diff --git a/src/npc/startingGirls/startingGirls.tw b/src/npc/startingGirls/startingGirls.tw index ca61a9e63c0d2aeb95e80217837ac7e31098970b..bb171a501f1b0ecee71721b9d4530be67ac1d433 100644 --- a/src/npc/startingGirls/startingGirls.tw +++ b/src/npc/startingGirls/startingGirls.tw @@ -249,7 +249,7 @@ __You are customizing this slave:__ <</if>> <<elseif $PC.career == "gang">> <<if $activeSlave.mother == -1 && $activeSlave.father == -1>> - <<set $activeSlave.origin = "She was the result of a night of hard drugs and unprotected sex after a big score. It took quite abit of alcohol to come to terms with drunkenly knocking yourself up.">> + <<set $activeSlave.origin = "She was the result of a night of hard drugs and unprotected sex after a big score. It took quite a bit of alcohol to come to terms with drunkenly knocking yourself up.">> <<set $activeSlave.customTat = "She has your former gang's sign tattooed on her neck.">> <<elseif $activeSlave.mother == -1>> <<set $activeSlave.origin = "She was the result of a night of hard drugs and unprotected sex after a big score.">> @@ -269,7 +269,7 @@ __You are customizing this slave:__ <<set $activeSlave.origin = "She was another of your late master's servants. She spent nine months in your womb, courtesy of your master.">> <<set $activeSlave.customTat = "She has your master's brand on her left breast.">> <<elseif $activeSlave.father == -1>> - <<set $activeSlave.origin = "She was another of your late master's servants. Your master permited you to knock up her mother.">> + <<set $activeSlave.origin = "She was another of your late master's servants. Your master permitted you to knock up her mother.">> <<set $activeSlave.customTat = "She has your master's brand on her left breast.">> <<elseif $PC.vagina == 1>> <<set $activeSlave.origin = "She was another of your late master's servants. She helped you give birth to his child.">> @@ -283,7 +283,7 @@ __You are customizing this slave:__ <<set $activeSlave.origin = "She was conceived after a successful experiment in hermaphrodite self-reproduction.">> <<set $activeSlave.customTat = "She has your personal symbol tattooed on the back of her neck: it's invisible to the naked eye, but shows up starkly on medical imaging.">> <<elseif $activeSlave.mother == -1>> - <<set $activeSlave.origin = "She was conceived after a botched birth control expirement early in your career.">> + <<set $activeSlave.origin = "She was conceived after a botched birth control experiment early in your career.">> <<set $activeSlave.customTat = "She has your personal symbol tattooed on the back of her neck: it's invisible to the naked eye, but shows up starkly on medical imaging.">> <<elseif $activeSlave.father == -1>> <<set $activeSlave.origin = "She is the product of an affair with a cute nurse who assisted you in more ways than one.">>