diff --git a/src/markets/specificMarkets/criminalMarkets.js b/src/markets/specificMarkets/criminalMarkets.js
index 0b27bca57fbee5862228de2a88aeae885688c400..7902a31089be44a156238f08131212a2d7cfd765 100644
--- a/src/markets/specificMarkets/criminalMarkets.js
+++ b/src/markets/specificMarkets/criminalMarkets.js
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ App.Markets["gangs and smugglers"] = function() {
let r = [];
/* males only, or females only if ${V.seeDicks} === 0 */
App.UI.DOM.appendNewElement("p", el, `You board the transport to a large gray prison at the edge of the Free City as word of your approach is sent ahead. The visage of the prison itself is a grim one, enclosed by a large gray concrete fence with electrified barbed wire coiled at the top. As the vehicle rolls to a stop before a large gate, the guard in control of the gate operates a board of buttons and levers, promptly opening it so it may continue. "Stay on the road," he respectfully advises, a final remark before letting your driver carry on. Beyond the fence is an array of guard towers manned with drones for 24/7 surveillance, giving you a clear idea of what was to happen if you were not to heed the guard's words and decided to wander off from the group.`);
- App.UI.DOM.appendNewElement("p", el, `Your destination at the end of the road is a garage, where upon your disembarking, no less than 4 heavily armored guards with electric batons at their sides come to greet you. You could almost mistake them for unmanned drones had they not start speaking. "We've been expecting you; please follow us. We house some dangerous individuals in our establishment and we need to keep you safe." You accept their advice and enter the premises.`);
+ App.UI.DOM.appendNewElement("p", el, `Your destination at the end of the road is a garage, where upon your disembarking, no less than 4 heavily armored guards with electric batons at their sides come to greet you. You could almost mistake them for unmanned drones had they not started speaking. "We've been expecting you; please follow us. We house some dangerous individuals in our establishment and we need to keep you safe." You accept their advice and enter the premises.`);
r.push(`You are met with a dimly lit concrete hallway as you enter, only for it to open up to a multi-floor prison that had placed its prisoners underground for the most`);
if ((V.PC.title === 0 || V.PC.boobs >= 1000 || V.PC.butt >= 3) && V.seeDicks > 0) {
@@ -27,16 +27,16 @@ App.Markets["gangs and smugglers"] = function() {
} else {
r.push(`part.`);
}
- r.push(`You come to a bridge and look down to see its inhabitants, hard criminals that are coming together for a meal. You watch a fight break out at one point and an armored guard quickly step in and apply his baton to the offenders, coupled with a loud zap that silences the entire area. Around your level, you see the better stock: the attractive prisoners one would show to an interested customer.`);
+ r.push(`You come to a bridge and look down to see its inhabitants, hard criminals that are coming together for a meal. At one point, you watch a fight break out; an armored guard quickly steps in and applies his baton to the offenders, coupled with a loud zap that silences the entire area. Around your level, you see the better stock: the attractive prisoners one would show to an interested customer.`);
App.UI.DOM.appendNewElement("p", el, r.join(" "));
r = [];
- r.push(`You finally reach the warden's office, "Welcome`);
+ r.push(`You finally reach the warden's office. "Welcome,`);
if (V.PC.title === 1) {
r.push(`Mister`);
} else {
r.push(`Miss`);
}
- r.push(`${V.PC.slaveSurname}, I never thought my prison could have turned to a trade such as this, but times are hard." He beckons you to the seat opposite him, "but I'm not one to complain when an opportunity such as this comes my way." He motions to his guards to bring in a select stock for your perusal. "We house some tough nuts in this establishment, but if you believe you can capitalize on these criminals, we'll be happy to have you take them off our hands." The guard returns with a convict ready to be sold.`);
+ r.push(`${V.PC.slaveSurname}. I never thought my prison could have turned to a trade such as this, but times are hard." He beckons you to the seat opposite him. "But I'm not one to complain when opportunities come my way." He motions to his guards to bring in a select stock for your perusal. "We house some tough nuts in this establishment, but if you believe you can capitalize on these criminals, we'll be happy to have you take them off our hands." The guard returns with a convict ready to be sold.`);
el.append(r.join(" "));
el.append(App.Markets.purchaseFramework("gangs and smugglers", {sTitleSingular: "prisoner", sTitlePlural: "prisoners"}));
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ App.Markets["gangs and smugglers"] = function() {
App.Markets["white collar"] = function() {
const el = new DocumentFragment();
// mixed prisoners
- App.UI.DOM.appendNewElement("p", el, `You board the transport to what looks more like an oversized vacation home rather than something one goes to for committing crimes. You enter the premises into a small chamber with a booth to the side and are immediately met with a cheerful "Ah! We've been waiting for you. Please go in. We'll call someone to guide you immediately."`);
+ App.UI.DOM.appendNewElement("p", el, `You board the transport to what looks more like an oversized vacation home rather than something one goes to for committing crimes. You enter the premises into a small chamber with a booth to the side and are immediately met with a cheerful greeting. "Ah! We've been waiting for you. Please go in. We'll call someone to guide you immediately."`);
App.UI.DOM.appendNewElement("p", el, `You nod at the prompt and enter further into the luxurious building to find a formally dressed guide and what appears to be the holding area of the prison. The cells, if you can call them that, are large and cozy, each with their own computer and television. The air is also conditioned for their comfort and old world classical music is playing to provide further ambiance. Walking through, you see the prisoners themselves, lazing about in their beds, sitting at their computers, or just talking to each other. If there was ever a prison you'd rather end up in, this would be it.`);
App.UI.DOM.appendNewElement("p", el, `You enter the warden's office and are greeted with all due formalities. "Glad to see you at our establishment. When I heard that someone as renowned as yourself was coming over, I made the appropriate preparations." You are served a cup of tea as she brings in the chosen stock for you to observe at your leisure.`);
@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ App.Markets["military prison"] = function() {
r.push(`understand the reasoning behind such a design choice.`);
App.UI.DOM.appendNewElement("p", el, r.join(" "));
App.UI.DOM.appendNewElement("p", el, `Once you arrive at the prison, the door opens to a garage and another door, brightly lit to welcome you to the premises. Through the door, you find the prisoner's quarters, each of them enclosed by electrified fences to ensure your safety as you see the stock. A guard enters, asking you to follow him as he leads you across the chamber to meet with the warden.`);
- App.UI.DOM.appendNewElement("p", el, `Entering the warden's quarters, you take a seat across from him as he takes the initiative. "Ah, fancy meeting one such as yourself here. Though we house some of the hardiest criminals you can find, I'm sure one such as yourself could find great use for them." He smirks. "... or perhaps great entertainment through the pits," he says as he beckons to his staff as they bring in the selected stock.`);
+ App.UI.DOM.appendNewElement("p", el, `Entering the warden's quarters, you take a seat across from him as he takes the initiative. "Ah, fancy meeting one such as yourself here. Though we house some of the hardiest criminals you can find, I'm sure someone of your capabilities could find great use for them." He smirks. "... or perhaps great entertainment through the pits," he says as he beckons to his staff as they bring in the selected stock.`);
el.append(r.join(" "));
el.append(App.Markets.purchaseFramework("military prison", {sTitleSingular: "prisoner", sTitlePlural: "prisoners"}));