From 5958d14d2138ac2617273e13744dd9d4685532ec Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Pregmodder <pregmodder@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 28 Apr 2020 19:34:38 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] Grammar

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 src/pregmod/theBlackMarket.tw | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/pregmod/theBlackMarket.tw b/src/pregmod/theBlackMarket.tw
index eff4d37042b..4d15dd79425 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/theBlackMarket.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/theBlackMarket.tw
@@ -308,9 +308,9 @@ He gestures to a door in the back of the stall. "The good shit's back there<<if
 					<</if>>
 					<br>"I'm not sure about this... but you still might be interested. Let me just begin with a story... Some time ago, there was a man with very pregnant girl in tow. Not so unusual in these days, but what made it really stand out was the girl's age — she couldn't have been any older then six! And looked ready to birth full sized triplets, no less. To top it all off, she did not look stressed by it at all, which was just amazing, given her size. The man said that he invented some sort of subsystem for those modern incubators to prep the occupant's body in a special way, and that this girl was a test subject. I do not understand much about this technical stuff, but the documentation seems legit enough. If you like, I can sell it to you; no guarantees though, on either the construction or the results."
 					<<if $arcologies[0].FSRepopulationFocus >= 60>>
-						<p style="text-indent:2em"> As pursuing repopulation focused society, you already have similar documentation in you possession. No reason to spend you money on dublicate. </p>
+						<p style="text-indent:2em"> As a repopulationist society, you already have similar documentation in your possession. Buying this would be a waste of money. </p>
 					<<elseif $incubatorUpgradeReproduction < 1 || $incubatorUpgradeOrgans < 1 || $dispensaryUpgrade < 1 || $bellyImplants < 1 || $incubatorUpgradeGrowthStims < 1>>
-						<p style="text-indent:2em"> You lack the facilities needed to manufacture something this complex, so though you can buy documentation, actual production of the incubator pregnancy adaptation module is currently out of your reach.</p>
+						<p style="text-indent:2em"> You lack the facilities needed to manufacture something this complex, so while you can buy its documentation, actual production and installation of the module is currently out of your reach.</p>
 					<</if>>
 				<<else>>
 					You have no interest in research that involves pregnancy.
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