diff --git a/src/endWeek/saChoosesOwnClothes.js b/src/endWeek/saChoosesOwnClothes.js
index 3c43be115f4a98e6020988feed522fb583b1ffeb..b3611f5a7146d6fb1e741d4fa8a57593993a340d 100644
--- a/src/endWeek/saChoosesOwnClothes.js
+++ b/src/endWeek/saChoosesOwnClothes.js
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ window.saChoosesOwnClothes = (function() {
 				r += `${shoeChoice.text} `;
 				slave.shoes = shoeChoice.shoes;
 			}
-			r += `<span class="mediumorchid">increasing ${his} independence.</span>`;
+			r += `Allowing ${him} permission to dress as ${he} sees fit <span class="mediumorchid">increases ${his} independence.</span>`;
 			slave.devotion -= 5;
 		} else {
 			const neckChoice = todaysCollar(slave);
@@ -999,9 +999,9 @@ window.saChoosesOwnClothes = (function() {
 			shoes.push({text: `${He} entered without shoes, and will leave the same.`, shoes: "none"});
 		} else if (slave.devotion <= 20) {
 			if (slave.heels === 0) {
-				shoes.push({text: `and wears comfortable flats,`, shoes: "flats"});
+				shoes.push({text: `${He} also slips on comfortable flats.`, shoes: "flats"});
 			} else {
-				shoes.push({text: `and angrily wears the heels ${he} needs to walk,`, shoes: "heels"});
+				shoes.push({text: `${He} angrily wears the heels ${he} needs to walk.`, shoes: "heels"});
 			}
 		} else {
 			if (slave.fetishKnown === 1 && slave.fetish === "dom") {
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/saLongTermEffects.tw b/src/uncategorized/saLongTermEffects.tw
index 1de53eab1fc3c26ed2087395be06b200882f5347..3638cb254c08da5114ef956bfd3125ee709f9d60 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/saLongTermEffects.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/saLongTermEffects.tw
@@ -5723,8 +5723,8 @@
 				<<= FutureSocieties.ChangePorn("SlimnessEnthusiast", 1)>>
 			<</if>>
 		<</if>>
-		<<if ($slaves[$i].butt > 4) && ($slaves[$i].boobs > 800)>>
-			Society @@.red;disapproves@@ of $slaves[$i].slaveName's boorishly large tits and ass; $he damages the fashion for slender slaves.
+		<<if ($slaves[$i].butt > 4) || ($slaves[$i].boobs > 800)>>
+			Society @@.red;disapproves@@ of $slaves[$i].slaveName's boorishly<<if ($slaves[$i].boobs > 800)>> large tits<<if ($slaves[$i].butt > 4)>> and ass<</if>><<else>> ass<</if>>; $he damages the fashion for slender slaves.
 			<<= FutureSocieties.ChangePorn("SlimnessEnthusiast", -1)>>
 		<</if>>
 	<<elseif $arcologies[0].FSAssetExpansionist != "unset">>