diff --git a/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw b/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw index b6d875017873301c454db22a6e28f042d871210b..ba419c2dd0dbffdbec5421711fa2a6d15814f623 100644 --- a/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw +++ b/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw @@ -818,7 +818,7 @@ The legalities completed, ''__@@.pink;<<SlaveFullName $activeSlave>>@@__'' <<if <br> <<link "Clean up her whorish appearance">> <<replace "#introResult">> - She's totally unsurprised when you send her to the salon for a makeover. It takes several days of work before she's brought back in for another inspection; when she arrives, you wordlessly point her to a full length mirror. She sees herself without tattoos, hooker's haircut, and piercings, a conventionally pretty girl with subtle implants and a clean appearance. She gasps and covers her mouth with a hand, and then suddenly bursts into tears. "Thank you, <<Master>>," she sobs. "I never would have thought." She reaches out to touch her reflection. "I look like a nice girl." She is @@.hotpink;grateful to you@@ for showing her this side of herself, and has @@.mediumaquamarine;begun to trust@@ that being your slave will be less degrading than being a free prostitute. + She's totally unsurprised when you send her to the salon for a makeover. It takes several days of work before she's brought back in for another inspection; when she arrives, you wordlessly point her to a full length mirror. She <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>sees herself<<else>> <<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>>tenderly uses her hands and finds herself<<else>> stoically waits while you vividly describe her new appearance. One<</if>> <</if>>without tattoos, a hooker's haircut and piercings, a conventionally pretty girl with subtle implants and a clean appearance. She gasps <<if $activeSlave.amp != 0>>and covers her mouth with a hand <<else>> but quickly closes her mouth<</if>>, and then suddenly bursts into tears. "Thank you, <<Master>>," she sobs. "I never would have thought." <<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>> She reaches out to touch her reflection.<</if>> "I <<if canSee($activeSlave)>> look <<else>> will look<</if>> like a nice girl." She is @@.hotpink;grateful to you@@ for <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>showing her<<else>> <<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>> letting her feel <<else>> detailing <</if>> <</if>> this new side of herself, and has @@.mediumaquamarine;begun to trust@@ that being your slave will be less degrading than being a free prostitute. <</replace>> <<set $activeSlave.trust += 4>> <<set $activeSlave.devotion += 4>>