From 9658dbb6f6658b13d1694e27cbfc35fa8f082207 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: klorpa <30924131+klorpa@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Fri, 6 Apr 2018 00:28:00 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] More Fixes --- src/events/gameover.tw | 19 +++++++++---------- src/init/setupVars.tw | 2 +- src/uncategorized/seLethalPit.tw | 10 +++++----- src/uncategorized/seNicaeaAnnouncement.tw | 6 +++--- src/uncategorized/seNicaeaCouncil.tw | 2 +- src/uncategorized/seNonlethalPit.tw | 10 +++++----- 6 files changed, 24 insertions(+), 25 deletions(-) diff --git a/src/events/gameover.tw b/src/events/gameover.tw index 9db35688627..7f65d53bbb7 100644 --- a/src/events/gameover.tw +++ b/src/events/gameover.tw @@ -49,16 +49,16 @@ <<elseif $gameover == "major battle defeat">> <<set $ui = "start">> <<if $attackType == "raiders">> - As the horde of raiders breaks the battlelines and enter the arcology, all hell break loose. You citizens are raped, your slaves captured and abused, your penthouse burned. + As the horde of raiders breaks the battle lines and enters the arcology, all hell breaks loose. You citizens are raped, your slaves captured and abused, your penthouse burned. As for you, you are quickly captured and brought in front of the warlord himself. With a satisfied smile he aims his pistol to your forehead and squeezes the trigger. <<elseif $attackType == "old world">> - As the interminable column of old world puppets breaks the battlines and enters the arcology, all hell breaks loose. Properties are seized and wealth stolen and distributed between the victorious soldiers. + As the interminable column of old world puppets breaks the battle lines and enters the arcology, all hell breaks loose. Properties are seized and wealth stolen and distributed between the victorious soldiers. You are stripped of everything you possessed and left to rot in a corner of your once glorious arcology. <<elseif $attackType == "freedom fighters">> - As the army of freedom fighters invades the arcology, all hell break loose. Their righteous fury torches everything you held dear, while the streets of the arcology run red with the blood of the masters. - You are reserved a special death: crucified in front of the arcology's entrance. Your corpse a grim reminder of your legacy. + As the army of freedom fighters invades the arcology, all hell breaks loose. Their righteous fury torches everything you held dear, while the streets of the arcology run red with the blood of the masters. + You are reserved a special death: crucified in front of the arcology's entrance, your corpse a grim reminder of your legacy. <<elseif $attackType == "free city">> - As the mercenaries break the battlelines and enter the arcology all hell break loose. The sectors are pillaged one by one, systematically an thoroughly. When they break in the penthouse they quickly capture and send you to their employers as proof of their success. + As the mercenaries break the battle lines and enter the arcology all hell break loose. The sectors are pillaged one by one, systematically and thoroughly. When they break in the penthouse they quickly capture and send you to their employers as proof of their success. Your personal story may continue, but that part of it worthy of retelling has now ended. <</if>> @@ -67,11 +67,11 @@ <<elseif $gameover == "Rebellion defeat">> <<set $ui = "start">> <<if $slaveRebellion == 1>> - As the furious horde of slaves invade your penthouse you are left a few precious seconds to decide your fate. You embrace for the last time your faithful revolver and just as the rebels break through your doors you squeeze the trigger. + As the furious horde of slaves invades your penthouse you are left a few precious seconds to decide your fate. You embrace for the last time your faithful revolver and just as the rebels break through your doors you squeeze the trigger. The end of your story has come and your arcology is now in the hands of whoever will take control of the vermins that dared rise up this day. <<else>> - As the furious horde of citizens invade your penthouse you are left a few precious seconds to decide your fate. You embrace for the last time your faithful revolver and just as the rebels break through your doors you squeeze the trigger. - The end of your story has come and your arcology is now in the hands of whoever will take control of the vermins that dared rise up this day. + As the furious horde of citizens invades your penthouse you are left a few precious seconds to decide your fate. You embrace for the last time your faithful revolver and just as the rebels break through your doors you squeeze the trigger. + The end of your story has come and your arcology is now in the hands of whoever will take control of the vermin that dared rise up this day. <</if>> <br><br> @@ -90,5 +90,4 @@ <br><br> ''GAME OVER'' -<</if>> - +<</if>> \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/src/init/setupVars.tw b/src/init/setupVars.tw index 5df872c5848..f15f7073651 100644 --- a/src/init/setupVars.tw +++ b/src/init/setupVars.tw @@ -359,7 +359,7 @@ <<set setup.brazilianSlaveNames = ["Agripina", "Aléxia", "Alice", "Aline", "Amanda", "Ana", "Andressa", "Anna", "Barbara", "Beatriz", "Brenda", "Bruna", "Camila", "Carla", "Carmen", "Carolina", "Caroline", "Clara", "Daniela", "Fabiana", "Fernanda", "Gabriela", "Gabrielle", "Giovana", "Giovanna", "Helena", "Isabela", "Isabella", "Janete", "Jessica", "Jéssica", "Joana", "Julia", "Juliana", "Larissa", "Laura", "Leticia", "LÃvia", "Luana", "Luiza", "LuÃza", "Manuela", "Marcela", "Maria", "Mariana", "Marta", "Mercedes", "Milena", "Natália", "Nathalia", "Neuza", "Rafaela", "Raissa", "Raquel", "Sabrina", "Sophia", "Stéfani", "Stephanie", "Tayná", "Taynara", "Thais", "ThaÃs", "Valentina", "Victória", "Vitoria", "Vitória", "Yasmin"]>> <<set setup.brazilianSlaveSurnames = ["Abreu", "Aguiar", "Albuquerque", "Alencar", "Alexandre", "Almeida", "Alves", "Amaral", "Amorim", "Anderson", "Andrade", "Antonio", "Antunes", "Aparecida", "Aquino", "Araujo", "Arruda", "Assis", "Augusto", "Azevedo", "Barbosa", "Barreto", "Barros", "Bastos", "Batista", "Bezerra", "Bispo", "Borges", "Braga", "Brandao", "Brasil", "Brito", "Bueno", "Cabral", "Caetano", "Camargo", "Campos", "Candido", "Cardoso", "Carlos", "Carneiro", "Carvalho", "Castro", "Cavalcante", "Cavalcanti", "Cesar", "Chagas", "Chaves", "Coelho", "Cordeiro", "Correa", "Correia", "Costa", "Coutinho", "Couto", "Cristina", "Cruz", "Cunha", "da Costa", "da Silva", "Dantas", "de Almeida", "de Jesus", "de Lima", "de Oliveira", "de Paula", "de Souza", "Dias", "Diniz", "Domingues", "dos Santos", "Duarte", "Dutra", "Eduardo", "Fagundes", "Faria", "Farias", "Felipe", "Felix", "Fernandes", "Ferrari", "Ferraz", "Ferreira", "Figueiredo", "Filho", "Fonseca", "França", "Francisco", "Franco", "Freire", "Freitas", "Garcia", "Gomes", "Gonalves", "Goncalves", "Guedes", "Guerra", "Guimaraes", "Guimares", "Henrique", "Jesus", "Jose", "Junior", "Lacerda", "Leal", "Leite", "Lemos", "Lima", "Lins", "Lira", "Lopes", "Luiz", "Luz", "Macedo", "Machado", "Maciel", "Magalhaes", "Maia", "Mariano", "Marinho", "Marques", "Martins", "Matos", "Mattos", "Medeiros", "Mello", "Melo", "Mendes", "Mendonça", "Menezes", "Mesquita", "Miranda", "Monteiro", "Moraes", "Morais", "Moreira", "Mota", "Motta", "Moura", "Muniz", "Nascimento", "Neto", "Neves", "Nogueira", "Nunes", "Oliveira", "Pacheco", "Paiva", "Passos", "Paula", "Paulo", "Peixoto", "Pereira", "Peres", "Pessoa", "Pimentel", "Pinheiro", "Pinto", "pires", "Pires", "Pontes", "Porto", "Prado", "Queiroz", "Ramos", "Rangel", "Regina", "Reis", "Rezende", "Ribeiro", "Ricardo", "Roberto", "Rocha", "Rodrigues", "Rosa", "Rossi", "Sales", "Sampaio", "Sanches", "Santana", "Santiago", "Santos", "Sena", "Silva", "Silveira", "Simoes", "Siqueira", "Soares", "Sousa", "Souza", "Tavares", "Teixeira", "Toledo", "Torres", "Trindade", "Vargas", "Vasconcelos", "Vaz", "Viana", "Vieira", "Xavier"]>> -<<set setup.chineseSlaveNames = ["Ah", "Ai", "Amin", "An", "Bai", "Bao", "Bi", "Bingbing", "Bo", "Cai", "Can", "Chang", "Chao", "Chen", "Cheng", "Chin", "Chun", "Da", "Dan", "Fang", "Fen", "Fu", "Fuli", "Guanting", "Guanyu", "Guiying", "Guo", "Hai", "He", "Heng", "Hong", "Hua", "Huan", "Huang", "Hui", "Jia", "Jian", "Jiang", "Jie", "Jin", "Jing", "Jinglei", "Jingyi", "Ju", "Juan", "Jun", "Kun", "Lan", "Lei", "Li", "Lian", "Lili", "Lim", "Lin", "Ling", "Lingyu", "Linxi", "Mei", "Meiling", "Min", "Ming", "Mu", "Na", "Ni", "Ning", "Nuan", "Ping", "Qian", "Qing", "Qinyuan", "Qiong", "Qiu", "Quan", "Rong", "Ru", "Shan", "Shengyi", "Shi", "Shishi", "Shu", "Shufen", "Shui", "Shun", "Sisi", "Siyi", "Soo-lin", "Su", "Tai", "Ting", "Tingting", "Tu", "Wee", "Wei", "Wen", "Wenhua", "Wenjie", "Wu", "Xia", "Xian", "Xiang", "Xianzi", "Xiaolu", "Xiaomei", "Xiaoyan", "Xinyi", "Xiu", "Xiulan", "Xiuying", "Xue", "Xun "Wei", "Xun", "Ya", "Yahui", "Yali", "Yaling", "Yan", "Yang", "Yating", "Yawen", "Yazhu", "Yi", "Yijun", "Yin", "Ying", "Yingyin", "Yisa", "Yitong", "Yong", "Yu", "Yun", "Zan", "Zedong", "Zhen", "Zheng", "Zhi", "Zhihao", "Zhong", "Zhou", "Ziyi", "Zuying"]>> +<<set setup.chineseSlaveNames = ["Ah", "Ai", "Amin", "An", "Bai", "Bao", "Bi", "Bingbing", "Bo", "Cai", "Can", "Chang", "Chao", "Chen", "Cheng", "Chin", "Chun", "Da", "Dan", "Fang", "Fen", "Fu", "Fuli", "Guanting", "Guanyu", "Guiying", "Guo", "Hai", "He", "Heng", "Hong", "Hua", "Huan", "Huang", "Hui", "Jia", "Jian", "Jiang", "Jie", "Jin", "Jing", "Jinglei", "Jingyi", "Ju", "Juan", "Jun", "Kun", "Lan", "Lei", "Li", "Lian", "Lili", "Lim", "Lin", "Ling", "Lingyu", "Linxi", "Mei", "Meiling", "Min", "Ming", "Mu", "Na", "Ni", "Ning", "Nuan", "Ping", "Qian", "Qing", "Qinyuan", "Qiong", "Qiu", "Quan", "Rong", "Ru", "Shan", "Shengyi", "Shi", "Shishi", "Shu", "Shufen", "Shui", "Shun", "Sisi", "Siyi", "Soo-lin", "Su", "Tai", "Ting", "Tingting", "Tu", "Wee", "Wei", "Wen", "Wenhua", "Wenjie", "Wu", "Xia", "Xian", "Xiang", "Xianzi", "Xiaolu", "Xiaomei", "Xiaoyan", "Xinyi", "Xiu", "Xiulan", "Xiuying", "Xue", "Xun", "Ya", "Yahui", "Yali", "Yaling", "Yan", "Yang", "Yating", "Yawen", "Yazhu", "Yi", "Yijun", "Yin", "Ying", "Yingyin", "Yisa", "Yitong", "Yong", "Yu", "Yun", "Zan", "Zedong", "Zhen", "Zheng", "Zhi", "Zhihao", "Zhong", "Zhou", "Ziyi", "Zuying"]>> <<set setup.chineseSlaveSurnames = ["An", "Bai", "Bao", "Bi", "Bian", "Bu", "Cai", "Cao", "Chai", "Chan", "Chang", "Chao", "Che", "Chen", "Cheng", "Cheung", "Chi", "Chiang", "Chiu", "Choi", "Chong", "Chou", "Chow", "Chu", "Chun", "Chung", "Cui", "Dai", "Deng", "Ding", "Dong", "Dou", "Du", "Duan", "Fan", "Fang", "Fei", "Feng", "Fu", "Fung", "Gan", "Gao", "Ge", "Geng", "Gong", "Gongsun", "Gu", "Guan", "Guangqiu", "Guo", "Han", "Hao", "He", "Ho", "Hong", "Hou", "Hsu", "Hu", "Hua", "Huang", "Hui", "Huo", "Ji", "Jia", "Jian", "Jiang", "Jiao", "Jin", "Jing", "Ju", "Kang", "Ke", "Kong", "Kuang", "Kwok", "Lai", "Lam", "Lan", "Lang", "Lau", "Law", "Le", "Lee", "Lei", "Leng", "Leung", "Li", "Lian", "Liang", "Liao", "Lim", "Lin", "Ling", "Liu", "Lo", "Long", "Lou", "Lu", "Luo", "Ma", "Man", "Mao", "Mei", "Meng", "Mi", "Miao", "Min", "Ming", "Mo", "Mu", "Na", "Ng", "Ni", "Nie", "Ning", "Niu", "Ou", "Ouyang", "Pan", "Pang", "Park", "Pei", "Peng", "Pu", "Qi", "Qian", "Qiao", "Qin", "Qiu", "Qu", "Quan", "Rao", "Ren", "Rong", "Ruan", "Sha", "Shan", "Shang", "Shao", "She", "Shen", "Sheng", "Shi", "Shu", "Sima", "Song", "Su", "Sui", "Sun", "Tam", "Tan", "Tang", "Tao", "Teng", "Tian", "Ting", "Tong", "Tsai", "Tsang", "Tse", "Tsui", "Tu", "Van", "Wan", "Wang", "Wee", "Wei", "Wen", "Weng", "Wong", "Woo", "Wu", "Xi", "Xia", "Xiahou", "Xiang", "Xiao", "Xie", "Xin", "Xing", "Xiong", "Xu", "Xue", "Yan", "Yang", "Yao", "Ye", "Yeung", "Yi", "Yin", "Ying", "Yip", "Yong", "Yu", "Yuan", "Yue", "Yun", "Zang", "Zeng", "Zhai", "Zhan", "Zhang", "Zhao", "Zheng", "Zhong", "Zhou", "Zhu", "Zhuang", "Zhuge", "Zhuo", "Zong", "Zou", "Zuo"]>> <<set setup.koreanSlaveNames = ["A-yeon", "Ae-jung", "Ah-jin", "Ah-ra", "Ah-sung", "An", "Ara", "Bae-young", "Bin", "Bo-ah", "Bo-mi", "Bo-ra", "Bo-young", "Boo-ja", "Bora", "Byul", "Chae-hwa", "Chae-kyung", "Chae-won", "Chae-yeon", "Chan-mi", "Cho-a", "Cho-ron", "Chun-ja", "Chun-ok", "Da-bin", "Da-eun", "Da-seul", "Do-hee", "Do-yeon", "Doo-na", "Du-ri", "Eon-jeong", "Eun-ah", "Eun-bi", "Eun-byul", "Eun-chae", "Eun-hee", "Eun-hye", "Eun-ji", "Eun-jin", "Eun-ju", "Eun-jung", "Eun-kyung", "Eun-seo", "Eun-yeong", "Eun-young", "Eun", "Ga-eun", "Ga-yoon", "Geu-rin", "Guk-joo", "Gyeong-hui", "Gyeong-suk", "Gyu-ri", "Ha-eun", "Ha-na", "Ha-neul", "Ha-nui", "Ha-nul", "Ha-sun", "Ha-yoon", "Hae-eun", "Hae-in", "Hae-ryung", "Hae-sook", "Hah-nul", "Han-bit", "Han-byul", "Han-na", "Hana", "He-suk", "Hee-ae", "Hee-jin", "Hee-jung", "Hee-seo", "Ho-jung", "Hon", "Hui-hyeon", "Hwa-ja", "Hwan-hee", "Hye-jeong", "Hye-jin", "Hye-kyo", "Hye-ok", "Hye-rim", "Hye-ryun", "Hyeon-jeong", "Hyeon-jung", "Hyo-jin", "Hyo-joo", "Hyo-rim", "Hyo-seong", "Hyun-bin", "Hyun-hwa", "Hyun-joo", "Hyun-jung", "Hyun-kyung", "Hyun-sook", "In-hee", "In-hye", "In-sook", "In-suk", "In-sun", "Ja-young", "Jae-kyung", "Jeong-hwa", "Jeong-ja", "Ji-a", "Ji-ae", "Ji-ah", "Ji-eun", "Ji-hoon", "Ji-hye", "Ji-hyun", "Ji-in", "Ji-kyung", "Ji-min", "Ji-seon", "Ji-won", "Ji-woo", "Ji-yeon", "Ji-yoo", "Ji-yoon", "Ji-young", "Jin-kyung", "Jin-sil", "Jin-sim", "Jin-suk", "Jong-suk", "Jong", "Joo-hee", "Joo-ri", "Joo-weon", "Joo-woo", "Ju-na", "Jung-ah", "Jung-eum", "Jung-hee", "Jung-hwa", "Jung-soo", "Jung-sook", "Jung-soon", "Jyu-ni", "Kan-hee", "Kyong-hui", "Kyong-jin", "Kyong", "Kyu-eun", "Kyung-hee", "Kyung-ja", "Kyung-ok", "Kyung-sook", "Mi-hyang", "Mi-kyung", "Mi-sook", "Mi-sun", "Mi-youn", "Mi-young", "Min-ah", "Min-ji", "Min-seo", "Moon-hee", "Moon-joo", "Myung-ja", "Myung-sook", "Na-eun", "Na-hee", "Na-na", "Na-rae", "Nam-joo", "Ok-bin", "Ok-dam", "Ok-ja", "Ok-ju", "Ok-sim", "Ok", "Pa-ni", "Ri-na", "Ri", "Ry", "Sae-rom", "Se-bin", "Se-young", "Seo-hyeon", "Seo-yeon", "Seo-yun", "Seol-hyun", "Seul-gi", "Seul-ki", "Seung-yeun", "Shi-ra", "Shin-hye", "Shin-young", "Si-ra", "Sin-hee", "So-hee", "So-hye", "So-hyun", "So-ra", "So-ri", "So-won", "So-yi", "So-young", "Sol-song", "Song-ae", "Soo-eun", "Soo-hee", "Soo-jin", "Soo-jung", "Soo-mi", "Soo-young", "Sook-ja", "Soon-hee", "Soon-ja", "Su-bin", "Su-dae", "Su-ji", "Sun-a", "Sun-bin", "Sun-young", "Sung-hye", "Sung-min", "Sung-ryung", "Tae-hee", "Tae-kung", "Tae-yeon", "Un-gyong", "Woo-ri", "Woo", "Ya-eun", "Ye-eun", "Ye-jin", "Ye-won", "Yeo-jeong", "Yeo-jin", "Yeon-doo", "Yeon-jung", "Yeong-ja", "Yo-jong", "Yo-won", "Yong-hui", "Yong-mi", "Yoo-jin", "Yoon-ah", "Yoon-hee", "Yoon-ju", "Yoon-seo", "Youn-ja", "Youn-sook", "Young-ae", "Young-ah", "Young-hee", "Young-ja", "Young-mi", "Young-sook", "Young-yoo", "Young", "Yu-jin", "Yu-na", "Yu-ri", "Yun-seo", "Zung-bok"]>> diff --git a/src/uncategorized/seLethalPit.tw b/src/uncategorized/seLethalPit.tw index 35aaeafd695..b6e3c7937d5 100644 --- a/src/uncategorized/seLethalPit.tw +++ b/src/uncategorized/seLethalPit.tw @@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ This week's pit fight is between $fighterOne.slaveName and $fighterTwo.slaveName <<set $rep += 10*$FSSingleSlaveRep*($arcologies[0].FSAztecRevivalist/$FSLockinLevel)>> <<set $arcologies[0].FSAztecRevivalist += 0.2*$FSSingleSlaveRep>> <</if>> -You review the rules - the combatants will use their choice of swords, and the fight will be to the death, with both combatants executed if no decision is reached. The winner will earn two complete days of rest, not to mention continued life. You take a moment to look over your girls before giving the word. After all, it's the last time you'll be seeing one of them alive. +You review the rules - the combatants will use their choice of swords, and the fight will be to the death, with both combatants executed if no decision is reached. The winner will earn two complete days of rest, not to mention continued life. You take a moment to look over your girls before giving the word. After all, it's the last time you'll be seeing one of them alive. <</nobr>> @@ -386,7 +386,7 @@ In any case, both of the slaves have been dosed with aggression enhancers and in <</if>> <<if !canSee(_winner) && !canSee(_loser)>> - _winner.slaveName and _loser.slaveName are both blind making the fight a staredown. Neither slave wants to make the first move, especially with the drowning cacophony coming from the jeering crowd. Slowly, _winner.slaveName moves forward, waving her sword side to side in the hopes of finding her opponent before she herself gets found. _loser.slaveName's sword clips the tip of _winner.slaveName's setting off a surprisingly brutal series of slashes. The two slaves violently lay into each other, suffering more and more strikes as the struggle goes on. Less than a minute from first contact, both slaves are laying in their combined blood. As you begin to call it a draw, you notice _winner.slaveName start to stir. She staggers to her feet, coated in her and _loser.slaveName's blood, before dropping back to her knees. It seems she lived through this fight, odds aren't likely she'll do it again. + _winner.slaveName and _loser.slaveName are both blind making the fight a staredown. Neither slave wants to make the first move, especially with the drowning cacophony coming from the jeering crowd. Slowly, _winner.slaveName moves forward, waving her sword side to side in the hopes of finding her opponent before she herself gets found. _loser.slaveName's sword clips the tip of _winner.slaveName's setting off a surprisingly brutal series of slashes. The two slaves violently lay into each other, suffering more and more strikes as the struggle goes on. Less than a minute from first contact, both slaves are lying in their combined blood. As you begin to call it a draw, you notice _winner.slaveName start to stir. She staggers to her feet, coated in her and _loser.slaveName's blood, before dropping back to her knees. It seems she lived through this fight; odds aren't likely she'll do it again. <<set _winner.health -= 50>> <<if $pitAudience == "paid">> The audience is surprised by the sudden violence after so much standing around, and your @@.yellowgreen;cut of the betting@@ is modest. @@ -484,7 +484,7 @@ In any case, both of the slaves have been dosed with aggression enhancers and in <<set $rep += 50>> <</if>> <<elseif (_loser.belly >= 300000)>> - _winner.slaveName wants to live badly enough that she takes and extremely brutal shortcut to victory. The instant the fight starts, she quickly slices right across _loser.slaveName's massive belly, which is far to large to possibly defend. _loser.slaveName's belly ruptures like a popped water balloon, showering _winner.slaveName with + _winner.slaveName wants to live badly enough that she takes and extremely brutal shortcut to victory. The instant the fight starts, she quickly slices right across _loser.slaveName's massive belly, which is far too large to possibly defend. _loser.slaveName's belly ruptures like a popped water balloon, showering _winner.slaveName with <<if _loser.pregType > 0>> blood. _loser.slaveName collapses into the pile of organs and babies released from her body. <<elseif _loser.bellyImplant > 0>> @@ -501,7 +501,7 @@ In any case, both of the slaves have been dosed with aggression enhancers and in <<set $rep += 100>> <</if>> <<elseif (_loser.boobs > 1200)>> - _winner.slaveName takes an extremely simple shortcut to victory. The instant the fight starts, she slices _loser.slaveName right across her huge tits, which are so large the cannot properly be defended. _loser.slaveName reflexively drops her sword to clasp her hands over her ruined breasts, gushing blood<<if _loser.boobsImplant > 400>> and implant fluid<</if>>. _winner.slaveName's followup is neither artful nor particularly well planned, but it is effective. She hits the distracted girl's neck from the side, almost but not quite separating her head from her body. + _winner.slaveName takes an extremely simple shortcut to victory. The instant the fight starts, she slices _loser.slaveName right across her huge tits, which are so large they cannot properly be defended. _loser.slaveName reflexively drops her sword to clasp her hands over her ruined breasts, gushing blood<<if _loser.boobsImplant > 400>> and implant fluid<</if>>. _winner.slaveName's followup is neither artful nor particularly well planned, but it is effective. She hits the distracted girl's neck from the side, almost but not quite separating her head from her body. <<if $pitAudience == "paid">> The audience is not very impressed by this easy kill, and your @@.yellowgreen;cut of the betting@@ is unimpressive. <<set $cash += 2000>> @@ -670,4 +670,4 @@ You let the winner _winner.slaveName, shaking as she comes off the adrenaline, d <</if>> <</for>> -<</nobr>>\ +<</nobr>>\ \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/src/uncategorized/seNicaeaAnnouncement.tw b/src/uncategorized/seNicaeaAnnouncement.tw index ceea49f59f2..acac9dad07c 100644 --- a/src/uncategorized/seNicaeaAnnouncement.tw +++ b/src/uncategorized/seNicaeaAnnouncement.tw @@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ Some prominent Chattel Religionists, however, are now arguing that Chattel Relig <<elseif _advocate == "futa">> down her naked chest. She's reclining on a pile of cushions, and a slave is squatting over her, riding her cock. The slave's head and shoulders are covered in religious garb, and the slave is wearing an expression of the most transcendent delight as she pistons herself up and down on her Mistress's penis. The slave orgasms, tears of rapture streaming down her face as she gives herself a pearl necklace. "This is well enough," your interlocutor says with satisfaction. "But if we pull together, we can create heaven on earth by spreading the gospel of hedonism to all." She <<else>> - from where she's sitting. Across the darkened room from her, there's an altar, lit from above. A young girl is spreadeagled on it, naked. She looks very much as though she's just turned eighteen. A slave in religious garb is performing oral sex on her, with evident skill; she orgasms, shrieking with religious fervor as she does. Another slave helps her up and dresses her in similar clothing, and a crowd of slaves surrounds their new sister, kissing her, fondling her, and praying. "This is good," your interlocutor says with satisfaction. "But if we pull together, this beautiful sexual purity can spread beyond a few arcologies." She + from where she's sitting. Across the darkened room from her, there's an altar, lit from above. A young girl is spread-eagled on it, naked. She looks very much as though she's just turned eighteen. A slave in religious garb is performing oral sex on her, with evident skill; she orgasms, shrieking with religious fervor as she does. Another slave helps her up and dresses her in similar clothing, and a crowd of slaves surrounds their new sister, kissing her, fondling her, and praying. "This is good," your interlocutor says with satisfaction. "But if we pull together, this beautiful sexual purity can spread beyond a few arcologies." She <</if>> comes to the point. "We need someone to call a council to lay down a strong foundation for the faith. We need a creed that can act as a uniting requisite to be a faithful slaveowner. You're one of the world's most prominent Chattel Religionist arcology owners. There's certainly no one who's ahead of you. I've spoken with our coreligionists, and those who aren't addicted to anarchy deputed me to ask you to convene it and host a council to establish the creed. If you're not willing, we'll find someone else." <br><br> @@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ Hosting a new religion's first synod will be expensive and time-consuming, but w <</link>> <br><<link "Ignore the council">> <<replace "#result">> - You give a politely noncomittal answer, instruct $assistantName that further calls on the matter are to be deflected, and give the matter no further thought. + You give a politely noncommittal answer, instruct $assistantName that further calls on the matter are to be deflected, and give the matter no further thought. <</replace>> <</link>> -</span> +</span> \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/src/uncategorized/seNicaeaCouncil.tw b/src/uncategorized/seNicaeaCouncil.tw index e80460921b5..505cbbefca5 100644 --- a/src/uncategorized/seNicaeaCouncil.tw +++ b/src/uncategorized/seNicaeaCouncil.tw @@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ Third, the aspirational part of the creed for slaveowners focuses on <<elseif $nicaeaAchievement == "devotion">> making slaves worshipful. Naturally, this will increase respect for people with many devoted slaves. <<else>> - building slaves's trust. Naturally, this will increase respect for people with many trusting slaves. + building slaves' trust. Naturally, this will increase respect for people with many trusting slaves. <</if>> <br><br> //Since you did not participate in the Council, $arcologies[0].name does not subscribe to the creed. It is effectively a policy. Its impacts can be reviewed from the policy menu, and conformity to the creed can be decided from the policy menu if you decided to change it.// diff --git a/src/uncategorized/seNonlethalPit.tw b/src/uncategorized/seNonlethalPit.tw index 6b11077e84b..c3f3f0a6c57 100644 --- a/src/uncategorized/seNonlethalPit.tw +++ b/src/uncategorized/seNonlethalPit.tw @@ -66,9 +66,9 @@ You review the rules - the combatants are wearing light gloves, and the fight wi <<elseif $fighterOne.muscles < -95>> She can barely stand, let alone defend herself. <<elseif $fighterOne.muscles < -30>> - She is very weak, a single punch will likely floor her. + She is very weak; a single punch will likely floor her. <<elseif $fighterOne.muscles < -5>> - She is rather unfit, she will likely be outmatched by near any real opponent. + She is rather unfit; she will likely be outmatched by near any real opponent. <</if>> <<if $fighterOne.height >= 170>> @@ -203,9 +203,9 @@ You review the rules - the combatants are wearing light gloves, and the fight wi <<elseif $fighterTwo.muscles < -95>> She can barely stand, let alone defend herself. <<elseif $fighterTwo.muscles < -30>> - She is very weak, a single punch will likely floor her. + She is very weak; a single punch will likely floor her. <<elseif $fighterTwo.muscles < -5>> - She is rather unfit, she will likely be outmatched by near any real opponent. + She is rather unfit; she will likely be outmatched by near any real opponent. <</if>> <<if $fighterTwo.height >= 170>> @@ -782,4 +782,4 @@ You throw the victor's strap-on down to _winner.slaveName. <</if>> <</for>> -<</nobr>>\ +<</nobr>>\ \ No newline at end of file -- GitLab