diff --git a/src/facilities/nursery/longChildDescription.tw b/src/facilities/nursery/longChildDescription.tw index be0154cf2ec1bef9bb6000955139d1b330d679dc..9753c7a5be6f207635cd5d4acb82b030f954deda 100644 --- a/src/facilities/nursery/longChildDescription.tw +++ b/src/facilities/nursery/longChildDescription.tw @@ -661,9 +661,9 @@ $he's <<elseif ($activeChild.attrXY <= 15)>> $He @@.red;considers men's bodies a turnoff,@@ <<if ($activeChild.attrXX <= 5)>> - and is @@.red;actually disgusted by womens'.@@ + and is @@.red;actually disgusted by women's'.@@ <<elseif ($activeChild.attrXX <= 15)>> - and @@.red;feels the same about womens'.@@ + and @@.red;feels the same about women's'.@@ <<elseif ($activeChild.attrXX <= 35)>> and is @@.red;unenthusiastic about women.@@ <<elseif ($activeChild.attrXX <= 65)>> diff --git a/src/uncategorized/longSlaveDescription.tw b/src/uncategorized/longSlaveDescription.tw index 6621c5fbe43da0394091bd45d88b63e1a299538a..f36d306657cf721f146fa3247231cfd5dbee9d07 100644 --- a/src/uncategorized/longSlaveDescription.tw +++ b/src/uncategorized/longSlaveDescription.tw @@ -844,9 +844,9 @@ is <<elseif ($activeSlave.attrXY <= 15)>> $He @@.red;considers men's bodies a turnoff,@@ <<if ($activeSlave.attrXX <= 5)>> - and is @@.red;actually disgusted by womens'.@@ + and is @@.red;actually disgusted by women's'.@@ <<elseif ($activeSlave.attrXX <= 15)>> - and @@.red;feels the same about womens'.@@ + and @@.red;feels the same about women's'.@@ <<elseif ($activeSlave.attrXX <= 35)>> and is @@.red;unenthusiastic about women.@@ <<elseif ($activeSlave.attrXX <= 65)>> @@ -1634,7 +1634,7 @@ is <<elseif $activeSlave.whoreSkill <= 60>> <<if $activeSlave.entertainSkill <= 10>>$He is <</if>>a @@.aquamarine;skilled streetwalker.@@ <<elseif $activeSlave.whoreSkill < 100>> - <<if $activeSlave.entertainSkill <= 10>>$He is <</if>>an @@.aquamarine;expert working girl.@@ + <<if $activeSlave.entertainSkill <= 10>>$He is <</if>>an @@.aquamarine;expert working $girl.@@ <<else>> <<if $activeSlave.entertainSkill <= 10>>$He is <</if>>a @@.aquamarine;masterful whore.@@ <</if>> diff --git a/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw b/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw index c97a0232dafb7d725016f23352a533b436acf861..4c686b285e60028fd97175c0b75fb17600359023 100644 --- a/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw +++ b/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw @@ -405,14 +405,14 @@ The legalities completed, ''__@@.pink;<<= SlaveFullName($activeSlave)>>@@__'' << <<if $arcologies[0].FSMaturityPreferentialist >= 50>> <<if ($activeSlave.actualAge > 30)>> - $He realizes that your arcology appreciates older girls, and @@.mediumaquamarine;hopes@@ it'll be nicer here. + $He realizes that your arcology appreciates older <<= $girl>>s, and @@.mediumaquamarine;hopes@@ it'll be nicer here. <<set $activeSlave.trust += 2>> <</if>> <</if>> <<if $arcologies[0].FSYouthPreferentialist >= 50>> <<if ($activeSlave.actualAge > 30)>> - $He realizes that your arcology has little use for older girls, and @@.gold;fears@@ $he'll be abused here. + $He realizes that your arcology has little use for older <<= $girl>>s, and @@.gold;fears@@ $he'll be abused here. <<set $activeSlave.trust -= 4>> <<elseif ($activeSlave.actualAge < 18)>> /% begin is a child block %/ @@ -1892,7 +1892,7 @@ The legalities completed, ''__@@.pink;<<= SlaveFullName($activeSlave)>>@@__'' << <<link "Threaten $him with the Arcade">> <<setNonlocalPronouns $seeDicks>> <<replace "#introResult">> - You tell $him that it's in $his interests to be a good $girl. $He does not react immediately, perhaps wondering if you think such a trite statement will have a real impact, but then you point at a wallscreen behind $him. $He turns, and beholds a live feed from $arcadeName. $He gazes at the row of butts sticking out of the wall at dick height, not quite realizing what $he's seeing. Then $he notices that there are citizens pumping away in front of two of the butts, and $he understands. As $he watches, terrified, first one citizen and then the other finishes and steps away. The first arcade inmate's <<if $seeDicks != 100>>pussy<<else>>butt<</if>> is left looking sore until $arcadeName's systems cover _himU for a quick cleaning, and the second inmate's asshole <<if $seeDicks != 0>>has obviously seen severe use, since the poor _girlU doesn't have a pussy to spread the load<<else>>is loose enough that the machines have to clean up the cum it drools onto the floor<</if>>. $activeSlave.slaveName lets out a huge sob and turns to you, @@.gold;fear suffusing $him@@ as $he promises to @@.hotpink;be a good girl.@@ + You tell $him that it's in $his interests to be a good $girl. $He does not react immediately, perhaps wondering if you think such a trite statement will have a real impact, but then you point at a wallscreen behind $him. $He turns, and beholds a live feed from $arcadeName. $He gazes at the row of butts sticking out of the wall at dick height, not quite realizing what $he's seeing. Then $he notices that there are citizens pumping away in front of two of the butts, and $he understands. As $he watches, terrified, first one citizen and then the other finishes and steps away. The first arcade inmate's <<if $seeDicks != 100>>pussy<<else>>butt<</if>> is left looking sore until $arcadeName's systems cover _himU for a quick cleaning, and the second inmate's asshole <<if $seeDicks != 0>>has obviously seen severe use, since the poor _girlU doesn't have a pussy to spread the load<<else>>is loose enough that the machines have to clean up the cum it drools onto the floor<</if>>. $activeSlave.slaveName lets out a huge sob and turns to you, @@.gold;fear suffusing $him@@ as $he promises to @@.hotpink;be a good $girl.@@ <</replace>> <<set $activeSlave.devotion += 10>> <<set $activeSlave.trust -= 10>> diff --git a/src/utility/descriptionWidgetsFlesh.tw b/src/utility/descriptionWidgetsFlesh.tw index 30930bb3405ef0dab667797308e0d2a104eab456..87f3c547030ad1f58631117c88ef8e825d5c0c2b 100644 --- a/src/utility/descriptionWidgetsFlesh.tw +++ b/src/utility/descriptionWidgetsFlesh.tw @@ -1114,7 +1114,7 @@ $His <<if $boobAccessibility == 1>> Fortunately for $him, the penthouse is adapted for daily life with a bosom <<else>> - $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for girls with chests + $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for <<= $girl>>s with chests <</if>> wider than a standard doorway. <</if>> @@ -1147,7 +1147,7 @@ $His <<if $boobAccessibility == 1>> Fortunately for $him, the penthouse is adapted for daily life with a bosom <<else>> - $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for girls with chests + $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for <<= $girl>>s with chests <</if>> wider than a standard doorway. <</if>> @@ -1178,7 +1178,7 @@ $His <<if $boobAccessibility == 1>> Fortunately for $him, the penthouse is adapted for daily life with a bosom <<else>> - $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for girls with chests + $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for <<= $girl>>s with chests <</if>> wider than a standard doorway. <</if>> @@ -1209,7 +1209,7 @@ $His <<if $boobAccessibility == 1>> Fortunately for $him, the penthouse is adapted for daily life with a bosom <<else>> - $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for girls with chests + $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for <<= $girl>>s with chests <</if>> wider than a standard doorway. <</if>> @@ -2436,7 +2436,7 @@ $He's got a <<if $buttAccessibility == 1>> Fortunately for $him, the penthouse is adapted for daily life with a rear <<else>> - $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for girls with buttcheeks + $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for <<= $girl>>s with buttcheeks <</if>> wider than a standard doorway. <</if>> @@ -2465,7 +2465,7 @@ $He's got a <<if $buttAccessibility == 1>> Fortunately for $him, the penthouse is adapted for daily life with a rear <<else>> - $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for girls with buttcheeks + $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for <<= $girl>>s with buttcheeks <</if>> wider than a standard doorway. <</if>> @@ -2494,7 +2494,7 @@ $He's got a <<if $buttAccessibility == 1>> Fortunately for $him, the penthouse is adapted for daily life with a rear <<else>> - $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for girls with buttcheeks + $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for <<= $girl>>s with buttcheeks <</if>> wider than a standard doorway. <</if>> @@ -3967,7 +3967,7 @@ $He's got a <<if $dickAccessibility == 1>> Fortunately for $him, the penthouse is adapted for daily life with a cock <<else>> - $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for girls with dicks + $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for <<= $girl>>s with dicks <</if>> bigger than they are. <</if>> @@ -3996,7 +3996,7 @@ $He's got a <<if $dickAccessibility == 1>> Fortunately for $him, the penthouse is adapted for daily life with a cock <<else>> - $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for girls with dicks + $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for <<= $girl>>s with dicks <</if>> bigger than they are. <</if>> @@ -4025,7 +4025,7 @@ $He's got a <<if $dickAccessibility == 1>> Fortunately for $him, the penthouse is adapted for daily life with a cock <<else>> - $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for girls with dicks + $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for <<= $girl>>s with dicks <</if>> bigger than they are. <</if>> @@ -4072,7 +4072,7 @@ $He's got a <<if $ballsAccessibility == 1>> Fortunately for $him, the penthouse is adapted for daily life with balls <<else>> - $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for girls with testicles + $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for <<= $girl>>s with testicles <</if>> wider than a standard doorway. <</if>> @@ -4103,7 +4103,7 @@ $He's got a <<if $ballsAccessibility == 1>> Fortunately for $him, the penthouse is adapted for daily life with balls <<else>> - $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for girls with testicles + $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for <<= $girl>>s with testicles <</if>> wider than a standard doorway. <</if>> @@ -4134,7 +4134,7 @@ $He's got a <<if $ballsAccessibility == 1>> Fortunately for $him, the penthouse is adapted for daily life with balls <<else>> - $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for girls with testicles + $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for <<= $girl>>s with testicles <</if>> wider than a standard doorway. <</if>> @@ -4303,7 +4303,7 @@ $He's got a <<if $ballsAccessibility == 1>> Fortunately for $him, the penthouse is adapted for daily life with balls <<else>> - $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for girls with testicles + $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for <<= $girl>>s with testicles <</if>> wider than a standard doorway. <</if>> @@ -4334,7 +4334,7 @@ $He's got a <<if $ballsAccessibility == 1>> Fortunately for $him, the penthouse is adapted for daily life with balls <<else>> - $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for girls with testicles + $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for <<= $girl>>s with testicles <</if>> wider than a standard doorway. <</if>> @@ -4365,7 +4365,7 @@ $He's got a <<if $ballsAccessibility == 1>> Fortunately for $him, the penthouse is adapted for daily life with balls <<else>> - $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for girls with testicles + $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for <<= $girl>>s with testicles <</if>> wider than a standard doorway. <</if>> @@ -4534,7 +4534,7 @@ $He's got a <<if $ballsAccessibility == 1>> Fortunately for $him, the penthouse is adapted for daily life with balls <<else>> - $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for girls with testicles + $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for <<= $girl>>s with testicles <</if>> wider than a standard doorway. <</if>> @@ -4565,7 +4565,7 @@ $He's got a <<if $ballsAccessibility == 1>> Fortunately for $him, the penthouse is adapted for daily life with balls <<else>> - $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for girls with testicles + $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for <<= $girl>>s with testicles <</if>> wider than a standard doorway. <</if>> @@ -4596,7 +4596,7 @@ $He's got a <<if $ballsAccessibility == 1>> Fortunately for $him, the penthouse is adapted for daily life with balls <<else>> - $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for girls with testicles + $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for <<= $girl>>s with testicles <</if>> wider than a standard doorway. <</if>> @@ -15303,7 +15303,7 @@ $He has <<if $pregAccessibility == 1>> Fortunately for $him, the penthouse is adapted for daily life with a <<if $activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 3000>>pregnant<</if>> belly <<else>> - $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for girls with <<if $activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 3000>>pregnancies<<else>>bellies<</if>> + $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for <<= $girl>>s with <<if $activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 3000>>pregnancies<<else>>bellies<</if>> <</if>> wider than a standard doorway. <</if>> @@ -18568,7 +18568,7 @@ $He has <<if $pregAccessibility == 1>> Fortunately for $him, the penthouse is adapted for daily life with a belly <<else>> - $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for girls with bellies + $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for <<= $girl>>s with bellies <</if>> wider than a standard doorway. <</if>> @@ -18595,7 +18595,7 @@ $He has <<if $pregAccessibility == 1>> Fortunately for $him, the penthouse is adapted for daily life with a belly <<else>> - $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for girls with bellies + $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for <<= $girl>>s with bellies <</if>> wider than a standard doorway. <</if>> @@ -18622,7 +18622,7 @@ $He has <<if $pregAccessibility == 1>> Fortunately for $him, the penthouse is adapted for daily life with a belly <<else>> - $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for girls with bellies + $He has trouble living in your penthouse, which is not designed for <<= $girl>>s with bellies <</if>> wider than a standard doorway. <</if>>