From 3cee1ff1bcf315cf072bb4768a9935dc6f3b26e7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: klorpa <30924131+klorpa@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Mon, 5 Aug 2019 21:19:44 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] Text

---
 src/uncategorized/RETS.tw                      |  4 ++--
 src/uncategorized/REresistantmotherdaughter.tw |  2 +-
 src/uncategorized/bodyModification.tw          | 14 +++++++-------
 3 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/uncategorized/RETS.tw b/src/uncategorized/RETS.tw
index 9e49c308225..7dd06ffac8e 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/RETS.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/RETS.tw
@@ -640,7 +640,7 @@ $activeSlave.slaveName chuckles into $subSlave.slaveName's ear, crooning,
 <<setSpokenPlayerPronouns $activeSlave>>
 $He grinds against the wilting $subSlave.slaveName, and then continues, "I felt your <<if ($subSlave.butt > 4)>>fat butt<<elseif ($subSlave.butt > 2)>>big butt<<else>>tiny little butt<</if>> clench ju<<s>>t now." $He gives $subSlave.slaveName's <<if ($subSlave.balls > 0 && $subSlave.scrotum > 0)>>balls a gentle squeeze<<elseif ($subSlave.dick > 0)>>dick a gentle tug<<elseif $subSlave.vagina == -1>>butthole a gentle massage<<else>>pussylips a gentle massage<</if>>. "<<HeP>> ha<<s>>n't fucked you back there yet, ha<<s>> <<heP>>? It'<<s>> going to hurt, you little bitch. <<HeP>>'<<s>> going to hold you down and <<sh>>ove <<hisP>> <<if $PC.dick == 1>>huge cockhead<<else>>bigge<<s>>t <<s>>trap-on<</if>> right up again<<s>>t thi<<s>> tight little hole." $He gropes the quivering slave's virgin anus, careful not to penetrate it. "You're going to do your be<<s>>t to relax like a good little _girl2. But it'<<s>> going to be so big. It'<<s>> going to burn. And then you're going to panic, and <<s>>truggle, and <<heP>>'<<s>> going to hold you down and rape your butt while you <<s>>cream and cry."
 <br><br>
-$subSlave.slaveName keeps _his2 eyes clamped shut and _his2 hands down at _his2 sides, balled into fists, but _his2 self-control finally cracks and _he2 lets out a great gasping sob before bursting into tears.
+$subSlave.slaveName keeps _his2 eyes clamped shut and _his2 hand<<if hasBothArms($subSlave)>>s<</if>> down at _his2 side<<if hasBothArms($subSlave)>>s<</if>>, balled into <<if !hasBothArms($subSlave)>>a <</if>>fist<<if hasBothArms($subSlave)>>s<</if>>, but _his2 self-control finally cracks and _he2 lets out a great gasping sob before bursting into tears.
 
 <<case "shower force">>
 
@@ -2023,7 +2023,7 @@ $he adds impishly. <<if canHear($subSlave)>>Hearing this<<else>>Realizing your p
 	<<run Enunciate($activeSlave)>>
 	<<switch $subSlave.fetish>>
 	<<case "submissive">>
-		is a shameless submissive and loves to be fucked. $activeSlave.slaveName must know $he's being had, at least a little. "$subSlave.slaveName," $he purrs, "I'll fuck you until your toe<<s>> curl."
+		is a shameless submissive and loves to be fucked. $activeSlave.slaveName must know $he's being had, at least a little. "$subSlave.slaveName," $he purrs, "I'll fuck you <<if hasAnyLegs($subSlave)>>until your toe<<s>> curl<<else>><<s>>en<<s>>ele<<ss>><</if>>."
 	<<case "cumslut">>
 		loves the taste of cum. "I promi<<s>>e to pull out and let you drink my cum, <<s>>traight from my cock," $he purrs.
 		<<set $activeSlave.counter.penetrative++, $penetrativeTotal++>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/REresistantmotherdaughter.tw b/src/uncategorized/REresistantmotherdaughter.tw
index 64746955f56..41e4b04dff6 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/REresistantmotherdaughter.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/REresistantmotherdaughter.tw
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ $slaves[$i].slaveName and $his _daughter2 are both having trouble getting acclim
 <span id="result">
 <br><<link "Spend the evening gently acclimating them to your ownership">>
 	<<replace "#result">>
-	Though neither of the two vehemently protests your decision to have them both join you in bed, furtive uneasy glances are exchanged between the two. Since they're already naked, they clamber onto your bed before you and reluctantly kneel facing each other, leaving enough space between them for you and for them to avert their eyes to avoid the other's nakedness. They clearly assume you would start by using one of them, so they're quite taken aback when you remain standing at the edge of the bed and suggest that $slaves[$i].slaveName play with $his _daughter2. $slaves[$j].slaveName awkwardly flounders a little as _his2 mother's <<if hasBothArms($slaves[$i])>>hands roam<<elseif hasAnyArms($slaves[$i])>>hand roams<</if>> about _his2 body, but does not reel back from the intimate touching. In time you instruct $slaves[$j].slaveName to pleasure _his2 mother, but still decline to join the incestuous union unfolding on your sheets. You extend the foreplay for hours, bringing both mother and _daughter2 to such a state of naked arousal that they begin grinding against each other uninhibitedly. They are both so desperate for release that they do not object when you finally decide to join them, instead eagerly moving to include you in their coupling. What started with $slaves[$j].slaveName awkwardly kneeling unmoving while _his2 mother sucked _his2 nipples ends with $slaves[$j].slaveName <<if hasAllLimbs($slaves[$j])>>on all fours<<else>>bent over<</if>> getting fucked by you while orally pleasuring $slaves[$i].slaveName. You gaze over at $slaves[$i].slaveName and $he moans and licks $his lips enticingly back at you as $slaves[$j].slaveName moans into $his fuckhole.
+	Though neither of the two vehemently protests your decision to have them both join you in bed, furtive uneasy glances are exchanged between the two. Since they're already naked, they clamber onto your bed before you and reluctantly kneel facing each other, leaving enough space between them for you<<if canSee($slaves[$i]) && canSee($slaves[$j])>> and for them to avert their eyes to avoid the other's nakedness<</if>>. They clearly assume you would start by using one of them, so they're quite taken aback when you remain standing at the edge of the bed and suggest that $slaves[$i].slaveName play with $his _daughter2. $slaves[$j].slaveName awkwardly flounders a little as _his2 mother's <<if hasBothArms($slaves[$i])>>hands roam<<elseif hasAnyArms($slaves[$i])>>hand roams<</if>> about _his2 body, but does not reel back from the intimate touching. In time you instruct $slaves[$j].slaveName to pleasure _his2 mother, but still decline to join the incestuous union unfolding on your sheets. You extend the foreplay for hours, bringing both mother and _daughter2 to such a state of naked arousal that they begin grinding against each other uninhibitedly. They are both so desperate for release that they do not object when you finally decide to join them, instead eagerly moving to include you in their coupling. What started with $slaves[$j].slaveName awkwardly kneeling unmoving while _his2 mother sucked _his2 nipples ends with $slaves[$j].slaveName <<if hasAllLimbs($slaves[$j])>>on all fours<<else>>bent over<</if>> getting fucked by you while orally pleasuring $slaves[$i].slaveName. You gaze over at $slaves[$i].slaveName and $he moans and licks $his lips enticingly back at you as $slaves[$j].slaveName moans into $his fuckhole.
 	@@.mediumaquamarine;They have both become more trusting of you.@@
 
 	<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 4, $slaves[$j].trust += 4, $slaves[$i].counter.oral += 1, $slaves[$j].counter.oral += 1, $oralTotal += 2>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/bodyModification.tw b/src/uncategorized/bodyModification.tw
index 0e26a8a945c..f977fdc4234 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/bodyModification.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/bodyModification.tw
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@
 						You really slashed away with your knife, but were careful not to allow $him to bleed out.
 					<</if>>
 				<<default>>
-					The best way to apply scarring to the entire body is with a good old fashioned whip.  $His body is a mess of crisscrossed lines<<if hasAnyNaturalLimbs($activeSlave)>>, and $his <<if getLimbCount($activeSlave, 1) > 1>>limbs twisted so violently in their restraints that they too have<<else>>only limb twists so violently in its restraints that it too has<</if>> become scarred<</if>>.
+					The best way to apply scarring to the entire body is with a good old fashioned whip. $His body is a mess of crisscrossed lines<<if hasAnyNaturalLimbs($activeSlave)>>, and $his <<if getLimbCount($activeSlave, 1) > 1>>limbs twisted so violently in their restraints that they too have<<else>>only limb twists so violently in its restraints that it too has<</if>> become scarred<</if>>.
 			<</switch>>
 			No matter how you chose to apply it, scarring so much of $his body has @@.red; hurt $his health.@@
 			<<set $activeSlave.health -= 20>>
@@ -57,9 +57,9 @@
 								$His clit was an impossibly tiny target,
 							<</if>>
 						<</if>>
-						but the end was never in doubt.  The tip connected with $his most intimate place on the first try, and plunged $him into absolute agony.
+						but the end was never in doubt. The tip connected with $his most intimate place on the first try, and plunged $him into absolute agony.
 					<<else>>
-						The	end was never in doubt.  A few strokes of the whip plunged $him into agony $his body will not allow $him to forget.
+						The	end was never in doubt. A few strokes of the whip plunged $him into agony $his body will not allow $him to forget.
 					<</if>>
 				<<case "burn">>
 					Your goal wasn't to make the distinct shape of a brand, but rather to permanently mar the $activeSlave.skin skin of $his $scarTarget.local with an open flame.
@@ -72,13 +72,13 @@
 						You really slashed away at $scarTarget.local with your knife, but were careful not to allow $him to bleed out.
 					<</if>>
 				<<default>>
-					You had no shortage of kinky and medical tools for applying scars.  $His $activeSlave.skin $scarTarget.local is bleeding profusely.
+					You had no shortage of kinky and medical tools for applying scars. $His $activeSlave.skin $scarTarget.local is bleeding profusely.
 			<</switch>>
 
 			No matter how you chose to apply it, being scarred @@.red; hurt $his health a little.@@
 			<<set $activeSlave.health -= 10>>
 		<</if>>
-		Afterwards you seal the wounds with a white medical spray.  Infection is no risk to your slave thanks to your curatives, but in order to form obvious scar tissue you want to keep air out and delay normal healing as long as possible.
+		Afterwards you seal the wounds with a white medical spray. Infection is no risk to your slave thanks to your curatives, but in order to form obvious scar tissue you want to keep air out and delay normal healing as long as possible.
 		<<unset $scarApplied>>
 	<</if>>
 	<<if $activeSlave.fetish != "mindbroken" && $activeSlave.fuckdoll == 0>>
@@ -1304,11 +1304,11 @@ Or a custom site: <<textbox "$scarTarget.local" $scarTarget.local "Body Modifica
 <<else>>
 	<<if $activeSlave.scar.hasOwnProperty($scarTarget.local)>>
 		<<if $activeSlave.scar[$scarTarget.local][$scarDesign.local]>>
-			$He already has $scarDesign.local scars on $his $scarTarget.local.  You can make it worse.
+			$He already has $scarDesign.local scars on $his $scarTarget.local. You can make it worse.
 		<<else>> /* check how much scarring is on this part */
 			<<set _scarTotalValue = (Object.values($activeSlave.scar[$scarTarget.local])).reduce((a, b) => a + b, 0)>>
 			<<if _scarTotalValue>>
-				That would be a new kind of scar to add to the growing collection on $his $scarTarget.local.  Life can always be worse for a slave.
+				That would be a new kind of scar to add to the growing collection on $his $scarTarget.local. Life can always be worse for a slave.
 			<</if>>
 		<</if>>
 	<</if>>
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