From 937df3aee9bce760812a776ca54f0a8b81cf3b92 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: klorpa <30924131+klorpa@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Tue, 18 Jun 2019 22:49:22 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] InspectFix --- src/pregmod/fNippleFuck.tw | 4 ++-- src/uncategorized/RESS.tw | 16 ++++++++-------- src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw | 2 +- src/uncategorized/reShelterInspection.tw | 2 +- 4 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-) diff --git a/src/pregmod/fNippleFuck.tw b/src/pregmod/fNippleFuck.tw index 7399fe35d41..d237deae55b 100644 --- a/src/pregmod/fNippleFuck.tw +++ b/src/pregmod/fNippleFuck.tw @@ -40,14 +40,14 @@ breast flesh grips you tightly. A few experimental pumps draws gasps from $him b <<if $activeSlave.fetish == "boobs" && $activeSlave.fetishKnown == 1>> - $He has a glassy eyed expression as $he + $He has a glassy-eyed expression as $he <<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>> gropes $his breasts with both hands, fingering $his unoccupied nipple in time with your thrusts. <<else>> savors the sensations running through $his breast. <</if>> <<elseif $activeSlave.devotion > 20 || $activeSlave.trust > 20>> - $He has a glassy eyed expression as $he + $He has a glassy-eyed expression as $he <<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>> gropes $his breasts with one hand and furiously abuses $his clit with the other. <<else>> diff --git a/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw b/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw index 62108ff751d..9560c102c3e 100644 --- a/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw +++ b/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw @@ -1245,7 +1245,7 @@ Your order $him to turn around and present $his anus for inspection. $He doesn't In the morning the penthouse is a busy bustle of female energy. Slaves get up promptly, eat, shower, dress themselves, and head out to work. They chatter if able and allowed, and draw a good deal of strength from each other. As you pass by the kitchen, you are narrowly avoided by a rush of slaves heading to the showers. They're almost bouncing, feeding off each others' youthful energy. At the back of the pack is <<EventNameLink>>. $He looks as young as any of them, but after they're out, $he leans against the door frame for a moment and exhales slowly. <br><br> -$His <<= App.Desc.eyeColor($activeSlave)>> eyed gaze catches yours for a moment, and you are reminded that $he isn't as young as they are, not at all. $His face might look youthful, but $his eyes don't. <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>$He sees your consideration, and<<else>>You make yourself known, and $he<</if>> murmurs, "<<S>>orry, <<Master>>. Ju<<s>>t a little <<s>>low thi<<s>> morning." +$His <<= App.Desc.eyeColor($activeSlave)>>-eyed gaze catches yours for a moment, and you are reminded that $he isn't as young as they are, not at all. $His face might look youthful, but $his eyes don't. <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>$He sees your consideration, and<<else>>You make yourself known, and $he<</if>> murmurs, "<<S>>orry, <<Master>>. Ju<<s>>t a little <<s>>low thi<<s>> morning." $He hurries after $his sisters, $his <<if $activeSlave.butt > 12>> massive @@ -9969,7 +9969,7 @@ brought in to you. This time <<EventNameLink>> has been sent to deliver it. $He <br><<link "Geld $him gradually">> <<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>> <<replace "#result">> - You shove $his unresisting<<if $activeSlave.belly >= 5000>> <<if $activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 3000>>gravid<<else>>swollen<</if>><</if>> body over the couch and seize $his ballsack. When $he feels your tight grip $he spasms and tries to pull away reflexively, but goes limp when $he feels the agony of a warning squeeze. You fasten a tight rubber ring around the base of $his sack, leaving $him writhing on the couch in considerable discomfort. You add leather mittens to $his hands to stop $him removing the rubber, and then observe that this is a method used to geld livestock. $His tearful begging goes on until you tire of it and put $him out. <<if $assistantName == "your personal assistant">>Your personal assistant<<else>>$assistantName<</if>> tracks $his agonized, weeping progress around the arcology for the many hours it takes the lack of blood flow to necessitate a trip to the remote surgery. When that time comes, you make $him beg you to remove $his balls for an hour straight before you do — and $he's so desperate for relief from the pain that $he does it. The experience has left $him @@.red;slightly injured,@@ @@.orange;gelded,@@ @@.red;thoroughly traumatized,@@ and @@.gold;willing to do anything@@ to avoid any more pain. + You shove $his unresisting<<if $activeSlave.belly >= 5000>> <<if $activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 3000>>gravid<<else>>swollen<</if>><</if>> body over the couch and seize $his ballsack. When $he feels your tight grip $he spasms and tries to pull away reflexively, but goes limp when $he feels the agony of a warning squeeze. You fasten a tight rubber ring around the base of $his sack, leaving $him writhing on the couch in considerable discomfort. You add leather mittens to $his hands to stop $him from removing the rubber, and then observe that this is a method used to geld livestock. $His tearful begging goes on until you tire of it and put $him out. <<if $assistantName == "your personal assistant">>Your personal assistant<<else>>$assistantName<</if>> tracks $his agonized, weeping progress around the arcology for the many hours it takes the lack of blood flow to necessitate a trip to the remote surgery. When that time comes, you make $him beg you to remove $his balls for an hour straight before you do — and $he's so desperate for relief from the pain that $he does it. The experience has left $him @@.red;slightly injured,@@ @@.orange;gelded,@@ @@.red;thoroughly traumatized,@@ and @@.gold;willing to do anything@@ to avoid any more pain. <<set $activeSlave.behavioralFlaw = "odd", $activeSlave.trust -= 20, $activeSlave.health -= 10, $activeSlave.balls = 0, $activeSlave.scrotum = 0>> <</replace>> <</link>> @@ -17361,7 +17361,7 @@ brought in to you. This time <<EventNameLink>> has been sent to deliver it. $He <br><<link "Dance along with $him">> <<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>> <<replace "#result">> - $He doesn't <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>see<<else>>notice<</if>> you advance on $him; $he's facing away from you, and in any case, $he's lost in $his own little world. At the same moment, however, $he begins to hear the track $he's humming, in perfect synchrony with the way $he's humming it, and senses a presence at $his side. You timed it perfectly, directing the sound system here to play the right track, match it to $him, and fade it in as you approached and began to dance beside $him. + $He doesn't <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>see<<else>>notice<</if>> you advance on $him; $he's facing away from you, and in any case, $he's lost in $his own little world. At the same moment, however, $he begins to hear the track you're humming, in perfect synchrony with the way $he's humming it, and senses a presence at $his side. You timed it perfectly, directing the sound system here to play the right track, match it to $him, and fade it in as you approached and began to dance beside $him. <<if $PC.title == 0>> You've got a woman's body, and you match $his moves, though an observer might see greater power and dominance in the way you dance. <<else>> @@ -20499,7 +20499,7 @@ brought in to you. This time <<EventNameLink>> has been sent to deliver it. $He <<replace "#result">> You decide to exercise a little maliciousness. You take a step forward, producing a look of <<if $activeSlave.energy > 80>>lustful anticipation<<elseif $activeSlave.trust > 20>>expectation<<else>>trepidation<</if>>, - but then you stop, <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>wordlessly<<else>>loudly<</if>> gesturing at $him to continue. $He does, bending $him back forward and backward, concave and convex, rolling $himself around on $his hips a little, and making $his <<if $activeSlave.belly >= 5000>>_belly belly and <</if>>breasts move mesmerizingly. Eventually, $he stretches deeply enough that<<if $activeSlave.trust <= 50>> $he lets $his guard down and<</if>> $his eyes close again. + but then you stop, <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>wordlessly<<elseif canHear($activeSlave)>>loudly<<else>>nudging and<</if>> gesturing at $him to continue. $He does, bending $him back forward and backward, concave and convex, rolling $himself around on $his hips a little, and making $his <<if $activeSlave.belly >= 5000>>_belly belly and <</if>>breasts move mesmerizingly. Eventually, $he stretches deeply enough that<<if $activeSlave.trust <= 50>> $he lets $his guard down and<</if>> $his eyes close again. <<switch $activeSlave.nipples>> <<case "tiny">> $His tiny little nipples are too small to grab and pull effectively, so you simply flick them, aiming a vicious high-velocity fingernail at each of them, using both hands. @@ -20550,7 +20550,7 @@ brought in to you. This time <<EventNameLink>> has been sent to deliver it. $He <<default>>pulling $his soft nipple and some of the areolae around it into your mouth. <</switch>> $His rich milk begins to flow across your tongue, creamy and with a hint of vanilla. $He breathes faster and faster as $he becomes aroused, but then the stimulation peaks. You keep drinking from $him, making no move to stop nursing and start fucking $him. $He sighs with sudden contentment, realizing that you're going to drink every drop $he has, and $his sudden relaxation sends a little extra gush of milk into your mouth. $He @@.hotpink;definitely enjoys the experience,@@ leaning back compliantly as you drain that breast and then $his left one, too. - <<if $activeSlave.boobs > 25000 || ($activeSlave.boobs > 10000 && $activeSlave.lactation > 1)>>Your clothes feel tight around your middle for the rest of the day, you may have indulged a little too much.<</if>> + <<if $activeSlave.boobs > 25000 || ($activeSlave.boobs > 10000 && $activeSlave.lactation > 1)>>Your clothes feel tight around your middle for the rest of the day; you may have indulged a little too much.<</if>> <<set $activeSlave.devotion += 5>> <<EventFetish $activeSlave "boobs">> <<set $activeSlave.lactationDuration = 2>> @@ -20791,7 +20791,7 @@ brought in to you. This time <<EventNameLink>> has been sent to deliver it. $He <<elseif $activeSlave.assignment == "whore" || $activeSlave.assignment == "serve the public">> sneaks a hand under the string around $his waist, tugging $his bottom up <<if $activeSlave.vagina != -1>>until the string between $his legs is pulled up into the entrance of $his womanhood<<else>>and turning sideways to suggest $his ass<</if>>. "Guy<<s>>'ll <<if $activeSlave.assignment == "whore">>pay money for<<else>>line up to fuck<</if>> thi<<s>>," $he giggles. <<else>> - bounces a little, smiling. "I'm ba<<s>>ically naked," $he giggles. "Today i<<s>> going to be fun. The other girl<<s>>'ll be jealou<<s>> you wanted me to look <<s>>o <<s>>lutty. Love you, <<Master>>." + bounces a little, smiling. "I'm ba<<s>>ically naked," $he giggles. "Today i<<s>> going to be fun. The other $girl<<s>>'ll be jealou<<s>> you wanted me to look <<s>>o <<s>>lutty. Love you, <<Master>>." <</if>> $He's happy you indulged $him, and @@.mediumaquamarine;satisfied that you think $he's cute@@ enough to have around (practically) nude. <<set $activeSlave.trust += 5>> @@ -20956,7 +20956,7 @@ brought in to you. This time <<EventNameLink>> has been sent to deliver it. $He <br><<link "Try the 'Butter Strategy'">> <<EventNameDelink $activeSlave>> <<replace "#result">> - You ponder $his predicament for a moment before settling on a solution. You procure an industrial sized jar of curative laced moisturizing butter — specially formulated to ease the strain of hypermassive pregnancy — and explain to your slave that, to free $him, you're going to need to completely cover $him in it so that $he can squeeze through. + You ponder $his predicament for a moment before settling on a solution. You procure an industrial-sized jar of curative-laced moisturizing butter — specially formulated to ease the strain of hypermassive pregnancy — and explain to your slave that, to free $him, you're going to need to completely cover $him in it so that $he can squeeze through. <<if $activeSlave.devotion > 95>> $He grins at you and then huffs, pretending to be put off by the idea. <<elseif $activeSlave.devotion > 50>> @@ -20966,7 +20966,7 @@ brought in to you. This time <<EventNameLink>> has been sent to deliver it. $He <<elseif ($activeSlave.trust < -20) && ($activeSlave.devotion > -10)>> $He had seemed uneasy when you first described your idea, but seems to resign $himself to it once you finish your description. <<elseif ($activeSlave.trust < -50)>> - The wide eyed slave nods as you describe your idea, clearly hoping you'll free $him as quickly as possible so that $he can get away from you. + The wide-eyed slave nods as you describe your idea, clearly hoping you'll free $him as quickly as possible so that $he can get away from you. <<else>> $He laughs derisively at you after you describe your idea, then motions for you to get on with it. <</if>> diff --git a/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw b/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw index a8f212ebc8e..7873e67bcf3 100644 --- a/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw +++ b/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw @@ -1198,7 +1198,7 @@ The legalities completed, ''__@@.pink;<<= SlaveFullName($activeSlave)>>@@__'' << <br> <<link "Threaten $his pregnancy">> <<replace "#introResult">> - You place an innocuous-looking drug injector on your desk, and let $him <<if !canSee($activeSlave)>>blindly <</if>>stare at it for a long moment. Then, you roll the cylinder slowly across the smooth surface, rotating it until its label comes into $his view. It depicts the silhouette of a pregnant woman, with a red X over it. Abortifacients. After an instant of horrified comprehension, $he flings $himself at your feet, crying, begging, promising. $He pledges to @@.hotpink;submit to you,@@ <<if $PC.dick == 1>><<if $PC.vagina == 1>>eat you out, <</if>>suck your cock, take it in $his pussy, take it up $his ass<<else>>eat you out, worship you with $his pussy, serve you with $his ass<</if>>, anything, as long as @@.gold;you don't hurt $his baby.@@ You observe that $he'll do all of those things, regardless of what you decide to do about $his pregnancy, but for now, you'll keep $him as a pregnant slut. $He thanks you through $his tears. + You place an innocuous-looking drug injector on your desk, and let $him <<if !canSee($activeSlave)>>blindly <</if>>stare at it for a long moment. Then, you roll the cylinder slowly across the smooth surface, rotating it until its label comes into $his view. It depicts the silhouette of a pregnant woman, with a red "X" over it. Abortifacients. After an <<if !canSee($activeSlave)>>short period<<else>>instant<</if>> of horrified comprehension, $he flings $himself at your feet, crying, begging, promising. $He pledges to @@.hotpink;submit to you,@@ <<if $PC.dick == 1>><<if $PC.vagina == 1>>eat you out, <</if>>suck your cock, take it in $his pussy, take it up $his ass<<else>>eat you out, worship you with $his pussy, serve you with $his ass<</if>>, anything, as long as @@.gold;you don't hurt $his baby.@@ You observe that $he'll do all of those things, regardless of what you decide to do about $his pregnancy, but for now, you'll keep $him as a pregnant slut. $He thanks you through $his tears. <</replace>> <<set $activeSlave.devotion += 10>> <<set $activeSlave.trust -= 10>> diff --git a/src/uncategorized/reShelterInspection.tw b/src/uncategorized/reShelterInspection.tw index ea36179aecd..56255242dfc 100644 --- a/src/uncategorized/reShelterInspection.tw +++ b/src/uncategorized/reShelterInspection.tw @@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ <<setLocalPronouns $activeSlave 2>> <<setAssistantPronouns>> <<setPlayerPronouns>> -<<run Enunciate(_Inspectee)>> +<<run Enunciate($activeSlave)>> <<setSpokenLocalPronouns _Inspectee $activeSlave>> <span id="artFrame"> -- GitLab