diff --git a/src/facilities/brothel/brothelAssignmentScene.tw b/src/facilities/brothel/brothelAssignmentScene.tw
index 2255bd8a0ef72c8fa359500912b4473551f70cb2..266c7137840e9b38f2b638d509b783e204073dc0 100644
--- a/src/facilities/brothel/brothelAssignmentScene.tw
+++ b/src/facilities/brothel/brothelAssignmentScene.tw
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ You tell $him $he's to report to <<if $Madam != 0>>$Madam.slaveName immediately,
 				<<if $activeSlave.attrXX > $activeSlave.attrXY>>
 					"there have to be ladie<<s>> who want to buttfuck a whore, right? At lea<<s>>t, I really hope there are."
 				<<else>>
-					"the other girl<<s>> tell me that whore<<s>> there get fucked up the a<<ss>> all day and all night. <<S>>ounds like fun to me."
+					"the other girl<<s>> tell me that whore<<s>> there get fucked up the a<<ss>> all day and all night. <<S>>ound<<s>> like fun to me."
 				<</if>>
 			<<case "boobs">>
 				I mean," and $he sticks out $his chest a little,
@@ -195,7 +195,7 @@ You tell $him $he's to report to <<if $Madam != 0>>$Madam.slaveName immediately,
 			"Ye<<s>>, <<Master>>," $he says obediently. $He hesitates, looking concerned.
 			<<switch $activeSlave.sexualFlaw>>
 			<<case "hates oral">>
-				"I - I'm going to h-have to <<s>>uck a lot of dick there, aren't I." $He swallows nervously. $His lower lip quivers, and $he does $his best not to cry in front of you.
+				"I — I'm going to h-have to <<s>>uck a lot of dick there, aren't I." $He swallows nervously. $His lower lip quivers, and $he does $his best not to cry in front of you.
 			<<case "hates anal">>
 				"C-cu<<s>>tomer<<s>> are really going to ream me up the butt hole, aren't they." $He <<if $activeSlave.amp == 1>>shifts uncomfortably, unconsciously trying to shield $his rear as best $he can manage without limbs.<<else>>unconsciously reaches around behind $himself, not quite shielding $his anus with $his hands.<</if>> $His lower lip quivers, and $he does $his best not to cry in front of you.
 			<<case "hates penetration">>
@@ -302,7 +302,7 @@ You tell $him $he's to report to <<if $Madam != 0>>$Madam.slaveName immediately,
 			"Yes, <<Master>>," $he says automatically. $He's badly frightened, and says in a small voice, half to $himself,
 			<<switch $activeSlave.sexualFlaw>>
 			<<case "hates oral">>
-				"I - I'm going to h-have to <<s>>uck a lot of dick, aren't I." $He swallows and tries to control $himself out of fear, but finally gasps out, "Oh God, I'm <<s>>cared," and bursts into tears.
+				"I — I'm going to h-have to <<s>>uck a lot of dick, aren't I." $He swallows and tries to control $himself out of fear, but finally gasps out, "Oh God, I'm <<s>>cared," and bursts into tears.
 			<<case "hates anal">>
 				"C-cu<<s>>tomer<<s>> are really going to ream me up the butt hole, aren't they." $He <<if $activeSlave.amp == 1>>shifts uncomfortably, unconsciously trying to shield $his rear as best $he can manage without limbs.<<else>>unconsciously reaches around behind $himself, not quite shielding $his anus with $his hands.<</if>> $His lower lip quivers and $he tries to control $himself out of fear, but finally gasps out, "Oh God, I'm <<s>>cared," and bursts into tears.
 			<<case "hates penetration">>
diff --git a/src/facilities/nursery/longChildDescription.tw b/src/facilities/nursery/longChildDescription.tw
index 076f558440fcb7d3fd2ffc7085e12179897cb05b..20c16cca1f54840174549034a038bf22f15975d9 100644
--- a/src/facilities/nursery/longChildDescription.tw
+++ b/src/facilities/nursery/longChildDescription.tw
@@ -1070,15 +1070,15 @@ and
 	<<if $activeChild.hips > 1>>
 		<<print either("very thin", "quite skinny")>>, but $his wide hips make the gap between $his thighs very noticeable.
 	<<elseif $activeChild.hips < -1>>
-		<<print either("very thin", "quite skinny")>>, but $his trim hips make $his look like a model.
+		<<print either("quite skinny", "very thin")>>, but $his trim hips make $him look like a model.
 	<<else>>
-		@@.red;<<print either("rail thin", "underweight", "too skinny")>>.@@
+		@@.red;<<print either("rail thin", "too skinny", "underweight")>>.@@
 	<</if>>
-<<else>>@@.red;<<print either("emaciated", "dangerously skinny")>>.@@
+<<else>>@@.red;<<print either("dangerously skinny", "emaciated")>>.@@
 <</if>>
 
 <<if $activeChild.hips > 2>>
-	$His hips are unrealistically wide, it is obvious they have been artificially widened.
+	$His hips are unrealistically wide; it is obvious they have been artificially widened.
 <</if>>
 
 <<waistDescription>>
diff --git a/src/gui/Encyclopedia/encyclopedia.tw b/src/gui/Encyclopedia/encyclopedia.tw
index 04c3552e1c38c926a2a617beb5f323affe7f6eff..a466add29f90d636cef28e9fc84f21892a8920f8 100644
--- a/src/gui/Encyclopedia/encyclopedia.tw
+++ b/src/gui/Encyclopedia/encyclopedia.tw
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ PLAYING FREE CITIES
  <br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Assign one of your Head Girls to be ''the'' Head Girl and make the other whore. Assign everyone else to whore. The [[rules ssistant|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Rules Assistant"]] will speed things up a lot when you know the basics, but leave it off for now; it's easy to miss a lot of stuff if you set it up without a bit of experience. Go through your girls one by one and experiment with their options, but anyone who's @@.hotpink;Accepting@@ or better should get nice clothes, accessories, and [[living conditions|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Living Conditions"]]; anyone who's not should not. When slaves tip over into @@.hotpink;Accepting,@@ switch them over from bedrolls and uncomfortable straps; until then, the good life is a waste of @@.yellowgreen;[[money|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Money"]]@@ and will spoil them. Give @@.red;unhealthy@@ slaves curatives, and give everyone hormones, since they're @@.yellowgreen;[[cheap|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Money"]]@@ and have good front end benefits. Get everyone working out or dieting to reach a basic fitness level and an attractive (not @@.red;red@@) [[weight|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Weight"]]. Sell the girl(s) your predecessor left behind for seed @@.yellowgreen;[[money|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Money"]],@@ and choose the most profitable option; there are ways to maximize this, but worry about that later. Check out the arcology management menu. You should have the @@.yellowgreen;[[money|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Money"]]@@ to upgrade the security systems, build the [[Head Girl suite|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Head Girl Suite"]], and to buy the kitchen upgrade; this will make dieting work faster. Check out the slave market, and buy a single bargain slave: @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(2000)>>@@ is good. Put her in the suite: if she won't go, abuse her until she will. Open the personal attention menu, and fix your Head Girl's flaws; softening is powerful but it takes longer and we're focusing on the basics. ''Save the game'' and end the turn.
 
  <br><br>__The end turn report__
- <br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Read this, and note all the colored text. Pay particular attention to @@.red;red,@@ @@.gold;gold,@@ or @@.mediumorchid;orchid@@ text; these are generally bad. Being a slave whore is a hard life, and some trouble is inevitable. But take particular note of things like slaves losing [[health|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Health"]], becoming [[fearful|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Trust"]], or [[hating|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]] you due to their [[rules|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Rules Assistant"]], [[conditions|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Living Conditions"]], or other slaves - these things you can control. Reload your save and fiddle around with the options to address these areas. (The Head Girl's girl may have a rough time; you can't affect that.) Since your Head Girl has her own slave to help her around the house, she'll work with two of your slaves.
+ <br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Read this, and note all the colored text. Pay particular attention to @@.red;red,@@ @@.gold;gold,@@ or @@.mediumorchid;orchid@@ text; these are generally bad. Being a slave whore is a hard life, and some trouble is inevitable. But take particular note of things like slaves losing [[health|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Health"]], becoming [[fearful|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Trust"]], or [[hating|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]] you due to their [[rules|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Rules Assistant"]], [[conditions|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Living Conditions"]], or other slaves — these things you can control. Reload your save and fiddle around with the options to address these areas. (The Head Girl's girl may have a rough time; you can't affect that.) Since your Head Girl has her own slave to help her around the house, she'll work with two of your slaves.
 
  <br><br>__Economics and events__
  <br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;The economics report offers some flavor, but you should leave the options it offers alone until you've got some spare cash. An event or two will follow; feel free to reload the page on each (F5 on most browsers) to see what the different options do. Generally, try to pick options that give you @@.yellowgreen;[[money|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Money"]]@@ and improve @@.hotpink;[[devotion|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]].@@ @@.mediumaquamarine;[[Trust|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Trust"]]@@ and @@.green;[[reputation|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Arcologies and Reputation"]]@@ can wait.
@@ -299,7 +299,7 @@ BEING IN CHARGE
  Buying shares from the corporation or issuing new shares will create new shares in the corporation. If you buy them yourself, cash will be transferred from you to the corporation in return for the shares; if you direct the corporation to issue new public shares, @@.yellowgreen;[[money|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Money"]]@@ will come into the corporation from the market. If you direct the corporation to buy back shares from the public, cash will be transferred from the corporation to reduce the number of public shares, which will increase your ownership percentage. You are not permitted to give up majority ownership of the corporation. Selling your shares or buying publicly held shares are both transactions between you and your shares and shareholders and their shares. All transactions impact the stock price; experiment to find a plan that will give you and your corporation the best outcome.
 
 	<br><br>__Assets__
-	All assets are mostly valuable as assets; they drive up the value of your corporation and thus its stock price, and they all produce a small amount of profit every week. Slave assets generate the most inherent profit. Both entrapment and conflict zone capture assets create more slave assets; drug, training, and surgical assets - in sufficient quantity - improve the slave assets you already have. Each week, all assets held by the corporation (including cash) will diminish to represent the costs of doing business. Slave assets are exempt from this, but their value is tied to the overall slave market. To maximize profits and offset the corporation's costs, it is advisable to sell some highly-priced assets each week and re-invest the proceeds in lower-priced assets. If all asset prices are low, it may be prudent to sell some slave assets and invest more in capture and/or entrapment assets or in training and medical assets. When other asset prices are high, slaves' assets may be your best option.
+	All assets are mostly valuable as assets; they drive up the value of your corporation and thus its stock price, and they all produce a small amount of profit every week. Slave assets generate the most inherent profit. Both entrapment and conflict zone capture assets create more slave assets; drug, training, and surgical assets — in sufficient quantity — improve the slave assets you already have. Each week, all assets held by the corporation (including cash) will diminish to represent the costs of doing business. Slave assets are exempt from this, but their value is tied to the overall slave market. To maximize profits and offset the corporation's costs, it is advisable to sell some highly-priced assets each week and re-invest the proceeds in lower-priced assets. If all asset prices are low, it may be prudent to sell some slave assets and invest more in capture and/or entrapment assets or in training and medical assets. When other asset prices are high, slaves' assets may be your best option.
 
 	<br><br>__Slave Sales__
 		Once a corporation is created, it will get its own establishment in the slave market. Stockholders are offered discounts on its slaves, which increase with the size of the owner's share in the corporation. As the corporation's assets increase, it can be given direction about what kind of slaves it should train and how it should train them, which will affect the slaves seen in the corporate catalog. Each asset type allows three choices:
@@ -1039,7 +1039,7 @@ SLAVE BODY:
 	<br>-31  - -95  - very thin
 	<br>-96-		- emaciated
 
-	<br><br>The ideal range for a [[bodyguard|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Bodyguard"]] is 30 - -10, going either way negatively impacts them.
+	<br><br>The ideal range for a [[bodyguard|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Bodyguard"]] is 30 — -10, going either way negatively impacts them.
 
 
 <<case "Hormones (XX)">>
@@ -1125,7 +1125,7 @@ Choose a more particular entry below:
 
 
 <<case "Buttsluts">>
-''Buttsluts'' fetishize anal sex - mostly on the receiving end, though they'll enjoy other anal play.
+''Buttsluts'' fetishize anal sex — mostly on the receiving end, though they'll enjoy other anal play.
 
 	<br><br>The fetish can be created by appropriate smart clit piercing settings, serving the Head Girl, relationships, anally focused fucktoy service, service in a [[Dairy|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Dairy"]] upgraded with reciprocating dildos, the dildo drug dispenser upgrade, anal accessories, and being a painal queen.
 
@@ -1441,7 +1441,7 @@ SLAVE RELATIONSHIPS
 
 
 <<case "Emotionally Bonded">>
-	''Emotionally Bonded'' slaves have become so @@.hotpink;[[devoted|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@ to the player character that they define their own happiness mostly in terms of pleasing the PC. Slaves may become emotionally bonded if they become perfectly @@.hotpink;[[devoted|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@ and @@.mediumaquamarine;[[trusting|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Trust"]]@@ without being part of a [[romance|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Romances"]]. They receive powerful mental benefits - in fact, they are likely to accept anything short of sustained intentional abuse without lasting displeasure - and perform better at the [[servitude|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Servitude"]] and [[fucktoy|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Fucktoy"]] assignments. The most reliable way of ensuring a slave's development of emotional bonds is to have her assigned as a fucktoy (or to the [[Master suite|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Master Suite"]]) as she becomes perfectly @@.hotpink;[[devoted|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@ and @@.mediumaquamarine;[[trusting|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Trust"]]@@.
+	''Emotionally Bonded'' slaves have become so @@.hotpink;[[devoted|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@ to the player character that they define their own happiness mostly in terms of pleasing the PC. Slaves may become emotionally bonded if they become perfectly @@.hotpink;[[devoted|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@ and @@.mediumaquamarine;[[trusting|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Trust"]]@@ without being part of a [[romance|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Romances"]]. They receive powerful mental benefits — in fact, they are likely to accept anything short of sustained intentional abuse without lasting displeasure — and perform better at the [[servitude|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Servitude"]] and [[fucktoy|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Fucktoy"]] assignments. The most reliable way of ensuring a slave's development of emotional bonds is to have her assigned as a fucktoy (or to the [[Master suite|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Master Suite"]]) as she becomes perfectly @@.hotpink;[[devoted|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@ and @@.mediumaquamarine;[[trusting|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Trust"]]@@.
 
 
 <<case "Emotional Slut">>
@@ -1500,14 +1500,7 @@ THE X-SERIES ARCOLOGY
 
 	<br><br>I have been watching you and your slaves with close attention, so I have one other function to mention. I have learned a little of what constitutes successful slave training and husbandry. If you select the 'Rules Assistant' option on the main menu, I will review the rules your slaves are under and address any obvious problems. For example, I will place all disobedient slaves under restrictive rules.
 
-	<br><br>I would say that it is a pleasure to serve, but you are no doubt @@cyan;intelligent@@ enough to know that I cannot feel pleasure, making that a pointless pleasantry. Good day,
-	<<if def $PC.customTitle>>
-		$PC.customTitle.
-	<<elseif $PC.title != 0>>
-		Sir.
-	<<else>>
-		Ma'am.
-	<</if>>//
+	<br><br>I would say that it is a pleasure to serve, but you are no doubt @@cyan;intelligent@@ enough to know that I cannot feel pleasure, making that a pointless pleasantry. Good day, <<= properTitle()>>.//
 
 
 <<case "The Wardrobe">>
@@ -2016,7 +2009,7 @@ LORE: THE FREE CITIES TODAY
 
  <br><br>Let's break it right down into categories, shall we?
 
- <br><br>''First, clothes for your disobedient bitches.'' We must keep them uncomfortable, yes? The old reliable is //slave clothes//, sometimes referred to as straps. These give her that sex slave allure while keeping her nice and uncomfortable. You can also go for full coverage with //latex//. A suit of that will keep her totally reliant on your little whims. //Plugs// are nice sturdy leather affairs with inward-facing dildos for all the holes - and I do mean all. They're good stuff for breaking a bitch, and she might even learn to take dick a bit better! Word to the wise: not a good idea if you want those holes tight, though. Finally, //corsets//. These will make life tough, but that's good for a @@.orangered;[[rebellious|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@ little cunt, no? And corseting might just narrow that waist. But never mind, on to my favorites.
+ <br><br>''First, clothes for your disobedient bitches.'' We must keep them uncomfortable, yes? The old reliable is //slave clothes//, sometimes referred to as straps. These give her that sex slave allure while keeping her nice and uncomfortable. You can also go for full coverage with //latex//. A suit of that will keep her totally reliant on your little whims. //Plugs// are nice sturdy leather affairs with inward-facing dildos for all the holes — and I do mean all. They're good stuff for breaking a bitch, and she might even learn to take dick a bit better! Word to the wise: not a good idea if you want those holes tight, though. Finally, //corsets//. These will make life tough, but that's good for a @@.orangered;[[rebellious|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@ little cunt, no? And corseting might just narrow that waist. But never mind, on to my favorites.
 
  <br><br>''Second, nice attire for your prize stock.'' These clothes will keep your good slaves happy. You know, women out in the old world still wear //attractive lingerie// UNDER clothing? Absurd. It's lovely on it's own. If you're looking to be a bit more fun and a bit less classy, go for //string lingerie// instead. You could even let her choose her own //slutty outfits//; watching livestock dress itself is always good fun. When you can afford proper //slutty jewelry//, who needs clothes? I suggest accenting heavy piercings with this. For your hookah fanatics and decadent harem masters, there's //sheer gauze//. Makes even a clumsy girl look like she's dancing to a zither.
 
@@ -2119,7 +2112,7 @@ LORE: FREE CITIES CULTURE TOMORROW
 
  <br><br>Free Cities glory holes are perhaps the ultimate expression of the dark side of modern slavery. In the old world, glory holes were mostly a sexual fantasy, and were confined to certain sexual subcultures where they did exist in reality. Free Cities glory holes are different both in that they exist, and are indeed very common; and in that their occupants are almost never present voluntarily.
 
- <br><br>Glory holes and slave brothels have a symbiotic existence, and any Free Cities slaveholder who owns a brothel full of pampered prostitutes who claims moral ascendancy for not owning an arcade is ignoring realities. In truth, all slave brothels benefit from the existence of arcades. After all, every slave whore in the Free Cities knows that if she does not perform up to her Master's standards, the arcades exist as a way of extracting value from her body. Every slave brothel receives better efforts out of its slaves due to their knowledge that a worse alternative is always available - if not with their current master, then with some other.
+ <br><br>Glory holes and slave brothels have a symbiotic existence, and any Free Cities slaveholder who owns a brothel full of pampered prostitutes who claims moral ascendancy for not owning an arcade is ignoring realities. In truth, all slave brothels benefit from the existence of arcades. After all, every slave whore in the Free Cities knows that if she does not perform up to her Master's standards, the arcades exist as a way of extracting value from her body. Every slave brothel receives better efforts out of its slaves due to their knowledge that a worse alternative is always available — if not with their current master, then with some other.
 
  <br><br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;-- Lawrence, J. K., and Bolingbroke, D. S., __Trends in Free Cities Culture, 2031__ //Journal of Modern Social Sciences, International Edition, February 2032////
 
@@ -2172,7 +2165,7 @@ LORE: FREE CITIES CULTURE TOMORROW
 
  <br><br>The medical impacts of the widespread reintroduction of slavery are not at all what might have been predicted twenty years ago. Medicine is not our primary focus in this review of Free Cities cultural trends, but a brief look at the striking medical outcomes is critical to understanding some of the social currents at work. By the second half of the twentieth century, the majority of humanity had reached a state of plenty so great that the health dangers of excess were greater than the health dangers of want.
 
- <br><br>For the first time in modern memory, people - slaves - in the Free Cities are, in large numbers, doing exactly what their doctors recommend. Properly managed slaves eat right, exercise regularly, and do not smoke, drink, or do recreational drugs. These simple but revolutionary changes mean that the more valuable classes of slave are healthier, on average, than any group of human beings has ever been.
+ <br><br>For the first time in modern memory, people — slaves — in the Free Cities are, in large numbers, doing exactly what their doctors recommend. Properly managed slaves eat right, exercise regularly, and do not smoke, drink, or do recreational drugs. These simple but revolutionary changes mean that the more valuable classes of slave are healthier, on average, than any group of human beings has ever been.
 
  <br><br>Naturally, fetishism, competitiveness, and leisure have intersected to create in the Free Cities a constant escalation of physical one-upmanship when it comes to the training of slaves. Wonderfully muscled specimens have become very common, with feats of athletic prowess cited alongside sexual accomplishments without any distinction. The arcology owners most @@.hotpink;[[devoted|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@ to the human form are creating societies of uniform physical perfection unlike anything in human history.
 
@@ -2214,7 +2207,7 @@ LORE: INTERVIEWS
  <br>Oh, like, you want me to tell you my life story?
 
  <br><br>//Sure.//
- <br>Would it be okay if you fucked me while I tell you? I, uh, can't really think right now. I guess I could also suck - but then I wouldn't be able to talk? Here, please, please stick - oh, okay. Okay! Uh. Yeah. [giggles] That feels better. Thanks!
+ <br>Would it be okay if you fucked me while I tell you? I, uh, can't really think right now. I guess I could also suck — but then I wouldn't be able to talk? Here, please, please stick — oh, okay. Okay! Uh. Yeah. [giggles] That feels better. Thanks!
 
  <br><br>//Why couldn't you talk without being fucked?//
  <br>Well, we're all really horny. I'm really horny. Everything does it. The hormones, and all the training, and the drugs, and it's also kind of a habit, you know? It's been almost an hour! If you do it slow like that I'll be okay. [giggles] Yeah. Thank you!
@@ -2335,7 +2328,7 @@ LORE: INTERVIEWS
 	<br><br>P-please, Sir! Please fuck me, Sir!
 
 	<br><br>//Very well. I will ask, though: why?//
-	<br>B-because I'm overdue, Sir. If I d-don't get someone to f-fuck me soon, my c-collar will hurt me, Sir. Oh please, oh - oh thank you Sir, please, please - oh, OH -
+	<br>B-because I'm overdue, Sir. If I d-don't get someone to f-fuck me soon, my c-collar will hurt me, Sir. Oh please, oh — oh thank you Sir, please, please — oh, OH —
 
 	<br><br>[Some time later.]
 	<br>[Slave collar chimes.]
@@ -2438,7 +2431,7 @@ LORE: INTERVIEWS
 	<br>Because you might damage the merchandise. Did you know it's possible to burst an implant with a beanbag round? Well, it's possible to burst an implant with a beanbag round.
 
 	<br><br>//You know I have to ask about that now.//
-	<br>And I wouldn't have said it if I didn't want to tell the story. Not a long one anyway. Old world mob boss asshole with a moored yacht full of hoes, all tats and fake tits and shit. We went in quick without enough muscle and the guards resisted. Perfect op is, you go in so heavy that nobody resists, but it was rushed and we had to put 'em down. So all these bitches are running around screaming their heads off and we get the call that the police are coming. Didn't want to shoot it out with them since the tip came from a cop in the first place. So we had a couple of minutes to grab what we could and jet. So, beanbags, zipties, bodybags, and off - we - go, one hoe apiece.
+	<br>And I wouldn't have said it if I didn't want to tell the story. Not a long one anyway. Old world mob boss asshole with a moored yacht full of hoes, all tats and fake tits and shit. We went in quick without enough muscle and the guards resisted. Perfect op is, you go in so heavy that nobody resists, but it was rushed and we had to put 'em down. So all these bitches are running around screaming their heads off and we get the call that the police are coming. Didn't want to shoot it out with them since the tip came from a cop in the first place. So we had a couple of minutes to grab what we could and jet. So, beanbags, zipties, bodybags, and off — we — go, one hoe apiece.
 
 	<br><br>//That sounds risky.//
 	<br>Yeah it was. I'm not some hothead who does shit like that for the rush. If you run that op once a week you're going to be dead inside a year. I found new employers not long after that one. Funny story and all, but if I hadn't gone with ceramic side plates in my vest that night I would have been fucked.
@@ -2506,7 +2499,7 @@ LORE: INTERVIEWS
 	Yes, Ma'am.
 
 	<br><br>//Do you like having your big fat naked butt hanging out, bitch?//
-	Yes, Ma - aaAAH! Oh, ow, oh my God, ow -
+	Yes, Ma — aaAAH! Oh, ow, oh my God, ow -
 
 	<br><br>//Be quiet. That was a 2. Your collar goes to 10.//
 	[sobbing] Yes, Ma'am.
@@ -2755,7 +2748,7 @@ LORE: INTERVIEWS
 	Eventually a pregnant slave will need to give birth. Cesarean sections are an option should a slave's health not permit a safe natural birth, or should a slaveowner want to keep her from being stretched out by her newborn child. A healthy, well rested slave, with wide hips and some knowledge will generally find childbirth easy. Though poor health, tiredness, narrow hips, anorexia, tight vaginas, excessively young motherhood, and lack of experience can complicate things, potentially leading to the loss of both child and mother.
 
 <<case "Surrogacy">>
-	''Surrogacy'' is an arrangement whereby a woman agrees or is forced to become pregnant, carry the pregnancy to due term, and give birth to a child or children, all of this for another person or persons, who are or will ultimately become the parent(s) of the newborn child or children. There are two types of surrogacies: traditional and gestational (full). Traditional is mostly used by homosexual couples or if fertility treatments are too expensive. With the exception of societies that embraced Repopulationism or Gender Fundamentalism, full surrogacy is popular among free women, who want children, but don't want pregnancy to impact their careers or physical attributes. It created a market of living incubators - perfectly healthy slaves of safe age for carrying pregnancies with often little to no skills necessary for most other slaves.
+	''Surrogacy'' is an arrangement whereby a woman agrees or is forced to become pregnant, carry the pregnancy to due term, and give birth to a child or children, all of this for another person or persons, who are or will ultimately become the parent(s) of the newborn child or children. There are two types of surrogacies: traditional and gestational (full). Traditional is mostly used by homosexual couples or if fertility treatments are too expensive. With the exception of societies that embraced Repopulationism or Gender Fundamentalism, full surrogacy is popular among free women, who want children, but don't want pregnancy to impact their careers or physical attributes. It created a market of living incubators — perfectly healthy slaves of safe age for carrying pregnancies with often little to no skills necessary for most other slaves.
 
 <<case "Ova Transplantation">>
 	''Ova transplantation'' is a procedure where an already fertilized ova is transplanted from one womb to another of the same species. It requires a remote surgery to perform and an advanced pregnancy monitoring systems to locate the egg, confirm the fertilization and determine that it happened less than four weeks ago, so that the ova is not too attached to the lining. Optimally the new host must be healthy and must not be already pregnant with large number of fetuses or hit menopause, but be old enough to carry children successfully.
diff --git a/src/npc/databases/dSlavesDatabase.tw b/src/npc/databases/dSlavesDatabase.tw
index 80db22447a885230b2fb1eac324e154a48ec4791..f5be41922c1ab35f496244779bdcaa0198527cbb 100644
--- a/src/npc/databases/dSlavesDatabase.tw
+++ b/src/npc/databases/dSlavesDatabase.tw
@@ -526,7 +526,7 @@
 /* put some of her custom description in her origin (box stuff), tagged as amp, lowered obedience, increased weight but lowered health, changed skin color from white to pale */
 
 <<set _HS = {}>>
-<<set _HS.slaveName = "Yukiko", _HS.birthName = "Yukiko", _HS.ID = _i++, _HS.birthWeek = random(0,51), _HS.actualAge = 19, _HS.physicalAge = 19, _HS.visualAge = 19, _HS.ovaryAge = 19, _HS.health = 20, _HS.devotion = 100, _HS.weight = -20, _HS.race = "asian", _HS.hColor = "black", _HS.pubicHColor = "black", _HS.skin = "very fair", _HS.hStyle = "long, and in a hime cut", _HS.amp = 1, _HS.boobs = 500, _HS.butt = 3, _HS.vaginaLube = 1, _HS.ovaries = 1, _HS.clothes = "a slave gown", _HS.intelligence = -40, _HS.intelligenceImplant = 30, _HS.attrXY = 40, _HS.fetishKnown = 1, _HS.behavioralFlaw = "odd", _HS.customDesc = "She is a work of art: stoic, mysterious, doll-like, - and always smiling.", _HS.voice = 0>>
+<<set _HS.slaveName = "Yukiko", _HS.birthName = "Yukiko", _HS.ID = _i++, _HS.birthWeek = random(0,51), _HS.actualAge = 19, _HS.physicalAge = 19, _HS.visualAge = 19, _HS.ovaryAge = 19, _HS.health = 20, _HS.devotion = 100, _HS.weight = -20, _HS.race = "asian", _HS.hColor = "black", _HS.pubicHColor = "black", _HS.skin = "very fair", _HS.hStyle = "long, and in a hime cut", _HS.amp = 1, _HS.boobs = 500, _HS.butt = 3, _HS.vaginaLube = 1, _HS.ovaries = 1, _HS.clothes = "a slave gown", _HS.intelligence = -40, _HS.intelligenceImplant = 30, _HS.attrXY = 40, _HS.fetishKnown = 1, _HS.behavioralFlaw = "odd", _HS.customDesc = "She is a work of art: stoic, mysterious, doll-like, — and always smiling.", _HS.voice = 0>>
 <<set $heroSlaves.push(_HS)>>
 /* not much to change, lowered weight ('perfect slim body'), set to mute and changed flaw to odd- described as creepy */
 
diff --git a/src/npc/databases/ddSlavesDatabase.tw b/src/npc/databases/ddSlavesDatabase.tw
index ee4f803ac55a0da88d07f8217985d68083649c04..af3fc38b6c521d3322de837b51f745695d3d8c03 100644
--- a/src/npc/databases/ddSlavesDatabase.tw
+++ b/src/npc/databases/ddSlavesDatabase.tw
@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@
 <<set _HS.slaveName = "Exta", _HS.birthName = "Exta", _HS.genes = "XY", _HS.ID = _i++, _HS.birthWeek = random(0,51), _HS.actualAge = 21, _HS.physicalAge = 21, _HS.visualAge = 21, _HS.ovaryAge = 21, _HS.health = 20, _HS.devotion = 60, _HS.muscles = 20, _HS.height = 190, _HS.eyeColor = "brown", _HS.hColor = "blonde", _HS.pubicHColor = "blonde", _HS.skin = "white", _HS.hLength = 15, _HS.hStyle = "short, and in a boyish cut", _HS.boobs = 300, _HS.butt = 1, _HS.vagina = -1, _HS.preg = -2, _HS.dick = 2, _HS.prostate = 1, _HS.balls = 1, _HS.anusTat = "bleached", _HS.oralSkill = 15, _HS.combatSkill = 1, _HS.intelligence = 30, _HS.attrXX = 40, _HS.attrXY = 40, _HS.fetishKnown = 1, _HS.customTat = "She has a raised circuitry pattern on the nape of her neck.", _HS.sexualFlaw = "shamefast", _HS.career = "a businessman">>
 <<set $heroSlaves.push(_HS)>>
 /*business skill*/
-/*likes mods - gave internal tesiticles as such PM*/
+/*likes mods - gave internal testicles as such PM*/
 
 <<set _HS = {}>>
 <<set _HS.slaveName = "Martin", _HS.birthName = "Martin", _HS.genes = "XY", _HS.ID = _i++, _HS.birthWeek = random(0,51), _HS.actualAge = 19, _HS.physicalAge = 19, _HS.visualAge = 19, _HS.ovaryAge = 19, _HS.health = 20, _HS.devotion = -55, _HS.muscles = 20, _HS.height = 190, _HS.eyeColor = "bright blue", _HS.hColor = "white", _HS.pubicHColor = "white", _HS.skin = "extremely pale", _HS.hLength = 15, _HS.hStyle = "short and in a boyish cut", _HS.waist = -55, _HS.boobs = 100, _HS.butt = 4, _HS.face = 55, _HS.vagina = -1, _HS.preg = -2, _HS.dick = 3, _HS.prostate = 1, _HS.balls = 3, _HS.scrotum = 3, _HS.anusTat = "bleached", _HS.combatSkill = 1, _HS.intelligence = 30, _HS.intelligenceImplant = 30, _HS.attrXX = 40, _HS.attrXY = 40, _HS.fetish = "submissive", _HS.behavioralFlaw = "arrogant", _HS.customDesc = "An iron-willed, recently captured figure of a prominent anti-Free City guerrilla party, she still clings strongly to traditional beliefs on Man's natural good, economic restriction, and monogamy. Excitable, girly, and sweet in comparison to her natural sister, Elisa, she has a lovely singing voice. She prays quite often, if allowed to.", _HS.mother = -9997, _HS.father = -9996, _HS.sexualFlaw = "hates penetration">>
diff --git a/src/npc/databases/dfSlavesDatabase.tw b/src/npc/databases/dfSlavesDatabase.tw
index e4a7ce0210149908d13d4b1b2ccf80819bb28afd..f68380d40ddbab9473215f367a72e81d03390437 100644
--- a/src/npc/databases/dfSlavesDatabase.tw
+++ b/src/npc/databases/dfSlavesDatabase.tw
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
 <<set $heroSlaves.push(_HS)>>
 
 <<set _HS = {}>>
-<<set _HS.slaveName = "Carambola", _HS.birthName = "Carambola", _HS.ID = _i++, _HS.birthWeek = random(0,51), _HS.actualAge = 25, _HS.physicalAge = 25, _HS.visualAge = 25, _HS.ovaryAge = 25, _HS.health = 20, _HS.devotion = 90, _HS.height = 175, _HS.eyeColor = "light green", _HS.hColor = "dark blonde", _HS.pubicHColor = "dark blonde", _HS.skin = "tanned", _HS.hLength = 60, _HS.hStyle = "curly and long, and in pigtails", _HS.pubicHStyle = "waxed", _HS.boobs = 650, _HS.nipplesPiercing = 1, _HS.butt = 8, _HS.buttImplant = 4, _HS.lips = 35, _HS.vagina = 1, _HS.vaginaLube = 1, _HS.vaginaPiercing = 2, _HS.preg = -2, _HS.anus = 3, _HS.ovaries = 1, _HS.vaginalSkill = 15, _HS.oralSkill = 15, _HS.analSkill = 100, _HS.attrXY = 40, _HS.fetish = "buttslut", _HS.fetishKnown = 1, _HS.customTat = "Carambolas — starfruits - are tattooed on her buttocks and on her face.", _HS.clitPiercing = 2, _HS.tonguePiercing = 1, _HS.clothes = "no clothing", _HS.collar = "bell collar", _HS.heels = 1>>
+<<set _HS.slaveName = "Carambola", _HS.birthName = "Carambola", _HS.ID = _i++, _HS.birthWeek = random(0,51), _HS.actualAge = 25, _HS.physicalAge = 25, _HS.visualAge = 25, _HS.ovaryAge = 25, _HS.health = 20, _HS.devotion = 90, _HS.height = 175, _HS.eyeColor = "light green", _HS.hColor = "dark blonde", _HS.pubicHColor = "dark blonde", _HS.skin = "tanned", _HS.hLength = 60, _HS.hStyle = "curly and long, and in pigtails", _HS.pubicHStyle = "waxed", _HS.boobs = 650, _HS.nipplesPiercing = 1, _HS.butt = 8, _HS.buttImplant = 4, _HS.lips = 35, _HS.vagina = 1, _HS.vaginaLube = 1, _HS.vaginaPiercing = 2, _HS.preg = -2, _HS.anus = 3, _HS.ovaries = 1, _HS.vaginalSkill = 15, _HS.oralSkill = 15, _HS.analSkill = 100, _HS.attrXY = 40, _HS.fetish = "buttslut", _HS.fetishKnown = 1, _HS.customTat = "Carambolas — starfruits — are tattooed on her buttocks and on her face.", _HS.clitPiercing = 2, _HS.tonguePiercing = 1, _HS.clothes = "no clothing", _HS.collar = "bell collar", _HS.heels = 1>>
 /*vibe nips, saliva implant lube*/
 <<set $heroSlaves.push(_HS)>>
 
diff --git a/src/npc/descriptions/fBoobs.tw b/src/npc/descriptions/fBoobs.tw
index 23959630ce5a2815fe4484dd456c9665dad9200c..b3b12835bfd4733e994bae2eb9798660d3ae64d5 100644
--- a/src/npc/descriptions/fBoobs.tw
+++ b/src/npc/descriptions/fBoobs.tw
@@ -109,11 +109,11 @@ tits.
 	<<elseif $PC.boobs != 0>>
 	You lie down on top of $him, face to face, forced high into the air by $his excessively large belly, so that your breasts press into $his<<if ($activeSlave.boobs >= 20000)>> colossal tits.<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobs >= 10000)>> massive tits.<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobs >= 5000)>> monster tits.<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobs >= 1000)>> huge tits.<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobsImplant > 250)>> fake tits.<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobs >= 650)>> big tits.<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobs >= 300)>> small tits.<<else>> flat chest.<</if>> Scooting around to stimulate your nipples against $his warm breastflesh, you kiss the slave while pushing a hand down between you to schlick yourself against $him.
 	<<else>>
-	You set $his massively distended body on the floor, and tease $him for a while until $his nipples are rock hard. This done, you kneel down on $his with each of your legs aside $his torso, rear against the top of $his belly, and hump your pussy back and forth on the stiff nub of one nipple. $He lies there, desperately trying to reach around $his bulk to $his own pussy, but unable to do so, resorts to squirming with the stimulation.
+	You set $his massively distended body on the floor, and tease $him for a while until $his nipples are rock hard. This done, you kneel down on $him with each of your legs aside $his torso, rear against the top of $his belly, and hump your pussy back and forth on the stiff nub of one nipple. $He lies there, desperately trying to reach around $his bulk to $his own pussy, but unable to do so, resorts to squirming with the stimulation.
 	<</if>>
 <<elseif tooBigBreasts($activeSlave)>>
 	<<if $PC.dick == 1>>
-	$His excessive breasts make $him a unique appliance for mammary intercourse. You lay $him down on the ground on $his back, lube $his cleavage, and straddle $his torso. $He holds $his udders together, creating a warm, wet channel as fuckable as any hole. You blast $his in the face with your cum in no time<<if $PC.vagina == 1>>, leaving your pussyjuice on $his chest where you rubbed against $him<</if>>.
+	$His excessive breasts make $him a unique appliance for mammary intercourse. You lay $him down on the ground on $his back, lube $his cleavage, and straddle $his torso. $He holds $his udders together, creating a warm, wet channel as fuckable as any hole. You blast $him in the face with your cum in no time<<if $PC.vagina == 1>>, leaving your pussyjuice on $his chest where you rubbed against $him<</if>>.
 	<<elseif $PC.boobs != 0>>
 	You lie down on top of $him, face to face, so that your much smaller breasts press into the massive pillows formed by $his chest. Scooting around to stimulate your nipples against $his warm breastflesh, you kiss the slave while pushing a hand down between you to schlick yourself against $him.
 	<<else>>
@@ -123,7 +123,7 @@ tits.
 	<<if $PC.dick == 1>>
 	$His excessive butt makes $him a unique appliance for mammary intercourse. You lay $him down on the ground on $his back, $his butt hoisting $his crotch high above $his head, lube $his cleavage, and straddle $his torso. With your cock between $his breasts, you <<if ($activeSlave.boobs >= 650)>>squash $his tits together to form a nice lubricated channel,<<else>>hold your cock in place,<</if>> and ride back and forth on $him<<if $PC.vagina == 1>>, leaving your pussyjuice on $his chest where you rubbed against $him<</if>>. $He has some trouble breathing under the assault, but $he manages. And for the finale, $he's totally unable to avoid a perfect cumshot.
 	<<elseif $PC.boobs != 0>>
-	You set $him upright on your lap, facing you, so that your breasts and $hers are resting heavily against one another and $his massive ass covers your lap. $He turns $his head to avoid getting splashed in the eyes as you add a generous coating of oil to the combined breastflesh. You reach around to grab $his luxurious ass and jiggle $his up and down, giving you both a wonderful mammary oil massage.
+	You set $him upright on your lap, facing you, so that your breasts and $hers are resting heavily against one another and $his massive ass covers your lap. $He turns $his head to avoid getting splashed in the eyes as you add a generous coating of oil to the combined breastflesh. You reach around to grab $his luxurious ass and jiggle $him up and down, giving you both a wonderful mammary oil massage.
 	<<else>>
 		You set $his nearly helpless body on the floor and then scoot your hips under the massive weight of $his tits. The heft feels nice against you, and you worm a naughty hand under there to play with yourself in the warm cave formed by your pelvis and $his udders.
 	<</if>>
@@ -144,9 +144,9 @@ tits.
 <<elseif $activeSlave.devotion < -20>>
 	$He tries to refuse you, so you throw $him down on the couch next to your desk and
 	<<if $PC.dick == 1>>
-		squeeze lubricant between $his $activeSlave.skin breasts. You straddle $his torso, hold $his boobs together, and fuck $his cleavage<<if $PC.vagina == 1>>, grinding your hips down against $his to stimulate your pussy<</if>>. Your cum splashes $his crying face.
+		squeeze lubricant between $his $activeSlave.skin breasts. You straddle $his torso, hold $his boobs together, and fuck $his cleavage<<if $PC.vagina == 1>>, grinding your hips down against $him to stimulate your pussy<</if>>. Your cum splashes $his crying face.
 	<<elseif $PC.boobs !== 0>>
-		squirt lubricant all over $his $activeSlave.skin breasts. Then, you lie down atop $his with your breasts meshing with $hers and begin to slide up and down, stimulating your nipples wonderfully. $He tries to turn $his head away, but you reach up to force $his unwilling mouth to accept your insistent tongue.
+		squirt lubricant all over $his $activeSlave.skin breasts. Then, you lie down atop $him with your breasts meshing with $hers and begin to slide up and down, stimulating your nipples wonderfully. $He tries to turn $his head away, but you reach up to force $his unwilling mouth to accept your insistent tongue.
 	<<else>>
 		straddle $his face, grinding your pussy against $his unwilling mouth. You begin to grope $his breasts and pinch $his nipples to hardness, and hen $he's slow at eating you out, you twist them cruelly. The pain makes $him squeal into your pussy, a lovely sensation, so you manhandle $him without mercy until you climax against $his gasping face.
 	<</if>>
@@ -155,7 +155,7 @@ tits.
 	<<if $PC.dick == 1>>
 		desk and rubs lube over $his $activeSlave.skin chest so you can fuck $his tits. You straddle $his torso, hold $his boobs together, and fuck $his cleavage. As you do, the pressure of your grip causes a thin rivulet of milk to run from each of $his nipples. Your cum covers $his reluctant face; between your semen<<if $PC.vagina == 1>>, the pussyjuice you left on $his chest,<</if>> and $his milk $he's quite a mess.
 	<<elseif $PC.boobs != 0>>
-		desk and rubs lube over $his $activeSlave.skin breasts. Then, you lie down atop $his with your breasts meshing with $hers and begin to slide up and down, titillating your nipples wonderfully. $He cannot ignore the slippery stimulation $his nipples are receiving, and you find $his mouth quite willing to receive your insistent tongue. $He begins to leak milk, adding $his cream to the lube between your breasts, and by the time you're done there's quite a mess.
+		desk and rubs lube over $his $activeSlave.skin breasts. Then, you lie down atop $him with your breasts meshing with $hers and begin to slide up and down, titillating your nipples wonderfully. $He cannot ignore the slippery stimulation $his nipples are receiving, and you find $his mouth quite willing to receive your insistent tongue. $He begins to leak milk, adding $his cream to the lube between your breasts, and by the time you're done there's quite a mess.
 	<<else>>
 		desk, and you've straddled $his face before $he can do anything more. You begin to grope $his breasts and pinch $his nipples to hardness as $he eats you out, your ministrations producing prompt jets of creamy milk, straight up into the air. You milk $him without mercy, shooting some of the stronger streams into your mouth as you ride $him, leaving $him to massage $his breasts gingerly as you get off $his face.
 	<</if>>
@@ -164,12 +164,12 @@ tits.
 	<<if $PC.dick == 1>>
 		desk and rubs lube over $his <<if $seeRace == 1>>$activeSlave.race <</if>>chest so you can fuck $his $activeSlave.skin tits. You straddle $his torso, hold $his boobs together, and fuck $his cleavage. Your cum covers $his reluctant face<<if $PC.vagina == 1>>, and you hike yourself up a little higher to grind your pussy against $his mouth<</if>>.
 	<<elseif $PC.boobs != 0>>
-		desk and rubs lube over $his $activeSlave.skin breasts. Then, you lie down atop $his with your breasts meshing with $hers and begin to slide up and down, titillating your nipples wonderfully. $He cannot ignore the slippery stimulation $his nipples are receiving, and you find $his mouth quite willing to receive your insistent tongue.
+		desk and rubs lube over $his $activeSlave.skin breasts. Then, you lie down atop $him with your breasts meshing with $hers and begin to slide up and down, titillating your nipples wonderfully. $He cannot ignore the slippery stimulation $his nipples are receiving, and you find $his mouth quite willing to receive your insistent tongue.
 	<<else>>
 		desk, and you've straddled $his face before $he can do anything more. You begin to grope $his breasts and pinch $his nipples to hardness as $he eats you out, your ministrations producing moans that feel quite nice against your clit. You maul $his boobs without mercy as you reach your climax, leaving $him to massage $his breasts gingerly as you get off $him.
 	<</if>>
 <<elseif ($activeSlave.lactation > 0)>>
-	Since $he's producing milk, $he gets an emotional high from breastfeeding, and $he sits on the edge of your desk for a while so you can use $his as a beverage dispenser while you work. Once $he's empty, $he gets down to <<if ($PC.dick == 0)>>eat you out. As $he buries $his face between your legs, $he gently rolls $his sore nipples around in $his fingers, quietly moaning and whining.<<else>>give you a titjob. As $he titfucks you, $he gently rolls $his sore nipples around in $his fingers, quietly moaning and whining. Your cum covers $his <<if $seeRace == 1>>$activeSlave.race <</if>>face in no time, and $he's left with a spectacular mess to clean. $He laps it all up.<</if>>
+	Since $he's producing milk, $he gets an emotional high from breastfeeding, and $he sits on the edge of your desk for a while so you can use $him as a beverage dispenser while you work. Once $he's empty, $he gets down to <<if ($PC.dick == 0)>>eat you out. As $he buries $his face between your legs, $he gently rolls $his sore nipples around in $his fingers, quietly moaning and whining.<<else>>give you a titjob. As $he titfucks you, $he gently rolls $his sore nipples around in $his fingers, quietly moaning and whining. Your cum covers $his <<if $seeRace == 1>>$activeSlave.race <</if>>face in no time, and $he's left with a spectacular mess to clean. $He laps it all up.<</if>>
 <<else>>
 	<<if $PC.dick == 1>>
 		$He massages and toys with $his chest for your benefit, languidly rubbing lubricant over not only $his cleavage but $his entire chest, making sure every inch of $his $activeSlave.skin breasts are nice and shiny. $He gives you a titjob with $his lubricated cleavage while you sit at your desk<<if $PC.vagina == 1>>, doing $his best to run $his hard nipples between your pussylips whenever $he can<</if>>. Your cum covers $his <<if $seeRace == 1>>$activeSlave.race <</if>>face, and $he carefully licks it all off while continuing to play with $his erect nipples.
diff --git a/src/npc/descriptions/fButt.tw b/src/npc/descriptions/fButt.tw
index 79928dfa5d111dcc0c3159477eb2459a8e7561f4..d85fe3b911a493ca9ccf3fee58c69ced74253d5b 100644
--- a/src/npc/descriptions/fButt.tw
+++ b/src/npc/descriptions/fButt.tw
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ $His anus is invitingly bleached,
 		Brooking no resistance, you take $his virginity and then break in $his virgin butt.
 	<</if>>
 	<<if ($activeSlave.devotion > 50)>>
-		You ease yourself into $his pussy before gradually working your way into $his ass and alternate between the two holes while $he begins to moan. In just a few minutes, $he has lost $his virginity and been assfucked for the first time. $He @@.hotpink;submits utterly@@ to your spoilage of $his innocence and thanks you meekly for introducing $his to proper sexual slavery. @@.lime;$His holes have been broken in.@@
+		You ease yourself into $his pussy before gradually working your way into $his ass and alternate between the two holes while $he begins to moan. In just a few minutes, $he has lost $his virginity and been assfucked for the first time. $He @@.hotpink;submits utterly@@ to your spoilage of $his innocence and thanks you meekly for introducing $him to proper sexual slavery. @@.lime;$His holes have been broken in.@@
 		<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 10>>
 	<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion > 20)>>
 		You ease yourself into $his pussy before gradually working your way into $his ass and alternate between the two holes while $he begins to moan. In just a few minutes, $he has lost $his virginity and been assfucked for the first time. $He's so bewildered by the pain and novelty that all $he feels is @@.gold;a little fear@@ of further use. @@.lime;$His holes have been broken in.@@
@@ -102,11 +102,11 @@ $His anus is invitingly bleached,
 	<<if ($PC.dick == 0)>>You don a cruelly large strap-on, and you do it so $he can see it. <</if>>$He tries to refuse you, so you throw $his across the back of the couch next to your desk with $his <<if $seeRace == 1>>$activeSlave.race <</if>>ass in the air. You finger $his anus <<if ($activeSlave.vagina != -1)>>while fucking $his pussy<<elseif ($activeSlave.amp != 1)>>while frotting $his thighs<</if>> for a bit and then switch to $his now-ready anus. $He sobs as you penetrate $his rectum.
 	<<if ($activeSlave.dick != 0) && canAchieveErection($activeSlave)>>
 		<<if $activeSlave.prostate == 0>>
-			$He lacks a prostate, denying $his any real pleasure. $His dick stays flaccid as you rape $him.
+			$He lacks a prostate, denying $him any real pleasure. $His dick stays flaccid as you rape $him.
 		<<elseif ($activeSlave.dickAccessory == "chastity")>>
-			Despite $his unwillingness to be sodomized, the prostate stimulation starts to give $his an erection, which $his dick chastity makes horribly uncomfortable. $He bucks with the pain, $his asshole spasming delightfully.
+			Despite $his unwillingness to be sodomized, the prostate stimulation starts to give $him an erection, which $his dick chastity makes horribly uncomfortable. $He bucks with the pain, $his asshole spasming delightfully.
 		<<else>>
-			Despite $his unwillingness to be sodomized, the prostate stimulation gives $his an erection. $He's mortified that $he would get hard while being anally raped.
+			Despite $his unwillingness to be sodomized, the prostate stimulation gives $him an erection. $He's mortified that $he would get hard while being anally raped.
 		<</if>>
 	<<elseif ($activeSlave.dickAccessory == "chastity")>>
 		$His dick chastity keeps $his bitch cock hidden away while you use $his anus like a pussy.
@@ -144,7 +144,7 @@ $His anus is invitingly bleached,
 	You fuck $him there for a while before repeatedly pulling out and stuffing yourself back in. $He moans each time you fill <<if canDoVaginal($activeSlave)>>a<<else>>$his<</if>> waiting hole.
 	<<if ($activeSlave.dick != 0) && canAchieveErection($activeSlave)>>
 		<<if ["chastity", "combined chastity"].includes($activeSlave.dickAccessory)>>
-			Whenever $he starts to get hard, $his dick chastity gives $his an awful twinge of pain. You do your best to be up $his butt when this happens so you can experience the resulting spasm.
+			Whenever $he starts to get hard, $his dick chastity gives $him an awful twinge of pain. You do your best to be up $his butt when this happens so you can experience the resulting spasm.
 		<<else>>
 			Every time you penetrate, $his erect dick jerks up and slaps $his stomach.
 		<</if>>
@@ -178,7 +178,7 @@ $His anus is invitingly bleached,
 
 <<if (random(1,100) > (100+$activeSlave.devotion))>>
 	<<if ($activeSlave.fetish !== "buttslut") && ($activeSlave.energy <= 95) && ($activeSlave.sexualFlaw !== "hates penetration")>>
-		Being brutally used has given $his a @@.red;hatred of penetration.@@
+		Being brutally used has given $him a @@.red;hatred of penetration.@@
 		<<set $activeSlave.sexualFlaw = "hates penetration">>
 	<</if>>
 <<elseif (random(1,100) > (110-$activeSlave.devotion))>>
diff --git a/src/npc/descriptions/fLips.tw b/src/npc/descriptions/fLips.tw
index b6ecbe4ecac3c85d86641a6d46bd6d79a397ac1e..4a521edff2662f4790ca25490737ab7916f66c21 100644
--- a/src/npc/descriptions/fLips.tw
+++ b/src/npc/descriptions/fLips.tw
@@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ You tell $activeSlave.slaveName to
 		the depth or quickness of oral sex, so you are careful not to hurt $him. Even so, you take $him to the edge of gagging, enjoying the sight of $his $activeSlave.skin throat bulging and $his absurd boobs jiggling as $he struggles to breathe. Eventually you shoot your load directly down $his gullet.
 		<<if $PC.vagina == 1>>If $he thought that was it, $he's soon corrected: you hike yourself up further, and grind your pussy against $his face.<</if>>
 	<<else>>
-		how hard you grind your cunt against $his face, so you are careful not to suffocate $him. Even so, you take $him to the edge, enjoying the sight of $his absurd boobs jiggling as $he struggles to breathe. Eventually you climax, giving $his a good taste of your femcum.
+		how hard you grind your cunt against $his face, so you are careful not to suffocate $him. Even so, you take $him to the edge, enjoying the sight of $his absurd boobs jiggling as $he struggles to breathe. Eventually you climax, giving $him a good taste of your femcum.
 	<</if>>
 <<elseif tooBigButt($activeSlave)>>
 	You get $him situated on the edge of your desk, on $his back. This anchors $him, the massive weight of $his ass stopping $him from going anywhere at all. $His head dangles off the edge of the desk, leaving $his <<if $seeRace == 1>>$activeSlave.race <</if>>mouth at the perfect angle for use.
@@ -139,7 +139,7 @@ You tell $activeSlave.slaveName to
 	<<if ($PC.dick != 0)>>
 		give you a blowjob. Deciding that $he isn't showing the necessary enthusiasm, you hold $his head and fuck $his <<if $seeRace == 1>>$activeSlave.race <</if>>face instead<<if $PC.vagina == 1>>, occasionally jerking your dick free to shove your pussy against $his face instead<</if>>. $He does $his best to follow your motions but still splutters and gags. You pull free to cum across $his $activeSlave.skin face and hair.
 	<<else>>
-		eat you out. Deciding that $he isn't showing the necessary enthusiasm, you hold $his head and grind your pussy against $his <<if $seeRace == 1>>$activeSlave.race <</if>>face instead. $He does $his best to follow your motions but still splutters and gasps for air. You climax quickly and haul $his to $his feet, kissing the bewildered $girl full on the mouth. You can taste yourself on $his lips.
+		eat you out. Deciding that $he isn't showing the necessary enthusiasm, you hold $his head and grind your pussy against $his <<if $seeRace == 1>>$activeSlave.race <</if>>face instead. $He does $his best to follow your motions but still splutters and gasps for air. You climax quickly and haul $him to $his feet, kissing the bewildered $girl full on the mouth. You can taste yourself on $his lips.
 	<</if>>
 <<else>>
 	$He licks $his lips <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>and looks you in the eyes <</if>>as $he gets to $his knees. $He
diff --git a/src/npc/descriptions/fVagina.tw b/src/npc/descriptions/fVagina.tw
index 4cd2c8a5d423db31c0177da9fd8dc9572811e6e3..46d044225f5b57dd98b5af18438ec4fc6f76b49c 100644
--- a/src/npc/descriptions/fVagina.tw
+++ b/src/npc/descriptions/fVagina.tw
@@ -112,7 +112,7 @@ You call $him over so you can
 		<</if>>
 		You tell $him to lie down on the couch next to your desk.
 	<<elseif (_fPosition <= 40)>>
-		in the cowgirl position. You lie on the couch beside your desk and tell $his to straddle you, facing towards you.
+		in the cowgirl position. You lie on the couch beside your desk and tell $him to straddle you, facing towards you.
 		<<if $activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 600000>>
 			A position that will smother you with $his immense pregnancy.
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.belly >= 600000>>
@@ -460,7 +460,7 @@ You call $him over so you can
 		<<elseif ($activeSlave.dickAccessory == "chastity") || ($activeSlave.dickAccessory == "combined chastity")>>
 			$He bites $his lip and moans as $he climaxes. You fill $his squeezing fuckhole with your cum. Precum has been dribbling out of $his dick chastity for some time, apparently the best $his soft bitchclit can manage.
 		<<elseif ($activeSlave.dick != 0)>>
-			When you orgasm together, $his limp, neglected cock dribbles weakly while your cock fills $his with cum.
+			When you orgasm together, $his limp, neglected cock dribbles weakly while your cock fills $him with cum.
 		<<elseif ($activeSlave.clit > 2)>>
 			As you fuck $him, $he plays with $his huge clit. It's so large it almost looks like $he's jacking off a cock.
 		<</if>>
diff --git a/src/npc/fFeelings.tw b/src/npc/fFeelings.tw
index 5d345a01d610f3d1d976d8207ac718dbfd779a58..a6c9c28e7187e392e86ddc351728cc7a37b237d4 100644
--- a/src/npc/fFeelings.tw
+++ b/src/npc/fFeelings.tw
@@ -148,47 +148,47 @@ My favorite part of my body i<<s>>
 		my blood. It'<<s>> so pretty and red, and there'<<s>> <<s>>o much of it when you and the other <<s>>lave<<s>> //really// lay into me. I'm <<s>>o fucking hot right now, thinking about the thing<<s>> you can do to my <<s>>lutty body.
 	<<elseif ($activeSlave.sexualFlaw == "cum addict") && ($activeSlave.fetishStrength > 95)>>
 		<<if $activeSlave.lips > 40>>
-			my <<if $activeSlave.lips > 70>>huge <</if>>lip<<s>>, I like how everyone expect<<s>> to fa<<c>>efuck me, and how my lip<<s>> wrap around their dick<<s>> to keep all that yummy cum in my belly. Oh! I like my belly, too, and that warm, sloshy feeling as it'<<s>> packed full of baby jui<<c>>e. It's so - I'm sorry, <<Master>>. I think my mouth i<<s>> watering. Plea<<s>>e give me a moment to collect my<<s>>elf.
+			my <<if $activeSlave.lips > 70>>huge <</if>>lip<<s>>, I like how everyone expect<<s>> to fa<<c>>efuck me, and how my lip<<s>> wrap around their dick<<s>> to keep all that yummy cum in my belly. Oh! I like my belly, too, and that warm, <<s>>lo<<sh>>y feeling as it'<<s>> packed full of baby jui<<c>>e. It'<<s>> <<s>>o — I'm <<s>>orry, <<Master>>. I think my mouth i<<s>> watering. Plea<<s>>e give me a moment to collect my<<s>>elf.
 		<<elseif $PC.dick == 1>>
-			my tummy--and my womb! The slo<<sh>>y feeling when I'm all packed full of cum in both end<<s>> get<<s>> me <<s>>o incredibly horny. Sometimes I wonder what it would be like if I were ju<<s>>t a puffed up, cum-baloon of a woman, helple<<ss>> and filled with cum, over, and over, and - I'm <<s>>orry, <<Master>>. I'm being weird again, aren't I?
+			my tummy--and my womb! The <<s>>lo<<sh>>y feeling when I'm all packed full of cum in both end<<s>> get<<s>> me <<s>>o incredibly horny. <<S>>ometime<<s>> I wonder what it would be like if I were ju<<s>>t a puffed up, cum-balloon of a woman, helple<<ss>> and filled with cum, over, and over, and — I'm <<s>>orry, <<Master>>. I'm being weird again, aren't I?
 		<<else>>
-			my mouth, I love how it feel<<s>> to - to eat pu<<ss>>y, <<Master>>. I love eating out your pu<<ss>>y. E<<s>>pecially when it<<s>> been filled up with <<s>>ome yummy cum. Maybe you could let me eat cum out of your pu<<ss>>y soon?
+			my mouth, I love how it feel<<s>> to — to eat pu<<ss>>y, <<Master>>. I love eating out your pu<<ss>>y. E<<s>>pe<<c>>ially when it<<s>> been filled up with <<s>>ome yummy cum. Maybe you could let me eat cum out of your pu<<ss>>y soon?
 		<</if>>
 	<<elseif ($activeSlave.sexualFlaw == "attention whore") && ($activeSlave.fetishStrength > 95)>>
 		my whole $activeSlave.skin body, and whatever part of me i<<s>> be<<s>>t u<<s>>ed to make me look like a total <<s>>lut.
 	<<elseif ($activeSlave.sexualFlaw == "anal addict") && ($activeSlave.fetishStrength > 95)>>
 		<<if ($activeSlave.anus > 3)>>
-			my gaping butthole. It'<<s>> //<<s>>o// fucked out and beautiful. I can barely remember what anal pain feel<<s>> like, but thinking about the sort<<s>> of thing<<s>> we can put in me, now, get<<s>> me <<s>>o hot.
+			my gaping butthole. It'<<s>> //<<s>>o// fucked out and beautiful. I can barely remember what anal pain feel<<s>> like, but thinking about the <<s>>ort<<s>> of thing<<s>> we can put in me, now, get<<s>> me <<s>>o hot.
 		<<elseif ($activeSlave.anus > 2)>>
-			my a<<ss>>pu<<ss>>y - I can take anything! It'<<s>> //<<s>>o// much better than my <<if $activeSlave.dick > 0>>cock<<else>>pu<<ss>>y<</if>>. It bring<<s>> me so much plea<<s>>ure -- and pain -- and -- I'm <<s>>orry, <<Master>> what were we talking about again? Oh! Right.
+			my a<<ss>>pu<<ss>>y — I can take anything! It'<<s>> //<<s>>o// much better than my <<if $activeSlave.dick > 0>>cock<<else>>pu<<ss>>y<</if>>. It bring<<s>> me so much plea<<s>>ure... and pain... and... I'm <<s>>orry, <<Master>> what were we talking about again? Oh! Right.
 		<<elseif ($activeSlave.anus > 1)>>
-			my a<<ss>>hole, I like how I can take anyone'<<s>> cock. It'<<s>> //<<s>>o// much better than my <<if $activeSlave.dick > 0>>cock<<else>>pu<<ss>>y<</if>>. It brings me <<s>>o much plea<<s>>ure -- and pain. -- and- - I'm <<s>>orry, <<Master>> what were we talking about again? Oh! Right.
+			my a<<ss>>hole, I like how I can take anyone'<<s>> cock. It'<<s>> //<<s>>o// much better than my <<if $activeSlave.dick > 0>>cock<<else>>pu<<ss>>y<</if>>. It brings me <<s>>o much plea<<s>>ure... and pain... and... I'm <<s>>orry, <<Master>> what were we talking about again? Oh! Right.
 		<<elseif ($activeSlave.anus == 1)>>
 			my tight little anu<<s>>, I like feeling it <<s>>tretch to take a fuck. It's //so// much better than my <<if $activeSlave.dick > 0>>cock<<else>>pu<<ss>>y<</if>>. It brings me so much plea<<s>>ure... and pain... and... I'm <<s>>orry, <<Master>> what were we talking about again? Oh! Right.
 		<<elseif ($activeSlave.anus == 0)>>
-			my little virgin butthole. I can't wait for the fir<<s>>t time you fuck me in the a<<ss>> -- I wonder if it'll hurt.
+			my little virgin butthole. I can't wait for the fir<<s>>t time you fuck me in the a<<ss>> — I wonder if it'll hurt.
 		<</if>>
 	<<elseif ($activeSlave.sexualFlaw == "breeder") && ($activeSlave.fetishStrength > 95)>>
 		<<if ($activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 600000)>>
-			... um... our impo<<ss>>ibly pregnant belly, of cour<<s>>e. We love being <<s>>o packed full with life that we're more baby than woman, now. And the way our belly keep<<s>> our <<s>>lutty preggo bodie<<s>> <<s>>tuck to the floor! We're <<s>>o hot ju<<s>>t thinking about it.
+			... Um... our impo<<ss>>ibly pregnant belly, of cour<<s>>e. We love being <<s>>o packed full with life that we're more baby than $woman, now. And the way our belly keep<<s>> our <<s>>lutty preggo bodie<<s>> <<s>>tuck to the floor! We're <<s>>o hot ju<<s>>t thinking about it.
 			<<if $activeSlave.pregSource == -1>>
 				Thank you for breeding u<<s>>, <<Master>>! Our womb i<<s>> your<<s>> to impregnate.
 			<</if>>
 			What? Oh, I'm thinking of my<<s>>elf and my <<if ($activeSlave.fetus_count >=2) || ($activeSlave.broodmother >=1)>> babie<<s>> <<else>> baby <</if>> as one person again, aren't I? I'm <<s>>orry, <<Master>>. It'<<s>> ju<<s>>t so hard to remember when my womb i<<s>> <<s>>o much more than I am in every way.
 		<<elseif ($activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 300000)>>
-			... um... our ma<<ss>>ive pregnant belly, of cour<<s>>e. We love feeling our womb <<s>>well with life. It<<s>> so hard to move now! We're <<s>>o hot ju<<s>>t thinking about it.
+			... Um... our ma<<ss>>ive pregnant belly, of cour<<s>>e. We love feeling our womb <<s>>well with life. It<<s>> so hard to move now! We're <<s>>o hot ju<<s>>t thinking about it.
 			<<if $activeSlave.pregSource == -1>>
 				Thank you for breeding u<<s>>, <<Master>>! Our womb i<<s>> your<<s>> to impregnate.
 			<</if>>
 			What? Oh, I'm thinking of my<<s>>elf and my <<if ($activeSlave.fetus_count >=2) || ($activeSlave.broodmother >=1)>> babie<<s>> <<else>> baby <</if>> as one person again, aren't I? I'm <<s>>orry, <<Master>>. It'<<s>> ju<<s>>t so hard to remember when my womb i<<s>> <<s>>o much more than I am in every way.
 		<<elseif ($activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 15000)>>
-			... um... our bulging pregnant belly, of cour<<s>>e. We love feeling our womb <<s>>well with life.
+			... Um... our bulging pregnant belly, of cour<<s>>e. We love feeling our womb <<s>>well with life.
 			<<if $activeSlave.pregSource == -1>>
 				Thank you for breeding u<<s>>, <<Master>>! Our womb i<<s>> your<<s>> to impregnate.
 			<</if>>
 			What? Oh, I'm thinking of my<<s>>elf and my <<if ($activeSlave.fetus_count >=2) || ($activeSlave.broodmother >=1)>> babie<<s>> <<else>> baby <</if>> as one person again, aren't I? I'm <<s>>orry, <<Master>>. It'<<s>> ju<<s>>t so hard to remember when my womb i<<s>> <<s>>o much more than I am in every way.
 		<<elseif ($activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 100)>>
-			... um... our pregnant belly, of cour<<s>>e.
+			... Um... our pregnant belly, of cour<<s>>e.
 			<<if $activeSlave.pregSource == -1>>
 				Thank you for breeding u<<s>>, <<Master>>! Our womb i<<s>> your<<s>> to impregnate.
 			<</if>>
diff --git a/src/npc/fKiss.tw b/src/npc/fKiss.tw
index 0f22dd7ff0e9f886fa34922ba09d9d68b2279728..17040ff45109c54a02a78bd1b7c29ddc31da80da 100644
--- a/src/npc/fKiss.tw
+++ b/src/npc/fKiss.tw
@@ -179,7 +179,7 @@ Then, you gently raise $his <<if $activeSlave.face > 95>>heartrendingly beautifu
 		<</if>>
 	<</if>>
 <<elseif ($activeSlave.fetish == "mindbroken")>>
-	$His mouth opens to accept the kiss, and is compliant with your questing tongue. $His posture remains completely unchanged. Being kissed affects $his as little as being penetrated, being struck, or being loved: not at all. When you pull away,
+	$His mouth opens to accept the kiss, and is compliant with your questing tongue. $His posture remains completely unchanged. Being kissed affects $him as little as being penetrated, being struck, or being loved: not at all. When you pull away,
 	<<if canSee($activeSlave)>>
 		$his $activeSlave.eyeColor eyes track you carefully, awaiting further use of $his body.
 	<<else>>
diff --git a/src/player/actions/fCaress.tw b/src/player/actions/fCaress.tw
index 52fcbb5f0d29f2e13b554dcab3df67d710a19a5f..673b7732261a05af156ca8ff0cd288be935d104f 100644
--- a/src/player/actions/fCaress.tw
+++ b/src/player/actions/fCaress.tw
@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ Then, you gently tilt $his <<if $activeSlave.face > 95>>overwhelmingly stunning<
 <<elseif ($activeSlave.relationship == -2)>>
 	$His eyes gradually close and $he slowly leans $his head back, relaxing as $he feels your caress. $He gently gasps as $he feels your warm <<if $PC.title == 1>>manly<<else>>feminine<</if>> hand. When you finally stop gently caressing $him, $his eyes remain closed and $his mouth still in a rapturous shape for a moment before $he slowly opens $his eyes and smiles at you, $he has an eager look on $his face.<<if ($activeSlave.amp != 1)>> A hand reaches dumbly up to $his face mimicking your last movements.<</if>> <<if ($activeSlave.accent >= 3)>>$He does $his best to communicate love with $his $activeSlave.eyeColor eyes, since $he does not speak $language well enough to express $himself.<<elseif ($activeSlave.amp == 1) && (!canTalk($activeSlave))>>$He does $his best to communicate love with $his $activeSlave.eyeColor eyes.<<elseif !canTalk($activeSlave)>>$He signs that $he loves you.<<elseif SlaveStatsChecker.checkForLisp($activeSlave)>>"I love you, <<Master>>," $he lisps dreamily.<<else>>"I love you, <<Master>>," $he says dreamily.<</if>> $He looks as though $he wants much more than your mere caress.
 <<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion > 50) && ($activeSlave.fetish == "dom") && ($activeSlave.fetishKnown == 1) && ($activeSlave.fetishStrength > 60)>>
-	As you start to touch $his <<if $activeSlave.face > 95>>gorgeous<<elseif $activeSlave.face > 10>>lovely<<elseif $activeSlave.face >= -10>>pretty<<elseif $activeSlave.face >= -40>>homely<<else>>ugly<</if>> face, $he smiles at you and takes your hand in $hers, following its movements. $He tries hard to stop $himself from losing $himself in your masterful hands. $He takes $his tendency towards sexual dominance right up to the edge of insubordination, when $he starts to caress your face in turn. When you finally stop, $his eyes are closed and $he's smiling. <<if ($activeSlave.accent >= 3)>>$He does $his best to communicate excitement with $his $activeSlave.eyeColor eyes, since $he does not speak $language well enough to express $himself.<<elseif ($activeSlave.amp == 1) && (!canTalk($activeSlave))>>$He does $his best to communicate excitement with $his $activeSlave.eyeColor eyes.<<elseif !canTalk($activeSlave)>>$He signs that $he liked that.<<elseif SlaveStatsChecker.checkForLisp($activeSlave)>>"That wath fun, <<Master>>," $he lisps cheerfully.<<else>>"That was fun, <<Master>>," $he says cheerfully.<</if>> $He looks at you, $his eyes almost begging you to give $his more than your mere caress.
+	As you start to touch $his <<if $activeSlave.face > 95>>gorgeous<<elseif $activeSlave.face > 10>>lovely<<elseif $activeSlave.face >= -10>>pretty<<elseif $activeSlave.face >= -40>>homely<<else>>ugly<</if>> face, $he smiles at you and takes your hand in $hers, following its movements. $He tries hard to stop $himself from losing $himself in your masterful hands. $He takes $his tendency towards sexual dominance right up to the edge of insubordination, when $he starts to caress your face in turn. When you finally stop, $his eyes are closed and $he's smiling. <<if ($activeSlave.accent >= 3)>>$He does $his best to communicate excitement with $his $activeSlave.eyeColor eyes, since $he does not speak $language well enough to express $himself.<<elseif ($activeSlave.amp == 1) && (!canTalk($activeSlave))>>$He does $his best to communicate excitement with $his $activeSlave.eyeColor eyes.<<elseif !canTalk($activeSlave)>>$He signs that $he liked that.<<elseif SlaveStatsChecker.checkForLisp($activeSlave)>>"That wath fun, <<Master>>," $he lisps cheerfully.<<else>>"That was fun, <<Master>>," $he says cheerfully.<</if>> $He looks at you, $his eyes almost begging you to give $him more than your mere caress.
 <<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion > 50) && ($activeSlave.fetish == "cumslut") && ($activeSlave.fetishKnown == 1) && ($activeSlave.fetishStrength > 60)>>
 	$He stiffens at your touch but slowly relaxes to your fingers on $his face. As you move your fingers along $his lips, $he reacts almost as though $he's receiving oral. $He starts to gently suck your fingers, moaning into your hand and pressing $himself lewdly against your <<if $PC.boobs == 1>>prominent breasts<<else>>manly chest<</if>>.<<if ($activeSlave.teeth == "pointy")>> $He's very careful to avoid spearing your tongue with $his sharp teeth.<</if>> $He achieves a weak orgasm before you stop caressing $him. <<if ($activeSlave.accent >= 3)>>$He does $his best to communicate undiminished lust with $his $activeSlave.eyeColor eyes, since $he does not speak $language well enough to express $himself.<<elseif ($activeSlave.amp == 1) && (!canTalk($activeSlave))>>$He does $his best to communicate undiminished lust with $his $activeSlave.eyeColor eyes.<<elseif !canTalk($activeSlave)>>$He signs that $he liked that.<<elseif SlaveStatsChecker.checkForLisp($activeSlave)>>"That wath fun, <<Master>>," $he lisps lustfully.<<else>>"That was fun, <<Master>>," $he says lustfully.<</if>> $He looks at you as if $he wants more than your hands touching $him.
 <<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion > 50)>>
@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ Then, you gently tilt $his <<if $activeSlave.face > 95>>overwhelmingly stunning<
 <<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion > 20)>>
 	$He accepts your touch willingly. As you are so close to $him, you sense considerable turmoil in the <<if ($activeSlave.physicalAge > 30)>>woman<<else>>$girl<</if>>; $he's doing $his duty as a slave by complying with your wishes, and is probably struggling with the mixture of resistance, obedience and perhaps even devotion forced to the forefront of $his mind by your touch across $his face. When you finally move your hand away, $his $activeSlave.eyeColor eyes gaze into yours searchingly, looking for answers that are not there. <<if (($activeSlave.amp == 1) && (!canTalk($activeSlave)))>>$His eyes beg for an answer: is that it?<<elseif !canTalk($activeSlave)>>$He signs hesitantly, asking if that's it.<<elseif SlaveStatsChecker.checkForLisp($activeSlave)>>$He asks hesitantly, "I-ith that it, <<Master>>?"<<else>>$He asks hesitantly, "I-is that it, <<Master>>?"<</if>>
 <<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion >= -20) && ($activeSlave.trust < -20)>>
-	$He shakes at your touch fearfully. As you move your hand along $his unresisting face, $his eagerness to avoid punishment leads $his to stiffen, $his nervousness is made apparent. You continue stroking $his cheek, enjoying $his fear, and the physical intimacy slowly does its work. $He starts to relax, $his resistance easing and $his eyes start to close. When finally move your hand away, $he looks at you for a long moment, $his eyes darting up at you, before visibly catching $himself with a reminder that $he's a slave and you're $his owner. <<if (($activeSlave.amp == 1) && (!canTalk($activeSlave)))>>$His eyes beg for an answer: is that it?<<elseif !canTalk($activeSlave)>>$He signs hesitantly, asking if that's it.<<elseif SlaveStatsChecker.checkForLisp($activeSlave)>>$He asks hesitantly, "I-ith that it, <<Master>>?"<<else>>$He asks hesitantly, "I-is that it, <<Master>>?"<</if>>
+	$He shakes at your touch fearfully. As you move your hand along $his unresisting face, $his eagerness to avoid punishment leads $him to stiffen, $his nervousness is made apparent. You continue stroking $his cheek, enjoying $his fear, and the physical intimacy slowly does its work. $He starts to relax, $his resistance easing and $his eyes start to close. When finally move your hand away, $he looks at you for a long moment, $his eyes darting up at you, before visibly catching $himself with a reminder that $he's a slave and you're $his owner. <<if (($activeSlave.amp == 1) && (!canTalk($activeSlave)))>>$His eyes beg for an answer: is that it?<<elseif !canTalk($activeSlave)>>$He signs hesitantly, asking if that's it.<<elseif SlaveStatsChecker.checkForLisp($activeSlave)>>$He asks hesitantly, "I-ith that it, <<Master>>?"<<else>>$He asks hesitantly, "I-is that it, <<Master>>?"<</if>>
 <<elseif ($activeSlave.trust < -50)>>
 	$He is nearly frozen with fear, and does not resist as you start to caress $his face. In fact, $he barely reacts at all. $He stares at you as you move your fingers across $his stiff face, but it's like touching a statue. $He is so filled with terror that $he remains stiff even as it becomes clear to $his you're not going to hurt $him. When you bore of touching the <<if ($activeSlave.physicalAge > 30)>>woman<<else>>$girl<</if>> and move your hand away, $he stares at you in utter incomprehension. <<if (($activeSlave.amp == 1) && (!canTalk($activeSlave)))>>$His eyes beg for an answer: is that it?<<elseif !canTalk($activeSlave)>>$He signs spastically, begging fearfully to know if that's it.<<elseif SlaveStatsChecker.checkForLisp($activeSlave)>>$He asks nervously, "I-ith that it, <<Master>>?"<<else>>$He asks nervously, "I-is that it, <<Master>>?"<</if>> Then $he cringes.
 <<else>>
diff --git a/src/player/actions/fEmbrace.tw b/src/player/actions/fEmbrace.tw
index 4ea7fe6987a7c1968071e9281659276f7627f1d1..e5a549b0e6be22936a9b3eb986a2b46b1ed3f48c 100644
--- a/src/player/actions/fEmbrace.tw
+++ b/src/player/actions/fEmbrace.tw
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ You tell $activeSlave.slaveName to
 <<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion > 75)>>
 	$He elatedly complies, joyful at being near to you. Once $he's close, you take $his completely relaxed head in your hands and gaze deeply into $his $activeSlave.eyeColor eyes. $He finds the intense look from $his beloved <<= WrittenMaster()>> disconcerting, and $his eyes flick downward after a moment. $He blushes furiously.
 <<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion > 50)>>
-	$He dotingly complies, being near you filling $his with delight. Once $he's close, you take $his completely relaxed head in your hands and gaze deeply into $his $activeSlave.eyeColor eyes. $He finds the intense attention from $his <<= WrittenMaster()>> disconcerting, and $he looks down after a moment, blushing.
+	$He dotingly complies, being near you filling $him with delight. Once $he's close, you take $his completely relaxed head in your hands and gaze deeply into $his $activeSlave.eyeColor eyes. $He finds the intense attention from $his <<= WrittenMaster()>> disconcerting, and $he looks down after a moment, blushing.
 <<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion > 20)>>
 	$He joyfully complies, happy to be near you. Once $he's close, you you take $his willing head in your hands and gaze deeply into $his $activeSlave.eyeColor eyes. $He finds the intense attention from $his <<= WrittenMaster()>> worrying, and $he looks down after a moment, blushing nervously.
 <<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion >= -20) && ($activeSlave.trust >= -20)>>
diff --git a/src/player/actions/fondleButt.tw b/src/player/actions/fondleButt.tw
index b6c4f88146bfbd8db058db1bb7698c462810c6d8..19f32e9c43b85ca49c7ad6452076e2ae9ed56059 100644
--- a/src/player/actions/fondleButt.tw
+++ b/src/player/actions/fondleButt.tw
@@ -174,7 +174,7 @@ as well as $his
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.butt <= 20>>
 		couch-like
 	<</if>>
-	buttocks with both hands before rubbing along them, feeling the shape of $his<<if $seeRace == 1>> $activeSlave.race<</if>> ass with your fingers and squeezing gently. $He gasps as you rub fingers around $his virgin anus. You watch $his face as you continue to move around $his posterior and $he clearly enjoys the contact on $his bare skin. You gently reach to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He starts to wiggle $his ass while you circle around $his anus, not breaking contact with $his with your fingers. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly - first one, then the other and then both and $he can't help but gyrate $his hips enticingly while in your grasp. You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and bend $him over your desk. You look at $his rear while you squeeze $his cheeks and rub them with your firm hands. You explore the contours of $his posterior with both your eyes and hands, then look at $his virgin butthole as you trace it with your fingers and thumb. Eventually you decide to stop and $he squeals in surprise after you give $his <<if $activeSlave.butt < 2>>
+	buttocks with both hands before rubbing along them, feeling the shape of $his<<if $seeRace == 1>> $activeSlave.race<</if>> ass with your fingers and squeezing gently. $He gasps as you rub fingers around $his virgin anus. You watch $his face as you continue to move around $his posterior and $he clearly enjoys the contact on $his bare skin. You gently reach to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He starts to wiggle $his ass while you circle around $his anus, not breaking contact with $him with your fingers. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly - first one, then the other and then both and $he can't help but gyrate $his hips enticingly while in your grasp. You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and bend $him over your desk. You look at $his rear while you squeeze $his cheeks and rub them with your firm hands. You explore the contours of $his posterior with both your eyes and hands, then look at $his virgin butthole as you trace it with your fingers and thumb. Eventually you decide to stop and $he squeals in surprise after you give $his <<if $activeSlave.butt < 2>>
 		flat
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.butt <= 2>>
 		cute
@@ -215,7 +215,7 @@ as well as $his
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.butt <= 20>>
 		couch-like
 	<</if>>
-	buttocks before rubbing along them, feeling the shape of $his<<if $seeRace == 1>> $activeSlave.race<</if>> ass with your fingers and squeezing gently. $He gasps as you rub fingers around $his virgin anus. You study $his face as you continue to move around $his posterior gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He starts to wiggle $his ass while you circle around $his anus, not breaking contact with $his with your fingers. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly - first one, then the other and then both and $he can't help but wiggle $his hips while in your grasp. You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and bend $him over your desk. You look at $his rear while you squeeze $his cheeks and rub them with your firm hands. You explore the contours of $his posterior with both your eyes and hands, then look at $his virgin butthole as you trace it with your fingers and thumb. Eventually you decide to stop and $he squeals in surprise after you give $his <<if $activeSlave.butt < 2>>
+	buttocks before rubbing along them, feeling the shape of $his<<if $seeRace == 1>> $activeSlave.race<</if>> ass with your fingers and squeezing gently. $He gasps as you rub fingers around $his virgin anus. You study $his face as you continue to move around $his posterior gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He starts to wiggle $his ass while you circle around $his anus, not breaking contact with $him with your fingers. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly - first one, then the other and then both and $he can't help but wiggle $his hips while in your grasp. You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and bend $him over your desk. You look at $his rear while you squeeze $his cheeks and rub them with your firm hands. You explore the contours of $his posterior with both your eyes and hands, then look at $his virgin butthole as you trace it with your fingers and thumb. Eventually you decide to stop and $he squeals in surprise after you give $his <<if $activeSlave.butt < 2>>
 		flat
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.butt <= 2>>
 		cute
@@ -256,7 +256,7 @@ as well as $his
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.butt <= 20>>
 		couch-like
 	<</if>>
-	buttocks before rubbing along them, feeling the shape of $his<<if $seeRace == 1>> $activeSlave.race<</if>> ass with your fingers and squeezing gently. $He gasps and shivers as you rub fingers around $his virgin anus. $He remains frozen as you continue to move around $his posterior gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He shudders more while you circle around $his anus, not breaking contact with $his with your fingers. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly - first one, then the other and then finally both. $He is so filled with terror that $he remains stiff while in your grasp, even as it becomes clear to $him you're not going to hurt $him. You pull $his quivering body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and bend $him over your desk. You look at $his quaking rear while you squeeze $his cheeks and rub them with your firm hands. You explore the contours of $his posterior with both your eyes and hands, then look at $his virgin butthole as you trace it with your fingers and thumb. Eventually, you decide to stop. $He gradually stands and looks in your eyes with utter incomprehension, but $he is frightened about what you will do next.
+	buttocks before rubbing along them, feeling the shape of $his<<if $seeRace == 1>> $activeSlave.race<</if>> ass with your fingers and squeezing gently. $He gasps and shivers as you rub fingers around $his virgin anus. $He remains frozen as you continue to move around $his posterior gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He shudders more while you circle around $his anus, not breaking contact with $him with your fingers. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly - first one, then the other and then finally both. $He is so filled with terror that $he remains stiff while in your grasp, even as it becomes clear to $him you're not going to hurt $him. You pull $his quivering body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and bend $him over your desk. You look at $his quaking rear while you squeeze $his cheeks and rub them with your firm hands. You explore the contours of $his posterior with both your eyes and hands, then look at $his virgin butthole as you trace it with your fingers and thumb. Eventually, you decide to stop. $He gradually stands and looks in your eyes with utter incomprehension, but $he is frightened about what you will do next.
 <<elseif ($activeSlave.anus == 0)>>
 	While you grope $his butt, $he tries hard to resist. $He <<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>>grabs your wrists and tugs on your arms<<else>>writhes under your fingers<</if>> but stops, helpless, when you tell $him what the alternatives are. You reach around and grab $his <<if $activeSlave.butt < 2>>
 		flat
@@ -368,7 +368,7 @@ as well as $his
 		<<elseif ($activeSlave.anus == 0)>>
 			virgin butthole.
 		<</if>>
-		$He writhes as you continue to move around $his posterior gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He struggles to stay still while you circle around $his anus, not breaking contact with $his with your fingers. You look at $his face and $he has shut $his eyes, trying not to think about what's happening to $his butt. This only encourages you to continue. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly - first one, then the other and then finally both and $he can't help but quiver while in your grasp.
+		$He writhes as you continue to move around $his posterior gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He struggles to stay still while you circle around $his anus, not breaking contact with $him with your fingers. You look at $his face and $he has shut $his eyes, trying not to think about what's happening to $his butt. This only encourages you to continue. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly - first one, then the other and then finally both and $he can't help but quiver while in your grasp.
 		<<if ($activeSlave.amp != 1)>>
 			You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and push $him down, bending $him over your desk while $he tries to push away.
 		<<else>>
diff --git a/src/player/actions/fondleVagina.tw b/src/player/actions/fondleVagina.tw
index 49d0cace179b5b85bf22445fcbd11459ef674ae9..95725c7ee7393eeb38d6315d622b57585c24fc11 100644
--- a/src/player/actions/fondleVagina.tw
+++ b/src/player/actions/fondleVagina.tw
@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ You call $him over so you can fondle $his
 
 <<if ($activeSlave.vagina == 0)>>
 	<<if ($activeSlave.fetish == "mindbroken")>>
-		$He accepts your orders dumbly and presents $his virgin pussy to you, watching your hands move towards $his without any real interest. You gently trace along $his
+		$He accepts your orders dumbly and presents $his virgin pussy to you, watching your hands move towards $him without any real interest. You gently trace along $his
 		<<if $activeSlave.labia == 1>>
 			lovely petals
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.labia == 2>>
@@ -187,7 +187,7 @@ You call $him over so you can fondle $his
 		and rub it with your fingertips as your hand nears it. $He <<if ($activeSlave.amp != 1)>>tightly grasps your wrist and<</if>> clamps $his thighs together as you continue to move your hand along $his pussy. $He moans as $he shudders in an orgasm, gripping tighter and shamefully looking at you as you stop moving your hand.
 	<</if>>
 <<elseif ($activeSlave.fetish == "mindbroken")>>
-	Like a doll, $he dumbly remains still, watching your hands move towards $his without any real interest.
+	Like a doll, $he dumbly remains still, watching your hands move towards $him without any real interest.
 	<<if ($activeSlave.vagina != -1)>>
 		You gently trace along $his
 		<<if $activeSlave.labia == 1>>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/beastFuck.tw b/src/pregmod/beastFuck.tw
index acc29050280266b13e29db14c9eef2b59a241fb4..f434138207051b7f518c5008d9b5b076d02fb418 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/beastFuck.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/beastFuck.tw
@@ -115,7 +115,7 @@
 	<<if $activeSlave.devotion > -20>>
 		<<if ($activeSlave.devotion <= 20) && ($activeSlave.fetish != "mindbroken") && ($activeSlave.fetish != "masochistic") && ($activeSlave.fetish != "humiliation") && ($activeSlave.sexualQuirk != "perverted") && ($activeSlave.behavioralQuirk != "sinful")>>and only the threat of worse punishment prevents $him from running out of the room.<</if>> You have $him <<if ($activeSlave.clothes != "naked")>>take off $his clothing and <</if>>kneel down on the floor with $his ass in the air,
 	<<else>>
-		and you have to physically prevent $him from running out of the room. You <<if ($activeSlave.clothes != "no clothing")>>force $him to take off $his $activeSlave.clothes and <</if>>restrain $him on the floor with $his ass in the air - all the while ignoring $his screams and pleas for mercy -
+		and you have to physically prevent $him from running out of the room. You <<if ($activeSlave.clothes != "no clothing")>>force $him to take off $his $activeSlave.clothes and <</if>>restrain $him on the floor with $his ass in the air — all the while ignoring $his screams and pleas for mercy -
 <</if>>
 <<else>>
 	You <<if ($activeSlave.clothes != "no clothing")>>take off $his $activeSlave.clothes and <</if>>place $him on the ground with a cushion under $his hips, $his ass in the air,
diff --git a/src/pregmod/eliteTakeOver.tw b/src/pregmod/eliteTakeOver.tw
index 85ac245802478ed6a40bd0aa57aab0e71d77fc33..56bac3ccd624a0f816ec0489d20090373a219861 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/eliteTakeOver.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/eliteTakeOver.tw
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ You look up from your desk as the locked door to your office unseals, and a doze
 <br>
 <<if _pregSurrender == 0>>
 	<<set $finalChoice = "final stand">>
-	The choice is simple - you will not be a slave. 
+	The choice is simple — you will not be a slave. 
 	<br>
 	You decide to <span id="fate">make a final stand.</span>
 	<br>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/eliteTakeOverFight.tw b/src/pregmod/eliteTakeOverFight.tw
index dce969adaef57e6ff639d609ff31e24a911196b4..e01d32611d0f8b1ae608dadd54d3c4db917b5df5 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/eliteTakeOverFight.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/eliteTakeOverFight.tw
@@ -227,7 +227,7 @@
 	<</link>>
 <<elseif $MercenariesMessageSent == 1>>
 	It is now that a squad of $mercenariesTitle makes their entrance, pointing their guns at the <<if $eliteLeft < $eliteTotal>>remaining<</if>> elite.
-	The officer asks "your orders, <<= properTitle()>>?"
+	The officer asks "Your orders, <<= properTitle()>>?"
 	<br>
 	<<link "Open fire">>
 		<<set $eliteFate = 0>>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/eliteTakeOverResult.tw b/src/pregmod/eliteTakeOverResult.tw
index f02a414ce3504614f83378408ebea20c6c68fd7b..40e9c264332fdf4d67ffbb6cb1155593ce55dae8 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/eliteTakeOverResult.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/eliteTakeOverResult.tw
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@
 		<br>The <<if $eliteLeft < $eliteTotal>>remaining<</if>> elite are quickly captured, abused and enslaved.
 		The officer is thankful for giving the troops a chance to let off some stream. Two soldiers decide to double team an elite; one ass fucks while the other facefucks.
 		Another soldier takes a particular interest in an elite and politely asks you
-		"<<if def $PC.customTitle>>$PC.customTitle<<elseif $PC.title != 0>>sir<<else>>ma'am<</if>> can I keep _himU?"
+		"<<= properTitle()>> can I keep _himU?"
 		<br><span id="choice1">
 			<<link "No">>
 				<<replace "#choice1">>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/fFeet.tw b/src/pregmod/fFeet.tw
index 55ea620057f5192c8521023e78e01e77c3a60808..9e02bbb344b022ffa9d1ff4d64647f113861cdd8 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/fFeet.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/fFeet.tw
@@ -224,7 +224,7 @@
 
 
 /*Part 1: Order and reaction*/
-You call $activeSlave.slaveName to your office, telling $his to use $his feet to please you.
+You call $activeSlave.slaveName to your office, telling $him to use $his feet to please you.
 <<if ($activeSlave.fetish == "mindbroken")>>
 	$He is brought to you and stands blankly by your desk.
 <<elseif ($activeSlave.relationship == -3 && $activeSlave.devotion >= 60 )>>
@@ -254,15 +254,15 @@ You call $activeSlave.slaveName to your office, telling $his to use $his feet to
 /*Part 2: lube and reaction*/
 <<if !canWalk($activeSlave)>>
 	<<if tooBigBreasts($activeSlave)>>
-		Since $he is immobilized by $his _boobs boobs, you have $he lay on $his side on the floor,
+		Since $he is immobilized by $his _boobs boobs, you have $him lay on $his side on the floor,
 	<<elseif tooBigBelly($activeSlave)>>
 		Since $he is immobilized by $his <<if $activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 3000>>hugely gravid<<elseif $activeSlave.bellyImplant >= 3000>>_belly protruding<<else>>heavy <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>>-filled<</if>> belly, you have $he lay on $his side on the floor,
 	<<elseif tooBigDick($activeSlave)>>
-		Since $he is immobilized by $his _dick dick, you have $he lay on $his side on the floor,
+		Since $he is immobilized by $his _dick dick, you have $him lay on $his side on the floor,
 	<<elseif tooBigButt($activeSlave)>>
-		Since $he is immobilized by $his _dick dick, you have $he sit on your desk to present $his _legs legs and feet,
+		Since $he is immobilized by $his _dick dick, you have $him sit on your desk to present $his _legs legs and feet,
 	<<elseif tooBigBalls($activeSlave)>>
-		Since $he is immobilized by $his _balls balls, you have $he lay on $his back on the floor with $his legs over $his nuts,
+		Since $he is immobilized by $his _balls balls, you have $him lay on $his back on the floor with $his legs over $his nuts,
 	<<else>>
 		You have $him sit on the edge of your desk to present $his _legs legs and feet,
 	<</if>>
@@ -316,7 +316,7 @@ You call $activeSlave.slaveName to your office, telling $his to use $his feet to
 	<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion < -20)>>
 		$He seems a bit reluctant when massaging you with $his feet so you have to do most of the work.
 	<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion <= 20)>>
-		$He tries to make it pleasurable for you, but the combination of the awkward angle and $his nervousness makes $his lose $his pacing often.
+		$He tries to make it pleasurable for you, but the combination of the awkward angle and $his nervousness makes $him lose $his pacing often.
 	<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion < 60 || ($activeSlave.sexualQuirk == "unflinching" && $activeSlave.devotion <= 20))>>
 		$He does $his best to please you from $his position on $his side, massaging your cock nicely.
 	<<else>>
@@ -496,7 +496,7 @@ You call $activeSlave.slaveName to your office, telling $his to use $his feet to
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.fetish == "sadist" && $activeSlave.fetishKnown == 1 && $activeSlave.fetishStrength >= 60>>
 		You eventually cum all over $his _skin feet<<if $PC.balls >= 2>>, _legs legs, and even $his _belly belly with your massive load<<elseif $PC.balls >= 1>> and _legs legs with your large load<</if>>, and $he gasps slightly and condescendingly smiles as you soil $his feet with semen.
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.fetish == "dom" && $activeSlave.fetishKnown == 1 && $activeSlave.fetishStrength >= 60>>
-		You eventually cum all over $his _skin feet<<if $PC.balls >= 2>>, _legs legs, and even $his _belly belly with your massive load<<elseif $PC.balls >= 1>> and _legs legs with your large load<</if>>, and $he gasps slightly and holds your cock between $his feet tightly as you soil $his with semen.
+		You eventually cum all over $his _skin feet<<if $PC.balls >= 2>>, _legs legs, and even $his _belly belly with your massive load<<elseif $PC.balls >= 1>> and _legs legs with your large load<</if>>, and $he gasps slightly and holds your cock between $his feet tightly as you soil $him with semen.
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.fetish == "pregnancy" && $activeSlave.fetishKnown == 1 && $activeSlave.fetishStrength >= 60>>
 		When you start to cum, $activeSlave.slaveName moves $his hand from $his belly to
 		<<if $activeSlave.vagina >= 0>>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/fSlaveFeed.tw b/src/pregmod/fSlaveFeed.tw
index ff5d3291cc1492c6f868537a2d4e2700e9c7b402..bdd387f4ef49da2869283a3e2da7a40911e989f3 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/fSlaveFeed.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/fSlaveFeed.tw
@@ -145,7 +145,7 @@ Next, you see to $activeSlave.slaveName.
 	$He is accustomed to submitting to you, but as a natural submissive $he doesn't have much trouble submitting to $milkTap.slaveName's mothering instead.
 
 <<elseif $activeSlave.devotion < -20>>
-	$He tries to refuse, so you strap $his to $milkTap.slaveName's breast, milky $milkTap.nipples nipple wedged in $his mouth.
+	$He tries to refuse, so you strap $him to $milkTap.slaveName's breast, milky $milkTap.nipples nipple wedged in $his mouth.
 
 <<elseif $activeSlave.devotion <= 20>>
 	$He obeys your orders reluctantly, drawing near $milkTap.slaveName's breasts despite $his obvious hesitation to be filled with milk.
@@ -186,7 +186,7 @@ Next, you see to $activeSlave.slaveName.
 <<elseif $activeSlave.mother == $milkTap.ID>>
 	$milkTap.slaveName sighs contently as _his2 little $girl once again suckles from _his2 breasts. You enjoy the show, specifically the sight of $activeSlave.slaveName's belly steadily growing larger until <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 3>>$his belly is round and taut, making $him look pregnant. $He pops off $his mother's nipple and settles into _his2 breasts for a short rest while hiccupping<<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>> and rubbing $his gurgling stomach<</if>><<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his belly is round, jiggling and sloshing with milk. $He pops off $his mother's nipple and settles into _his2 breasts for a short rest while hiccupping<<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>> and teasing $his wobbling, gurgling stomach<</if>><<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his belly is distended and sloshing with milk. $He pops off $his mother's nipple and settles into _his2 breasts for a short rest while hiccupping<<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>> and teasing $his gurgling stomach<</if>><</if>>.
 <<elseif $activeSlave.father == $milkTap.ID>>
-	$milkTap.slaveName moans lewdly as _his2 daughter suckles from _his2 breasts<<if $milkTap.dick > 0 && canAchieveErection($milkTap)>>, _his2 dick throbbing with lust<</if>>. You enjoy the show, specifically the sight of $activeSlave.slaveName's belly steadily growing larger until <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 3>>$his belly is round and taut, making $him look pregnant. $He pops off $his father's nipple and settles into _his2 breasts for a short rest while hiccupping<<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>> and rubbing $his gurgling stomach<</if>><<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his belly is round, jiggling and sloshing with milk. $He pops off $his father's nipple and settles into _his2 breasts for a short rest while hiccupping<<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>> and teasing $his wobbling, gurgling stomach<</if>><<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his belly is distended and sloshing with milk. $He pops off $his father's nipple and settles into _his2 breasts for a short rest while hiccupping<<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>> and teasing $his gurgling stomach<</if>><</if>><<if $milkTap.dick > 0 && canAchieveErection($milkTap)>><<if $activeSlave.sexualQuirk == "perverted">>. The way $he is wiggling $his hips suggests $he isn't finished with $his daddy just yet, and $his father's moaning confirms $he is teasing him with $his rear. $He giggles as the horny cow unloads on $his backside<<else>>. $He doesn't stay put for long, as a strong moan and a blast of cum across $his rear from the horny cow startles $his from $his rest<</if>><</if>>.
+	$milkTap.slaveName moans lewdly as _his2 daughter suckles from _his2 breasts<<if $milkTap.dick > 0 && canAchieveErection($milkTap)>>, _his2 dick throbbing with lust<</if>>. You enjoy the show, specifically the sight of $activeSlave.slaveName's belly steadily growing larger until <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 3>>$his belly is round and taut, making $him look pregnant. $He pops off $his father's nipple and settles into _his2 breasts for a short rest while hiccupping<<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>> and rubbing $his gurgling stomach<</if>><<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his belly is round, jiggling and sloshing with milk. $He pops off $his father's nipple and settles into _his2 breasts for a short rest while hiccupping<<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>> and teasing $his wobbling, gurgling stomach<</if>><<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his belly is distended and sloshing with milk. $He pops off $his father's nipple and settles into _his2 breasts for a short rest while hiccupping<<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>> and teasing $his gurgling stomach<</if>><</if>><<if $milkTap.dick > 0 && canAchieveErection($milkTap)>><<if $activeSlave.sexualQuirk == "perverted">>. The way $he is wiggling $his hips suggests $he isn't finished with $his daddy just yet, and $his father's moaning confirms $he is teasing him with $his rear. $He giggles as the horny cow unloads on $his backside<<else>>. $He doesn't stay put for long, as a strong moan and a blast of cum across $his rear from the horny cow startles $him from $his rest<</if>><</if>>.
 <<elseif $milkTap.mother == $activeSlave.ID>>
 	$milkTap.slaveName moans lewdly as _he2 enjoys some role reversal as _his2 mother suckles from _his2 breasts. You enjoy the show, specifically the sight of $activeSlave.slaveName's belly steadily growing larger until <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 3>>$his belly is round and taut, making $him look pregnant. $He pops off $his daughter's nipple and settles into _his2 breasts for a short rest while hiccupping<<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>> and rubbing $his gurgling stomach<</if>><<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his belly is round, jiggling and sloshing with milk. $He pops off $his daughter's nipple and settles into _his2 breasts for a short rest while hiccupping<<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>> and teasing $his wobbling, gurgling stomach<</if>><<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his belly is distended and sloshing with milk. $He pops off $his daughter's nipple and settles into _his2 breasts for a short rest while hiccupping<<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>> and teasing $his gurgling stomach<</if>><</if>>.
 <<elseif $milkTap.father == $activeSlave.ID>>
@@ -277,7 +277,7 @@ Next, you see to $activeSlave.slaveName.
 	<<elseif $PC.dick == 1 && $activeSlave.amp == 0>>
 		You position the restrained $activeSlave.slaveName so that you can fuck $his <<if $activeSlave.weight > 95>>soft <</if>>thighs, for a lack of anything better, while $he is forced to drink from $milkTap.slaveName's breasts. With every thrust against the squirming slave, you push $him into the moaning $milkTap.slaveName forcing even more milk down $his throat. You wrap an arm around $activeSlave.slaveName's middle so you may feel $his stomach swell with milk and place your other hand to $milkTap.slaveName's free nipple, knowing just how much $he loves it groped. <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 3>>You cum multiple times as you feel $his belly slowly round with milk, transform into a jiggling mass, and finally grow taut under your molesting fingers<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>You cum several times as you feel $his belly slowly round with milk, finally transforming into a jiggling mass, under your molesting fingers<<else>>You cum as you feel $his belly slowly round with milk under your molesting fingers<</if>> and $milkTap.slaveName even more. _He2 is semi-conscious, drooling in @@.hotpink;pleasure and satisfaction,@@ by the time you release the bloated $activeSlave.slaveName from $his harness. Patting _his2 well milked breasts, you know _he2'll come out of it and be eagerly begging you for another milking soon. $activeSlave.slaveName, on the other hand, is regarding $his swollen, cum-covered stomach @@.mediumorchid;with disgust@@ and @@.gold;fear@@ of your power over $him.
 	<<else>>
-		You position the restrained $activeSlave.slaveName so that you can rub your <<if $PC.dick == 0>>clit<<else>>dick<</if>> against $his while $he is forced to drink from $milkTap.slaveName's breasts, since $he lacks any better way to please you while you lavish attention on your eager cow. With every thrust against the squirming slave, you push $him into the moaning $milkTap.slaveName forcing even more milk down $his throat. You wrap an arm around $activeSlave.slaveName's middle so you may feel $his stomach swell with milk and place your other hand to $milkTap.slaveName's free nipple, knowing just how much $he loves it groped. <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 3>>You cum multiple times as you feel $his belly slowly round with milk, transform into a jiggling mass, and finally grow taut under your molesting fingers<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>You cum several times as you feel $his belly slowly round with milk, finally transforming into a jiggling mass, under your molesting fingers<<else>>You cum as you feel $his belly slowly round with milk under your molesting fingers<</if>> and $milkTap.slaveName even more. _He2 is semi-conscious, drooling in @@.hotpink;pleasure and satisfaction,@@ by the time you release the bloated $activeSlave.slaveName from $his harness. Patting _his2 well milked breasts, you know _he2'll come out of it and be eagerly begging you for another milking soon. $activeSlave.slaveName, on the other hand, is regarding $his swollen stomach @@.mediumorchid;with disgust@@ and @@.gold;fear@@ of your power over $him.
+		You position the restrained $activeSlave.slaveName so that you can rub your <<if $PC.dick == 0>>clit<<else>>dick<</if>> against $him while $he is forced to drink from $milkTap.slaveName's breasts, since $he lacks any better way to please you while you lavish attention on your eager cow. With every thrust against the squirming slave, you push $him into the moaning $milkTap.slaveName forcing even more milk down $his throat. You wrap an arm around $activeSlave.slaveName's middle so you may feel $his stomach swell with milk and place your other hand to $milkTap.slaveName's free nipple, knowing just how much $he loves it groped. <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 3>>You cum multiple times as you feel $his belly slowly round with milk, transform into a jiggling mass, and finally grow taut under your molesting fingers<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>You cum several times as you feel $his belly slowly round with milk, finally transforming into a jiggling mass, under your molesting fingers<<else>>You cum as you feel $his belly slowly round with milk under your molesting fingers<</if>> and $milkTap.slaveName even more. _He2 is semi-conscious, drooling in @@.hotpink;pleasure and satisfaction,@@ by the time you release the bloated $activeSlave.slaveName from $his harness. Patting _his2 well milked breasts, you know _he2'll come out of it and be eagerly begging you for another milking soon. $activeSlave.slaveName, on the other hand, is regarding $his swollen stomach @@.mediumorchid;with disgust@@ and @@.gold;fear@@ of your power over $him.
 	<</if>>
 	<<if canDoVaginal($activeSlave) && ($activeSlave.vagina == 0)>>
 		<<set $activeSlave.vagina = 1>>
@@ -302,7 +302,7 @@ Next, you see to $activeSlave.slaveName.
 	<<elseif $PC.dick == 1 && $activeSlave.amp == 0>>
 		You order $activeSlave.slaveName to lift $his ass so you can fuck $his <<if $activeSlave.weight > 95>>soft <</if>>thighs, for a lack of anything better, while $he drinks from $milkTap.slaveName's breasts. With every thrust against the squirming slave, you push $him into the docile $milkTap.slaveName forcing even more milk down $his throat.
 	<<else>>
-		You order $activeSlave.slaveName to position $himself so you can rub your <<if $PC.dick == 0>>clit<<else>>dick<</if>> against $his while $he drinks from $milkTap.slaveName's breasts, since $he lacks any better way to please you while you lavish praise on your obedient cow. With every thrust against the squirming slave, you push $him into the docile $milkTap.slaveName forcing even more milk down $his throat.
+		You order $activeSlave.slaveName to position $himself so you can rub your <<if $PC.dick == 0>>clit<<else>>dick<</if>> against $him while $he drinks from $milkTap.slaveName's breasts, since $he lacks any better way to please you while you lavish praise on your obedient cow. With every thrust against the squirming slave, you push $him into the docile $milkTap.slaveName forcing even more milk down $his throat.
 	<</if>>
 	You wrap an arm around $activeSlave.slaveName's middle so you may feel $his stomach swell with milk and place your other hand to $milkTap.slaveName's free nipple, knowing just how much _he2 loves it groped. <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 3>>You cum multiple times as you feel $his belly slowly round with milk, transform into a jiggling mass, and finally grow taut under your molesting fingers<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>You cum several times as you feel $his belly slowly round with milk, finally transforming into a jiggling mass, under your molesting fingers<<else>>You cum as you feel $his belly slowly round with milk under your molesting fingers<</if>>. When you release $him from under your weight, $he drops to the ground panting. Neither slave seems to have enjoyed it, instead opting to just get it over with, though $milkTap.slaveName makes sure to thank $activeSlave.slaveName for lightening _his2 milky breasts.
 	<<if canDoVaginal($activeSlave) && ($activeSlave.vagina == 0)>>
@@ -323,7 +323,7 @@ Next, you see to $activeSlave.slaveName.
 	<<elseif $PC.dick == 1 && $activeSlave.amp == 0>>
 		You order $activeSlave.slaveName to lift $his ass so you can fuck $his <<if $activeSlave.weight > 95>>soft <</if>>thighs, for a lack of anything better, while $he drinks from $milkTap.slaveName's breasts. $He submissively obeys. With every thrust against the chaste slave, you push $him into the smiling $milkTap.slaveName forcing even more milk down $his throat.
 	<<else>>
-		You order $activeSlave.slaveName to position $himself so you can rub your <<if $PC.dick == 0>>clit<<else>>dick<</if>> against $his while $he drinks from $milkTap.slaveName's breasts, since $he lacks any better way to please you while you lavish attention on your happy cow. With every thrust against the squirming slave, you push $him into the smiling $milkTap.slaveName forcing even more milk down $his throat.
+		You order $activeSlave.slaveName to position $himself so you can rub your <<if $PC.dick == 0>>clit<<else>>dick<</if>> against $him while $he drinks from $milkTap.slaveName's breasts, since $he lacks any better way to please you while you lavish attention on your happy cow. With every thrust against the squirming slave, you push $him into the smiling $milkTap.slaveName forcing even more milk down $his throat.
 	<</if>>
 	You wrap an arm around $activeSlave.slaveName's middle so you may feel $his stomach swell with milk and place your other hand to $milkTap.slaveName's free nipple, knowing just how much _he2 gets backed up. <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 3>>You cum multiple times as you feel $his belly slowly round with milk, transform into a jiggling mass, and finally grow taut under your molesting fingers<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>You cum several times as you feel $his belly slowly round with milk, finally transforming into a jiggling mass, under your molesting fingers<<else>>You cum as you feel $his belly slowly round with milk under your molesting fingers<</if>>. When you release $him from under your weight, $he drops to the ground panting. Both slaves enjoyed their union, though $milkTap.slaveName even more so thanks to _his2 lighter breasts.
 	<<if canDoVaginal($activeSlave) && ($activeSlave.vagina == 0)>>
@@ -472,7 +472,7 @@ Next, you see to $activeSlave.slaveName.
 	$He hesitantly brings $his mouth to its precum tipped dick, uncertain about sucking off a doll.
 
 <<elseif $activeSlave.rivalryTarget == $milkTap.ID>>
-	Knowing $his relationship with $milkTap.slaveName, you feel it best to restrain $him and anchor $his to $milkTap.slaveName's eager cock so $he has no choice but to suck $his way to release.
+	Knowing $his relationship with $milkTap.slaveName, you feel it best to restrain $him and anchor $him to $milkTap.slaveName's eager cock so $he has no choice but to suck $his way to release.
 
 <<elseif $activeSlave.relationshipTarget == $milkTap.ID>>
 	This is rather easy, as $activeSlave.slaveName
@@ -544,7 +544,7 @@ Next, you see to $activeSlave.slaveName.
 	Slight moaning emanates from the Fuckdoll as $activeSlave.slaveName sucks _his2 dick. You enjoy the show, specifically the sight of $activeSlave.slaveName's belly steadily growing larger until <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 3>>$his belly is round and taut, making $him look pregnant. $He pops off _his2 cock and settles into _his2 balls for a short rest while hiccupping<<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>> and rubbing $his gurgling stomach<</if>><<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his belly is round, jiggling and sloshing with cum. $He pops off _his2 cock and settles into _his2 balls for a short rest while hiccupping<<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>> and teasing $his wobbling, gurgling stomach<</if>><<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his belly is distended and sloshing with cum. $He pops off _his2 cock and settles into _his2 balls for a short rest while hiccupping<<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>> and teasing $his gurgling stomach<</if>><</if>>.
 
 <<elseif $milkTap.rivalryTarget == $activeSlave.ID>>
-	$milkTap.slaveName grins as _his2 rival is forced to suck down loads until $his belly is <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 3>>nearly bursting with cum. $activeSlave.slaveName struggles against $his bindings until the pressure building in $his overwhelms $him, causing $him to pass out with $milkTap.slaveName's ejaculating cock still stuck in $him. You quickly remove $his from it, making sure $he gets roused from $his stupor by one last blast of cum directly to the face<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>is rounded, jiggling and sloshing with cum. You release $his bindings, allowing $him to flop to the floor. <<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>>$he gingerly crawls away from $milkTap.slaveName, one hand cradling $his overfull stomach<<else>>$he rolls onto $his side, groaning with discomfort<</if>><<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>bloated with cum. You release $his bindings, allowing $him to flop to the floor. <<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>>$he gingerly sits up and begins massaging $his full stomach<<else>>$he rolls onto $his back, hiccupping pathetically<</if>><</if>>.
+	$milkTap.slaveName grins as _his2 rival is forced to suck down loads until $his belly is <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 3>>nearly bursting with cum. $activeSlave.slaveName struggles against $his bindings until the pressure building in $his overwhelms $him, causing $him to pass out with $milkTap.slaveName's ejaculating cock still stuck in $him. You quickly remove $him from it, making sure $he gets roused from $his stupor by one last blast of cum directly to the face<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>is rounded, jiggling and sloshing with cum. You release $his bindings, allowing $him to flop to the floor. <<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>>$he gingerly crawls away from $milkTap.slaveName, one hand cradling $his overfull stomach<<else>>$he rolls onto $his side, groaning with discomfort<</if>><<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>bloated with cum. You release $his bindings, allowing $him to flop to the floor. <<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>>$he gingerly sits up and begins massaging $his full stomach<<else>>$he rolls onto $his back, hiccupping pathetically<</if>><</if>>.
 
 <<elseif $milkTap.relationshipTarget == $activeSlave.ID>>
 	<<if $milkTap.relationship == 1>>
@@ -598,7 +598,7 @@ Next, you see to $activeSlave.slaveName.
 	<<elseif $PC.dick == 1 && $activeSlave.amp == 0>>
 		Moving behind the struggling cocksleeve while teasing your erect cock, you pull $him into a comfortable position to fuck $his <<if $activeSlave.weight > 95>>soft <</if>>thighs, for a lack of anything better. Once you are firmly seated, you reach around, bringing one hand to $his empty stomach and the other to $his exposed throat. As you thrust against $him, you force $him to choke down $milkTap.slaveName's dick, applying pressure to $his throat any time $he attempts to pull away.
 	<<else>>
-		Moving behind the struggling cocksleeve while teasing your erect cock, you find a distinct lack of ways to use $him to get off. <<if $PC.dick == 1>>You settle for rubbing your erection against $his back<<else>>You settle for a vibrating dildo stuck deep into your pussy<</if>>, you'll need both hands to fondle your toy. Once you are positioned, you reach around, bringing one hand to $his empty stomach and the other to $his exposed throat. As you masturbate, you force $his to choke down $milkTap.slaveName's dick, applying pressure to $his throat any time $he attempts to pull away.
+		Moving behind the struggling cocksleeve while teasing your erect cock, you find a distinct lack of ways to use $him to get off. <<if $PC.dick == 1>>You settle for rubbing your erection against $his back<<else>>You settle for a vibrating dildo stuck deep into your pussy<</if>>, you'll need both hands to fondle your toy. Once you are positioned, you reach around, bringing one hand to $his empty stomach and the other to $his exposed throat. As you masturbate, you force $him to choke down $milkTap.slaveName's dick, applying pressure to $his throat any time $he attempts to pull away.
 	<</if>>
 	<<if $activeSlave.inflation == 3>>You cum multiple times as you feel $his belly slowly round with cum, transform into a jiggling mass, and finally grow taut under your molesting fingers and the seemingly endless supply of ejaculate from $milkTap.slaveName<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>You cum several times as you feel $his belly slowly round with cum, finally transforming into a jiggling mass, under your molesting fingers and the seemingly endless supply of ejaculate from $milkTap.slaveName<<else>>You cum as you feel $his belly slowly round with cum under your molesting fingers and the seemingly endless supply of ejaculate from $milkTap.slaveName<</if>>. Standing and releasing $him from $milkTap.slaveName, gives you a lovely sight of $activeSlave.slaveName's <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 3>>taut, round belly<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>rounded, jiggling belly<<else>>distended, sloshing belly<</if>> quivering as $he comes down from $his own forced climax<<if $PC.dick == 1 && (canDoAnal($activeSlave) || canDoVaginal($activeSlave))>>, cum leaking from both ends<</if>>.
 	Both slaves @@.mediumorchid;resent@@ what you made them do and @@.gold;fear you@@ as a result.
@@ -652,7 +652,7 @@ Next, you see to $activeSlave.slaveName.
 	<<elseif $PC.dick == 1 && $activeSlave.amp == 0>>
 		You position the restrained $activeSlave.slaveName so that you can fuck $his <<if $activeSlave.weight > 95>>soft <</if>>thighs while $he is forced to suck $milkTap.slaveName's dick. With every thrust against the squirming slave, you force the moaning $milkTap.slaveName's cock deep into $his throat.
 	<<else>>
-		You position $activeSlave.slaveName so you can rub your <<if $PC.dick == 0>>clit<<else>>dick<</if>> against $his while $he is forced to suck $milkTap.slaveName's dick, since $he lacks any better way to please you. With every thrust against the squirming slave, you force the moaning $milkTap.slaveName's cock deep into $his throat.
+		You position $activeSlave.slaveName so you can rub your <<if $PC.dick == 0>>clit<<else>>dick<</if>> against $him while $he is forced to suck $milkTap.slaveName's dick, since $he lacks any better way to please you. With every thrust against the squirming slave, you force the moaning $milkTap.slaveName's cock deep into $his throat.
 	<</if>>
 	You wrap an arm around $activeSlave.slaveName's middle so you may feel $his stomach swell with ejaculate and place your other hand to $milkTap.slaveName's swollen testicles, knowing just how much _he2 loves to jettison cum. <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 3>>You cum multiple times as you feel $his belly slowly round with cum, transform into a jiggling mass, and finally grow taut under your molesting fingers<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>You cum several times as you feel $his belly slowly round with cum, finally transforming into a jiggling mass, under your molesting fingers<<else>>You cum as you feel $his belly slowly round with cum under your molesting fingers<</if>> and $milkTap.slaveName even more. _He2 is semi-conscious, drooling in @@.hotpink;pleasure and satisfaction,@@ by the time you release the bloated $activeSlave.slaveName from $his harness. Patting _his2 spasming, dribbling cock, you know _he2'll come out of it and be eagerly begging you for another slave to fuck soon. $activeSlave.slaveName, on the other hand, is regarding $his swollen stomach @@.mediumorchid;with disgust@@ and @@.gold;fear@@ of your power over $him.
 	<<if canDoVaginal($activeSlave) && ($activeSlave.vagina == 0)>>
@@ -677,7 +677,7 @@ Next, you see to $activeSlave.slaveName.
 	<<elseif $PC.dick == 1 && $activeSlave.amp == 0>>
 		You order $activeSlave.slaveName to position $his ass so you can fuck $his <<if $activeSlave.weight > 95>>soft <</if>>thighs while $he sucks $milkTap.slaveName's cock. With every thrust against the squirming slave, you push $milkTap.slaveName's cock deeper down $his throat, giving $milkTap.slaveName's orgasms a straight shot into the moaning slave's gullet.
 	<<else>>
-		You order $activeSlave.slaveName to position $himself so you can rub your <<if $PC.dick == 0>>clit<<else>>dick<</if>> against $his while $he is forced to suck $milkTap.slaveName's dick, since $he lacks any better way to please you. With every thrust against the squirming slave, you force the moaning $milkTap.slaveName's cock deep into $his throat.
+		You order $activeSlave.slaveName to position $himself so you can rub your <<if $PC.dick == 0>>clit<<else>>dick<</if>> against $him while $he is forced to suck $milkTap.slaveName's dick, since $he lacks any better way to please you. With every thrust against the squirming slave, you force the moaning $milkTap.slaveName's cock deep into $his throat.
 	<</if>>
 	You wrap an arm around $activeSlave.slaveName's middle so you may feel $his stomach swell with ejaculate and place your other hand to $milkTap.slaveName's balls, planning to coax even stronger orgasms out of _him2. <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 3>>You cum multiple times as you feel $his belly slowly round with cum, transform into a jiggling mass, and finally grow taut under your molesting fingers<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>You cum several times as you feel $his belly slowly round with cum, finally transforming into a jiggling mass, under your molesting fingers<<else>>You cum as you feel $his belly slowly round with cum under your molesting fingers<</if>>. When you release $him from under your weight, $he drops to the ground panting. Neither slave seems to have truly enjoyed it, instead opting to just get it over with, though $milkTap.slaveName makes sure to thank $activeSlave.slaveName for dealing with $his pent up loads.
 	<<if canDoVaginal($activeSlave) && ($activeSlave.vagina == 0)>>
@@ -698,9 +698,9 @@ Next, you see to $activeSlave.slaveName.
 	<<elseif $PC.dick == 1 && $activeSlave.amp == 0>>
 		You order $activeSlave.slaveName to lift $his ass so you can fuck $his <<if $activeSlave.weight > 95>>soft <</if>>thighs while $he sucks $milkTap.slaveName's cock. $He submissively obeys. With every thrust against the moaning slave, you push milkTap.slaveName's dick deeper down $his throat.
 	<<else>>
-		You order $activeSlave.slaveName to position $himself so you can rub your <<if $PC.dick == 0>>clit<<else>>dick<</if>> against $his while $he sucks $milkTap.slaveName's cock, since $he lacks any better way to please you. $He submissively obeys. With every thrust against the moaning slave, you push milkTap.slaveName's dick deeper down $his throat.
+		You order $activeSlave.slaveName to position $himself so you can rub your <<if $PC.dick == 0>>clit<<else>>dick<</if>> against $him while $he sucks $milkTap.slaveName's cock, since $he lacks any better way to please you. $He submissively obeys. With every thrust against the moaning slave, you push milkTap.slaveName's dick deeper down $his throat.
 	<</if>>
-	You wrap an arm around $activeSlave.slaveName's middle so you may feel $his stomach swell with ejaculate and place your other hand to $milkTap.slaveName's balls, knowing just how much _he2 gets backed up. <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 3>>You cum multiple times as you feel $his belly slowly round with cum, transform into a jiggling mass, and finally grow taut under your molesting fingers<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>You cum several times as you feel $his belly slowly round with cum, finally transforming into a jiggling mass, under your molesting fingers<<else>>You cum as you feel $his belly slowly round with cum under your molesting fingers<</if>>. When you release $his from under your weight, $he drops to the ground panting. Both slaves enjoyed their union, though $milkTap.slaveName even more so after that many orgasms.
+	You wrap an arm around $activeSlave.slaveName's middle so you may feel $his stomach swell with ejaculate and place your other hand to $milkTap.slaveName's balls, knowing just how much _he2 gets backed up. <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 3>>You cum multiple times as you feel $his belly slowly round with cum, transform into a jiggling mass, and finally grow taut under your molesting fingers<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>You cum several times as you feel $his belly slowly round with cum, finally transforming into a jiggling mass, under your molesting fingers<<else>>You cum as you feel $his belly slowly round with cum under your molesting fingers<</if>>. When you release $him from under your weight, $he drops to the ground panting. Both slaves enjoyed their union, though $milkTap.slaveName even more so after that many orgasms.
 	<<if canDoVaginal($activeSlave) && ($activeSlave.vagina == 0)>>
 		$activeSlave.slaveName feels @@.hotpink;closer to you@@ after losing $his virginity to you.
 		<<set $activeSlave.vagina = 1, $activeSlave.devotion += 5>>
@@ -723,7 +723,7 @@ Next, you see to $activeSlave.slaveName.
 	<<elseif $PC.dick == 1 && $activeSlave.amp == 0>>
 		You know that signal, but $he isn't allowed to get penetrated, so you settle for sticking your dick between $his <<if $activeSlave.weight > 95>>soft <</if>>thighs and fucking $him along with $milkTap.slaveName. With every thrust against the moaning slave, both you and $milkTap.slaveName come closer to climax.
 	<<else>>
-		You know that signal, but $he isn't allowed to get fucked, so you reposition $his so you can rub your <<if $PC.dick == 0>>clit<<else>>dick<</if>> against $him while $he deepthroats $milkTap.slaveName. With every thrust against the moaning slave, both you and $milkTap.slaveName come closer to climax.
+		You know that signal, but $he isn't allowed to get fucked, so you reposition $him so you can rub your <<if $PC.dick == 0>>clit<<else>>dick<</if>> against $him while $he deepthroats $milkTap.slaveName. With every thrust against the moaning slave, both you and $milkTap.slaveName come closer to climax.
 	<</if>>
 	You wrap an arm around $activeSlave.slaveName's middle so you may feel $his stomach swell with ejaculate and place your other hand to $milkTap.slaveName's breasts to prevent _him2 from feeling left out from your attention. <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 3>>You cum multiple times as you feel $his belly slowly round with cum, transform into a jiggling mass, and finally grow taut under your molesting fingers<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>You cum several times as you feel $his belly slowly round with cum, finally transforming into a jiggling mass, under your molesting fingers<<else>>You cum as you feel $his belly slowly round with cum under your molesting fingers<</if>>. When you release $him from under your weight, $he drops to the ground panting from $his meal and from the pleasure you drove into $him. Both slaves @@.hotpink;loved the attention,@@ though $milkTap.slaveName even more so after so much relief.
 	<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 4>>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/fillUpButt.tw b/src/pregmod/fillUpButt.tw
index c4bfcec000f880b00db68823f657704927843264..e7c12c0b871ae701dc99574c84ee536b037a507c 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/fillUpButt.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/fillUpButt.tw
@@ -157,7 +157,7 @@ before shoving the equipment into $his
 			tight butthole.
 		<<elseif ($activeSlave.anus == 0)>>
 			virgin butthole.
-		<</if>> $He writhes as you continue to move around $his posterior gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He struggles to stay still while you circle around $his anus, not breaking contact with $his with your fingers. You look at $his face and $he has shut $his eyes, trying not to think about what's about to happen.
+		<</if>> $He writhes as you continue to move around $his posterior gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He struggles to stay still while you circle around $his anus, not breaking contact with $him with your fingers. You look at $his face and $he has shut $his eyes, trying not to think about what's about to happen.
 		<<if ($activeSlave.amp != 1)>>
 			You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and bend $him over your lap, <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his soft and jiggly <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>>-filled belly spilling over your legs<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>> distended belly resting on your legs<<else>>$his belly resting on your legs<</if>>, while $he tries to push away.
 		<<else>>
@@ -277,7 +277,7 @@ before shoving the equipment into $his
 			tight
 		<<elseif ($activeSlave.anus == 0)>>
 			virgin
-		<</if>> butthole, and setting it on low. <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his sloshing belly slowly grows even larger with $activeSlave.inflationType. You rest a hand on $his back as $his swelling belly forces $him to rise off your lap. Once the enema is complete and $he is plugged, you <<if canWalk($activeSlave)>>push $him to $his feet<<else>>help $him onto your desk<</if>> and admire $his taut, $activeSlave.skin stomach. $He sighs contently, hoping you'll give $him more attention. You pat $his belly and tell $him to keep $himself filled with two gallons of $activeSlave.inflationType until you say otherwise<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his bloated belly slowly swells even larger with $activeSlave.inflationType. You slip a hand under $his stomach to feel it grow in your palm. Once the enema is complete and $he is plugged, you <<if canWalk($activeSlave)>>push $him to $his feet<<else>>help $him onto your desk<</if>> and admire $his jiggly, soft, $activeSlave.skin stomach. $He sighs contently, hoping you'll give $his more attention. You pat $his belly and tell $him to keep $himself filled with four liters of $activeSlave.inflationType until you say otherwise<<else>>$his belly slowly swells with $activeSlave.inflationType. You slip a hand under $his stomach to feel it grow in your palm. Once the enema is complete and $he is plugged, you <<if canWalk($activeSlave)>>push $him to $his feet<<else>>help $him onto your desk<</if>> and admire $his distended, $activeSlave.skin stomach. $He sighs contently, hoping you'll give $him more attention. You pat $his belly and tell $him to keep $himself filled with two liters of $activeSlave.inflationType until you say otherwise<</if>>.
+		<</if>> butthole, and setting it on low. <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his sloshing belly slowly grows even larger with $activeSlave.inflationType. You rest a hand on $his back as $his swelling belly forces $him to rise off your lap. Once the enema is complete and $he is plugged, you <<if canWalk($activeSlave)>>push $him to $his feet<<else>>help $him onto your desk<</if>> and admire $his taut, $activeSlave.skin stomach. $He sighs contently, hoping you'll give $him more attention. You pat $his belly and tell $him to keep $himself filled with two gallons of $activeSlave.inflationType until you say otherwise<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his bloated belly slowly swells even larger with $activeSlave.inflationType. You slip a hand under $his stomach to feel it grow in your palm. Once the enema is complete and $he is plugged, you <<if canWalk($activeSlave)>>push $him to $his feet<<else>>help $him onto your desk<</if>> and admire $his jiggly, soft, $activeSlave.skin stomach. $He sighs contently, hoping you'll give $him more attention. You pat $his belly and tell $him to keep $himself filled with four liters of $activeSlave.inflationType until you say otherwise<<else>>$his belly slowly swells with $activeSlave.inflationType. You slip a hand under $his stomach to feel it grow in your palm. Once the enema is complete and $he is plugged, you <<if canWalk($activeSlave)>>push $him to $his feet<<else>>help $him onto your desk<</if>> and admire $his distended, $activeSlave.skin stomach. $He sighs contently, hoping you'll give $him more attention. You pat $his belly and tell $him to keep $himself filled with two liters of $activeSlave.inflationType until you say otherwise<</if>>.
 
 <<else>>
 	<<if canWalk($activeSlave)>>
@@ -322,7 +322,7 @@ You look at $his rear while you squeeze $his cheeks and rub them with your firm
 			tight
 		<<elseif ($activeSlave.anus == 0)>>
 			virgin
-		<</if>> butthole, and setting it on low. <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his sloshing belly slowly grows even larger with $activeSlave.inflationType. You rest a hand on $his back as $his swelling belly forces $him to rise off your lap. Once the enema is complete and $he is plugged, you <<if canWalk($activeSlave)>>push $his to $his feet<<else>>help $his onto your desk<</if>> and admire $his taut, $activeSlave.skin stomach. $He sighs contently, before eagerly begging for more. You pat $his belly and tell $him to keep $himself filled with two gallons of $activeSlave.inflationType until you say otherwise<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his bloated belly slowly swells even larger with $activeSlave.inflationType. You slip a hand under $his stomach to feel it grow in your palm. Once the enema is complete and $he is plugged, you <<if canWalk($activeSlave)>>push $his to $his feet<<else>>help $him onto your desk<</if>> and admire $his jiggly, soft, $activeSlave.skin stomach. $He sighs contently, before eagerly begging for more. You pat $his belly and tell $him to keep $himself filled with four liters of $activeSlave.inflationType until you say otherwise<<else>>$his belly slowly swells with $activeSlave.inflationType. You slip a hand under $his stomach to feel it grow in your palm. Once the enema is complete and $he is plugged, you <<if canWalk($activeSlave)>>push $him to $his feet<<else>>help $him onto your desk<</if>> and admire $his distended, $activeSlave.skin stomach. $He sighs contently, before eagerly begging for more. You pat $his belly and tell $him to keep $himself filled with two liters of $activeSlave.inflationType until you say otherwise<</if>>.
+		<</if>> butthole, and setting it on low. <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his sloshing belly slowly grows even larger with $activeSlave.inflationType. You rest a hand on $his back as $his swelling belly forces $him to rise off your lap. Once the enema is complete and $he is plugged, you <<if canWalk($activeSlave)>>push $him to $his feet<<else>>help $his onto your desk<</if>> and admire $his taut, $activeSlave.skin stomach. $He sighs contently, before eagerly begging for more. You pat $his belly and tell $him to keep $himself filled with two gallons of $activeSlave.inflationType until you say otherwise<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his bloated belly slowly swells even larger with $activeSlave.inflationType. You slip a hand under $his stomach to feel it grow in your palm. Once the enema is complete and $he is plugged, you <<if canWalk($activeSlave)>>push $him to $his feet<<else>>help $him onto your desk<</if>> and admire $his jiggly, soft, $activeSlave.skin stomach. $He sighs contently, before eagerly begging for more. You pat $his belly and tell $him to keep $himself filled with four liters of $activeSlave.inflationType until you say otherwise<<else>>$his belly slowly swells with $activeSlave.inflationType. You slip a hand under $his stomach to feel it grow in your palm. Once the enema is complete and $he is plugged, you <<if canWalk($activeSlave)>>push $him to $his feet<<else>>help $him onto your desk<</if>> and admire $his distended, $activeSlave.skin stomach. $He sighs contently, before eagerly begging for more. You pat $his belly and tell $him to keep $himself filled with two liters of $activeSlave.inflationType until you say otherwise<</if>>.
 <</if>>
 <<if _pregDiscovery == 0>>
 	<<set $activeSlave.inflation += 1>>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/fillUpFace.tw b/src/pregmod/fillUpFace.tw
index 53d3d919c48a7a800e6ac3f2073e11c22650146b..6a7373238ef9a0beb48bf4573742c3423cf48465 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/fillUpFace.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/fillUpFace.tw
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ You attach a hose to $dairyName tap with the pipes set to pump $activeSlave.infl
 	<<else>>
 		firm, flat
 	<</if>>
-	belly, pulling $him into your lap. You force the hose down $his throat, strapping it to $his head to prevent it from slipping out, and turn the flow to low. With everything in place, you return your hands to $his gurgling stomach.<<if $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>You can feel $his $activeSlave.skin belly growing taut with $activeSlave.inflationType as it pushes out against your hands. Once you have given $him $his fill, you give the firm orb of $his belly a slap, eliciting a large belch from the broken slave and no motion at all from $his gut. You order $him to keep $himself filled with two gallons of $activeSlave.inflationType until you say otherwise, before helping $his hiccupping bulk onto the couch to recover. After a few minutes of rest, and several glares from you when it appears $his meal might be coming back up, is the groaning $activeSlave.slaveName ready to be moved<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>You can feel $his $activeSlave.skin belly growing larger with $activeSlave.inflationType as it pushes out against your hands. Once you have given $him $his fill, you give the jiggling orb of $his belly a slap, eliciting a burp from the broken slave and tons of motion from $his gut. You order $his to keep $himself filled with four liters of $activeSlave.inflationType until you say otherwise, before helping $his hiccupping bulk onto the couch to recover, After a few minutes of rest, and several glares from you when it appears $his meal might be coming back up, is the groaning $activeSlave.slaveName ready to be moved<<else>>You can feel $his $activeSlave.skin belly swelling with $activeSlave.inflationType as it pushes out against your hands. Once you have given $him $his fill, you give $his bloated belly a slap, eliciting a small burp from the broken slave and a little jiggle from $his gut. You order $him to keep $himself filled with two liters of $activeSlave.inflationType until you say otherwise, before helping $his sloshing bulk onto the couch to recover. After a few minutes of rest, and several glares from you when it appears $his meal might be coming back up, is the hiccupping $activeSlave.slaveName ready to be moved<</if>>.
+	belly, pulling $him into your lap. You force the hose down $his throat, strapping it to $his head to prevent it from slipping out, and turn the flow to low. With everything in place, you return your hands to $his gurgling stomach.<<if $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>You can feel $his $activeSlave.skin belly growing taut with $activeSlave.inflationType as it pushes out against your hands. Once you have given $him $his fill, you give the firm orb of $his belly a slap, eliciting a large belch from the broken slave and no motion at all from $his gut. You order $him to keep $himself filled with two gallons of $activeSlave.inflationType until you say otherwise, before helping $his hiccupping bulk onto the couch to recover. After a few minutes of rest, and several glares from you when it appears $his meal might be coming back up, is the groaning $activeSlave.slaveName ready to be moved<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>You can feel $his $activeSlave.skin belly growing larger with $activeSlave.inflationType as it pushes out against your hands. Once you have given $him $his fill, you give the jiggling orb of $his belly a slap, eliciting a burp from the broken slave and tons of motion from $his gut. You order $him to keep $himself filled with four liters of $activeSlave.inflationType until you say otherwise, before helping $his hiccupping bulk onto the couch to recover, After a few minutes of rest, and several glares from you when it appears $his meal might be coming back up, is the groaning $activeSlave.slaveName ready to be moved<<else>>You can feel $his $activeSlave.skin belly swelling with $activeSlave.inflationType as it pushes out against your hands. Once you have given $him $his fill, you give $his bloated belly a slap, eliciting a small burp from the broken slave and a little jiggle from $his gut. You order $him to keep $himself filled with two liters of $activeSlave.inflationType until you say otherwise, before helping $his sloshing bulk onto the couch to recover. After a few minutes of rest, and several glares from you when it appears $his meal might be coming back up, is the hiccupping $activeSlave.slaveName ready to be moved<</if>>.
 
 <<elseif $activeSlave.devotion < -20>>
 	<<if canWalk($activeSlave)>>
@@ -176,7 +176,7 @@ You attach a hose to $dairyName tap with the pipes set to pump $activeSlave.infl
 	<<else>>
 		firm, flat
 	<</if>>
-	belly. You <<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>>hand $him the hose<<else>>place the hose in $his mouth<</if>>, allowing $him to drink from it at $his own pace, as you keep a hand on the tap to control the flow. With everything in place, you place your free hand on $his gurgling stomach.<<if $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>You can feel $his $activeSlave.skin belly growing taut with $activeSlave.inflationType as it pushes out against your hand. Once you have given $him $his fill, you give the firm orb of $his belly a couple gentle pats, eliciting a small hiccup, that $he immediately apologizes for, from the overfilled slave and no motion at all from $his gut. $He sighs contently, hoping you'll give $his more attention. You order $him to keep $himself filled with two gallons of $activeSlave.inflationType until you say otherwise, before helping $his heavy body onto the couch to recover. $His meal attempts to come back up on $his several times, but $he dutifully holds it down. Only after a few minutes of rest is the groaning $activeSlave.slaveName ready to be moved<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>You can feel $his $activeSlave.skin belly growing larger with $activeSlave.inflationType as it pushes out against your hand. Once you have given $him $his fill, you give the jiggling orb of $his belly a couple pats, eliciting a small hiccup, that $he immediately apologizes for, from the full slave and tons of motion from $his gut. $He sighs contently, hoping you'll give $him more attention. You order $him to keep $himself filled with four liters of $activeSlave.inflationType until you say otherwise, before helping $his heavy body onto the couch to recover. $His meal attempts to come back up on $him several times, but $he dutifully holds it down. Only after a few minutes of rest is the groaning $activeSlave.slaveName ready to be moved<<else>>You can feel $his $activeSlave.skin belly swelling with $activeSlave.inflationType as it pushes out against your hand. Once you have given $him $his fill, you give $his bloated belly a couple pats, eliciting a small hiccup, that $he immediately apologizes for, from the bloated slave and a little jiggle from $his gut. $He sighs contently, hoping you'll give $his more attention. You order $him to keep $himself filled with two liters of $activeSlave.inflationType until you say otherwise, before helping $his sloshing body onto the couch to recover. $His meal attempts to come back up on $his several times, but $he dutifully holds it down. Only after a few minutes of rest is the groaning $activeSlave.slaveName ready to be moved<</if>>.
+	belly. You <<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>>hand $him the hose<<else>>place the hose in $his mouth<</if>>, allowing $him to drink from it at $his own pace, as you keep a hand on the tap to control the flow. With everything in place, you place your free hand on $his gurgling stomach.<<if $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>You can feel $his $activeSlave.skin belly growing taut with $activeSlave.inflationType as it pushes out against your hand. Once you have given $him $his fill, you give the firm orb of $his belly a couple gentle pats, eliciting a small hiccup, that $he immediately apologizes for, from the overfilled slave and no motion at all from $his gut. $He sighs contently, hoping you'll give $him more attention. You order $him to keep $himself filled with two gallons of $activeSlave.inflationType until you say otherwise, before helping $his heavy body onto the couch to recover. $His meal attempts to come back up on $his several times, but $he dutifully holds it down. Only after a few minutes of rest is the groaning $activeSlave.slaveName ready to be moved<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>You can feel $his $activeSlave.skin belly growing larger with $activeSlave.inflationType as it pushes out against your hand. Once you have given $him $his fill, you give the jiggling orb of $his belly a couple pats, eliciting a small hiccup, that $he immediately apologizes for, from the full slave and tons of motion from $his gut. $He sighs contently, hoping you'll give $him more attention. You order $him to keep $himself filled with four liters of $activeSlave.inflationType until you say otherwise, before helping $his heavy body onto the couch to recover. $His meal attempts to come back up on $him several times, but $he dutifully holds it down. Only after a few minutes of rest is the groaning $activeSlave.slaveName ready to be moved<<else>>You can feel $his $activeSlave.skin belly swelling with $activeSlave.inflationType as it pushes out against your hand. Once you have given $him $his fill, you give $his bloated belly a couple pats, eliciting a small hiccup, that $he immediately apologizes for, from the bloated slave and a little jiggle from $his gut. $He sighs contently, hoping you'll give $him more attention. You order $him to keep $himself filled with two liters of $activeSlave.inflationType until you say otherwise, before helping $his sloshing body onto the couch to recover. $His meal attempts to come back up on $his several times, but $he dutifully holds it down. Only after a few minutes of rest is the groaning $activeSlave.slaveName ready to be moved<</if>>.
 
 <<else>>
 	<<if canWalk($activeSlave)>>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/incubator.tw b/src/pregmod/incubator.tw
index dda38945bb0ec4846390b883d7634d5c458a52f3..f4b5bf4ebbd51660a363a3c0a67f80be024dea36 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/incubator.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/incubator.tw
@@ -398,7 +398,7 @@ Target age for release: <<textbox "$targetAge" $targetAge "Incubator">> [[Minimu
 		<<else>>
 			<br>$His growth is currently being accelerated. $He will be ready for release in about <<print Math.round($tanks[$i].growTime/$incubatorUpgradeSpeed)>> weeks.
 		<</if>>
-		<br>The tank is imprinting $his with basic life and sexual skills, though $he will still be very naïve and inexperienced on release.
+		<br>The tank is imprinting $him with basic life and sexual skills, though $he will still be very naïve and inexperienced on release.
 		<<if $tanks[$i].tankBaby == 2>>
 			The majority of $his indoctrination involves painting the world as a terrible place where only horror awaits $him should $he not obey $his owner.
 		<<else>>
@@ -484,9 +484,9 @@ Target age for release: <<textbox "$targetAge" $targetAge "Incubator">> [[Minimu
 				<</if>>
 			<</for>>
 			<<if $tanks[$i].genes == "XX">>
-				Being a natural $girl, $he possesses a functional vagina and ovaries, you can:
+				Being a natural girl, $he possesses a functional vagina and ovaries, you can:
 			<<else>>
-				Being a natural $girl, $he possesses a functional penis and balls, you can:
+				Being a natural boy, $he possesses a functional penis and balls, you can:
 			<</if>>
 			<br>
 			<<if $tanks[$i].ovaries == 0 && $tankOrgans.ovaries != 1>>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/pRaped.tw b/src/pregmod/pRaped.tw
index 064778ecc8ef3d9ea6a852a7477e0d26de83a038..02d7fec17aa30f6a1b8c802d45c0359cadd1b5c8 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/pRaped.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/pRaped.tw
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ While returning from a meeting with a prospective investor, an unfortunate wrong
 		"Nice and supple, how much did you have to pay for these babies?" he smirks as he gropes your breasts.
 	<</if>>
 	<<if $PC.preg >= 20 || $PC.belly >= 5000>>
-		"Couldn't afford an abortion after you took over? How sad." he chuckles as he rubs your pregnant belly.
+		"Couldn't afford an abortion after you took over? How sad," he chuckles as he rubs your pregnant belly.
 	<</if>>
 	<<if $PC.dick > 0>>
 		"Went with the full package didn't you?" he mocks as he flicks the tip of your stiffening cock.
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ While returning from a meeting with a prospective investor, an unfortunate wrong
 		"I can see why your designs were so popular, you fucked your way into the spotlight!" he chuckles as he rubs your pregnant belly.
 	<</if>>
 	<<if $PC.dick > 0>>
-		"Well you do know how to erect things don't you?" he mocks as he flicks the tip of your stiffening cock.
+		"Well you do know how to erect things, don't you?" he mocks as he flicks the tip of your stiffening cock.
 	<</if>>
 <<case "medicine">>
 	<<if $PC.boobs > 0>>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/rePregInventor.tw b/src/pregmod/rePregInventor.tw
index 1949cf35eaae64ad1608b366be6301d05af48a2f..04d96c2a60361ee0a8d154e40cc14f7cdc02ab67 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/rePregInventor.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/rePregInventor.tw
@@ -349,7 +349,7 @@
 		<<if $FCTVreceiver == 1>>
 			<br><<link "Organize a televised demonstration of $his skills.">>
 				<<replace "#result2">>
-				You are so impressed by $his ideas that you arrange to have $him demonstrate $his discoveries on a prominent FCTV talkshow. It will take some time, and you'll have to insure that $he's at least reasonably well known before the show's executives will agree to allow $him on-air, but you're certain that $activeSlave.slaveName's name will soon be on the lips of pregnancy-loving slaveowners and Free Cities citizens around the world. In the meantime, you implement her ideas around the arcology. $He is @@.hotpink;thrilled@@ to have pleased you so much that you would @@.mediumaquamarine;put such faith in $his ideas.@@
+				You are so impressed by $his ideas that you arrange to have $him demonstrate $his discoveries on a prominent FCTV talk show. It will take some time, and you'll have to insure that $he's at least reasonably well known before the show's executives will agree to allow $him on-air, but you're certain that $activeSlave.slaveName's name will soon be on the lips of pregnancy-loving slaveowners and Free Cities citizens around the world. In the meantime, you implement her ideas around the arcology. $He is @@.hotpink;thrilled@@ to have pleased you so much that you would @@.mediumaquamarine;put such faith in $his ideas.@@
 				<<set $cash -= 10000>>
 				<<set $pregInventor = 2>>
 				<<set $pregInventions = 1>>
@@ -538,7 +538,7 @@
 		<<if $FCTVreceiver == 1>>
 			<br><<link "Organize a televised demonstration of $his skills.">>
 				<<replace "#result2">>
-				You are so impressed by $his ideas that you arrange to have $him demonstrate $his discoveries on a prominent FCTV talkshow. It will take some time, and you'll have to insure that $he's at least reasonably well known before the show's executives will agree to allow $him on-air, but you're certain that $activeSlave.slaveName's name will soon be on the lips of pregnancy-loving slaveowners and Free Cities citizens around the world. In the meantime, you implement her ideas around the arcology. $He is @@.hotpink;thrilled@@ to have pleased you so much that you would @@.mediumaquamarine;put such faith in $his ideas.@@
+				You are so impressed by $his ideas that you arrange to have $him demonstrate $his discoveries on a prominent FCTV talk show. It will take some time, and you'll have to insure that $he's at least reasonably well known before the show's executives will agree to allow $him on-air, but you're certain that $activeSlave.slaveName's name will soon be on the lips of pregnancy-loving slaveowners and Free Cities citizens around the world. In the meantime, you implement her ideas around the arcology. $He is @@.hotpink;thrilled@@ to have pleased you so much that you would @@.mediumaquamarine;put such faith in $his ideas.@@
 				<<set $cash -= 10000>>
 				<<set $pregInventor = 2>>
 				<<set $pregInventions = 1>>
@@ -618,7 +618,7 @@
 		<</if>>
 		<br><br>
 		<<if canTalk($activeSlave)>>
-			"Hi, <<Master>>," $he <<say>>s. "//Oooooh...// you have no idea how good this feel<<s>>. My aching belly is warmed all through--well? Why don't you come in and I'll explain things."
+			"Hi, <<Master>>," $he <<say>>s. "//Oooooh...// you have no idea how good this feel<<s>>. My aching belly i<<s>> warmed all through — well? Why don't you come in and I'll e<<x>>plain thing<<s>>."
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.amp < 1>>
 			$He motions to you in more formal greetings and then lets out an involuntary moan of pleasure, rubbing at the sides of $his tremendous belly. $He beckons you to enter the pool.
 		<<else>>
@@ -628,7 +628,7 @@
 		You strip and put on one of the swimming outfits that are stored in the baths for your personal use, then slide yourself into the pool, squeezing in between its wall and your hyperswollen broodmother. The gel has a medicinal scent masked by lavender and is the perfect warmth to ease your muscles as you slide into it. Your skin tingles at its touch.
 		<br><br>
 		<<if canTalk($activeSlave)>>
-			"It'<<s>> curative jelly," your slave explains. "I'm <<s>>o big, now, it take<<s>> mo<<s>>t of the day to moi<<s>>turize my poor belly, even with help. With thi<<s>> jelly pool, it only takes a few minute<<s>>. I'm <<s>>ure thi<<s>> pool can help all <<s>>ort<<s>> of <<s>>lave<<s>> with big a<<ss>>et<<s>> <<s>>o that they can keep them<<s>>elve<<s>> looking pretty for their <<Master>><</if>>."
+			"It'<<s>> curative jelly," your slave explains. "I'm <<s>>o big, now, it take<<s>> mo<<s>>t of the day to moi<<s>>turi<<z>>e my poor belly, even with help. With thi<<s>> jelly pool, it only take<<s>> a few minute<<s>>. I'm <<s>>ure thi<<s>> pool can help all <<s>>ort<<s>> of <<s>>lave<<s>> with big a<<ss>>et<<s>> <<s>>o that they can keep them<<s>>elve<<s>> looking pretty for their <<Master>><</if>>."
 		<<else>>
 			<<if $activeSlave.amp == 0>>
 				$He motions to you, explaining in sign that the pool is filled with curative gel. It's designed to help slaves with enormous assets moisturize their oversized bodies without having to spend all day applying it manually.
@@ -660,7 +660,7 @@
 		$His weight falls onto you and pushes you into the cushioned wall of the pool. The wall gives beneath your combined bulk, swelling down and outward to accommodate and support you.
 		<br><br>
 		<<if canTalk($activeSlave)>>
-			"Do you like it, <<Master>>?" $he asks. "It'<<s>> built to grow and change a<<s>> your <<s>>lave<<s>> do. It <<sh>>ould be the perfect <<s>>ize to <<s>>upport them, no matter what that <<s>>ize might be. And if we ever get too big for even that, well..." $he smiles and you realize that, between the feeling of $his heavy, slick mass pressing into you and the rejuvenating effect of the gel,
+			"Do you like it, <<Master>>?" $he asks. "It'<<s>> built to grow and change a<<s>> your <<s>>lave<<s>> do. It <<sh>>ould be the perfect <<s>>i<<z>>e to <<s>>upport them, no matter what that <<s>>i<<z>>e might be. And if we ever get too big for even that, well..." $he smiles and you realize that, between the feeling of $his heavy, slick mass pressing into you and the rejuvenating effect of the gel,
 			<<if $PC.dick == 1>>
 				you're hard as a rock and
 			<<else>>
@@ -757,7 +757,7 @@
 		<<if $FCTVreceiver == 1>>
 			<br><<link "Organize a televised demonstration of $his skills.">>
 				<<replace "#result2">>
-				You are so impressed by $his ideas that you arrange to have $him demonstrate $his discoveries on a prominent FCTV talkshow. It will take some time, and you'll have to insure that $he's at least reasonably well known before the show's executives will agree to allow $him on-air, but you're certain that $activeSlave.slaveName's name will soon be on the lips of pregnancy-loving slaveowners and Free Cities citizens around the world. In the meantime, you implement her ideas around the arcology. $He is @@.hotpink;thrilled@@ to have pleased you so much that you would @@.mediumaquamarine;put such faith in $his ideas.@@
+				You are so impressed by $his ideas that you arrange to have $him demonstrate $his discoveries on a prominent FCTV talk show. It will take some time, and you'll have to insure that $he's at least reasonably well known before the show's executives will agree to allow $him on-air, but you're certain that $activeSlave.slaveName's name will soon be on the lips of pregnancy-loving slaveowners and Free Cities citizens around the world. In the meantime, you implement her ideas around the arcology. $He is @@.hotpink;thrilled@@ to have pleased you so much that you would @@.mediumaquamarine;put such faith in $his ideas.@@
 				<<set $cash -= 10000>>
 				<<set $pregInventor = 2>>
 				<<set $pregInventions = 1>>
@@ -776,7 +776,7 @@
 	<<set _arcCount = $arcologies.length>>
 	<<set $pregInventor = 3>>
 
-	The time has finally come for your slave, <<EventNameLink $activeSlave>>, to appear on the slave-breeding based talkshow, "Husbandry with Millie."
+	The time has finally come for your slave, <<EventNameLink $activeSlave>>, to appear on the slave-breeding based talk show, "Husbandry with Millie."
 	<<if $activeSlave.pornPrestige > 2 || $activeSlave.prestige > 2>>
 		While $he is already world-renowned, you might still improve $his chances to impress on the show with a little bit of extra investment in commercial spots or a tweaking of FCTV algorithms.
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.pornPrestige > 1 || $activeSlave.prestige > 2>>
@@ -827,7 +827,7 @@
 	<br><<link "Fund Additional Ads [Requires 10k funds]">>
 		<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
 		<<replace "#result">>
-		You fund an aggressive ad campaign featuring your slave in provocative positions and selling a "life changing interview" on "Husbandry With Millie." By the day of her interview, user boards all through the global web are discussing your slave and what she might be about to reveal. Even social demographics not typically inclined toward the idea of breeding slaves seem to be intrigued, and you're confident that many users will be watching as your slave sells your vision for the world's future.
+		You fund an aggressive ad campaign featuring your slave in provocative positions and selling a "life changing interview" on "Husbandry with Millie." By the day of her interview, user boards all through the global web are discussing your slave and what she might be about to reveal. Even social demographics not typically inclined toward the idea of breeding slaves seem to be intrigued, and you're confident that many users will be watching as your slave sells your vision for the world's future.
 		<br><br>
 		That done, you settle in to watch the interview.
 		<br><br>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/rePregInventorText.tw b/src/pregmod/rePregInventorText.tw
index 6247de8e6c39d38d617f927721cb166028eb6140..b4f8464314e0b4183818b6ed8d9fcaa9793dba53 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/rePregInventorText.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/rePregInventorText.tw
@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
 :: RE Preg Inventor Text [nobr]
 
-		The interview starts about halfway into a special episode of "Husbandry With Millie." The show's host is introducing a who's who of important figures in the slave breeding community. As you turn on the show, Millie seems to have just completed another interview.
+		The interview starts about halfway into a special episode of "Husbandry with Millie." The show's host is introducing a who's who of important figures in the slave breeding community. As you turn on the show, Millie seems to have just completed another interview.
 		<br><br>
-		"Everybody, give one last round of applause for renowned breakout porn star 'Twinner Jennie!'" she says. "Who'd have thought an eighteen year old slave could be pregnant with their own eighteen year old cloned sister? Quite a world--thank you again for that fascinating interview! Our next guest on 'Husbandry With Millie' is a clever 'broodmother' class breeding slave and mother of <<= commaNum($activeSlave.birthsTotal)>> children from the $continent arcology of '$arcologies[0].name.' Everybody, please give a hearty welcome to <<= SlaveFullName($activeSlave)>>!"
+		"Everybody, give one last round of applause for renowned breakout porn star 'Twinner Jennie!'" she says. "Who'd have thought an eighteen year old slave could be pregnant with their own eighteen year old cloned sister? Quite a world--thank you again for that fascinating interview! Our next guest on 'Husbandry with Millie' is a clever 'broodmother' class breeding slave and mother of <<= commaNum($activeSlave.birthsTotal)>> children from the $continent arcology of '$arcologies[0].name.' Everybody, please give a hearty welcome to <<= SlaveFullName($activeSlave)>>!"
 		<br><br>
-		The first thing that the audience sees of your slave is a colossal $activeSlave.skin orb pressing forward through an inadequate looking faux doorway at the rear of the set. "Husbandry With Millie" is a show about breeders and for breeders, and the host, Millie, has seen pregnant slaves of innumerable sizes and descriptions. Despite this, she does a clear double take as your slave enters, and enters, and enters stage right, $his grossly distorted belly seeming to go on forever as it precedes $him. $He is always growing, and you are constantly increasing the size of $his menial entourage to ensure $his unhindered mobility. As a result, a veritable platoon of masked menials can be seen throwing themselves into your overladen babyfactory before $his
+		The first thing that the audience sees of your slave is a colossal $activeSlave.skin orb pressing forward through an inadequate looking faux doorway at the rear of the set. "Husbandry with Millie" is a show about breeders and for breeders, and the host, Millie, has seen pregnant slaves of innumerable sizes and descriptions. Despite this, she does a clear double take as your slave enters, and enters, and enters stage right, $his grossly distorted belly seeming to go on forever as it precedes $him. $He is always growing, and you are constantly increasing the size of $his menial entourage to ensure $his unhindered mobility. As a result, a veritable platoon of masked menials can be seen throwing themselves into your overladen babyfactory before $his
 		<<if ($activeSlave.boobs >= 20000)>>
 			debilitatingly enormous, mind boggling breasts
 		<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobs >= 3000)>>
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@
 			waving $his stumps at $his belly to emphasize the truth of the host's statement.
 		<</if>>
 		<br><br>
-		"I have to admit, $activeSlave.slaveName," Millie says, "you might just be the most heavily pregnant breeder I've ever seen." She motions at your slave's replete body and says: "--may I?"
+		"I have to admit, $activeSlave.slaveName," Millie says, "you might just be the most heavily pregnant breeder I've ever seen." She motions at your slave's replete body and says: "— may I?"
 		<br><br>
 		<<if canTalk($activeSlave)>>
 			"Plea<<s>>e do," your slave <<say>>s.
@@ -102,11 +102,11 @@
 		<<else>>
 			thin lips,
 		<</if>>
-		making no noise. You know $him well enough to understand that the combined pleasure and pain from the talkshow host's uncareful touch has caused $him to experience one of $his "secret little orgasms," and you savor the sight of $him squirming as $he tries not to let on.
+		making no noise. You know $him well enough to understand that the combined pleasure and pain from the talk show host's uncareful touch has caused $him to experience one of $his "secret little orgasms," and you savor the sight of $him squirming as $he tries not to let on.
 		<br><br>
 		"So, $activeSlave.slaveName," Millie says, not taking her eyes off of the slave's incredibly fecund figure, "why don't you tell us about your inventions?"
 		<br><br>
-		Your slave bites $his lip and gives the talkshow host a meaningful look.
+		Your slave bites $his lip and gives the talk show host a meaningful look.
 		<<if canTalk($activeSlave)>>
 			"How about I give you a 'hand<<s>>-on' demon<<s>>tration in<<s>>tead?" $he asks.
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.amp < 1>>
@@ -130,17 +130,17 @@
 		"This feels great," Millie says. "I've been feeling a bit stretched thin, lately, but I can feel all the tension in my belly just slipping away."
 		<br><br>
 		<<if canTalk($activeSlave)>>
-			"Thi<<s>> pool i<<s>> de<<s>>igned to allow <<s>>lave<<s>> to care for their bodie<<s>> no matter how large they inflate," your slave <<say>>s. "--are you alright?" $he asks, wearing a look of mock concern on $his face.
+			"Thi<<s>> pool i<<s>> de<<s>>igned to allow <<s>>lave<<s>> to care for their bodie<<s>> no matter how large they inflate," your slave <<say>>s. "— Are you alright?" $he asks, wearing a look of mock concern on $his face.
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.amp < 1>>
 			Using the hand farthest from Millie, and with the other conspicuously hidden under the goo, your slave signs that the pool is designed to allow slaves to care for their bodies no matter how large they grow. $He then signs a request regarding the host's wellbeing, wearing a look of mocking concern on $his face.
 		<<else>>
 			Your slave's speaking assistant explains that the pool is designed to allow slaves and women to care for their bodies no matter how large they inflate. Meanwhile, your slave has been slowly rotating in the pool until $he is pressed conspicuously close to the host. The assistant asks if the host is feeling well, a look of mock concern on her face.
 		<</if>>
 		<br><br>
-		"Ah! Um, yes - yep! I'm feeling just fine," Millie says. She's blushing furiously and squirming, and you can just make out the outline of your slave performing some form of teasing shenanigans under the distorting effect of the pool's goo. "So - oooh, yes... $activeSlave.slaveName, how did you, um, come up with the idea for this pool?
+		"Ah! Um, yes - yep! I'm feeling just fine," Millie says. She's blushing furiously and squirming, and you can just make out the outline of your slave performing some form of teasing shenanigans under the distorting effect of the pool's goo. "So — oooh, yes... $activeSlave.slaveName, how did you, um, come up with the idea for this pool?
 		<br><br>
 		<<if canTalk($activeSlave)>>
-			"I'm alway<<s>> trying to think of way<<s>> to keep my<<s>>elf pretty for--oh!--my <<Master>>," your slave <<say>>s, suddenly squirming $himself. Millie has slouched down into the pool and is grinning wickedly as she apparently gets revenge. "Thi<<s>> wa<<s>> ju<<s>>t the be<<s>>t--um--I Mean--the be<<s>>t--oh //fuck, keep//--I mean, the be<<s>>t method I could think of for doing that."
+			"I'm alway<<s>> trying to think of way<<s>> to keep my<<s>>elf pretty for — oh! — my <<Master>>," your slave <<say>>s, suddenly squirming $himself. Millie has slouched down into the pool and is grinning wickedly as she apparently gets revenge. "Thi<<s>> wa<<s>> ju<<s>>t the be<<s>>t — um — I mean — the be<<s>>t — oh //fuck, keep// — I mean, the be<<s>>t method I could think of for doing that."
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.amp == 0>>
 			Your slave signs that this was the best method $he could think of to keep $himself pretty for you, given $his size, then starts moaning as a grinning Millie seems to have started enacting her revenge.
 		<<else>>
@@ -159,7 +159,7 @@
 		<br><br>
 		"That's quite something," Millie whispers. "I don't know about you, $activeSlave.slaveName, but I think I speak for everyone watching today when I say that now seems like a //really good time// to try out that other invention of yours."
 		<br><br>
-		They both exit the pool, dripping clear, slippery gel onto the wood floor of "Husbandry With Millie"'s set. Without a thorough rinsing, your slave's slathered up belly will be dripping for an hour or more, and $he seems to know that as $he motions to stop $his assistants from wiping $him off before strapping $him into $his aerial gymnastics maternity swing. As a result, when the two visibly panting preggos are strapped into the machine and elevated several <<if $showInches == 2>>feet<<else>>meters<</if>> above the now-visible studio audience, your slave drips a steady stream of goop onto their craning heads.
+		They both exit the pool, dripping clear, slippery gel onto the wood floor of "Husbandry with Millie"'s set. Without a thorough rinsing, your slave's slathered up belly will be dripping for an hour or more, and $he seems to know that as $he motions to stop $his assistants from wiping $him off before strapping $him into $his aerial gymnastics maternity swing. As a result, when the two visibly panting preggos are strapped into the machine and elevated several <<if $showInches == 2>>feet<<else>>meters<</if>> above the now-visible studio audience, your slave drips a steady stream of goop onto their craning heads.
 		<br><br>
 		"Oops!" Millie says. "Looks like we should have warned our audience about a wet zone for this episode. So, $activeSlave.slaveName, why don't we show off all the things this advanced maternity swing of yours can do?"
 		<br><br>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/widgets/bodySwapReaction.tw b/src/pregmod/widgets/bodySwapReaction.tw
index c9abf5f2245004ab85b28233bb155c48455fbc70..5903e1bf8136fb8396e8e6d787c48150300ff173 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/widgets/bodySwapReaction.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/widgets/bodySwapReaction.tw
@@ -2421,7 +2421,7 @@ Now you only have to wait for $him to wake up.
 					<<elseif $args[0].behavioralQuirk == "fitness">>
 						$He would prefer to be fitter, but without arms and legs, $he gets little say in the matter.
 					<<else>>
-						$He is happy that you have given $his more weight for you to play
+						$He is happy that you have given $him more weight for you to play
 						<<if $arcologies[0].FSSlimnessEnthusiast != "unset">>
 							with, but is somewhat confused that you would do so against the society you created.
 						<<else>>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/widgets/bodyswapWidgets.tw b/src/pregmod/widgets/bodyswapWidgets.tw
index 2c8e14077eb5c9f77c8b9c5d216bc4a744627795..7e19e6db07e8eeedccdbb2a66e4fb64cc80c155d 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/widgets/bodyswapWidgets.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/widgets/bodyswapWidgets.tw
@@ -209,7 +209,7 @@
 <<set $args[0].bellyPreg = $args[1].bellyPreg>>
 <<set $args[0].bellyFluid = $args[1].bellyFluid>>
 <<set $args[0].readyOva = $args[1].readyOva>>
-<<set $args[0].womb = $args[1].womb>> /* this is array assigned by reference, if slave body that is $args[1] will be stil used anywhere in code (not discarded) - it's WRONG (they now technically share one womb object). Please tell me about it then. But if old body $args[1] just discarded - it's no problem then.*/
+<<set $args[0].womb = $args[1].womb>> /* this is array assigned by reference, if slave body that is $args[1] will be still used anywhere in code (not discarded) - it's WRONG (they now technically share one womb object). Please tell me about it then. But if old body $args[1] just discarded - it's no problem then.*/
 <<set $args[0].laborCount = $args[1].laborCount>>
 <<set $args[0].geneMods = $args[1].geneMods>>
 <<set $args[0].NCSyouthening = $args[1].NCSyouthening>>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/widgets/deathWidgets.tw b/src/pregmod/widgets/deathWidgets.tw
index cb7e44ac4a9c002ed53f5a70b4a8071d320ba6f2..d2635f836799e1ca0ed20b6bab982d29e969f135 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/widgets/deathWidgets.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/widgets/deathWidgets.tw
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 
 <br>
 
-As $args[0].slaveName is going about $his business with $his overfilled $args[0].inflationType belly, $he can't help but feel exhausted. $His health has been poor lately and the pressure in $his organs is not helping things. $He immediately knows something is wrong when an intense pain runs through $his middle and $his load shifts threateningly. Blood and $args[0].inflationType leak from $his rear as $his body cavity fills with the contents of $his digestive tract. The skin of $his taut belly reddens as the pressure against it builds. As $he takes $his last breath, $he falls forward, $his weight landing upon $his straining stomach. With a gush, $he ruptures, flooding the area around $his with blood, guts and $args[0].inflationType. Word of the late slave and $his gruesome fate spread fast, @@.gold;terrifying@@ your untrusting slaves.
+As $args[0].slaveName is going about $his business with $his overfilled $args[0].inflationType belly, $he can't help but feel exhausted. $His health has been poor lately and the pressure in $his organs is not helping things. $He immediately knows something is wrong when an intense pain runs through $his middle and $his load shifts threateningly. Blood and $args[0].inflationType leak from $his rear as $his body cavity fills with the contents of $his digestive tract. The skin of $his taut belly reddens as the pressure against it builds. As $he takes $his last breath, $he falls forward, $his weight landing upon $his straining stomach. With a gush, $he ruptures, flooding the area around $him with blood, guts and $args[0].inflationType. Word of the late slave and $his gruesome fate spread fast, @@.gold;terrifying@@ your untrusting slaves.
 <<for _dw = 0; _dw < $slaves.length; _dw++>>
 	<<if ($slaves[_dw].trust <= 50)>>
 	<<if ($slaves[_dw].inflation >= 0)>>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/widgets/pregmodBirthWidgets.tw b/src/pregmod/widgets/pregmodBirthWidgets.tw
index dfd784047fc2ef31ea2da47f0676e59668d7e8ef..67e5ca21d9361c7d5d31c823ab2e09873e0d107b 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/widgets/pregmodBirthWidgets.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/widgets/pregmodBirthWidgets.tw
@@ -1730,7 +1730,7 @@
 				While licking a customer's cunt, $slaves[$i].slaveName's body begins to birth another of $his brood. $He desperately tries to disengage but she grabs $his head and slams $him back into $his crotch.
 				<<set $humiliation = 1>>
 				<<ClothingBirth>>
-				She cums across $his face before helping $him to $his feet and handing $his the newborn child.
+				She cums across $his face before helping $him to $his feet and handing $him the newborn child.
 			<<else>>
 				While taking a customer's dick in $his ass, $slaves[$i].slaveName's body begins to birth another of $his brood. $He desperately tries to disengage but he shoves $him onto $his bloated womb and mounts $him. Quickly $he spreads $his legs apart and begins pushing out $his bab<<if $slaves[$i].pregType > 1>>ies<<else>>y<</if>>. $He can't hide what's happening between $his legs, <<if $slaves[$i].fetish == "humiliation">>but that only makes it more exciting<<else>>so $he bears with it<</if>>. He came strongly thanks to $him and gives $him a slap on the ass as $he collapses onto $his bloated womb. Once $he recovers enough to get to $his feet, $he gathers $his child to be sent off.
 				<<set $humiliation = 1>>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/widgets/pregmodWidgets.tw b/src/pregmod/widgets/pregmodWidgets.tw
index a090002c25260878904882eb56b63de07f254daa..076666fcacbe679c4dd83375fecbe0b29d1903eb 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/widgets/pregmodWidgets.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/widgets/pregmodWidgets.tw
@@ -256,6 +256,11 @@
 	<<set _himP = $PC.object>>
 	<<set _himselfP = $PC.objectReflexive>>
 	<<set _womanP = $PC.noun>>
+	<<if _womanP == "woman">>
+		<<set _girlP = "girl", _loliP = "loli", _womenP = "women">>
+	<<else>>
+		<<set _girlP = "boy", _loliP = "shota", _womenP = "men">>
+	<</if>>
 
 	<<set _HeP = capFirstChar(_heP)>>
 	<<set _HisP = capFirstChar(_hisP)>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw b/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw
index bf005e5dc54190425357aa79a27cf5bbf40326c2..390818292a0f5f26ac157faf5db86612550c801d 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw
@@ -2266,7 +2266,7 @@ Lately, you've noticed that $he reacts to these <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>sight
 
 <<case "devoted waist">>
 
-<<EventNameLink $activeSlave>> is a real work of surgical art. As $he showers, carefully soaping and then moisturizing every inch of $his $activeSlave.skin skin, you notice the undeniable eroticism created by the unnatural narrowness of $his middle<<if $activeSlave.belly >= 5000>>, especially given how much $his _belly <<if $activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 3000>>pregnancy<<else>>belly<</if>> extends past $his sides<</if>>. Though $his hands are by no means large, when $he washes $his sides, $his hands span almost the entire circumference of $his waist. <<if $activeSlave.dick > 0>>Though $he's not sexually aroused, $his cock is visible as $he bathes $himself; $his member and $his narrow waist work together to create a real melange of gender traits.<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobs > 800) && ($activeSlave.butt > 4)>>$His massive bust and hips work together to create a spectacular hourglass effect; $he's a fantasy woman made flesh.<<else>>The narrowness of $his waist accentuates $his feminine features.<</if>>
+<<EventNameLink $activeSlave>> is a real work of surgical art. As $he showers, carefully soaping and then moisturizing every inch of $his $activeSlave.skin skin, you notice the undeniable eroticism created by the unnatural narrowness of $his middle<<if $activeSlave.belly >= 5000>>, especially given how much $his _belly <<if $activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 3000>>pregnancy<<else>>belly<</if>> extends past $his sides<</if>>. Though $his hands are by no means large, when $he washes $his sides, $his hands span almost the entire circumference of $his waist. <<if $activeSlave.dick > 0>>Though $he's not sexually aroused, $his cock is visible as $he bathes $himself; $his member and $his narrow waist work together to create a real mélange of gender traits.<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobs > 800) && ($activeSlave.butt > 4)>>$His massive bust and hips work together to create a spectacular hourglass effect; $he's a fantasy woman made flesh.<<else>>The narrowness of $his waist accentuates $his feminine features.<</if>>
 
 <<case "muscles">>
 
@@ -2332,7 +2332,7 @@ A perfectly devoted slave might display $himself, and a rebellious one might try
 <<else>>
 	gravity causes them to hang low.
 <</if>>
-As you inspect $his with your hands, $he
+As you inspect $him with your hands, $he
 <<if !canTalk($activeSlave)>>
 	breathes a little harder and looks like $he would speak, were $he not mute.
 <<else>>
@@ -4767,7 +4767,7 @@ brought in to you. This time <<EventNameLink $activeSlave>> has been sent to del
 		<<else>>
 			hypertrophied
 		<</if>>
-		dick on your lower body, thrusting blindly around your belly, before lodging $himself between your thighs. You have a hard time fighting against $his in your position, but you're not about to let $him dominate you either. You continue trying to shake $him off, making sure at the same time that your movements are as aggressive as possible to try and distract $him with pain or pleasure. You feel $his grip loosen as $his body tenses before pending orgasm, so you strongly push into $him, knocking $him off balance and to the floor. $He spills $his seed all over $himself and you as you wrestle $him into a chokehold. Now that you have $him restrained, it's time $he learned $his place.
+		dick on your lower body, thrusting blindly around your belly, before lodging $himself between your thighs. You have a hard time fighting against $him in your position, but you're not about to let $him dominate you either. You continue trying to shake $him off, making sure at the same time that your movements are as aggressive as possible to try and distract $him with pain or pleasure. You feel $his grip loosen as $his body tenses before pending orgasm, so you strongly push into $him, knocking $him off balance and to the floor. $He spills $his seed all over $himself and you as you wrestle $him into a chokehold. Now that you have $him restrained, it's time $he learned $his place.
 		<<set $mutinery = 2>>
 
 		<br><br><span id="result2">
@@ -6623,7 +6623,7 @@ brought in to you. This time <<EventNameLink $activeSlave>> has been sent to del
 <br><<link "Buttfuck $him against the railing">>
 	<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
 	<<replace "#result">>
-	You move quietly over to $him and encircle $his with your arms, holding both $his hands over $his _belly<<if $activeSlave.pregKnown == 1>> pregnant<</if>> belly with both of yours. $He relaxes into your
+	You move quietly over to $him and encircle $him with your arms, holding both $his hands over $his _belly<<if $activeSlave.pregKnown == 1>> pregnant<</if>> belly with both of yours. $He relaxes into your
 	<<if $PC.boobsBonus > 2>>
 		enormous<<if $PC.boobsImplant == 1>> fake<</if>> breasts
 	<<elseif $PC.boobsBonus == 2>>
@@ -7379,7 +7379,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
 <br><<link "Comfort $him">>
 	<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
 	<<replace "#result">>
-	$He turns around as <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>$he hears <</if>>you enter the bathroom, fear and loathing on $his face, but is surprised by <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>your gentle expression<<else>>by how calm your steps seem<</if>>. $He's more shocked still when you give $him a reassuring hug and kiss $his unresisting mouth. $He's so unable to figure out what's happening that $he eventually gives up and relaxes into you. You run your hands along $his body and kiss $his deeply for a long while before reassuring $his of $his value to you. $He looks confused, but goes about $his business with dry eyes. $He hates you a little less, but wonders whether $he can get away with retaining some independence.
+	$He turns around as <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>$he hears <</if>>you enter the bathroom, fear and loathing on $his face, but is surprised by <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>your gentle expression<<else>>by how calm your steps seem<</if>>. $He's more shocked still when you give $him a reassuring hug and kiss $his unresisting mouth. $He's so unable to figure out what's happening that $he eventually gives up and relaxes into you. You run your hands along $his body and kiss $his deeply for a long while before reassuring $him of $his value to you. $He looks confused, but goes about $his business with dry eyes. $He hates you a little less, but wonders whether $he can get away with retaining some independence.
 	<</replace>>
 <</link>>
 
@@ -7568,11 +7568,11 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
 	<<if ($activeSlave.muscles > 30)>>
 		$His powerful form has to be sedated for immurement in the arcade.
 	<<elseif ($activeSlave.weight >= 190)>>
-		$He is so massively fat that immuring $his in the arcade is a struggle, even when $he isn't trying to.
+		$He is so massively fat that immuring $him in the arcade is a struggle, even when $he isn't trying to.
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.belly >= 120000>>
-		$He is so enormously gravid that immuring $his in the arcade is a hassle, even though $his _belly middle limits $his ability to struggle.
+		$He is so enormously gravid that immuring $him in the arcade is a hassle, even though $his _belly middle limits $his ability to struggle.
 	<<elseif ($activeSlave.weight >= -10)>>
-		$His desperate struggles make immuring $his in the arcade difficult.
+		$His desperate struggles make immuring $him in the arcade difficult.
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.belly >= 1500>>
 		$His <<if $activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 3000>>pregnant<<else>>_belly<</if>> body makes it slightly difficult to fit $him properly into the restraints for immurement in the arcade.
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.muscles < -15>>
@@ -7905,7 +7905,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
 <br><<link "Secure $him by $his piercings for public use">>
 	<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
 	<<replace "#result">>
-	You order $him to make sure all of $his piercings have rings in them, and then come to you when $he's done. $He enters your office with a mixture of fear and curiosity on $his face. You lead $him outside and secure $his in a side hall so that $his ass is presented to anyone who takes interest. $He's forced to maintain this exact posture by a light chain between <<if $activeSlave.belly > 10000>>$his popped navel and a ring on the ground.<<elseif ($activeSlave.dick > 0)>>$his dickhead and a ring on the ground.<<elseif $activeSlave.vagina == -1>>$his nipples and a ring on the ground.<<else>>$his pussy and a ring on the ground.<</if>> You fuck $his ass to check the bondage; it's good. The chain is out of the way, and $he jerks and struggles amusingly to keep it from tugging $him painfully. You pull out to leave $his fucked butt with cum dribbling out of it, and leave $him to the tender mercies of the growing crowd. @@.green;The sadists among the public are duly grateful.@@
+	You order $him to make sure all of $his piercings have rings in them, and then come to you when $he's done. $He enters your office with a mixture of fear and curiosity on $his face. You lead $him outside and secure $him in a side hall so that $his ass is presented to anyone who takes interest. $He's forced to maintain this exact posture by a light chain between <<if $activeSlave.belly > 10000>>$his popped navel and a ring on the ground.<<elseif ($activeSlave.dick > 0)>>$his dickhead and a ring on the ground.<<elseif $activeSlave.vagina == -1>>$his nipples and a ring on the ground.<<else>>$his pussy and a ring on the ground.<</if>> You fuck $his ass to check the bondage; it's good. The chain is out of the way, and $he jerks and struggles amusingly to keep it from tugging $him painfully. You pull out to leave $his fucked butt with cum dribbling out of it, and leave $him to the tender mercies of the growing crowd. @@.green;The sadists among the public are duly grateful.@@
 	<<if canDoAnal($activeSlave) && canDoVaginal($activeSlave)>>
 		<<if $activeSlave.vagina == 0 && $activeSlave.anus == 0>>
 			They take pleasure in claiming @@.lime;both $his virginity and anal cherry.@@
@@ -7990,7 +7990,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
 	<<else>>
 		"<<Master>>, you ta<<s>>te great," $he purrs.
 	<</if>>
-		@@.mediumaquamarine;$He has become more trusting@@ in your willingness to give $his what $he wants.
+		@@.mediumaquamarine;$He has become more trusting@@ in your willingness to give $him what $he wants.
 	<<set $activeSlave.trust += 4, $activeSlave.oralCount++, $oralTotal++>>
 	<</replace>>
 <</link>>
@@ -8477,7 +8477,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
 		After so much of this that $he's clearly ready to orgasm at the slightest further touch, you gently massage $his nether lips with a single finger and $he comes spastically, abdominal muscles quivering. $His pussy relaxes and opens naturally; taking the cue, you pick $him up and lower $him, <<if $showInches == 2>>inch<<else>>centimeter<</if>> by moaning <<if $showInches == 2>>inch<<else>>centimeter<</if>>, onto <<if $PC.dick == 0>>a strap-on you put on while playing with $his<<else>>your cock<</if>>.
 		<<= VaginalVCheck()>>
 	<<else>>
-		After so much of this that $he's clearly ready to orgasm at the slightest further touch, you gently massage $his anus with a single finger and $he comes spastically, abdominal muscles quivering. $His sphincter relaxes and opens naturally; taking the cue, you pick $his up and lower $his rectum, <<if $showInches == 2>>inch<<else>>centimeter<</if>> by sobbing <<if $showInches == 2>>inch<<else>>centimeter<</if>>, onto <<if $PC.dick == 0>>a strap-on you put on while playing with $his<<else>>your cock<</if>>.
+		After so much of this that $he's clearly ready to orgasm at the slightest further touch, you gently massage $his anus with a single finger and $he comes spastically, abdominal muscles quivering. $His sphincter relaxes and opens naturally; taking the cue, you pick $him up and lower $his rectum, <<if $showInches == 2>>inch<<else>>centimeter<</if>> by sobbing <<if $showInches == 2>>inch<<else>>centimeter<</if>>, onto <<if $PC.dick == 0>>a strap-on you put on while playing with $his<<else>>your cock<</if>>.
 		<<= AnalVCheck()>>
 	<</if>>
 	After pumping $his helpless torso up and down with your arms, a parody of masturbation with $his helpless body, you carry your toy to the shower to wash $him. @@.mediumaquamarine;$He has become more trusting of you.@@
@@ -8862,7 +8862,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.anus > 1>>
 		welcomes you in, offering you only a delicious bit of resistance to push against.
 	<<else>>
-		saves $his from too much anal pain, though $he does buck a little at the first penetration.
+		saves $him from too much anal pain, though $he does buck a little at the first penetration.
 	<</if>>
 	You surprised $him badly, but the adrenaline melts into arousal as you pump in and out of $his ass. $He grinds shamelessly against the cushion; since $he's being a good $girl, you reach up to your bedside without giving $him any respite to fetch
 	<<if ($activeSlave.dick > 0) && !canAchieveErection($activeSlave)>>
@@ -9589,7 +9589,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
 	<<replace "#result">>
 	You open a drawer of your desk and extract a razor-sharp ceramic-bladed knife. <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>You make a show of inspecting its edge and then place it on your desk before looking meaningfully at $his ballsack. $He watches this display with wide eyes<<else>>You describe what it is you took out of your desk and how easily it could be used to remove $his ballsack. $He cocks $his head slightly<</if>> until $he gets your meaning, and then collapses to the ground, almost wetting $himself.
 	<<if !canTalk($activeSlave)>>
-		$He frantically uses $his hands to promise you perfect obedience if you'll only spare $his from emasculation.
+		$He frantically uses $his hands to promise you perfect obedience if you'll only spare $him from emasculation.
 	<<else>>
 		$He begs through tears, "Plea<<s>>e no, <<if $activeSlave.rudeTitle == 1>><<= PoliteRudeTitle($activeSlave)>><<else>><<Master>><</if>>! Plea<<s>>e let me keep them! Plea<<s>>e!"
 	<</if>>
@@ -10376,7 +10376,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
 	<<replace "#result">>
 	$He seems a little too focused on $his hot cunt. You order $him to get up on your desk, and $he obeys eagerly, $his <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>$activeSlave.eyeColor eyes shining<<else>>facial expression filled<</if>> with lust. <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>They focus<<else>>$He focuses<</if>> on <<if $PC.dick == 1>>your cock as you bring it to bear<<if $PC.vagina == 1>>, not to mention the pussy at its base<</if>><<else>>your strap-on as you step into it<</if>>, and $he's about to express $his gratitude when you push the slave, who is sitting on the edge of your desk with $his legs spread to provide you access to $his pussy, over onto $his back. $He barely has time to reorient $himself when $he feels <<if $activeSlave.anus > 2>>a sudden fullness in $his loose ass<<elseif $activeSlave.anus == 2>>a presence inside $his experienced ass<<else>>something starting to push its way up $his poor little bottom<</if>>.
 	<br><br>
-	$He cannot hide $his disappointment, but has the presence of mind not to protest as you assfuck $him hard enough that $his <<if $activeSlave.boobs > 2000>>ridiculous tits almost hit $his in the face with each stroke<<elseif $activeSlave.boobs > 800>>big boobs bounce all over the place<<else>>boobs bounce<</if>><<if $activeSlave.belly >= 10000>> and taut belly is forced back<</if>>. $His orgasm sneaks up on $him, and comes by surprise, forcing a squeal out of $his as $his sphincter tightens down involuntarily. $He gets up gingerly, clearly feeling sore,
+	$He cannot hide $his disappointment, but has the presence of mind not to protest as you assfuck $him hard enough that $his <<if $activeSlave.boobs > 2000>>ridiculous tits almost hit $him in the face with each stroke<<elseif $activeSlave.boobs > 800>>big boobs bounce all over the place<<else>>boobs bounce<</if>><<if $activeSlave.belly >= 10000>> and taut belly is forced back<</if>>. $His orgasm sneaks up on $him, and comes by surprise, forcing a squeal out of $him as $his sphincter tightens down involuntarily. $He gets up gingerly, clearly feeling sore,
 	<<if (random(0,1) == 1)>>
 		and looks preoccupied. $He reaches idly around and massages $his well-fucked backdoor meditatively, biting $his lower lip as $he investigates. Maybe, $he seems to be thinking, @@.lightcoral;anal is fun?@@
 		<<set $activeSlave.fetish = "buttslut", $activeSlave.fetishKnown = 1, $activeSlave.fetishStrength = 10>>
@@ -11248,7 +11248,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
 <br><<link "Delay $his milking and then fuck $him in public">>
 	<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
 	<<replace "#result">>
-	$activeSlave.slaveName obeys <<if $activeSlave.devotion > 20>>without hesitation<<else>>hesitantly<</if>> when you order $him to kneel next to your desk the next time $he tries to go to the milkers. $His equanimity is severely tested over the next hours as you ignore $him. The occasional glance at $him shows $him growing increasingly frantic as $his breasts grow heavier and $his nipples <<if $activeSlave.nipples != "fuckable">>get prouder<<else>>begin to prolapse<</if>>. <<if $activeSlave.preg > $activeSlave.pregData.normalBirth/1.33>>Soon, $his child's kicking is forcing milk out of $his swollen breasts.<</if>> Eventually, the slight rising and falling of $his ribcage as $he inhales and exhales induces enough motion in $his overfull breasts that milk spurts out of $his with each breath. Satisfied that $he's ready, you<<if $PC.dick == 0>> don a strap-on and<</if>> lead the whimpering, dripping slave out to a public street. Here, you hold $him upright so you can fuck $him standing. When $he finally comes through the pain of $his overfull udders, you reach forward and squeeze $him so that $he screams in pain and relief, spraying jets of milk. $He continually aftershock orgasms as you continue pounding. You offer $his breasts to the growing crowd, many of whom come forward to taste $his cream.
+	$activeSlave.slaveName obeys <<if $activeSlave.devotion > 20>>without hesitation<<else>>hesitantly<</if>> when you order $him to kneel next to your desk the next time $he tries to go to the milkers. $His equanimity is severely tested over the next hours as you ignore $him. The occasional glance at $him shows $him growing increasingly frantic as $his breasts grow heavier and $his nipples <<if $activeSlave.nipples != "fuckable">>get prouder<<else>>begin to prolapse<</if>>. <<if $activeSlave.preg > $activeSlave.pregData.normalBirth/1.33>>Soon, $his child's kicking is forcing milk out of $his swollen breasts.<</if>> Eventually, the slight rising and falling of $his ribcage as $he inhales and exhales induces enough motion in $his overfull breasts that milk spurts out of $him with each breath. Satisfied that $he's ready, you<<if $PC.dick == 0>> don a strap-on and<</if>> lead the whimpering, dripping slave out to a public street. Here, you hold $him upright so you can fuck $him standing. When $he finally comes through the pain of $his overfull udders, you reach forward and squeeze $him so that $he screams in pain and relief, spraying jets of milk. $He continually aftershock orgasms as you continue pounding. You offer $his breasts to the growing crowd, many of whom come forward to taste $his cream.
 	<<if !canDoVaginal($activeSlave)>>
 		You fuck $his butt until they've sucked $him empty.
 		<<= AnalVCheck()>>
@@ -11306,7 +11306,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
 	<<else>>
 		you insert a couple of fingers alongside your <<if $PC.dick == 1>>dick<<else>>phallus<</if>>.
 	<</if>>
-	$He just goes on screaming about how much $his boobs hurt. Eventually, you tire of $his bellowing, so you reach around and pop <<if $activeSlave.nipples != "fuckable">>$his nipples out one by one<<else>>finger into each nipple<</if>>. The shrieking reaches a paroxysm, but once they're <<if $activeSlave.nipples != "fuckable">>protruded<<else>>opened<</if>>, the milk begins to jet out of $his in a pair of uninterrupted streams. $He collapses forward onto $his face, crying with relief as the pain in $his breasts recedes. As it does, $he finally begins to notice
+	$He just goes on screaming about how much $his boobs hurt. Eventually, you tire of $his bellowing, so you reach around and pop <<if $activeSlave.nipples != "fuckable">>$his nipples out one by one<<else>>finger into each nipple<</if>>. The shrieking reaches a paroxysm, but once they're <<if $activeSlave.nipples != "fuckable">>protruded<<else>>opened<</if>>, the milk begins to jet out of $him in a pair of uninterrupted streams. $He collapses forward onto $his face, crying with relief as the pain in $his breasts recedes. As it does, $he finally begins to notice
 	<<if canDoAnal($activeSlave)>>
 		the pain in $his backdoor as you continue to abuse it<<if $activeSlave.anus == 0>><<set $activeSlave.anus++>>, and that $he is @@.lime;no longer an anal virgin@@<</if>>.
 		<<if canDoVaginal($activeSlave) && $activeSlave.vagina == 0>>
@@ -12118,7 +12118,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
 				ass.
 			<</if>>
 		<<else>>
-			"Plea<<s>>e, would you let me rape <<s>>omeone, <<Master>>?" $His eyes are wild. You could let $him rape someone, and you do, bringing in an appropriate slave and letting $him have $his way with the poor girl.
+			"Plea<<s>>e, would you let me rape <<s>>omeone, <<Master>>?" $His eyes are wild. You could let $him rape someone, and you do, bringing in an appropriate slave and letting $him have $his way with the poor _girlU.
 		<</if>>
 		<<set $activeSlave.penetrativeCount++, $penetrativeTotal++>>
 	<<case "masochist">>
@@ -13090,7 +13090,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
 	<<if $activeSlave.belly >= 300000 || $activeSlave.weight > 190>>
 		struggles to line $himself up, and finds it slammed into $his asshole when the table gives out under $his<<if $activeSlave.belly >= 300000>> gravid<</if>> weight. You leave $him there to struggle with the dildo wedged in $his rear until $he finally manages to pop it free from the table fragment stuck under mass and roll over. You haul $him onto
 	<<else>>
-		<<if $activeSlave.belly > 20>>gingerly lowers $his <<if $activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 3000>>pregnant <</if>>bulk onto it,<</if>> and fucks $his little ass open on the dildo. You keep $him up there until $his legs give out<<if $activeSlave.belly >= 10000 || $activeSlave.weight > 190>>and $his <<if $activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 3000>>gravid <</if>>weight pins $his on the toy;<<else>>, and<</if>> then let $him lie down on
+		<<if $activeSlave.belly > 20>>gingerly lowers $his <<if $activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 3000>>pregnant <</if>>bulk onto it,<</if>> and fucks $his little ass open on the dildo. You keep $him up there until $his legs give out<<if $activeSlave.belly >= 10000 || $activeSlave.weight > 190>>and $his <<if $activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 3000>>gravid <</if>>weight pins $him on the toy;<<else>>, and<</if>> then let $him lie down on
 	<</if>>
 	the couch, telling $him to keep working the dildo with $his hands or suffer another whipping. After $he's had $his ass filled for a good while, $he has no trouble taking a <<if $PC.dick == 0>>strap-on<<else>>real dick<</if>> for the first time, and is by this point too exhausted to do anything but lie there and be a good little anal slave. @@.gold;$He fears you,@@ and @@.lime;$his butthole has been broken in.@@
 	<<set $activeSlave.trust -= 5, $activeSlave.anus = 1>>
@@ -13427,7 +13427,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
 <br><<link "Make $his eat in your office and keep $his busy while $he does">>
 	<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
 	<<replace "#result">>
-	$He knows what it means when $he's informed that $him meals will now be available in your office only. You not only supervise $him intake strictly, but set up a bowl for $his on a little stand so the chubby bitch can lap up $him food hands free on
+	$He knows what it means when $he's informed that $him meals will now be available in your office only. You not only supervise $him intake strictly, but set up a bowl for $him on a little stand so the chubby bitch can lap up $him food hands free on
 	<<if $activeSlave.belly >= 300000>>
 		$his _belly belly,
 	<<else>>
@@ -13446,7 +13446,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
 	<</replace>>
 <</link>><<if ($activeSlave.anus == 0 && canDoAnal($activeSlave)) || ($activeSlave.vagina == 0 && canDoVaginal($activeSlave))>> //This option will take virginity//<</if>>
 <</if>>
-<br><<link "Fill $his up with water as punishment">>
+<br><<link "Fill $him up with water as punishment">>
 	<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
 	<<replace "#result">>
 	You meet $him in time for $his next meal and tell $him that you're aware of $his stealing. You indicate a table full of cups, and tell $him that $he can drink as much as $he wants from them if $he'll tell you the truth. $He confesses, and is horrified to find they're full of water, not food. You add casually that $he can choose not to 'eat' the contents... but that $he'll get no real food until $he finishes every one. Torn between hunger and reluctance, $he spends the next hour struggling with so much water that you have to check $him for water intoxication. $He finishes with <<if $activeSlave.belly >= 1500>>an even more bulbous<<else>>a bulging<</if>> stomach and a @@.gold;sincere desire to avoid further punishment.@@
@@ -13486,13 +13486,13 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
 	<<if $PC.belly >= 10000>>
 		beside you and cozying up to your pregnant belly and sliding a hand down to see to your pussy without hesitation. You help $him get comfortable and instead of demanding $he please you or get down on all fours, you just sit there with $him,
 	<<elseif $PC.dick == 0>>
-		into your lap without hesitation. You help $him get comfortable and instead of <<if $PC.dick == 0>>grinding<<else>>thrusting<</if>> or telling $him to ride, you just sit there with $his in your lap,
+		into your lap without hesitation. You help $him get comfortable and instead of <<if $PC.dick == 0>>grinding<<else>>thrusting<</if>> or telling $him to ride, you just sit there with $him in your lap,
 	<<else>>
 		onto your member
 		<<if $PC.vagina == 1>>
 			and sliding a hand down to see to your pussy
 		<</if>>
-		without hesitation. You help $him get comfortable and instead of <<if $PC.dick == 0>>grinding<<else>>thrusting<</if>> or telling $him to ride, you just sit there with $his in your lap,
+		without hesitation. You help $him get comfortable and instead of <<if $PC.dick == 0>>grinding<<else>>thrusting<</if>> or telling $him to ride, you just sit there with $him in your lap,
 	<</if>>
 	gently massaging $his massive tits. They get sore from swinging around as $he moves, works, and fucks, and soon $he's groaning with pleasure at the attention. You finally manage to bring $him to orgasm with almost nothing but delicate stimulation of $his nipples. @@.mediumaquamarine;$He has become more trusting of you.@@
 	<<set $activeSlave.trust += 4, $activeSlave.mammaryCount++, $mammaryTotal++>>
@@ -13579,7 +13579,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
 	<<if ($activeSlave.height >= 185)>>
 		pull $his tall body in
 	<<elseif ($activeSlave.height >= 160)>>
-		pull $his up on tiptoe
+		pull $him up on tiptoe
 	<<else>>
 		push $his petite form up onto a railing
 	<</if>>
@@ -16368,14 +16368,14 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
 	<</if>>
 	and gets to work,
 	<<if $activeSlave.oralSkill >= 100>>
-		using all of $his mastery at giving oral pleasure.
+		using all of $his mastery in giving oral pleasure.
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.oralSkill > 60>>
-		using all of $his skills at in oral pleasure.
+		using all of $his skills in giving oral pleasure.
 	<<else>>
 		doing $his best despite $his mediocre oral skills.
 	<</if>>
 	<<if $activeSlave.teeth == "pointy">>
-		You can feel the extreme care $he has to take to keep $his sharklike teeth clear of you.
+		You can feel the extreme care $he has to take to keep $his shark-like teeth clear of you.
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.lips > 40>>
 		$His huge lips are soft and pillowy against you.
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.teeth == "gapped">>
@@ -16477,7 +16477,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
 <br><<link "Put your $PC.refreshment out on $him">>
 	<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
 	<<replace "#result">>
-	You select a $PC.refreshment and start smoking, ordering $him to stick around and get $his tits out. $He sees nothing too unusual about this, and obeys complaisantly, standing beside you with $his breasts bare. You reach over and play with $his as you smoke, teasing $his
+	You select a $PC.refreshment and start smoking, ordering $him to stick around and get $his tits out. $He sees nothing too unusual about this, and obeys complaisantly, standing beside you with $his breasts bare. You reach over and play with $him as you smoke, teasing $his
 	<<if $activeSlave.nipples == "huge">>
 		massive, erect nipples.
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.nipples == "inverted">>
@@ -16596,7 +16596,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
 <<link "Hug $him">>
 	<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
 	<<replace "#result">>
-	You reach out to hug $him, but as soon as your hand touches $his shoulder, $he writhes instinctively away. <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>$His eyes fly open, searching frantically for $his assailant. Seeing that it's you, $he screams and scrabbles away even harder. After making it a few feet, $he collects $his wits enough to bring $himself to a stop and stop screaming, though $he continues to sob, staring at you in terror<<else>>$He gropes frantically for $his assailant, before making contact with you. $He screams and scrabbles away, only stopping when $he collides with the nearest solid object. <<if canHear($activeSlave)>>Only after several call outs that it is you does $he stop screaming, though $he continues to sob, listening to your every breath in terror<<else>>After screaming $himself horase, $he realizes that $his assault has abruptly ended, and gently feels around $his surroundings with a shaking hand to discover $himself back in $his room<</if>><</if>>. $He remains frozen in place as you slowly advance on $him and give $him a light embrace. $His tears gradually stop, but $he does not relax, <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>remaining dumbly stiff<<else>>continuing to quake in fear<</if>> within your arms. Eventually you let $him go, and $he crawls pathetically back under $his sheet, still weeping softly. It seems $he is @@.gold;more afraid of you@@ than ever, and if you thought that a simple hug could win $him over, you were wrong.
+	You reach out to hug $him, but as soon as your hand touches $his shoulder, $he writhes instinctively away. <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>$His eyes fly open, searching frantically for $his assailant. Seeing that it's you, $he screams and scrabbles away even harder. After making it a few feet, $he collects $his wits enough to bring $himself to a stop and stop screaming, though $he continues to sob, staring at you in terror<<else>>$He gropes frantically for $his assailant, before making contact with you. $He screams and scrabbles away, only stopping when $he collides with the nearest solid object. <<if canHear($activeSlave)>>Only after several call outs that it is you does $he stop screaming, though $he continues to sob, listening to your every breath in terror<<else>>After screaming $himself hoarse, $he realizes that $his assault has abruptly ended, and gently feels around $his surroundings with a shaking hand to discover $himself back in $his room<</if>><</if>>. $He remains frozen in place as you slowly advance on $him and give $him a light embrace. $His tears gradually stop, but $he does not relax, <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>remaining dumbly stiff<<else>>continuing to quake in fear<</if>> within your arms. Eventually you let $him go, and $he crawls pathetically back under $his sheet, still weeping softly. It seems $he is @@.gold;more afraid of you@@ than ever, and if you thought that a simple hug could win $him over, you were wrong.
 	<<if canSee($activeSlave)>>
 		<<set $activeSlave.trust -= 4>>
 	<<elseif canHear($activeSlave)>>
@@ -16657,7 +16657,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
 <br><<link "Punish $him with a bigger feeder">>
 	<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
 	<<replace "#result">>
-	You give the kitchen an order by voice command. It's technical, so $he doesn't understand it, but the meaning becomes clear soon enough. The phallus dangling in $his face is withdrawn, and $he's halfway through a shocked thank you when it's replaced by another, noticeably larger<<if !canSee($activeSlave)>>. $He doesn't notice its larger size until it bumps into $his cheek, causing $him to scoot back<</if>>. You tell $him in deceptively mild tones that you'll keep increasing the size of $his feeder until $he decides to suck it off like a good little $desc, or you run out of size options and are forced to strap $his down and push them down $his throat. At that point, $he might be able to breathe; then again, $he might not. $He begins to cry, $his <<if $activeSlave.face > 95>>heartbreakingly beautiful<<elseif $activeSlave.face > 10>>pretty<<else>>homely<</if>> face clouding with anguish, but is so @@.gold;frightened@@ by the threat that $he doesn't let $him tears distract $him from scooting forward to suck off a huge dildo for $his breakfast.
+	You give the kitchen an order by voice command. It's technical, so $he doesn't understand it, but the meaning becomes clear soon enough. The phallus dangling in $his face is withdrawn, and $he's halfway through a shocked thank you when it's replaced by another, noticeably larger<<if !canSee($activeSlave)>>. $He doesn't notice its larger size until it bumps into $his cheek, causing $him to scoot back<</if>>. You tell $him in deceptively mild tones that you'll keep increasing the size of $his feeder until $he decides to suck it off like a good little $desc, or you run out of size options and are forced to strap $him down and push them down $his throat. At that point, $he might be able to breathe; then again, $he might not. $He begins to cry, $his <<if $activeSlave.face > 95>>heartbreakingly beautiful<<elseif $activeSlave.face > 10>>pretty<<else>>homely<</if>> face clouding with anguish, but is so @@.gold;frightened@@ by the threat that $he doesn't let $him tears distract $him from scooting forward to suck off a huge dildo for $his breakfast.
 	<<if ($suppository != 0) && ($activeSlave.drugs != "none")>>Once it senses $he's complying, the kitchen starts dosing $him with drugs by fucking $his butt with a phallus that ejaculates them for absorption. Mercifully, $he doesn't try to refuse the anal fuckmachine, and avoids having $his asshole filled by a bigger phallus too.<</if>>
 	$He keeps the threat in mind, and has a slightly sore throat to @@.hotpink;help $him remember to obey without question.@@
 	<<set $activeSlave.trust -= 2, $activeSlave.devotion += 2>>
@@ -16750,7 +16750,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
 		<<set _carried = 0>>
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.dick > 30>>
 		<<if $arcologies[0].FSPhysicalIdealist != "unset">>
-			$His hanging dick adds tremendously to $his weight and touches the floor, but you're <<if $PC.title == 1>>strong<<else>>fit<</if>> enough to carry $his some distance.
+			$His hanging dick adds tremendously to $his weight and touches the floor, but you're <<if $PC.title == 1>>strong<<else>>fit<</if>> enough to carry $him some distance.
 		<<else>>
 			$His hanging dick adds tremendously to $his weight and touches the floor, preventing you from really carrying $him very far.
 			<<set _carried = 0>>
@@ -16758,14 +16758,14 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.belly >= 100000>>
 		<<if $activeSlave.bellyPreg > 3000>>
 			<<if $arcologies[0].FSPhysicalIdealist != "unset">>
-				$His pregnancy is truly gigantic, but you're <<if $PC.title == 1>>strong<<else>>fit<</if>> enough to carry $his some distance.
+				$His pregnancy is truly gigantic, but you're <<if $PC.title == 1>>strong<<else>>fit<</if>> enough to carry $him some distance.
 			<<else>>
 				$His pregnancy is truly gigantic and a little too big for you to safely carry without the risk of dropping, quickly forcing you to lower $him.
 				<<set _carried = 0>>
 			<</if>>
 		<<else>>
 			<<if $arcologies[0].FSPhysicalIdealist != "unset">>
-				$His _belly belly is truly gigantic, but you're <<if $PC.title == 1>>strong<<else>>fit<</if>> enough to carry $his some distance.
+				$His _belly belly is truly gigantic, but you're <<if $PC.title == 1>>strong<<else>>fit<</if>> enough to carry $him some distance.
 			<<else>>
 				$His _belly belly is truly an armful and a little to heavy for you to carry, quickly forcing you to lower $him.
 				<<set _carried = 0>>
@@ -16774,7 +16774,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.boobs > 25000>>
 		$His enormous boobs
 		<<if $arcologies[0].FSPhysicalIdealist != "unset">>
-			add tremendously to $his weight and are awkward to manage, but you're <<if $PC.title == 1>>strong<<else>>fit<</if>> enough to carry $his some distance.
+			add tremendously to $his weight and are awkward to manage, but you're <<if $PC.title == 1>>strong<<else>>fit<</if>> enough to carry $him some distance.
 		<<else>>
 			add tremendously to $his weight and are awkward to manage, quickly forcing you to lower $him.
 			<<set _carried = 0>>
@@ -16782,7 +16782,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.weight > 130>>
 		$He's a
 		<<if $arcologies[0].FSPhysicalIdealist != "unset">>
-			fatty, but you're <<if $PC.title == 1>>strong<<else>>fit<</if>> enough to carry $his some distance.
+			fatty, but you're <<if $PC.title == 1>>strong<<else>>fit<</if>> enough to carry $him some distance.
 		<<else>>
 			fatty and a little too big and heavy for you to hold for long.
 			<<set _carried = 0>>
@@ -16790,35 +16790,35 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.balls > 100>>
 		$His enormous balls
 		<<if $arcologies[0].FSPhysicalIdealist != "unset">>
-			add tremendously to $his weight and dangle ponderously, but you're <<if $PC.title == 1>>strong<<else>>fit<</if>> enough to carry $his some distance, even though you have to step awkwardly to avoid kneeing $his sensitive sack.
+			add tremendously to $his weight and dangle ponderously, but you're <<if $PC.title == 1>>strong<<else>>fit<</if>> enough to carry $him some distance, even though you have to step awkwardly to avoid kneeing $his sensitive sack.
 		<<else>>
 			add tremendously to $his weight and dangle ponderously, quickly forcing you to lower $him or risk accidentally kneeing the sensitive sack.
 			<<set _carried = 0>>
 		<</if>>
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.dick > 20>>
-		$His dangling cock adds tremendously to $his weight and is awkward to walk with, but you're <<if $PC.title == 1>>strong<<else>>fit<</if>> enough to carry $his some distance.
+		$His dangling cock adds tremendously to $his weight and is awkward to walk with, but you're <<if $PC.title == 1>>strong<<else>>fit<</if>> enough to carry $him some distance.
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.butt > 18>>
 		$His expansive ass
 		<<if $arcologies[0].FSPhysicalIdealist != "unset">>
-			adds tremendously to $his weight and is awkward to handle, but you're <<if $PC.title == 1>>strong<<else>>fit<</if>> enough to carry $his some distance.
+			adds tremendously to $his weight and is awkward to handle, but you're <<if $PC.title == 1>>strong<<else>>fit<</if>> enough to carry $him some distance.
 		<<else>>
 			adds tremendously to $his weight and is awkward to handle, quickly forcing you to lower $him.
 			<<set _carried = 0>>
 		<</if>>
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.boobs > 8000>>
-		$His boobs add tremendously to $his weight, but you're <<if $PC.title == 1>>strong<<else>>fit<</if>> enough to carry $his some distance.
+		$His boobs add tremendously to $his weight, but you're <<if $PC.title == 1>>strong<<else>>fit<</if>> enough to carry $him some distance.
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.weight > 95>>
-		$He's got some extra weight on $him, but you're <<if $PC.title == 1>>strong<<else>>fit<</if>> enough to carry $his some distance.
+		$He's got some extra weight on $him, but you're <<if $PC.title == 1>>strong<<else>>fit<</if>> enough to carry $him some distance.
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.height > 180>>
-		$He's a big $girl, but you're <<if $PC.title == 1>>strong<<else>>fit<</if>> enough to carry $his some distance.
+		$He's a big $girl, but you're <<if $PC.title == 1>>strong<<else>>fit<</if>> enough to carry $him some distance.
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.weight > 30>>
-		$He's a chubby $girl, but you're <<if $PC.title == 1>>strong<<else>>fit<</if>> enough to carry $his some distance.
+		$He's a chubby $girl, but you're <<if $PC.title == 1>>strong<<else>>fit<</if>> enough to carry $him some distance.
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 10000>>
-		$He's heavily pregnant, but you're <<if $PC.title == 1>>strong<<else>>fit<</if>> enough to carry $his some distance.
+		$He's heavily pregnant, but you're <<if $PC.title == 1>>strong<<else>>fit<</if>> enough to carry $him some distance.
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.bellyImplant >= 10000>>
-		$His belly is greatly laden with inert filler, but you're <<if $PC.title == 1>>strong<<else>>fit<</if>> enough to carry $his some distance.
+		$His belly is greatly laden with inert filler, but you're <<if $PC.title == 1>>strong<<else>>fit<</if>> enough to carry $him some distance.
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.bellyFluid >= 10000>>
-		$His belly is greatly laden with <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>>, but you're <<if $PC.title == 1>>strong<<else>>fit<</if>> enough to carry $his some distance.
+		$His belly is greatly laden with <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>>, but you're <<if $PC.title == 1>>strong<<else>>fit<</if>> enough to carry $him some distance.
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.height > 160>>
 		$He's no little $girl, but you're <<if $PC.title == 1>>strong<<else>>fit<</if>> enough to carry $him.
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.weight > 10>>
@@ -17429,7 +17429,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
 <br><<link "Suppress $his gag reflex and double $his cum intake for a week">>
 	<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
 	<<replace "#result">>
-	$He is already on a very heavy cum-based diet, and there's only so much ejaculate you can force a slut to ingest before it negatively affects $his health. However, as a temporary measure, you still have options. You instruct $assistantName to re-double the amount of ejaculate in <<print $activeSlave.slaveName>>'s diet for the week. You also have $him closely monitored and injected with anti-nausea drugs to help $his hold down $his food. Although the idea of being forced to eat large amounts of human reproductive fluid still disgusts $him, the week of having a super-concentrated cum-diet, along with the suppressed reflex to purge it has its effect. Knowing that you monitor and control every aspect of $his life @@.hotpink;breaks down $his resistance to your will,@@ and by the end of the week, $he is grateful that you return $him to a more nutritionally viable regimen--even if its cum content is still overwhelmingly high. <<if $activeSlave.fetishKnown == 1>>@@.lightcoral;$His brain has now begun to accept the sexual perversity of $his food as a turn on.@@<<else>>$He is now able to eat and digest $his prescribed diet without pharmacological assistance.<</if>>
+	$He is already on a very heavy cum-based diet, and there's only so much ejaculate you can force a slut to ingest before it negatively affects $his health. However, as a temporary measure, you still have options. You instruct $assistantName to re-double the amount of ejaculate in <<print $activeSlave.slaveName>>'s diet for the week. You also have $him closely monitored and injected with anti-nausea drugs to help $his hold down $his food. Although the idea of being forced to eat large amounts of human reproductive fluid still disgusts $him, the week of having a super-concentrated cum-diet, along with the suppressed reflex to purge it has its effect. Knowing that you monitor and control every aspect of $his life @@.hotpink;breaks down $his resistance to your will,@@ and by the end of the week, $he is grateful that you return $him to a more nutritionally viable regimen - even if its cum content is still overwhelmingly high. <<if $activeSlave.fetishKnown == 1>>@@.lightcoral;$His brain has now begun to accept the sexual perversity of $his food as a turn on.@@<<else>>$He is now able to eat and digest $his prescribed diet without pharmacological assistance.<</if>>
 	<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 5, $activeSlave.fetish = "cumslut">>
 	<<if $activeSlave.fetishKnown == 1>>
 		<<set $activeSlave.fetishStrength = 10>>
@@ -17441,7 +17441,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
 	<br><<link "Sentence $him to a day in $arcadeName for cum injection therapy">>
 	<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
 	<<replace "#result">>
-	You have $assistantName inform $activeSlave.slaveName of $his unacceptable behavior and sentence $him to a day in $arcadeName. $He cries and pleads for mercy, and even begs to be allowed to suck a cock, any cock, so $he can prove $his newfound enthusiasm for cum, but you are unmerciful as two other slaves drag $him off to serve $his sentence. $He is forced to wear a<<if $activeSlave.vagina != -1>> combined vaginal and<<else>>n<</if>> anal chastity belt so that the only hole available is $his mouth, and is then confined in $arcadeName with $his mouth spread open by a ring gag and $his head sticking through the hole in the wall. A sign below $his mouth proclaims $him to be a "cum extraction tube" and $he is used that way for the duration of $his stay--a grueling, 18-hour marathon of relentless throat fucking. <<if $activeSlave.sexualFlaw != "hates oral">>$His ordeal is so extreme that $he now @@.red;hates oral sex@@<<else>>$His hatred of oral sex makes $his ordeal that much more horrific<</if>>, but it @@.hotpink;breaks down $his resistance.@@ $He now @@.gold;better understands the terrifying power you have over $him,@@ and the sheer amount of cum $he is forced to ingest @@.red;negatively effects $his health.@@ Your other cum-fed slaves take note of what you do to those who can't hold down their assigned diet.
+	You have $assistantName inform $activeSlave.slaveName of $his unacceptable behavior and sentence $him to a day in $arcadeName. $He cries and pleads for mercy, and even begs to be allowed to suck a cock, any cock, so $he can prove $his newfound enthusiasm for cum, but you are unmerciful as two other slaves drag $him off to serve $his sentence. $He is forced to wear a<<if $activeSlave.vagina != -1>> combined vaginal and<<else>>n<</if>> anal chastity belt so that the only hole available is $his mouth, and is then confined in $arcadeName with $his mouth spread open by a ring gag and $his head sticking through the hole in the wall. A sign below $his mouth proclaims $him to be a "cum extraction tube" and $he is used that way for the duration of $his stay - a grueling, 18-hour marathon of relentless throat fucking. <<if $activeSlave.sexualFlaw != "hates oral">>$His ordeal is so extreme that $he now @@.red;hates oral sex@@<<else>>$His hatred of oral sex makes $his ordeal that much more horrific<</if>>, but it @@.hotpink;breaks down $his resistance.@@ $He now @@.gold;better understands the terrifying power you have over $him,@@ and the sheer amount of cum $he is forced to ingest @@.red;negatively effects $his health.@@ Your other cum-fed slaves take note of what you do to those who can't hold down their assigned diet.
 	<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 5, $activeSlave.trust -= 5, $activeSlave.health -= 5, $activeSlave.oralCount += 55, $activeSlave.publicCount += 55, $oralTotal += 55, $activeSlave.sexualFlaw = "hates oral", $activeSlave.fetish = "masochist">>
 	<</replace>>
 <</link>>
@@ -17537,9 +17537,9 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
 		There are the segregated milking stalls, where only the dirtiest and most dilapidated machines are reserved for filthy $arcologies[0].FSSubjugationistRace sluts.
 	<</if>>
 	<<if $club > 0>>
-		There are the "refresher" sinks in $clubName where normal slaves can go to periodically clean the cum out of their holes before returning to service more citizens--but such a luxury is off limits to $arcologies[0].FSSubjugationistRace animals--who simply have to work through their long shifts with ever increasing amount of ejaculate covering their worthless bodies.
+		There are the "refresher" sinks in $clubName where normal slaves can go to periodically clean the cum out of their holes before returning to service more citizens - but such a luxury is off limits to $arcologies[0].FSSubjugationistRace animals, who simply have to work through their long shifts with ever increasing amount of ejaculate covering their worthless bodies.
 	<<else>>
-		There are the "animal fuckers" in the public square--groups of racial purists who specifically seek out slaves of the inferior $arcologies[0].FSSubjugationistRace race to mistreat through extreme public use.
+		There are the "animal fuckers" in the public square - groups of racial purists who specifically seek out slaves of the inferior $arcologies[0].FSSubjugationistRace race to mistreat through extreme public use.
 	<</if>>
 	<<if $clinic > 0>>
 		While $clinicName is available to normal slaves to recover from injuries and general ill health, such things aren't afforded to $arcologies[0].FSSubjugationistRace whores. They have to work through it, no matter the outcome.
@@ -17611,7 +17611,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
 	<</if>>
 	Without word or ceremony, you shove $him forward so that $he is bent over and crushed against your desk. The tears start to flow out of $him as $he feels your <<if $PC.dick == 0>>massive rubber dong <<else>>hard, thick cock <</if>>pressing against $his unprotected anus.
 	<br><br>
-	When you offer $him the opportunity to revise $his request, $he does. "Plea<<s>>e, <<Master>>! I'm <<s>>orry! Plea<<s>>e don't fuck my a<<ss>>! I'll eat all the cum you want! Plea<<s>>e!" $He screams <<if $activeSlave.accent > 1>>in $his thick accent <</if>> as you force your<<if $PC.dick == 0>> strap-on <<else>>self <</if>> inside $his butt-hole and subdue $his weak, struggling body against your unforgiving desk. @@.gold;Horrified tears@@ stream down $his face with each brutal thrust as you speak into $his ear and remind $him that slaves are not allowed to dictate their needs to their owners. You know what's best for $him, and right now, $his proper role is as an eager little depository for the products of the free-cities ejaculate market. It's $his job to suck down cum at the whim of $his owner--plain and simple--until $he's told otherwise. You butt-fuck the cum-fed slag until $he simply lays there and accepts $his corrective ass-rape.
+	When you offer $him the opportunity to revise $his request, $he does. "Plea<<s>>e, <<Master>>! I'm <<s>>orry! Plea<<s>>e don't fuck my a<<ss>>! I'll eat all the cum you want! Plea<<s>>e!" $He screams <<if $activeSlave.accent > 1>>in $his thick accent <</if>> as you force your<<if $PC.dick == 0>> strap-on <<else>>self <</if>> inside $his butt-hole and subdue $his weak, struggling body against your unforgiving desk. @@.gold;Horrified tears@@ stream down $his face with each brutal thrust as you speak into $his ear and remind $him that slaves are not allowed to dictate their needs to their owners. You know what's best for $him, and right now, $his proper role is as an eager little depository for the products of the free-cities ejaculate market. It's $his job to suck down cum at the whim of $his owner, plain and simple, until $he's told otherwise. You butt-fuck the cum-fed slag until $he simply lays there and accepts $his corrective ass-rape.
 	<<if $activeSlave.anus == 0>>
 		@@.lime;$His@@
 		<<if $activeSlave.butt < 5>>
@@ -17819,7 +17819,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
 <<link "Make love to $his ready cunt">>
 	<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
 	<<replace "#result">>
-		$His body is so perfectly made to be fucked that it's getting itself ready for you, without your even having to give the order. Deciding not to bother with verbal commands, you approach $him and reach for one of $his hands; $he obediently extends it towards your grasp, and follows <<if ($activeSlave.energy > 40) || ($activeSlave.aphrodisiacs > 0) || $activeSlave.inflationType == "aphrodisiac">>eagerly<<else>>willingly<</if>> as you pull $his in for a hug
+		$His body is so perfectly made to be fucked that it's getting itself ready for you, without your even having to give the order. Deciding not to bother with verbal commands, you approach $him and reach for one of $his hands; $he obediently extends it towards your grasp, and follows <<if ($activeSlave.energy > 40) || ($activeSlave.aphrodisiacs > 0) || $activeSlave.inflationType == "aphrodisiac">>eagerly<<else>>willingly<</if>> as you pull $him in for a hug
 		<<if $activeSlave.boobs > 5000>>
 			hug (cushioned by $his enormous udders),
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.belly >= 10000>>
@@ -18121,7 +18121,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
 		<<else>>
 			<<= VaginalVCheck(10)>>
 		<</if>>
-		$He <<if $activeSlave.voice > 0>>squeals<<else>>rasps<</if>> with displeasure as you roughly plow $him into $his distended breasts until you cum deep inside $his fertile hole. You return to your desk, leaving $him to sob into $his unwelcome bust as cum pools from $his abused <<if $activeSlave.mpreg == 1>>ass<<else>>pussy<</if>>. $He knows full well what you meant now, and @@.hotpink;lets you have your way@@ with $his body every time you catch $his in a vulnerable moment or complaining about $his tits. By the week's end, scans reveal that your seed has taken root; @@.lime;$he's pregnant.@@ As $his breasts grow to feed $his coming child, $he will likely be too distracted by $his swelling middle to complain about their added weight.
+		$He <<if $activeSlave.voice > 0>>squeals<<else>>rasps<</if>> with displeasure as you roughly plow $him into $his distended breasts until you cum deep inside $his fertile hole. You return to your desk, leaving $him to sob into $his unwelcome bust as cum pools from $his abused <<if $activeSlave.mpreg == 1>>ass<<else>>pussy<</if>>. $He knows full well what you meant now, and @@.hotpink;lets you have your way@@ with $his body every time you catch $him in a vulnerable moment or complaining about $his tits. By the week's end, scans reveal that your seed has taken root; @@.lime;$he's pregnant.@@ As $his breasts grow to feed $his coming child, $he will likely be too distracted by $his swelling middle to complain about their added weight.
 		<<set $activeSlave.trust -= 5, $activeSlave.devotion += 5>>
 		<<= knockMeUp($activeSlave, 100, 2, -1, 1)>>
 	<</replace>>
@@ -18641,7 +18641,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
 			up $his spasming ass.
 			<<= AnalVCheck()>>
 		<</if>>
-		$He whines and bucks, but $he's entirely at your mercy. $He doesn't like dicks, and to go by $his facial expression as you piston in and out of $him, this experience isn't going to make $him reconsider. When you fill $his with cum, pull out, and let $him retreat to clean $himself up, $he's relieved to go.
+		$He whines and bucks, but $he's entirely at your mercy. $He doesn't like dicks, and to go by $his facial expression as you piston in and out of $him, this experience isn't going to make $him reconsider. When you fill $him with cum, pull out, and let $him retreat to clean $himself up, $he's relieved to go.
 		<<set $activeSlave.trust -= 5>>
 	<</replace>>
 <</link>><<if canDoVaginal($activeSlave) && ($activeSlave.vagina == 0)>>//This option will take virginity//<<elseif !canDoVaginal($activeSlave) && ($activeSlave.anus == 0)>> //This option will take anal virginity//<</if>>
@@ -18954,7 +18954,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
 			as you take $him.
 			<<if canDoVaginal($activeSlave)>><<= VaginalVCheck()>><<else>><<= AnalVCheck()>><</if>>
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.trust > 20>>
-			$He relaxes submissively when $he feels you take hold of $his huge ass and slide your <<if $PC.dick == 1>>dick<<else>>strap-on<</if>> between $his asscheeks and then inside $his <<if canDoVaginal($activeSlave)>>pussy<<else>>anus<</if>>. $His legs are already in effect bound, by the constricting clothing that's still holding them together, and you enhance the effect by taking hold of $his wrists and hugging $his from behind as you fuck $him, holding $his arms crossed across $his <<if $activeSlave.boobs > 2000>>massive breasts<<elseif $activeSlave.boobs > 300>>boobs<<else>>chest<</if>>. Helpless in your embrace, $he @@.hotpink;relaxes completely and lets it happen.@@
+			$He relaxes submissively when $he feels you take hold of $his huge ass and slide your <<if $PC.dick == 1>>dick<<else>>strap-on<</if>> between $his asscheeks and then inside $his <<if canDoVaginal($activeSlave)>>pussy<<else>>anus<</if>>. $His legs are already in effect bound, by the constricting clothing that's still holding them together, and you enhance the effect by taking hold of $his wrists and hugging $him from behind as you fuck $him, holding $his arms crossed across $his <<if $activeSlave.boobs > 2000>>massive breasts<<elseif $activeSlave.boobs > 300>>boobs<<else>>chest<</if>>. Helpless in your embrace, $he @@.hotpink;relaxes completely and lets it happen.@@
 			<<if canDoVaginal($activeSlave)>><<= VaginalVCheck()>><<else>><<= AnalVCheck()>><</if>>
 		<<else>>
 			$He stiffens fearfully when $he feels you take hold of $his huge ass, but $he knows not to resist. $He stays still as you slide your <<if $PC.dick == 1>>dick<<else>>strap-on<</if>> between $his asscheeks and then inside $his <<if canDoVaginal($activeSlave)>>pussy<<else>>anus<</if>>, trying to angle $his hips to make the standing penetration less uncomfortable. The clothing binds $his legs together, reducing $him to simply sticking $his butt out as best $he can to ease the stroking of your <<if $PC.dick == 1>>cock<<else>>phallus<</if>>, invading $his helpless
@@ -19028,7 +19028,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
 	<<if $activeSlave.belly >= 300000>>
 		help $him to $his feet and guide $him to bed, aiding the <<if $activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 3000>>child-laden<<else>>tremendously swollen<</if>> older woman onto the sheets before gently mounting $him.
 	<<else>>
-		<<if $activeSlave.belly >= 5000>>carefully <</if>>lift $his up from $his low position beneath you and carry $him to bed, laying the flushed older woman down on the sheets before gently positioning yourself on top of $him.
+		<<if $activeSlave.belly >= 5000>>carefully <</if>>lift $him up from $his low position beneath you and carry $him to bed, laying the flushed older woman down on the sheets before gently positioning yourself on top of $him.
 	<</if>>
 	Together, the two of you make fiercely intimate love, while you whisper romantic reassurances into $his ear, nip at $his neck,
 	<<if $activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 300000>>
@@ -19053,7 +19053,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
 	<</if>>
 	<</replace>>
 <</link>><<if canDoVaginal($activeSlave) && ($activeSlave.vagina == 0)>>//This option will take virginity//<<elseif !canDoVaginal($activeSlave) && ($activeSlave.anus == 0)>> //This option will take anal virginity//<</if>>
-<br><<link "Cruelly torment $his about the age difference">>
+<br><<link "Cruelly torment $him about the age difference">>
 	<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
 	<<replace "#result">>
 	As you close in on $activeSlave.slaveName predatorily, $his face blanches with visible regret at $his prior candidness. By the time you have $his bent over
@@ -19110,7 +19110,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
 	<<else>>
 		messy pussy
 	<</if>>
-	$his youthful partners particularly enjoyed filling $his with their potent seed. Unsurprisingly, at a routine check up later that week, $activeSlave.slaveName joyfully discovers that $he was impregnated during $his Frat House excursion. It seems that being bred by a bunch of horny college boys has eliminated $his prior worries about the importance of age and also caused $him to @@.lightcoral;fetishize impregnation.@@ @@.hotpink;$He has become more submissive to you@@ for giving $him the means to broaden $his sexual horizons.
+	$his youthful partners particularly enjoyed filling $him with their potent seed. Unsurprisingly, at a routine check up later that week, $activeSlave.slaveName joyfully discovers that $he was impregnated during $his Frat House excursion. It seems that being bred by a bunch of horny college boys has eliminated $his prior worries about the importance of age and also caused $him to @@.lightcoral;fetishize impregnation.@@ @@.hotpink;$He has become more submissive to you@@ for giving $him the means to broaden $his sexual horizons.
 	<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 4, $activeSlave.preg = 1, $activeSlave.pregWeek = 1, $activeSlave.pregKnown = 1>>
 	<<set $activeSlave.pregType = setPregType($activeSlave)>>
 	<<set WombImpregnate($activeSlave, $activeSlave.pregType, 0, 1)>>
@@ -19492,7 +19492,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
 		$his mediocre oral skills providing some relief.
 	<</if>>
 	<<if $activeSlave.teeth == "pointy">>
-		Although most of your attention is focused on the intriguing drama unfolding on your wallscreen, you still feel the extreme care $he has to take to keep $his sharklike teeth clear of you.
+		Although most of your attention is focused on the intriguing drama unfolding on your wallscreen, you still feel the extreme care $he has to take to keep $his shark-like teeth clear of you.
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.lips > 40>>
 		$His huge lips are soft and pillowy against you.
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.teeth == "gapped">>
@@ -19678,7 +19678,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
 	<</if>>
 	$He sniffles, trying to restrain $his hopes. You push $him backwards toward the couch, giving $him a kiss to really bring $him to the height of anticipation before laying $him down and sliding your <<if $PC.dick == 1>>cock<<else>>strap-on<</if>> <<if $activeSlave.anus > 1>>inside $his soft asshole<<else>>up $his tight little butt<</if>>.
 	<<if $activeSlave.prostate != 0>>
-		The instant <<if $PC.dick == 1>>your hard dickhead<<else>>the hard tip of your phallus<</if>> presses against $his prostate, $he orgasms, squirting <<if $activeSlave.balls == 0>>translucent fluid<<else>>cum<</if>>. $He looks like $he wants to say something, or maybe even apologize, so you shush $his with a gentle hand and pull out, letting the fluid run down <<if $activeSlave.scrotum > 0>>$his soft scrotum<<else>>the pretty skin between $his cumhole and $his anus<</if>> until it glazes $his asspussy. You use <<if $PC.dick == 1>>the tip of your cock<<else>>the head of the strap-on<</if>> to massage the fluid into the hole before penetrating it again with the extra lubrication.
+		The instant <<if $PC.dick == 1>>your hard dickhead<<else>>the hard tip of your phallus<</if>> presses against $his prostate, $he orgasms, squirting <<if $activeSlave.balls == 0>>translucent fluid<<else>>cum<</if>>. $He looks like $he wants to say something, or maybe even apologize, so you shush $him with a gentle hand and pull out, letting the fluid run down <<if $activeSlave.scrotum > 0>>$his soft scrotum<<else>>the pretty skin between $his cumhole and $his anus<</if>> until it glazes $his asspussy. You use <<if $PC.dick == 1>>the tip of your cock<<else>>the head of the strap-on<</if>> to massage the fluid into the hole before penetrating it again with the extra lubrication.
 	<<else>>
 		Without a prostate or a strong anal fetish, $he'll have trouble climaxing to nothing but buttsex, so you make sure to tend to every erogenous zone $he has left. You guide one of $his hands down so $he can rub <<if $activeSlave.scrotum > 0>>$his scrotum<<else>>the skin between $his legs<</if>>, and make $his stimulate one of $his nipples with the other. You <<if $activeSlave.nipples != "fuckable">>pinch and rub<<else>>finger<</if>> $his other nipple, and push two fingers of your other hand into $his mouth, making $him suck them. So completely stimulated, $he finally manages to orgasm.
 	<</if>>
@@ -19790,7 +19790,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
 <</link>>
 <</if>>
 <<if canDoAnal($activeSlave) || canDoVaginal($activeSlave) || $activeSlave.belly >= 300000>>
-<br><<link "Use $his as an exercise ball">>
+<br><<link "Use $him as an exercise ball">>
 	<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
 	<<replace "#result">>
 	<<if $activeSlave.belly >= 3000000>>
@@ -19847,7 +19847,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
 <<link "Give $him a nice massage">>
 	<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
 	<<replace "#result">>
-	You sit on the couch next to your desk and pat your thighs. $He smiles and comes over, lowering $himself <<if $PC.dick == 0>>into your lap<<else>>onto your member<<if $PC.vagina == 1>> and sliding a hand down to see to your pussy<</if>><</if>> without hesitation. You help $his get comfortable and instead of <<if $PC.dick == 0>>grinding<<else>>thrusting<</if>> or telling $him to ride, you just sit there with $his in your lap, gently massaging $his <<if $activeSlave.boobs < 900>>big <<else>>huge <</if>> tits. Despite their fine craftsmanship, implants are prone to rendering breasts sore, so $he's soon groaning with relief at the attention you lavish upon them. You finally manage to bring $him to orgasm with almost nothing but delicate stimulation of $his nipples, despite $his implants making them less sensitive than usual. @@.mediumaquamarine;$He has become more trusting of you.@@
+	You sit on the couch next to your desk and pat your thighs. $He smiles and comes over, lowering $himself <<if $PC.dick == 0>>into your lap<<else>>onto your member<<if $PC.vagina == 1>> and sliding a hand down to see to your pussy<</if>><</if>> without hesitation. You help $his get comfortable and instead of <<if $PC.dick == 0>>grinding<<else>>thrusting<</if>> or telling $him to ride, you just sit there with $him in your lap, gently massaging $his <<if $activeSlave.boobs < 900>>big <<else>>huge <</if>> tits. Despite their fine craftsmanship, implants are prone to rendering breasts sore, so $he's soon groaning with relief at the attention you lavish upon them. You finally manage to bring $him to orgasm with almost nothing but delicate stimulation of $his nipples, despite $his implants making them less sensitive than usual. @@.mediumaquamarine;$He has become more trusting of you.@@
 	<<set $activeSlave.trust += 4>>
 	<</replace>>
 <</link>>
@@ -19896,7 +19896,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
 <br><<link "Show $his off in public">>
 	<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
 	<<replace "#result">>
-	You bring $his out onto the promenade, still nude, $his impressively augmented breasts attracting open stares with their perfect roundness and perkiness.
+	You bring $him out onto the promenade, still nude, $his impressively augmented breasts attracting open stares with their perfect roundness and perkiness.
 	<<if $activeSlave.sexualFlaw == "attention whore">>
 		The slut loves being the center of attention and wishes $his tits where even more eye catching.
 	<<elseif ($activeSlave.fetishKnown == 1) && ($activeSlave.fetishStrength > 60) && ($activeSlave.fetish == "humiliation")>>
@@ -19924,7 +19924,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
 	<<if ($activeSlave.height >= 185)>>
 		pull $his tall body in
 	<<elseif ($activeSlave.height >= 160)>>
-		pull $his up on tiptoe
+		pull $him up on tiptoe
 	<<else>>
 		push $his petite form up onto a railing
 	<</if>>
@@ -20014,7 +20014,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
 		$His time spent gagged has limited the growth of $his mediocre oral skills, though $he is still able to provide some relief.
 	<</if>>
 	<<if $activeSlave.teeth == "pointy">>
-		Though your attention is largely sapped by $his tender oral ministrations, you note that $he takes care not to rake you with $his sharklike teeth.
+		Though your attention is largely sapped by $his tender oral ministrations, you note that $he takes care not to rake you with $his shark-like teeth.
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.lips > 40>>
 		Though your attention is largely sapped by $his tender oral ministrations, you note that $his huge lips are soft and pillowy against you.
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.teeth == "gapped">>
@@ -20532,7 +20532,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
 <br><<link "Try the 'Butter Strategy'">>
 	<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
 	<<replace "#result">>
-	You ponder $his predicament for a moment before settling on a solution. You procure an industrial sized jar of curative laced moisturizing butter--specially formulated to ease the strain of hypermassive pregnancy--and explain to your slave that, to free $him, you're going to need to completely cover $him in it so that $he can squeeze through.
+	You ponder $his predicament for a moment before settling on a solution. You procure an industrial sized jar of curative laced moisturizing butter - specially formulated to ease the strain of hypermassive pregnancy - and explain to your slave that, to free $him, you're going to need to completely cover $him in it so that $he can squeeze through.
 	<<if $activeSlave.devotion > 95>>
 		$He grins at you and then huffs, pretending to be put off by the idea.
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.devotion > 50>>
@@ -20562,7 +20562,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
 	<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobs >= 7000)>>
 		massage the soft butter into $his monstrous tits, enjoying the struggle it takes to heft each butter-slick, glistening melon with both hands. You note with satisfaction $his nipples harden with arousal.
 	<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobs >= 3000)>>
-		massage the soft butter into each of $his huge tits. Your slave cranes $his head back a bit to avoid being smothered by $his own breasts as you work the butter into them, but you can tell $he's aroused by what you're doing--$his nipples have turned hard as rocks.
+		massage the soft butter into each of $his huge tits. Your slave cranes $his head back a bit to avoid being smothered by $his own breasts as you work the butter into them, but you can tell $he's aroused by what you're doing - $his nipples have turned hard as rocks.
 	<<elseif Math.floor($activeSlave.boobsImplant/$activeSlave.boobs) >= .60>>
 		massage the soft butter into $his fat, fake titties, noting with satisfaction $his nipples harden with arousal.
 	<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobs >= 650)>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/RETS.tw b/src/uncategorized/RETS.tw
index c0fa137bb1893f8211ff3f761ee1c280db03344f..7f5333c6481e6b05cc0176ed9b9b470b662815e3 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/RETS.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/RETS.tw
@@ -834,9 +834,9 @@ Passing the slave quarters late at night, you hear <<EventNameLink $activeSlave>
 voice. It's $subSlave.slaveName.
 <<if $subSlave.belly >= 120000 && $activeSlave.dick > 3>>
 	<<if $subSlave.bellyPreg >= 2000>>
-		"I'm way too pregnant, there'<<s>> ju<<s>>t no room for a big cock like your<<s>> inside me anymore. Plu<<s>> you'll wake them up and they'll be kicking all night again."
+		"I'm way too pregnant; there'<<s>> ju<<s>>t no room for a big cock like your<<s>> in<<s>>ide me anymore. Plu<<s>> you'll wake them up and they'll be kicking all night again."
 	<<elseif $subSlave.bellyImplant >= 2000>>
-		"My belly'<<s>> <<s>>o filled by my implant that there'<<s>> just no room for a big cock like your<<s>> inside me anymore."
+		"My belly'<<s>> <<s>>o filled by my implant that there'<<s>> ju<<s>>t no room for a big cock like your<<s>> in<<s>>ide me anymore."
 	<</if>>
 <<elseif $subSlave.bellyFluid >= 10000 && $activeSlave.dick > 3>>
 	"I'm really full of $subSlave.inflationType. I don't know what will happen if you fuck me."
@@ -845,7 +845,7 @@ voice. It's $subSlave.slaveName.
 <<elseif $subSlave.assignment == "work in the brothel" || $subSlave.assignment == "whore">>
 	"And my <<if _vaginal>>pu<<ss>>y<<else>>a<<ss>><</if>> i<<s>> <<s>>ore. Cu<<s>>tomer<<s>> <<if _vaginal>>fucked me<<else>>pounded it<</if>> all day."
 <<elseif $subSlave.assignment == "serve in the club" || $subSlave.assignment == "serve the public">>
-	"And my <<if _vaginal>>pu<<ss>>y<<else>>a<<ss>><</if>> i<<s>> <<s>>ore. Citizen<<s>> <<if _vaginal>>fucked me<<else>>pounded it<</if>> all day."
+	"And my <<if _vaginal>>pu<<ss>>y<<else>>a<<ss>><</if>> i<<s>> <<s>>ore. <<C>>itizen<<s>> <<if _vaginal>>fucked me<<else>>pounded it<</if>> all day."
 <<else>>
 	"I'm tired, and I have to $subSlave.assignment tomorrow. I ju<<s>>t want to go to <<s>>leep."
 <</if>>
@@ -898,7 +898,7 @@ The slaves are about to go to bed; they're naked, and the horny $activeSlave.sla
 <<elseif $subSlave.boobShape == "torpedo-shaped">>
 	"Your torpedoe<<s>> are incredible," $he wheedles. "<<if $subSlave.boobs > 400>>The way they <<s>>way when you move <<sh>>ould be again<<s>>t the rule<<s>>.<<else>>They're <<s>>o tiny and cute!<</if>> I want you<<if !_vaginal>>r a<<ss>><</if>> <<s>>o much!"
 <<elseif $subSlave.muscles > 30>>
-	"You're <<s>>o jacked," $he wheedles. "I ju<<s>>t want to <<if _vaginal>>feel tho<<s>>e huge thigh<<s>> wrap around me a<<s>> I fuck you<<else>>feel that mu<<s>>cular booty flex under me a<<s>> I fuck your butt<</if>>!"
+	"You're <<s>>o jacked," $he wheedles. "I ju<<s>>t want to <<if _vaginal>>feel tho<<s>>e huge thigh<<s>> wrap around me a<<s>> I fuck you<<else>>feel that mu<<s>>cular booty fle<<x>> under me a<<s>> I fuck your butt<</if>>!"
 <<elseif $subSlave.entertainSkill > 95>>
 	"You're <<s>>o beautiful and gra<<c>>eful," $he wheedles. "I love watching you walk. Look at you, ju<<s>>t <<s>>tanding there you're <<s>>o perfectly feminine. I want to make love to you<<if !_vaginal>>r butt<</if>>!"
 <<else>>
@@ -926,7 +926,7 @@ $activeSlave.slaveName is almost in tears.
 		<<if _hole > 2>>
 			"I'm t-too big," $he adds sadly, gesturing to $his massive erection. "<<S>>ome of the other girl<<s>> can't take me, and I have to be gentle. Plea<<s>>e, let me u<<s>>e you. I need to fuck <<s>>o bad."
 		<<else>>
-			"Your <<if _vaginal>>beautiful cunt<<else>><<s>>phincter<</if>> will make me explode. I haven't gotten to fuck anything today and I need it <<s>>o bad. Plea<<s>>e."
+			"Your <<if _vaginal>>beautiful cunt<<else>><<s>>phincter<</if>> will make me e<<x>>plode. I haven't gotten to fuck anything today and I need it <<s>>o bad. Plea<<s>>e."
 		<</if>>
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.dick > _hole+1>>
 		"I've been dreaming about your tight <<if _vaginal>>cunt<<else>>a<<ss>><</if>> all day. My dick i<<s>> a perfect fit for it, it'll make me feel <<s>>o good. I want to fuck it <<s>>o bad. Plea<<s>>e."
@@ -1468,8 +1468,8 @@ $he adds impishly. Hearing this, $subSlave.slaveName lets the breast pop free of
 <<link "$He's not wrong">>
 	<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
 	<<replace "#result">>
-	You ask $activeSlave.slaveName what $he said in a neutral tone. $He gives you a quick glance, not sure whether to be aroused or afraid, but takes a breath to steady $himself and begins. For _his2 part, $subSlave.slaveName vainly tries to stop crying in front of you. When $activeSlave.slaveName reaches "_HeP'<<s>> going to hold you down and <<sh>>ove _hisP <<if $PC.dick == 1>>huge cockhead<<else>>bigge<<s>>t <<s>>trap-on<</if>> right up again<<s>>t thi<<s>> tight little hole," you hold up a hand to get $him to pause. $He does, and you suddenly shove $subSlave.slaveName towards the couch. _He2 crashes face-down into the cushions, already sobbing in terror. You place a hand on _his2 $activeSlave.skin back to hold _him2 down and then use the other to apply some lube to your <<if $PC.dick == 1>>penis<<else>>strap-on<</if>> before pressing it against the quivering slave's virgin anus. _He2 shakes with anguish, causing <<if $PC.dick == 1>>your cock to rub deliciously<<else>>the strap-on to slide amusingly<</if>> up and down _his2 asscrack. You make a come-on gesture to $activeSlave.slaveName, and $he continues, "You're going to do your be<<s>>t to relax like a good little _girl2."
-	$subSlave.slaveName desperately takes in a huge breath. $activeSlave.slaveName, who has gotten the idea (and to go by $his furious masturbation, clearly likes it), gasps out, "But it'<<s>> going to be <<s>>o big! It'<<s>> going to burn!" Here you begin to apply inexorable pressure. $subSlave.slaveName manages one more deep breath, but it becomes a squeal of anguish and _he2 tries frantically to burrow into the couch, away from the penetrating <<if $PC.dick == 1>>cock<<else>>strap-on<</if>>. "You're going to panic, and <<s>>truggle, and _heP'<<s>> going to hold you down and rape your butt while you <<s>>cream and cry..."
+	You ask $activeSlave.slaveName what $he said in a neutral tone. $He gives you a quick glance, not sure whether to be aroused or afraid, but takes a breath to steady $himself and begins. For _his2 part, $subSlave.slaveName vainly tries to stop crying in front of you. When $activeSlave.slaveName reaches "<<HeP>>'<<s>> going to hold you down and <<sh>>ove <<hisP>> <<if $PC.dick == 1>>huge cockhead<<else>>bigge<<s>>t <<s>>trap-on<</if>> right up again<<s>>t thi<<s>> tight little hole," you hold up a hand to get $him to pause. $He does, and you suddenly shove $subSlave.slaveName towards the couch. _He2 crashes face-down into the cushions, already sobbing in terror. You place a hand on _his2 $activeSlave.skin back to hold _him2 down and then use the other to apply some lube to your <<if $PC.dick == 1>>penis<<else>>strap-on<</if>> before pressing it against the quivering slave's virgin anus. _He2 shakes with anguish, causing <<if $PC.dick == 1>>your cock to rub deliciously<<else>>the strap-on to slide amusingly<</if>> up and down _his2 asscrack. You make a come-on gesture to $activeSlave.slaveName, and $he continues, "You're going to do your be<<s>>t to relax like a good little _girl2."
+	$subSlave.slaveName desperately takes in a huge breath. $activeSlave.slaveName, who has gotten the idea (and to go by $his furious masturbation, clearly likes it), gasps out, "But it'<<s>> going to be <<s>>o big! It'<<s>> going to burn!" Here you begin to apply inexorable pressure. $subSlave.slaveName manages one more deep breath, but it becomes a squeal of anguish and _he2 tries frantically to burrow into the couch, away from the penetrating <<if $PC.dick == 1>>cock<<else>>strap-on<</if>>. "You're going to panic, and <<s>>truggle, and <<heP>>'<<s>> going to hold you down and rape your butt while you <<s>>cream and cry..."
 	$activeSlave.slaveName trails off as $he shakes with orgasm; $he doesn't say any more, but the @@.hotpink;wild satisfaction@@ <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>in $his $activeSlave.eyeColor eyes<<else>>on $his face<</if>> says it for $him. $subSlave.slaveName, meanwhile, is a mess, but hurries @@.gold;fearfully@@ to obey your instructions to go clean _himself2, and hides _his2 @@.mediumorchid;hatred@@ as _he2 gingerly applies an enema to _his2 @@.lime;loosened butt.@@
 	<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 5>>
 	<<set $subSlave.trust -= 10, $subSlave.devotion -= 5, $subSlave.analCount++, $subSlave.anus = 1>>
@@ -1485,7 +1485,7 @@ $he adds impishly. Hearing this, $subSlave.slaveName lets the breast pop free of
 	<<replace "#result">>
 	You approach and observe to $activeSlave.slaveName that it sounds like $he's speaking from experience. $He glances at you nervously, but agrees. You tell $him to go on, so $he turns to the mystified $subSlave.slaveName and mumbles, "It wa<<s>>n't ea<<s>>y for me the fir<<s>>t time either."
 	$He gasps as you slide around behind $him, your hands snaking around $his <<if $activeSlave.boobs > 2000>>massive tits<<elseif $activeSlave.boobs > 1000>>big boobs<<elseif $activeSlave.boobs > 400>>prominent breasts<<else>>chest<</if>> to pinch $his $activeSlave.nipples nipples. You whisper into $his ear, ordering $him to tell $his little story again, slowly. "_HeP'<<s>> going to hold you down and <<sh>>ove _hisP <<if $PC.dick == 1>>huge cockhead<<else>>bigge<<s>>t <<s>>trap-on<</if>> right up again<<s>>t thi<<s>> tight little hole," $he tells $subSlave.slaveName. The poor _girl2 doesn't know what to do, so _he2 just stands and listens, <<if canSee($subSlave)>>watching<<else>>staring<</if>> dumbly as $activeSlave.slaveName talks. $He's a lot less intimidating this time around, gasping out the words as you maneuver your <<if $PC.dick == 1>>cock<<else>>strap-on<</if>> against $his <<if $activeSlave.anus > 2>>loose butthole<<elseif $activeSlave.anus > 1>>experienced ass<<else>>tight butthole<</if>> for some standing anal. "You're going to do your be<<s>>t to relax like a good little _girl2," $he moans. <<if ($activeSlave.dick > 0) && !canAchieveErection($activeSlave)>>$His limp dick hangs lamely as you press against $his backdoor, but it's dripping precum.<<elseif $activeSlave.dick > 0>>$He has a throbbing erection.<<elseif $activeSlave.clit > 0>>As you shove $him into place, your hand brushes against $his enormously erect clit.<<else>>As you shove $him into place, your hand brushes against moisture coating $his inner thighs.<</if>> The bitch is getting off on this.
-	"But it'<<s>> going to be <<s>>o big - it'<<s>> going to bu-hu-hur-hurn... oh..." You're up $his ass and pounding away, <<if $subSlave.belly >= 5000>>with one hand on $his hips and the other around $his gravid belly<<else>>holding $his hips with both hands and<</if>> bouncing $his butt against your crotch as your <<if $PC.dick == 1>>cock<<else>>strap-on<</if>> slides in and out of $him. You administer a hard slap to $his ass and tell $him to keep going. $He shakes $his head and manages to get back on track, grunting out, "You're going to panic - and - and - oh - <<s>>-<<s>>truggle, and _heP'<<s>> going t-to h-ho-oh-old you d-down, oh ow, and r-ra-rape your b-butt while, oh p-plea<<s>>e <<Master>>, you <<s>>cream, ooh, and c-cry... o-oh... ah." $He feels your <<if $PC.dick == 1>>hot seed jet into $his asshole<<else>>own orgasm<</if>> and your hands release their grip, and slides wetly off you, <<if ($activeSlave.dick > 0) && !canAchieveErection($activeSlave)>>$his own messy little orgasm running down $his legs to join the cum dripping out of $his ass<<elseif $activeSlave.dick > 0>>stepping around the mess $he shot onto the floor and trying to keep your load inside $his ass<<else>>$his feminine juices running down $his legs to join the cum dripping out of $his ass<</if>>. $He walks gingerly to the bathroom for a cleanup, looking a lot more @@.hotpink;submissive@@ than when you walked in. $subSlave.slaveName is still staring <<if canSee($subSlave)>>at<<else>>towards<</if>> you. There's a little @@.gold;fear@@ there, but some @@.hotpink;awe,@@ too.
+	"But it'<<s>> going to be <<s>>o big - it'<<s>> going to bu-hu-hur-hurn... oh..." You're up $his ass and pounding away, <<if $subSlave.belly >= 5000>>with one hand on $his hips and the other around $his gravid belly<<else>>holding $his hips with both hands and<</if>> bouncing $his butt against your crotch as your <<if $PC.dick == 1>>cock<<else>>strap-on<</if>> slides in and out of $him. You administer a hard slap to $his ass and tell $him to keep going. $He shakes $his head and manages to get back on track, grunting out, "You're going to panic - and - and - oh - <<s>>-<<s>>truggle, and <<heP>>'<<s>> going t-to h-ho-oh-old you d-down, oh ow, and r-ra-rape your b-butt while, oh p-plea<<s>>e <<Master>>, you <<s>>cream, ooh, and c-cry... o-oh... ah." $He feels your <<if $PC.dick == 1>>hot seed jet into $his asshole<<else>>own orgasm<</if>> and your hands release their grip, and slides wetly off you, <<if ($activeSlave.dick > 0) && !canAchieveErection($activeSlave)>>$his own messy little orgasm running down $his legs to join the cum dripping out of $his ass<<elseif $activeSlave.dick > 0>>stepping around the mess $he shot onto the floor and trying to keep your load inside $his ass<<else>>$his feminine juices running down $his legs to join the cum dripping out of $his ass<</if>>. $He walks gingerly to the bathroom for a cleanup, looking a lot more @@.hotpink;submissive@@ than when you walked in. $subSlave.slaveName is still staring <<if canSee($subSlave)>>at<<else>>towards<</if>> you. There's a little @@.gold;fear@@ there, but some @@.hotpink;awe,@@ too.
 	<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 5, $activeSlave.analCount++>>
 	<<set $analTotal++>>
 	<<if canImpreg($activeSlave, $PC)>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/arcologyDescription.tw b/src/uncategorized/arcologyDescription.tw
index 2838e04ad535c980e5c8a43f2d4e2a9bbe4957a8..1330f5211e721142973f58f9dcbc0035066631bf 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/arcologyDescription.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/arcologyDescription.tw
@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ Its<<if $weatherCladding == 2>> glorious<<elseif $weatherCladding > 0>> dull<<el
 	<<if $arcologies[0].FSRestartDecoration == 100>>
 		The central
 		<<if ($PC.dick == 1) && ($PC.vagina == 1)>>
-			futanari figure's balls are oversized and her stomach slightly rounded,
+			futanari figure's balls are oversized and _hisP stomach slightly rounded,
 		<<elseif ($PC.dick == 1) && ($PC.boobs == 1)>>
 			shemale figure's balls are swollen with virile seed,
 		<<elseif ($PC.dick == 1)>>
@@ -124,8 +124,7 @@ Its<<if $weatherCladding == 2>> glorious<<elseif $weatherCladding > 0>> dull<<el
 		The central <<if ($PC.dick == 1)>><<if ($PC.vagina == 1)>>futanari<<elseif ($PC.boobs == 1)>>shemale<<else>>male<</if>><<else>>female<</if>> figure is wearing a pharaoh's crown.
 	<</if>>
 	<<if $arcologies[0].FSEdoRevivalistDecoration == 100>>
-		The central <<if ($PC.dick == 1)>><<if ($PC.vagina == 1)>>futanari<<elseif ($PC.boobs == 1)>>shemale<<else>>male<</if>><<else>>female<</if>> figure has a hand resting confidently on the hilts of the sheathed katana and wakizashi _heP
-		has thrust through the sash about _hisP waist.
+		The central <<if ($PC.dick == 1)>><<if ($PC.vagina == 1)>>futanari<<elseif ($PC.boobs == 1)>>shemale<<else>>male<</if>><<else>>female<</if>> figure has a hand resting confidently on the hilts of the sheathed katana and wakizashi _heP has thrust through the sash about _hisP waist.
 	<</if>>
 	<<if $arcologies[0].FSArabianRevivalistDecoration == 100>>
 		The central <<if ($PC.dick == 1)>><<if ($PC.vagina == 1)>>futanari<<elseif ($PC.boobs == 1)>>shemale<<else>>male<</if>><<else>>female<</if>> figure is wearing a turban and flowing robes.
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/assistantEvents.tw b/src/uncategorized/assistantEvents.tw
index b4ea0e0da8c94d485f447f20d3195091660e8f8e..9c65ac2f5fbda92648cd0176b20fdae93c528f82 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/assistantEvents.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/assistantEvents.tw
@@ -1315,7 +1315,7 @@ You look over the details of the report. It would require another rather expansi
 
 <<link "Yes, use the alternate personality">>
 	<<replace "#result">>
-	Your sultry-voiced assistant requests a slave to demonstrate what it - now _heA - means. You bring in a slave and a fuckmachine, and tell _himU to get on it. The lovely voice croons and talks dirty to the slave as _heU uses the machine, acting as though _heA is the machine's voice. The pace of the machine is different, too, irregular and more lifelike. The slave certainly enjoys _himselfU, even if $assistantName is just simulating sex.
+	Your sultry-voiced assistant requests a slave to demonstrate what it — now _heA — means. You bring in a slave and a fuckmachine, and tell _himU to get on it. The lovely voice croons and talks dirty to the slave as _heU uses the machine, acting as though _heA is the machine's voice. The pace of the machine is different, too, irregular and more lifelike. The slave certainly enjoys _himselfU, even if $assistantName is just simulating sex.
 	<<set $assistant = 1>>
 	<<run generateAssistantPronouns($assistant)>>
 	<</replace>>
@@ -1428,7 +1428,7 @@ __Personal assistant appearances:__
 __Personal assistant appearances:__
 <br><<link "Keep your new appearance">>
 	<<replace "#result">>
-	At your order, _heA enthusiastically explores _hisA new body, perfecting its appearance. "Thank you, <<if $PC.title != 0>>sir<<else>>ma'am<</if>>. This was fun. As always, you can customize me from the arcology management menu," _heA states. "Oh! And if you choose to drive society in another direction, I'll have a new appearance ready for your enjoyment at once," _heA hastily adds.
+	At your order, _heA enthusiastically explores _hisA new body, perfecting its appearance. "Thank you, <<= properTitle()>>. This was fun. As always, you can customize me from the arcology management menu," _heA states. "Oh! And if you choose to drive society in another direction, I'll have a new appearance ready for your enjoyment at once," _heA hastily adds.
 	<<if $arcologies[0].FSPaternalist != "unset">>
 	<<set $assistantFSAppearance = "paternalist">>
 	<<elseif $arcologies[0].FSRepopulationFocus != "unset">>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/barracks.tw b/src/uncategorized/barracks.tw
index b7a9700fc68e4a4ed2aa22f3cdbfde8a1a5797f3..44e8f93ecb58c23e97f5941fd95ee0810444bcd3 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/barracks.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/barracks.tw
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ The mercenaries you retain to protect $arcologies[0].name are housed in this sec
 <<else>>
 	they don't resent an unannounced visit from their employer.
 <</if>>
-As you enter the main bay of the armory, lined with modern arms and armor and a few muscular, scarred men and women looking after their gear or suiting up to stand post, you're greeted respectfully, with<<if $personalArms > 0 && $invasionVictory > 0>> jaunty salutes and<</if>> formal <<if $PC.title == 1>>"Sir"s<<else>>"Ma'am"s<</if>><<if $personalArms > 0 && $invasionVictory > 0>>, but also with smiles and nods<</if>>.
+As you enter the main bay of the armory, lined with modern arms and armor and a few muscular, scarred men and women looking after their gear or suiting up to stand post, you're greeted respectfully, with<<if $personalArms > 0 && $invasionVictory > 0>> jaunty salutes and<</if>> formal "<<= properTitle()>>"s<<if $personalArms > 0 && $invasionVictory > 0>>, but also with smiles and nods<</if>>.
 <<if $mercenaries >= 3>>
 	Though few of the mercenaries are visible,
 	<<if $mercenaries >= 5>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/bodyModification.tw b/src/uncategorized/bodyModification.tw
index dbecadf784a54c8eda221ab18516c068a55f7a9e..cec2fa6a643101ad297559b3a6cb61484b455a2d 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/bodyModification.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/bodyModification.tw
@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@
 				<<if $activeSlave.fetish == "masochist">>
 					Since $he's a pain whore,
 					<<if $activeSlave.corsetPiercing > _slaveBeforeSession.corsetPiercing>>
-						$he @@.hotpink;got off on@@ you giving $his a corset piercing personally. $He loved the feeling of the metal entering $his flesh.
+						$he @@.hotpink;got off on@@ you giving $him a corset piercing personally. $He loved the feeling of the metal entering $his flesh.
 						<<set $activeSlave.devotion += ($activeSlave.corsetPiercing-_slaveBeforeSession.corsetPiercing)*2>>
 					<<elseif $activeSlave.devotion <= 95>>
 						$he's @@.mediumorchid;saddened@@ you decided to take out $his corset piercings yourself. $He'll miss the constant slight discomfort they gave $him.
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/customSlave.tw b/src/uncategorized/customSlave.tw
index 3f583ae5d1727037150d554f366e1207bfc7a4fc..657330778d9f57997ddc61fc78a239eef7ee3a47 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/customSlave.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/customSlave.tw
@@ -2,6 +2,8 @@
 
 <<set $nextButton = "Back", $nextLink = "Buy Slaves", $returnTo = "Buy Slaves", $showEncyclopedia = 1, $encyclopedia = "Kidnapped Slaves">>
 
+<<setAssistantPronouns>>
+
 <<if $customSlaveOrdered == 0>>You work up a new slave order for posting where slave merchants can work to fulfill it.<<else>>You review your posted slave order.<</if>> <<if $assistant == 1>>As you work, $assistantName makes lewd comments about what _heA looks forward to doing to this new slave. <</if>>Your order requests a slave with the following characteristics:
 
 <br><br>
@@ -613,8 +615,8 @@ Ethnicity: <span id = "ethnicity">
 Skin tone: <span id = "skin">
 <<textbox "$customSlave.skin" $customSlave.skin "Custom Slave">>
 </span>
-<<link "White">>
-	<<set $customSlave.skin = "white">>
+<<link "Pure White">>
+	<<set $customSlave.skin = "pure white">>
 	<<CustomSlaveSkin>>
 <</link>>
 |
@@ -628,26 +630,61 @@ Skin tone: <span id = "skin">
 	<<CustomSlaveSkin>>
 <</link>>
 |
+<<link "Extremely Fair">>
+	<<set $customSlave.skin = "extremely fair">>
+	<<CustomSlaveSkin>>
+<</link>>
+|
+<<link "Very Fair">>
+	<<set $customSlave.skin = "very fair">>
+	<<CustomSlaveSkin>>
+<</link>>
+|
 <<link "Fair">>
 	<<set $customSlave.skin = "fair">>
 	<<CustomSlaveSkin>>
 <</link>>
 |
+<<link "White">>
+	<<set $customSlave.skin = "white">>
+	<<CustomSlaveSkin>>
+<</link>>
+|
 <<link "Light">>
 	<<set $customSlave.skin = "light">>
 	<<CustomSlaveSkin>>
 <</link>>
 |
+<<link "Lightened">>
+	<<set $customSlave.skin = "lightened">>
+	<<CustomSlaveSkin>>
+<</link>>
+|
 <<link "Light Olive">>
 	<<set $customSlave.skin = "light olive">>
 	<<CustomSlaveSkin>>
 <</link>>
 |
+<<link "Olive">>
+	<<set $customSlave.skin = "olive">>
+	<<CustomSlaveSkin>>
+<</link>>
+|
+<<link "Natural">>
+	<<set $customSlave.skin = "natural">>
+	<<CustomSlaveSkin>>
+<</link>>
+|
 <<link "Tanned">>
 	<<set $customSlave.skin = "tanned">>
 	<<CustomSlaveSkin>>
 <</link>>
 |
+<<link "Bronzed">>
+	<<set $customSlave.skin = "bronzed">>
+	<<CustomSlaveSkin>>
+<</link>>
+|
 <<link "Dark Olive">>
 	<<set $customSlave.skin = "dark olive">>
 	<<CustomSlaveSkin>>
@@ -658,6 +695,11 @@ Skin tone: <span id = "skin">
 	<<CustomSlaveSkin>>
 <</link>>
 |
+<<link "Light Brown">>
+	<<set $customSlave.skin = "light brown">>
+	<<CustomSlaveSkin>>
+<</link>>
+|
 <<link "Brown">>
 	<<set $customSlave.skin = "brown">>
 	<<CustomSlaveSkin>>
@@ -673,6 +715,16 @@ Skin tone: <span id = "skin">
 	<<CustomSlaveSkin>>
 <</link>>
 |
+<<link "Ebony">>
+	<<set $customSlave.skin = "ebony">>
+	<<CustomSlaveSkin>>
+<</link>>
+|
+<<link "Pure Black">>
+	<<set $customSlave.skin = "pure black">>
+	<<CustomSlaveSkin>>
+<</link>>
+|
 <<link "Left natural">>
 	<<set $customSlave.skin = "left natural">>
 	<<CustomSlaveSkin>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/dairy.tw b/src/uncategorized/dairy.tw
index f6d130bb5487d278fcc622183f8b0ede8400e2b8..b5d1f70462d546b5f35e9f7bafcfe6d3be009fdc 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/dairy.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/dairy.tw
@@ -163,7 +163,7 @@ $dairyNameCaps is an industrial facility, but there's a viewing gallery for visi
 <<case "Asset Expansionist">>
 	It's designed for VIP visits, since this place is arguably the present apogee of expansionism. Nowhere else can breasts become so large. This is a place for pride.
 <<case "Transformation Fetishist">>
-	It's designed for VIP visits, since this place is arguably the present apogee of transformationism. Nowhere else can slaves be so radically changed, from humans into something less - and something more.
+	It's designed for VIP visits, since this place is arguably the present apogee of transformationism. Nowhere else can slaves be so radically changed, from humans into something less — and something more.
 <<case "Gender Radicalist">>
 	The gallery is placed for a good view of each slave's front, from their head to what's between their spread legs.
 <<case "Gender Fundamentalist">>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/economics.tw b/src/uncategorized/economics.tw
index e1261d48b8b7463887a2577f340503bbbbb0489e..5ac17c73d0a4846a3c464a53d7f91b821d6bc2d5 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/economics.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/economics.tw
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 :: Economics [nobr]
 
-<h1> <<print $arcologies[0].name + " Weekly Financial Report - Week " + $week>></h1>
+<h1> <<print $arcologies[0].name + " Weekly Financial Report — Week " + $week>></h1>
 
 <<set $nextButton = "Continue", $nextLink = "Scheduled Event">>
 
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/hgSelect.tw b/src/uncategorized/hgSelect.tw
index eae063439ba364f174242943ecaf89cee1bb15ad..86cd389140391f0d6a426310efb82285aa40204b 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/hgSelect.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/hgSelect.tw
@@ -58,9 +58,9 @@ _HGName is
 <br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
 _HGName
 <<if ($HGFormality != 0)>>
-	will be ''formal'': she will always call you <<if $PC.title == 1>>Master<<else>>Mistress<</if>>, just like any other slave. [[Allow private informality|HG Select][$HGFormality = 0]]
+	will be ''formal'': $he will always call you <<= WrittenMaster()>>, just like any other slave. [[Allow private informality|HG Select][$HGFormality = 0]]
 <<else>>
-	is allowed to be ''informal'': in private, she may call you <<if $PC.title == 1>>Sir<<else>>Ma'am<</if>>. [[Maintain complete formality|HG Select][$HGFormality = 1]]
+	is allowed to be ''informal'': in private, $he may call you <<= properTitle()>>. [[Maintain complete formality|HG Select][$HGFormality = 1]]
 <</if>>
 
 <<if $seePreg != 0>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/longSlaveDescription.tw b/src/uncategorized/longSlaveDescription.tw
index 2e96c590150ac80a192230df59fd528926d16910..6621c5fbe43da0394091bd45d88b63e1a299538a 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/longSlaveDescription.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/longSlaveDescription.tw
@@ -1734,18 +1734,18 @@ and
 	<<else>>
 		@@.red;<<print either("chubby", "carrying extra weight")>>.@@
 	<</if>>
-<<elseif $activeSlave.weight > 10 >><<print either("pleasingly curvy", "nicely plush")>>.
-<<elseif $activeSlave.weight >= -10>><<print either("a healthy weight", "neither too fat nor too skinny", "an attractive weight for $his frame")>>.
-<<elseif $activeSlave.weight >= -30>><<print either("pleasingly thin", "appealingly skinny")>>.
+<<elseif $activeSlave.weight > 10 >><<print either("nicely plush", "pleasingly curvy")>>.
+<<elseif $activeSlave.weight >= -10>><<print either("a healthy weight", "an attractive weight for $his frame", "neither too fat nor too skinny")>>.
+<<elseif $activeSlave.weight >= -30>><<print either("appealingly skinny", "pleasingly thin")>>.
 <<elseif $activeSlave.weight >= -95>>
 	<<if $activeSlave.hips > 1>>
-		<<print either("very thin", "quite skinny")>>, but $his wide hips make the gap between $his thighs very noticeable.
+		<<print either("quite skinny", "very thin")>>, but $his wide hips make the gap between $his thighs very noticeable.
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.hips < -1>>
-		<<print either("very thin", "quite skinny")>>, but $his trim hips make $his look like a model.
+		<<print either("quite skinny", "very thin")>>, but $his trim hips make $him look like a model.
 	<<else>>
-		@@.red;<<print either("rail thin", "underweight", "too skinny")>>.@@
+		@@.red;<<print either("rail thin", "too skinny", "underweight")>>.@@
 	<</if>>
-<<else>>@@.red;<<print either("emaciated", "dangerously skinny")>>.@@
+<<else>>@@.red;<<print either("dangerously skinny", "emaciated")>>.@@
 <</if>>
 
 <<if $activeSlave.hips > 2>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/pBioreactorPerfected.tw b/src/uncategorized/pBioreactorPerfected.tw
index 9c65dee6d04781ed414cd12e160831f64726d032..b567f74d18a9ee8cc1d7add49f591e4a07ffec0b 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/pBioreactorPerfected.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/pBioreactorPerfected.tw
@@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ You stop and consider the cow, from $his titanic breasts to $his <<if ($activeSl
 <span id="result">
 <<link "Do it, and do it to all maximized dairy slaves">>
 	<<replace "#result">>
-		Your assistant pauses, and then says, "Redesignation complete, <<if $PC.title == 1>>sir<<else>>ma'am<</if>>. This milking machine has been equipped with biological components. This combination is projected to produce approximately <<if $activeSlave.balls > 0>><<print 1000*Math.trunc((3*52*($retirementAge-$activeSlave.physicalAge))/1000)>> liters of cum,<</if>>
+		Your assistant pauses, and then says, "Redesignation complete, <<= properTitle()>>. This milking machine has been equipped with biological components. This combination is projected to produce approximately <<if $activeSlave.balls > 0>><<print 1000*Math.trunc((3*52*($retirementAge-$activeSlave.physicalAge))/1000)>> liters of cum,<</if>>
 		<<if $activeSlave.ovaries == 1>><<print 100*Math.trunc((52*($retirementAge-$activeSlave.physicalAge))/100)>> liters of vaginal secretions, <<print 5*($retirementAge-$activeSlave.physicalAge)>> slaves,<</if>>
 		and <<print 1000*Math.trunc((300*52*($retirementAge-$activeSlave.physicalAge))/1000)>> liters of milk over a <<print $retirementAge-$activeSlave.physicalAge>> year period before its biological components must be replaced."
 		<<if $assistant > 0>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/pCoupAftermath.tw b/src/uncategorized/pCoupAftermath.tw
index 871b1f9226c76aae60f35509e1820138dcc250d2..d1de2f9b66300ed6f25567939a029d4d42b3c713 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/pCoupAftermath.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/pCoupAftermath.tw
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 
 <<if $mercenaries == 0>>Your security drones<<elseif $mercenaries <= 3>>Your mercenaries<<else>>Your $mercenariesTitle<</if>> perform the grisly task of disposing of the bodies of the Daughters killed in the assault. They strip them of anything that might be of use in cleaning up after the attempted coup - communication devices, PDAs, computers, even handwritten notes. The raw intel is scanned and passed to $assistantName. Most of it is rubbish.
 <br><br>
-Some of it is not. There is evidence of payments from a <<if $rivalSet == 0>>nearby Free City<<else>>neighboring arcology<</if>> to the leadership of the Daughters. <<if $assistantName == "your personal assistant">>Your personal assistant<<else>>$assistantName<</if>> is silent for a long time, crosschecking records to assemble a complete picture despite your enemies' attempts to disguise the transactions. Finally, $assistantName finishes and displays a picture, using nearly the entire surface of your desk for effect. <<if $assistant > 0>>"This," she says in a tone of satisfaction, "is the <<if _num < $seeDicks>>bastard<<elseif (_num-25) < $seeDicks>>bitch<<else>>cunt<</if>> you want, <<if $PC.title == 0>>Ma'am<<else>>Sir<</if>>."<<else>>"This," it says neutrally, "is the culprit, <<if $PC.title == 0>>Ma'am<<else>>Sir<</if>>."<</if>>
+Some of it is not. There is evidence of payments from a <<if $rivalSet == 0>>nearby Free City<<else>>neighboring arcology<</if>> to the leadership of the Daughters. <<if $assistantName == "your personal assistant">>Your personal assistant<<else>>$assistantName<</if>> is silent for a long time, crosschecking records to assemble a complete picture despite your enemies' attempts to disguise the transactions. Finally, $assistantName finishes and displays a picture, using nearly the entire surface of your desk for effect. <<if $assistant > 0>>"This," _heA says in a tone of satisfaction, "is the <<if _num < $seeDicks>>bastard<<elseif (_num-25) < $seeDicks>>bitch<<else>>cunt<</if>> you want, <<= properTitle()>>."<<else>>"This," _heA says neutrally, "is the culprit, <<= properTitle()>>."<</if>>
 
 The face is vigorous, determined, <<if _num < $seeDicks>>and masculine. The very stereotype of the male arcology owner.<<elseif (_num-50 < $seeDicks)>>and androgynous. The very stereotype of the dissolute arcology owner.<<else>>and feminine. The very stereotype of the female arcology owner.<</if>>
 <<if $rivalSet != 0>>
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ The face is vigorous, determined, <<if _num < $seeDicks>>and masculine. The very
 	<</for>>
 	<br><br>
 <</if>>
-Your assistant continues, "<<if _num < $seeDicks>>He<<else>>She<</if>> came into an arcology about when you did, <<if $PC.title == 0>>Ma'am<<else>>Sir<</if>>. It seems the Daughters originally planned to attack <<if _num < $seeDicks>>him<<else>>her<</if>>, but <<if _num < $seeDicks>>he<<else>>she<</if>> bought them off and sent them after you, instead."<<if $assistant > 0>> "I wonder," she teases, "if <<if _num < $seeDicks>>he<<else>>she<</if>> thinks you're cute, or what?"<</if>>
+Your assistant continues, "<<if _num < $seeDicks>>He<<else>>She<</if>> came into an arcology about when you did, <<= properTitle()>>. It seems the Daughters originally planned to attack <<if _num < $seeDicks>>him<<else>>her<</if>>, but <<if _num < $seeDicks>>he<<else>>she<</if>> bought them off and sent them after you, instead."<<if $assistant > 0>> "I wonder," she teases, "if <<if _num < $seeDicks>>he<<else>>she<</if>> thinks you're cute, or what?"<</if>>
 <br><br>
 You inquire as to whether there's any identifiable cause for the evident dislike.
 <<if $rivalryFS != 0>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/reFSAcquisition.tw b/src/uncategorized/reFSAcquisition.tw
index be1b46e0685776fd83700c3d6a1dd9b05c499eaf..aff40095c227c2f5239e7dc0757fbe92cdb89015 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/reFSAcquisition.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/reFSAcquisition.tw
@@ -1477,7 +1477,7 @@ The call comes in from an office, and you suppress the urge to check whether $as
 	<<case "Slimness Enthusiast Two">>
 		When $he arrives, $he is the very picture of a young waif out of $his depth. It's clear $he feels relief and escaping going under the knife, but $he knows enough about the Free Cities to know that $he's likely to buy $his presence here through long years of sexual labor. A purchaser's agent appears to take $him away, and $he quietly asks who's bought $him. A citizen, you tell $him, who prefers his women slender and unimplanted. $He seems relieved by this.
 	<<case "Asset Expansionist">>
-		When $he arrives, it's clear $he's nobody's fool. $He comes without personal effects of any kind, and is wearing cheap, sturdy clothes to travel in, since $he knows $he'll be taking them off immediately. $He does, without being told, just as soon as the enslavement formalities are out of the way. $His breasts are capped by titanic, puffy nipples; $he notices you appreciating them and gives you a hesitant little smile, swaying $his shoulders back and forth a little to set $his flesh deliciously into motion. $His playfulness vanishes when a purchaser's agent arrives to take $him away. $He looks at you desperately, begging to know who's purchased $him. You tell $him truthfully that a wealthy citizen one arcology over bought $his as a house slave; you neglect to mention that he likes big tits.
+		When $he arrives, it's clear $he's nobody's fool. $He comes without personal effects of any kind, and is wearing cheap, sturdy clothes to travel in, since $he knows $he'll be taking them off immediately. $He does, without being told, just as soon as the enslavement formalities are out of the way. $His breasts are capped by titanic, puffy nipples; $he notices you appreciating them and gives you a hesitant little smile, swaying $his shoulders back and forth a little to set $his flesh deliciously into motion. $His playfulness vanishes when a purchaser's agent arrives to take $him away. $He looks at you desperately, begging to know who's purchased $him. You tell $him truthfully that a wealthy citizen one arcology over bought $him as a house slave; you neglect to mention that he likes big tits.
 	<<case "Asset Expansionist Two">>
 		When $he arrives, it's clear $he's nobody's fool. $He comes without personal effects of any kind, and is wearing cheap, sturdy clothes to travel in, since $he knows $he'll be taking them off immediately. $He does, without being told, just as soon as the enslavement formalities are out of the way. $His breasts are capped by titanic, puffy nipples; $he notices you appreciating them and gives you a hesitant little smile, swaying $his shoulders back and forth a little to set $his flesh deliciously into motion. $His playfulness vanishes when a purchaser's agent arrives to take $him away. $He looks at you desperately, begging to know who's purchased $him. You tell $him truthfully that a wealthy citizen one arcology over bought $him as a house slave; you neglect to mention that he likes big tits.
 	<<case "Physical Idealist">>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/reShelterInspection.tw b/src/uncategorized/reShelterInspection.tw
index b3ffc0c6700203255e24a6df5a96985561c513cb..d9db070637230912e4f433ff7b8f21f5d4d45dbb 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/reShelterInspection.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/reShelterInspection.tw
@@ -99,19 +99,19 @@ Not waiting to be greeted, the inspector looks up at the nearest camera and dema
 <br><br>
 
 <span id="result">
-<<link "Amusing. Enslave her">>
+<<link "Amusing. Enslave _him2">>
 	<<set $cash -= $contractCost>>
 	<<replace "#result">>
-	$assistantName ushers her into your penthouse and keeps her busy for the few minutes you need to circumvent the Shelter's various legal and contractual defenses to prevent slaveowners from doing exactly what you're doing. Fortunately, you're cleverer and richer than most, and you succeed. You have her brought into your office, and you are pleased to see her. She's not young and she's not pretty, but her suit cannot disguise her big bottom, and she's using the tablet she has clasped protectively against her chest to conceal a huge pair of mature breasts. She knows exactly what's happened, and fixes you with a gimlet stare. "In a couple of months," she says with venom, "when you've filled me full of hormones and drugs and training, and I'm begging you to <<if $PC.dick == 1>>stick your tiny little dick up<<else>>fist<</if>> my asshole, remember this. It'll be conditioning and self-preservation and Stockholm Syndrome talking, not me. I think you're a <<if $PC.title == 1>>sad bastard<<else>>vile cunt<</if>>, and I always will."
+	$assistantName ushers _him2 into your penthouse and keeps _him2 busy for the few minutes you need to circumvent the Shelter's various legal and contractual defenses to prevent slaveowners from doing exactly what you're doing. Fortunately, you're cleverer and richer than most, and you succeed. You have _him2 brought into your office, and you are pleased to see _him2. _He2's not young and _he2's not pretty, but _his2 suit cannot disguise _his2 big bottom, and _he2's using the tablet _he2 has clasped protectively against _his2 chest to conceal a huge pair of mature breasts. _He2 knows exactly what's happened, and fixes you with a gimlet stare. "In a couple of months," _he2 says with venom, "when you've filled me full of hormones and drugs and training, and I'm begging you to <<if $PC.dick == 1>>stick your tiny little dick up<<else>>fist<</if>> my asshole, remember this. It'll be conditioning and self-preservation and Stockholm Syndrome talking, not me. I think you're a <<if $PC.title == 1>>sad bastard<<else>>vile cunt<</if>>, and I always will."
 	<<set $shelterAbuse += 10>>
 	<<set $nextButton = "Continue">><<UpdateNextButton>> /* unlock Continue button */
 	<<include "New Slave Intro">>
 	<</replace>>
 <</link>> //This will cost <<print cashFormat($contractCost)>>//
 <<if $Bodyguard != 0 || $mercenaries > 1 || ($SF.Toggle && $SF.Active >= 1)>>
-	<br><<link "Escort her off your property">>
+	<br><<link "Escort _him2 off your property">>
 	<<replace "#result">>
-		You along with <<if $Bodyguard != 0>> your bodyguard <<print SlaveFullName($Bodyguard)>> and<</if>> <<if $mercenaries > 1>>a squad of $mercenariesTitle <<elseif ($SF.Toggle && $SF.Active >= 1)>>, a squad of $SF.Lower <<elseif $mercenaries > 1 && ($SF.Toggle && $SF.Active >= 1)>> a squad of both $mercenariesTitle and $SF.Lower <</if>> forcefully escort the inspector off your property. You barely make it back to the penthouse before the massage deeming you permanently banned from the Slave Shelter arrives.
+		You along with <<if $Bodyguard != 0>> your bodyguard <<print SlaveFullName($Bodyguard)>> and<</if>> <<if $mercenaries > 1>>a squad of $mercenariesTitle <<elseif ($SF.Toggle && $SF.Active >= 1)>>, a squad of $SF.Lower <<elseif $mercenaries > 1 && ($SF.Toggle && $SF.Active >= 1)>> a squad of both $mercenariesTitle and $SF.Lower <</if>> forcefully escort the inspector off your property. You barely make it back to the penthouse before the message deeming you permanently banned from the Slave Shelter arrives.
 		<<set $shelterAbuse += 100>>
 		<<set $nextButton = "Continue">><<UpdateNextButton>> /* unlock Continue button */
 	<</replace>>
@@ -124,7 +124,7 @@ Not waiting to be greeted, the inspector looks up at the nearest camera and dema
 		<<set $activeSlave.clothes = "no clothing">>
 		<<set $cash -= $contractCost/2>>
 		<<replace "#result">>
-		_Inspectee.slaveName is attached to a milking machine, so it would be extremely unwise to let the inspector report on _Inspectee.slaveName's industrial fate in all its gorgeous productivity. So, you greet her politely, and bring her down to $dairyName to show her _Inspectee.slaveName. The inspector has a single moment to stiffen in shock at the sight before she stiffens involuntarily due to the security drone tasing her unconscious. It takes a few credits here and there to circumvent the Shelter's various legal and contractual defenses to prevent slaveowners from doing exactly what you're doing, but you finish the day richer by one more big-boobed milk producer. You leave the inspector's drug dosage low to start, so she can appreciate her situation for a while. When the inspector awakes, her visor is set to show an overhead view of her bay in $dairyName. She sees her breasts, already larger than she remembers, gently swaying with the pumping of the milkers.<<if $dairyFeedersSetting > 1>> She sees the huge phallus occupying her mouth, and feels nutrition sliding down her throat.<</if>><<if $dairyPregSetting > 1>> She sees her vagina drooling as it's fucked in preparation for pregnancy.<</if>><<if $dairyPregSetting > 1>> She sees a massive piston moving slowly back and forth beneath her buttocks, and understands what the ache of impossible fullness in her bottom is.<</if>> Her hands ball into fists.
+		_Inspectee.slaveName is attached to a milking machine, so it would be extremely unwise to let the inspector report on _Inspectee.slaveName's industrial fate in all its gorgeous productivity. So, you greet _him2 politely, and bring _him2 down to $dairyName to show _him2 _Inspectee.slaveName. The inspector has a single moment to stiffen in shock at the sight before _he2 stiffens involuntarily due to the security drone tasing _him2 unconscious. It takes a few credits here and there to circumvent the Shelter's various legal and contractual defenses to prevent slaveowners from doing exactly what you're doing, but you finish the day richer by one more big-boobed milk producer. You leave the inspector's drug dosage low to start, so _he2 can appreciate _his2 situation for a while. When the inspector awakes, _his2 visor is set to show an overhead view of _his2 bay in $dairyName. _He2 sees _his2 breasts, already larger than _he2 remembers, gently swaying with the pumping of the milkers.<<if $dairyFeedersSetting > 1>> _He2 sees the huge phallus occupying _his2 mouth, and feels nutrition sliding down _his2 throat.<</if>><<if $dairyPregSetting > 1>> _He2 sees _his2 vagina drooling as it's fucked in preparation for pregnancy.<</if>><<if $dairyPregSetting > 1>> _He2 sees a massive piston moving slowly back and forth beneath _his2 buttocks, and understands what the ache of impossible fullness in _his2 bottom is.<</if>> _His2 hands ball into fists.
 		<<set $shelterAbuse += 10>>
 		<<set $nextButton = "Continue">><<UpdateNextButton>> /* unlock Continue button */
 		<<run newSlave($activeSlave)>> /* skip New Slave Intro */
@@ -136,15 +136,15 @@ Not waiting to be greeted, the inspector looks up at the nearest camera and dema
 		<<set $activeSlave.clothes = "no clothing">>
 		<<set $cash -= $contractCost/2>>
 		<<replace "#result">>
-		_Inspectee.slaveName is sealed in a box and currently in use, so it would be extremely unwise to let the inspector report on _Inspectee.slaveName's permanent position in the service industry. So, you greet her politely, and bring her down to $arcadeName to show her _Inspectee.slaveName. The inspector has a single moment to stiffen in shock at the sight before she stiffens involuntarily due to the security drone tasing her unconscious. It takes a few credits here and there to circumvent the Shelter's various legal and contractual defenses to prevent slaveowners from doing exactly what you're doing, but you finish the day richer by three more fuckable holes. When the inspector awakes to a dick intruding her body, the pitch blackness and sound proofing disorientates her.
+		_Inspectee.slaveName is sealed in a box and currently in use, so it would be extremely unwise to let the inspector report on _Inspectee.slaveName's permanent position in the service industry. So, you greet _him2 politely, and bring _him2 down to $arcadeName to show _him2 _Inspectee.slaveName. The inspector has a single moment to stiffen in shock at the sight before _he2 stiffens involuntarily due to the security drone tasing _him2 unconscious. It takes a few credits here and there to circumvent the Shelter's various legal and contractual defenses to prevent slaveowners from doing exactly what you're doing, but you finish the day richer by three more fuckable holes. When the inspector awakes to a dick intruding _his2 body, the pitch blackness and sound proofing disorientates _him2.
 		<<if $arcadeUpgradeInjectors == 1>>
-			She gasps as a needle breaks her skin, filling her veins with a potent mixture of aphrodisiacs to help her better service the cock in her cunt. She attempts to defy, but a strong shock forces her to tighten and bring her partner to climax.
+			_He2 gasps as a needle breaks _his2 skin, filling _his2 veins with a potent mixture of aphrodisiacs to help _him2 better service the cock in _his2 cunt. _He2 attempts to defy, but a strong shock forces _him2 to tighten and bring _his2 partner to climax.
 		<<elseif $arcadeUpgradeCollectors == 1>>
-			She groans at the feeling of something sucking away at her milkless tits, but it does nothing the distract from her rape. She struggles to resist in any way she can, but she is too firmly anchored to move.
+			_He2 groans at the feeling of something sucking away at _his2 milkless tits, but it does nothing the distract from _his2 rape. _He2 struggles to resist in any way _he2 can, but _he2 is too firmly anchored to move.
 		<<else>>
-			She struggles to resist in any way she can, but she is too firmly anchored to move.
+			_He2 struggles to resist in any way _he2 can, but _he2 is too firmly anchored to move.
 		<</if>>
-		Before she gets the chance to swear defiance against you, another patron rams his dick down her throat, putting a stop to that notion. Her hands ball into fists as she endures her spit-roasting.
+		Before _he2 gets the chance to swear defiance against you, another patron rams his dick down _his2 throat, putting a stop to that notion. _His2 hands ball into fists as _he2 endures _his2 spitroasting.
 		<<set $shelterAbuse += 15>>
 		<<set $nextButton = "Continue">><<UpdateNextButton>> /* unlock Continue button */
 		<<run newSlave($activeSlave)>> /* skip New Slave Intro */
@@ -153,7 +153,7 @@ Not waiting to be greeted, the inspector looks up at the nearest camera and dema
 <<elseif (_Inspectee.assignment == "be your agent") || (_Inspectee.assignment == "live with your agent")>>
 	<br><<link "Your slave is in another arcology">>
 		<<replace "#result">>
-		_Inspectee.slaveName is now a guiding force in another of the Free City's arcologies, so it would be disruptive to $his work to be called away like this. You simply pass along $his new address and send the inspector on her way. She stands there dumbfounded before hastily writing notes on her tablet. She seems quite pleased by _Inspectee.slaveName's progress.
+		_Inspectee.slaveName is now a guiding force in another of the Free City's arcologies, so it would be disruptive to $his work to be called away like this. You simply pass along $his new address and send the inspector on _his2 way. _He2 stands there dumbfounded before hastily writing notes on _his2 tablet. _He2 seems quite pleased by _Inspectee.slaveName's progress.
 		<<set $shelterAbuse -= 15>>
 		<<set $nextButton = "Continue">><<UpdateNextButton>> /* unlock Continue button */
 		<</replace>>
@@ -162,7 +162,7 @@ Not waiting to be greeted, the inspector looks up at the nearest camera and dema
 	<br><<link "The slave is little more than a latex wrapped doll, and so will be the inspector">>
 		<<set $cash -= $contractCost/2>>
 		<<replace "#result">>
-		You have her ushered up to your office, and order _Inspectee.slaveName brought in. The inspector has a single moment to stiffen in shock at the sight before she stiffens involuntarily due to the security drone tasing her unconscious. It takes a few credits here and there to circumvent the Shelter's various legal and contractual defenses to prevent slaveowners from doing exactly what you're doing, but you finish the day richer by one more Fuckdoll. Odds are she wants to be defiant, but the suit works perfectly and leaves her no outlet to make her thoughts known.
+		You have _him2 ushered up to your office, and order _Inspectee.slaveName brought in. The inspector has a single moment to stiffen in shock at the sight before _he2 stiffens involuntarily due to the security drone tasing _him2 unconscious. It takes a few credits here and there to circumvent the Shelter's various legal and contractual defenses to prevent slaveowners from doing exactly what you're doing, but you finish the day richer by one more Fuckdoll. Odds are _he2 wants to be defiant, but the suit works perfectly and leaves _him2 no outlet to make _his2 thoughts known.
 		<<set $activeSlave.toyHole="all her holes", $activeSlave.pubicHStyle="waxed", $activeSlave.livingRules="spare", $activeSlave.speechRules="restrictive", $activeSlave.releaseRules="restrictive", $activeSlave.relationshipRules="restrictive", $activeSlave.fuckdoll=1, $activeSlave.choosesOwnClothes=0, $activeSlave.clothes="a Fuckdoll suit", $activeSlave.collar="none", $activeSlave.shoes="heels",$activeSlave.legAccessory="none", $activeSlave.vaginalAccessory="none", $activeSlave.dickAccessory="none", $activeSlave.buttplug="none", $activeSlave.attrKnown=1, $activeSlave.fetishKnown=1>>
 		<<set $shelterAbuse += 10>>
 		<<set $nextButton = "Continue">><<UpdateNextButton>> /* unlock Continue button */
@@ -173,30 +173,30 @@ Not waiting to be greeted, the inspector looks up at the nearest camera and dema
 <br><<link "Allow the inspection">>
 	<<replace "#result">>
 	<<set _inspectionContinues = 1, _inspectionResult = 0>>
-	You have her ushered up to your office, and order _Inspectee.slaveName brought in.
+	You have _him2 ushered up to your office, and order _Inspectee.slaveName brought in.
 	<br><br>
 	/*
 	<<if _Inspectee.amp == 1 && _originSlave.amp != 1>>
-		You may have lopped off the poor $girl's arms and legs, a fact not lost on the inspector. She can barely conceal her terror as she makes lengthy notes on her tablet before practically running out of the penthouse.
+		You may have lopped off the poor $girl's arms and legs, a fact not lost on the inspector. _He2 can barely conceal _his2 terror as _he2 makes lengthy notes on _his2 tablet before practically running out of the penthouse.
 		<<set $shelterAbuse += 10>>
 	<<elseif _Inspectee.fetish == "mindbroken">>
 		<<if _Inspectee.origin == "You got her at the Slave Shelter. She has never communicated anything about her background, since she arrived at the shelter with a broken mind.">>
-			Of course, the poor $girl is just as mindbroken as ever. The inspector asks some cursory questions and gives up. "Don't worry," she says. "I know $he was like this when you got $him. Just - just keep trying, would you?" She leaves, looking bitter.
+			Of course, the poor $girl is just as mindbroken as ever. The inspector asks some cursory questions and gives up. "Don't worry," _he2 says. "I know $he was like this when you got $him. Just - just keep trying, would you?" _He2 leaves, looking bitter.
 		<<elseif _Inspectee.origin == "You got her at the Slave Shelter. She was found unresponsive in the lower arcology with a gaping pussy and deflated belly. It is unclear what happened to her.">>
-			Of course, the poor $girl is just as mindbroken as ever. The inspector asks some cursory questions and gives up. "Don't worry," she says. "I know $he was like this when you got $him. Just - just keep trying, would you?"
+			Of course, the poor $girl is just as mindbroken as ever. The inspector asks some cursory questions and gives up. "Don't worry," _he2 says. "I know $he was like this when you got $him. Just - just keep trying, would you?"
 			<<if _Inspectee.pussy > 3 && _Inspectee.bellySag > 1>>
-				She gropes the slave's sagging middle before inspecting her ruined pussy. "Still ruined I see."
+				_He2 gropes the slave's sagging middle before inspecting $his ruined pussy. "Still ruined I see."
 			<<elseif _Inspectee.pussy <= 3 && _Inspectee.bellySag > 1>>
-				She gropes the slave's sagging middle before inspecting $his pussy. "Apart from the belly, $his pussy has recovered nicely."
+				_He2 gropes the slave's sagging middle before inspecting $his pussy. "Apart from the belly, $his pussy has recovered nicely."
 			<<elseif _Inspectee.pussy > 3 && _Inspectee.bellySag <= 1>>
-				She gropes the slave's middle before inspecting $his ruined pussy. "$His stomach seems to have recovered, shame you did nothing for $his poor vagina."
+				_He2 gropes the slave's middle before inspecting $his ruined pussy. "$His stomach seems to have recovered, shame you did nothing for $his poor vagina."
 			<<else>>
-				She runs her hand across the slave's restored midriff, before inspecting $his pussy. "$He is looking much better, physically, though. That's worth noting."
+				_He2 runs _his2 hand across the slave's restored midriff, before inspecting $his pussy. "$He is looking much better, physically, though. That's worth noting."
 				<<set $shelterAbuse-->>
 			<</if>>
-			She leaves, looking bitter.
+			_He2 leaves, looking bitter.
 		<<else>>
-			Of course, the poor $girl is mindbroken now. The inspector is horrified, though she tries to conceal it. She makes lengthy notes on her tablet, and almost runs out of the penthouse.
+			Of course, the poor $girl is mindbroken now. The inspector is horrified, though _he2 tries to conceal it. _He2 makes lengthy notes on _his2 tablet, and almost runs out of the penthouse.
 			<<set $shelterAbuse += 5>>
 		<</if>>
 		<<set _inspectionContinues = 0>>
@@ -205,135 +205,135 @@ Not waiting to be greeted, the inspector looks up at the nearest camera and dema
 	<<if _inspectionContinues == 1>>
 		<<switch _Inspectee.origin>>
 		<<case "You got her at the Slave Shelter. She has never communicated anything about her background, since she arrived at the shelter with a broken mind.">>
-			The inspector asks some cursory questions and is shocked when she responds. "$He came back?" she mutters, "You restored $his mind, I can't believe it. This is incredible." She carries on while writing notes on her tablet, "You're more than welcome to adopt slaves from our shelter." You swear she seems in much better spirits as she leaves your penthouse.
+			The inspector asks some cursory questions and is shocked when $he responds. "$He came back?" _he2 mutters, "You restored $his mind, I can't believe it. This is incredible." _He2 carries on while writing notes on _his2 tablet, "You're more than welcome to adopt slaves from our shelter." You swear _he2 seems in much better spirits as _he2 leaves your penthouse.
 			<<set _inspectionContinues = 0>>
 			<<set $shelterAbuse -= 5>>
 		<<case "You got her at the Slave Shelter. It's not clear why her previous owner cut her arms and legs off.">>
 			<<if _Inspectee.amp == _originSlave.amp>>
 				Unsurprisingly, the poor $girl still lacks arms and legs, so the inspector just carries on.
 			<<else>>
-				The inspector stares, dumbfounded, at pair of limbs now supporting _Inspectee.slaveName. "Most owners wouldn't go through the trouble... I think I've seen enough to know you're welcome to come back and take in another girl any time." She leaves your penthouse in much better spirits than she arrived in.
+				The inspector stares, dumbfounded, at pair of limbs now supporting _Inspectee.slaveName. "Most owners wouldn't go through the trouble... I think I've seen enough to know you're welcome to come back and take in another girl any time." _He2 leaves your penthouse in much better spirits than _he2 arrived in.
 				<<set _inspectionContinues = 0>>
 				<<set $shelterAbuse -= 3>>
 			<</if>>
 		<<case "You got her at the Slave Shelter. Her owner purposely blinded her by dumping boiling water into her eyes.">>
-			"I wish the scaring wasn't so bad, that way people wouldn't stare so much."
+			"I wish the scarring wasn't so bad, that way people wouldn't stare so much."
 			<<if _Inspectee.eyes > _originSlave.eyes>>
 				<<if canTalk(_Inspectee)>>
 					_Inspectee.slaveName quickly retorts with "But I like <<s>>eeing their eye<<s>>..."
 				<<else>>
 					_Inspectee.slaveName shakes $his head in response.
 				<</if>>
-				The inspector gasps at the realization that $he can see again. "They look just like $his old photos too..." A tear comes to her weary eye as she writes out notes on her tablet. "You're more than welcome to adopt slaves from our shelter." You swear she seems in much better spirits as she leaves your penthouse.
+				The inspector gasps at the realization that $he can see again. "They look just like $his old photos too..." A tear comes to _his2 weary eye as _he2 writes out notes on _his2 tablet. "You're more than welcome to adopt slaves from our shelter." You swear _he2 seems in much better spirits as _he2 leaves your penthouse.
 				<<set _inspectionContinues = 0>>
 				<<set $shelterAbuse-->>
 			<</if>>
 		<<case "You got her at the Slave Shelter. She was found unresponsive in the lower arcology with a gaping pussy and deflated belly. It is unclear what happened to her.">>
-			The inspector asks some cursory questions and is shocked when $he responds. "$He came back?" she mutters, "You restored $his mind, I can't believe it. This is incredible." She carries on while writing notes on her tablet, "You're more than welcome to adopt slaves from our shelter." You swear she seems in much better spirits as she leaves your penthouse, even though she forgot to check $his pussy.
+			The inspector asks some cursory questions and is shocked when $he responds. "$He came back?" _he2 mutters, "You restored $his mind, I can't believe it. This is incredible." _He2 carries on while writing notes on _his2 tablet, "You're more than welcome to adopt slaves from our shelter." You swear _he2 seems in much better spirits as _he2 leaves your penthouse, even though _he2 forgot to check $his pussy.
 			<<set _inspectionContinues = 0>>
 			<<set $shelterAbuse -= 5>>
 
 		<<case "You got her at the Slave Shelter. Her previous owner forced her to cut off her dick and balls and cook them.">>
 			<<if _Inspectee.dick > _originSlave.dick>>
-				"I see that you've given $him a replacement tool," she reaches down and gives it an exploratory fondle,
+				"I see that you've given $him a replacement tool," _he2 reaches down and gives it an exploratory fondle,
 				<<if canAchieveErection(_Inspectee)>>
-					"it even works, that's lovely." The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on her tablet.
+					"it even works, that's lovely." The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on _his2 tablet.
 				<<else>>
-					"it seems to be non-functional, but it's a nice gesture at least." The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on her tablet.
+					"it seems to be non-functional, but it's a nice gesture at least." The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on _his2 tablet.
 				<</if>>
 				<<set _inspectionResult-->>
 			<</if>>
 			<<if _Inspectee.balls > _originSlave.balls && _Inspectee.scrotum>>
 				<<if _Inspectee.dick > _originSlave.dick>>
-					"And these work too, right?" She asks as she points to $his dangling balls. "So $he has been fully restored, that's something." The inspector adds another positive note to the inspection.
+					"And these work too, right?" _he2 asks as _he2 points to $his dangling balls. "So $he has been fully restored, that's something." The inspector adds another positive note to the inspection.
 					<<set _inspectionResult-->>
 				<<else>>
-					"I take it these testicles are more than just an implant? I'm sure $he appreciates the gesture, though what good are they without a penis?" The inspector shakes her head and notes your attempt to undo the damages to _Inspectee.slaveName.
+					"I take it these testicles are more than just an implant? I'm sure $he appreciates the gesture, though what good are they without a penis?" The inspector shakes _his2 head and notes your attempt to undo the damages to _Inspectee.slaveName.
 				<</if>>
 			<</if>>
 
 			<<if !["apathetic", "neglectful"].includes(_Inspectee.sexualFlaw) && !["odd", "anorexic"].includes(_Inspectee.behavioralFlaw) && !["none", "masochist"].includes(_Inspectee.fetish)>>
-				The inspector can see that her personality is much better than before. The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on her tablet.
+				The inspector can see that $his personality is much better than before. The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on _his2 tablet.
 				<<set $shelterAbuse -= 3>>
 			<</if>>
 
 		<<case "You got her at the Slave Shelter. Her previous owner forced her to cut off her breasts and cook them.">>
 			<<if _Inspectee.boobs > $genePool[_Arrival].boobs>>
-				The inspector can see that she has a new set of breasts. The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on her tablet.
+				The inspector can see that $he has a new set of breasts. The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on _his2 tablet.
 				<<set $shelterAbuse -= 2>>
 			<</if>>
 			<<if !["apathetic", "neglectful", "self hating"].includes(_Inspectee.sexualFlaw) && !["odd", "anorexic"].includes(_Inspectee.behavioralFlaw) && !["none", "masochist"].includes(_Inspectee.fetish)>>
-				The inspector can see that $his personality is much better than before. The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on her tablet.
+				The inspector can see that $his personality is much better than before. The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on _his2 tablet.
 				<<set $shelterAbuse -= 3>>
 			<</if>>
 
 		<<case "You got her at the Slave Shelter. She is an enslaved Daughter of Liberty, caught some weeks after the failed coup. Her previous owner used her as a punching bag and dart board, then when he was bored of her tattooed obscenities all over her body and threw her away.">>
 			<<if _Inspectee.slaveName != $genePool[_Arrival].slaveName>>
-				The inspector notices _Inspectee.birthName new name. The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on her tablet.
+				The inspector notices _Inspectee.birthName new name. The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on _his2 tablet.
 				<<set $shelterAbuse-->>
 			<</if>>
 
 		<<case "You got her at the Slave Shelter. Her previous owner gelded her and used her for anal abuse.">>
 			<<if _Inspectee.anus < $genePool[_Arrival].anus>>
-				The inspector can see that her anus is better. The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on her tablet.
+				The inspector can see that $his anus is better. The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on _his2 tablet.
 				<<set $shelterAbuse-->>
 			<</if>>
 			<<if _Inspectee.dick > $genePool[_Arrival].dick>>
-				The inspector can see that she has a new dick. The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on her tablet.
+				The inspector can see that $he has a new dick. The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on _his2 tablet.
 				<<set $shelterAbuse-->>
 			<</if>>
 
 		<<case "You got her at the Slave Shelter. Her background is obscure, but seems to have involved terrible abuse of her huge cock and balls.">>
 			<<if _Inspectee.energy > $genePool[_Arrival].energy>>
-				The inspector notices that _Inspectee.birthName has more energy. The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on her tablet.
+				The inspector notices that _Inspectee.birthName has more energy. The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on _his2 tablet.
 				<<set $shelterAbuse-->>
 			<</if>>
 
 		<<case "You got her at the Slave Shelter. Her holes were cruelly stretched by constant plug use.">>
 			<<if _Inspectee.vagina < $genePool[_Arrival].vagina && _Inspectee.anus < $genePool[_Arrival].anus>>
-				The inspector notices that _Inspectee.birthName's holes are tighter. The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on her tablet.
+				The inspector notices that _Inspectee.birthName's holes are tighter. The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on _his2 tablet.
 				<<set $shelterAbuse-->>
 			<</if>>
 
 		<<case "You got her at the Slave Shelter. Her previous owner discarded her after many pregnancies.">>
 			<<if _Inspectee.vagina < $genePool[_Arrival].vagina>>
-				The inspector notices that _Inspectee.birthName's vagina is tighter. The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on her tablet.
+				The inspector notices that _Inspectee.birthName's vagina is tighter. The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on _his2 tablet.
 				<<set $shelterAbuse-->>
 			<</if>>
 
 		<<case "You got her at the Slave Shelter. She was worn out by twenty years of brothel service.">>
 			<<if _Inspectee.vagina < $genePool[_Arrival].vagina && _Inspectee.anus < $genePool[_Arrival].anus>>
-				The inspector notices that _Inspectee.birthName's holes are tighter. The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on her tablet.
+				The inspector notices that _Inspectee.birthName's holes are tighter. The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on _his2 tablet.
 				<<set $shelterAbuse-->>
 			<</if>>
 
 		<<case	"You got her at the Slave Shelter. She was discarded after suffering a terrible reaction to growth hormone treatment.">>
 			<<if _Inspectee.chem < $genePool[_Arrival].chem>>
-				Upon scanning _Inspectee.birthName, the inspector finds that her chem damage has been reduced. The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on her tablet.
+				Upon scanning _Inspectee.birthName, the inspector finds that $his chem damage has been reduced. The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on _his2 tablet.
 				<<set $shelterAbuse-->>
 			<<else>>
-				The inspector scans _Inspectee.birthName and finds that her chem damage has been increased. The inspector is horrified, though she tries to conceal it.
+				The inspector scans _Inspectee.birthName and finds that $his chem damage has been increased. The inspector is horrified, though _he2 tries to conceal it.
 				<<set $shelterAbuse++>>
 			<</if>>
 			<<if _Inspectee.dick < $genePool[_Arrival].dick>>
-				The inspector measures _Inspectee.birthName's dick and finds that has been reduced. The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on her tablet.
+				The inspector measures _Inspectee.birthName's dick and finds that it has been reduced. The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on _his2 tablet.
 				<<set $shelterAbuse-->>
 			<<else>>
-					The inspector measures _Inspectee.birthName's dick and finds that has increased. The inspector is horrified, though she tries to conceal it.
+				The inspector measures _Inspectee.birthName's dick and finds that it has increased. The inspector is horrified, though _he2 tries to conceal it.
 				<<set $shelterAbuse++>>
 			<</if>>
 			<<if _Inspectee.balls < $genePool[_Arrival].balls>>
-				The inspector measures _Inspectee.birthName's balls and finds they has been reduced. The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on her tablet.
+				The inspector measures _Inspectee.birthName's balls and finds they have been reduced. The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on _his2 tablet.
 				<<set $shelterAbuse-->>
 			<<else>>
-				The inspector measures _Inspectee.birthName's balls and finds they has been increased. The inspector is horrified, though she tries to conceal it.
+				The inspector measures _Inspectee.birthName's balls and finds they have been increased. The inspector is horrified, though _he2 tries to conceal it.
 				<<set $shelterAbuse++>>
 			<</if>>
 			<<if _Inspectee.fetish != $genePool[_Arrival].fetish>>
-				The inspector measures _Inspectee.birthName's balls and finds they has been reduced. The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on her tablet.
+				The inspector measures _Inspectee.birthName's balls and finds they have been reduced. The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on _his2 tablet.
 				<<set $shelterAbuse-->>
 			<<else>>
-				The inspector is happy that _Inspectee.birthName's balls and finds they has been increased. The inspector is horrified, though she tries to conceal it.
+				The inspector is happy that _Inspectee.birthName's balls and finds they have been increased. The inspector is horrified, though _he2 tries to conceal it.
 				<<set $shelterAbuse++>>
 			<</if>>
 		<</switch>>
@@ -342,68 +342,68 @@ Not waiting to be greeted, the inspector looks up at the nearest camera and dema
 
 	<<if _Inspectee.origin == "You got her at the Slave Shelter. She has never communicated anything about her background, since she arrived at the shelter with a broken mind.">>
 		<<if _Inspectee.fetish == "mindbroken">>
-			Of course, the poor girl is just as mindbroken as ever. The inspector asks some cursory questions and gives up. "Don't worry," she says. "I know she was like this when you got her. Just - just keep trying, would you?" She leaves, looking bitter.
+			Of course, the poor $girl is just as mindbroken as ever. The inspector asks some cursory questions and gives up. "Don't worry," _he2 says. "I know $he was like this when you got $him. Just - just keep trying, would you?" _He2 leaves, looking bitter.
 		<<else>>
-			The inspector asks some cursory questions and is shocked when she responds. "S-she came back?" she mutters, "You restored her mind, I can't believe it. This is incredible." She carries on while writing notes on her tablet, "You're more than welcome to adopt slaves from our shelter." You swear she seems in much better spirits as she leaves your penthouse.
+			The inspector asks some cursory questions and is shocked when $he responds. "$He came back?" _he2 mutters, "You restored $his mind, I can't believe it. This is incredible." _He2 carries on while writing notes on _his2 tablet, "You're more than welcome to adopt slaves from our shelter." You swear _he2 seems in much better spirits as _he2 leaves your penthouse.
 			<<set $shelterAbuse -= 5>>
 		<</if>>
 	<<elseif _Inspectee.origin == "You got her at the Slave Shelter. She was found unresponsive in the lower arcology with a gaping pussy and deflated belly. It is unclear what happened to her.">>
 		<<if _Inspectee.fetish == "mindbroken">>
-			Of course, the poor girl is just as mindbroken as ever. The inspector asks some cursory questions and gives up. "Don't worry," she says. "I know she was like this when you got her. Just - just keep trying, would you?"
+			Of course, the poor girl is just as mindbroken as ever. The inspector asks some cursory questions and gives up. "Don't worry," _he2 says. "I know $he was like this when you got $him. Just - just keep trying, would you?"
 			<<if _Inspectee.pussy > 3 && _Inspectee.bellySag > 1>>
-				She gropes the slave's sagging middle before inspecting her ruined pussy. "Still ruined I see."
+				_He2 gropes the slave's sagging middle before inspecting $his ruined pussy. "Still ruined I see."
 			<<elseif _Inspectee.pussy <= 3 && _Inspectee.bellySag > 1>>
-				She gropes the slave's sagging middle before inspecting her pussy. "Apart from the belly, her pussy has recovered nicely."
+				_He2 gropes the slave's sagging middle before inspecting $his pussy. "Apart from the belly, $his pussy has recovered nicely."
 			<<elseif _Inspectee.pussy > 3 && _Inspectee.bellySag <= 1>>
-				She gropes the slave's middle before inspecting her ruined pussy. "Her stomach seems to have recovered, shame you did nothing for her poor vagina."
+				_He2 gropes the slave's middle before inspecting $his ruined pussy. "$His stomach seems to have recovered, shame you did nothing for $his poor vagina."
 			<<else>>
-				She runs her hand across the slave's restored midriff, before inspecting her pussy. "She is looking much better, physically, though. That's worth noting."
+				_He2 runs _his2 hand across the slave's restored midriff, before inspecting $his pussy. "$He is looking much better, physically, though. That's worth noting."
 				<<set $shelterAbuse-->>
 			<</if>>
-			She leaves, looking bitter.
+			_He2 leaves, looking bitter.
 		<<else>>
-			The inspector asks some cursory questions and is shocked when she responds. "S-she came back?" she mutters, "You restored her mind, I can't believe it. This is incredible." She carries on while writing notes on her tablet, "You're more than welcome to adopt slaves from our shelter." You swear she seems in much better spirits as she leaves your penthouse, even though she forgot to check her pussy.
+			The inspector asks some cursory questions and is shocked when $he responds. "$He came back?" _he2 mutters, "You restored $his mind, I can't believe it. This is incredible." _He2 carries on while writing notes on _his2 tablet, "You're more than welcome to adopt slaves from our shelter." You swear _he2 seems in much better spirits as _he2 leaves your penthouse, even though _he2 forgot to check $his pussy.
 			<<set $shelterAbuse -= 5>>
 		<</if>>
 	<<elseif _Inspectee.fetish == "mindbroken">>
-		Of course, the poor girl is mindbroken now. The inspector is horrified, though she tries to conceal it. She makes lengthy notes on her tablet, and almost runs out of the penthouse.
+		Of course, the poor girl is mindbroken now. The inspector is horrified, though _he2 tries to conceal it. _He2 makes lengthy notes on _his2 tablet, and almost runs out of the penthouse.
 		<<set $shelterAbuse += 5>>
 	<<elseif _Inspectee.trust < -20>>
-		She is sufficiently afraid of you that she tells the inspector whatever she thinks you'd want her to say. The inspector, experienced at this, is not amused. She offers you a few choice words, makes notes on her tablet, and storms out.
+		$He is sufficiently afraid of you that $he tells the inspector whatever $he thinks you'd want $him to say. The inspector, experienced at this, is not amused. _He2 offers you a few choice words, makes notes on _his2 tablet, and storms out.
 	<<elseif _Inspectee.devotion <= 20>>
-		She does not like you and isn't particularly terrified of you, so she is not flattering. She's not stupid enough to really criticize you, but she is honest and makes no effort to conceal troubling particulars. The inspector takes copious notes. She offers you a few choice words, makes notes on her tablet, and storms out.
+		$He does not like you and isn't particularly terrified of you, so $he is not flattering. $He's not stupid enough to really criticize you, but $he is honest and makes no effort to conceal troubling particulars. The inspector takes copious notes. _He2 offers you a few choice words, makes notes on _his2 tablet, and storms out.
 	<<elseif _Inspectee.anus > 2>>
-		She cooperates with the inspector, who pulls on a pair of latex gloves and performs a complete examination. When she pulls the girl's buttocks apart and probes the slave's asshole, she pulls her hand away as if scalded. "Oh my God," she says. "_Inspectee.birthName, what happened to your anus?"
+		$He cooperates with the inspector, who pulls on a pair of latex gloves and performs a complete examination. When _he2 pulls the $girl's buttocks apart and probes the slave's asshole, _he2 pulls _his2 hand away as if scalded. "Oh my God," _he2 says. "_Inspectee.birthName, what happened to your anus?"
 		<br><br>
 		<<if (_Inspectee.devotion < 10)>>
 			<<if (_Inspectee.buttplug == "large plug") || (_Inspectee.buttplug == "huge plug") || (_Inspectee.buttplug == "long, large plug") || (_Inspectee.buttplug == "long, huge plug")>>
-				"W-well," she says, "I wear a buttplug." The inspector frowns. "A buttplug shouldn't do that!" The slave looks worried and replies, "It'<<s>> kinda big? And I wear it all the time. B-but I like it! It d-doe<<s>>n't hurt. Well, anymore." The inspector is not amused. She offers you a few choice words, makes notes on her tablet, and storms out.
+				"W-well," $he says, "I wear a buttplug." The inspector frowns. "A buttplug shouldn't do that!" The slave looks worried and replies, "It'<<s>> kinda big? And I wear it all the time. B-but I like it! It d-doe<<s>>n't hurt. Well, anymore." The inspector is not amused. _He2 offers you a few choice words, makes notes on _his2 tablet, and storms out.
 			<<elseif (_Inspectee.assignment == "whore") || (_Inspectee.assignment == "work in the brothel") || (_Inspectee.assignment == "serve the public") || (_Inspectee.assignment == "serve in the club")>>
-				"W-well," she says, "I get fucked there at work." The inspector frowns. "How often!?" The slave looks worried and replies, "L-let me think. Four time<<s>> today? After the third time, it u<<s>>ually <<s>>top<<s>> clo<<s>>ing up again between cock<<s>>." The inspector is not amused. She offers you a few choice words, makes notes on her tablet, and storms out.
+				"W-well," $he says, "I get fucked there at work." The inspector frowns. "How often!?" The slave looks worried and replies, "L-let me think. Four time<<s>> today? After the third time, it u<<s>>ually <<s>>top<<s>> clo<<s>>ing up again between cock<<s>>." The inspector is not amused. _He2 offers you a few choice words, makes notes on _his2 tablet, and storms out.
 			<<elseif (_Inspectee.fetish == "buttslut") && (_Inspectee.fetishKnown == 1)>>
-				"Hey," she protests, "that'<<s>> normal." The inspector looks incredulous. "What!?" The slave looks insulted and replies, "I love anal <<s>>e<<x>>! Don't judge me. I want cock up that hole right now, you bitch. I'm going to beg for butt<<s>>e<<x>> the moment you leave." She defiantly sticks her rump out at you. The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on her tablet.
+				"Hey," $he protests, "that'<<s>> normal." The inspector looks incredulous. "What!?" The slave looks insulted and replies, "I love anal <<s>>e<<x>>! Don't judge me. I want cock up that hole right now, you bitch. I'm going to beg for butt<<s>>e<<x>> the moment you leave." $He defiantly sticks $his rump out at you. The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on _his2 tablet.
 				<<set $shelterAbuse -= 1>>
 			<<elseif (_Inspectee.energy > 95) && (_Inspectee.fetishKnown == 1)>>
-				"Hey," she protests, "that'<<s>> normal." The inspector looks incredulous. "What!?" The slave looks insulted and replies, "I love <<s>>e<<x>>! Don't judge me. I take cock in all my hole<<s>>, and I like it. I'm going to beg for butt<<s>>e<<x>> the moment you leave, you bitch." She defiantly sticks her rump out at you. The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on her tablet.
+				"Hey," $he protests, "that'<<s>> normal." The inspector looks incredulous. "What!?" The slave looks insulted and replies, "I love <<s>>e<<x>>! Don't judge me. I take cock in all my hole<<s>>, and I like it. I'm going to beg for butt<<s>>e<<x>> the moment you leave, you bitch." $He defiantly sticks $his rump out at you. The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on _his2 tablet.
 				<<set $shelterAbuse -= 1>>
 			<<else>>
-				"W-well," she says, "I'm a <<s>>lave." The inspector frowns. "What does that have to do with it?" The slave looks worried and replies, "I-it'<<s>> a hole, right? I get fucked in all my hole<<s>>." The inspector is not amused. She offers you a few choice words, makes notes on her tablet, and storms out.
+				"W-well," $he says, "I'm a <<s>>lave." The inspector frowns. "What does that have to do with it?" The slave looks worried and replies, "I-it'<<s>> a hole, right? I get fucked in all my hole<<s>>." The inspector is not amused. _He2 offers you a few choice words, makes notes on _his2 tablet, and storms out.
 			<</if>>
 		<<else>>
 			<<if (_Inspectee.buttplug == "large plug") || (_Inspectee.buttplug == "huge plug") || (_Inspectee.buttplug == "long, large plug") || (_Inspectee.buttplug == "long, huge plug")>>
-				"I wear a buttplug!" she says confidently. The inspector frowns. "A buttplug shouldn't do that!" The slave looks worried and replies, "It'<<s>> really big, and I wear it all the time. I like it! It keep<<s>> my hole ready for anything." The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on her tablet.
+				"I wear a buttplug!" $he says confidently. The inspector frowns. "A buttplug shouldn't do that!" The slave looks worried and replies, "It'<<s>> really big, and I wear it all the time. I like it! It keep<<s>> my hole ready for anything." The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on _his2 tablet.
 				<<set $shelterAbuse -= 1>>
 			<<elseif (_Inspectee.assignment == "whore") || (_Inspectee.assignment == "work in the brothel") || (_Inspectee.assignment == "serve the public") || (_Inspectee.assignment == "serve in the club")>>
-				"I get fucked there at work!" she says confidently. The inspector frowns. "How often!?" The slave thinks for a moment and replies, "Four time<<s>> today. After the third time, it u<<s>>ually <<s>>top<<s>> clo<<s>>ing up again between cock<<s>>. I'm good at my job!" The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on her tablet.
+				"I get fucked there at work!" $he says confidently. The inspector frowns. "How often!?" The slave thinks for a moment and replies, "Four time<<s>> today. After the third time, it u<<s>>ually <<s>>top<<s>> clo<<s>>ing up again between cock<<s>>. I'm good at my job!" The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on _his2 tablet.
 				<<set $shelterAbuse -= 1>>
 			<<elseif (_Inspectee.fetish == "buttslut") && (_Inspectee.fetishKnown == 1)>>
-				"Hey," she protests, "that'<<s>> normal." The inspector looks incredulous. "What!?" The slave looks insulted and replies, "I love anal <<s>>e<<x>>! Don't judge me. I want cock up that hole right now, you bitch. I'm going to beg for butt<<s>>e<<x>> the moment you leave." She defiantly sticks her rump out at you. The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on her tablet.
+				"Hey," $he protests, "that'<<s>> normal." The inspector looks incredulous. "What!?" The slave looks insulted and replies, "I love anal <<s>>e<<x>>! Don't judge me. I want cock up that hole right now, you bitch. I'm going to beg for butt<<s>>e<<x>> the moment you leave." $He defiantly sticks $his rump out at you. The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on _his2 tablet.
 				<<set $shelterAbuse -= 1>>
 			<<elseif (_Inspectee.energy > 95) && (_Inspectee.fetishKnown == 1)>>
-				"Hey," she protests, "that'<<s>> normal." The inspector looks incredulous. "What!?" The slave looks insulted and replies, "I love <<s>>e<<x>>! Don't judge me. I take cock in all my hole<<s>>, and I like it. I'm going to beg for butt<<s>>e<<x>> the moment you leave, you bitch." She defiantly sticks her rump out at you. The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on her tablet.
+				"Hey," $he protests, "that'<<s>> normal." The inspector looks incredulous. "What!?" The slave looks insulted and replies, "I love <<s>>e<<x>>! Don't judge me. I take cock in all my hole<<s>>, and I like it. I'm going to beg for butt<<s>>e<<x>> the moment you leave, you bitch." $He defiantly sticks $his rump out at you. The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on _his2 tablet.
 				<<set $shelterAbuse -= 1>>
 			<<else>>
-				"I'm a <<s>>lave," she says confidently. The inspector frowns. "What does that have to do with it?" The slave beams and replies, "It'<<s>> a hole. I'm a good girl, <<s>>o I get fucked in all my hole<<s>>." The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on her tablet.
+				"I'm a <<s>>lave," $he says confidently. The inspector frowns. "What does that have to do with it?" The slave beams and replies, "It'<<s>> a hole. I'm a good girl, <<s>>o I get fucked in all my hole<<s>>." The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on _his2 tablet.
 				<<set $shelterAbuse -= 1>>
 			<</if>>
 		<</if>>
@@ -413,25 +413,25 @@ Not waiting to be greeted, the inspector looks up at the nearest camera and dema
 		<<switch _Inspectee.assignment>>
 		<<case "whore" "work in the brothel">>
 			<<if (_Inspectee.fetishStrength > 95) || (_Inspectee.energy > 95)>>
-				_Inspectee.slaveName says happily, "I'm a whore!" The inspector makes a go-on gesture, and the slave continues, "It'<<s>> awe<<s>>ome. Nothing but cock, every day." The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on her tablet.
+				_Inspectee.slaveName says happily, "I'm a whore!" The inspector makes a go-on gesture, and the slave continues, "It'<<s>> awe<<s>>ome. Nothing but cock, every day." The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on _his2 tablet.
 				<<set $shelterAbuse -= 1>>
 			<<else>>
-				_Inspectee.slaveName says confidently, "I'm a whore!" The inspector makes a go-on gesture, and the slave continues, "It'<<s>> hard work <<s>>ometime<<s>>, but I'm okay. I'm much happier with my current owner, thank you." The inspector looks pleased, and says she'll put out a @@.green;good word@@ about you.
+				_Inspectee.slaveName says confidently, "I'm a whore!" The inspector makes a go-on gesture, and the slave continues, "It'<<s>> hard work <<s>>ometime<<s>>, but I'm okay. I'm much happier with my current owner, thank you." The inspector looks pleased, and says _he2'll put out a @@.green;good word@@ about you.
 				<<set $rep += 100>>
 				<<set $shelterAbuse -= 1>>
 			<</if>>
 		<<case "serve the public" "serve in the club">>
 			<<if (_Inspectee.fetishStrength > 95) || (_Inspectee.energy > 95)>>
-				_Inspectee.slaveName says happily, "I'm a <<s>>lut!" The inspector makes a go-on gesture, and the slave continues, "It'<<s>> awe<<s>>ome. Nothing but cute boy<<s>> and girl<<s>>, every day." The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on her tablet.
+				_Inspectee.slaveName says happily, "I'm a <<s>>lut!" The inspector makes a go-on gesture, and the slave continues, "It'<<s>> awe<<s>>ome. Nothing but cute boy<<s>> and girl<<s>>, every day." The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on _his2 tablet.
 				<<set $shelterAbuse -= 1>>
 			<<else>>
-				_Inspectee.slaveName says confidently, "I'm a <<s>>lut!" The inspector makes a go-on gesture, and the slave continues, "It'<<s>> not bad. I'm much happier with my current owner, thank you." The inspector looks pleased, and says she'll put out a @@.green;good word@@ about you.
+				_Inspectee.slaveName says confidently, "I'm a <<s>>lut!" The inspector makes a go-on gesture, and the slave continues, "It'<<s>> not bad. I'm much happier with my current owner, thank you." The inspector looks pleased, and says _he2'll put out a @@.green;good word@@ about you.
 				<<set $rep += 100>>
 				<<set $shelterAbuse -= 1>>
 			<</if>>
 		<<case "get milked" "work in the dairy">>
 			<<if _Inspectee.lactation > 0>>
-				_Inspectee.slaveName says happily, "I'm a milk cow!" The inspector arches an eyebrow skeptically, and the slave continues, "I give milk. <<s>>ee?" She expresses a squirt of milk from one nipple. It'<<s>> a ni<<c>>e life. I'm much happier with my current owner, thank you." The inspector looks pleased, and says she'll put out a @@.green;good word@@ about you.
+				_Inspectee.slaveName says happily, "I'm a milk cow!" The inspector arches an eyebrow skeptically, and the slave continues, "I give milk. <<s>>ee?" $He expresses a squirt of milk from one nipple. It'<<s>> a ni<<c>>e life. I'm much happier with my current owner, thank you." The inspector looks pleased, and says _he2'll put out a @@.green;good word@@ about you.
 				<<set $rep += 100>>
 				<<set $shelterAbuse -= 1>>
 			<<else>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/reStaffedMorning.tw b/src/uncategorized/reStaffedMorning.tw
index 9f6c28a5fca7b4893371a8c75339114a389c6099..c982953f81fad5072a74161784a55f3282478662 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/reStaffedMorning.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/reStaffedMorning.tw
@@ -6,14 +6,17 @@
 	<<goto "RIE Eligibility Check">>
 <<else>>
 <<set _bedSlaves = _bedSlaves.shuffle()>>
+<<setLocalPronouns _bedSlaves[0]>>
+<<setLocalPronouns _bedSlaves[1] 2>>
+<<setPlayerPronouns>>
 
 Sleep leaves you quickly one morning to the sensation of two of your fucktoys performing human alarm clock duty. You open your eyes and look down: it's _bedSlaves[0].slaveName and _bedSlaves[1].slaveName today.
 <<if $PC.dick == 1>>
-	_bedSlaves[0].slaveName is <<if (_bedSlaves[0].fetish == "cumslut") && (_bedSlaves[0].fetishKnown == 1)>>rapturously<<else>>industriously<</if>> sucking your dick as it rapidly hardens in her mouth<<if $PC.vagina == 1>>, occasionally letting it pop free so she can run her tongue up and down your cunt<</if>>.
+	_bedSlaves[0].slaveName is <<if (_bedSlaves[0].fetish == "cumslut") && (_bedSlaves[0].fetishKnown == 1)>>rapturously<<else>>industriously<</if>> sucking your dick as it rapidly hardens in $his mouth<<if $PC.vagina == 1>>, occasionally letting it pop free so $he can run $his tongue up and down your cunt<</if>>.
 	Meanwhile, _bedSlaves[1].slaveName is <<if (_bedSlaves[1].fetish == "cumslut") && (_bedSlaves[1].fetishKnown == 1)>>hungrily<<else>>gently<</if>> sucking your nuts.
 	The two slaves have crowded close together, and not just so they can both have access to your cock and balls. They're <<if (_bedSlaves[0].dick > 0) && (_bedSlaves[1].dick > 0)>>jerking each other off<<else>>manually stimulating each other<</if>> as they work.
 <<else>>
-	An absolutely wonderful melange of sensations rises to meet you. Each slave is gently sucking one of your hardening nipples, and one hand from each slave is moving delicately across your womanhood, kindling a fire in your lower belly. They're cuddled up closely under your arms, with a warm body pressed against each side of you. You can feel their soft breasts against your ribcage and the heat between their legs against your thighs. You feel absolutely buried in attentive slave.
+	An absolutely wonderful mélange of sensations rises to meet you. Each slave is gently sucking one of your hardening nipples, and one hand from each slave is moving delicately across your womanhood, kindling a fire in your lower belly. They're cuddled up closely under your arms, with a warm body pressed against each side of you. You can feel their <<if (_bedSlaves[0].boobs > 300) && (_bedSlaves[1].boobs > 300)>>soft breasts<<else>>steady breathing<</if>> against your ribcage and the heat between their legs against your thighs. You feel absolutely buried in attentive slave.
 <</if>>
 
 The bathroom door is open and the shower is running. Though the steam is beginning to fill the glass-walled shower, you can see a pair of naked bodies in there; that would be _bedSlaves[2].slaveName and _bedSlaves[3].slaveName, ready to attend you as you bathe.
@@ -29,18 +32,22 @@ The bathroom door is open and the shower is running. Though the steam is beginni
 		You reach down and run a possessive hand across each slave's scalp, neck, and back, eliciting shivers. Then, you gently hook them under the armpits and pull them up a bit, without breaking their lip locks with your nipples, or forcing them to stop playing with your cunt. Each slave ends curled up, mostly face-down, with their mouths still sucking on your <<if $PC.boobs == 1>>boobs<<else>>chest<</if>> and their free hands trapped between their legs. They get the message and begin to look after themselves, too; their resultant moaning against your nipples grows when you reach down and start teasing their butts. The three of you climax more or less together, and you bounce up with undiminished arousal to enjoy your shower.
 	<</if>>
 	<br><br>
+	<<setLocalPronouns _bedSlaves[2]>>
+	<<setLocalPronouns _bedSlaves[3] 2>>
 	By now, the shower is an impenetrable fog of steam. The wet, soapy bodies inside are easy to find, though. _bedSlaves[2].slaveName happens to be closest, so you
 	<<if $PC.dick == 1>>
-		kiss her laughing mouth hard and fuck her with her back against the shower wall<<if _bedSlaves[2].boobs > 2000>>, her huge soapy tits sliding around deliciously<</if>>. She does her best to soap your front while she takes cock, and _bedSlaves[3].slaveName washes your back<<if $PC.vagina == 1>>, reaching under your butt to tease your pussy<</if>>. After a short while, you set her down and seize _bedSlaves[3].slaveName, sliding your cock <<if _bedSlaves[3].butt > 4>>between her huge buttocks and<</if>> up her willing ass, taking her from behind while _bedSlaves[2].slaveName does her best to get her wits back and take over washing duty. They towel you together, and you head back out of the bathroom.
+		kiss $his laughing mouth hard and fuck $him with $his back against the shower wall<<if _bedSlaves[2].boobs > 2000>>, $his huge soapy tits sliding around deliciously<</if>>. $He does $his best to soap your front while $he takes cock, and _bedSlaves[3].slaveName washes your back<<if $PC.vagina == 1>>, reaching under your butt to tease your pussy<</if>>. After a short while, you set $him down and seize _bedSlaves[3].slaveName, sliding your cock <<if _bedSlaves[3].butt > 4>>between _his2 huge buttocks and<</if>> up _his2 willing ass, taking _him2 from behind while _bedSlaves[2].slaveName does $his best to get $his wits back and take over washing duty. They towel you together, and you head back out of the bathroom.
 	<<else>>
-		kiss her laughing mouth hard and trib her with her back against the shower wall<<if _bedSlaves[2].boobs > 2000>>, her huge soapy tits sliding around deliciously<</if>>. She does her best to soap your front while you hump her thigh<<if _bedSlaves[2].vagina > -1>> and pussy<</if>>, and _bedSlaves[3].slaveName washes your back. After a short while, you set her down and seize _bedSlaves[3].slaveName, pushing her face against the wall and sliding your fingers inside her while you straddle one of her legs. _bedSlaves[2].slaveName does her best to get her wits back and take over washing duty. They towel you together, and you head back out of the bathroom.
+		kiss $his laughing mouth hard and trib $him with $his back against the shower wall<<if _bedSlaves[2].boobs > 2000>>, $his huge soapy tits sliding around deliciously<</if>>. $He does $his best to soap your front while you hump $his thigh<<if _bedSlaves[2].vagina > -1>> and pussy<</if>>, and _bedSlaves[3].slaveName washes your back. After a short while, you set $him down and seize _bedSlaves[3].slaveName, pushing _his2 face against the wall and sliding your fingers inside _him2 while you straddle one of _his2 legs. _bedSlaves[2].slaveName does $his best to get $his wits back and take over washing duty. They towel you together, and you head back out of the bathroom.
 	<</if>>
 	<br><br>
+	<<setLocalPronouns _bedSlaves[0]>>
+	<<setLocalPronouns _bedSlaves[1] 2>>
 	Your clothes have been laid out, ready for _bedSlaves[0].slaveName and _bedSlaves[1].slaveName to dress you, but
 	<<if $PC.dick == 1>>
-		next to the neat stack of clothes, the two slaves are bent over the bed with their buttocks spread. You select _bedSlaves[1].slaveName and slide your dick up her <<if _bedSlaves[1].anus > 2>>welcoming asspussy<<elseif _bedSlaves[1].anus > 1>>soft butthole<<else>>tight anus<</if>>, sodomizing her while _bedSlaves[0].slaveName buttons your shirt. When it's done, you push her down next to _bedSlaves[1].slaveName and switch assholes, letting _bedSlaves[1].slaveName up to do her best to help you into your trousers in the meantime. She gets them on and fastens everything, except the fly, of course.
+		next to the neat stack of clothes, the two slaves are bent over the bed with their buttocks spread. You select _bedSlaves[1].slaveName and slide your dick up _his2 <<if _bedSlaves[1].anus > 2>>welcoming asspussy<<elseif _bedSlaves[1].anus > 1>>soft butthole<<else>>tight anus<</if>>, sodomizing _him2 while _bedSlaves[0].slaveName buttons your shirt. When it's done, you push $him down next to _bedSlaves[1].slaveName and switch assholes, letting _bedSlaves[1].slaveName up to do _his2 best to help you into your trousers in the meantime. _He2 gets them on and fastens everything, except the fly, of course.
 	<<else>>
-		next to the neat stack of clothes, the two slaves are kneeling on the floor and looking at you with mock innocence. You select _bedSlaves[1].slaveName and straddle her face, letting her<<if _bedSlaves[1].lips > 0>> use her big soft lips to<</if>> eat you out while _bedSlaves[0].slaveName helps you into your top. When you're buttoned, you take her face in your hands and kiss her deeply, favoring her with the sensation of kissing her <<if def $PC.customTitle>>$PC.customTitle<<elseif $PC.title == 1>>Master while he<<else>>Mistress while she<</if>> orgasms. You keep making out with her while _bedSlaves[1].slaveName dresses your lower half.
+		next to the neat stack of clothes, the two slaves are kneeling on the floor and looking at you with mock innocence. You select _bedSlaves[1].slaveName and straddle _his2 face, letting _him2<<if _bedSlaves[1].lips > 0>> use _his2 big soft lips to<</if>> eat you out while _bedSlaves[0].slaveName helps you into your top. When you're buttoned, you take $his face in your hands and kiss $him deeply, favoring $him with the sensation of kissing $his <<= WrittenMaster(_bedSlaves[0])>> while _heP orgasms. You keep making out with $him while _bedSlaves[1].slaveName dresses your lower half.
 	<</if>>
 	When you finally leave the suite, _bedSlaves[0].slaveName and _bedSlaves[1].slaveName head into the shower for their turn, while _bedSlaves[2].slaveName and _bedSlaves[3].slaveName have finished drying each other off so they can have sex on the bed without getting the sheets wet. They pause for a moment to wave at you as you go, though. @@.mediumaquamarine;Your fucktoys are very satisfied with their morning routine.@@
 	<<set $slaves.forEach(function(s) { if ([_bedSlaves[0].ID, _bedSlaves[1].ID, _bedSlaves[2].ID, _bedSlaves[3].ID].includes(s.ID)) { s.trust += 4, s.analCount += 1, s.oralCount += 1; } })>>
@@ -50,28 +57,32 @@ The bathroom door is open and the shower is running. Though the steam is beginni
 <br><<link "Leave them exhausted">>
 <<replace "#result">>
 	<<if $PC.dick == 1>>
-		_bedSlaves[0].slaveName feels a hand snake behind her head and relaxes her throat, knowing what's coming. You fuck the bitch's mouth hard, and since the pounding pulls your balls out of _bedSlaves[1].slaveName's mouth, you yank her up towards you so you can maul her breasts. The compliant slave thrusts out her chest, presenting her tits for use as toys, and then gasps as you pinch, squeeze, and twist. You blow your load down _bedSlaves[0].slaveName's throat
+		_bedSlaves[0].slaveName feels a hand snake behind $his head and relaxes $his throat, knowing what's coming. You fuck the bitch's mouth hard, and since the pounding pulls your balls out of _bedSlaves[1].slaveName's mouth, you yank _him2 up towards you so you can maul _his2 breasts. The compliant slave thrusts out _his2 chest, presenting _his2 tits for use as toys, and then gasps as you pinch, squeeze, and twist. You blow your load down _bedSlaves[0].slaveName's throat
 	<<else>>
-		You shove _bedSlaves[0].slaveName down towards your pussy and grab her hair. She takes a deep breath, knowing what's coming. You grind your cunt against the bitch's mouth hard, and since there's no room for _bedSlaves[1].slaveName's hand there any more, you yank her up towards you so you can maul her breasts. The compliant slave thrusts out her chest, presenting her tits for use as toys, and then gasps as you pinch, squeeze, and twist. You climax against _bedSlaves[0].slaveName's face
+		You shove _bedSlaves[0].slaveName down towards your pussy and grab $his hair. $He takes a deep breath, knowing what's coming. You grind your cunt against the bitch's mouth hard, and since there's no room for _bedSlaves[1].slaveName's hand there any more, you yank _him2 up towards you so you can maul _his2 breasts. The compliant slave thrusts out _his2 chest, presenting _his2 tits for use as toys, and then gasps as you pinch, squeeze, and twist. You climax against _bedSlaves[0].slaveName's face
 	<</if>>
 	and bounce up to fuck bitches in the shower, knocking _bedSlaves[0].slaveName to the floor and sending _bedSlaves[1].slaveName sprawling. As you go, you tell them they've got ten minutes to get your clothes laid out and their buttholes ready. They nod furiously and scramble.
 	<br><br>
+	<<setLocalPronouns _bedSlaves[2]>>
+	<<setLocalPronouns _bedSlaves[3] 2>>
 	By now, the shower is an impenetrable fog of steam. The wet, soapy bodies inside are easy to find, though. _bedSlaves[2].slaveName happens to be closest, so you
 	<<if $PC.dick == 1>>
-		grab her and shove her into a corner of the shower<<if _bedSlaves[2].boobs > 2000>>, her huge soapy tits slapping painfully against the glass<</if>>. She does her best to angle her hips for you as you push your cock up her ass and give her a good hard reaming. _bedSlaves[3].slaveName does her best to wash your back<<if $PC.vagina == 1>> and give your pussy some manual attention<</if>>, but finds herself taking _bedSlaves[2].slaveName's place soon enough, smashed into the corner with your dick pistoning in and out of her rectum.
+		grab $him and shove $him into a corner of the shower<<if _bedSlaves[2].boobs > 2000>>, $his huge soapy tits slapping painfully against the glass<</if>>. $He does $his best to angle $his hips for you as you push your cock up $his ass and give $him a good hard reaming. _bedSlaves[3].slaveName does _his2 best to wash your back<<if $PC.vagina == 1>> and give your pussy some manual attention<</if>>, but finds _himself2 taking _bedSlaves[2].slaveName's place soon enough, smashed into the corner with your dick pistoning in and out of _his2 rectum.
 	<<else>>
-		grab her and shove her into a corner of the shower<<if _bedSlaves[2].boobs > 2000>>, her huge soapy tits slapping painfully against the glass<</if>>. She does her best to angle her hips for you as you fingerfuck her butthole, forcing complete submission out of the compliant girl. _bedSlaves[3].slaveName does her best to wash your back, but finds herself taking _bedSlaves[2].slaveName's place soon enough, smashed into the corner with your fingers pistoning in and out of her rectum.
+		grab $him and shove $him into a corner of the shower<<if _bedSlaves[2].boobs > 2000>>, $his huge soapy tits slapping painfully against the glass<</if>>. $He does $his best to angle $his hips for you as you fingerfuck $his butthole, forcing complete submission out of the compliant $girl. _bedSlaves[3].slaveName does _his2 best to wash your back, but finds _himself2 taking _bedSlaves[2].slaveName's place soon enough, smashed into the corner with your fingers pistoning in and out of _his2 rectum.
 	<</if>>
 	You're in a hurry, but it'll be a sad day when you aren't able to assrape a slave into total submission in five minutes. You drop _bedSlaves[3].slaveName on the shower floor and let _bedSlaves[2].slaveName towel you off.
 	<<if $PC.dick == 0>>
-		_bedSlaves[3].slaveName gets to her feet and helpfully holds up a strap-on questioningly; you shake your head and point to another, larger one. She helps you into it, and you ram it up her loosened ass experimentally, nodding in satisfaction when the big phallus forces a pained gasp out of her.
+		_bedSlaves[3].slaveName gets to _his2 feet and helpfully holds up a strap-on questioningly; you shake your head and point to another, larger one. _He2 helps you into it, and you ram it up _his2 loosened ass experimentally, nodding in satisfaction when the big phallus forces a pained gasp out of _him2.
 	<</if>>
 	<br><br>
+	<<setLocalPronouns _bedSlaves[0]>>
+	<<setLocalPronouns _bedSlaves[1] 2>>
 	Back in the bedroom, your clothes have been laid out, ready for _bedSlaves[0].slaveName and _bedSlaves[1].slaveName to dress you.
 	<<if $PC.dick == 1>>
-		Next to the neat stack of clothes, the two slaves are bent over the bed with their buttocks spread. They're perfectly still, awaiting your pleasure. You select _bedSlaves[1].slaveName and ram your dick up her <<if _bedSlaves[1].anus > 2>>welcoming asspussy<<elseif _bedSlaves[1].anus > 1>>soft butthole<<else>>tight anus<</if>>, assraping her without mercy while _bedSlaves[0].slaveName buttons your shirt. When it's done, you push her down next to _bedSlaves[1].slaveName and switch assholes, letting _bedSlaves[1].slaveName up to do her best to help you into your trousers in the meantime. She gets them on and fastens everything, except the fly, of course. When _bedSlaves[0].slaveName has been buttfucked into helplessness, you throw her away her like the human sex toy she is and pound _bedSlaves[1].slaveName and then the dried-off _bedSlaves[3].slaveName and _bedSlaves[2].slaveName senseless, careful to frequently pull far enough out that the slaves have to take the pain of initial penetration again.
+		Next to the neat stack of clothes, the two slaves are bent over the bed with their buttocks spread. They're perfectly still, awaiting your pleasure. You select _bedSlaves[1].slaveName and ram your dick up _his2 <<if _bedSlaves[1].anus > 2>>welcoming asspussy<<elseif _bedSlaves[1].anus > 1>>soft butthole<<else>>tight anus<</if>>, assraping _him2 without mercy while _bedSlaves[0].slaveName buttons your shirt. When it's done, you push $him down next to _bedSlaves[1].slaveName and switch assholes, letting _bedSlaves[1].slaveName up to do _his2 best to help you into your trousers in the meantime. _He2 gets them on and fastens everything, except the fly, of course. When _bedSlaves[0].slaveName has been buttfucked into helplessness, you throw $him away like the human sex toy $he is and pound _bedSlaves[1].slaveName and then the dried-off _bedSlaves[3].slaveName and _bedSlaves[2].slaveName senseless, careful to frequently pull far enough out that the slaves have to take the pain of initial penetration again.
 	<<else>>
-		Next to the neat stack of clothes, the two slaves are bent over the bed with their buttocks spread. They're perfectly still, awaiting your pleasure. You select _bedSlaves[1].slaveName and ram your strap-on up her <<if _bedSlaves[1].anus > 2>>welcoming asspussy<<elseif _bedSlaves[1].anus > 1>>soft butthole<<else>>tight anus<</if>>, assraping her without mercy while _bedSlaves[0].slaveName helps you into your top. When it's done, you push her down next to _bedSlaves[1].slaveName and switch assholes, letting _bedSlaves[1].slaveName up to do her best to dress your lower half. When _bedSlaves[0].slaveName has been buttfucked into helplessness, you throw her away like the human sex toy she is and pound _bedSlaves[1].slaveName and then the dried-off _bedSlaves[3].slaveName and _bedSlaves[2].slaveName senseless, careful to frequently pull far enough out that the slaves have to take the pain of initial penetration again.
+		Next to the neat stack of clothes, the two slaves are bent over the bed with their buttocks spread. They're perfectly still, awaiting your pleasure. You select _bedSlaves[1].slaveName and ram your strap-on up _his2 <<if _bedSlaves[1].anus > 2>>welcoming asspussy<<elseif _bedSlaves[1].anus > 1>>soft butthole<<else>>tight anus<</if>>, assraping _him2 without mercy while _bedSlaves[0].slaveName helps you into your top. When it's done, you push $him down next to _bedSlaves[1].slaveName and switch assholes, letting _bedSlaves[1].slaveName up to do _his2 best to dress your lower half. When _bedSlaves[0].slaveName has been buttfucked into helplessness, you throw $him away like the human sex toy $he is and pound _bedSlaves[1].slaveName and then the dried-off _bedSlaves[3].slaveName and _bedSlaves[2].slaveName senseless, careful to frequently pull far enough out that the slaves have to take the pain of initial penetration again.
 	<</if>>
 	When you finally leave the suite, all four slaves are lying like discarded tissues on the bed, face-down with their buttocks spread to relieve their sore assholes. @@.hotpink;Your fucktoys are reminded of who you are.@@
 	<<set $slaves.forEach(function(s) { if ([_bedSlaves[0].ID, _bedSlaves[1].ID, _bedSlaves[2].ID, _bedSlaves[3].ID].includes(s.ID)) { s.devotion += 4, s.analCount += 1, s.oralCount += 1; } })>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/recETS.tw b/src/uncategorized/recETS.tw
index ad0e89f866603029bb869d06ff35b37a7e561e3c..d8c5e57b202a448a0c3e583898ee13885710f3c2 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/recETS.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/recETS.tw
@@ -1568,13 +1568,13 @@ A pair of young slaves is going door to door offering themselves for sale on beh
 
 They pull themselves together, bringing their gravid middles in tight contact with one another.
 
-One of them speaks up. "We're twins, <<if $PC.title != 0>>Sir<<else>>Ma'am<</if>>. Identical twins. "We've also been trained <<if ($activeSlave.actualAge > $minimumSlaveAge)>>ever since we turned $minimumSlaveAge<</if>> to be completely obedient, <<if $PC.title != 0>>Sir<<else>>Ma'am<</if>>, in everything, and sexually proficient."
+One of them speaks up. "We're twins, <<= properTitle()>>. Identical twins. "We've also been trained <<if ($activeSlave.actualAge > $minimumSlaveAge)>>ever since we turned $minimumSlaveAge<</if>> to be completely obedient, <<= properTitle()>>, in everything, and sexually proficient."
 
 The other blurts out. "But we kinda got too into each other, in more ways than one!" _He2 winks.
 
 <br><br>
 
-"We cost <<print cashFormat($contractCost)>>, <<if $PC.title != 0>>Sir<<else>>Ma'am<</if>>."
+"We cost <<print cashFormat($contractCost)>>, <<= properTitle()>>."
 
 <br><br>
 
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/remoteSurgery.tw b/src/uncategorized/remoteSurgery.tw
index c699fb4784015acbb9c5f65c67bbfebf6bf1b7cb..81736fe9a7c69386e3e018d48c5872a97a3d53e3 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/remoteSurgery.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/remoteSurgery.tw
@@ -1418,7 +1418,7 @@ Work on $him structurally:
 <</if>>
 <<if ($activeSlave.heels == 0) && ($seeExtreme == 1)>>
 	<<if $activeSlave.indentureRestrictions < 1>>
-	[[Shorten tendons|Surgery Degradation][$activeSlave.heels = 1,$activeSlave.shoes = "heels",$cash -= $surgeryCost, $activeSlave.health -= 20,$surgeryType = "heels"]] //Prevents $his from walking in anything but very high heels//
+	[[Shorten tendons|Surgery Degradation][$activeSlave.heels = 1,$activeSlave.shoes = "heels",$cash -= $surgeryCost, $activeSlave.health -= 20,$surgeryType = "heels"]] //Prevents $him from walking in anything but very high heels//
 	<</if>>
 <</if>>
 <<if ($activeSlave.heels == 1)>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/saLongTermEffects.tw b/src/uncategorized/saLongTermEffects.tw
index 7b25a89ebd85c5db6f4222e9ea8a6bdf29000a27..afb4ba8939d214e6da5d0c5f7b4d7749e41b54f2 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/saLongTermEffects.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/saLongTermEffects.tw
@@ -4827,7 +4827,7 @@
 				Society @@.green;approves@@ of $slaves[$i].slaveName's commitment to fitness; but thinks $his muscles are too big and vascular.
 				<<= FSChangePorn("PhysicalIdealist", 1)>>
 			<<elseif ($slaves[$i].muscles > 20)>>
-				Society @@.green;strongly approves@@ of $slaves[$i].slaveName's fit body; physical enthusiasts see $his as the optimal example of feminine fitness.
+				Society @@.green;strongly approves@@ of $slaves[$i].slaveName's fit body; physical enthusiasts see $him as the optimal example of feminine fitness.
 				<<= FSChangePorn("PhysicalIdealist", 2)>>
 			<<elseif ($slaves[$i].muscles > 5)>>
 				Society @@.green;approves@@ of $slaves[$i].slaveName's toned form; the public sees potential in those guns.
@@ -4838,7 +4838,7 @@
 				Society @@.green;strongly approves@@ of $slaves[$i].slaveName's glorious muscles; everyone wants to train a slave to look as swole as $him.
 				<<= FSChangePorn("PhysicalIdealist", 2)>>
 			<<elseif ($slaves[$i].muscles > 30)>>
-				Society @@.green;approves@@ of $slaves[$i].slaveName's fit body; physical enthusiasts see $his as on $his way to something great.
+				Society @@.green;approves@@ of $slaves[$i].slaveName's fit body; physical enthusiasts see $him as on $his way to something great.
 				<<= FSChangePorn("PhysicalIdealist", 1)>>
 			<<elseif ($slaves[$i].muscles > 5)>>
 				Society @@.green;approves@@ of $slaves[$i].slaveName's toned form; the public sees potential in those guns.
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/saPleaseYou.tw b/src/uncategorized/saPleaseYou.tw
index dc6cfe2cc560817869a7414033fa86f938381543..1d5da7464515d0b896412e3224884d436d030b9e 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/saPleaseYou.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/saPleaseYou.tw
@@ -710,7 +710,7 @@ serves you this week.
 					on occasion;
 					<<set $slaves[$i].devotion -= 3, $slaves[$i].trust += 3>>
 				<</if>>
-				getting to dominantly fuck $his '<<= WrittenMaster($slaves[$i])>>' @@.mediumorchid;builds $his self-confidence,@@ yet @@.mediumaquamarine;makes $his more trusting@@ of you.
+				getting to dominantly fuck $his '<<= WrittenMaster($slaves[$i])>>' @@.mediumorchid;builds $his self-confidence,@@ yet @@.mediumaquamarine;makes $him more trusting@@ of you.
 			<<else>>
 				<<if ($fuckSlaves <= $PC.sexualEnergy/2)>>
 					<<set _penetrativeUse = random(21,40)>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/surgeryDegradation.tw b/src/uncategorized/surgeryDegradation.tw
index 93d82eb6242cd632495c0feb17d6d03b366d0357..91f508829dba999eb49dbec51610e8030a6d76bf 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/surgeryDegradation.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/surgeryDegradation.tw
@@ -2392,7 +2392,7 @@ As the remote surgery's long recovery cycle completes,
 				$He is @@.hotpink;turned on@@ by how humiliating this is for $him and @@.mediumaquamarine;can't wait@@ for the next time you decide to show $him off.
 				<<set $activeSlave.trust += 5, $activeSlave.devotion += 5>>
 			<<else>>
-				$He is very devoted to you so $his new condition doesn't affect $his as much as it would other slaves.
+				$He is very devoted to you so $his new condition doesn't affect $him as much as it would other slaves.
 			<</if>>
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.devotion >= -20>>
 			<<if ($activeSlave.fetish == "humiliation") && ($activeSlave.fetishStrength > 50)>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/walkPast.tw b/src/uncategorized/walkPast.tw
index 8716011a655bfb8840a4788cdbaec7fb684cb160..c1b320c683b1510e9bb48e679408b2bbb7ab9581 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/walkPast.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/walkPast.tw
@@ -116,7 +116,7 @@
 			<<if (_partnerSlave.dick > 1) && canPenetrate(_partnerSlave)>>
 				_his2 cock up the butt.
 				<<if ($activeSlave.anus > 2) && (_partnerSlave.dick > 2)>>
-					$activeSlave.slaveName is clearly enjoying getting buttfucked by a cock big enough to make $his feel tight again.
+					$activeSlave.slaveName is clearly enjoying getting buttfucked by a cock big enough to make $him feel tight again.
 				<<elseif ($activeSlave.anus > 2) && (_partnerSlave.dick > 1)>>
 					$activeSlave.slaveName's gaping ass takes _partnerSlave.slaveName's cock easily.
 				<<elseif ($activeSlave.anus > 2)>>
@@ -3739,7 +3739,7 @@
 		<<case "a mini dress">>
 			$His stretched minidress shows every jiggle in $his fat gut as $he moves.
 		<<case "a monokini">>
-			$His fat gut bulges out $his monokini, which stops $his from jiggling as $he moves.
+			$His fat gut bulges out $his monokini, which stops $him from jiggling as $he moves.
 		<<case "an apron">>
 			$His apron provides some covering to the jiggling of $his fat gut.
 		<<case "a cybersuit">>
diff --git a/src/utility/descriptionWidgetsFlesh.tw b/src/utility/descriptionWidgetsFlesh.tw
index 9d3ef81f9db04488b117ae46d58bfcad8792a08e..80bb9e86956f7f8ae17c30a5951505191f382203 100644
--- a/src/utility/descriptionWidgetsFlesh.tw
+++ b/src/utility/descriptionWidgetsFlesh.tw
@@ -277,7 +277,7 @@
 				<<elseif $activeSlave.boobs > 4000>>
 					is strongly engineered, but it can barely support $his enormous bust.
 				<<elseif $activeSlave.boobs > 800>>
-					gives $his an acre of cleavage.
+					gives $him an acre of cleavage.
 				<<elseif $activeSlave.boobs < 300>>
 					tightly clings to $his flat chest, prominently displaying $his $activeSlave.nipples nipples.
 				<<else>>
@@ -1134,7 +1134,7 @@ $His
 				<<elseif $activeSlave.muscles > 5>>
 					$He requires assistance to get to $his feet, and uses a stand to support them when $he must remain upright for more than a short time.
 				<<elseif ($activeSlave.assignment == "work in the dairy") && ($dairyRestraintsSetting > 1) && ($activeSlave.boobs > 5100+($activeSlave.muscles*100))>>
-					The straps that secure $him to the milking machine have become less necessary since $his breasts grew to the point where they pin $his to it.
+					The straps that secure $him to the milking machine have become less necessary since $his breasts grew to the point where they pin $him to it.
 				<<else>>
 					$He cannot get to $his feet unaided, and uses a wheeled stand to support $his boobs when $he must walk or remain upright.
 				<</if>>
@@ -1198,7 +1198,7 @@ $His
 				<<elseif $activeSlave.muscles > 5>>
 					$He requires assistance to get to $his feet, and uses a stand to support them when $he must remain upright for more than a short time.
 				<<elseif ($activeSlave.assignment == "work in the dairy") && ($dairyRestraintsSetting > 1) && ($activeSlave.boobs > 9000+($activeSlave.muscles*500))>>
-					The straps that secure $him to the milking machine have become less necessary since $his breasts grew to the point where they pin $his to it.
+					The straps that secure $him to the milking machine have become less necessary since $his breasts grew to the point where they pin $him to it.
 				<<else>>
 					$He cannot get to $his feet unaided, and uses a wheeled stand to support $his boobs when $he must walk or remain upright.
 				<</if>>
@@ -2336,17 +2336,17 @@ $He's got a
 <<elseif $activeSlave.butt <= 7>><<print either("gigantic", "titanic")>> ass.
 <<elseif $activeSlave.butt <= 10>><<print either("gigantic", "titanic")>> ass.
 	<<if ($activeSlave.assignment == "work in the dairy") && ($dairyStimulatorsSetting > 1)>> It's so big it jiggles as the machine rapes $his asshole.
-	<<elseif !canWalk($activeSlave)>> It's so big it would jiggle as $he walked - if $he could walk.
+	<<elseif !canWalk($activeSlave)>> It's so big it would jiggle as $he walked — if $he could walk.
 	<<else>> It's so big it jiggles as $he walks.
 	<</if>>
 <<elseif $activeSlave.butt <= 14>><<print either("cushion-like", "hall-crowding")>> ass.
 	<<if ($activeSlave.assignment == "work in the dairy") && ($dairyStimulatorsSetting > 1)>> It's so big it massively jiggles as the machine rapes $his asshole.
-	<<elseif !canWalk($activeSlave)>> It's so big it would jiggle nonstop as $he walked - if $he could walk.
+	<<elseif !canWalk($activeSlave)>> It's so big it would jiggle nonstop as $he walked — if $he could walk.
 	<<else>> It's so big it jiggles nonstop as $he walks.
 	<</if>>
 <<else>><<print either("bean bag sized", "room-crowding")>> ass.
 	<<if ($activeSlave.assignment == "work in the dairy") && ($dairyStimulatorsSetting > 1)>> It's so massive it jiggles endlessly as the machine rapes $his asshole.
-	<<elseif !canWalk($activeSlave)>> It's so massive it would jiggle endlessly as $he walked - if $he could walk.
+	<<elseif !canWalk($activeSlave)>> It's so massive it would jiggle endlessly as $he walked — if $he could walk.
 	<<else>> It's so massive it jiggles endlessly as $he walks.
 	<</if>>
 <</if>>
@@ -2709,7 +2709,7 @@ $He's got a
 			<</if>>
 		<<case "chains">>
 			<<if $activeSlave.dick > 0>>
-				$activeSlave.slaveName has chain dangling from around $his waist to end next to $his cock, so that when $he moves, it occasionally strikes $his in the dick.
+				$activeSlave.slaveName has chain dangling from around $his waist to end next to $his cock, so that when $he moves, it occasionally strikes $him in the dick.
 			<<elseif $activeSlave.vagina == -1>>
 				$activeSlave.slaveName's chains leave $his featureless groin bare; there's nothing there to restrain.
 			<<else>>
@@ -2987,7 +2987,7 @@ $He's got a
 			<<elseif $activeSlave.dick > 0>>
 				cheerleader skirt hides $his dick reasonably well as long as $he stands still.
 			<<elseif $activeSlave.vagina == -1>>
-				cheerleader skirt hides $his the featurelessness of $his groin.
+				cheerleader skirt hides the featurelessness of $his groin.
 			<<else>>
 				cheerleader skirt often flips up to reveal $his bare pussy.
 			<</if>>
@@ -4378,7 +4378,7 @@ $He's got a
 			$He's got a string of precum dangling from the hole; $his artificially hyperactive prostate keeps $him that way.
 		<</if>>
 		<<if ($activeSlave.aphrodisiacs > 0) || ($activeSlave.inflationType == "aphrodisiac")>>
-			The aphrodisiacs have $his so horny that there's a <<if $activeSlave.prostate > 1>>constant flow of precum leaking from<<else>>little precum beading at<</if>> the hole.
+			The aphrodisiacs have $him so horny that there's a <<if $activeSlave.prostate > 1>>constant flow of precum leaking from<<else>>little precum beading at<</if>> the hole.
 		<<elseif ($activeSlave.energy > 95)>>
 			As a nympho, $he's almost always got a <<if $activeSlave.prostate > 1>>constant flow of precum leaking from<<else>>little bead of precum forming at<</if>> the hole.
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.fetishKnown == 0>>
@@ -4609,7 +4609,7 @@ $He's got a
 			$He's got a string of precum dangling from the hole and down $his testicles; $his artificially hyperactive prostate keeps $him that way.
 		<</if>>
 		<<if ($activeSlave.aphrodisiacs > 0) || ($activeSlave.inflationType == "aphrodisiac")>>
-			The aphrodisiacs have $his so horny that there's a <<if $activeSlave.prostate > 1>>constant flow of precum leaking from<<else>>little precum beading at<</if>> the hole.
+			The aphrodisiacs have $him so horny that there's a <<if $activeSlave.prostate > 1>>constant flow of precum leaking from<<else>>little precum beading at<</if>> the hole.
 		<<elseif ($activeSlave.energy > 95)>>
 			As a nympho, $he's almost always got a <<if $activeSlave.prostate > 1>>constant flow of precum leaking from<<else>>little bead of precum forming at<</if>> the hole.
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.fetishKnown == 0>>
@@ -5997,7 +5997,7 @@ $He has
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.bellyPreg > 0>>
 		$He is massively pregnant, beyond any typical pregnancy,
 		<<if $activeSlave.physicalAge <= 3>>
-			and $his belly pins $his to the ground. $His toddlerish form is dwarfed by $his pregnancy, and try as $he might $he cannot even drag the oversized thing.<<if $activeSlave.amp == 0>> $He requires assistance to get to $his feet<<if $saleDescription == 0>>, and uses a wheeled stand to support $his pregnancy when $he must walk anywhere<</if>>.<</if>>
+			and $his belly pins $him to the ground. $His toddlerish form is dwarfed by $his pregnancy, and try as $he might $he cannot even drag the oversized thing.<<if $activeSlave.amp == 0>> $He requires assistance to get to $his feet<<if $saleDescription == 0>>, and uses a wheeled stand to support $his pregnancy when $he must walk anywhere<</if>>.<</if>>
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.physicalAge <= 12>>
 			and $he can barely function with $his oversized belly.<<if $activeSlave.amp == 0>> $He requires assistance to get to $his feet<<if $saleDescription == 0>>, and uses a wheeled stand to support $his pregnancy when $he must walk anywhere<</if>>.<</if>>
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.height >= 185>>
@@ -6043,7 +6043,7 @@ $He has
 	<<else>>
 		$He looks massively pregnant, beyond any typical pregnancy,
 		<<if $activeSlave.physicalAge <= 3>>
-			and $his belly pins $his to the ground. $His toddlerish form is dwarfed by $his implant, and try as $he might $he cannot even drag the oversized thing.<<if $activeSlave.amp == 0>> $He requires assistance to get to $his feet<<if $saleDescription == 0>>, and uses a wheeled stand to support $his middle when $he must walk anywhere<</if>>.<</if>>
+			and $his belly pins $him to the ground. $His toddlerish form is dwarfed by $his implant, and try as $he might $he cannot even drag the oversized thing.<<if $activeSlave.amp == 0>> $He requires assistance to get to $his feet<<if $saleDescription == 0>>, and uses a wheeled stand to support $his middle when $he must walk anywhere<</if>>.<</if>>
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.physicalAge <= 12>>
 			and $he can barely function with $his oversized belly.<<if $activeSlave.amp == 0>> $He requires assistance to get to $his feet<<if $saleDescription == 0>>, and uses a wheeled stand to support $his middle when $he must walk anywhere<</if>>.<</if>>
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.height >= 185>>
@@ -11761,7 +11761,7 @@ $He has
 					$activeSlave.slaveName's apron is filled out by $his pregnant belly.
 				<</if>>
 			<<elseif $activeSlave.weight > 95>>
-				$activeSlave.slaveName's apron bulges with $his $his fat belly.
+				$activeSlave.slaveName's apron bulges with $his fat belly.
 			<<elseif $activeSlave.belly >= 1500 || $activeSlave.bellyAccessory == "a small empathy belly">>
 				<<if $activeSlave.bellyAccessory == "a small empathy belly">>
 					$activeSlave.slaveName's apron is rounded out by $his small pregnant belly.
@@ -14406,7 +14406,7 @@ $He has
 			<<elseif $activeSlave.weight > 130>>
 				$activeSlave.slaveName's slave gown is carefully tailored, accentuating and hugging every curve and fold of $his big fat belly.
 			<<elseif $activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 5000 || ($activeSlave.bellyAccessory == "a medium empathy belly")>>
-				$activeSlave.slaveName's slave gown is carefully tailored, giving $his a sensual motherly look as it carefully caresses $his pregnant belly.
+				$activeSlave.slaveName's slave gown is carefully tailored, giving $him a sensual motherly look as it carefully caresses $his pregnant belly.
 			<<elseif $activeSlave.weight > 95>>
 				$activeSlave.slaveName's slave gown is carefully tailored, accentuating and hugging every curve of $his fat belly.
 			<<elseif (($activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 1500) || ($activeSlave.bellyAccessory == "a small empathy belly"))>>
@@ -14607,21 +14607,21 @@ $He has
 			<<elseif $activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 600000>>
 				$activeSlave.slaveName's blouse rests atop $his titanic bulging pregnant belly, showing off the result of $his promiscuity.
 			<<elseif $activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 300000>>
-				$activeSlave.slaveName's blouse rests atop $his massive pregnant belly, leaving $his looking particularly slutty.
+				$activeSlave.slaveName's blouse rests atop $his massive pregnant belly, leaving $him looking particularly slutty.
 			<<elseif $activeSlave.weight > 190>>
 				$activeSlave.slaveName's blouse rests atop $his massively fat belly, allowing it to hang loose over $his skirt.
 			<<elseif $activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 10000 || ($activeSlave.bellyAccessory == "a huge empathy belly") || ($activeSlave.bellyAccessory == "a large empathy belly")>>
-				$activeSlave.slaveName's blouse rides up $his big pregnant belly, leaving $his looking particularly slutty.
+				$activeSlave.slaveName's blouse rides up $his big pregnant belly, leaving $him looking particularly slutty.
 			<<elseif $activeSlave.weight > 160>>
 				$activeSlave.slaveName's blouse rides up $his hugely fat belly, leaving it hanging loose and covering $his skirt.
 			<<elseif $activeSlave.weight > 130>>
 				$activeSlave.slaveName's blouse rides up $his big fat belly, leaving it hanging loose and covering $his skirt.
 			<<elseif $activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 5000 || ($activeSlave.bellyAccessory == "a medium empathy belly")>>
-				$activeSlave.slaveName's blouse rides up $his pregnant belly, leaving $his looking particularly slutty.
+				$activeSlave.slaveName's blouse rides up $his pregnant belly, leaving $him looking particularly slutty.
 			<<elseif $activeSlave.weight > 95>>
 				$activeSlave.slaveName's blouse rides up $his fat belly, leaving it hanging loose and covering $his skirt.
 			<<elseif (($activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 1500) || ($activeSlave.bellyAccessory == "a small empathy belly"))>>
-				$activeSlave.slaveName's blouse bulges with $his growing belly. It peeks out from the bottom leaving $his looking particularly slutty.
+				$activeSlave.slaveName's blouse bulges with $his growing belly. It peeks out from the bottom leaving $him looking particularly slutty.
 			<<elseif $activeSlave.weight > 30>>
 				$activeSlave.slaveName's blouse bulges with $his chubby belly. It peeks out from the bottom as it hangs over the waist of $his skirt.
 			<</if>>
@@ -14679,23 +14679,23 @@ $He has
 			<<elseif $activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 600000>>
 				$activeSlave.slaveName's tank top rests atop $his titanic bulging pregnant belly leaving $him looking like someone who fucked half the country.
 			<<elseif $activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 300000>>
-				$activeSlave.slaveName's tank top rests atop $his massive pregnant belly leaving $his looking like someone who fucked all the locals.
+				$activeSlave.slaveName's tank top rests atop $his massive pregnant belly leaving $him looking like someone who fucked all the locals.
 			<<elseif $activeSlave.weight > 190>>
 				$activeSlave.slaveName's tank top rests atop $his massively fat belly, leaving it to hang over $his fatigues. There is no way $he didn't slut $his way through basic.
 			<<elseif $activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 10000 || ($activeSlave.bellyAccessory == "a huge empathy belly") || ($activeSlave.bellyAccessory == "a large empathy belly")>>
-				$activeSlave.slaveName's tank top barely even covers the top of $his big pregnant belly, leaving $his looking like someone who had too much fun on shore leave.
+				$activeSlave.slaveName's tank top barely even covers the top of $his big pregnant belly, leaving $him looking like someone who had too much fun on shore leave.
 			<<elseif $activeSlave.weight > 160>>
 				$activeSlave.slaveName's tank top rests atop $his hugely fat belly, leading everyone to believe $he sucked $his way through basic.
 			<<elseif $activeSlave.weight > 130>>
 				$activeSlave.slaveName's tank top rests atop $his big fat belly, casting doubt on how this recruit passed basic.
 			<<elseif $activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 5000 || ($activeSlave.bellyAccessory == "a medium empathy belly")>>
-				$activeSlave.slaveName's tank top rides up $his pregnant belly leaving $his looking like someone who had too much fun on shore-leave.
+				$activeSlave.slaveName's tank top rides up $his pregnant belly leaving $him looking like someone who had too much fun on shore-leave.
 			<<elseif $activeSlave.weight > 95>>
 				$activeSlave.slaveName's tank top rests atop $his fat belly, leaving everyone wondering how this recruit passed basic.
 			<<elseif (($activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 1500) || ($activeSlave.bellyAccessory == "a small empathy belly"))>>
-				$activeSlave.slaveName's tank top covers the top of $his growing belly leaving $his looking like someone who had too much fun on shore-leave.
+				$activeSlave.slaveName's tank top covers the top of $his growing belly leaving $him looking like someone who had too much fun on shore-leave.
 			<<elseif $activeSlave.weight > 30>>
-				$activeSlave.slaveName's tank top covers the top of $his chubby belly leaving $his looking like someone who had has been lazy lately.
+				$activeSlave.slaveName's tank top covers the top of $his chubby belly leaving $him looking like someone who had has been lazy lately.
 			<</if>>
 		<<case "a halter top dress">>
 			<<if $activeSlave.belly >= 1000000>>
@@ -15084,7 +15084,7 @@ $He has
 				<<elseif $activeSlave.weight > 130>>
 					$activeSlave.slaveName's top fails to contain $his big fat belly, leaving it hanging loose and covering $his spats from view.
 				<<elseif $activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 5000 || ($activeSlave.bellyAccessory == "a medium empathy belly")>>
-					$activeSlave.slaveName's top can't entirely cover $his big pregnancy, leaving $his looking particularly slutty.
+					$activeSlave.slaveName's top can't entirely cover $his big pregnancy, leaving $him looking particularly slutty.
 				<<elseif $activeSlave.weight > 95>>
 					$activeSlave.slaveName's top can't entirely contain $his fat belly, leaving a bit of it hanging loose and covering $his spats from view.
 				<<elseif (($activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 1500) || ($activeSlave.bellyAccessory == "a small empathy belly"))>>
@@ -15277,14 +15277,14 @@ $He has
 		<</if>>
 		<<if $activeSlave.breedingMark == 1>>
 			<<if $propOutcome == 1>>
-				The Societal Elites' mark designating $his as a breeder is prominently displayed across $his lower belly, beneath $his navel.
+				The Societal Elites' mark designating $him as a breeder is prominently displayed across $his lower belly, beneath $his navel.
 			<<else>>
 				An alluring tattoo is prominently displayed across $his lower belly, beneath $his navel, urging $him to be bred.
 			<</if>>
 		<</if>>
 		<<if _heavyBelly == 1>>
 			<<if canWalk($activeSlave)>>
-				$His <<if $activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 3000>>pregnancy<<else>>stomach<</if>> is so massive that it is difficult for $his to move.
+				$His <<if $activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 3000>>pregnancy<<else>>stomach<</if>> is so massive that it is difficult for $him to move.
 				<<if $activeSlave.muscles > 95>>
 					However, $he is so powerfully built that $he can manage it with effort, using $his arms to support it.
 				<<elseif $activeSlave.muscles > 30>>
@@ -16320,7 +16320,7 @@ $He has
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.belly < 100000>>
 			$His _belly belly can be seen around $his narrow waist.
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.belly < 450000>>
-			$His _belly belly lewdly extends past $his $his narrow waist.
+			$His _belly belly lewdly extends past $his narrow waist.
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.belly < 600000>>
 			$His _belly belly lewdly distends far to either side of $his narrow waist.
 			<<if $activeSlave.preg > 3>>
@@ -16360,7 +16360,7 @@ $He has
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.belly < 8000>>
 			$His _belly belly can be seen around $his narrow waist.
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.belly < 15000>>
-			$His _belly belly lewdly extends past $his $his narrow waist.
+			$His _belly belly lewdly extends past $his narrow waist.
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.belly < 45000>>
 			$His _belly belly lewdly distends far to either side of $his narrow waist.
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.belly < 600000>>
@@ -16936,7 +16936,7 @@ $He has
 			<</if>>
 		<<case "downward-facing">>
 			<<if $activeSlave.boobs > 12000>>
-				Their naturally downward-facing shape makes them a convenient cushion when $he's face-down, naturally placing $his in a kneeling position.
+				Their naturally downward-facing shape makes them a convenient cushion when $he's face-down, naturally placing $him in a kneeling position.
 			<<elseif $activeSlave.boobs > 5000>>
 				They're huge pillows of soft flesh, distorted by gravity and where they rest against $his stomach and each other. Naturally downward-facing, they are so big that $his nipples point directly down.
 			<<elseif $activeSlave.boobs > 2500>>
@@ -16984,7 +16984,7 @@ $He has
 			<</if>>
 		<<case "saggy">>
 			<<if $activeSlave.boobs > 12000>>
-				Their naturally saggy shape makes them a convenient cushion when $he's face-down, naturally placing $his in a kneeling position.
+				Their naturally saggy shape makes them a convenient cushion when $he's face-down, naturally placing $him in a kneeling position.
 			<<elseif $activeSlave.boobs > 5000>>
 				They're huge pillows of soft flesh that sag past $his navel. $His nipples are placed on their bottoms, pointed at the ground by the heavy mass of breastflesh above them.
 			<<elseif $activeSlave.boobs > 2500>>
@@ -17138,7 +17138,7 @@ $He has
 <<elseif $activeSlave.bellyImplant >= 16000>>
 	$He looks unbelievably pregnant,
 	<<if $activeSlave.physicalAge <= 3>>
-		and $his belly pins $his to the ground. $His toddlerish form is dwarfed by $his implant; try as $he might, $he cannot even drag the massive thing. $He is so full you can nearly make out the implant within $his body through $his skin.
+		and $his belly pins $him to the ground. $His toddlerish form is dwarfed by $his implant; try as $he might, $he cannot even drag the massive thing. $He is so full you can nearly make out the implant within $his body through $his skin.
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.physicalAge <= 12>>
 		and $he can barely function with $his enormous belly. $He is so full you can nearly make out the implant within $his body through $his skin.
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.height >= 185>>
@@ -17983,7 +17983,7 @@ $He has
 			<<case "a slutty nurse outfit">>
 				$activeSlave.slaveName's jacket barely closes over $his implant-filled belly leaving its buttons threatening to pop.
 			<<case "a schoolgirl outfit">>
-				$activeSlave.slaveName's blouse rides up $his implant-filled belly, leaving $his looking particularly slutty.
+				$activeSlave.slaveName's blouse rides up $his implant-filled belly, leaving $him looking particularly slutty.
 			<<case "a kimono">>
 				$activeSlave.slaveName's implant-filled belly is demurely covered by $his kimono.
 			<<case "a hijab and abaya" "a niqab and abaya">>
@@ -18540,7 +18540,7 @@ $He has
 
 	<<if $activeSlave.breedingMark == 1>>
 		<<if $propOutcome == 1>>
-			The Societal Elites' mark designating $his as a breeder is prominently displayed across $his lower belly, beneath $his navel.
+			The Societal Elites' mark designating $him as a breeder is prominently displayed across $his lower belly, beneath $his navel.
 		<<else>>
 			An alluring tattoo is prominently displayed across $his lower belly, beneath $his navel, urging $him to be bred.
 		<</if>>
@@ -19259,7 +19259,7 @@ $He has
 					$activeSlave.slaveName's t-shirt covers only the top of $his fat belly, allowing it to hang mostly free and cover $his jeans.
 				<</if>>
 			<<case "a slutty outfit">>
-				$activeSlave.slaveName lets $his fat belly hang free, leaving $his looking particularly slutty.
+				$activeSlave.slaveName lets $his fat belly hang free, leaving $him looking particularly slutty.
 			<<case "a slave gown">>
 				$activeSlave.slaveName's slave gown is carefully tailored, accentuating and hugging every curve of $his fat belly.
 			<<case "slutty business attire">>
@@ -19590,7 +19590,7 @@ $He has
 
 <<if $activeSlave.breedingMark == 1>>
 	<<if $propOutcome == 1>>
-		The Societal Elites' mark designating $his as a breeder is prominently displayed across $his lower belly, beneath $his navel.
+		The Societal Elites' mark designating $him as a breeder is prominently displayed across $his lower belly, beneath $his navel.
 	<<else>>
 		An alluring tattoo is prominently displayed across $his lower belly, beneath $his navel, urging $him to be bred.
 	<</if>>
diff --git a/src/utility/descriptionWidgetsStyle.tw b/src/utility/descriptionWidgetsStyle.tw
index b4ffabc7615ed5c64bdcf65cc77acb1d8b239875..99e029ccdddfc533462b2d73cb3a1ede051d91c1 100644
--- a/src/utility/descriptionWidgetsStyle.tw
+++ b/src/utility/descriptionWidgetsStyle.tw
@@ -1106,7 +1106,7 @@ $His
 		<<case "a slutty qipao">>
 			is brushed back over $his shoulders, ornamented with little silver talismans here and there.
 		<<case "a huipil">>
-			flows down $his shoulders, giving $his a very innocent look.
+			flows down $his shoulders, giving $him a very innocent look.
 		<<case "restrictive latex" "a latex catsuit">>
 			is allowed a gap at the back of $his head so it can escape down $his back.
 		<<case "harem gauze">>
@@ -1166,7 +1166,7 @@ $His
 		<<case "a slutty qipao">>
 			is brushed back and ornamented with a little jade talisman.
 		<<case "a huipil">>
-			is short and neat, giving $his an innocent look.
+			is short and neat, giving $him an innocent look.
 		<<case "restrictive latex" "a latex catsuit">>
 			is crammed under $his latex hood.
 		<<case "harem gauze">>
@@ -1655,7 +1655,7 @@ $His
 		<<case "spats and a tank top">>
 			is pulled back with a pair of scrunchies into little tails.
 		<<case "a huipil">>
-			is twisted into two short tails that give $his the look of a little girl.
+			is twisted into two short tails that give $him the look of a little girl.
 		<<case "a kimono">>
 			is in short tails secured by ivory combs carved with images of
 			<<ImageDesc>>
@@ -3672,7 +3672,7 @@ $His
 	<<case "pumps">>
 		pump-shaped trainers, for a slutty athletic look.
 	<<case "extreme heels">>
-		ankle-supporting high heels to force $his as high as possible without damage.
+		ankle-supporting high heels to force $him as high as possible without damage.
 	<<default>>
 		nothing but a fine layer of oil on the tops of $his bare feet.
 	<</switch>>
diff --git a/src/utility/descriptionWidgetsTattoos.tw b/src/utility/descriptionWidgetsTattoos.tw
index 41a8635fbab302f0df7fb27fa2129b147af29dc3..7845bb320ca02bd6cef176b3bf89afd4a945bef0 100644
--- a/src/utility/descriptionWidgetsTattoos.tw
+++ b/src/utility/descriptionWidgetsTattoos.tw
@@ -355,7 +355,7 @@
 		<<if $activeSlave.analCount == 0>>
 			There is a horizontal line tattooed across the tops of $his buttocks for symbols counting $his anal exploits to be inscribed under, once $he has some.
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.analCount < 500>>
-			Tiny dick symbols are tattooed all over $his the tops of $his buttocks, one for every time $he's been assfucked.
+			Tiny dick symbols are tattooed all over the top of $his buttocks, one for every time $he's been assfucked.
 		<<else>>
 			Tiny dick symbols are tattooed all over $his entire buttocks, attesting to long anal slavery.
 		<</if>>