diff --git a/js/003-data/policiesData.js b/js/003-data/policiesData.js
index cfffe3322a2c2d1c0703772d3078d8a95f39cdd1..18c052f210469be77fc27a9279dbbb455a701cc3 100644
--- a/js/003-data/policiesData.js
+++ b/js/003-data/policiesData.js
@@ -766,19 +766,19 @@ App.Data.Policies.Selection = {
 			{
 				title: "Public Fluid Production Retirement",
 				get text() {
-					let text = `once reaching mandatory retirement age, slaves will be converted for full-time milk`;
+					let text = `upon reaching the mandatory retirement age, slaves will be converted for full-time milk`;
 					if (V.seeDicks === 1) {
-						text += `, vaginal secretion, and semen`;
+						text += `, semen,`;
 					}
-					text += `production.`;
+					text += ` and vaginal secretion production.`;
 					return text;
 				},
 				get activatedText() {
-					let text = `once reaching mandatory retirement age, slaves are converted for full-time milk`;
+					let text = `upon reaching the mandatory retirement age, slaves are converted for full-time milk`;
 					if (V.seeDicks === 1) {
-						text += `, vaginal secretion, and semen`;
+						text += `, semen,`;
 					}
-					text += `production.`;
+					text += ` and vaginal secretion production.`;
 					return text;
 				},
 				get requirements() { return (V.arcologies[0].FSPaternalist === "unset"); },
@@ -786,8 +786,8 @@ App.Data.Policies.Selection = {
 			},
 			{
 				title: "Public Arcade Retirement",
-				text: "once reaching mandatory retirement age, slaves will be placed in cheap public arcades to be used until useless.",
-				activatedText: "once reaching mandatory retirement age, slaves are placed in cheap public arcades to be used until useless.",
+				text: "upon reaching the mandatory retirement age, slaves will be placed in cheap public arcades to be used until useless.",
+				activatedText: "upon reaching the mandatory retirement age, slaves are placed in cheap public arcades to be used until useless.",
 				get requirements() { return (V.arcologies[0].FSPaternalist === "unset"); },
 				enable: "arcade"
 			},