diff --git a/src/events/scheduled/murderAttempt.js b/src/events/scheduled/murderAttempt.js
index 6329b5e6483eaa5318d05ef4863b9b2231939424..56243b3f6e5f7219ab8a52e5b2a7a631b6dde7d6 100644
--- a/src/events/scheduled/murderAttempt.js
+++ b/src/events/scheduled/murderAttempt.js
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ App.Events.murderAttempt = function() {
r.push("arcology");
break;
case "drug":
- r.push("medicine");
+ r.push("medical");
break;
case "military":
r.push("military");
@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ App.Events.murderAttempt = function() {
noText = "new drug";
break;
case "military":
- yesText = "A profitable use for your mercenary troops are";
+ yesText = "A profitable use for your mercenary troops is";
noText = "profitable military venture";
break;
}
@@ -98,10 +98,10 @@ App.Events.murderAttempt = function() {
const fragment = document.createDocumentFragment();
let r = [];
- r.push("Your assistant makes a meeting a few days later in your personal office, despite those meetings usually being conducted in a more neutral, albeit as secure location, but",
+ r.push("Your assistant makes a meeting a few days later in your personal office, despite those meetings usually being conducted in a more neutral, albeit less secure location, but",
companyName, "insisted on meeting in your office.");
if (["capitalist", "mercenary", "slaver", "engineer"].includes(V.PC.career)) {
- r.push("This seems shady.");
+ r.push("You should prepare for anything.");
} else {
r.push("Less time wasted in case nothing comes out of it.");
}
@@ -110,7 +110,7 @@ App.Events.murderAttempt = function() {
r = [];
r.push("At the time of the meeting a", man,
"arrives at your penthouse and is brought to your office by one of your slaves, while you watch him on your PC screen. The",
- man, "is distinctively average looking, as if you took all business man that did their job well, but did not overachieve, and created the perfect average of it. Someone looking this average is certainly everything but average.");
+ man, "is distinctively average looking, as if you took all business man that did their job well, but did not overachieve, and created the perfect average of it. Someone looking this average is certainly anything but average.");
App.Events.addParagraph(fragment, r);
r = [];
@@ -132,9 +132,11 @@ App.Events.murderAttempt = function() {
"looking at your bodyguard. \"I'm sorry, this is meant only for your ears, can you please send your bodyguard outside?\"");
App.Events.addParagraph(fragment, r);
+ const {she: sheBG} = getPronouns(S.Bodyguard);
+
App.Events.addResponses(fragment, [
new App.Events.Result("\"No one gives me commands in my own office. You can leave now.\"", endEvent),
- new App.Events.Result(`"${S.Bodyguard.slaveName} IS my ears, she stays."`, bgStaysRoute),
+ new App.Events.Result(`"${S.Bodyguard.slaveName} IS my ears, ${sheBG} stays."`, bgStaysRoute),
new App.Events.Result(`"This better be worth it." Order ${S.Bodyguard.slaveName} to leave.`, bgLeavesRoute)
], "bodyguard");
} else {
@@ -209,6 +211,7 @@ App.Events.murderAttempt = function() {
paragraphStart.push("Before you can react to anything the", man, "draws a weapon and");
if (hasAnyArms(S.Bodyguard) && canSee(S.Bodyguard)) {
const {her: herBG} = getPronouns(S.Bodyguard);
+
paragraphStart.push(paragraphStart.pop() + ",");
if (S.Bodyguard.skill.combat > 0) {
paragraphStart.push("just a moment faster,", S.Bodyguard.slaveName, "draws", herBG, "own, shooting", him,
@@ -268,15 +271,15 @@ App.Events.murderAttempt = function() {
const options = [];
switch (variation) {
case "trade":
- paragraphStart.push(companyName, "is planning a trade deal with an old world corporation that wants to expand into the Free Cities, but with the added twist of effectively robbing them during this. Their problem is that they need a something to show them and your arcology would ideal for this. Your role would be simple, just following a short script before leaving both sides to negotiate. If everything goes as planned your share could be in the six digit realm, but in case something goes wrong your reputation would be severely damaged.");
+ paragraphStart.push(companyName, "is planning a trade deal with an old world corporation that wants to expand into the Free Cities, but with the added twist of effectively robbing them during this. Their problem is that they need something to show them and your arcology would ideal for this. Your role would be simple, just following a short script before leaving both sides to negotiate. If everything goes well your share could be in the six digit realm, but in case something goes wrong your reputation could be severely damaged.");
options.push(
new App.Events.Result("A chance to get this amount of money doesn't come by every day. Of course you take this opportunity.", accept()),
- new App.Events.Result("The potential winnings are not in proportion to the risk. You will be part of their plans.", refused)
+ new App.Events.Result("The potential winnings are not in proportion to the risk. You will not be a part of their plans.", refused)
);
break;
case "slave":
paragraphStart.push(companyName,
- "is dealing in a special kind of enslavement. Instead of searching for buyers for the slaves they already have, they instead first search for buyers and enslave those the buyer wants to buy. And while you can at many companies pre buy slaves with certain traits,",
+ "is dealing in a special kind of enslavement. Instead of searching for buyers for the slaves they already have, they instead first search for buyers and enslave those the buyer wants to buy. And while you can at many companies pre order slaves with certain traits,",
companyName,
"enslaves the exact individuals you want, fabricating debt or even kidnapping until they own their target.");
if (V.cash >= 50000) {
@@ -292,7 +295,7 @@ App.Events.murderAttempt = function() {
options.push(new App.Events.Result(`There is no one you ${options.length > 0 ? "want to" : "can"} enslave right now.`, refused));
break;
case "drug":
- paragraphStart.push(companyName, "has developed a new performance enhancing drug that can greatly enhance a humans productivity. It does however come with serious drawbacks making it unusable for sex slaves, but it could immensely enhance the performance of your menial slaves.");
+ paragraphStart.push(companyName, "has developed a new performance enhancing drug that can greatly enhance one's productivity. It does however come with serious drawbacks making it unusable for sex slaves, but it could immensely enhance the performance of your menial slaves.");
if (V.cash >= 100000) {
options.push(new App.Events.Result("Making more money from your menials is always good. Buy the drug.", accept(), "Costs ¤100.000"));
} else {
@@ -399,13 +402,13 @@ App.Events.murderAttemptFollowup = function(variation, companyName, type) {
function tradeDeal() {
V.illegalDeals.trade = -1;
let r = [];
- r.push("Today you are receiving the delegation of the old world company wanting to buy enter the lucrative Free Cities market. After showing them around your logistic centers and the cleaner industry areas you leave them alone with the delegation from",
+ r.push("Today you are receiving the delegation of the old world company wanting to buy into the lucrative Free Cities market. After showing them around your logistic centers and the cleaner industry areas you leave them alone with the delegation from",
companyName + ".");
if (Math.random() > 0.05) {
r.push("The next day you receive a transaction of", cashFormatColor(270000) + ".");
cashX(270000, "event");
} else {
- r.push("A few hours later you receive a message that tricking the old world company in giving them money for nothing didn't work out as hoped. And truly, the next day your uncompetitive behaviour is all over the media. This inflicts <span class='reputation dec'>lasting harm on your reputation</span> and <span class='red'>severely damages your economy</span> since your arcology is not seen as a reliable place to conduct business anymore.");
+ r.push("A few hours later you receive a message that tricking the old world company in giving them money for nothing didn't quite work out as hoped. And truly, the next day your uncompetitive behaviour is all over the media. This inflicts <span class='reputation dec'>lasting harm on your reputation</span> and <span class='red'>severely damages your economy</span> since your arcology is not seen as a reliable place to conduct business anymore.");
repX(-20000, "event");
V.enduringRep *= 0.5;
V.arcologies[0].prosperity *= 0.7;
@@ -454,7 +457,7 @@ App.Events.murderAttemptFollowup = function(variation, companyName, type) {
V.illegalDeals.military = -1;
let r = [];
if (Math.random() > 0.1) {
- r.push("After several months of fighting the Free Cities colony in the old world is finally established. While small scale fighting will continue likely for years to come it is local Free Cities can easily do this, so external forces, like your own mercenaries, are starting to withdraw. For your participation you get",
+ r.push("After several months of fighting the Free Cities colony in the old world is finally established. While small scale fighting will continue likely for years to come local Free Cities can easily do this, so external forces, like your own mercenaries, are starting to withdraw. For your participation you get",
cashFormatColor(1000000), "and 500 menial slaves.");
cashX(1000000, "event");
V.menial += 500;