From 4d64435f90f8c3e497950fb8d763bc63085c91bd Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: lowercase-donkey <lowercasedonkey@gmail.com> Date: Fri, 18 Jan 2019 15:57:58 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] Flavor text that makes clear I can't track every impact of ads. --- src/uncategorized/brothel.tw | 4 ++-- src/uncategorized/brothelAdvertisement.tw | 2 +- 2 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/src/uncategorized/brothel.tw b/src/uncategorized/brothel.tw index d85d0c2b4ac..e808b0c15da 100644 --- a/src/uncategorized/brothel.tw +++ b/src/uncategorized/brothel.tw @@ -194,9 +194,9 @@ $brothelNameCaps Last week this <<set $lastWeeksCashProfits.brothelAds = $lastWeeksCashIncome.brothelAds + $lastWeeksCashExpenses.brothelAds>> <<if $lastWeeksCashProfits.brothelAds > 0>> - made you an extra @@.green;<<print cashFormat($lastWeeksCashProfits.brothelAds)>>@@. + made you an extra @@.green;<<print cashFormat($lastWeeksCashProfits.brothelAds)>>@@,<<if $brothelSlaves > 1>> as well as increasing business for your whores.<</if>> <<elseif $lastWeeksCashProfits.brothelAds < 0>> - cost you @@.red;<<print cashFormat($lastWeeksCashProfits.brothelAds)>>@@. + cost you @@.red;<<print cashFormat($lastWeeksCashProfits.brothelAds)>>@@,<<if $brothelSlaves > 1>> but still increased business for your whores.<</if>> <</if>> <<link "Manage brothel advertisements" "Brothel Advertisement">><<set $nextLink = passage(), $nextButton = "Back">><</link>> diff --git a/src/uncategorized/brothelAdvertisement.tw b/src/uncategorized/brothelAdvertisement.tw index 61a3ce9771e..ede82821913 100644 --- a/src/uncategorized/brothelAdvertisement.tw +++ b/src/uncategorized/brothelAdvertisement.tw @@ -121,7 +121,7 @@ You are spending @@.red;<<print cashFormat($brothelAdsSpending)>>@@ each week to advertise the brothel. <<if $lastWeeksCashIncome.brothelAds > 0>> - Last week's ads increased profits by @@.green;<<print cashFormat($lastWeeksCashIncome.brothelAds)>>@@, and cost @@.red;<<print cashFormat($lastWeeksCashExpenses.brothelAds)>>@@. + Last week's ads increased profits by @@.green;<<print cashFormat($lastWeeksCashIncome.brothelAds)>>@@<<if $brothelSlaves > 1>> and also increased business for your whores<</if>>, and cost @@.red;<<print cashFormat($lastWeeksCashExpenses.brothelAds)>>@@. <</if>> <<if $brothelAdsSpending > 900>> -- GitLab