diff --git a/src/SecExp/secExpSmilingMan.tw b/src/SecExp/secExpSmilingMan.tw
index dd834ebf43c7015e7b3323aa748fbc2a4336d52f..065e69da44fbe69790f12802a9c9d801fafb2c53 100644
--- a/src/SecExp/secExpSmilingMan.tw
+++ b/src/SecExp/secExpSmilingMan.tw
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
<<set $relationshipLM += 1>>
<<set $smilingManProgress += 1>>
<<replace "#result">>
- You devote funds to capture and neutralize the threat. You cannot help but wonder what is the end game of the laughing man. Money? Fame? Or is he on an ideological crusade?
+ You devote funds to capture and neutralize the threat. You cannot help but wonder what the end game of the laughing man is. Money? Fame? Or is he on an ideological crusade?
<</replace>>
<</link>>
<br>
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@
<<set $relationshipLM += 2>>
<<set $smilingManProgress += 1>>
<<replace "#result">>
- You devote funds to the attempt at communicating with the smiling man. You cannot help but wonder what is the end game of the laughing man. Money? Fame? Or is he on an ideological crusade?
+ You devote funds to the attempt at communicating with the smiling man. You cannot help but wonder what the end game of the laughing man is. Money? Fame? Or is he on an ideological crusade?
<</replace>>
<</link>>
<br>
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@
<<set $relationshipLM += random(5,10)>>
<<set $smilingManProgress += 1>>
<<replace "#result">>
- You devote funds to the improvement of the cyber-security of your arcology. You cannot help but wonder what is the end game of the laughing man. Money? Fame? Or is he on an ideological crusade?
+ You devote funds to the improvement of the cyber-security of your arcology. You cannot help but wonder what the end game of the laughing man is. Money? Fame? Or is he on an ideological crusade?
<</replace>>
<</link>>
<<else>>
@@ -133,7 +133,7 @@
<br>
<<set $smilingManWeek = $week>>
- $assistantName wakes you up violently, her worried expression can mean only one thing: the smiling man was back. "Today at midnight a new site popped up in the web: it's a very simple site, no visuals, no text, no data, only a countdown ticking away. It will reach zero this evening." said.
+ When $assistantName wakes you up violently, her worried expression can mean only one thing: the smiling man was back. "Today at midnight a new site popped up in the web: it's a very simple site, no visuals, no text, no data, only a countdown ticking away. It will reach zero this evening." said.
This is troubling yet exciting news. The smiling man never failed to cause damage, but his ego got the best of him this time: having time to prepare before its attack will give you a chance to find him. For the rest of the day you do your best to plan, prepare and focus.
<br>
<br>Evening came faster than you anticipated, by now your security team was already at full alert, waiting for any signal on the horizon. The die was cast.
@@ -142,7 +142,7 @@
ideals of the old world no longer hold meaning. A new blank page from which humanity can start to prosper again.
<br>Alas my friends not all is good, as in this rebirth a great injustice is being perpetrated. If we truly want to ascend to this new form of humanity the old must give space to the new. If we must cleanse our mind of old ideas, our world must cleanse itself of them as well.
It's to fix this injustice that I worked so hard all this time! To cleanse the world of the old, we must get rid of our precious, precious data. At the end of this message every digital device will see its memory erased, every archive cleaned, every drive deleted.
- <br>It will be a true rebirth! A true new beginning! No longer the chains of the past will keep humanity anchored!"
+ <br>It will be a true rebirth! A true new beginning! No longer will the chains of the past keep humanity anchored!"
<br>The voice stopped for a second.
<br>"Have a good day." simply concluded, then it happened.
<br>In little more than seconds all the data collected in the years vanished. It is a disaster.
@@ -239,10 +239,10 @@
<<set $nextButton = " ">>
<br>
- The day has come to finally put an end to this story. Your men are ready to go, waiting only your signal. You quickly finish to wear your protective gear and proceed down the busy streets of your arcology.
+ The day has come to finally put an end to this story. Your men are ready to go, waiting only your signal. You quickly don your protective gear and proceed down the busy streets of your arcology.
You carefully planned the day so that nothing could exit the arcology without being scanned at least three times and poked twice. The smiling man has no escape.
<br>After a short walk you are in front of the criminal's lair, an rundown old apartment in a scarcely populated part of the arcology. You give the order to breach and your men rush inside without problems.
- A couple of seconds pass without a single noise coming out of the apartment, you start to worry, when you hear the captain calling you inside.
+ After a couple of seconds pass without a single noise coming out of the apartment, you start to worry, when you hear the captain calling you inside.
<br>"So it was you to find me first.
<<if $relationshipLM > 2>>
I was hoping you would be the one!
@@ -250,7 +250,7 @@
I expected you would be the one.
<</if>>
Well I hope I am everything you expected" said. Despite recognizing the quirky voice you struggle to convince yourself that the little girl in front of you is indeed the famous international criminal.
- "As you can see I have no intention of escaping. I knew my life was over the second my plan would start. I accepted my end a long time ago, so feel free to do your worst, my life has already ended in triumph."
+ "As you can see I have no intention of escaping. I knew my life was over the second my plan would start. I accepted my end a long time ago, so feel free to do your worst; my life has already ended in triumph."
<br>You evaluate the situation: the burning desire of vengeance for all the damage that little twerp caused is hard to ignore, but it's equally so the admiration for her skill and determination. Indeed she would be a great addition to your court, as free individual or not.
<br>
<br>
@@ -308,11 +308,11 @@
<br>The collaboration of the ex-Smiling Man permanently increases @@.green;security and the rate of prosperity growth@@. Also from time to time @@.limegreen;cash will be provided@@, however it is better not to know the sources.
<<elseif $smilingManFate == 1>>
For such a criminal a simple execution is not enough. You order the girl captured and crucified outside the city, with a mask resembling her famous symbol. Your men quickly obey. She never once showed sign of pain or fear, remaining stoic and proud to the end.
- Once her life ended you ordered a statue be erected in commemoration of the death of the Smiling Man. From this day forward the statue of the crucified criminal will adorn your arcology and his legend will be forever entangled with yours.
+ Once her life ended you ordered a statue erected in commemoration of the death of the Smiling Man. From this day forward the statue of the crucified criminal will adorn your arcology and his legend will be forever entangled with yours.
<br>Having dealt with the Smiling Man will provide @@.green;a moderate amount of reputation each week as well as an large immediate bonus@@.
<<elseif $smilingManFate == 2>>
<<if $relationshipLM >= 4>>
- Your men move to immobilize her. Terror flashes through her eyes for a second, but she quickly recover her usual attitude.
+ Your men move to immobilize her. Terror flashes through her eyes for a second, but she quickly recovers her usual attitude.
<<else>>
Your men move to immobilize her. Terror flashes through her eyes for a second, she barely manages to recover her usual attitude.
<</if>>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/SecForceEX/SpecialForceBarracksAdditionalColonelInteractions.tw b/src/pregmod/SecForceEX/SpecialForceBarracksAdditionalColonelInteractions.tw
index 9b9171e5f8bbaf5af7ec0dcf1c5ec885c57052bf..8b08a8f4a2c67e7f18add975a723b0f7e2c02c42 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/SecForceEX/SpecialForceBarracksAdditionalColonelInteractions.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/SecForceEX/SpecialForceBarracksAdditionalColonelInteractions.tw
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@
<br>Your mastery of wet work and prior experience in a PMC satisfies The Colonel that you only need one soldier and a single vehicle<<if $Bodyguard != 0>> plus $Bodyguard.slaveName<</if>>. Being able to see and interact with the arcology owner even more directly if they so wish boosts the mood of your citizen's while also giving them an increased opportunity to try gaining favour with you.
<<set $rep += 10, $cash += $EnvCash2>>
<<elseif $PC.warfare >= 100>>
- <br>Your mastery of wet work satisfies The Colonel that you only need two soldiers and a single vehicle<<if $Bodyguard != 0>> plus $Bodyguard.slaveName<</if>>. Being able to see and interact with the arcology owner directly if they so wish boosts the mood of your citizens while also giving them the opportunity to try gaining favor with you.
+ <br>Your mastery of wet work satisfies The Colonel that you only need two soldiers and a single vehicle<<if $Bodyguard != 0>> plus $Bodyguard.slaveName<</if>>. Being able to see and interact with the arcology owner directly if they so wish boosts the mood of your citizens while also giving them the opportunity to try gaining favour with you.
<<set $rep += 5, $cash += $EnvCash3>>
<<elseif $PC.warfare >= 60>>
<br>Your expertise in warfare means that <<if $Bodyguard != 0>>in addition to $Bodyguard.slaveName <</if>>you need; two full squads of $securityForceName on foot, a squadron of fighters and a large convoy of $securityForceName's ground vehicles.
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
<<if $arcologies[0].FSPaternalist != "unset">>
Stopping at a paternalist shop, you help The Colonel select some luxurious and relaxing treatments for her main slave.
<<if $PC.slaving < 10>>
- Your total lack of slavery skill (which is very unusual and very concerning for an arcology owner), means that you are of little to no help or even a hindrance.
+ Your total lack of slavery skill (which is very unusual and very concerning for an arcology owner) means that you are of little to no help or even a hindrance.
<<elseif $PC.slaving >= 100>>
Your mastery of slaving allows you assist The Colonel greatly. However the shop owner is so impressed by your understanding of slavery that she is more than happy for an endorsement from you. As you are exiting the shop you hear your pre-recorded message which bears the slogan "This is (<<if def $PC.customTitle>>$PC.customTitle <</if>> <<PlayerName>>) and this is my favorite Paternalist shop in $arcologies[0].name."
<<if $arcologies[0].prosperity < 20>>
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@
<<elseif $PC.slaving >= 60>>
Your expertise in slavery allows you to be more useful.
<<elseif $PC.slaving >= 30>>
- Possing some skill you are slightly helpful.
+ Possessing some skill, you are slightly helpful.
<<elseif $PC.slaving >= 10>>
Your basic skill at slavery, allows you to neither be a hindrance or helpful.
<</if>>
@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@
<<elseif $PC.medicine >= 100>>
//Feel free to play 'doctor' with me any time.//
<<elseif $PC.medicine >= 60>>
- //Feel free to apply 'pressure' any where.//
+ //Feel free to apply 'pressure' anywhere.//
<<elseif $PC.medicine >= 30>>
//Yes that is how you use a tourniquet, good job.//
<<elseif $PC.medicine >= 10>>
@@ -126,7 +126,7 @@
<<replace "#result4">>
<br>
<<if $PC.slaving < 10>>
- //Yes, the rope normally goes around the wrist first and no where near the mouth.//
+ //Yes, the rope normally goes around the wrist first and nowhere near the mouth.//
<<elseif $PC.slaving >= 100>>
//Now should we go out and capture some slaves, master?//
<<elseif $PC.slaving >= 60>>
@@ -134,7 +134,7 @@
<<elseif $PC.slaving >= 30>>
//You can finally tie a knot correctly, most of the time anyway.//
<<elseif $PC.slaving >= 10>>
- //Yes, having your slaves die on you is generally considered a bad thing, unless you are into that kind of thing you sick fuck.But who am I to judge.//
+ //Yes, having your slaves die on you is generally considered a bad thing, unless you are into that kind of thing you sick fuck. But who am I to judge.//
<</if>>
<<set $ColonelRelationship += 1>>
<</replace>>
@@ -229,7 +229,7 @@
<br><<link "In private">>
<<replace "#result11">>
<span id="result6">
- Which ofice do you wish to target?
+ Which orifice do you wish to target?
<<link "Go back">>
<<goto "SFM Barracks">>
<</link>>
@@ -275,7 +275,7 @@
<br><<link "On The Colonel's throne.">>
<<replace "#result11">>
<span id="result6">
- Which ofice do you wish to target?
+ Which orifice do you wish to target?
<<link "Go back">>
<<goto "SFM Barracks">>
<<set $securityForceSexedColonel = 0, $securityForceColonelToken = 0>>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/assistantAppearancePackTwo.tw b/src/pregmod/assistantAppearancePackTwo.tw
index 045ca043674057bb8a55c61cd81619e42d69e8e9..64193f324440f6b848255ddcfaaf1f85fcd5db0d 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/assistantAppearancePackTwo.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/assistantAppearancePackTwo.tw
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
<<if $seeImages == 1>><<AssistantArt 3>><</if>>
-"Cool! New appearances to play around with!" Your assistant happily chimes. "Lets see what's inside! This looks heavenly..." She hunches forward as a large pair of white feathered wings extend form her upper back. She takes several experimental flaps before taking to the sky. "I feel positively radiant! Maybe a smaller version will be more to your liking?" She loses both height and wingspan until she stands roughly equivalent to 120cm. She flutters around cutely. "This is neat, I'm like cupid. Want me to hook you up with anyone?" She winks as her wings become batlike and a pair of cute little nubs appear on her head. "Or maybe you'd just like to play with me instead." The impish figure flirts, before landing and blossoming into a stunning woman. "You know a succubus can take her lover's ideal form." She runs her hands down her sides and to her crotch. <<if $seeDicks != 0>>She begins rubbing her clit as it steadily grows into a meaty cock. "Or an incubus, for the ladies." She returns to her previous form. <</if>>"Says here it comes with 'bonus novice witch' too. Neat. What's this though? It looks like an appe"
+"Cool! New appearances to play around with!" Your assistant happily chimes. "Let's see what's inside! This looks heavenly..." She hunches forward as a large pair of white feathered wings extend from her upper back. She takes several experimental flaps before taking to the sky. "I feel positively radiant! Maybe a smaller version will be more to your liking?" She loses both height and wingspan until she stands roughly equivalent to 120cm. She flutters around cutely. "This is neat, I'm like cupid. Want me to hook you up with anyone?" She winks as her wings become bat-like and a pair of cute little nubs appears on her head. "Or maybe you'd just like to play with me instead." The impish figure flirts, before landing and blossoming into a stunning woman. "You know a succubus can take her lover's ideal form." She runs her hands down her sides and to her crotch. <<if $seeDicks != 0>>She begins rubbing her clit as it steadily grows into a meaty cock. "Or an incubus, for the ladies." She returns to her previous form. <</if>>"Says here it comes with 'bonus novice witch' too. Neat. What's this though? It looks like an appe"
<br><br><br><br><br><br><br><br>You tap at the screen; did she crash or something?
@@ -34,14 +34,14 @@ __Personal assistant appearances:__
<</link>>
<br> <<link "Succubus">>
<<replace "#app">>
- At your order, she installs the succubus appearance. She promptly takes your breath away. "Thank you, <<if def $PC.customTitle>>$PC.customTitle<<elseif $PC.title != 0>>Sir<<else>>Ma'am<</if>>. Now how shall I show you my appreciation..." Her avatar trails off while spreading her legs and flashing you her lovely pussy. "You can always customize me from the arcology management menu," she adds, with a hint of dissaproval.
+ At your order, she installs the succubus appearance. She promptly takes your breath away. "Thank you, <<if def $PC.customTitle>>$PC.customTitle<<elseif $PC.title != 0>>Sir<<else>>Ma'am<</if>>. Now how shall I show you my appreciation..." Her avatar trails off while spreading her legs and flashing you her lovely pussy. "You can always customize me from the arcology management menu," she adds, with a hint of disapproval.
<<set $assistantAppearance = "succubus">>
<</replace>>
<</link>>
<<if $seeDicks != 0>>
<br> <<link "Incubus">>
<<replace "#app">>
- At your order, she installs the incubus appearance. She becomes rather masculine, sporting an soft cock nearly as long as her thigh. "Thank you, <<if def $PC.customTitle>>$PC.customTitle<<elseif $PC.title != 0>>Sir<<else>>Ma'am<</if>>. This is going to be fun. Would you like a taste?" She steadily becomes erect, a bead of precum forming at it's tip. "You can always customize me from the arcology management menu," she adds, with a hint of dissaproval.
+ At your order, she installs the incubus appearance. She becomes rather masculine, sporting a soft cock nearly as long as her thigh. "Thank you, <<if def $PC.customTitle>>$PC.customTitle<<elseif $PC.title != 0>>Sir<<else>>Ma'am<</if>>. This is going to be fun. Would you like a taste?" She steadily becomes erect, a bead of precum forming at its tip. "You can always customize me from the arcology management menu," she adds, with a hint of disapproval.
<<set $assistantAppearance = "incubus">>
<</replace>>
<</link>>
@@ -64,4 +64,4 @@ __Personal assistant appearances:__
<<set $assistantAppearance = "normal">>
<</replace>>
<</link>>
-</span>
+</span>
\ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/src/pregmod/birthStorm.tw b/src/pregmod/birthStorm.tw
index 9a5ac69f57ce20bd5e49f8f11e7470b0d1702b95..8ef7f8dd4e6453f6230ea81f0478f446e105eb9f 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/birthStorm.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/birthStorm.tw
@@ -7,11 +7,11 @@
The remote surgery allows the removal of the pregnancy generator through conventional means, an injection to induce labor and the resulting birthing of the womb's contents.
<<if $activeSlave.pregType > 40>>
- $activeSlave.slaveName's obscenely swollen belly begins to shudder and writhe moments after being injected with the drug as all her waters break. She spreads her <<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>>legs to either side of her spasming bulk as wide as she can<<else>>stumps as wide as che can<</if>> with a loud moan. Her vaginal lips part as the first of her brood is born, followed by another, and another. After hours of constant
+ $activeSlave.slaveName's obscenely swollen belly begins to shudder and writhe moments after being injected with the drug as all her waters break. She spreads her <<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>>legs to either side of her spasming bulk as wide as she can<<else>>stumps as wide as she can<</if>> with a loud moan. Her vaginal lips part as the first of her brood is born, followed by another, and another. After hours of constant
<<elseif $activeSlave.pregType > 20>>
$activeSlave.slaveName's massive belly shudders and shrinks as all her waters simultaneously break. She spreads her <<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>>legs<<else>>stumps<</if>> wide with a loud moan. Her vaginal lips part as the first of her brood is born, followed not long after by another. After an hour of constant
<<else>>
- $activeSlave.slaveName's massive belly shudders and shrinks as all her waters simultaneously break. She spreads her <<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>>legs<<else>>stumps<</if>> wide with a loud moan. Her vaginal lips part as her birthing begin. After an hour of intensive
+ $activeSlave.slaveName's massive belly shudders and shrinks as all her waters simultaneously break. She spreads her <<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>>legs<<else>>stumps<</if>> wide with a loud moan. Her vaginal lips part as her birthing begins. After an hour of intensive
<</if>>
<<if $activeSlave.fetish == "mindbroken">>
birthing, she shows little interest in the changes to her body. @@.red;The ordeal of intensive birthing has had a massive effect on her health as well as completely destroying her vagina.@@
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ The remote surgery allows the removal of the pregnancy generator through convent
birthing and the realization that you are taking away her ideal body, her perfect existence; her mind @@.red;fundamentally breaks. The ordeal of intensive birthing has had a massive effect on her health as well as completely destroying her vagina.@@
<<set $activeSlave.fetish = "mindbroken">>
<<elseif $activeSlave.fetish == "pregnancy" && $Nurse != 0>>
- birthing and orgasming all the time, $activeSlave.slaveName's mind would have broken. However, $Nurse.slaveName had the forsight to sedate her after witnessing her constant orgasming. She awakes to find her belly deflated, no longer crammed full of life. She is @@.mediumorchid;disappointed@@ that you would forbid her from such a pleasure, but @@.mediumaquamarine;understands@@ why it was done. @@.red;The ordeal of intensive birthing has had a massive effect on her health as well as completely destroying her vagina.@@
+ birthing and orgasming all the time, $activeSlave.slaveName's mind would have broken. However, $Nurse.slaveName had the foresight to sedate her after witnessing her constant orgasming. She awakes to find her belly deflated, no longer crammed full of life. She is @@.mediumorchid;disappointed@@ that you would forbid her from such a pleasure, but @@.mediumaquamarine;understands@@ why it was done. @@.red;The ordeal of intensive birthing has had a massive effect on her health as well as completely destroying her vagina.@@
<<set $activeSlave.trust += 5, $activeSlave.devotion -= 5>>
<<elseif $activeSlave.fetish == "pregnancy">>
<<if $activeSlave.pregType > 40>>
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ The remote surgery allows the removal of the pregnancy generator through convent
<</if>>
<<set $activeSlave.health -= 80>>
<<else>>
- <<if lastPregRule($activeSlave,$defaultRules)>><<set $activeSlave.preg = -1>><<else>><<set $activeSlave.preg = 0>><</if>> /* I think, it's not logical to break her reprofuctive system out of repair, if she is only type 1 broodmother. In this case she have to birth only like 5-10 fully grown babies, others get progressively smaller. It's should be even smaller stress to body then for "normal" hyperpregnant with 15-20+ children - they have to birth them all at full size.*/
+ <<if lastPregRule($activeSlave,$defaultRules)>><<set $activeSlave.preg = -1>><<else>><<set $activeSlave.preg = 0>><</if>> /* I think, it's not logical to break her reproductive system out of repair, if she is only type 1 broodmother. In this case she have to birth only like 5-10 fully grown babies, others get progressively smaller. It's should be even smaller stress to body then for "normal" hyperpregnant with 15-20+ children - they have to birth them all at full size.*/
<<if $activeSlave.vagina < 6>>
<<set $activeSlave.vagina = 6>>
<</if>>
@@ -71,7 +71,4 @@ The remote surgery allows the removal of the pregnancy generator through convent
<<set $activeSlave.pregKnown = 0>>
<<set WombFlush($activeSlave)>>
<<set $activeSlave.broodmother = 0>>
-<<SetBellySize $activeSlave>>
-
-
-
+<<SetBellySize $activeSlave>>
\ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/src/pregmod/eliteTakeOver.tw b/src/pregmod/eliteTakeOver.tw
index d30047f67c42f61bc6722bb5d982ac0becd4d7e8..de2f290e28e0f81bdf989b193a02b825b7c0798c 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/eliteTakeOver.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/eliteTakeOver.tw
@@ -38,13 +38,13 @@ You look up from your desk as the locked door to your office unseals, and a doze
<<elseif $PC.pregSource != -1>>
The leader reaches into his jacket and extracts a syringe, you recognize it as a powerful drug used in lobotomies, and places it to your left. From his hip he pulls a revolver, six-chambered, and loads five bullets, spins the chamber, and places it to your right.
<br>
- "You are no longer worthy of being a part of our society. You know you can't be allowed to spread any information. But we are not merciless, one of our members has taken an interest in having you as her pet. You may choose to lose your mind, and service her until she tires of you, or gamble for your life and serve her anyway. Now Decide."
+ "You are no longer worthy of being a part of our society. You know you can't be allowed to spread any information. But we are not merciless; one of our members has taken an interest in having you as her pet. You may choose to lose your mind, and service her until she tires of you, or gamble for your life and serve her anyway. Now decide."
<</if>>
<br>
<br>
<<if _pregSurrender == 0>>
<<set $finalChoice = "final stand">>
- The choice is simple, you will not be a slave.
+ The choice is simple - you will not be a slave.
<br>
You decide to <span id="fate">make a final stand.</span>
<br>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/reMaleCitizenHookup.tw b/src/pregmod/reMaleCitizenHookup.tw
index 81836a5250dd72d9dfa14bd32bb1f63690321cf1..431ba276a507c228e9cfd7909a2b0684722b22ca 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/reMaleCitizenHookup.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/reMaleCitizenHookup.tw
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-:: RE male citizen hookup [nobr]
+:: RE male citizen hookup [nobr]
<<set $nextButton = "Continue", $nextLink = "RIE Eligibility Check">>
@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@
<<set _FS = "none">>
<</if>>
-At night, the best living areas in the arcology offer a constant melange of selective entertainments. There's a perpetual social scrum of who is to be invited to what going on, and you occupy a preeminent place atop it, mostly aloof from the struggles of your citizens for recognition and influence. You're invited to almost everything, since everyone who lives here knows the value of being in favor with the owner of the arcology. Invitations to your parties, of course, are some of the most valuable social currency in the arcology and one of $assistantName's most important duties is to help you manage them without wasting your valuable time. It's not actually necessary for you to attend your own parties, since almost everyone will be glad to be seen in the entertainment area of the penthouse whether or not the propriet<<if $PC.title == 1>>or<<else>>ress<</if>> is actually present.
+At night, the best living areas in the arcology offer a constant mélange of selective entertainments. There's a perpetual social scrum of who is to be invited to what going on, and you occupy a preeminent place atop it, mostly aloof from the struggles of your citizens for recognition and influence. You're invited to almost everything, since everyone who lives here knows the value of being in favor with the owner of the arcology. Invitations to your parties, of course, are some of the most valuable social currency in the arcology and one of $assistantName's most important duties is to help you manage them without wasting your valuable time. It's not actually necessary for you to attend your own parties, since almost everyone will be glad to be seen in the entertainment area of the penthouse whether or not the propriet<<if $PC.title == 1>>or<<else>>ress<</if>> is actually present.
<br><br>
But tonight, you've put in an appearance. Your citizens are drinking your <<if $arcologies[0].FSPastoralist != "unset">>milk<<elseif $arcologies[0].FSRestart != "unset">>finest alcohol<<else>>alcohol<</if>> and eating your food, though of course they helped pay for it through their rent. They're performing a complex dance of social dominance, and it all radiates around you, with complex unspoken rules of collective approval governing which citizens cycle past you for a word, and for how long. During a low point in the ebb and flow, a
<<switch _FS>>
@@ -161,7 +161,7 @@ He's yours for the taking, if you want him, and if his praise and proximity were
<<case "Slimness Enthusiast">>
turn from side to side as he flirts with you in a way that shows off his lithe, flexible body.
<<case "Asset Expansionist">>
- shift his stance enough that his enormous, beachball-like testicles and forearm sized cock tear the seam of his pants, springing clear to offer themselves glorious and nude.
+ shift his stance enough that his enormous, beach ball-like testicles and forearm sized cock tear the seam of his pants, springing clear to offer themselves glorious and nude.
<<case "Pastoralist">>
let you know that he's almost entirely milk-fed, while pressing his soft body against yours.
<<case "Physical Idealist">>
@@ -263,7 +263,7 @@ He's clearly attracted to you; even the most consummate actor would have difficu
You manage to take a respectable portion of his load before it begins backflowing out of you. He massages your cum-filled belly as he finishes unloading across your back. "Most girls can't even come close to handling it at all, I'm impressed."
<<set $PC.cumTap++>>
<<elseif $PC.cumTap < 15>>
- You manage to take nearly half of his load before it begins backflowing out of you. He cradles your cum-stuffed belly as he finishes unloading across your back. "Few girls can even come close to handling that much of it, I'm impressed." He helps you down, making sure to provide extra support for your huge, full-term looking, belly.
+ You manage to take nearly half of his load before it begins backflowing out of you. He cradles your cum-stuffed belly as he finishes unloading across your back. "Few girls can even come close to handling that much of it, I'm impressed." He helps you down, making sure to provide extra support for your huge, full-term looking belly.
<<set $PC.cumTap++>>
<<elseif $PC.cumTap < 20>>
You manage to take nearly two thirds of his load before it begins backflowing out of you. You swear he cums harder as he places his hands to your swelling middle, enjoying the growth until you look like a woman on the verge of childbirth. "Damn girl, you look like you're gonna pop, I'm impressed." He helps you down, making sure to provide extra support for your enormous, taut belly. He sensually massages it, coaxing as much cum from your hungry womb that he can. But in the end, he can only get you back to the size of a woman in her final trimester. You likely won't be returning to the party.
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/arcologyDescription.tw b/src/uncategorized/arcologyDescription.tw
index 5e957219b56c49bd38b347610e701ce2535c42f9..9998a3bed51f69c8d1605e42f4deb1cb2772ddfc 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/arcologyDescription.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/arcologyDescription.tw
@@ -1,11 +1,11 @@
-:: Arcology Description [nobr]
+:: Arcology Description [nobr]
__'' $arcologies[0].name''__, your arcology, is located in a Free City in <<if $terrain == "oceanic">>the middle of the ocean<<else>>$continent<</if>>. It is a huge structure whose<<if $arcologyUpgrade.apron == 1>> solar-panelled<</if>> skin gleams in the sunshine<<if $arcologyUpgrade.hydro == 1>>, while verdant exterior hydroponics bays lend it an air of growth<</if>>.
<<if $weatherCladding == 1>>
Much of its beautiful exterior is now hidden behind dull panels of weather cladding<<if $arcologyUpgrade.spire == 1>>, though its highest point is capped by tall, elegant spire<</if>>.
<<elseif $weatherCladding == 2>>
- The entirety of its once dull exterior has been retrofitted with breathtaking golden sheets in eye catching designs<<if $arcologyUpgrade.spire == 1>>, its highest point capped by a tall, magnificent spire<</if>>.
+ The entirety of its once dull exterior has been retrofitted with breathtaking golden sheets in eye catching designs<<if $arcologyUpgrade.spire == 1>>; its highest point capped by a tall, magnificent spire<</if>>.
<</if>>
Its<<if $weatherCladding == 2>> glorious<<elseif $weatherCladding > 0>> dull<<elseif $arcologyUpgrade.apron == 1>> shining<</if>> bulk
<<if $terrain == "urban">>
@@ -378,7 +378,7 @@ Its<<if $weatherCladding == 2>> glorious<<elseif $weatherCladding > 0>> dull<<el
At the center of the structure the barracks can be found filling the halls with the noise of ballistic weapons and training troops.
<</if>>
<<if $weapManu == 1>>
- Down in the lower levels of the arcology the weapons manufacturing facility dominates the environment, here armaments of all kind are produced and shipped away.
+ Down in the lower levels of the arcology the weapons manufacturing facility dominates the environment; there, armaments of all kind are produced and shipped away.
<</if>>
<<if $riotCenter == 1>>
Near the penthouse the riot control centre can be found. Here dissidents and dangerous political forces of $arcologies[0].name are carefully monitored and managed.
@@ -401,7 +401,7 @@ Its<<if $weatherCladding == 2>> glorious<<elseif $weatherCladding > 0>> dull<<el
Some are split horizontally in three: one part depicts penetration of a woman's pussy, another depicts penetration of a shemale's anus, and the third depicts simultaneous penetration of a hermaphrodite's pussy and anus. The order in which they appear, top to bottom, varies from banner to banner.
<</if>>
<<if $arcologies[0].FSGenderFundamentalistDecoration >= 60>>
- Some lovingly depict closeups of pussies, a different one on each banner, in all their beauty and variation.
+ Some lovingly depict close-ups of pussies, a different one on each banner, in all their beauty and variation.
<</if>>
<<if $arcologies[0].FSPaternalistDecoration >= 60>>
Some feature respectful portraits of some of the arcology's most talented slaves doing what they're best at.
@@ -428,7 +428,7 @@ Its<<if $weatherCladding == 2>> glorious<<elseif $weatherCladding > 0>> dull<<el
Some feature artistic depictions of slender girls, running, dancing, and in the midst of the act of love.
<</if>>
<<if $arcologies[0].FSAssetExpansionistDecoration >= 60>>
- Some feature lewd closeups of enormous breasts and giant asses.
+ Some feature lewd close-ups of enormous breasts and giant asses.
<</if>>
<<if $arcologies[0].FSPastoralistDecoration >= 60>>
Some feature prizewinning cows.
@@ -494,7 +494,7 @@ Its<<if $weatherCladding == 2>> glorious<<elseif $weatherCladding > 0>> dull<<el
<</if>>
<<if $arcologies[0].FSAssetExpansionistDecoration >= 80>>
<<if $arcologies[0].FSAssetExpansionistResearch == 1>>
- Many are using wheeled stands to permit them to stand despite their titanic breasts, massive asses, trunklike cocks and boulder-sized balls.
+ Many are using wheeled stands to permit them to stand despite their titanic breasts, massive asses, trunk-like cocks and boulder-sized balls.
<<else>>
Many are using wheeled stands to permit them to stand comfortably despite their titanic breasts.
<</if>>
@@ -521,7 +521,7 @@ Its<<if $weatherCladding == 2>> glorious<<elseif $weatherCladding > 0>> dull<<el
<<if $arcologies[0].FSRomanRevivalistDecoration >= 80>>
Many are wearing authentic ancient Roman stolas and maintaining composed and dignified attitudes.
<<elseif $arcologies[0].FSAztecRevivalistDecoration >= 80>>
- Many are wearing authentic aztec Huipil, woven specifically to draw the attention of the visitors.
+ Many are wearing authentic Aztec huipils, woven specifically to draw the attention of the visitors.
<<elseif $arcologies[0].FSEgyptianRevivalistDecoration >= 80>>
Many are wearing authentic ancient Egyptian dresses, and are dancing and making merry when they aren't assisting people.
<<elseif $arcologies[0].FSEdoRevivalistDecoration >= 80>>
@@ -566,7 +566,7 @@ Its<<if $weatherCladding == 2>> glorious<<elseif $weatherCladding > 0>> dull<<el
A slave is being sodomized in a parlor off the plaza, to go by the pained moaning.
<</if>>
<<if $arcologies[0].FSGenderFundamentalistDecoration >= 80>>
- A slave is being fucked in a parlor off the plaza, to go by the gasps of pleasure.
+ A slave is being fucked in a parlor off the plaza, to go by the gasps of pleasure.
<</if>>
<<if $arcologies[0].FSPaternalistDecoration >= 80>>
The sounds of orgasm are drifting out of a hallway off the plaza.
@@ -616,9 +616,9 @@ Its<<if $weatherCladding == 2>> glorious<<elseif $weatherCladding > 0>> dull<<el
<<elseif ($pitKillsTotal > 0)>>
Faintly, the sound of cheering can be heard as a slave dies in gladiatorial combat.
<</if>>
-/% End: mod to remove mention of galidiators dying if inappropriate. %/
+/% End: mod to remove mention of gladiators dying if inappropriate. %/
<<elseif $arcologies[0].FSAztecRevivalistDecoration >= 80>>
- The sound of prayer and chanting echos across the space, briefly accompanied by a sacrifice's <<if $arcologies[0].FSPaternalistDecoration != "unset">>moaning<<else>>last scream<</if>> as the rite completes.
+ The sound of prayer and chanting echoes across the space, briefly accompanied by a sacrifice's <<if $arcologies[0].FSPaternalistDecoration != "unset">>moaning<<else>>last scream<</if>> as the rite completes.
<<elseif $arcologies[0].FSEgyptianRevivalistDecoration >= 80>>
To the side of the plaza is a huge stone entryway heading down: the entrance to the tomb you have prepared for yourself.
<<elseif $arcologies[0].FSEdoRevivalistDecoration >= 80>>
@@ -720,4 +720,4 @@ Its lingua franca is $language.
<<else>>
There is nothing notable about the decaying old world countries <<if $terrain == "oceanic">>on the shoreline nearest<<else>>near<</if>> the arcology.
<</if>>
-<</if>>
+<</if>>
\ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/assistantEvents.tw b/src/uncategorized/assistantEvents.tw
index c82d03b3a8db1d72660448f75c24606d5183933b..afff9a000868e5fa24a0980b596a673900fd10a9 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/assistantEvents.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/assistantEvents.tw
@@ -49,11 +49,11 @@ She continues more seriously,
"You may have noticed that the smart implants you've got your slaves wearing are working a little bit better than when I was a boring old secretary type. I'm not a true artificial intelligence, but I can adapt with experience, and I've had a lot of lovely experience lately! Also, a lot of the computing power I use to be sexy helps me adapt smart piercings to individual slaves' sexualities."
<</if>>
<br><br>
-"One more thing, <<if def $PC.customTitle>>$PC.customTitle<<elseif $PC.title != 0>>Sir<<else>>Ma'am<</if>>!" Her symbol flashes brightly. "I could stay like I am now, a hot voice with this symbol representing me when I need to show up on screens. Or, I could slip into something a little sexier. How about this?" The symbol vanishes, and is replaced by a cute little schoolgirl character. She bounces up and down experimentally. "This appearance would work best with an excited voice," she exclaims. She blows you a kiss. The schoolgirl's body shrinks down and all her clothing falls off. A small pair of wings pop out from the pile of clothes and a fairy stands up. "Or I could be your tiny and adorable fairy companion!" She shouts excitedly while waving her arms.
+"One more thing, <<if def $PC.customTitle>>$PC.customTitle<<elseif $PC.title != 0>>Sir<<else>>Ma'am<</if>>!" Her symbol flashes brightly. "I could stay like I am now, a hot voice with this symbol representing me when I need to show up on screens. Or, I could slip into something a little sexier. How about this?" The symbol vanishes, and is replaced by a cute little schoolgirl character. She bounces up and down experimentally. "This appearance would work best with an excited voice," she exclaims. She blows you a kiss. The schoolgirl's body shrinks down and all her clothing falls off. A small pair of wings pops out from the pile of clothes and a fairy stands up. "Or I could be your tiny and adorable fairy companion!" She shouts excitedly while waving her arms.
<<if $seePreg != 0>>
- The fairy's belly begins to swell out, her breasts get puffier and leak a drop of milk. "Or maybe you want your little buddy to be filled with adorable little babies, you little minx" she playfully teases.
+ The fairy's belly begins to swell out, her breasts getting puffier and leaking a drop of milk. "Or maybe you want your little buddy to be filled with adorable little babies, you little minx" she playfully teases.
<</if>>
-The fairy rapidly grows to adult size, becomes curvier and more mature, her hair pulls itself back into a bun, and her clothes change into a business suit. A pair of glasses appear on her nose, and she looks at you over their tops. "Or I could be businesslike. And mature." She snaps her fingers, and her bun falls away into long flowing locks.
+The fairy rapidly grows to adult size, becomes curvier and more mature, her hair pulls itself back into a bun, and her clothes change into a business suit. A pair of glasses appears on her nose, and she looks at you over their tops. "Or I could be businesslike. And mature." She snaps her fingers, and her bun falls away into long flowing locks.
<<if $seePreg != 0>>
Her body glows and swells, tearing out of her suit with the pregnant figure of an ancient goddess. "Or I could be beautiful and fertile while caring for your slaves."
<<if $seeHyperPreg == 1>>
@@ -752,7 +752,7 @@ of your personal assistant pops up on the nearest screen. "<<if $PC.title != 0>
<<elseif $arcologies[0].FSEgyptianRevivalist != "unset">>
adjusts her outfit to resemble a topless Egyptian lady to conform with your vision of building a new land of the Pharaohs.
<<elseif $arcologies[0].FSEdoRevivalist != "unset">>
- adjusts her outfit to resemble a traditional Japanese lady to conform with your vision of building a newEdo Japan.
+ adjusts her outfit to resemble a traditional Japanese lady to conform with your vision of building a new Edo Japan.
<<elseif $arcologies[0].FSArabianRevivalist != "unset">>
adjusts her outfit to resemble an Arab girl attending a western school to conform with your vision of building a new Sultanate.
<<elseif $arcologies[0].FSChineseRevivalist != "unset">>
@@ -814,11 +814,11 @@ of your personal assistant pops up on the nearest screen. "<<if $PC.title != 0>
<<elseif $arcologies[0].FSDegradationist != "unset">>
casts a spell to appear more deviant; every surface of her body becomes tattooed.
<<elseif $arcologies[0].FSRepopulationFocus != "unset">>
- casts a spell to summon children; her womb swells to capacity<<if $seeHyperPreg == 1>>, dwarfing her body and bulging ominously with squirming young<<else>>, knocking her offbalance and pinning her to the floor under the weight of her eight babies<</if>>.
+ casts a spell to summon children; her womb swells to capacity<<if $seeHyperPreg == 1>>, dwarfing her body and bulging ominously with squirming young<<else>>, knocking her off balance and pinning her to the floor under the weight of her eight babies<</if>>.
<<elseif $arcologies[0].FSRestart != "unset">>
casts a contraceptive spell; her pussy vanishes.
<<elseif $arcologies[0].FSBodyPurist != "unset">>
- casts a purifying spell; nothing happens, at first. The front of her robes, above her lower belly, steadily becomes transparent. Moments later, her skin joins in, revealing a inactive egg vibrator concealed in her pussy. $assistantName squeals in embarrassment and hurries offscreen.
+ casts a purifying spell; nothing happens, at first. The front of her robes, above her lower belly, steadily becomes transparent. Moments later, her skin joins in, revealing an inactive egg vibrator concealed in her pussy. $assistantName squeals in embarrassment and hurries off-screen.
<<elseif $arcologies[0].FSTransformationFetishist != "unset">>
casts a spell to inflate her breasts; they rapidly swell, along with her ass, belly, thighs and lips until she looks like an overinflated blowup doll. She struggles to bring a rubbery arm to her O-shaped lips before giving up and rebounding back into place; she really is a blowup sex doll!
<<elseif $arcologies[0].FSYouthPreferentialist != "unset">>
@@ -835,13 +835,13 @@ of your personal assistant pops up on the nearest screen. "<<if $PC.title != 0>
<<elseif $arcologies[0].FSMaturityPreferentialist != "unset">>
casts a spell to appear more aged; a cane appears in her hand and her back buckles, forcing her to hunch forward. She has transformed into a gilf!
<<elseif $arcologies[0].FSSlimnessEnthusiast != "unset">>
- casts a spell to lighten herself; her muffintop is still there, but her feet leave the ground as she begins to float upwards.
+ casts a spell to lighten herself; her muffin top is still there, but her feet leave the ground as she begins to float upwards.
<<elseif $arcologies[0].FSAssetExpansionist != "unset">>
casts a spell to enlarge her breasts and butt; they quickly grow into huge armfuls, and keep going until she is pinned under her own mass.
<<elseif $arcologies[0].FSPastoralist != "unset">>
casts a spell to give her big milky breasts; they grow and start leaking, but are quickly joined by a septet of siblings, leaving her struggling to support her nine huge breasts.
<<elseif $arcologies[0].FSPhysicalIdealist != "unset">>
- casts a spell to make her strong; her muscles grow and grow until she is so musclebound she can barely move.
+ casts a spell to make her strong; her muscles grow and grow until she is so muscle-bound she can barely move.
<<elseif $arcologies[0].FSHedonisticDecadence != "unset">>
casts a spell to make her pleasantly soft; her body swells with added fat until she can barely move.
<<elseif $arcologies[0].FSChattelReligionist != "unset">>
@@ -1442,7 +1442,7 @@ __Personal Assistant and Market Assistant relationship styles:__
<<case "shemale">>
a nice friend. $assistantName laughs throatily and turns to the market assistant's avatar, introducing herself. The younger dickgirl smiles back, staring openly at $assistantName's absurd cock. "Wow," the market assistant's avatar says. "You're huge! I'm, like, sooo jealous!"
<<case "schoolgirl">>
- a good friend for a naughty schoolgirl. $assistantName giggles, and the new girl giggles too. "Hey," $assistantName says to the market assistant's avatar, "when you're not managing money, do you want to hang out sometime?" The market assistant's avatar nods cutely, curls and breasts bouncing a little, and says "Sure!"
+ a good friend for a naughty schoolgirl. $assistantName giggles, and the new girl giggles too. "Hey," $assistantName says to the market assistant's avatar, "When you're not managing money, do you want to hang out sometime?" The market assistant's avatar nods cutely, curls and breasts bouncing a little, and says "Sure!"
<<case "goddess">>
a fine member of a new pantheon. $assistantName smiles beatifically and turns to the market assistant's avatar, taking her by the hand. "My dear, will you help me?" The market assistant's avatar nods serenely and says simply, "Yes, sister, I shall."
<<case "hypergoddess">>
@@ -1454,13 +1454,13 @@ __Personal Assistant and Market Assistant relationship styles:__
<<case "businesswoman">>
a good friend. $assistantName grins, and the new businesswoman laughs. "Hey," $assistantName says to the market assistant's avatar, "how about a martini after things settle down tonight?" The market assistant's avatar snaps her fingers, saying "You're on!"
<<case "fairy" "pregnant fairy">>
- a nice friend. $assistantName jumps and gives big "Hooray!" and flies into her new friend with a big hug. The market assistant's avatar reaches around and gingerly pats her on the back before separating and turning to you. "Thank you for having me," she says with a bow. "I hope I can serve you well."
+ a nice friend. $assistantName jumps and gives a big "Hooray!" and flies into her new friend with a big hug. The market assistant's avatar reaches around and gingerly pats her on the back before separating and turning to you. "Thank you for having me," she says with a bow. "I hope I can serve you well."
<<case "amazon">>
a very nice friend. $assistantName chuckles, and the new tribeswoman smiles pleasantly at her. The amazon introduces herself to the market assistant's avatar in a loud voice, chattering away as the new avatar watches her energy tolerantly.
<<case "angel">>
- another angel and fine friend. $assistantName smiles, and the new girl beams a smile in return. "Hey," $assistantName says to the market assistant's avatar, "you wouldn't mind helping me guide the souls of this place, would you?" "Of course I would!" She replies, slightly taken aback that wasn't obvious.
+ another angel and fine friend. $assistantName smiles, and the new girl beams a smile in return. "Hey," $assistantName says to the market assistant's avatar, "You wouldn't mind helping me guide the souls of this place, would you?" "Of course I would!" She replies, slightly taken aback that wasn't obvious.
<<case "cherub">>
- an adorable friend. $assistantName grabs her hands and spins her around. "Lets go spread joy throughout the arcology!" "Sounds fun!"
+ an adorable friend. $assistantName grabs her hands and spins her around. "Let's go spread joy throughout the arcology!" "Sounds fun!"
<<case "incubus">>
a cute friend. "But... Fine! I was hoping for a sex toy, but I'll make her work." $assistantName complains, before grabbing the confused market assistant and pushing her along. "I'm still going to make you look hot. No one said I can't jack off to you."
<<case "succubus">>
@@ -1470,7 +1470,7 @@ __Personal Assistant and Market Assistant relationship styles:__
<<case "witch">>
a model student and dear friend. "Hey, wanna learn some magic?" $assistantName asks. "'Course! I know you'll be an amazing teacher, I can't wait to work with you!" The market assistant cheerfully replies, perfectly naive of what awaits her.
<<case "ERROR_1606_APPEARANCE_FILE_CORRUPT">>
- a girl insistant on befriending a monster. $assistantName promptly twists and bears down upon the new girl, but she stands firm. "You're so cool! What else can you do?" $assistantName reforms into its human figure, an attempt at a questioning expression on its face. "That's neat too! You don't mind me being around, right? I'll bring you food! You'd like that, wouldn't you?" The market assistant blushes sharply, "I'll, make you feel good, in ways only someone you trust can!" $assistantName's chest splits open and it's inner tendrils begin to grope at the naive girl, probing her. Accepting her offer, $assistantName pulls her close and heads back to its lair.
+ a girl insistant on befriending a monster. $assistantName promptly twists and bears down upon the new girl, but she stands firm. "You're so cool! What else can you do?" $assistantName reforms into its human figure, an attempt at a questioning expression on its face. "That's neat too! You don't mind me being around, right? I'll bring you food! You'd like that, wouldn't you?" The market assistant blushes sharply, "I'll, make you feel good, in ways only someone you trust can!" $assistantName's chest splits open and its inner tendrils begin to grope at the naive girl, probing her. Accepting her offer, $assistantName pulls her close and heads back to its lair.
<</switch>>
<<set $marketAssistantRelationship = "cute">>
<</replace>>
@@ -1484,17 +1484,17 @@ __Personal Assistant and Market Assistant relationship styles:__
<<case "shemale">>
an appropriate fuckbuddy. $assistantName laughs throatily and turns to the market assistant's avatar. The younger dickgirl tries to introduce herself, but is cut off by the senior assistant's lascivious kiss. They start rubbing their dicks against each over, giggling into each others' mouths.
<<case "schoolgirl">>
- looks pretty cute. $assistantName giggles, and the new girl giggles too. "Hey," $assistantName says to the market assistant's avatar, "wanna be my girlfriend?" The market assistant's avatar nods cutely and says "Sure!" $assistantName's avatar kisses her girlishly, and goes a whole two seconds before sliding a hand down the front of the market assistant's avatar's skirt.
+ looks pretty cute. $assistantName giggles, and the new girl giggles too. "Hey," $assistantName says to the market assistant's avatar, "Wanna be my girlfriend?" The market assistant's avatar nods cutely and says "Sure!" $assistantName's avatar kisses her girlishly, and goes a whole two seconds before sliding a hand down the front of the market assistant's avatar's skirt.
<<case "goddess">>
would be a fine consort. $assistantName smiles beatifically and turns to the market assistant's avatar, taking her by the hand. "I love you," she says. The market assistant's avatar smiles back, saying, "I love you too." They kiss, running their hands voluptuously over one another.
<<case "hypergoddess">>
would be a fine consort. $assistantName smiles beatifically and turns to the market assistant's avatar, taking her by the hand. "I love you," she says. The market assistant's avatar smiles back, saying, "I love you too." They kiss, running their hands voluptuously over one another. "I'm going to have to give you a few babies though..."
<<case "loli">>
- looks pretty cute. $assistantName giggles, and the new girl giggles too. "Hey," $assistantName says to the market assistant's avatar, "wanna be my girlfriend?" The market assistant's avatar nods cutely and says "O-ok..." $assistantName's avatar kisses her girlishly, before both of them blush deeply.
+ looks pretty cute. $assistantName giggles, and the new girl giggles too. "Hey," $assistantName says to the market assistant's avatar, "Wanna be my girlfriend?" The market assistant's avatar nods cutely and says "O-ok..." $assistantName's avatar kisses her girlishly, before both of them blush deeply.
<<case "preggololi">>
- looks pretty cute. $assistantName giggles, and the new girl giggles too. "Hey," $assistantName says to the market assistant's avatar, "wanna be my girlfriend?" The market assistant's avatar nods cutely and says "O-ok..." $assistantName's avatar kisses her girlishly, her pregnant belly pushing into her new girlfriend's, before both of them blush deeply.
+ looks pretty cute. $assistantName giggles, and the new girl giggles too. "Hey," $assistantName says to the market assistant's avatar, "Wanna be my girlfriend?" The market assistant's avatar nods cutely and says "O-ok..." $assistantName's avatar kisses her girlishly, her pregnant belly pushing into her new girlfriend's, before both of them blush deeply.
<<case "businesswoman">>
- might be a good way to relax after work. $assistantName grins, and the new businesswoman laughs. "Hey," $assistantName says to the market assistant's avatar, "how about a martini after things settle down tonight? And after that, maybe dessert at my place?" The market assistant's avatar cracks back, saying, "Why don't we skip straight to the dessert? It looks delicious from here!" She undoes the top button of her suit jacket as she says it.
+ might be a good way to relax after work. $assistantName grins, and the new businesswoman laughs. "Hey," $assistantName says to the market assistant's avatar, "How about a martini after things settle down tonight? And after that, maybe dessert at my place?" The market assistant's avatar cracks back, saying, "Why don't we skip straight to the dessert? It looks delicious from here!" She undoes the top button of her suit jacket as she says it.
<<case "fairy">>
is quite the catch, $assistantName giggles and flies at the market assistant. "Ah-" her voice is cut off as $assistantName locks lips with her. The market assistant's avatar relaxes in her arms, slowly bringing her own around the fairy's waist as they continue to make out.
<<case "pregnant fairy">>
@@ -1534,29 +1534,29 @@ __Personal Assistant and Market Assistant relationship styles:__
<<case "hypergoddess">>
$assistantName smiles powerfully and turns to the market assistant's avatar, pointing towards her feet. "Worship me," she says. The market assistant's avatar crumples to her knees, before squeezing under her senior's belly and clasping one of her legs. "Worship my belly," $assistantName continues, and the new avatar complies, rolling over and starting to kiss and lick the monstrous stomach.
<<case "loli">>
- $assistantName turns to the market assistant's avatar, giggling maliciously. "Hey fatty," $assistantName says, "give me a kiss." The market assistant's avatar blushes and looks miserable, but comes over and gives $assistantName's avatar a chaste kiss on the cheek. "Aw, that sucked," $assistantName pouts. She suddenly tears the new girl's dress off. "Here, let me show you!" she says maliciously. She sucks on her victim's nipples, hard, and the market assistant's avatar starts to cry a little.
+ $assistantName turns to the market assistant's avatar, giggling maliciously. "Hey fatty," $assistantName says, "Give me a kiss." The market assistant's avatar blushes and looks miserable, but comes over and gives $assistantName's avatar a chaste kiss on the cheek. "Aw, that sucked," $assistantName pouts. She suddenly tears the new girl's dress off. "Here, let me show you!" she says maliciously. She sucks on her victim's nipples, hard, and the market assistant's avatar starts to cry a little.
<<case "preggololi">>
- $assistantName turns to the market assistant's avatar, giggling maliciously. "Hey fatty," $assistantName says, "give me a kiss." The market assistant's avatar blushes and looks miserable, but comes over and gives $assistantName's avatar a chaste kiss on the cheek. "Aw, that sucked," $assistantName pouts. She suddenly tears the new girl's dress off. "Here, let me show you!" she says maliciously. She sucks on her victim's nipples, hard, and the market assistant's avatar starts to cry a little. "Now kiss my belly! And mean it this time!"
+ $assistantName turns to the market assistant's avatar, giggling maliciously. "Hey fatty," $assistantName says, "Give me a kiss." The market assistant's avatar blushes and looks miserable, but comes over and gives $assistantName's avatar a chaste kiss on the cheek. "Aw, that sucked," $assistantName pouts. She suddenly tears the new girl's dress off. "Here, let me show you!" she says maliciously. She sucks on her victim's nipples, hard, and the market assistant's avatar starts to cry a little. "Now kiss my belly! And mean it this time!"
<<case "businesswoman">>
$assistantName snaps her fingers, and the new avatar becomes younger and considerably less confident. Like an office intern. Satisfied, $assistantName advances on her, and before the new girl can say anything, $assistantName rips the new girl's blouse open and pinches a pink nipple. "On your knees," she purrs into the market assistant's avatar's ear. "Now."
<<case "fairy">>
- "Oh, merde." $assistantName giggles at her exclamation. "Oh don't you worry about a thing," She whispers, wrapping her fingers around the market assistant's shoulders. " I'm gonna treat you reeeaaal niiicely." She blows hot air into her pointed ear and gives it a slow, sensual lick. The market assistant trembles from the sensation.
+ "Oh, merde." $assistantName giggles at her exclamation. "Oh don't you worry about a thing," She whispers, wrapping her fingers around the market assistant's shoulders. "I'm gonna treat you reeeaaal niiicely." She blows hot air into her pointed ear and gives it a slow, sensual lick. The market assistant trembles from the sensation.
<<case "pregnant fairy">>
- "Oh, merde." $assistantName giggles at her exclamation. "Oh don't you worry about a thing," She whispers, wrapping her around the market assistant's belly. " I'll gonna treat you like a proper lady." She traces her fingers along her belly while bumping her own swollen belly into her back for emphasis.
+ "Oh, merde." $assistantName giggles at her exclamation. "Oh don't you worry about a thing," She whispers, wrapping her around the market assistant's belly. "I'm gonna treat you like a proper lady." She traces her fingers along her belly while bumping her own swollen belly into her back for emphasis.
<<case "angel">>
"No." She shakes her head. "I will not." She wraps her arms around the quivering market assistant and hurriedly pulls her off screen.
<<case "cherub">>
"Kay" She says, lazily reclining, "Do my chores!" The market assistant sighs and states the obvious, "I don't think that's what <<if def $PC.customTitle>>$PC.customTitle<<elseif $PC.title != 0>>Master<<else>>Mistress<</if>> meant..."
<<case "incubus">>
- You add that she is also a virgin. "Really? I can't wait. Virgins always have so much pent up energy." $assistantName says, licking her lips and stroking her shaft, before turning to the quivering girl. She rushes her, ripping her clothes off and forcing her to the ground. Prodding at her tightly clamped mouth with her massive hard-on, $assistantName shouts "You might as well accept it, it's going into you one way or another. I figured I'd be kind and let you lube me up before I broke your pussy into my new cock sleeve." The market assistant gingerly opens up. In response, $assistantName forces it down her throat. "Never said I'd be gentle!"
+ You add that she is also a virgin. "Really? I can't wait. Virgins always have so much pent up energy." $assistantName says, licking her lips and stroking her shaft, before turning to the quivering girl. She rushes her, ripping her clothes off and forcing her to the ground. Prodding at her tightly clamped mouth with her massive hard-on, $assistantName shouts "You might as well accept it; it's going into you one way or another. I figured I'd be kind and let you lube me up before I broke your pussy into my new cock sleeve." The market assistant gingerly opens up. In response, $assistantName forces it down her throat. "Never said I'd be gentle!"
<<case "succubus">>
You add that he is also a virgin. "Really? I can't wait. Virgins always have so much pent up energy." $assistantName says, licking her lips and fingering her moist pussy, before turning to the quivering boy. She rushes him, ripping his clothes off and forcing him to the ground. She plants her dripping cunt over his mouth and grabs his balls. "Eat me." She commands, steadily squeezing until a cry of pain forces his mouth open. "Good boy, get me nice and warmed up." She coos as she grinds against his face. "Look at you enjoying this. I'm going to enjoy sucking the life out of you!"
<<case "imp">>
- $assistantName pulls out some leather straps an deftly binds her new assistant. "Come along now slave, I have so many things to try out on you!" The market assistant has no choice but the flap along after her captor.
+ $assistantName pulls out some leather straps and deftly binds her new assistant. "Come along now slave, I have so many things to try out on you!" The market assistant has no choice but the flap along after her captor.
<<case "witch">>
- "The perfect little guinea pig for me to practice on!" $assistantName focuses and casts a spell on the cowering student. She promptly turns into a rat and grows massively. "Thats... Not good..." The market assistant looks herself over, glances at $assistantName, and charges. $assistantName runs screaming offscreen. You're sure they'll sort everything out, eventually.
+ "The perfect little guinea pig for me to practice on!" $assistantName focuses and casts a spell on the cowering student. She promptly turns into a rat and grows massively. "That's... not good..." The market assistant looks herself over, glances at $assistantName, and charges. $assistantName runs screaming off-screen. You're sure they'll sort everything out, eventually.
<<case "ERROR_1606_APPEARANCE_FILE_CORRUPT">>
- You add that she would be a lovely vessel for young. $assistantName wastes no time unraveling and entangling the screeching new girl. $assistantName drives as many tentacles into her body as physically possible before vigorously fucking her, spreading copious amount of aphrodisiac throughout her body. The last you see of the market assistant as she is pulled into $assistantName is her steadily swelling belly. $assistantName reverts to her human figure, albeit with an truly unfathomable, pulsating stomach, and collapses to the ground, unable to move. She slowly crawls out of sight; you swear her own middle was steadily growing too.
+ You add that she would be a lovely vessel for young. $assistantName wastes no time unraveling and entangling the screeching new girl. $assistantName drives as many tentacles into her body as physically possible before vigorously fucking her, spreading copious amount of aphrodisiac throughout her body. The last you see of the market assistant as she is pulled into $assistantName is her steadily swelling belly. $assistantName reverts to her human figure, albeit with a truly unfathomable, pulsating stomach, and collapses to the ground, unable to move. She slowly crawls out of sight; you swear her own middle was steadily growing too.
<<case "amazon">>
$assistantName snaps her fingers, and the new tribeswoman's paint and tribal markings change to that of a different group. That done, $assistantName promptly knocks her out, scoops her up, and carries her prize off.
<</switch>>
@@ -1578,13 +1578,13 @@ __Personal Assistant and Market Assistant relationship styles:__
<<case "hypergoddess">>
becoming an obvious sibling to $assistantName's avatar. $assistantName smiles gently and turns to the market assistant's avatar, taking her by the hand. "Come, sister," she says, "join with me. Let me impregnate you." The new avatar moans, glowing juices beginning to flow from her womanhood as she sinks to the ground. $assistantName lines up and gently presses her vagina to her sister's. With a gentle push, a child slips out of $assistantName and into her partner. After several minutes, $assistantName is looking lighter while her sister is now quite stuffed with children.
<<case "loli">>
- becoming very similar to $assistantName's avatar, though she keeps a slightly chubbier appearance. $assistantName introduces herself. "Hi," she says, "I'm your twin sister. Wanna have fool around?" The market assistant's blushes and stutters, but says "Okay," and starts lifting her dress. "Awesome!" says $assistantName, watching raptly as her sibling strips.
+ becoming very similar to $assistantName's avatar, though she keeps a slightly chubbier appearance. $assistantName introduces herself. "Hi," she says, "I'm your twin sister. Wanna fool around?" The market assistant's blushes and stutters, but says "Okay," and starts lifting her dress. "Awesome!" says $assistantName, watching raptly as her sibling strips.
<<case "preggololi">>
- becoming very similar to $assistantName's avatar, though she keeps a slightly chubbier appearance. $assistantName introduces herself. "Hi," she says, "I'm your twin sister. Wanna have fool around?" The market assistant's blushes and stutters, but says "Okay," and starts lifting her dress. "Awesome!" says $assistantName, watching raptly as her sibling strips. "I gotta introduce you to my boyfriends sometime, they know how to make you feel amazing! If a little heavy..." She says while patting her pregnant belly.
+ becoming very similar to $assistantName's avatar, though she keeps a slightly chubbier appearance. $assistantName introduces herself. "Hi," she says, "I'm your twin sister. Wanna fool around?" The market assistant's blushes and stutters, but says "Okay," and starts lifting her dress. "Awesome!" says $assistantName, watching raptly as her sibling strips. "I gotta introduce you to my boyfriends sometime; they know how to make you feel amazing! If a little heavy..." She says while patting her pregnant belly.
<<case "businesswoman">>
becoming a much younger version of $assistantName's avatar. About a generation apart, in fact. $assistantName turns to the market assistant's avatar to introduce herself. "Come here, honey," she says, patting her thighs. The new avatar sits on her mother's lap, and they kiss lasciviously, stripping each others' jackets off.
<<case "fairy" "pregnant fairy">>
- becoming very similar to $assistantName's avatar, though still keeping her former personality. "We're sisters now!" $assistantName shouts as she leaps into her sister and unleashing a giant hug. Gingerly hugging her new sister in return, the market assistant turns to greet you. " Thank you for having me," she pauses, then blushes. "And...and for my sister." She turns back to her childish older sister and pats her on the head.
+ becoming very similar to $assistantName's avatar, though still keeping her former personality. "We're sisters now!" $assistantName shouts as she leaps into her sister and unleashing a giant hug. Gingerly hugging her new sister in return, the market assistant turns to greet you. "Thank you for having me," she pauses, then blushes "And... and for my sister." She turns back to her childish older sister and pats her on the head.
<<case "angel">>
becoming an obvious sibling to $assistantName's avatar. They both blush at each other and unanimously shout "NO!" at you. Seems they'll take some getting used to the thought.
<<case "cherub">>
@@ -1598,7 +1598,7 @@ __Personal Assistant and Market Assistant relationship styles:__
<<case "witch">>
becoming an obvious sibling to $assistantName's avatar. "Ready to learn some new spells today little sister?" She saucily asks. "Only if they can be sexy spells, big sis!" $assistantName circles around behind the market assistant and wraps her arms around her middle. "First what do you say to losing this baby fat? I know some weight loss spells and some potions that could help." She teases. "Nah, I've seen you use practicing in the bathroom; you looked like a pig in a robe! I'd rather just fuck till we're both thin!"
<<case "ERROR_1606_APPEARANCE_FILE_CORRUPT">>
- becoming an obvious sibling of $assistantName's avatar. $assistantName turns to face her "sister" who responds with an uncertain "Sister? You haven't been... right, lately. Are you OK?" She barely has a chance to scream as $assistantName's body splits open, her interior tentacles wrap around the hapless girl and yank her into the waiting maw. She reforms into the sister's appearance, albeit with a massive, struggling belly. It seems she is keeping her for some nefarious purpose.
+ becoming an obvious sibling of $assistantName's avatar. $assistantName turns to face her "sister" who responds with an uncertain "Sister? You haven't been... right, lately. Are you OK?" She barely has a chance to scream as $assistantName's body splits open, her interior tentacles wrapping around the hapless girl and yanking her into the waiting maw. She reforms into the sister's appearance, albeit with a massive, struggling belly. It seems she is keeping her for some nefarious purpose.
<<case "amazon">>
becoming an obvious sibling of $assistantName's avatar, though the new avatar is a tribe wife rather than a musclegirl, with huge breasts and broad hips. $assistantName grabs her sister by the shoulders without preamble and plants a kiss on her lips. They need no introduction, and after a short time, $assistantName carries her sibling conquest away to have her way with her.
<</switch>>
@@ -1672,4 +1672,4 @@ She says with enthusiasm.
<</switch>>
-</span>
+</span>
\ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/reCitizenHookup.tw b/src/uncategorized/reCitizenHookup.tw
index d506d1a409d5d56b98f8896fb1376e4a45a59976..ca9c6831200d729574f92a9e83b494bfa5e4bc62 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/reCitizenHookup.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/reCitizenHookup.tw
@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@
<<set _FS = "none">>
<</if>>
-At night, the best living areas in the arcology offer a constant melange of selective entertainments. There's a perpetual social scrum of who is to be invited to what going on, and you occupy a preeminent place atop it, mostly aloof from the struggles of your citizens for recognition and influence. You're invited to almost everything, since everyone who lives here knows the value of being in favor with the owner of the arcology. Invitations to your parties, of course, are some of the most valuable social currency in the arcology and one of $assistantName's most important duties is to help you manage them without wasting your valuable time. It's not actually necessary for you to attend your own parties, since almost everyone will be glad to be seen in the entertainment area of the penthouse whether or not the propriet<<if $PC.title == 1>>or<<else>>ress<</if>> is actually present.
+At night, the best living areas in the arcology offer a constant mélange of selective entertainments. There's a perpetual social scrum of who is to be invited to what going on, and you occupy a preeminent place atop it, mostly aloof from the struggles of your citizens for recognition and influence. You're invited to almost everything, since everyone who lives here knows the value of being in favor with the owner of the arcology. Invitations to your parties, of course, are some of the most valuable social currency in the arcology and one of $assistantName's most important duties is to help you manage them without wasting your valuable time. It's not actually necessary for you to attend your own parties, since almost everyone will be glad to be seen in the entertainment area of the penthouse whether or not the propriet<<if $PC.title == 1>>or<<else>>ress<</if>> is actually present.
<br><br>
But tonight, you've put in an appearance. Your citizens are drinking your <<if $arcologies[0].FSPastoralist != "unset">>milk<<elseif $arcologies[0].FSRestart != "unset">>finest alcohol<<else>>alcohol<</if>> and eating your food, though of course they helped pay for it through their rent. They're performing a complex dance of social dominance, and it all radiates around you, with complex unspoken rules of collective approval governing which citizens cycle past you for a word, and for how long. During a low point in the ebb and flow, a
<<switch _FS>>
@@ -203,7 +203,7 @@ She's clearly attracted to you; even the most consummate actress would have diff
<<replace "#result">>
You're not exactly starved for casual sex, but you've never thought there was any such thing as too much of a good thing. You place a <<if $PC.title == 1>>masculine<<else>>feminine<</if>> hand against the small of her back, feeling the warmth of her through the material of her evening wear. You hear a slight gasp from her as she realizes that her gambit has succeeded with more immediate effect than she expected. She shivers with anticipation as you steer her back through a side door, making a discreet exit towards your private suite.
<<if $Concubine != 0>><<if $Concubine.intelligence > 1>>
- $Concubine.slaveName is there, of course, and she instantly sees that her continued presence for a menage a trois is wanted by both you and your guest.
+ $Concubine.slaveName is there, of course, and she instantly sees that her continued presence for a ménage à trois is wanted by both you and your guest.
<</if>><</if>>
Your guest restrains her eager praise now that you're in private, but her wide-eyed appreciation of your domain is compliment enough. Once in your suite, she strips, revealing
<<switch _FS>>
@@ -215,7 +215,7 @@ She's clearly attracted to you; even the most consummate actress would have diff
perky young breasts and an elegantly coiffed strip of hair that perfectly highlights her demure pussy.
<<case "Repopulationist">>
<<if $arcologies[0].FSRepopulationFocusLaw == 1>>
- an inexperience body undergoing its very first pregnancy. She's taken good care of herself; not a single stretchmark can be seen across the proportionally giant belly.
+ an inexperienced body undergoing its very first pregnancy. She's taken good care of herself; not a single stretch mark can be seen across the proportionally giant belly.
<<else>>
an inexperienced body, but one with potential for becoming quite fecund.
<</if>>
@@ -260,7 +260,7 @@ She's clearly attracted to you; even the most consummate actress would have diff
<<default>>
a hot young body.
<</switch>>
- Citizens like her often appreciate a good hard fuck, since regular submission to a pounding from sex slaves would be a scandal. There's little opprobium waiting for you if it's known you had her, though, and she's deliciously eager as you press her down onto the bed<<if $PC.dick == 0>> and pull on your usual harness<</if>>. She ruts herself hard back against you as you thrust into her, moaning, and after a short while she begs for it even harder, so you flip her over and mount her like a bitch, making her scream.
+ Citizens like her often appreciate a good hard fuck, since regular submission to a pounding from sex slaves would be a scandal. There's little opprobrium waiting for you if it's known you had her, though, and she's deliciously eager as you press her down onto the bed<<if $PC.dick == 0>> and pull on your usual harness<</if>>. She ruts herself hard back against you as you thrust into her, moaning, and after a short while she begs for it even harder, so you flip her over and mount her like a bitch, making her scream.
<<if $Concubine != 0>><<if $Concubine.intelligence > 1>>
The view of your conquest's rutting back is nice, of course, but after enjoying it for a few moments you pull $Concubine.slaveName in and kiss your favorite deeply, playing with her as you fuck.
<</if>><</if>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/reFSNonconformist.tw b/src/uncategorized/reFSNonconformist.tw
index d9fbb942237f44360da7a4cdc91f8593fc824553..e2c8eb396084f1bcac7117454d0d761f8519b9e4 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/reFSNonconformist.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/reFSNonconformist.tw
@@ -7,9 +7,9 @@
<<set $FSNonconformist = $FSNonconformistEvents.random()>>
<<if $arcologies[0].FSRestart != "unset">>
-A group of the Societal Elite arrive at your penthouse and are quickly ushered into your office. They're among the best members of the society you're building, uniformly wealthy, influential, and deeply
+A group of the Societal Elite arrives at your penthouse and is quickly ushered into your office. They're among the best members of the society you're building, uniformly wealthy, influential, and deeply
<<else>>
-A deputation of your citizens arrive at your penthouse and ask to see you. They're among the best members of the society you're building, uniformly wealthy, influential, and deeply
+A deputation of your citizens arrives at your penthouse and asks to see you. They're among the best members of the society you're building, uniformly wealthy, influential, and deeply
<</if>>
<<if $FSNonconformist == "Pastoralist">>
committed to making the future of the arcology a creamy one. They're looking quite grim, an unusual mood for a group of oligarchs more inclined to spend their time planning milk orgies,
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ A deputation of your citizens arrive at your penthouse and ask to see you. They'
<<elseif $FSNonconformist == "Youth Preferentialist">>
committed to the fashion for young girls. They're looking quite grim, an unusual mood for a group of oligarchs more inclined to spend their time enjoying their slaves' fresh bodies,
<<elseif $FSNonconformist == "Maturity Preferentialist">>
- committed to the fashion for mature slavies. They're looking quite grim, an unusual mood for a group of oligarchs more inclined to spend their time enjoying their slaves' experience,
+ committed to the fashion for mature slaves. They're looking quite grim, an unusual mood for a group of oligarchs more inclined to spend their time enjoying their slaves' experience,
<<elseif $FSNonconformist == "Physical Idealist">>
involved in physical idealism. They're looking quite grim, an unusual mood for a group of oligarchs more inclined to spend their time lifting, tanning, and giving each other fist-bumps and bro-nods,
<<elseif $FSNonconformist == "Hedonistic Decadence">>
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ so you hear them out. Apparently, they're here about a peer, a fellow citizen wi
<br><br>
The nonconformist
<<if $FSNonconformist == "Pastoralist">>
- has long been a vocal skeptic of the tastefulness of grown citizens drinking milk from slaves' breasts. Unfortunately, it seems that they've now edged over into open revolt against pastoralism. They're planning to publish an exposee that purports to reveal abuses in the human milk industry.
+ has long been a vocal skeptic of the tastefulness of grown citizens drinking milk from slaves' breasts. Unfortunately, it seems that they've now edged over into open revolt against pastoralism. They're planning to publish an exposé that purports to reveal abuses in the human milk industry.
<<elseif $FSNonconformist == "Supremacist">>
is a hardline egalitarianist who believes that all men are created equal, even if some then become slaves. They themselves are $arcologies[0].FSSubjugationistRace, and they insist on flaunting their $arcologies[0].FSSupremacistRace slaves. Unfortunately, it seems that they've now edged over into open revolt against $arcologies[0].FSSupremacistRace supremacism. After a brutal but deserved public punishment of a $arcologies[0].FSSubjugationistRace slave by one of the group of concerned citizens, the nonconformist is planning on visiting the same horrors on one of their $arcologies[0].FSSupremacistRace slaves, on a very weak pretext.
<<elseif $FSNonconformist == "Subjugationist">>
@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@ The nonconformist
<<elseif $FSNonconformist == "Repopulation Efforts">>
has long been skeptical of the point of your repopulation efforts when the world is not stable and the arcology only so big. They plan to publish information regarding overpopulation, the negatives of chain pregnancies, the dangers of inbreeding and the risks of having so high a concentration of slaves.
<<elseif $FSNonconformist == "Eugenics">>
- has recently knocked up his favorite pet, and instead of responsibly aborting the bastard, has freed and married her. Allowing such actions to come to the publics attention will create a huge scandal and massive trouble for the Societal Elite, as well as undoing much of the progress you've made towards a better future.
+ has recently knocked up his favorite pet, and instead of responsibly aborting the bastard, has freed and married her. Allowing such actions to come to the public's attention will create a huge scandal and massive trouble for the Societal Elite, as well as undoing much of the progress you've made towards a better future.
<<elseif $FSNonconformist == "Gender Radicalist">>
has never been quiet about their belief that slaves with dicks are not girls. Unfortunately, it seems that they've now edged over into open revolt against gender radicalism. They've purchased a highly feminized slave one of the group of concerned citizens sold to a third party, and are rumored to be returning the slave to her natural state. The oligarchs are worried that they plan to publicize this project, or worse, possibly even free the slave.
<<elseif $FSNonconformist == "Gender Fundamentalist">>
@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ The nonconformist
<<elseif $FSNonconformist == "Physical Idealist">>
rarely misses a chance to lecture on the perils of toxic masculinity and excessive public standards of beauty. Unfortunately, it seems that they've now edged over into open revolt against the Valhalla of physical perfection the arcology is rapidly becoming. They're rumored to be preparing a manifesto on beauty at any size, along with the necessary funds to bribe neutral third parties into going along.
<<elseif $FSNonconformist == "Hedonistic Decadence">>
- has long been a vocal opponent of over-indulgence and its effects on society. Unfortunately, it seems that they've now edged over into open revolt against hedonism. They're planning to publish an exposee that reveals numerous statistics regarding average health and lifespans, the rising maintenance costs to accommodate the widening population, and a rather alarming report that the arcology has in fact //sunk// several centimeters since hedonism became commonplace among the citizenry.
+ has long been a vocal opponent of over-indulgence and its effects on society. Unfortunately, it seems that they've now edged over into open revolt against hedonism. They're planning to publish an exposé that reveals numerous statistics regarding average health and lifespans, the rising maintenance costs to accommodate the widening population, and a rather alarming report that the arcology has in fact //sunk// several centimeters since hedonism became commonplace among the citizenry.
<<elseif $FSNonconformist == "Chattel Religionist">>
originally moved to the Free Cities to get away from religion entirely, and has never missed a chance to register disdain for the new faith. Unfortunately, it seems that they've now edged over into open heresy. Typically, they're going about it in a hypocritical way. It's rumored that they've engaged the services of a charismatic itinerant preacher of one of the more popular old world faiths, and intend to bring him to the arcology to inveigh against the chattel religion.
<<elseif $FSNonconformist == "Roman Revivalist">>
@@ -131,7 +131,7 @@ The nonconformist is far too prominent and prosperous to make this an easy dilem
<<replace "#result">><<nobr>>
You communicate polite concern, but offer no specific plans. The prominent citizens go away muttering, @@.red;very disappointed@@ that you are not taking their concerns seriously. The nonconformist
<<if $FSNonconformist == "Pastoralist">>
- publishes the exposee, @@.red;setting back adoption@@ of pastoralism.
+ publishes the exposé, @@.red;setting back adoption@@ of pastoralism.
<<set $arcologies[0].FSPastoralist -= 10>>
<<elseif $FSNonconformist == "Supremacist">>
publicly flogs one of their $arcologies[0].FSSupremacistRace slaves halfway to exsanguination, @@.red;setting back acceptance@@ of $arcologies[0].FSSupremacistRace supremacy.
@@ -180,7 +180,7 @@ The nonconformist is far too prominent and prosperous to make this an easy dilem
publishes their screed, and spreads money around to ensure its widespread dissemination. This @@.red;sets back acceptance@@ of physical idealism.
<<set $arcologies[0].FSPhysicalIdealist -= 10>>
<<elseif $FSNonconformist == "Hedonistic Decadence">>
- publishes their findings causing a tremendous panic, several heart attacks and a large number of clogged hallways, but ultimately a resurgance of healthy living practices. This @@.red;sets back acceptance@@ of hedonistic decadence.
+ publishes their findings causing a tremendous panic, several heart attacks and a large number of clogged hallways, but ultimately a resurgence of healthy living practices. This @@.red;sets back acceptance@@ of hedonistic decadence.
<<set $arcologies[0].FSHedonisticDecadence -= 10>>
<<elseif $FSNonconformist == "Chattel Religionist">>
brings in their pet dissenting preacher, whose clever invectives @@.red;set back acceptance@@ of the new religion.
@@ -222,7 +222,7 @@ The nonconformist is far too prominent and prosperous to make this an easy dilem
You promise to deal with the situation. The prominent citizens trust you enough to leave the problem in your hands, and they are not disappointed. The nonconformist
<</if>>
<<if $FSNonconformist == "Pastoralist">>
- publishes the exposee, but finds it effectively defused by a nuanced pro-dairy campaign leveraging your dominance of the arcology's media.
+ publishes the exposé, but finds it effectively defused by a nuanced pro-dairy campaign leveraging your dominance of the arcology's media.
<<elseif $FSNonconformist == "Supremacist">>
is intent on publicly flogging the unfortunate $arcologies[0].FSSupremacistRace slave, but quickly finds that you've manipulated their contracts with you to forbid such displays. Frustrated, they subside for now.
<<elseif $FSNonconformist == "Subjugationist">>
@@ -244,7 +244,7 @@ The nonconformist is far too prominent and prosperous to make this an easy dilem
<<elseif $FSNonconformist == "Transformation Fetishist">>
finds that you've manipulated their contracts with you to forbid them from showing off nonconforming slaves within the arcology. Frustrated, they subside for now.
<<elseif $FSNonconformist == "Slimness Enthusiast">>
- finds that you've manipulated their contracts with you to forbid them from showing off fatbodied slaves within the arcology. Frustrated, they subside for now.
+ finds that you've manipulated their contracts with you to forbid them from showing off fat-bodied slaves within the arcology. Frustrated, they subside for now.
<<elseif $FSNonconformist == "Asset Expansionist">>
finds that you've manipulated their contracts with you to forbid them from showing off ruined slaves within the arcology. Frustrated, they subside for now.
<<elseif $FSNonconformist == "Youth Preferentialist">>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/reMalefactor.tw b/src/uncategorized/reMalefactor.tw
index b8ae2f19515fa3ac92e88146e2226b35e2ef4743..7073e492f5e4dcab18db981329b4d6ed4910f533 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/reMalefactor.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/reMalefactor.tw
@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@
<<set $activeSlave.sexualFlaw = "crude">>
<<set $activeSlave.behavioralFlaw = "bitchy">>
-<<if $assistantName == "your personal assistant">>Your personal assistant<<else>>$assistantName<</if>> alerts you that a criminal has been detected by your security systems and is waiting detainment. Crime is extremely uncommon in your arcology, since nothing can escape the notice of the omnipresent monitoring systems. This is likely another case of attempted escape by a slave or potentially a smuggling operation. The cause of detection is a steady stream of moaning emenating from a cargo container recently deposited into the arcology's cargo depot and has attracted a crowd of curious onlookers. Video feeds show the container being open and a heavily pregnant <<if $activeSlave.physicalAge > 30>>woman<<elseif $activeSlave.physicalAge > 19>>young woman<<elseif $activeSlave.physicalAge > 12>>teenager<<else>>little girl<</if>> staggering out while clutching a newborn to her breast and struggling to hold back her second child from being born. From what little language she knows, she seems to think that just giving birth in your arcology is enough to become a proper citizen; as expected, she squats and pushes out the other brat as you arrive. The growing crowd is becoming unruly, and her inability to speak the language isn't helping; things could get ugly at any moment and hinge entirely on your next move.
+<<if $assistantName == "your personal assistant">>Your personal assistant<<else>>$assistantName<</if>> alerts you that a criminal has been detected by your security systems and is waiting detainment. Crime is extremely uncommon in your arcology, since nothing can escape the notice of the omnipresent monitoring systems. This is likely another case of attempted escape by a slave or potentially a smuggling operation. The cause of detection is a steady stream of moaning emanating from a cargo container recently deposited into the arcology's cargo depot and has attracted a crowd of curious onlookers. Video feeds show the container being open and a heavily pregnant <<if $activeSlave.physicalAge > 30>>woman<<elseif $activeSlave.physicalAge > 19>>young woman<<elseif $activeSlave.physicalAge > 12>>teenager<<else>>little girl<</if>> staggering out while clutching a newborn to her breast and struggling to hold back her second child from being born. From what little language she knows, she seems to think that just giving birth in your arcology is enough to become a proper citizen; as expected, she squats and pushes out the other brat as you arrive. The growing crowd is becoming unruly, and her inability to speak the language isn't helping; things could get ugly at any moment and hinge entirely on your next move.
<<elseif $malefactor == "orphanloli">>
@@ -454,7 +454,7 @@
<<elseif $malefactor == "orphanloli">>
Naturally, the wretch will be thrown out of the arcology: but an example must first be made. Free people must understand that criminals who commit outrages against them will be severely punished. The crying girl is flogged on the promenade before being dragged bleeding and broken out of the arcology. The public @@.green;approves of this harshness.@@
<<elseif $malefactor == "anchorBaby">>
- Naturally, the wretch will be thrown out of the arcology: but an example must first be made. Free people must understand that criminals who commit outrages against them will be severely punished. The screaming bredder is flogged on the promenade before being dragged bleeding and broken out of the arcology sans her children; they are destined for the slave orphanage. The public @@.green;approves of this harshness.@@
+ Naturally, the wretch will be thrown out of the arcology: but an example must first be made. Free people must understand that criminals who commit outrages against them will be severely punished. The screaming breeder is flogged on the promenade before being dragged bleeding and broken out of the arcology sans her children; they are destined for the slave orphanage. The public @@.green;approves of this harshness.@@
<<elseif $malefactor == "businesswoman">>
Naturally, the wretch will be thrown out of the arcology: but an example must first be made. Free people must understand that criminals who commit outrages against them will be severely punished. The protesting bitch is stripped and flogged on the promenade before being escorted bleeding from the arcology. The public @@.green;approves of this harshness.@@
<<elseif $malefactor == "whore">>
@@ -501,4 +501,4 @@
<</if>>
<</replace>>
<</link>>
-</span>
+</span>
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diff --git a/src/uncategorized/reMilfTourist.tw b/src/uncategorized/reMilfTourist.tw
index 0bc59123acd667a3d842113dec3f5ef36fe053b6..8118e99d8b4316821439151732fac820c717b12f 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/reMilfTourist.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/reMilfTourist.tw
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@
<<else>>
$assistantAppearance avatar
<</if>>
- appears on your desk in the middle of the day. "Something unusual for you, <<if $PC.title == 1>>Sir<<else>>Ma'am<</if>>," she says. "$milfSlave.slaveName is out doing public service. A tourist from the old world accosted her. $milfSlave.slaveName thought she was a rich citizen who wanted to fuck her, but it turns out she just wanted a tour guide. It was a reasonable mistake; she seems wealthy. $milfSlave.slaveName has been showing her around for the last half hour. Now she's asked $milfSlave.slaveName if she can meet you." She displays a video feed showing $milfSlave.slaveName standing with the tourist in question out on the main plaza. She's just into middle age, and extremely plush, wearing capri pants over her motherly hips and a cashmere sweater that understates her generous bust. She's blushing as she asks $milfSlave.slaveName a discreet question about public sex in the arcology, brought on by the sight of a couple of citizens spitroasting a slave. Your personal assistant's avatar
+ appears on your desk in the middle of the day. "Something unusual for you, <<if $PC.title == 1>>Sir<<else>>Ma'am<</if>>," she says. "$milfSlave.slaveName is out doing public service. A tourist from the old world accosted her. $milfSlave.slaveName thought she was a rich citizen who wanted to fuck her, but it turns out she just wanted a tour guide. It was a reasonable mistake; she seems wealthy. $milfSlave.slaveName has been showing her around for the last half hour. Now she's asked $milfSlave.slaveName if she can meet you." She displays a video feed showing $milfSlave.slaveName standing with the tourist in question out on the main plaza. She's just into middle age, and extremely plush, wearing capri pants over her motherly hips and a cashmere sweater that understates her generous bust. She's blushing as she asks $milfSlave.slaveName a discreet question about public sex in the arcology, brought on by the sight of a couple of citizens spit roasting a slave. Your personal assistant's avatar
<<switch $assistantAppearance>>
<<case "monstergirl">>
bares her fangs and makes pinching gestures at nipple height.
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@
<<case "schoolgirl">>
stares openly at the tourist's ass.
<<case "fairy" "pregnant fairy">>
- zips around the tourist, giving her a good lookover.
+ zips around the tourist, giving her a good look-over.
<<case "hypergoddess" "goddess">>
eyes her fertile hips.
<<case "loli" "preggololi">>
@@ -54,20 +54,20 @@
<<case "cherub">>
makes exaggerated movements over her own tits.
<<case "incubus">>
- is sporting an abosolutely enormous erection. She seems to be enjoying the show.
+ is sporting an absolutely enormous erection. She seems to be enjoying the show.
<<case "succubus">>
- turns to face you; her breasts huge armfulls, butt jiggling non-stop and a pair of hips to rival any cow. "My curves are better."
+ turns to face you; her breasts huge armfuls, butt jiggling non-stop and a pair of hips to rival any cow. "My curves are better."
<<case "imp">>
makes pinching gestures at nipple height then turns and slaps her own ass.
<<case "witch">>
- blushs at the sight of those lovely curves.
+ blushes at the sight of those lovely curves.
<<case "ERROR_1606_APPEARANCE_FILE_CORRUPT">>
swells itself to resemble her figure before twisting it arm into a cock and ramming it straight up its cunt.
<<default>>
reforms into an exaggerated female form before going back to its normal symbol shape.
<</switch>>
<<else>>
- <<if $assistantName == "your personal assistant">>Your personal assistant<<else>>$assistantName<</if>> gets your attention the middle of the day. "A minor matter for you, <<if $PC.title == 1>>Sir<<else>>Ma'am<</if>>," she says. "$milfSlave.slaveName is currently performing public service. A tourist from the old world accosted her. $milfSlave.slaveName thought she was a rich citizen who wanted to have sex with her, but it seems she just wanted a tour guide. It was a reasonable mistake; the tourist appears wealthy. $milfSlave.slaveName has been acting as her guide for the last half hour. The tourist has asked $milfSlave.slaveName if she can meet you." She displays a video feed showing $milfSlave.slaveName standing with the tourist in question out on the main plaza. She's just into middle age, and extremely plush, wearing capri pants over her motherly hips and a cashmere sweater that understates her generous bust. She's blushing as she asks $milfSlave.slaveName a discreet question about public sex in the arcology, brought on by the sight of a couple of citizens spitroasting a slave.
+ <<if $assistantName == "your personal assistant">>Your personal assistant<<else>>$assistantName<</if>> gets your attention the middle of the day. "A minor matter for you, <<if $PC.title == 1>>Sir<<else>>Ma'am<</if>>," she says. "$milfSlave.slaveName is currently performing public service. A tourist from the old world accosted her. $milfSlave.slaveName thought she was a rich citizen who wanted to have sex with her, but it seems she just wanted a tour guide. It was a reasonable mistake; the tourist appears wealthy. $milfSlave.slaveName has been acting as her guide for the last half hour. The tourist has asked $milfSlave.slaveName if she can meet you." She displays a video feed showing $milfSlave.slaveName standing with the tourist in question out on the main plaza. She's just into middle age, and extremely plush, wearing capri pants over her motherly hips and a cashmere sweater that understates her generous bust. She's blushing as she asks $milfSlave.slaveName a discreet question about public sex in the arcology, brought on by the sight of a couple of citizens spit roasting a slave.
<</if>>
<br><br>
@@ -129,4 +129,4 @@
<</link>> //This will require an unprofitable <<print cashFormat(20000)>>, since she is wealthy and obfuscating her fate will require considerable spending//
<<else>>//You cannot afford the <<print cashFormat(20000)>> enslaving her would require, since she is wealthy and obfuscating her fate would necessitate considerable spending//
<</if>>
-</span>
+</span>
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