diff --git a/src/events/RETS/reSiblingTussle.js b/src/events/RETS/reSiblingTussle.js
index 19967d2e337f3367b2b46baa5bf64b75596d28a4..23d4d79106c68f4b107b38c44c1b8fa0dcb26885 100644
--- a/src/events/RETS/reSiblingTussle.js
+++ b/src/events/RETS/reSiblingTussle.js
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ App.Events.RETSSiblingTussle = class RETSSiblingTussle extends App.Events.BaseEv
t = [];
t.push(`You walk into the dressing area and clear your throat loudly. The other slaves pause what they're doing and turn to look at you, either from devotion or fear.`);
- t.push(`After a few seconds, ${sib2.slaveName} realizes that things have gone strangely quiet and scrambles to stand and pay attention to you, and ${sib1.slaveName} follows suit when ${he} realizes that the nature of their fight has changed.`);
+ t.push(`After a few seconds, ${sib2.slaveName} ${canHear(sib2) ? "realizes" : "manages to realize"} that things have gone strangely quiet and scrambles to stand and pay attention to you, and ${sib1.slaveName} follows suit when ${he} realizes that the nature of their fight has changed.`);
App.Events.addParagraph(frag, t);
t = [];
diff --git a/src/facilities/brothel/brothelAssignmentScene.tw b/src/facilities/brothel/brothelAssignmentScene.tw
index 05ef134da658c2691b2284113353603f1d30b486..3ebda3d30ee6b8924842e40b38d57e7a88b62f47 100644
--- a/src/facilities/brothel/brothelAssignmentScene.tw
+++ b/src/facilities/brothel/brothelAssignmentScene.tw
@@ -125,11 +125,11 @@ You tell $him $he's to report to <<if $MadamID != 0>>_S.Madam.slaveName immediat
<<elseif $activeSlave.vagina == -1>>
how much $he wishes $he could get pregnant from all the cum loads $he's going to get shot up $his rear.
<<elseif isFertile($activeSlave)>>
- that $he knows all the sex is bareback. By the look in $his eyes, you can tell $he is wondering how long it will take for some guys seed to take root in $him.
+ that $he knows all the sex is bareback. By the look in $his eyes, you can tell $he is wondering how long it will take for some guy's seed to take root in $him.
<<elseif $activeSlave.pregKnown == 1>>
how sexy $he thinks pregnant whores are.
<<elseif $activeSlave.preg > 0>>
- that $he knows all the sex is bareback. By the look in $his eyes, you can tell $he is wondering how long it will take for some guys seed to take root in $him.
+ that $he knows all the sex is bareback. By the look in $his eyes, you can tell $he is wondering how long it will take for some guy's seed to take root in $him.
<<elseif $activeSlave.ovaries == 1 && $activeSlave.pubertyXX == 0>>
how excited $he is for the day $he starts $his menstrual cycle. Will $he even see $his first period, or will every egg $he makes get fertilized?
<<else>>
@@ -265,11 +265,11 @@ You tell $him $he's to report to <<if $MadamID != 0>>_S.Madam.slaveName immediat
<<elseif $activeSlave.vagina == -1>>
how much $he wishes $he could get pregnant from all the cum loads $he's going to get shot up $his rear.
<<elseif isFertile($activeSlave)>>
- that $he knows all the sex is bareback. By the look in $his eyes, you can tell $he is wondering how long it will take for some guys seed to take root in $him.
+ that $he knows all the sex is bareback. By the look in $his eyes, you can tell $he is wondering how long it will take for some guy's seed to take root in $him.
<<elseif $activeSlave.pregKnown == 1>>
how sexy $he thinks pregnant whores are.
<<elseif $activeSlave.preg > 0>>
- that $he knows all the sex is bareback. By the look in $his eyes, you can tell $he is wondering how long it will take for some guys seed to take root in $him.
+ that $he knows all the sex is bareback. By the look in $his eyes, you can tell $he is wondering how long it will take for some guy's seed to take root in $him.
<<elseif $activeSlave.ovaries == 1 && $activeSlave.pubertyXX == 0>>
how excited $he is for the day $he starts $his menstrual cycle. Will $he even see $his first period, or will every egg $he makes get fertilized?
<<else>>
diff --git a/src/npc/infants/customizeInfant.tw b/src/npc/infants/customizeInfant.tw
index c4687bfe6128d2180f0281bb1080c60d895896df..18c5933084fca6c4bfb899420db5cd9298e9a63a 100644
--- a/src/npc/infants/customizeInfant.tw
+++ b/src/npc/infants/customizeInfant.tw
@@ -137,12 +137,12 @@ Custom eye color: <<textbox "$activeChild.eyeColor" $activeChild.eyeColor "Add c
/*
<br><br>
Change $his origin story: <<textbox "$activeChild.origin" $activeChild.origin "Add custom descriptors">>
-<br> //For best results, use complete, capitalized and punctuated sentences; for example: 'She followed you home from the pet store.'//
+<br> //For best results, use complete, capitalized and punctuated sentences; for example: '$He followed you home from the pet store.'//
*/
/*
<br><br>
Change $his custom description: <<textbox "$activeChild.custom.desc" $activeChild.custom.desc "Add custom descriptors">>
-<br> //For best results, use complete, capitalized and punctuated sentences; for example: 'She has a beauty mark above her left nipple.'//
+<br> //For best results, use complete, capitalized and punctuated sentences; for example: '$He has a beauty mark above $his left nipple.'//
<br><br>
Change $his custom label: <<textbox "$activeChild.custom.label" $activeChild.custom.label "Add custom descriptors">>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/theUtopianOrphanage.tw b/src/pregmod/theUtopianOrphanage.tw
index 064e55fd31b18b3205a2c791e58eccbe81a0671d..98f300e63cecda8db3b6278addc3413ff5bed9a0 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/theUtopianOrphanage.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/theUtopianOrphanage.tw
@@ -7,7 +7,9 @@
<<set $nextButton = "Continue", $nextLink = "Bulk Slave Intro", $returnTo = "Main", $newSlaveIndex = 0>>
<</if>>
-//The Utopian Orphanage is where all slaves dream of being raised. Its business model is to offer intelligent, well educated girls just past their majority. The girls are treated exceptionally well and have no sexual education or experience.
+//
+The Utopian Orphanage is where all slaves dream of being raised. Its business model is to offer intelligent, well educated girls just past their majority. The girls are treated exceptionally well and have no sexual education or experience.
+//
<br><br>
The Utopian Orphanage offers a fresh graduate for inspection. The interview takes place in the girl's private room, where she showcases her education and wits.
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw b/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw
index b7cb402cc5f2683c8cc1fe3dfae0db99af2f0001..55f704430e8cf77cf78015f718fabfe54fb936a0 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw
@@ -573,7 +573,7 @@ The legalities completed, <span class='slave-name'><<= SlaveFullName($activeSlav
$He realizes that fat slaves are preferred around here, and as a glutton, can't wait to @@.mediumaquamarine;eat $himself sick.@@
<<set $activeSlave.trust += 2>>
<<elseif ($activeSlave.weight > 130) && $activeSlave.behavioralFlaw != "anorexic">>
- $He realizes that fat slaves are preferred around here, and since $he is quiet rotund already, $he @@.mediumaquamarine;hopes@@ $he'll fit right in. That and if the cafeteria is open 24/7.
+ $He realizes that fat slaves are preferred around here, and since $he is quite rotund already, $he @@.mediumaquamarine;hopes@@ $he'll fit right in. That and if the cafeteria is open 24/7.
<<set $activeSlave.trust += 2>>
<<elseif ($activeSlave.weight > 10) && $activeSlave.behavioralFlaw != "anorexic">>
$He realizes that chubby slaves are preferred around here, and though $he isn't truly fat, $he's partway there; $he @@.mediumaquamarine;hopes@@ $he'll be kept well fed and happy.
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/reBoomerang.tw b/src/uncategorized/reBoomerang.tw
index 739c5934a5bd48660807b2e2515378c7fc7b29a1..a496709f7b61ee096763cb2111d2cd30540778d5 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/reBoomerang.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/reBoomerang.tw
@@ -332,12 +332,16 @@ brings up the relevant feeds. There's a naked body crumpled pathetically against
<<else>>
<<set $activeSlave.bellyImplant = 300000, $activeSlave.belly = 300000>>
<</if>>
+<<case "sniper spotter">>
+ You sold $him to a mercenary sniper to act as his spotter. "When the job wa<<s>> done, he ju<<s>>t left me behind, in the middle of a war zone. He <<s>>aid it wa<<s>> cheaper to hire a new <<s>>lave <<s>>potter than to get both of u<<s>> to <<s>>afety." $He looks emaciated; it's nothing short of a miracle $he was able to find $his way back to your arcology.
+ <<set $activeSlave.weight = random(-85, -80)>>
+ <<run setHealth($activeSlave, jsRandom(-50, -45), $activeSlave.health.shortDamage + normalRandInt(10, 3), $activeSlave.health.longDamage + normalRandInt(10, 3))>>
<<default>>
<<switch _buyer>>
<<case "housekeeper">>
"My kind Ma<<s>>ter pa<<ss>>ed away, and hi<<s>> heir <<s>>old me
<<case "nice brothel">>
- "The ni<<c>>e brothel you <<s>>old me to failed, and their girl<<s>> went
+ "The ni<<c>>e brothel you <<s>>old me to failed, and their $girl<<s>> went
<<case "virgin trader">>
"After I couldn't pa<<ss>> a<<s>> a virgin any more, they <<s>>old me
<<case "D virgin asspussy">>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/seCoursingRace.tw b/src/uncategorized/seCoursingRace.tw
index 740908993eac09b6820ce5d3e43dd7ca6c1c45ed..14d6c704826c796434cd2d1b299060b95963991a 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/seCoursingRace.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/seCoursingRace.tw
@@ -321,9 +321,9 @@ You place your hand on the leash's quick release and <<if canHear(_activeLurcher
<<elseif $origin == "feminized">>
pushes the tip of $his pleasure tail up the slave's sissy ass. The slave stiffens with shock. _He2's obviously had quite a variety of things pushed up _his2 girly butthole, but apparently this is _his2 first time being fucked by a tail.
<<elseif $origin == "huge balled">>
- pushes the tip of $his pleasure tail up the slave's ass. The slave stiffens with shock. Regardless of how much experience _he2's had with anal toys, a tail squirming through his bowels and pushing on _his2 prostate must be a novel experience. Playing up the spectacle, _activeLurcher.slaveName massages _his2 balls with both hands, stimulating them until the hare achieves a shameful anal orgasm.
+ pushes the tip of $his pleasure tail up the slave's ass. The slave stiffens with shock. Regardless of how much experience _he2's had with anal toys, a tail squirming through _his2 bowels and pushing on _his2 prostate must be a novel experience. Playing up the spectacle, _activeLurcher.slaveName massages _his2 balls with both hands, stimulating them until the hare achieves a shameful anal orgasm.
<<else>>
- pushes the tip of $his pleasure tail up the slave's ass. The slave never stops struggling, which is eloquent proof of the slave's undiminished resolve to resist _his2 lot in life. _He2's probably had things pushed up _his2 ass before, but a tail worming its way univited into _his2 bowels is not going to be easily forgotten.
+ pushes the tip of $his pleasure tail up the slave's ass. The slave never stops struggling, which is eloquent proof of the slave's undiminished resolve to resist _his2 lot in life. _He2's probably had things pushed up _his2 ass before, but a tail worming its way uninvited into _his2 bowels is not going to be easily forgotten.
<</if>>
<<else>>
as _activeLurcher.slaveName hesitates over _him2. The lurcher realizes that $he won't be able to get hard. Desperate to avoid failure, $he
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/sellSlave.tw b/src/uncategorized/sellSlave.tw
index e2b4591cc95328920e58b5e12c95c073a220e694..c3ace087078fc638e921a3715177da82ef0d7d50 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/sellSlave.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/sellSlave.tw
@@ -1951,6 +1951,21 @@ __Bids Received__
<</if>>
<</if>>
+<<if hasBothEyes($activeSlave)>>
+ <<if canSeePerfectly($activeSlave)>>
+ <<if isSlim($activeSlave)>>
+ <<if random(1,100) > 65>>
+ <br>''<<print cashFormat(450*Math.trunc((_slaveCost*1.45)/450))>>'' from a mercenary sniper looking for a small slave to act as his spotter.
+ <<link "Accept bid" "Slave Sold">>
+ <<set _Price = 450*Math.trunc((_slaveCost*1.45)/450)>>
+ <<run cashX(_Price, "slaveTransfer", $activeSlave)>>
+ <<set $buyer = "sniper spotter">>
+ <</link>>
+ <</if>>
+ <</if>>
+ <</if>>
+<</if>>
+
<<if $plot>>
<<if $peacekeepers>>
<<if $peacekeepers.strength >= 50>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/slaveSold.tw b/src/uncategorized/slaveSold.tw
index 1d96e9ade08d29e7848c04f51183e5a1af314ceb..7bd87ebfaa430a06942c0e2f6f890b873a63f28e 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/slaveSold.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/slaveSold.tw
@@ -1060,6 +1060,18 @@
<<if (_slaveImpact == 1)>>
The pregnancy obsessed sluts among your slaves are @@.mediumorchid;envious@@ of $activeSlave.slaveName's new experience, even if it is fake.
<</if>>
+
+<<case "sniper spotter">>
+ The mercenary sniper greets $activeSlave.slaveName before the two of them head off for a battlefield halfway around the world. "Let's hope you've got a good eye for political assassinations," he says humorlessly.
+ <<for _ss = 0; _ss < $slaves.length; _ss++>>
+ <<if ($slaves[_ss].skill.combat <= 15)>>
+ <<set $slaves[_ss].devotion -= 3>>
+ <<set _slaveImpact = 1>>
+ <</if>>
+ <</for>>
+ <<if (_slaveImpact == 1)>>
+ Your slaves lacking in combat skills don't envy $him, and @@.gold;in fact seem very worried@@ that they may share $his fate.
+ <</if>>
<<case "peacekeepers">>
$activeSlave.slaveName is delivered to General $peacekeepers.generalName's forces, to serve as a barracks whore. Several days later, the purchasing officer forwards a short shot of $activeSlave.slaveName