From 58610e4b15b33148862615e863dbc08631ead33a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: hwp <you@example.com> Date: Wed, 22 Dec 2021 01:02:55 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] initial proofreading of the new cards passages --- game/overworld-plains/loc-estate/cards.twee | 228 ++++++++++++-------- 1 file changed, 143 insertions(+), 85 deletions(-) diff --git a/game/overworld-plains/loc-estate/cards.twee b/game/overworld-plains/loc-estate/cards.twee index b279043a56..c5aecf9fb0 100644 --- a/game/overworld-plains/loc-estate/cards.twee +++ b/game/overworld-plains/loc-estate/cards.twee @@ -1710,40 +1710,56 @@ Your lips part as the <<person>> pushes your face against <<his>> <<print $NPCLi :: Estate Cards Oral Penis Cumslut <<effects>> - <<if $NPCList[($estate.cards.oral - 1)].penissize lte 1 >> - Your eagerly get ready to suck on the goon's cock, but you soon discover the <<print $NPCList[($estate.cards.oral - 1)].penisdesc>> barely limping out of the pelvis of this <<person>>. - <br><br> - <<if $submissive lte 850>> - You <<oraltext>> try to suck it. - <br><br> - After a couple minutes of licking, the goon twitches and <span class="lewd">ejaculates a string of semen that you rinse for a second in your mouth before swallowing</span> and moving on. - <<else>> - You do your best to satisfy <<him>>, <<oraltext>> sucking and licking <<his>> <<print $NPCList[($estate.cards.oral - 1)].penisdesc>> even if it's hard to keep it in your mouth. - <br><br> - After a while, the goon groans and you push your mouth, making choking noises. The <<person>> cums on your tongue. <span class="lewd">You swallow</span>. "Thank you, that was very nice" you say before moving on. - <</if>> - <<oralstat>> - <<ejacstat>> - <<oralejacstat>> - <<set $player.bodyliquid.mouth.semen += 1>> +<<set $_penisdesc to $NPCList[($estate.cards.oral - 1)].penisdesc>> +<<if $NPCList[($estate.cards.oral - 1)].penissize lte 1 >> + You eagerly prepare to suck on the goon's cock, but you soon discover the $_penisdesc barely limping out of the pelvis of this <<person>>. + <br><br> + <<if $submissive lte 850>> + You <<oraltext>> try to suck it. + <br><br> + After a couple minutes of licking, + the goon twitches and ejaculates a string of semen that you swirl around in your mouth for a second before swallowing it and moving on. <<else>> -<<switch $estate.cards.oral>> + You do your best to satisfy <<him>>, <<oraltext>> sucking and licking <<his>> $_penisdesc even if it's hard to keep it in your mouth. + <br><br> + After a while, the goon groans and you push your mouth on it, making choking noises. The <<person>> cums on your tongue. + <span class="lewd">You swallow</span>. "Thank you, that was very nice," you say before moving on. + <</if>> + <<oralstat>> + <<ejacstat>> + <<oralejacstat>> + <<set $player.bodyliquid.mouth.semen += 1>> +<<else>> + <<switch $estate.cards.oral>> <<case 2>> - You eagerly engulf the <<print $NPCList[($estate.cards.oral - 1)].penisdesc>> with your mouth, <<oraltext>> deepthroating as it grows hard. - <br><br> - Suddenly, the <<person>> firmly grasps the back of your head <span class="red">forcing <<his>> <<print $NPCList[($estate.cards.oral - 1)].penisdesc>> hard down your throat.</span> <span class="pink">Tears start running down your face</span>. To the great amusement of the goons, <span class="pink">your body spasms involuntarily from the lack of air,</span> shaking the table and the cards on it. - <br><br> - Seeing that you might pass out, you have the <span class="blue"> idea of massaging the <<print $NPCList[($estate.cards.oral - 1)].penisdesc>> through the front of your neck.</span> "Ha, ha. Look at this, this slut is trying to jerk me off through its neck!". + You eagerly engulf the $_penisdesc with your mouth, <<oraltext>> deepthroating as it grows hard. + <br><br> + + Suddenly, the <<person>> firmly grasps the back of your head <span class="red">forcing <<his>> $_penisdesc hard down your throat.</span> + <span class="pink">Tears start running down your face</span>. + To the great amusement of the goons, <span class="pink">your body spasms involuntarily from the lack of air,</span> shaking the table and the cards on it. <br><br> - Finally, the <<print $NPCList[($estate.cards.oral - 1)].penisdesc>> starts throbbing. "Swallow it all. I don't want to see a drop of it when I take it out", <<he>> says as the grip on your head becomes harder and a <span class="lewd">warm thick stream of semen fills your throat.</span> + + Seeing that you might pass out, you have the <span class="blue">idea of massaging the $_penisdesc through the front of your neck.</span> + "Ha, ha. Look at this, this slut is trying to jerk me off through <<his>> neck!" <br><br> - "Now hold it for a while." The goon keeps <<his>> phallus deep in your throat long after it's done ejaculating. Soon you feel it become increasingly softer. Eventually, you are able to catch a stream of breath through your nose. "Very well done", says the <<person>> as <<he>> pats you in the head and releases <<his>> grip. + + Finally, the $_penisdesc starts throbbing. + "Swallow it all. I don't want to see a drop of it when I take it out," + <<he>> says as the grip on your head becomes harder and a <span class="lewd">warm thick stream of semen fills your throat.</span> <br><br> + + "Now hold it for a while." The goon keeps <<his>> phallus deep in your throat long after it's done ejaculating. + Soon you feel it become increasingly softer. Eventually, you are able to catch a stream of breath through your nose. + "Very well done," says the <<person>> as <<he>> pats you in the head and releases <<his>> grip. + <br><br> + <<if $submissive lte 850>> - You dry the tears in your face, hardly hiding that you <span class="green">feel horny and proud about how you managed the predicament</span>. - <<else>> - "Th... Thank you very much, sir", you say with the first words that you can utter once you are sure that you <span class="green">managed to fully swallow all the cum.</span> - <</if>> + You dry the tears in your face, hardly hiding that you <span class="green">feel horny and proud about how you managed the predicament</span>. + <<else>> + "Th... Thank you very much, sir," + you say with the first words that you can utter once you are sure that you <span class="green">managed to fully swallow all the cum.</span> + <</if>> <<arousal 600>><<garousal>><<lstress>><<stress -5>> <<oralstat>> <<ejacstat>> @@ -1751,20 +1767,37 @@ Your lips part as the <<person>> pushes your face against <<his>> <<print $NPCLi <<set $hygiene += 500>> <<set $player.bodyliquid.mouth.semen += 1>> <<case 3>> - The second goon's <<print $NPCList[($estate.cards.oral - 1)].penisdesc>> is readily erect for you to suck as soon as you turn to it. You <<oraltext>> work the phallus with your mouth for a while, while they play cards. - <br><br> - Right as the <<person>> starts twitching, you pull the <<print $NPCList[($estate.cards.oral - 1)].penisdesc>> from your mouth. You <span class="lewd">let the massive spurt of sperm unload right in the middle of your forehead</span> while you <<handtext>> milk it with your hand. - <br><br> - "Come up here, I want to see this", orders the <<person>>. You emerge from under the table as <span class="lewd"> two thick streams of semen slowly come running down each side of your nose </span>. "You really are enjoying this, aren't you?". "Here, look here". One of the goons points a phone at you. "Smile a little, come on. People ought to know what a cumslut you are". - <br><br> - <<if $submissive lte 850>> - Your eyes water and you refuse to smile. But as the streams of cum reach the sides of your mouth, you can't resist to <span class="lewd"> provocatively push your tonge out and lick some of the spunk around your lips.</span> "We knew it! You can't help yourself!". - <<else>> - <span class="lewd">You gleefully make a big smile for the camera. This diverts the two streams of semen straight into your mouth.</span> "Ah, that is just perfect" says one of the goons as more of them join taking more pictures with their phones. - <</if>> - <br><br> - You pose some more, <span class="green">toying with the cum and letting them capture videos of you swallowing</span>. "Man, this is fucking hot. I'm sharing this with everyone," you hear one say. + The second goon's $_penisdesc is readily erect for you to suck as soon as you turn to it. + You <<oraltext>> work the phallus with your mouth for a while, while they play cards. + <br><br> + + Right as the <<person>> starts twitching, you pull the $_penisdesc from your mouth. + You <span class="lewd">let the massive spurt of sperm unload right in the middle of your forehead</span> while you <<handtext>> milk it with your hand. + <br><br> + + "Come up here, I want to see this," orders the <<person>>. + You emerge from under the table as <span class="lewd"> two thick streams of semen slowly come running down each side of your nose </span>. + "You really are enjoying this, aren't you?" + <br><br> + + "Here, look here." One of the goons points a phone at you. "Smile a little, come on. People ought to know what a cumslut you are." + <br><br> + + <<if $submissive lte 850>> + Your eyes water and you refuse to smile. + But as the streams of cum reach the sides of your mouth, you can't resist the urge to + <span class="lewd">provocatively push your tongue out and lick some of the spunk around your lips.</span> + "We knew it! You can't help yourself!" + <<else>> + <span class="lewd">You gleefully make a big smile for the camera. This diverts the two streams of semen straight into your mouth.</span> + "Ah, that is just perfect" says one of the goons as more of them join taking more pictures with their phones. + <</if>> + <br><br> + + You pose some more, <span class="green">toying with the cum and letting them capture videos of you swallowing</span>. + "Man, this is fucking hot. I'm sharing this with everyone," you hear one say. <br><br> + After a bit the goons instruct you to go back under the table. Some of them are still waiting to be satisfied as agreed. <<famesex 2>> <<oralstat>> @@ -1775,11 +1808,15 @@ Your lips part as the <<person>> pushes your face against <<his>> <<print $NPCLi <<set $hygiene += 500>> <<arousal 600>><<garousal>><<lstress>><<stress -5>> <<case 4>> - You start sucking the <<person>> <<print $NPCList[($estate.cards.oral - 1)].penisdesc>>. At a certain point, <<he>> looks down and says "What a nice <<print $haircolour>> hair you've got. How would you like it to be more shiny?". + You start sucking the <<persons>> $_penisdesc. Eventually, <<he>> looks down and says + "What nice <<haircolourtext>> hair you've got. How would you like it to be more shiny?" <br><br> - <<He>> pushes your mouth away and <span class="lewd">repeatedly whips you on your head with <<his>> <<print $NPCList[($estate.cards.oral - 1)].penisdesc>> before ejaculating right on your scalp.</span> "Here, here's something to soap it, go ahead". + + <<He>> pushes your mouth away and <span class="lewd">repeatedly whips you on the head with <<his>> $_penisdesc before ejaculating right on your scalp.</span> + "Here, here's something to soap it with, go ahead." <br><br> - He looks delighted as <span class="lewd">you spread <<his>> load all over your <<print $hairtype>></span>. + + <<He>> looks delighted as <span class="lewd">you spread <<his>> load all over your <<haircolourtext>> hair</span>. <<oralstat>> <<hairejacstat>> <<ejacstat>> @@ -1787,15 +1824,21 @@ Your lips part as the <<person>> pushes your face against <<his>> <<print $NPCLi <<set $hygiene += 500>> <<arousal 600>><<garousal>><<lstress>><<stress -5>> <<case 5>> - The fourth goon's <<print $NPCList[($estate.cards.oral - 1)].penisdesc>> is all hard and pulsating as soon as you turn to it. + The fourth goon's $_penisdesc is all hard and pulsating as soon as you turn to it. <br><br> - "Aah, aah..." twitches the goon; and without much warning it <span class="lewd">bursts semen over your body and everywhere under the table.</span> The <<person>> looks at you kneeling between <<his>> thighs, both of you wide-eyed gazing at each other. + + "Aah, aah..." twitches the goon; and without much warning it <span class="lewd">bursts semen over your body and everywhere under the table.</span> + The <<person>> looks at you kneeling between <<his>> thighs, both of you wide-eyed gazing at each other. <br><br> + <<if $submissive lte 850>> - <span class=green>"Wow, that was quick!" you exclaim out loudly with a restrained laugh.</span> The rest of the goons, becoming aware of what just happened burst into laughter, poking fun at the goon's quick gun. The <<person>>, embarrassed and red-faced, utters: "Fucking bitch, I'd slap that smug out of your face if it wasn't covered in jizz". - <<else>> - "I'm sorry sir, I might have been a little too eager" you whisper to the goon. <span class="lewd">You pretend to suck on his limp dick while rubbing the semen over your neck and <<breasts>>.</span> - <</if>> + <span class=green>"Wow, that was quick!" you exclaim out loudly with a restrained laugh.</span> + The rest of the goons, becoming aware of what just happened burst into laughter, start poking fun at the goon's quick gun. + The <<person>>, embarrassed and red-faced, utters: "Fucking bitch, I'd slap that smug look off your face if it wasn't covered in jizz." + <<else>> + "I'm sorry <<sir>>, I might have been a little too eager," you whisper to the goon. + <span class="lewd">You pretend to suck on <<his>> limp dick while rubbing the semen over your neck and <<breasts>>.</span> + <</if>> <<neckejacstat>> <<chestejacstat>> <<ejacstat>> @@ -1804,26 +1847,39 @@ Your lips part as the <<person>> pushes your face against <<his>> <<print $NPCLi <<set $hygiene += 500>> <<arousal 600>><<garousal>><<lstress>><<stress -5>> <<case 6>> - You begin sucking the <<print $NPCList[($estate.cards.oral - 1)].penisdesc>>. It is the last one remaining. Your jaw is hurting a little. + You begin sucking the $_penisdesc. It is the last one remaining. Your jaw is hurting a little. <br><br> - After a short while, the man twitches and you feel the <span class="lewd">hard cock pulsating in your mouth.</span> "Oh boy, this has been building up for quite some time" the <<person>> says as <span class="pink">he firmly holds your head with both hands and starts furiously thrusting.</span> + + After a short while, the <<man>> twitches and you feel the <span class="lewd">hard cock pulsating in your mouth.</span> + "Oh boy, this has been building up for quite some time," + the <<person>> says as <<he>> holds your head firmly with both hands and starts furiously thrusting. <br><br> - The first spurt is so awfully large and so viciously pushed down your throat that it <span class="lewd">chokes you and comes bursting down your nose.</span> It becomes impossible to keep in all the cum being pumped in your mouth with your lips sealed around the pushing <<print $NPCList[($estate.cards.oral - 1)].penisdesc>>. With every shove, you<span class="lewd"> keep drooling semen all over your body.</span> + + The first spurt is so awfully large and so viciously pushed down your throat that it <span class="lewd">chokes you and comes bursting out your nose.</span> + It becomes impossible to keep in all the cum being pumped in your mouth with your lips sealed around the $_penisdesc. + With every shove, you <span class="lewd">keep drooling semen all over your body.</span> <br><br> - "Ah fuck, look at this fucking slut", the goon says once <<he>>'s done pumping you. The game going on on the table has stopped. Everyone is staring at you, the kneeling cum-covered mess with <<lewdness>> trying to catch a breath. + + "Ah fuck, look at this fucking slut," the goon says once <<he>>'s done pumping you. + The game being played on the table has stopped. Everyone is staring at you, the kneeling cum-covered mess with the <<lewdness>> trying to catch their breath. <br><br> - With white strings still dangling from your chin and all eyes on you, <span class="green"> you smile and take a bow and the room erupts in cheers.</span> + + With white strings still dangling from your chin and all eyes on you, <span class="green">you smile and take a bow, and the room erupts in cheers.</span> <br><br> - "Hey, you are not going anywhere until you clean all this shit. We're not touching any of that", Wren says pointing at the floor under the table. + + "Hey, you are not going anywhere until you clean all this shit up. We're not touching any of that," Wren says, pointing at the floor under the table. <br><br> + <<if $submissive lte 850>> - Still kneeling, you collect the cold semen lying on the floor and <span class="lewd">rub it all over your torso.</span> - <<set $player.bodyliquid.leftarm.semen += 1>> - <<set $player.bodyliquid.rightarm.semen += 1>> - <<else>> - You get on all fours to <span class="lewd">lick clean all the cold semen lying on the floor.</span> "Godness <<girl>>, don't you ever have enough?", one asks while you lick <<his>> shoes. "No, sir. It's just too tasty and the smell of it soothes me", you answer before <span class="lewd">swallowing the last of it.</span> - <<set $player.bodyliquid.mouth.semen += 2>> - <</if>> + Still kneeling, you collect the cold semen lying on the floor and <span class="lewd">rub it all over your torso.</span> + <<set $player.bodyliquid.leftarm.semen += 1>> + <<set $player.bodyliquid.rightarm.semen += 1>> + <<else>> + You get on all fours to <span class="lewd">lick clean all the cold semen lying on the floor.</span> + "Goodness <<girl>>, you still haven't had enough?" one asks while you lick <<his>> shoes. + "No, sir. It's just too tasty and the smell of it soothes me," you answer before <span class="lewd">swallowing the last of it.</span> + <<set $player.bodyliquid.mouth.semen += 2>> + <</if>> <<chestejacstat>> <<tummyejacstat>> @@ -1835,11 +1891,12 @@ Your lips part as the <<person>> pushes your face against <<his>> <<print $NPCLi <<set $hygiene += 1000>> <<arousal 600>><<garousal>><<lstress>><<stress -5>> -<</switch>> + <</switch>> <br><br> <</if>> <br><br> + <<set $estate.cards.oral += 1>> <<if $arousal gte $arousalmax>> <<link [[Next|Estate Cards Oral Cumslut Orgasm]]>><</link>> @@ -1849,24 +1906,25 @@ Your lips part as the <<person>> pushes your face against <<his>> <<print $NPCLi <br> :: Estate Cards Oral Cumslut Orgasm - Suddenly, the arousal from seeing yourself covered in jizz becomes overwhelming. Your abs and thighs squeeze as a <span class="lewd">massive orgasm builds up.</span> - <br><br> - The <<person>> notices: "Hey <<girl>>, are you really going to orgasm from just being cummed on?" - <br><br> - <<if $submissive lte 850>> - "Fuck... this is too much...", - <<else>> - "I'm so s-s-sorry, a-apologies", - <</if>> - you say while <span class="lewd">you spread your knees as wide as they will go</span> in an attempt to keep your balance. - <br><br> - The goons cheer. <span class="red">A swarm of smartphones surround you.</span> They record videos of you moaning and uncontrollably shaking while orgasming under the blackjack table. - <br><br> - <<orgasm>> - <<famesex 4>> +Suddenly, the arousal from seeing yourself covered in jizz becomes overwhelming. Your abs and thighs squeeze as a <span class="lewd">massive orgasm builds up.</span> +<br><br> +The <<person>> notices: "Hey <<girl>>, are you really going to orgasm from just being cummed on?" +<br><br> +<<if $submissive lte 850>> + "Fuck... this is too much..." +<<else>> + "I'm so s-s-sorry, a-apologies," +<</if>> +you say while you spread your knees as wide as they will go in an attempt to keep your balance. +<br><br> +The goons cheer. <span class="red">A swarm of smartphones surround you.</span> +They record videos of you moaning and uncontrollably shaking while orgasming under the blackjack table. +<br><br> +<<orgasm>> +<<famesex 4>> - <br><br> - <<link [[Next|Estate Cards Oral 2]]>><</link>> +<br><br> +<<link [[Next|Estate Cards Oral 2]]>><</link>> :: Estate Cards Oral Vagina 2 <<effects>> @@ -1896,12 +1954,12 @@ You walk outside. A breeze makes you shiver. :: Estate Cards Orgasm <<effects>> - - <<if $estate.cards.position is "wren_lap" or $estate.cards.position is "vaginal" or $estate.cards.position is "anal">> - <<He>> keeps <<his>> hands firm on your hips as <<he>> reclines in the chair, still panting. <<He>> releases <<his>> grasp. "Not bad," <<he>> admits, pushing you off <<his>> lap. "The game's over. I hope you got what you came for." + <<He>> keeps <<his>> hands firm on your hips as <<he>> reclines in the chair, still panting. + <<He>> releases <<his>> grasp. "Not bad," <<he>> admits, pushing you off <<his>> lap. "The game's over. I hope you got what you came for." <<else>> - <<He>> keeps <<his>> arms locked around your chest as <<he>> pants against you. <<He>> pulls away, looking tired. "Not bad," <<he>> admits, swinging <<his>> leg off you. "The game's over. I hope you got what you came for." + <<He>> keeps <<his>> arms locked around your chest as <<he>> pants against you. <<He>> pulls away, looking tired. + "Not bad," <<he>> admits, swinging <<his>> leg off you. "The game's over. I hope you got what you came for." <</if>> <br><br> <<cards_naked_end>> -- GitLab