diff --git a/src/SecExp/attackGenerator.tw b/src/SecExp/attackGenerator.tw
index 8b9f119cf59534017a23d053b722eaa3c219f5c8..b7efcdc9749f0364023d7ba1e9307e3dd20229e5 100644
--- a/src/SecExp/attackGenerator.tw
+++ b/src/SecExp/attackGenerator.tw
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@
/* Rolls to see if attack happens this week */
/* raiders are attracted by low security */
-/* the Old World by "degenerate" future societies */
+/* the old world by "degenerate" future societies */
/* free Cities by high prosperity */
/* freedom fighters by high slave/citizen ratio */
<<if random(1,100) <= _attackChance>>
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@
<<set _oldWorld = 25>>
<<set _freeCity = 25>>
<<set _free = 25>>
- /* Old World */
+ /* old world */
<<if $arcologies[0].FSRomanRevivalist != "unset" || $arcologies[0].FSEdoRevivalist != "unset" || $arcologies[0].FSArabianRevivalist != "unset" || $arcologies[0].FSChineseRevivalist != "unset" || $arcologies[0].FSEgyptianRevivalist != "unset" || $arcologies[0].FSAztecRevivalist != "unset" || $arcologies[0].FSRepopulationFocus != "unset" || $arcologies[0].FSGenderRadicalist != "unset" || $arcologies[0].FSPastoralist != "unset" || $arcologies[0].FSChattelReligionist != "unset">>
<<set _oldWorld += 15>>
<<set _raider -= 5>>
diff --git a/src/SecExp/attackOptions.tw b/src/SecExp/attackOptions.tw
index 20aee57aae116250242bd7d6902237c88f7c5e04..c34165d3ec936267e161418c918334a4ff9b1b4e 100644
--- a/src/SecExp/attackOptions.tw
+++ b/src/SecExp/attackOptions.tw
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
Some of your citizens saw the disorganized horde of raiders coming towards the city and quickly reported it. To such jackals your arcology surely looks like an appetizing morsel.
<</if>>
<br>
- Raiders are roaming gangs of bandits, preying on the vulnerable supply lines of free cities and Old World nations. They are rarely equipped with decent armaments and even more rarely have any formal military training, but they make up for that with high mobility and numbers.
+ Raiders are roaming gangs of bandits, preying on the vulnerable supply lines of free cities and old world nations. They are rarely equipped with decent armaments and even more rarely have any formal military training, but they make up for that with high mobility and numbers.
<<elseif $attackType == "free city">>
<<if $recon >= 1>>
A menacing column of slavers and hired mercenaries is coming to your city. Another free city is ready to use their best tools to hit a dangerous competitor where it hurts.
@@ -40,10 +40,10 @@
Freedom Fighters are groups of individuals fighting to rid the planet of "evils" such as the free cities and their way of life. Lacking the strength to assault one directly they fight guerrilla style slowly starving to death their enemies. They are rarely well equipped, but with good training and mobility they are not a threat that can be taken lightly.
<<elseif $attackType == "old world">>
<<if $recon >= 1>>
- A disciplined yet dusty, scruffy Old World army is approaching the confines of your arcology. There's nothing better than a good war to unite the electorate and your arcology is just the perfect target.
+ A disciplined yet dusty, scruffy old world army is approaching the confines of your arcology. There's nothing better than a good war to unite the electorate and your arcology is just the perfect target.
Fortunately you knew of their coming, thanks to your recon systems.
<<else>>
- Some of your citizens saw the disciplined yet dusty, scruffy Old World army is approaching the confines of your arcology. There's nothing better than a good war to unite the electorate and your arcology is just the perfect target.
+ Some of your citizens saw the disciplined yet dusty, scruffy old world army is approaching the confines of your arcology. There's nothing better than a good war to unite the electorate and your arcology is just the perfect target.
<</if>>
<br>
Old world expeditions are usually sent to secure resources and trade routs for their nation or, more often, to provide their citizens with a bogeyman to be scared of. They are usually decently equipped and trained, which together with their generous numbers make them a tough nut to crack. They however often lack in mobility.
@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@
Some of your citizens saw the massive, disorganized horde of raiders coming towards the city and quickly reported it. It seems a warlord of the wastelands massed enough men to try and obtain a slice of territory of his own, if he's not defeated there won't be a tomorrow for the arcology.
<</if>>
<br>
- Raiders are roaming gangs of bandits, preying on the vulnerable supply lines of free cities and Old World nations. They are rarely equipped with decent armaments and even more rarely have any formal military training, but they make up for that with high mobility and numbers.
+ Raiders are roaming gangs of bandits, preying on the vulnerable supply lines of free cities and old world nations. They are rarely equipped with decent armaments and even more rarely have any formal military training, but they make up for that with high mobility and numbers.
<<elseif $attackType == "free city">>
<<if $recon >= 1>>
A massive, menacing column of slavers and hired mercenaries is coming to your city. The quantity of money invested in this assault is staggering, it seems you made some very powerful enemies. If they're not defeated your story will end this day.
@@ -84,10 +84,10 @@
Freedom Fighters are groups of individuals fighting to rid the planet of "evils" such as the free cities and their way of life. Lacking the strength to assault one directly they fight guerrilla style slowly starving to death their enemies. They are rarely well equipped, but with good training and mobility they are not a threat that can be taken lightly.
<<elseif $attackType == "old world">>
<<if $recon >= 1>>
- A massive, disciplined Old World army is approaching the confines of your arcology. It seems one of the nations of the Old World is determined to put your arcology to rest once and for all or die trying.
+ A massive, disciplined old world army is approaching the confines of your arcology. It seems one of the nations of the old world is determined to put your arcology to rest once and for all or die trying.
Fortunately you knew of their coming, thanks to your recon systems.
<<else>>
- Some of your citizens saw the massive, disciplined Old World army is approaching the confines of your arcology. It seems one of the nations of the Old World is determined to put your arcology to rest once and for all or die trying.
+ Some of your citizens saw the massive, disciplined old world army is approaching the confines of your arcology. It seems one of the nations of the old world is determined to put your arcology to rest once and for all or die trying.
<</if>>
<br>
Old world expeditions are usually sent to secure resources and trade routs for their nation or, more often, to provide their citizens with a bogeyman to be scared of. They are usually decently equipped and trained, which together with their generous numbers make them a tough nut to crack. They however often lack in mobility.
@@ -104,7 +104,7 @@
Some of your citizens saw the massive, disorganized horde of raiders coming towards the city and quickly reported it. It seems a warlord of the wastelands massed enough men to try and obtain a slice of territory of his own, if he's not defeated there won't be a tomorrow for the arcology.
<</if>>
<br>
- Raiders are roaming gangs of bandits, preying on the vulnerable supply lines of free cities and Old World nations. They are rarely equipped with decent armaments and even more rarely have any formal military training, but they make up for that with high mobility and numbers.
+ Raiders are roaming gangs of bandits, preying on the vulnerable supply lines of free cities and old world nations. They are rarely equipped with decent armaments and even more rarely have any formal military training, but they make up for that with high mobility and numbers.
<<elseif $attackType == "free city">>
<<if $recon >= 1>>
A massive, menacing column of slavers and hired mercenaries is coming to your city. The quantity of money invested in this assault is staggering, it seems you made some very powerful enemies. If they're not defeated your story will end this day.
@@ -125,10 +125,10 @@
Freedom Fighters are groups of individuals fighting to rid the planet of "evils" such as the free cities and their way of life. Lacking the strength to assault one directly they fight guerrilla style slowly starving to death their enemies. They are rarely well equipped, but with good training and mobility they are not a threat that can be taken lightly.
<<elseif $attackType == "old world">>
<<if $recon >= 1>>
- A massive, disciplined Old World army is approaching the confines of your arcology. It seems one of the nations of the Old World is determined to put your arcology to rest once and for all or die trying.
+ A massive, disciplined old world army is approaching the confines of your arcology. It seems one of the nations of the old world is determined to put your arcology to rest once and for all or die trying.
Fortunately you knew of their coming, thanks to your recon systems.
<<else>>
- Some of your citizens saw the massive, disciplined Old World army is approaching the confines of your arcology. It seems one of the nations of the Old World is determined to put your arcology to rest once and for all or die trying.
+ Some of your citizens saw the massive, disciplined old world army is approaching the confines of your arcology. It seems one of the nations of the old world is determined to put your arcology to rest once and for all or die trying.
<</if>>
<br>
Old world expeditions are usually sent to secure resources and trade routs for their nation or, more often, to provide their citizens with a bogeyman to be scared of. They are usually decently equipped and trained, which together with their generous numbers make them a tough nut to crack. They however often lack in mobility.
diff --git a/src/SecExp/attackReport.tw b/src/SecExp/attackReport.tw
index 5866d145b5ee50a3ea5604af6349df4d2a0a7c08..9d492f8c20e10ea5e32a424e4249cba5c39b06f6 100644
--- a/src/SecExp/attackReport.tw
+++ b/src/SecExp/attackReport.tw
@@ -134,7 +134,7 @@
<<if $battleResult != 1 && $battleResult != 0 && $battleResult != -1>>
Our defense forces, <<print num(Math.trunc($troopCount))>> strong, clashed with them
<<if $battleTerrain == "urban">>
- in the streets of <<if $terrain == "urban">>the Old World city surrounding the arcology<<else>>of the free city<</if>>,
+ in the streets of <<if $terrain == "urban">>the old world city surrounding the arcology<<else>>of the free city<</if>>,
<<elseif $battleTerrain == "rural">>
in the rural land surrounding the free city,
<<elseif $battleTerrain == "hills">>
@@ -196,7 +196,7 @@
<<if $battleResult != 1 && $battleResult != 0 && $battleResult != -1>>
Our defense forces, <<print num(Math.trunc($troopCount))>> strong, clashed with them
<<if $battleTerrain == "urban">>
- in the streets of <<if $terrain == "urban">>the Old World city surrounding the arcology<<else>>of the free city<</if>>,
+ in the streets of <<if $terrain == "urban">>the old world city surrounding the arcology<<else>>of the free city<</if>>,
<<elseif $battleTerrain == "rural">>
in the rural land surrounding the free city,
<<elseif $battleTerrain == "hills">>
@@ -258,7 +258,7 @@
<<if $battleResult != 1 && $battleResult != 0 && $battleResult != -1>>
Our defense forces, <<print num(Math.trunc($troopCount))>> strong, clashed with them
<<if $battleTerrain == "urban">>
- in the streets of <<if $terrain == "urban">>the Old World city surrounding the arcology<<else>>of the free city<</if>>,
+ in the streets of <<if $terrain == "urban">>the old world city surrounding the arcology<<else>>of the free city<</if>>,
<<elseif $battleTerrain == "rural">>
in the rural land surrounding the free city,
<<elseif $battleTerrain == "hills">>
@@ -316,11 +316,11 @@
You decided in favor of a financial approach rather than open hostilities. Your troops remain inside the arcology's walls.
<</if>>
<<elseif $attackType == "old world">>
- Today, the _day of _month _year, our arcology was attacked by an Old World nation boasting a misplaced sense of superiority, <<print num(Math.trunc($attackTroops))>> men strong.
+ Today, the _day of _month _year, our arcology was attacked by an old world nation boasting a misplaced sense of superiority, <<print num(Math.trunc($attackTroops))>> men strong.
<<if $battleResult != 1 && $battleResult != 0 && $battleResult != -1>>
Our defense forces, <<print num(Math.trunc($troopCount))>> strong, clashed with them
<<if $battleTerrain == "urban">>
- in the streets of <<if $terrain == "urban">>the Old World city surrounding the arcology<<else>>of the free city<</if>>,
+ in the streets of <<if $terrain == "urban">>the old world city surrounding the arcology<<else>>of the free city<</if>>,
<<elseif $battleTerrain == "rural">>
in the rural land surrounding the free city,
<<elseif $battleTerrain == "hills">>
@@ -342,11 +342,11 @@
<</if>>
<<if $battleResult == 3>>
<<if $battleTurns <= 5>>
- The fight was quick and one sided, our men easily stopped the Old World soldiers dead in their tracks<<if $PCvictoryStreak >= 2 || $PClossStreak >= 2>>,<<else>>.<</if>>
+ The fight was quick and one sided, our men easily stopped the old world soldiers dead in their tracks<<if $PCvictoryStreak >= 2 || $PClossStreak >= 2>>,<<else>>.<</if>>
<<elseif $battleTurns <= 7>>
- The fight was hard, but in the end our men stopped the soldiers of the Old World<<if $PCvictoryStreak >= 2 || $PClossStreak >= 2>>,<<else>>.<</if>>
+ The fight was hard, but in the end our men stopped the soldiers of the old world<<if $PCvictoryStreak >= 2 || $PClossStreak >= 2>>,<<else>>.<</if>>
<<else>>
- The fight was long and hard, but our men managed to stop the Old World soldiers<<if $PCvictoryStreak >= 2 || $PClossStreak >= 2>>,<<else>>.<</if>>
+ The fight was long and hard, but our men managed to stop the old world soldiers<<if $PCvictoryStreak >= 2 || $PClossStreak >= 2>>,<<else>>.<</if>>
<</if>>
<<if $PCvictoryStreak >= 2>>
adding another victory to the growing list of our military's successes.
@@ -355,11 +355,11 @@
<</if>>
<<elseif $battleResult == -3>>
<<if $battleTurns <= 5>>
- The fight was quick and one sided, our men were easily crushed by the discipline of the Old World armies<<if $PCvictoryStreak >= 2 || $PClossStreak >= 2>>,<<else>>.<</if>>
+ The fight was quick and one sided, our men were easily crushed by the discipline of the old world armies<<if $PCvictoryStreak >= 2 || $PClossStreak >= 2>>,<<else>>.<</if>>
<<elseif $battleTurns <= 7>>
- The fight was hard and in the end the Old World proved too much to handle for our men<<if $PCvictoryStreak >= 2 || $PClossStreak >= 2>>,<<else>>.<</if>>
+ The fight was hard and in the end the old world proved too much to handle for our men<<if $PCvictoryStreak >= 2 || $PClossStreak >= 2>>,<<else>>.<</if>>
<<else>>
- The fight was long and hard, but despite their bravery the determination of the Old World troops proved too much for our men<<if $PCvictoryStreak >= 2 || $PClossStreak >= 2>>,<<else>>.<</if>>
+ The fight was long and hard, but despite their bravery the determination of the old world troops proved too much for our men<<if $PCvictoryStreak >= 2 || $PClossStreak >= 2>>,<<else>>.<</if>>
<</if>>
<<if $PCvictoryStreak >= 2>>
so interrupting a long series of military successes.
@@ -367,9 +367,9 @@
confirming the long list of recent failures our armed forces collected.
<</if>>
<<elseif $battleResult == 2>>
- The fight was long and hard, but in the end our men managed to repel the Old World soldiers, though not without difficulty.
+ The fight was long and hard, but in the end our men managed to repel the old world soldiers, though not without difficulty.
<<elseif $battleResult == -2>>
- The fight was long and hard. Our men in the end had to yield to the Old World soldiers, which were fortunately unable to capitalized on their victory.
+ The fight was long and hard. Our men in the end had to yield to the old world soldiers, which were fortunately unable to capitalized on their victory.
<<elseif $battleResult == -1>>
You gave your troops the order to surrender, obediently they stand down.
<<elseif $battleResult == 0>>
@@ -1437,7 +1437,7 @@
<<elseif $attackType == "free city">>
The modern armies hired by free cities are decently mobile, which means quick hit and run attacks will be less successful, but their discipline and confidence still make them quite susceptible to this type of attack.
<<elseif $attackType == "old world">>
- While Old World armies are tough nuts to crack, their predictability makes them the perfect target for hit and run and harassment tactics.
+ While old world armies are tough nuts to crack, their predictability makes them the perfect target for hit and run and harassment tactics.
<<elseif $attackType == "freedom fighters">>
Freedom fighters live every day as chasing and being chased by far superior forces, they are far more experienced than your troops in this type of warfare and much less susceptible to it.
<</if>>
@@ -1447,7 +1447,7 @@
<<elseif $attackType == "free city">>
The modern armies hired by free cities are highly mobile, which means quick hit and run attacks will be less successful, but their discipline and confidence still make them quite susceptible to this type of attack.
<<elseif $attackType == "old world">>
- While Old World armies are tough nuts to crack, their predictability makes them the perfect target for hit and run and harassment tactics.
+ While old world armies are tough nuts to crack, their predictability makes them the perfect target for hit and run and harassment tactics.
<<elseif $attackType == "freedom fighters">>
Freedom fighters live every day as chasing and being chased by far superior forces, they are far more experienced than your troops in this type of warfare and much less susceptible to it.
<</if>>
@@ -1477,7 +1477,7 @@
<<elseif $attackType == "free city">>
While decently mobile, the low number of free cities expedition forces make them good candidates for encirclements.
<<elseif $attackType == "old world">>
- The discipline and numbers of Old World armies make them quite difficult to encircle.
+ The discipline and numbers of old world armies make them quite difficult to encircle.
<<elseif $attackType == "freedom fighters">>
While not particularly mobile, freedom fighters are used to fight against overwhelming odds, diminishing the effectiveness of the encirclement.
<</if>>
@@ -1487,7 +1487,7 @@
<<elseif $attackType == "free city">>
With their low numbers free cities mercenaries are quite susceptible to this type of tactic, despite their mobility.
<<elseif $attackType == "old world">>
- With their low mobility Old World armies are very susceptible to this type of strategy.
+ With their low mobility old world armies are very susceptible to this type of strategy.
<<elseif $attackType == "freedom fighters">>
Low mobility and not particularly high numbers mean freedom fighters can be defeated by employing elastic defense tactics.
<</if>>
@@ -1497,7 +1497,7 @@
<<elseif $attackType == "free city">>
Having good equipment and discipline on their side, free cities expeditions are capable of responding to even strong lightning strikes.
<<elseif $attackType == "old world">>
- While disciplined, Old World armies low mobility makes them highly susceptible to lightning strikes.
+ While disciplined, old world armies low mobility makes them highly susceptible to lightning strikes.
<<elseif $attackType == "freedom fighters">>
While not well equipped, freedom fighters have plenty of experience fighting small, mobile attacks, making them difficult to defeat with lightning strikes.
<</if>>
@@ -1507,7 +1507,7 @@
<<elseif $attackType == "free city">>
The good equipment and mobility of free cities mercenaries cannot save them from an organized mass assault.
<<elseif $attackType == "old world">>
- Unfortunately the discipline and good equipment of Old World armies allow them to respond well against a mass assault.
+ Unfortunately the discipline and good equipment of old world armies allow them to respond well against a mass assault.
<<elseif $attackType == "freedom fighters">>
The relative low numbers and not great equipment typical of freedom fighters make them susceptible to being overwhelmed by an organized mass assault.
<</if>>
diff --git a/src/SecExp/secBarracks.tw b/src/SecExp/secBarracks.tw
index 942a08b3593a2ee5fd7c171da34297fa51ae0588..d00288aaa7e06245cf519474bb117a5b08132d4c 100644
--- a/src/SecExp/secBarracks.tw
+++ b/src/SecExp/secBarracks.tw
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ While this a sore sight for many citizens of $arcologies[0].name, the barracks s
<<elseif $secBarracksUpgrades.size == 4>>
The building has been greatly expanded and can now house a small army.
<<else>>
- The building has been greatly expanded and can now house an army worthy of an Old World nation.
+ The building has been greatly expanded and can now house an army worthy of an old world nation.
<</if>>
<<if $secBarracksUpgrades.luxury == 0>>
The barracks are a spartan building, with little to make the day to day lives of your soldiers pleasant.
diff --git a/src/SecExp/secExpSmilingMan.tw b/src/SecExp/secExpSmilingMan.tw
index 0b3ce07e046351590a1856a4b98529902007ed2e..28b974c136b2ffecb30bf2f58ec279380ed2b2e6 100644
--- a/src/SecExp/secExpSmilingMan.tw
+++ b/src/SecExp/secExpSmilingMan.tw
@@ -140,7 +140,7 @@
<br>Evening came faster than you anticipated. Your security team was already at full alert, waiting for any signal on the horizon. The die was cast.
<br>Suddenly all the computers in the room begin to act strangely, then it happened. On all of the screens across the arcology the Smiling Man's icon appears, then every speaker begins broadcasting the same voice, one that you have already heard once before:
<br>"Hello citizens of $arcologies[0].name! I am here on this special day to relay to you a very important message: we find ourselves in very peculiar times, times of strife and suffering! But these are also times of change and regeneration! Indeed, I say humanity itself is regenerating, turning into a new being for which the
- ideals of the Old World no longer hold meaning. A new blank page from which humanity can begin to prosper again.
+ ideals of the old world no longer hold meaning. A new blank page from which humanity can begin to prosper again.
<br>Alas, my friends, not all is good, as in this rebirth a great injustice is being perpetrated. If we truly want to ascend to this new form of humanity the old must give way to the new. If we must cleanse our mind of old ideas, our world must cleanse itself of them as well.
It's to fix this injustice, that I worked so hard all this time! To cleanse the world of the old, we must get rid of our precious, precious data. At the end of this message every digital device will see its memory erased, every archive cleaned, every drive deleted.
<br>It will be a true rebirth! A true new beginning! No longer will the chains of the past keep humanity anchored!"
diff --git a/src/SecExp/securityReport.tw b/src/SecExp/securityReport.tw
index 29ed6bb0bae1f4ee41ffa88260aa4f6a370f3e82..50c8232374dcdf652c9d2404de1b4e9eedda2c73 100644
--- a/src/SecExp/securityReport.tw
+++ b/src/SecExp/securityReport.tw
@@ -214,15 +214,15 @@
<strong>Crime</strong>:
/* crime modifiers */
<<if $week < 30>>
- Due to the deterioration of the Old World countries, organized crime focuses more and more on the prosperous free cities, yours included. This has a small impact on the growth of criminal activities in your arcology.<<set _crimeGrowth += 0.5>>
+ Due to the deterioration of the old world countries, organized crime focuses more and more on the prosperous free cities, yours included. This has a small impact on the growth of criminal activities in your arcology.<<set _crimeGrowth += 0.5>>
<<elseif $week < 60>>
- Due to the deterioration of the Old World countries, organized crime focuses more and more on the prosperous free cities, yours included. This has a noticeable impact on the growth of criminal activities in your arcology.<<set _crimeGrowth += 1>>
+ Due to the deterioration of the old world countries, organized crime focuses more and more on the prosperous free cities, yours included. This has a noticeable impact on the growth of criminal activities in your arcology.<<set _crimeGrowth += 1>>
<<elseif $week < 90>>
- Due to the deterioration of the Old World countries, organized crime focuses more and more on the prosperous free cities, yours included. This has a moderate impact on the growth of criminal activities in your arcology.<<set _crimeGrowth += 1.5>>
+ Due to the deterioration of the old world countries, organized crime focuses more and more on the prosperous free cities, yours included. This has a moderate impact on the growth of criminal activities in your arcology.<<set _crimeGrowth += 1.5>>
<<elseif $week < 120>>
- Due to the deterioration of the Old World countries, organized crime focuses more and more on the prosperous free cities, yours included. This has a big impact on the growth of criminal activities in your arcology.<<set _crimeGrowth += 2>>
+ Due to the deterioration of the old world countries, organized crime focuses more and more on the prosperous free cities, yours included. This has a big impact on the growth of criminal activities in your arcology.<<set _crimeGrowth += 2>>
<<else>>
- Due to the deterioration of the Old World countries, organized crime focuses more and more on the prosperous free cities, yours included. This has a huge impact on the growth of criminal activities in your arcology.<<set _crimeGrowth += 2.5>>
+ Due to the deterioration of the old world countries, organized crime focuses more and more on the prosperous free cities, yours included. This has a huge impact on the growth of criminal activities in your arcology.<<set _crimeGrowth += 2.5>>
<</if>>
<<if $arcologies[0].prosperity < 50>>
The low prosperity of the arcology facilitates criminal recruitment and organization.<<set _crimeGrowth += 1>>
diff --git a/src/SecExp/weaponsManufacturing.tw b/src/SecExp/weaponsManufacturing.tw
index d25b4e4a1ada2c8042bda264cf322699a6d7372c..c48d2e98a1771251addde53762037d43c9ade0ed 100644
--- a/src/SecExp/weaponsManufacturing.tw
+++ b/src/SecExp/weaponsManufacturing.tw
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ This sector of the arcology has been dedicated to weapons manufacturing. These f
<<if $militiaUnits.length > 0>> your militia and<</if>>
<<if $slaveUnits.length > 0>> your slave soldiers and<</if>>
<<if $mercenaries > 0>> your mercenaries and<</if>>
-many small Old World nations as the advanced technology that free cities have available is hard to come by otherwise.
+many small old world nations as the advanced technology that free cities have available is hard to come by otherwise.
<br>
<<if $weapProductivity == 1>>
Production is completely manned by human workers. The complex has close to zero automation.
@@ -162,13 +162,13 @@ __Markets__:
<</if>>
<br>
<<if $sellTo.oldWorld == 1>>
- We are currently selling our weapons to many Old World nations.
+ We are currently selling our weapons to many old world nations.
<<link "Forbid">>
<<set $sellTo.oldWorld = 0>>
<<goto "weaponsManufacturing">>
<</link>>
<<else>>
- We are not selling our weaponry to Old World nations.
+ We are not selling our weaponry to old world nations.
<<link "Allow">>
<<set $sellTo.oldWorld = 1>>
<<goto "weaponsManufacturing">>
diff --git a/src/SpecialForce/Firebase.tw b/src/SpecialForce/Firebase.tw
index 60a3677938385ba08c7f6d724d731f0831dd5281..a0c3747f12cfbb4493d3bd020be16a52f3ae4d40 100644
--- a/src/SpecialForce/Firebase.tw
+++ b/src/SpecialForce/Firebase.tw
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@
You continue towards the common area, the soldiers you pass, nod respectfully, salute, or bow slightly, as they please. You pass the briefing areas, the officers and sergeants of the force are conferring over planning tables and display screens regarding their upcoming deployments.
<br><br><div style="margin-left:2em">The commanders are
<<if $SF.Target === "recruit">>
- viewing lists of potential recruits for $SF.Lower. Mainly mercenaries and Old World soldiers who might be receptive to an offer of employment and residence within the arcology, in addition to some citizens of the arcology who wish to have some excitement in their lives.
+ viewing lists of potential recruits for $SF.Lower. Mainly mercenaries and old world soldiers who might be receptive to an offer of employment and residence within the arcology, in addition to some citizens of the arcology who wish to have some excitement in their lives.
<<elseif $SF.Target === "secure">>
reviewing maps of trade routes to the arcology as well as nearby merchant hubs, arranging their future deployments to best protect them and encourage business and trade.
<<else>>
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@
<<elseif $SF.Regs === "some">>
On several screens, there are some minor warnings regarding the mild disciplinary procedures that may be taken against soldiers who commit especially severe crimes while on deployment.
<<else>>
- There are no warnings or information regarding disciplinary procedures on any of the screens. Near one of them, a waste basket has been dragged over and a soldier has posted a note above it that says: "For Old World Complaints and Warrants."
+ There are no warnings or information regarding disciplinary procedures on any of the screens. Near one of them, a waste basket has been dragged over and a soldier has posted a note above it that says: "For old world Complaints and Warrants."
<</if>> </div>
<br>You arrive at the firebase's common area, a nest of bars, pleasure dens, public spaces, and other facilities catering to the soldiers' needs and giving them somewhere to spend their free time, since they do not mingle with your citizens on the higher levels or exit the arcology except on deployment. It is well-occupied by the soldiers not currently tasked with duties, and they respectfully move out of your way as you approach, clearing a path for you to move forward.
diff --git a/src/SpecialForce/NamingColonel.tw b/src/SpecialForce/NamingColonel.tw
index a264a2a424fb20688d9f6c7fc87d736918f3d4bd..c99d15deed53884ab93120b94ec16ffd0e3e0187 100644
--- a/src/SpecialForce/NamingColonel.tw
+++ b/src/SpecialForce/NamingColonel.tw
@@ -11,14 +11,14 @@
eating you out, pressing _hisU face into your pussy and forcing _hisU tongue deep inside you.
<</if>>
- <br><br>A blinking light tells you that the channel is open. You take a deep breath, and begin. You greet your citizens and explain that while you believe deeply in the underlying principles of the Free Cities, recent events have forced you to modify some of your views. The Old World attack from the outside and the more recent assault by the Daughters of Liberty from within has proven that some form of permanent, organized standing force is needed to ensure the personal safety of the citizen body.
- <br><br>You tell them that the Old World continues to deteriorate. You tell them that it is only a matter of time before the poor, diseased, starving, and unwashed masses try their hand at invading the arcology again. You tell them that such a force would be good for business, securing trade routes and conducting slaving raids far greater in scale than those performed by private slaving corporations. And finally, to quell their greatest fear, you tell them that you would personally support the force financially.
+ <br><br>A blinking light tells you that the channel is open. You take a deep breath, and begin. You greet your citizens and explain that while you believe deeply in the underlying principles of the Free Cities, recent events have forced you to modify some of your views. The old world attack from the outside and the more recent assault by the Daughters of Liberty from within has proven that some form of permanent, organized standing force is needed to ensure the personal safety of the citizen body.
+ <br><br>You tell them that the old world continues to deteriorate. You tell them that it is only a matter of time before the poor, diseased, starving, and unwashed masses try their hand at invading the arcology again. You tell them that such a force would be good for business, securing trade routes and conducting slaving raids far greater in scale than those performed by private slaving corporations. And finally, to quell their greatest fear, you tell them that you would personally support the force financially.
<br><br>As you speak, you carefully monitor the citizens' opinions as indicated on their communication devices. It is uniformly positive — they know whom they have to thank for their continued survival and dominance. You also monitor your arousal given the ministrations of your slave. A few small movements on your part communicate to your citizens what is happening without being too obvious. Free Cities business etiquette respects business conducted while being subtly serviced (and your doing so during such a public and important broadcast signals how seriously you are taking it), but a climax would be seen as a serious lack of discipline.
<br><br>You finally wrap up your speech, declaring yourself Marshal of the newly-formed <<textbox "$SF.Lower" $SF.Lower "Security Force Naming-Colonel">>
<br><br>You close the link to the communication system and read a message from your assistant that appeared during the last moments of your address. In consultation with major figures in the mercenary community, a suitable candidate for day-to-day command of the new unit has been found. Your instructions were to keep you in the dark about them so as to avoid prejudgment. They are waiting outside your office.
<br><br>[[Invite them inside|Security Force Naming-Colonel][$SF.IntroProgress = 1]]
<<elseif $SF.IntroProgress < 2>> <<= SFNameCapsCheck()>>
- The figure that enters is not what you were expecting, given your previous experiences with the mercenary groups that work with the arcology owners of the Free Cities. Most mercenaries you've worked with have been grizzled stout men, veterans of the Old World militaries that finally had too much and went private. Instead, a woman walks in.
+ The figure that enters is not what you were expecting, given your previous experiences with the mercenary groups that work with the arcology owners of the Free Cities. Most mercenaries you've worked with have been grizzled stout men, veterans of the old world militaries that finally had too much and went private. Instead, a woman walks in.
<<if $SF.Colonel.Core === "">>
She strikes you as someone who is likely to be:
<br><br>[[Kind|Security Force Naming-Colonel][$SF.Colonel.Core = "kind"]]
@@ -112,7 +112,7 @@
<</if>>
<<elseif $SF.IntroProgress < 3>> <<set $nextLink = "RIE Eligibility Check",$nextButton = "Continue">>
She turns and leaves, and you chase the slave out after her. A few minutes later, a soft chime announces the arrival of a message. It's from the Colonel.
- <br><br>//Hey boss, just wanted to mention something else. In your speech you said that you were going to be paying for $SF.Lower. In my mind that means it's yours, no matter what anyone else here might think. I do what you tell me to do. I make sure the troops behave as you want them to behave. I've worked for some 'nice guys' in the past, and I can do that job if you want. It's boring, but sustainable, and I'll have the $SF.Lower turning a profit and supporting the arcology in good order. But if you let me <<if $SF.Colonel.Core === "cruel">>off the leash<<else>>do what I do<</if>> and throw any Old World complaints in the trash where they belong, I promise you'll have money pouring into your coffers, even accounting for the good amounts me and my boys will pocket along the way. You'll have an empire in short order.
+ <br><br>//Hey boss, just wanted to mention something else. In your speech you said that you were going to be paying for $SF.Lower. In my mind that means it's yours, no matter what anyone else here might think. I do what you tell me to do. I make sure the troops behave as you want them to behave. I've worked for some 'nice guys' in the past, and I can do that job if you want. It's boring, but sustainable, and I'll have the $SF.Lower turning a profit and supporting the arcology in good order. But if you let me <<if $SF.Colonel.Core === "cruel">>off the leash<<else>>do what I do<</if>> and throw any old world complaints in the trash where they belong, I promise you'll have money pouring into your coffers, even accounting for the good amounts me and my boys will pocket along the way. You'll have an empire in short order.
<<if $mercenaries > 1>>
Either way, I'll keep my hands off those mercs you've already installed. I figure that you've reasons for having two different death squads under contract.
<</if>>
diff --git a/src/SpecialForce/Proposal.tw b/src/SpecialForce/Proposal.tw
index cdf521355e5da9de948593709daec51c3823641c..7c9e478ca8aaa92406d640aeeef983f7e9f093b3 100644
--- a/src/SpecialForce/Proposal.tw
+++ b/src/SpecialForce/Proposal.tw
@@ -2,9 +2,9 @@
<<set $nextButton = " ">> <span id="result">
The Free Cities were founded on the principles of unrestrained anarcho-capitalism. To those with such beliefs, the very idea of possessing an armed force, a key tool of government control, or weapons at all, was anathema.
-<br><br>In the period since, however, your citizens have seen the value in weaponry. They watched on their news-feed as some Free Cities were sacked by the armies and mobs of the Old World, driven by their hatred of the citizens' luxurious lifestyles. They've seen other Cities toppled from within, by slave conspiracies or infighting among citizen groupings with differing beliefs. They've witnessed the distressingly rapid rise of fanatical anti-slavery organizations, who would like nothing more than to see them slowly bled by their own chattel. They are learned people, and they know what happens to slaveowners who lose their power.
-<br><br>They've also seen the results of your policies. Your actions towards the arming of both yourself and the arcology proved critical, and ensured their safety when the Old World came for them. And your victory over the Daughters of Liberty, who the citizens know would have executed every single one of them, has created an opportunity. If you insisted upon the creation of a standing 'special' force for the arcology, many would support you and, more importantly, nobody of note would object.
-<br><br>Such a force would solve many problems. More soldiers would mean more control, which is very good for you. More soldiers would mean more security for the arcology and the approaches to it, which is very good for business. More soldiers would mean more obedience from rebellious slaves who can see how powerless they truly are, which is very good for everybody. The force would be tiny compared to the Old World militaries that still exist, but money and technology can, of course, overcome massive numerical inferiority. This being the Free Cities, they would have other uses besides security. Perhaps, in time, you could exert some manner of influence on the Old World itself.
+<br><br>In the period since, however, your citizens have seen the value in weaponry. They watched on their news-feed as some Free Cities were sacked by the armies and mobs of the old world, driven by their hatred of the citizens' luxurious lifestyles. They've seen other Cities toppled from within, by slave conspiracies or infighting among citizen groupings with differing beliefs. They've witnessed the distressingly rapid rise of fanatical anti-slavery organizations, who would like nothing more than to see them slowly bled by their own chattel. They are learned people, and they know what happens to slaveowners who lose their power.
+<br><br>They've also seen the results of your policies. Your actions towards the arming of both yourself and the arcology proved critical, and ensured their safety when the old world came for them. And your victory over the Daughters of Liberty, who the citizens know would have executed every single one of them, has created an opportunity. If you insisted upon the creation of a standing 'special' force for the arcology, many would support you and, more importantly, nobody of note would object.
+<br><br>Such a force would solve many problems. More soldiers would mean more control, which is very good for you. More soldiers would mean more security for the arcology and the approaches to it, which is very good for business. More soldiers would mean more obedience from rebellious slaves who can see how powerless they truly are, which is very good for everybody. The force would be tiny compared to the old world militaries that still exist, but money and technology can, of course, overcome massive numerical inferiority. This being the Free Cities, they would have other uses besides security. Perhaps, in time, you could exert some manner of influence on the old world itself.
<br><br>''This is a unique and very important opportunity'', and is possible only because of your recent victory over the Daughters. If you do not seize it, the memories and fears of your citizens will fade,and you will not be able to raise the matter again.
<<set _price = 20000>> <<if $PC.warfare >= 100>> <<set _price *= .5>>
diff --git a/src/SpecialForce/SpecialForce.js b/src/SpecialForce/SpecialForce.js
index 5890241780d6b7e7384348ec5ce0041014266495..7db09805e1f0d9dd0ce411c32dbae4a9fd7650e1 100644
--- a/src/SpecialForce/SpecialForce.js
+++ b/src/SpecialForce/SpecialForce.js
@@ -591,7 +591,7 @@ window.BadOutcome = function() {
case "Shell-Shocked":
V.SF.BadOutcome = "lockdown"; V.trinkets.push("${t} explosives detonator");
r += `Unnerved by your ever-increasing influence over your men and undercutting of her authority, The Colonel uses heavy explosives at Midnight to seal off The Firebase from your access. When you step off of your express elevator, you are met not with two guards, but several armed proximity mines next to an incredibly thick wall of smoking rubble. No doubt there are machine gun nests, anti-tank nests, and lots more proximity mines just waiting for you on the other side, should you somehow get through the wall of debris.`;
- r += `<br>The ${V.SF.Lower} still deploys into the Old World to plunder as it pleases, but no longer for you. You receive no money from their exploits, and their total defiance and independence of you is a permanent stain on your reputation. Of course, you'll never have the needed military power to dislodge them, especially with all the redundant fortifications, crossfire envelopes, and myriad traps that paranoid bitch had built around each entrance ever since she went rouge. Trying to sabotage certain support beams from above to make the Firebase facility collapse in on itself could easily cause enough damage to topple other parts of the arcology too, and such a thing would be very difficult to cover up. In other words, you're stuck with them. The Firebase has become a permanent tumor on your Arcology and good name.`;
+ r += `<br>The ${V.SF.Lower} still deploys into the old world to plunder as it pleases, but no longer for you. You receive no money from their exploits, and their total defiance and independence of you is a permanent stain on your reputation. Of course, you'll never have the needed military power to dislodge them, especially with all the redundant fortifications, crossfire envelopes, and myriad traps that paranoid bitch had built around each entrance ever since she went rouge. Trying to sabotage certain support beams from above to make the Firebase facility collapse in on itself could easily cause enough damage to topple other parts of the arcology too, and such a thing would be very difficult to cover up. In other words, you're stuck with them. The Firebase has become a permanent tumor on your Arcology and good name.`;
break;
case "Cruel":
V.SF.BadOutcome = "Revolt"; V.trinkets.push("${t} dog tags"); repX((0 - V.rep), "specialForces");
@@ -600,7 +600,7 @@ window.BadOutcome = function() {
V.researchLab.hired = 0; V.fuckdolls = 0; V.menialBioreactors = 0;
V.activeUnits = 0; V.secBots.troops = 0; V.createdSlavesUnits = 0;
V.createdMilitiaUnits = 0; V.createdMercUnits = 0;
- r += `<br>The ${V.SF.Lower} still deploys into the Old World to plunder as it pleases, but no longer for you. You receive no money from their exploits, and their total defiance and independence of you is a permanent stain on your reputation. Of course, you'll never have the needed military power to dislodge them, especially with all the redundant fortifications, crossfire envelopes, and myriad traps that paranoid bitch had built around each entrance ever since she went rouge. Trying to sabotage certain support beams from above to make the Firebase facility collapse in on itself could easily cause enough damage to topple other parts of the arcology too, and such a thing would be very difficult to cover up. In other words, you're stuck with them. The Firebase has become a permanent tumor on your Arcology and good name.`;
+ r += `<br>The ${V.SF.Lower} still deploys into the old world to plunder as it pleases, but no longer for you. You receive no money from their exploits, and their total defiance and independence of you is a permanent stain on your reputation. Of course, you'll never have the needed military power to dislodge them, especially with all the redundant fortifications, crossfire envelopes, and myriad traps that paranoid bitch had built around each entrance ever since she went rouge. Trying to sabotage certain support beams from above to make the Firebase facility collapse in on itself could easily cause enough damage to topple other parts of the arcology too, and such a thing would be very difficult to cover up. In other words, you're stuck with them. The Firebase has become a permanent tumor on your Arcology and good name.`;
break;
case "Cruel and Psychopathic":
V.SF.BadOutcome = "Revolt"; V.trinkets.push("${t} dog tags"); repX((0 - V.rep), "specialForces");
@@ -613,7 +613,7 @@ window.BadOutcome = function() {
r += `<br>The main Residential courtyard features the Residential Sectors' massive elevator complex, which will give The Colonel's forces rapid access to the Promenade, and ultimately, You. In front of it, your Mercenary Captain stands atop one of the many meters-thick sandbag walls his men just assembled there, leading the raging defensive blockade in bringing the vanguard's assault to a gory halt. ${V.SF.Lower}'s bodies and bits and debris pile up in small walls on the outskirts under the burning heat of hundreds of flying autocannon rounds and dozens of screeching missiles. Before the vanguard's morale can break however, The Colonel shows up in person behind her own lines, kitted in a customized power armor and dragging, of all things, a hydraulic trebuchet loaded with a crudely-welded large metal box. She launches the box from beyond your Mercenaries' line of sight, sending it reeling towards them and predicting that they will try to shoot it out of the sky. They do, not wanting the slow but strange projectile to hit them directly, only learning of their folly when the metal 'box' detonates midair and releases a dense cloud of cluster bombs over their position. The munitions themselves disable some of the exosuits, but they don't kill too many on their own. However, the bomblets do succeed in detonating the various ammo dumps that were feeding your Mercenaries' blazing guns. The chain explosions, resulting fires, destroyed cover, and widespread casualties and confusion all create the perfect opportunity for The Colonel to storm the previously implacable barricade at the head of her troops, with her followers rushing the merc lines and blasting off the heavy armor plating of your disoriented Mercenaries themselves before stabbing them to death, or in some cases, hauling off the dis-armored and defeated female Mercenaries they discover for immediate use. As the few intact Mercenaries remaining desperately struggle to hold off the advancing horde with their remaining ammo, The Colonel takes on your dazed Mercenary Captain in single combat. When their ammunition runs dry, and their blasted battlesuits break down, they both eject, and then the knives come out. Minutes later, she stabs him in the side of his skull after she dodges yet another attempt to land a killing blow on her. With the source of Mercenary command and control gone, The Colonel staunches her own bleeding, yanks a trooper out of a near-pristine battlesuit that she now claims for herself, and directly organizes the isolation and extermination of the smaller teams of Mercenaries that are bleeding her troops everywhere else. She routs your Mercenaries for good with the razing of their Garrison structure. The ${V.SF.Lower} now enjoys absolute air and ground superiority. Soon the surviving rear of her army is brought upstairs from the killing floors down in the Markets, and the many elevators and cargo lifts of the elevator complex are boarded, with your executive override codes to remotely shut down the elevators somehow being manually bypassed by her combat engineers. It won't be long now.`;
r += `<br>Dawn has broken over the Free City. Only five hours into the slaughter (of which your Mercenaries no doubt bought you at least three), it becomes very clear to you that the only way to save your arcology is to destroy it. Everything and Everyone will burn before you let this crazy bitch and her rabid dogs get their dirty hands on you or your slaves. On your order, your most loyal subordinates, the ones who were with you since the early days to patrol your Arcology before you even had drones to protect it, fight their way to through the carnage of your panicking civilians on The Promenade to get to the exact hidden elevators that your Personal Assistant specifies for them. Their destination is the arcology's reactor complex, of course. Following the PA's instructions precisely, they arm their many high-yield explosive charges on your now-exposed and de-stabilized reactor, and in one final service to you, detonate them, creating a colossal explosion. The rapidly ascending heretics quite literally have the rug pulled from under them, as the blast takes out nearly all of the arcology's lesser foundational support beams, thus collapsing many thousands of metric tons of concrete, steel, plastic, and plaster out from underneath the upward bound Colonel and her men... And everyone else, unfortunately. With no foundation any longer, all of your arcology's interior Sectors are utterly gutted from the bottom-up by gravity itself, and everything beneath your ration-stocked, backup-powered Penthouse crumbles to the earth. The massive cloud of dust created by the widespread fires and interior collapse ends up covering the entire Free City for hours. Her aircraft, now bereft of their logistical support and command structure, immediately fly off to neighboring arcologies to offer their services to the various employers there, seeing as the coup has failed and they have nowhere else to go. The skies are free for You to travel as you please, but You aren't going anywhere.`;
r += `<br>It is late evening when the tremors finally stop. Everything below your Penthouse is ruin, and your arcology, its population, and your reputation are now essentially dust. However, the arcology did not fall. It. Is. Still. Yours. You shall rise again, not flee this tragedy in shame. Of course, no one will ever know that you sacrificed the arcology deliberately in order to save yourself; it is all too easy to claim that The Colonel carelessly damaged the reactor complex during her assault, ironically causing her own defeat. Frankly, sacrificing most of your tenants doesn't bother you as much as it probably should; maybe its because you know that if The Colonel and her men had won, all those people were as good as dead anyway.`;
- r += `<br>You know that if you want to survive, you'll need to surround yourself with workers and allies to rebuild fast, else your rivals gobble you up. It costs you a horrific sum to clear and process the wreckage and rebuild the basic Sector superstructures and infrastructure for your arcology on such short notice, even after liquidating everything your workers salvage. Your powerful friends still residing in the Old World or other Free Cities have lent you a surprising amount of aid too, with quite a few lent super-heavy construction assets getting huge amounts of work done quickly. Even then, what you've been able to rebuild is very little. After a nearly sleepless, sexless week of immense toil, you've successfully organized tens of thousands of people in restoring the arcology to a barely functional condition (along with rudimentary imitations of all your upgrades), and you've even got some new Garrison Mercenaries in by week's end too... But its just not the same. If it weren't for your bruised weather-plating your arcology would look like a giant skeleton. Inside, it feels like a concrete boneyard; everything has been built cheap and utilitarian, and the walls aren't even painted. With only a few operational services staffed by commuters from neighboring arcologies, there is just an eerie silence just about everywhere. With few amenities for relief, there are going to be many long days ahead for your few tenants, most of them being wealthy but distraught returning travelers who left before the attack. Maybe your slaves can help entertain them. A lot of these people are VIP's it seems.`;
+ r += `<br>You know that if you want to survive, you'll need to surround yourself with workers and allies to rebuild fast, else your rivals gobble you up. It costs you a horrific sum to clear and process the wreckage and rebuild the basic Sector superstructures and infrastructure for your arcology on such short notice, even after liquidating everything your workers salvage. Your powerful friends still residing in the old world or other Free Cities have lent you a surprising amount of aid too, with quite a few lent super-heavy construction assets getting huge amounts of work done quickly. Even then, what you've been able to rebuild is very little. After a nearly sleepless, sexless week of immense toil, you've successfully organized tens of thousands of people in restoring the arcology to a barely functional condition (along with rudimentary imitations of all your upgrades), and you've even got some new Garrison Mercenaries in by week's end too... But its just not the same. If it weren't for your bruised weather-plating your arcology would look like a giant skeleton. Inside, it feels like a concrete boneyard; everything has been built cheap and utilitarian, and the walls aren't even painted. With only a few operational services staffed by commuters from neighboring arcologies, there is just an eerie silence just about everywhere. With few amenities for relief, there are going to be many long days ahead for your few tenants, most of them being wealthy but distraught returning travelers who left before the attack. Maybe your slaves can help entertain them. A lot of these people are VIP's it seems.`;
r += `<br>It is now midnight. In a rare moment of reflection, you contemplate that what The Colonel just did to your arcology was exactly what you were all too happy to have her do to dozens, if not hundreds of innocent villages and townships under your shadow during her 'Raiding and Slaving' operations. Nevertheless, You have hard work ahead of you, especially now that your enemies see that you are now much weaker than you have ever been.`;
r += `<br>The Colonel's body was never found.`;
break;
@@ -664,7 +664,7 @@ window.UnitText = function(input) {
let e0 = `The engine has been`, engine3 = ``, armor3 = ``, tires = ``;
let m1 = ``, m2 = ``, pod1 = ``, pod2 = ``;
- let b1 = `has been sold to ${V.SF.Lower} through back channels to support a failing Old World nation. The tank is so large it cannot fit inside the garage, and has`;
+ let b1 = `has been sold to ${V.SF.Lower} through back channels to support a failing old world nation. The tank is so large it cannot fit inside the garage, and has`;
let c1 = ``, engines4 = `. Two engines power the left and right sides of the tank separately, leaving it underpowered and slow`;
let gun0 = ``, gun1 = ``, gun2 = `an undersized main gun and makeshift firing system from a standard battle tank`;
let armor5 = ``, armor6 = ``, cannon = ``, laser = ``, PGTframe = ``;
@@ -679,7 +679,7 @@ window.UnitText = function(input) {
let miniguns = ``, counter = ``;
let engine20 = `ramjet engines in the atmosphere that can reach Mach 10`;
- let b5 = `has been purchased from an insolvent Old World nation. It `;
+ let b5 = `has been purchased from an insolvent old world nation. It `;
let shield = ``, camera = ``, efficiency = ``, camera2 = ``, drag = ``;
let crew = ``, engine2 = ``, skin = ``;
@@ -687,11 +687,11 @@ window.UnitText = function(input) {
let barrels = `Miniguns and Gatling cannons line`, distance = `, though the distance to ground targets renders the smaller calibers somewhat less useful`;
let b4 = ``, c2 = ``, fuel = ``, GS_Speed = ``, countermeasures = ``, ammunition = ``, DFA = ``, autocannon = ``;
- let loc1 = `An unused science satellite has been purchased from an Old World nation. While currently useless, it holds potential to be a powerful tool.`;
+ let loc1 = `An unused science satellite has been purchased from an old world nation. While currently useless, it holds potential to be a powerful tool.`;
let gyro = ``, telemetry = ``, thrusters = ``, solar = ``, surviv = ``;
let laser1 = ``, heat = ``, reactor = ``, lens = ``, kin = ``;
- let loc = `has been purchased from a crumbling Old World nation. It`;
+ let loc = `has been purchased from a crumbling old world nation. It`;
let power = `Large batteries mounted in oversized shoulders power the robot for up to ten minutes of use, though they make for large targets.`;
let knife = `simply a 8.5 meter long knife, though additional weapons are under development.`;
let armor8 = ``, actuator = ``, cannon1 = ``, heatsink = ``, ammo2 = ``;
@@ -701,11 +701,11 @@ window.UnitText = function(input) {
let b2 = `outdated, something quickly rigged together to give the launch site something to fire in the case of an attack`;
let c8 = ``, d1 = ``, e1 = ``, f1 = ``, g1 = ``, h1 = ``;
- let recom1 = `has been recommissioned from the Old World for ${V.SF.Lower}. It`;
+ let recom1 = `has been recommissioned from the old world for ${V.SF.Lower}. It`;
let jets = `Formerly mothballed strike jets`, loc2 = ``, radar = ``, AAG = ``;
let prop = ``, torp = ``, armor9 = ``, power1 = ``, scramble1 = ``;
- let recom = `has been recommissioned from the Old World, and`;
+ let recom = `has been recommissioned from the old world, and`;
let reactor0 = `Because diesel engines provide power and breathing oxygen is kept in pressurized canisters, the sub must frequently surface.`;
let reactor1 = ``, cal = ``, hull = ``, tubes = ``, torpedoes = ``, sonar = ``;
let control = ``, missiles = ``;
@@ -800,7 +800,7 @@ window.UnitText = function(input) {
if (S.AV >= 7) fireC2 = `and an autoloader have`; fireC1 = `rapid, accurate fire while separating the crew from the stored ammunition in the event the ammo cooks off.`;
if (S.AV >= 8) armor22 = `A reactive armor system has been added, giving the tank an additional, if temporary, layer of protection.`;
if (S.AV >= 9) turret = `The turret has been massively redesigned, lowering the tank profile and increasing the efficiency of the mechanisms within.`;
- if (S.AV >= 10) MG = `140 mm main gun can quash anything even the greatest Old World nations could muster.`;
+ if (S.AV >= 10) MG = `140 mm main gun can quash anything even the greatest old world nations could muster.`;
return `${text5} A fleet of main battle tanks ${activate} are parked in the garage${mechanics}. ${turret} The ${MG} ${ammo1} ${mg} ${fireC0} ${fireC2} ${fireC3} ${fireC1} ${engine1} ${armor2} ${armor22}`;
}
break;
diff --git a/src/events/gameover.tw b/src/events/gameover.tw
index ef40ece1711925efcc5542a87570b917e43fc385..4b62c2d887f008e134dd8146fe534550cca6e6a6 100644
--- a/src/events/gameover.tw
+++ b/src/events/gameover.tw
@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@
As the horde of raiders breaks the battle lines and enters the arcology, all hell breaks loose. You citizens are raped, your slaves captured and abused, your penthouse burned.
As for you, you are quickly captured and brought in front of the warlord himself. With a satisfied smile he aims his pistol to your forehead and squeezes the trigger.
<<elseif $attackType == "old world">>
- As the interminable column of Old World puppets breaks the battle lines and enters the arcology, all hell breaks loose. Properties are seized and wealth stolen and distributed between the victorious soldiers.
+ As the interminable column of old world puppets breaks the battle lines and enters the arcology, all hell breaks loose. Properties are seized and wealth stolen and distributed between the victorious soldiers.
You are stripped of everything you possessed and left to rot in a corner of your once glorious arcology.
<<elseif $attackType == "freedom fighters">>
As the army of freedom fighters invades the arcology, all hell breaks loose. Their righteous fury torches everything you held dear, while the streets of the arcology run red with the blood of the masters.
diff --git a/src/events/intro/pcBodyIntro.tw b/src/events/intro/pcBodyIntro.tw
index c3ee34f0e66ade75f569fc68dd3131f850a0e0e2..f42f251a3081a160f1f79d4d24c0ae16f5c9612f 100644
--- a/src/events/intro/pcBodyIntro.tw
+++ b/src/events/intro/pcBodyIntro.tw
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
:: PC Body Intro [nobr]
-Most slaveowners in the Free Cities are male. The preexisting power structures of the Old World have mostly migrated to the new, and it can often be very hard to be a free woman in the Free Cities. Some manage to make their way, but in many arcologies, men are the owners, and women are the owned. You'll cut a striking figure as the owner and leader of your arcology, but @@.orange;what's under your business attire?@@
+Most slaveowners in the Free Cities are male. The preexisting power structures of the old world have mostly migrated to the new, and it can often be very hard to be a free woman in the Free Cities. Some manage to make their way, but in many arcologies, men are the owners, and women are the owned. You'll cut a striking figure as the owner and leader of your arcology, but @@.orange;what's under your business attire?@@
<<set $PC.actualAge = Math.clamp($PC.actualAge, 14, 80)>>
<br>
diff --git a/src/events/intro/terrainIntro.tw b/src/events/intro/terrainIntro.tw
index 73fb136ea5c3876e1d7fa86868d9a778b6b4a79b..8cf3c72f642b867e776ce8634368974e2e344bf3 100644
--- a/src/events/intro/terrainIntro.tw
+++ b/src/events/intro/terrainIntro.tw
@@ -29,34 +29,34 @@ Many Free Cities are therefore located in marginal, rural terrain. Founding a Fr
<br><br>
Some Free Cities are located on water. Though some areas of shallow sea over the continental shelves hide valuable resources, others are neglected. Arcologies are such massive structures that it is very possible to design them to float anchored to the seabed.
<br><br>
-Finally, a few Free Cities have been carved out from Old World cities. Urban decay has left the hearts of many cities ripe for this. Many Old World countries resist this kind of secession, but this rarest, smallest, and densest kind of Free City can offer its surrounding nation a great deal of economic advantage.
+Finally, a few Free Cities have been carved out from old world cities. Urban decay has left the hearts of many cities ripe for this. Many old world countries resist this kind of secession, but this rarest, smallest, and densest kind of Free City can offer its surrounding nation a great deal of economic advantage.
<br><br>
@@.orange;Which kind of Free City hosts your arcology?@@
<br>
<br>[[Urban|Location Intro][$terrain = "urban"]]
<br> @@.yellow;Low@@ minimum slave value and initial @@.yellow;bear market@@ for slaves.
-<br> @@.green;High@@ ease of commerce with the Old World.
+<br> @@.green;High@@ ease of commerce with the old world.
<br> @@.green;High@@ access to refugees and other desperate people.
<br> @@.red;Low@@ cultural independence.
<br>[[Rural|Location Intro][$terrain = "rural"]]
<br> @@.yellow;High@@ minimum slave value and initial @@.yellow;bull market@@ for slaves.
-<br> Moderate ease of commerce with the Old World.
+<br> Moderate ease of commerce with the old world.
<br> Moderate access to refugees and other desperate people.
<br> Moderate cultural independence.
<br>[[Ravine|Location Intro][$terrain = "ravine"]]
<br> @@.yellow;High@@ minimum slave value and initial @@.yellow;bull market@@ for slaves.
-<br> @@.red;Low@@ ease of commerce with the Old World.
+<br> @@.red;Low@@ ease of commerce with the old world.
<br> @@.red;Very low@@ access to refugees and other desperate people.
<br> @@.green;High@@ cultural independence.
<br>[[Marine|Location Intro][$terrain = "marine"]]
<br> Moderate minimum slave value and initially balanced market for slaves.
-<br> Moderate ease of commerce with the Old World.
+<br> Moderate ease of commerce with the old world.
<br> @@.red;Low@@ access to refugees and other desperate people.
<br> @@.green;High@@ cultural independence.
<br>[[Oceanic|Intro Summary][$terrain = "oceanic"]]
<br> @@.yellow;High@@ minimum slave value and initial @@.yellow;bull market@@ for slaves.
-<br> Moderate ease of commerce with the Old World.
+<br> Moderate ease of commerce with the old world.
<br> @@.red;Very low@@ access to refugees and other desperate people.
<br> @@.green;Very high@@ cultural independence.
<br> Ensures access to slaves from all over the world and will not associate the arcology with a continent.
diff --git a/src/events/intro/tradeIntro.tw b/src/events/intro/tradeIntro.tw
index 0eb3ff4538ddb50cd2451bcc224a24a2bfe706b6..44d7cd5823fcb89ddab456206077e9f5c5ddedf1 100644
--- a/src/events/intro/tradeIntro.tw
+++ b/src/events/intro/tradeIntro.tw
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
:: Trade Intro [nobr]
-Most of the Free Cities are run on radically libertarian or even anarcho-capitalist principles. The first Free Cities experimented with indentured servitude, and this rapidly developed into widespread slavery. By now, the Free Cities collectively are a fundamentally slaveowning society and maintain a thriving slave trade that feeds off the terrible conditions in parts of the Old World. @@.orange;What attitude have the Old World countries generally taken towards this trade?@@
+Most of the Free Cities are run on radically libertarian or even anarcho-capitalist principles. The first Free Cities experimented with indentured servitude, and this rapidly developed into widespread slavery. By now, the Free Cities collectively are a fundamentally slaveowning society and maintain a thriving slave trade that feeds off the terrible conditions in parts of the old world. @@.orange;What attitude have the old world countries generally taken towards this trade?@@
<br><br>
[[They've turned a blind eye, or even been complicit.|Extreme Intro][$internationalTrade = 1]] //Slaves from all across the world will appear.//<br>
[[They've done what little they can to stop it.|Extreme Intro][$internationalTrade = 0]] //Almost all slaves will be from the continent where the arcology is located.//<br>
diff --git a/src/facilities/nursery/longChildDescription.tw b/src/facilities/nursery/longChildDescription.tw
index 39e38d6069566f2aebc8638cbe12b8e57eb62c37..702d7bb835287badf55726145f44c9011d2b67b2 100644
--- a/src/facilities/nursery/longChildDescription.tw
+++ b/src/facilities/nursery/longChildDescription.tw
@@ -351,7 +351,7 @@ is
<<if $arcologies[0].FSChattelReligionist == "unset">>
$He's delightfully @@.green;sinful,@@ taking real pleasure in breaking cultural mores.
<<else>>
- $He's a devout Chattel Religionist, and is aggressively @@.green;sinful@@ against Old World faiths. $He is enthusiastic about slutty religious clothing, and excited by intentional sacrilege like openly using Old World religious icons as sex toys or having orgies on altars.
+ $He's a devout Chattel Religionist, and is aggressively @@.green;sinful@@ against old world faiths. $He is enthusiastic about slutty religious clothing, and excited by intentional sacrilege like openly using old world religious icons as sex toys or having orgies on altars.
<</if>>
<<case "advocate">>
$He's an @@.green;advocate@@ for slavery, and can articulate what it's done for $him.
diff --git a/src/gui/Encyclopedia/encyclopedia.tw b/src/gui/Encyclopedia/encyclopedia.tw
index bc9bfc5f6ce653c00d6c095860abc5483488cc33..57687e5cd45d9b3237c42acc19bc0986a067b122 100644
--- a/src/gui/Encyclopedia/encyclopedia.tw
+++ b/src/gui/Encyclopedia/encyclopedia.tw
@@ -231,7 +231,7 @@ BEING IN CHARGE
<br><br>//The benefits of high @@.green;[[reputation|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Arcologies and Reputation"]]@@ are numerous. Many business and enslavement opportunities will open to you once you are reputable. Some of the most advanced technology is only available to those with impeccable @@.green;[[reputations|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Arcologies and Reputation"]]@@ as slaveowners, and many of the finer slave markets will only consider reputable buyers. You may eventually become so renowned that merely branding a slave with your mark will increase her value on the open market.//
- <br><br>//However, your @@.green;[[reputation|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Arcologies and Reputation"]]@@ will not look after itself. At a certain point, you will become so reputable that continual effort will be necessary to maintain your renown. The Old World question "What have you done for me lately?" is asked with twice the force in the Free Cities! You will quickly find that this natural decay of @@.green;[[reputation|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Arcologies and Reputation"]]@@ can overwhelm your efforts to improve it by the end of the week. A concerted strategy will be necessary to overcome this.//
+ <br><br>//However, your @@.green;[[reputation|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Arcologies and Reputation"]]@@ will not look after itself. At a certain point, you will become so reputable that continual effort will be necessary to maintain your renown. The old world question "What have you done for me lately?" is asked with twice the force in the Free Cities! You will quickly find that this natural decay of @@.green;[[reputation|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Arcologies and Reputation"]]@@ can overwhelm your efforts to improve it by the end of the week. A concerted strategy will be necessary to overcome this.//
<<case "Random Events">>
@@ -760,7 +760,7 @@ SLAVE ASSIGNMENTS:
<br><br>A good Head Girl will be @@.hotpink;[[devotion|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@ to her master and sexually skilled. Experienced slaveowners have also found that an older slave girl is often more effective than a young one. Since slavery is new, older slave girls will have spent part of their adult lives as free women, and have a deeper body of life experience to draw on.
- <br><br>Naturally, some slaveowners form a strong emotional bond with their Head Girl. @@.mediumaquamarine;[[Trusting|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Trust"]]@@ and relying on a close companion can begin to resemble Old World relationships. It is a paradox of modern Free Cities life that such closeness is strongly frowned upon. Rumors that a prominent person is emotionally involved with his or her Head Girl can be as socially devastating as rumors of infidelity were a hundred years ago.
+ <br><br>Naturally, some slaveowners form a strong emotional bond with their Head Girl. @@.mediumaquamarine;[[Trusting|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Trust"]]@@ and relying on a close companion can begin to resemble old world relationships. It is a paradox of modern Free Cities life that such closeness is strongly frowned upon. Rumors that a prominent person is emotionally involved with his or her Head Girl can be as socially devastating as rumors of infidelity were a hundred years ago.
<br><br>— Lawrence, W. G., //Guide to Modern Slavery, 2037 Edition////
@@ -1513,7 +1513,7 @@ THE X-SERIES ARCOLOGY
<<case "The Auto Salon">>
- //Your auto salon is similar to the studio and the remote surgery, but is far less intimidating. It is set up like a single seat from an Old World beauty salon, except that a series of manipulators descend from the ceiling towards the chair. It can perform any of the usual cosmetic services. The only special capability it has is to automatically color coordinate nails and makeup with a slave's hair. It is fashionable to apply color schemes to slaves, and this function will make following the trend easy. Your salon will cost @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat($modCost)>>@@ per use. These procedures are not especially invasive, and you can perform as many of them as you wish during a single week without fear for your slave's health.//
+ //Your auto salon is similar to the studio and the remote surgery, but is far less intimidating. It is set up like a single seat from an old world beauty salon, except that a series of manipulators descend from the ceiling towards the chair. It can perform any of the usual cosmetic services. The only special capability it has is to automatically color coordinate nails and makeup with a slave's hair. It is fashionable to apply color schemes to slaves, and this function will make following the trend easy. Your salon will cost @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat($modCost)>>@@ per use. These procedures are not especially invasive, and you can perform as many of them as you wish during a single week without fear for your slave's health.//
<br><br>The auto salon is mostly available for the player's experimentation. Some combinations of cosmetic options can have minor effects on some assignments and events, but these are very marginal. Slaves' appearances will differ in many scenes and events based on the player's cosmetic choices, but these details are for flavor only. As usual, gameplay effects are usually called out in explicit colored text; if they aren't, no major gameplay effects are happening.
@@ -1627,7 +1627,7 @@ ARCOLOGY FACILITIES
<br><br>First, it's really tasty! If you've never tried it, put FCHW no. 1 down now and go try it. Buy it bottled if you have to, but make an effort to take your first drink right from the teat. You'll only ever take your first sip of mother's milk once, and it should really be special. Everyone describes it a little differently, but I'd say it's a warm, rich and comforting milk with vanilla and nutty flavors.
- <br><br>Second, it's sexy! Decadence is in, folks. Many people move to the Free Cities to get away from the Old World, but some come here to experience real freedom. The experience of drinking a woman's milk before, during, and after you use her just isn't something you pass up. Try it today.
+ <br><br>Second, it's sexy! Decadence is in, folks. Many people move to the Free Cities to get away from the old world, but some come here to experience real freedom. The experience of drinking a woman's milk before, during, and after you use her just isn't something you pass up. Try it today.
<br><br>— Banaszewski, Valerie P., //Free Cities Husbandry Weekly, February 2, 2032////
@@ -1706,7 +1706,7 @@ TERRAIN TYPES
<<case "Urban Terrain">>
''Urban'' terrain is one of the possible settings for the Free City in which the arcology is located. It provides:
<br> @@.yellow;Low@@ minimum slave value and initial @@.yellow;bear market@@ for slaves.
- <br> @@.green;High@@ ease of commerce with the Old World.
+ <br> @@.green;High@@ ease of commerce with the old world.
<br> @@.green;High@@ access to refugees and other desperate people.
<br> @@.red;Low@@ cultural independence.
@@ -1714,7 +1714,7 @@ TERRAIN TYPES
<<case "Rural Terrain">>
''Rural'' terrain is one of the possible settings for the Free City in which the arcology is located. It provides:
<br> @@.yellow;High@@ minimum slave value and initial @@.yellow;bull market@@ for slaves.
- <br> Moderate ease of commerce with the Old World.
+ <br> Moderate ease of commerce with the old world.
<br> Moderate access to refugees and other desperate people.
<br> Moderate cultural independence.
@@ -1722,7 +1722,7 @@ TERRAIN TYPES
<<case "Marine Terrain">>
''Marine'' terrain is one of the possible settings for the Free City in which the arcology is located. It provides:
<br> Moderate minimum slave value and initially balanced market for slaves.
- <br> Moderate ease of commerce with the Old World.
+ <br> Moderate ease of commerce with the old world.
<br> @@.red;Low@@ access to refugees and other desperate people.
<br> @@.green;High@@ cultural independence.
@@ -1730,7 +1730,7 @@ TERRAIN TYPES
<<case "Oceanic Terrain">>
''Oceanic'' terrain is one of the possible settings for the Free City in which the arcology is located. It provides:
<br> @@.yellow;High@@ minimum slave value and initial @@.yellow;bull market@@ for slaves.
- <br> Moderate ease of commerce with the Old World.
+ <br> Moderate ease of commerce with the old world.
<br> @@.red;Very low@@ access to refugees and other desperate people.
<br> @@.green;Very high@@ cultural independence.
<br> Ensures access to slaves from all over the world and will not associate the arcology with a continent.
@@ -1741,7 +1741,7 @@ FUTURE SOCIETIES
<<case "Future Societies">>
//The evolution of society has never been linear. Times of unrest and upheaval produce rapid change, followed by long periods of stasis in the absence of the necessary ingredients for further change. The world is undoubtedly in the midst of a time of great change: society is certainly evolving. But into what?
- <br><br>Not since antiquity have single persons held as much practical power over the direction of society as Free Cities arcology owners now have. Naturally, different Free Cities notables are going different ways with their great power. Many are building new societies as different from each other as they are from the Old World.
+ <br><br>Not since antiquity have single persons held as much practical power over the direction of society as Free Cities arcology owners now have. Naturally, different Free Cities notables are going different ways with their great power. Many are building new societies as different from each other as they are from the old world.
<br><br>One arcology might hold a society that is moving towards a fundamentalist interpretation of an old slaveholding religious tradition. Another might pay homage to historical racially segregated societies. A third might see intentional manipulation of gender roles that have held since the start of recorded history. And these three arcologies might well be each other's neighbors.
@@ -1959,9 +1959,9 @@ LORE: THE FREE CITIES TODAY
<<case "Money">>
- //Digital currencies have come a long way in the past twenty years. From the poorly managed, excessively ideological, incompetently run experiments whose failures inspired years of public skepticism, they have matured into a reliable means of exchange. The technical details are unimportant for all but students of economics, since broad diversification and clever design have made them reliable and stable means of exchange. With so many Old World currencies collapsing, they are coming to dominate world commerce at last.
+ //Digital currencies have come a long way in the past twenty years. From the poorly managed, excessively ideological, incompetently run experiments whose failures inspired years of public skepticism, they have matured into a reliable means of exchange. The technical details are unimportant for all but students of economics, since broad diversification and clever design have made them reliable and stable means of exchange. With so many old world currencies collapsing, they are coming to dominate world commerce at last.
- <br><br>The diversified bundle of assets that constitutes the unit of exchange that allows the Free Cities to function is commonly referred to as the "credit" and denoted in print by a ¤ symbol. It is unusually valuable for a basic monetary unit, but the extreme wealth concentration seen in most of the Free Cities makes this a feature rather than a flaw. Estimating its value is extremely difficult, since the value of goods and services varies wildly between Free Cities, and even more wildly between any given Free City and the surrounding Old World.
+ <br><br>The diversified bundle of assets that constitutes the unit of exchange that allows the Free Cities to function is commonly referred to as the "credit" and denoted in print by a ¤ symbol. It is unusually valuable for a basic monetary unit, but the extreme wealth concentration seen in most of the Free Cities makes this a feature rather than a flaw. Estimating its value is extremely difficult, since the value of goods and services varies wildly between Free Cities, and even more wildly between any given Free City and the surrounding old world.
<br><br> Direct comparisons of purchasing power across long gulfs of time are often unscientific. Such comparisons usually rely on indexing currencies to a good or a market basket of goods, ignoring the constant shifts in the value of goods and services throughout history. The best that a responsible economist can do for a historical value of the ¤ is to give a range. Depending on the index good, the 2037 ¤ can be argued to be worth anywhere between thirty and several hundred US dollars.
@@ -1978,9 +1978,9 @@ LORE: THE FREE CITIES TODAY
<br><br>Over the course of the 21st century, diseases and disease treatments have become more powerful, side by side. New disease vectors, antibiotic resistances, and even malicious engineering have combined to make infectious agents tougher. However, medicine has advanced as well, with distributed fabrication techniques and genetic sequencing making tailored drugs widely available to those with the resources to afford them.
- <br><br>This sounds like balance. In the Old World, however, it looks like the bugs may be winning. Life expectancy is beginning to settle to pre-antibiotic levels. Meanwhile, in the Free Cities, medicine is [[nymphomania|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Nymphomania"]]: better health care and the ubiquity of modern medicine have nearly eliminated disease as a day-to-day concern.
+ <br><br>This sounds like balance. In the old world, however, it looks like the bugs may be winning. Life expectancy is beginning to settle to pre-antibiotic levels. Meanwhile, in the Free Cities, medicine is [[nymphomania|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Nymphomania"]]: better health care and the ubiquity of modern medicine have nearly eliminated disease as a day-to-day concern.
- <br><br>If you want simple advice, here it is: fuck your Free Cities slaves bareback, but wrap up if you visit the Old World.
+ <br><br>If you want simple advice, here it is: fuck your Free Cities slaves bareback, but wrap up if you visit the old world.
<br><br>— Dodgson, Jane Elizabeth, //FC Med Today, March 25, 2032////
@@ -1990,7 +1990,7 @@ LORE: THE FREE CITIES TODAY
<br><br>The only law respected across all Cities is the enforcement of contracts. Some Cities have limited regulation of other areas, but in general, the only justice available comes when a contract has been breached.
- <br><br>Different Cities have taken different approaches to the obvious problem of dealing with criminal conduct, which in the Old World breaks no traditional contract. The most common approach is to require everyone to sign contracts with the owners of their homes and workplaces to commit no crimes while there. In this way, what would be murder in the Old World is a breach of the contract with one's landlord not to murder on his property.
+ <br><br>Different Cities have taken different approaches to the obvious problem of dealing with criminal conduct, which in the old world breaks no traditional contract. The most common approach is to require everyone to sign contracts with the owners of their homes and workplaces to commit no crimes while there. In this way, what would be murder in the old world is a breach of the contract with one's landlord not to murder on his property.
<br><br>Penalties for such conduct are usually left to the imagination of the property owner. With the traditional roles of judge, jury, and jailer concentrated into the hands of a single wealthy person, rich potentates of the Cities hold more personal power over their tenants than anyone since the great feudal lords seven centuries ago.
@@ -2014,7 +2014,7 @@ LORE: THE FREE CITIES TODAY
<br><br>''First, clothes for your disobedient bitches.'' We must keep them uncomfortable, yes? The old reliable is //slave clothes//, sometimes referred to as straps. These give her that sex slave allure while keeping her nice and uncomfortable. You can also go for full coverage with //latex//. A suit of that will keep her totally reliant on your little whims. //Plugs// are nice sturdy leather affairs with inward-facing dildos for all the holes — and I do mean all. They're good stuff for breaking a bitch, and she might even learn to take dick a bit better! Word to the wise: not a good idea if you want those holes tight, though. Finally, //corsets//. These will make life tough, but that's good for a @@.orangered;[[rebellious|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@ little cunt, no? And corseting might just narrow that waist. But never mind, on to my favorites.
- <br><br>''Second, nice attire for your prize stock.'' These clothes will keep your good slaves happy. You know, women out in the Old World still wear //attractive lingerie// UNDER clothing? Absurd. It's lovely on it's own. If you're looking to be a bit more fun and a bit less classy, go for //string lingerie// instead. You could even let her choose her own //slutty outfits//; watching livestock dress itself is always good fun. When you can afford proper //slutty jewelry//, who needs clothes? I suggest accenting heavy piercings with this. For your hookah fanatics and decadent harem masters, there's //sheer gauze//. Makes even a clumsy girl look like she's dancing to a zither.
+ <br><br>''Second, nice attire for your prize stock.'' These clothes will keep your good slaves happy. You know, women out in the old world still wear //attractive lingerie// UNDER clothing? Absurd. It's lovely on it's own. If you're looking to be a bit more fun and a bit less classy, go for //string lingerie// instead. You could even let her choose her own //slutty outfits//; watching livestock dress itself is always good fun. When you can afford proper //slutty jewelry//, who needs clothes? I suggest accenting heavy piercings with this. For your hookah fanatics and decadent harem masters, there's //sheer gauze//. Makes even a clumsy girl look like she's dancing to a zither.
<br><br>Finally, //chastity belts//. Hard to categorize. Different bitches react in different ways to having the front door locked. Depends on how much traffic goes in the back, I find.
@@ -2036,7 +2036,7 @@ LORE: THE FREE CITIES TODAY
<br><br>Understanding this is the only way to understand some emerging markets in the Free Cities. This maxim often receives criticism from the uninformed, but all it means is that enjoyment is a good (or service) that can be bought and sold like any other. The market for exotic varieties of fun has never been more open than it is right now.
- <br><br>The forming market for ejaculate can only be understood in this context. In the Old World, a thriving market for semen for insemination purposes has been thriving for a long while. In the Free Cities, however, homogenized ejaculate is now available in quantities and at prices that make it obvious that it's being put to other uses. Semen is nutritionally marginal; it has some cosmetic applications, but like every other natural cosmetic it has long since been eclipsed by artificial means. The only possible explanation is that many citizens of the Free Cities find various combinations of slaves and large volumes of ejaculate an amusing combination.
+ <br><br>The forming market for ejaculate can only be understood in this context. In the old world, a thriving market for semen for insemination purposes has been thriving for a long while. In the Free Cities, however, homogenized ejaculate is now available in quantities and at prices that make it obvious that it's being put to other uses. Semen is nutritionally marginal; it has some cosmetic applications, but like every other natural cosmetic it has long since been eclipsed by artificial means. The only possible explanation is that many citizens of the Free Cities find various combinations of slaves and large volumes of ejaculate an amusing combination.
<br><br>Anecdotes abound. Some slaveowners claim that using it as a dietary additive with the knowledge of their slaves enforces an extra layer of degradation and sexual servitude while habituating the unfortunates to oral sex.
@@ -2044,7 +2044,7 @@ LORE: THE FREE CITIES TODAY
<<case "Gingering">>
- //Like much of the traditional husbandry terminology, 'gingering' is a term whose meaning in the Free Cities is slowly diverging from its original Old World definition. In animal husbandry, especially of horses, gingering is the nearly extinct practice of placing an irritant compound (traditionally ginger, hence the term) inside one of the animal's orifices, typically the anus, in order to make the animal step high, be sprightly, and generally behave energetically due to the discomfort. Though it was sometimes used at shows and competitions, the usual application was to make the animal seem more valuable for sale.
+ //Like much of the traditional husbandry terminology, 'gingering' is a term whose meaning in the Free Cities is slowly diverging from its original old world definition. In animal husbandry, especially of horses, gingering is the nearly extinct practice of placing an irritant compound (traditionally ginger, hence the term) inside one of the animal's orifices, typically the anus, in order to make the animal step high, be sprightly, and generally behave energetically due to the discomfort. Though it was sometimes used at shows and competitions, the usual application was to make the animal seem more valuable for sale.
<br><br>In the Free Cities, 'gingering' is coming to mean any drugging or other temporary adulteration of a slave in order to make her seem more valuable. For poorly broken slaves, stimulants and depressants are both common. These can be applied to make a resistant slave seem less @@.hotpink;[[rebellious|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]],@@ or a terrified slave more @@.mediumaquamarine;[[trusting|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Trust"]],@@ though of course this is unreliable.
@@ -2080,7 +2080,7 @@ LORE: FREE CITIES CULTURE TOMORROW
<br><br>Fine historical parallels are probably lost on the person with XY chromosomes who is brought to the Free Cities, enslaved, treated thenceforth as female, and expected to behave as female on pain of severe punishment (sometimes with gender reassignment surgery to match, but often without). This redefinition of gender is common in the Free Cities: being penetrated makes one female, while penetrating makes one male. It almost certainly arose as a way for citizens to partake in all that a slave society has to offer, sexually, without reconsidering their own sexual identity. It is not identical to Roman sexual mores, but the Romans are the closest precedent.
- <br><br>This new and evolving system of sexual values does not free citizens from all expectations. Quite to the contrary, many find it just as restrictive as Old World values, although differently so. For example, a naturally heterosexual female arcology owner who indulges in vanilla sex with masculine slaves will typically find her strength and acumen being questioned for no other reason than that she permits slaves to penetrate her.
+ <br><br>This new and evolving system of sexual values does not free citizens from all expectations. Quite to the contrary, many find it just as restrictive as old world values, although differently so. For example, a naturally heterosexual female arcology owner who indulges in vanilla sex with masculine slaves will typically find her strength and acumen being questioned for no other reason than that she permits slaves to penetrate her.
<br><br> — Lawrence, J. K., and Bolingbroke, D. S., __Trends in Free Cities Culture, 2031__ //Journal of Modern Social Sciences, International Edition, February 2032////
@@ -2102,7 +2102,7 @@ LORE: FREE CITIES CULTURE TOMORROW
<br><br>The safest slave society is a stratified slave society. Innovative Free Cities slaveowners are carefully differentiating their chattel, ensuring that favored slaves are interposed between them and the masses of their lesser stock. This is one of the oldest principles of leadership, ensuring that the grind of day-to-day direction and correction comes from subordinate leaders, while rewards and planning come from the top. The addition of sexuality to this model simply means that many Free Cities slaves get it, so to speak, from both ends.
- <br><br>There can be great advantages for talented and hardworking slaves. Out in the Old World, crime, war, natural disasters, and simple crushing want often strike with little distinction based on @@.cyan;intelligence,@@ skill, or strength. A truly excellent individual serving in a well-thought-out arcology can rise to a position of considerable @@.mediumaquamarine;[[trust|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Trust"]]@@ and power on her merits. It would be foolish to over-romanticize the reality of slavery, however, for all that advancement rests entirely on the whim of her owner. Talent can count for little for girls unlucky enough to find themselves owned by a capricious master.
+ <br><br>There can be great advantages for talented and hardworking slaves. Out in the old world, crime, war, natural disasters, and simple crushing want often strike with little distinction based on @@.cyan;intelligence,@@ skill, or strength. A truly excellent individual serving in a well-thought-out arcology can rise to a position of considerable @@.mediumaquamarine;[[trust|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Trust"]]@@ and power on her merits. It would be foolish to over-romanticize the reality of slavery, however, for all that advancement rests entirely on the whim of her owner. Talent can count for little for girls unlucky enough to find themselves owned by a capricious master.
<br><br> — Lawrence, J. K., and Bolingbroke, D. S., __Trends in Free Cities Culture, 2031__ //Journal of Modern Social Sciences, International Edition, February 2032////
@@ -2111,9 +2111,9 @@ LORE: FREE CITIES CULTURE TOMORROW
//Public servant today, whore tomorrow, glory hole bitch next month.
<br> — Anonymous slave
- <br><br>Slaves at the top of the Free Cities hierarchy enjoy a standard of life far above the average free citizen of the Old World. However, slaves at the bottom do not. As the Free Cities redefine what it means to be human, they can be extraordinarily callous to those people who are excluded from the new rubric.
+ <br><br>Slaves at the top of the Free Cities hierarchy enjoy a standard of life far above the average free citizen of the old world. However, slaves at the bottom do not. As the Free Cities redefine what it means to be human, they can be extraordinarily callous to those people who are excluded from the new rubric.
- <br><br>Free Cities glory holes are perhaps the ultimate expression of the dark side of modern slavery. In the Old World, glory holes were mostly a sexual fantasy, and were confined to certain sexual subcultures where they did exist in reality. Free Cities glory holes are different both in that they exist, and are indeed very common; and in that their occupants are almost never present voluntarily.
+ <br><br>Free Cities glory holes are perhaps the ultimate expression of the dark side of modern slavery. In the old world, glory holes were mostly a sexual fantasy, and were confined to certain sexual subcultures where they did exist in reality. Free Cities glory holes are different both in that they exist, and are indeed very common; and in that their occupants are almost never present voluntarily.
<br><br>Glory holes and slave brothels have a symbiotic existence, and any Free Cities slaveholder who owns a brothel full of pampered prostitutes who claims moral ascendancy for not owning an arcade is ignoring realities. In truth, all slave brothels benefit from the existence of arcades. After all, every slave whore in the Free Cities knows that if she does not perform up to her Master's standards, the arcades exist as a way of extracting value from her body. Every slave brothel receives better efforts out of its slaves due to their knowledge that a worse alternative is always available — if not with their current master, then with some other.
@@ -2156,7 +2156,7 @@ LORE: FREE CITIES CULTURE TOMORROW
<br><br>At different points in the history of slavery, slaves have been nearly equal to or even in some cases superior to the lowest classes of free citizen, and have been nearly as low as or even lower than the most valuable categories of animal livestock. Which will become the Free Cities norm remains to be seen; there are arcologies that exemplify either approach. A few arcologies apply both standards, and standards in between, all at once.
- <br><br>The present, however, is a time of great supply in the slave market. The social collapse of many societies in the Old World and the perpetual conflicts in many areas are producing an immense number of captives for sale, keeping prices at historically low levels. Many slaveowners treat their chattel relatively well, but this comes from motivations other than financial necessity. With no laws requiring it and no economic reason to treat slaves as different from livestock, many citizens of the Free Cities see little reason to make a distinction. Spectacular expressions of this callousness, like the restraint of women for use as milk production devices or the usage of dangerous dosages of growth hormones, become more understandable when one realizes that the Free Cities are refining what was once a settled idea: what it means to be human.
+ <br><br>The present, however, is a time of great supply in the slave market. The social collapse of many societies in the old world and the perpetual conflicts in many areas are producing an immense number of captives for sale, keeping prices at historically low levels. Many slaveowners treat their chattel relatively well, but this comes from motivations other than financial necessity. With no laws requiring it and no economic reason to treat slaves as different from livestock, many citizens of the Free Cities see little reason to make a distinction. Spectacular expressions of this callousness, like the restraint of women for use as milk production devices or the usage of dangerous dosages of growth hormones, become more understandable when one realizes that the Free Cities are refining what was once a settled idea: what it means to be human.
<br><br> — Lawrence, J. K., and Bolingbroke, D. S., __Trends in Free Cities Culture, 2031__ //Journal of Modern Social Sciences, International Edition, February 2032////
@@ -2416,7 +2416,7 @@ LORE: INTERVIEWS
<br>Well, W.G., I'll answer questions for your book, but I don't actually want to be famous. No names.
<br><br>//That works fine for me. How did you become a mercenary?//
- <br>I was a soldier, and the pay was shit, so instead of re-upping I went merc. Boring, but pretty common, believe me. Half the Old World militaries are just merc training camps now. You enlist, and then you get out as soon as you have enough experience that a mercenary group'll take you on.
+ <br>I was a soldier, and the pay was shit, so instead of re-upping I went merc. Boring, but pretty common, believe me. Half the old world militaries are just merc training camps now. You enlist, and then you get out as soon as you have enough experience that a mercenary group'll take you on.
<br><br>//Did you have combat experience?//
<br>[laughs] You know your shit. No, no I did not. I wasn't even infantry. Dirty little secret you probably already know: if you're a girl, most merc groups don't give a fuck what experience you actually have, 'cause either way, they win.
@@ -2824,9 +2824,9 @@ LORE: INTERVIEWS
An additional prostate implant designed to hyperstimulate one's prostate and store the resulting fluid for release during ejaculation in a specialized reservoir. An easy way to tell if the precum soaked slave you are fucking is sporting this implant is the distinct swelling in her lower belly as she nears release. Due to the sheer amount of prostate fluid released, sperm per volume is greatly reduced, devastating profits of those looking to sell cum. Remember to keep your slaves well hydrated!
<<case "FCTV">>
- Free Cities TV, or ''FCTV'' as it is more commonly called, is a very popular streaming video service. A venture started not long after the first Free Cities were founded, it took advantage of the new lack of regulatory oversight to create and host content that had long been banned in the Old World. Under the guidance of 8HGG Inc., FCTV has developed into a popular mixed-mode service, with a variety of live streaming channels as well as a large selection of ready stream content ranging from hyper porn to contemporary broadcast series shows.
+ Free Cities TV, or ''FCTV'' as it is more commonly called, is a very popular streaming video service. A venture started not long after the first Free Cities were founded, it took advantage of the new lack of regulatory oversight to create and host content that had long been banned in the old world. Under the guidance of 8HGG Inc., FCTV has developed into a popular mixed-mode service, with a variety of live streaming channels as well as a large selection of ready stream content ranging from hyper porn to contemporary broadcast series shows.
- <br><br>The successful service is largely supported by a combination of subscription and advertising revenue, and to a smaller extent on-demand content payments. Though still targeted at free citizens — or their slaves in the case of for-slave content — FCTV has become very popular in the Old World. A combination of the service's eroticism, extreme content, and high production value has given it extraordinary popularity. Savvy execs at 8HGG and arcology owners alike have realized the benefits of exposing the Old World populations to FCTV content, and a carefully-curated selection of content is kept available to old-worlders thanks to revenue from advertisements supporting immigration and voluntary enslavement. The content selection has a glamorized and often romanticized view of slavery, and typically displays common citizens and slaves alike living in opulence beyond the realm of possibility for most old-worlders.
+ <br><br>The successful service is largely supported by a combination of subscription and advertising revenue, and to a smaller extent on-demand content payments. Though still targeted at free citizens — or their slaves in the case of for-slave content — FCTV has become very popular in the old world. A combination of the service's eroticism, extreme content, and high production value has given it extraordinary popularity. Savvy execs at 8HGG and arcology owners alike have realized the benefits of exposing the old world populations to FCTV content, and a carefully-curated selection of content is kept available to old-worlders thanks to revenue from advertisements supporting immigration and voluntary enslavement. The content selection has a glamorized and often romanticized view of slavery, and typically displays common citizens and slaves alike living in opulence beyond the realm of possibility for most old-worlders.
<br><br>FCTV has always worked closely with the Free Cities, developing a large network of sponsors and partnerships for content protection. This has increased the breadth of content and popularity of FCTV, while allowing the ruling class to encourage content supporting their vision of the future. While you can access non-citizen FCTV content from just about anywhere, an arcology needs its own [[receiver|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "FCTVReceiver"]] to access citizen-only content. This measure of content protection does add extra expense, but nearly eliminating the risk of old-worlders seeing uncurated content is viewed as being worth the expense by most arcology owners.
diff --git a/src/interaction/main/toychest.js b/src/interaction/main/toychest.js
index 262f0368e93211bcf5e4093767aed573687b6b44..56e233ca6d32633f63f838445cb4fe791e66bf7d 100644
--- a/src/interaction/main/toychest.js
+++ b/src/interaction/main/toychest.js
@@ -318,7 +318,7 @@ App.Interact.ToyChest = function(slave) {
r += `${His} purpose as your office sex toy is prominently displayed by ${his} revealing outfit.`;
break;
case "a gothic lolita dress":
- r += `${His} gothic lolita dress lends a cute but dark Old World charm to your office.`;
+ r += `${His} gothic lolita dress lends a cute but dark old world charm to your office.`;
break;
case "a police uniform":
r += `${His} police uniform lends an air of security and authority to your office.`;
diff --git a/src/interaction/main/useGuard.js b/src/interaction/main/useGuard.js
index 942f7daba7a1a6aa3ec87e1af5a83a0309f4f1a2..cbc6ada15a4c98d3953e867489ce39c7a593b275 100644
--- a/src/interaction/main/useGuard.js
+++ b/src/interaction/main/useGuard.js
@@ -176,10 +176,10 @@ App.Interact.UseGuard = function(slave) {
r += `${His} business suit and weapons give ${him} the look of a finely honed corporate instrument.`;
break;
case "conservative clothing":
- r += `${His} casual, conservative clothes and weapons make ${him} look like a normal Old World security contractrix.`;
+ r += `${His} casual, conservative clothes and weapons make ${him} look like a normal old world security contractrix.`;
break;
case "a hijab and blouse":
- r += `${His} modest, conservative clothes and weapons make ${him} look like an Old World security contractrix.`;
+ r += `${His} modest, conservative clothes and weapons make ${him} look like an old world security contractrix.`;
break;
case "a comfortable bodysuit":
r += `${His} bodysuit and weapons make ${him} look like an action movie heroine.`;
diff --git a/src/pregmod/criminalMarkets.tw b/src/pregmod/criminalMarkets.tw
index 9bdfc8868143357f1c876f9e6fe5a239750c4289..aeae2ec19af8e8a94676f5949ffc45de1efb6f1e 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/criminalMarkets.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/criminalMarkets.tw
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ You board the transport to
<<switch $weeklyMarket>>
<<case "low tier criminals">> /* mixed prisoners */
- a small prison on the edge of the city spanning from the foot of your arcology with the appearance of an Old World police station. You arrive inside and are met by a cute receptionist, asking why one such as yourself would visit such a place. With formalities out of the way, the head of the station is called and arrives shortly. "Well now, didn't expect to see you here. Came to pick up a criminal and give them a chance at not being a menial?" You are then led further into the station and into the prisoners quarters; most of them downcast and dismal, but some look up to see what the commotion is about. "You! Come here! This gentleman wants to take a look so be on your best behavior!" the head calls out, bringing one of the criminals close enough to be inspected.
+ a small prison on the edge of the city spanning from the foot of your arcology with the appearance of an old world police station. You arrive inside and are met by a cute receptionist, asking why one such as yourself would visit such a place. With formalities out of the way, the head of the station is called and arrives shortly. "Well now, didn't expect to see you here. Came to pick up a criminal and give them a chance at not being a menial?" You are then led further into the station and into the prisoners quarters; most of them downcast and dismal, but some look up to see what the commotion is about. "You! Come here! This gentleman wants to take a look so be on your best behavior!" the head calls out, bringing one of the criminals close enough to be inspected.
<<case "gangs and smugglers">> /* males only */
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ You board the transport to
what looks more like an oversized vacation home rather than something one goes to for committing crimes. You enter the premises into a small chamber with a booth to the side and are immediately met with, "Ah! We've been waiting for you. Please go in. We'll call someone to guide you immediately."
<br><br>
- You nod at the prompt and enter further into the luxurious building to find a formally dressed guide and what appears to be the holding area of the prison. The cells, if you can call them that, are large and cozy, each with their own computer and television. The air is also conditioned for their comfort and Old World classical music is playing to provide further ambiance. Walking through, you see the prisoners themselves, lazing about in their beds, sitting at their computers or just talking to each other. If there was ever a prison you'd rather end up in, this would be it.
+ You nod at the prompt and enter further into the luxurious building to find a formally dressed guide and what appears to be the holding area of the prison. The cells, if you can call them that, are large and cozy, each with their own computer and television. The air is also conditioned for their comfort and old world classical music is playing to provide further ambiance. Walking through, you see the prisoners themselves, lazing about in their beds, sitting at their computers or just talking to each other. If there was ever a prison you'd rather end up in, this would be it.
<br><br>
You enter the warden's office and are greeted with all due formalities, "Glad to see you at our establishment. When I heard that someone as renowned as yourself was coming over, I made the appropriate preparations." You are served a cup of tea as she brings in the chosen stock for you to observe at your leisure.
diff --git a/src/pregmod/reMaleArcologyOwner.tw b/src/pregmod/reMaleArcologyOwner.tw
index 5c4a20e924f4fd1e3ca792943575ff9c49b88a62..4719c281cc81106dba5fc8f7dba84105e37df7e4 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/reMaleArcologyOwner.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/reMaleArcologyOwner.tw
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
<<set $nextButton = "Continue", $nextLink = "RIE Eligibility Check">>
-The more reputable you've gotten, the more rarefied your entertainments have become. Parties featuring celebrities, Old World national leaders, and Free Cities arcology owners have become a nearly nightly experience for you, an expected part of your routine as one of the Free Cities' leading citizens. According to your whims and predilections, you have the choice of participating all night or just making a brief appearance at the start. The important thing is that they're here, come to pay tribute by their presence.
+The more reputable you've gotten, the more rarefied your entertainments have become. Parties featuring celebrities, old world national leaders, and Free Cities arcology owners have become a nearly nightly experience for you, an expected part of your routine as one of the Free Cities' leading citizens. According to your whims and predilections, you have the choice of participating all night or just making a brief appearance at the start. The important thing is that they're here, come to pay tribute by their presence.
<br><br>
Tonight there are several attendees of such stature that you must exchange pleasantries with each. The last is a fellow arcology owner, not quite up to your stature of course, but certainly worth conciliating. As usual, it's a man. He stands a touch taller than you, and is wearing one of the best-tailored suits you've ever seen. The pants are cut perfectly to draw your eyes to his bulge, and, from what you can see, he is quite toned; the jacket is masculine, and accentuates his fine chest. He is obviously well into middle age, but has made no attempt to hide the fact, allowing his graying hair to proudly display his experience.
<br><br>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/saClothes.tw b/src/pregmod/saClothes.tw
index bc2fb7c1de7c5f170e7a50f56581019b6bd7396e..32f4642090985d28484b96c7ff6259b0249c5efa 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/saClothes.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/saClothes.tw
@@ -288,7 +288,7 @@
<<if ($arcologies[0].FSChattelReligionist != "unset")>>
<<if ($slaves[$i].behavioralQuirk == "sinful")>>
<<if ($slaves[$i].clothes == "a fallen nuns habit") || ($slaves[$i].clothes == "a chattel habit") || ($slaves[$i].clothes == "a succubus outfit")>>
- $He's @@.hotpink;gratified@@ by the sacrilegious clothing $he's wearing, glad to be an obvious anathema to Old World faiths.
+ $He's @@.hotpink;gratified@@ by the sacrilegious clothing $he's wearing, glad to be an obvious anathema to old world faiths.
<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 1>>
<</if>>
<</if>>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/seFCTVshows.tw b/src/pregmod/seFCTVshows.tw
index 78332c8510efe516e8705f88350b22ab2e1b5d43..3a418ac65c09464e4cc58b535caf43e362984f3c 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/seFCTVshows.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/seFCTVshows.tw
@@ -62,20 +62,20 @@ Tired after a long day, you tell <<if $Concubine != 0>>@@.pink;$Concubine.slaveN
The segment is being anchored by the middle aged Kirk McMahon, and he's joined by the ever-popular "Anchor Slave", Jules. She's got a nice figure, and the only thing she's wearing to cover her perky breasts is a pair of FCNN pasties. She has on a fine leather collar; the large gold charm hanging from the front seems to be a stylized emblem of a ship's anchor merged with a microphone. The pair seems to be discussing the recent actions and punishment of the reality show slave Slooty.
<br><br>Jules seems to be quite passionate about the subject, the animated way she talks is causing her sizable tits to bounce all over the place. "It doesn't matter how famous or valuable that slut thinks she is, her behavior was just wrong on SO many levels. It makes all of us good slaves look bad. If you ask me, her master's choice of punishment fits the attention whore perfectly!"
<br><br>Kirk's face looks more than a little surprised, but you can't quite tell if it's an act or not. "You won't get any argument from me that she deserves to be punished... but getting chained up with an obedience collar and feeder system in the middle of Times Square, free for public use? A slum like Manhattan, she'll never <<if $seeExtreme == 0>><i>enjoy</i><<else>>survive<</if>> the 10 day sentence!"
- <br><br>Jules smiles. "That's exactly right Master McMahon, she's going to be <<if $seeExtreme == 0>><i>hugged until she smiles</i><<else>>fucked to death<</if>>. Her precious popularity in the Old World will have the locals lined up all the way to New New Jersey waiting for their turn. I'd never question her master's decision, but if it were me, I'd pump her full of curatives and stimulants during the sentence. That way, she doesn't <<if $seeExtreme == 0>><i>smile</i><<else>>die or pass out<</if>> too soon. I think her master is being lenient after the way she badmouthed him in a live broadcast."
+ <br><br>Jules smiles. "That's exactly right Master McMahon, she's going to be <<if $seeExtreme == 0>><i>hugged until she smiles</i><<else>>fucked to death<</if>>. Her precious popularity in the old world will have the locals lined up all the way to New New Jersey waiting for their turn. I'd never question her master's decision, but if it were me, I'd pump her full of curatives and stimulants during the sentence. That way, she doesn't <<if $seeExtreme == 0>><i>smile</i><<else>>die or pass out<</if>> too soon. I think her master is being lenient after the way she badmouthed him in a live broadcast."
<br><br>...
<<elseif $randShow == 2 && $showOne > 3 || $showOne == 2>>
The program is showing some poorly-shot video showing a woman with flaming-red short hair angrily shouting at a large but uncomfortable-looking man. The title text at the bottom says: <b>"EmancipationGate: Emancipation Movement Exposed"</b> The video continues, revealing more of the angry woman. She's short, wearing a sweaty tank top that makes her bushy underarm hair stand out. Based on the audio thus far, it seems she's trying to tell the large man to keep <<if $seeExtreme == 0>><i>hugging their captives until they smile</i><<else>>torturing their captives until they die<</if>>, that it has to be convincing for the camera. The man says he isn't comfortable doing that to kids, but the woman shouts him down by saying they're only migrant man brats before beginning some nonsensical babble about patriarchy and slavery. The video seems to be being shot on a small handheld device, and pans over to reveal a bunch of severely <<if $seeExtreme == 0>><i>hugged</i><<else>>beaten<</if>> children in slave chains that look like obvious S&M props to your well-trained eye. The angry woman's rant is still continuing from the background, but suddenly stops to be replaced with a yell: <i>"Get the fuck away from the subjects, you better not be fucking filming any..."</i> and the video cuts out.
<br><br>
The segment cuts back to two news anchors, a dark-haired man with a mustache and an aging bottle blonde.
- <br><br>The bottle blonde speaks to the viewers. "Some of you may recognize the woman in that video as Angry Red, noted femsupremacist and a leading figure in the Old World Emancipation Movement. The video you saw was released along with countless other media files and documents from the movement in the EmancipationGate hacktivist attack. This particular video has been confirmed by computer analysis to be behind the scenes footage from the movement's latest documentary about the horrors of slavery."
+ <br><br>The bottle blonde speaks to the viewers. "Some of you may recognize the woman in that video as Angry Red, noted femsupremacist and a leading figure in the old world Emancipation Movement. The video you saw was released along with countless other media files and documents from the movement in the EmancipationGate hacktivist attack. This particular video has been confirmed by computer analysis to be behind the scenes footage from the movement's latest documentary about the horrors of slavery."
<br><br>The mustached man looks knowingly at the camera. "Anyone remotely familiar with Free City slavery knew the documentary was complete bullshit, but what we didn't know was just how far those radicalists were willing to go to make us all look bad."
<br><br>...
<<elseif $randShow == 3 && $showOne > 3 || $showOne == 3>>
The segment seems to be more of a conversational piece. The two hosts are sitting next to each other on one couch. Samuel Klein, a handsome man with dark blonde hair and a winning smile, can't help but be overshadowed by his cohost. The popular SlaveAnchor Jules might be mistaken for just another gorgeous face and body, but it's her brilliant wit and sure-footed advocacy that made her famous. She's wearing her usual slave anchor collar, and her large natural breasts are only covered by the standard FCNN pasties, leaving the perky flesh free to jiggle enticingly. On this show her lower half is revealed; it's usually hidden behind a desk. The dark red material of her narrow panties matches her auburn hair, and reveals her broad hips and long slender legs.
- <br><br>The camera cuts back to two distinguished looking gentlemen, one is labeled by the screen as medical researchers. <<if $PC.medicine == 100>>You vaguely recognize both of them from your time studying medicine. <</if>>One of them continues the conversation, apparently answering a question. <i>"That's right, the results of our research tell us what everyone already suspected, but now with an indisputable weight of evidence behind it."</i> The other nods and continues, <i>"our meta analysis examines over two decades of data, and nearly 6000 independent studies. We can safely say that free city slaves are healthier than the average person living anywhere in the Old World. While a few of the wealthiest countries of the Old World may surpass one or two areas, our slaves have better nutrition, standard of living, are more psychologically stable, have longer lives, and are happier on average as well."</i> The first gentleman interjects, <i>"We even found strong evidence that the higher sexual tempo and libido-stimulating training given to sex slaves greatly contributes to their life span; they live even longer than the average slave, and even look younger than their age."</i>
+ <br><br>The camera cuts back to two distinguished looking gentlemen, one is labeled by the screen as medical researchers. <<if $PC.medicine == 100>>You vaguely recognize both of them from your time studying medicine. <</if>>One of them continues the conversation, apparently answering a question. <i>"That's right, the results of our research tell us what everyone already suspected, but now with an indisputable weight of evidence behind it."</i> The other nods and continues, <i>"our meta analysis examines over two decades of data, and nearly 6000 independent studies. We can safely say that free city slaves are healthier than the average person living anywhere in the old world. While a few of the wealthiest countries of the old world may surpass one or two areas, our slaves have better nutrition, standard of living, are more psychologically stable, have longer lives, and are happier on average as well."</i> The first gentleman interjects, <i>"We even found strong evidence that the higher sexual tempo and libido-stimulating training given to sex slaves greatly contributes to their life span; they live even longer than the average slave, and even look younger than their age."</i>
<br><br>The camera switches back to the two anchors, showing an excited Jules hefting and bouncing her tits. "They've barely sagged at all since they stopped growing, now I know why!"
- <br><br>As the AnchorSlave continues to squeeze, one of the researchers answers from off camera. <i>"That's right, it can be rather amazing. To tell you the truth, we didn't believe it at first, but the evidence made it too hard to ignore."</i> Jules starts looking toward the backstage area trying to signal someone as the other researcher continues. <i>"It's also important not to wear a bra unless you're doing high-impact cardio. We've known since the mid 20th century that wearing bras causes sagging; bras devastate the breasts of postpartum women in particular, and promote breast cancer... Despite countless decades-long studies showing us this, the Old World insists on forcing women to wear..."</i>
+ <br><br>As the AnchorSlave continues to squeeze, one of the researchers answers from off camera. <i>"That's right, it can be rather amazing. To tell you the truth, we didn't believe it at first, but the evidence made it too hard to ignore."</i> Jules starts looking toward the backstage area trying to signal someone as the other researcher continues. <i>"It's also important not to wear a bra unless you're doing high-impact cardio. We've known since the mid 20th century that wearing bras causes sagging; bras devastate the breasts of postpartum women in particular, and promote breast cancer... Despite countless decades-long studies showing us this, the old world insists on forcing women to wear..."</i>
<br><br>It seems that Jules finally got the approval she was looking for, because she immediately reached down between her legs, causing the researcher to distractedly forget what he was saying. Apparently the panties she's wearing are of the dildo variety, because when she removes her hand you can see a tell-tale green indicator light glowing on the front of them. A cute rosy flush comes to Jules cheeks before she apologizes and urges the pair of researchers to continue.
<br><br>...
<</if>>
@@ -517,7 +517,7 @@ The offered price is <<print cashFormat($slaveCost)>>.
<br><br>
Another common level for an arcology is the Concourse, which is typically located near the bottom of the structure. Like the Promenade, it hosts businesses, but these focus less on the luxury and entertainment needs of citizens than the Promenade. The Concourse typically houses bulk trade, necessary services such as medical clinics, corporate offices, research and development centers, and even education facilities. The best universities in the world are located on the concourse level of an arcology! Of course, the concourse also houses slave markets and slave training facilities. Some arcologies have arenas for sports or other events, while others have venues for sport combat ranging from traditional octagon fighting rings to pits reminiscent of ancient gladiatorial combat. If you're lucky, your arcology may just have a public arcade, where a variety of needs can be met at an affordable price. With research pointing to the benefits of arcades to adolescent development, family-friendly arcologies are quickly adding arcades of their own!
<br><br>
- The lowest and largest level is typically known as the Service level. Its Sectors are occupied by manufacturing and industry, including the production of food resources such as livestock facilities and dairies. Menial slaves are housed in the Service level, and often work there too. The service level also contains much of an arcology's infrastructure, supplying clean water and electricity to the citizens and businesses. Another common sight in the service level is that of a warehouse, which stores the goods and raw materials an arcology needs, and also facilitates trade with other arcologies. Finally, the Service level may contain barracks and training facilities for mercenaries or arcology militia tasked to protect it from the Old World.
+ The lowest and largest level is typically known as the Service level. Its Sectors are occupied by manufacturing and industry, including the production of food resources such as livestock facilities and dairies. Menial slaves are housed in the Service level, and often work there too. The service level also contains much of an arcology's infrastructure, supplying clean water and electricity to the citizens and businesses. Another common sight in the service level is that of a warehouse, which stores the goods and raw materials an arcology needs, and also facilitates trade with other arcologies. Finally, the Service level may contain barracks and training facilities for mercenaries or arcology militia tasked to protect it from the old world.
<</if>>
<<case 8>>
@@ -530,8 +530,8 @@ The offered price is <<print cashFormat($slaveCost)>>.
It looks like the random function chose to play
<<if $randShow == 1>>
a documentary on the surging Repopulation movement: "Continuing the Dream". After the opening credits, the documentary introduces a young and extremely pregnant woman as the commentator. The program makes an impassioned argument about the need for a new generation of citizens and slaves that were born into the dream of the free cities. The woman is wearing semi-conservative business attire, and has on elegant makeup. She looks somewhat plain when compared to the hyper-sexualized style of other FCTV programming, though she does make it plain over the course of the program that she loves sex more than ever. She tends to use herself as an example to show that pregnancy no longer means limitations or sacrifice, instead emphasizing that she's on her fifth pregnancy and would rather be with child than without.
- <br><br>The woman makes two main points during the course of the documentary. The first is that the combined population of the free cities needs to grow explosively for 'Free City Society' to become stable. She points out several economic reasons, including the drive to invest in research and infrastructure. She has interviews with experts explaining the need for independence; that the Free Cities are still dependent on the Old World industrially and financially, and that the population must expand dramatically to avoid going down with the metaphorical ship. The more Free Cities there are, the more they become free and independent of the Old World.
- <br><br>The second point concerns the source of the new citizens and slaves that the Free Cities need. Her arguments concerning citizens focus on the unique culture of the Free Cities, and the direction that the future society will take. She points out that immigrants from the Old World are rooted in its decaying culture. She asks her viewers how long it took them to adapt to their new lives, and how often they find themselves doubting their new home subconsciously. She admits that even she sometimes finds something wrong or repulsive, until she realizes that it's the ghost of her past life clinging to her. A noted psychologist talks about the strong hold people's earlier lives has on them, and how developing the promise of the Free Cities will need a generation untainted by the Old World. The documentary's argument for slaves largely comes down to the fact that second-generation slaves are happier, better adjusted, and simply better slaves.
+ <br><br>The woman makes two main points during the course of the documentary. The first is that the combined population of the free cities needs to grow explosively for 'Free City Society' to become stable. She points out several economic reasons, including the drive to invest in research and infrastructure. She has interviews with experts explaining the need for independence; that the Free Cities are still dependent on the old world industrially and financially, and that the population must expand dramatically to avoid going down with the metaphorical ship. The more Free Cities there are, the more they become free and independent of the old world.
+ <br><br>The second point concerns the source of the new citizens and slaves that the Free Cities need. Her arguments concerning citizens focus on the unique culture of the Free Cities, and the direction that the future society will take. She points out that immigrants from the old world are rooted in its decaying culture. She asks her viewers how long it took them to adapt to their new lives, and how often they find themselves doubting their new home subconsciously. She admits that even she sometimes finds something wrong or repulsive, until she realizes that it's the ghost of her past life clinging to her. A noted psychologist talks about the strong hold people's earlier lives has on them, and how developing the promise of the Free Cities will need a generation untainted by the old world. The documentary's argument for slaves largely comes down to the fact that second-generation slaves are happier, better adjusted, and simply better slaves.
<<if $IntelligenceEugenicsSMR != 0 || $HeightEugenicsSMR != 0 || $FaceEugenicsSMR != 0>>
It also points out the practical problems that the mass importation of slaves will cause in the gene pool.
<</if>>
@@ -549,11 +549,11 @@ The offered price is <<print cashFormat($slaveCost)>>.
<<elseif $arcologies[0].FSSlimnessEnthusiast == "unset" && $randShow == 3>>
a documentary on the growing Asset Expansionist movement titled: "More of a Good Thing". After a brief set of opening credits the documentary dives immediately into short clips of numerous interviews with stacked women stating that they love having big tits and a big ass. Eventually, a man and woman are introduced as the hosts of the program. Both are finely dressed in the recent fashions, and despite the subject of the documentary, they don't have humongous assets. The woman does have huge breasts, wide hips, and a large derrière; the man has a noticeable bulge in his pants, but nothing extreme. The hosts explain that seeing Asset Expansionism as a call for ridiculous size is something of a misconception. They emphasize that it's about the freedom to enjoy more of a good thing.
- <br><br>The documentary makes several arguments in favor of the movement, and is clear about explaining the natural biological attraction humans have to large assets. By interviewing stacked members of the movement and psychological experts alike, they try to demonstrate how larger assets lead to happier and more pleasurable lives, both in and out of the bedroom. The documentary neatly tops off its argument by demonstrating how assets have been expanding naturally since the start of the twentieth century, and claiming that it's silly to idolize the way humans looked before modern nutrition and medicine. Western countries in the Old World already had average bust sizes of D-cup or larger by the turn of the century, the hosts claim that trying to go back to smaller sizes is synonymous with reducing the prosperity of free citizens.
+ <br><br>The documentary makes several arguments in favor of the movement, and is clear about explaining the natural biological attraction humans have to large assets. By interviewing stacked members of the movement and psychological experts alike, they try to demonstrate how larger assets lead to happier and more pleasurable lives, both in and out of the bedroom. The documentary neatly tops off its argument by demonstrating how assets have been expanding naturally since the start of the twentieth century, and claiming that it's silly to idolize the way humans looked before modern nutrition and medicine. Western countries in the old world already had average bust sizes of D-cup or larger by the turn of the century, the hosts claim that trying to go back to smaller sizes is synonymous with reducing the prosperity of free citizens.
<br><br>.....
<<elseif $arcologies[0].FSAssetExpansionist == "unset" && $randShow == 3>>
- a documentary on the Slimness Enthusiast counter movement titled: "Slim Is In". Artistic opening credits play across the screen before a slim woman walks up and begins talking to the camera conversationally. She seems to be in her mid to late thirties, and is wearing conservative makeup to accent her natural beauty. Her narrow waist combines with her slim hips and full shoulders to create a balanced but muted hourglass profile. It's a look that was popular for decades on fashion models in the Old World, and it improves the attractiveness of her B- or C-cup breasts and taut butt. It's obvious that the woman aspires to be a role model in addition to being the documentary's commentator.
+ a documentary on the Slimness Enthusiast counter movement titled: "Slim Is In". Artistic opening credits play across the screen before a slim woman walks up and begins talking to the camera conversationally. She seems to be in her mid to late thirties, and is wearing conservative makeup to accent her natural beauty. Her narrow waist combines with her slim hips and full shoulders to create a balanced but muted hourglass profile. It's a look that was popular for decades on fashion models in the old world, and it improves the attractiveness of her B- or C-cup breasts and taut butt. It's obvious that the woman aspires to be a role model in addition to being the documentary's commentator.
<br><br>Much of the documentary's arguments center around the concept of fashion and the privileged. They point out how in the past societal changes have altered what people find attractive, giving skin tans as an example. When most worked outside and only the privileged stayed indoors pale skin was considered attractive. When the world changed and most people worked indoors, suddenly the tan skin of those with leisure time to spend outside came into vogue. She argues that modern hormones can easily expand the assets of the masses, but that only the privileged can afford to sculpt themselves into an ideal form like hers. She points out that even though the masses may imitate with surgery, they'll never be able to copy the naturally good bone structure and vibrancy of the well-bred elite.
<br><br>.....
@@ -568,8 +568,8 @@ The offered price is <<print cashFormat($slaveCost)>>.
<<else>>
a documentary on the surging Repopulation movement: "Continuing the Dream". After the opening credits, the documentary introduces a young and extremely pregnant woman as the commentator. The program makes an impassioned argument about the need for a new generation of citizens and slaves that were born into the dream of the free cities. The woman is wearing semi-conservative business attire, and has on elegant makeup. She looks somewhat plain when compared to the hyper-sexualized style of other FCTV programming, though she does make it plain over the course of the program that she loves sex more than ever. She tends to use herself as an example to show that pregnancy no longer means limitations or sacrifice, instead emphasizing that she's on her fifth pregnancy and would rather be with child than without.
- <br><br>The woman makes two main points during the course of the documentary. The first is that the combined population of the free cities needs to grow explosively for 'Free City Society' to become stable. She points out several economic reasons, including the drive to invest in research and infrastructure. She has interviews with experts explaining the need for independence; that the Free Cities are still dependent on the Old World industrially and financially, and that the population must expand dramatically to avoid going down with the metaphorical ship. The more Free Cities there are, the more they become free and independent of the Old World.
- <br><br>The second point concerns the source of the new citizens and slaves that the Free Cities need. Her arguments concerning citizens focus on the unique culture of the Free Cities, and the direction that the future society will take. She points out that immigrants from the Old World are rooted in its decaying culture. She asks her viewers how long it took them to adapt to their new lives, and how often they find themselves doubting their new home subconsciously. She admits that even she sometimes finds something wrong or repulsive, until she realizes that it's the ghost of her past life clinging to her. A noted psychologist talks about the strong hold people's earlier lives has on them, and how developing the promise of the Free Cities will need a generation untainted by the Old World. The documentary's argument for slaves largely comes down to the fact that second-generation slaves are happier, better adjusted, and simply better slaves.
+ <br><br>The woman makes two main points during the course of the documentary. The first is that the combined population of the free cities needs to grow explosively for 'Free City Society' to become stable. She points out several economic reasons, including the drive to invest in research and infrastructure. She has interviews with experts explaining the need for independence; that the Free Cities are still dependent on the old world industrially and financially, and that the population must expand dramatically to avoid going down with the metaphorical ship. The more Free Cities there are, the more they become free and independent of the old world.
+ <br><br>The second point concerns the source of the new citizens and slaves that the Free Cities need. Her arguments concerning citizens focus on the unique culture of the Free Cities, and the direction that the future society will take. She points out that immigrants from the old world are rooted in its decaying culture. She asks her viewers how long it took them to adapt to their new lives, and how often they find themselves doubting their new home subconsciously. She admits that even she sometimes finds something wrong or repulsive, until she realizes that it's the ghost of her past life clinging to her. A noted psychologist talks about the strong hold people's earlier lives has on them, and how developing the promise of the Free Cities will need a generation untainted by the old world. The documentary's argument for slaves largely comes down to the fact that second-generation slaves are happier, better adjusted, and simply better slaves.
<<if $IntelligenceEugenicsSMR != 0 || $HeightEugenicsSMR != 0 || $FaceEugenicsSMR != 0>>
It also points out the practical problems that the mass importation of slaves will cause in the gene pool.
<</if>>
@@ -680,7 +680,7 @@ The offered price is <<print cashFormat($slaveCost)>>.
<br><br>After a moment, she nodded her head and begrudgingly said, "Ok". Scott smiled at his daughter and kissed the crown of her head before giving her another firm squeeze. "Thank you, sweetheart." Scott grinned and his voice took on a tone that only a parent can manage. "Hey, who's my cuddly moo cow?" Sarah blushed, but said nothing. "Who's my cuddly moo cow?" he asked again, his tone reaching diabetes inducing levels. "I am" she said softly "You are!" he declared before giving her breasts a jiggle and another kiss on her crown.
<br><br>A moment past in companionable silence before Scott remembered something. "Hey sweetheart, why didn't Sadie come back with you?" Sarah made a sound of surprise and said, "Oh, mommy got a bit drippy getting into her exo and needed Sadie for licky. Mommy also wants you to pound her boobies after you're done with Cathy."
<br><br>"Alright, June will help you take care of your morning milkies while Sadie and I tend to your mother." he said. "But I wanna watch" she pleaded. He shook his head and said, "You need to have your milkies and mommy's going to use the bedroom milker, so you're going to use the one in the kitchen." "I can use my backpack milker" she said quickly. He gave her a look and his voice took on a wry tone. "Weren't you just telling me that your milker is old and we need to get you a new one? I guess you'll have to wait until then." Sarah looked up at her father, unshed tears in her eyes. "Please?" she pleaded. Scott sighed deeply and said, "Alright, go get your milker after we're done here." Sarah gave her father a sunny smile and cheered.
- <br><br>Scott called out to Cathy, "Come on out and give us a look!" The door to the bathroom opened and Cathy stepped out, tugging at her skirt. The clothing was a simple blouse and skirt affair with a Holstein pattern. In truth, it didn't look like something that would offend Old World sensibilities, except for the fact the skirt was so short that her frilly panties were in plain view.
+ <br><br>Scott called out to Cathy, "Come on out and give us a look!" The door to the bathroom opened and Cathy stepped out, tugging at her skirt. The clothing was a simple blouse and skirt affair with a Holstein pattern. In truth, it didn't look like something that would offend old world sensibilities, except for the fact the skirt was so short that her frilly panties were in plain view.
<br><br>"Do you have a skirt that's a little longer?" Cathy said and tugged at her skirt again. "It's supposed to look like that." Scott explained. Cathy looked skeptical. "Really?" she asked. Sarah gave Cathy a look that asked if she really was that stupid. "Why would you wear pretty panties and never show anyone?" She asked rhetorically. Cathy started on a hot retort, but was interrupted by Scott. "We'll stop for now and pick this later. You can put your new clothes away." Cathy sighed, picked up her cloths, and walked out the door.
<br><br>Scott stood up and set his daughter on her feet. She turned her back to her father, bent over slightly, and wiggled her bottom meaningfully. Scott smacked her right butt cheek and said, "Off you go." Sarah didn't move. "Daddy" she said pleadingly and wiggled her bottom again. He smacked her left butt cheek. She giggled happily and jiggled out the door. Scott smiled at his daughter's antics, shook his head, and made his way to his bedroom.
<<elseif $showTwelve == 2>>
@@ -711,7 +711,7 @@ The offered price is <<print cashFormat($slaveCost)>>.
<br><br>After a light lunch, the family assembled in the entry hall. Sarah rode in her mother's cleavage, playing with a tablet as they waited on Cathy. When Cathy made her way into the hall Scott frowned at her. "You're not going out dressed like that." Cathy looked down at herself. "What's wrong with this? This shows of my body well enough, right?"
<br><br>She wore jeans and a T-shirt made a few sizes too small by her regimen of growth drug. "Why don't you put on that bikini I gave you?" Cathy just furrowed her brow and said nothing. Scott sighed and said, "Just don't wear pants and show some cleavage. For god's sake, people show more skin at funerals than you do." Cathy frowned, but went back to change. When she came back she was wearing the Holstein pattern skirt and blouse he had given her earlier. "You're going to wear that?" he asked. "What's wrong now?" He raised his hands in a placating gesture. "Nothing, nothing. Let's go."
<br><br>The family left, made their way to an elevator and rode it down a few floors before exiting. As they turned the corner onto the street, the creamery came into sight. The family continued onward until Sarah spoke up. "Daddy, where's Cathy?" Scott looked back and saw that Cathy had stopped walking a few <<if $showInches == 2>>feet<<else>>meters<</if>> back. She stood staring wide eyed at the creamery.
- <br><br>The LCD screen above the entrance wasn't anything too eye catching. It proudly displayed the words Blue Barn Creamery & Grocery in bright letters. An ever changing list of advertisements and new products on sale scrolled along the bottom. Truly, it could have fit-in with Old World signs if no one looked too closely at the words on screen. What was truly eye catching is what surrounded it.
+ <br><br>The LCD screen above the entrance wasn't anything too eye catching. It proudly displayed the words Blue Barn Creamery & Grocery in bright letters. An ever changing list of advertisements and new products on sale scrolled along the bottom. Truly, it could have fit-in with old world signs if no one looked too closely at the words on screen. What was truly eye catching is what surrounded it.
<br><br>Dozens of cowslaves mounted in milking frames surrounded the screen up and down the building. The building curved out to dangle slaves into the street. Whoever created the display had been thoughtful enough to arrange the cowslaves in order of pregnancy, from flat bellies at the top to the monstrously pregnant at the bottom.
<br><br>Scott walked back to Cathy grabbed her hand. "Come along." He managed to get a dozen paces before she pulled her hand out of his grasp. "Those are people" she hissed under her breath. "Of course they're people. What did you think they were, animatronics?" he scoffed. "This isn't Yellow Farmhouse." He shook his head. "Honestly, what were they thinking?"
<br><br>She sputtered and fumed at him for a moment before she found her voice again. "That isn't what I meant and you know it." She turned away from him to take in the scene. A dark haired beauty with smoky eyes amongst the cowslaves above caught her eye and gave her a lewd grin or, rather, attempted to do so around the feeding dildo in her mouth. Cathy wrinkled her nose. "Why would people do this?"
@@ -804,7 +804,7 @@ The offered price is <<print cashFormat($slaveCost)>>.
<br><br>A moment passed in companionable silence until a shrill sound emanated from June's pocket. She looked a bit sheepish and said, "Sorry", before pulling out a slim device to prod at it. "The brisket should be finished soon, maybe another hour or so." Scott nodded, gently rubbing Sarah's back. "Alright. Hey sweetheart, could you and Cathy go set the table?" She let out a sound of acknowledgment and when over to grab the other girl's hand. Cathy reluctantly set down her paperback and allowed Sarah to pull her into the kitchen.
<br><br>Dinner was a rather pleasant affair, all things considered. The brisket was tender and paired well with a spinach salad. Cathy managed a conversation with June about greenhouses with the others interjecting every so often. Sarah cleaned her plate without complaint, although she did clamber into her mother's cleavage the moment she finished.
<br><br>After dinner, the family reconvened in the living room. Cathy had returned to reading her paperback in an armchair. June and Sadie were sitting together in a love seat, both fiddling with their devices. Sarah had appropriated the TV remote and was flipping through channels from her commanding perch in Annie's cleavage.
- <br><br>Eventually, Sarah settled on an animated show in the middle of its opening. The show appeared to be similar to the magical girl shows of the Old World, but with enough sexual content to be mistaken for pornography. The premise appeared to be that spirits were possessing women and the only way to drive the evil specters out of the girls' hearts was by massively expanding their breasts. Apparently, the current episode was the second part of an arc involving a breast shrinking witch.
+ <br><br>Eventually, Sarah settled on an animated show in the middle of its opening. The show appeared to be similar to the magical girl shows of the old world, but with enough sexual content to be mistaken for pornography. The premise appeared to be that spirits were possessing women and the only way to drive the evil specters out of the girls' hearts was by massively expanding their breasts. Apparently, the current episode was the second part of an arc involving a breast shrinking witch.
<br><br>The heroine danced and wobbled around crowds of possessed women, leaving piles of jiggly breast flesh and clouds of sparkles in her wake. Eventually, she reached the witch and began to shoot at her with blasts of colored light. But the witch's power was too much for her and was sent fleeing, her skimpy dress now tattered. While on the run from the possessed, she encounters her mysterious love interest. A quick titfuck powerup and inspirational speech later, the heroine returned to challenge the witch. After rambling about love, justice, and the beauty of huge boobs, she blasted away the witch with a 'Magical Milky Mammary Beam'.
<br><br>All throughout the show, Cathy was mesmerized by the show in the same way one might be by a train wreck. When the credits rolled, she broke out of the spell and noticed that another episode was about to play. "Uh, could we watch something else?" Cathy asked tentatively. Sarah looked like she going to object, but Scott gave her a quick look. She pouted at her father, but began to flip through the channels. As the channels went by, Cathy's eyes grew wider. "Why don't we go back to the cartoon channel?"
<br><br>After a few more episodes, Scott noticed the time. "I think it's bedtime for cuddly cows." Sarah grumbled, but didn't resist when he lifted her out of Annie's cleavage. She received a hug and a kiss from both her parents before June took her off to prepare for bed. Scott turned to Cathy and said, "Why don't head off too. You'll be coming into work with me in the morning so you should get some rest." Cathy nodded and headed off to her room, but returned a moment later to grab her plushie. Annie caught sight of the doll and gave Cathy a lascivious grin. Cathy did her best to avoid eye contact and all but ran out of the room.
@@ -1062,7 +1062,7 @@ The offered price is <<print cashFormat($slaveCost)>>.
<br>
"Not at all." he says confidently. "But I'd rather show you than tell you." he says, motioning to the camera. He signals to someone off-camera and an unresisting woman in a nun's outfit is dragged out and placed on her knees in the middle of the room by two men in street clothes.
<br>
- "This was a nun from the Old World, recently made a slave." he explains. "We do all of our testing on legally purchased slaves who are slated to work in brothels that use aphrodisiacs anyway, so there's no harm done."
+ "This was a nun from the old world, recently made a slave." he explains. "We do all of our testing on legally purchased slaves who are slated to work in brothels that use aphrodisiacs anyway, so there's no harm done."
<br>
One of the men from earlier walks back into frame and hands the scientist an injector. "This is one of our latest prototypes, the purest we've produced yet. I'm proud to be able to show it off today." he says as he prepares an injection site on the right side of the nun's neck. He moves the injector close to her neck, just barely grazing her skin. "Before I do this, for the cameras, how do you feel about taking it up the ass in front of this nice girl, Sister?"
<br>
@@ -1089,7 +1089,7 @@ The offered price is <<print cashFormat($slaveCost)>>.
*/
You're greeted by a man with an eyepatch, a bushy black beard, and a crimson bandanna around his head. He's sitting behind a crude looking bamboo desk. Behind him is the backdrop of a sun rising over the ocean and two slaves in tight revealing sailor outfits swabbing the deck. The whole set looks like some sort of tropical pirate theme and you almost change the channel mistaking the show for a kids show when it catches up to you what the pirate is talking about.
<br><br>
- "- An' that be concludin' our special report on the dangers o' dealin' with Old World customs agencies an' how to find a scallywag'll right proper let you sneak a bound wench through fer the right bribe. If'n you missed it or be needin' a refresher, catch our rebroadcast in 12 bells time. Now afore the turn of the hourglass we go to our weatherwench Lusty Pearl who's been keepin' a weather eye on the horizon. Lusty?"
+ "- An' that be concludin' our special report on the dangers o' dealin' with old world customs agencies an' how to find a scallywag'll right proper let you sneak a bound wench through fer the right bribe. If'n you missed it or be needin' a refresher, catch our rebroadcast in 12 bells time. Now afore the turn of the hourglass we go to our weatherwench Lusty Pearl who's been keepin' a weather eye on the horizon. Lusty?"
<br><br>
The camera cuts to a young blonde girl with her hair braided back in rows. She's wearing a white blouse that's unbuttoned all the way down to her leather corset showing much of her very large rack while hiding little.
<br><br>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/theBlackMarket.tw b/src/pregmod/theBlackMarket.tw
index 2bd3af90c5de18ddbb0fe57db6814689f6693b32..fc975ea39ff0b53452e0c1dfcfe6bb367474875c 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/theBlackMarket.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/theBlackMarket.tw
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
<</if>>
<<setPlayerPronouns>>
-You board your VTOL bird for the trip to the current location of the particularly exclusive, and quite lucrative, Black Market knowing full well that the trip may take far longer than anticipated; the market frequently relocates to shake the unwanted attention it inevitably gains. It's far easier than paying off authorities, especially with how outrageous their demands have become with the decline of the Old World. You're greeted by a gruff bouncer, already fully aware of just who you are and your permission to be there. "Check your weapons — no firearms allowed inside.<<if $Bodyguard != 0>> $He may keep $his blade," he gestures to $Bodyguard.slaveName, "But keep in mind: if you cause us trouble, you will not be going home in one piece.<<if $Bodyguard.amp <= -4>> Oh, and one more thing." He taps his clearly bionic arm. "Disable $his weapons systems. I know what $he is capable of.<</if>><</if>>"
+You board your VTOL bird for the trip to the current location of the particularly exclusive, and quite lucrative, Black Market knowing full well that the trip may take far longer than anticipated; the market frequently relocates to shake the unwanted attention it inevitably gains. It's far easier than paying off authorities, especially with how outrageous their demands have become with the decline of the old world. You're greeted by a gruff bouncer, already fully aware of just who you are and your permission to be there. "Check your weapons — no firearms allowed inside.<<if $Bodyguard != 0>> $He may keep $his blade," he gestures to $Bodyguard.slaveName, "But keep in mind: if you cause us trouble, you will not be going home in one piece.<<if $Bodyguard.amp <= -4>> Oh, and one more thing." He taps his clearly bionic arm. "Disable $his weapons systems. I know what $he is capable of.<</if>><</if>>"
<br><br>
@@ -178,7 +178,7 @@ He gestures to a door in the back of the stall. "The good shit's back there<<if
<<if $minimumSlaveAge > 8>>
<br>
Illegal information for the Childhood Fertility @@.orange;Induced NCS@@ (genetic engineering and hormonal blend) research recipe.<br>
- "I'm sorry, I can't sell this product to you, even if I wanted to," he says. "I have this technology, which if applied, would make slaves appear younger than the legal age of majority. I picked it up from an exotics dealer, who picked it up from some Old World government research center. And yes, I know, this is a black market, and I would be happy to sell it to you, except, you see, too many of the wrong people know I have it, and while the knowledge isn't illegal, selling or using it is. See if I sell this to you, you'd start getting younger looking slaves, and those people would try to take us both down, and since I'm not the master of an arcology, I would probably end up enslaved, and I'm not interested in that. If only the laws were more open about who could have sex with who, I could sell this to anyone interested."
+ "I'm sorry, I can't sell this product to you, even if I wanted to," he says. "I have this technology, which if applied, would make slaves appear younger than the legal age of majority. I picked it up from an exotics dealer, who picked it up from some old world government research center. And yes, I know, this is a black market, and I would be happy to sell it to you, except, you see, too many of the wrong people know I have it, and while the knowledge isn't illegal, selling or using it is. See if I sell this to you, you'd start getting younger looking slaves, and those people would try to take us both down, and since I'm not the master of an arcology, I would probably end up enslaved, and I'm not interested in that. If only the laws were more open about who could have sex with who, I could sell this to anyone interested."
Since the agreed upon minimum age in your Free City is greater than eight, it would draw way too much attention for you to make use of the research recipe for the Childhood Fertility @@.orange;Induced NCS@@ (genetic engineering and hormonal blend).
<br>
He notices your interest and lets you read the information [[Childhood Fertility Induced NCS|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Childhood Fertility Induced NCS"]].
@@ -190,9 +190,9 @@ He gestures to a door in the back of the stall. "The good shit's back there<<if
<<set _match = "I'm not sure this is a good match for your arcology's current society at this moment, but I'm sure you could have fun with it.">>
<</if>>
<<if ($pedo_mode)>>
- <<set _toydolls = "If you like sexy little toy dolls, I mean biological ''@@.coral;lolis@@'' or ''@@.coral;shotas@@'' for life, then this is the one for you. I picked it up from an exotics dealer, who picked it up from some Old World government research center.", _norefunds = "Remember, though, no money back on this. Technology like this doesn't exist anywhere else, your younger slaves will stay that way forever, and your older ones will slowly begin to regress towards that nice mid-childhood state. If you want to build yourself a cadre of ''@@.coral;preteen@@'' delights for yourself or your customers, then buy now!">>
+ <<set _toydolls = "If you like sexy little toy dolls, I mean biological ''@@.coral;lolis@@'' or ''@@.coral;shotas@@'' for life, then this is the one for you. I picked it up from an exotics dealer, who picked it up from some old world government research center.", _norefunds = "Remember, though, no money back on this. Technology like this doesn't exist anywhere else, your younger slaves will stay that way forever, and your older ones will slowly begin to regress towards that nice mid-childhood state. If you want to build yourself a cadre of ''@@.coral;preteen@@'' delights for yourself or your customers, then buy now!">>
<<else>>
- <<set _toydolls = "This might be a little too shady or perverted for you. But, if you want your slaves to last longer, you know, look younger for longer, well this treatment can help. However it comes at a price, this treatment will eventually turn your slave girls younger and younger looking, until the point you might not want to use them as sex slaves because they'll appear as teenagers or even younger. I'm serious, your slaves treated with this treatment will eventually look like children! They won't be, really, but this is no fountain of perpetual youth, and to be fair, maybe none of this will be up your alley. If that's the case, I guess you could just sell them once they get too young looking, and possibly for a higher price than if they looked older. It's, at best, for possibly more discerning or eclectic tastes then you might have. I picked it up from an exotics dealer, who picked it up from some Old World government research center.", _norefunds = "Remember, though, no money back on this. Technology like this doesn't exist anywhere else, your treated slaves will stay and become younger looking forever, and your older ones will slowly begin to regress towards a disturbingly young mid-childhood state. All those caveats aside, if this sounds like something you'd want, then buy now!">>
+ <<set _toydolls = "This might be a little too shady or perverted for you. But, if you want your slaves to last longer, you know, look younger for longer, well this treatment can help. However it comes at a price, this treatment will eventually turn your slave girls younger and younger looking, until the point you might not want to use them as sex slaves because they'll appear as teenagers or even younger. I'm serious, your slaves treated with this treatment will eventually look like children! They won't be, really, but this is no fountain of perpetual youth, and to be fair, maybe none of this will be up your alley. If that's the case, I guess you could just sell them once they get too young looking, and possibly for a higher price than if they looked older. It's, at best, for possibly more discerning or eclectic tastes then you might have. I picked it up from an exotics dealer, who picked it up from some old world government research center.", _norefunds = "Remember, though, no money back on this. Technology like this doesn't exist anywhere else, your treated slaves will stay and become younger looking forever, and your older ones will slowly begin to regress towards a disturbingly young mid-childhood state. All those caveats aside, if this sounds like something you'd want, then buy now!">>
<</if>>
<<if $geneticMappingUpgrade == 0>>
You lack the facilities required for such a treatment to be effective on specific individuals.
diff --git a/src/pregmod/widgets/bodySwapReaction.tw b/src/pregmod/widgets/bodySwapReaction.tw
index e2598c0ed6890aff23a577b8c02a38a5977fc3d9..9b315708df27787f7c0acb1ef6b9d92f041d5c85 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/widgets/bodySwapReaction.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/widgets/bodySwapReaction.tw
@@ -273,7 +273,7 @@ Now you only have to wait for $him to wake up.
<<if $args[0].boobsImplant > 0 && $args[1].boobsImplant > 0>> /*(breast implants)*/
and finds
<<if $args[0].boobsImplant >= $args[1].boobsImplant+20000 && $args[0].fetish == "boobs" && $args[0].fetishKnown>> /*(Massive implants+breast fetish)*/
- $he @@.lime;still has breast implants; implants easily bigger than any Old World woman's.@@
+ $he @@.lime;still has breast implants; implants easily bigger than any old world woman's.@@
<<if $args[0].devotion >= -20>>
The sheer size of $his silicone titans greatly excites $him to the point that $he can't hold back. $He gropes $his new chest boulders until an intense orgasm @@.hotpink;courses through $his body.@@
<<set $args[0].devotion += 5>>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/widgets/playerDescriptionWidgets.tw b/src/pregmod/widgets/playerDescriptionWidgets.tw
index 6d923126141aa4370f3790bd613d0b674ba1d10a..ed2ee429b9797b33b1a85847edde6e461adcde8a 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/widgets/playerDescriptionWidgets.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/widgets/playerDescriptionWidgets.tw
@@ -209,7 +209,7 @@
Your breasts feel bigger lately; likely a side effect of your lactation, though you could do without the wet spots forming over your nipples.
<</if>>
<<elseif $PC.boobsBonus == -2>>
- Your breasts are fairly average, at least to Old World
+ Your breasts are fairly average, at least to old world
<<if $PC.markings == "freckles">>
standards, with light freckling on the tops and in your cleavage.
<<elseif $PC.markings == "heavily freckled">>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/PESS.tw b/src/uncategorized/PESS.tw
index 2b17a6b7de27e9b6e07f30e89eca19616ce1c67e..1723cdec259f0fcfbe3839da2b1002f1cbc72f05 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/PESS.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/PESS.tw
@@ -126,7 +126,7 @@ Your milkmaid <<EventNameLink>> worked hard today. The cows have it much easier
<<case "loving concubine">>
-It's been a long, harassing day as owner of the arcology. You're composing an angry communication to a couple of imbecile tenants who seem to think they're still in their Old World shithole of a homeland, insist on acting like it, and are also wealthy enough to make it unwise to simply defenestrate them from the nearest window. Not that you aren't tempted. Suddenly, you feel a moist, <<if ($activeSlave.lips > 70)>>massive<<elseif ($activeSlave.lips > 40)>>pillowlike<<else>>girlish<</if>> pair of lips nibbling their way along your ear, and a <<if ($activeSlave.muscles > 95)>>powerful<<elseif ($activeSlave.muscles > 30)>>strong<<else>>feminine<</if>> hand over your shoulder. Its owner <<if !canTalk($activeSlave)>>passes you a handwritten note: "? ? It can wait, <<= WrittenMaster()>> ? ?"<<else>>whispers "It can wait, <<Master>>."<</if>>
+It's been a long, harassing day as owner of the arcology. You're composing an angry communication to a couple of imbecile tenants who seem to think they're still in their old world shithole of a homeland, insist on acting like it, and are also wealthy enough to make it unwise to simply defenestrate them from the nearest window. Not that you aren't tempted. Suddenly, you feel a moist, <<if ($activeSlave.lips > 70)>>massive<<elseif ($activeSlave.lips > 40)>>pillowlike<<else>>girlish<</if>> pair of lips nibbling their way along your ear, and a <<if ($activeSlave.muscles > 95)>>powerful<<elseif ($activeSlave.muscles > 30)>>strong<<else>>feminine<</if>> hand over your shoulder. Its owner <<if !canTalk($activeSlave)>>passes you a handwritten note: "? ? It can wait, <<= WrittenMaster()>> ? ?"<<else>>whispers "It can wait, <<Master>>."<</if>>
You turn to see your concubine <<EventNameLink>>'s <<if ($activeSlave.butt > 5)>>massive, nude ass<<elseif ($activeSlave.butt > 2)>>big naked butt<<else>>nice, nude rear<</if>> vanishing back into your suite.<<if ($activeSlave.boobs > 2000)>> As $he sways away from you, you can clearly see the sides of $his massive tits, sticking out on either side of $his torso.<</if>>
@@ -184,7 +184,7 @@ $He sees you examining at $him, and looks back at you submissively, too tired to
<<link "$He uses $his muscles to manhandle him">>
<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
<<replace "#result">>
- $activeSlave.slaveName stomps over to the drunken delinquent, who finds himself sobering up with each step the muscular $woman makes in his direction. Soon he finds himself <<if ($activeSlave.height > 170)>>staring up at $his $activeSlave.faceShape face<<elseif ($activeSlave.height > 150)>>eye to eye with $his $activeSlave.faceShape face<<else>>looking down at $his $activeSlave.faceShape face<</if>> as $he grips him by the shoulders and lifts him bodily off of the ground. The man squeals with terror as he begs forgiveness for his affront to you, but $activeSlave.slaveName simply tosses him away from your presence as if discharging him from a bar. Word of your herculean protector is soon @@.green;the talk of $arcologies[0].name and beyond,@@ with many in the Old World mistakenly believing you are guarded by a warrior so strong $he can throw any man the breadth of a room in a single heave.
+ $activeSlave.slaveName stomps over to the drunken delinquent, who finds himself sobering up with each step the muscular $woman makes in his direction. Soon he finds himself <<if ($activeSlave.height > 170)>>staring up at $his $activeSlave.faceShape face<<elseif ($activeSlave.height > 150)>>eye to eye with $his $activeSlave.faceShape face<<else>>looking down at $his $activeSlave.faceShape face<</if>> as $he grips him by the shoulders and lifts him bodily off of the ground. The man squeals with terror as he begs forgiveness for his affront to you, but $activeSlave.slaveName simply tosses him away from your presence as if discharging him from a bar. Word of your herculean protector is soon @@.green;the talk of $arcologies[0].name and beyond,@@ with many in the old world mistakenly believing you are guarded by a warrior so strong $he can throw any man the breadth of a room in a single heave.
<<run repX(2500, "event", $activeSlave)>> <<if $activeSlave.prestige < 1>> <<set $activeSlave.prestige = 1,$activeSlave.prestigeDesc = "Word in the arcology is $he can throw a man the breadth of a room in a single heave.">> <</if>>
<</replace>>
<</link>>
@@ -195,7 +195,7 @@ $He sees you examining at $him, and looks back at you submissively, too tired to
<br><<link "$He intimidates him with $his towering height">>
<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
<<replace "#result">>
- $activeSlave.slaveName calmly strides over to the drunken delinquent and simply towers over him with a glower on $his $activeSlave.faceShape face. The man quickly finds himself sobering up and moves to run from the scene with all the drunken haste he can muster. Unfortunately for him, $activeSlave.slaveName matches his pace with a brisk power-walk, and the citizen soon finds himself face-down on the pavement after a swift strike to the back of the head. Word of your giant protector is soon @@.green;the talk of $arcologies[0].name and beyond,@@ with many in the Old World mistakenly believing you are guarded by a warrior twice the height of any man.
+ $activeSlave.slaveName calmly strides over to the drunken delinquent and simply towers over him with a glower on $his $activeSlave.faceShape face. The man quickly finds himself sobering up and moves to run from the scene with all the drunken haste he can muster. Unfortunately for him, $activeSlave.slaveName matches his pace with a brisk power-walk, and the citizen soon finds himself face-down on the pavement after a swift strike to the back of the head. Word of your giant protector is soon @@.green;the talk of $arcologies[0].name and beyond,@@ with many in the old world mistakenly believing you are guarded by a warrior twice the height of any man.
<<run repX(2500, "event", $activeSlave)>> <<if $activeSlave.prestige < 1>> <<set $activeSlave.prestige = 1,$activeSlave.prestigeDesc = "Word in the arcology is $he is twice the height of any man.">> <</if>>
<</replace>>
<</link>>
@@ -206,7 +206,7 @@ $He sees you examining at $him, and looks back at you submissively, too tired to
<br><<link "$He distracts him with $his beautiful face">>
<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
<<replace "#result">>
- $activeSlave.slaveName seductively saunters over to the drunken delinquent and poses alluringly nearby. The man can't help but become entranced by $his gorgeous $activeSlave.faceShape face, and follows $him like a lost puppy as $he beckons with one outstretched finger. $activeSlave.slaveName lures $his prey into a nearby alley before slamming $his fist into the unsuspecting drunkard's face, leaving him knocked out cold on the floor before returning to guard you. Word of your beautiful protector is soon @@.green;the talk of $arcologies[0].name and beyond,@@ with many in the Old World mistakenly believing you are guarded by a warrior unmatched by any $woman in the world in $his good looks.
+ $activeSlave.slaveName seductively saunters over to the drunken delinquent and poses alluringly nearby. The man can't help but become entranced by $his gorgeous $activeSlave.faceShape face, and follows $him like a lost puppy as $he beckons with one outstretched finger. $activeSlave.slaveName lures $his prey into a nearby alley before slamming $his fist into the unsuspecting drunkard's face, leaving him knocked out cold on the floor before returning to guard you. Word of your beautiful protector is soon @@.green;the talk of $arcologies[0].name and beyond,@@ with many in the old world mistakenly believing you are guarded by a warrior unmatched by any $woman in the world in $his good looks.
<<run repX(2500, "event", $activeSlave)>> <<if $activeSlave.prestige < 1>> <<set $activeSlave.prestige = 1,$activeSlave.prestigeDesc = "Word in the arcology is $his beauty is unmatched by any woman in the world.">> <</if>>
<</replace>>
<</link>>
@@ -217,7 +217,7 @@ $He sees you examining at $him, and looks back at you submissively, too tired to
<br><<link "$He de-escalates the situation with tact">>
<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
<<replace "#result">>
- $activeSlave.slaveName walks over to the man, puts an arm about his shoulders and explains to him <<if canTalk($activeSlave)>>in hushed whispers<<else>>with rapid sign language<</if>> the severity of the situation. The man sobers up quickly as the reality of his actions set in and he soon beats a hasty exit from the scene as $activeSlave.slaveName returns to guard your body. Word of your tactful protector is soon @@.green;the talk of $arcologies[0].name and beyond,@@ with many in the Old World mistakenly believing you are guarded by a warrior whose silver tongue is the envy of many politicians.
+ $activeSlave.slaveName walks over to the man, puts an arm about his shoulders and explains to him <<if canTalk($activeSlave)>>in hushed whispers<<else>>with rapid sign language<</if>> the severity of the situation. The man sobers up quickly as the reality of his actions set in and he soon beats a hasty exit from the scene as $activeSlave.slaveName returns to guard your body. Word of your tactful protector is soon @@.green;the talk of $arcologies[0].name and beyond,@@ with many in the old world mistakenly believing you are guarded by a warrior whose silver tongue is the envy of many politicians.
<<run repX(2500, "event", $activeSlave)>> <<if $activeSlave.prestige < 1>> <<set $activeSlave.prestige = 1,$activeSlave.prestigeDesc = "$His silver tongue is the envy of many in the arcology.">> <</if>>
<</replace>>
<</link>>
@@ -228,7 +228,7 @@ $He sees you examining at $him, and looks back at you submissively, too tired to
<br><<link "$He fights him hand to hand">>
<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
<<replace "#result">>
- $activeSlave.slaveName quickly maneuvers over to the man and strikes him low in the stomach, robbing him of breath in a single strike. The man sobers up somewhat and raises his arms to defend himself, but finds himself outmatched by $activeSlave.slaveName's skillful attacks. It doesn't take long for $activeSlave.slaveName to reduce the man to a battered heap on the ground with $his hands alone, after which $he soon returns to you to guard your body. Word of your martial protector is soon @@.green;the talk of $arcologies[0].name and beyond,@@ with many in the Old World mistakenly believing you are guarded by a warrior whose hands are deadlier than many weapons.
+ $activeSlave.slaveName quickly maneuvers over to the man and strikes him low in the stomach, robbing him of breath in a single strike. The man sobers up somewhat and raises his arms to defend himself, but finds himself outmatched by $activeSlave.slaveName's skillful attacks. It doesn't take long for $activeSlave.slaveName to reduce the man to a battered heap on the ground with $his hands alone, after which $he soon returns to you to guard your body. Word of your martial protector is soon @@.green;the talk of $arcologies[0].name and beyond,@@ with many in the old world mistakenly believing you are guarded by a warrior whose hands are deadlier than many weapons.
<<run repX(2500, "event", $activeSlave)>> <<if $activeSlave.prestige < 1>> <<set $activeSlave.prestige = 1,$activeSlave.prestigeDesc = "Word in the arcology is $his hands are deadlier than many weapons.">> <</if>>
<</replace>>
<</link>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/RECI.tw b/src/uncategorized/RECI.tw
index 408a2c93dca06b17abfb7b477a412b964eac9b6f..e13c3b862a998747d142ce0c4178924a7cbf27ed 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/RECI.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/RECI.tw
@@ -522,7 +522,7 @@ $He looks pensive, and goes through two false starts before $he clears $his thro
<br><<link "Put the horny old $girl to work">>
<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
<<replace "#result">>
- You tell $him that you've hired $him out for a party hosted by a prominent citizen's son, home from college, and that $he should be saving it for that. $He promises that $he will, bringing $his legs together again and clearly already imagining it. You check in on $him later, using the video feeds, and are treated to the sight of $him wearing a recently-acquired, too-tight t-shirt with an Old World college's mascot on it as $he rides a dick young enough to be $his son's. There's some drunken yelling, which $he responds to by blowing kisses and licking $his <<if $activeSlave.lips > 0>>plump <</if>>lips until another cock finds its way into $his mouth. $His fee for the night is @@.yellowgreen;substantial,@@ and the student's father attaches a note to the payment. Apparently $he got him too, and he's interested in hiring $him for a business meeting next month.
+ You tell $him that you've hired $him out for a party hosted by a prominent citizen's son, home from college, and that $he should be saving it for that. $He promises that $he will, bringing $his legs together again and clearly already imagining it. You check in on $him later, using the video feeds, and are treated to the sight of $him wearing a recently-acquired, too-tight t-shirt with an old world college's mascot on it as $he rides a dick young enough to be $his son's. There's some drunken yelling, which $he responds to by blowing kisses and licking $his <<if $activeSlave.lips > 0>>plump <</if>>lips until another cock finds its way into $his mouth. $His fee for the night is @@.yellowgreen;substantial,@@ and the student's father attaches a note to the payment. Apparently $he got him too, and he's interested in hiring $him for a business meeting next month.
<<run cashX(500, "event", $activeSlave)>>
<<set $activeSlave.analCount += 5>>
<<set $analTotal += 5>>
@@ -599,7 +599,7 @@ $He looks pensive, and goes through two false starts before $he clears $his thro
<<set $activeSlave.clothes = _clothesTemp>>
<<replace "#result">>
- You tell $him to head down to the wardrobe and put on the outfit that'll be laid out for $him there. $He obeys promptly, but does not return for some time, having gotten instructions from $assistantName along the way to put extra effort into $his grooming. When $he finally returns, the effect is striking. <<if $activeSlave.face > 10>>$He's a gorgeous girl with or without makeup, dressed up or naked, but $he's especially luscious tonight.<<else>>$His face is not flawless, but $he's conscious of $his transformation, and the new confidence in $his beauty adds a special glow that cannot be faked.<</if>> $His evening dress is elegant; it's quite slutty by Old World standards, but according to Free Cities fashion, it's just about the most conservative gown a slave can be expected to wear, and quite daring in that it isn't immediately obvious whether $he's a slave or not. The tops of $his areolae are hardly even visible.<br><br>
+ You tell $him to head down to the wardrobe and put on the outfit that'll be laid out for $him there. $He obeys promptly, but does not return for some time, having gotten instructions from $assistantName along the way to put extra effort into $his grooming. When $he finally returns, the effect is striking. <<if $activeSlave.face > 10>>$He's a gorgeous girl with or without makeup, dressed up or naked, but $he's especially luscious tonight.<<else>>$His face is not flawless, but $he's conscious of $his transformation, and the new confidence in $his beauty adds a special glow that cannot be faked.<</if>> $His evening dress is elegant; it's quite slutty by old world standards, but according to Free Cities fashion, it's just about the most conservative gown a slave can be expected to wear, and quite daring in that it isn't immediately obvious whether $he's a slave or not. The tops of $his areolae are hardly even visible.<br><br>
You take $him out to a nice lounge, with blue-toned light and soft music. $He clings to your arm, pressing $himself against you just the right amount: not enough to demand sex right now, but enough to raise the anticipation of it later. $He's a slave, so $he does not eat or drink the usual fare on offer, but the establishment is used to slaves and offers flavorful variation on liquid slave food. $He drinks the translucent fluid out of a tall glass, carefully maintaining $his poise. You circulate, leaving $him at the bar when acquaintances appear. $He perches on a stool, conscious of and pleased by the discreet admiration of $his body, delectably outlined by the tight dress. Once a new arrival who did not see you with $him introduces himself to $him. He's tall and fit and silver-haired, but he picked $him out of the room to approach, and it's with polite disappointment that he reacts to $his indication of you, across the room: "I'm <<s>>orry, <<S>>ir, that'<<s>> my <<Master>> there." He offers a nonverbal apology without coming over, which you accept with a wave: it's such a common mistake in Free Cities high society that it's universally brushed off without offense. It happens again later in the night, when a slightly tipsy free woman occupies the barstool next to $activeSlave.slaveName's and keeps trying to relax against $him until the flattered slave explains $himself again. When you bring $him home at the end of the night, $his eyes are shining with @@.mediumaquamarine;private assurance,@@ and $he presses $himself against you more closely than ever.
<<set $activeSlave.analCount += 1>>
<<set $analTotal += 1>>
@@ -609,7 +609,7 @@ $He looks pensive, and goes through two false starts before $he clears $his thro
<br><<link "Show $him off online">>
<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
<<replace "#result">>
- You tell $him that $he's become a very pretty sex slave, and to prove it, you set up a live feed for $him that's available for free in the Old World. The Free Cities produce an utter torrent of hardcore video, so much that there's never any profit to be made off it anymore, but viewers begin to join the channel anyway and by the end of the week $he has thousands of eyes watching $him as $he <<if $activeSlave.assignment == "whore">>sells $his body<<else>>has sex with random citizens<</if>> in the hallways of $arcologies[0].name. <<if $assistantName == "your personal assistant">>Your personal assistant<<else>>$assistantName<</if>> keeps $him constantly informed of how many people are watching $him get fucked, how many of them are likely masturbating to $his body, and how many inquiries about $him $assistantName is culling out of your inbox. $He slowly gets used to $his starring role in an impromptu free hardcore stream, but never quite stops stealing wondering glances at the nearest camera, as though $he cannot believe that so many people would sexualize $him. This lends $him a naughtiness that cannot be faked, garnering $him @@.green;much attention@@ by the end of the week.
+ You tell $him that $he's become a very pretty sex slave, and to prove it, you set up a live feed for $him that's available for free in the old world. The Free Cities produce an utter torrent of hardcore video, so much that there's never any profit to be made off it anymore, but viewers begin to join the channel anyway and by the end of the week $he has thousands of eyes watching $him as $he <<if $activeSlave.assignment == "whore">>sells $his body<<else>>has sex with random citizens<</if>> in the hallways of $arcologies[0].name. <<if $assistantName == "your personal assistant">>Your personal assistant<<else>>$assistantName<</if>> keeps $him constantly informed of how many people are watching $him get fucked, how many of them are likely masturbating to $his body, and how many inquiries about $him $assistantName is culling out of your inbox. $He slowly gets used to $his starring role in an impromptu free hardcore stream, but never quite stops stealing wondering glances at the nearest camera, as though $he cannot believe that so many people would sexualize $him. This lends $him a naughtiness that cannot be faked, garnering $him @@.green;much attention@@ by the end of the week.
<<if ($activeSlave.fetish == "humiliation") && ($activeSlave.fetishKnown == 1) && ($activeSlave.fetishStrength > 60)>>
Of course, since $he's a humiliation fetishist, this experience is like sexual candy for $him. $He @@.hotpink;can't get enough.@@
<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 4>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/REFS.tw b/src/uncategorized/REFS.tw
index f437c7f501c3fa25ba028492b2a5faaa05a25c82..68e1db5c280a2cc00a149969843271e1854a2997 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/REFS.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/REFS.tw
@@ -196,7 +196,7 @@ On one particular outing, you come across an elderly male citizen giving his you
<<case "degradationist encounter">>
-As a result of $arcologies[0].name's adoption of degradationism there has been a remarkable effect on the social status of slaves, with the continued reduction of slave rights taking center stage. However, not all citizens are so keen as to internalize the tenants of degradationism, whether out of misplaced compassion, old habits or adherence to the Old World style of relationships.
+As a result of $arcologies[0].name's adoption of degradationism there has been a remarkable effect on the social status of slaves, with the continued reduction of slave rights taking center stage. However, not all citizens are so keen as to internalize the tenants of degradationism, whether out of misplaced compassion, old habits or adherence to the old world style of relationships.
<br><br>
On one particular outing, you come across an elderly male citizen holding the hand of his young slave, seemingly on a date at one of the arcology's prominent promenades. From the ring on the $girl's finger and the modest neckline on $his clothing, it is clear that $his owner is treating $him as if $he is his wife. His obscene treatment of his slave has already drawn a large crowd of shocked onlookers.
@@ -204,7 +204,7 @@ On one particular outing, you come across an elderly male citizen holding the ha
The notion of the physical ideal has taken $arcologies[0].name by storm and a number of enterprising citizens have been quick to respond by providing new services and businesses in response. One such innovation is the open air gym, a now common sight along $arcologies[0].name's many streets. Many citizens utilize such facilities to squeeze in an extra work-out on their daily commute, or in lieu of personal fitness facilities in their own homes.
<br><br>
-While navigating your arcology on an outing, you find yourself coming across one of the arcology's finest open-air gyms, clearly marketed towards the wealthy citizen on the move. As impressive as the gold plated fitness equipment is, in amongst the power racks, dip bars and bench press stations is perhaps one of the most spectacular athletic specimens in the entire arcology. This female citizen has clearly embraced everything that $arcologies[0].name's physical idealism represents, molding herself into a rippling blend of broad shoulders, powerful muscles and a ripped stomach that would shame even the most well-built Old World athlete.
+While navigating your arcology on an outing, you find yourself coming across one of the arcology's finest open-air gyms, clearly marketed towards the wealthy citizen on the move. As impressive as the gold plated fitness equipment is, in amongst the power racks, dip bars and bench press stations is perhaps one of the most spectacular athletic specimens in the entire arcology. This female citizen has clearly embraced everything that $arcologies[0].name's physical idealism represents, molding herself into a rippling blend of broad shoulders, powerful muscles and a ripped stomach that would shame even the most well-built old world athlete.
<<case "pastoralist encounter">>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw b/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw
index cd9bdaf7960a73a37c700f6e2fb522df9848bcaf..b7197cb4beddc164b875a53a0ff7ee42388c528a 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw
@@ -2247,9 +2247,9 @@ At your <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>nod<<else>>acknowledgment<</if>>, $he
<<if $arcologies[0].FSPhysicalIdealist != "unset">>
You maintain a tremendous workout routine: the leader of a society that worships physical perfection can afford nothing less. Working out maintains your appearance, keeps you sharp, and makes you the exemplar of the physical ideal that you have to be for your vision for the future to be realized. So, you pay the iron price for your <<if $PC.title == 1>>muscles<<else>>toned body<</if>>. Like most of the arcology's prominent citizens, you often lift publicly and take part in other amateur sports, but you also have your own private weight room in your penthouse, and you spend a lot of time there.
<<elseif $PC.physicalAge >= 50>>
- You take care of yourself. You're no longer as young as you once were, making it almost a requirement that you work out, hard and regularly. The fact is, the overwhelming majority of arcology owners who maintain their positions for more than a short time are physically fit. The Free Cities have a reputation for destroying Old World wastrels who inherit wealth and think that makes them able to survive in an anarcho-capitalist world. Sloth and an inability to self-govern are not qualities common among your successful peers. Not to mention, it's useful to look good, and it may well prove essential to be physically capable in the near future.
+ You take care of yourself. You're no longer as young as you once were, making it almost a requirement that you work out, hard and regularly. The fact is, the overwhelming majority of arcology owners who maintain their positions for more than a short time are physically fit. The Free Cities have a reputation for destroying old world wastrels who inherit wealth and think that makes them able to survive in an anarcho-capitalist world. Sloth and an inability to self-govern are not qualities common among your successful peers. Not to mention, it's useful to look good, and it may well prove essential to be physically capable in the near future.
<<else>>
- You take care of yourself. It would be absurd to think that there's any explicit requirement that you work out, hard and regularly, but the fact remains that the overwhelming majority of arcology owners who maintain their positions for more than a short time are physically fit. The Free Cities have a reputation for destroying Old World wastrels who inherit wealth and think that makes them able to survive in an anarcho-capitalist world. Sloth and an inability to self-govern are not qualities common among your successful peers. Not to mention, it's useful to look good, and it may well prove essential to be physically capable in the near future.
+ You take care of yourself. It would be absurd to think that there's any explicit requirement that you work out, hard and regularly, but the fact remains that the overwhelming majority of arcology owners who maintain their positions for more than a short time are physically fit. The Free Cities have a reputation for destroying old world wastrels who inherit wealth and think that makes them able to survive in an anarcho-capitalist world. Sloth and an inability to self-govern are not qualities common among your successful peers. Not to mention, it's useful to look good, and it may well prove essential to be physically capable in the near future.
<</if>>
You complete the final rep of your first workout of the day, rack the bar, and jump to your feet to shower, change, and see to your empire. The motion brings your field of view up, and you notice for the first time that <<EventNameLink>> is frozen in the open doorway, having seen something in the workout room that caught $his attention as $he passed by. $His eyes are fixed on your
<<if $PC.belly >= 120000>>
@@ -4099,7 +4099,7 @@ says a third, obviously smitten. "I'd give anything to have a night with $him."
Although your life as an arcology owner comes with many associated privileges, extended idleness to bask in your luxury is not often among them. Thankfully, $assistantName knows better than to let you run yourself ragged from the weight of your assorted responsibilities and often allots time in the evenings of your active schedule to simply relax.
<br><br>
-Of course, no self respecting arcology owner could be expected to enjoy a lazy night of idle relaxation on their own. As you resolve the last of your most pressing responsibilities for the evening, $assistantName directs one of your attentive slaves to gently guide you away from the unending burdens of running your arcology. Leaning against the doorway and wearing a facsimile of what an Old World $woman might wear on a casual night in, <<EventNameLink>>
+Of course, no self respecting arcology owner could be expected to enjoy a lazy night of idle relaxation on their own. As you resolve the last of your most pressing responsibilities for the evening, $assistantName directs one of your attentive slaves to gently guide you away from the unending burdens of running your arcology. Leaning against the doorway and wearing a facsimile of what an old world $woman might wear on a casual night in, <<EventNameLink>>
<<if !canTalk($activeSlave)>>
asks with a gesture that carries just the right mixture of submission and exaggerated casualness if you'd like to 'hang out.'
<<elseif SlaveStatsChecker.checkForLisp($activeSlave)>>
@@ -4120,11 +4120,11 @@ $He saunters over and
<</if>>
in front of you, awaiting further direction.
<<if $activeSlave.amp < 0>>
- Clad in an antique T-Shirt referencing some defunct Old World website, $his P-Limbs stand in stark contrast — gyros and servomotors against simple thread and cloth. With such tangible examples of the technological prowess of the Free Cities serving as $his limbs, $his <<if $activeSlave.belly >= 5000>>taut <</if>>shirt is an amusing testimonial to how far behind the Old World stands in contrast to the new.
+ Clad in an antique T-Shirt referencing some defunct old world website, $his P-Limbs stand in stark contrast — gyros and servomotors against simple thread and cloth. With such tangible examples of the technological prowess of the Free Cities serving as $his limbs, $his <<if $activeSlave.belly >= 5000>>taut <</if>>shirt is an amusing testimonial to how far behind the old world stands in contrast to the new.
<<elseif $activeSlave.boobs > 4000>>
$His breasts are so massive that the front of $his loose pajama top must be unbuttoned. Even so, the protrusion of $his immense breasts<<if $activeSlave.belly >= 5000>> and _belly rounded belly<</if>> from $his chest strains the soft pajama top to it's breaking point.
<<elseif $activeSlave.intelligence+$activeSlave.intelligenceImplant > 50>>
- As a clever $girl, $his simple<<if $activeSlave.belly >= 5000>>, yet tight around the middle,<</if>> summer dress evokes memories of bygone warm weather days at elite Old World colleges — and the sexual conquest of their youthful residents.
+ As a clever $girl, $his simple<<if $activeSlave.belly >= 5000>>, yet tight around the middle,<</if>> summer dress evokes memories of bygone warm weather days at elite old world colleges — and the sexual conquest of their youthful residents.
<<elseif $activeSlave.muscles > 30>>
$His simple sports bra and compression shorts ensemble does little to conceal $his incredible musculature, <<if $activeSlave.belly >= 1500 && $activeSlave.belly < 5000>>straining to hold up against $his swelling middle and<<elseif $activeSlave.belly >= 5000>>straining to hold up against $his swelling middle and <</if>>glistening with sweat from a recent workout. Despite $his recent exertions, $he's able to maintain utter stillness in the perfect posture of an obedient slave.
<<elseif $activeSlave.energy > 95>>
@@ -4140,7 +4140,7 @@ in front of you, awaiting further direction.
<</if>>
showing unmistakably how badly $he needs release.
<<else>>
- $He keeps $his <<if canSee($activeSlave)>><<= App.Desc.EyeColor>> eyes<<else>>face<</if>> slightly downcast, $his hands lightly smoothing the folds from $his tight skirt while $his breasts visibly rise and fall under $his even tighter blouse<<if $activeSlave.belly >= 5000>>. Between the two, there is little $he can do to cover $his exposed <<if $activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 3000>>pregnancy<<else>>middle<</if>><</if>>. $He's the perfect picture of an attentive little Old World girlfriend<<if $activeSlave.height > 185>> (though, of course, $he's anything but physically small)<</if>>.
+ $He keeps $his <<if canSee($activeSlave)>><<= App.Desc.EyeColor>> eyes<<else>>face<</if>> slightly downcast, $his hands lightly smoothing the folds from $his tight skirt while $his breasts visibly rise and fall under $his even tighter blouse<<if $activeSlave.belly >= 5000>>. Between the two, there is little $he can do to cover $his exposed <<if $activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 3000>>pregnancy<<else>>middle<</if>><</if>>. $He's the perfect picture of an attentive little old world girlfriend<<if $activeSlave.height > 185>> (though, of course, $he's anything but physically small)<</if>>.
<</if>>
<<case "devoted shortstack">>
@@ -12358,7 +12358,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
This is very close to $his dream of the ideal sexual encounter, and getting rewarded for such devoted behavior with pleasure on such a level encourages $him to @@.mediumaquamarine;trust you.@@
<<set $activeSlave.trust += 5>>
<<else>>
- It isn't exactly an Old World romance, but sharing this with you @@.lightcoral;advances $his fetish.@@ In the Free Cities, it will do for romance.
+ It isn't exactly an old world romance, but sharing this with you @@.lightcoral;advances $his fetish.@@ In the Free Cities, it will do for romance.
<<set $activeSlave.fetishStrength += 4>>
<</if>>
When $he's gone, you direct another slave to return the napkin to its proper place.
@@ -17203,7 +17203,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
<</if>>
as $he moves.
<</if>>
- $He gives you an excellent nude lap dance, expressing the art at the level only the finest Old World strippers can manage. The interaction is all about you, your eyes on $his body, your desire for $his touch, and finally your <<if $PC.dick == 1>>cum flowing into $his mouth as $he sucks your dick<<if $PC.vagina == 1>> and the wetness against $his fingers as they tease your pussy<</if>><<else>>pussyjuice coating $his lips as $he eats you out<</if>>. $He @@.mediumaquamarine;knows $his place@@ very well.
+ $He gives you an excellent nude lap dance, expressing the art at the level only the finest old world strippers can manage. The interaction is all about you, your eyes on $his body, your desire for $his touch, and finally your <<if $PC.dick == 1>>cum flowing into $his mouth as $he sucks your dick<<if $PC.vagina == 1>> and the wetness against $his fingers as they tease your pussy<</if>><<else>>pussyjuice coating $his lips as $he eats you out<</if>>. $He @@.mediumaquamarine;knows $his place@@ very well.
<<set $activeSlave.trust += 4, $activeSlave.oralCount++, $oralTotal++>>
<</replace>>
<</link>>
@@ -18507,7 +18507,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
<<case "stay confined">>($his cell),
<<case "guard you">>(the armory where $his weapons are kept),
<<case "be your Head Girl">>(the assignment location of a slave who needs some hands-on guidance from your Head Girl),
- <<case "recruit girls">>(the camera station $he uses to convince people from the Old World that becoming your slave is a good idea),
+ <<case "recruit girls">>(the camera station $he uses to convince people from the old world that becoming your slave is a good idea),
<<case "serve in the master suite">>(your bedroom, where $he'll ready $himself for later),
<<case "be the DJ">>(the back of $clubName where $he decides the playlist for the day),
<<case "be the Attendant">>(the back of $spaName, where $he'll decide the perfect mixture for today's baths),
@@ -19364,7 +19364,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
<</replace>>
<<set $activeSlave.clothes = _clothesTemp>>
<<replace "#result">>
- You direct $assistantName to clear $activeSlave.slaveName's schedule and to find a local Frat House willing to 'host' a $woman of $his age and experience. Perhaps a group of virile college boys running a train on $activeSlave.slaveName might accustom $him to younger sexual partners. When $activeSlave.slaveName leaves the penthouse, $he's dressed up to look like a frumpy Old World MILF and is clearly skeptical about your age-play therapy.
+ You direct $assistantName to clear $activeSlave.slaveName's schedule and to find a local Frat House willing to 'host' a $woman of $his age and experience. Perhaps a group of virile college boys running a train on $activeSlave.slaveName might accustom $him to younger sexual partners. When $activeSlave.slaveName leaves the penthouse, $he's dressed up to look like a frumpy old world MILF and is clearly skeptical about your age-play therapy.
<br><br>
$activeSlave.slaveName returns to the penthouse naked, disheveled, and absolutely covered in a thick coating of drying cum. Despite $his appearance, however, $he is practically beaming with happiness. It seems young cock agrees with $him, and by the state of $his
<<if $activeSlave.mpreg == 1>>
@@ -19529,7 +19529,7 @@ You tell $him kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address
<</replace>>
<<set $activeSlave.clothes = _clothesTemp>>
<<replace "#result">>
- You direct $assistantName to clear $activeSlave.slaveName's schedule and to find a local retirement community willing to 'host' a $girl of $his age. Perhaps a group of venerable graybeards running a train on $activeSlave.slaveName might accustom $him to older sexual partners. When $activeSlave.slaveName leaves the penthouse, $he's dressed up to look like an Old World schoolgirl and is clearly skeptical about your age-play therapy.
+ You direct $assistantName to clear $activeSlave.slaveName's schedule and to find a local retirement community willing to 'host' a $girl of $his age. Perhaps a group of venerable graybeards running a train on $activeSlave.slaveName might accustom $him to older sexual partners. When $activeSlave.slaveName leaves the penthouse, $he's dressed up to look like an old world schoolgirl and is clearly skeptical about your age-play therapy.
<br><br>
$activeSlave.slaveName returns to the penthouse naked, disheveled, and absolutely covered in a thick coating of drying cum. Despite $his appearance, however, $he is practically beaming with happiness. It seems a good fucking from experienced older men agrees with $him, and by the state of $his
<<if $activeSlave.mpreg == 1>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/REroyalblood.tw b/src/uncategorized/REroyalblood.tw
index 34834d2fd5fcd258493f4593af0d87eacafdb56c..988a92696d29be383808a5de7821d631606db188 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/REroyalblood.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/REroyalblood.tw
@@ -157,7 +157,7 @@ One unfortunate consequence of existing in a global world is that business oppor
<br><br>
A convenient video feed is brought up, displaying a quick visual summary of the opportunity at hand.
-It seems a bastion of the Old World has fallen, a royal family of ancient blood and reputation has been overthrown by a local populist leader and his fellow revolutionaries. Furthermore, the leader of the revolution has designs to transform the outmoded monarchy into an arcology of his own, and has transmitted a request for aid to his new peers in the Free Cities.
+It seems a bastion of the old world has fallen, a royal family of ancient blood and reputation has been overthrown by a local populist leader and his fellow revolutionaries. Furthermore, the leader of the revolution has designs to transform the outmoded monarchy into an arcology of his own, and has transmitted a request for aid to his new peers in the Free Cities.
Of course, nothing in the Free Cities is free and international aid is no exception. This new arcology owner is no fool, however, and has outlined a number of rewards to be delivered to his most generous benefactors.
@@ -172,7 +172,7 @@ Time is short, but you are well placed to acquire some choice slaves. With an ad
<span id="result">
<<link "Go back to sleep">>
<<replace "#result">>
- You inform your personal assistant that you aren't planning to take any action. It's not every day that a monarchy collapses in the Old World, but it's also not particularly uncommon either.
+ You inform your personal assistant that you aren't planning to take any action. It's not every day that a monarchy collapses in the old world, but it's also not particularly uncommon either.
<</replace>>
<</link>>
<<if ($cash >= 50000) && ($rep >= 2000)>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/arcologyDescription.tw b/src/uncategorized/arcologyDescription.tw
index 8de6f60ac6544718a162a03d270369920e6f3d2d..13ad0e7a862a03755f65de79700d543ec8b3f133 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/arcologyDescription.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/arcologyDescription.tw
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ __'' $arcologies[0].name''__, your arcology, is located in a Free City in <<if $
<</if>>
Its<<if $weatherCladding == 2>> glorious<<elseif $weatherCladding > 0>> dull<<elseif $arcologyUpgrade.apron == 1>> shining<</if>> bulk
<<if $terrain == "urban">>
- towers above the city around it; it is part of a cluster of arcologies that form a Free City in the midst of an Old World urban area.
+ towers above the city around it; it is part of a cluster of arcologies that form a Free City in the midst of an old world urban area.
<<elseif $terrain == "rural">>
rises above the buildings around it; it is part of a cluster of arcologies and smaller structures that form a Free City in the middle of a barren wilderness.
<<elseif $terrain == "ravine">>
@@ -690,7 +690,7 @@ Its lingua franca is $language.
<<if $peacekeepers.undermining>>
<<if $peacekeepers.undermining > 10000>><<set _warn = 1>><</if>>
<<set $peacekeepers.undermining = Math.clamp(Math.ceil($peacekeepers.undermining/1000)*1000, 0, 10000)>>
- You are spending ¤<<textbox "_newUndermining" $peacekeepers.undermining>> each week to promote misinformation in the Old World that undermines the peacekeepers.
+ You are spending ¤<<textbox "_newUndermining" $peacekeepers.undermining>> each week to promote misinformation in the old world that undermines the peacekeepers.
[[Save changes|Manage Arcology][$peacekeepers.undermining = Number(_newUndermining) || 0]]
<<if _warn>><br>//Spending more than <<print cashFormat(10000)>> weekly would be counterproductive//<</if>>
<<else>>
@@ -698,10 +698,10 @@ Its lingua franca is $language.
<</if>>
<</if>>
<<elseif $invasionVictory>>
- The area previously occupied by the little Old World country whose collapse led to a failed invasion of the Free City is a lawless wilderness.
+ The area previously occupied by the little old world country whose collapse led to a failed invasion of the Free City is a lawless wilderness.
<<elseif $week > 29>>
- A small Old World country near the arcology is in the process of collapse<<if $nationHate>>, and your opportunistic behavior towards it has caused hatred there<</if>>.
+ A small old world country near the arcology is in the process of collapse<<if $nationHate>>, and your opportunistic behavior towards it has caused hatred there<</if>>.
<<else>>
- There is nothing notable about the decaying Old World countries <<if $terrain == "oceanic">>on the shoreline nearest<<else>>near<</if>> the arcology.
+ There is nothing notable about the decaying old world countries <<if $terrain == "oceanic">>on the shoreline nearest<<else>>near<</if>> the arcology.
<</if>>
<</if>>
\ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/brothel.tw b/src/uncategorized/brothel.tw
index ccb92b9d27da7b2c469213124a3e18be67f7e5fd..f1c2752c26338cc51572335f310b9bdba27faa1b 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/brothel.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/brothel.tw
@@ -33,13 +33,13 @@ $brothelNameCaps
<<case "Transformation Fetishist">>
is sterile and clean. Interactive screens on the walls list the whores and their modifications in clinical detail.
<<case "Gender Radicalist">>
- is decorated to look like an Old World bordello. The rich décor includes erotic photography and pornographic statuary, depicting every possible combination of human sexual congress.
+ is decorated to look like an old world bordello. The rich décor includes erotic photography and pornographic statuary, depicting every possible combination of human sexual congress.
<<case "Gender Fundamentalist">>
- is decorated to look like an Old World whorehouse. Screens on the walls are showing pornography starring the whores, with prices flashing after each sex act.
+ is decorated to look like an old world whorehouse. Screens on the walls are showing pornography starring the whores, with prices flashing after each sex act.
<<case "Physical Idealist">>
is decorated to look like a club. Loud music is playing, and the whores that aren't with customers are stripping on a stage. There is a distinct smell of sweat, and there is as much emphasis on the strippers' muscles as their breasts.
<<case "Supremacist">>
- is decorated like an Old World gentleman's club. The pictures on the wall depict degradation of every race on earth, except $arcologies[0].FSSupremacistRace people.
+ is decorated like an old world gentleman's club. The pictures on the wall depict degradation of every race on earth, except $arcologies[0].FSSupremacistRace people.
<<case "Subjugationist">>
is decorated to celebrate the degradation of $arcologies[0].FSSubjugationistRace whores. The whores greet customers in stereotypical $arcologies[0].FSSubjugationistRace accents.
<<case "Paternalist">>
@@ -49,11 +49,11 @@ $brothelNameCaps
<<case "Maturity Preferentialist">>
is decorated to look like a refined bar. It has a row of sturdy backless barstools, perfect for a delectable selection of succulent MILFs to perch on.
<<case "Youth Preferentialist">>
- is decorated to look like the sort of bar Old World students visit on spring break. Vapid music is playing, and when whores aren't with customers, they dance and make out with each other to attract some.
+ is decorated to look like the sort of bar old world students visit on spring break. Vapid music is playing, and when whores aren't with customers, they dance and make out with each other to attract some.
<<case "Body Purist">>
- is decorated to look like an Old World bordello. The rich décor includes erotic photography and pornographic statuary, depicting idealized human forms in the act of love.
+ is decorated to look like an old world bordello. The rich décor includes erotic photography and pornographic statuary, depicting idealized human forms in the act of love.
<<case "Slimness Enthusiast">>
- is decorated to look like an Old World bordello. The rich décor includes erotic photography and pornographic statuary, depicting slim, girlish figures playing, dancing, and loving.
+ is decorated to look like an old world bordello. The rich décor includes erotic photography and pornographic statuary, depicting slim, girlish figures playing, dancing, and loving.
<<case "Hedonistic">>
is comfortable and full of soft couches and chairs for its' overweight whores to lounge upon between clients <<if $arcologies[0].FSHedonisticDecadenceResearch == 1>>and enjoy a plate of snacks<<else>>and enjoy a big cup of slave food<</if>>. The smells of fresh baked goods are pumped into the facility to mask the smell of sweat. It's not unusual for a client to fuck a whore right on her chosen couch, since the effort of moving is often too much.
<<default>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/brothelAdvertisement.tw b/src/uncategorized/brothelAdvertisement.tw
index 23f3999901dfaa48a02347c404e8548a0c1ad18c..5342f69d4f22c1dbf82c48a947fb6198268100fa 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/brothelAdvertisement.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/brothelAdvertisement.tw
@@ -26,25 +26,25 @@
<<case "Transformation Fetishist">>
$brothelNameCaps is sterile and clean. Interactive screens on the walls list the whores and their modifications in clinical detail.
<<case "Gender Radicalist">>
- $brothelNameCaps is decorated to look like an Old World bordello. The rich décor includes erotic photography and pornographic statuary, depicting every possible combination of human sexual congress.
+ $brothelNameCaps is decorated to look like an old world bordello. The rich décor includes erotic photography and pornographic statuary, depicting every possible combination of human sexual congress.
<<case "Gender Fundamentalist">>
- $brothelNameCaps is decorated to look like an Old World whorehouse. Screens on the walls are showing pornography starring the whores, with prices flashing after each sex act.
+ $brothelNameCaps is decorated to look like an old world whorehouse. Screens on the walls are showing pornography starring the whores, with prices flashing after each sex act.
<<case "Physical Idealist">>
$brothelNameCaps is decorated to look like a club. Loud music is playing, and the whores that aren't with customers are stripping on a stage. There is a distinct smell of sweat, and there is as much emphasis on the strippers' muscles as their breasts.
<<case "Subjugationist">>
$brothelNameCaps is decorated to celebrate the degradation of $arcologies[0].FSSubjugationistRace whores. The whores greet customers in stereotypical $arcologies[0].FSSubjugationistRace accents.
<<case "Supremacist">>
- $brothelNameCaps is decorated like an Old World gentleman's club. The pictures on the wall depict degradation of every race on earth, except $arcologies[0].FSSupremacistRace people.
+ $brothelNameCaps is decorated like an old world gentleman's club. The pictures on the wall depict degradation of every race on earth, except $arcologies[0].FSSupremacistRace people.
<<case "Paternalist">>
$brothelNameCaps is decorated to look like a normal bar. Whores are encouraged to meet customers for a drink and get to know them a little before heading back into a private room.
<<case "Maturity Preferentialist">>
$brothelNameCaps is decorated to look like a refined bar. It has a row of sturdy backless barstools, perfect for a delectable selection of succulent MILFs to perch on.
<<case "Youth Preferentialist">>
- $brothelNameCaps is decorated to look like a the sort of bar Old World students visit on spring break. Vapid music is playing, and when whores aren't with customers, they dance and make out with each other to attract some.
+ $brothelNameCaps is decorated to look like a the sort of bar old world students visit on spring break. Vapid music is playing, and when whores aren't with customers, they dance and make out with each other to attract some.
<<case "Body Purist">>
- $brothelNameCaps is decorated to look like an Old World bordello. The rich décor includes erotic photography and pornographic statuary, depicting idealized human forms in the act of love.
+ $brothelNameCaps is decorated to look like an old world bordello. The rich décor includes erotic photography and pornographic statuary, depicting idealized human forms in the act of love.
<<case "Slimness Enthusiast">>
- $brothelNameCaps is decorated to look like an Old World bordello. The rich décor includes erotic photography and pornographic statuary, depicting slim, girlish figures playing, dancing, and loving.
+ $brothelNameCaps is decorated to look like an old world bordello. The rich décor includes erotic photography and pornographic statuary, depicting slim, girlish figures playing, dancing, and loving.
<<case "Pastoralist">>
$brothelNameCaps is decorated to look like a dairy. Though it isn't one, there is an intense sexual focus on boobs and lactation, and all the whores have their sizes proudly posted.
<<case "Hedonistic">>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/club.tw b/src/uncategorized/club.tw
index 0be2d6a3ea24de982d57361b24122d9a5416861c..1231f6018d1c489d4edbcfbb79ba71cdc84ffbf0 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/club.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/club.tw
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ $clubNameCaps
<<case "Gender Radicalist">>
has a gaudy appearance. There are a lot of neon lights and there are screens everywhere, showing closeups of cocks fucking every imaginable orifice.
<<case "Gender Fundamentalist">>
- has an Old World appearance, a decidedly throwback atmosphere harking back to the glory days of cultures past.
+ has an old world appearance, a decidedly throwback atmosphere harking back to the glory days of cultures past.
<<case "Physical Idealist">>
isn't a gym, but it smells like one. The dancing is rough and competitive, and the drinks are rich with protein.
<<case "Supremacist">>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/clubAdvertisement.tw b/src/uncategorized/clubAdvertisement.tw
index ebe00d765d35b2cdbecb2192acfe548d9f14b2bc..45aebff7ca2db54b035a094f1dffdc6e186eb1a3 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/clubAdvertisement.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/clubAdvertisement.tw
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@
<<case "Gender Radicalist">>
$clubNameCaps has a gaudy appearance. There are a lot of neon lights and there are screens everywhere, showing closeups of cocks fucking every imaginable orifice.
<<case "Gender Fundamentalist">>
- $clubNameCaps has an Old World appearance, a decidedly throwback atmosphere harking back to the glory days of cultures past.
+ $clubNameCaps has an old world appearance, a decidedly throwback atmosphere harking back to the glory days of cultures past.
<<case "Physical Idealist">>
$clubNameCaps isn't a gym, but it smells like one. The dancing is rough and competitive, and the drinks are rich with protein.
<<case "Supremacist">>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/costsBudget.tw b/src/uncategorized/costsBudget.tw
index 0a5f3d2bdc88a2009c8950197fbfd23fe8db790a..564e1f4ca8643ad9ed5dc70012426d9a5ec83507 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/costsBudget.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/costsBudget.tw
@@ -313,7 +313,7 @@ for(var i = 0; i < State.variables.lastWeeksCashIncome.length; i++){
<<print budgetLine("specialForces", "Special forces")>>
- <<print budgetLine("undermining", "Undermine political support for the nearby Old World peacekeeping mission.")>>
+ <<print budgetLine("undermining", "Undermine political support for the nearby old world peacekeeping mission.")>>
<tr><td></td></tr>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/costsReport.tw b/src/uncategorized/costsReport.tw
index 07e8a016e9eb8ed2aa44cab88048ee2f24f56c36..314867026ee540cabf2253b1aa2a99b0b62680d9 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/costsReport.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/costsReport.tw
@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ your personal living expenses are @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(Math.trunc($
<</if>>
<<if $peacekeepers != 0 && $peacekeepers.undermining != 0>>
- <br> <<print cashFormat($peacekeepers.undermining)>> to undermine political support for the nearby Old World peacekeeping mission.
+ <br> <<print cashFormat($peacekeepers.undermining)>> to undermine political support for the nearby old world peacekeeping mission.
<<set _arcologyCosts += $peacekeepers.undermining>>
<</if>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/genericPlotEvents.tw b/src/uncategorized/genericPlotEvents.tw
index 27040cb371a50dd18d1fcbb902ad29d4ecdadff5..b0dec61763cbdb44f8bcd6a8649b979416afa51a 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/genericPlotEvents.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/genericPlotEvents.tw
@@ -122,7 +122,7 @@ As you step off the elevator, you hear several <<if $seeDicks != 100>>female <</
<<set $saleDescription = 0>>
<<include "Long Slave Description">>
<<elseif $PStrip == 2>>
- One day, you walk by the commercial space where the strip club that closed was located. It's now advertised as a massage parlor, and indeed, you can see a couple of competent-looking, modestly dressed masseuses seeing to clients. The only chink in the Old World decorum is the pretty sign detailing pricing, which lists not only various massages but the masseuses' hands, breasts, mouths,<<if $seeDicks != 100>> pussies,<</if>> and anuses.
+ One day, you walk by the commercial space where the strip club that closed was located. It's now advertised as a massage parlor, and indeed, you can see a couple of competent-looking, modestly dressed masseuses seeing to clients. The only chink in the old world decorum is the pretty sign detailing pricing, which lists not only various massages but the masseuses' hands, breasts, mouths,<<if $seeDicks != 100>> pussies,<</if>> and anuses.
<br><br>
As you pass, a pretty streetwalker walking by wearing an attractive club $girl outfit sidles up to you. $He's halfway through $his first flirty come-on before $he recognizes you. $He gasps and <<say>>s, "You own thi<<s>> arcology! <<if $PC.title != 0>><<S>>ir<<else>>Ma'am<</if>>, I wa<<s>> a <<s>>tripper here! Thank you <<s>>o much for helping u<<s>>. That money <<s>>et mo<<s>>t of u<<s>> up pretty well." $He hefts $his chest. "It bought me new boob<<s>>, that'<<s>> for <<s>>ure. <<S>>o, um," $he bites $his lip in indecision, "I hear —" $he hesitates and then the words come out in a rush. "I hear your $girl<<s>> do really well. I've <<s>>een them, they look good. Can I come?" You arch an eyebrow and begin to ask whether $he knows what that means. "Yep," $he interrupts. "I'll be your <<s>>e<<x>> <<s>>lave."
<br><br>
@@ -139,7 +139,7 @@ As you step off the elevator, you hear several <<if $seeDicks != 100>>female <</
<<case "militia">>
-The outside world continues to deteriorate. The Free Cities are a popular target for Old World demagogues looking for a convenient scapegoat for the restive populate to hate. The Free Cities were originally founded without much thought towards how they might be defended, should it come to that. But recently, the leading citizens have begun to worry that there might one day be barbarians at the gates. It has been suggested that citizens of means should form a militia.
+The outside world continues to deteriorate. The Free Cities are a popular target for old world demagogues looking for a convenient scapegoat for the restive populate to hate. The Free Cities were originally founded without much thought towards how they might be defended, should it come to that. But recently, the leading citizens have begun to worry that there might one day be barbarians at the gates. It has been suggested that citizens of means should form a militia.
<br><br>
This is a less ludicrous suggestion than it might sound. Your arcology's security drones alone could form a formidable means of defense if adapted for that purpose. However, it's not likely that the anarchic Free Cities are going to ever make this anything more than a polite suggestion.
<br><br>
@@ -179,7 +179,7 @@ The crowd of nude slaves led up to the lawn and chained to rings along one edge
<</if>>
<<set _trapped.push("gradeSchool")>>
<<set $PAidTarget = _trapped.random()>>
-A small Old World country near the arcology is experiencing serious unrest. Its corrupt government is doing an even poorer job than most of addressing chronic joblessness and general malaise. Thus far, it's been a fertile source of people in poverty for slavers to target, and little else. Lately, though, it's been showing signs worse may be to come. You've instructed $assistantName to flag communications from the area; there's always a possibility that business opportunities may arise from the benighted country, and the situation is becoming so unstable it's prudent to keep a personal eye on it anyway. You receive just such a call from
+A small old world country near the arcology is experiencing serious unrest. Its corrupt government is doing an even poorer job than most of addressing chronic joblessness and general malaise. Thus far, it's been a fertile source of people in poverty for slavers to target, and little else. Lately, though, it's been showing signs worse may be to come. You've instructed $assistantName to flag communications from the area; there's always a possibility that business opportunities may arise from the benighted country, and the situation is becoming so unstable it's prudent to keep a personal eye on it anyway. You receive just such a call from
<<if $PAidTarget == "convent">>
the leader of a female-oriented religious retreat
<<elseif $PAidTarget == "school">>
@@ -368,7 +368,7 @@ When the aircraft lands at your penthouse pad, the would-be escapees are still u
<<set $one_time_age_overrides_pedo_mode = 1>> /% Old enough to be pregnant. %/
<<set $oneTimeDisableDisability = 1>>
<<include "Generate XX Slave">>
- <<set $activeSlave.origin = "She was an expectant mother you enslaved when you evacuated her from a threatened Old World hospital.">>
+ <<set $activeSlave.origin = "She was an expectant mother you enslaved when you evacuated her from a threatened old world hospital.">>
<<set $activeSlave.career = "a housewife">>
<<set $activeSlave.devotion = random(-90,-75)>>
<<set $activeSlave.trust = -20>>
@@ -405,7 +405,7 @@ When the aircraft lands at your penthouse pad, the would-be escapees are still u
<<set $one_time_age_overrides_pedo_mode = 1>>
<<set $oneTimeDisableDisability = 1>>
<<include "Generate New Slave">>
- <<set $activeSlave.origin = "She was a student you enslaved when you evacuated her from a threatened Old World grade school.">>
+ <<set $activeSlave.origin = "She was a student you enslaved when you evacuated her from a threatened old world grade school.">>
<<set $activeSlave.career = "a student">>
<<set $activeSlave.devotion = random(-90,-75)>>
<<set $activeSlave.trust = random(-90,-75)>>
@@ -1395,7 +1395,7 @@ A screen opposite your desk springs to life, <<if $assistant == 0>>showing your
<<link "Hurrah!">>
<<replace "#result">>
- Your citizens enthusiastically respond to your naming of the arcology as $arcologies[0].name. They are proud to finally have a real name for their home. Other Free Cities take note, and some take up their own names as well, another indication of the Cities' collective ascension over the Old World.
+ Your citizens enthusiastically respond to your naming of the arcology as $arcologies[0].name. They are proud to finally have a real name for their home. Other Free Cities take note, and some take up their own names as well, another indication of the Cities' collective ascension over the old world.
<<set $nextButton = "Continue">>
<</replace>>
<</link>> // Click to confirm your arcology's name, for now and ever! Or until you decide to change it again while managing your arcology.//
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/jeSlaveDispute.tw b/src/uncategorized/jeSlaveDispute.tw
index 57cf29476750429ec0e9f7fc1623559aa3f12f27..81319d3e740317e90aa1a70ed45f5bc62f4c5516 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/jeSlaveDispute.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/jeSlaveDispute.tw
@@ -299,7 +299,7 @@
<</link>>
<br><<link "Settle the dispute in favor of the trainer">>
<<replace "#result">>
- You settle the dispute in favor of the slave trainer. It transpires that the wealthy accuser was no longer wealthy at all, and was looking to get out of the deal; he's furious, and spends a long day @@.red;spewing invectives@@ against you to anyone who will listen before decamping back to the Old World. The trainer, on the other hand, lets it be known that you support businessmen, who can trust you to look after their interests, @@.green;increasing prosperity.@@
+ You settle the dispute in favor of the slave trainer. It transpires that the wealthy accuser was no longer wealthy at all, and was looking to get out of the deal; he's furious, and spends a long day @@.red;spewing invectives@@ against you to anyone who will listen before decamping back to the old world. The trainer, on the other hand, lets it be known that you support businessmen, who can trust you to look after their interests, @@.green;increasing prosperity.@@
<<set $arcologies[0].prosperity += 5>>
<<run repX(-500, "event")>>
<</replace>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/longSlaveDescription.tw b/src/uncategorized/longSlaveDescription.tw
index 395074b5b50a8d0a7ad623af11417d5b748cc97c..e3e8bb107f4203e61a81d59d1df21a60b28eaeb7 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/longSlaveDescription.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/longSlaveDescription.tw
@@ -633,7 +633,7 @@ is
<<if $arcologies[0].FSChattelReligionist == "unset">>
$He's delightfully @@.green;sinful,@@ taking real pleasure in breaking cultural mores.
<<else>>
- $He's a devout Chattel Religionist, and is aggressively @@.green;sinful@@ against Old World faiths. $He is enthusiastic about slutty religious clothing, and excited by intentional sacrilege like openly using Old World religious icons as sex toys or having orgies on altars.
+ $He's a devout Chattel Religionist, and is aggressively @@.green;sinful@@ against old world faiths. $He is enthusiastic about slutty religious clothing, and excited by intentional sacrilege like openly using old world religious icons as sex toys or having orgies on altars.
<</if>>
<<case "advocate">>
$He's an @@.green;advocate@@ for slavery, and can articulate what it's done for $him.
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/neighborDescription.tw b/src/uncategorized/neighborDescription.tw
index e3fbd9d6912bcfcf52768128a29c2823af6c18b3..332e236ed150698a3cc5947f90ee6ebcd60a627a 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/neighborDescription.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/neighborDescription.tw
@@ -415,7 +415,7 @@ its neighbors.
<<if $arcologies[$i].FSChattelReligionist > 95>>
<<set $desc = $desc + "a significant force in the global development of Chattel Religionist dogma.">>
<<elseif $arcologies[$i].FSChattelReligionist > 40>>
- <<set $desc = $desc + "a popular destination for devout Old World citizens engaging in sex tourism.">>
+ <<set $desc = $desc + "a popular destination for devout old world citizens engaging in sex tourism.">>
<<else>>
<<set $desc = $desc + "in the throes of public dissention over its religious laws.">>
<</if>>
@@ -431,7 +431,7 @@ its neighbors.
<</if>>
<<set $desc = $desc + "@@.gold;Roman Revivalism,@@ and is ">>
<<if $arcologies[$i].FSRomanRevivalist > 95>>
- <<set $desc = $desc + "hugely famous for its broadcasts of gladiatorial combat, popular even in the Old World.">>
+ <<set $desc = $desc + "hugely famous for its broadcasts of gladiatorial combat, popular even in the old world.">>
<<elseif $arcologies[$i].FSRomanRevivalist > 40>>
<<set $desc = $desc + "almost obnoxiously aspirational, with citizens competing to serve the state best.">>
<<else>>
@@ -487,7 +487,7 @@ its neighbors.
<<if $arcologies[$i].FSEdoRevivalist > 95>>
<<set $desc = $desc + "visibly trailing cherry blossoms, blown off its balconies by the wind.">>
<<elseif $arcologies[$i].FSEdoRevivalist > 40>>
- <<set $desc = $desc + "becoming a notable cultural center, even in the Old World.">>
+ <<set $desc = $desc + "becoming a notable cultural center, even in the old world.">>
<<else>>
<<set $desc = $desc + "the object of considerable debate among socially awkward teenagers worldwide.">>
<</if>>
@@ -539,6 +539,6 @@ its neighbors.
<<elseif _neighborDescription.length == 2>>
Its culture is developing along two lines. First, it is _neighborDescription[0] Second, it is _neighborDescription[1]
<<else>>
- Its culture is diverging from the Old World: it is _neighborDescription[0]
+ Its culture is diverging from the old world: it is _neighborDescription[0]
<</if>>
<</if>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/neighborsDevelopment.tw b/src/uncategorized/neighborsDevelopment.tw
index c8a30ca8e30028b606e9dc56e8101e5c7bb0388f..46d293c3edcaba4bed7322d66432a7183da5e4ba 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/neighborsDevelopment.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/neighborsDevelopment.tw
@@ -2748,17 +2748,17 @@ has an estimated GSP of @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(_prosperity)>><<if $sh
<<elseif $peacekeepers.strength < 0>>
@@.yellow;The peacekeeping force led by General $peacekeepers.generalName in the troubled area near the Free City has been withdrawn.@@
<<if $peacekeepers.undermining>>
- Your misinformation campaign against it in the Old World media was successful. Before long, everyone in the Free City is confident that you're somehow responsible, @@.green;greatly improving your reputation.@@
+ Your misinformation campaign against it in the old world media was successful. Before long, everyone in the Free City is confident that you're somehow responsible, @@.green;greatly improving your reputation.@@
<<set $peacekeepers = 0, $peacekeepersGone = 1>>
<<run repX(2000, "peacekeepers")>>
<<else>>
- The cost was ultimately too high. The time when Old World countries could afford to waste billions on military adventurism is gone. It will not return.
+ The cost was ultimately too high. The time when old world countries could afford to waste billions on military adventurism is gone. It will not return.
<<set $peacekeepers = 0, $peacekeepersGone = 1>>
<</if>>
<<else>>
There's a peacekeeping force led by General $peacekeepers.generalName in the troubled area near the Free City.
<<if $peacekeepers.undermining>>
- You're paying for a media misinformation campaign in the Old World country that sent him. It
+ You're paying for a media misinformation campaign in the old world country that sent him. It
<<set $peacekeepers.strength -= $peacekeepers.undermining/10000>>
<<if $peacekeepers.strength < 10>>
has had a significant impact; one of the nation's two major political parties now favors withdrawing the peacekeepers.
@@ -2766,7 +2766,7 @@ has an estimated GSP of @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(_prosperity)>><<if $sh
has not had a significant impact yet; only a few fringe figures are arguing against the mission.
<</if>>
<</if>>
- Unfortunately, the presence of so much Old World military power near the Free City causes @@.red;public concern.@@
+ Unfortunately, the presence of so much old world military power near the Free City causes @@.red;public concern.@@
<<run repX(-100, "peacekeepers")>>
<</if>>
<br>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw b/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw
index b87cc31eb6b17899601ecd4475a936079ced245d..ac2237f90c1ca80fce810e707b8e2e1fbe6ad973 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ The legalities completed, ''__@@.pink;<<= SlaveFullName($activeSlave)>>@@__'' <<
waiting meekly for orders.
<<elseif canSmell($activeSlave) && $activeSlave.career == "a breeding bull" && isPlayerFertile($PC)>>
sniffing the air and staring intently at your crotch.
-<<elseif $activeSlave.origin == "She submitted to enslavement to escape the hard life of an Old World whore.">>
+<<elseif $activeSlave.origin == "She submitted to enslavement to escape the hard life of an old world whore.">>
wondering what one of your working girls can expect.
<<elseif ($activeSlave.origin == "She submitted to enslavement to get access to modern prenatal care.") || ($activeSlave.origin == "She sold herself into slavery out of fear that life on the streets was endangering her pregnancy.")>>
hoping you'll give $him modern medicine right away.
@@ -579,8 +579,8 @@ The legalities completed, ''__@@.pink;<<= SlaveFullName($activeSlave)>>@@__'' <<
//Now might be a good time to introduce $him to life in your stable of sex slaves//
<<switch $activeSlave.origin>>
-<<case "She submitted to enslavement to escape the hard life of an Old World whore.">>
- //and since $he wanted to leave the Old World...//
+<<case "She submitted to enslavement to escape the hard life of an old world whore.">>
+ //and since $he wanted to leave the old world...//
<br>
<<link "Brand $him to introduce $him to life as a slave whore">>
<<replace "#introResult">>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/officeDescription.tw b/src/uncategorized/officeDescription.tw
index cfb17c82278fbfe5669a02c23d159bbd6aad7d05..160f9ae27cdc35e6a923fc11f28c99c0592c0804 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/officeDescription.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/officeDescription.tw
@@ -118,7 +118,7 @@
<<case "chinese revivalist">>
_heA's depicted wearing colorful silk robes; _heA's pulled them open to flash _hisA lovely body.
<<case "supremacist">>
- _heA's depicted wearing the dress of an Old World $arcologies[0].FSSupremacistRace noblewoman and blowing a kiss in a sexy manner.
+ _heA's depicted wearing the dress of an old world $arcologies[0].FSSupremacistRace noblewoman and blowing a kiss in a sexy manner.
<<case "subjugationist">>
_heA's depicted sitting with _hisA legs wide open and using _hisA fingers to spread _hisA $arcologies[0].FSSubjugationistRace pussy lips apart in a lewd manner.
<<case "chattel religionist">>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/pMercenaries.tw b/src/uncategorized/pMercenaries.tw
index 2a754ae55cced4909c6718a68c1f451f8e4a04ff..0f8f978b8e741533d57a64529f71b9f0c545aecb 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/pMercenaries.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/pMercenaries.tw
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
<<set _price = 5000>>
<</if>>
-Another wave of security hysteria is sweeping the Free Cities. And this time, it's not based on rumor and alarmism. On the other side of the globe, a Free City was sacked by an Old World army today. The Free City's handful of high-technology defenders and multitude of drones caused heavy casualties among the attackers, but eventually sheer weight of numbers wore them down.
+Another wave of security hysteria is sweeping the Free Cities. And this time, it's not based on rumor and alarmism. On the other side of the globe, a Free City was sacked by an old world army today. The Free City's handful of high-technology defenders and multitude of drones caused heavy casualties among the attackers, but eventually sheer weight of numbers wore them down.
<br><br>
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ Your Free City is on good terms with the nations that border it, unlike the unfo
<br><br>
-The budgetary difficulty many Old World countries are in has resulted in unemployed soldiers looking for mercenary work. You could easily hire some of them to protect the arcology and fight in the militia if necessary. ''This is a unique opportunity.'' Without this security scare, it's unlikely you could convince any of your free-spirited tenants to even stay near a permanent armed presence.
+The budgetary difficulty many old world countries are in has resulted in unemployed soldiers looking for mercenary work. You could easily hire some of them to protect the arcology and fight in the militia if necessary. ''This is a unique opportunity.'' Without this security scare, it's unlikely you could convince any of your free-spirited tenants to even stay near a permanent armed presence.
<br><br>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/pPeacekeepersDeficit.tw b/src/uncategorized/pPeacekeepersDeficit.tw
index 921962f8085350ff70e3e84e20dfcb05f4e07b46..0a37090fbf3c31afe48aa85e1cae885eb3e6e045 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/pPeacekeepersDeficit.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/pPeacekeepersDeficit.tw
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ The singular solution to the two problems is obvious. It's equally obvious that
<</link>>
<br><<link "Tell him his situation is untenable">>
<<replace "#result">>
- You decide to use this as an object lesson in the limits of Old World power projection, and tell his situation is untenable and that he should withdraw. If he doesn't have the political firepower necessary to get proper support and supply, he's better off cutting his losses. "That's not for you to say," he responds bitterly. "And that's not for me to say, either. I still go where I'm told and do what I'm told. Thank you for your time." He ends the call brusquely. Word of your verbal defense of the Free City's sphere of influence gets around, @@.green;greatly improving your reputation.@@
+ You decide to use this as an object lesson in the limits of old world power projection, and tell his situation is untenable and that he should withdraw. If he doesn't have the political firepower necessary to get proper support and supply, he's better off cutting his losses. "That's not for you to say," he responds bitterly. "And that's not for me to say, either. I still go where I'm told and do what I'm told. Thank you for your time." He ends the call brusquely. Word of your verbal defense of the Free City's sphere of influence gets around, @@.green;greatly improving your reputation.@@
<<set $peacekeepers.attitude -= 10>>
<<run repX(5000, "event")>>
<</replace>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/pPeacekeepersIndependence.tw b/src/uncategorized/pPeacekeepersIndependence.tw
index 6011f19ec2e59078f33826c89a7d4ff56a65223f..c1c760f4eac4335430811c877509688062d449b4 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/pPeacekeepersIndependence.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/pPeacekeepersIndependence.tw
@@ -16,14 +16,14 @@ General $peacekeepers.generalName contacts you again, looking more tired and bat
<br><br>
-"But," he says. "But. This is going to be difficult. I can't be sure I'll succeed. As for me, I'd take the chance and be damned, just for the chance to tell the politicians back home what they can do with their orders. But there's my men and women. They'll do what I ask, but I won't ask it of them without a good, solid chance." His eyes narrow. "I need funding, and I need it now. I can't offer anything in return, not right away. But I pay my debts. And we'll be a buffer between external threats and the Free City. And finally, any resentment about Old World power in the area among your people will be wiped away overnight."
+"But," he says. "But. This is going to be difficult. I can't be sure I'll succeed. As for me, I'd take the chance and be damned, just for the chance to tell the politicians back home what they can do with their orders. But there's my men and women. They'll do what I ask, but I won't ask it of them without a good, solid chance." His eyes narrow. "I need funding, and I need it now. I can't offer anything in return, not right away. But I pay my debts. And we'll be a buffer between external threats and the Free City. And finally, any resentment about old world power in the area among your people will be wiped away overnight."
<br><br>
<span id="result">
<<if $cash >= 100000>>
<<link "Provide immediate assistance">>
<<replace "#result">>
- You immediately wire General $peacekeepers.generalName <<print cashFormat(100000)>>, not an impressive sum by Free Cities standards, but probably enough to turn the scales in his plans to keep his force together as it transitions from Old World peacekeeping to autocratic nation building. Soon enough, he'll be able to support his men and women through armed extortion, the original form of taxation and, arguably, the only form of taxation.
+ You immediately wire General $peacekeepers.generalName <<print cashFormat(100000)>>, not an impressive sum by Free Cities standards, but probably enough to turn the scales in his plans to keep his force together as it transitions from old world peacekeeping to autocratic nation building. Soon enough, he'll be able to support his men and women through armed extortion, the original form of taxation and, arguably, the only form of taxation.
<br><br>
"You have my thanks," he says formally. "We'll be in control here soon enough. The one thing we'll have an almost limitless supply of is people. I don't think anyone's likely to notice a few menial slaves transferred into the Free City. I'm sure a regular trade already exists; we'll just be adding a few undesirables to it." He ends the call, looking determined. Despite his confidence, he has his work cut out for him.
<<set cashX(-100000, "peacekeepers"), $peacekeepers.strength = 50, $peacekeepers.attitude += 5, $peacekeepers.undermining = 0>>
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ General $peacekeepers.generalName contacts you again, looking more tired and bat
<<if $cash >= 250000>>
<br><<link "Deliver generous aid">>
<<replace "#result">>
- You immediately wire General $peacekeepers.generalName <<print cashFormat(250000)>>, enough to keep his force together through the critical period as it transitions from Old World peacekeeping to autocratic nation building. Soon enough, he'll be able to support his men and women through armed extortion, the original form of taxation and, arguably, the only form of taxation.
+ You immediately wire General $peacekeepers.generalName <<print cashFormat(250000)>>, enough to keep his force together through the critical period as it transitions from old world peacekeeping to autocratic nation building. Soon enough, he'll be able to support his men and women through armed extortion, the original form of taxation and, arguably, the only form of taxation.
<br><br>
"That's extremely generous of you," he says, with an undertone of relief. "This is going to go much more smoothly than I'd originally thought. And I see that we're going to have friends and allies out here, as we establish ourselves. We're going to have quite a few undesirables to rid ourselves of, here, and the menial slave trade between this area and the Free City seems like an opportune way to do that." He ends the call, looking confident.
<<set cashX(-250000, "peacekeepers"), $peacekeepers.strength = 50, $peacekeepers.attitude += 25, $peacekeepers.undermining = 0>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/pPeacekeepersInfluence.tw b/src/uncategorized/pPeacekeepersInfluence.tw
index 597668538902dc506006560b02df50cff8504ec1..ead885aa7f6b80234f38f9ab484cf094ec678901 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/pPeacekeepersInfluence.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/pPeacekeepersInfluence.tw
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
<<set $peacekeepers.influenceAnnounced = 1>>
<<setAssistantPronouns>>
-General $peacekeepers.generalName has successfully declared his independence from his mother country. That nation recruited, trained, and commanded him and all his men and women, but then it sent him to keep the peace in a war-torn region, failed to give him the support he needed, and then tried to withdraw him when the costs of what support they were willing to send overtopped what weak political will the Old World still has. In truth, it was only a half-step from peacekeeping force to government, for General $peacekeepers.generalName and his troops. They were already the only source of public order in that area.
+General $peacekeepers.generalName has successfully declared his independence from his mother country. That nation recruited, trained, and commanded him and all his men and women, but then it sent him to keep the peace in a war-torn region, failed to give him the support he needed, and then tried to withdraw him when the costs of what support they were willing to send overtopped what weak political will the old world still has. In truth, it was only a half-step from peacekeeping force to government, for General $peacekeepers.generalName and his troops. They were already the only source of public order in that area.
<br><br>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/pPeacekeepersIntro.tw b/src/uncategorized/pPeacekeepersIntro.tw
index 575b73563166060fa245c81b71aee18c6d321a6b..bd497efb62ae210c40fab6005acc21cebe5566fd 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/pPeacekeepersIntro.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/pPeacekeepersIntro.tw
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ There are still enough weapons and desperate people there to keep banditry and w
<br><br>
-Having the area revert to a Hobbesian wilderness might not be too annoying for you and your peers in the Free City, but to an Old World country, it's not a good thing to have next door. And there are still Old World countries with the ability and the will to project power. After a spate of bad incidents, rumors have started that the strongest remaining Old World nation in this part of the world will be sending a peacekeeping force to stabilize the area. This is a cynical time and the rumors stay just that, rumors, until one day $assistantName announces that you're receiving an unscheduled call from a general officer. General $peacekeepers.generalName, in point of fact. One of the most dynamic military leaders the Old World has.
+Having the area revert to a Hobbesian wilderness might not be too annoying for you and your peers in the Free City, but to an old world country, it's not a good thing to have next door. And there are still old world countries with the ability and the will to project power. After a spate of bad incidents, rumors have started that the strongest remaining old world nation in this part of the world will be sending a peacekeeping force to stabilize the area. This is a cynical time and the rumors stay just that, rumors, until one day $assistantName announces that you're receiving an unscheduled call from a general officer. General $peacekeepers.generalName, in point of fact. One of the most dynamic military leaders the old world has.
<br><br>
@@ -41,13 +41,13 @@ He spreads his hands. "I don't have anything to suggest, not yet. But if I see a
<br><br>
-As he spoke, you and $assistantName surreptitiously checked out what he said. He seems to be telling the truth, and he's correct that your interests won't be immediately affected. Nevertheless, this is a concerning development. General $peacekeepers.generalName will have thousands of troops and a lot of military hardware under his able command, more or less right next door to the Free City. He might not intend to overstep the bounds of his peacekeeping mandate, but that's no guarantee that his civilian superiors back home won't decide to order him to. Worse, the politics of the Free Cities are almost unanimously hostile to Old World power; there will be public resentment about this. On the other hand, General $peacekeepers.generalName has been successful in these difficult times in no small part due to his willingness to bend the rules. If he sees an opportunity to work with an ambitious arcology owner in furtherance of his goals, he'll probably take it.
+As he spoke, you and $assistantName surreptitiously checked out what he said. He seems to be telling the truth, and he's correct that your interests won't be immediately affected. Nevertheless, this is a concerning development. General $peacekeepers.generalName will have thousands of troops and a lot of military hardware under his able command, more or less right next door to the Free City. He might not intend to overstep the bounds of his peacekeeping mandate, but that's no guarantee that his civilian superiors back home won't decide to order him to. Worse, the politics of the Free Cities are almost unanimously hostile to old world power; there will be public resentment about this. On the other hand, General $peacekeepers.generalName has been successful in these difficult times in no small part due to his willingness to bend the rules. If he sees an opportunity to work with an ambitious arcology owner in furtherance of his goals, he'll probably take it.
<br><br>
<span id="result">
-<<link "Tell him you disapprove of Old World meddling in the Free City's sphere of influence">>
+<<link "Tell him you disapprove of old world meddling in the Free City's sphere of influence">>
<<replace "#result">>
- You tell him that you consider that area within the Free City's area of influence now, and that you disapprove of Old World meddling. "Interesting," he says, noncommittal. "It takes real power projection to maintain a real sphere of influence. It remains to be seen whether your Free City has it. In the meantime, we'll pursue our mission." He inclines his head respectfully, and ends the call. Word of your brusque defense of the Free City's growing influence gets around, @@.green;greatly improving your reputation.@@
+ You tell him that you consider that area within the Free City's area of influence now, and that you disapprove of old world meddling. "Interesting," he says, noncommittal. "It takes real power projection to maintain a real sphere of influence. It remains to be seen whether your Free City has it. In the meantime, we'll pursue our mission." He inclines his head respectfully, and ends the call. Word of your brusque defense of the Free City's growing influence gets around, @@.green;greatly improving your reputation.@@
<<set $peacekeepers.attitude -= 10>>
<<run repX(5000, "event")>>
<</replace>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/pRivalryVictory.tw b/src/uncategorized/pRivalryVictory.tw
index c8a37be0488efc5fe49115c6ed723e9ca7ac1b4a..2afcda7ded9f5803fdf1270208df05515c1df4e0 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/pRivalryVictory.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/pRivalryVictory.tw
@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ For the first time, you receive a direct call from your rival. You pictured the
</span>
<</if>>
<<else>>
- "All my remaining liquid assets have just been @@.red;expended in an attack on the value of your holdings,@@ and my arcology has been heavily sabotaged. You'll get nothing from me." It's not entirely true, but the damage to your holdings does outweigh your gains by a significant margin. Your rival vanishes back into the Old World.
+ "All my remaining liquid assets have just been @@.red;expended in an attack on the value of your holdings,@@ and my arcology has been heavily sabotaged. You'll get nothing from me." It's not entirely true, but the damage to your holdings does outweigh your gains by a significant margin. Your rival vanishes back into the old world.
<<run cashX(random(-10000,-25000), "war")>>
<</if>>
<</replace>>
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ For the first time, you receive a direct call from your rival. You pictured the
<br><<link "Refuse, and place a bounty of <<print cashFormat(50000)>> on your rival's death">>
<<set $nextButton = "Continue">><<UpdateNextButton>> /* unlock Continue button */
<<replace "#result">>
- You coldly decline. "That was a mistake," your rival replies, entering a computer command. "All my remaining liquid assets have just been @@.red;expended in an attack on the value of your holdings,@@ and my arcology has been heavily sabotaged. You'll get nothing from me." It's not entirely true, but the damage to your holdings does outweigh your gains by a significant margin. Your rival vanishes back into the Old World
+ You coldly decline. "That was a mistake," your rival replies, entering a computer command. "All my remaining liquid assets have just been @@.red;expended in an attack on the value of your holdings,@@ and my arcology has been heavily sabotaged. You'll get nothing from me." It's not entirely true, but the damage to your holdings does outweigh your gains by a significant margin. Your rival vanishes back into the old world
- but only for a few days.
<br><br>
Your bounty is quickly claimed, and you are treated to the delicious moment of finding your rival's head delivered to your doorstep. It might not have done much good, but damn did it feel good.
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/peConcubineInterview.tw b/src/uncategorized/peConcubineInterview.tw
index bb0d32ec592beae2c2b7c82652b70eadfc82b48e..af9071e3678e3ce35c3f42b94781f7b75854c671 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/peConcubineInterview.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/peConcubineInterview.tw
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
/* 000-250-006 */
</span>
-You receive an official communication from a popular talk show e-hosted in one of the Old World's still-thriving first world countries. Your fame has become known even in the Old World, and they'd like to interview <<EventNameLink>> about you. They frankly warn you that you'll have no right to review the interview and no ability to control what $he says, and that they'll be asking about anything the interviewer thinks is juicy. This could be great for your reputation, but it could be hazardous, too.
+You receive an official communication from a popular talk show e-hosted in one of the old world's still-thriving first world countries. Your fame has become known even in the old world, and they'd like to interview <<EventNameLink>> about you. They frankly warn you that you'll have no right to review the interview and no ability to control what $he says, and that they'll be asking about anything the interviewer thinks is juicy. This could be great for your reputation, but it could be hazardous, too.
<br><br>
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ You receive an official communication from a popular talk show e-hosted in one o
<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
<<replace "#result">>
- The show is broadcast live; you head out onto a balcony to watch it on a big screen. It's been impossible to hide, and many of your citizens have taken a proprietary attitude towards your fame: they see your success as their success, too, and want to see $activeSlave.slaveName do well. The show introduction plays, introducing the host, a swishy, rail-thin gentleman with impeccable sartorial style and a close-cropped salt-and-pepper beard. He reviews who you are, giving equal time to your accomplishments and the inevitable criticisms from Old World antislavery activists, and then calls $activeSlave.slaveName out.
+ The show is broadcast live; you head out onto a balcony to watch it on a big screen. It's been impossible to hide, and many of your citizens have taken a proprietary attitude towards your fame: they see your success as their success, too, and want to see $activeSlave.slaveName do well. The show introduction plays, introducing the host, a swishy, rail-thin gentleman with impeccable sartorial style and a close-cropped salt-and-pepper beard. He reviews who you are, giving equal time to your accomplishments and the inevitable criticisms from old world antislavery activists, and then calls $activeSlave.slaveName out.
<br>
$He
<<if $activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 1000000>>
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ You receive an official communication from a popular talk show e-hosted in one o
strides out
<</if>>
<<if $activeSlave.clothes == "no clothing">>
- in magnificent nudity. It's a shock to Old World values, no doubt, but the titillation should counterbalance that.
+ in magnificent nudity. It's a shock to old world values, no doubt, but the titillation should counterbalance that.
<<else>>
resplendent in $activeSlave.clothes.
<</if>>
@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ You receive an official communication from a popular talk show e-hosted in one o
<br>
$He shakes $his head.
<<if $activeSlave.trust > 95>>
- @@.green;$He responds confidently,@@ "My life with _himP i<<s>> very different from anything you might find here in the Old World. But I'm happy with _himP, and there'<<s>> no one I'd rather be with, a<<s>> a <<s>>lave or not."
+ @@.green;$He responds confidently,@@ "My life with _himP i<<s>> very different from anything you might find here in the old world. But I'm happy with _himP, and there'<<s>> no one I'd rather be with, a<<s>> a <<s>>lave or not."
<<run repX(500, "concubine", $activeSlave)>>
<<elseif $activeSlave.trust < 60>>
$He explains that it isn't hard to trust someone like you, but this @@.red;falls a little flat.@@
@@ -243,7 +243,7 @@ You receive an official communication from a popular talk show e-hosted in one o
<</if>>
The host, taken off guard, laughs in surprise and says he envies you that. He asks a follow up question that hints at $his sexual preferences without coming straight out and asking how $he likes it.
<<if $activeSlave.intelligence + $activeSlave.intelligenceImplant + $activeSlave.entertainSkill >= 130 && $activeSlave.tankBaby == 0>>
- $He has enough knowledge of the Old World to be able to answer without going too far, and @@.green;subtly alludes@@ to how much $he enjoys
+ $He has enough knowledge of the old world to be able to answer without going too far, and @@.green;subtly alludes@@ to how much $he enjoys
<<if ($activeSlave.fetish == "submissive")>>
submitting to you in bed.
<<elseif ($activeSlave.fetish == "cumslut")>>
@@ -279,7 +279,7 @@ You receive an official communication from a popular talk show e-hosted in one o
<</if>>
<<run repX(500, "concubine", $activeSlave)>>
<<else>>
- $His answer betrays how <<if $activeSlave.tankBaby > 0>>little $he knows<<else>>much $he's forgotten<</if>> about the Old World: $he mildly shocks the studio audience by describing
+ $His answer betrays how <<if $activeSlave.tankBaby > 0>>little $he knows<<else>>much $he's forgotten<</if>> about the old world: $he mildly shocks the studio audience by describing
<<if ($activeSlave.fetish == "submissive")>>
how good it feels when you hold $him down and fuck $him
<<elseif ($activeSlave.fetish == "cumslut")>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/peLonelyBodyguard.tw b/src/uncategorized/peLonelyBodyguard.tw
index 87aebf0b74d8779a54ccb1e3d8dd08814a5f16ff..817390f78a50fee29957e689a26c8980940f732f 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/peLonelyBodyguard.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/peLonelyBodyguard.tw
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ On a whim, you ask $him whether $he feels lonely. Caught off guard, $he <<if !ca
<</link>>
<br><<link "Marry them">>
<<replace "#result">>
- You order $slaves[$j].slaveName in and brusquely inform _him2 _he2'll be marrying $activeSlave.slaveName. $slaves[$j].slaveName is too surprised to react much, and even $activeSlave.slaveName looks shocked, but there is a gleam of wild glee in $his eyes. You give them a few minutes to get dressed in special outfits you make available: they're lacy lingerie designed to resemble Old World wedding dresses, but without concealing anything.
+ You order $slaves[$j].slaveName in and brusquely inform _him2 _he2'll be marrying $activeSlave.slaveName. $slaves[$j].slaveName is too surprised to react much, and even $activeSlave.slaveName looks shocked, but there is a gleam of wild glee in $his eyes. You give them a few minutes to get dressed in special outfits you make available: they're lacy lingerie designed to resemble old world wedding dresses, but without concealing anything.
<br><br>
$activeSlave.slaveName is
<<if ($activeSlave.vagina == 0)>>a virgin, so $he's wearing white<<elseif ($activeSlave.vagina < 0) && ($activeSlave.dick > 0)>>a sissy slave, so $he's wearing light blue<<elseif ($activeSlave.vagina < 0) && ($activeSlave.dick < 1)>>a null, so it's wearing black<<else>>is an experienced sex slave, so $he's wearing light pink<</if>> against $his $activeSlave.skin skin.
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/persBusiness.tw b/src/uncategorized/persBusiness.tw
index 5f21cab2b220923f9b75ca574a200cf08b354f85..cad03dabfbe1c102fed978398162a5b1b9d52866 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/persBusiness.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/persBusiness.tw
@@ -221,7 +221,7 @@
You manage to arrange a few sex-changes and geldings in your own remote surgery for some powerful people to accommodate your arcology's sense of power, but also for people who want to transform others into females so that they lose all the power they have. This makes you @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(_income)>>.@@
<<case "hedonistic">>
<<set _income += random(1500,2500)>>
- Since most of what the Old World considered to be illegal is legal in your arcology, "smuggling" is quite common, and you easily find people ready to pay for your help with dealing with their competition. With this, you manage to make @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(_income)>>.@@
+ Since most of what the old world considered to be illegal is legal in your arcology, "smuggling" is quite common, and you easily find people ready to pay for your help with dealing with their competition. With this, you manage to make @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(_income)>>.@@
<<case "pastoralist">>
<<set _income += random (1500,2500)>>
You take advantage of your own laws, making sure that animal products still come into your arcology. But you also make sure to make them as disgusting as possible so that people would rather turn to slave-produced ones instead. This allows you to make @@.yellowgreen;<<print cashFormat(_income)>>.@@
@@ -842,7 +842,7 @@ Routine upkeep of your demesne costs @@.yellow;<<print cashFormat($costs)>>.@@
<<set _income += Math.round($week / 3 * (_price / 2) * 10 * _factoryMod)>>
<</if>>
<<if $sellTo.oldWorld == 1>>
- Part of our production is sold to some Old World nations.
+ Part of our production is sold to some old world nations.
<<set _income += Math.round($week / 3 * _price * 10 * _factoryMod)>>
<</if>>
<<if $sellTo.raiders == 1>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/policies.tw b/src/uncategorized/policies.tw
index 713222bbf0eb1e32636d9dc9560d0800c5933f19..d8f307855f9796e3eaada65a95ca97f5244e4e2f 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/policies.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/policies.tw
@@ -246,7 +246,7 @@
<br><br>__Population Policy__
<<if $ProRefugees == 1>>
- <br>''Encourage Refugee Servitude:'' the image of slavery in your arcology is being softened, encouraging Old World refugees to consider becoming menial slaves.
+ <br>''Encourage Refugee Servitude:'' the image of slavery in your arcology is being softened, encouraging old world refugees to consider becoming menial slaves.
[[Repeal|Policies][$ProRefugees = 0]]
<</if>>
@@ -691,7 +691,7 @@
<</if>>
<<if $arcologies[0].FSEdoRevivalistLaw == 1>>
- <br>''Cultural Insularity:'' protects the arcology from Old World influences, speeding the acceptance of all future societies.
+ <br>''Cultural Insularity:'' protects the arcology from old world influences, speeding the acceptance of all future societies.
[[Repeal|Policies][$arcologies[0].FSEdoRevivalistLaw = 0]]
<</if>>
@@ -1006,7 +1006,7 @@
<<if $arcologies[0].FSDegradationist == "unset">>
<<if $ProRefugees == 0>>
- <br>''Encourage Refugee Servitude:'' the image of slavery in your arcology will be softened, encouraging Old World refugees to consider slavery.
+ <br>''Encourage Refugee Servitude:'' the image of slavery in your arcology will be softened, encouraging old world refugees to consider slavery.
[[Implement|Policies][$ProRefugees = 1, cashX(-5000, "policies"), repX(-1000, "policies")]]
<br> //Will increase immigration of refugees to become menial slaves//
<</if>>
@@ -1035,7 +1035,7 @@
<<if $ProImmigrationCash == 0>>
<<if $AntiImmigrationCash == 0>>
- <br>''Immigrant Information Brokerage:'' you will covertly sell information on troubled potential immigrants to your arcology to their Old World enemies.
+ <br>''Immigrant Information Brokerage:'' you will covertly sell information on troubled potential immigrants to your arcology to their old world enemies.
[[Implement|Policies][$AntiImmigrationCash = 1, cashX(-5000, "policies"), repX(-1000, "policies")]]
<br> //Will produce <<print cashFormat($policyCost)>> weekly, and slow growth of the citizen population//
<</if>>
@@ -1637,7 +1637,7 @@
<</if>>
<<if $arcologies[0].FSEdoRevivalist >= 90>>
<<if $arcologies[0].FSEdoRevivalistLaw == 0>>
- <br>''@@.lime;Cultural Insularity:@@'' will protect the arcology from Old World influences.
+ <br>''@@.lime;Cultural Insularity:@@'' will protect the arcology from old world influences.
[[Implement|Policies][$arcologies[0].FSEdoRevivalistLaw = 1, cashX(-5000, "policies"), repX(-1000, "policies")]]
<br> //Will speed the acceptance of all future societies//
<</if>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/prestigiousSlave.tw b/src/uncategorized/prestigiousSlave.tw
index b3740577ca8de7039897b6caa08b6683feaba47e..fcfdb1967d8640c2e784d6527550460042a6480d 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/prestigiousSlave.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/prestigiousSlave.tw
@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ You check to see if any especially prestigious slaves are on auction. <<if $pres
<<include "Generate XX Slave">>
<<set $activeSlave.origin = "You bought her at auction.">>
<<set $activeSlave.prestige = 1>>
- <<set $activeSlave.prestigeDesc = "She was once the young trophy wife of a powerful man in the Old World, but he sold her into slavery in revenge for her infidelity.">>
+ <<set $activeSlave.prestigeDesc = "She was once the young trophy wife of a powerful man in the old world, but he sold her into slavery in revenge for her infidelity.">>
<<set $activeSlave.career = "a trophy wife">>
<<set $activeSlave.boobsImplant += random(1,3)*200>>
<<set $activeSlave.boobs += $activeSlave.boobsImplant>>
@@ -306,7 +306,7 @@ You check to see if any especially prestigious slaves are on auction. <<if $pres
<<include "Generate XX Slave">>
<<set $activeSlave.origin = "You bought her at auction.">>
<<set $activeSlave.prestige = 2>>
- <<set $activeSlave.prestigeDesc = "She was once a rising Old World politician, but was forced to flee from the increasingly dangerous politics common in a stressed world, and was subsequently enslaved.">>
+ <<set $activeSlave.prestigeDesc = "She was once a rising old world politician, but was forced to flee from the increasingly dangerous politics common in a stressed world, and was subsequently enslaved.">>
<<set $activeSlave.career = "a politician">>
<<set $activeSlave.boobs += 100>>
<<set $activeSlave.butt += 1>>
@@ -328,7 +328,7 @@ You check to see if any especially prestigious slaves are on auction. <<if $pres
<<set $activeSlave.pubicHStyle = "waxed">>
<<set $activeSlave.underArmHStyle = "waxed">>
<<set $activeSlave.behavioralFlaw = either("arrogant", "bitchy")>>
- <<set $activeSlave.customTat = "A small tattoo of the crest of an Old World sorority is visible on $his left shoulder blade.">>
+ <<set $activeSlave.customTat = "A small tattoo of the crest of an old world sorority is visible on $his left shoulder blade.">>
<<set $activeSlave.customDesc = "Her face is still recognizable as that which once graced a million campaign posters.">>
<<case "princess">>
@@ -575,7 +575,7 @@ You check to see if any especially prestigious slaves are on auction. <<if $pres
<<include "Generate XY Slave">>
<<set $activeSlave.origin = "You bought her at auction.">>
<<set $activeSlave.prestige = 1>>
- <<set $activeSlave.prestigeDesc = "She was once the young trophy husband of a powerful woman in the Old World, but she sold her into slavery in revenge for her infidelities.">>
+ <<set $activeSlave.prestigeDesc = "She was once the young trophy husband of a powerful woman in the old world, but she sold her into slavery in revenge for her infidelities.">>
<<set $activeSlave.career = "a trophy spouse">>
<<set $activeSlave.face = Math.clamp($activeSlave.face+20,-100,100)>>
<<set $activeSlave.faceImplant += 20>>
@@ -778,7 +778,7 @@ You check to see if any especially prestigious slaves are on auction. <<if $pres
<<include "Generate XY Slave">>
<<set $activeSlave.origin = "You bought her at auction.">>
<<set $activeSlave.prestige = 2>>
- <<set $activeSlave.prestigeDesc = "She was once a rising Old World politician, but was forced to flee from the increasingly dangerous politics common in a stressed world, and was subsequently enslaved.">>
+ <<set $activeSlave.prestigeDesc = "She was once a rising old world politician, but was forced to flee from the increasingly dangerous politics common in a stressed world, and was subsequently enslaved.">>
<<set $activeSlave.career = "a politician">>
<<set $activeSlave.muscles = random(10,50)>>
<<set $activeSlave.height = random(160,200)>>
@@ -795,7 +795,7 @@ You check to see if any especially prestigious slaves are on auction. <<if $pres
<<set $activeSlave.whoreSkill = 0>>
<<set $activeSlave.entertainSkill = 35>>
<<set $activeSlave.behavioralFlaw = either("arrogant", "bitchy")>>
- <<set $activeSlave.customTat = "A small tattoo of the crest of an Old World fraternity is visible on $his left shoulder blade.">>
+ <<set $activeSlave.customTat = "A small tattoo of the crest of an old world fraternity is visible on $his left shoulder blade.">>
<<set $activeSlave.customDesc = "Her face is still recognizable as that which once graced a million campaign posters.">>
<<case "d princess">>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/ptWorkaround.tw b/src/uncategorized/ptWorkaround.tw
index 80bb082e35ffe3d37e57a91d0dacac0bac4a36d3..3a13c80c7ade2978ecb3250a0838df8f5a09db78 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/ptWorkaround.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/ptWorkaround.tw
@@ -153,7 +153,7 @@
<<elseif ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "liberated")>>
$activeSlave.slaveName can express a decent argument for why it's wrong to use $him as a sex slave. With a combination of rote training, discussion, and reinforcement, you do your best to turn this into a sincere belief in the moral rightness of slavery.
<<elseif ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "devout")>>
- $activeSlave.slaveName remains devoted to an Old World faith that serves $him as a reservoir of mental resilience. Like all such beliefs, $hers has certain sexual elements; you amuse yourself by forcing $him to break them, and rewarding $him generously when $he does.
+ $activeSlave.slaveName remains devoted to an old world faith that serves $him as a reservoir of mental resilience. Like all such beliefs, $hers has certain sexual elements; you amuse yourself by forcing $him to break them, and rewarding $him generously when $he does.
<</if>>
<<if $activeSlave.training < 100>>
You make progress, but $he's the same at the end of the week.
@@ -552,7 +552,7 @@
<<elseif ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "liberated")>>
$activeSlave.slaveName has not yet accepted that $his world has changed. You could wait for the weight of circumstances to bear it home to $him, but you accelerated the process by giving $him as many trivial orders as possible. $He is required to receive orders to perform the most humiliatingly obvious of tasks.
<<elseif ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "devout")>>
- $activeSlave.slaveName remains devoted to an Old World faith that serves $him as a reservoir of mental resilience. You carefully select pressure points to break $him of this by forcing $him to violate $his faith's purity codes, constantly. $He is forced to eat, dress, and fuck in ways that convince $him that $he must either condemn $himself as an irredeemable sinner, or abandon $his beliefs.
+ $activeSlave.slaveName remains devoted to an old world faith that serves $him as a reservoir of mental resilience. You carefully select pressure points to break $him of this by forcing $him to violate $his faith's purity codes, constantly. $He is forced to eat, dress, and fuck in ways that convince $him that $he must either condemn $himself as an irredeemable sinner, or abandon $his beliefs.
<</if>>
<<set $activeSlave.training += 40>> /* fixing is easier than softening */
<<if $activeSlave.training < 100>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/reFSAcquisition.tw b/src/uncategorized/reFSAcquisition.tw
index b2b4580390f7a8a4dc0e97476dffc2a50c25263e..d1e13d434410578e5c23a2f97dfbe0d9410fad67 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/reFSAcquisition.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/reFSAcquisition.tw
@@ -216,7 +216,7 @@
<<set $activeSlaveOneTimeMaxAge = 42>>
<<set $oneTimeDisableDisability = 1>>
<<include "Generate New Slave">>
-<<set $activeSlave.origin = "She was voluntarily enslaved after she decided that your paternalistic arcology was a better place for advancement than the Old World.">>
+<<set $activeSlave.origin = "She was voluntarily enslaved after she decided that your paternalistic arcology was a better place for advancement than the old world.">>
<<set $activeSlave.career = setup.educatedCareers.random()>>
<<set $activeSlave.health = random(40,60)>>
<<set $activeSlave.devotion = random(25,45)>>
@@ -235,7 +235,7 @@
<<set $activeSlaveOneTimeMaxAge = 42>>
<<set $oneTimeDisableDisability = 1>>
<<include "Generate New Slave">>
-<<set $activeSlave.origin = "She was voluntarily enslaved after she decided that your paternalistic arcology was a better place to live than the Old World.">>
+<<set $activeSlave.origin = "She was voluntarily enslaved after she decided that your paternalistic arcology was a better place to live than the old world.">>
<<set $activeSlave.health = random(40,60)>>
<<set $activeSlave.devotion = random(25,45)>>
<<set $activeSlave.trust = random(25,45)>>
@@ -666,7 +666,7 @@
<<set $activeSlaveOneTimeMaxAge = 42>>
<<set $oneTimeDisableDisability = 1>>
<<include "Generate New Slave">>
-<<set $activeSlave.origin = "She was offered to you by a group of Chattel Religionists eager to be rid of her blasphemous Old World beliefs.">>
+<<set $activeSlave.origin = "She was offered to you by a group of Chattel Religionists eager to be rid of her blasphemous old world beliefs.">>
<<set $activeSlave.health = random(-10,10)>>
<<set $activeSlave.devotion = random(-15,15)>>
<<set $activeSlave.trust = random(60,75)>>
@@ -1021,7 +1021,7 @@ It seems that they've run into a serious cash flow problem. They may not have li
<<case "Supremacist Two">>
-Ever since you have been steering $arcologies[0].name towards a belief in $arcologies[0].FSSupremacistRace supremacy, you've been receiving increasingly useful communications from groups that share your ideals. With much of the Old World in freefall many groups with particularly vehement racial beliefs are expanding unchecked by the mores of big government, and by taking the $arcologies[0].FSSupremacistRace side, you've automatically inserted yourself into a worldwide network of like-minded organizations. You receive a communication from one such group.
+Ever since you have been steering $arcologies[0].name towards a belief in $arcologies[0].FSSupremacistRace supremacy, you've been receiving increasingly useful communications from groups that share your ideals. With much of the old world in freefall many groups with particularly vehement racial beliefs are expanding unchecked by the mores of big government, and by taking the $arcologies[0].FSSupremacistRace side, you've automatically inserted yourself into a worldwide network of like-minded organizations. You receive a communication from one such group.
<br><br>
It seems that in a man in their town made the mistake of marrying a $woman of an undesirable racial background, and this group has stepped in to put an end to such a distasteful union. However, though they may be ruthless vigilantes, they don't consider themselves murderers. They're interested in fencing this former wife to you, no questions asked, on a flat fee basis. Included in the message is a slave dossier detailing the piece of human chattel they're offering.
@@ -1041,23 +1041,23 @@ The caller is $arcologies[0].FSSubjugationistRace, and a particularly self-hatin
You receive so many messages, as a noted titan of the new Free Cities world, that $assistantName has to be quite draconian in culling them. _HeA lets only the most important through to you. One category of message that always gets through regardless of content, though, is requests for voluntary enslavement. As the new world takes shape, they've become less rare than they once were.
<br><br>
-This one is from a rather abused individual from one of the more traditionalist areas of the Old World. It seems $he's heard of the new and interesting way gender is thought of in the Free Cities, and in $arcologies[0].name in particular. "Being your <<s>>lave ha<<s>> to be better than being a <<s>>ubhuman here," $he says. "Being your <<s>>e<<x>> <<s>>lave i<<s>> more a<<cc>>epted in your <<c>>ity than being me i<<s>> here."
+This one is from a rather abused individual from one of the more traditionalist areas of the old world. It seems $he's heard of the new and interesting way gender is thought of in the Free Cities, and in $arcologies[0].name in particular. "Being your <<s>>lave ha<<s>> to be better than being a <<s>>ubhuman here," $he says. "Being your <<s>>e<<x>> <<s>>lave i<<s>> more a<<cc>>epted in your <<c>>ity than being me i<<s>> here."
<<case "Gender Radicalist Two">>
You receive so many messages, as a noted titan of the new Free Cities world, that $assistantName has to be quite draconian in culling them. _HeA lets only the most important through to you. One category of message that always gets through regardless of content, though, is requests for voluntary enslavement. As the new world takes shape, they've become less rare than they once were.
<br><br>
-This one is from a rather mature but otherwise visibly well-to-do individual from one of the more traditionalist areas of the Old World. It seems $he's heard of the new and interesting way gender is thought of in the Free Cities, and in $arcologies[0].name in particular. "I've lived my whole life a<<s>> a <<s>>ubhuman here," $he says. "Being your <<s>>e<<x>> <<s>>lave i<<s>> more a<<cc>>epted in your <<c>>ity than being me i<<s>> here."
+This one is from a rather mature but otherwise visibly well-to-do individual from one of the more traditionalist areas of the old world. It seems $he's heard of the new and interesting way gender is thought of in the Free Cities, and in $arcologies[0].name in particular. "I've lived my whole life a<<s>> a <<s>>ubhuman here," $he says. "Being your <<s>>e<<x>> <<s>>lave i<<s>> more a<<cc>>epted in your <<c>>ity than being me i<<s>> here."
<<case "Gender Fundamentalist">>
-The sexual and moral revolution taking place in the Free Cites has spread back into the Old World, producing an inevitable reaction. Thus there are still many places in the world where it is socially embarrassing for one's young female relatives to appear pregnant and unmarried, and where direct solutions to this unfortunate situation are frowned upon. You receive a communication from one such place, from a traditionalist family whose daughter has dishonored them in this way.
+The sexual and moral revolution taking place in the Free Cites has spread back into the old world, producing an inevitable reaction. Thus there are still many places in the world where it is socially embarrassing for one's young female relatives to appear pregnant and unmarried, and where direct solutions to this unfortunate situation are frowned upon. You receive a communication from one such place, from a traditionalist family whose daughter has dishonored them in this way.
<br><br>
Having $him disappear discreetly into $arcologies[0].name would be a convenient and face-saving way of resolving the situation. Your society's respect for slave pregnancy gives them a plausible way to salve their own consciences where the baby is concerned. As for the $girl, having $him out of the way is what matters to them.
<<case "Gender Fundamentalist Two">>
-The sexual and moral revolution taking place in the Free Cites has spread back into the Old World, producing an inevitable reaction. Thus there are still many places in the world where it is socially embarrassing for one's female relatives to be pregnant as a result of rape, and where direct solutions to this unfortunate situation are frowned upon. You receive a communication from one such place, from a traditionalist family whose mother was dishonored in this way.
+The sexual and moral revolution taking place in the Free Cites has spread back into the old world, producing an inevitable reaction. Thus there are still many places in the world where it is socially embarrassing for one's female relatives to be pregnant as a result of rape, and where direct solutions to this unfortunate situation are frowned upon. You receive a communication from one such place, from a traditionalist family whose mother was dishonored in this way.
<br><br>
Having $him disappear discreetly into $arcologies[0].name would be a convenient and face-saving way of resolving the situation. Your society's respect for slave pregnancy gives them a plausible way to salve their own consciences where the baby is concerned. As for the mother, having $him out of the way is what matters to them.
@@ -1065,13 +1065,13 @@ Having $him disappear discreetly into $arcologies[0].name would be a convenient
You receive so many messages, as a noted titan of the new Free Cities world, that $assistantName has to be quite draconian in culling them. _HeA lets only the most important through to you. One category of message that always gets through regardless of content, though, is requests for voluntary enslavement. As the new world takes shape, they've become less rare than they once were.
<br><br>
-This one is interesting, even by the standards of messages from people who want to become slaves. The individual is neither sick nor abused, and speaks with intelligence and directness. "I've heard a lot about how $arcologies[0].name treat<<s>> <<s>>lave<<s>>," $he says. "And, well, I don't know how clo<<s>>ely you watch the Old World from where you are, but it'<<s>> pretty bad. Being <<s>>mart and driven out here doe<<s>>n't alway<<s>> keep you fed and clothed, or even alive. I'm <<s>>mart and driven, and I under<<s>>tand that might make me a Madam or a DJ or even a Head Girl in $arcologies[0].name. I'm not dumb enough to rely on that, but I'll take that chan<<c>>e."
+This one is interesting, even by the standards of messages from people who want to become slaves. The individual is neither sick nor abused, and speaks with intelligence and directness. "I've heard a lot about how $arcologies[0].name treat<<s>> <<s>>lave<<s>>," $he says. "And, well, I don't know how clo<<s>>ely you watch the old world from where you are, but it'<<s>> pretty bad. Being <<s>>mart and driven out here doe<<s>>n't alway<<s>> keep you fed and clothed, or even alive. I'm <<s>>mart and driven, and I under<<s>>tand that might make me a Madam or a DJ or even a Head Girl in $arcologies[0].name. I'm not dumb enough to rely on that, but I'll take that chan<<c>>e."
<<case "Paternalist Two">>
You receive so many messages, as a noted titan of the new Free Cities world, that $assistantName has to be quite draconian in culling them. _HeA lets only the most important through to you. One category of message that always gets through regardless of content, though, is requests for voluntary enslavement. As the new world takes shape, they've become less rare than they once were.
<br><br>
-This one is interesting, even by the standards of messages from people who want to become slaves. The individual is a normal looking $woman, neither sick nor visibly abused. "I've heard a lot about how $arcologies[0].name treat<<s>> <<s>>lave<<s>>," $he says. "And, well, I don't know how clo<<s>>ely you watch the Old World from where you are, but it'<<s>> pretty bad. <<S>>aving your whole life doesn't alway<<s>> keep you fed and clothed, or even alive. I never had much and now I have even le<<ss>>, and I'd rather live as your <<s>>lave in $arcologies[0].name than on the <<s>>treet<<s>> back home."
+This one is interesting, even by the standards of messages from people who want to become slaves. The individual is a normal looking $woman, neither sick nor visibly abused. "I've heard a lot about how $arcologies[0].name treat<<s>> <<s>>lave<<s>>," $he says. "And, well, I don't know how clo<<s>>ely you watch the old world from where you are, but it'<<s>> pretty bad. <<S>>aving your whole life doesn't alway<<s>> keep you fed and clothed, or even alive. I never had much and now I have even le<<ss>>, and I'd rather live as your <<s>>lave in $arcologies[0].name than on the <<s>>treet<<s>> back home."
<<case "Degradationist">>
@@ -1185,7 +1185,7 @@ This one is interesting, even by the standards of messages from people who want
You receive so many messages, as a noted titan of the new Free Cities world, that your personal assistant has to be quite draconian in culling them. _HeA lets only the most important through to you. One category of message that always gets through regardless of content, though, are requests for voluntary enslavement. As the new world takes shape, they've become less rare than they once were.
<br><br>
-This one is interesting, even by the standards of messages from people who want to become slaves. The individual is neither sick nor abused, and speaks with directness. "I've heard a lot about how your arcology wi<<sh>>e<<s>> to pre<<s>>erve humanity'<<s>> pla<<c>>e in the future," $he says. "And, well, I don't know how clo<<s>>ely you watch the Old World from where you are, but thing<<s>> are falling apart. Humanity'<<s>> future <<s>>urely re<<s>>t<<s>> in the arcologie<<s>>, and you <<s>>eem to be the only one who'<<s>> focu<<s>>ing on that future... A<<s>> <<s>>uch, I want to become a mother to the future of humanity! Plea<<s>>e, take me in and knock me up! I'll carry a<<s>> many children a<<s>> my body can take!"
+This one is interesting, even by the standards of messages from people who want to become slaves. The individual is neither sick nor abused, and speaks with directness. "I've heard a lot about how your arcology wi<<sh>>e<<s>> to pre<<s>>erve humanity'<<s>> pla<<c>>e in the future," $he says. "And, well, I don't know how clo<<s>>ely you watch the old world from where you are, but thing<<s>> are falling apart. Humanity'<<s>> future <<s>>urely re<<s>>t<<s>> in the arcologie<<s>>, and you <<s>>eem to be the only one who'<<s>> focu<<s>>ing on that future... A<<s>> <<s>>uch, I want to become a mother to the future of humanity! Plea<<s>>e, take me in and knock me up! I'll carry a<<s>> many children a<<s>> my body can take!"
<<case "Repopulation Efforts Two">>
@@ -1213,21 +1213,21 @@ This one is a little odd; it merely begs you for an in person audience and offer
<<case "Chattel Religionist Two">>
-Ever since you have been steering $arcologies[0].name towards a belief in chattel religionism, you've been receiving increasingly useful communications from groups that share your ideals. With much of the Old World in freefall, many groups with particularly vehement religious beliefs are expanding unchecked by the mores of big government, and by taking the chattel religionist side, you've automatically inserted yourself into a worldwide network of like-minded organizations. You receive a message from one such group.
+Ever since you have been steering $arcologies[0].name towards a belief in chattel religionism, you've been receiving increasingly useful communications from groups that share your ideals. With much of the old world in freefall, many groups with particularly vehement religious beliefs are expanding unchecked by the mores of big government, and by taking the chattel religionist side, you've automatically inserted yourself into a worldwide network of like-minded organizations. You receive a message from one such group.
<br><br>
-It seems that the Chattel Religionists have all but taken over their town and driven out or converted the local worshippers of Old World religions, save for a single religious building and its clergy who continue in defiance. This group has stepped in to put an end to this impiety. However, though they may be ruthless vigilantes, they don't consider themselves murderers. They're interested in fencing a member of the clergy to you, no questions asked, on a flat fee basis. Included in the message is a slave dossier detailing the piece of human chattel they're offering: <<if $activeSlave.genes == "XX">>a lovely virgin nun<<else>>a rather stuck up priest<</if>>.
+It seems that the Chattel Religionists have all but taken over their town and driven out or converted the local worshippers of old world religions, save for a single religious building and its clergy who continue in defiance. This group has stepped in to put an end to this impiety. However, though they may be ruthless vigilantes, they don't consider themselves murderers. They're interested in fencing a member of the clergy to you, no questions asked, on a flat fee basis. Included in the message is a slave dossier detailing the piece of human chattel they're offering: <<if $activeSlave.genes == "XX">>a lovely virgin nun<<else>>a rather stuck up priest<</if>>.
<<case "Roman Revivalist">>
You receive so many messages, as a noted titan of the new Free Cities world, that $assistantName has to be quite draconian in culling them. _HeA lets only the most important through to you. One category of message that always gets through regardless of content, though, is requests for voluntary enslavement. As the new world takes shape, they've become less rare than they once were.
<br><br>
-The call comes in from an Old World university. The caller is a young $woman who explains that $he's struggling with extreme student debt, and has recently graduated with a history degree that $he can't seem to turn into gainful employment. $He gushes at length about how much $he enjoyed ancient history, and how $he's heard all about your ideas about reviving ancient culture in the Free Cities. $He sees joining your household as a romantic way out of $his difficult situation. Apparently $he read all the idyllic parts of history and somehow missed out on learning about the salt mines and slave galleys. $He's not terribly pretty and seems socially awkward, but that's likely to have its side benefits. $He nervously sends you a complete dossier on $himself.
+The call comes in from an old world university. The caller is a young $woman who explains that $he's struggling with extreme student debt, and has recently graduated with a history degree that $he can't seem to turn into gainful employment. $He gushes at length about how much $he enjoyed ancient history, and how $he's heard all about your ideas about reviving ancient culture in the Free Cities. $He sees joining your household as a romantic way out of $his difficult situation. Apparently $he read all the idyllic parts of history and somehow missed out on learning about the salt mines and slave galleys. $He's not terribly pretty and seems socially awkward, but that's likely to have its side benefits. $He nervously sends you a complete dossier on $himself.
<<case "Aztec Revivalist">>
You receive so many messages, as a noted titan of the new Free Cities world, that $assistantName has to be quite draconian in culling them. _HeA lets only the most important through to you. One category of message that always gets through regardless of content, though, is requests for voluntary enslavement. As the new world takes shape, they've become less rare than they once were.
<br><br>
-The call comes in from an Old World trading colony. The caller is a $woman who humbly explains how tired $he is from all the godless people and terrible conditions, and expresses interest to join the old empires. $He probably knows only of the incredible architecture and the military accomplishments that are advertised in vids. Though the sacrifice and collaring of slaves is no secret, most people never find out the real truth to what you do. Nevertheless $he's incredibly willing, so much so that $he almost signs $himself off to you by accident. $His file is displayed in front if you, pending your reaction.
+The call comes in from an old world trading colony. The caller is a $woman who humbly explains how tired $he is from all the godless people and terrible conditions, and expresses interest to join the old empires. $He probably knows only of the incredible architecture and the military accomplishments that are advertised in vids. Though the sacrifice and collaring of slaves is no secret, most people never find out the real truth to what you do. Nevertheless $he's incredibly willing, so much so that $he almost signs $himself off to you by accident. $His file is displayed in front if you, pending your reaction.
<<case "Edo Revivalist">>
@@ -1239,7 +1239,7 @@ The caller is a young $woman who struggles to stop $himself from peppering $his
You receive so many messages, as a noted titan of the new Free Cities world, that $assistantName has to be quite draconian in culling them. _HeA lets only the most important through to you. One category of message that always gets through regardless of content, though, is requests for voluntary enslavement. As the new world takes shape, they've become less rare than they once were.
<br><br>
-The call comes in from an Old World university. The caller, surprisingly, is a beautiful $woman in $his thirties who speaks with a richly lilting accent and a literary vocabulary. "I'm afraid," $he says sadly, "it'<<s>> come to <<s>>lavery, for me. I am no longer a $girl, but I can make <<s>>ome claim to beauty. I know many <<s>>torie<<s>> and can tell them cleverly; I can <<s>>ing and dan<<c>>e well. I know you are not looking for a <<Sch>>ehera<<z>>ade, but I could play her part. Nor am I naïve; I know the <<S>>ultan enjoyed her body a<<s>> well a<<s>> her wit, and I am not un<<s>>killed in tho<<s>>e re<<s>>pect<<s>>, either." $He looks you straight in the eye. "May I come into your harem? I will do my be<<s>>t to brighten it."
+The call comes in from an old world university. The caller, surprisingly, is a beautiful $woman in $his thirties who speaks with a richly lilting accent and a literary vocabulary. "I'm afraid," $he says sadly, "it'<<s>> come to <<s>>lavery, for me. I am no longer a $girl, but I can make <<s>>ome claim to beauty. I know many <<s>>torie<<s>> and can tell them cleverly; I can <<s>>ing and dan<<c>>e well. I know you are not looking for a <<Sch>>ehera<<z>>ade, but I could play her part. Nor am I naïve; I know the <<S>>ultan enjoyed her body a<<s>> well a<<s>> her wit, and I am not un<<s>>killed in tho<<s>>e re<<s>>pect<<s>>, either." $He looks you straight in the eye. "May I come into your harem? I will do my be<<s>>t to brighten it."
<<case "Chinese Revivalist">>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/reFSNonconformist.tw b/src/uncategorized/reFSNonconformist.tw
index a122c64282d578d1076da88de17af64a6c8fed96..c6e6edc73128c2fce9c061c3119ecbccef5a4c04 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/reFSNonconformist.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/reFSNonconformist.tw
@@ -102,7 +102,7 @@ The nonconformist
<<elseif $FSNonconformist == "Hedonistic Decadence">>
has long been a vocal opponent of over-indulgence and its effects on society. Unfortunately, it seems that they've now edged over into open revolt against hedonism. They're planning to publish an exposé that reveals numerous statistics regarding average health and lifespans, the rising maintenance costs to accommodate the widening population, and a rather alarming report that the arcology has in fact //sunk// several <<if $showInches == 2>>inches<<else>>centimeters<</if>> since hedonism became commonplace among the citizenry.
<<elseif $FSNonconformist == "Chattel Religionist">>
- originally moved to the Free Cities to get away from religion entirely, and has never missed a chance to register disdain for the new faith. Unfortunately, it seems that they've now edged over into open heresy. Typically, they're going about it in a hypocritical way. It's rumored that they've engaged the services of a charismatic itinerant preacher of one of the more popular Old World faiths, and intend to bring him to the arcology to inveigh against the chattel religion.
+ originally moved to the Free Cities to get away from religion entirely, and has never missed a chance to register disdain for the new faith. Unfortunately, it seems that they've now edged over into open heresy. Typically, they're going about it in a hypocritical way. It's rumored that they've engaged the services of a charismatic itinerant preacher of one of the more popular old world faiths, and intend to bring him to the arcology to inveigh against the chattel religion.
<<elseif $FSNonconformist == "Roman Revivalist">>
has been a longtime skeptic of historical revivalism, publicly deploring it as a childish game of dress-up. This never got much traction, since Rome has become quite fashionable here. Frustrated, they're rumored to be planning a change of approach. Despairing of getting the population to give up the Roman project, they're going to set up a competing Gaulish Revivalism. The quixotic effort is almost certainly doomed to fail, but the oligarchs fear it will be a distraction.
<<elseif $FSNonconformist == "Aztec Revivalist">>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/reFemaleArcologyOwner.tw b/src/uncategorized/reFemaleArcologyOwner.tw
index 007f08fb6aa6c8a34a9c038f47f5fbcf09ddead9..913296b84530c95c0576e5ad218a504d6f47c0f6 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/reFemaleArcologyOwner.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/reFemaleArcologyOwner.tw
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
<<set $nextButton = "Continue", $nextLink = "RIE Eligibility Check">>
-The more reputable you've gotten, the more rarefied your entertainments have become. Parties featuring celebrities, Old World national leaders, and Free Cities arcology owners have become a nearly nightly experience for you, an expected part of your routine as one of the Free Cities' leading citizens. According to your whims and predilections, you have the choice of participating all night or just making a brief appearance at the start. The important thing is that they're here, come to pay tribute by their presence.
+The more reputable you've gotten, the more rarefied your entertainments have become. Parties featuring celebrities, old world national leaders, and Free Cities arcology owners have become a nearly nightly experience for you, an expected part of your routine as one of the Free Cities' leading citizens. According to your whims and predilections, you have the choice of participating all night or just making a brief appearance at the start. The important thing is that they're here, come to pay tribute by their presence.
<br><br>
Tonight there are several attendees of such stature that you must exchange pleasantries with each. The last is a fellow arcology owner, not quite up to your stature of course, but certainly worth conciliating. Unusually, she's a woman. She comes up almost to your height, with the aid of very tall spike heels, and is wearing one of the best-tailored suits you've ever seen. The skirt is just short enough to hint at sexuality, and she has lovely, athletic legs; the jacket is feminine, yet makes her trim fitness very clear. She is obviously well into middle age, but has made no attempt to hide the fact, her understated makeup and elegant bun flattering her years rather than concealing them.
<br><br>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/reLegendaryEntertainer.tw b/src/uncategorized/reLegendaryEntertainer.tw
index 246557674862e02b85b8101ebfae7c9809c6c818..32fad41308271fbd474a4a876d8666a8121693a2 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/reLegendaryEntertainer.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/reLegendaryEntertainer.tw
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
/* 000-250-006 */
</span>
-The Free Cities fashion scene extends to slave bodies, of course; stopping at mere clothes and behaviors is an Old World conceit. This week, <<EventNameLink>> is in vogue. Such a crowd of gawkers and hangers-on follows $him around the club that the fine citizens who have a chance at an hour of $his time must shoulder their way through the throng.
+The Free Cities fashion scene extends to slave bodies, of course; stopping at mere clothes and behaviors is an old world conceit. This week, <<EventNameLink>> is in vogue. Such a crowd of gawkers and hangers-on follows $him around the club that the fine citizens who have a chance at an hour of $his time must shoulder their way through the throng.
<br><br>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/reMilfTourist.tw b/src/uncategorized/reMilfTourist.tw
index ee4932ee1193fb236a81ff8273a3145f906fdb52..f47c316237d3b58c6c5508404455c0b5c5cbcb6d 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/reMilfTourist.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/reMilfTourist.tw
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@
<<else>>
$assistantAppearance avatar
<</if>>
- appears on your desk in the middle of the day. "Something unusual for you, <<= properTitle()>>," _heA says. "_milfSlave.slaveName is out doing public service. A tourist from the Old World accosted $him. _milfSlave.slaveName thought _he2 was a rich citizen who wanted to fuck $him, but it turns out _he2 just wanted a tour guide. It was a reasonable mistake; _he2 seems wealthy. $He has been showing _him2 around for the last half hour. Now _he2's asked $him if _he2 can meet you." _HeA displays a video feed showing _milfSlave.slaveName standing with the tourist in question out on the main plaza. _He2's just into middle age, and extremely plush, wearing Capri pants over _his2 motherly hips and a cashmere sweater that understates _his2 generous bust. _He2's blushing as _he2 asks your slave a discreet question about public sex in the arcology, brought on by the sight of a couple of citizens spitroasting a slave. Your personal assistant's avatar
+ appears on your desk in the middle of the day. "Something unusual for you, <<= properTitle()>>," _heA says. "_milfSlave.slaveName is out doing public service. A tourist from the old world accosted $him. _milfSlave.slaveName thought _he2 was a rich citizen who wanted to fuck $him, but it turns out _he2 just wanted a tour guide. It was a reasonable mistake; _he2 seems wealthy. $He has been showing _him2 around for the last half hour. Now _he2's asked $him if _he2 can meet you." _HeA displays a video feed showing _milfSlave.slaveName standing with the tourist in question out on the main plaza. _He2's just into middle age, and extremely plush, wearing Capri pants over _his2 motherly hips and a cashmere sweater that understates _his2 generous bust. _He2's blushing as _he2 asks your slave a discreet question about public sex in the arcology, brought on by the sight of a couple of citizens spitroasting a slave. Your personal assistant's avatar
<<switch $assistantAppearance>>
<<case "monstergirl">>
bares _hisA fangs and makes pinching gestures at nipple height.
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@
reforms into an exaggerated female form before going back to _hisA normal symbol shape.
<</switch>>
<<else>>
- <<if $assistantName == "your personal assistant">>Your personal assistant<<else>>$assistantName<</if>> gets your attention the middle of the day. "A minor matter for you, <<= properTitle()>>," _heA says. "_milfSlave.slaveName is currently performing public service. A tourist from the Old World accosted $him. _milfSlave.slaveName thought _he2 was a rich citizen who wanted to have sex with $him, but it seems _he2 just wanted a tour guide. It was a reasonable mistake; the tourist appears wealthy. $He has been acting as _his2 guide for the last half hour. The tourist has asked $him if _he2 can meet you." _HeA displays a video feed showing _milfSlave.slaveName standing with the tourist in question out on the main plaza. _He2's just into middle age, and extremely plush, wearing Capri pants over _his2 motherly hips and a cashmere sweater that understates _his2 generous bust. _He2's blushing as _he2 asks your slave a discreet question about public sex in the arcology, brought on by the sight of a couple of citizens spitroasting a slave.
+ <<if $assistantName == "your personal assistant">>Your personal assistant<<else>>$assistantName<</if>> gets your attention the middle of the day. "A minor matter for you, <<= properTitle()>>," _heA says. "_milfSlave.slaveName is currently performing public service. A tourist from the old world accosted $him. _milfSlave.slaveName thought _he2 was a rich citizen who wanted to have sex with $him, but it seems _he2 just wanted a tour guide. It was a reasonable mistake; the tourist appears wealthy. $He has been acting as _his2 guide for the last half hour. The tourist has asked $him if _he2 can meet you." _HeA displays a video feed showing _milfSlave.slaveName standing with the tourist in question out on the main plaza. _He2's just into middle age, and extremely plush, wearing Capri pants over _his2 motherly hips and a cashmere sweater that understates _his2 generous bust. _He2's blushing as _he2 asks your slave a discreet question about public sex in the arcology, brought on by the sight of a couple of citizens spitroasting a slave.
<</if>>
<br><br>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/reNickname.tw b/src/uncategorized/reNickname.tw
index 54b3bd7ffdb26f8cf87a92198c7b0d86598ac47b..3ac75be8482850706c01c7a89498b6b63de60432 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/reNickname.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/reNickname.tw
@@ -702,73 +702,73 @@
<<case "amerindian">>
<<set $nickname = either("'Amerindian'", "'Chug'", "'Deerskin'", "'Eskimo'", "'Eskimo Sister'", "'Firewater'", "'First Nations'", "'Indian'", "'Indio'", "'Injun'", "'Ke-mo Sah-bee'", "'La Malinche'", "'Métis Mother'", "'Moccasins'", "'Native'", "'Nitchie'", "'Peace Pipe'", "'Pocahontas'", "'Red'", "'Redskin'", "'Reservation'", "'Savage'", "'Scalper'", "'Smoke Signal'", "'Squaw'", "'Tiger Lily'", "'Tipi Warmer'", "'Totem Pole'", "'Tonto'", "'Tribal'", "'Warpath'", "'Wigwam'")>>
- <<set $situationDesc = "is amerindian, which is not uncommon given the poverty that still plagues those long-suffering peoples. Slaves casually reference race as much or more than free citizens. They absorb the racial peccadilloes of their owners, and many of them bring prejudices from the Old World into their slave lives.">>
+ <<set $situationDesc = "is amerindian, which is not uncommon given the poverty that still plagues those long-suffering peoples. Slaves casually reference race as much or more than free citizens. They absorb the racial peccadilloes of their owners, and many of them bring prejudices from the old world into their slave lives.">>
<<set $applyDesc = "now has a constant reminder that as a sex slave $he is judged on $his appearance first.">>
<<set $notApplyDesc = "may feel some gratitude due to your preference that $he not be defined by $his ethnicity, but this is counterbalanced by the increased independence your kindness inspires.">>
<<case "asian">>
<<set $nickname = either("'3DPD'", "'Almond'", "'Asian'", "'Charlie'", "'Chinese'", "'Ching Chong'", "'Chink'", "'Chopsticks'", "'Coolie'", "'Dink'", "'E-Sports'", "'Fortune Cookie'", "'Gook'", "'Manila'", "'Me Love You Long Time'", "'Me So Horny'", "'Oriental'", "'Pancake Face'", "'Pinoy'", "'Sideways'", "'Slant'", "'Slanteye'", "'Slope'", "'Squint'", "'Thaigirl'", "'Ting Tong'", "'Tokyo'", "'Waifu'", "'Yellow Fever'", "'Yellow'", "'Zip'")>>
- <<set $situationDesc = "is asian, which is not uncommon given the huge population of Asia and the poverty of many countries there. Slaves casually reference race as much or more than free citizens. They absorb the racial peccadilloes of their owners, and many of them bring prejudices from the Old World into their slave lives.">>
+ <<set $situationDesc = "is asian, which is not uncommon given the huge population of Asia and the poverty of many countries there. Slaves casually reference race as much or more than free citizens. They absorb the racial peccadilloes of their owners, and many of them bring prejudices from the old world into their slave lives.">>
<<set $applyDesc = "now has a constant reminder that as a sex slave $he is judged on $his appearance first.">>
<<set $notApplyDesc = "may feel some gratitude due to your preference that $he not be defined by $his ethnicity, but this is counterbalanced by the increased independence your kindness inspires.">>
<<case "black">>
<<set $nickname = either("'African'", "'B-Girl'", "'Black'", "'Blackie'", "'Bottom Bitch'", "'Burrhead'", "'Cocoa'", "'Coon'", "'Cotton'", "'Dark'", "'Ebony'", "'Gangsta'", "'His Girl Friday'", "'House Slave'", "'Jungle Bunny'", "'Jungle Fever'", "'Mammy'", "'Miss'", "'Missie'", "'Mulatto'", "'N-Word'", "'Negro'", "'Negroid'", "'Nigga'", "'Nigger'", "'Porch Monkey'", "'Quadroon'", "'Sambo'", "'Sheboon'", "'Spade'", "'Spook'")>>
- <<set $situationDesc = "is black, which is not uncommon given the urban collapse afflicting the first world and the wars raging in Africa. Slaves casually reference race as much or more than free citizens. They absorb the racial peccadilloes of their owners, and many of them bring prejudices from the Old World into their slave lives.">>
+ <<set $situationDesc = "is black, which is not uncommon given the urban collapse afflicting the first world and the wars raging in Africa. Slaves casually reference race as much or more than free citizens. They absorb the racial peccadilloes of their owners, and many of them bring prejudices from the old world into their slave lives.">>
<<set $applyDesc = "now has a constant reminder that as a sex slave $he is judged on $his appearance first.">>
<<set $notApplyDesc = "may feel some gratitude due to your preference that $he not be defined by $his ethnicity, but this is counterbalanced by the increased independence your kindness inspires.">>
<<case "indo-aryan">>
<<set $nickname = either("'Aryan'", "'Babu'", "'Bhabhi'", "'Bindi'", "'Bollywood'", "'Brown'", "'Chandala'", "'Curry Muncher'", "'Desi'", "'Dothead'", "'Durga'", "'Gyp'", "'Gypsy'", "'Hajji'", "'Indian'", "'Indo-Aryan'", "'Kali Maa'", "'Kama Sutra'", "'Kaur'", "'Mughal'", "'Paki'", "'Sati'", "'Sepoy'", "'Shanti'", "'Sim Sim Salabim'", "'Snake Charmer'", "'Subcontinental'", "'Swami'", "'Tigress'", "'Untouchable'", "'Yoga'", "'Zoroastrian'", "'Zott'")>>
- <<set $situationDesc = "is indo-aryan, which is not uncommon given the poverty in many majority indo-aryan countries, and the near-submersion of some others due to rising sea levels. Slaves casually reference race as much or more than free citizens. They absorb the racial peccadilloes of their owners, and many of them bring prejudices from the Old World into their slave lives.">>
+ <<set $situationDesc = "is indo-aryan, which is not uncommon given the poverty in many majority indo-aryan countries, and the near-submersion of some others due to rising sea levels. Slaves casually reference race as much or more than free citizens. They absorb the racial peccadilloes of their owners, and many of them bring prejudices from the old world into their slave lives.">>
<<set $applyDesc = "now has a constant reminder that as a sex slave $he is judged on $his appearance first.">>
<<set $notApplyDesc = "may feel some gratitude due to your preference that $he not be defined by $his ethnicity, but this is counterbalanced by the increased independence your kindness inspires.">>
<<case "latina">>
<<set $nickname = either("'Adorada'", "'Banana Republic'", "'Brown'", "'Café'", "'Chica'", "'Chiquita'", "'Chola'", "'Cuzinho'", "'Facil'", "'Hispanic'", "'Latin'", "'Latina'", "'Mestiza'", "'Mexicali'", "'One Peso'", "'Rio Grande'", "'Senora'", "'Senorita'", "'Shakira'", "'South of the Border'", "'Spic'", "'Spicy'", "'Wetback'", "'Yeyo'")>>
- <<set $situationDesc = "is latina, which is not uncommon given the poor state of many Central and South American countries and the long diaspora of poor natives of those areas. Slaves casually reference race as much or more than free citizens. They absorb the racial peccadilloes of their owners, and many of them bring prejudices from the Old World into their slave lives.">>
+ <<set $situationDesc = "is latina, which is not uncommon given the poor state of many Central and South American countries and the long diaspora of poor natives of those areas. Slaves casually reference race as much or more than free citizens. They absorb the racial peccadilloes of their owners, and many of them bring prejudices from the old world into their slave lives.">>
<<set $applyDesc = "now has a constant reminder that as a sex slave $he is judged on $his appearance first.">>
<<set $notApplyDesc = "may feel some gratitude due to your preference that $he not be defined by $his ethnicity, but this is counterbalanced by the increased independence your kindness inspires.">>
<<case "malay">>
<<set $nickname = either("'Austronesian'", "'Bumi'", "'Bumiputera'", "'Cinnamon'", "'Huan-a'", "'Indon'", "'Island Hopper'", "'Jakun'", "'Keling'", "'Krakatoa'", "'Kunlun'", "'Malay'", "'Malaysian'", "'Malingsia'", "'Malon'", "'Melayu'", "'My Lay'", "'NÄga'", "'Nutmeg'", "'Orang'", "'Pinoy'", "'Pribumi'", "'Rani'", "'Samudra Kidul'", "'Sandalwood'", "'Spice Islands'", "'Spice'", "'Trade Winds'")>>
- <<set $situationDesc = "is malay, which is not uncommon given the ongoing poverty in many majority malay countries, and the serious weather patterns savaging that part of the world. Slaves casually reference race as much or more than free citizens. They absorb the racial peccadilloes of their owners, and many of them bring prejudices from the Old World into their slave lives.">>
+ <<set $situationDesc = "is malay, which is not uncommon given the ongoing poverty in many majority malay countries, and the serious weather patterns savaging that part of the world. Slaves casually reference race as much or more than free citizens. They absorb the racial peccadilloes of their owners, and many of them bring prejudices from the old world into their slave lives.">>
<<set $applyDesc = "now has a constant reminder that as a sex slave $he is judged on $his appearance first.">>
<<set $notApplyDesc = "may feel some gratitude due to your preference that $he not be defined by $his ethnicity, but this is counterbalanced by the increased independence your kindness inspires.">>
<<case "middle eastern">>
<<set $nickname = either("'Arab'", "'Arabian'", "'Arabian Nights'", "'Arabush'", "'Bibi'", "'Bougnoule'", "'Caliph'", "'Camel Jockey'", "'Chai Girl'", "'Desert Sun'", "'Dune Coon'", "'Dune'", "'Durka Durka'", "'Flying Carpet'", "'Halal'", "'Harem Girl'", "'Hijabi'", "'Jasmine'", "'Kebab'", "'Middle Eastern'", "'Moromierda'", "'Raghead'", "'Sand Nigger'", "'Sand'", "'Sandy'", "'Scheherazade'", "'Soosmar-Khor'", "'Third Wife'", "'Towelhead'")>>
- <<set $situationDesc = "is middle eastern, which is not uncommon given the interminable wars and disruptions in that part of the world. Slaves casually reference race as much or more than free citizens. They absorb the racial peccadilloes of their owners, and many of them bring prejudices from the Old World into their slave lives.">>
+ <<set $situationDesc = "is middle eastern, which is not uncommon given the interminable wars and disruptions in that part of the world. Slaves casually reference race as much or more than free citizens. They absorb the racial peccadilloes of their owners, and many of them bring prejudices from the old world into their slave lives.">>
<<set $applyDesc = "now has a constant reminder that as a sex slave $he is judged on $his appearance first.">>
<<set $notApplyDesc = "may feel some gratitude due to your preference that $he not be defined by $his ethnicity, but this is counterbalanced by the increased independence your kindness inspires.">>
<<case "mixed race">>
<<set $nickname = either("'Chola'", "'Colonial'", "'Colored'", "'Creole'", "'Diverse'", "'Diversity'", "'HÄfu'", "'Half and Half'", "'Half-breed'", "'Half-caste'", "'Integration'", "'Interracial'", "'Melting Pot'", "'Melungeon'", "'Mestiza'", "'Miscegenation'", "'Mixed Race'", "'Mixed'", "'Mongrel'", "'Mulatto'", "'Multiracial'", "'Mutt'", "'Octaroon'", "'Pardo'", "'Quadroon'", "'Zambo'")>>
- <<set $situationDesc = "is mixed race, an ethnic makeup that has always been a target for abuse. Slaves of all races can find something about $him to dislike. They absorb the racial peccadilloes of their owners, and many of them bring prejudices from the Old World into their slave lives.">>
+ <<set $situationDesc = "is mixed race, an ethnic makeup that has always been a target for abuse. Slaves of all races can find something about $him to dislike. They absorb the racial peccadilloes of their owners, and many of them bring prejudices from the old world into their slave lives.">>
<<set $applyDesc = "now has a constant reminder that as a sex slave $he is judged on $his appearance first.">>
<<set $notApplyDesc = "may feel some gratitude due to your preference that $he not be defined by $his ethnicity, but this is counterbalanced by the increased independence your kindness inspires.">>
<<case "pacific islander">>
<<set $nickname = either("'Aloha'", "'Antipodean'", "'Austronesian'", "'Boonga'", "'Breadfruit'", "'Coconut'", "'Conch Blower'", "'Grass Skirt'", "'Hori'", "'Hula Girl'", "'Islander'", "'Kanaka'", "'Melanesian'", "'Micronesian'", "'Longpig'", "'Oceanian'", "'Outrigger'", "'Pacific Islander'", "'Pacific'", "'Paradise'", "'Pasifika'", "'Pineapple'", "'Polynesian'", "'Sea'", "'Seashell'", "'South Pacific'", "'Tiki Torch'")>>
- <<set $situationDesc = "is a pacific islander, which is not uncommon given wholesale destruction of many countries in that area by the worsening climate. Slaves casually reference race as much or more than free citizens. They absorb the racial peccadilloes of their owners, and many of them bring prejudices from the Old World into their slave lives.">>
+ <<set $situationDesc = "is a pacific islander, which is not uncommon given wholesale destruction of many countries in that area by the worsening climate. Slaves casually reference race as much or more than free citizens. They absorb the racial peccadilloes of their owners, and many of them bring prejudices from the old world into their slave lives.">>
<<set $applyDesc = "now has a constant reminder that as a sex slave $he is judged on $his appearance first.">>
<<set $notApplyDesc = "may feel some gratitude due to your preference that $he not be defined by $his ethnicity, but this is counterbalanced by the increased independence your kindness inspires.">>
<<case "semitic">>
<<set $nickname = either("'Abie'", "'Abrahamic'", "'Baal Worshipper'", "'Biblical'", "'Canaanite'", "'Dead Sea'", "'Golden Calf'", "'Good Samaritan'", "'Hebrew'", "'Heeb'", "'Holy land'", "'Hymie'", "'Inanna'", "'Ishtar'", "'Kike'", "'Kosher'", "'Levantine'", "'Lilith'", "'Lost Ark'", "'Nephilim'", "'Oven Dodger'", "'Oy Vey'", "'Philistine'", "'Qedesha'", "'Red Sea'", "'Salome'", "'Semite'", "'Semitic'", "'Sheeny'", "'Shylock'", "'Sodom and Gomorrah'", "'Whore of Babylon'", "'Yid'")>>
- <<set $situationDesc = "is semitic, which is not uncommon given the many conflicts in countries with semitic minorities. Slaves casually reference race as much or more than free citizens. They absorb the racial peccadilloes of their owners, and many of them bring prejudices from the Old World into their slave lives.">>
+ <<set $situationDesc = "is semitic, which is not uncommon given the many conflicts in countries with semitic minorities. Slaves casually reference race as much or more than free citizens. They absorb the racial peccadilloes of their owners, and many of them bring prejudices from the old world into their slave lives.">>
<<set $applyDesc = "now has a constant reminder that as a sex slave $he is judged on $his appearance first.">>
<<set $notApplyDesc = "may feel some gratitude due to your preference that $he not be defined by $his ethnicity, but this is counterbalanced by the increased independence your kindness inspires.">>
<<case "southern european">>
<<set $nickname = either("'Aphrodite'", "'Bella'", "'Dago'", "'Doña'", "'Fine Wine'", "'Garlic Breath'", "'Goombah'", "'Greaseball'", "'Greaser'", "'Grecian'", "'Guido'", "'Guinea'", "'Infamis'", "'Lupa'", "'Mediterranean'", "'Meretrix'", "'Odalisque'", "'Olive Oil'", "'Olive'", "'Pizzahead'", "'Riviera'", "'Roman Nose'", "'Southern European'", "'Venus'", "'Wog'", "'Wop'")>>
- <<set $situationDesc = "is southern european, which is not uncommon given the endemic corruption and political collapse in that part of the world. Slaves casually reference race as much or more than free citizens. They absorb the racial peccadilloes of their owners, and many of them bring prejudices from the Old World into their slave lives.">>
+ <<set $situationDesc = "is southern european, which is not uncommon given the endemic corruption and political collapse in that part of the world. Slaves casually reference race as much or more than free citizens. They absorb the racial peccadilloes of their owners, and many of them bring prejudices from the old world into their slave lives.">>
<<set $applyDesc = "now has a constant reminder that as a sex slave $he is judged on $his appearance first.">>
<<set $notApplyDesc = "may feel some gratitude due to your preference that $he not be defined by $his ethnicity, but this is counterbalanced by the increased independence your kindness inspires.">>
<<case "white">>
<<set $nickname = either("'Ang Mo'", "'Casper'", "'Caucasian'", "'Caucasoid'", "'Cracker'", "'Cumskin'", "'Dixie'", "'Down Home'", "'Duchess'", "'Euro Trash'", "'Europa'", "'European'", "'Farang'", "'Grits'", "'Gweilo'", "'Hick'", "'Hillbilly'", "'Hollywood'", "'Honky'", "'Ice Monkey'", "'Ice Queen'", "'Mayo'", "'Memphis'", "'Pale'", "'Paleface'", "'Pasty'", "'Peckerwood'", "'Princess'", "'Snowflake'", "'Top Dollar'", "'Valley Girl'", "'Vanilla'", "'Vegas'", "'White Bread'", "'White Devil'", "'White Trash'", "'White'", "'Whitey'", "'Wigger'", "'Yankee'")>>
- <<set $situationDesc = "is white, which is not uncommon given the collapse of many erstwhile first world nations into depression and the proximity of many Free Cities to majority white areas. Slaves casually reference race as much or more than free citizens. They absorb the racial peccadilloes of their owners, and many of them bring prejudices from the Old World into their slave lives.">>
+ <<set $situationDesc = "is white, which is not uncommon given the collapse of many erstwhile first world nations into depression and the proximity of many Free Cities to majority white areas. Slaves casually reference race as much or more than free citizens. They absorb the racial peccadilloes of their owners, and many of them bring prejudices from the old world into their slave lives.">>
<<set $applyDesc = "now has a constant reminder that as a sex slave $he is judged on $his appearance first.">>
<<set $notApplyDesc = "may feel some gratitude due to your preference that $he not be defined by $his ethnicity, but this is counterbalanced by the increased independence your kindness inspires.">>
@@ -1141,7 +1141,7 @@
<<set $nickname = either("'Barely Legal'")>>
<</if>>
<</if>>
- <<set $situationDesc = "is yet underage by Old World standards, and some older slaves do not let $him forget that.">>
+ <<set $situationDesc = "is yet underage by old world standards, and some older slaves do not let $him forget that.">>
<<set $applyDesc = "understands that far from being a mockery, your sanction has turned an intended insult into a reference to the appeal of $his years.">>
<<set $notApplyDesc = "understands that despite $his young age $he must do $his best to fuck like the most veteran of whores.">>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/reRebels.tw b/src/uncategorized/reRebels.tw
index 3d6f002a0caaad81b168bc0a840c9dda63132609..2d1bc299ec545f6e10a4022421afed55c5a971f3 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/reRebels.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/reRebels.tw
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ You have a rebel problem. $slaves[_i].slaveName and $slaves[_j].slaveName are bo
<</link>>
<br><<link "Set them against each other, in private">>
<<replace "#result">>
- Back in the Old World, the saying went that turnabout was fair play. In the Free Cities, turnabout is often a cast-iron bitch. Whenever you have an idle moment, all week, you set them against one another in some degrading or painful contest. They are made to spank each other, with the slave who hits lightest getting a spanking from you. They are made to compete to see who can suck other slaves off quickest, with the loser forced to orally service the winner. So on, and so on; by the end of the week @@.gold;they forget their friendship@@ and try to outdo each other to avoid punishment.
+ Back in the old world, the saying went that turnabout was fair play. In the Free Cities, turnabout is often a cast-iron bitch. Whenever you have an idle moment, all week, you set them against one another in some degrading or painful contest. They are made to spank each other, with the slave who hits lightest getting a spanking from you. They are made to compete to see who can suck other slaves off quickest, with the loser forced to orally service the winner. So on, and so on; by the end of the week @@.gold;they forget their friendship@@ and try to outdo each other to avoid punishment.
<<set $slaves[_i].trust -= 5>>
<<set $slaves[_j].trust -= 5>>
<<set $slaves[_j].oralCount += 6>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/reRecruit.tw b/src/uncategorized/reRecruit.tw
index 93e0daeee1ff715fff855e1dc77a435cdd7bcebe..5e674f146997c64a9fa4715d26664c9b2d12b2b6 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/reRecruit.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/reRecruit.tw
@@ -273,7 +273,7 @@
<<set $activeSlave.intelligenceImplant = 15>>
<<set $activeSlave.intelligence = 100>>
<<set $activeSlave.prestige = 3>>
-<<set $activeSlave.prestigeDesc = "She was a famous young musical prodigy known throughout both the Old World and the free cities.">>
+<<set $activeSlave.prestigeDesc = "She was a famous young musical prodigy known throughout both the old world and the free cities.">>
<<set $activeSlave.accent = 1>>
<<case "desperate milf">>
@@ -1449,7 +1449,7 @@
<<set $activeSlave.hColor = "blonde">>
<<set $activeSlave.teeth = "normal">>
<<set $activeSlave.prestige = 1>>
-<<set $activeSlave.prestigeDesc = "She is the notoriously spoiled daughter of a wealthy Old World businessman.">>
+<<set $activeSlave.prestigeDesc = "She is the notoriously spoiled daughter of a wealthy old world businessman.">>
<<case "desperate university milf">>
@@ -1507,7 +1507,7 @@
<<set $activeSlave.voice = 3>>
<<set $activeSlave.teeth = "normal">>
<<set $activeSlave.prestige = 1>>
-<<set $activeSlave.prestigeDesc = "She is the spoiled daughter of a wealthy Old World businessman. Many will pay well to use her to discredit her father and family.">>
+<<set $activeSlave.prestigeDesc = "She is the spoiled daughter of a wealthy old world businessman. Many will pay well to use her to discredit her father and family.">>
<<case "starving artist">>
@@ -1912,7 +1912,7 @@
<<set $activeSlave.origin = "You purchased her in order to pave the way for her brother to take the throne.">>
<<set $activeSlave.career = "a prince">>
<<set $activeSlave.prestige = 2>>
-<<set $activeSlave.prestigeDesc = "She was once the crown prince of an Old World kingdom up until you aided her brother in making her 'disappear'.">>
+<<set $activeSlave.prestigeDesc = "She was once the crown prince of an old world kingdom up until you aided her brother in making her 'disappear'.">>
<<set $activeSlave.teeth = "normal">>
<<set $activeSlave.devotion = random(-100,-90)>>
<<set $activeSlave.trust = random(25,85)>>
@@ -1942,7 +1942,7 @@
<<set $activeSlave.origin = "You purchased her as a favor to her father.">>
<<set $activeSlave.career = "a princess">>
<<set $activeSlave.prestige = 2>>
-<<set $activeSlave.prestigeDesc = "She was once the princess of an Old World kingdom up until her loose habits caught up with her and she was exiled.">>
+<<set $activeSlave.prestigeDesc = "She was once the princess of an old world kingdom up until her loose habits caught up with her and she was exiled.">>
<<set $activeSlave.devotion = random(-100,-90)>>
<<set $activeSlave.trust = random(25,85)>>
<<set $activeSlave.health = random(0,20)>>
@@ -2055,13 +2055,13 @@ A young <<if $activeSlave.physicalAge < 13>>$girl<<elseif $activeSlave.physicalA
Not every day in the arcology is calm and this one is most certainly more energetic than usual. It seems there that a large crowd is gathering along the
<<if $terrain != "oceanic">>
- road extending from the front gate as a small convoy of luxury vehicles rolls in. Your arcology isn't immune to outside Old World influences, and the person in the center vehicle
+ road extending from the front gate as a small convoy of luxury vehicles rolls in. Your arcology isn't immune to outside old world influences, and the person in the center vehicle
<<elseif $terrain == "oceanic">>
- canal extending from the front gate as a small convoy of luxury yachts sails in. Your arcology isn't immune to outside Old World influences, and the person on the center yacht
+ canal extending from the front gate as a small convoy of luxury yachts sails in. Your arcology isn't immune to outside old world influences, and the person on the center yacht
<</if>>
so happens to be such a force.
-Recently, a young musical prodigy has taken both the Old World and the free cities by storm. Their rising popularity has gained them quite a following and the attention of some very powerful people. You look at the schedule of events for citizens tonight and, sure enough, they are to appear, live in concert, tonight. You tell $assistantName to set up a live feed of the performance for you so as not to interrupt your work. Several hours later, the young artist comes out on stage to a full house. They perform their latest hits and some fan favorites, but it's the crowd suddenly going silent that disturbs you from your paperwork. You look at the feed to see the artist standing there, a sullen expression on their face, tears streaming down their cheeks, and their body jerking, obviously wracked by occasional sobbing. They take a very quick bow and run off stage, before the feed gets cut. You shrug — artists have breakdowns — and return to your tasks. Surprisingly, $assistantName chimes in to tell you that an unexpected guest has arrived. You have them sent in and are surprised to see the young, visibly distressed prodigy.
+Recently, a young musical prodigy has taken both the old world and the free cities by storm. Their rising popularity has gained them quite a following and the attention of some very powerful people. You look at the schedule of events for citizens tonight and, sure enough, they are to appear, live in concert, tonight. You tell $assistantName to set up a live feed of the performance for you so as not to interrupt your work. Several hours later, the young artist comes out on stage to a full house. They perform their latest hits and some fan favorites, but it's the crowd suddenly going silent that disturbs you from your paperwork. You look at the feed to see the artist standing there, a sullen expression on their face, tears streaming down their cheeks, and their body jerking, obviously wracked by occasional sobbing. They take a very quick bow and run off stage, before the feed gets cut. You shrug — artists have breakdowns — and return to your tasks. Surprisingly, $assistantName chimes in to tell you that an unexpected guest has arrived. You have them sent in and are surprised to see the young, visibly distressed prodigy.
"I wa<<s>> told by my produ<<c>>er to come here; they <<s>>ay I have earned enough of a debt to be en<<s>>laved. I heard that <<s>>lave<<s>> <<s>>eem to be treated well here and thought that, ju<<s>>t maybe, if I convin<<c>>ed them to let my final performan<<c>>e be here, I would have a chan<<c>>e at a better life than at another arcology owned by a crueler ma<<s>>ter. Plea<<s>>e, would you con<<s>>ider taking me in?"
<<case "desperate milf">>
@@ -2311,7 +2311,7 @@ From the looks of all the brochures and extra information included, the associat
<<case "orphan rebellious female">>
-An invitation to a 'visitation day' at an orphanage in the arcology pops up in your in-box, prompting you to make some room in your schedule to go have a look. Run by a well-meaning non-profit organization active in numerous of the Free Cities, the facility does house quite a few orphans (both local and saved from the chaos of the Old World), doing excellent work in teaching them and finding new homes. Still, with times being what they are, the people running things do have a... realistic outlook, in the end. And so, in order to keep the orphanage going, those living there who aren't adopted till they reach maturity are sold as slaves. Legally this practice is easily arranged, as the life-debt for any of the orphans builds up over the years, pretty much automatically putting them over the limit for enslavement.
+An invitation to a 'visitation day' at an orphanage in the arcology pops up in your in-box, prompting you to make some room in your schedule to go have a look. Run by a well-meaning non-profit organization active in numerous of the Free Cities, the facility does house quite a few orphans (both local and saved from the chaos of the old world), doing excellent work in teaching them and finding new homes. Still, with times being what they are, the people running things do have a... realistic outlook, in the end. And so, in order to keep the orphanage going, those living there who aren't adopted till they reach maturity are sold as slaves. Legally this practice is easily arranged, as the life-debt for any of the orphans builds up over the years, pretty much automatically putting them over the limit for enslavement.
<br><br>
Knowing what's coming, the teachers in the facility do train their pupils accordingly and try to instill obedience and acceptance into those soon reaching eighteen years of age, but there are always those with whom the lessons don't quite take hold. The young $woman that catches your eye from among the newly of age orphans is such a case... from all accounts, $he's rather headstrong and doesn't bend $his will to anyone really — for example having long lost $his virginities one way or another. Still, a young slave at a fairly low price could be worth the investment for anyone who likes breaking them in...
<br><br>
@@ -2319,7 +2319,7 @@ Knowing what's coming, the teachers in the facility do train their pupils accord
<<case "orphan femboy">>
-An invitation to a 'visitation day' at an orphanage in the arcology pops up in your in-box, prompting you to make some room in your schedule to go have a look. Run by a well-meaning non-profit organization active in numerous of the Free Cities, the facility does house quite a few orphans (both local and saved from the chaos of the Old World), doing excellent work in teaching them and finding new homes. Still, with times being what they are, the people running things do have a... realistic outlook, in the end. And so, in order to keep the orphanage going, those living there who aren't adopted till they reach maturity are sold as slaves. Legally this practice is easily arranged, as the life-debt for any of the orphans builds up over the years, pretty much automatically putting them over the limit for enslavement.
+An invitation to a 'visitation day' at an orphanage in the arcology pops up in your in-box, prompting you to make some room in your schedule to go have a look. Run by a well-meaning non-profit organization active in numerous of the Free Cities, the facility does house quite a few orphans (both local and saved from the chaos of the old world), doing excellent work in teaching them and finding new homes. Still, with times being what they are, the people running things do have a... realistic outlook, in the end. And so, in order to keep the orphanage going, those living there who aren't adopted till they reach maturity are sold as slaves. Legally this practice is easily arranged, as the life-debt for any of the orphans builds up over the years, pretty much automatically putting them over the limit for enslavement.
<br><br>
Knowing what's coming, the teachers in the facility do train their pupils accordingly and try to instill obedience and acceptance into those soon reaching eighteen years of age, and the young man you're shown in short notice is said to be a good student and receptive for his lessons. It is quite obvious why he hasn't been adopted so far — the eighteen year old is relatively small in stature and his face was too pretty and feminine to appeal to anyone wanting to add a male child to their family. For your uses on the other hand, he's perfect. With a little bit of training, this teen will make an excellent dickgirl. Approaching him, you question the soon-to-be slave a little, finding him nervous but fairly obedient to commands. Testing out his limits, you have him pull down his pants right then and there, revealing that there's one part of his body that's not at all small — his dick. When you pose the question what he'd think about becoming a dickgirl, he is speechless at first, then after a pointed stare stammers out, "I — um, I'd do my be<<s>>t, <<if $PC.title != 0>><<s>>ir<<else>>ma'am<</if>>!"
@@ -2331,14 +2331,14 @@ You've been kept busy until late at night. The warm blue glow of your desk scree
<br><br>
With apprehension, you decide to let the call through. The screen switches from your work to the vidcall. Several armed men, cloaked in black, are standing around a pretty young $girl. $He's gagged and bound to a chair.
<br><br>
-The men explain that they've captured the young daughter of a wealthy old-world businessman, by abducting $him straight from a gated community. It's far from uncommon for <<= $girl>>s to be captured and sold as slaves, but that these men had the balls to raid a gated community is something else. There are still some places in the world that are considered safe, where the world's deterioration isn't readily apparent. Showing that these places aren't safe from the predations of slavers upsets what little balance that the Old World still has left, and that isn't always a good thing for the Free Cities.<br><br>
+The men explain that they've captured the young daughter of a wealthy old-world businessman, by abducting $him straight from a gated community. It's far from uncommon for <<= $girl>>s to be captured and sold as slaves, but that these men had the balls to raid a gated community is something else. There are still some places in the world that are considered safe, where the world's deterioration isn't readily apparent. Showing that these places aren't safe from the predations of slavers upsets what little balance that the old world still has left, and that isn't always a good thing for the Free Cities.<br><br>
At any rate, $he's a fine capture. And unsurprisingly, they want to get rid of $him. Fast. They're willing to offer a below-market price for $his enslavement.
<br><br>
//You can buy out $his auction for <<print cashFormat(10000)>>.//
<<case "desperate university milf">>
-A call comes in from an Old World household. The caller appears on your screen, a worn down matronly $woman flanked by $his two daughters. The middle-aged mother addresses you in a formal yet halting manner, as if rehearsing an unfamiliar speech. "I don't know how clo<<s>>ely you watch the Old World from where you are, but finding <<s>>teady work without an education i<<s>> becoming increa<<s>>ingly difficult".
+A call comes in from an old world household. The caller appears on your screen, a worn down matronly $woman flanked by $his two daughters. The middle-aged mother addresses you in a formal yet halting manner, as if rehearsing an unfamiliar speech. "I don't know how clo<<s>>ely you watch the old world from where you are, but finding <<s>>teady work without an education i<<s>> becoming increa<<s>>ingly difficult".
<br><br>
The mother pauses to glance at $his daughters before continuing. "I want my daughter<<s>> to have a chance to make a life for them<<s>>elve<<s>>. I know that if I can pay their way toward<<s>> attending univer<<s>>ity, then I will have <<s>>u<<cc>>eeded a<<s>> a parent."
<br><br>
@@ -2346,7 +2346,7 @@ $He begins to weep quietly, but continues after $his daughters lay their hands s
<<case "spoiled daughter">>
-Your desk flags a video message as coming from an influential Old World businessman. To your surprise, rather than the portly visage you were expecting, a pretty young face appears on your screen. "Oh. My. God. How long doe<<s>> it take to an<<s>>wer a call?"
+Your desk flags a video message as coming from an influential old world businessman. To your surprise, rather than the portly visage you were expecting, a pretty young face appears on your screen. "Oh. My. God. How long doe<<s>> it take to an<<s>>wer a call?"
<br><br>
The $girl speaks in a ridiculously high, bubblegum voice and bounces indignantly around $his father's luxurious office as $he rants, barely acknowledging your presence on the other end of the call. "Daddy <<s>>ay<<s>> that I'm <<s>>pending too much of hi<<s>> money but what the hell i<<s>> all of hi<<s>> money for if he'<<s>> not <<s>>pending it on hi<<s>> little $girl?"
<br><br>
@@ -2457,7 +2457,7 @@ The <<if ($activeSlave.actualAge >= 18)>>young $woman<<elseif ($activeSlave.actu
You receive so many messages, as a noted titan of the new Free Cities world, that $assistantName has to be quite draconian in culling them. _HeA lets only the most important through to you. One category of message that always gets through regardless of content, though, are lucrative deals with powerful individuals.
<br><br>
-This call is coming from a public kiosk, which is usually an indication that the person on the other end is a transient individual who has decided to take slavery over homelessness and not someone of high society. This call, as you would expect, is different. The moment the person on the other end introduces themselves you immediately recognize why your assistant brought this to your attention. The caller is the prince of an Old World kingdom, contacting you by an untraceable means due of the conspiratorial nature of his proposal.
+This call is coming from a public kiosk, which is usually an indication that the person on the other end is a transient individual who has decided to take slavery over homelessness and not someone of high society. This call, as you would expect, is different. The moment the person on the other end introduces themselves you immediately recognize why your assistant brought this to your attention. The caller is the prince of an old world kingdom, contacting you by an untraceable means due of the conspiratorial nature of his proposal.
<br><br>
He explains that he is the younger of two princes, and is about to carry out a plan to poison his father and take the throne for himself. However, his older brother is standing in the way of his plan simply by virtue of being next in line for the throne. He sees selling his brother to you as a more humane method of disposing of him, not wanting to have to kill any more family than he has to. It doesn't hurt that he stands to make a lot of money either.
<br><br>
@@ -2467,7 +2467,7 @@ He explains that he is the younger of two princes, and is about to carry out a p
You receive so many messages, as a noted titan of the new Free Cities world, that $assistantName has to be quite draconian in culling them. _HeA lets only the most important through to you. One category of message that always gets through regardless of content, though, are lucrative deals with powerful individuals.
<br><br>
-This call is coming from a public kiosk, which is usually an indication that the person on the other end is a transient individual who has decided to take slavery over homelessness and not someone of high society. This call, as you would expect, is different. The moment the person on the other end introduces themselves you immediately recognize why your assistant brought this to your attention. The caller is the King of an Old World kingdom, contacting you by an untraceable means due of the conspiratorial nature of his proposal.
+This call is coming from a public kiosk, which is usually an indication that the person on the other end is a transient individual who has decided to take slavery over homelessness and not someone of high society. This call, as you would expect, is different. The moment the person on the other end introduces themselves you immediately recognize why your assistant brought this to your attention. The caller is the King of an old world kingdom, contacting you by an untraceable means due of the conspiratorial nature of his proposal.
<br><br>
He explains that his daughter, the princess, attempted to marry a man of improper station, and was deflowered by him. For this, $his would-be fiancé was executed and $he confined to a cell. Finding his daughter impossible to deal with after killing $his boyfriend, he's decided he'd rather just be rid of $him than have to continue carrying the shame of having such an unruly slut as a member of the royal family.
<br><br>
@@ -2477,7 +2477,7 @@ He explains that his daughter, the princess, attempted to marry a man of imprope
You receive so many messages, as a noted titan of the new Free Cities world, that $assistantName has to be quite draconian in culling them. _HeA lets only the most important through to you. One category of message that always gets through regardless of content, though, are lucrative deals with powerful individuals.
<br><br>
-This call is coming from a public kiosk, which is usually an indication that the person on the other end is a transient individual who has decided to take slavery over homelessness and not someone of high society. This call, as you would expect, is different. The moment the person on the other end introduces themselves you immediately recognize why your assistant brought this to your attention. The caller is the King of an Old World kingdom, contacting you by an untraceable means due of the conspiratorial nature of his proposal.
+This call is coming from a public kiosk, which is usually an indication that the person on the other end is a transient individual who has decided to take slavery over homelessness and not someone of high society. This call, as you would expect, is different. The moment the person on the other end introduces themselves you immediately recognize why your assistant brought this to your attention. The caller is the King of an old world kingdom, contacting you by an untraceable means due of the conspiratorial nature of his proposal.
<br><br>
He explains that one of his servant <<= $girl>>s was impregnated by his fool of a son, and that he wants to sell you the $girl and $his nosy coworkers to clean house and cover it up.
<<if $arcologies[0].FSrepopulationFocus != "unset">>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/reShowerPunishment.tw b/src/uncategorized/reShowerPunishment.tw
index dc2c62d39ce7eafc0dbf235f2d78ab7809dfc516..2753fa517ef23bb2575cda79fae1bf7a9aa6d797 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/reShowerPunishment.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/reShowerPunishment.tw
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ $activeSlave.slaveName is being very thorough. When you first appeared, $he was
<<link "Just spectate">>
<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
<<replace "#result">>
- You could strip off your suit, walk into the steam, and enjoy your slaves' ministrations, but sometimes the artistry of tastefully nude bodies is a welcome change of pace. You lean against the wall, far enough away that they remain unaware of your presence, and take in the sight. $HeadGirl.slaveName makes the penitent $girl do the job with Brahmanical thoroughness, cleaning $his superior's $HeadGirl.race body down to its very last pore. As $activeSlave.slaveName circles the Head Girl laboriously, doing $his best to ingratiate $himself by diligence, the pair of naked women present a fascinating contrast. They are unclothed alike, the water streaming off their bodies without any distinction, but even an Old World fool could not mistake the immense gulf between them.
+ You could strip off your suit, walk into the steam, and enjoy your slaves' ministrations, but sometimes the artistry of tastefully nude bodies is a welcome change of pace. You lean against the wall, far enough away that they remain unaware of your presence, and take in the sight. $HeadGirl.slaveName makes the penitent $girl do the job with Brahmanical thoroughness, cleaning $his superior's $HeadGirl.race body down to its very last pore. As $activeSlave.slaveName circles the Head Girl laboriously, doing $his best to ingratiate $himself by diligence, the pair of naked women present a fascinating contrast. They are unclothed alike, the water streaming off their bodies without any distinction, but even an old world fool could not mistake the immense gulf between them.
<br><br>
When $activeSlave.slaveName is finally done, $HeadGirl.slaveName's
<<if $HGSeverity > 0>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/reSlaveMarriage.tw b/src/uncategorized/reSlaveMarriage.tw
index a949b2b107de797e448591296540549e0f217ecf..99413870dd011a758940f80dafab37a9ae1ff838 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/reSlaveMarriage.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/reSlaveMarriage.tw
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@
<span id="result">
<<link "Of course">>
<<replace "#result">>
- You inquire as to whether they understand the Free Cities slave marriage ceremony, and they nod, not trusting themselves to do anything more. You give them a few minutes to get dressed in special outfits you make available. When they come back, they're wearing lacy lingerie designed to resemble Old World wedding dresses, but without concealing anything.
+ You inquire as to whether they understand the Free Cities slave marriage ceremony, and they nod, not trusting themselves to do anything more. You give them a few minutes to get dressed in special outfits you make available. When they come back, they're wearing lacy lingerie designed to resemble old world wedding dresses, but without concealing anything.
<br><br>
<<if ($groomSlave.vagina == 0)>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/remFluctuations.tw b/src/uncategorized/remFluctuations.tw
index 1f66c6956934210fcb92883f219524f4284d54dd..966e53f426825d8b1de41ab0936b96f5993514f5 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/remFluctuations.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/remFluctuations.tw
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ Your <<if $marketAssistantAnnounced>>market<<else>>personal<</if>> assistant's s
/* The events reducing slave prices are all supply sided. Without events reducing demand this is a little unbalanced. A minor issue */
<<if $REM == "revel">>
- Something is happening in one of the Free Cities' richest arcologies. It's not clear what, exactly, it is, since its owner is making skillful use of the arcology's advanced surveillance and media systems to keep its internal affairs quite secret. The truth will get out eventually, and it's probably not going to do much for Old World opinions of the Free Cities. After all, cheap slaves go into that arcology at a prodigious rate, and they don't seem to ever come out again. The unexpected demand for slaves, any slaves, has produced a temporary tightening of the entire slave market. Projections suggest price increases of up to five percent. There will be no immediate impact on you or your slaves, but the coming weeks will be a great time to sell stock, and a bad time to buy. @@.yellow;The market price of slaves has increased.@@
+ Something is happening in one of the Free Cities' richest arcologies. It's not clear what, exactly, it is, since its owner is making skillful use of the arcology's advanced surveillance and media systems to keep its internal affairs quite secret. The truth will get out eventually, and it's probably not going to do much for old world opinions of the Free Cities. After all, cheap slaves go into that arcology at a prodigious rate, and they don't seem to ever come out again. The unexpected demand for slaves, any slaves, has produced a temporary tightening of the entire slave market. Projections suggest price increases of up to five percent. There will be no immediate impact on you or your slaves, but the coming weeks will be a great time to sell stock, and a bad time to buy. @@.yellow;The market price of slaves has increased.@@
<<set $menialDemandFactor += 12000>>
<<set $menialDemandFactor = Math.clamp($menialDemandFactor,-50000,50000)>>
<<set $slaveCostFactor = menialSlaveCost()/1000>>
@@ -92,12 +92,12 @@ Your <<if $marketAssistantAnnounced>>market<<else>>personal<</if>> assistant's s
<<set $menialSupplyFactor = Math.clamp($menialSupplyFactor,-50000,50000)>>
<<set $slaveCostFactor = menialSlaveCost()/1000>>
<<elseif $REM == "antislavery terrorism">>
- Antislavery activism in the Old World has grown to match the spread of slavery in the Free Cities. Unfortunately for the activists, they are confronted with a fundamental problem: the independence of the Free Cities. There is very little they can do without resorting to violence, and so, predictably, they often do. A major slave induction center in one of the more open Free Cities has just suffered a suicide bombing. The actual damage was slight, but a wave of increased import security is sweeping the Free Cities in reaction to the incident. Slave prices will be driven up by the cost of checking imported merchandise for explosive devices until the market adjusts. Projections suggest price increases of up to five percent. There will be no immediate impact on you or your slaves, but the coming weeks will be a great time to sell stock, and a bad time to buy. @@.yellow;The market price of slaves has increased.@@
+ Antislavery activism in the old world has grown to match the spread of slavery in the Free Cities. Unfortunately for the activists, they are confronted with a fundamental problem: the independence of the Free Cities. There is very little they can do without resorting to violence, and so, predictably, they often do. A major slave induction center in one of the more open Free Cities has just suffered a suicide bombing. The actual damage was slight, but a wave of increased import security is sweeping the Free Cities in reaction to the incident. Slave prices will be driven up by the cost of checking imported merchandise for explosive devices until the market adjusts. Projections suggest price increases of up to five percent. There will be no immediate impact on you or your slaves, but the coming weeks will be a great time to sell stock, and a bad time to buy. @@.yellow;The market price of slaves has increased.@@
<<set $menialSupplyFactor -= 12000>>
<<set $menialSupplyFactor = Math.clamp($menialSupplyFactor,-50000,50000)>>
<<set $slaveCostFactor = menialSlaveCost()/1000>>
<<elseif $REM == "new free city">>
- New Free Cities arise unpredictably. They require either carving out a slice of the Old World, emancipating it from whichever inattentive or corrupt country previously owned the land, or reclaiming new land from barren or uninhabitable areas, efforts which are often kept secret. The unpredictable happened today; the world has a new Free City. As usual, immigration rights are being offered cheaply to deserving persons. Many of the remaining rich and talented of the Old World are staking claims in the new city, and they'll be buying slaves when they get to their new home. It's a sellers' market out there; projections show the price of slaves rising as much as ten percent in the short term. There will be no immediate impact on you or your slaves, but the coming weeks will be a great time to sell stock, and a bad time to buy. @@.yellow;The market price of slaves has increased.@@
+ New Free Cities arise unpredictably. They require either carving out a slice of the old world, emancipating it from whichever inattentive or corrupt country previously owned the land, or reclaiming new land from barren or uninhabitable areas, efforts which are often kept secret. The unpredictable happened today; the world has a new Free City. As usual, immigration rights are being offered cheaply to deserving persons. Many of the remaining rich and talented of the old world are staking claims in the new city, and they'll be buying slaves when they get to their new home. It's a sellers' market out there; projections show the price of slaves rising as much as ten percent in the short term. There will be no immediate impact on you or your slaves, but the coming weeks will be a great time to sell stock, and a bad time to buy. @@.yellow;The market price of slaves has increased.@@
<<set $menialDemandFactor += 20000>>
<<set $menialDemandFactor = Math.clamp($menialDemandFactor,-50000,50000)>>
<<set $slaveCostFactor = menialSlaveCost()/1000>>
@@ -112,12 +112,12 @@ Your <<if $marketAssistantAnnounced>>market<<else>>personal<</if>> assistant's s
<<set $menialDemandFactor = Math.clamp($menialDemandFactor,-50000,50000)>>
<<set $slaveCostFactor = menialSlaveCost()/1000>>
<<elseif $REM == "bankruptcy">>
- The economy of the Free Cities is a rough-and-tumble place. The absence of Old World regulations and institutions, and the often gold-rush atmosphere of the new cities, lead to fortunes being made and lost overnight. Last night, one of the Free Cities' greatest fortunes was lost. A great slave trading house unexpectedly went bankrupt, and its huge stable of slaves are being sold at fire-sale prices. The unforeseen sell off is driving down the market price of slaves all across the Free Cities. Projections show a short-term price drop of up to five percent. There will be no immediate impact on you or your slaves, but the coming weeks will be a fine time to buy new stock, and a terrible time to sell. @@.yellow;The market price of slaves has dropped.@@
+ The economy of the Free Cities is a rough-and-tumble place. The absence of old world regulations and institutions, and the often gold-rush atmosphere of the new cities, lead to fortunes being made and lost overnight. Last night, one of the Free Cities' greatest fortunes was lost. A great slave trading house unexpectedly went bankrupt, and its huge stable of slaves are being sold at fire-sale prices. The unforeseen sell off is driving down the market price of slaves all across the Free Cities. Projections show a short-term price drop of up to five percent. There will be no immediate impact on you or your slaves, but the coming weeks will be a fine time to buy new stock, and a terrible time to sell. @@.yellow;The market price of slaves has dropped.@@
<<set $menialSupplyFactor += 12000>>
<<set $menialSupplyFactor = Math.clamp($menialSupplyFactor,-50000,50000)>>
<<set $slaveCostFactor = menialSlaveCost()/1000>>
<<elseif $REM == "refugee boat">>
- Periodic refugee crises sweep the Old World, and sometimes the human flotsam shaken loose from its moorings in the Old World is brought up on the shores of the Free Cities. This week, that was no metaphor. A floating Free City has been inundated by refugees in boats. Naturally, the boats have been discarded and the refugees enslaved. It is unclear whether they somehow did not know that this was their inevitable fate, or their lot in the Old World was so desperate that they were willing to accept it. Projections show a short-term slave price drop of up to five percent as the market digests the influx. There will be no immediate impact on you or your slaves, but the coming weeks will be a fine time to buy new stock, and a terrible time to sell. @@.yellow;The market price of slaves has dropped.@@
+ Periodic refugee crises sweep the old world, and sometimes the human flotsam shaken loose from its moorings in the old world is brought up on the shores of the Free Cities. This week, that was no metaphor. A floating Free City has been inundated by refugees in boats. Naturally, the boats have been discarded and the refugees enslaved. It is unclear whether they somehow did not know that this was their inevitable fate, or their lot in the old world was so desperate that they were willing to accept it. Projections show a short-term slave price drop of up to five percent as the market digests the influx. There will be no immediate impact on you or your slaves, but the coming weeks will be a fine time to buy new stock, and a terrible time to sell. @@.yellow;The market price of slaves has dropped.@@
<<set $menialSupplyFactor += 12000>>
<<set $menialSupplyFactor = Math.clamp($menialSupplyFactor,-50000,50000)>>
<<set $slaveCostFactor = menialSlaveCost()/1000>>
@@ -127,22 +127,22 @@ Your <<if $marketAssistantAnnounced>>market<<else>>personal<</if>> assistant's s
<<set $menialSupplyFactor = Math.clamp($menialSupplyFactor,-50000,50000)>>
<<set $slaveCostFactor = menialSlaveCost()/1000>>
<<elseif $REM == "war">>
- The Old World outside the Free Cities took another step towards its final decline today. A relatively prosperous third world city fell to a regional warlord, and it seems the remaining great powers lack either the money or the will to do anything about it. The victors seem to be following the standard procedure for modern conquerors. Anything valuable, they steal. Among the population, they recruit the willing, shoot the unwilling, and enslave everyone else. The slave markets are going to be glutted with new stock soon. Projections show a short-term price drop of up to ten percent. There will be no immediate impact on you or your slaves, but the coming weeks will be a fine time to buy new stock, and a terrible time to sell. @@.yellow;The market price of slaves has dropped.@@
+ The old world outside the Free Cities took another step towards its final decline today. A relatively prosperous third world city fell to a regional warlord, and it seems the remaining great powers lack either the money or the will to do anything about it. The victors seem to be following the standard procedure for modern conquerors. Anything valuable, they steal. Among the population, they recruit the willing, shoot the unwilling, and enslave everyone else. The slave markets are going to be glutted with new stock soon. Projections show a short-term price drop of up to ten percent. There will be no immediate impact on you or your slaves, but the coming weeks will be a fine time to buy new stock, and a terrible time to sell. @@.yellow;The market price of slaves has dropped.@@
<<set $menialSupplyFactor += 20000>>
<<set $menialSupplyFactor = Math.clamp($menialSupplyFactor,-50000,50000)>>
<<set $slaveCostFactor = menialSlaveCost()/1000>>
<<elseif $REM == "empty prisons">>
- A small, impoverished Old World country defaulted on its currency today. Its beleaguered government is taking every available step to raise funds. Among other things, it has sold every inmate in its prisons who would fetch a price worth the trouble of sale into Free Cities slavery. Though most of the influx is going to be of abominably low quality, the sudden addition of so much new meat is going to have a big impact on the slave economy. Projections show a short-term price drop of up to ten percent. There will be no immediate impact on you or your slaves, but the coming weeks will be a fine time to buy new stock, and a terrible time to sell. @@.yellow;The market price of slaves has dropped.@@
+ A small, impoverished old world country defaulted on its currency today. Its beleaguered government is taking every available step to raise funds. Among other things, it has sold every inmate in its prisons who would fetch a price worth the trouble of sale into Free Cities slavery. Though most of the influx is going to be of abominably low quality, the sudden addition of so much new meat is going to have a big impact on the slave economy. Projections show a short-term price drop of up to ten percent. There will be no immediate impact on you or your slaves, but the coming weeks will be a fine time to buy new stock, and a terrible time to sell. @@.yellow;The market price of slaves has dropped.@@
<<set $menialSupplyFactor += 20000>>
<<set $menialSupplyFactor = Math.clamp($menialSupplyFactor,-50000,50000)>>
<<set $slaveCostFactor = menialSlaveCost()/1000>>
<<elseif $REM == "unemployment">>
- A leading Old World nation has just suffered a major economic downturn. Old world nations suffer economic downturns all the time, of course, but to those with interests in the slave market, news like this can be very important. Slave market shocks from catastrophes get all the headlines, but a change that affects millions will often be more impactful. As unemployment in the Old World rises, the number of people faced with the choice between starvation and voluntary enslavement rises. Social safety nets just aren't what they used to be. Projections show a short-term slave price drop of up to ten percent due to the sharp increase in desperate people immigrating to the Free Cities for enslavement. There will be no immediate impact on you or your slaves, but the coming weeks will be a fine time to buy new stock, and a terrible time to sell. @@.yellow;The market price of slaves has dropped.@@
+ A leading old world nation has just suffered a major economic downturn. Old world nations suffer economic downturns all the time, of course, but to those with interests in the slave market, news like this can be very important. Slave market shocks from catastrophes get all the headlines, but a change that affects millions will often be more impactful. As unemployment in the old world rises, the number of people faced with the choice between starvation and voluntary enslavement rises. Social safety nets just aren't what they used to be. Projections show a short-term slave price drop of up to ten percent due to the sharp increase in desperate people immigrating to the Free Cities for enslavement. There will be no immediate impact on you or your slaves, but the coming weeks will be a fine time to buy new stock, and a terrible time to sell. @@.yellow;The market price of slaves has dropped.@@
<<set $menialSupplyFactor += 20000>>
<<set $menialSupplyFactor = Math.clamp($menialSupplyFactor,-50000,50000)>>
<<set $slaveCostFactor = menialSlaveCost()/1000>>
<<elseif $REM == "anti-slavery coup">>
- For months there were strong indications that an Old World nation was quietly taking steps towards legalizing slavery. The market began to anticipate a serious increase in the demand for slaves in earnest but this week a month of protests against the country's leaders ended in a violent coup. The new government, claiming to only follow the will of the people, has made several promises, including a very vocal rebuke of even the slightest possibility of legal slavery within their borders. The slave market was shocked to find the previous government to be so weak and even more shocked at how unwilling the new one is to accept the times we live in. The panicked market quickly adjusted to greatly lowered slave demand and projections show a short-term price drop of up to ten percent. There will be no immediate impact on you or your slaves, but the coming weeks will be a fine time to buy new stock, and a terrible time to sell. @@.yellow;The market price of slaves has dropped.@@
+ For months there were strong indications that an old world nation was quietly taking steps towards legalizing slavery. The market began to anticipate a serious increase in the demand for slaves in earnest but this week a month of protests against the country's leaders ended in a violent coup. The new government, claiming to only follow the will of the people, has made several promises, including a very vocal rebuke of even the slightest possibility of legal slavery within their borders. The slave market was shocked to find the previous government to be so weak and even more shocked at how unwilling the new one is to accept the times we live in. The panicked market quickly adjusted to greatly lowered slave demand and projections show a short-term price drop of up to ten percent. There will be no immediate impact on you or your slaves, but the coming weeks will be a fine time to buy new stock, and a terrible time to sell. @@.yellow;The market price of slaves has dropped.@@
<<set $menialDemandFactor -= 20000>>
<<set $menialDemandFactor = Math.clamp($menialDemandFactor, -50000, 50000)>>
<<set $slaveCostFactor = menialSlaveCost()/1000>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/remMerger.tw b/src/uncategorized/remMerger.tw
index 753e19061529116b0bfb23e5af5c0777761449f5..305d0ea30d8138509ab2afcbc6a7c23594c2f499 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/remMerger.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/remMerger.tw
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@
<<if _company1 == "slaves">>
a minor slaveholding company. A major deal with a troubled government just fell through, and they had depended on it going through to an unwise degree. They need to merge with a larger slaving concern immediately, but there's nothing at all wrong with their significant inventory of slaves.
<<elseif _company1 == "entrapment">>
- an Old World telemarketing firm. In an attempt to survive in the changing economy, it turned its focus towards convincing desperate, ignorant or stupid people from the Old World to accept voluntary enslavement, through a variety of entrapment procedures. It failed to make the transition successfully, but you could certainly continue its operations under your aegis.
+ an old world telemarketing firm. In an attempt to survive in the changing economy, it turned its focus towards convincing desperate, ignorant or stupid people from the old world to accept voluntary enslavement, through a variety of entrapment procedures. It failed to make the transition successfully, but you could certainly continue its operations under your aegis.
<<elseif _company1 == "training">>
a small slave training firm. Slave training is a notoriously difficult business, since the maturation times on the merchandise can be extremely long, and the improvement in price can be marginal if the training does not prove highly successful. There's nothing inherently wrong with the business, they've simply hit a cash flow bottleneck and need to merge with a cash-rich organization like yours.
<<elseif _company1 == "break">>
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@
<<elseif _company1 == "whore">>
a little brothel. With slave whores becoming the dominant force in sexual services the current madam lost her passion for the business. She's getting up there in age and has run a tight ship for many years so she deemed it the right time to bow out. All you need to do to add a new brothel location for your corporation is sign at the dotted line before anyone else has a chance to bite.
<<else>>
- a small medical clinic. Medical malpractice continues to be a major source of trouble for surgeons in the Old World. A plastic surgeon has just suffered defeat in a major legal case over implant ruptures. He's looking to make the transition to a more enlightened area, along with his inventory and staff.
+ a small medical clinic. Medical malpractice continues to be a major source of trouble for surgeons in the old world. A plastic surgeon has just suffered defeat in a major legal case over implant ruptures. He's looking to make the transition to a more enlightened area, along with his inventory and staff.
<</if>>
<br><br>
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ The second is
<<if _company2 == "slaves">>
a minor slaveholding company. A major deal with a troubled government just fell through, and they had depended on it going through to an unwise degree. They need to merge with a larger slaving concern immediately, but there's nothing at all wrong with their significant inventory of slaves.
<<elseif _company2 == "entrapment">>
- an Old World telemarketing firm. In an attempt to survive in the changing economy, it turned its focus towards convincing desperate, ignorant or stupid people from the Old World to accept voluntary enslavement, through a variety of entrapment procedures. It failed to make the transition successfully, but you could certainly continue its operations under your aegis.
+ an old world telemarketing firm. In an attempt to survive in the changing economy, it turned its focus towards convincing desperate, ignorant or stupid people from the old world to accept voluntary enslavement, through a variety of entrapment procedures. It failed to make the transition successfully, but you could certainly continue its operations under your aegis.
<<elseif _company2 == "training">>
a small slave training firm. Slave training is a notoriously difficult business, since the maturation times on the merchandise can be extremely long, and the improvement in price can be marginal if the training does not prove highly successful. There's nothing inherently wrong with the business, they've simply hit a cash flow bottleneck and need to merge with a cash-rich organization like yours.
<<elseif _company2 == "break">>
@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ The second is
<<elseif _company2 == "whore">>
a little brothel. With slave whores becoming the dominant force in sexual services the current madam lost her passion for the business. She's getting up there in age and has run a tight ship for many years so she deemed it the right time to bow out. All you need to do to add a new brothel location for your corporation is sign at the dotted line before anyone else has a chance to bite.
<<else>>
- a small medical clinic. Medical malpractice continues to be a major source of trouble for surgeons in the Old World. A plastic surgeon has just suffered defeat in a major legal case over implant ruptures. He's looking to make the transition to a more enlightened area, along with his inventory and staff.
+ a small medical clinic. Medical malpractice continues to be a major source of trouble for surgeons in the old world. A plastic surgeon has just suffered defeat in a major legal case over implant ruptures. He's looking to make the transition to a more enlightened area, along with his inventory and staff.
<</if>>
<</if>>
<br><br>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/resEndowment.tw b/src/uncategorized/resEndowment.tw
index a6b04cc9f4c8f6f51a8d29a509cce56936db0ffd..c27e591711d1c47e124e39c4277376f3ee016fa5 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/resEndowment.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/resEndowment.tw
@@ -156,7 +156,7 @@
<<elseif $RESEndowment == "TGA">>
<<link "Endow an advanced training center to produce fanatical loyalty">>
<<replace "#result">>
- You express general satisfaction with previous graduates, but point out that their mental conditioning is incomplete at best. The representative quickly hides his incredulous glee as you outline a basic plan for an advanced training center that would use refined versions of Old World mental conditioning techniques to produce total loyalty. The grateful school spreads @@.green;word of your generosity,@@ using you as an example of investment in the future of slaveowning.
+ You express general satisfaction with previous graduates, but point out that their mental conditioning is incomplete at best. The representative quickly hides his incredulous glee as you outline a basic plan for an advanced training center that would use refined versions of old world mental conditioning techniques to produce total loyalty. The grateful school spreads @@.green;word of your generosity,@@ using you as an example of investment in the future of slaveowning.
<<set $TGA.schoolUpgrade = 1>>
<<run cashX(-50000, "capEx")>>
<<run repX(7500, "event")>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/resMove.tw b/src/uncategorized/resMove.tw
index 173db0f95de0a10d8563be918e718f70a2f5d0f5..04d25bcf64b59dc353ca452576bf0fd4cdea1dd3 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/resMove.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/resMove.tw
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
and you have shown yourself to be our friend. Would you accept one of our communities in $arcologies[0].name? We'd like to ask for a significant reduction in rent from your standard rate, since we could bring significant benefits to you through our presence."
<</if>>
<br><br>
- You inquire about the Sister you helped, and she smiles. "She reached the age at which even the best Sister must serve us by being sold as a slave. Don't worry, though; I hear she is very happy. <<if random(1,3) == 1>>A powerful man from the Old World bought her, and they're engaged. I believe he means to free her.<<elseif random(1,2) == 1>>A powerful woman from the Old World bought her, and they're engaged. I believe she means to free her.<<else>>Though she's a slave, she's become something of a celebrity in the Old World. I believe her porn is quite popular there.<</if>>"
+ You inquire about the Sister you helped, and she smiles. "She reached the age at which even the best Sister must serve us by being sold as a slave. Don't worry, though; I hear she is very happy. <<if random(1,3) == 1>>A powerful man from the old world bought her, and they're engaged. I believe he means to free her.<<elseif random(1,2) == 1>>A powerful woman from the old world bought her, and they're engaged. I believe she means to free her.<<else>>Though she's a slave, she's become something of a celebrity in the old world. I believe her porn is quite popular there.<</if>>"
<</if>>
<br><br>
<<if $assistantName == "your personal assistant">>Your personal assistant<<else>>$assistantName<</if>> performed a business analysis of the proposal during the call,
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/saLongTermEffects.tw b/src/uncategorized/saLongTermEffects.tw
index aa92554998e3c098fb714400304fca0f26fe2c49..4db67ce2c4c61d4bf3cf485c4668ab4e9cce93ec 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/saLongTermEffects.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/saLongTermEffects.tw
@@ -728,7 +728,7 @@
<<if ($slaves[$i].behavioralFlaw == "devout") && ($arcologies[0].FSChattelReligionist != "unset")>>
<<if ($slaves[$i].devotion <= 20)>>
<<if ($slaves[$i].trust < -20)>>
- $He is inwardly @@.gold;terrified@@ by living in what $he sees as a powerful theocratic society inimical to $his Old World faith.
+ $He is inwardly @@.gold;terrified@@ by living in what $he sees as a powerful theocratic society inimical to $his old world faith.
<<set $slaves[$i].trust -= 1*Math.trunc($arcologies[0].FSChattelReligionist/25)>>
<<else>>
$He is filled with @@.mediumorchid;hatred and disgust@@ by Chattel Religionism, which $he believes to be heretical and wrong.
@@ -739,7 +739,7 @@
$He is experiencing considerable spiritual anguish as $he is torn between obedience and conviction that Chattel Religionism is heretical and wrong. This @@.gold;hinders $his acceptance of $his place@@ in slave society.
<<set $slaves[$i].trust -= 1*Math.trunc($arcologies[0].FSChattelReligionist/25)>>
<<else>>
- $He is badly torn between Chattel Religionism and $his Old World faith, but $he is doing $his best to defer these spiritual issues for now.
+ $He is badly torn between Chattel Religionism and $his old world faith, but $he is doing $his best to defer these spiritual issues for now.
<</if>>
<<else>>
$He has experienced a religious epiphany, and now accepts Chattel Religionism in $his mind, $his heart, and $his <<if $slaves[$i].vagina > -1>>womanhood<<else>>anus<</if>>. @@.green;$He has become sinful,@@ maliciously eager to transgress against the faith $he has abandoned.
@@ -5811,9 +5811,9 @@
<<= FSChangePorn("ChattelReligionist", 2)>>
<</if>>
<<if ($slaves[$i].behavioralFlaw == "devout")>>
- Society does not disapprove of $his devout adherence to an Old World faith, having confidence that you'll bring $him around, and looking forward to seeing $him converted into a holy sex object.
+ Society does not disapprove of $his devout adherence to an old world faith, having confidence that you'll bring $him around, and looking forward to seeing $him converted into a holy sex object.
<<elseif ($slaves[$i].behavioralQuirk == "sinful")>>
- Society @@.green;strongly approves@@ of $his eagerness to transgress against the Old World religious mores $he once held dear.
+ Society @@.green;strongly approves@@ of $his eagerness to transgress against the old world religious mores $he once held dear.
<<= FSChangePorn("ChattelReligionist", 2)>>
<</if>>
<<if $slaves[$i].shouldersTat == "sacrilege" && $slaves[$i].lipsTat == "sacrilege" && $slaves[$i].boobsTat == "sacrilege" && $slaves[$i].armsTat == "sacrilege" && $slaves[$i].backTat == "sacrilege" && $slaves[$i].stampTat == "sacrilege" && $slaves[$i].buttTat == "sacrilege" && $slaves[$i].vaginaTat == "sacrilege" && $slaves[$i].dickTat == "sacrilege" && $slaves[$i].anusTat == "sacrilege" && $slaves[$i].legsTat == "sacrilege" && $slaves[$i].fuckdoll == 0>>
@@ -7385,7 +7385,7 @@
<<if canWalk($slaves[$i])>>
$His _belly belly is troublesome for $him. Every step is a slow, ponderous one and $he has to be careful not to collide with anything.
<<if $slaves[$i].sexualFlaw == "breeder" && $slaves[$i].preg > 0>>
- However, such inconveniences are nothing when you're more pregnant than any woman ever was in the Old World.
+ However, such inconveniences are nothing when you're more pregnant than any woman ever was in the old world.
<<elseif $slaves[$i].devotion <= 50>>
$His day to day life is @@.mediumorchid;miserable@@ as $he struggles to do the simplest of tasks.
<<set $slaves[$i].devotion -= 4>>
@@ -7435,7 +7435,7 @@
<<if canWalk($slaves[$i])>>
$His _belly belly is troublesome for $him. Every step is a slow, ponderous one and $he has to be careful not to collide with anything.
<<if $slaves[$i].sexualFlaw == "breeder" && $slaves[$i].preg > 0>>
- However, such inconveniences are nothing when you're more pregnant than any woman ever was in the Old World.
+ However, such inconveniences are nothing when you're more pregnant than any woman ever was in the old world.
<<elseif $slaves[$i].devotion <= 50>>
$His day to day life is @@.mediumorchid;miserable@@ as $he struggles to do the simplest of tasks.
<<set $slaves[$i].devotion -= 4>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/saRecruitGirls.tw b/src/uncategorized/saRecruitGirls.tw
index 997129bea2da1ad9c02dae93a8140075fe1b8d1f..f361a51ace0e2ba97d05cfe27eb3959e54b2a9a1 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/saRecruitGirls.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/saRecruitGirls.tw
@@ -253,7 +253,7 @@
<<set $recruiterProgress += random(0,1)>>
- uses your online resources and some @@.yellowgreen;modest funds@@ to convince $recruiterTarget from the Old World to immigrate for voluntary enslavement.
+ uses your online resources and some @@.yellowgreen;modest funds@@ to convince $recruiterTarget from the old world to immigrate for voluntary enslavement.
<<if $slaves[$i].devotion > 95>>
$His extreme devotion to you lends $him total cogency.
@@ -926,7 +926,7 @@
<<elseif $slaves[$i].intelligence+$slaves[$i].intelligenceImplant > 15>>
$His lecture on the new religious morality is thorough, and also devastatingly boring: all bullet point scriptures and little emotion that would sway unenlightened hearts.
<<elseif $slaves[$i].devotion > 95 || $slaves[$i].trust > 95>>
- Although $he wears $his faith in you on $his metaphorical sleeve, $he can't muster the intellectual arguments to counter the shrill voices of backward Old World religions.
+ Although $he wears $his faith in you on $his metaphorical sleeve, $he can't muster the intellectual arguments to counter the shrill voices of backward old world religions.
<<else>>
$He is hapless as a proselytizer for the new religious order because $his personal understanding and adherence remains inadequate.
<</if>>
@@ -971,7 +971,7 @@
<</if>>
<<if $slaves[$i].energy > 60 || $slaves[$i].sexualQuirk == "tease" || $slaves[$i].sexualQuirk == "perverted">>
<<if _recruiterRelation.energy > 60 || _recruiterRelation.sexualQuirk == "tease" || _recruiterRelation.sexualQuirk == "perverted">>
- $slaves[$i].slaveName and $his $relationType _recruiterRelation.slaveName collaborate on a series of short commercials walking and playing in your arcology's public spaces. A little hand on the ass here, a little lips almost touching there, and it's enough to tease your Ancient Egyptian sensibility about incest without running afoul of too many Old World censors.
+ $slaves[$i].slaveName and $his $relationType _recruiterRelation.slaveName collaborate on a series of short commercials walking and playing in your arcology's public spaces. A little hand on the ass here, a little lips almost touching there, and it's enough to tease your Ancient Egyptian sensibility about incest without running afoul of too many old world censors.
<<elseif $slaves[$i].relationshipTarget == _recruiterRelation.ID>>
Even though their incestuous relationship is not condemned here, $his $relationType _recruiterRelation.slaveName is too shy to act it out in front of the world.
<<else>>
@@ -995,7 +995,7 @@
<<else>>
<<if $slaves[$i].energy > 60 || $slaves[$i].sexualQuirk == "tease" || $slaves[$i].sexualQuirk == "perverted">>
<<if _recruiterRelation.energy > 60 || _recruiterRelation.sexualQuirk == "tease" || _recruiterRelation.sexualQuirk == "perverted">>
- $slaves[$i].slaveName and $his _recruiterRelation.relation _recruiterRelation.slaveName collaborate on a series of short commercials walking and playing in your arcology's public spaces. A little hand on the ass here, a little lips almost touching there, and it's enough to tease your Ancient Egyptian sensibility about incest without running afoul of too many Old World censors.
+ $slaves[$i].slaveName and $his _recruiterRelation.relation _recruiterRelation.slaveName collaborate on a series of short commercials walking and playing in your arcology's public spaces. A little hand on the ass here, a little lips almost touching there, and it's enough to tease your Ancient Egyptian sensibility about incest without running afoul of too many old world censors.
<<elseif $slaves[$i].relationshipTarget == _recruiterRelation.ID>>
Even though their incestuous relationship is not condemned here, $his _recruiterRelation.relation _recruiterRelation.slaveName is too shy to act it out in front of the world.
<<else>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/seIndependenceDay.tw b/src/uncategorized/seIndependenceDay.tw
index 63c80396ad463210ffb011227c02fa8801a642c9..b314e00284199f90d50240a7b11713f11cc92148 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/seIndependenceDay.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/seIndependenceDay.tw
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
Independence Day is this week.
<br><br>
-In the Free Cities, Independence Day falls on the day when the Free City achieved its de facto freedom from the laws of the Old World. In most of the Free Cities, including yours, this was an unspectacular event that involved a lot of signing of contracts and not much storming of bastions. Nevertheless, this is the anniversary of the day that this tiny patch of earth became truly free, and its inhabitants became free to exercise their dominion over the freedom of others. It will pass unnoticed and uncelebrated unless you take action to make it special.
+In the Free Cities, Independence Day falls on the day when the Free City achieved its de facto freedom from the laws of the old world. In most of the Free Cities, including yours, this was an unspectacular event that involved a lot of signing of contracts and not much storming of bastions. Nevertheless, this is the anniversary of the day that this tiny patch of earth became truly free, and its inhabitants became free to exercise their dominion over the freedom of others. It will pass unnoticed and uncelebrated unless you take action to make it special.
<br><br>
@@ -105,7 +105,7 @@ In the Free Cities, Independence Day falls on the day when the Free City achieve
<<if $daughtersVictory >= 1>>
You offer brief remembrance of those lost during the Daughters' attack on the arcology, and pledge that all enemies, foreign and domestic, will be similarly defeated.
<<elseif $invasionVictory >= 1>>
- You remind your citizens of the ongoing threat from the degenerating Old World, and pledge to defeat all attacks as you helped defeat the recent invasion.
+ You remind your citizens of the ongoing threat from the degenerating old world, and pledge to defeat all attacks as you helped defeat the recent invasion.
<<elseif $nationHate > 1>>
You express resolution in the face of threats to the arcology, and pledge that they will be dealt with efficiently.
<</if>>
@@ -135,9 +135,9 @@ In the Free Cities, Independence Day falls on the day when the Free City achieve
<<elseif $PC.career == "servant">>
You share a rather some of the highlights of your late master's life; the moral of the story is that you've seen how to lead from someone who was a leader... It didn't help your standing much.
<<elseif $PC.career == "celebrity">>
- You share a hilarious anecdote from your background as a celebrity, one which the Old World tabloids never did learn about, until now.
+ You share a hilarious anecdote from your background as a celebrity, one which the old world tabloids never did learn about, until now.
<<elseif $PC.career == "BlackHat">>
- You share a series of juicy details of some Old World politicians, driving home just how much you know.
+ You share a series of juicy details of some old world politicians, driving home just how much you know.
<<else>>
You cast yourself as one of the leading citizens of the Free Cities, from the beginning.
<</if>>
@@ -273,9 +273,9 @@ In the Free Cities, Independence Day falls on the day when the Free City achieve
<</if>>
<<elseif $arcologies[0].FSGenderFundamentalist != "unset">>
<<if $arcologies[0].FSGenderFundamentalist >= 90>>
- You review your arcology's refinement of Old World gender mores into a future populated by beautiful slave women with approval.
+ You review your arcology's refinement of old world gender mores into a future populated by beautiful slave women with approval.
<<elseif $arcologies[0].FSGenderFundamentalist >= 40>>
- You argue for continued progress towards a society that maintains all the best parts of Old World gender mores.
+ You argue for continued progress towards a society that maintains all the best parts of old world gender mores.
<</if>>
<</if>>
<<if $arcologies[0].FSPhysicalIdealist != "unset">>
@@ -325,7 +325,7 @@ In the Free Cities, Independence Day falls on the day when the Free City achieve
<span id="result2">
<br><<link "Pay for a lavish fireworks display">>
<<replace "#result2">>
- <br><br>Once darkness falls outside the arcology, a traditional fireworks display erupts from mortars mounted on your penthouse balconies. The noise and light @@.green;delights@@ your citizens, terrifies the arcology's stupider slaves, and serves a useful ancillary purpose in defense preparedness. The arcology's radar and laser sensors track the display, using it as an opportunity to calibrate the point defense systems on real targets. There is general agreement that this sort of thing should be a yearly tradition here, just like it was in some parts of the Old World: old ideas aren't all bad.
+ <br><br>Once darkness falls outside the arcology, a traditional fireworks display erupts from mortars mounted on your penthouse balconies. The noise and light @@.green;delights@@ your citizens, terrifies the arcology's stupider slaves, and serves a useful ancillary purpose in defense preparedness. The arcology's radar and laser sensors track the display, using it as an opportunity to calibrate the point defense systems on real targets. There is general agreement that this sort of thing should be a yearly tradition here, just like it was in some parts of the old world: old ideas aren't all bad.
<<run repX(5000, "event")>>
<<run cashX(forceNeg(Math.trunc(10000*$upgradeMultiplierTrade)), "event")>>
<</replace>>
@@ -377,7 +377,7 @@ In the Free Cities, Independence Day falls on the day when the Free City achieve
<<run repX(1250, "event")>>
<</if>>
<<if $SF.Squad.GiantRobot === 1>>
- Seeing a basic Old World rusted looking Giant Robot, doesn't provide your citizens with much assurance that they are protected.
+ Seeing a basic old world rusted looking Giant Robot, doesn't provide your citizens with much assurance that they are protected.
<<run repX(-200, "event")>>
<<else>>
Seeing that the Giant Robot has been fully upgraded provides your citizens with a feeling of safety.
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/seNicaeaAnnouncement.tw b/src/uncategorized/seNicaeaAnnouncement.tw
index ceddb7ad3d024a9f6f03cfe87c2caec82a8fa598..cc09f626fcf4034ddd247463f0ae43c486910043 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/seNicaeaAnnouncement.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/seNicaeaAnnouncement.tw
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
Religion is full of politics.
<br><br>
-The Chattel Religionist faith was always going to be a ferociously controversial thing. The Old World faiths it borrows from condemned it as sinful at best and heretical at worst, right from the start, and they've done their feeble best against it ever since. Secular Old World institutions regard it with a predictable mixture of disdain and fear. Lately, however, the young faith has started to suffer from another common malady of new religions for the first time: internal dissention. Just who is a Chattel Religionist? The faith has no governing body, no standard holy text, and no creed held in common. So far, any slaveowner has been able to define themselves as a Chattel Religionist by adopting some Old World religious tropes adapted to modern slavery, and by calling themselves a Chattel Religionist. That's it. This loose, welcoming basis has often been a strength. It appeals to many potential converts among Free Cities slaveowners, and it's been difficult to have internal disputes when there are no rules to fight over.
+The Chattel Religionist faith was always going to be a ferociously controversial thing. The old world faiths it borrows from condemned it as sinful at best and heretical at worst, right from the start, and they've done their feeble best against it ever since. Secular old world institutions regard it with a predictable mixture of disdain and fear. Lately, however, the young faith has started to suffer from another common malady of new religions for the first time: internal dissention. Just who is a Chattel Religionist? The faith has no governing body, no standard holy text, and no creed held in common. So far, any slaveowner has been able to define themselves as a Chattel Religionist by adopting some old world religious tropes adapted to modern slavery, and by calling themselves a Chattel Religionist. That's it. This loose, welcoming basis has often been a strength. It appeals to many potential converts among Free Cities slaveowners, and it's been difficult to have internal disputes when there are no rules to fight over.
<br><br>
Some prominent Chattel Religionists, however, are now arguing that Chattel Religionism can and should do more. You're conversing with one such advocate now, via video call. "Chattel Religionism could be truly great," <<if _advocate == "male">>he<<else>>she<</if>> argues vigorously. "It isn't now. We'll never accomplish anything without minimal unity and direction. There's too much play-acting and not enough evangelical fire." <<if _advocate == "male">>He<<else>>She<</if>> rotates the camera, letting you see the view
<<if _advocate == "male">>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/seNicaeaCouncil.tw b/src/uncategorized/seNicaeaCouncil.tw
index 4ce421d98f7d10c1f534bb28782853288c053959..54352e1d32b0c23f2e4be25495058a134ba114db 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/seNicaeaCouncil.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/seNicaeaCouncil.tw
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ First, it emphasizes
<<if $nicaeaFocus == "slaves">>
slaves throughout. The creed goes so far as to imply that slaveowners have a duty to slaves, which they fulfill by providing them the opportunity to enjoy the holy and pure state of being a sex slave.
<<else>>
- reverence for and obedience to slaveowners. This is not likely to have a great impact on slaves, but it affirms the total superiority of slaveowners and is likely to attract wealthy religious people from the Old World.
+ reverence for and obedience to slaveowners. This is not likely to have a great impact on slaves, but it affirms the total superiority of slaveowners and is likely to attract wealthy religious people from the old world.
<</if>>
<br><br>
Second, one of the ways it states that free people can make their devotions is to
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/seRaiding.tw b/src/uncategorized/seRaiding.tw
index 7fb51df1c46a4c45113480091027e132df9b66c1..c7f66a83d1a537b549e8856e0d3c4c5b2e54a88e 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/seRaiding.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/seRaiding.tw
@@ -567,43 +567,43 @@ target
<<setLocalPronouns $activeSlave>>
<<switch $origin>>
<<case "housewife">>
- is an idyllic mansion in the countryside of an Old World nation. It's owner is a businessman of some notoriety, but is often away from his expansive estate. A number of servants and maids are in residence, but the primary resident of the mansion is his wife. From the sound of things, $he is not a young $woman but attractive enough in a fake sort of way.
+ is an idyllic mansion in the countryside of an old world nation. It's owner is a businessman of some notoriety, but is often away from his expansive estate. A number of servants and maids are in residence, but the primary resident of the mansion is his wife. From the sound of things, $he is not a young $woman but attractive enough in a fake sort of way.
<<case "university student">>
- is the department offices of a still operational Old World university. The University prides itself on a diverse and capable faculty, often touting its wealth of female professors as a symbol of its progressive agenda. Though they are unlikely to be young, these professors will be educated and quite intelligent. The head of the department is no exception, a $woman of considerable academic credentials.
+ is the department offices of a still operational old world university. The University prides itself on a diverse and capable faculty, often touting its wealth of female professors as a symbol of its progressive agenda. Though they are unlikely to be young, these professors will be educated and quite intelligent. The head of the department is no exception, a $woman of considerable academic credentials.
<<case "university student">>
- is the residence dormitories of a still operational Old World university. The University prides itself on a diverse and inspired student body, often touting its wealth of female students as a symbol of its progressive agenda. Though they are young, these students will likely have benefited from their education and fairly intelligent. By all accounts the prettiest of them is no exception, a student with a shining academic record.
+ is the residence dormitories of a still operational old world university. The University prides itself on a diverse and inspired student body, often touting its wealth of female students as a symbol of its progressive agenda. Though they are young, these students will likely have benefited from their education and fairly intelligent. By all accounts the prettiest of them is no exception, a student with a shining academic record.
<<case "female military officer">>
- is a military officer currently traveling to the front of a fresh conflict between rival powers in the Old World. In an attempt to disguise $his high rank, $he is traveling with only a small escort of soldiers and is a prime target for enslavement. The officer is a graduate of a renowned Old World military college and no stranger to the battlefield, yet has retained $his femininity despite $his considerable achievements.
+ is a military officer currently traveling to the front of a fresh conflict between rival powers in the old world. In an attempt to disguise $his high rank, $he is traveling with only a small escort of soldiers and is a prime target for enslavement. The officer is a graduate of a renowned old world military college and no stranger to the battlefield, yet has retained $his femininity despite $his considerable achievements.
<<case "male military officer">>
- is a military officer currently traveling to the front of a fresh conflict between rival powers in the Old World. In an attempt to disguise $his high rank, $he is traveling with only a small escort of soldiers and is a prime target for enslavement. The officer is a graduate of a renowned Old World military college and no stranger to the battlefield.
+ is a military officer currently traveling to the front of a fresh conflict between rival powers in the old world. In an attempt to disguise $his high rank, $he is traveling with only a small escort of soldiers and is a prime target for enslavement. The officer is a graduate of a renowned old world military college and no stranger to the battlefield.
<<case "military soldier">>
- is the barracks of a local garrison in an Old World town. The majority of the town's young men have already been sent to the front of a new conflict, so the town has conscripted a number of young $women to fill the ranks of their garrison. Though the soldiers are likely to be untested, they have still received some measure of combat training. Their sergeant is the nominal leader of the group, though $he holds the position due to familial connections rather than any real military seniority.
+ is the barracks of a local garrison in an old world town. The majority of the town's young men have already been sent to the front of a new conflict, so the town has conscripted a number of young $women to fill the ranks of their garrison. Though the soldiers are likely to be untested, they have still received some measure of combat training. Their sergeant is the nominal leader of the group, though $he holds the position due to familial connections rather than any real military seniority.
<<case "doctor">>
- is a hospital located in an impoverished Old World City. Despite its crime ridden surroundings, the hospital possesses a sterling reputation as a result of its distinguished staff of veteran doctors and nurses. Chief among these medical professionals is a female doctor, an accomplished pioneer in $his field.
+ is a hospital located in an impoverished old world City. Despite its crime ridden surroundings, the hospital possesses a sterling reputation as a result of its distinguished staff of veteran doctors and nurses. Chief among these medical professionals is a female doctor, an accomplished pioneer in $his field.
<<case "nun">>
is a reclusive religious community in a mountain range between two current conflict zones. The members of the community have withdrawn from the collapsing social order of the world and established a commune in their mountain retreat, filling their days with peaceful reflection and prayer. Though the nuns have no true leader, one among them has emerged as the most pious of the sisters.
<<case "journalist">>
- is the offices of an esteemed Old World newspaper firm. The paper is known for its investigative journalism, particularly as one of the few firms willing to delve into the brave new world of the Free Cities. The rising star of the paper is undoubtedly a young journalist who has been an outspoken critic of slaveholding and other Free Cities traditions.
+ is the offices of an esteemed old world newspaper firm. The paper is known for its investigative journalism, particularly as one of the few firms willing to delve into the brave new world of the Free Cities. The rising star of the paper is undoubtedly a young journalist who has been an outspoken critic of slaveholding and other Free Cities traditions.
<<case "local news anchor">>
- is the recording studio of a sleepy Old World town's local news channel. The news channel itself is unremarkable, a quaint reminder of the tedious life of a small town, save for its news anchor. The anchor stands in stark contrast to $his fellow residents by the abundance of $his plastic surgery, likely an attempt to cling to youth lest $his coveted anchor position be snatched away by a younger $woman.
+ is the recording studio of a sleepy old world town's local news channel. The news channel itself is unremarkable, a quaint reminder of the tedious life of a small town, save for its news anchor. The anchor stands in stark contrast to $his fellow residents by the abundance of $his plastic surgery, likely an attempt to cling to youth lest $his coveted anchor position be snatched away by a younger $woman.
<<case "classical dancer">>
- is the performing arts theater at the heart of an aristocratic Old World city. The theater itself would usually not be considered a choice target, except that tonight its stage is graced by a renowned dance troupe. The jewel of the troupe's cast is a young $girl<<if $pedo_mode == 0>>, barely past $his majority,<</if>> whose performance has been said to bring tears to the eyes of audiences the world over.
+ is the performing arts theater at the heart of an aristocratic old world city. The theater itself would usually not be considered a choice target, except that tonight its stage is graced by a renowned dance troupe. The jewel of the troupe's cast is a young $girl<<if $pedo_mode == 0>>, barely past $his majority,<</if>> whose performance has been said to bring tears to the eyes of audiences the world over.
<<case "law enforcement officer">>
- is the precinct of a small Old World town's police department. The department is notoriously underfunded and unlikely to be particularly well staffed. Nonetheless, one of the officers is well known in the area for $his adherence to the letter of the law despite $his small town cop status.
+ is the precinct of a small old world town's police department. The department is notoriously underfunded and unlikely to be particularly well staffed. Nonetheless, one of the officers is well known in the area for $his adherence to the letter of the law despite $his small town cop status.
<<case "classical musician">>
- is the concert hall at the heart of an aristocratic Old World city. The concert hall itself would usually not be considered a choice target, except that tonight its stage is graced by a renowned orchestra. The pride of the orchestra's cast is a <<if $activeSlave.visualAge < 13>>little $girl<<elseif $activeSlave.visualAge <= 18>>teenager<<elseif $activeSlave.visualAge <= 24>>young $woman<<elseif $activeSlave.visualAge <= 32>>$woman<<else>>mature $woman<</if>>, whose skill with $his instrument has been known to move listeners to tears.
+ is the concert hall at the heart of an aristocratic old world city. The concert hall itself would usually not be considered a choice target, except that tonight its stage is graced by a renowned orchestra. The pride of the orchestra's cast is a <<if $activeSlave.visualAge < 13>>little $girl<<elseif $activeSlave.visualAge <= 18>>teenager<<elseif $activeSlave.visualAge <= 24>>young $woman<<elseif $activeSlave.visualAge <= 32>>$woman<<else>>mature $woman<</if>>, whose skill with $his instrument has been known to move listeners to tears.
<<case "politician">>
- is a campaign rally for the reelection of an Old World politician. Though the rally will be an extremely public affair, the benefits of capturing a prestigious politician could outweigh the risks.
+ is a campaign rally for the reelection of an old world politician. Though the rally will be an extremely public affair, the benefits of capturing a prestigious politician could outweigh the risks.
<<case "shut-in">>
is the shack of a notorious shut-in located just outside your arcology. Not a particularly distinguished target, but it would save your $mercenariesTitle considerable time and effort. The shut-in $himself has been a fixture of the landscape for <<if $activeSlave.visualAge < 13>>only a little while<<elseif $activeSlave.visualAge <= 18>>some time<<elseif $activeSlave.visualAge <= 32>>years<<else>>decades<</if>>, with many speculating that $he remains a virgin<<if $activeSlave.visualAge > 32>> despite $his mature age<</if>>.
<<case "procuress">>
is a halfway house for vulnerable $women operating in a nearby conflict zone. Far from being a wholesome institution, the proprietor of this halfway house is a notorious procuress who sells $his guests into slavery. Raiding the halfway house avoids the procuress' fees on a new shipment of slaves, with the procuress $himself as a tempting bonus.
<<case "investor">>
- is one of the last remaining business expositions still operating in the Old World. In years past, such expositions were often a showcase for innovation and corporate development but in recent years have become a sad spectacle of industry stagnation. This particular exposition's keynote speaker is a reputable investor with decades of experience, hoping to breathe new life into some valuable yet dying firms.
+ is one of the last remaining business expositions still operating in the old world. In years past, such expositions were often a showcase for innovation and corporate development but in recent years have become a sad spectacle of industry stagnation. This particular exposition's keynote speaker is a reputable investor with decades of experience, hoping to breathe new life into some valuable yet dying firms.
<<case "scientist">>
- is a research lab operating on the lawless fringe between the Old World and the Free Cities. Here, scientists push the boundaries of the known world without the burden of governmental oversight or moral restrictions. Their de facto leader is a fellow scientist, one of the first to leave the Old World behind in pursuit of knowledge.
+ is a research lab operating on the lawless fringe between the old world and the Free Cities. Here, scientists push the boundaries of the known world without the burden of governmental oversight or moral restrictions. Their de facto leader is a fellow scientist, one of the first to leave the old world behind in pursuit of knowledge.
<<case "lawyer">>
- is the offices of a law firm operating on the boundary between the Old World and the Free Cities. The lawyers within profit from the shaky legal channels between Old World nations and new Free Cities, largely drawing up contracts or facilitating the transfer of goods, services, and slaves. The sole senior partner of the firm is one of the pioneers of this new field of legal work, having been a staunch corporate advocate for much of $his life.
+ is the offices of a law firm operating on the boundary between the old world and the Free Cities. The lawyers within profit from the shaky legal channels between old world nations and new Free Cities, largely drawing up contracts or facilitating the transfer of goods, services, and slaves. The sole senior partner of the firm is one of the pioneers of this new field of legal work, having been a staunch corporate advocate for much of $his life.
<</switch>>
<<set $activeSlave.origin = "Your " + $mercenariesTitle + " caught her while raiding; she was a " + $origin + ".">>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/seRaidingAssault.tw b/src/uncategorized/seRaidingAssault.tw
index 74b052726da2c6447ecafd893724c01d92a6eba2..1321a0ee0957b23fbede46e9e69937e317372f82 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/seRaidingAssault.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/seRaidingAssault.tw
@@ -202,7 +202,7 @@ You make your selection and direct your $mercenariesTitle to attack the target.
<</if>>
<<case "lawyer">>
<<if $targetEscape >= _MercCapture>>
- It seems the lawyer had anticipated the possibility of conflict on the frontier on the outer rim of the Old World, so the $mercenariesTitle are able to do little more than enter the building before the law firm's offices seal themselves off. Faced with the prospect of lingering in a conflict zone, your $mercenariesTitle cut their losses and retreat back to their VTOLs.
+ It seems the lawyer had anticipated the possibility of conflict on the frontier on the outer rim of the old world, so the $mercenariesTitle are able to do little more than enter the building before the law firm's offices seal themselves off. Faced with the prospect of lingering in a conflict zone, your $mercenariesTitle cut their losses and retreat back to their VTOLs.
<<elseif _raidescape == 1>>
Your $mercenariesTitle capture the law firm's staff without much difficulty, but when they open the door to the lawyer's office they find $him frothing from the mouth and unresponsive. From the quantity of pill bottles evident on $his desk, it seems $he found the sole loophole to escape capture.
<<else>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/seRecruiterSuccess.tw b/src/uncategorized/seRecruiterSuccess.tw
index 1c769ca2c74b3200493b8bd751f58a078d3e0662..8e311b0d4789de03e17ea7bab3081f9bdb5a152f 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/seRecruiterSuccess.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/seRecruiterSuccess.tw
@@ -169,7 +169,7 @@
<<set $activeSlaveOneTimeMaxAge = 22>>
<<set $oneTimeDisableDisability = 1>>
<<include "Generate New Slave">>
-<<set $activeSlave.origin = "She submitted to enslavement to escape the hard life of an Old World whore.">>
+<<set $activeSlave.origin = "She submitted to enslavement to escape the hard life of an old world whore.">>
<<set $activeSlave.career = "a prostitute">>
<<set $activeSlave.devotion = random(-15,5)>>
<<set $activeSlave.trust = random(-10,10)>>
@@ -217,19 +217,19 @@
<<if $recruiterTarget == "young migrants">>
-Your recruiter $Recruiter.slaveName has succeeded; $he's convinced a starving young migrant from the Old World that _he2'll have a better chance at survival as one of your slaves.
+Your recruiter $Recruiter.slaveName has succeeded; $he's convinced a starving young migrant from the old world that _he2'll have a better chance at survival as one of your slaves.
<<elseif $recruiterTarget == "recent divorcees">>
-Your recruiter $Recruiter.slaveName has succeeded; $he's convinced a recent divorcee from the Old World that _he2'll have a better quality of life as one of your slaves.
+Your recruiter $Recruiter.slaveName has succeeded; $he's convinced a recent divorcee from the old world that _he2'll have a better quality of life as one of your slaves.
<<elseif $recruiterTarget == "reassignment candidates">>
-Your recruiter $Recruiter.slaveName has succeeded; $he's convinced an Old World person desperate for modern reassignment surgery that you'll provide it if _he2 agrees to be a sex slave after _he2's recreated as a female.
+Your recruiter $Recruiter.slaveName has succeeded; $he's convinced an old world person desperate for modern reassignment surgery that you'll provide it if _he2 agrees to be a sex slave after _he2's recreated as a female.
<<elseif $recruiterTarget == "dissolute sissies">>
-Your recruiter $Recruiter.slaveName has succeeded; $he's convinced an Old World sissy that _he2'd be better off as a slave in a society that is so totally sexually libertine as to accept as female and respectable anyone who takes cock.
+Your recruiter $Recruiter.slaveName has succeeded; $he's convinced an old world sissy that _he2'd be better off as a slave in a society that is so totally sexually libertine as to accept as female and respectable anyone who takes cock.
<<elseif $recruiterTarget == "expectant mothers">>
@@ -237,7 +237,7 @@ Your recruiter $Recruiter.slaveName has succeeded; $he's convinced an unhealthy
<<else>>
-Your recruiter $Recruiter.slaveName has succeeded; $he's convinced a desperate Old World whore that _he2'd be better off as a slave in $arcologies[0].name than as a free prostitute on the rough streets of a traditional city.
+Your recruiter $Recruiter.slaveName has succeeded; $he's convinced a desperate old world whore that _he2'd be better off as a slave in $arcologies[0].name than as a free prostitute on the rough streets of a traditional city.
<</if>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/shops.tw b/src/uncategorized/shops.tw
index b6c1f6b9b74f277fed01e7bc65e0ddf95583cc4a..bcb43990a14405762d2ca8c4b5edebc236d0bd06 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/shops.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/shops.tw
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ This is a section of the promenade
<span id="result"><<link "Shop there">><<replace "#result">>You decide to look in on the crane showroom, to see how citizens who don't own enough slaves to do the lifting and carrying are served. The huge-boobed slave sales<<= _girlU>>s show you a variety of wheeled cranes that can help support a slave's breasts if they get too big for _himU to walk, and _heU needs to go somewhere. You have other slaves to help with that, and mechanical assistance built into your penthouse, but not everyone does. The sales<<= _girlU>>s work in pairs, so one of them can unbutton _hisU tent-like blouse and demonstrate the merchandise with _hisU monstrous udders.<</replace>><</link>></span>
<<case "Pastoralist">>
dedicated to Pastoralism. Milking is mostly done elsewhere, so the establishments here are a curious mix of farm supply stores and eateries. You can sample all kinds of ice cream, shakes, smoothies, cheeses, butter, and other dairy products here, all made from creamy human milk drawn from a busty slave<<= _girlU>>'s breasts. <<if $seeDicks > 0>>There are also all kinds of slave beauty products and foods made from 'the other slave<<= _girlU>> milk,' cum.<</if>>
- <span id="result"><<link "Tour the kitchens">><<replace "#result">>The eateries are very eager to have you seen inspecting their equipment and methods, and roll out the red carpet for you as they show you around. All kinds of Old World culinary skill is on display here: artisan cheesemaking, butter hand-churned by muscular slaves, sweet custards and delicate flans that could compete in any dessert contest in the world. It's all so very refined and normal that it's quite easy to forget completely that the milk that is the basis of all this food comes from slaves.<</replace>><</link>></span>
+ <span id="result"><<link "Tour the kitchens">><<replace "#result">>The eateries are very eager to have you seen inspecting their equipment and methods, and roll out the red carpet for you as they show you around. All kinds of old world culinary skill is on display here: artisan cheesemaking, butter hand-churned by muscular slaves, sweet custards and delicate flans that could compete in any dessert contest in the world. It's all so very refined and normal that it's quite easy to forget completely that the milk that is the basis of all this food comes from slaves.<</replace>><</link>></span>
<<case "Physical Idealist">>
dedicated to Physical Idealism. There are supplement shops and workout equipment stores here, but they're small and packed into the spaces between all the gyms. These are some of the best patronized gyms in the world, because not only do physical idealists work out, there's a strong inclination to work out in public.
<span id="result"><<link "Leg day">><<replace "#result">>It's all very positive, and the one unspoken rule is not to disparage others, but there's definitely competition. So when you step forward and get a complimentary day pass from one of the bubbly, permed slave<<= _girlU>> receptionists, you have an audience. What kind of definition you've got in your quads is going to be a subject of conversation today, but you've got confidence. You lift, and receive respectful complements and bro-fists. Then you take your turn spotting others, an honor your citizens greatly appreciate.<</replace>><</link>></span>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/slaveMarkets.tw b/src/uncategorized/slaveMarkets.tw
index 927d15cf8dda2a0646f6a99c2f315e35677d186e..27f194b12bd43ce6f039e538d0835cde3af35eed 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/slaveMarkets.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/slaveMarkets.tw
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ You visit the slave markets off the arcology plaza. It's always preferable to ex
<<GenerateMarketSlave "wetware">>
<<case "kidnappers">>
- You're in the area of the slave market populated by slave kidnappers, though of course they prefer more polite titles. The slaves here are cheap, and they look it. They're almost all recent catches from bad parts of the Old World, and most of them have seen considerable abuse between the moment of their capture and entering your arcology.
+ You're in the area of the slave market populated by slave kidnappers, though of course they prefer more polite titles. The slaves here are cheap, and they look it. They're almost all recent catches from bad parts of the old world, and most of them have seen considerable abuse between the moment of their capture and entering your arcology.
<<if $arcologies[0].FSPaternalistSMR == 1>>
Fortunately for them, such behavior is not permitted here. Though they remain frightened and angry, they are safe from rape, for now.
<<else>>
@@ -127,7 +127,7 @@ You visit the slave markets off the arcology plaza. It's always preferable to ex
<<case "raiders">>
- You're in the area of the slave market populated by girl raiders, that daredevil subset of slave kidnappers that specifically target Old World schools, preparatory institutions, religious groups, and other sources of slaves that can soon be sold right after they reach their majorities. The extreme risk of these raids makes the slavers here aggressive and confident,
+ You're in the area of the slave market populated by girl raiders, that daredevil subset of slave kidnappers that specifically target old world schools, preparatory institutions, religious groups, and other sources of slaves that can soon be sold right after they reach their majorities. The extreme risk of these raids makes the slavers here aggressive and confident,
<<if $arcologies[0].FSPaternalistSMR == 1>>
though they do obey the rules of your arcology that restrain them from abusing the girls.
<<else>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/slaveSold.tw b/src/uncategorized/slaveSold.tw
index 78df9e21550c2c0c158b129cca097506ba277c88..bc1ecb2f7cefb5f611667c05a2f02ce49afaae66 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/slaveSold.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/slaveSold.tw
@@ -1157,7 +1157,7 @@
<</switch>>
<</if>>
<<if $peacekeepers.attitude+Math.ceil($slaveCost/10000) < 100>>
- $His presence will influence General $peacekeepers.generalName's troops in favor of a closer relationship with the Free City; Old World mores are difficult to maintain while inside an arcology-trained sex slave.
+ $His presence will influence General $peacekeepers.generalName's troops in favor of a closer relationship with the Free City; old world mores are difficult to maintain while inside an arcology-trained sex slave.
<<set $peacekeepers.attitude += Math.ceil($slaveCost/10000)>>
<<elseif $peacekeepers.attitude < 100>>
With $activeSlave.slaveName added to their stable of sex slaves, General $peacekeepers.generalName's troops will be fully converted to the idea of aligning with the slaveowning Free Cities, and the general will no longer have to maintain even plausible deniability. @@.yellow;General $peacekeepers.generalName's little empire is now effectively a client state of $arcologies[0].name.@@
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/stClaverPreparatory.tw b/src/uncategorized/stClaverPreparatory.tw
index 27b604763acd3b87cce38ea7f48d6e1aaa43051a..60af457651ac64016fc1058399f96254081be721 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/stClaverPreparatory.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/stClaverPreparatory.tw
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
<<set $nextButton = "Continue", $nextLink = "Bulk Slave Intro", $slaveMarket = "SCP", $returnTo = "Main", $newSlaveIndex = 0>>
<</if>>
-//St. Claver Preparatory is an Old World preparatory school that was purchased by an Old World medical school adapting to the demand for plastic surgeons from the Free Cities. It functions as a standard slave school until its students near graduation. At that point they are paired with a budding plastic surgeon. Intensive, flawless, and of course successful surgical modification of the student is required to complete certification as a Free Cities plastic surgeon of the top rank. All St. Claver's graduates are modified to a single exacting standard. Meanwhile, the slave school is free to train its students for obedience and sexual conformity. <<if $SCP.schoolUpgrade != 0>><br><br>You have endowed <<if $SCP.schoolUpgrade == 1>>thorough use of mental suppressants that reliably produce total devotion at the price of total stupidity.<<else>>diversification of the school's approach into general slave training that produces graduates with basic skills.<</if>> As a major <<if $PC.title == 0>>benefactrix<<else>>benefactor<</if>> of the institution, you also receive a discount on them.<</if>>//
+//St. Claver Preparatory is an old world preparatory school that was purchased by an old world medical school adapting to the demand for plastic surgeons from the Free Cities. It functions as a standard slave school until its students near graduation. At that point they are paired with a budding plastic surgeon. Intensive, flawless, and of course successful surgical modification of the student is required to complete certification as a Free Cities plastic surgeon of the top rank. All St. Claver's graduates are modified to a single exacting standard. Meanwhile, the slave school is free to train its students for obedience and sexual conformity. <<if $SCP.schoolUpgrade != 0>><br><br>You have endowed <<if $SCP.schoolUpgrade == 1>>thorough use of mental suppressants that reliably produce total devotion at the price of total stupidity.<<else>>diversification of the school's approach into general slave training that produces graduates with basic skills.<</if>> As a major <<if $PC.title == 0>>benefactrix<<else>>benefactor<</if>> of the institution, you also receive a discount on them.<</if>>//
<br><br>St. Claver Preparatory offers a fresh graduate for inspection via video call. The interview takes place in a very obviously medical office, with medical supply robots wheeling past its glass walls and nurses hurrying to and fro.
diff --git a/src/utility/descriptionWidgets.tw b/src/utility/descriptionWidgets.tw
index 128c92edce35627b619cf0ecf0c9a377810b1dc7..bb34bda797a64c05b44a754d1f022939d16b1452 100644
--- a/src/utility/descriptionWidgets.tw
+++ b/src/utility/descriptionWidgets.tw
@@ -326,8 +326,8 @@
"She offered herself for voluntary enslavement after a lifetime as an outcast due to her sexual tendencies."
"She was sold to you as a way of disposing of an inconveniently pregnant young woman."
"She was raped and impregnated, then sold to you as a way of disposing of an inconveniently pregnant mother."
- "She was voluntarily enslaved after she decided that your paternalistic arcology was a better place for advancement than the Old World."
- "She was voluntarily enslaved after she decided that your paternalistic arcology was a better place to live than the Old World."
+ "She was voluntarily enslaved after she decided that your paternalistic arcology was a better place for advancement than the old world."
+ "She was voluntarily enslaved after she decided that your paternalistic arcology was a better place to live than the old world."
"She was sold to you by an anonymous person who wanted her to suffer."
"She was sold to you by an anonymous slave breaking group."
"She offered herself for voluntary enslavement to get to an arcology in which implants are uncommon, since she has a fear of surgery."
@@ -344,7 +344,7 @@
"She offered herself to you to escape enslavement in her homeland for being older and unmarried."
"She was voluntarily enslaved after she decided that your arcology was the best place for her to get the steroids that she'd allowed to define her life."
"She offered herself for enslavement out of religious conviction."
- "She was offered to you by a group of Chattel Religionists eager to be rid of her blasphemous Old World beliefs."
+ "She was offered to you by a group of Chattel Religionists eager to be rid of her blasphemous old world beliefs."
"She sold herself to you to escape those who condemned her lifestyle."
"She offered herself for enslavement in hope of being less dull."
"She sold herself to you in the hopes that her body would help keep humanity alive."