diff --git a/devNotes/VersionChangeLog-Premod+LoliMod.txt b/devNotes/VersionChangeLog-Premod+LoliMod.txt index 12aae1f84eb535353231da025e0c637c4a156775..86ee4540f3a8c651bbe7c9ed28cb8a677e8b3ad8 100644 --- a/devNotes/VersionChangeLog-Premod+LoliMod.txt +++ b/devNotes/VersionChangeLog-Premod+LoliMod.txt @@ -4,6 +4,9 @@ 8/25/2018 + 3 + -fixes + 2 -fixes diff --git a/src/uncategorized/REFS.tw b/src/uncategorized/REFS.tw index 6548dc06c4afce9d72c99ba931919d362abaa2ee..03b0a822493b66eacb15d3a426bc861cc03b5fa0 100644 --- a/src/uncategorized/REFS.tw +++ b/src/uncategorized/REFS.tw @@ -123,7 +123,7 @@ <<default>> <</switch>> -<<if def $activeSlave>> +<<if $activeSlave != 0>> <<set $desc = SlaveTitle($activeSlave)>> <<run Enunciate($activeSlave)>> <<setLocalPronouns $activeSlave>> diff --git a/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw b/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw index 9c1a4db7b651db13f6c5f238c2a34b91944f74a5..553dec28d0b4d6562073e8fecac6ca0e5b694757 100644 --- a/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw +++ b/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw @@ -5099,7 +5099,7 @@ $He cranes her neck, glancing over her shoulder to give you a pleading look. <<else>> $His eyes begin to water as $he struggles not to sob but $he quickly loses composure and hastily flees your gaze, likely to the cafeteria. <</if>> - $He may have run out of your office @@.gold;in tears,@@ but $he'll quickly come to terms with all that matters is @@.hotpink;you think, not her.@@ Even more so when $he realizes the resuliting stress eating only @@.lime;filled her out more.@@ + $He may have run out of your office @@.gold;in tears,@@ but $he'll quickly come to terms with all that matters is @@.hotpink;what you think, not her.@@ Even more so when $he realizes the resuliting stress eating only @@.lime;filled her out more.@@ <<set $activeSlave.devotion += 7, $activeSlave.trust -= 5, $activeSlave.weight += 5>> <<elseif $activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "anorexic">> <<if canTalk($activeSlave)>> @@ -5108,14 +5108,14 @@ $He cranes her neck, glancing over her shoulder to give you a pleading look. $His face lightens at your <<if canHear($activeSlave)>>words<<else>>affirmation<</if>>. It seems you told her just what $he wanted to hear<<if !canHear($activeSlave)>>, so to speak<</if>>. $He gives her thanks and <</if>> leaves your office with @@.hotpink;slightly more faith@@ in her <<= WrittenMaster()>>. - <<set $activeSlave.trust += 5>> + <<set $activeSlave.devotion += 5>> <<else>> <<if canTalk($activeSlave)>> $His eyes begin to water as $he struggles not to sob. "But... But... I'm not... Why would you <<s>>ay that?" $He breaks done completely and hastily flees your sight, jiggling in all the wrong places. <<else>> $His eyes begin to water as $he struggles not to sob but $he quickly loses composure and hastily flees your gaze. <</if>> - $He may have run out of your office @@.gold;in tears,@@ but $he'll quickly come to terms with all that matters is @@.hotpink;you think, not her.@@ + $He may have run out of your office @@.gold;in tears,@@ but $he'll quickly come to terms with all that matters is @@.hotpink;what you think, not her.@@ <<set $activeSlave.devotion += 5, $activeSlave.trust -= 5>> <</if>> <</replace>> @@ -5133,7 +5133,7 @@ $He cranes her neck, glancing over her shoulder to give you a pleading look. <<set $activeSlave.devotion++>> <<elseif $activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "gluttonous">> <<if canTalk($activeSlave)>> - "It'<<s>> ok <<Master>>, you don't have to lie to me. I know thi<<s>> i<<s>> my fault, but thank you for trying to cheer me up." + "It'<<s>> okay <<Master>>, you don't have to lie to me. I know thi<<s>> i<<s>> my fault, but thank you for trying to cheer me up." <<else>> $He frowns before explaining $he has only $himself to blame for her weight, but does appreciate the thought. <</if>> @@ -5171,7 +5171,7 @@ $He cranes her neck, glancing over her shoulder to give you a pleading look. <</replace>> <</link>> <<if canDoAnal($activeSlave) || canDoVaginal($activeSlave)>> - <br><<link "Help her burn some calories">> + <br><<link "Help $him burn some calories">> <<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>> <<replace "#result">> $He's dismayed when you agree, but that fades quickly into hope when you continue, suggesting there's a way to start fixing the problem. $He just needs some exercise, to shed off those pounds with some hard physical work. The couch, you think, will do perfectly, moving around your desk to stretch out on the inviting surface a few steps away, hands linking behind your head in a powerful display of your body. It's enough to make $him press $his thighs together, but you make no move for your pants, <<if $PC.dick == 0>>a strap on,<</if>> or even your shirt. You let $him puzzle and suffer for a few moments more before you make your intentions clear; if $he wants to burn calories, then it should be $him that does all the work. @@ -5341,14 +5341,14 @@ $He cranes her neck, glancing over her shoulder to give you a pleading look. <</if>> /* <<if canPenetrate($activeSlave) && $PC.belly < 1500 && (($activeSlave.height >= $PC.height*1.5) || $activeSlave.muscles > 70)>> - <br><<link "Take her for a jog">> + <br><<link "Take $him for a jog">> <<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>> <<replace "#result">> <</replace>> //This option will penetrate you// <</link>> <</if>> */ -<br><<link "Send her on her way">> +<br><<link "Send $him on $his way">> <<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>> <<replace "#result">> All that $he should be worried about is serving you, not inconsequential changes to $his body.