diff --git a/src/npc/generate/newSlaveIntro.js b/src/npc/generate/newSlaveIntro.js
index 9d2884a12186391c302ca4d4ffcde25274ad75c0..4067378565a09b4ffefe56e7d5d0ff014f54d8db 100644
--- a/src/npc/generate/newSlaveIntro.js
+++ b/src/npc/generate/newSlaveIntro.js
@@ -4522,11 +4522,11 @@ App.UI.newSlaveIntro = function(slave, slave2, {tankBorn = false, momInterest =
 						result(slave) {
 							const el = new DocumentFragment();
 							let r = [];
-							r.push(`You securely restrain your new slave; for both ${his} own safety and so ${he} can't object to ${his} meal. You reassure ${him}`);
+							r.push(`You securely restrain your new slave; for both ${his} own safety and so ${he} can't object to ${his} meal. You reassure ${him}, and order ${him} to`);
 							if (hasAnyEyes(slave)) {
-								r.push(`and order ${him} to close ${his} eyes`);
+								r.push(`close ${his} eyes and`);
 							}
-							r.push(`and open wide for a treat.`);
+							r.push(`open wide for a treat.`);
 							if (canSee(slave)) {
 								r.push(`Since ${his} eyes are contentedly closed,`);
 							} else {
@@ -4610,11 +4610,11 @@ App.UI.newSlaveIntro = function(slave, slave2, {tankBorn = false, momInterest =
 						result(slave) {
 							const el = new DocumentFragment();
 							let r = [];
-							r.push(`You securely restrain your new slave; for both ${his} own safety and so ${he} can't object to ${his} meal. You reassure ${him}`);
+							r.push(`You securely restrain your new slave; for both ${his} own safety and so ${he} can't object to ${his} meal. You reassure ${him}, and order ${him} to`);
 							if (hasAnyEyes(slave)) {
-								r.push(`and order ${him} to close ${his} eyes`);
+								r.push(`close ${his} eyes and`);
 							}
-							r.push(`and open wide for a treat.`);
+							r.push(`open wide for a treat.`);
 							if (canSee(slave)) {
 								r.push(`Since ${his} eyes are contentedly closed,`);
 							} else {