diff --git a/src/npc/descriptions/butt/anus.js b/src/npc/descriptions/butt/anus.js
index a4e0f47b75b8cf966792f9363bfab7b83ffbbb03..fc1e2376b259bbbff1656535e5707f868a8a2786 100644
--- a/src/npc/descriptions/butt/anus.js
+++ b/src/npc/descriptions/butt/anus.js
@@ -25,17 +25,16 @@ App.Desc.anus = function(slave) {
if (slave.analArea - slave.anus > 3) {
r.push(`but it's surrounded by a massive oval of ${analSkinDesc} ${skinDesc} skin that runs from ${his} tailbone all the way down to the`);
if (slave.vagina > -1) {
- r.push(`bottom of ${his} pussy`);
+ r.push(`bottom of ${his} pussy.`);
} else {
- r.push(`base of ${his} cock`);
+ r.push(`base of ${his} cock.`);
}
- r.push(`.`);
} else if (slave.analArea - slave.anus > 2) {
- r.push(`but it's surrounded by an oval of ${analSkinDesc} ${skinDesc} skin that occupies ${his} entire ${either("asscrack", "buttcrack")} ass`);
+ r.push(`but it's surrounded by an oval of ${analSkinDesc} ${skinDesc} skin that occupies ${his} entire ${either("asscrack", "buttcrack")} ass.`);
} else if (slave.analArea - slave.anus > 1) {
r.push(`but it's surrounded by a big ring of ${analSkinDesc} ${skinDesc} skin.`);
} else if (slave.analArea - slave.anus > 0) {
- r.push(`and it's surrounded by a cute ${either("pucker", "ring", "rosebud")} of ${skinDesc} skin`);
+ r.push(`and it's surrounded by a cute ${either("pucker", "ring", "rosebud")} of ${skinDesc} skin.`);
} else {
r.push(`and the ${skinDesc} skin around it is stretched smooth, since it's been deflowered only recently.`);
}
@@ -69,7 +68,7 @@ App.Desc.anus = function(slave) {
r.push(`base of ${his} cock.`);
}
} else if (slave.analArea - slave.anus > 0) {
- r.push(`and it's surrounded by an oval of ${analSkinDesc} ${skinDesc} skin that occupies ${his} entire ${either("asscrack", "buttcrack")}`);
+ r.push(`and it's surrounded by an oval of ${analSkinDesc} ${skinDesc} skin that occupies ${his} entire ${either("asscrack", "buttcrack")}.`);
} else {
r.push(`and the ${skinDesc} skin around it is stretched smooth, suggesting ${he}'s getting used to having such a cock-hungry rear fuckhole.`);
}
@@ -78,11 +77,10 @@ App.Desc.anus = function(slave) {
if (slave.analArea - slave.anus > 0) {
r.push(`and it's surrounded by a massive oval of ${skinDesc} skin that runs from ${his} tailbone all the way down to the`);
if (slave.vagina > -1) {
- r.push(`bottom of ${his} pussy`);
+ r.push(`bottom of ${his} pussy.`);
} else {
- r.push(`base of ${his} cock`);
+ r.push(`base of ${his} cock.`);
}
- r.push(`.`);
} else {
r.push(`and the ${skinDesc} skin around it is stretched smooth, suggesting ${he}'s only recently had ${his} ass ruined.`);
}
diff --git a/src/npc/descriptions/crotch/dick.js b/src/npc/descriptions/crotch/dick.js
index 169e20f86eaf6e6eceb4e45e2fb44c7671be45a9..8928310140fe82095145a41eec4d60426d838aca 100644
--- a/src/npc/descriptions/crotch/dick.js
+++ b/src/npc/descriptions/crotch/dick.js
@@ -399,7 +399,7 @@ App.Desc.dick = function(slave) {
case 10:
r.push(`and ${he} has an inhuman pair of testicles`);
if (V.showDickCMs === 1) {
- r.push(`testicles, nearly ${ballsToEitherUnit(slave.balls)} long`);
+ r.push(`testicles, nearly ${ballsToEitherUnit(slave.balls)} long.`);
} else {
r.push(`testicles.`);
}
@@ -407,7 +407,7 @@ App.Desc.dick = function(slave) {
case 9:
r.push(`and ${he} has a titanic pair of`);
if (V.showDickCMs === 1) {
- r.push(`testicles, about ${ballsToEitherUnit(slave.balls)} long`);
+ r.push(`testicles, about ${ballsToEitherUnit(slave.balls)} long.`);
} else {
r.push(`testicles.`);
}
@@ -415,7 +415,7 @@ App.Desc.dick = function(slave) {
case 8:
r.push(`and ${he} has a gigantic pair of`);
if (V.showDickCMs === 1) {
- r.push(`testicles, about ${ballsToEitherUnit(slave.balls)} long`);
+ r.push(`testicles, about ${ballsToEitherUnit(slave.balls)} long.`);
} else {
r.push(`testicles.`);
}
@@ -423,7 +423,7 @@ App.Desc.dick = function(slave) {
case 7:
r.push(`and ${he} has a monstrous pair of`);
if (V.showDickCMs === 1) {
- r.push(`testicles, about ${ballsToEitherUnit(slave.balls)} long`);
+ r.push(`testicles, about ${ballsToEitherUnit(slave.balls)} long.`);
} else {
r.push(`testicles.`);
}
@@ -431,7 +431,7 @@ App.Desc.dick = function(slave) {
case 6:
r.push(`and ${he} has an enormous pair of`);
if (V.showDickCMs === 1) {
- r.push(`testicles, about ${ballsToEitherUnit(slave.balls)} long`);
+ r.push(`testicles, about ${ballsToEitherUnit(slave.balls)} long.`);
} else {
r.push(`testicles.`);
}
@@ -439,7 +439,7 @@ App.Desc.dick = function(slave) {
case 5:
r.push(`and ${he} has a huge pair of`);
if (V.showDickCMs === 1) {
- r.push(`testicles, about ${ballsToEitherUnit(slave.balls)} long`);
+ r.push(`testicles, about ${ballsToEitherUnit(slave.balls)} long.`);
} else {
r.push(`testicles.`);
}
@@ -447,7 +447,7 @@ App.Desc.dick = function(slave) {
case 4:
r.push(`and ${he} has a big pair of`);
if (V.showDickCMs === 1) {
- r.push(`testicles, about ${ballsToEitherUnit(slave.balls)} long`);
+ r.push(`testicles, about ${ballsToEitherUnit(slave.balls)} long.`);
} else {
r.push(`testicles.`);
}
@@ -455,7 +455,7 @@ App.Desc.dick = function(slave) {
case 3:
r.push(`and ${he} has an average pair of`);
if (V.showDickCMs === 1) {
- r.push(`testicles, about ${ballsToEitherUnit(slave.balls)} long`);
+ r.push(`testicles, about ${ballsToEitherUnit(slave.balls)} long.`);
} else {
r.push(`testicles.`);
}
@@ -463,7 +463,7 @@ App.Desc.dick = function(slave) {
case 2:
r.push(`and ${he} has a small pair of testicles`);
if (V.showDickCMs === 1) {
- r.push(`testicles, about ${ballsToEitherUnit(slave.balls)} long`);
+ r.push(`testicles, about ${ballsToEitherUnit(slave.balls)} long.`);
} else {
r.push(`testicles.`);
}
@@ -592,7 +592,7 @@ App.Desc.dick = function(slave) {
} else if (scrotalFullness === 0) {
r.push(`${His} soft scrotum allows them to rest comfortably`);
if (hasBothLegs(slave)) {
- r.push(`between ${his} leg.s`);
+ r.push(`between ${his} legs.`);
} else {
r.push(`beneath ${his}`);
if (isAmputee(slave)) {
@@ -1008,9 +1008,11 @@ App.Desc.dick = function(slave) {
if (canAchieveErection(slave)) {
r.push(`goes, along with ${his} shaft`);
if (hasAnyLegs(slave)) {
- r.push(`and leg`);
+ r.push(`and`);
if (hasBothLegs(slave)) {
- r.push(`s`);
+ r.push(`legs`);
+ } else {
+ r.push(`leg`);
}
}
r.push(`whenever ${he} is erect.`);
@@ -1369,11 +1371,11 @@ App.Desc.dick = function(slave) {
} else if (scrotalFullness === 0) {
r.push(`${His} soft scrotum allows them to rest comfortably`);
if (hasAnyLegs(slave)) {
- r.push(`between ${his} leg`);
+ r.push(`between ${his}`);
if (hasBothLegs(slave)) {
- r.push(`s.`);
+ r.push(`legs.`);
} else {
- r.push(`and stump.`);
+ r.push(`leg and stump.`);
}
} else {
r.push(`beneath ${his}`);
diff --git a/src/npc/descriptions/describeTattoos.js b/src/npc/descriptions/describeTattoos.js
index 5d08d394fbc826a4ceeda0d4f5caf7197d824ec2..9ad4b38fc69b7a3b7ffcf1f823b65369656eb26c 100644
--- a/src/npc/descriptions/describeTattoos.js
+++ b/src/npc/descriptions/describeTattoos.js
@@ -474,11 +474,11 @@ App.Desc.tattoo = function(slave, surface) {
case "Asian art":
r.push(`A traditional Asian household scene is tattooed on ${his} lower back, showing a rendition of ${slave.slaveName}, dressed in rich silks, having sex with a`);
if (V.PC.title === 1) {
- r.push(`gentleman`);
+ r.push(`gentleman.`);
} else {
- r.push(`lady`);
+ r.push(`lady.`);
}
- r.push(`. The slave and the`);
+ r.push(`The slave and the`);
if (V.PC.title === 1) {
r.push(`gentleman`);
} else {
diff --git a/src/npc/descriptions/descriptionWidgets.js b/src/npc/descriptions/descriptionWidgets.js
index 2606e331030394e182d96d89d4caf4c160a3a117..01c06dd0e43024e1041e337e0db90e971d5a1382 100644
--- a/src/npc/descriptions/descriptionWidgets.js
+++ b/src/npc/descriptions/descriptionWidgets.js
@@ -798,12 +798,12 @@ App.Desc.mods = function(slave, surface) {
if (slave.fuckdoll !== 0 && !["anus", "lips", "vagina"].includes(surface)) { /* Fuckdoll vulva and anus alone are visible, plus enormous lips */
return App.Desc.piercing(slave, surface); // Most piercings are part of the suit and have appropriate descriptions
}
- return (
- App.Desc.piercing(slave, surface) +
- App.Desc.tattoo(slave, surface) +
- App.Desc.brand(slave, surface) +
+ return [
+ App.Desc.piercing(slave, surface),
+ App.Desc.tattoo(slave, surface),
+ App.Desc.brand(slave, surface),
App.Desc.scar(slave, surface)
- );
+ ].join(' ');
};
/**
diff --git a/src/npc/descriptions/style/hairClothing.js b/src/npc/descriptions/style/hairClothing.js
index b0b4a402cc8025fde936113b94b0f9407c4aaf84..3d553e04c073a50e93f1739b85605fd93a8484ae 100644
--- a/src/npc/descriptions/style/hairClothing.js
+++ b/src/npc/descriptions/style/hairClothing.js
@@ -1778,16 +1778,17 @@ App.Desc.hairClothing = function(slave) {
r.push(App.Desc.image(slave));
break;
case "spats and a tank top":
- r.push(`is tied back with a scrunchy into a long ponytail that falls down `);
+ r.push(`is tied back with a scrunchy into a long ponytail that falls down`);
if (hasAnyLegs(slave)) {
- r.push(`${his} leg`);
+ r.push(his);
if (hasBothLegs(slave)) {
- r.push(`s`);
+ r.push(`legs.`);
+ } else {
+ r.push(`leg.`);
}
} else {
- r.push(`past ${his} torso`);
+ r.push(`past ${his} torso.`);
}
- r.push(`.`);
break;
case "a huipil":
r.push(`is tied into a huge ponytail, that leaves ${his} long hair to wave in the wind.`);