diff --git a/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw b/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw index b6d875017873301c454db22a6e28f042d871210b..cddb13cf7d5955d8c16373c29b25a7f00410309c 100644 --- a/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw +++ b/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw @@ -818,7 +818,7 @@ The legalities completed, ''__@@.pink;<<SlaveFullName $activeSlave>>@@__'' <<if <br> <<link "Clean up her whorish appearance">> <<replace "#introResult">> - She's totally unsurprised when you send her to the salon for a makeover. It takes several days of work before she's brought back in for another inspection; when she arrives, you wordlessly point her to a full length mirror. She sees herself without tattoos, hooker's haircut, and piercings, a conventionally pretty girl with subtle implants and a clean appearance. She gasps and covers her mouth with a hand, and then suddenly bursts into tears. "Thank you, <<Master>>," she sobs. "I never would have thought." She reaches out to touch her reflection. "I look like a nice girl." She is @@.hotpink;grateful to you@@ for showing her this side of herself, and has @@.mediumaquamarine;begun to trust@@ that being your slave will be less degrading than being a free prostitute. + She's totally unsurprised when you send her to the salon for a makeover. It takes several days of work before she's brought back in for another inspection; when she arrives, you wordlessly point her to a full length mirror. She <<if $activeSlave.eyes != -2>>sees<<else>>feels<</if>> herself without tattoos, hooker's haircut, and piercings, a conventionally pretty girl with subtle implants and a clean appearance. She gasps and covers her mouth with a hand, and then suddenly bursts into tears. "Thank you, <<Master>>," she sobs. "I never would have thought." She reaches out to touch her reflection. "I look like a nice girl." She is @@.hotpink;grateful to you@@ for showing her this side of herself, and has @@.mediumaquamarine;begun to trust@@ that being your slave will be less degrading than being a free prostitute. <</replace>> <<set $activeSlave.trust += 4>> <<set $activeSlave.devotion += 4>>