diff --git a/src/endWeek/saServeThePublic.js b/src/endWeek/saServeThePublic.js
index be3888c5a80289e638ee60afcccd3b3f190dd65b..b5a65e173c7d82b0e64cf5c696be4dbe6d1ed136 100644
--- a/src/endWeek/saServeThePublic.js
+++ b/src/endWeek/saServeThePublic.js
@@ -1228,7 +1228,7 @@ window.saServeThePublic = (function saServeThePublic() {
 	 */
 	function addRep(slave) {
 		if (slave.assignment !== "recruit girls") {
-			if (slave.assignment === "serve in the club" || slave.assignment ===  "be the DJ") {
+			if (slave.assignment === "serve in the club" || slave.assignment === "be the DJ") {
 				repX(Math.trunc((slave.sexAmount * slave.sexQuality) * (1 + (0.003 * slave.skill.entertainment)) * 0.15), "publicServantClub", slave);
 			} else if (slave.assignment === "serve the public") {
 				repX(Math.trunc((slave.sexAmount * slave.sexQuality) * (1 + (0.003 * slave.skill.entertainment)) * 0.15), "publicServant", slave);
diff --git a/src/endWeek/saWhore.js b/src/endWeek/saWhore.js
index b4352599a9b7011cc5697616e6c0596b2873370c..f441a94515f8e69c928a3fa21b6997b30487f094 100644
--- a/src/endWeek/saWhore.js
+++ b/src/endWeek/saWhore.js
@@ -1220,7 +1220,7 @@ window.saWhore = (function saWhore() {
 
 		switch (slave.behavioralQuirk) {
 			case "confident":
-				r += ` ${He}'s better at ${his} job because ${he}'s  such a confident whore.`;
+				r += ` ${He}'s better at ${his} job because ${he}'s such a confident whore.`;
 				break;
 			case "cutting":
 				r += ` ${He} gets a lot of attention for ${his} ability to joke at a customer's expense.`;
diff --git a/src/events/intro/introSummary.tw b/src/events/intro/introSummary.tw
index 75bc6bb9f663419509fb87246992e45f45b245cb..43c0c34fefa8d63a0a7bce3e95a54f75aef2a688 100644
--- a/src/events/intro/introSummary.tw
+++ b/src/events/intro/introSummary.tw
@@ -409,7 +409,7 @@ __''Content settings''__
 <br>
 <<if $seeDicks == 0>>
 	<<options $makeDicks>>
-		&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Should you be able to surgically attach a penis to your female slaves and  starting girls?
+		&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Should you be able to surgically attach a penis to your female slaves and starting girls?
 	<<option 0 "No">>
 	<<option 1 "Yes">>
 	<</options>>
diff --git a/src/init/storyInit.tw b/src/init/storyInit.tw
index 107af7e7c487fc4f8a26f53cb74d140e6bcc1e99..a61c1de4d6f31354b419aecffa7cc9ac14b174b2 100644
--- a/src/init/storyInit.tw
+++ b/src/init/storyInit.tw
@@ -1010,6 +1010,7 @@ You should have received a copy of the GNU General Public License along with thi
 
 <<set $brandTarget = "buttock">>
 <<set $brandDesign = "your initials">>
+<<set $dyedSkin = ["dyed red", "dyed green", "dyed blue", "dyed pink", "dyed gray", "tiger striped", "camouflage patterned"]>>
 
 <<set $oralTotal = 0>>
 <<set $vaginalTotal = 0>>
diff --git a/src/npc/descriptions/fAnus.tw b/src/npc/descriptions/fAnus.tw
index d77cceb6ff12e44895a6b95a1d78aef0251a233a..a6b4a8f3519519db4408aff5d8f81353fb12f116 100644
--- a/src/npc/descriptions/fAnus.tw
+++ b/src/npc/descriptions/fAnus.tw
@@ -19,6 +19,8 @@ You call $him over so you can
 
 <<if ($activeSlave.fetish == "buttslut") && ($activeSlave.devotion >= -20)>>
 	$He's delighted at the prospect of $his favorite activity.
+<<elseif ($activeSlave.fetish == "buttslut")>>
+	$He perks up at the prospect of $his favorite activity, but the idea of spending it with you instantly sours $his mood.
 <</if>>
 
 <<if ($activeSlave.anusTat == "tribal patterns")>>
@@ -30,7 +32,7 @@ You call $him over so you can
 <</if>>
 
 <<if ($activeSlave.heels == 1)>>
-	<<if !["flats", "flats with short stockings", "flats with long stockings", "none"].includes($activeSlave.shoes)>>
+	<<if !["flats", "flats with long stockings", "flats with short stockings", "none"].includes($activeSlave.shoes)>>
 		As $he went past your desk, $his high heels and surgically altered legs enforced a gait that presented $his butt enticingly.
 	<<else>>
 		As $he crawls along on all fours, $his anus is readily available.
diff --git a/src/npc/fAbuse.tw b/src/npc/fAbuse.tw
index 59172d7308c804698a5f02bae094b161fcb8fd30..eb216b1abe8940144ed03ecf5df8e7c0a8c6c2f3 100644
--- a/src/npc/fAbuse.tw
+++ b/src/npc/fAbuse.tw
@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@
 		In $his haste to get out of $his slutty netting $he trips and falls flat.
 	<<case "shibari ropes">>
 		In $his haste to get out of $his shibari ropes $he only manages to get tangled and fall over.
-	<<case "restrictive latex" "a latex catsuit">>
+	<<case "a latex catsuit" "restrictive latex">>
 		In $his haste to get out of $his clinging latex $he trips and falls flat in a tangle of latex and trembling flesh.
 	<<case "a military uniform">>
 		$He's desperately torn between hurry to avoid punishment and fear $he'll damage $his shirt.
@@ -163,6 +163,8 @@
 		$His schoolgirl outfit is easily stripped off: $he pulls down $his skimpy skirt and tears off $his little blouse, and $he's nude.
 	<<case "a kimono">>
 		Getting out of $his kimono in that amount of time is flagrantly impossible, but $he tries anyway.
+	<<case "a klan robe">>
+		Because $he's nude under $his robes, $he simply lifts it over $his head.
 	<<case "a hijab and abaya" "a niqab and abaya" "a klan robe">>
 		Because $he's nude under $his abaya, $he simply lifts it over $his head.
 	<<case "a burqa">>
@@ -336,18 +338,16 @@ from your victim.
 	<</if>>
 <</if>>
 
-<<if $seeRace == 1>>
-<<if $activeSlave.race == "white">>
-	$His white, $activeSlave.skin ass shows the spanking well.
-<<elseif $activeSlave.race == "asian">>
-	$His asian, $activeSlave.skin ass shows the spanking well.
-<<elseif $activeSlave.race == "middle eastern">>
-	$His arab, $activeSlave.skin ass barely shows the spanking.
-<<elseif $activeSlave.race == "latina">>
-	$His latina, $activeSlave.skin ass barely shows the spanking.
-<<elseif $activeSlave.race == "black">>
-	$His black, $activeSlave.skin ass barely shows any marks from the spanking.
-<</if>>
+<<if ($dyedSkin.indexOf($activeSlave) != -1)>>
+	$His dyed<<if $seeRace == 1>>, $activeSlave.race<</if>> ass barely shows the spanking.
+<<elseif (skinToneLevel($activeSlave) < 5)>>
+	$His $activeSlave.skin<<if $seeRace == 1>>, $activeSlave.race<</if>> ass shows the spanking extremely well.
+<<elseif (skinToneLevel($activeSlave) < 12)>>
+	$His $activeSlave.skin<<if $seeRace == 1>>, $activeSlave.race<</if>> ass shows the spanking well.
+<<elseif (skinToneLevel($activeSlave) < 20)>>
+	$His $activeSlave.skin<<if $seeRace == 1>>, $activeSlave.race<</if>> ass barely shows the spanking.
+<<else>>
+	$His $activeSlave.skin<<if $seeRace == 1>>, $activeSlave.race<</if>> ass barely shows any marks from the spanking.
 <</if>>
 
 <<if ($activeSlave.chastityPenis == 1)>>
@@ -396,22 +396,22 @@ from your victim.
 	<<= BothVCheck()>>
 <</if>>
 <<if ($activeSlave.ID !== $Bodyguard.ID)>>
-This leaves $him sobbing on the floor <<if ($PC.dick == 0)>>as you shuck off the strap-on and drop it on $his face<<else>>with cum dripping out of $him<</if>>.
+	This leaves $him sobbing on the floor <<if ($PC.dick == 0)>>as you shuck off the strap-on and drop it on $his face<<else>>with cum dripping out of $him<</if>>.
 <<elseif ($activeSlave.ID == $Bodyguard.ID) && ($activeSlave.fetish == "masochist") && ($activeSlave.fetishKnown == 1) && ($activeSlave.fetishStrength > 95)>>
-$He thanks you rapidly, trying to break away from the pleasure of your reward. $He quickly gets back to $his feet and stumbles towards the shower, to make sure you won't stay unprotected too long.
+	$He thanks you rapidly, trying to break away from the pleasure of your reward. $He quickly gets back to $his feet and stumbles towards the shower, to make sure you won't stay unprotected too long.
 <<else>>
-Even though $he's in a somewhat bad shape, $he still jumps back to $his feet and stumbles towards the shower, to make sure you won't stay unprotected too long.
+	Even though $he's in a somewhat bad shape, $he still jumps back to $his feet and stumbles towards the shower, to make sure you won't stay unprotected too long.
 <</if>>
 
 <<if ($activeSlave.ID !== $Bodyguard.ID)>>
-<<if $activeSlave.minorInjury == 0>>
-<<if _asspain == 1>>
-	The anal rape leaves $him with a sore butthole.
-<<elseif random(1,100) > 50>>
-	<<set $activeSlave.minorInjury = either("black eye", "bruise", "split lip")>>
-	Your abuse gave $him a $activeSlave.minorInjury.
-<</if>>
-<</if>>
+	<<if $activeSlave.minorInjury == 0>>
+		<<if _asspain == 1>>
+			The anal rape leaves $him with a sore butthole.
+		<<elseif random(1,100) > 50>>
+			<<set $activeSlave.minorInjury = either("black eye", "bruise", "split lip")>>
+			Your abuse gave $him a $activeSlave.minorInjury.
+		<</if>>
+	<</if>>
 <</if>>
 
 <<if $activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 600000>>
@@ -457,48 +457,48 @@ Even though $he's in a somewhat bad shape, $he still jumps back to $his feet and
 
 <<if (random(1,100) > (20+$activeSlave.devotion+$activeSlave.trust))>>
 	<<if ($activeSlave.fetish !== "submissive") && ($activeSlave.fetish !== "masochist") && ($activeSlave.ID != $Bodyguard.ID)>>
-	<<set _seed = random(1,8)>>
-	Brutal abuse has left $him
-	<<if (_seed == 1) && ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw !== "odd")>>
-		@@.red;acting strangely.@@
-		<<set $activeSlave.behavioralFlaw = "odd">>
-	<<elseif (_seed == 2) && ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw !== "anorexic")>>
-		@@.red;starving $himself@@ in a crippling attempt to be pretty.
-		<<set $activeSlave.behavioralFlaw = "anorexic">>
-	<<elseif (_seed == 3) && ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw !== "gluttonous")>>
-		@@.red;stress eating@@ whenever $he can.
-		<<set $activeSlave.behavioralFlaw = "gluttonous">>
-	<<elseif (_seed == 4) && ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw !== "devout")>>
-		@@.red;praying in private@@ whenever $he can.
-		<<set $activeSlave.behavioralFlaw = "devout">>
-	<<elseif (_seed == 5) && ($activeSlave.sexualFlaw !== "apathetic")>>
-		@@.red;sexually apathetic,@@ since $he feels it cannot go well for $him.
-		<<set $activeSlave.sexualFlaw = "apathetic">>
-	<<elseif (_seed == 6) && ($activeSlave.sexualFlaw !== "crude")>>
-		@@.red;sexually crude,@@ out of an unconscious belief that sex is ugly and unworthy of effort.
-		<<set $activeSlave.sexualFlaw = "crude">>
-	<<elseif (_seed == 7) && ($activeSlave.sexualFlaw !== "judgemental")>>
-		@@.red;sexually judgemental,@@ out of an unconscious desire to disqualify people from being good enough to have sex with $him.
-		<<set $activeSlave.sexualFlaw = "judgemental">>
-	<<elseif ($PC.dick == 1)>>
-		@@.red;hating men,@@ since you forced your cock on $him.
-		<<set $activeSlave.behavioralFlaw = "hates men">>
-	<<else>>
-		@@.red;hating women,@@ since you forced your cunt on $him.
-		<<set $activeSlave.behavioralFlaw = "hates women">>
-	<</if>>
+		<<set _seed = random(1,8)>>
+		Brutal abuse has left $him
+		<<if (_seed == 1) && ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw !== "odd")>>
+			@@.red;acting strangely.@@
+			<<set $activeSlave.behavioralFlaw = "odd">>
+		<<elseif (_seed == 2) && ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw !== "anorexic")>>
+			@@.red;starving $himself@@ in a crippling attempt to be pretty.
+			<<set $activeSlave.behavioralFlaw = "anorexic">>
+		<<elseif (_seed == 3) && ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw !== "gluttonous")>>
+			@@.red;stress eating@@ whenever $he can.
+			<<set $activeSlave.behavioralFlaw = "gluttonous">>
+		<<elseif (_seed == 4) && ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw !== "devout")>>
+			@@.red;praying in private@@ whenever $he can.
+			<<set $activeSlave.behavioralFlaw = "devout">>
+		<<elseif (_seed == 5) && ($activeSlave.sexualFlaw !== "apathetic")>>
+			@@.red;sexually apathetic,@@ since $he feels it cannot go well for $him.
+			<<set $activeSlave.sexualFlaw = "apathetic">>
+		<<elseif (_seed == 6) && ($activeSlave.sexualFlaw !== "crude")>>
+			@@.red;sexually crude,@@ out of an unconscious belief that sex is ugly and unworthy of effort.
+			<<set $activeSlave.sexualFlaw = "crude">>
+		<<elseif (_seed == 7) && ($activeSlave.sexualFlaw !== "judgemental")>>
+			@@.red;sexually judgemental,@@ out of an unconscious desire to disqualify people from being good enough to have sex with $him.
+			<<set $activeSlave.sexualFlaw = "judgemental">>
+		<<elseif ($PC.dick == 1)>>
+			@@.red;hating men,@@ since you forced your cock on $him.
+			<<set $activeSlave.behavioralFlaw = "hates men">>
+		<<else>>
+			@@.red;hating women,@@ since you forced your cunt on $him.
+			<<set $activeSlave.behavioralFlaw = "hates women">>
+		<</if>>
 	<</if>>
 <</if>>
 <<if (random(1,100) > (50+$activeSlave.devotion+$activeSlave.trust)) && ($activeSlave.ID !== $Bodyguard.ID)>>
 	<<if ($activeSlave.fetish !== "mindbroken") && ($activeSlave.fetishKnown == 0) && ($activeSlave.clitSetting !== $activeSlave.fetish)>>
-	$His acceptance of your abuse has twisted $his
-	<<if (random(1,2) == 1) && ($activeSlave.fetish !== "submissive")>>
-		@@.lightcoral;sexuality towards submissiveness.@@
-		<<set $activeSlave.fetish = "submissive", $activeSlave.fetishKnown = 1>>
-	<<elseif ($activeSlave.fetish !== "masochism")>>
-		@@.lightcoral;sexuality towards masochism.@@
-		<<set $activeSlave.fetish = "masochism", $activeSlave.fetishKnown = 1>>
-	<</if>>
+		$His acceptance of your abuse has twisted $his
+		<<if (random(1,2) == 1) && ($activeSlave.fetish !== "submissive")>>
+			@@.lightcoral;sexuality towards submissiveness.@@
+			<<set $activeSlave.fetish = "submissive", $activeSlave.fetishKnown = 1>>
+		<<elseif ($activeSlave.fetish !== "masochism")>>
+			@@.lightcoral;sexuality towards masochism.@@
+			<<set $activeSlave.fetish = "masochism", $activeSlave.fetishKnown = 1>>
+		<</if>>
 	<</if>>
 <</if>>
 <<if $activeSlave.fetish == "mindbroken" && $activeSlave.relationship == -3>>
diff --git a/src/npc/fBeg.tw b/src/npc/fBeg.tw
index a314520caad86b67b3680fcb60dc626ba26aa113..a1a1095800cfe25b334927be232b345d94ec1660 100644
--- a/src/npc/fBeg.tw
+++ b/src/npc/fBeg.tw
@@ -6,157 +6,210 @@
 <<run Enunciate($activeSlave)>>
 <<setSpokenLocalPronouns $activeSlave $activeSlave>>
 
-You call $him over to you for inspection. <<BoobsDescription>> You look at $him lustfully and instruct $him to strip. 
-<<if ($activeSlave.sexualFlaw == "shamefast")>> Tears well up in $his eyes at the idea of showing $his naked body. 
-<<elseif ($activeSlave.sexualQuirk == "tease")>> $He blushes with arousal. $He has kept $his innate embarrassment at the thought of being naked, but you have infused this with overwhelming arousal. $His cheeks are red as $he removes $his clothes, giving quite a strip tease as $he does. 
-<<elseif ($activeSlave.sexualFlaw == "repressed")>>$He subconsciously uses $his hands to try to cover $his body. $He is still repressing $his own sexuality. That type of behavior may have been allowed in the old world, but it has no place in a Free City.
-<<elseif ($activeSlave.sexualFlaw == "idealistic")>>$He shakes $his head pleadingly, "But I don't consent" $he responds. You laugh in such a way that tells $him that $his consent is irrelevant. $He is still idealistic, believing that sex should be a consensual expression of love and intimacy. Such ideas were common in the Old World, but they have no place in a Free City. You decide to grab $him and forcefully rip $his clothes from $his body, since obedience could simply be seen as consent. $He screams and plead as you pin her arms, ripping and tearing at the cloth that keeps her beauty from sight. 
-<<elseif ($activeSlave.sexualFlaw == "neglectful")>> 
-	$He replies "Ye<<s>>, 
+You call $him over to you for inspection. <<BoobsDescription>> You look at $him lustfully and instruct $him to strip.
+<<if ($activeSlave.sexualFlaw == "shamefast")>>
+	Tears well up in $his eyes at the idea of showing $his naked body.
+<<elseif ($activeSlave.sexualQuirk == "tease")>>
+	$He blushes with arousal. $He has kept $his innate embarrassment at the thought of being naked, but you have infused this with overwhelming arousal. $His cheeks are red as $he removes $his clothes, giving quite a strip tease as $he does.
+<<elseif ($activeSlave.sexualFlaw == "repressed")>>
+	$He subconsciously uses $his hands to try to cover $his body. $He is still repressing $his own sexuality. That type of behavior may have been allowed in the old world, but it has no place in a Free City.
+<<elseif ($activeSlave.sexualFlaw == "idealistic")>>
+	$He shakes $his head pleadingly. "But I don't con<<s>>ent," $he responds. You laugh in such a way that tells $him that $his consent is irrelevant. $He is still idealistic, believing that sex should be a consensual expression of love and intimacy. Such ideas were common in the Old World, but they have no place in a Free City. You decide to grab $him and forcefully rip $his clothes from $his body, since obedience could simply be seen as consent. $He screams and plead as you pin $his arms, ripping and tearing at the cloth that keeps $his beauty from sight.
+<<elseif ($activeSlave.sexualFlaw == "neglectful")>>
+	$He replies "Ye<<s>>,
 	<<if $activeSlave.rudeTitle == 1>>
 		<<= PoliteRudeTitle($activeSlave)>>,"
 	<<else>>
 		<<Master>>,"
 	<</if>>
-	$he replies contritely. $He has no sense of self beyond your usefulness of $him, and selflessly sacrifices $his own comfort for your pleasure. 
-<<elseif ($activeSlave.sexualFlaw == "attention whore")>>eagerly begins to shirk $his wear, drawing as much attention to the process as possible.
-<<else>> 
+	$he replies contritely. $He has no sense of self beyond your usefulness of $him, and selflessly sacrifices $his own comfort for your pleasure.
+<<elseif ($activeSlave.sexualFlaw == "attention whore")>>
+	$He eagerly begins to shirk $his wear, drawing as much attention to the process as possible.
+<<else>>
 	<<if ($activeSlave.devotion < -20)>>
-	$He resists, forcing you to undress $him yourself.
-	<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion > -20)>> $He obeys, and moves to the center of your office to undress $himself for you.
+		$He resists, forcing you to undress $him yourself.
+	<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion > -20)>>
+		$He obeys, and moves to the center of your office to undress $himself for you.
 	<</if>>
 <</if>>
 <<if ($activeSlave.devotion > -20)>>
-$He begins to undress with
-	<<if ($activeSlave.entertainSkill >= 100)>> masterful skill, teasing and taunting all the way down. $He rolls $his hips and most sexual parts as $he removes $his clothing.
-	<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 80)>> arousing skill. Even though the goal is just to get 	$him naked, your slave knows that $his job is to entertain you with $his every move. 
-	<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 50)>> notable skill. $He takes the opportunity to give you a light strip tease as $he undresses. 
-	<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 20)>> a decent effort. $He isn't your most entertaining slave, but $he still makes an effort to arouse you with $his undressing.
-	<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 9)>> some effort to be sexy. $His moves are less than skillful and the undressing is more pragmatic than arousing. 
-	<<else>> no effort to be sexy. $He has no entertainment skill, and the only goal of $his actions is to go from clothed to naked. 
+	$He begins to undress with
+	<<if ($activeSlave.entertainSkill >= 100)>>
+		masterful skill, teasing and taunting all the way down. $He rolls $his hips and most sexual parts as $he removes $his clothing.
+	<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 80)>>
+		arousing skill. Even though the goal is just to get $him naked, your slave knows that $his job is to entertain you with $his every move.
+	<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 50)>>
+		notable skill. $He takes the opportunity to give you a light strip tease as $he undresses.
+	<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 20)>>
+		a decent effort. $He isn't your most entertaining slave, but $he still makes an effort to arouse you with $his undressing.
+	<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 9)>>
+		some effort to be sexy. $His moves are less than skillful and the undressing is more pragmatic than arousing.
+	<<else>>
+		no effort to be sexy. $He has no entertainment skill, and the only goal of $his actions is to go from clothed to naked.
 	<</if>>
 <</if>>
 
 <<if ($activeSlave.fetishStrength > 60)>>
-		<<switch $activeSlave.fetish>>
-		<<case "submissive">> As $he begins to strip you grab $him without warning and begin to tear off $his clothes. Your slave expected you to allow $him to obey your command, and so $he is initially taken aback by the sudden force but $his submissive nature keeps $him from resisting. $He is such a submissive slut that you feel obligation to push $his status even further. You bind $his arms tightly behind $his back in a leather monoglove, lacing it tighter until $his elbows are touching. $He gives a soft whimper, but you both know that this is for your benefit and not a protest.  
-			<<if ($activeSlave.nipplesPiercing >= 1)>> You then retrieve heavy bells and attach them to her nipple rings. 
-			<<else>> You reach into your pocket and retrieve two weighted and belled nipple clamps, attaching them tightly to your slave's delicate nipples. 
-			<</if>> You tell her to bounce so that they jingle, reminding her of her status.
-		<<case "masochist">>  Once $he is fully exposed you give $him a firm slap across the tits. $He's a massochist and relishes the pain with sexual arousal. You ask your painslut if $he deserves to be punished. "Oh yes, 
-			<<if $activeSlave.rudeTitle == 1>><<= PoliteRudeTitle($activeSlave)>>
-			<<else>><<Master>>
-			<</if>>. 
-			Please punish your little slut. Sensing that your slave is getting too much enjoyment from $his beating you cease.  
-		<</switch>>
+	<<switch $activeSlave.fetish>>
+	<<case "submissive">>
+		As $he begins to strip you grab $him without warning and begin to tear off $his clothes. Your slave expected you to allow $him to obey your command, and so $he is initially taken aback by the sudden force but $his submissive nature keeps $him from resisting. $He is such a submissive slut that you feel obligation to push $his status even further. You bind $his arms tightly behind $his back in a leather monoglove, lacing it tighter until $his elbows are touching. $He gives a soft whimper, but you both know that this is for your benefit and not a protest.
+		<<if ($activeSlave.nipplesPiercing >= 1)>>
+			You then retrieve heavy bells and attach them to $his nipple rings.
+		<<else>>
+			You reach into your pocket and retrieve two weighted and belled nipple clamps, attaching them tightly to your slave's delicate nipples.
+		<</if>>
+		You tell $him to bounce so that they jingle, reminding $him of $his status.
+	<<case "masochist">>
+		Once $he is fully exposed you give $him a firm slap across the tits. $He's a masochist and relishes the pain with sexual arousal. You ask your painslut if $he deserves to be punished. "Oh ye<<s>>,
+		<<if $activeSlave.rudeTitle == 1>>
+			<<= PoliteRudeTitle($activeSlave)>>.
+		<<else>>
+			<<Master>>.
+		<</if>>
+		Plea<<s>>e puni<<sh>> your little <<s>>lut." Sensing that your slave is getting too much enjoyment from $his beating you cease.
+	<</switch>>
 <</if>>
 
-You stare at the naked form of your slave standing before you.  
+You stare at the naked form of your slave standing before you.
 
-<<if ($activeSlave.boobsTat == "rude words")>> The words on $his chest stand out at you. You ask $him what $his tits say. "Fuckslave." $he replies. You ask if that's what $he is. 
-	<<if ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "liberated")>> "I'm nobody's property. I'm a free woman!" $He shoots back. "We shall see" you reply. 
-	<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion < -20)>> $He does $his best to shake $his head. 
-	<<else>> "Yes <<Master>>, that's what I am. 
-	<</if>>  
-<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobsTat == "possessive")>> The words on $his chest stand out at you. You ask $him what $his tits say. "It's Your personal symbol" $he replies. You ask if that's what $he is. 
-	<<if ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "liberated")>> "I'm nobody's property. I'm a free woman!" $He shoots back. "We shall see" you reply. 
-	<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion < -20)>> $He does $his best to shake $his head. 
-	<<else>> "Yes <<Master>>, that's what I am. 
+<<if ($activeSlave.boobsTat == "rude words")>>
+	The words on $his chest stand out at you. You ask $him what $his tits say. "Fuck<<s>>lave," $he replies. You ask if that's what $he is.
+	<<if ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "liberated")>>
+		"I'm nobody'<<s>> property. I'm a free $woman!" $he shoots back. "We shall see," you reply.
+	<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion < -20)>>
+		$He does $his best to shake $his head.
+	<<else>>
+		"Yes <<Master>>, that'<<s>> what I am."
+	<</if>>
+<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobsTat == "possessive")>>
+	The words on $his chest stand out at you. You ask $him what $his tits say. "It'<<s>> your per<<s>>onal <<s>>ymbol," $he replies. You ask if that's what $he is.
+	<<if ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "liberated")>>
+		"I'm nobody'<<s>> property. I'm a free $woman!" $he shoots back. "We shall see," you reply.
+	<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion < -20)>>
+		$He does $his best to shake $his head.
+	<<else>>
+		"Ye<<s>> <<Master>>, that'<<s>> what I am."
+	<</if>>
+<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobsTat == "degradation")>>
+	The words on $his chest stand out at you. You ask $him what $his tits say. "<<Master>>'<<s>> Bitch," $he replies. You ask if that's what $he is.
+	<<if ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "liberated")>>
+		"I'm nobody'<<s>> property. I'm a free $woman!" $he shoots back. "We shall see," you reply.
+	<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion < -20)>>
+		$He does $his best to shake $his head.
+	<<else>>
+		"Ye<<s>> <<Master>>, that'<<s>> what I am."
 	<</if>>
-<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobsTat == "degradation")>> The words on $his chest stand out at you. You ask $him what $his tits say. "<<Master>>'s Bitch" $he replies. You ask if that's what $he is. 
-	<<if ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "liberated")>> "I'm nobody's property. I'm a free woman!" $He shoots back. "We shall see" you reply. 
-	<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion < -20)>> $He does $his best to shake $his head. 
-	<<else>> "Yes <<Master>>, that's what I am. 
-	<</if>> 
-<<else>> $His body belongs to you, and your slave needs to remember that. 
+<<else>>
+	$His body belongs to you, and your slave needs to remember that.
 <</if>>
 
-You then tell your slave to kneel at your feet. 
-<<if ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "bitchy")>> $He rolls $his eyes sasses you a bit, "Whatever," she scoffs and 
-<<elseif ($activeSlave.behaviorFlaw == "arrogant")>> $He stands up even straighter than before, crossing $his arms and widening $his stance. $His arrogance makes obeying commands like this difficult, but that is not your concern. You give $him a look that tells $him that pain will await if $he does not obey. $He
-<<elseif ($activeSlave.behavioralQuirk == "confident")>> $He confidently moves to obey. $He
-<<elseif ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "liberated")>> $He stands up even straighter than before, crossing $his arms and widening $his stance. "I am not some animal," $he protests "I am a free woman." You laugh at $his continued delusions. Liberated women have no place in a Free City. You remind her that pain awaits $him should $he defy you further and $he
-<<elseif ($activeSlave.behavioralQuirk == "advocate")>> $He smiles at the demonstration of $his rightful place as a lowly slave. $He
-<<elseif ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "odd")>> $He sticks her tongue out at you, blowing raspberries in an act of futile defiance. $He really is an odd one. $He
-<<elseif ($activeSlave.behavioralQuirk == "funny")>> $He smiles and turns $his butt to you, swaying it cutely as $his silly way of acknowledging your command. $He
+You then tell your slave to kneel at your feet.
+<<if ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "bitchy")>>
+	$He rolls $his eyes sasses you a bit, "Whatever," $he scoffs and
+<<elseif ($activeSlave.behaviorFlaw == "arrogant")>>
+	$He stands up even straighter than before, crossing $his arms and widening $his stance. $His arrogance makes obeying commands like this difficult, but that is not your concern. You give $him a look that tells $him that pain will await if $he does not obey. $He
+<<elseif ($activeSlave.behavioralQuirk == "confident")>>
+	$He confidently moves to obey. $He
+<<elseif ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "liberated")>>
+	$He stands up even straighter than before, crossing $his arms and widening $his stance. "I am not <<s>>ome animal," $he protests, "I am a free $woman." You laugh at $his continued delusions. Liberated $women have no place in a Free City. You remind $him that pain awaits $him should $he defy you further and $he
+<<elseif ($activeSlave.behavioralQuirk == "advocate")>>
+	$He smiles at the demonstration of $his rightful place as a lowly slave. $He
+<<elseif ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "odd")>>
+	$He sticks $his tongue out at you, blowing raspberries in an act of futile defiance. $He really is an odd one. $He
+<<elseif ($activeSlave.behavioralQuirk == "funny")>>
+	$He smiles and turns $his butt to you, swaying it cutely as $his silly way of acknowledging your command. $He
 <<else>>
-$He
+	$He
 <</if>>
 
 <<if ($activeSlave.devotion < -20)>>
 	<<if ($activeSlave.fear < -50)>>
-	drops terrified to the ground. 
+		drops terrified to the ground.
 	<<else>>
-		<<if !canTalk($activeSlave)>>gestures
-		<<elseif (_lisping == 1)>>lisps
-		<<else>>declares
-		<</if>> 
-	angrily that slavery is wrong and $he will not bow. You look at your Assistant who silently summons two other, more obedient slaves from their duties. 
-		<<if ($activeSlave.nipplesPiercing > 1)>> You reach out and grab $him by her nipple chain, pulling her in harshly. She yelps in pain, but knows better than to pull away.
-		<<elseif ($activeSlave.nosePiercing > 1)>> You reach out and grab $him by her nose ring, pulling her in harshly. She yelps in pain, but knows better than to pull away.
-		<<else>> You reach out and grab $him firmly by the collar. 
+		<<if !canTalk($activeSlave)>>
+			gestures
+		<<elseif (_lisping == 1)>>
+			lisps
+		<<else>>
+			declares
 		<</if>>
-	"One more chance, slut" by now, the other slaves have arrived and are standing loyally by your side. Your loyal slaves force $him to $his knees.  
+		angrily that slavery is wrong and $he will not bow. You look at your assistant who silently summons two other, more obedient slaves from their duties.
+		<<if ($activeSlave.nipplesPiercing > 1)>>
+			You reach out and grab $him by $his nipple chain, pulling $him in harshly. $He yelps in pain, but knows better than to pull away.
+		<<elseif ($activeSlave.nosePiercing > 1)>>
+			You reach out and grab $him by $his nose ring, pulling $him in harshly. $He yelps in pain, but knows better than to pull away.
+		<<else>>
+			You reach out and grab $him firmly by the collar.
+		<</if>>
+		"One more chance, slut." By now, the other slaves have arrived and are standing loyally by your side. Your loyal slaves force $him to $his knees.
 	<</if>>
-	"Head at crotch level," you clarify. "Remember your purpose"
-<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion < 20)>> is not enthusiastic, but is obedient enough to go down without much threat of discipline. 
+	"Head at crotch level," you clarify. "Remember your purpose."
+<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion < 20)>>
+	is not enthusiastic, but is obedient enough to go down without much threat of discipline.
 <<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion > 20)>>
 	<<if ($activeSlave.fetishKnown == 1)>>
 		<<switch $activeSlave.fetish>>
 		<<case "submissive">>
-			bows $his head and humbly assumes $his rightful position at $his <<Master>>'s feet.
+			bows $his head and humbly assumes $his rightful position at $his <<= WrittenMaster()>>'s feet.
 		<<case "dom">>
-			would rather be standing by your side making your other sluts bow, but $he still knows that you are $his <<Master>>.
+			would rather be standing by your side making your other sluts bow, but $he still knows that you are $his <<= WrittenMaster()>>.
 		<<case "sadist">>
-			would rather be pushing one of your other whores painfully to her knees, but $he still obeys. 
+			would rather be pushing one of your other whores painfully to their knees, but $he still obeys.
 		<<case "masochist">>
-			waits just long enough to recieve a disciplinary slap, making $him blush with arousal as $he kneels before you. 
+			waits just long enough to receive a disciplinary slap, making $him blush with arousal as $he kneels before you.
 		<<case "cumslut">>
 			is excited to be closer to your delicious crotch, and hurries to match $his eyes to your package.
 		<<case "humiliation">>
-			makes a big show of it as $he lowers $himself dramatically before you. 
+			makes a big show of it as $he lowers $himself dramatically before you.
 		<<case "buttslut">>
-			leans heavily forward so that $his ass sticks out ridiculously far as $he bends $his knees and goes to the floor. 
+			leans heavily forward so that $his ass sticks out ridiculously far as $he bends $his knees and goes to the floor.
 		<<case "pregnancy">>
 			obeys your command and goes to $his knees.
 		<<case "boobs">>
-			pulls $his shoulders back strongly while leaning far enough forward to drag $his 
-			<<if ($activeSlave.boobs >= 10000)>> weighty mammaries 
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobs >= 2000)>> cumbersome udders 
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobs >= 1000)>> massive slave tits 
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobs >= 800)>> forward-thrust breasts 
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobs >= 500)>> meager chest 
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobs <= 400)>> pathetic slave boobs 
-			<<else>> tits 
-			<</if>> 
+			pulls $his shoulders back strongly while leaning far enough forward to drag $his
+			<<if ($activeSlave.boobs >= 10000)>>
+				weighty mammaries
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobs >= 2000)>>
+				cumbersome udders
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobs >= 1000)>>
+				massive slave tits
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobs >= 800)>>
+				forward-thrust breasts
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobs >= 500)>>
+				meager chest
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobs <= 400)>>
+				pathetic slave boobs
+			<<else>>
+				tits
+			<</if>>
 			across your body as $he goes down.
 		<<default>>
 			obeys your command and goes to $his knees.
 		<</switch>>
-
 	<<else>>
-	obeys your command and goes to $his knees.	
+		obeys your command and goes to $his knees.
 	<</if>>
 <</if>>
-<<if ($activeSlave.devotion < -20)>> The other slaves guide $him to adjust $his posture so $his eyes ar directly in line with your package. 
-<<else>> $He kneels so that $his eyes are directly level with your package.
+<<if ($activeSlave.devotion < -20)>>
+	The other slaves guide $him to adjust $his posture so $his eyes ar directly in line with your package.
+<<else>>
+	$He kneels so that $his eyes are directly level with your package.
 <</if>>
 
 <<if ($activeSlave.energy > 50)>>
-$He cant help but stare in lust at your 
-
+	$He cant help but stare in lust at your
 	<<if $PC.balls > 2 && $PC.ballsImplant > 3>>
-	monstrous, massive pair of watermelon sized balls.
+		monstrous, massive pair of watermelon sized balls.
 	<<elseif $PC.balls == 2 && $PC.ballsImplant == 3>>
-	enormous, heavy pair of balls.
+		enormous, heavy pair of balls.
 	<<elseif $PC.balls == 1 && $PC.ballsImplant == 2>>
-	huge pair of balls, bulging like softballs from behind your suit.
+		huge pair of balls, bulging like softballs from behind your suit.
 	<<elseif $PC.balls > 2 && $PC.ballsImplant > 2>>
-	enormous, heavy pair of balls.
+		enormous, heavy pair of balls.
 	<<elseif $PC.balls == 2 && $PC.ballsImplant == 2>>
-	huge pair of balls, bulging like softballs from behind your suit.
+		huge pair of balls, bulging like softballs from behind your suit.
 	<<elseif $PC.balls == 1 && $PC.ballsImplant == 1>>
-	large pair of balls, swinging heavily as you move. 
+		large pair of balls, swinging heavily as you move.
 	<<elseif $PC.ballsImplant > 2>>
 		enormous, heavy pair of balls.
 	<<elseif $PC.ballsImplant == 2>>
@@ -166,194 +219,221 @@ $He cant help but stare in lust at your
 	<<else>>
 		manly package.
 	<</if>>
-
 <<else>>
 	Your balls loom directly in front of $his face.
 <</if>>
 
-Now kneeling at your feet naked before you, your slave waits for $his Master's command. You take some time to survey the slut's properly displayed body. 
-<<if $activeSlave.butt > 6>> $His massive ass is so huge that $he it squishes around her heels, almost reaching the floor. 
-<<elseif $activeSlave.butt > 4>> $His <<print either("ass", "rear end")>> is so round and large it rolls out from her back in two perfect mounds. The cheeks are so thick it forms a perfect crevice between them, more than a couple inches deep.
-<<elseif $activeSlave.butt > 2>> $His nice <<print either("thick", "plump")>> <<print either("butt", "ass")>> curves out noticably, even while $he sits on $his knees. 
-<<else>> $His cute and tight ass rests gently on $his ankles. 
+Now kneeling at your feet naked before you, your slave waits for $his Master's command. You take some time to survey the slut's properly displayed body.
+<<if $activeSlave.butt > 6>>
+	$His massive ass is so huge that $he it squishes around $his heels, almost reaching the floor.
+<<elseif $activeSlave.butt > 4>>
+	$His <<print either("ass", "rear end")>> is so round and large it rolls out from $his back in two perfect mounds. The cheeks are so thick it forms a perfect crevice between them, more than a couple inches deep.
+<<elseif $activeSlave.butt > 2>>
+	$His nice <<print either("plump", "thick")>> <<print either("ass", "butt")>> curves out noticeably, even while $he sits on $his knees.
+<<else>>
+	$His cute and tight ass rests gently on $his ankles.
 <</if>>
 
 
 <<if ($activeSlave.energy > 95)>>
-		Her eyes fill with lust at the helplessness of kneeling at your crotch. 
+	$His eyes fill with lust at the helplessness of kneeling at your crotch.
 <</if>>
 <<if ($activeSlave.fetishKnown == 1)>>
 	<<if ($activeSlave.fetishStrength > 60)>>
 		<<switch $activeSlave.fetish>>
 		<<case "submissive">>
-			$He keeps her eyes down and poises her body to be fully available to $his master, trying to model for you the image of the perfect submissive. 
+			$He keeps $his eyes down and poises $his body to be fully available to $his master, trying to model for you the image of the perfect submissive.
 		<<case "dom">>
 			Despite $his kneeling stature, $his back is straight and shoulders back.
 		<<case "masochist">>
 			$He positions $himself uncomfortably, bringing visual pleasure to you and pain to $himself. $He accentuates $his most sensitive parts, inviting you to slap or spank them.
 		<<case "cumslut">>
-			$he goes to $his knees, all the while staring at your <<if $PC.dick != 0>>manly bulge.<<if $PC.vagina == 1>> <</if>>.<<else>> feminine mound.<</if>>
+			$he goes to $his knees, all the while staring at your <<if $PC.dick != 0>>manly bulge<<if $PC.vagina == 1>> and <</if>><<else>>feminine mound<</if>>.
 		<<case "humiliation">>
-			$He eagerly takes to this humiliating position, hoping to demonstrate $his willingness to be degraded by $his <<Master>>. 
+			$He eagerly takes to this humiliating position, hoping to demonstrate $his willingness to be degraded by $his <<Master>>.
 		<<case "buttslut">>
-			$He positions $himself, sticking $his butt out as far as $he can manage, hoping to draw your attention to $his favorite area. 
+			$He positions $himself, sticking $his butt out as far as $he can manage, hoping to draw your attention to $his favorite area.
 		<<case "boobs">>
-			$he kneels with $his back strongly arching far back and diligently works to touch $his elbows behind $his back to best display $his 
-		<<if ($activeSlave.boobs >= 10000)>> colossal mammaries 
-		<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobs >= 2000)>> gigantic udders 
-		<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobs >= 1000)>> massive slave tits 
-		<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobs >= 800)>> prominent breasts 
-		<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobs >= 400)>> modest chest 
-		<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobs <= 400)>> pathetic slave boobs 
-		<</if>> for $his master. 
-		<<if ($activeSlave.lactation > 0)>> milk dribbles down the soft curves of $his chest as a further sign of $his arousal. 
-		<</if>>
-	This is, of course, how all slaves are supposed to kneel, but $he takes the pose with added dedication. 
+			$he kneels with $his back strongly arching far back and diligently works to touch $his elbows behind $his back to best display $his
+			<<if ($activeSlave.boobs >= 10000)>>
+				colossal mammaries
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobs >= 2000)>>
+				gigantic udders
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobs >= 1000)>>
+				massive slave tits
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobs >= 800)>>
+				prominent breasts
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobs >= 400)>>
+				modest chest
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobs <= 400)>>
+				pathetic slave boobs
+			<</if>>
+			for $his master.
+			<<if ($activeSlave.lactation > 0)>>
+				milk dribbles down the soft curves of $his chest as a further sign of $his arousal.
+			<</if>>
+			This is, of course, how all slaves are supposed to kneel, but $he takes the pose with added dedication.
 		<<default>>
 			$He positions $himself with $his knees spread wide, hoping that you will turn your attention to $his wet pussy.
 		<</switch>>
 	<</if>>
 <</if>>
-You give $him permission to speak, and tell $him that $he may beg $his Master. 
+You give $him permission to speak, and tell $him that $he may beg $his Master.
 
 <<if ($activeSlave.devotion < -20)>>
 	<<if ($activeSlave.fear < -50)>>
-	
-	<<switch $activeSlave.standardPunishment>>
-
-	<<case "confinement">> Your slave simply presses $his hands together and begs you not to lock $him up in the bad girl box.
-	<<case "whipping">> Your slave simply presses $his hands together and begs you not to whip $him.
-	<<case "chastity">>
-		<<if ($activeSlave.energy > 60)>>
-		Your slave simply presses $his hands together and begs you not to take away $his next orgasm
-		<<else>> Your slave simply asks that you not change $his punishment. $He fears you, but using chastity as a punishment is not an efficient way to command $his obedience, since $he has no sexual energy. 
-		<</if>>
-	<</switch>>
+		<<switch $activeSlave.standardPunishment>>
+		<<case "confinement">>
+			Your slave simply presses $his hands together and begs you not to lock $him up in the bad girl box.
+		<<case "whipping">>
+			Your slave simply presses $his hands together and begs you not to whip $him.
+		<<case "chastity">>
+			<<if ($activeSlave.energy > 60)>>
+				Your slave simply presses $his hands together and begs you not to take away $his next orgasm
+			<<else>>
+				Your slave simply asks that you not change $his punishment. $He fears you, but using chastity as a punishment is not an efficient way to command $his obedience, since $he has no sexual energy.
+			<</if>>
+		<</switch>>
 	<<else>>
-		<<if ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "bitchy")>> $He turns $his nose up in utter disgust. "Why, to feed your misogynistic ego? Thanks, but no." $He looks at your other slaves holding $him down, "Why don't you get one of these mindless cunts to do it? Or are they not hot enough?" $He is disobedient and bitchy, a bad combo.
-		<<elseif ($activeSlave.behaviorFlaw == "arrogant")>> $He tries to cock $his shoulders back, giving a death glare to the slaves holding $him in place, "I don't need anything from you" $he hisses. $He is disobedient and arrogant, a bad combo. 
-		<<elseif ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "liberated")>> $He does $his best to spit in your face, but the height difference means $he only stains your shirt. "I demand you release me!" $he scowls, "Or I'm going to call the police!" You smile at $his pathetically outdated worldview. You tell $him that's a good idea, since you know how rebellious slaves fair in jail.
-		<<elseif ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "odd")>> $He purses $his lips and bounces on $his heels in futile rebellion. "Nuh-uh." $he puffs, shaking $his head wildly. 
+		<<if ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "bitchy")>>
+			$He turns $his nose up in utter disgust. "Why, to feed your <<if $girl == "boy">>mi<<s>>andri<<s>>tic<<else>>mi<<s>>ogyni<<s>>tic<</if>> ego? Thank<<s>>, but no." $He looks at your other slaves holding $him down, "Why don't you get one of these mindle<<ss>> cunt<<s>> to do it? Or are they not hot enough?" $He is disobedient and bitchy, a bad combo.
+		<<elseif ($activeSlave.behaviorFlaw == "arrogant")>>
+			$He tries to cock $his shoulders back, giving a death glare to the slaves holding $him in place, "I don't need anything from you," $he hisses. $He is disobedient and arrogant, a bad combo.
+		<<elseif ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "liberated")>>
+			$He does $his best to spit in your face, but the height difference means $he only stains your shirt. "I demand you relea<<s>>e me!" $he scowls, "Or I'm going to call the poli<<c>>e!" You smile at $his pathetically outdated worldview. You tell $him that's a good idea, since you know how rebellious slaves fair in jail.
+		<<elseif ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "odd")>>
+			$He purses $his lips and bounces on $his heels in futile rebellion. "Nuh-uh." $he puffs, shaking $his head wildly.
 		<<else>>
-		$He simply sits there, struggling against the hands holding $him down.  
+			$He simply sits there, struggling against the hands holding $him down.
 		<</if>>
 	<</if>>
-This is clearly the best you are going to get out of $him until $he is better trained. You
+	This is clearly the best you are going to get out of $him until $he is better trained. You
 	<<if ($activeSlave.fear > -50)>>
-	 signal your loyal slaves to lift $him to $his feet, and 
+		signal your loyal slaves to lift $him to $his feet, and
 	<</if>>
 	send $him away for now.
-<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion < 20)>> 
-		<<if ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "bitchy")>> $He turns $his nose up in utter disgust. "Why, to feed your misogynistic ego? Thanks, but no." $He looks at your other slaves holding $him down, "Why don't you get one of these mindless cunts to do it? Or are they not hot enough?" $He is disobedient and bitchy, a bad combo.
-		<<elseif ($activeSlave.behaviorFlaw == "arrogant")>> $He tries to cock $his shoulders back, giving a death glare to the slaves holding $him in place, "I don't need anything from you" $he hisses. $He is disobedient and arrogant, a bad combo. 
-		<<elseif ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "liberated")>> $He does $his best to spit in your face, but the height difference means $he only stains your shirt. "I demand you release me!" $he scowls, "Or I'm going to call the police!" You smile at $his pathetically outdated worldview. You tell $him that's a good idea, since you know how rebellious slaves fair in jail.
-		<<elseif ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "odd")>> $He purses $his lips and bounces on $his heels in futile rebellion. "Nuh-uh." $he puffs, shaking $his head wildly. 
-		<<elseif ($activeSlave.sexualFlaw == "shamefast")>> $He tries to cover $his naked body from your gaze "Plea<<s>>e, can I ju<<s>>t put <<s>>ome clothe<<s>> on?"
-		<<else>>
+<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion < 20)>>
+	<<if ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "bitchy")>>
+		$He turns $his nose up in utter disgust. "Why, to feed your <<if $girl == "boy">>mi<<s>>andri<<s>>tic<<else>>mi<<s>>ogyni<<s>>tic<</if>> ego? Thank<<s>>, but no." $He looks at your other slaves holding $him down, "Why don't you get one of the<<s>>e mindle<<ss>> cunt<<s>> to do it? Or are they not hot enough?" $He is disobedient and bitchy, a bad combo.
+	<<elseif ($activeSlave.behaviorFlaw == "arrogant")>>
+		$He tries to cock $his shoulders back, giving a death glare to the slaves holding $him in place, "I don't need anything from you," $he hisses. $He is disobedient and arrogant, a bad combo.
+	<<elseif ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "liberated")>>
+		$He does $his best to spit in your face, but the height difference means $he only stains your shirt. "I demand you relea<<s>>e me!" $he scowls, "Or I'm going to call the poli<<c>>e!" You smile at $his pathetically outdated worldview. You tell $him that's a good idea, since you know how rebellious slaves fair in jail.
+	<<elseif ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "odd")>>
+		$He purses $his lips and bounces on $his heels in futile rebellion. "Nuh-uh." $he puffs, shaking $his head wildly.
+	<<elseif ($activeSlave.sexualFlaw == "shamefast")>>
+		$He tries to cover $his naked body from your gaze "Plea<<s>>e, can I ju<<s>>t put <<s>>ome clothe<<s>> on?"
+	<<else>>
 		$He looks up at you with a sudden glimpse of hope, and begins to plead, "Plea<<s>>e, <<s>>ir, plea<<s>>e <<s>>et me free. I don't want to be here.
-			<<if ($activeSlave.energy < 50)>>
-			I have no desire for sex. I don't want to be your toy! Please let me go."
-			<<else>> 
-			I might even come back to share consensual love with you. I ju<<s>>t don't want to be property. Plea<<s>>e, let me go."   
-			<</if>>
+		<<if ($activeSlave.energy < 50)>>
+			I have no de<<s>>ire for <<s>>e<<x>>. I don't want to be your toy! Plea<<s>>e let me go."
+		<<else>>
+			I might even come back to <<sh>>are con<<s>>en<<s>>ual love with you. I ju<<s>>t don't want to be property. Plea<<s>>e, let me go."
 		<</if>>
-You tell your slave to rise to rise to $his feet. Even though $he desired the impossible, it wasn't a total waste. You feel as though you have a pretty good understanding of where your slave stands. You send $him away with $his request denied, and you resolve to break $him more in the coming weeks. 
+	<</if>>
+	You tell your slave to rise to $his feet. Even though $he desired the impossible, it wasn't a total waste. You feel as though you have a pretty good understanding of where your slave stands. You send $him away with $his request denied, and you resolve to break $him more in the coming weeks.
 <<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion < 60)>>
-	Your slave looks at $his Master with obedient eyes. 
+	Your slave looks at $his Master with obedient eyes.
 <<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion <= 100)>>
-Your devoted slave takes the begging position, 
+	Your devoted slave takes the begging position,
 	<<if ($activeSlave.fetish != "submissive")>>
-	$he even brings $his hands up like a dog's paws. 
+		$he even brings $his hands up like a dog's paws.
 	<<else>>
 		<<if ($activeSlave.fetishKnown == 1) && ($activeSlave.fetishStrength > 60)>>
-	 and $he bows $his head in total submission.
-			<<if ($activeSlave.nipplesPiercing > 0)>> 
-			The armbinder thrusts $his tits out nicely, and $his nipple rings are pulled tight by the weighted bells weighing them down. 
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.nipplesPiercing > 1)>> 
-			The armbinder thrusts $his tits out nicely, and ensures that $his nipple chains are pulled tight by the angle of $his shoulders. <<BoobWatch>> The bells on $his nipple piercings jungle sweetly as $he breathes. 
+			and $he bows $his head in total submission.
+			<<if ($activeSlave.nipplesPiercing > 0)>>
+				The armbinder thrusts $his tits out nicely, and $his nipple rings are pulled tight by the weighted bells weighing them down.
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.nipplesPiercing > 1)>>
+				The armbinder thrusts $his tits out nicely, and ensures that $his nipple chains are pulled tight by the angle of $his shoulders. <<BoobWatch>> The bells on $his nipple piercings jungle sweetly as $he breathes.
 			<<else>>
-			The armbinder thrusts $his tits out nicely and $his nipples are now red from the clamps pressing down hard on $his sensitive flesh. Every painful shudder makes the bells jungle ever so sweetly.
+				The armbinder thrusts $his tits out nicely and $his nipples are now red from the clamps pressing down hard on $his sensitive flesh. Every painful shudder makes the bells jungle ever so sweetly.
 			<</if>>
 		<<else>>
-	$he even brings $his hands up like a dog's paws. 
+			$he even brings $his hands up like a dog's paws.
 		<</if>>
 	<</if>>
-"Ye<<s>> Ma<<s>>ter. Thank you, <<Master>>." $He is fully subservient to you, and would do anything to please you. 
-<</if>>	
+	"Ye<<s>> Ma<<s>>ter. Thank you, <<Master>>." $He is fully subservient to you, and would do anything to please you.
+<</if>>
 
 <<if ($activeSlave.devotion > 20)>>
 /*eventually plan to make a string of Paraphilia text, which will be stronger versions of their fetish counterparts. */
 	<<if ($activeSlave.fetishKnown == 1)>>
 		<<if ($activeSlave.fetishStrength > 60)>>
-		<<switch $activeSlave.fetish>>
-		<<case "submissive">>
-			$He adjusts $his monoglove behind $his back, jingling $his nipple bells as $he does "Plea<<s>>e <<Master>>," $he begs with genuine humility, "Plea<<s>>e use your slave in whatever way you see fit. This <<s>>lave has no purpose but to please $his <<Master>>"
-		<<case "dom">>
-			$He looks up at you. Even from $his kneeling position $his eyes carry confident domination. "<<Master>>, I know my pla<<c>>e i<<s>> beneath you. Give me the authority to lord over your other <<s>>lave<<s>> and I will for<<c>>e them to <<s>>erve you a<<s>> I do."
-		<<case "masochist">>
-			"I know I haven't di<<s>>obeyed," $he begins, "but I ju<<s>>t need to be punished." You smile down at your little painslut, running your finger along $his chin. "Plea<<s>>e <<Master>>, beat me. Beat my a<<ss>> until it'<<s>> red and clamp my nipple<<s>> until they bleed. Plea<<s>>e! I need to feel your <<s>>trength!"
-		<<case "cumslut">>
-			Your little cumslut can't stop staring at your  
+			<<switch $activeSlave.fetish>>
+			<<case "submissive">>
+				$He adjusts $his monoglove behind $his back, jingling $his nipple bells as $he does "Plea<<s>>e <<Master>>," $he begs with genuine humility, "Plea<<s>>e use your slave in whatever way you see fit. This <<s>>lave has no purpose but to please $his <<Master>>"
+			<<case "dom">>
+				$He looks up at you. Even from $his kneeling position $his eyes carry confident domination. "<<Master>>, I know my pla<<c>>e i<<s>> beneath you. Give me the authority to lord over your other <<s>>lave<<s>> and I will for<<c>>e them to <<s>>erve you a<<s>> I do."
+			<<case "masochist">>
+				"I know I haven't di<<s>>obeyed," $he begins, "but I ju<<s>>t need to be puni<<sh>>ed." You smile down at your little painslut, running your finger along $his chin. "Plea<<s>>e <<Master>>, beat me. Beat my a<<ss>> until it'<<s>> red and clamp my nipple<<s>> until they bleed. Plea<<s>>e! I need to feel your <<s>>trength!"
+			<<case "cumslut">>
+				Your little cumslut can't stop staring at your
 				<<if $PC.balls > 2 && $PC.ballsImplant > 3>>
-				monstrous, massive pair of watermelon sized balls.
+					monstrous, massive pair of watermelon sized balls.
 				<<elseif $PC.balls == 2 && $PC.ballsImplant == 3>>
-				enormous, heavy pair of balls.
+					enormous, heavy pair of balls.
 				<<elseif $PC.balls == 1 && $PC.ballsImplant == 2>>
-				huge pair of balls, bulging like softballs from behind your suit.
+					huge pair of balls, bulging like softballs from behind your suit.
 				<<elseif $PC.balls > 2 && $PC.ballsImplant > 2>>
-				enormous, heavy pair of balls.
+					enormous, heavy pair of balls.
 				<<elseif $PC.balls == 2 && $PC.ballsImplant == 2>>
-				huge pair of balls, bulging like softballs from behind your suit.
+					huge pair of balls, bulging like softballs from behind your suit.
 				<<elseif $PC.balls == 1 && $PC.ballsImplant == 1>>
-				large pair of balls, swinging heavily as you move. 
+					large pair of balls, swinging heavily as you move.
 				<<elseif $PC.ballsImplant > 2>>
-				enormous, heavy pair of balls.
+					enormous, heavy pair of balls.
 				<<elseif $PC.ballsImplant == 2>>
-				huge pair of balls, bulging like heavy softballs from behind your suit.
+					huge pair of balls, bulging like heavy softballs from behind your suit.
 				<<elseif $PC.ballsImplant == 1>>
-				large pair of balls, swinging heavily as you move.
+					large pair of balls, swinging heavily as you move.
 				<<else>>
-				crotch.
+					crotch.
 				<</if>>
-	Drool begins to drip from $his lips, and you have to remind your slave that $he is here to beg.
-			"<<Master>>," $he breathes heavily, "Please let me 
-			<<if $PC.dick != 0>> suck your magnificent cock
-				<<if $PC.vagina == 1>> and eat you out
-				<</if>>."
-			<<else>> eat your delicious pussy."
-			<</if>>	
-			You smile at the little cocksucker, so eager to please. 
-
-		<<case "humiliation">>
-			$He sits so that $her body is on full display, "Plea<<s>>e <<Master>>, use me and humiliate me. Take me out to the public square so that everyone can see you overpower me." 
-		<<case "buttslut">>
-			$He positions $his back so $his ass sticks out even further "<<Master>>," $he begs, "u<<s>>e my a<<ss>>!
-			<<if ($activeSlave.sexualQuirk == "painal")>> make me <<s>>queel!
-			<</if>>
-			I just need your cock in my mo<<s>>t u<<s>>eful fuckhole, plea<<s>>e!"
-		<<case "boobs">>
-			$He takes $his hands and presses $his tits together, lifting them to display for you $his primary purpose in life.
-			<<if ($activeSlave.lactation > 0)>> More milk squirts from each teat as $he bears them. 
-			<</if>>
-		 "I beg of you, <<Master>>, I need you to u<<s>>e my tits. Suck them, squeeze them, fuck them, I cannot cum without you using my slave tits! I am nothing more than a walking tit-carrier, and my only purpose is to offer these breasts to you."
-		<<case "pregnant">>
-		$He begins to caress $his womb "U<<s>>e me as your breeder, <<Master>>, plea<<s>>e! I ju<<s>>t want to be filled with your <<s>>eed forever!"
-		<<default>>
-			$He kneels with $his knees far spread, "use my fuckhole <<Master>>, I beg you. Plea<<s>>e, I need you to fuck me!"
-		<</switch>>
-	<<else>>
-	"<<Master>>, I exi<<s>>t to <<s>>erve you." $He say, "I have no other purpose in life. I beg of you, plea<<s>>e never let me leave your <<s>>ervi<<c>>e. Let me wait on you forever. I <<s>>wear I will alway<<s>> be obedient. Let me cook your meal<<s>>, clean your penthou<<s>>e, care for your other <<s>>lave<<s>>, even make me a cow. I don't care, a<<s>> long a<<s>> I'm here serving you." $He knows that $his rightful place is a slave, and $he is dedicated to living out that role to the fullest.  
-			<<if ($activeSlave.behavioralQuirk == "advocate")>> 
-			"I <<s>>ee now," $he continues, "that <<s>>lavery really i<<s>> a $woman'<<s>> rightful pla<<c>>e. <<He>> ha<<s>> no purpo<<s>>e e<<x>><<c>>ept to <<s>>erve <<his>> <<Master>>."
+				Drool begins to drip from $his lips, and you have to remind your slave that $he is here to beg.
+				"<<Master>>," $he breathes heavily, "Plea<<s>>e let me
+				<<if $PC.dick != 0>>
+					<<s>>uck your magnifi<<c>>ent
+					<<if $PC.vagina == 1>>
+						cock and eat you out,
+					<<else>>
+						cock,
+					<</if>>
+				<<else>>
+					eat your deli<<c>>iou<<s>> pu<<ss>>y,
+				<</if>>
+				plea<<s>>e." You smile at the little cocksucker, so eager to please.
+			<<case "humiliation">>
+				$He sits so that $his body is on full display, "Plea<<s>>e <<Master>>, u<<s>>e me and humiliate me. Take me out to the public <<s>>quare <<s>>o that everyone can <<s>>ee you overpower me."
+			<<case "buttslut">>
+				$He positions $his back so $his ass sticks out even further "<<Master>>," $he begs, "u<<s>>e my a<<ss>>!
+				<<if ($activeSlave.sexualQuirk == "painal")>>
+					Make me <<s>>queal!
+				<</if>>
+				I ju<<s>>t need your cock in my mo<<s>>t u<<s>>eful fuckhole, plea<<s>>e!"
+			<<case "boobs">>
+				$He takes $his hands and presses $his tits together, lifting them to display for you $his primary purpose in life.
+				<<if ($activeSlave.lactation > 0)>>
+					More milk squirts from each teat as $he bears them.
+				<</if>>
+				"I beg of you, <<Master>>, I need you to u<<s>>e my tit<<s>>. <<S>>uck them, <<s>>queeze them, fuck them, I cannot cum without you u<<s>>ing my <<s>>lave tit<<s>>! I am nothing more than a walking tit-carrier, and my only purpo<<s>>e i<<s>> to offer the<<s>>e brea<<s>>t<<s>> to you."
+			<<case "pregnant">>
+				$He begins to caress $his womb "U<<s>>e me a<<s>> your breeder, <<Master>>, plea<<s>>e! I ju<<s>>t want to be filled with your <<s>>eed forever!"
+			<<default>>
+				$He kneels with $his knees far spread, "use my fuckhole <<Master>>, I beg you. Plea<<s>>e, I need you to fuck me!"
+			<</switch>>
+		<<else>>
+			"<<Master>>, I e<<x>>i<<s>>t to <<s>>erve you." $He say, "I have no other purpo<<s>>e in life. I beg of you, plea<<s>>e never let me leave your <<s>>ervi<<c>>e. Let me wait on you forever. I <<s>>wear I will alway<<s>> be obedient. Let me cook your meal<<s>>, clean your penthou<<s>>e, care for your other <<s>>lave<<s>>, even make me a cow. I don't care, a<<s>> long a<<s>> I'm here <<s>>erving you." $He knows that $his rightful place is a slave, and $he is dedicated to living out that role to the fullest.
+			<<if ($activeSlave.behavioralQuirk == "advocate")>>
+				"I <<s>>ee now," $he continues, "that <<s>>lavery really i<<s>> a $woman'<<s>> rightful pla<<c>>e. <<He>> ha<<s>> no purpo<<s>>e e<<x>><<c>>ept to <<s>>erve <<his>> <<Master>>."
 			<</if>>
 		<</if>>
 	<<else>>
-		"<<Master>>, I exi<<s>>t to <<s>>erve you." $He says, "I have no other purpo<<s>>e in life. I beg of you, plea<<s>>e never let me leave your <<s>>ervi<<c>>e. Let me wait on you forever. I <<s>>wear I will alway<<s>> be obedient. Let me cook your meal<<s>>, clean your penthou<<s>>e, care for your other <<s>>lave<<s>>, even make me a cow. I don't care, a<<s>> long a<<s>> I'm here serving you." $He knows that $his rightful place is a slave, and $he is dedicated to living out that role to the fullest.  
-			<<if ($activeSlave.behavioralQuirk == "advocate")>> 
+		"<<Master>>, I exi<<s>>t to <<s>>erve you." $He says, "I have no other purpo<<s>>e in life. I beg of you, plea<<s>>e never let me leave your <<s>>ervi<<c>>e. Let me wait on you forever. I <<s>>wear I will alway<<s>> be obedient. Let me cook your meal<<s>>, clean your penthou<<s>>e, care for your other <<s>>lave<<s>>, even make me a cow. I don't care, a<<s>> long a<<s>> I'm here <<s>>erving you." $He knows that $his rightful place is a slave, and $he is dedicated to living out that role to the fullest.
+		<<if ($activeSlave.behavioralQuirk == "advocate")>>
 			"I <<s>>ee now," $he continues, "that <<s>>lavery really i<<s>> a $woman'<<s>> rightful pla<<c>>e. <<He>> ha<<s>> no purpo<<s>>e e<<x>><<c>>ept to <<s>>erve <<his>> <<Master>>."
-			<</if>>
+		<</if>>
 	<</if>>
-You smile at your obedient little slave, and agree to grant $his request. 
+	You smile at your obedient little slave, and agree to grant $his request.
 <</if>>
 
 <<if (random(1,100) > (100 + $activeSlave.devotion))>>
@@ -363,7 +443,7 @@ You smile at your obedient little slave, and agree to grant $his request.
 	<</if>>
 <<elseif (random(1,100) > (110 - $activeSlave.devotion))>>
 	<<if ($activeSlave.fetish == "none") && ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw != "liberated")>>
-		Feeling the joy of kneeling before such a powerful master and begging at his feet has @@.lightcoral;encouraged $him to be more submissive.@@
+		Feeling the joy of kneeling before such a powerful <<= WrittenMaster()>> and begging at his feet has @@.lightcoral;encouraged $him to be more submissive.@@
 		<<set $activeSlave.fetish = "submissive", $activeSlave.fetishKnown = 1>>
 	<</if>>
 <</if>>
diff --git a/src/npc/fDance.tw b/src/npc/fDance.tw
index 79bef6c5105efafcd65bfd3933b3bfd760608fe6..4d7d5ac9dd603b00d4169e5c39c085406b9b5dc6 100644
--- a/src/npc/fDance.tw
+++ b/src/npc/fDance.tw
@@ -3,15 +3,22 @@
 <<set $desc = SlaveTitle($activeSlave)>>
 <<run clearSummaryCache($activeSlave)>>
 <<setLocalPronouns $activeSlave>>
+<<setPlayerPronouns>>
 
-You tell your assistant to summon your slave and set some erotic music. When your slave arrives $he finds the lights in your office flashing club colors. You gesture towards the platform in the center of your office and tell her to dance for you. 
+You tell your assistant to summon your slave and set some erotic music. When your slave arrives $he finds the lights in your office flashing club colors. You gesture towards the platform in the center of your office and tell $him to dance for you.
 
-<<if ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment > 99)>> $He slides his ass gracefully unto the stage, then dramatically raises $his elongated legs one at a time onto the platform. Circling to $his knees, $he raises $his ass in the air and glides $his hands up $his legs as $he stands upright. 
-<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment > 60)>> $He takes his rightful place on your stage.
-<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment > 40)>> $He goes to take $his place on your stage and dance for $his Master. 
-<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment > 20)>> $He ascends to the platform and begins to grind at the pole. 
-<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment > 9)>> $He climbs up onto the platform and grabs onto the pole. 
-<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment > -10)>>  $He climbs up onto the platform and grabs onto the pole.
+<<if ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment > 99)>>
+	$He slides his ass gracefully unto the stage, then dramatically raises $his elongated legs one at a time onto the platform. Circling to $his knees, $he raises $his ass in the air and glides $his hands up $his legs as $he stands upright.
+<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment > 60)>>
+	$He takes his rightful place on your stage.
+<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment > 40)>>
+	$He goes to take $his place on your stage and dance for $his Master.
+<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment > 20)>>
+	$He ascends to the platform and begins to grind at the pole.
+<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment > 9)>>
+	$He climbs up onto the platform and grabs onto the pole.
+<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment > -10)>>
+	$He climbs up onto the platform and grabs onto the pole.
 <</if>>
 
 <<if $activeSlave.weight > 190>>
@@ -25,16 +32,20 @@ You tell your assistant to summon your slave and set some erotic music. When you
 <<elseif $activeSlave.weight > 20>>
 	$His form sways and moves with the music in a most alluring way.
 <<elseif $activeSlave.weight > 0>>
-	$His trim body is highlighted by $his dance. Whenever $he  rolls $his ass or sways $his hips it highlights the contours of $his waist.
+	$His trim body is highlighted by $his dance. Whenever $he rolls $his ass or sways $his hips it highlights the contours of $his waist.
 <<elseif $activeSlave.weight < 0>>
-	Your slave's trim body glides to the music like a <<print either("stripper", "belly dancer")>>. $He is thin and tight, with no bodyfat to speak of,
-	<<if $activeSlave.boobs > 400>> making $his tits
-		<<if $activeSlave.butt > 1>> and ass
+	Your slave's trim body glides to the music like a <<print either("belly dancer", "stripper")>>. $He is thin and tight, with no bodyfat to speak of,
+	<<if $activeSlave.boobs > 400>>
+		making $his tits
+		<<if $activeSlave.butt > 1>>
+			and ass
 		<</if>>
 		the main focus of $his dance.
 	<<else>>
-		<<if $activeSlave.butt > 1>> making $his ass the main focus of $his dance.
-		<<else>> totally flat. $His body is flat and girlish, providing a tastefully alluring display.
+		<<if $activeSlave.butt > 1>>
+			making $his ass the main focus of $his dance.
+		<<else>>
+			totally flat. $His body is flat and girlish, providing a tastefully alluring display.
 		<</if>>
 	<</if>>
 <</if>>
@@ -42,7 +53,7 @@ $His face is
 <<switch $activeSlave.faceShape>>
 <<case "masculine">>
 	<<if $activeSlave.face < -95>>
-		hiddeously manly, distracting you from anything positive that may be going on.
+		hideously manly, distracting you from anything positive that may be going on.
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.face < -40>>
 		ugly and masculine, and you find it difficult to enjoy looking at $him.
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.face < -10>>
@@ -74,9 +85,9 @@ $His face is
 	<</if>>
 <<case "cute">>
 	<<if $activeSlave.face < -95>>
-		pitifully cute. $He's so ugly and cute you can't help but be turned off and drawn in simultaneously. 
+		pitifully cute. $He's so ugly and cute you can't help but be turned off and drawn in simultaneously.
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.face < -40>>
-		not attractive, but $his cuteness makes her pitifully appealing. 
+		not attractive, but $his cuteness makes $him pitifully appealing.
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.face < -10>>
 		not attractive, but is still cute enough to keep you entertained.
 	<<elseif ($activeSlave.face <= 10)>>
@@ -102,17 +113,20 @@ $His face is
 	<<elseif ($activeSlave.face <= 95)>>
 		constantly turning you on, with the sensual structure of $his beautiful never letting sex leave your mind.
 	<<else>>
-		making you 
-		<<if $PC.dick != 0>> rock hard
-			<<if $PC.vagina == 1>> and dripping wet
+		making you
+		<<if $PC.dick != 0>>
+			rock hard
+			<<if $PC.vagina == 1>>
+				and dripping wet
 			<</if>>
-		<<else>> dripping wet
-		<</if>>	
-	as you lust after $his sexual beauty.
+		<<else>>
+			dripping wet
+		<</if>>
+		as you lust after $his sexual beauty.
 	<</if>>
 <<case "exotic">>
 	<<if $activeSlave.face < -95>>
-		hiddeously unusual, distracting you from anything positive that may be going on.
+		hideously unusual, distracting you from anything positive that may be going on.
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.face < -40>>
 		ugly and unusual, and you find it difficult to enjoy looking at $him.
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.face < -10>>
@@ -134,302 +148,428 @@ $His face is
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.face < -10>>
 		not a highlight. $He isn't beautiful, and you would rather watch $his body.
 	<<elseif ($activeSlave.face <= 10)>>
-		quite feminine and pleasing. You aren't captivated by $his face, but you don't avoid it either. 
+		quite feminine and pleasing. You aren't captivated by $his face, but you don't avoid it either.
 	<<elseif ($activeSlave.face <= 40)>>
 		feminine and attractive. You find yourself looking at it from time to time.
 	<<elseif ($activeSlave.face <= 95)>>
 		beautiful and feminine. You often find your eyes locked on $his face for long periods of time.
 	<<else>>
-		absolutely stunning. Watching $his face is often more pleasing than watching $him dance. 
+		absolutely stunning. Watching $his face is often more pleasing than watching $him dance.
 	<</if>>
 <</switch>>
 
 
-<<if ($activeSlave.devotion < -20)>> It's clear that $he hates being on display for you. $He resents you for making $him dance for you,
-	<<if ($activeSlave.fear < -50)>> but $he is to terrified of you to see what happens if $he resists
-	<<else>> and refuses to comply. In order to make $him obey, a leash is attached from
-	<<switch $activeSlave.collar>>
-	<<case "uncomfortable leather">>
-		the steel ring on $his leather collar
-	<<case "dildo gag">>
-		a ring on $his gag strap
-	<<case "massive dildo gag">>
-		a ring on $his gag strap
-	<<case "preg biometrics">> 
-		$his collar
-	<<case "silk ribbon">>
-		$his silk ribbon
-	<<case "tight steel">>
-		$his steel collar
-	<<case "porcelain mask">>
-		<<if $activeSlave.nosePiercing == 2>> $his nose ring
-		<<elseif $activeSlave.nipplesPiercing == 2>> $his nipple chain
-		<<else>>
-		a collar that is placed around $his neck
-		<</if>>
-	<<case "shock punishment">>
-		$his shock collar
-	<<case "neck corset">>
-		an O-ring at the from of $his neck corset
-	<<case "stylish leather">>
-		$his collar
-	<<case "satin choker">>
-		$his choker collar
-	<<case "heavy gold">>
-		$He is wearing a heavy gold collar, an outstanding bit of ostentation.
-	<<case "pretty jewelry">>
-		$his ornate collar
-	<<case "bell collar">>
-		the ring attaching $his bell to $his collar, and
-	<<case "leather with cowbell">>
-		the ring attaching $his bell to $his collar, and
-	<<case "bowtie">>
-		$his bowtie collar
-	<<case "ancient Egyptian">>
-		<<if $activeSlave.nosePiercing == 2>> $his nose ring
-		<<elseif $activeSlave.nipplesPiercing == 2>> $his nipple chain
-		<<else>>
-		$his wesekh
-		<</if>>.
-	<<case "ball gag">>
-		a ring on the back of $his gag
-	<<case "bit gag">>
-		the ring on the side of $his bit
-	<<case "cruel retirement counter" "nice retirement counter">>
-		$his retirement counter
-	<<case "default">>
-		<<if $activeSlave.nosePiercing == 2>> $his nose ring
-		<<elseif $activeSlave.nipplesPiercing == 2>> $his nipple chain
-		<<else>>
-		a collar that is placed on $his neck for the occasion, and
-		<</if>>
-	<</switch>> 
-	to the pole in order to keep $him from getting down. Whenever $he stops dancing the chain is tightened a bit more,
-	<<switch $activeSlave.collar>>
-	<<case "uncomfortable leather">>
-		choking $him and rubbing $his skin raw from the leather;
-	<<case "tight steel">>
-		choking $him without mercy;
-	<<case "shock punishment">>
-		and a shock is sent through $his collar;
-	<<case "neck corset">>
-		making breathing even more difficult;
-	<<case "ancient Egyptian">>
-		<<if $activeSlave.nosePiercing == 2>> tugging at his nose ring;
-		<<elseif $activeSlave.nipplesPiercing == 2>> threatening to tear themselves from $his sensitive flesh;
-		<<else>>
-		tugging at $his throat;
-		<</if>>.
-	<<case "default">>
-		<<if $activeSlave.nosePiercing == 2>> tugging at his nose ring;
-		<<elseif $activeSlave.nipplesPiercing == 2>> threatening to tear themselves from $his sensitive flesh;
-		<<else>>
-		choking $him;
-		<</if>>
-	<</switch>>
- forcing $him to keep moving or face more pain.
-	<</if>>	
+<<if ($activeSlave.devotion < -20)>>
+	It's clear that $he hates being on display for you. $He resents you for making $him dance for you,
+	<<if ($activeSlave.fear < -50)>>
+		but $he is to terrified of you to see what happens if $he resists
+	<<else>>
+		and refuses to comply. In order to make $him obey, a leash is attached from
+		<<switch $activeSlave.collar>>
+		<<case "uncomfortable leather">>
+			the steel ring on $his leather collar
+		<<case "dildo gag">>
+			a ring on $his gag strap
+		<<case "massive dildo gag">>
+			a ring on $his gag strap
+		<<case "preg biometrics">>
+			$his collar
+		<<case "silk ribbon">>
+			$his silk ribbon
+		<<case "tight steel">>
+			$his steel collar
+		<<case "porcelain mask">>
+			<<if $activeSlave.nosePiercing == 2>>
+				$his nose ring
+			<<elseif $activeSlave.nipplesPiercing == 2>>
+				$his nipple chain
+			<<else>>
+				a collar that is placed around $his neck
+			<</if>>
+		<<case "shock punishment">>
+			$his shock collar
+		<<case "neck corset">>
+			an O-ring at the from of $his neck corset
+		<<case "stylish leather">>
+			$his collar
+		<<case "satin choker">>
+			$his choker collar
+		<<case "heavy gold">>
+			$He is wearing a heavy gold collar, an outstanding bit of ostentation.
+		<<case "pretty jewelry">>
+			$his ornate collar
+		<<case "bell collar">>
+			the ring attaching $his bell to $his collar, and
+		<<case "leather with cowbell">>
+			the ring attaching $his bell to $his collar, and
+		<<case "bowtie">>
+			$his bowtie collar
+		<<case "ancient Egyptian">>
+			<<if $activeSlave.nosePiercing == 2>>
+				$his nose ring
+			<<elseif $activeSlave.nipplesPiercing == 2>>
+				$his nipple chain
+			<<else>>
+				$his wesekh
+			<</if>>.
+		<<case "ball gag">>
+			a ring on the back of $his gag
+		<<case "bit gag">>
+			the ring on the side of $his bit
+		<<case "cruel retirement counter" "nice retirement counter">>
+			$his retirement counter
+		<<case "default">>
+			<<if $activeSlave.nosePiercing == 2>>
+				$his nose ring
+			<<elseif $activeSlave.nipplesPiercing == 2>>
+				$his nipple chain
+			<<else>>
+				a collar that is placed on $his neck for the occasion, and
+			<</if>>
+		<</switch>>
+		to the pole in order to keep $him from getting down. Whenever $he stops dancing the chain is tightened a bit more,
+		<<switch $activeSlave.collar>>
+		<<case "uncomfortable leather">>
+			choking $him and rubbing $his skin raw from the leather;
+		<<case "tight steel">>
+			choking $him without mercy;
+		<<case "shock punishment">>
+			and a shock is sent through $his collar;
+		<<case "neck corset">>
+			making breathing even more difficult;
+		<<case "ancient Egyptian">>
+			<<if $activeSlave.nosePiercing == 2>>
+				tugging at his nose ring;
+			<<elseif $activeSlave.nipplesPiercing == 2>>
+				threatening to tear themselves from $his sensitive flesh;
+			<<else>>
+				tugging at $his throat;
+			<</if>>.
+		<<case "default">>
+			<<if $activeSlave.nosePiercing == 2>>
+				tugging at his nose ring;
+			<<elseif $activeSlave.nipplesPiercing == 2>>
+				threatening to tear themselves from $his sensitive flesh;
+			<<else>>
+				choking $him;
+			<</if>>
+		<</switch>>
+		forcing $him to keep moving or face more pain.
+	<</if>>
 <<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion < 20)>>
-$He hates being forced to dance for you, but tries $his best in spite of this. 
+	$He hates being forced to dance for you, but tries $his best in spite of this.
 <<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion < 50)>>
-$He wants to do $his best for you, and tries not to hold back.
+	$He wants to do $his best for you, and tries not to hold back.
 <<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion < 80)>>
-$He is so eager to please you, and works hard to push $himself beyond $his skill limit.
+	$He is so eager to please you, and works hard to push $himself beyond $his skill limit.
 <<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion < 200)>>
-$He is so honored that you want to use $him in this way, and tries eagerly to please you. $His eyes are filled with adoration and every move $he makes is done with the sole intention of pleasure $his beloved Master.
+	$He is so honored that you want to use $him in this way, and tries eagerly to please you. $His eyes are filled with adoration and every move $he makes is done with the sole intention of pleasure $his beloved Master.
 <</if>>
 
 <<if ($activeSlave.devotion < 20)>>
-	<<if ($activeSlave.sexualFlaw == "judgemental")>> 
-	$He thinks to $himself that a real man wouldn't need to compensate this way, and judges you harshly. 
-	<<elseif ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "idealistic")>> $He can't believe $he now lives in a world where women are expected to preform for their Masters whether they consent or not.  
-	<<elseif ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "bitchy")>> $He dances, but makes sure that the disgust on $his face shows clearly that $he is not into it.
+	<<if ($activeSlave.sexualFlaw == "judgemental")>>
+		$He thinks to $himself that a real _womanP wouldn't need to compensate this way, and judges you harshly.
+	<<elseif ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "idealistic")>>
+		$He can't believe $he now lives in a world where $women are expected to preform for their <<= WrittenMaster()>> whether they consent or not.
+	<<elseif ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "bitchy")>>
+		$He dances, but makes sure that the disgust on $his face shows clearly that $he is not into it.
 	<</if>>
 <</if>>
-The atmosphere of your office is a testament to masculine opulence. Few men in the old world would have the pleasure of completing their work while an attractive woman flaunts herself for his pleasure. 
-You allow the situation to continue for about an hour, before deciding it's time to escalate. 
+The atmosphere of your office is a testament to masculine opulence. Few _womenP in the old world would have the pleasure of completing their work while an attractive $woman flaunts $himself for _hisP pleasure.
+You allow the situation to continue for about an hour, before deciding it's time to escalate.
 You look up once more at your slave and take some time to review $his dancing performance
 <<if ($activeSlave.devotion > -20)>>
-	<<if ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment == 100)>> Your slave has a level of skill previously unseen in the old world. Even $his blinks have the seductive pull of a goddess. As you watch $him preform, you think how no man of the old world would ever get to see pure sexuality like this. And not only do get to watch $him, you OWN $him. $His body moves like water, and hips that ebbed and flowed as if the tides themselves panged for a rock hard cock to come and take them. You tried to get some work done, but couldn't take your eyes off $him for even a second. You promise to reward your slave for bringing so much sensuality and beauty into your office; transforming your place of work into a shrine of Masculine dominance.
-	<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 60)>> $His skill would have only been matched by the best of the best old world erotic dancers, but in your Free City expectations are high. $He dances with seduction in every move, alternating $his style between everything from belly dancing to club twerking, and each with the skill level of a trained professional. You got some work done while $he danced, but often found yourself pulled back in by the tide of $his rolling hips. You praise your slave for $his enriching preformance.
-	<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 40)>> $He has impressive skill and would have been a top-tier dancer in the old world. One of the many benefits of being a leader of a Free City is the ability to work in an atmosphere of pure servitude. You were free to continue your work in an office the old world men could only dream of.  You tell your slave that you are pleased with $his show.
-	<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 20)>> Despite being an average entertainer, it is clear that $he is doing $his best. You enjoyed the sexy ambiance while you worked. You tell your slave that $his preformance was adequate.
-	<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 10)>> $He is still learning the nuances of seductive dance, but at least able to move with the rhythm. You spent much of the preformance distracted, forgetting that $he was even there at times and leaving $him unable to stop until you remembered about $him. You tell $him that $he will have to work harder if $he wishes to please you.
-	<<else>> Or, at least, $his best attempt at dancing. $His arms flail about awkwardly as $he crouches and straightens off-beat to the music. You spent much of the dance ignoring $him and working on your business. You chide your slave for such a pathetic excuse for a preformance, and tell $him that $he will have to find a place to please you, or you will be forced to make $him useful, turning $his thoughts to the arcades, dairies, and Fuckdolls common amongst the Free Cities.
+	<<if ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment == 100)>>
+		Your slave has a level of skill previously unseen in the old world. Even $his blinks have the seductive pull of a goddess. As you watch $him preform, you think how no _womanP of the old world would ever get to see pure sexuality like this. And not only do get to watch $him, you OWN $him. $His body moves like water, and hips that ebbed and flowed as if the tides themselves panged for a rock hard cock to come and take them. You tried to get some work done, but couldn't take your eyes off $him for even a second. You promise to reward your slave for bringing so much sensuality and beauty into your office; transforming your place of work into a shrine of Masculine dominance.
+	<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 60)>>
+		$His skill would have only been matched by the best of the best old world erotic dancers, but in your Free City expectations are high. $He dances with seduction in every move, alternating $his style between everything from belly dancing to club twerking, and each with the skill level of a trained professional. You got some work done while $he danced, but often found yourself pulled back in by the tide of $his rolling hips. You praise your slave for $his enriching performance.
+	<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 40)>>
+		$He has impressive skill and would have been a top-tier dancer in the old world. One of the many benefits of being a leader of a Free City is the ability to work in an atmosphere of pure servitude. You were free to continue your work in an office the old world men could only dream of. You tell your slave that you are pleased with $his show.
+	<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 20)>>
+		Despite being an average entertainer, it is clear that $he is doing $his best. You enjoyed the sexy ambiance while you worked. You tell your slave that $his performance was adequate.
+	<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 10)>>
+		$He is still learning the nuances of seductive dance, but at least able to move with the rhythm. You spent much of the performance distracted, forgetting that $he was even there at times and leaving $him unable to stop until you remembered about $him. You tell $him that $he will have to work harder if $he wishes to please you.
+	<<else>>
+		Or, at least, $his best attempt at dancing. $His arms flail about awkwardly as $he crouches and straightens off-beat to the music. You spent much of the dance ignoring $him and working on your business. You chide your slave for such a pathetic excuse for a performance, and tell $him that $he will have to find a place to please you, or you will be forced to make $him useful, turning $his thoughts to the arcades, dairies, and Fuckdolls common amongst the Free Cities.
 	<</if>>
 <<else>>
-$He dances poorly on purpose to spite you. Whatever skills $he has, they are not on display here. You threaten to
+	$He dances poorly on purpose to spite you. Whatever skills $he has, they are not on display here. You threaten to
 	<<switch $activeSlave.standardPunishment>>
-		<<case "confinement">> lock $him up in the bad-girl box 
-		<<case "whipping">> whip $him until $he screams
-		<<case "chastity">>
-			<<if ($activeSlave.energy > 60)>>
+	<<case "confinement">>
+		lock $him up in the bad-girl box
+	<<case "whipping">>
+		whip $him until $he screams
+	<<case "chastity">>
+		<<if ($activeSlave.energy > 60)>>
 			keep $him on the edge of orgasm until $he loses $his mind
-			<<else>>
+		<<else>>
 			fuck $him in the ass until $he's unconscious
-			<</if>>
-		<<case "situational">> 
-			<<switch $activeSlave.collar>>
-			<<case "shock punishment">> activate $his collar, and 
-			<</switch>>
-			make punish $him
+		<</if>>
+	<<case "situational">>
+		<<switch $activeSlave.collar>>
+		<<case "shock punishment">>
+			activate $his collar, and
 		<</switch>>
-	if $he doesn't shape up. 
+		punish $him
+	<</switch>>
+	if $he doesn't shape up.
 <</if>>
 
-But it's not over yet. You tell your slave that it's time to incorporate some stripping into $his dance. 
+But it's not over yet. You tell your slave that it's time to incorporate some stripping into $his dance.
 
-<<if ($activeSlave.sexualFlaw == "shamefast")>> 
+<<if ($activeSlave.sexualFlaw == "shamefast")>>
 	<<if ($activeSlave.devotion < 40)>>
-	$He immediately begins to tear up at the thought of being naked. $His shame is obvious to you, and you remind $him that $his comfort is not your concern. 
-		<<if ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 99)>> Even though $he is crippled by shame, your slave is a masterful entertainer, able to keep anyone entertained for even the most lengthy of strip teases. With tears still streaming down $his face, $he begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass.  $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he knows how to fulfill $his purpose, even as $he sniffles at the shame of revealing $himself for you. You keep trying to get back to work, but your slave's movements are so enthralling that you cannot seem to break free. 
-		<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 60)>> Even though $he is crippled by shame, your slave is a skilled entertainer, well above average. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass. $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. 
-		<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 40)>> Your slave is a practiced entertainer, not masterful but still able to give an arousing performance. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass. $He is able to use $his hips and ass to draw your attention before suddenly moving up to $his chest. $He isn't able to fully keep your attention, but whenever $he sees that you are becoming distracted $he ups the ante to draw you back in. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. $He does her best to direct your arousal onto $his body.
-		<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 20)>> Your slave works hard to keep with the rhythm while removing articles of clothing. $His attempts are inhibited by $his shame, which makes $him shudder and cry whenever it's time for another article of clothing to come off. 
-		<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 10)>> Your slave is not a skilled performer, and $his movements are uninspired. $He is too concerned with protecting $his nakedness to be obedient and attractive simultaneously, and you find yourself becoming distracted, $his dance not enough to keep your attention or draw you back. You take out your tablet and make a note that this slave will need to practice $his seduction if $he is to be allowed to dance for you again. Even without skill you still can admire $his body. You imagine how much more attractive $his tits and ass could be if $he knew how to move them right.
-		<<else>> Your slave has no skills to speak of, and isn't able to keep even the simplest of rhythms. $He fumbles about awkwardly and clumsily, stopping abruptly every so often to reluctantly, but obediently, remove an article of clothing. You decide to find $his lack of skill amusing, and allow $him to continue practicing while you resume your work. 
+		$He immediately begins to tear up at the thought of being naked. $His shame is obvious to you, and you remind $him that $his comfort is not your concern.
+		<<if ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 99)>>
+			Even though $he is crippled by shame, your slave is a masterful entertainer, able to keep anyone entertained for even the most lengthy of strip teases. With tears still streaming down $his face, $he begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he knows how to fulfill $his purpose, even as $he sniffles at the shame of revealing $himself for you. You keep trying to get back to work, but your slave's movements are so enthralling that you cannot seem to break free.
+		<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 60)>>
+			Even though $he is crippled by shame, your slave is a skilled entertainer, well above average. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose.
+		<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 40)>>
+			Your slave is a practiced entertainer, not masterful but still able to give an arousing performance. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He is able to use $his hips and ass to draw your attention before suddenly moving up to $his chest. $He isn't able to fully keep your attention, but whenever $he sees that you are becoming distracted $he ups the ante to draw you back in. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. $He does $his best to direct your arousal onto $his body.
+		<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 20)>>
+			Your slave works hard to keep with the rhythm while removing articles of clothing. $His attempts are inhibited by $his shame, which makes $him shudder and cry whenever it's time for another article of clothing to come off.
+		<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 10)>>
+			Your slave is not a skilled performer, and $his movements are uninspired. $He is too concerned with protecting $his nakedness to be obedient and attractive simultaneously, and you find yourself becoming distracted, $his dance not enough to keep your attention or draw you back. You take out your tablet and make a note that this slave will need to practice $his seduction if $he is to be allowed to dance for you again. Even without skill you still can admire $his body. You imagine how much more attractive $his tits and ass could be if $he knew how to move them right.
+		<<else>>
+			Your slave has no skills to speak of, and isn't able to keep even the simplest of rhythms. $He fumbles about awkwardly and clumsily, stopping abruptly every so often to reluctantly, but obediently, remove an article of clothing. You decide to find $his lack of skill amusing, and allow $him to continue practicing while you resume your work.
 		<</if>>
 	<<else>>
-	Even though $he is uncomfortable at the thought of being naked, $he is so devoted to you that $he obeys without question. 
-		<<if ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 99)>> Your slave is a masterful entertainer, able to keep anyone entertained for even the most lengthy of strip teases. Overcoming $his fear of being naked, $he begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass. $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he knows how to fulfill $his purpose, even as $he sniffles at the shame of revealing $himself for you. You keep trying to get back to work, but your slave's movements are so enthralling that you cannot seem to break free. 
-		<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 60)>> Even though $he is still ashamed, your slave is a skilled entertainer, well above average. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass. $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. 
-		<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 40)>> Your slave is a practiced entertainer, not masterful but still able to give an arousing performance. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass. $He is able to use $his hips and ass to draw your attention before suddenly moving up to $his chest. $He isn't able to fully keep your attention, but whenever $he sees that you are becoming distracted $he ups the ante to draw you back in. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. $He does her best to direct your arousal onto $his body.
-		<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 20)>> Your slave works hard to keep with the rhythm while removing articles of clothing. $His attempts would be inhibited by $his shame, but $his devotion to you overrides this and $he is able to dance with added skill. 
-		<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 10)>> Your slave is not a skilled performer, and $his movements are uninspired. You find yourself becoming distracted, $his dance not enough to keep your attention or draw you back. You take out your tablet and make a note that this slave will need to practice $his seduction if $he is to be allowed to dance for you again. Even without skill you still can admire $his body. You imagine how much more attractive $his tits and ass could be if $he knew how to move them right.
-		<<else>> Your slave has no skills to speak of, and isn't able to keep even the simplest of rhythms. $He fumbles about awkwardly and clumsily, stopping abruptly every so often to shamefully remove an article of clothing. You decide to find $his lack of skill amusing, and allow $him to continue practicing while you resume your work. 
+		Even though $he is uncomfortable at the thought of being naked, $he is so devoted to you that $he obeys without question.
+		<<if ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 99)>>
+			Your slave is a masterful entertainer, able to keep anyone entertained for even the most lengthy of strip teases. Overcoming $his fear of being naked, $he begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he knows how to fulfill $his purpose, even as $he sniffles at the shame of revealing $himself for you. You keep trying to get back to work, but your slave's movements are so enthralling that you cannot seem to break free.
+		<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 60)>>
+			Even though $he is still ashamed, your slave is a skilled entertainer, well above average. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose.
+		<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 40)>>
+			Your slave is a practiced entertainer, not masterful but still able to give an arousing performance. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He is able to use $his hips and ass to draw your attention before suddenly moving up to $his chest. $He isn't able to fully keep your attention, but whenever $he sees that you are becoming distracted $he ups the ante to draw you back in. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. $He does $his best to direct your arousal onto $his body.
+		<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 20)>>
+			Your slave works hard to keep with the rhythm while removing articles of clothing. $His attempts would be inhibited by $his shame, but $his devotion to you overrides this and $he is able to dance with added skill.
+		<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 10)>>
+			Your slave is not a skilled performer, and $his movements are uninspired. You find yourself becoming distracted, $his dance not enough to keep your attention or draw you back. You take out your tablet and make a note that this slave will need to practice $his seduction if $he is to be allowed to dance for you again. Even without skill you still can admire $his body. You imagine how much more attractive $his tits and ass could be if $he knew how to move them right.
+		<<else>>
+			Your slave has no skills to speak of, and isn't able to keep even the simplest of rhythms. $He fumbles about awkwardly and clumsily, stopping abruptly every so often to shamefully remove an article of clothing. You decide to find $his lack of skill amusing, and allow $him to continue practicing while you resume your work.
 		<</if>>
 	<</if>>
 <<elseif ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "odd")>>
-	<<if ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 99)>> Even though $he is extremely odd, your slave is a masterful entertainer, able to keep anyone entertained for even the most lengthy of strip teases. With her ass cheeks straddling the pole $he begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass.  $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he knows how to fulfill $his purpose. You keep trying to get back to work, but your slave's movements are so enthralling that you cannot seem to break free. 
-	<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 60)>> Even though $he is extremely odd, your slave is a skilled entertainer, well above average. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass. $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. 
-	<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 40)>> Your slave is a practiced entertainer, not masterful but still able to give an arousing performance. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass. $He is able to use $his hips and ass to draw your attention before suddenly moving up to $his chest. $He isn't able to fully keep your attention, but whenever $he sees that you are becoming distracted $he shouts wildly before upping the ante to draw you back in. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. $He does her best to direct your arousal onto $his body.
-	<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 20)>> Your slave works hard to keep with the rhythm while removing articles of clothing. $His attempts are inhibited by $his oddness, which results in $him crouching and squealing at inappropriate times. $He wonders aloud and you instruct $him to be silent the remainder of the dance. 
-	<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 10)>> Your slave is not a skilled performer, and $his movements are uninspired. $He is so odd that $his moves more resembles the chicken dance than any form of erotic dancing. You find yourself unable to look away, and for all the wrong reasons. You take out your tablet and make a note that this slave will need to practice $his seduction if $he is to be allowed to dance for you again. Even without skill you still can admire $his body. You imagine how much more attractive $his tits and ass could be if $he knew how to move them right.
-	<<else>> Your slave has no skills to speak of, and isn't able to keep even the simplest of rhythms. Deciding that the rhythm is to blame, $he decides instead to sing $his own song to strip to. $He proceeds to hum string of off beat notes peppered with random words and scats, all punctuated by the sloppy kicking of clothes from $his ankles. $He fumbles about awkwardly and clumsily, stopping abruptly every so often to roughly remove an article of clothing. You decide to find $his lack of skill amusing, and allow $him to continue practicing while you resume your work. 
+	<<if ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 99)>>
+		Even though $he is extremely odd, your slave is a masterful entertainer, able to keep anyone entertained for even the most lengthy of strip teases. With $his ass cheeks straddling the pole $he begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he knows how to fulfill $his purpose. You keep trying to get back to work, but your slave's movements are so enthralling that you cannot seem to break free.
+	<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 60)>>
+		Even though $he is extremely odd, your slave is a skilled entertainer, well above average. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose.
+	<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 40)>>
+		Your slave is a practiced entertainer, not masterful but still able to give an arousing performance. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He is able to use $his hips and ass to draw your attention before suddenly moving up to $his chest. $He isn't able to fully keep your attention, but whenever $he sees that you are becoming distracted $he shouts wildly before upping the ante to draw you back in. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. $He does $his best to direct your arousal onto $his body.
+	<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 20)>>
+		Your slave works hard to keep with the rhythm while removing articles of clothing. $His attempts are inhibited by $his oddness, which results in $him crouching and squealing at inappropriate times. $He wonders aloud and you instruct $him to be silent the remainder of the dance.
+	<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 10)>>
+		Your slave is not a skilled performer, and $his movements are uninspired. $He is so odd that $his moves more resembles the chicken dance than any form of erotic dancing. You find yourself unable to look away, and for all the wrong reasons. You take out your tablet and make a note that this slave will need to practice $his seduction if $he is to be allowed to dance for you again. Even without skill you still can admire $his body. You imagine how much more attractive $his tits and ass could be if $he knew how to move them right.
+	<<else>>
+		Your slave has no skills to speak of, and isn't able to keep even the simplest of rhythms. Deciding that the rhythm is to blame, $he decides instead to sing $his own song to strip to. $He proceeds to hum string of off beat notes peppered with random words and scats, all punctuated by the sloppy kicking of clothes from $his ankles. $He fumbles about awkwardly and clumsily, stopping abruptly every so often to roughly remove an article of clothing. You decide to find $his lack of skill amusing, and allow $him to continue practicing while you resume your work.
 	<</if>>
 <<elseif ($activeSlave.sexualFlaw == "attention whore")>>
-	As an attentrion whore, this is what $he lives for. 
-	<<if ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 99)>>  Your slave is a masterful entertainer, able to keep anyone entertained for even the most lengthy of strip teases. Being a an attention whore, $he is obsessed with attracting the sexual arousal of others. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass.  $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he knows how to fulfill $his purpose, even though $he is also fulfilled by the event $he knows that your desire is all that matters. You keep trying to get back to work, but your slave's movements are so enthralling that you cannot seem to break free. 
-	<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 60)>> Your slave is a skilled entertainer, well above average. Being an attention whore, $he is obsessed with attracting the sexual arousal of others. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass.  $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. $He surely wishes $he wer a better entertainer soyou would call on $him to strip more often. 
-	<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 40)>> Your slave is a practiced entertainer, not masterful but still able to give an arousing performance. The true entertainment comes from $his teasing nature, which makes $him blush cutely anytime $he shows a bit of skin. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass.  $He is able to use $his hips and ass to draw your attention before suddenly moving up to $his chest. $He isn't able to fully keep your attention, but whenever $he sees that you are becoming distracted $he ups the ante to draw you back in. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. $He does her best to direct your arousal onto $his body.
-	<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 20)>>Your slave works hard to keep with the rhythm while removing articles of clothing. $His attempts are overshadowed by $his clear desire to be looked at, and you can tell $he is distracted by this.
-	<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 10)>> Your slave is not a skilled performer, and $his movements are uninspired. $He is trying much too hard to get your attention, and is visibly angered whenever $he sees that you are not aroused by $his fumblings. You find yourself becoming distracted, $his dance not enough to keep your attention or draw you back. You take out your tablet and make a note that this slave will need to practice $his seduction if $he is to be allowed to dance for you again. Even without skill you still can admire $his body. You imagine how much more attractive $his tits and ass could be if $he knew how to move them right.
-	<<else>> Your slave has no skills to speak of, and isn't able to keep even the simplest of rhythms. $He fumbles about awkwardly and clumsily, stopping abruptly every so often to over-dramatically remove an article of clothing. After each article removed $he stops and looks at you to make sure you're watching. $His clear desire to be looked at makes $him more self-conscious which offsets the rhythm of the dance even more. $He decides to pick up the pace, aiming to be naked as quickly as possible so that you can admire $his body. You decide to find $his lack of skill amusing, and allow $him to continue practicing while you resume your work. 
+	As an attention whore, this is what $he lives for.
+	<<if ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 99)>>
+		Your slave is a masterful entertainer, able to keep anyone entertained for even the most lengthy of strip teases. Being a an attention whore, $he is obsessed with attracting the sexual arousal of others. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he knows how to fulfill $his purpose, even though $he is also fulfilled by the event $he knows that your desire is all that matters. You keep trying to get back to work, but your slave's movements are so enthralling that you cannot seem to break free.
+	<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 60)>>
+		Your slave is a skilled entertainer, well above average. Being an attention whore, $he is obsessed with attracting the sexual arousal of others. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. $He surely wishes $he were a better entertainer so you would call on $him to strip more often.
+	<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 40)>>
+		Your slave is a practiced entertainer, not masterful but still able to give an arousing performance. The true entertainment comes from $his teasing nature, which makes $him blush cutely anytime $he shows a bit of skin. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He is able to use $his hips and ass to draw your attention before suddenly moving up to $his chest. $He isn't able to fully keep your attention, but whenever $he sees that you are becoming distracted $he ups the ante to draw you back in. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. $He does $his best to direct your arousal onto $his body.
+	<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 20)>>
+		Your slave works hard to keep with the rhythm while removing articles of clothing. $His attempts are overshadowed by $his clear desire to be looked at, and you can tell $he is distracted by this.
+	<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 10)>>
+		Your slave is not a skilled performer, and $his movements are uninspired. $He is trying much too hard to get your attention, and is visibly angered whenever $he sees that you are not aroused by $his fumblings. You find yourself becoming distracted, $his dance not enough to keep your attention or draw you back. You take out your tablet and make a note that this slave will need to practice $his seduction if $he is to be allowed to dance for you again. Even without skill you still can admire $his body. You imagine how much more attractive $his tits and ass could be if $he knew how to move them right.
+	<<else>>
+		Your slave has no skills to speak of, and isn't able to keep even the simplest of rhythms. $He fumbles about awkwardly and clumsily, stopping abruptly every so often to over-dramatically remove an article of clothing. After each article removed $he stops and looks at you to make sure you're watching. $His clear desire to be looked at makes $him more self-conscious which offsets the rhythm of the dance even more. $He decides to pick up the pace, aiming to be naked as quickly as possible so that you can admire $his body. You decide to find $his lack of skill amusing, and allow $him to continue practicing while you resume your work.
 	<</if>>
-<<elseif ($activeSlave.sexualQuirk == "tease")>> 
-	<<if ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 99)>>  Your slave is a masterful entertainer, able to keep anyone entertained for even the most lengthy of strip teases. Being a tease, $he is able to maintain an attractive blend of shame and arousal at the thought of being naked before you, and this inspires $him to tease you endlessly. With cheeks still flushed and red, $he begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass.  $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he knows how to fulfill $his purpose, even as $he blushes at the shame and arousal of revealing $himself for you. You keep trying to get back to work, but your slave's movements are so enthralling that you cannot seem to break free. 
-	<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 60)>> Your slave is a skilled entertainer, well above average. Being a tease, $he is able to maintain an attractive blend of shame and arousal at the thought of being naked before you, and this inspires $him to tease you endlessly. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass.  $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. 
-	<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 40)>> Your slave is a practiced entertainer, not masterful but still able to give an arousing performance. The true entertainment comes from $his teasing nature, which makes $him blush cutely anytime $he shows a bit of skin. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass.  $He is able to use $his hips and ass to draw your attention before suddenly moving up to $his chest. $He isn't able to fully keep your attention, but whenever $he sees that you are becoming distracted $he ups the ante to draw you back in. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. $He does her best to direct your arousal onto $his body.
-	<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 20)>>Your slave works hard to keep with the rhythm while removing articles of clothing. $His attempts are made more entertaining by $his shame, which makes $him redden and blush whenever it's time for another article of clothing to come off. Even though $his entertainment skill needs improving, you genuinely enjoy the teasing way $he tugs at $his wear and makes you anticipate the removal of each article. 
-	<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 10)>> Your slave is not a skilled performer, and $his movements are uninspired. $He is a tease, which adds a bit of value, but you find yourself becoming distracted, $his dance not enough to keep your attention or draw you back. You take out your tablet and make a note that this slave will need to practice $his seduction if $he is to be allowed to dance for you again. Even without skill you still can admire $his body. You imagine how much more attractive $his tits and ass could be if $he knew how to move them right.
-	<<else>> Your slave has no skills to speak of, and isn't able to keep even the simplest of rhythms. $He fumbles about awkwardly and clumsily, stopping abruptly every so often to gracelessly remove an article of clothing. You decide to find $his lack of skill amusing, and allow $him to continue practicing while you resume your work. 
+<<elseif ($activeSlave.sexualQuirk == "tease")>>
+	<<if ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 99)>>
+		Your slave is a masterful entertainer, able to keep anyone entertained for even the most lengthy of strip teases. Being a tease, $he is able to maintain an attractive blend of shame and arousal at the thought of being naked before you, and this inspires $him to tease you endlessly. With cheeks still flushed and red, $he begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he knows how to fulfill $his purpose, even as $he blushes at the shame and arousal of revealing $himself for you. You keep trying to get back to work, but your slave's movements are so enthralling that you cannot seem to break free.
+	<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 60)>>
+		Your slave is a skilled entertainer, well above average. Being a tease, $he is able to maintain an attractive blend of shame and arousal at the thought of being naked before you, and this inspires $him to tease you endlessly. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose.
+	<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 40)>>
+		Your slave is a practiced entertainer, not masterful but still able to give an arousing performance. The true entertainment comes from $his teasing nature, which makes $him blush cutely anytime $he shows a bit of skin. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He is able to use $his hips and ass to draw your attention before suddenly moving up to $his chest. $He isn't able to fully keep your attention, but whenever $he sees that you are becoming distracted $he ups the ante to draw you back in. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. $He does $his best to direct your arousal onto $his body.
+	<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 20)>>
+		Your slave works hard to keep with the rhythm while removing articles of clothing. $His attempts are made more entertaining by $his shame, which makes $him redden and blush whenever it's time for another article of clothing to come off. Even though $his entertainment skill needs improving, you genuinely enjoy the teasing way $he tugs at $his wear and makes you anticipate the removal of each article.
+	<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 10)>>
+		Your slave is not a skilled performer, and $his movements are uninspired. $He is a tease, which adds a bit of value, but you find yourself becoming distracted, $his dance not enough to keep your attention or draw you back. You take out your tablet and make a note that this slave will need to practice $his seduction if $he is to be allowed to dance for you again. Even without skill you still can admire $his body. You imagine how much more attractive $his tits and ass could be if $he knew how to move them right.
+	<<else>>
+		Your slave has no skills to speak of, and isn't able to keep even the simplest of rhythms. $He fumbles about awkwardly and clumsily, stopping abruptly every so often to gracelessly remove an article of clothing. You decide to find $his lack of skill amusing, and allow $him to continue practicing while you resume your work.
 	<</if>>
 <<else>>
 	<<if ($activeSlave.fetishKnown == 1)>>
 		<<switch $activeSlave.fetish>>
 		<<case "submissive">>
-			<<if ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 99)>> Your slave is a masterful entertainer, able to keep anyone entertained for even the most lengthy of strip teases. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass.  $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he knows how to fulfill $his purpose. You keep trying to get back to work, but your slave's movements are so enthralling that you cannot seem to break free. 
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 60)>> Your slave is a skilled entertainer, well above average. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass. $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. 
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 40)>> Your slave is a practiced entertainer, not masterful but still able to give an arousing performance. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass.  $He is able to use $his hips and ass to draw your attention before suddenly moving up to $his chest. $He isn't able to fully keep your attention, but whenever $he sees that you are becoming distracted $he ups the ante to draw you back in. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. $He does her best to direct your arousal onto $his body.
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 20)>>Your slave works hard to keep with the rhythm while removing articles of clothing. 
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 10)>> Your slave is not a skilled performer, and $his movements are uninspired. $His movements are still attractive, but you find yourself becoming distracted, $his dance not enough to keep your attention or draw you back. You take out your tablet and make a note that this slave will need to practice $his seduction if $he is to be allowed to dance for you again. Even without skill you still can admire $his body. You imagine how much more attractive $his tits and ass could be if $he knew how to move them right.
-			<<else>> Your slave has no skills to speak of, and isn't able to keep even the simplest of rhythms. $He fumbles about awkwardly and clumsily, stopping abruptly every so often to gracelessly remove an article of clothing. You decide to find $his lack of skill amusing, and allow $him to continue practicing while you resume your work. 
+			<<if ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 99)>>
+				Your slave is a masterful entertainer, able to keep anyone entertained for even the most lengthy of strip teases. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he knows how to fulfill $his purpose. You keep trying to get back to work, but your slave's movements are so enthralling that you cannot seem to break free.
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 60)>>
+				Your slave is a skilled entertainer, well above average. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose.
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 40)>>
+				Your slave is a practiced entertainer, not masterful but still able to give an arousing performance. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He is able to use $his hips and ass to draw your attention before suddenly moving up to $his chest. $He isn't able to fully keep your attention, but whenever $he sees that you are becoming distracted $he ups the ante to draw you back in. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. $He does $his best to direct your arousal onto $his body.
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 20)>>
+				Your slave works hard to keep with the rhythm while removing articles of clothing.
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 10)>>
+				Your slave is not a skilled performer, and $his movements are uninspired. $His movements are still attractive, but you find yourself becoming distracted, $his dance not enough to keep your attention or draw you back. You take out your tablet and make a note that this slave will need to practice $his seduction if $he is to be allowed to dance for you again. Even without skill you still can admire $his body. You imagine how much more attractive $his tits and ass could be if $he knew how to move them right.
+			<<else>>
+				Your slave has no skills to speak of, and isn't able to keep even the simplest of rhythms. $He fumbles about awkwardly and clumsily, stopping abruptly every so often to gracelessly remove an article of clothing. You decide to find $his lack of skill amusing, and allow $him to continue practicing while you resume your work.
 			<</if>>
 		<<case "dom">>
-			<<if ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 99)>> Your slave is a masterful entertainer, able to keep anyone entertained for even the most lengthy of strip teases. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass. $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he knows how to fulfill $his purpose. You keep trying to get back to work, but your slave's movements are so enthralling that you cannot seem to break free. 
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 60)>> Your slave is a skilled entertainer, well above average. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass.  $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. 
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 40)>> Your slave is a practiced entertainer, not masterful but still able to give an arousing performance. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass.  $He is able to use $his hips and ass to draw your attention before suddenly moving up to $his chest. $He isn't able to fully keep your attention, but whenever $he sees that you are becoming distracted $he ups the ante to draw you back in. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. $He does her best to direct your arousal onto $his body.
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 20)>>Your slave works hard to keep with the rhythm while removing articles of clothing. 
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 10)>> Your slave is not a skilled performer, and $his movements are uninspired. $His movements are still attractive, but you find yourself becoming distracted, $his dance not enough to keep your attention or draw you back. You take out your tablet and make a note that this slave will need to practice $his seduction if $he is to be allowed to dance for you again. Even without skill you still can admire $his body. You imagine how much more attractive $his tits and ass could be if $he knew how to move them right.
-			<<else>> Your slave has no skills to speak of, and isn't able to keep even the simplest of rhythms. $He fumbles about awkwardly and clumsily, stopping abruptly every so often to gracelessly remove an article of clothing. You decide to find $his lack of skill amusing, and allow $him to continue practicing while you resume your work. 
+			<<if ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 99)>>
+				Your slave is a masterful entertainer, able to keep anyone entertained for even the most lengthy of strip teases. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he knows how to fulfill $his purpose. You keep trying to get back to work, but your slave's movements are so enthralling that you cannot seem to break free.
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 60)>>
+				Your slave is a skilled entertainer, well above average. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose.
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 40)>>
+				Your slave is a practiced entertainer, not masterful but still able to give an arousing performance. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He is able to use $his hips and ass to draw your attention before suddenly moving up to $his chest. $He isn't able to fully keep your attention, but whenever $he sees that you are becoming distracted $he ups the ante to draw you back in. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. $He does $his best to direct your arousal onto $his body.
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 20)>>
+				Your slave works hard to keep with the rhythm while removing articles of clothing.
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 10)>>
+				Your slave is not a skilled performer, and $his movements are uninspired. $His movements are still attractive, but you find yourself becoming distracted, $his dance not enough to keep your attention or draw you back. You take out your tablet and make a note that this slave will need to practice $his seduction if $he is to be allowed to dance for you again. Even without skill you still can admire $his body. You imagine how much more attractive $his tits and ass could be if $he knew how to move them right.
+			<<else>>
+				Your slave has no skills to speak of, and isn't able to keep even the simplest of rhythms. $He fumbles about awkwardly and clumsily, stopping abruptly every so often to gracelessly remove an article of clothing. You decide to find $his lack of skill amusing, and allow $him to continue practicing while you resume your work.
 			<</if>>
 		<<case "sadist">>
-			<<if ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 99)>> Your slave is a masterful entertainer, able to keep anyone entertained for even the most lengthy of strip teases. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass.  $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he knows how to fulfill $his purpose. You keep trying to get back to work, but your slave's movements are so enthralling that you cannot seem to break free. 
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 60)>> Your slave is a skilled entertainer, well above average. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass.  $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. 
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 40)>> Your slave is a practiced entertainer, not masterful but still able to give an arousing performance. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass.  $He is able to use $his hips and ass to draw your attention before suddenly moving up to $his chest. $He isn't able to fully keep your attention, but whenever $he sees that you are becoming distracted $he ups the ante to draw you back in. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. $He does her best to direct your arousal onto $his body.
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 20)>>Your slave works hard to keep with the rhythm while removing articles of clothing. 
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 10)>> Your slave is not a skilled performer, and $his movements are uninspired. $His movements are still attractive, but you find yourself becoming distracted, $his dance not enough to keep your attention or draw you back. You take out your tablet and make a note that this slave will need to practice $his seduction if $he is to be allowed to dance for you again. Even without skill you still can admire $his body. You imagine how much more attractive $his tits and ass could be if $he knew how to move them right.
-			<<else>> Your slave has no skills to speak of, and isn't able to keep even the simplest of rhythms. $He fumbles about awkwardly and clumsily, stopping abruptly every so often to gracelessly remove an article of clothing. You decide to find $his lack of skill amusing, and allow $him to continue practicing while you resume your work. 
+			<<if ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 99)>>
+				Your slave is a masterful entertainer, able to keep anyone entertained for even the most lengthy of strip teases. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he knows how to fulfill $his purpose. You keep trying to get back to work, but your slave's movements are so enthralling that you cannot seem to break free.
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 60)>>
+				Your slave is a skilled entertainer, well above average. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose.
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 40)>>
+				Your slave is a practiced entertainer, not masterful but still able to give an arousing performance. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He is able to use $his hips and ass to draw your attention before suddenly moving up to $his chest. $He isn't able to fully keep your attention, but whenever $he sees that you are becoming distracted $he ups the ante to draw you back in. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. $He does $his best to direct your arousal onto $his body.
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 20)>>
+				Your slave works hard to keep with the rhythm while removing articles of clothing.
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 10)>>
+				Your slave is not a skilled performer, and $his movements are uninspired. $His movements are still attractive, but you find yourself becoming distracted, $his dance not enough to keep your attention or draw you back. You take out your tablet and make a note that this slave will need to practice $his seduction if $he is to be allowed to dance for you again. Even without skill you still can admire $his body. You imagine how much more attractive $his tits and ass could be if $he knew how to move them right.
+			<<else>>
+				Your slave has no skills to speak of, and isn't able to keep even the simplest of rhythms. $He fumbles about awkwardly and clumsily, stopping abruptly every so often to gracelessly remove an article of clothing. You decide to find $his lack of skill amusing, and allow $him to continue practicing while you resume your work.
 			<</if>>
 		<<case "masochist">>
-			<<if ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 99)>> Your slave is a masterful entertainer, able to keep anyone entertained for even the most lengthy of strip teases. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass.  $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he knows how to fulfill $his purpose. You keep trying to get back to work, but your slave's movements are so enthralling that you cannot seem to break free. 
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 60)>> Your slave is a skilled entertainer, well above average. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass.  $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. 
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 40)>> Your slave is a practiced entertainer, not masterful but still able to give an arousing performance. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass.  $He is able to use $his hips and ass to draw your attention before suddenly moving up to $his chest. $He isn't able to fully keep your attention, but whenever $he sees that you are becoming distracted $he ups the ante to draw you back in. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. $He does her best to direct your arousal onto $his body.
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 20)>>Your slave works hard to keep with the rhythm while removing articles of clothing. 
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 10)>> Your slave is not a skilled performer, and $his movements are uninspired. $His movements are still attractive, but you find yourself becoming distracted, $his dance not enough to keep your attention or draw you back. You take out your tablet and make a note that this slave will need to practice $his seduction if $he is to be allowed to dance for you again. Even without skill you still can admire $his body. You imagine how much more attractive $his tits and ass could be if $he knew how to move them right.
-			<<else>> Your slave has no skills to speak of, and isn't able to keep even the simplest of rhythms. $He fumbles about awkwardly and clumsily, stopping abruptly every so often to gracelessly remove an article of clothing. You decide to find $his lack of skill amusing, and allow $him to continue practicing while you resume your work. 
+			<<if ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 99)>>
+				Your slave is a masterful entertainer, able to keep anyone entertained for even the most lengthy of strip teases. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he knows how to fulfill $his purpose. You keep trying to get back to work, but your slave's movements are so enthralling that you cannot seem to break free.
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 60)>>
+				Your slave is a skilled entertainer, well above average. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose.
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 40)>>
+				Your slave is a practiced entertainer, not masterful but still able to give an arousing performance. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He is able to use $his hips and ass to draw your attention before suddenly moving up to $his chest. $He isn't able to fully keep your attention, but whenever $he sees that you are becoming distracted $he ups the ante to draw you back in. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. $He does $his best to direct your arousal onto $his body.
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 20)>>
+				Your slave works hard to keep with the rhythm while removing articles of clothing.
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 10)>>
+				Your slave is not a skilled performer, and $his movements are uninspired. $His movements are still attractive, but you find yourself becoming distracted, $his dance not enough to keep your attention or draw you back. You take out your tablet and make a note that this slave will need to practice $his seduction if $he is to be allowed to dance for you again. Even without skill you still can admire $his body. You imagine how much more attractive $his tits and ass could be if $he knew how to move them right.
+			<<else>>
+				Your slave has no skills to speak of, and isn't able to keep even the simplest of rhythms. $He fumbles about awkwardly and clumsily, stopping abruptly every so often to gracelessly remove an article of clothing. You decide to find $his lack of skill amusing, and allow $him to continue practicing while you resume your work.
 			<</if>>
 		<<case "cumslut">>
-			<<if ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 99)>> Your slave is a masterful entertainer, able to keep anyone entertained for even the most lengthy of strip teases. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass.  $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he knows how to fulfill $his purpose. You keep trying to get back to work, but your slave's movements are so enthralling that you cannot seem to break free. 
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 60)>> Your slave is a skilled entertainer, well above average. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass.  $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. 
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 40)>> Your slave is a practiced entertainer, not masterful but still able to give an arousing performance. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass.  $He is able to use $his hips and ass to draw your attention before suddenly moving up to $his chest. $He isn't able to fully keep your attention, but whenever $he sees that you are becoming distracted $he ups the ante to draw you back in. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. $He does her best to direct your arousal onto $his body.
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 20)>>Your slave works hard to keep with the rhythm while removing articles of clothing. 
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 10)>> Your slave is not a skilled performer, and $his movements are uninspired. $His movements are still attractive, but you find yourself becoming distracted, $his dance not enough to keep your attention or draw you back. You take out your tablet and make a note that this slave will need to practice $his seduction if $he is to be allowed to dance for you again. Even without skill you still can admire $his body. You imagine how much more attractive $his tits and ass could be if $he knew how to move them right.
-			<<else>> Your slave has no skills to speak of, and isn't able to keep even the simplest of rhythms. $He fumbles about awkwardly and clumsily, stopping abruptly every so often to gracelessly remove an article of clothing. You decide to find $his lack of skill amusing, and allow $him to continue practicing while you resume your work. 
+			<<if ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 99)>>
+				Your slave is a masterful entertainer, able to keep anyone entertained for even the most lengthy of strip teases. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he knows how to fulfill $his purpose. You keep trying to get back to work, but your slave's movements are so enthralling that you cannot seem to break free.
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 60)>>
+				Your slave is a skilled entertainer, well above average. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose.
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 40)>>
+				Your slave is a practiced entertainer, not masterful but still able to give an arousing performance. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He is able to use $his hips and ass to draw your attention before suddenly moving up to $his chest. $He isn't able to fully keep your attention, but whenever $he sees that you are becoming distracted $he ups the ante to draw you back in. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. $He does $his best to direct your arousal onto $his body.
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 20)>>
+				Your slave works hard to keep with the rhythm while removing articles of clothing.
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 10)>>
+				Your slave is not a skilled performer, and $his movements are uninspired. $His movements are still attractive, but you find yourself becoming distracted, $his dance not enough to keep your attention or draw you back. You take out your tablet and make a note that this slave will need to practice $his seduction if $he is to be allowed to dance for you again. Even without skill you still can admire $his body. You imagine how much more attractive $his tits and ass could be if $he knew how to move them right.
+			<<else>>
+				Your slave has no skills to speak of, and isn't able to keep even the simplest of rhythms. $He fumbles about awkwardly and clumsily, stopping abruptly every so often to gracelessly remove an article of clothing. You decide to find $his lack of skill amusing, and allow $him to continue practicing while you resume your work.
 			<</if>>
 		<<case "humiliation">>
-			<<if ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 99)>> Your slave is a masterful entertainer, able to keep anyone entertained for even the most lengthy of strip teases. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass.  $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he knows how to fulfill $his purpose. You keep trying to get back to work, but your slave's movements are so enthralling that you cannot seem to break free. 
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 60)>> Your slave is a skilled entertainer, well above average. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass.  $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. 
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 40)>> Your slave is a practiced entertainer, not masterful but still able to give an arousing performance. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass.  $He is able to use $his hips and ass to draw your attention before suddenly moving up to $his chest. $He isn't able to fully keep your attention, but whenever $he sees that you are becoming distracted $he ups the ante to draw you back in. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. $He does her best to direct your arousal onto $his body.
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 20)>>Your slave works hard to keep with the rhythm while removing articles of clothing. 
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 10)>> Your slave is not a skilled performer, and $his movements are uninspired. $His movements are still attractive, but you find yourself becoming distracted, $his dance not enough to keep your attention or draw you back. You take out your tablet and make a note that this slave will need to practice $his seduction if $he is to be allowed to dance for you again. Even without skill you still can admire $his body. You imagine how much more attractive $his tits and ass could be if $he knew how to move them right.
-			<<else>> Your slave has no skills to speak of, and isn't able to keep even the simplest of rhythms. $He fumbles about awkwardly and clumsily, stopping abruptly every so often to gracelessly remove an article of clothing. You decide to find $his lack of skill amusing, and allow $him to continue practicing while you resume your work. 
+			<<if ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 99)>>
+				Your slave is a masterful entertainer, able to keep anyone entertained for even the most lengthy of strip teases. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he knows how to fulfill $his purpose. You keep trying to get back to work, but your slave's movements are so enthralling that you cannot seem to break free.
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 60)>>
+				Your slave is a skilled entertainer, well above average. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose.
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 40)>>
+				Your slave is a practiced entertainer, not masterful but still able to give an arousing performance. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He is able to use $his hips and ass to draw your attention before suddenly moving up to $his chest. $He isn't able to fully keep your attention, but whenever $he sees that you are becoming distracted $he ups the ante to draw you back in. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. $He does $his best to direct your arousal onto $his body.
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 20)>>
+				Your slave works hard to keep with the rhythm while removing articles of clothing.
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 10)>>
+				Your slave is not a skilled performer, and $his movements are uninspired. $His movements are still attractive, but you find yourself becoming distracted, $his dance not enough to keep your attention or draw you back. You take out your tablet and make a note that this slave will need to practice $his seduction if $he is to be allowed to dance for you again. Even without skill you still can admire $his body. You imagine how much more attractive $his tits and ass could be if $he knew how to move them right.
+			<<else>>
+				Your slave has no skills to speak of, and isn't able to keep even the simplest of rhythms. $He fumbles about awkwardly and clumsily, stopping abruptly every so often to gracelessly remove an article of clothing. You decide to find $his lack of skill amusing, and allow $him to continue practicing while you resume your work.
 			<</if>>
 		<<case "buttslut">>
-			<<if ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 99)>> Your slave is a masterful entertainer, able to keep anyone entertained for even the most lengthy of strip teases. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass.  $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he knows how to fulfill $his purpose. You keep trying to get back to work, but your slave's movements are so enthralling that you cannot seem to break free. 
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 60)>> Your slave is a skilled entertainer, well above average. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass.  $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. 
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 40)>> Your slave is a practiced entertainer, not masterful but still able to give an arousing performance. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass.  $He is able to use $his hips and ass to draw your attention before suddenly moving up to $his chest. $He isn't able to fully keep your attention, but whenever $he sees that you are becoming distracted $he ups the ante to draw you back in. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. $He does her best to direct your arousal onto $his body.
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 20)>>Your slave works hard to keep with the rhythm while removing articles of clothing. 
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 10)>> Your slave is not a skilled performer, and $his movements are uninspired. $His movements are still attractive, but you find yourself becoming distracted, $his dance not enough to keep your attention or draw you back. You take out your tablet and make a note that this slave will need to practice $his seduction if $he is to be allowed to dance for you again. Even without skill you still can admire $his body. You imagine how much more attractive $his tits and ass could be if $he knew how to move them right.
-			<<else>> Your slave has no skills to speak of, and isn't able to keep even the simplest of rhythms. $He fumbles about awkwardly and clumsily, stopping abruptly every so often to gracelessly remove an article of clothing. You decide to find $his lack of skill amusing, and allow $him to continue practicing while you resume your work. 
+			<<if ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 99)>>
+				Your slave is a masterful entertainer, able to keep anyone entertained for even the most lengthy of strip teases. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he knows how to fulfill $his purpose. You keep trying to get back to work, but your slave's movements are so enthralling that you cannot seem to break free.
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 60)>>
+				Your slave is a skilled entertainer, well above average. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose.
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 40)>>
+				Your slave is a practiced entertainer, not masterful but still able to give an arousing performance. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He is able to use $his hips and ass to draw your attention before suddenly moving up to $his chest. $He isn't able to fully keep your attention, but whenever $he sees that you are becoming distracted $he ups the ante to draw you back in. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. $He does $his best to direct your arousal onto $his body.
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 20)>>
+				Your slave works hard to keep with the rhythm while removing articles of clothing.
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 10)>>
+				Your slave is not a skilled performer, and $his movements are uninspired. $His movements are still attractive, but you find yourself becoming distracted, $his dance not enough to keep your attention or draw you back. You take out your tablet and make a note that this slave will need to practice $his seduction if $he is to be allowed to dance for you again. Even without skill you still can admire $his body. You imagine how much more attractive $his tits and ass could be if $he knew how to move them right.
+			<<else>>
+				Your slave has no skills to speak of, and isn't able to keep even the simplest of rhythms. $He fumbles about awkwardly and clumsily, stopping abruptly every so often to gracelessly remove an article of clothing. You decide to find $his lack of skill amusing, and allow $him to continue practicing while you resume your work.
 			<</if>>
 		<<case "pregnancy">>
-			<<if ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 99)>> Your slave is a masterful entertainer, able to keep anyone entertained for even the most lengthy of strip teases. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass.  $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he knows how to fulfill $his purpose. You keep trying to get back to work, but your slave's movements are so enthralling that you cannot seem to break free. 
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 60)>> Your slave is a skilled entertainer, well above average. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass.  $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. 
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 40)>> Your slave is a practiced entertainer, not masterful but still able to give an arousing performance. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass.  $He is able to use $his hips and ass to draw your attention before suddenly moving up to $his chest. $He isn't able to fully keep your attention, but whenever $he sees that you are becoming distracted $he ups the ante to draw you back in. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. $He does her best to direct your arousal onto $his body.
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 20)>>Your slave works hard to keep with the rhythm while removing articles of clothing. 
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 10)>> Your slave is not a skilled performer, and $his movements are uninspired. $His movements are still attractive, but you find yourself becoming distracted, $his dance not enough to keep your attention or draw you back. You take out your tablet and make a note that this slave will need to practice $his seduction if $he is to be allowed to dance for you again. Even without skill you still can admire $his body. You imagine how much more attractive $his tits and ass could be if $he knew how to move them right.
-			<<else>> Your slave has no skills to speak of, and isn't able to keep even the simplest of rhythms. $He fumbles about awkwardly and clumsily, stopping abruptly every so often to gracelessly remove an article of clothing. You decide to find $his lack of skill amusing, and allow $him to continue practicing while you resume your work. 
+			<<if ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 99)>>
+				Your slave is a masterful entertainer, able to keep anyone entertained for even the most lengthy of strip teases. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he knows how to fulfill $his purpose. You keep trying to get back to work, but your slave's movements are so enthralling that you cannot seem to break free.
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 60)>>
+				Your slave is a skilled entertainer, well above average. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose.
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 40)>>
+				Your slave is a practiced entertainer, not masterful but still able to give an arousing performance. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He is able to use $his hips and ass to draw your attention before suddenly moving up to $his chest. $He isn't able to fully keep your attention, but whenever $he sees that you are becoming distracted $he ups the ante to draw you back in. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. $He does $his best to direct your arousal onto $his body.
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 20)>>
+				Your slave works hard to keep with the rhythm while removing articles of clothing.
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 10)>>
+				Your slave is not a skilled performer, and $his movements are uninspired. $His movements are still attractive, but you find yourself becoming distracted, $his dance not enough to keep your attention or draw you back. You take out your tablet and make a note that this slave will need to practice $his seduction if $he is to be allowed to dance for you again. Even without skill you still can admire $his body. You imagine how much more attractive $his tits and ass could be if $he knew how to move them right.
+			<<else>>
+				Your slave has no skills to speak of, and isn't able to keep even the simplest of rhythms. $He fumbles about awkwardly and clumsily, stopping abruptly every so often to gracelessly remove an article of clothing. You decide to find $his lack of skill amusing, and allow $him to continue practicing while you resume your work.
 			<</if>>
 		<<case "boobs">>
-			<<if ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 99)>> Your slave is a masterful entertainer, able to keep anyone entertained for even the most lengthy of strip teases. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass.  $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he knows how to fulfill $his purpose. You keep trying to get back to work, but your slave's movements are so enthralling that you cannot seem to break free. 
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 60)>> Your slave is a skilled entertainer, well above average. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass.  $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. 
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 40)>> Your slave is a practiced entertainer, not masterful but still able to give an arousing performance. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass.  $He is able to use $his hips and ass to draw your attention before suddenly moving up to $his chest. $He isn't able to fully keep your attention, but whenever $he sees that you are becoming distracted $he ups the ante to draw you back in. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. $He does her best to direct your arousal onto $his body.
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 20)>>Your slave works hard to keep with the rhythm while removing articles of clothing. 
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 10)>> Your slave is not a skilled performer, and $his movements are uninspired. $His movements are still attractive, but you find yourself becoming distracted, $his dance not enough to keep your attention or draw you back. You take out your tablet and make a note that this slave will need to practice $his seduction if $he is to be allowed to dance for you again. Even without skill you still can admire $his body. You imagine how much more attractive $his tits and ass could be if $he knew how to move them right.
-			<<else>> Your slave has no skills to speak of, and isn't able to keep even the simplest of rhythms. $He fumbles about awkwardly and clumsily, stopping abruptly every so often to gracelessly remove an article of clothing. You decide to find $his lack of skill amusing, and allow $him to continue practicing while you resume your work. 
+			<<if ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 99)>>
+				Your slave is a masterful entertainer, able to keep anyone entertained for even the most lengthy of strip teases. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he knows how to fulfill $his purpose. You keep trying to get back to work, but your slave's movements are so enthralling that you cannot seem to break free.
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 60)>>
+				Your slave is a skilled entertainer, well above average. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose.
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 40)>>
+				Your slave is a practiced entertainer, not masterful but still able to give an arousing performance. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He is able to use $his hips and ass to draw your attention before suddenly moving up to $his chest. $He isn't able to fully keep your attention, but whenever $he sees that you are becoming distracted $he ups the ante to draw you back in. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. $He does $his best to direct your arousal onto $his body.
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 20)>>
+				Your slave works hard to keep with the rhythm while removing articles of clothing.
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 10)>>
+				Your slave is not a skilled performer, and $his movements are uninspired. $His movements are still attractive, but you find yourself becoming distracted, $his dance not enough to keep your attention or draw you back. You take out your tablet and make a note that this slave will need to practice $his seduction if $he is to be allowed to dance for you again. Even without skill you still can admire $his body. You imagine how much more attractive $his tits and ass could be if $he knew how to move them right.
+			<<else>>
+				Your slave has no skills to speak of, and isn't able to keep even the simplest of rhythms. $He fumbles about awkwardly and clumsily, stopping abruptly every so often to gracelessly remove an article of clothing. You decide to find $his lack of skill amusing, and allow $him to continue practicing while you resume your work.
+			<</if>>
+			<<if ($activeSlave.boobs >= 10000)>>
+				weighty mammaries
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobs >= 2000)>>
+				cumbersome udders
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobs >= 1000)>>
+				massive slave tits
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobs >= 800)>>
+				forward-thrust breasts
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobs >= 500)>>
+				meager chest
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobs <= 400)>>
+				pathetic slave boobs
+			<<else>> tits
 			<</if>>
-			<<if ($activeSlave.boobs >= 10000)>> weighty mammaries 
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobs >= 2000)>> cumbersome udders 
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobs >= 1000)>> massive slave tits 
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobs >= 800)>> forward-thrust breasts 
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobs >= 500)>> meager chest 
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.boobs <= 400)>> pathetic slave boobs 
-			<<else>> tits 
-			<</if>> 
 			across your body as $he goes down.
 		<<default>>
-			<<if ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 99)>> Your slave is a masterful entertainer, able to keep anyone entertained for even the most lengthy of strip teases. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass.  $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he knows how to fulfill $his purpose. You keep trying to get back to work, but your slave's movements are so enthralling that you cannot seem to break free. 
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 80)>> Your slave is a skilled entertainer, well above average. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass.  $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. 
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 60)>> Your slave is a practiced entertainer, not masterful but still able to give an arousing performance. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass.  $He is able to use $his hips and ass to draw your attention before suddenly moving up to $his chest. $He isn't able to fully keep your attention, but whenever $he sees that you are becoming distracted $he ups the ante to draw you back in. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. $He does her best to direct your arousal onto $his body.
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 40)>>Your slave works hard to keep with the rhythm while removing articles of clothing. 
-			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 20)>> Your slave is not a skilled performer, and $his movements are uninspired. $His movements are still attractive, but you find yourself becoming distracted, $his dance not enough to keep your attention or draw you back. You take out your tablet and make a note that this slave will need to practice $his seduction if $he is to be allowed to dance for you again. Even without skill you still can admire $his body. You imagine how much more attractive $his tits and ass could be if $he knew how to move them right.
-			<<else>> Your slave has no skills to speak of, and isn't able to keep even the simplest of rhythms. $He fumbles about awkwardly and clumsily, stopping abruptly every so often to gracelessly remove an article of clothing. You decide to find $his lack of skill amusing, and allow $him to continue practicing while you resume your work. 
+			<<if ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 99)>>
+				Your slave is a masterful entertainer, able to keep anyone entertained for even the most lengthy of strip teases. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he knows how to fulfill $his purpose. You keep trying to get back to work, but your slave's movements are so enthralling that you cannot seem to break free.
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 80)>>
+				Your slave is a skilled entertainer, well above average. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose.
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 60)>>
+				Your slave is a practiced entertainer, not masterful but still able to give an arousing performance. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He is able to use $his hips and ass to draw your attention before suddenly moving up to $his chest. $He isn't able to fully keep your attention, but whenever $he sees that you are becoming distracted $he ups the ante to draw you back in. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. $He does $his best to direct your arousal onto $his body.
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 40)>>
+				Your slave works hard to keep with the rhythm while removing articles of clothing.
+			<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 20)>>
+				Your slave is not a skilled performer, and $his movements are uninspired. $His movements are still attractive, but you find yourself becoming distracted, $his dance not enough to keep your attention or draw you back. You take out your tablet and make a note that this slave will need to practice $his seduction if $he is to be allowed to dance for you again. Even without skill you still can admire $his body. You imagine how much more attractive $his tits and ass could be if $he knew how to move them right.
+			<<else>>
+				Your slave has no skills to speak of, and isn't able to keep even the simplest of rhythms. $He fumbles about awkwardly and clumsily, stopping abruptly every so often to gracelessly remove an article of clothing. You decide to find $his lack of skill amusing, and allow $him to continue practicing while you resume your work.
 			<</if>>
 		<</switch>>
-	<<else>> 
-		<<if ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 99)>> Your slave is a masterful entertainer, able to keep anyone entertained for even the most lengthy of strip teases. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass.  $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he knows how to fulfill $his purpose. You keep trying to get back to work, but your slave's movements are so enthralling that you cannot seem to break free. 
-		<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 60)>> Your slave is a skilled entertainer, well above average. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass.  $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. 
-		<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 40)>> Your slave is a practiced entertainer, not masterful but still able to give an arousing performance. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling her ass.  $He is able to use $his hips and ass to draw your attention before suddenly moving up to $his chest. $He isn't able to fully keep your attention, but whenever $he sees that you are becoming distracted $he ups the ante to draw you back in. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. $He does her best to direct your arousal onto $his body.
-		<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 20)>>Your slave works hard to keep with the rhythm while removing articles of clothing. 
-		<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 10)>> Your slave is not a skilled performer, and $his movements are uninspired. $His movements are still attractive, but you find yourself becoming distracted, $his dance not enough to keep your attention or draw you back. You take out your tablet and make a note that this slave will need to practice $his seduction if $he is to be allowed to dance for you again. Even without skill you still can admire $his body. You imagine how much more attractive $his tits and ass could be if $he knew how to move them right.
-		<<else>> Your slave has no skills to speak of, and isn't able to keep even the simplest of rhythms. $He fumbles about awkwardly and clumsily, stopping abruptly every so often to gracelessly remove an article of clothing. You decide to find $his lack of skill amusing, and allow $him to continue practicing while you resume your work. 
+	<<else>>
+		<<if ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 99)>>
+			Your slave is a masterful entertainer, able to keep anyone entertained for even the most lengthy of strip teases. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he knows how to fulfill $his purpose. You keep trying to get back to work, but your slave's movements are so enthralling that you cannot seem to break free.
+		<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 60)>>
+			Your slave is a skilled entertainer, well above average. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He knows how to use $his hips and ass to draw and keep your attention while slowly moving up to $his chest. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose.
+		<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 40)>>
+			Your slave is a practiced entertainer, not masterful but still able to give an arousing performance. $He begins by writhing $his hips and rolling $his ass. $He is able to use $his hips and ass to draw your attention before suddenly moving up to $his chest. $He isn't able to fully keep your attention, but whenever $he sees that you are becoming distracted $he ups the ante to draw you back in. $His body is nothing more than an object for your desire, and $he is learning to fulfill $his purpose. $He does $his best to direct your arousal onto $his body.
+		<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 20)>>
+			Your slave works hard to keep with the rhythm while removing articles of clothing.
+		<<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 10)>>
+			Your slave is not a skilled performer, and $his movements are uninspired. $His movements are still attractive, but you find yourself becoming distracted, $his dance not enough to keep your attention or draw you back. You take out your tablet and make a note that this slave will need to practice $his seduction if $he is to be allowed to dance for you again. Even without skill you still can admire $his body. You imagine how much more attractive $his tits and ass could be if $he knew how to move them right.
+		<<else>>
+			Your slave has no skills to speak of, and isn't able to keep even the simplest of rhythms. $He fumbles about awkwardly and clumsily, stopping abruptly every so often to gracelessly remove an article of clothing. You decide to find $his lack of skill amusing, and allow $him to continue practicing while you resume your work.
 		<</if>>
 	<</if>>
 
 <</if>>
 
-/* The following is formatting for later inclusion */ 
+/* The following is formatting for later inclusion */
 /*
 <<switch $activeSlave.clothes>>
 			<<case "a Fuckdoll suit">>
@@ -1436,33 +1576,43 @@ But it's not over yet. You tell your slave that it's time to incorporate some st
 End clothing-specific stripping */
 
 Once the last piece of clothing has hit the floor you let your little slut dance naked a little while longer while you finish your last report. Once you have gotten enough of $his dancing you snap your fingers to call your slave over.
-<<if ($activeSlave.devotion < 100)>> Your slave hurries to your side and drops to $his knees. $He gladly kneels at your feet, looking up at $his Master in adoration.
-<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion < 50)>> Your slave hurries to your side and drops to $his knees. $He obediently kneels at your feet. 
-<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion < 20)>> Your slave walks slowly to your desk and kneels. $He looks up at you, hoping that $his life gets easier.
-<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion < -20)>> 
+<<if ($activeSlave.devotion < 100)>>
+	Your slave hurries to your side and drops to $his knees. $He gladly kneels at your feet, looking up at $his Master in adoration.
+<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion < 50)>>
+	Your slave hurries to your side and drops to $his knees. $He obediently kneels at your feet.
+<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion < 20)>>
+	Your slave walks slowly to your desk and kneels. $He looks up at you, hoping that $his life gets easier.
+<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion < -20)>>
 	<<if ($activeSlave.fear < -50)>>
-	$He hurries frantically to your side, and drops quivering to the floor at your feet hoping $he was quick enough to avoid 
+		$He hurries frantically to your side, and drops quivering to the floor at your feet hoping $he was quick enough to avoid
 		<<switch $activeSlave.standardPunishment>>
-		<<case "confinement">> confinement.
-		<<case "whipping">> whipping
+		<<case "confinement">>
+			confinement.
+		<<case "whipping">>
+			whipping
 		<<case "chastity">>
 			<<if ($activeSlave.energy > 60)>>
-			orgasm denial
-			<<else>> punishment.
+				orgasm denial
+			<<else>>
+				punishment.
 			<</if>>
-		<<case "situational">> 
+		<<case "situational">>
 			<<switch $activeSlave.collar>>
-			<<case "shock punishment">> shock
+			<<case "shock punishment">>
+				shock
 			<</switch>>
-		punishment.
+			punishment.
 		<</switch>>
-	<<else>> $He looks at you angrily, refusing to obey. You are forced to get up from your chair and retrieve $his leash, dragging $him back by $his
-		<<if $activeSlave.nosePiercing == 2>> nose ring
-		<<elseif $activeSlave.nipplesPiercing == 2>> nipples
+	<<else>>
+		$He looks at you angrily, refusing to obey. You are forced to get up from your chair and retrieve $his leash, dragging $him back by $his
+		<<if $activeSlave.nosePiercing == 2>>
+			nose ring.
+		<<elseif $activeSlave.nipplesPiercing == 2>>
+			nipples.
 		<<else>>
-		collar
+			collar.
 		<</if>>
-. Once seated, you chain $him to your desk and force $him to $his knees. You may have to start punishing $him more severely. 
+		Once seated, you chain $him to your desk and force $him to $his knees. You may have to start punishing $him more severely.
 	<</if>>
 <<else>>
 Your slave hurries to your side and drops to $his knees. $He gladly kneels at your feet, looking up at $his Master in adoration.
diff --git a/src/npc/startingGirls/startingGirls.tw b/src/npc/startingGirls/startingGirls.tw
index c4aa1b4ea135dd68cc40a7294d313374e0838457..2d42dbcab3a86379e6d7665794dadd41c30d4861 100644
--- a/src/npc/startingGirls/startingGirls.tw
+++ b/src/npc/startingGirls/startingGirls.tw
@@ -16,9 +16,9 @@
 <<else>>
 	You have <<print cashFormat($cash)>> remaining and have
 	<<if $slaves.length == 1>>
-	one slave already committed.
+		one slave already committed.
 	<<elseif $slaves.length > 1>>
-	$slaves.length slaves already committed.
+		$slaves.length slaves already committed.
 	<</if>>
 <</if>>
 
@@ -396,25 +396,25 @@ __You are customizing this slave:__
 <br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;''<<link "Refresh">><<goto "Starting Girls">><</link>>''
 
 | <<link "Randomize career">>
-<<set $activeSlave.career = randomCareer($activeSlave)>>
-<<SaleDescription>>
-<<StartingGirlsCost>>
+	<<set $activeSlave.career = randomCareer($activeSlave)>>
+	<<SaleDescription>>
+	<<StartingGirlsCost>>
 <</link>>
 
 | <<link "Randomize name">>
-<<run nationalityToName($activeSlave)>>
-<<set $activeSlave.slaveName = $activeSlave.birthName>>
-<<SaleDescription>>
-<<StartingGirlsCost>>
+	<<run nationalityToName($activeSlave)>>
+	<<set $activeSlave.slaveName = $activeSlave.birthName>>
+	<<SaleDescription>>
+	<<StartingGirlsCost>>
 <</link>>
 
 | [[More customization options]]
 
 | <<link "Start over with a random slave" "Starting Girls">>
-<<set $fixedNationality = hashChoice($nationalities)>>
-<<StartingGirlsWorkaround>>
-<<SaleDescription>>
-<<StartingGirlsCost>>
+	<<set $fixedNationality = hashChoice($nationalities)>>
+	<<StartingGirlsWorkaround>>
+	<<SaleDescription>>
+	<<StartingGirlsCost>>
 <</link>>
 <hr>
 
diff --git a/src/pregmod/fDick.tw b/src/pregmod/fDick.tw
index bfa3d6e8e69163e70d37c3abca359565481f5444..783d68a267ea9172b35ab8335c58005e9a026d96 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/fDick.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/fDick.tw
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.devotion >= -20>>
 			$He thought $he would fucking another slave, not $his <<= WrittenMaster()>>; $he has mixed feelings about this, but $his body can't wait to plunge your depths.
 		<<else>>
-			<<if $activeSlave.trust > 20>>
+			<<if $activeSlave.trust < -20>>
 				$He was already horrified at the thought of being ordered to lie down and let another slave rape $his dick, but when $he realized it would be you instead, that horror turned to a mix of confusion and sheer terror.
 			<<else>>
 				$His dick springs to life at the prospect of plunging into your depths; this may be $his chance to one up you for a change.
diff --git a/src/pregmod/fSlaveSlaveDick.tw b/src/pregmod/fSlaveSlaveDick.tw
index d98d633971c019d5b485bc04b12a0d905d29c655..3f19eebf0a042391d783fc234133595361aceeda 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/fSlaveSlaveDick.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/fSlaveSlaveDick.tw
@@ -32,20 +32,20 @@ __Select an eligible slave:__
 			<</if>>
 			/* sibling test */
 			<<switch areSisters($activeSlave, $slaves[_i])>>
-				<<case 1>>
-					@@.lightgreen;Twin.@@
-				<<case 2>>
-					<<if ($slaves[_i].genes == "XX")>>
-						@@.lightgreen;Sister@@
-					<<else>>
-						@@.lightgreen;Brother@@
-					<</if>>
-				<<case 3>>
-					<<if ($slaves[_i].genes == "XX")>>
-						@@.lightgreen;Half-Sister@@
-					<<else>>
-						@@.lightgreen;Half-Brother@@
-					<</if>>
+			<<case 1>>
+				@@.lightgreen;Twin.@@
+			<<case 2>>
+				<<if ($slaves[_i].genes == "XX")>>
+					@@.lightgreen;Sister@@
+				<<else>>
+					@@.lightgreen;Brother@@
+				<</if>>
+			<<case 3>>
+				<<if ($slaves[_i].genes == "XX")>>
+					@@.lightgreen;Half-Sister@@
+				<<else>>
+					@@.lightgreen;Half-Brother@@
+				<</if>>
 			<</switch>>
 		<</if>> /* closes extended family mode */
 		<<set _capable = 1>>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/managePersonalAffairs.tw b/src/pregmod/managePersonalAffairs.tw
index 2376de6fe693273e969bacf35c8351aff40628ed..8f80d664a404ae943e927bce31c2c4becae8e02e 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/managePersonalAffairs.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/managePersonalAffairs.tw
@@ -615,7 +615,7 @@ __Other Personal Business__
 
 <<if $propOutcome == 1 && $arcologies[0].FSRestart != "unset">>
 	<br><br>
-__Elite Breeder Qualifications__
+	__Elite Breeder Qualifications__
 	<<if ndef $activeStandard>>
 		<<InitStandards>>
 	<<else>>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/pInsemination.tw b/src/pregmod/pInsemination.tw
index ff07cd6037044b94b57bb74a0aeaa923e7335359..bd5b624e264649de2a6ffc6c3523fa7d733f20c4 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/pInsemination.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/pInsemination.tw
@@ -36,6 +36,7 @@
 		<<set $movesCount++>>
 	<<else>>
 		You arrive at the apartment of the gentleman, only to find him waiting to take you on another date. After a pleasant evening, and a night of intense sex, you find it hard to part with him come morning, but an arcology owner's job comes first and you have slaves waiting for your attention. He walks you back to your penthouse, deeply kissing you and making your slaves deeply envious once it comes to goodbyes. A girl could get used to a life like this, or perhaps he could even be roped into your life. Though it would take more than getting knocked up to do that, you think to yourself as you rub your fertilized belly.
+		<<set $movesCount++>>
 	<</if>>
 
 <<case "quick">>
@@ -44,6 +45,7 @@
 		<<set $quickCount++>>
 	<<else>>
 		You arrive at the apartment of the quick-shooting fuel baron and once more he quickly pulls you in. He barely manages to undress you before he is on top of you humping away. Just as he is about to cum, you wrap your legs around him; anchoring yourself to him. You remind him that his job is to knock you up, and a quick in and out isn't good enough. Buying it, he keeps thrusting, letting you reach your own orgasm. He still hurried you out the door in the end, but you got some pleasure out of him this time.
+		<<set $quickCount++>>
 	<</if>>
 
 <<case "crazy">>
@@ -55,6 +57,7 @@
 		<<set $crazyCount++>>
 	<<else>>
 		Once again you arrive at the crazy scientist's door. Letting yourself in, you immediately notice the table is set and waiting for you to strap in. He doesn't even acknowledge your existence, but you know what he expects you to do. Once you have hopped on and gotten comfortable, you gasp as the injector pushes into you. You came prepared this time, wearing a skirt, no underwear, and a shirt that will allow your middle room to stretch. You tease your breasts and <<if $PC.dick == 1>>erection<<else>>erect clit<</if>> as the machine pumps cum into you. Only once you've climaxed, and you look like you're nearly full-term, does the device stop pumping into you and you are allowed to right yourself. Slowly you waddle back to your penthouse, indifferent to who may see you; you can't wait to soak in a bath, drain, and <<if $PC.dick == 1>>jack-off<<else>>rub out an orgasm or two<</if>>.
+		<<set $crazyCount++>>
 	<</if>>
 
 <<case "virgin">>
@@ -66,6 +69,7 @@
 		<<set $virginCount++>>
 	<<else>>
 		You arrive at the apartment of the boy whose virginity you took. He happily hugs you before pulling you inside and into his bedroom. He wastes no time in diving deep into your needy cunt, even going as far as experimenting with new positions as he enjoys his lover's body. Once both of you are exhausted, you cuddle up for you post sex snooze. When it's time to leave, he sees you to the door. "You don't have to go..." he pleads, but you tell him running the arcology comes first.
+		<<set $virginCount++>>
 	<</if>>
 
 <<case "futa">>
@@ -77,6 +81,7 @@
 		<<set $futaCount++>>
 	<<else>>
 		You arrive once more at the apartment of the assertive girl with both sets of functional genitals. She calls for you to enter shortly after knocking, and beckons you into the bedroom. You strip as you walk, eager to get a taste of her huge load again. You are not disappointed; her balls are utterly massive, easily the size of her.<<if $PC.balls > 2>> "Your balls! Huge loads are great, aren't they? We are going to make such a wonderful mess!"<<else>>"Like 'em? Slide on up here and let's see just how big a mess we can make!"<</if>> You try your best to straddle her nuts, but shortly after getting seated, end up falling forward from her first thrust and locking lips with the lusty futa. She eagerly bucks into you as she deeply kisses you; and blows her load early. The sheer force of her orgasm floods your womb with fertile seed and forces her cock out, where it stays, spraying cum upwards like a fountain, until her room is soaked with cum. She stares at you, ashamed at herself. She finishes you off with some oral before inviting you to relax and enjoy some fine wine as an apology for cumming early. You give her balls a pat as you make your leave. A mistake, you soon realize, as she promptly orgasms and showers your back with ejaculate. Guess you'll be showering before you leave.
+		<<set $futaCount++>>
 	<</if>>
 
 <<case "preggo">>
@@ -88,6 +93,7 @@
 		<<set $preggoCount++>>
 	<<else>>
 		You arrive once more at the apartment of the heavily pregnant futa, though this time she takes a while to reach the door by the sound of it. When it opens, you are greeted by her usual smile and an octuplets stuffed belly. She grabs your hand and pulls it to her taut middle. "Feel them kick! There's so many of them, it feels amazing!" You wrap your arms around your heavy lover for the evening and help her back to her bed, savoring the weight of her pregnancy. She stops you once she takes a seat and asks "My offer still stands, cutie. I assure you it feels amazing to be so full of babies." You shake your head "no"; being that pregnant would definitely impede your ability to run the arcology and even enjoy your slaves properly. She lies back, before shifting her weight to her side out of discomfort. Her belly is really big, and hangs low enough that reaching her needy cock is quite the challenge; you take a moment to think of a good position to receive her. You take her dick, and gently sliding yourself between her legs, fit it into your pussy. The two of you buck against each other as best you can; a struggle, seeing as you are bearing the weight of her children right now. You have no choice but to wrap your arms around the eagerly kicking mass<<if $PC.dick == 1>>, trapping your dick between it and yourself,<</if>> as you near your climax. You feel your nethers clamp down as she cums, hard, deep into your pussy. Her children shift under your arms as her water breaks onto you. You quickly untangle yourself and help her to her feet; you can't help but enjoy the feeling of her close contractions under your hand. She points you to her bathroom; "Water birth," she pants, struggling to not give birth where she stands. The tub is already prepared for her, so you help her into it. She refuses to let go of your hand, pleading "Join me?" You take her up on the offer and slide in behind her. You massage her taxed stomach as she struggles to bring her children into the world. A loud moan escapes her lips as the first of her children slips from her pussy and into your waiting hands. Setting her aside, you prepare for the next. After several hours, and a mutual shower, you and her recover together with her eight children; as thanks, you have one milky nipple all to yourself. When it's time to leave, she blows you a kiss and thanks you sincerely for helping her through this.
+		<<set $preggoCount++>>
 	<</if>>
 
 <</switch>>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/reMaleCitizenHookup.tw b/src/pregmod/reMaleCitizenHookup.tw
index e44c6ac301147e2385b9604dabd98246daf6a71b..b7855fa4b9976e6720015846fcf56fd7c23fd47e 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/reMaleCitizenHookup.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/reMaleCitizenHookup.tw
@@ -321,98 +321,98 @@ He's clearly attracted to you; even the most consummate actor would have difficu
 	<</replace>>
 <</link>>
 <<if _FS != "none">>
-<br><<link "Emphasize his societal style with exhibitionism">>
-	<<replace "#result">>
-	You turn to face him straight on, and something about the look in your eye fills him with mixed apprehension and anticipation. You agree with his banter and praise him for being so forward-thinking, before transitioning to more direct praise of his style and then his body. You're speaking in a tone that cuts through the room, and by the time you kiss your willing conquest, there's not a person in the room who isn't paying attention. They all understand the message: this gathering is turning into something else, now. Those few who aren't willing to fuck in public withdraw, and everyone who didn't come with a sexual partner sends urgent messages to have appropriate slaves brought from their apartments. You make out with him for a while, letting everyone make arrangements, and then pull his clothes off, making sure his
-	<<switch _FS>>
-	<<case "Subjugationist" "Supremacist">>
-		superior body
-		<<if _FS == "Supremacist">>
-			<<set $arcologies[0].FSSupremacist += 5>>
-		<<else>>
-			<<set $arcologies[0].FSSubjugationist += 5>>
-		<</if>>
-	<<case "Gender Radicalist">>
-		tits and stiff dick
-		<<set $arcologies[0].FSGenderRadicalist += 5>>
-	<<case "Gender Fundamentalist">>
-		dominant masculinity
-		<<set $arcologies[0].FSGenderFundamentalist += 5>>
-	<<case "Repopulationist">>
-		urge to father a daughter
-		<<set $arcologies[0].FSRepopulationFocus += 5>>
-	<<case "Eugenics">>
-		perfect body
-		<<set $arcologies[0].FSRestart += 5>>
-	<<case "Paternalist">>
-		appealing body
-		<<set $arcologies[0].FSPaternalist += 5>>
-	<<case "Degradationist">>
-		dominant form
-		<<set $arcologies[0].FSDegradationist += 5>>
-	<<case "Body Purist">>
-		natural body
-		<<set $arcologies[0].FSBodyPurist += 5>>
-	<<case "Transformation Fetishist">>
-		extended dick
-		<<set $arcologies[0].FSTransformationFetishist += 5>>
-	<<case "Youth Preferentialist">>
-		<<if $minimumSlaveAge < 13>>
-			boyish
-		<<elseif $minimumSlaveAge < 18>>
-			teenage
-		<<else>>
-			young
-		<</if>>
-		body
-		<<set $arcologies[0].FSYouthPreferentialist += 5>>
-	<<case "Maturity Preferentialist">>
-		mature body
-		<<set $arcologies[0].FSMaturityPreferentialist += 5>>
-	<<case "Slimness Enthusiast">>
-		slender body
-		<<set $arcologies[0].FSSlimnessEnthusiast += 5>>
-	<<case "Asset Expansionist">>
-		huge genitals
-		<<set $arcologies[0].FSAssetExpansionist += 5>>
-	<<case "Pastoralist">>
-		milk-fed, chubby body
-		<<set $arcologies[0].FSPastoralist += 5>>
-	<<case "Physical Idealist">>
-		ripped body
-		<<set $arcologies[0].FSPhysicalIdealist += 5>>
-	<<case "Hedonistic">>
-		plump body
-		<<set $arcologies[0].FSHedonisticDecadence += 5>>
-	<<case "Chattel Religionist">>
-		divine sexuality
-		<<set $arcologies[0].FSChattelReligionist += 5>>
-	<<case "Roman Revivalist">>
-		muscular form
-		<<set $arcologies[0].FSRomanRevivalist += 5>>
-	<<case "Aztec Revivalist">>
-		well-built form
-		<<set $arcologies[0].FSAztecRevivalist += 5>>
-	<<case "Egyptian Revivalist">>
-		beautiful tanned body
-		<<set $arcologies[0].FSEgyptianRevivalist += 5>>
-	<<case "Arabian Revivalist" "Chinese Revivalist" "Edo Revivalist">>
-		graceful form
-		<<if _FS == "Edo Revivalist">>
-			<<set $arcologies[0].FSEdoRevivalist += 5>>
-		<<elseif _FS == "Arabian Revivalist">>
-			<<set $arcologies[0].FSArabianRevivalist += 5>>
-		<<else>>
-			<<set $arcologies[0].FSChineseRevivalist += 5>>
+	<br><<link "Emphasize his societal style with exhibitionism">>
+		<<replace "#result">>
+		You turn to face him straight on, and something about the look in your eye fills him with mixed apprehension and anticipation. You agree with his banter and praise him for being so forward-thinking, before transitioning to more direct praise of his style and then his body. You're speaking in a tone that cuts through the room, and by the time you kiss your willing conquest, there's not a person in the room who isn't paying attention. They all understand the message: this gathering is turning into something else, now. Those few who aren't willing to fuck in public withdraw, and everyone who didn't come with a sexual partner sends urgent messages to have appropriate slaves brought from their apartments. You make out with him for a while, letting everyone make arrangements, and then pull his clothes off, making sure his
+		<<switch _FS>>
+		<<case "Subjugationist" "Supremacist">>
+			superior body
+			<<if _FS == "Supremacist">>
+				<<set $arcologies[0].FSSupremacist += 5>>
+			<<else>>
+				<<set $arcologies[0].FSSubjugationist += 5>>
+			<</if>>
+		<<case "Gender Radicalist">>
+			tits and stiff dick
+			<<set $arcologies[0].FSGenderRadicalist += 5>>
+		<<case "Gender Fundamentalist">>
+			dominant masculinity
+			<<set $arcologies[0].FSGenderFundamentalist += 5>>
+		<<case "Repopulationist">>
+			urge to father a daughter
+			<<set $arcologies[0].FSRepopulationFocus += 5>>
+		<<case "Eugenics">>
+			perfect body
+			<<set $arcologies[0].FSRestart += 5>>
+		<<case "Paternalist">>
+			appealing body
+			<<set $arcologies[0].FSPaternalist += 5>>
+		<<case "Degradationist">>
+			dominant form
+			<<set $arcologies[0].FSDegradationist += 5>>
+		<<case "Body Purist">>
+			natural body
+			<<set $arcologies[0].FSBodyPurist += 5>>
+		<<case "Transformation Fetishist">>
+			extended dick
+			<<set $arcologies[0].FSTransformationFetishist += 5>>
+		<<case "Youth Preferentialist">>
+			<<if $minimumSlaveAge < 13>>
+				boyish
+			<<elseif $minimumSlaveAge < 18>>
+				teenage
+			<<else>>
+				young
+			<</if>>
+			body
+			<<set $arcologies[0].FSYouthPreferentialist += 5>>
+		<<case "Maturity Preferentialist">>
+			mature body
+			<<set $arcologies[0].FSMaturityPreferentialist += 5>>
+		<<case "Slimness Enthusiast">>
+			slender body
+			<<set $arcologies[0].FSSlimnessEnthusiast += 5>>
+		<<case "Asset Expansionist">>
+			huge genitals
+			<<set $arcologies[0].FSAssetExpansionist += 5>>
+		<<case "Pastoralist">>
+			milk-fed, chubby body
+			<<set $arcologies[0].FSPastoralist += 5>>
+		<<case "Physical Idealist">>
+			ripped body
+			<<set $arcologies[0].FSPhysicalIdealist += 5>>
+		<<case "Hedonistic">>
+			plump body
+			<<set $arcologies[0].FSHedonisticDecadence += 5>>
+		<<case "Chattel Religionist">>
+			divine sexuality
+			<<set $arcologies[0].FSChattelReligionist += 5>>
+		<<case "Roman Revivalist">>
+			muscular form
+			<<set $arcologies[0].FSRomanRevivalist += 5>>
+		<<case "Aztec Revivalist">>
+			well-built form
+			<<set $arcologies[0].FSAztecRevivalist += 5>>
+		<<case "Egyptian Revivalist">>
+			beautiful tanned body
+			<<set $arcologies[0].FSEgyptianRevivalist += 5>>
+		<<case "Arabian Revivalist" "Chinese Revivalist" "Edo Revivalist">>
+			graceful form
+			<<if _FS == "Edo Revivalist">>
+				<<set $arcologies[0].FSEdoRevivalist += 5>>
+			<<elseif _FS == "Arabian Revivalist">>
+				<<set $arcologies[0].FSArabianRevivalist += 5>>
+			<<else>>
+				<<set $arcologies[0].FSChineseRevivalist += 5>>
+			<</if>>
+		<<default>>
+			hot young body
+		<</switch>>
+		is obvious to everyone. The message is clear, and your guest of honor is the center of attention as you take him there in view of the arcology's leading citizens. Naturally, the story percolates, making it clear that there's nothing you won't do to @@.green;further acceptance of _FS principles.@@
+		<<if isPlayerFertile($PC)>>
+			<<= knockMeUp($PC, 40, 0, -2)>>
 		<</if>>
-	<<default>>
-		hot young body
-	<</switch>>
-	is obvious to everyone. The message is clear, and your guest of honor is the center of attention as you take him there in view of the arcology's leading citizens. Naturally, the story percolates, making it clear that there's nothing you won't do to @@.green;further acceptance of _FS principles.@@
-	<<if isPlayerFertile($PC)>>
-		<<= knockMeUp($PC, 40, 0, -2)>>
-	<</if>>
-	<</replace>>
-<</link>>
+		<</replace>>
+	<</link>>
 <</if>>
 </span>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/saDevotion.tw b/src/uncategorized/saDevotion.tw
index f0b01f5ed8ae3330df2268fb3f674b876e025ec5..94484d2eecc5d9e00896c3e66280d284a530609c 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/saDevotion.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/saDevotion.tw
@@ -198,398 +198,398 @@
 
 <<if ($slaves[$i].indenture > -1)>>
 	<<if $slaves[$i].indenture <= 52>>
-	$He knows that it's less than a year until $his indenture ends.
-	<<if $slaves[$i].devotion > 95>>
-		Since $he loves you, $he has mixed feelings about the prospect.
-	<<elseif $slaves[$i].devotion >= -20>>
-		The prospect of freedom @@.hotpink;encourages $him to submit to your orders@@ and @@.mediumaquamarine;encourages $him to be optimistic.@@
-		<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 2>>
-		<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 2>>
-	<<else>>
-		The prospect of freedom encourages $him to @@.mediumaquamarine;tolerate anything.@@
-		<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 2>>
-	<</if>>
-	<<else>>
-	The fact that $he is an indentured servant, not a permanent slave, is never truly far from $his mind.
-	<<if $slaves[$i].devotion > 95>>
-		Since $he loves you, $he has mixed feelings about eventual freedom.
-	<<elseif $slaves[$i].devotion >= -20>>
-		The prospect of eventual freedom @@.hotpink;cheers $him up@@ and @@.mediumaquamarine;makes $him optimistic.@@
-		<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 1>>
-		<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 1>>
+		$He knows that it's less than a year until $his indenture ends.
+		<<if $slaves[$i].devotion > 95>>
+			Since $he loves you, $he has mixed feelings about the prospect.
+		<<elseif $slaves[$i].devotion >= -20>>
+			The prospect of freedom @@.hotpink;encourages $him to submit to your orders@@ and @@.mediumaquamarine;encourages $him to be optimistic.@@
+			<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 2>>
+			<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 2>>
+		<<else>>
+			The prospect of freedom encourages $him to @@.mediumaquamarine;tolerate anything.@@
+			<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 2>>
+		<</if>>
 	<<else>>
-		The prospect of eventual freedom works to make the indignities of slavery @@.mediumaquamarine;weigh lightly@@ on $him.
-		<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 1>>
-	<</if>>
+		The fact that $he is an indentured servant, not a permanent slave, is never truly far from $his mind.
+		<<if $slaves[$i].devotion > 95>>
+			Since $he loves you, $he has mixed feelings about eventual freedom.
+		<<elseif $slaves[$i].devotion >= -20>>
+			The prospect of eventual freedom @@.hotpink;cheers $him up@@ and @@.mediumaquamarine;makes $him optimistic.@@
+			<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 1>>
+			<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 1>>
+		<<else>>
+			The prospect of eventual freedom works to make the indignities of slavery @@.mediumaquamarine;weigh lightly@@ on $him.
+			<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 1>>
+		<</if>>
 	<</if>>
 	<<if $slaves[$i].devotion <= 20>>
-	<<if $slaves[$i].indentureRestrictions >= 2>>
-		$He's also @@.mediumaquamarine;able to rely on the protection@@ of $his indenture.
-		<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 1>>
-	<<elseif $slaves[$i].indentureRestrictions > 1>>
-		$He's also @@.mediumaquamarine;able to trust the restrictions@@ that $his indenture places on $his treatment.
-		<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 1>>
-	<</if>>
+		<<if $slaves[$i].indentureRestrictions >= 2>>
+			$He's also @@.mediumaquamarine;able to rely on the protection@@ of $his indenture.
+			<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 1>>
+		<<elseif $slaves[$i].indentureRestrictions > 1>>
+			$He's also @@.mediumaquamarine;able to trust the restrictions@@ that $his indenture places on $his treatment.
+			<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 1>>
+		<</if>>
 	<</if>>
 
 <<elseif $seeAge == 1>> /* RETIREMENT */
 
 <<if $slaves[$i].actualAge >= $retirementAge-5 && $PhysicalRetirementAgePolicy != 1>>
-<<if ($CitizenRetirement == 1)>>
-	<<if $slaves[$i].actualAge >= $retirementAge-1>>
-	$He knows that it's less than a year until $his retirement from sexual slavery into citizenship.
-	<<if $slaves[$i].devotion > 95>>
-		Since $he loves you, $he has mixed feelings about the prospect, but $he prefers to think of it as your way of looking after $him. It's $his favorite subject, and $his strong feelings about it
-		<<if $arcologies[0].FSPaternalist != "unset">>
-			advances paternalistic ideals and @@.green;improves your reputation.@@
-			<<= FSChange("Paternalist", 2)>>
+	<<if ($CitizenRetirement == 1)>>
+		<<if $slaves[$i].actualAge >= $retirementAge-1>>
+			$He knows that it's less than a year until $his retirement from sexual slavery into citizenship.
+			<<if $slaves[$i].devotion > 95>>
+				Since $he loves you, $he has mixed feelings about the prospect, but $he prefers to think of it as your way of looking after $him. It's $his favorite subject, and $his strong feelings about it
+				<<if $arcologies[0].FSPaternalist != "unset">>
+					advances paternalistic ideals and @@.green;improves your reputation.@@
+					<<= FSChange("Paternalist", 2)>>
+				<<else>>
+					@@.green;improves your reputation.@@
+					<<run repX($FSSingleSlaveRep*2, "retirement", $slaves[$i])>>
+				<</if>>
+			<<elseif $slaves[$i].devotion >= -20>>
+				The prospect of manumission @@.hotpink;encourages $him to submit to slavery@@ and @@.mediumaquamarine;encourages $him to be optimistic.@@
+				<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 2>>
+				<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 2>>
+			<<else>>
+				The prospect of manumission encourages $him to @@.mediumaquamarine;tolerate anything.@@
+				<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 2>>
+			<</if>>
 		<<else>>
-			@@.green;improves your reputation.@@
-			<<run repX($FSSingleSlaveRep*2, "retirement", $slaves[$i])>>
+			$His retirement from sexual slavery into citizenship is on the horizon.
+			<<if $slaves[$i].devotion > 95>>
+				Since $he loves you, $he has mixed feelings about the prospect, but $he prefers to think of it as your way of looking after $him. This
+				<<if $arcologies[0].FSPaternalist != "unset">>
+					advances paternalistic ideals and @@.green;improves your reputation.@@
+					<<= FSChange("Paternalist", 2)>>
+				<<else>>
+					@@.green;improves your reputation.@@
+					<<run repX($FSSingleSlaveRep, "retirement", $slaves[$i])>>
+				<</if>>
+			<<elseif $slaves[$i].devotion >= -20>>
+				The prospect of manumission @@.hotpink;cheers $him up@@ and @@.mediumaquamarine;makes $him optimistic.@@
+				<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 1>>
+				<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 1>>
+			<<else>>
+				The prospect of manumission works to make the indignities of slavery @@.mediumaquamarine;weigh lightly@@ on $him.
+				<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 1>>
+			<</if>>
 		<</if>>
-	<<elseif $slaves[$i].devotion >= -20>>
-		The prospect of manumission @@.hotpink;encourages $him to submit to slavery@@ and @@.mediumaquamarine;encourages $him to be optimistic.@@
-		<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 2>>
-		<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 2>>
-	<<else>>
-		The prospect of manumission encourages $him to @@.mediumaquamarine;tolerate anything.@@
-		<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 2>>
-	<</if>>
-	<<else>>
-	$His retirement from sexual slavery into citizenship is on the horizon.
-	<<if $slaves[$i].devotion > 95>>
-		Since $he loves you, $he has mixed feelings about the prospect, but $he prefers to think of it as your way of looking after $him. This
-		<<if $arcologies[0].FSPaternalist != "unset">>
-			advances paternalistic ideals and @@.green;improves your reputation.@@
-			<<= FSChange("Paternalist", 2)>>
+	<<elseif ($BioreactorRetirement == 1)>>
+		<<if $slaves[$i].actualAge >= $retirementAge-1>>
+			$He knows that it's less than a year until $his permanent inclusion in the arcology's milk production systems.
+			<<if $slaves[$i].devotion > 95>>
+				Since $he loves you, $he desperately tries not to think about it, though $he occasionally bursts into tears without provocation.
+			<<elseif $slaves[$i].devotion > 20>>
+				To put it mildly, @@.gold;$he is terrified.@@
+				<<set $slaves[$i].trust -= 3>>
+			<<else>>
+				$He is filled with @@.gold;terror@@ and @@.mediumorchid;horror.@@
+				<<set $slaves[$i].devotion -= 3>>
+				<<set $slaves[$i].trust -= 3>>
+			<</if>>
 		<<else>>
-			@@.green;improves your reputation.@@
-			<<run repX($FSSingleSlaveRep, "retirement", $slaves[$i])>>
+			$He knows that $his permanent inclusion in the arcology's milk production systems is not far off.
+			<<if $slaves[$i].devotion > 95>>
+				Since $he loves you, $he tries not to think about it, though $he occasionally seems preoccupied.
+			<<elseif $slaves[$i].devotion > 20>>
+				The prospect @@.gold;scares $him.@@
+				<<set $slaves[$i].trust -= 2>>
+			<<else>>
+				The prospect @@.gold;scares@@ and @@.mediumorchid;disgusts $him.@@
+				<<set $slaves[$i].devotion -= 2>>
+				<<set $slaves[$i].trust -= 2>>
+			<</if>>
+		<</if>>
+	<<elseif ($ArcadeRetirement == 1)>>
+		<<if $slaves[$i].actualAge >= $retirementAge-1>>
+			$He knows that it's less than a year until $he is to be permanently encased in a bodysuit with holes for nothing but dick.
+			<<if $slaves[$i].devotion > 95>>
+				Since $he loves you, $he desperately tries not to think about it, though $he occasionally bursts into tears without provocation.
+			<<elseif $slaves[$i].devotion > 20>>
+				To put it mildly, @@.gold;$he is terrified.@@
+				<<set $slaves[$i].trust -= 3>>
+			<<else>>
+				$He is filled with @@.gold;terror@@ and @@.mediumorchid;horror.@@
+				<<set $slaves[$i].devotion -= 3>>
+				<<set $slaves[$i].trust -= 3>>
+			<</if>>
+		<<else>>
+			$He knows that $his ultimate fate as a Fuckdoll is not far off.
+			<<if $slaves[$i].devotion > 95>>
+				Since $he loves you, $he tries not to think about it, though $he occasionally seems preoccupied.
+			<<elseif $slaves[$i].devotion > 20>>
+				The prospect @@.gold;scares $him.@@
+				<<set $slaves[$i].trust -= 2>>
+			<<else>>
+				The prospect @@.gold;scares@@ and @@.mediumorchid;disgusts $him.@@
+				<<set $slaves[$i].devotion -= 2>>
+				<<set $slaves[$i].trust -= 2>>
+			<</if>>
 		<</if>>
-	<<elseif $slaves[$i].devotion >= -20>>
-		The prospect of manumission @@.hotpink;cheers $him up@@ and @@.mediumaquamarine;makes $him optimistic.@@
-		<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 1>>
-		<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 1>>
-	<<else>>
-		The prospect of manumission works to make the indignities of slavery @@.mediumaquamarine;weigh lightly@@ on $him.
-		<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 1>>
-	<</if>>
-	<</if>>
-<<elseif ($BioreactorRetirement == 1)>>
-	<<if $slaves[$i].actualAge >= $retirementAge-1>>
-	$He knows that it's less than a year until $his permanent inclusion in the arcology's milk production systems.
-	<<if $slaves[$i].devotion > 95>>
-		Since $he loves you, $he desperately tries not to think about it, though $he occasionally bursts into tears without provocation.
-	<<elseif $slaves[$i].devotion > 20>>
-		To put it mildly, @@.gold;$he is terrified.@@
-		<<set $slaves[$i].trust -= 3>>
-	<<else>>
-		$He is filled with @@.gold;terror@@ and @@.mediumorchid;horror.@@
-		<<set $slaves[$i].devotion -= 3>>
-		<<set $slaves[$i].trust -= 3>>
-	<</if>>
-	<<else>>
-	$He knows that $his permanent inclusion in the arcology's milk production systems is not far off.
-	<<if $slaves[$i].devotion > 95>>
-		Since $he loves you, $he tries not to think about it, though $he occasionally seems preoccupied.
-	<<elseif $slaves[$i].devotion > 20>>
-		The prospect @@.gold;scares $him.@@
-		<<set $slaves[$i].trust -= 2>>
-	<<else>>
-		The prospect @@.gold;scares@@ and @@.mediumorchid;disgusts $him.@@
-		<<set $slaves[$i].devotion -= 2>>
-		<<set $slaves[$i].trust -= 2>>
-	<</if>>
-	<</if>>
-<<elseif ($ArcadeRetirement == 1)>>
-	<<if $slaves[$i].actualAge >= $retirementAge-1>>
-	$He knows that it's less than a year until $he is to be permanently encased in a bodysuit with holes for nothing but dick.
-	<<if $slaves[$i].devotion > 95>>
-		Since $he loves you, $he desperately tries not to think about it, though $he occasionally bursts into tears without provocation.
-	<<elseif $slaves[$i].devotion > 20>>
-		To put it mildly, @@.gold;$he is terrified.@@
-		<<set $slaves[$i].trust -= 3>>
-	<<else>>
-		$He is filled with @@.gold;terror@@ and @@.mediumorchid;horror.@@
-		<<set $slaves[$i].devotion -= 3>>
-		<<set $slaves[$i].trust -= 3>>
-	<</if>>
-	<<else>>
-	$He knows that $his ultimate fate as a Fuckdoll is not far off.
-	<<if $slaves[$i].devotion > 95>>
-		Since $he loves you, $he tries not to think about it, though $he occasionally seems preoccupied.
-	<<elseif $slaves[$i].devotion > 20>>
-		The prospect @@.gold;scares $him.@@
-		<<set $slaves[$i].trust -= 2>>
-	<<else>>
-		The prospect @@.gold;scares@@ and @@.mediumorchid;disgusts $him.@@
-		<<set $slaves[$i].devotion -= 2>>
-		<<set $slaves[$i].trust -= 2>>
-	<</if>>
 	<</if>>
-<</if>>
 <<elseif $slaves[$i].physicalAge >= $retirementAge-5 && $PhysicalRetirementAgePolicy == 1>>
-<<if ($CitizenRetirement == 1)>>
-	<<if $slaves[$i].physicalAge >= $retirementAge-1>>
-	$He knows that it's less than a year until $his retirement from sexual slavery into citizenship.
-	<<if $slaves[$i].devotion > 95>>
-		Since $he loves you, $he has mixed feelings about the prospect, but $he prefers to think of it as your way of looking after $him. It's $his favorite subject, and $his strong feelings about it
-		<<if $arcologies[0].FSPaternalist != "unset">>
-			advances paternalistic ideals and @@.green;improves your reputation.@@
-			<<= FSChange("Paternalist", 2)>>
+	<<if ($CitizenRetirement == 1)>>
+		<<if $slaves[$i].physicalAge >= $retirementAge-1>>
+			$He knows that it's less than a year until $his retirement from sexual slavery into citizenship.
+			<<if $slaves[$i].devotion > 95>>
+				Since $he loves you, $he has mixed feelings about the prospect, but $he prefers to think of it as your way of looking after $him. It's $his favorite subject, and $his strong feelings about it
+				<<if $arcologies[0].FSPaternalist != "unset">>
+					advances paternalistic ideals and @@.green;improves your reputation.@@
+					<<= FSChange("Paternalist", 2)>>
+				<<else>>
+					@@.green;improves your reputation.@@
+					<<run repX($FSSingleSlaveRep*2, "retirement", $slaves[$i])>>
+				<</if>>
+			<<elseif $slaves[$i].devotion >= -20>>
+				The prospect of manumission @@.hotpink;encourages $him to submit to slavery@@ and @@.mediumaquamarine;encourages $him to be optimistic.@@
+				<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 2>>
+				<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 2>>
+			<<else>>
+				The prospect of manumission encourages $him to @@.mediumaquamarine;tolerate anything.@@
+				<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 2>>
+			<</if>>
 		<<else>>
-			@@.green;improves your reputation.@@
-			<<run repX($FSSingleSlaveRep*2, "retirement", $slaves[$i])>>
+			$His retirement from sexual slavery into citizenship is on the horizon.
+			<<if $slaves[$i].devotion > 95>>
+				Since $he loves you, $he has mixed feelings about the prospect, but $he prefers to think of it as your way of looking after $him. This
+				<<if $arcologies[0].FSPaternalist != "unset">>
+					advances paternalistic ideals and @@.green;improves your reputation.@@
+					<<= FSChange("Paternalist", 2)>>
+				<<else>>
+					@@.green;improves your reputation.@@
+					<<run repX($FSSingleSlaveRep, "retirement", $slaves[$i])>>
+				<</if>>
+			<<elseif $slaves[$i].devotion >= -20>>
+				The prospect of manumission @@.hotpink;cheers $him up@@ and @@.mediumaquamarine;makes $him optimistic.@@
+				<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 1>>
+				<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 1>>
+			<<else>>
+				The prospect of manumission works to make the indignities of slavery @@.mediumaquamarine;weigh lightly@@ on $him.
+				<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 1>>
+			<</if>>
 		<</if>>
-	<<elseif $slaves[$i].devotion >= -20>>
-		The prospect of manumission @@.hotpink;encourages $him to submit to slavery@@ and @@.mediumaquamarine;encourages $him to be optimistic.@@
-		<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 2>>
-		<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 2>>
-	<<else>>
-		The prospect of manumission encourages $him to @@.mediumaquamarine;tolerate anything.@@
-		<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 2>>
-	<</if>>
-	<<else>>
-	$His retirement from sexual slavery into citizenship is on the horizon.
-	<<if $slaves[$i].devotion > 95>>
-		Since $he loves you, $he has mixed feelings about the prospect, but $he prefers to think of it as your way of looking after $him. This
-		<<if $arcologies[0].FSPaternalist != "unset">>
-			advances paternalistic ideals and @@.green;improves your reputation.@@
-			<<= FSChange("Paternalist", 2)>>
+	<<elseif ($BioreactorRetirement == 1)>>
+		<<if $slaves[$i].physicalAge >= $retirementAge-1>>
+			$He knows that it's less than a year until $his permanent inclusion in the arcology's milk production systems.
+			<<if $slaves[$i].devotion > 95>>
+				Since $he loves you, $he desperately tries not to think about it, though $he occasionally bursts into tears without provocation.
+			<<elseif $slaves[$i].devotion > 20>>
+				To put it mildly, @@.gold;$he is terrified.@@
+				<<set $slaves[$i].trust -= 3>>
+			<<else>>
+				$He is filled with @@.gold;terror@@ and @@.mediumorchid;horror.@@
+				<<set $slaves[$i].devotion -= 3>>
+				<<set $slaves[$i].trust -= 3>>
+			<</if>>
 		<<else>>
-			@@.green;improves your reputation.@@
-			<<run repX($FSSingleSlaveRep, "retirement", $slaves[$i])>>
+			$He knows that $his permanent inclusion in the arcology's milk production systems is not far off.
+			<<if $slaves[$i].devotion > 95>>
+				Since $he loves you, $he tries not to think about it, though $he occasionally seems preoccupied.
+			<<elseif $slaves[$i].devotion > 20>>
+				The prospect @@.gold;scares $him.@@
+				<<set $slaves[$i].trust -= 2>>
+			<<else>>
+				The prospect @@.gold;scares@@ and @@.mediumorchid;disgusts $him.@@
+				<<set $slaves[$i].devotion -= 2>>
+				<<set $slaves[$i].trust -= 2>>
+			<</if>>
+		<</if>>
+	<<elseif ($ArcadeRetirement == 1)>>
+		<<if $slaves[$i].physicalAge >= $retirementAge-1>>
+			$He knows that it's less than a year until $he is to be permanently encased in a bodysuit with holes for nothing but dick.
+			<<if $slaves[$i].devotion > 95>>
+				Since $he loves you, $he desperately tries not to think about it, though $he occasionally bursts into tears without provocation.
+			<<elseif $slaves[$i].devotion > 20>>
+				To put it mildly, @@.gold;$he is terrified.@@
+				<<set $slaves[$i].trust -= 3>>
+			<<else>>
+				$He is filled with @@.gold;terror@@ and @@.mediumorchid;horror.@@
+				<<set $slaves[$i].devotion -= 3>>
+				<<set $slaves[$i].trust -= 3>>
+			<</if>>
+		<<else>>
+			$He knows that $his ultimate fate as a Fuckdoll is not far off.
+			<<if $slaves[$i].devotion > 95>>
+				Since $he loves you, $he tries not to think about it, though $he occasionally seems preoccupied.
+			<<elseif $slaves[$i].devotion > 20>>
+				The prospect @@.gold;scares $him.@@
+				<<set $slaves[$i].trust -= 2>>
+			<<else>>
+				The prospect @@.gold;scares@@ and @@.mediumorchid;disgusts $him.@@
+				<<set $slaves[$i].devotion -= 2>>
+				<<set $slaves[$i].trust -= 2>>
+			<</if>>
 		<</if>>
-	<<elseif $slaves[$i].devotion >= -20>>
-		The prospect of manumission @@.hotpink;cheers $him up@@ and @@.mediumaquamarine;makes $him optimistic.@@
-		<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 1>>
-		<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 1>>
-	<<else>>
-		The prospect of manumission works to make the indignities of slavery @@.mediumaquamarine;weigh lightly@@ on $him.
-		<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 1>>
-	<</if>>
-	<</if>>
-<<elseif ($BioreactorRetirement == 1)>>
-	<<if $slaves[$i].physicalAge >= $retirementAge-1>>
-	$He knows that it's less than a year until $his permanent inclusion in the arcology's milk production systems.
-	<<if $slaves[$i].devotion > 95>>
-		Since $he loves you, $he desperately tries not to think about it, though $he occasionally bursts into tears without provocation.
-	<<elseif $slaves[$i].devotion > 20>>
-		To put it mildly, @@.gold;$he is terrified.@@
-		<<set $slaves[$i].trust -= 3>>
-	<<else>>
-		$He is filled with @@.gold;terror@@ and @@.mediumorchid;horror.@@
-		<<set $slaves[$i].devotion -= 3>>
-		<<set $slaves[$i].trust -= 3>>
-	<</if>>
-	<<else>>
-	$He knows that $his permanent inclusion in the arcology's milk production systems is not far off.
-	<<if $slaves[$i].devotion > 95>>
-		Since $he loves you, $he tries not to think about it, though $he occasionally seems preoccupied.
-	<<elseif $slaves[$i].devotion > 20>>
-		The prospect @@.gold;scares $him.@@
-		<<set $slaves[$i].trust -= 2>>
-	<<else>>
-		The prospect @@.gold;scares@@ and @@.mediumorchid;disgusts $him.@@
-		<<set $slaves[$i].devotion -= 2>>
-		<<set $slaves[$i].trust -= 2>>
-	<</if>>
-	<</if>>
-<<elseif ($ArcadeRetirement == 1)>>
-	<<if $slaves[$i].physicalAge >= $retirementAge-1>>
-	$He knows that it's less than a year until $he is to be permanently encased in a bodysuit with holes for nothing but dick.
-	<<if $slaves[$i].devotion > 95>>
-		Since $he loves you, $he desperately tries not to think about it, though $he occasionally bursts into tears without provocation.
-	<<elseif $slaves[$i].devotion > 20>>
-		To put it mildly, @@.gold;$he is terrified.@@
-		<<set $slaves[$i].trust -= 3>>
-	<<else>>
-		$He is filled with @@.gold;terror@@ and @@.mediumorchid;horror.@@
-		<<set $slaves[$i].devotion -= 3>>
-		<<set $slaves[$i].trust -= 3>>
-	<</if>>
-	<<else>>
-	$He knows that $his ultimate fate as a Fuckdoll is not far off.
-	<<if $slaves[$i].devotion > 95>>
-		Since $he loves you, $he tries not to think about it, though $he occasionally seems preoccupied.
-	<<elseif $slaves[$i].devotion > 20>>
-		The prospect @@.gold;scares $him.@@
-		<<set $slaves[$i].trust -= 2>>
-	<<else>>
-		The prospect @@.gold;scares@@ and @@.mediumorchid;disgusts $him.@@
-		<<set $slaves[$i].devotion -= 2>>
-		<<set $slaves[$i].trust -= 2>>
-	<</if>>
 	<</if>>
 <</if>>
-<</if>>
 
 <<if ($CitizenRetirement == 1)>>
-<<if ($slaves[$i].devotion <= 95) || ($slaves[$i].trust <= 95)>>
-<<if $SexMilestoneRetirement == 1>>
-	<<if $slaves[$i].counter.oral + $slaves[$i].counter.anal + $slaves[$i].counter.vaginal + $slaves[$i].counter.penetrative + $slaves[$i].counter.mammary >= $retirementSex*0.8>>
-	<<if $slaves[$i].devotion >= -20>>
-		$He's @@.hotpink;more obedient@@ and @@.mediumaquamarine;more tolerant,@@
-		<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 1>>
-		<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 1>>
-	<<else>>
-		$He does $his best to @@.mediumaquamarine;stay strong,@@
-		<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 1>>
-	<</if>>
-	since $he knows that $his freedom is only a few thousand dicks away.
-	<</if>>
-<</if>>
-<<if $MilkMilestoneRetirement == 1>>
-	<<if $slaves[$i].counter.milk >= $retirementMilk*0.8>>
-	<<if $slaves[$i].devotion >= -20>>
-		$He's @@.hotpink;more obedient@@ and @@.mediumaquamarine;more tolerant,@@
-		<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 1>>
-		<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 1>>
-	<<else>>
-		$He does $his best to @@.mediumaquamarine;stay strong,@@
-		<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 1>>
-	<</if>>
-	since $he knows $he will be free if $his udders can gush just a bit more cream.
-	<</if>>
-<</if>>
-<<if $CumMilestoneRetirement == 1>>
-	<<if $slaves[$i].counter.cum >= $retirementCum*0.8>>
-	<<if $slaves[$i].devotion >= -20>>
-		$He's @@.hotpink;more obedient@@ and @@.mediumaquamarine;more tolerant,@@
-		<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 1>>
-		<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 1>>
-	<<else>>
-		$He does $his best to @@.mediumaquamarine;stay strong,@@
-		<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 1>>
-	<</if>>
-	since $he knows $he will be free if $his prick can spurt just a bit more jizz.
-	<</if>>
-<</if>>
-<<if $BirthsMilestoneRetirement == 1>>
-	<<if $slaves[$i].counter.births >= $retirementBirths*0.6>>
-	<<if $slaves[$i].devotion >= -20>>
-		$He's @@.hotpink;more obedient@@ and @@.mediumaquamarine;more tolerant,@@
-		<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 1>>
-		<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 1>>
-	<<else>>
-		$He does $his best to @@.mediumaquamarine;stay strong,@@
-		<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 1>>
-	<</if>>
-	since $he knows $he only has to successfully breed a little more to be free.
-	<</if>>
-<</if>>
-<<if $KillsMilestoneRetirement == 1>>
-	<<if $slaves[$i].counter.pitKills >= $retirementKills*0.6>>
-	<<if $slaves[$i].devotion >= -20>>
-		$He's @@.hotpink;more obedient@@ and @@.mediumaquamarine;more tolerant,@@
-		<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 1>>
-		<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 1>>
-	<<else>>
-		$He does $his best to @@.mediumaquamarine;stay strong,@@
-		<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 1>>
-	<</if>>
-	since $he knows just a bit more murder in the pit will win $his freedom.
+	<<if ($slaves[$i].devotion <= 95) || ($slaves[$i].trust <= 95)>>
+		<<if $SexMilestoneRetirement == 1>>
+			<<if $slaves[$i].counter.oral + $slaves[$i].counter.anal + $slaves[$i].counter.vaginal + $slaves[$i].counter.penetrative + $slaves[$i].counter.mammary >= $retirementSex*0.8>>
+			<<if $slaves[$i].devotion >= -20>>
+				$He's @@.hotpink;more obedient@@ and @@.mediumaquamarine;more tolerant,@@
+				<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 1>>
+				<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 1>>
+			<<else>>
+				$He does $his best to @@.mediumaquamarine;stay strong,@@
+				<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 1>>
+			<</if>>
+			since $he knows that $his freedom is only a few thousand dicks away.
+			<</if>>
+		<</if>>
+		<<if $MilkMilestoneRetirement == 1>>
+			<<if $slaves[$i].counter.milk >= $retirementMilk*0.8>>
+			<<if $slaves[$i].devotion >= -20>>
+				$He's @@.hotpink;more obedient@@ and @@.mediumaquamarine;more tolerant,@@
+				<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 1>>
+				<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 1>>
+			<<else>>
+				$He does $his best to @@.mediumaquamarine;stay strong,@@
+				<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 1>>
+			<</if>>
+			since $he knows $he will be free if $his udders can gush just a bit more cream.
+			<</if>>
+		<</if>>
+		<<if $CumMilestoneRetirement == 1>>
+			<<if $slaves[$i].counter.cum >= $retirementCum*0.8>>
+			<<if $slaves[$i].devotion >= -20>>
+				$He's @@.hotpink;more obedient@@ and @@.mediumaquamarine;more tolerant,@@
+				<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 1>>
+				<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 1>>
+			<<else>>
+				$He does $his best to @@.mediumaquamarine;stay strong,@@
+				<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 1>>
+			<</if>>
+			since $he knows $he will be free if $his prick can spurt just a bit more jizz.
+			<</if>>
+		<</if>>
+		<<if $BirthsMilestoneRetirement == 1>>
+			<<if $slaves[$i].counter.births >= $retirementBirths*0.6>>
+			<<if $slaves[$i].devotion >= -20>>
+				$He's @@.hotpink;more obedient@@ and @@.mediumaquamarine;more tolerant,@@
+				<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 1>>
+				<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 1>>
+			<<else>>
+				$He does $his best to @@.mediumaquamarine;stay strong,@@
+				<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 1>>
+			<</if>>
+			since $he knows $he only has to successfully breed a little more to be free.
+			<</if>>
+		<</if>>
+		<<if $KillsMilestoneRetirement == 1>>
+			<<if $slaves[$i].counter.pitKills >= $retirementKills*0.6>>
+			<<if $slaves[$i].devotion >= -20>>
+				$He's @@.hotpink;more obedient@@ and @@.mediumaquamarine;more tolerant,@@
+				<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 1>>
+				<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 1>>
+			<<else>>
+				$He does $his best to @@.mediumaquamarine;stay strong,@@
+				<<set $slaves[$i].trust += 1>>
+			<</if>>
+			since $he knows just a bit more murder in the pit will win $his freedom.
+			<</if>>
+		<</if>>
 	<</if>>
 <</if>>
-<</if>>
-<</if>>
 
 <</if>> /* CLOSES RETIREMENT */
 
 <<if $slaves[$i].assignmentVisible == 1>>
-<<if $personalAttention == "sex">>
-<<if $freeSexualEnergy > 0>>
-	<<if $freeSexualEnergy == 3>>
-		$He gets a lot of sexual attention from you, since you don't have nearly enough dedicated fucktoys to sate your libido, and this @@.hotpink;<<if $slaves[$i].devotion > 50>>intensifies $his love for you<<else>>forces $him to get used to sex slavery<</if>>.@@
-	<<elseif $freeSexualEnergy == 2>>
-		$He receives some sexual attention from you, since you don't have enough dedicated fucktoys to sate your libido, and this @@.hotpink;<<if $slaves[$i].devotion > 50>>builds $his closeness to you<<else>>gets $him used to being your sex slave<</if>>.@@
-	<<else>>
-		$He receives occasional sexual attention from you, since you barely have enough dedicated fucktoys to sate your libido, @@.hotpink;<<if $slaves[$i].devotion > 50>>making $him feel closer to you<<else>>keeping $him aware $he's your sex slave<</if>>.@@
-	<</if>>
-	<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += $freeSexualEnergy>>
-	<<set $slaves[$i].counter.oral += $freeSexualEnergy>>
-	<<set $oralTotal += $freeSexualEnergy>>
-	<<if canDoVaginal($slaves[$i]) && $slaves[$i].vagina > 0>>
-		<<set $slaves[$i].counter.vaginal += $freeSexualEnergy>>
-		<<set $vaginalTotal += $freeSexualEnergy>>
-	<</if>>
-	<<if canDoAnal($slaves[$i]) && $slaves[$i].anus > 0>>
-		<<set $slaves[$i].counter.anal += $freeSexualEnergy>>
-		<<set $analTotal += $freeSexualEnergy>>
-	<</if>>
-	<<if $slaves[$i].boobs > 500 && $PC.dick > 0>>
-		<<set $slaves[$i].counter.mammary += $freeSexualEnergy>>
-		<<set $mammaryTotal += $freeSexualEnergy>>
-	<</if>>
-	<<if ($slaves[$i].toyHole == "dick") && canPenetrate($slaves[$i])>>
-		<<set $slaves[$i].counter.penetrative += $freeSexualEnergy>>
-		<<set $penetrativeTotal += $freeSexualEnergy>>
-		<<if canImpreg($PC, $slaves[$i])>>
-			<<= knockMeUp($PC, $freeSexualEnergy, 0, $slaves[$i].ID, 1)>>
-		<</if>>
-		<<if $sexualOpeness == 0>>
-			<<set $PC.degeneracy++>>
+	<<if $personalAttention == "sex">>
+		<<if $freeSexualEnergy > 0>>
+			<<if $freeSexualEnergy == 3>>
+				$He gets a lot of sexual attention from you, since you don't have nearly enough dedicated fucktoys to sate your libido, and this @@.hotpink;<<if $slaves[$i].devotion > 50>>intensifies $his love for you<<else>>forces $him to get used to sex slavery<</if>>.@@
+			<<elseif $freeSexualEnergy == 2>>
+				$He receives some sexual attention from you, since you don't have enough dedicated fucktoys to sate your libido, and this @@.hotpink;<<if $slaves[$i].devotion > 50>>builds $his closeness to you<<else>>gets $him used to being your sex slave<</if>>.@@
+			<<else>>
+				$He receives occasional sexual attention from you, since you barely have enough dedicated fucktoys to sate your libido, @@.hotpink;<<if $slaves[$i].devotion > 50>>making $him feel closer to you<<else>>keeping $him aware $he's your sex slave<</if>>.@@
+			<</if>>
+			<<set $slaves[$i].devotion += $freeSexualEnergy>>
+			<<set $slaves[$i].counter.oral += $freeSexualEnergy>>
+			<<set $oralTotal += $freeSexualEnergy>>
+			<<if canDoVaginal($slaves[$i]) && $slaves[$i].vagina > 0>>
+				<<set $slaves[$i].counter.vaginal += $freeSexualEnergy>>
+				<<set $vaginalTotal += $freeSexualEnergy>>
+			<</if>>
+			<<if canDoAnal($slaves[$i]) && $slaves[$i].anus > 0>>
+				<<set $slaves[$i].counter.anal += $freeSexualEnergy>>
+				<<set $analTotal += $freeSexualEnergy>>
+			<</if>>
+			<<if $slaves[$i].boobs > 500 && $PC.dick > 0>>
+				<<set $slaves[$i].counter.mammary += $freeSexualEnergy>>
+				<<set $mammaryTotal += $freeSexualEnergy>>
+			<</if>>
+			<<if ($slaves[$i].toyHole == "dick") && canPenetrate($slaves[$i])>>
+				<<set $slaves[$i].counter.penetrative += $freeSexualEnergy>>
+				<<set $penetrativeTotal += $freeSexualEnergy>>
+				<<if canImpreg($PC, $slaves[$i])>>
+					<<= knockMeUp($PC, $freeSexualEnergy, 0, $slaves[$i].ID, 1)>>
+				<</if>>
+				<<if $sexualOpeness == 0>>
+					<<set $PC.degeneracy++>>
+				<</if>>
+			<</if>>
 		<</if>>
 	<</if>>
 <</if>>
-<</if>>
-<</if>>
 
 /* COLLECTIVE SPIRIT IMPACTS */
 
 <<if ($slaves.length > 3)>>
-<<set _collectiveTrustEffect = 0>>
-<<set _collectiveDevotionEffect = 0>>
-<<if $enduringDevotion > 50>>
-	<<if $slaves[$i].devotion >= -20>>
-	<<if $slaves[$i].devotion <= 20>>
-		<<set _collectiveDevotionEffect = 1, $slaves[$i].devotion += 1>>
-		<<if $slaves[$i].assignmentVisible == 1>><<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 1>><</if>>
-	<</if>>
-	<</if>>
-<<elseif $enduringDevotion <= 0>>
-	<<if $slaves[$i].devotion <= 20>>
-		<<set _collectiveDevotionEffect = -1, $slaves[$i].devotion -= 1>>
-		<<if $slaves[$i].assignmentVisible == 1>><<set $slaves[$i].devotion -= 1>><</if>>
-	<</if>>
-<</if>>
-<<if $enduringTrust > 50>>
-	<<if $slaves[$i].trust >= -20>>
-	<<if $slaves[$i].trust <= 20>>
-		<<set _collectiveTrustEffect = 1, $slaves[$i].trust += 1>>
-		<<if $slaves[$i].assignmentVisible == 1>><<set $slaves[$i].trust += 1>><</if>>
-	<</if>>
-	<</if>>
-<<elseif $enduringTrust <= 0>>
-	<<if $slaves[$i].trust <= 20>>
-		<<set _collectiveTrustEffect = -1, $slaves[$i].trust -= 1>>
-		<<if $slaves[$i].assignmentVisible == 1>><<set $slaves[$i].trust -= 1>><</if>>
-	<</if>>
-<</if>>
-<<if _collectiveDevotionEffect == 1>>
-	<<if _collectiveTrustEffect == 1>>
-		Since $he's ambivalent and fearful, the @@.hotpink;collective devotion@@ @@.mediumaquamarine;and trust@@ of your slaves affect $him slightly.
-	<<elseif _collectiveTrustEffect == 0>>
-		Since $he's ambivalent about you, the @@.hotpink;collective devotion@@ your slaves feel for you affects $him slightly.
-	<<else>>
-		Since $he's ambivalent about you, the @@.hotpink;collective devotion@@ your slaves feel for you affects $him slightly, but their @@.gold;general fear@@ affects $him too.
+	<<set _collectiveTrustEffect = 0>>
+	<<set _collectiveDevotionEffect = 0>>
+	<<if $enduringDevotion > 50>>
+		<<if $slaves[$i].devotion >= -20>>
+			<<if $slaves[$i].devotion <= 20>>
+				<<set _collectiveDevotionEffect = 1, $slaves[$i].devotion += 1>>
+				<<if $slaves[$i].assignmentVisible == 1>><<set $slaves[$i].devotion += 1>><</if>>
+			<</if>>
+		<</if>>
+	<<elseif $enduringDevotion <= 0>>
+		<<if $slaves[$i].devotion <= 20>>
+			<<set _collectiveDevotionEffect = -1, $slaves[$i].devotion -= 1>>
+			<<if $slaves[$i].assignmentVisible == 1>><<set $slaves[$i].devotion -= 1>><</if>>
+		<</if>>
 	<</if>>
-<<elseif _collectiveDevotionEffect == 0>>
-	<<if _collectiveTrustEffect == 1>>
-		Since $he's fearful of you, the @@.mediumaquamarine;collective trust@@ your slaves place in you affects $him slightly.
-	<<elseif _collectiveTrustEffect == -1>>
-		Since $he doesn't trust you, the @@.gold;collective fear@@ your slaves feel for you affects $him slightly.
+	<<if $enduringTrust > 50>>
+		<<if $slaves[$i].trust >= -20>>
+			<<if $slaves[$i].trust <= 20>>
+				<<set _collectiveTrustEffect = 1, $slaves[$i].trust += 1>>
+				<<if $slaves[$i].assignmentVisible == 1>><<set $slaves[$i].trust += 1>><</if>>
+			<</if>>
+		<</if>>
+	<<elseif $enduringTrust <= 0>>
+		<<if $slaves[$i].trust <= 20>>
+			<<set _collectiveTrustEffect = -1, $slaves[$i].trust -= 1>>
+			<<if $slaves[$i].assignmentVisible == 1>><<set $slaves[$i].trust -= 1>><</if>>
+		<</if>>
 	<</if>>
-<<else>>
-	<<if _collectiveTrustEffect == 1>>
-		The @@.mediumorchid;collective anger@@ your slaves feel reinforces $his own feelings, but their @@.mediumaquamarine;collective trust@@ also affects $him slightly.
-	<<elseif _collectiveTrustEffect == 0>>
-		The @@.mediumorchid;collective anger@@ your slaves feel reinforces $his own feelings.
+	<<if _collectiveDevotionEffect == 1>>
+		<<if _collectiveTrustEffect == 1>>
+			Since $he's ambivalent and fearful, the @@.hotpink;collective devotion@@ @@.mediumaquamarine;and trust@@ of your slaves affect $him slightly.
+		<<elseif _collectiveTrustEffect == 0>>
+			Since $he's ambivalent about you, the @@.hotpink;collective devotion@@ your slaves feel for you affects $him slightly.
+		<<else>>
+			Since $he's ambivalent about you, the @@.hotpink;collective devotion@@ your slaves feel for you affects $him slightly, but their @@.gold;general fear@@ affects $him too.
+		<</if>>
+	<<elseif _collectiveDevotionEffect == 0>>
+		<<if _collectiveTrustEffect == 1>>
+			Since $he's fearful of you, the @@.mediumaquamarine;collective trust@@ your slaves place in you affects $him slightly.
+		<<elseif _collectiveTrustEffect == -1>>
+			Since $he doesn't trust you, the @@.gold;collective fear@@ your slaves feel for you affects $him slightly.
+		<</if>>
 	<<else>>
-		The @@.mediumorchid;collective anger@@ @@.gold;and fear@@ your slaves feel reinforce $his own feelings.
+		<<if _collectiveTrustEffect == 1>>
+			The @@.mediumorchid;collective anger@@ your slaves feel reinforces $his own feelings, but their @@.mediumaquamarine;collective trust@@ also affects $him slightly.
+		<<elseif _collectiveTrustEffect == 0>>
+			The @@.mediumorchid;collective anger@@ your slaves feel reinforces $his own feelings.
+		<<else>>
+			The @@.mediumorchid;collective anger@@ @@.gold;and fear@@ your slaves feel reinforce $his own feelings.
+		<</if>>
 	<</if>>
 <</if>>
-<</if>>
 
 <<if $slaves[$i].assignmentVisible == 1>>
 <<if ($arcade != 0) || (($dairy != 0) && ($dairyRestraintsSetting >= 2))>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/salon.tw b/src/uncategorized/salon.tw
index 1d34d76ee29588c267cce839dffbb3e900c8a5d2..3ccd26ad087775173aa537abc2a7842a1b476b6f 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/salon.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/salon.tw
@@ -606,7 +606,6 @@ Apply makeup:
 <</if>>
 
 /* SKIN */
-<<set $dyedSkin = ["dyed red", "dyed green", "dyed blue", "dyed pink", "dyed gray", "tiger striped", "camouflage patterned"]>>
 
 <br><br>
 $His skin is $activeSlave.skin.