From 4156a237905e1a13b90e138ae6513a96f7ccbf6c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Arkerthan <arkerthan@gmail.com>
Date: Sun, 26 Apr 2020 11:10:56 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] fix eye description grammar
---
src/js/descriptionWidgets.js | 14 +++++++-------
1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
diff --git a/src/js/descriptionWidgets.js b/src/js/descriptionWidgets.js
index 464d824b6de..86a273ae8a5 100644
--- a/src/js/descriptionWidgets.js
+++ b/src/js/descriptionWidgets.js
@@ -252,15 +252,15 @@ App.Desc.eyes = function(slave) {
if (slave.intelligence + slave.intelligenceImplant > 95) {
r += `${His} ${App.Desc.eyeColor(slave)}-eyed gaze is incisive, quick, cunning; with ${his} education, ${he} can be considered <span class="deepskyblue">brilliant.</span> `;
} else if (slave.intelligence + slave.intelligenceImplant <= 50) {
- r += `${His} ${App.Desc.eyesColor(slave, "", "eye is", "eyes are", false)} alive with intelligence; with ${his} miseducation, however, ${he} performs merely <span class="orangered">above average.</span> `;
+ r += `${His} ${App.Desc.eyesColor(slave, "", "eye", "eyes", false)} ${hasBothEyes(slave) ? "are" : "is"} alive with intelligence; with ${his} miseducation, however, ${he} performs merely <span class="orangered">above average.</span> `;
} else if (slave.intelligenceImplant >= 15) {
- r += `${His} ${App.Desc.eyesColor(slave, "", "eye is", "eyes are", false)} alive with intelligence; ${he} is both <span class="deepskyblue">highly intelligent</span> and `;
+ r += `${His} ${App.Desc.eyesColor(slave, "", "eye", "eyes", false)} ${hasBothEyes(slave) ? "are" : "is"} alive with intelligence; ${he} is both <span class="deepskyblue">highly intelligent</span> and `;
if (slave.intelligenceImplant >= 30) {
r += `well `;
}
r += `educated. `;
} else {
- r += `${His} ${App.Desc.eyesColor(slave, "", "eye is", "eyes are", false)} alive with intelligence; ${he} is so <span class="deepskyblue">highly intelligent</span> that ${his} `;
+ r += `${His} ${App.Desc.eyesColor(slave, "", "eye", "eyes", false)} ${hasBothEyes(slave) ? "are" : "is"} alive with intelligence; ${he} is so <span class="deepskyblue">highly intelligent</span> that ${his} `;
if (slave.intelligenceImplant > 0) {
r += `meager`;
} else if (slave.intelligenceImplant <= -15) {
@@ -271,7 +271,7 @@ App.Desc.eyes = function(slave) {
r += ` education is unimportant. `;
}
} else if (slave.intelligence > 15) {
- r += `${His} ${App.Desc.eyesColor(slave, "", "eye is", "eyes are", false)} `;
+ r += `${His} ${App.Desc.eyesColor(slave, "", "eye", "eyes", false)} ${hasBothEyes(slave) ? "are" : "is"} `;
if (slave.intelligence + slave.intelligenceImplant > 50) {
r += `alive with intelligence; with ${his} education, ${he} can be considered <span class="deepskyblue">highly intelligent.</span> `;
} else if (slave.intelligence + slave.intelligenceImplant <= 15) {
@@ -288,7 +288,7 @@ App.Desc.eyes = function(slave) {
r += `clever; ${he} is of <span class="deepskyblue">above average intelligence</span> despite being undereducated. `;
}
} else if (slave.intelligence >= -15) {
- r += `${His} ${App.Desc.eyesColor(slave, "", "eye is", "eyes are", false)} `;
+ r += `${His} ${App.Desc.eyesColor(slave, "", "eye", "eyes", false)} ${hasBothEyes(slave) ? "are" : "is"} `;
if (slave.intelligence + slave.intelligenceImplant > 15) {
r += `clever; with ${his} education, ${he} can be considered of <span class="deepskyblue">above average intelligence.</span> `;
} else if (slave.intelligence + slave.intelligenceImplant < -15) {
@@ -305,7 +305,7 @@ App.Desc.eyes = function(slave) {
r += `alert; ${he} is of average intelligence and is undereducated. `;
}
} else if (slave.intelligence >= -50) {
- r += `${His} ${App.Desc.eyesColor(slave, "", "eye is", "eyes are", false)} `;
+ r += `${His} ${App.Desc.eyesColor(slave, "", "eye", "eyes", false)} ${hasBothEyes(slave) ? "are" : "is"} `;
if (slave.intelligence + slave.intelligenceImplant >= -15) {
r += `alert; with ${his} education, ${he} can be considered of average intelligence. `;
} else if (slave.intelligence + slave.intelligenceImplant < -50) {
@@ -322,7 +322,7 @@ App.Desc.eyes = function(slave) {
r += `dim; ${he} is of <span class="orangered">below average intelligence</span> and is poorly educated. `;
}
} else if (slave.intelligence >= -95) {
- r += `${His} ${App.Desc.eyesColor(slave, "", "eye is", "eyes are", false)} `;
+ r += `${His} ${App.Desc.eyesColor(slave, "", "eye", "eyes", false)} ${hasBothEyes(slave) ? "are" : "is"} `;
if (slave.intelligence + slave.intelligenceImplant >= -50) {
r += `dim; even with ${his} education, ${he} can only be considered of <span class="orangered">below average intelligence.</span> `;
} else if (slave.intelligence + slave.intelligenceImplant < -95) {
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