From 2b25e7f4a2bd3fb611b52ba97636ab4b42681832 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: D-K <9832-D-K@users.noreply.gitgud.io> Date: Mon, 28 Jan 2019 09:11:15 -0800 Subject: [PATCH] Fixes unintended word agglutination. --- src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw b/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw index 228f622d1b1..6f7ced7483e 100644 --- a/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw +++ b/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw @@ -841,7 +841,7 @@ The legalities completed, ''__@@.pink;<<= SlaveFullName($activeSlave)>>@@__'' << <br> <<link "Clean up $his whorish appearance">> <<replace "#introResult">> - $He's totally unsurprised when you send $him to the salon for a makeover. It takes several days of work before $he's brought back in for another inspection; when $he arrives, you wordlessly point $him to a full length mirror. $He <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>sees $himself<<else>> <<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>>tenderly uses $his hands and finds $himself<<else>> stoically waits while you vividly describe $his new appearance. One<</if>> <</if>>without tattoos, a hooker's haircut and piercings, a conventionally pretty $girl with subtle implants and a clean appearance. $He gasps <<if $activeSlave.amp != 0>>and covers $his mouth with a hand <<else>> but quickly closes $his mouth<</if>>, and then suddenly bursts into tears. "Thank you, <<Master>>," $he sobs. "I never would have thought." <<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>> $He reaches out to touch $his reflection.<</if>> "I <<if canSee($activeSlave)>> look <<else>> would look<</if>> like a nice $girl." $He is @@.hotpink;grateful to you@@ for <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>showing $him<<else>> <<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>> letting $him feel <<else>> detailing <</if>> <</if>> this new side of $himself, and has @@.mediumaquamarine;begun to trust@@ that being your slave will be less degrading than being a free prostitute. + $He's totally unsurprised when you send $him to the salon for a makeover. It takes several days of work before $he's brought back in for another inspection; when $he arrives, you wordlessly point $him to a full length mirror. $He <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>sees $himself<<else>> <<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>>tenderly uses $his hands and finds $himself<<else>> stoically waits while you vividly describe $his new appearance. One<</if>> <</if>> without tattoos, a hooker's haircut and piercings, a conventionally pretty $girl with subtle implants and a clean appearance. $He gasps <<if $activeSlave.amp != 0>>and covers $his mouth with a hand <<else>> but quickly closes $his mouth<</if>>, and then suddenly bursts into tears. "Thank you, <<Master>>," $he sobs. "I never would have thought." <<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>> $He reaches out to touch $his reflection.<</if>> "I <<if canSee($activeSlave)>> look <<else>> would look<</if>> like a nice $girl." $He is @@.hotpink;grateful to you@@ for <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>showing $him<<else>> <<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>> letting $him feel <<else>> detailing <</if>> <</if>> this new side of $himself, and has @@.mediumaquamarine;begun to trust@@ that being your slave will be less degrading than being a free prostitute. <</replace>> <<set $activeSlave.trust += 4>> <<set $activeSlave.devotion += 4>> -- GitLab