From 55a324645be49e00761cda26035dd71fec9918ab Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: pregmodfan <pregmodfan@cock.li>
Date: Sun, 12 Apr 2020 13:05:14 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] Apply suggestion to src/pregmod/incubator.tw

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 src/pregmod/incubator.tw | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/src/pregmod/incubator.tw b/src/pregmod/incubator.tw
index 543c9904324..b4acfd233d7 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/incubator.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/incubator.tw
@@ -440,7 +440,7 @@ Target age for release: <<textbox "$targetAge" $targetAge "Incubator">> [[Minimu
 				<</if>>
 			<</if>>
 			<<if ($incubatorPregAdaptationSetting == 1 && $tanks[$i].genes == "XX") || ($incubatorPregAdaptationSetting == 2 && $tanks[$i].genes == "XY") ||$incubatorPregAdaptationSetting == 3 >>
-				Probes and tubes inserted inside $his reproductive organs. Incubator working on them.
+				There are probes and tubes inserted inside $his reproductive organs, as the Incubator works on them.
 				<<set _safecc = ($tanks[$i].pregAdaptation - 5) * 2000>>
 				<<if _safecc > 300000>> /* Some bigger size descriptions may be unreachable by normal game mechanic, they are here just in case.*/
 					$His bloated form looks more like overinflated beachball made of overstretched skin of $his belly, with relative tiny body attached to it side. $He is completly dominated by it now. Process gone too far, so $his body can't maintain it's form with the belly as part of abdominal cavity. Now $his skin and tissues stretched enough for $his belly to bloat outside of any body boundaries and looked more attached to $his body then as a part of it. 
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