diff --git a/src/SecExp/authorityReport.tw b/src/SecExp/authorityReport.tw
index 7ebe182cc8dae982d03b0b4ee3baffbefca6086d..3e1e7ce8a2cec8ee34e87425a6901c8a2e2019c8 100644
--- a/src/SecExp/authorityReport.tw
+++ b/src/SecExp/authorityReport.tw
@@ -18,97 +18,97 @@ Your authority is
<<set _authGrowth = 0>>
<<if $PC.career == "wealth">>
- As part of the idle wealth, you were used to have obedience coming naturally to you. Now you find it harder to maintain authority over the arcology.
- <<set _authGrowth -= 10 * random(5,15)>>
+ As part of the idle rich, you were used to have obedience coming naturally to you. Now you find it harder to maintain authority over the arcology.
+ <<set _authGrowth -= (10 * random(5,15))>>
<<elseif $PC.career == "slaver">>
Your past as a slaver helps you assert your authority over the arcology.
- <<set _authGrowth += 10 * random(5,15)>>
+ <<set _authGrowth += (10 * random(5,15))>>
<<elseif $PC.career == "escort">>
Given your past career as an escort, you find it hard to assert your authority over the arcology and its inhabitants.
- <<set _authGrowth -= 10 * random(5,15)>>
+ <<set _authGrowth -= (10 * random(5,15))>>
<<elseif $PC.career == "servant">>
Given your past career as a servant, you find it hard to assert your authority over the arcology and its inhabitants.
- <<set _authGrowth -= 10 * random(5,15)>>
+ <<set _authGrowth -= (10 * random(5,15))>>
<<elseif $PC.career == "BlackHat">>
- Given your past career as a, rather questionable, incursion specialist, you find it hard to assert your authority over the arcology and its inhabitants, despite what you may know about them.
- <<set _authGrowth -= 10 * random(5,15)>>
+ Given your past career as a (rather questionable) incursion specialist, you find it hard to assert your authority over the arcology and its inhabitants, despite what you may know about them.
+ <<set _authGrowth -= (10 * random(5,15))>>
<<elseif $PC.career == "gang">>
Given your past life as a gang leader, you find it easier to assert your authority over the arcology and its inhabitants.
- <<set _authGrowth += 10 * random(5,15)>>
+ <<set _authGrowth += (10 * random(5,15))>>
<</if>>
<<if $rep >= 19500>>
Your legend is so well known that your mere presence commands respect and obedience, increasing your authority.
- <<set _authGrowth += 10 * random(10,20)>>
+ <<set _authGrowth += (10 * random(10,20))>>
<<elseif $rep >= 15000>>
Your reputation is so high that your mere presence commands respect, increasing your authority.
- <<set _authGrowth += 10 * random(5,15)>>
+ <<set _authGrowth += (10 * random(5,15))>>
<<elseif $rep >= 10000>>
Your reputation is high enough that your presence commands some respect, increasing your authority.
- <<set _authGrowth += 10 * random(2,8)>>
+ <<set _authGrowth += (10 * random(2,8))>>
<</if>>
<<if $security >= 90>>
Your arcology is incredibly secure and your citizens know quite well who to thank, greatly increasing your authority.
- <<set _authGrowth += 10 * random(10,20)>>
+ <<set _authGrowth += (10 * random(10,20))>>
<<elseif $security >= 70>>
Your arcology is really secure and your citizens know quite well who to thank, increasing your authority.
- <<set _authGrowth += 10 * random(5,15)>>
+ <<set _authGrowth += (10 * random(5,15))>>
<<elseif $security >= 50>>
Your arcology is quite secure and your citizens know who to thank, increasing your authority.
- <<set _authGrowth += 10 * random(2,8)>>
+ <<set _authGrowth += (10 * random(2,8))>>
<</if>>
<<if $crime >= 90>>
The all powerful criminal organizations controlling the arcology have a very easy time undermining your authority.
- <<set _authGrowth -= 10 * random(10,20)>>
+ <<set _authGrowth -= (10 * random(10,20))>>
<<elseif $crime >= 70>>
Crime is king in the arcology, powerful criminals have a very easy time undermining your authority.
- <<set _authGrowth -= 10 * random(5,15)>>
+ <<set _authGrowth -= (10 * random(5,15))>>
<<elseif $crime >= 50>>
Criminal organizations have a strong foothold in the arcology, their activities undermine your authority.
- <<set _authGrowth -= 10 * random(2,8)>>
+ <<set _authGrowth -= (10 * random(2,8))>>
<</if>>
<<if $averageDevotion >= 50 && $averageTrust >= 50>>
The high devotion and trust of your slaves speak eloquently of your leadership capabilities, helping your authority grow.
- <<set _authGrowth += 5 * (($averageDevotion + $averageTrust) / 10)>>
+ <<set _authGrowth += (5 * (($averageDevotion + $averageTrust) / 10))>>
<<elseif $averageDevotion >= 50>>
- The high devotion of your slaves speak eloquently of your leadership capabilities, helping your authority grow.
- <<set _authGrowth += 5 * ($averageDevotion / 10)>>
+ The high devotion of your slaves speaks eloquently of your leadership capabilities, helping your authority grow.
+ <<set _authGrowth += (5 * ($averageDevotion / 10))>>
<<elseif $averageTrust >= 50>>
- The high trust of your slaves speak eloquently of your leadership capabilities, helping your authority grow.
- <<set _authGrowth += 5 * ($averageTrust / 10)>>
+ The high trust of your slaves speaks eloquently of your leadership capabilities, helping your authority grow.
+ <<set _authGrowth += (5 * ($averageTrust / 10))>>
<</if>>
<<if $arcologies[0].ownership >= 90>>
You own so much of the arcology that your authority quickly increases.
- <<set _authGrowth += 5 * Math.trunc($arcologies[0].ownership / 10)>>
+ <<set _authGrowth += (5 * Math.trunc($arcologies[0].ownership / 10))>>
<<elseif $arcologies[0].ownership >= 70>>
You own a big part of the arcology, causing your authority to increase.
- <<set _authGrowth += 5 * Math.trunc($arcologies[0].ownership / 10)>>
+ <<set _authGrowth += (5 * Math.trunc($arcologies[0].ownership / 10))>>
<<elseif $arcologies[0].ownership >= 50>>
You own the majority of the arcology, causing your authority to slowly increase.
- <<set _authGrowth += 5 * Math.trunc($arcologies[0].ownership / 10)>>
+ <<set _authGrowth += (5 * Math.trunc($arcologies[0].ownership / 10))>>
<<else>>
Your low ownership of the arcology causes your authority to decrease.
- <<set _authGrowth -= 5 * Math.trunc($arcologies[0].ownership / 10)>>
+ <<set _authGrowth -= (5 * Math.trunc($arcologies[0].ownership / 10))>>
<</if>>
<<if $activeUnits >= 9>>
- Your military is massive, commanding so many troops greatly increases your authority.
- <<set _authGrowth += 12 * $activeUnits>>
+ Your military is massive; commanding so many troops greatly increases your authority.
+ <<set _authGrowth += (12 * $activeUnits)>>
<<elseif $activeUnits >= 7>>
- Your military is huge, commanding such a number of soldiers increases your authority.
- <<set _authGrowth += 12 * $activeUnits>>
+ Your military is huge; commanding such a number of soldiers increases your authority.
+ <<set _authGrowth += (12 * $activeUnits)>>
<<elseif $activeUnits >= 4>>
- Your military is at a decent size, commanding a small army increases your authority.
- <<set _authGrowth += 12 * $activeUnits>>
+ Your military is at a decent size; commanding a small army increases your authority.
+ <<set _authGrowth += (12 * $activeUnits)>>
<</if>>
<<if $SF.Toggle && $SF.Active >= 1 && $SF.Size > 10>>
- Having a powerful special force, increases your authority.
- <<set _authGrowth += $SF.Size/10>>
+ Having a powerful special force increases your authority.
+ <<set _authGrowth += ($SF.Size/10)>>
<</if>>
<<if $arcologies[0].FSChattelReligionist >= 90>>
@@ -145,12 +145,12 @@ Your authority is
<<if $miniTruth >= 1>>
Your authenticity department works tirelessly to impose your authority in all the arcology.
- <<set _authGrowth += 15 * $miniTruth>>
+ <<set _authGrowth += (15 * $miniTruth)>>
<</if>>
<<if $secretService >= 1>>
Your secret services constantly keep under surveillance any potential threat, intervening when necessary. Rumors of the secretive security service and mysterious disappearances make your authority increase.
- <<set _authGrowth += 15 * $secretService>>
+ <<set _authGrowth += (15 * $secretService)>>
<</if>>
<<if $edictsAuthUpkeep > 0>>
diff --git a/src/cheats/mod_editSlaveCheatNew.tw b/src/cheats/mod_editSlaveCheatNew.tw
index 99b144c1f1ac93a90c9eaaaca0a208d31af613bd..274c9b99c14406bb11e6f9c7f690813e32db878b 100644
--- a/src/cheats/mod_editSlaveCheatNew.tw
+++ b/src/cheats/mod_editSlaveCheatNew.tw
@@ -3462,7 +3462,7 @@
/* <<textbox "$tempSlave.geneticQuirks.heterochromia" $tempSlave.geneticQuirks.heterochromia>> */
<span id=ecol3></span>
<br>
- ''rear Lipedema: ''
+ ''Rear Lipedema: ''
<<switch $tempSlave.geneticQuirks.rearLipedema>>
<<case 0 >>
@@.yellow;none@@ |
diff --git a/src/interaction/main/toychest.js b/src/interaction/main/toychest.js
index d71a23e8175af593f976b1c26dc8f7a159be59e0..2b35b8db014fc8ecefc2a2e5e47958aba5a59cdd 100644
--- a/src/interaction/main/toychest.js
+++ b/src/interaction/main/toychest.js
@@ -131,7 +131,16 @@ App.Interact.ToyChest = function(slave) {
r += `${His} cat-themed lingerie gives the office a bizarrely innocent air of perversion.`;
break;
case "a succubus outfit":
- r += `${He}'s dressed to look like a succubus. There is a <<if $PC.title == 1>>demon<<else>>demoness<</if>> in this office, and ${he} serves _himP.`;
+ r += `${He}'s dressed to look like a succubus. There is a demon`;
+ if ($PC.title === 0) {
+ r += `ess`;
+ }
+ r += `in this office, and ${he} serves `;
+ if ($PC.title === 0) {
+ r += `her.`;
+ } else {
+ r += `him.`;
+ }
break;
case "spats and a tank top":
r += `${He}'s wearing spats and a tank top, giving the office the active air of a gym.`;
diff --git a/src/js/utilJS.js b/src/js/utilJS.js
index 487cc9bf57325975f44673088917c5100ad9c237..aa5c5186b189c097c2f2feae4c8d98af63498fb4 100644
--- a/src/js/utilJS.js
+++ b/src/js/utilJS.js
@@ -2961,7 +2961,7 @@ App.Utils.slaveIndexForId = function(id) {
};
/**
- * Sets temporary variables named by the scheme, dscribed below, to pronouns for the given slave
+ * Sets temporary variables named by the scheme, described below, to pronouns for the given slave
* @param {App.Entity.SlaveState} slave
* @param {any} [suffix] pronounsSuffix. Anything that can be converted to string.
* @param {string[]} [pronouns] requested pronouns. Defaults to all pronoun forms.
diff --git a/src/pregmod/fNippleFuck.tw b/src/pregmod/fNippleFuck.tw
index 7399fe35d418e62817423c44534093d14907f7b2..d237deae55bb71b47a59cfd7677acdd21f036080 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/fNippleFuck.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/fNippleFuck.tw
@@ -40,14 +40,14 @@ breast flesh grips you tightly. A few experimental pumps draws gasps from $him b
<<if $activeSlave.fetish == "boobs" && $activeSlave.fetishKnown == 1>>
- $He has a glassy eyed expression as $he
+ $He has a glassy-eyed expression as $he
<<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>>
gropes $his breasts with both hands, fingering $his unoccupied nipple in time with your thrusts.
<<else>>
savors the sensations running through $his breast.
<</if>>
<<elseif $activeSlave.devotion > 20 || $activeSlave.trust > 20>>
- $He has a glassy eyed expression as $he
+ $He has a glassy-eyed expression as $he
<<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>>
gropes $his breasts with one hand and furiously abuses $his clit with the other.
<<else>>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/newChildIntro.tw b/src/pregmod/newChildIntro.tw
index e61505596b9de9925b438559dfd87a8d18e5e14a..a0b1fa40f75adf65fe75466ded810427d497ab7c 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/newChildIntro.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/newChildIntro.tw
@@ -704,7 +704,7 @@ You slowly strip down, gauging $his reactions to your show, until you are fully
<<else>>
up $his poor little butthole, making the poor $girl struggle desperately with anal pain.
<</if>>
- You take $him, hard, while passersby stare at $him as $he gets pounded over a rail. $He takes the fuck obediently, all the while observing the passing spectators. $He might not be a humiliation fetishist, but $he is @@.hotpink;willing to submit@@ to being used as a sex slave in public and may even grow to enjoy it.
+ You take $him, hard, while passersby stare at $him as $he gets pounded over a rail. $He takes the fuck obediently, all the while <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>observing<<elseif canHear($activeSlave)>>overhearing<<else>>imagining<</if>> the passing spectators. $He might not be a humiliation fetishist, but $he is @@.hotpink;willing to submit@@ to being used as a sex slave in public and may even grow to enjoy it.
<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 4>>
<<if random(1,100) > 60 && $activeSlave.fetish == "none">>
<<set $activeSlave.fetish = "humiliation">>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/saClothes.tw b/src/pregmod/saClothes.tw
index 144f54b472a1ce6be94e0580c587aed5f2e61fd4..02f47548c7877b03ebe02b767fea6da1c7ac3630 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/saClothes.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/saClothes.tw
@@ -731,7 +731,7 @@
is a @@.hotpink;point of pride@@ for the ostentatious size queen.
<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 2>>
<<else>>
- @@.hotpink;breaks $him to sexual slavery@@ slightly. It also penetrates $his cervix causing $him tremendous discomfort, making $him a little @@.gold;less trusting@@ of you.
+ @@.hotpink;breaks $him to sexual slavery@@ slightly. It also penetrates $his cervix, causing $him tremendous discomfort, and making $him a little @@.gold;less trusting@@ of you.
<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 1>>
<<set $slaves[$i].trust -= 1>>
<</if>>
@@ -747,7 +747,7 @@
<<if $slaves[$i].fuckdoll == 0>>
<<if $slaves[$i].fetish != "mindbroken">>
<<if ($slaves[$i].sexualQuirk == "size queen")>>
- $He thinks of the massive dildo stretching out $his womanhood as @@.lime;preparation for the biggest cocks,@@ and @@.hotpink;looks forward@@ to take anything, dicks, hands, truly anything, inside $his newly capacious cunt.
+ $He thinks of the massive dildo stretching out $his womanhood as @@.lime;preparation for the biggest cocks,@@ and @@.hotpink;looks forward@@ to take anything — dicks, hands, truly anything — inside $his newly capacious cunt.
<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 4>>
<<elseif ($slaves[$i].fetish == "masochist") && ($slaves[$i].fetishKnown == 1) && ($slaves[$i].fetishStrength > 60)>>
$He gets off on the agony of having $his cunt @@.lime;permanently stretched@@ by a huge dildo. The terrible combination of pain and pleasure @@.hotpink;breaks $his will@@ but fills $him with @@.gold;fear.@@
@@ -770,7 +770,7 @@
<<if $slaves[$i].fuckdoll == 0>>
<<if $slaves[$i].fetish != "mindbroken">>
<<if ($slaves[$i].sexualQuirk == "size queen")>>
- $He thinks of the massive dildo stretching out $his womanhood and stomach as @@.lime;preparation for the biggest cocks,@@ and @@.hotpink;looks forward@@ to take anything, dicks, hands, arms, truly anything, inside $his newly capacious cunt.
+ $He thinks of the massive dildo stretching out $his womanhood and stomach as @@.lime;preparation for the biggest cocks,@@ and @@.hotpink;looks forward@@ to take anything — dicks, hands, arms, truly anything — inside $his newly capacious cunt.
<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 4>>
<<elseif ($slaves[$i].fetish == "masochist") && ($slaves[$i].fetishKnown == 1) && ($slaves[$i].fetishStrength > 60)>>
$He gets off on the agony of having $his cunt @@.lime;permanently stretched@@ and $his cervix penetrated by a huge dildo. The terrible combination of pain and pleasure @@.hotpink;breaks $his will@@ but fills $him with @@.gold;fear.@@
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw b/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw
index 75d2a782621833343b68f97694111558fc0cf2d0..9560c102c3e38f310726e989c65092a6ccc1e85d 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw
@@ -1245,7 +1245,7 @@ Your order $him to turn around and present $his anus for inspection. $He doesn't
In the morning the penthouse is a busy bustle of female energy. Slaves get up promptly, eat, shower, dress themselves, and head out to work. They chatter if able and allowed, and draw a good deal of strength from each other. As you pass by the kitchen, you are narrowly avoided by a rush of slaves heading to the showers. They're almost bouncing, feeding off each others' youthful energy. At the back of the pack is <<EventNameLink>>. $He looks as young as any of them, but after they're out, $he leans against the door frame for a moment and exhales slowly.
<br><br>
-$His <<= App.Desc.eyeColor($activeSlave)>> eyed gaze catches yours for a moment, and you are reminded that $he isn't as young as they are, not at all. $His face might look youthful, but $his eyes don't. <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>$He sees your consideration, and<<else>>You make yourself known, and $he<</if>> murmurs, "<<S>>orry, <<Master>>. Ju<<s>>t a little <<s>>low thi<<s>> morning."
+$His <<= App.Desc.eyeColor($activeSlave)>>-eyed gaze catches yours for a moment, and you are reminded that $he isn't as young as they are, not at all. $His face might look youthful, but $his eyes don't. <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>$He sees your consideration, and<<else>>You make yourself known, and $he<</if>> murmurs, "<<S>>orry, <<Master>>. Ju<<s>>t a little <<s>>low thi<<s>> morning."
$He hurries after $his sisters, $his
<<if $activeSlave.butt > 12>>
massive
@@ -9969,7 +9969,7 @@ brought in to you. This time <<EventNameLink>> has been sent to deliver it. $He
<br><<link "Geld $him gradually">>
<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
<<replace "#result">>
- You shove $his unresisting<<if $activeSlave.belly >= 5000>> <<if $activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 3000>>gravid<<else>>swollen<</if>><</if>> body over the couch and seize $his ballsack. When $he feels your tight grip $he spasms and tries to pull away reflexively, but goes limp when $he feels the agony of a warning squeeze. You fasten a tight rubber ring around the base of $his sack, leaving $him writhing on the couch in considerable discomfort. You add leather mittens to $his hands to stop $him removing the rubber, and then observe that this is a method used to geld livestock. $His tearful begging goes on until you tire of it and put $him out. <<if $assistantName == "your personal assistant">>Your personal assistant<<else>>$assistantName<</if>> tracks $his agonized, weeping progress around the arcology for the many hours it takes the lack of blood flow to necessitate a trip to the remote surgery. When that time comes, you make $him beg you to remove $his balls for an hour straight before you do — and $he's so desperate for relief from the pain that $he does it. The experience has left $him @@.red;slightly injured,@@ @@.orange;gelded,@@ @@.red;thoroughly traumatized,@@ and @@.gold;willing to do anything@@ to avoid any more pain.
+ You shove $his unresisting<<if $activeSlave.belly >= 5000>> <<if $activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 3000>>gravid<<else>>swollen<</if>><</if>> body over the couch and seize $his ballsack. When $he feels your tight grip $he spasms and tries to pull away reflexively, but goes limp when $he feels the agony of a warning squeeze. You fasten a tight rubber ring around the base of $his sack, leaving $him writhing on the couch in considerable discomfort. You add leather mittens to $his hands to stop $him from removing the rubber, and then observe that this is a method used to geld livestock. $His tearful begging goes on until you tire of it and put $him out. <<if $assistantName == "your personal assistant">>Your personal assistant<<else>>$assistantName<</if>> tracks $his agonized, weeping progress around the arcology for the many hours it takes the lack of blood flow to necessitate a trip to the remote surgery. When that time comes, you make $him beg you to remove $his balls for an hour straight before you do — and $he's so desperate for relief from the pain that $he does it. The experience has left $him @@.red;slightly injured,@@ @@.orange;gelded,@@ @@.red;thoroughly traumatized,@@ and @@.gold;willing to do anything@@ to avoid any more pain.
<<set $activeSlave.behavioralFlaw = "odd", $activeSlave.trust -= 20, $activeSlave.health -= 10, $activeSlave.balls = 0, $activeSlave.scrotum = 0>>
<</replace>>
<</link>>
@@ -13595,7 +13595,7 @@ brought in to you. This time <<EventNameLink>> has been sent to deliver it. $He
<<= VCheck.Anal()>>
<</if>>
<<else>>
- you and $activeSlave.slaveName enjoy the sights while fooling around. While you'd love to use $him, $his chastity keeps you at bay.
+ you and $activeSlave.slaveName enjoy the <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>sights<<else>>atmosphere<</if>> while fooling around. While you'd love to use $him, $his chastity keeps you at bay.
<</if>>
@@.hotpink;$He has become more devoted to you.@@
<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 4>>
@@ -17361,7 +17361,7 @@ brought in to you. This time <<EventNameLink>> has been sent to deliver it. $He
<br><<link "Dance along with $him">>
<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
<<replace "#result">>
- $He doesn't <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>see<<else>>notice<</if>> you advance on $him; $he's facing away from you, and in any case, $he's lost in $his own little world. At the same moment, however, $he begins to hear the track $he's humming, in perfect synchrony with the way $he's humming it, and senses a presence at $his side. You timed it perfectly, directing the sound system here to play the right track, match it to $him, and fade it in as you approached and began to dance beside $him.
+ $He doesn't <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>see<<else>>notice<</if>> you advance on $him; $he's facing away from you, and in any case, $he's lost in $his own little world. At the same moment, however, $he begins to hear the track you're humming, in perfect synchrony with the way $he's humming it, and senses a presence at $his side. You timed it perfectly, directing the sound system here to play the right track, match it to $him, and fade it in as you approached and began to dance beside $him.
<<if $PC.title == 0>>
You've got a woman's body, and you match $his moves, though an observer might see greater power and dominance in the way you dance.
<<else>>
@@ -20499,7 +20499,7 @@ brought in to you. This time <<EventNameLink>> has been sent to deliver it. $He
<<replace "#result">>
You decide to exercise a little maliciousness. You take a step forward, producing a look of
<<if $activeSlave.energy > 80>>lustful anticipation<<elseif $activeSlave.trust > 20>>expectation<<else>>trepidation<</if>>,
- but then you stop, <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>wordlessly<<else>>loudly<</if>> gesturing at $him to continue. $He does, bending $him back forward and backward, concave and convex, rolling $himself around on $his hips a little, and making $his <<if $activeSlave.belly >= 5000>>_belly belly and <</if>>breasts move mesmerizingly. Eventually, $he stretches deeply enough that<<if $activeSlave.trust <= 50>> $he lets $his guard down and<</if>> $his eyes close again.
+ but then you stop, <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>wordlessly<<elseif canHear($activeSlave)>>loudly<<else>>nudging and<</if>> gesturing at $him to continue. $He does, bending $him back forward and backward, concave and convex, rolling $himself around on $his hips a little, and making $his <<if $activeSlave.belly >= 5000>>_belly belly and <</if>>breasts move mesmerizingly. Eventually, $he stretches deeply enough that<<if $activeSlave.trust <= 50>> $he lets $his guard down and<</if>> $his eyes close again.
<<switch $activeSlave.nipples>>
<<case "tiny">>
$His tiny little nipples are too small to grab and pull effectively, so you simply flick them, aiming a vicious high-velocity fingernail at each of them, using both hands.
@@ -20550,7 +20550,7 @@ brought in to you. This time <<EventNameLink>> has been sent to deliver it. $He
<<default>>pulling $his soft nipple and some of the areolae around it into your mouth.
<</switch>>
$His rich milk begins to flow across your tongue, creamy and with a hint of vanilla. $He breathes faster and faster as $he becomes aroused, but then the stimulation peaks. You keep drinking from $him, making no move to stop nursing and start fucking $him. $He sighs with sudden contentment, realizing that you're going to drink every drop $he has, and $his sudden relaxation sends a little extra gush of milk into your mouth. $He @@.hotpink;definitely enjoys the experience,@@ leaning back compliantly as you drain that breast and then $his left one, too.
- <<if $activeSlave.boobs > 25000 || ($activeSlave.boobs > 10000 && $activeSlave.lactation > 1)>>Your clothes feel tight around your middle for the rest of the day, you may have indulged a little too much.<</if>>
+ <<if $activeSlave.boobs > 25000 || ($activeSlave.boobs > 10000 && $activeSlave.lactation > 1)>>Your clothes feel tight around your middle for the rest of the day; you may have indulged a little too much.<</if>>
<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 5>>
<<EventFetish $activeSlave "boobs">>
<<set $activeSlave.lactationDuration = 2>>
@@ -20791,7 +20791,7 @@ brought in to you. This time <<EventNameLink>> has been sent to deliver it. $He
<<elseif $activeSlave.assignment == "whore" || $activeSlave.assignment == "serve the public">>
sneaks a hand under the string around $his waist, tugging $his bottom up <<if $activeSlave.vagina != -1>>until the string between $his legs is pulled up into the entrance of $his womanhood<<else>>and turning sideways to suggest $his ass<</if>>. "Guy<<s>>'ll <<if $activeSlave.assignment == "whore">>pay money for<<else>>line up to fuck<</if>> thi<<s>>," $he giggles.
<<else>>
- bounces a little, smiling. "I'm ba<<s>>ically naked," $he giggles. "Today i<<s>> going to be fun. The other girl<<s>>'ll be jealou<<s>> you wanted me to look <<s>>o <<s>>lutty. Love you, <<Master>>."
+ bounces a little, smiling. "I'm ba<<s>>ically naked," $he giggles. "Today i<<s>> going to be fun. The other $girl<<s>>'ll be jealou<<s>> you wanted me to look <<s>>o <<s>>lutty. Love you, <<Master>>."
<</if>>
$He's happy you indulged $him, and @@.mediumaquamarine;satisfied that you think $he's cute@@ enough to have around (practically) nude.
<<set $activeSlave.trust += 5>>
@@ -20956,7 +20956,7 @@ brought in to you. This time <<EventNameLink>> has been sent to deliver it. $He
<br><<link "Try the 'Butter Strategy'">>
<<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>>
<<replace "#result">>
- You ponder $his predicament for a moment before settling on a solution. You procure an industrial sized jar of curative laced moisturizing butter — specially formulated to ease the strain of hypermassive pregnancy — and explain to your slave that, to free $him, you're going to need to completely cover $him in it so that $he can squeeze through.
+ You ponder $his predicament for a moment before settling on a solution. You procure an industrial-sized jar of curative-laced moisturizing butter — specially formulated to ease the strain of hypermassive pregnancy — and explain to your slave that, to free $him, you're going to need to completely cover $him in it so that $he can squeeze through.
<<if $activeSlave.devotion > 95>>
$He grins at you and then huffs, pretending to be put off by the idea.
<<elseif $activeSlave.devotion > 50>>
@@ -20966,7 +20966,7 @@ brought in to you. This time <<EventNameLink>> has been sent to deliver it. $He
<<elseif ($activeSlave.trust < -20) && ($activeSlave.devotion > -10)>>
$He had seemed uneasy when you first described your idea, but seems to resign $himself to it once you finish your description.
<<elseif ($activeSlave.trust < -50)>>
- The wide eyed slave nods as you describe your idea, clearly hoping you'll free $him as quickly as possible so that $he can get away from you.
+ The wide-eyed slave nods as you describe your idea, clearly hoping you'll free $him as quickly as possible so that $he can get away from you.
<<else>>
$He laughs derisively at you after you describe your idea, then motions for you to get on with it.
<</if>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw b/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw
index 7da9e689c3ea2c3e78cb77959c76403d3d6f7ae4..7873e67bcf3a52e44f57a2a9ea7a1f99083304a3 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw
@@ -1198,7 +1198,7 @@ The legalities completed, ''__@@.pink;<<= SlaveFullName($activeSlave)>>@@__'' <<
<br>
<<link "Threaten $his pregnancy">>
<<replace "#introResult">>
- You place an innocuous-looking drug injector on your desk, and let $him <<if !canSee($activeSlave)>>blindly <</if>>stare at it for a long moment. Then, you roll the cylinder slowly across the smooth surface, rotating it until its label comes into $his view. It depicts the silhouette of a pregnant woman, with a red X over it. Abortifacients. After an instant of horrified comprehension, $he flings $himself at your feet, crying, begging, promising. $He pledges to @@.hotpink;submit to you,@@ <<if $PC.dick == 1>><<if $PC.vagina == 1>>eat you out, <</if>>suck your cock, take it in $his pussy, take it up $his ass<<else>>eat you out, worship you with $his pussy, serve you with $his ass<</if>>, anything, as long as @@.gold;you don't hurt $his baby.@@ You observe that $he'll do all of those things, regardless of what you decide to do about $his pregnancy, but for now, you'll keep $him as a pregnant slut. $He thanks you through $his tears.
+ You place an innocuous-looking drug injector on your desk, and let $him <<if !canSee($activeSlave)>>blindly <</if>>stare at it for a long moment. Then, you roll the cylinder slowly across the smooth surface, rotating it until its label comes into $his view. It depicts the silhouette of a pregnant woman, with a red "X" over it. Abortifacients. After an <<if !canSee($activeSlave)>>short period<<else>>instant<</if>> of horrified comprehension, $he flings $himself at your feet, crying, begging, promising. $He pledges to @@.hotpink;submit to you,@@ <<if $PC.dick == 1>><<if $PC.vagina == 1>>eat you out, <</if>>suck your cock, take it in $his pussy, take it up $his ass<<else>>eat you out, worship you with $his pussy, serve you with $his ass<</if>>, anything, as long as @@.gold;you don't hurt $his baby.@@ You observe that $he'll do all of those things, regardless of what you decide to do about $his pregnancy, but for now, you'll keep $him as a pregnant slut. $He thanks you through $his tears.
<</replace>>
<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 10>>
<<set $activeSlave.trust -= 10>>
@@ -1282,7 +1282,7 @@ The legalities completed, ''__@@.pink;<<= SlaveFullName($activeSlave)>>@@__'' <<
<<= FutureSocieties.Change("Eugenics", 3)>>
<</if>>
<</replace>>
- <<set $activeSlave.chastityVagina = 0,$activeSlave.dick = 0,$activeSlave.foreskin = 0,$activeSlave.ovaries = 0,$activeSlave.preg = -2,$activeSlave.pregKnown = 0,$activeSlave.pregSource = 0,$activeSlave.pregType = 0,$activeSlave.pregWeek = -4,$activeSlave.vagina = -1,$activeSlave.skill.vaginal = 0>>
+ <<set $activeSlave.chastityPenis = 0, $activeSlave.chastityVagina = 0, $activeSlave.dick = 0, $activeSlave.foreskin = 0, $activeSlave.ovaries = 0, $activeSlave.preg = -2, $activeSlave.pregKnown = 0, $activeSlave.pregSource = 0, $activeSlave.pregType = 0, $activeSlave.pregWeek = -4, $activeSlave.vagina = -1, $activeSlave.skill.vaginal = 0>>
<<run SetBellySize($activeSlave)>>
<<set $activeSlave.health -= 10, $activeSlave.trust = Math.clamp($activeSlave.trust-100, -100, 100)>>
<</link>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/reBoomerang.tw b/src/uncategorized/reBoomerang.tw
index 22d269eb2d408ef137aa9bdc0e8be75b1b8d3298..edd2dd097a30dd0a2c499f12d83cc37e9288557f 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/reBoomerang.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/reBoomerang.tw
@@ -165,6 +165,7 @@ brings up the relevant feeds. There's a naked body crumpled pathetically against
"They were breeding me with idiot<<s>>." You sold $him to a Subjugationist arcology; it's nothing short of incredible that $he managed to get back here. $He must have sold and traded $himself without hesitation. "I d-don't want thi<<s>> pregnan<<c>>y."
<<set $activeSlave.preg = _pregWeeks-1, $activeSlave.pregType = random(2,4), $activeSlave.pregWeek = $activeSlave.preg, $activeSlave.pregKnown = 1>>
<<run SetBellySize($activeSlave)>>
+ <<run WombFatherRace($activeSlave, $activeSlave.race)>>
<<case "gender radicalist arcology">>
"They <<if $activeSlave.balls>> cut my ball<<s>> off and then<</if>> j-ju<<s>>t kind of t-turned me loo<<s>>e in the corridor<<s>>," $he moans. You sold $him to a Gender Radicalist arcology. "Naked, <<s>>o everyone could u<<s>>e my a<<ss>>. Plea<<s>>e, I don't want to be an entire arcology'<<s>> bitch."
<<set $activeSlave.balls = 0>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/reFSAcquisition.tw b/src/uncategorized/reFSAcquisition.tw
index de1fb465a0d2c63a23d0216752367a5e79e82dab..145b4c236bd21f4b52ebeb6b635519cac6ac24ca 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/reFSAcquisition.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/reFSAcquisition.tw
@@ -1339,7 +1339,7 @@ The call comes in from an office, and you suppress the urge to check whether $as
<<case "Roman Revivalist">>
$He arrives wide-eyed and enthusiastic about the historical style $he saw on the way in. $He swallows nervously throughout the enslavement process and even cries a little at the end. $He's slow to undress, and when $he's finished, $he covers $his modest breasts with one arm and $his mons with the other. It seems that $he's about to have a rude awakening about the realities of being a house slave.
<<case "Aztec Revivalist">>
- $He arrives awestruck by all the sights $he passed through to get to your abode. $He probably didn't see anything too extreme, but $he will soon. Feeling your gaze on $his body, $he quickly abandons all fears from $his past life, strips off $his clothes, and submits to you fully. Only time will tell if $he made a mistake.
+ $He arrives awestruck by <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>all the sights<<else>>everything<</if>> $he passed through to get to your abode. $He probably didn't see anything too extreme, but $he will soon. Feeling your gaze on $his body, $he quickly abandons all fears from $his past life, strips off $his clothes, and submits to you fully. Only time will tell if $he made a mistake.
<<case "Edo Revivalist">>
$He arrives with doubt already clouding $his eyes. It seems $he passed one of the arcology's seedier bars on $his way up to your penthouse; the sight of roaring patrons swilling cheap sake and manhandling whores in loose kimonos does not seem to have been part of $his expectations. As the enslavement process winds on, $he reflexively begins to look around for a means of escape, and slowly collapses into $himself as $he realizes there is none.
<<case "Arabian Revivalist">>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/reMilfTourist.tw b/src/uncategorized/reMilfTourist.tw
index c3462b1528031a26647b24d6d94a093bcdeca18e..6ab2d6bd83f305908f99cf576ebb87a152dbd2f2 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/reMilfTourist.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/reMilfTourist.tw
@@ -110,7 +110,9 @@
<</link>>
<br><<link "Share some Free Cities life with _him2">>
<<replace "#result">>
- You have _milfSlave.slaveName bring the tourist up to meet you. _He2's full of questions about what it's like to be an arcology owner, and you finally tell _him2 that you can give _him2 a pretty good idea. Eagerly, _he2 asks you how, and you point at _milfSlave.slaveName, telling the tourist _he2 ought to bend the slave over the couch if _he2 wants to know what it's really like to be an oversexed oligarch. "I'm, um, not really a lesbian," the tourist responds hesitantly.
+ <<run Enunciate($activeSlave)>>
+ You have _milfSlave.slaveName bring the tourist up to meet you. _He2's full of questions about what it's like to be an arcology owner, and you finally tell _him2 that you can give _him2 a pretty good idea. Eagerly, _he2 asks you how, and you point at _milfSlave.slaveName, telling the tourist _he2 ought to bend the slave over the couch if _he2 wants to know what it's really like to be an oversexed oligarch. "I'm, um, not really a le<<s>>bian," the tourist responds hesitantly.
+ <<run Enunciate(_milfSlave)>>
<<if _milfSlave.dick > 0>>
"You don't have to be," $he purrs. "I have a cock." $He slides in, just close enough to prove it. "Plea<<s>>e,
<<else>>
@@ -128,8 +130,9 @@
<</link>>
<br><<link "Encourage _him2 to enjoy the slave with your compliments">>
<<replace "#result">>
- <<setSpokenLocalPronouns _milfSlave $activeSlave>>
- You have _milfSlave.slaveName bring the tourist up to meet you, and exchange some minor pleasantries. You tell _him2 that if _he2 really wants to experience Free Cities life, though, _he2 really should enjoy _milfSlave.slaveName, pointing at the slave hovering behind _him2. _He2 blushes furiously, but before _he2 can stammer a refusal, the slave whispers something into _his2 ear. "I'm, um, not really a lesbian," the tourist responds hesitantly.
+ <<run Enunciate($activeSlave)>>
+ You have _milfSlave.slaveName bring the tourist up to meet you, and exchange some minor pleasantries. You tell _him2 that if _he2 really wants to experience Free Cities life, though, _he2 really should enjoy _milfSlave.slaveName, pointing at the slave hovering behind _him2. _He2 blushes furiously, but before _he2 can stammer a refusal, the slave whispers something into _his2 ear. "I'm, um, not really a le<<s>>bian," the tourist responds hesitantly.
+ <<run Enunciate(_milfSlave)>>
<<if _milfSlave.dick > 0>>
"You don't have to be," $he purrs. "I have a cock." $He slides in, just close enough to prove it. "Plea<<s>>e,
<<else>>
@@ -137,6 +140,7 @@
<</if>>
give me a try." The tourist turns to stare at $him, and _he2 offers just the right kind of plaintive expression. "O-okay," the tourist says in a tiny voice, and _milfSlave.slaveName giggles, hugging _him2 from behind. $He takes the tourist's hand, and they leave your office together.
<br><br>
+ <<setSpokenLocalPronouns _milfSlave $activeSlave>>
"<<Master>>," $he reports the next time you see $him, "that touri<<s>>t was really nice. Al<<s>>o, I got _him2 to have <<s>>e<<x>> with me, after all. <<He 2>> wa<<s>> going to take me back to <<his 2>> hotel but I got _him2 to do me on the way. <<He 2>> wa<<s>> all he<<s>>itant and blu<<sh>>y about doing it in public, but <<he 2>> got better after the fir<<s>>t time I ate _him2 out." $He looks pleased with $himself. "I bet <<he 2>> @@.green;tell<<s>> all <<his 2>> friend<<s>>@@ back home how much fun it i<<s>> here."
<<set $slaves[_milfed].trust += 4, $slaves[_milfed].counter.oral++>>
<<set $oralTotal++>>
@@ -163,7 +167,8 @@
/* 000-250-006 */
<</replace>>
<<replace "#result">>
- When your new slave comes to, _his2 weight is hanging from _his2 wrists, bound over _his2 head. _He2's not exactly thin, making the position uncomfortable for _his2 arms, so _he2 groggily stands, finding _himself2 in a pool of light in the middle of a cell. _He2's nursing a tremendous hangover, and though _he2 does not realize it, _he2's drugged. You're present, though not visible, witnessing _his2 first conscious moment of slavery from your desk. Realization is slow. _He2's no innocent, so _he2 recognizes the sensations of waking up the morning after a night of drinking interspersed with vigorous vaginal, oral, and anal intercourse, but _he2 does not remember the specifics. After a few minutes, _he2 understands that no one is coming, and speaks up hesitantly: "Is anyone there?" Getting no immediate answer, _he2 slumps against _his2 wrist restraints again, and begins to cry to _himself2. "W-why would a-anyone do this."
+ <<run Enunciate($activeSlave)>>
+ When your new slave comes to, _his2 weight is hanging from _his2 wrists, bound over _his2 head. _He2's not exactly thin, making the position uncomfortable for _his2 arms, so _he2 groggily stands, finding _himself2 in a pool of light in the middle of a cell. _He2's nursing a tremendous hangover, and though _he2 does not realize it, _he2's drugged. You're present, though not visible, witnessing _his2 first conscious moment of slavery from your desk. Realization is slow. _He2's no innocent, so _he2 recognizes the sensations of waking up the morning after a night of drinking interspersed with vigorous vaginal, oral, and anal intercourse, but _he2 does not remember the specifics. After a few minutes, _he2 understands that no one is coming, and speaks up hesitantly: "I<<s>> anyone there?" Getting no immediate answer, _he2 slumps against _his2 wrist restraints again, and begins to cry to _himself2. "W-why would a-anyone do thi<<s>>."
<br>
<<run cashX(-20000, "event", $activeSlave)>>
<<include "New Slave Intro">>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/reShelterInspection.tw b/src/uncategorized/reShelterInspection.tw
index 53a21373a7ce1359f99f1218f512dafedfff0efc..56255242dfcf324aa39a0479ec1443bb86001542 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/reShelterInspection.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/reShelterInspection.tw
@@ -52,11 +52,12 @@
<</if>>
*/
-<<run Enunciate(_Inspectee)>>
<<setLocalPronouns _Inspectee>>
<<setLocalPronouns $activeSlave 2>>
<<setAssistantPronouns>>
<<setPlayerPronouns>>
+<<run Enunciate($activeSlave)>>
+<<setSpokenLocalPronouns _Inspectee $activeSlave>>
<span id="artFrame">
/* 000-250-006 */
@@ -112,7 +113,7 @@ Your assistant announces a visitor in the entryway of your penthouse, and adds<<
_HisA avatar turns a reproving blue and shrinks a little.
<</switch>>
<</if>>
-Not waiting to be greeted, the inspector looks up at the nearest camera and demands to be let in. _He2's an older _woman2 with graying hair up in a bun, holding a tablet against _his2 chest like a shield. "I'm here to inspect _originSlave.slaveName,<<if _originSlave.slaveName != _Inspectee.slaveName>> or as you call $him, _Inspectee.slaveName,<</if>>" _he2 bellows up at the camera.
+Not waiting to be greeted, the inspector looks up at the nearest camera and demands to be let in. _He2's an older _woman2 with graying hair up in a bun, holding a tablet against _his2 chest like a shield. "I'm here to in<<s>>pect _originSlave.slaveName,<<if _originSlave.slaveName != _Inspectee.slaveName>> or a<<s>> you call $him, _Inspectee.slaveName,<</if>>" _he2 bellows up at the camera.
<br><br>
@@ -120,7 +121,7 @@ Not waiting to be greeted, the inspector looks up at the nearest camera and dema
<<link "Amusing. Enslave _him2">>
<<run cashX(forceNeg($contractCost), "slaveTransfer", $activeSlave)>>
<<replace "#result">>
- $assistantName ushers _him2 into your penthouse and keeps _him2 busy for the few minutes you need to circumvent the Shelter's various legal and contractual defenses to prevent slaveowners from doing exactly what you're doing. Fortunately, you're cleverer and richer than most, and you succeed. You have _him2 brought into your office, and you are pleased to see _him2. _He2's not young and _he2's not pretty, but _his2 suit cannot disguise _his2 big bottom, and _he2's using the tablet _he2 has clasped protectively against _his2 chest to conceal a huge pair of mature breasts. _He2 knows exactly what's happened, and fixes you with a gimlet stare. "In a couple of months," _he2 says with venom, "when you've filled me full of hormones and drugs and training, and I'm begging you to <<if $PC.dick == 1>>stick your tiny little dick up<<else>>fist<</if>> my asshole, remember this. It'll be conditioning and self-preservation and Stockholm Syndrome talking, not me. I think you're a <<if $PC.title == 1>>sad bastard<<else>>vile cunt<</if>>, and I always will."
+ $assistantName ushers _him2 into your penthouse and keeps _him2 busy for the few minutes you need to circumvent the Shelter's various legal and contractual defenses to prevent slaveowners from doing exactly what you're doing. Fortunately, you're cleverer and richer than most, and you succeed. You have _him2 brought into your office, and you are pleased to see _him2. _He2's not young and _he2's not pretty, but _his2 suit cannot disguise _his2 big bottom, and _he2's using the tablet _he2 has clasped protectively against _his2 chest to conceal a huge pair of mature breasts. _He2 knows exactly what's happened, and fixes you with a gimlet stare. "In a couple of month<<s>>," _he2 says with venom, "when you've filled me full of hormone<<s>> and drug<<s>> and training, and I'm begging you to <<if $PC.dick == 1>><<s>>tick your tiny little dick up<<else>>fi<<s>>t<</if>> my a<<ss>>hole, remember thi<<s>>. It'll be conditioning and <<s>>elf-pre<<s>>ervation and <<S>>tockholm <<S>>yndrome talking, not me. I think you're a <<if $PC.title == 1>><<s>>ad ba<<s>>tard<<else>>vile cunt<</if>>, and I alway<<s>> will."
<<set $shelterAbuse += 10>>
<<set $nextButton = "Continue">><<UpdateNextButton>> /* unlock Continue button */
<<include "New Slave Intro">>
@@ -201,17 +202,17 @@ Not waiting to be greeted, the inspector looks up at the nearest camera and dema
<<set $shelterAbuse += 10>>
<<elseif _Inspectee.fetish == "mindbroken">>
<<if _Inspectee.origin == "You got $him at the Slave Shelter. $He has never communicated anything about $his background, since $he arrived at the shelter with a broken mind.">>
- Of course, the poor $girl is just as mindbroken as ever. The inspector asks some cursory questions and gives up. "Don't worry," _he2 says. "I know $he was like this when you got $him. Just — just keep trying, would you?" _He2 leaves, looking bitter.
+ Of course, the poor $girl is just as mindbroken as ever. The inspector asks some cursory questions and gives up. "Don't worry," _he2 says. "I know <<he>> wa<<s>> like thi<<s>> when you got $him. Ju<<s>>t — ju<<s>>t keep trying, would you?" _He2 leaves, looking bitter.
<<elseif _Inspectee.origin == "You got $him at the Slave Shelter. $He was found unresponsive in the lower arcology with a gaping pussy and deflated belly. It is unclear what happened to $him.">>
- Of course, the poor $girl is just as mindbroken as ever. The inspector asks some cursory questions and gives up. "Don't worry," _he2 says. "I know $he was like this when you got $him. Just — just keep trying, would you?"
+ Of course, the poor $girl is just as mindbroken as ever. The inspector asks some cursory questions and gives up. "Don't worry," _he2 says. "I know <<he>> wa<<s>> like thi<<s>> when you got $him. Ju<<s>>t — ju<<s>>t keep trying, would you?"
<<if _Inspectee.pussy > 3 && _Inspectee.bellySag > 1>>
- _He2 gropes the slave's sagging middle before inspecting $his ruined pussy. "Still ruined I see."
+ _He2 gropes the slave's sagging middle before inspecting $his ruined pussy. "<<S>>till ruined, I <<s>>ee."
<<elseif _Inspectee.pussy <= 3 && _Inspectee.bellySag > 1>>
- _He2 gropes the slave's sagging middle before inspecting $his pussy. "Apart from the belly, $his pussy has recovered nicely."
+ _He2 gropes the slave's sagging middle before inspecting $his pussy. "Apart from the belly, <<his>> pu<<ss>>y ha<<s>> recovered ni<<c>>ely."
<<elseif _Inspectee.pussy > 3 && _Inspectee.bellySag <= 1>>
- _He2 gropes the slave's middle before inspecting $his ruined pussy. "$His stomach seems to have recovered, shame you did nothing for $his poor vagina."
+ _He2 gropes the slave's middle before inspecting $his ruined pussy. "<<His>> <<s>>tomach <<s>>eem<<s>> to have recovered; <<sh>>ame you did nothing for <<his>> poor vagina."
<<else>>
- _He2 runs _his2 hand across the slave's restored midriff, before inspecting $his pussy. "$He is looking much better, physically, though. That's worth noting."
+ _He2 runs _his2 hand across the slave's restored midriff, before inspecting $his pussy. "<<He>> i<<s>> looking much better, phy<<s>>ically, though. That'<<s>> worth noting."
<<set $shelterAbuse-->>
<</if>>
_He2 leaves, looking bitter.
@@ -225,50 +226,52 @@ Not waiting to be greeted, the inspector looks up at the nearest camera and dema
<<if _inspectionContinues == 1>>
<<switch _Inspectee.origin>>
<<case "You got $him at the Slave Shelter. $He has never communicated anything about $his background, since $he arrived at the shelter with a broken mind.">>
- The inspector asks some cursory questions and is shocked when $he responds. "$He came back?" _he2 mutters, "You restored $his mind, I can't believe it. This is incredible." _He2 carries on while writing notes on _his2 tablet, "You're more than welcome to adopt slaves from our shelter." You swear _he2 seems in much better spirits as _he2 leaves your penthouse.
+ The inspector asks some cursory questions and is shocked when $he responds. "<<He>> came back?" _he2 mutters, "You re<<s>>tored <<his>> mind; I can't believe it. Thi<<s>> i<<s>> incredible." _He2 carries on while writing notes on _his2 tablet, "You're more than welcome to adopt <<s>>lave<<s>> from our <<sh>>elter." You swear _he2 seems in much better spirits as _he2 leaves your penthouse.
<<set _inspectionContinues = 0>>
<<set $shelterAbuse -= 5>>
<<case "You got $him at the Slave Shelter. It's not clear why $his previous owner cut $his arms and legs off.">>
<<if _Inspectee.amp == _originSlave.amp>>
Unsurprisingly, the poor $girl still lacks arms and legs, so the inspector just carries on.
<<else>>
- The inspector stares, dumbfounded, at pair of limbs now supporting _Inspectee.slaveName. "Most owners wouldn't go through the trouble... I think I've seen enough to know you're welcome to come back and take in another girl any time." _He2 leaves your penthouse in much better spirits than _he2 arrived in.
+ The inspector stares, dumbfounded, at pair of limbs now supporting _Inspectee.slaveName. "Mo<<s>>t owner<<s>> wouldn't go through the trouble... I think I've <<s>>een enough to know you're welcome to come back and take in another <<s>>lave any time." _He2 leaves your penthouse in much better spirits than _he2 arrived in.
<<set _inspectionContinues = 0>>
<<set $shelterAbuse -= 3>>
<</if>>
<<case "You got $him at the Slave Shelter. $His owner purposely blinded $him by dumping boiling water into $his eyes.">>
- "I wish the scarring wasn't so bad, that way people wouldn't stare so much."
+ "I wi<<sh>> the <<s>>carring wa<<s>>n't so bad, that way people wouldn't <<s>>tare so much."
<<if _Inspectee.eyes > _originSlave.eyes>>
<<if canTalk(_Inspectee)>>
+ <<run Enunciate(_Inspectee)>>
_Inspectee.slaveName quickly retorts with "But I like <<s>>eeing their eye<<s>>..."
<<else>>
_Inspectee.slaveName shakes $his head in response.
<</if>>
- The inspector gasps at the realization that $he can see again. "They look just like $his old photos too..." A tear comes to _his2 weary eye as _he2 writes out notes on _his2 tablet. "You're more than welcome to adopt slaves from our shelter." You swear _he2 seems in much better spirits as _he2 leaves your penthouse.
+ <<run Enunciate($activeSlave)>>
+ The inspector gasps at the realization that $he can see again. "They look ju<<s>>t like <<his>> old photo<<s>> too..." A tear comes to _his2 weary eye as _he2 writes out notes on _his2 tablet. "You're more than welcome to adopt <<s>>lave<<s>> from our <<sh>>elter." You swear _he2 seems in much better spirits as _he2 leaves your penthouse.
<<set _inspectionContinues = 0>>
<<set $shelterAbuse-->>
<</if>>
<<case "You got $him at the Slave Shelter. $He was found unresponsive in the lower arcology with a gaping pussy and deflated belly. It is unclear what happened to $him.">>
- The inspector asks some cursory questions and is shocked when $he responds. "$He came back?" _he2 mutters, "You restored $his mind, I can't believe it. This is incredible." _He2 carries on while writing notes on _his2 tablet, "You're more than welcome to adopt slaves from our shelter." You swear _he2 seems in much better spirits as _he2 leaves your penthouse, even though _he2 forgot to check $his pussy.
+ The inspector asks some cursory questions and is shocked when $he responds. "<<He>> came back?" _he2 mutters, "You re<<s>>tored <<his>> mind; I can't believe it. Thi<<s>> i<<s>> incredible." _He2 carries on while writing notes on _his2 tablet, "You're more than welcome to adopt <<s>>lave<<s>> from our <<sh>>elter." You swear _he2 seems in much better spirits as _he2 leaves your penthouse, even though _he2 forgot to check $his pussy.
<<set _inspectionContinues = 0>>
<<set $shelterAbuse -= 5>>
<<case "You got $him at the Slave Shelter. $His previous owner forced $him to cut off $his dick and balls and cook them.">>
<<if _Inspectee.dick > _originSlave.dick>>
- "I see that you've given $him a replacement tool," _he2 says as _he2 reaches down and gives it an exploratory fondle,
+ "I <<s>>ee that you've given $him a repla<<c>>ement tool," _he2 says as _he2 reaches down and gives it an exploratory fondle,
<<if canAchieveErection(_Inspectee)>>
- "It even works, that's lovely." The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on _his2 tablet.
+ "It even work<<s>>, that'<<s>> lovely." The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on _his2 tablet.
<<else>>
- "It seems to be non-functional, but it's a nice gesture at least." The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on _his2 tablet.
+ "It <<s>>eem<<s>> to be non-functional, but it'<<s>> a ni<<c>>e gesture at lea<<s>>t." The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on _his2 tablet.
<</if>>
<<set _inspectionResult-->>
<</if>>
<<if _Inspectee.balls > _originSlave.balls && _Inspectee.scrotum>>
<<if _Inspectee.dick > _originSlave.dick>>
- "And these work too, right?" _he2 asks as _he2 points to $his dangling balls. "So $he has been fully restored; that's something." The inspector adds another positive note to the inspection.
+ "And the<<s>>e work too, right?" _he2 asks as _he2 points to $his dangling balls. "<<S>>o <<he>> ha<<s>> been fully re<<s>>tored; that'<<s>> <<s>>omething." The inspector adds another positive note to the inspection.
<<set _inspectionResult-->>
<<else>>
- "I take it these testicles are more than just an implant? I'm sure $he appreciates the gesture, though what good are they without a penis?" The inspector shakes _his2 head and notes your attempt to undo the damages to _Inspectee.slaveName.
+ "I take it the<<s>>e testicle<<s>> are more than ju<<s>>t an implant? I'm <<s>>ure <<he>> appre<<c>>iate<<s>> the ge<<s>>ture, though what good are they without a peni<<s>>?" The inspector shakes _his2 head and notes your attempt to undo the damages to _Inspectee.slaveName.
<</if>>
<</if>>
@@ -362,27 +365,27 @@ Not waiting to be greeted, the inspector looks up at the nearest camera and dema
<<if _Inspectee.origin == "You got $him at the Slave Shelter. $He has never communicated anything about $his background, since $he arrived at the shelter with a broken mind.">>
<<if _Inspectee.fetish == "mindbroken">>
- Of course, the poor $girl is just as mindbroken as ever. The inspector asks some cursory questions and gives up. "Don't worry," _he2 says. "I know $he was like this when you got $him. Just — just keep trying, would you?" _He2 leaves, looking bitter.
+ Of course, the poor $girl is just as mindbroken as ever. The inspector asks some cursory questions and gives up. "Don't worry," _he2 says. "I know <<he>> wa<<s>> like thi<<s>> when you got $him. Ju<<s>>t — ju<<s>>t keep trying, would you?" _He2 leaves, looking bitter.
<<else>>
- The inspector asks some cursory questions and is shocked when $he responds. "$He came back?" _he2 mutters, "You restored $his mind, I can't believe it. This is incredible." _He2 carries on while writing notes on _his2 tablet, "You're more than welcome to adopt slaves from our shelter." You swear _he2 seems in much better spirits as _he2 leaves your penthouse.
+ The inspector asks some cursory questions and is shocked when $he responds. "<<He>> came back?" _he2 mutters, "You re<<s>>tored <<his>> mind; I can't believe it. Thi<<s>> i<<s>> incredible." _He2 carries on while writing notes on _his2 tablet, "You're more than welcome to adopt <<s>>lave<<s>> from our <<sh>>elter." You swear _he2 seems in much better spirits as _he2 leaves your penthouse.
<<set $shelterAbuse -= 5>>
<</if>>
<<elseif _Inspectee.origin == "You got $him at the Slave Shelter. $He was found unresponsive in the lower arcology with a gaping pussy and deflated belly. It is unclear what happened to $him.">>
<<if _Inspectee.fetish == "mindbroken">>
- Of course, the poor $girl is just as mindbroken as ever. The inspector asks some cursory questions and gives up. "Don't worry," _he2 says. "I know $he was like this when you got $him. Just — just keep trying, would you?"
+ Of course, the poor $girl is just as mindbroken as ever. The inspector asks some cursory questions and gives up. "Don't worry," _he2 says. "I know <<he>> wa<<s>> like thi<<s>> when you got $him. Ju<<s>>t — ju<<s>>t keep trying, would you?"
<<if _Inspectee.pussy > 3 && _Inspectee.bellySag > 1>>
- _He2 gropes the slave's sagging middle before inspecting $his ruined pussy. "Still ruined I see."
+ _He2 gropes the slave's sagging middle before inspecting $his ruined pussy. "<<S>>till ruined, I <<s>>ee."
<<elseif _Inspectee.pussy <= 3 && _Inspectee.bellySag > 1>>
- _He2 gropes the slave's sagging middle before inspecting $his pussy. "Apart from the belly, $his pussy has recovered nicely."
+ _He2 gropes the slave's sagging middle before inspecting $his pussy. "Apart from the belly, <<his>> pu<<ss>>y ha<<s>> recovered ni<<c>>ely."
<<elseif _Inspectee.pussy > 3 && _Inspectee.bellySag <= 1>>
- _He2 gropes the slave's middle before inspecting $his ruined pussy. "$His stomach seems to have recovered, shame you did nothing for $his poor vagina."
+ _He2 gropes the slave's middle before inspecting $his ruined pussy. "<<His>> <<s>>tomach <<s>>eem<<s>> to have recovered; <<sh>>ame you did nothing for <<his>> poor vagina."
<<else>>
- _He2 runs _his2 hand across the slave's restored midriff, before inspecting $his pussy. "$He is looking much better, physically, though. That's worth noting."
+ _He2 runs _his2 hand across the slave's restored midriff, before inspecting $his pussy. "<<He>> i<<s>> looking much better, phy<<s>>ically, though. That'<<s>> worth noting."
<<set $shelterAbuse-->>
<</if>>
_He2 leaves, looking bitter.
<<else>>
- The inspector asks some cursory questions and is shocked when $he responds. "$He came back?" _he2 mutters, "You restored $his mind, I can't believe it. This is incredible." _He2 carries on while writing notes on _his2 tablet, "You're more than welcome to adopt slaves from our shelter." You swear _he2 seems in much better spirits as _he2 leaves your penthouse, even though _he2 forgot to check $his pussy.
+ The inspector asks some cursory questions and is shocked when $he responds. "<<He>> came back?" _he2 mutters, "You re<<s>>tored <<his>> mind; I can't believe it. Thi<<s>> i<<s>> incredible." _He2 carries on while writing notes on _his2 tablet, "You're more than welcome to adopt <<s>>lave<<s>> from our <<sh>>elter." You swear _he2 seems in much better spirits as _he2 leaves your penthouse, even though _he2 forgot to check $his pussy.
<<set $shelterAbuse -= 5>>
<</if>>
<<elseif _Inspectee.fetish == "mindbroken">>
@@ -393,11 +396,16 @@ Not waiting to be greeted, the inspector looks up at the nearest camera and dema
<<elseif _Inspectee.devotion <= 20>>
$He does not like you and isn't particularly terrified of you, so $he is not flattering. $He's not stupid enough to really criticize you, but $he is honest and makes no effort to conceal troubling particulars. The inspector takes copious notes. _He2 offers you a few choice words, makes notes on _his2 tablet, and storms out.
<<elseif _Inspectee.anus > 2>>
- $He cooperates with the inspector, who pulls on a pair of latex gloves and performs a complete examination. When _he2 pulls the $girl's buttocks apart and probes the slave's asshole, _he2 pulls _his2 hand away as if scalded. "Oh my God," _he2 says. "_Inspectee.birthName, what happened to your anus?"
+ $He cooperates with the inspector, who pulls on a pair of latex gloves and performs a complete examination. When _he2 pulls the $girl's buttocks apart and probes the slave's asshole, _he2 pulls _his2 hand away as if scalded. "Oh my God," _he2 says. "_Inspectee.birthName, what happened to your anu<<s>>?"
<br><br>
+ <<run Enunciate(_Inspectee)>>
<<if (_Inspectee.devotion < 10)>>
<<if (_Inspectee.buttplug == "large plug") || (_Inspectee.buttplug == "huge plug") || (_Inspectee.buttplug == "long, large plug") || (_Inspectee.buttplug == "long, huge plug")>>
- "W-well," $he says, "I wear a buttplug." The inspector frowns. "A buttplug shouldn't do that!" The slave looks worried and replies, "It'<<s>> kinda big? And I wear it all the time. B-but I like it! It d-doe<<s>>n't hurt. Well, anymore." The inspector is not amused. _He2 offers you a few choice words, makes notes on _his2 tablet, and storms out.
+ "W-well," $he says, "I wear a buttplug." The inspector frowns.
+ <<run Enunciate($activeSlave)>>
+ "A buttplug <<sh>>ouldn't do that!"
+ <<run Enunciate(_Inspectee)>>
+ The slave looks worried and replies, "It'<<s>> kinda big? And I wear it all the time. B-but I like it! It d-doe<<s>>n't hurt. Well, anymore." The inspector is not amused. _He2 offers you a few choice words, makes notes on _his2 tablet, and storms out.
<<elseif (_Inspectee.assignment == "whore") || (_Inspectee.assignment == "work in the brothel") || (_Inspectee.assignment == "serve the public") || (_Inspectee.assignment == "serve in the club")>>
"W-well," $he says, "I get fucked there at work." The inspector frowns. "How often!?" The slave looks worried and replies, "L-let me think. Four time<<s>> today? After the third time, it u<<s>>ually <<s>>top<<s>> clo<<s>>ing up again between cock<<s>>." The inspector is not amused. _He2 offers you a few choice words, makes notes on _his2 tablet, and storms out.
<<elseif (_Inspectee.fetish == "buttslut") && (_Inspectee.fetishKnown == 1)>>
@@ -407,11 +415,19 @@ Not waiting to be greeted, the inspector looks up at the nearest camera and dema
"Hey," $he protests, "that'<<s>> normal." The inspector looks incredulous. "What!?" The slave looks insulted and replies, "I love <<s>>e<<x>>! Don't judge me. I take cock in all my hole<<s>>, and I like it. I'm going to beg for butt<<s>>e<<x>> the moment you leave, you bitch." $He defiantly sticks $his rump out at you. The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on _his2 tablet.
<<set $shelterAbuse -= 1>>
<<else>>
- "W-well," $he says, "I'm a <<s>>lave." The inspector frowns. "What does that have to do with it?" The slave looks worried and replies, "I-it'<<s>> a hole, right? I get fucked in all my hole<<s>>." The inspector is not amused. _He2 offers you a few choice words, makes notes on _his2 tablet, and storms out.
+ "W-well," $he says, "I'm a <<s>>lave." The inspector frowns.
+ <<run Enunciate($activeSlave)>>
+ "What doe<<s>> that have to do with it?"
+ <<run Enunciate(_Inspectee)>>
+ The slave looks worried and replies, "I-it'<<s>> a hole, right? I get fucked in all my hole<<s>>." The inspector is not amused. _He2 offers you a few choice words, makes notes on _his2 tablet, and storms out.
<</if>>
<<else>>
<<if (_Inspectee.buttplug == "large plug") || (_Inspectee.buttplug == "huge plug") || (_Inspectee.buttplug == "long, large plug") || (_Inspectee.buttplug == "long, huge plug")>>
- "I wear a buttplug!" $he says confidently. The inspector frowns. "A buttplug shouldn't do that!" The slave looks worried and replies, "It'<<s>> really big, and I wear it all the time. I like it! It keep<<s>> my hole ready for anything." The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on _his2 tablet.
+ "I wear a buttplug!" $he says confidently. The inspector frowns.
+ <<run Enunciate($activeSlave)>>
+ "A buttplug <<sh>>ouldn't do that!"
+ <<run Enunciate(_Inspectee)>>
+ The slave looks worried and replies, "It'<<s>> really big, and I wear it all the time. I like it! It keep<<s>> my hole ready for anything." The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on _his2 tablet.
<<set $shelterAbuse -= 1>>
<<elseif (_Inspectee.assignment == "whore") || (_Inspectee.assignment == "work in the brothel") || (_Inspectee.assignment == "serve the public") || (_Inspectee.assignment == "serve in the club")>>
"I get fucked there at work!" $he says confidently. The inspector frowns. "How often!?" The slave thinks for a moment and replies, "Four time<<s>> today. After the third time, it u<<s>>ually <<s>>top<<s>> clo<<s>>ing up again between cock<<s>>. I'm good at my job!" The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on _his2 tablet.
@@ -423,7 +439,11 @@ Not waiting to be greeted, the inspector looks up at the nearest camera and dema
"Hey," $he protests, "that'<<s>> normal." The inspector looks incredulous. "What!?" The slave looks insulted and replies, "I love <<s>>e<<x>>! Don't judge me. I take cock in all my hole<<s>>, and I like it. I'm going to beg for butt<<s>>e<<x>> the moment you leave, you bitch." $He defiantly sticks $his rump out at you. The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on _his2 tablet.
<<set $shelterAbuse -= 1>>
<<else>>
- "I'm a <<s>>lave," $he says confidently. The inspector frowns. "What does that have to do with it?" The slave beams and replies, "It'<<s>> a hole. I'm a good $girl, <<s>>o I get fucked in all my hole<<s>>." The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on _his2 tablet.
+ "I'm a <<s>>lave," $he says confidently. The inspector frowns.
+ <<run Enunciate($activeSlave)>>
+ "What doe<<s>> that have to do with it?"
+ <<run Enunciate(_Inspectee)>>
+ The slave beams and replies, "It'<<s>> a hole. I'm a good $girl, <<s>>o I get fucked in all my hole<<s>>." The inspector looks deflated, and reluctantly makes a positive note on _his2 tablet.
<<set $shelterAbuse -= 1>>
<</if>>
<</if>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/saLongTermEffects.tw b/src/uncategorized/saLongTermEffects.tw
index 152e30cdf5f76eb5a81ffe40356ea05b79516df3..5ab4804b656ab8cd947daa942365a0b8a81627fb 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/saLongTermEffects.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/saLongTermEffects.tw
@@ -5011,7 +5011,9 @@
<<if $arcologies[0].FSHedonisticDecadenceResearch == 1>>
<<if $arcologies[0].FSDegradationist == "unset">>
<<if $slaves[$i].onDiet != 1>>
- <<if $slaves[$i].behavioralQuirk == "insecure">>
+ <<if !canTaste($slaves[$i])>>
+ $His lack of a sense of taste makes $him essentially immune to the addictive slave treats, as $he can't be enticed by their delicious taste.
+ <<elseif $slaves[$i].behavioralQuirk == "insecure">>
$He can't stop $himself from eating the @@.hotpink;addictive, delicious@@ slave treats available throughout the arcology. $He knows they are fattening and @@.gold;starts obsessing@@ even more about $his weight, appearance and how others view $him.
<<set $slaves[$i].trust -= 3>>
<<if $arcologies[0].FSHedonisticDecadenceDietResearch == 0>>
@@ -5057,7 +5059,9 @@
<<set $slaves[$i].trust++, $slaves[$i].devotion++>>
<</if>>
<<else>> /* no treats for you */
- <<if $slaves[$i].behavioralQuirk == "insecure">>
+ <<if !canTaste($slaves[$i])>>
+ $He lacks permission to eat the slave treats, which $he has no real opinion over, as $he lacks the sense to taste them anyway.
+ <<elseif $slaves[$i].behavioralQuirk == "insecure">>
$He is @@.mediumaquamarine;relieved@@ $he doesn't have to fret over eating the treats and gaining weight as $his <<= WrittenMaster($slaves[$i])>> is carefully directing $him.
<<set $slaves[$i].trust++>>
<<elseif $slaves[$i].behavioralQuirk == "fitness">>
@@ -5079,7 +5083,7 @@
The treats are designed to cause stomach cramps alongside being extremely addictive. $He cannot stop $himself from eating them, but $he can @@.gold;fear@@ your cruelty as $his @@.hotpink;will steadily erodes@@ from the concentrated aphrodisiacs in $his food.
<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 2, $slaves[$i].trust -= 3>>
<<else>>
- The treats are designed to cause stomach cramps alongside being extremely addictive. Since $he is not permitted to eat them, @@.mediumaquamarine;$he breathes a sigh of relief,@@ though $he is fully aware of what happens to those not as fortunate as $him. $He @@.hotpink;tries $his best to be obedient@@ hoping to not undergo the agony, but $his efforts pale in comparison to the effects of the food based aphrodisiacs.
+ The treats are designed to cause stomach cramps alongside being extremely addictive. Since $he is not permitted to eat them, @@.mediumaquamarine;$he breathes a sigh of relief,@@ though $he is fully aware of what happens to those not as fortunate as $him. $He @@.hotpink;tries $his best to be obedient@@ hoping to not undergo the agony, but $his efforts pale in comparison to the effects of the food-based aphrodisiacs.
<<set $slaves[$i].devotion++, $slaves[$i].trust++>>
<</if>>
<</if>>
@@ -5101,7 +5105,9 @@
<<elseif $arcologies[0].FSHedonisticDecadenceResearch == 1>>
<<if $arcologies[0].FSDegradationist == "unset">>
<<if $slaves[$i].onDiet != 1>>
- <<if $slaves[$i].behavioralQuirk == "insecure">>
+ <<if !canTaste($slaves[$i])>>
+ $His lack of a sense of taste makes $him essentially immune to the addictive slave treats, as $he can't be enticed by their delicious taste.
+ <<elseif $slaves[$i].behavioralQuirk == "insecure">>
$He can't stop $himself from eating the @@.hotpink;addictive, delicious@@ slave treats available throughout the arcology. $He knows they are fattening and @@.gold;starts obsessing@@ even more about $his weight, appearance and how others view $him.
<<set $slaves[$i].trust -= 3>>
<<if $arcologies[0].FSHedonisticDecadenceDietResearch == 0>>
@@ -5147,7 +5153,9 @@
<<set $slaves[$i].trust++, $slaves[$i].devotion++>>
<</if>>
<<else>> /* no treats for you */
- <<if $slaves[$i].behavioralQuirk == "insecure">>
+ <<if !canTaste($slaves[$i])>>
+ $He lacks permission to eat the slave treats, which $he has no real opinion over, as $he lacks the sense to taste them anyway.
+ <<elseif $slaves[$i].behavioralQuirk == "insecure">>
$He is @@.mediumaquamarine;relieved@@ $he doesn't have to fret over eating the treats and gaining weight as $his <<= WrittenMaster($slaves[$i])>> is carefully directing $him.
<<set $slaves[$i].trust++>>
<<elseif $slaves[$i].behavioralQuirk == "fitness">>