diff --git a/src/interaction/prostheticConfig.tw b/src/interaction/prostheticConfig.tw
index a5d6e382e3ea7d53481744563d6ffb193ddeaa1e..1f290e7646704a0d52d4f4b399cfefc985b1f7f0 100644
--- a/src/interaction/prostheticConfig.tw
+++ b/src/interaction/prostheticConfig.tw
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ This room is lined with shelves and cabinets, it could be easily mistaken for a
| [[Sky-Blue|Prosthetics Configuration][$activeSlave.eyeColor = "sky-blue", $prostheticsConfig = "eyeColor", cashX(forceNeg($modCost), "slaveMod", $activeSlave)]]
| [[Hazel|Prosthetics Configuration][$activeSlave.eyeColor = "hazel", $prostheticsConfig = "eyeColor", cashX(forceNeg($modCost), "slaveMod", $activeSlave)]]
| [[Pale-Grey|Prosthetics Configuration][$activeSlave.eyeColor = "pale-grey", $prostheticsConfig = "eyeColor", cashX(forceNeg($modCost), "slaveMod", $activeSlave)]]
- | [[White|Prosthetics Configuration][$activeSlave.eyeColor = "white", $prostheticsConfig = "eyeColor" ,cashX(forceNeg($modCost), "slaveMod", $activeSlave)]]
+ | [[White|Prosthetics Configuration][$activeSlave.eyeColor = "white", $prostheticsConfig = "eyeColor", cashX(forceNeg($modCost), "slaveMod", $activeSlave)]]
| [[Pink|Prosthetics Configuration][$activeSlave.eyeColor = "pink", $prostheticsConfig = "eyeColor", cashX(forceNeg($modCost), "slaveMod", $activeSlave)]]
| [[Amber|Prosthetics Configuration][$activeSlave.eyeColor = "amber", $prostheticsConfig = "eyeColor", cashX(forceNeg($modCost), "slaveMod", $activeSlave)]]
| [[Red|Prosthetics Configuration][$activeSlave.eyeColor = "red", $prostheticsConfig = "eyeColor", cashX(forceNeg($modCost), "slaveMod", $activeSlave)]]
diff --git a/src/npc/newSlaveIncestSex.tw b/src/npc/newSlaveIncestSex.tw
index 2c9a3eca8252c9b84ce8fd56ec6dc49505fddb98..ac87a2082afe97c73e6c52ba8fcf722956df0603 100644
--- a/src/npc/newSlaveIncestSex.tw
+++ b/src/npc/newSlaveIncestSex.tw
@@ -42,10 +42,10 @@
/* gender relation descriptions */
/* TODO: is there a function for gender-aware relationships? */
<<if $relative.vagina == -1 >>
- <<set _one = _one.replace("mother","father").replace("sister","brother").replace("daughter","son") >>
+ <<set _one = _one.replace("mother", "father").replace("sister", "brother").replace("daughter", "son") >>
<</if>>
<<if $relative2.vagina == -1 >>
- <<set _other = _other.replace("mother","father").replace("sister","brother").replace("daughter","son") >>
+ <<set _other = _other.replace("mother", "father").replace("sister", "brother").replace("daughter", "son") >>
<</if>>
<<if _one == _other >>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/bodyModification.tw b/src/uncategorized/bodyModification.tw
index c68bdefa7f9fff2f9be5b520c80ffd2a7181721b..759b8a7ee50dad5a3597e18a66cbee019bd7e527 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/bodyModification.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/bodyModification.tw
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@
<</if>>
<<switch $scarDesign.local>>
<<case "whip">>
- Targetting a single area with a whip is not easy. You set the mood by carefully arranging candles drippping on to a whimpering $activeSlave.slaveName, then got $his attention with a quick <<if canSee($activeSLave)>>wave<<elseif canHear($activeSlave)>>crack<<else>>tap<</if>> of the whip. One by one, you carefully snuffed out the candles, flicking hot wax as you went. After pausing a moment, you prepared to leave your mark.
+ Targetting a single area with a whip is not easy. You set the mood by carefully arranging candles dripping on to a whimpering $activeSlave.slaveName, then got $his attention with a quick <<if canSee($activeSLave)>>wave<<elseif canHear($activeSlave)>>crack<<else>>tap<</if>> of the whip. One by one, you carefully snuffed out the candles, flicking hot wax as you went. After pausing a moment, you prepared to leave your mark.
<<if ["penis", "vagina"].includes($scarTarget.local)>>
<<if $activeSlave.dick > 4 && $seeDicks>>
$His dick was large enough that it was not too difficult to hit,
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw b/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw
index bec5870b44b6d7d1b6e4dafe723ee58c22be10b9..d504c68148a1bd7e18027484b95791ebafdfde32 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw
@@ -1299,7 +1299,7 @@ The legalities completed, ''__@@.pink;<<= SlaveFullName($activeSlave)>>@@__'' <<
<<else>>
twists and turns, but without limbs is powerless to escape the curling whip.
<</if>>
- If $he didn't know $he was a slave before, @@.mediumorchid;$he does now,@@ and $he's got the @@.gold;agonizing@@ @@.red;injury@@ to prove it. What $he doesn't yet know is just how permanent this lashing's effects will be. The level of violence and the coating you used will leave $him scarred with the marks of slavery forever.
+ If $he didn't know $he was a slave before, @@.mediumorchid;$he does now,@@ and $he's got the @@.gold;agonizing@@ @@.red;injury@@ to prove it. What $he doesn't yet know is just how permanent this lashing's effects will be. The level of violence and the coating you used will leave $him scarred with the marks of slavery forever.
<<if ($arcologies[0].FSSubjugationistRace == $activeSlave.race) && ($arcologies[0].FSSubjugationist > 0)>>
Society @@.green;approves@@ of your purchase and whipping of an inferior $activeSlave.race person; this advances the idea that $activeSlave.race people ought to be enslaved.
<<= FutureSocieties.Change("Subjugationist", 2)>>
@@ -1312,7 +1312,7 @@ The legalities completed, ''__@@.pink;<<= SlaveFullName($activeSlave)>>@@__'' <<
| <<link "Scar $him on the _scarTarget">>
<<replace "#introResult">>
- You drag $him to the body modification studio and strap $him down with $his _scarTarget clear and defenseless. $He doesn't understand what's coming for a while, even as disinfectant is applied to $his _scarTarget. You have a wide selection of tools to create scars, the trick is to keep the wound from healing correctly afterward. Of course, $he has no way of knowing that the pain you are inflicting as you cut into $his flesh will leave such a permanent mark, but the basic message is clear: if $he didn't know $he was a slave before, @@.mediumorchid;$he does now,@@ and $he's got the @@.gold;agonizing@@ @@.red;injury@@ to prove it.
+ You drag $him to the body modification studio and strap $him down with $his _scarTarget clear and defenseless. $He doesn't understand what's coming for a while, even as disinfectant is applied to $his _scarTarget. You have a wide selection of tools to create scars, the trick is to keep the wound from healing correctly afterwards. Of course, $he has no way of knowing that the pain you are inflicting as you cut into $his flesh will leave such a permanent mark, but the basic message is clear: if $he didn't know $he was a slave before, @@.mediumorchid;$he does now,@@ and $he's got the @@.gold;agonizing@@ @@.red;injury@@ to prove it.
<<if ($arcologies[0].FSSubjugationistRace == $activeSlave.race) && ($arcologies[0].FSSubjugationist > 0)>>
Society @@.green;approves@@ of your purchase and scarring of an inferior $activeSlave.race person; this advances the idea that $activeSlave.race people ought to be enslaved.
<<= FutureSocieties.Change("Subjugationist", 2)>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/personalAssistantAppearance.tw b/src/uncategorized/personalAssistantAppearance.tw
index 894ff15e923ca041c39d708d74bcbd8ef5852709..c6299b14814c76855d609a5a9472c1d3533ff9f2 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/personalAssistantAppearance.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/personalAssistantAppearance.tw
@@ -426,7 +426,7 @@ _HeA's a cute little <<if $arcologies[0].FSSupremacist != "unset" && $assistantF
<<case "slave professionalism">>
_hisA swollen hips and pregnant belly loosely wrapped in an elegant kimono. _HeA radiates experience.
<<case "petite admiration">>
- _hisA big pregnant belly utterly dominating _hisA short height. _HeA's nude aside from a crown of flowers, _hisA modesty protected only by _hisA flowing hair.
+ _hisA big pregnant belly utterly dominating _hisA short height. _HeA's nude aside from a crown of flowers, _hisA modesty protected only by _hisA flowing hair.
<<case "statuesque glorification">>
with swollen breasts and an enormous pregnant belly to fit _hisA towering form. _HeA's nude aside from a crown of flowers, _hisA modesty protected only by _hisA flowing hair.
<<default>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/saRelationships.tw b/src/uncategorized/saRelationships.tw
index 65b4843bc9ee2c99404eda41d4d9c2c0e8701580..169e311099addb11e86c9564584ddc829f39c287 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/saRelationships.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/saRelationships.tw
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
<<if _j == _SL>> /* gone through the full loop, found no matches, so reset _SlaveJ */
<<set _SlaveJ = null>>
<</if>>
- <<elseif (_SlaveI.origin == "You were acquainted with $him before you were an arcology owner; your rival tried to use $him to manipulate you, but you rescued $him.") && ($rivalryDuration > 20) && !["Intellectual Dependency", "Paternalism", "Racial Supremacism", "Slave Professionalism"].includes($rivalryFS)&& _SlaveI.newGamePlus == 0>>
+ <<elseif (_SlaveI.origin == "You were acquainted with $him before you were an arcology owner; your rival tried to use $him to manipulate you, but you rescued $him.") && ($rivalryDuration > 20) && !["Intellectual Dependency", "Paternalism", "Racial Supremacism", "Slave Professionalism"].includes($rivalryFS)&& _SlaveI.newGamePlus == 0>>
<<for _j = 0; _j < _SL; _j++>>
<<set _SlaveJ = $slaves[_j]>>
<<setLocalPronouns _SlaveJ 2>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/universalRules.tw b/src/uncategorized/universalRules.tw
index 2f8122318f777ced9e0191b3df27740c946724b5..0fdc15dd1cb41f7b1a3c7d42a56e296cc3cbdfa7 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/universalRules.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/universalRules.tw
@@ -150,7 +150,7 @@ Or design your own: <<textbox "$brandDesign.official" $brandDesign.official "Uni
<br><br>
-One 'welcome' for a new slave is to have them branded. Where would you like such brands to be applied?
+One 'welcome' for a new slave is to have them branded. Where would you like such brands to be applied?
<<if ["ankle", "breast", "buttock", "calf", "cheek", "ear", "foot", "hand", "lower arm", "shoulder", "testicle", "thigh", "upper arm", "wrist"].includes($brandTarget.primary)>>
<br> On the
[[left|Universal Rules][$brandTarget.primary = ("left " + $brandTarget.primary)]]
@@ -324,7 +324,7 @@ Or design your own: <<textbox "$scarDesign.primary" $scarDesign.primary "Univers
<</if>>
<</if>>
-One 'welcome' for a new slave is to have them scarred. Where would you like such scars to be applied?
+One 'welcome' for a new slave is to have them scarred. Where would you like such scars to be applied?
<<if ["ankle", "breast", "buttock", "calf", "cheek", "ear", "foot", "hand", "lower arm", "shoulder", "testicle", "thigh", "upper arm", "wrist"].includes($scarTarget.primary)>>
<br> On the
[[left|Universal Rules][$scarTarget.primary = ("left " + $scarTarget.primary)]]