From a393fa96b7efd2be500192d2a42202d03b3d0b41 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: klorpa <30924131+klorpa@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Thu, 23 Aug 2018 14:10:06 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] FinalFix --- src/uncategorized/PESS.tw | 4 ++-- src/uncategorized/RESS.tw | 4 ++-- src/uncategorized/longSlaveDescription.tw | 2 +- src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw | 2 +- src/uncategorized/reFSAcquisition.tw | 6 +++--- src/uncategorized/remoteSurgery.tw | 8 ++++---- src/uncategorized/surgeryDegradation.tw | 2 +- 7 files changed, 14 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-) diff --git a/src/uncategorized/PESS.tw b/src/uncategorized/PESS.tw index ebbbe31d4dd..a59e2b8d478 100644 --- a/src/uncategorized/PESS.tw +++ b/src/uncategorized/PESS.tw @@ -88,9 +88,9 @@ Your DJ <<EventNameLink $activeSlave>> is a terribly pretty $girl. Very few of y <<case "tired collectrix">> -Your milkmaid <<EventNameLink $activeSlave>> worked hard today. $He's clearly exhausted, but $he seems to think it below $him to show the fatigue. $He holds $his chin level and $his shoulders square as $he heads to the bathroom to bathe before bed. After $his shower, $he inspects $his crotch closely before appearing to start masturbating. On closer inspection, however, she's very gently massaging analgesic lotion into $his cock, wincing a little as she does so. $He starts a little when you enter the room, but relaxes when you tell $him to continue $his ministrations and let you know how she's feeling as she does. +Your milkmaid <<EventNameLink $activeSlave>> worked hard today. $He's clearly exhausted, but $he seems to think it below $him to show the fatigue. $He holds $his chin level and $his shoulders square as $he heads to the bathroom to bathe before bed. After $his shower, $he inspects $his crotch closely before appearing to start masturbating. On closer inspection, however, $he's very gently massaging analgesic lotion into $his cock, wincing a little as $he does so. $He starts a little when you enter the room, but relaxes when you tell $him to continue $his ministrations and let you know how $he's feeling as $he does. <br><br> -<<if !canTalk($activeSlave)>>She indicates in amusingly graphic gestures that her dick is sore. She painstakingly counts on her fingers, letting you know that she's fucked <<print $cumSlaves>> assholes today, most of them more than once. <<else>>"<<Master>>, I've fucked a lot of a<<ss>>holes today. There'<<s>> <<print $cumSlaves>> <<s>>laves in the dairy, and I fucked them all up the butt at lea<<s>>t on<<c>>e. Mo<<s>>t of them more than on<<c>>e. My poor cock i<<s>> a little <<s>>ore, <<Master>>," she <<say>>s.<</if>> With so many slaves getting cockmilked, she certainly has to work hard to make sure none of them go unpenetrated. +<<if !canTalk($activeSlave)>>$He indicates in amusingly graphic gestures that $his dick is sore. $He painstakingly counts on $his fingers, letting you know that $he's fucked <<print $cumSlaves>> assholes today, most of them more than once. <<else>>"<<Master>>, I've fucked a lot of a<<ss>>holes today. There'<<s>> <<print $cumSlaves>> <<s>>laves in the dairy, and I fucked them all up the butt at lea<<s>>t on<<c>>e. Mo<<s>>t of them more than on<<c>>e. My poor cock i<<s>> a little <<s>>ore, <<Master>>," $he <<say>>s.<</if>> With so many slaves getting cockmilked, $he certainly has to work hard to make sure none of them go unpenetrated. <<case "tired milkmaid">> diff --git a/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw b/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw index 57ff468840b..eb557108f11 100644 --- a/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw +++ b/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw @@ -15856,13 +15856,13 @@ You tell her kindly that you understand, and that $he'll be trained to address t <<elseif $activeSlave.fetish == "sadist">> You know her tastes, but by the act of this intimate missionary lovemaking, you wordlessly command $him to join you for more conventional pleasures, if only for the moment. $He complies with pleasure, climaxing with surprising speed; perhaps $he appreciates the change. <<elseif $activeSlave.fetish == "masochist">> - Knowing her tastes and wanting the intimacy of mutual pleasure, you nip her lower lip in your teeth with each kiss, and rake your nails across her flanks just hard enough to hurt a little. $He climaxes quickly to the mixed pain and missionary intimacy. + Knowing her tastes and wanting the intimacy of mutual pleasure, you nip her lower lip in your teeth with each kiss, and rake your nails across $his flanks just hard enough to hurt a little. $He climaxes quickly to the mixed pain and missionary intimacy. <<elseif $activeSlave.fetish == "dom">> You know her tastes, but by the act of this intimate missionary lovemaking, you wordlessly command $him to join you for more equal pleasures, if only for the moment. $He complies with something like relief, climaxing with surprising speed; perhaps $he appreciates a turn on the bottom. <<elseif $activeSlave.fetish == "submissive">> Being on the bottom for some missionary lovemaking is very much to her tastes, and $he rises to the point of climax with almost indecent speed. You slow your pace to nothing more than a gentle pressure now and then, and keep her on the edge of orgasm for a long time. <<elseif $activeSlave.fetish == "boobs">> - Knowing her tastes and wanting the intimacy of mutual pleasure, you make sure your nipples line up <<if $activeSlave.nipples == "fuckable">>and interlock <</if>>with $hers as best you can. You note the buck of pleasure this produces each time you get it perfectly right as you make love to $him. + Knowing $his tastes and wanting the intimacy of mutual pleasure, you make sure your nipples line up <<if $activeSlave.nipples == "fuckable">>and interlock <</if>>with $hers as best you can. You note the buck of pleasure this produces each time you get it perfectly right as you make love to $him. <<elseif $activeSlave.fetish == "pregnancy" && $activeSlave.pregKnown == 1>> Being on the bottom for some missionary lovemaking is very much to her tastes, even though $he is already pregnant. $He builds to orgasm slowly, reveling in the feeling of being your woman. <<elseif $activeSlave.fetish == "pregnancy">> diff --git a/src/uncategorized/longSlaveDescription.tw b/src/uncategorized/longSlaveDescription.tw index 8711c07fdb2..a2e3e917252 100644 --- a/src/uncategorized/longSlaveDescription.tw +++ b/src/uncategorized/longSlaveDescription.tw @@ -760,7 +760,7 @@ is <<elseif ($activeSlave.fetishStrength > 60)>> $He enjoys @@.lightcoral;breast play,@@ and is rapidly aroused by nipple stimulation. <<else>> - $He @@.lightcoral;really likes boobs,@@ hers and others. + $He @@.lightcoral;really likes boobs,@@ $hers and others. <</if>> <<case "pregnancy">> <<if ($activeSlave.fetishStrength > 95)>> diff --git a/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw b/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw index 642c22e86f0..b11169f7175 100644 --- a/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw +++ b/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw @@ -846,7 +846,7 @@ The legalities completed, ''__@@.pink;<<= SlaveFullName($activeSlave)>>@@__'' << <<replace "#introResult">> You send $him out to be cleaned up and inducted, but have $him brought back afterward. You point out a clothes box on the couch and tell $him to get dressed, since you're about to make a tour of the club, and $he'll be accompanying you. $He obeys without comment, but gasps with shock to find that $he's been given a string sling bikini. $He climbs into it hesitantly, and finds that not only does its string bottom ride up between $his pussylips, it does not cover $his nipples at all: the strings part to either side of the nipples to let them stick through, bare. This can only generously be called clothing. $He accepts this with an obvious internal sigh, however, and walks dutifully behind you, $his bare feet slapping along as $his big butt bounces and $his tits constantly fall out of $his strings. <<if $activeSlave.behavioralFlaw != "shamefast">> - After a while, though, $he notices that $he's getting a lot of very positive attention, and even starts to strut it a little. When you get back to the penthouse, you ask $him how $he felt. $He blushes. "Kinda hot, <<Master>>," $he <<say>>s, embarrassed. "I didn't think an older girl like me would get <<s>>o many <<s>>tare<<s>>." You reach out to grope $his tits, and tell $him that with breasts like hers, it's not surprising. $He @@.hotpink;likes you@@ for liking $his body, and has @@.mediumaquamarine;begun to trust@@ that even though $he's old, $he can find a place under you. + After a while, though, $he notices that $he's getting a lot of very positive attention, and even starts to strut it a little. When you get back to the penthouse, you ask $him how $he felt. $He blushes. "Kinda hot, <<Master>>," $he <<say>>s, embarrassed. "I didn't think an older girl like me would get <<s>>o many <<s>>tare<<s>>." You reach out to grope $his tits, and tell $him that with breasts like $hers, it's not surprising. $He @@.hotpink;likes you@@ for liking $his body, and has @@.mediumaquamarine;begun to trust@@ that even though $he's old, $he can find a place under you. <<set $activeSlave.trust += 4>> <<set $activeSlave.devotion += 4>> <<else>> diff --git a/src/uncategorized/reFSAcquisition.tw b/src/uncategorized/reFSAcquisition.tw index 94b63c90f38..37c7063a0d0 100644 --- a/src/uncategorized/reFSAcquisition.tw +++ b/src/uncategorized/reFSAcquisition.tw @@ -1286,7 +1286,7 @@ The call comes in from an office, and you suppress the urge to check whether $as <<case "Pastoralist">> She drags herself in, but as the enslavement process winds grindingly on, she shakes off her depression. The vast weight of her situation lifts from her. You've seen this before, the perverse internal freedom that comes with the knowledge that her life is in the hands of another now, and that all she has to do or can do is obey. Her last words to you as a free woman are an ironic statement that, when she was teased back in school for the size of her boobs, she never thought they'd save her one day. <<case "Pastoralist Two">> - She speaks to you as a free woman while working through the enslavement process, perhaps she hasn't quite grasped her new role. Nonetheless, it seems as if a vast weight has been lifted from her shoulders. You've seen this before, the perverse internal freedom that comes with the knowledge that her life is in the hands of another now, and that all she has to do or can do is obey. Her last words to you as a free woman are an ironic statement that, people always praised her milk filled udders as givers of life, yet she never thought they'd save hers one day. + She speaks to you as a free woman while working through the enslavement process, perhaps she hasn't quite grasped her new role. Nonetheless, it seems as if a vast weight has been lifted from her shoulders. You've seen this before, the perverse internal freedom that comes with the knowledge that her life is in the hands of another now, and that all she has to do or can do is obey. Her last words to you as a free woman are an ironic statement that, people always praised her milk filled udders as givers of life, yet she never thought they'd save $hers one day. <<case "Supremacist">> A battered VTOL craft arrives at $arcologies[0].name, broadcasting obviously bogus IFF codes. It seems this mercenary group is playing fast and loose in an attempt to get back on their feet. The aircraft doesn't even touch down on the pad they're directed to: it simply hovers six feet off the pad for the five seconds it takes to shove a canvas bag that obviously contains a struggling human form out of the side door. <<case "Supremacist Two">> @@ -1387,9 +1387,9 @@ The call comes in from an office, and you suppress the urge to check whether $as <<case "Subjugationist">> The purchasing agent is businesslike, even hurried. The inert slave receives a simple check, with some industrious fingering of orifices, and is bundled off. As is appropriate. <<case "Subjugationist Two">> - The enslavement process is disappointingly quiet, since she does little more than stare blankly ahead and respond to any orders. As of this morning she was one of the last free $arcologies[0].FSSubjugationistRace people in the arcology. Now she's simply the newest, and perhaps most willing, sex slave of the inferior race to take her proper place. She's taken away by a purchasing agent soon after. + The enslavement process is disappointingly quiet, since $he does little more than stare blankly ahead and respond to any orders. As of this morning $he was one of the last free $arcologies[0].FSSubjugationistRace people in the arcology. Now $he's simply the newest, and perhaps most willing, sex slave of the inferior race to take $his proper place. $He's taken away by a purchasing agent soon after. <<case "Repopulation Efforts">> - When she arrives, she comes directly to your to your penthouse for enslavement. She wears an excited expression, having seen so many pregnant women on the way there, she can barely contain her enthusiasm. She eagerly strips for inspection revealing her moist pussy, it seems she may be more into pregnancy then she let on. You shake your head to her as a purchaser's agent appears to take her away. She asks if she'll still be impregnated and the agent nods approvingly. She seems slightly downtrodden that she won't be yours but she accepts the fact that she'll still be useful to your future. + When $he arrives, $he comes directly to your to your penthouse for enslavement. She wears an excited expression, having seen so many pregnant women on the way there, she can barely contain her enthusiasm. She eagerly strips for inspection revealing her moist pussy, it seems she may be more into pregnancy then she let on. You shake your head to her as a purchaser's agent appears to take her away. She asks if she'll still be impregnated and the agent nods approvingly. She seems slightly downtrodden that she won't be yours but she accepts the fact that she'll still be useful to your future. <<case "Repopulation Efforts Two">> When she arrives, she is the very picture of a someone who has seen the light at the end of a very dark tunnel. She can't wait to get started making babies for you. A purchaser's agent arrives to take charge of her and she pleads not to leave her infertile. You abate her fears, her fertility will be restored. Her new owner likes to experiment with fertility agents; she'll quickly be pregnant with <<if $seeHyperPreg == 1>>dozens of children<<else>>multiples<</if>>. Her face alights at the thought. She'll finally have all the children she'd dreamed of. <<case "Eugenics">> diff --git a/src/uncategorized/remoteSurgery.tw b/src/uncategorized/remoteSurgery.tw index 8c9b97dcb3f..ab333985047 100644 --- a/src/uncategorized/remoteSurgery.tw +++ b/src/uncategorized/remoteSurgery.tw @@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ <br><br> <</if>> -Work on her face: +Work on $his face: <br> $His $activeSlave.faceShape face is @@ -1134,7 +1134,7 @@ Alter $his race: <</if>> <br><br> -Work on her structurally: +Work on $him structurally: <br> <<if $activeSlave.indentureRestrictions < 1>> <<if ($activeSlave.shoulders < -1)>> @@ -1575,11 +1575,11 @@ Work on her structurally: <<if $bodyswapAnnounced == 1 && $activeSlave.indenture < 0>> <br> <<if $activeSlave.bodySwap == 0>> - $He is in her native body. + $He is in $his native body. <<elseif $activeSlave.origBodyOwner != "">> $He currently occupies <<print $activeSlave.origBodyOwner>>'s body. <<else>> - $He is no longer in her native body. + $He is no longer in $his native body. <</if>> <<if $activeSlave.indenture == -1>> [[Swap her body with another of your stock's|Slave Slave Swap Workaround]] diff --git a/src/uncategorized/surgeryDegradation.tw b/src/uncategorized/surgeryDegradation.tw index f01a5846f16..8c3c9f0fb63 100644 --- a/src/uncategorized/surgeryDegradation.tw +++ b/src/uncategorized/surgeryDegradation.tw @@ -1405,7 +1405,7 @@ As the remote surgery's long recovery cycle completes, <</if>> <<case "electrolarynx">> - <<if $activeSlave.eyes == 0>> + <<if $activeSlave.voice == 0>> <<if ($activeSlave.devotion > 50)>> The autosurgery instructed $him in no uncertain terms not to speak during recovery, so $he knows that $his voice has been restored. When you come in to check on her late in the process, though, $he does $his best to communicate adoration with $his <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>eyes<<else>>face<</if>> alone. Finally, the accelerated healing process reaches the time when $he's to test $his new vocal organs. $He <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>looks at<<else>>turns to<</if>> you shyly, and <<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>>meekly beckons to you from where $he's still<<else>>meekly mouths a request that you come over to where $he's<</if>> restrained by the autosurgery. When you're near, $he clears her sore throat gingerly and then whispers, "@@.hotpink;I love you,@@ <<Master>>" @@.mediumaquamarine;$He is far more trusting of your plans for $him in the future.@@ <<set $activeSlave.trust += 5>> -- GitLab