From 6bc8619e253467d792f0fd6670c7dcde64470ce9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: lowercasedonkey <lowercasedonkey@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 26 Aug 2020 16:24:50 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] milk fix

---
 js/003-data/policiesData.js | 16 ++++++++--------
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/js/003-data/policiesData.js b/js/003-data/policiesData.js
index cfffe3322a2..18c052f2104 100644
--- a/js/003-data/policiesData.js
+++ b/js/003-data/policiesData.js
@@ -766,19 +766,19 @@ App.Data.Policies.Selection = {
 			{
 				title: "Public Fluid Production Retirement",
 				get text() {
-					let text = `once reaching mandatory retirement age, slaves will be converted for full-time milk`;
+					let text = `upon reaching the mandatory retirement age, slaves will be converted for full-time milk`;
 					if (V.seeDicks === 1) {
-						text += `, vaginal secretion, and semen`;
+						text += `, semen,`;
 					}
-					text += `production.`;
+					text += ` and vaginal secretion production.`;
 					return text;
 				},
 				get activatedText() {
-					let text = `once reaching mandatory retirement age, slaves are converted for full-time milk`;
+					let text = `upon reaching the mandatory retirement age, slaves are converted for full-time milk`;
 					if (V.seeDicks === 1) {
-						text += `, vaginal secretion, and semen`;
+						text += `, semen,`;
 					}
-					text += `production.`;
+					text += ` and vaginal secretion production.`;
 					return text;
 				},
 				get requirements() { return (V.arcologies[0].FSPaternalist === "unset"); },
@@ -786,8 +786,8 @@ App.Data.Policies.Selection = {
 			},
 			{
 				title: "Public Arcade Retirement",
-				text: "once reaching mandatory retirement age, slaves will be placed in cheap public arcades to be used until useless.",
-				activatedText: "once reaching mandatory retirement age, slaves are placed in cheap public arcades to be used until useless.",
+				text: "upon reaching the mandatory retirement age, slaves will be placed in cheap public arcades to be used until useless.",
+				activatedText: "upon reaching the mandatory retirement age, slaves are placed in cheap public arcades to be used until useless.",
 				get requirements() { return (V.arcologies[0].FSPaternalist === "unset"); },
 				enable: "arcade"
 			},
-- 
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