From 8b616f502f70a34b5d09f35033a137d83c0a0a5e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: klorpa <30924131+klorpa@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Tue, 4 Dec 2018 23:52:41 -0600
Subject: [PATCH] Fixings
---
src/pregmod/analyzePlayerPregnancy.tw | 4 ++--
src/pregmod/birthStorm.tw | 2 +-
src/uncategorized/arcmgmt.tw | 4 ++--
src/uncategorized/buySlaves.tw | 2 +-
src/uncategorized/lecoleDesEnculees.tw | 10 +++++-----
src/uncategorized/seBirth.tw | 2 +-
src/utility/descriptionWidgets.tw | 2 +-
7 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)
diff --git a/src/pregmod/analyzePlayerPregnancy.tw b/src/pregmod/analyzePlayerPregnancy.tw
index 1dbc7dfe9ef..f3e12841056 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/analyzePlayerPregnancy.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/analyzePlayerPregnancy.tw
@@ -142,7 +142,7 @@
<<if $incubator > 0>>
<br>
<<if $PC.womb[_ap].reserve === "incubator">>
- <<link "Remove this child from $incubatorName" "Analyze PC Pregnancy">>
+ <<link "Don't keep this child $incubatorName" "Analyze PC Pregnancy">>
<<set $PC.womb[_ap].reserve = "">>
<<set $reservedChildren-->>
<</link>>
@@ -161,7 +161,7 @@
<<if $nursery > 0>>
<br>
<<if $PC.womb[_ap].reserve === "nursery">>
- <<link "Remove this child from $nurseryName" "Analyze PC Pregnancy">>
+ <<link "Don't keep this child in $nurseryName" "Analyze PC Pregnancy">>
<<set $PC.womb[_ap].reserve = "">>
<<set $reservedChildrenNursery-->>
<</link>>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/birthStorm.tw b/src/pregmod/birthStorm.tw
index 07d5e8b266e..c4f669633fa 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/birthStorm.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/birthStorm.tw
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
:: BirthStorm [nobr]
-
+
<<set $nextButton = "Back", $nextLink = "Slave Interact">>
<<set $activeSlave.curBabies = WombBirth($activeSlave, 34)>> /*Here check - how many children survive this event. 34 weeks minimum.*/
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/arcmgmt.tw b/src/uncategorized/arcmgmt.tw
index 80e7a1c1040..98ff5de1943 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/arcmgmt.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/arcmgmt.tw
@@ -596,7 +596,7 @@ _middleClass *= 1 + ($TSS.subsidize + $GRI.subsidize + $SCP.subsidize + $LDE.sub
_ASlavesRetirement = Math.trunc($NPCSlaves * 0.8),
$NPCSlaves = Math.trunc($NPCSlaves * 0.8),
$CitizenRetirement = 2>>
- You have enacted citizen retirement, the slaves of eligible age are granted freedom.
+ You have enacted citizen retirement, the slaves of eligible age are granted freedom.
<<if _helotsRetirement > 1>>
@@.red;<<print _helotsRetirement>> of your menial slaves@@ were retired.
<<elseif _helotsRetirements > 0>>
@@ -630,7 +630,7 @@ $menialBioreactors -= _expirationBR>>
<<if _expiration > 1>>
<<if _expirationFS <= 0.5>>
@@.red;<<print _expiration>> slaves passed away@@ due to natural causes.
- <<else>>
+ <<else>>
@@.red;<<print _expiration>> slaves died@@ due to the tough working conditions in your arcology.
<</if>>
<<if _expirationPC > 1>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/buySlaves.tw b/src/uncategorized/buySlaves.tw
index 5441b59c5c0..635b855bd8d 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/buySlaves.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/buySlaves.tw
@@ -203,7 +203,7 @@ __Sex Slave Purchase Options__
<</if>>
<<if ($seeDicks != 0)>>
- <br> [[L'école des Enculées][$slavesSeen += 1]] |
+ <br> [[L'École des Enculées][$slavesSeen += 1]] |
<<if $cash > _minimumFive>>
[[(x5)|Bulk Slave Generate][$slaveMarket = "LDE", $introType = "bulk", $numSlaves = 5]] |
<</if>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/lecoleDesEnculees.tw b/src/uncategorized/lecoleDesEnculees.tw
index b6b64f110b3..88f7c33ab48 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/lecoleDesEnculees.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/lecoleDesEnculees.tw
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-:: L'école des Enculées [nobr]
+:: L'École des Enculées [nobr]
<<set $nextButton = "Back", $nextLink = "Buy Slaves", $returnTo = "Buy Slaves", $showEncyclopedia = 1, $encyclopedia = "Slave Schools">>
/* Multi-Purchase Support */
@@ -7,9 +7,9 @@
<<set $nextButton = "Continue", $nextLink = "Bulk Slave Intro", $slaveMarket = "LDE", $returnTo = "Main", $newSlaveIndex = 0>>
<</if>>
-//L'école des Enculées is one of the oldest networks of slave schools, but because its training must be started early, it is only now beginning to produce and show a return on its investors' stakes. It aims to produce graduates more feminine than the average naturally born female, in spite of their having been born male. The school is a global leader in hormonal feminization, which allows it to produce curvier slaves than many schools that focus on natural females. It also retains its graduates for a year after their majority and their enslavement, so as to be able to legally subject them to intensive sexual conditioning that focuses on their prostates as their main remaining locus of arousal. <<if $LDE.schoolUpgrade != 0>><br><br>Since you have endowed <<if $LDE.schoolUpgrade == 1>>the regular application of drugs to induce extreme infatuation in its graduates towards the first dominant person they encounter, any graduate purchased here will now promptly fall in love with you.<<else>>research into narrowly targeted hormonal treatments, its graduates are now available with generous members despite their femininity.<</if>> As a major <<if $PC.title == 0>>benefactrix<<else>>benefactor<</if>> of the institution, you also receive a discount on them.<</if>>//
+//L'École des Enculées is one of the oldest networks of slave schools, but because its training must be started early, it is only now beginning to produce and show a return on its investors' stakes. It aims to produce graduates more feminine than the average naturally born female, in spite of their having been born male. The school is a global leader in hormonal feminization, which allows it to produce curvier slaves than many schools that focus on natural females. It also retains its graduates for a year after their majority and their enslavement, so as to be able to legally subject them to intensive sexual conditioning that focuses on their prostates as their main remaining locus of arousal. <<if $LDE.schoolUpgrade != 0>><br><br>Since you have endowed <<if $LDE.schoolUpgrade == 1>>the regular application of drugs to induce extreme infatuation in its graduates towards the first dominant person they encounter, any graduate purchased here will now promptly fall in love with you.<<else>>research into narrowly targeted hormonal treatments, its graduates are now available with generous members despite their femininity.<</if>> As a major <<if $PC.title == 0>>benefactrix<<else>>benefactor<</if>> of the institution, you also receive a discount on them.<</if>>//
-<br><br>L'école des Enculées offers a fresh graduate for inspection via video call. The interview takes place in the dormitory for the oldest class of girls. Absurdly sexual squeals repeatedly interrupt the call, making it very clear that someone close by the interviewee is experiencing a strong combination of anal pain and anal pleasure.
+<br><br>L'École des Enculées offers a fresh graduate for inspection via video call. The interview takes place in the dormitory for the oldest class of girls. Absurdly sexual squeals repeatedly interrupt the call, making it very clear that someone close by the interviewee is experiencing a strong combination of anal pain and anal pleasure.
<<GenerateMarketSlave "LDE">>
<<slaveCost $activeSlave>>
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
<<setLocalPronouns $activeSlave>>
<<if $cash >= $slaveCost>>
- <br>[["Buy " + $him + " and check out other slaves to order"|L'école des Enculées][$cash -= $slaveCost, $LDE.schoolSale = 0, $LDE.studentsBought += 1, $newSlaves.push($activeSlave), $introType = "multi", $slavesSeen+=1]]
+ <br>[["Buy " + $him + " and check out other slaves to order"|L'École des Enculées][$cash -= $slaveCost, $LDE.schoolSale = 0, $LDE.studentsBought += 1, $newSlaves.push($activeSlave), $introType = "multi", $slavesSeen+=1]]
<<if $newSlaves.length == 0>>
<br>[["Buy " + $his + " slave contract"|New Slave Intro][$cash -= $slaveCost, $LDE.schoolSale = 0, $LDE.studentsBought += 1, $nextButton = "Continue", $nextLink = "AS Dump", $returnTo = "Main"]]
<<else>>
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
<<else>>
//You lack the necessary funds to buy this slave.//
<</if>>
-<br>[["Decline to purchase " + $him + " and check out another slave"|L'école des Enculées][$slavesSeen += 1]]
+<br>[["Decline to purchase " + $him + " and check out another slave"|L'École des Enculées][$slavesSeen += 1]]
<<if $newSlaves.length > 0>>
<br>[[Finish your order of slaves|Bulk Slave Intro]]
<</if>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/seBirth.tw b/src/uncategorized/seBirth.tw
index 41dbba39537..19f03ca9abc 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/seBirth.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/seBirth.tw
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ I need to break single passage to several widgets, as it's been overcomplicated
<</if>>
<</if>>
<<set $dispositionId = _.uniqueId('babyDisposition-')>>
- Birth report: @@.coral;<<= SlaveFullName($HeadGirl)>>@@
+ Birth report: @@.coral;<<= SlaveFullName($slaves[$i])>>@@
<br>
<<seBirthPreChek>>
<<seBirthPreScene>>
diff --git a/src/utility/descriptionWidgets.tw b/src/utility/descriptionWidgets.tw
index a991b409b80..be53f96e5e8 100644
--- a/src/utility/descriptionWidgets.tw
+++ b/src/utility/descriptionWidgets.tw
@@ -159,7 +159,7 @@
<</if>>
<<if ($seeDicks != 0)>>
<<if $LDE.schoolSale != 0>>
- <br>@@.yellow;For your first purchase, @@<strong>[[L'école des Enculées][$slavesSeen += 1]]</strong>@@.yellow; will sell at half price this week.@@
+ <br>@@.yellow;For your first purchase, @@<strong>[[L'École des Enculées][$slavesSeen += 1]]</strong>@@.yellow; will sell at half price this week.@@
<</if>>
<<if $TGA.schoolSale != 0>>
<br>@@.yellow;For your first purchase, @@<strong>[[The Gymnasium-Academy][$slavesSeen += 1]]</strong>@@.yellow; will sell at half price this week.@@
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