diff --git a/src/player/actions/fondleBoobs.tw b/src/player/actions/fondleBoobs.tw
index 1183317347f84edfe540310f1a1b4b9b9e2b46e9..e7b996c30234ac146eb6172691158bcc3d821f3f 100644
--- a/src/player/actions/fondleBoobs.tw
+++ b/src/player/actions/fondleBoobs.tw
@@ -367,7 +367,7 @@ You call $him over so you can fondle $his
<<else>>
flat breasts,
<</if>>
- $his eagerness to avoid punishment leading $him to stiffen as you start to massage them. $He finally starts to relax as you continue to massage $his breasts with your <<if $PC.title == 1>>manly<<else>>feminine<</if>> hands,
+ $his eagerness to avoid punishment leads $him to stiffen as you start to massage them. $He finally starts to relax as you continue to massage $his breasts with your <<if $PC.title == 1>>manly<<else>>feminine<</if>> hands,
<<if $activeSlave.nipples != "fuckable">>
playing with $his<<if ($activeSlave.lactation > 0)>> milky<</if>> $activeSlave.nipples nipples so that they become hard in between your fingers and thumbs. You squeeze the tips of $his nipples with your thumbs and fingers and tweak them in your fingertips, then you dab $his nipples with your thumbs, flicking them in different directions. When you firmly pull $his nipples<<if ($activeSlave.lactation > 0)>> milk streams out of them and<</if>> $he lets out a gasp.
<<else>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw b/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw
index b4665d1217a5b791bf4c2ed5213a2094577da3c6..be9bea0c7086f2d7f4c1049e332e9717dfa897f5 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw
@@ -584,17 +584,17 @@ The legalities completed, ''__@@.pink;<<= SlaveFullName($activeSlave)>>@@__'' <<
//and since $he wanted to leave the Old World...//
<br>
<<link "Brand $him to introduce $him to life as a slave whore">>
- <<replace "#introResult">>
- You tell $him you'll be marking $him as one of your working girls. $He looks resigned as $he follows you to the body modification studio, and lets you strap $him down with $his $brandTarget bare. $He understands what's coming. You've got $him positioned just right<<if canDoAnal($activeSlave)>>, so your cock slides up $his experienced asshole easily<</if>>. You bring the brand in close so $he can feel the radiated heat, which breaks through even $his jaded exterior and makes $him tighten with fear. When you're close, you apply the brand<<if canDoAnal($activeSlave)>>, making the poor whore cinch $his sphincter down hard in agony, bringing you to climax<</if>>. $He knows you know how to @@.gold;apply pain,@@ now, and $he @@.mediumorchid;learns to dislike you@@ even as $his @@.red;wound@@ heals.
- <</replace>>
- <<set $activeSlave.brand = $brandDesign>>
- <<set $activeSlave.brandLocation = $brandTarget>>
- <<set $activeSlave.devotion -= 5>>
- <<set $activeSlave.trust -= 10>>
- <<set $activeSlave.health -= 10>>
- <<if canDoAnal($activeSlave)>>
- <<= AnalVCheck()>>
- <</if>>
+ <<replace "#introResult">>
+ You tell $him you'll be marking $him as one of your working girls. $He looks resigned as $he follows you to the body modification studio, and lets you strap $him down with $his $brandTarget bare. $He understands what's coming. You've got $him positioned just right<<if canDoAnal($activeSlave)>>, so your cock slides up $his experienced asshole easily<</if>>. You bring the brand in close so $he can feel the radiated heat, which breaks through even $his jaded exterior and makes $him tighten with fear. When you're close, you apply the brand<<if canDoAnal($activeSlave)>>, making the poor whore cinch $his sphincter down hard in agony, bringing you to climax<</if>>. $He knows you know how to @@.gold;apply pain,@@ now, and $he @@.mediumorchid;learns to dislike you@@ even as $his @@.red;wound@@ heals.
+ <</replace>>
+ <<set $activeSlave.brand = $brandDesign>>
+ <<set $activeSlave.brandLocation = $brandTarget>>
+ <<set $activeSlave.devotion -= 5>>
+ <<set $activeSlave.trust -= 10>>
+ <<set $activeSlave.health -= 10>>
+ <<if canDoAnal($activeSlave)>>
+ <<= AnalVCheck()>>
+ <</if>>
<</link>>
<br>
@@ -602,13 +602,13 @@ The legalities completed, ''__@@.pink;<<= SlaveFullName($activeSlave)>>@@__'' <<
//and since $he's worried about $his child...//
<br>
<<link "Manipulate $his fear for $his pregnancy">>
- <<replace "#introResult">>
- You place a curative injector on your desk, and describe its remarkable medical powers in detail, before mentioning its extreme cost. $His face rises at the first part and falls at the second. You tell $him that if $he's a perfect sex slave, $he'll get as much as $he needs, and that $he can start by sucking you off. $He grunts a little as $he hurries to get $his pregnant body down to $his knees, but works your cock with almost desperate enthusiasm. You stroke $his hair comfortingly as $he does, and inject the healing dose into $his shoulder. $He murmurs $his @@.hotpink;gratitude@@ into your dick, but @@.gold;fears@@ for $his pregnancy.
- <</replace>>
- <<set $activeSlave.devotion += 4>>
- <<set $activeSlave.trust -= 10>>
- <<set $activeSlave.oralCount += 1>>
- <<set $oralTotal += 1>>
+ <<replace "#introResult">>
+ You place a curative injector on your desk, and describe its remarkable medical powers in detail, before mentioning its extreme cost. $His face rises at the first part and falls at the second. You tell $him that if $he's a perfect sex slave, $he'll get as much as $he needs, and that $he can start by sucking you off. $He grunts a little as $he hurries to get $his pregnant body down to $his knees, but works your cock with almost desperate enthusiasm. You stroke $his hair comfortingly as $he does, and inject the healing dose into $his shoulder. $He murmurs $his @@.hotpink;gratitude@@ into your dick, but @@.gold;fears@@ for $his pregnancy.
+ <</replace>>
+ <<set $activeSlave.devotion += 4>>
+ <<set $activeSlave.trust -= 10>>
+ <<set $activeSlave.oralCount += 1>>
+ <<set $oralTotal += 1>>
<</link>>
<br>
@@ -616,18 +616,18 @@ The legalities completed, ''__@@.pink;<<= SlaveFullName($activeSlave)>>@@__'' <<
//and since $he loathes $his pregnancy...//
<br>
<<link "Abort $his child">>
- <<replace "#introResult">>
- You loudly place an innocuous-looking drug injector on your desk, and let $him think about it for a long moment. Then, you declare exactly what made that sound: abortifacients. After a moment of comprehension, $his mood instantly improves. $He pledges to @@.hotpink;submit to you,@@ <<if $PC.dick == 1 && $PC.vagina == 1>>suck your cock, take it in $his pussy, take it up $his ass, eat you out<<elseif $PC.dick == 1>>suck your cock, take it in $his pussy, take it up $his ass<<else>>eat you out, worship you with $his pussy, serve you with $his ass<</if>>, anything, as long as you @@.mediumaquamarine;remove $his rape baby.@@ You observe that $he'll do all of those things, regardless of what you decide to do about $his pregnancy, but for now, you'll let $him terminate it; $he needs all the nutrients for $himself right now. $He thanks you through $his tears.
- <</replace>>
- <<set $activeSlave.devotion += 4>>
- <<set $activeSlave.trust += 3>>
- <<set $activeSlave.preg = 0>>
- <<set WombFlush($activeSlave)>>
- <<set $activeSlave.pregType = 0>>
- <<set $activeSlave.pregSource = 0>>
- <<set $activeSlave.pregKnown = 0>>
- <<set $activeSlave.pregWeek = -4>>
- <<run SetBellySize($activeSlave)>>
+ <<replace "#introResult">>
+ You loudly place an innocuous-looking drug injector on your desk, and let $him think about it for a long moment. Then, you declare exactly what made that sound: abortifacients. After a moment of comprehension, $his mood instantly improves. $He pledges to @@.hotpink;submit to you,@@ <<if $PC.dick == 1 && $PC.vagina == 1>>suck your cock, take it in $his pussy, take it up $his ass, eat you out<<elseif $PC.dick == 1>>suck your cock, take it in $his pussy, take it up $his ass<<else>>eat you out, worship you with $his pussy, serve you with $his ass<</if>>, anything, as long as you @@.mediumaquamarine;remove $his rape baby.@@ You observe that $he'll do all of those things, regardless of what you decide to do about $his pregnancy, but for now, you'll let $him terminate it; $he needs all the nutrients for $himself right now. $He thanks you through $his tears.
+ <</replace>>
+ <<set $activeSlave.devotion += 4>>
+ <<set $activeSlave.trust += 3>>
+ <<set $activeSlave.preg = 0>>
+ <<set WombFlush($activeSlave)>>
+ <<set $activeSlave.pregType = 0>>
+ <<set $activeSlave.pregSource = 0>>
+ <<set $activeSlave.pregKnown = 0>>
+ <<set $activeSlave.pregWeek = -4>>
+ <<run SetBellySize($activeSlave)>>
<</link>>
<br>
@@ -961,15 +961,15 @@ The legalities completed, ''__@@.pink;<<= SlaveFullName($activeSlave)>>@@__'' <<
<<if $activeSlave.health < -20>>
<br>
<<link "Address $his medical issues">>
- <<replace "#introResult">>
- Since $he's in rough shape, you give $him a comprehensive medical exam with the help of the remote surgery. You apply care to @@.green;address@@ some of the most outstanding concerns. Whatever gratitude $he might have felt for prompt medical attention is balanced by fear of the remote surgery and the nagging (and accurate) feeling that $he's being treated like livestock, but $he does @@.mediumaquamarine;begin to hope@@ $he'll be well treated.
- <<if $arcologies[0].FSPaternalist != "unset">>
- Society @@.green;approves@@ of your promptly seeing to your stock's health; this advances the idea that all slaveowners should look after their slaves.
- <<= FSChange("Paternalist", 2)>>
- <</if>>
- <</replace>>
- <<set $activeSlave.health += 10>>
- <<set $activeSlave.trust += 4>>
+ <<replace "#introResult">>
+ Since $he's in rough shape, you give $him a comprehensive medical exam with the help of the remote surgery. You apply care to @@.green;address@@ some of the most outstanding concerns. Whatever gratitude $he might have felt for prompt medical attention is balanced by fear of the remote surgery and the nagging (and accurate) feeling that $he's being treated like livestock, but $he does @@.mediumaquamarine;begin to hope@@ $he'll be well treated.
+ <<if $arcologies[0].FSPaternalist != "unset">>
+ Society @@.green;approves@@ of your promptly seeing to your stock's health; this advances the idea that all slaveowners should look after their slaves.
+ <<= FSChange("Paternalist", 2)>>
+ <</if>>
+ <</replace>>
+ <<set $activeSlave.health += 10>>
+ <<set $activeSlave.trust += 4>>
<</link>>
<</if>>