From 80bc5cf7471f5d9bd08bfdb2abf69c833479d8dd Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Anu <barrychahal@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 8 Jul 2021 04:08:53 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Steerswood proofreading
---
src/pregmod/FCTV/FCTVshows.js | 6 +++---
1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
diff --git a/src/pregmod/FCTV/FCTVshows.js b/src/pregmod/FCTV/FCTVshows.js
index d940d1625af..ae13a5d8f09 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/FCTV/FCTVshows.js
+++ b/src/pregmod/FCTV/FCTVshows.js
@@ -2145,9 +2145,9 @@ App.Data.FCTV.channels = {
r.push(`<p>"You fucking whore!" the first one, a blonde, screams.</p>`);
r.push(`<p>"Tell her, Annie!" the second one chimes in.</p>`);
- r.push(`<p>"I am sick and tired of you. Thieves!" She jabs a trapped breast with her finger to punctuate her words, "stealing our husbands with your harlotry."</p>`);
+ r.push(`<p>"I am sick and tired of you. Thieves!" She jabs a trapped breast with her finger to punctuate her words, "Stealing our husbands with your harlotry."</p>`);
r.push(`<p>"I beg you," the Indian girl replies, "it's very urgent. We are all in great danger! The great Bird..."</p>`);
- r.push(`<p>"Listen to this bitch, Dakota." Annie turns to the second woman. "We are all in great danger" she mimics. She turns back to slap the Indian. "Little Cloud, was it? I don't give a SHIT about the coming of your bird god. The greatest danger my husband has right now is ME. And right now, YOU are in danger for stealing him, bitch."</p>`);
+ r.push(`<p>"Listen to this bitch, Dakota." Annie turns to the second woman. "We are all in great danger," she mimics. She turns back to slap the Indian. "Little Cloud, was it? I don't give a SHIT about the coming of your bird god. The greatest danger my husband has right now is ME. And right now, YOU are in danger for stealing him, bitch."</p>`);
r.push(`<p>Frantically the girl twists to face the third woman, with a crown of red hair and freckles. "You are Kate, yes? Please, tell them I have done nothing." Kate looks up for a moment, saying nothing. "Your men, they don't even look at us. When they come to the village, they only have eyes for..."</p>`);
r.push(`<p>In a flash, Kate is choking her. "How DARE you. How DARE you insinuate that my husband is some PERVERT. He is a doctor, and can heal man or beast. I trust you can at least respect a 'medicine man'?"</p>`);
r.push(`<p>Annie punches one breast, while Dakota slowly twists the nipple on the other one. Cloud shrinks into silence under the assault.</p>`);
@@ -2162,7 +2162,7 @@ App.Data.FCTV.channels = {
r.push(`<p>"I can help with that," Dakota smiles.</p>`);
r.push(`<p>"You've got boots?"</p>`);
r.push(`<p>"Nope, but I can get her some big red ones." She returns quickly, holding up a large bucket. "You see, my husband has left me to fix the barn all by myself. Waterproofing with pitch, fixing boards, and painting the wood!"</p>`);
- r.push(`<p>The girl squirms, but Dakota and Annie dive in with big sweeping strokes and large brushes. "Leave her bush and asshole clean for customers" giggles Dakota. "As clean as a whore's holes can be," corrects Annie.</p>`);
+ r.push(`<p>The girl squirms, but Dakota and Annie dive in with big sweeping strokes and large brushes. "Leave her bush and asshole clean for customers," giggles Dakota. "As clean as a whore's holes can be," corrects Annie.</p>`);
r.push(`<p>They step back to inspect their work. "Looks like a whore to me," Kate says.</p>`);
r.push(`<p>The girl is clearly exhausted and struggling to stay on her feet. Sweat is rolling down her face, and her makeup is already beginning to run around her eyes. Her legs are barn red from her hips to the tip of her toes, and a small puddle of paint is forming under her feet and between her toes. Sweat is pouring off her naked body.</p>`);
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