diff --git a/src/uncategorized/REFS.tw b/src/uncategorized/REFS.tw
index e0170ec3daab5b4c978eab52343b788c5305051a..adc7576ecb1a074e459490c449935067d78d1c20 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/REFS.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/REFS.tw
@@ -133,13 +133,13 @@
 
 As a result of $arcologies[0].name's adoption of paternalism there has been a remarkable effect on relationships between slaves and owners, with the flourishing of mutual respect between the two forming the basis for social life in the arcology. However, not all citizens are so keen as to internalize the tenants of paternalism, whether out of prejudice, old habits or adherence to a more brutal style of slaveholding.
 <br><br>
-On one particular outing, you come across an elderly male citizen giving his young slave quite a thrashing in the street outside of a prominent apartment complex. From the skinned state of the poor girl's knees and the cruel spiked collar about her neck, it is clear that her owner has been dragging her about the arcology as if she were a dog. To say nothing of this degrading treatment, beating of a slave in public is a fineable offense.
+On one particular outing, you come across an elderly male citizen giving his young slave quite a thrashing in the street outside of a prominent apartment complex. From the skinned state of the poor $girl's knees and the cruel spiked collar about $his neck, it is clear that $his owner has been dragging $him about the arcology as if $he were a dog. To say nothing of this degrading treatment, beating of a slave in public is a fineable offense.
 
 <<case "degradationist encounter">>
 
 As a result of $arcologies[0].name's adoption of degradationism there has been a remarkable effect on the social status of slaves, with the continued reduction of slave rights taking center stage. However, not all citizens are so keen as to internalize the tenants of degradationism, whether out of misplaced compassion, old habits or adherence to the Old World style of relationships.
 <br><br>
-On one particular outing, you come across an elderly male citizen holding the hand of his young slave, seemingly on a date at one of the arcology's prominent promenades. From the ring on the girl's finger and the modest neckline on her clothing, it is clear that her owner is treating her as if she is his wife. His obscene treatment of his slave has already drawn a large crowd of shocked onlookers.
+On one particular outing, you come across an elderly male citizen holding the hand of his young slave, seemingly on a date at one of the arcology's prominent promenades. From the ring on the $girl's finger and the modest neckline on $his clothing, it is clear that $his owner is treating $him as if $he is his wife. His obscene treatment of his slave has already drawn a large crowd of shocked onlookers.
 
 <<case "physical idealist encounter">>
 
@@ -157,7 +157,7 @@ While navigating your arcology on an outing, you find yourself coming across one
 
 As a result of $arcologies[0].name's adoption of transformation fetishism, a number of plastic surgery clinics, cosmetic surgeries and other transformative businesses have begun to crop up around the arcology's various promenades and shopping districts. The citizens of $arcologies[0].name have taken to the idea of altering their bodies with a gusto - though not all are so quick to adopt the trend just because it's in vogue.
 <br><br>
-On one particular outing, you come across a female citizen outside a surgery clinic staring pensively up at a poster advertising the variety of cosmetic procedures on offer in the institution. The citizen's expression is wistful, if somewhat grave, and at odds with the display above her lit up with silicone breasts, plump bee-stung lips and fake asses. From her unaltered appearance and simple garments, it is likely that she is not one of the arcology's wealthier denizens and thus is unable to shape $his body to $his heart's desire.
+On one particular outing, you come across a female citizen outside a surgery clinic staring pensively up at a poster advertising the variety of cosmetic procedures on offer in the institution. The citizen's expression is wistful, if somewhat grave, and at odds with the display above $him lit up with silicone breasts, plump bee-stung lips and fake asses. From $his unaltered appearance and simple garments, it is likely that she is not one of the arcology's wealthier denizens and thus is unable to shape $his body to $his heart's desire.
 
 <<case "body purism encounter">>
 
@@ -169,13 +169,13 @@ On one particular outing, you come across a female citizen outside a famous heal
 
 Your excursions out of your penthouse and into the arcology as a whole often put you in close proximity with citizens from all levels of the social strata. After all, they themselves have their own lives to live within the walls of $arcologies[0].name.
 <br><br>
-On this particular outing you happen to cross paths with a nubile young woman, accompanied by her father. From her plain clothes and rudimentary makeup, it is readily apparent that she is not one of the arcology's well-to-do inhabitants. She recognizes you quickly and dips her head in deference to your high status, <<if ($PC.visualAge >= 50)>>her cheeks flushed in embarrassment and delight at an aged arcology owner's interest in a young girl like her.<<else>>her expression awestruck by the presence of an arcology owner before her.<</if>>
+On this particular outing you happen to cross paths with a nubile young woman, accompanied by $his father. From $his plain clothes and rudimentary makeup, it is readily apparent that $he is not one of the arcology's well-to-do inhabitants. $He recognizes you quickly and dips $his head in deference to your high status, <<if ($PC.visualAge >= 50)>>$his cheeks flushed in embarrassment and delight at an aged arcology owner's interest in a young $girl like $him.<<else>>$his expression awestruck by the presence of an arcology owner before $him.<</if>>
 
 <<case "maturity preferentialist encounter">>
 
 Your excursions out of your penthouse and into the arcology as a whole often put you in close proximity with citizens from all levels of the social strata. After all, they themselves have their own lives to live within the walls of $arcologies[0].name.
 <br><br>
-On this particular outing you happen to cross paths with a comely female citizen and $his two adult sons. From her plain clothes and conspicuous lack of makeup, it is readily apparent that $he is not one of the arcology's well-to-do inhabitants. She recognizes you quickly and dips her head in deference to your high status, <<if ($PC.visualAge < 35)>>$his cheeks flushed in embarrassment and confusion at a young arcology owner's interest in an old lady like her.<<else>>$his expression awestruck by the presence of an arcology owner before $him.<</if>>
+On this particular outing you happen to cross paths with a comely female citizen and $his two adult sons. From $his plain clothes and conspicuous lack of makeup, it is readily apparent that $he is not one of the arcology's well-to-do inhabitants. $He recognizes you quickly and dips $his head in deference to your high status, <<if ($PC.visualAge < 35)>>$his cheeks flushed in embarrassment and confusion at a young arcology owner's interest in an old lady like $him.<<else>>$his expression awestruck by the presence of an arcology owner before $him.<</if>>
 
 <<default>>
 	<br>ERROR: bad REFS event $REFSevent
@@ -196,13 +196,13 @@ On this particular outing you happen to cross paths with a comely female citizen
 	<</replace>>
 <</link>>
 <<if $cash >= 2000>>
-<br><<link "Take the poor slave girl into your custody">>
+<br><<link "Take the poor slave $girl into your custody">>
 	<<replace "#result">>
-	Confronting the citizen is simplicity in itself; he would not dare defy you under threat of arrest by your security drones and is unlikely to garner any sympathy from the public for his degradationist behaviors. As such, you are able to take civil ownership over the poor slave girl and take her into your care with only minimal compensation to the citizen. As you stride away from her former owner with the girl in your arms, she leans over to plant a chaste kiss of thanks on your cheek.
+	Confronting the citizen is simplicity in itself; he would not dare defy you under threat of arrest by your security drones and is unlikely to garner any sympathy from the public for his degradationist behaviors. As such, you are able to take civil ownership over the poor slave $girl and take $him into your care with only minimal compensation to the citizen. As you stride away from $his former owner with the $girl in your arms, $he leans over to plant a chaste kiss of thanks on your cheek.
 	<<set $cash -= 2000>>
 	<<include "New Slave Intro">>
 	<</replace>>
-<</link>> // Taking custody of the girl will cost <<print cashFormat(2000)>>. //
+<</link>> // Taking custody of the $girl will cost <<print cashFormat(2000)>>. //
 <</if>>
 <br><<link "Publicly confront the citizen">>
 	<<replace "#result">>
@@ -221,17 +221,17 @@ On this particular outing you happen to cross paths with a comely female citizen
 	<</replace>>
 <</link>>
 <<if $cash >= 2000>>
-<br><<link "Take the pampered slave girl into your custody">>
+<br><<link "Take the pampered slave $girl into your custody">>
 	<<replace "#result">>
-	Confronting the citizen is simplicity in itself; he would not dare defy you directly under threat of arrest by your security drones and is unlikely to garner any sympathy from the public for his disturbing actions. As such, you are able to take civil ownership over the slave girl and claim her for yourself with only token compensation to the citizen. As you stride away from her former owner with the girl in your arms, she clings to you with obvious naiveté for how you will treat her. It's time she learnt how slaves are treated in $arcologies[0].name.
+	Confronting the citizen is simplicity in itself; he would not dare defy you directly under threat of arrest by your security drones and is unlikely to garner any sympathy from the public for his disturbing actions. As such, you are able to take civil ownership over the slave $girl and claim $him for yourself with only token compensation to the citizen. As you stride away from $his former owner with the girl in your arms, $he clings to you with obvious naiveté for how you will treat $him. It's time $he learnt how slaves are treated in $arcologies[0].name.
 	<<set $cash -= 2000>>
 	<<include "New Slave Intro">>
 	<</replace>>
-<</link>> // Taking custody of the girl will cost <<print cashFormat(2000)>>. //
+<</link>> // Taking custody of the $girl will cost <<print cashFormat(2000)>>. //
 <</if>>
 <br><<link "Publicly confront the citizen">>
 	<<replace "#result">>
-	Your walk up to the citizen is not accompanied by shaking ground or tumultuous fanfare, yet the citizen looks as if death itself has come before him. You don't hurt him physically, instead chastising him publicly in front of his fellow peers who begin to cheer their agreement. You end your tirade of verbal abuse with a reminder that although the man is a citizen of your arcology, that does not give him the impunity to parade a slave around the arcology as if she were his wife. To make it clear that you will not be so forgiving of his next transgression, a brace of your security drones hover behind you threateningly. The crowd that gathered @@.green;approve of your rebuke of the citizen@@.
+	Your walk up to the citizen is not accompanied by shaking ground or tumultuous fanfare, yet the citizen looks as if death itself has come before him. You don't hurt him physically, instead chastising him publicly in front of his fellow peers who begin to cheer their agreement. You end your tirade of verbal abuse with a reminder that although the man is a citizen of your arcology, that does not give him the impunity to parade a slave around the arcology as if $he were his wife. To make it clear that you will not be so forgiving of his next transgression, a brace of your security drones hover behind you threateningly. The crowd that gathered @@.green;approve of your rebuke of the citizen@@.
 	<<set $rep += 500>>
 	<</replace>>
 <</link>>
@@ -294,32 +294,32 @@ On this particular outing you happen to cross paths with a comely female citizen
 <span id="result">
 <<link "Keep walking">>
 	<<replace "#result">>
-	It's unfortunate that this citizen is unable to realize her dreams, but that's the way of the Free Cities. There are winners, and there are losers.
+	It's unfortunate that this citizen is unable to realize $his dreams, but that's the way of the Free Cities. There are winners, and there are losers.
 	<</replace>>
 <</link>>
 <<if $cash >= 1000>>
-<br><<link "Pay for her treatment">>
+<br><<link "Pay for $his treatment">>
 	<<replace "#result">>
-	It takes a moment for you to convince the woman that you aren't playing some cruel joke on her, but once you do she practically squeals with joy as you take her through the doors of the clinic and announce your intent to pay to give your loyal citizen the absolute transformative works. When you next see her it's on a gurney as she's wheeled out of the surgery, her patient's gown jutting out from her chest due to the size of her new rack. Through swollen lips she gushes to you about how great she feels to finally be a veritable bimbo, and how she's going to tell every citizen she fucks in $arcologies[0].name @@.green;that they have you to thank for her new body@@.
+	It takes a moment for you to convince the woman that you aren't playing some cruel joke on $him, but once you do $he practically squeals with joy as you take $him through the doors of the clinic and announce your intent to pay to give your loyal citizen the absolute transformative works. When you next see $him it's on a gurney as $he's wheeled out of the surgery, $his patient's gown jutting out from $his chest due to the size of $his new rack. Through swollen lips $he gushes to you about how great $he feels to finally be a veritable bimbo, and how $he's going to tell every citizen $he fucks in $arcologies[0].name @@.green;that they have you to thank for $his new body@@.
 	<<set $rep += 1000, $cash -= 1000>>
 	<</replace>>
 <</link>> // The treatment will cost <<print cashFormat(1000)>>. //
 <</if>>
-<br><<link "Offer to enhance her in your remote surgery in exchange for a fuck">>
+<br><<link "Offer to enhance $him in your remote surgery in exchange for a fuck">>
 	<<replace "#result">>
-	You make your presence known to citizen, and once the usual shock and disbelief have worn off the citizen rapidly agrees to your proposal. She follows you back to the penthouse where you inform $assistantName that the citizen is to be given the works in the remote surgery. As the citizen passes through the doors to the surgery, she turns and blows you a kiss of gratitude.
+	You make your presence known to citizen, and once the usual shock and disbelief have worn off the citizen rapidly agrees to your proposal. $He follows you back to the penthouse where you inform $assistantName that the citizen is to be given the works in the remote surgery. As the citizen passes through the doors to the surgery, $he turns and blows you a kiss of gratitude.
 	<br><br>
-	When the citizen is later delivered to your private suite to uphold her end of the bargain, she does so as the veritable image of a perfect bimbo slut. In her rush to come thank you for transforming her from her plain and plebian appearance she has evidently neglected to clothe herself, so you can admire her new firm tits, plump ass and bee-stung lips from the moment she enters the room. Despite being fresh from surgery, she's an exquisite fuck and an enthusiastic partner - citizens like her often are, given that penetration from a slave would be a social suicide.
+	When the citizen is later delivered to your private suite to uphold $his end of the bargain, $he does so as the veritable image of a perfect bimbo slut. In $his rush to come thank you for transforming $him from $his plain and plebian appearance $he has evidently neglected to clothe herself, so you can admire $his new firm tits, plump ass and bee-stung lips from the moment $he enters the room. Despite being fresh from surgery, $he's an exquisite fuck and an enthusiastic partner - citizens like $him often are, given that penetration from a slave would be a social suicide.
 	<<if $cash >= 10000>>
 		<br><br>
 		<span id="result2">
-		<<link "Enslave her afterwards">>
+		<<link "Enslave $him afterwards">>
 			<<replace "#result2">>
-			As your new playmate lies slumbering in bed, you consult with $assistantName as to the cost of the surgery conducted today. With some creative accounting, you settle the citizen's other outstanding debts and then arrange for her to be charged a sum in excess of her financial means for the surgery conducted on her today. Of course, that was not what you agreed, but it was her mistake for undergoing an expensive procedure without a formal contract. When she awakens, though she will retain her new bimbo body, she will be just another slave in your penthouse.
+			As your new playmate lies slumbering in bed, you consult with $assistantName as to the cost of the surgery conducted today. With some creative accounting, you settle the citizen's other outstanding debts and then arrange for $him to be charged a sum in excess of $his financial means for the surgery conducted on $him today. Of course, that was not what you agreed, but it was $his mistake for undergoing an expensive procedure without a formal contract. When $he awakens, though $he will retain $his new bimbo body, $he will be just another slave in your penthouse.
 			<<AddSlave $activeSlave>> /* skip New Slave Intro */
 			<<set $cash -= 10000>>
 			<</replace>>
-		<</link>> // Purchasing her outstanding debts will cost <<print cashFormat(10000)>>. //
+		<</link>> // Purchasing $his outstanding debts will cost <<print cashFormat(10000)>>. //
 		</span>
 	<</if>>
 	<</replace>>
@@ -359,29 +359,29 @@ On this particular outing you happen to cross paths with a comely female citizen
 <span id="result">
 <<link "Let them pass">>
 	<<replace "#result">>
-	You step aside gracefully and bow your head, while signifying to the girl that you intend to allow her to pass you. She seems taken aback by your geniality, especially given the gulf in social standing between the two of you, and has to be chaperoned from your presence by her father. Nonetheless, she is struck by her chance encounter with you and cannot stop recounting the story to all her friends, soon @@.green;the anecdote has seized the imaginations of $arcologies[0].name's youthful, female citizens@@. 
+	You step aside gracefully and bow your head, while signifying to the $girl that you intend to allow $him to pass you. $He seems taken aback by your geniality, especially given the gulf in social standing between the two of you, and has to be chaperoned from your presence by $his father. Nonetheless, $he is struck by $his chance encounter with you and cannot stop recounting the story to all $his friends, soon @@.green;the anecdote has seized the imaginations of $arcologies[0].name's youthful, female citizens@@. 
 	<<set $rep += 100>>
 	<</replace>>
 <</link>>
 <<if $cash >= 500>>
-<br><<link "Fuck her over dinner">>
+<br><<link "Fuck $him over dinner">>
 	<<replace "#result">>
-	It takes a moment for you to convince the young girl and her father that you aren't playing some cruel joke on them, but once you do she enthusiastically agrees to be your companion for the evening. With a pretty young thing on your arm for the rest of the night, and her father trailing behind the two of you at a respectful distance, you take $arcologies[0].name by storm amidst a flurry of speculative whispers and contemplative rumors. Later that night, you conclude your date with a pleasant meal at one of $arcologies[0].name's choicest restaurants with fine dining and even finer conversation. To the credit of her father, he politely continues eating his dinner without batting an eye when you <<if $PC.dick == 0>>don a strap-on and <</if>>take his daughter over the dinner table. When you part ways, the young girl is clearly smitten with you - so it's no wonder that by the next day the story of your encounter has @@.green;spread across $arcologies[0].name like wildfire@@.
+	It takes a moment for you to convince the young $girl and $his father that you aren't playing some cruel joke on them, but once you do $he enthusiastically agrees to be your companion for the evening. With a pretty young thing on your arm for the rest of the night, and $his father trailing behind the two of you at a respectful distance, you take $arcologies[0].name by storm amidst a flurry of speculative whispers and contemplative rumors. Later that night, you conclude your date with a pleasant meal at one of $arcologies[0].name's choicest restaurants with fine dining and even finer conversation. To the credit of $his father, he politely continues eating his dinner without batting an eye when you <<if $PC.dick == 0>>don a strap-on and <</if>>take his daughter over the dinner table. When you part ways, the young $girl is clearly smitten with you - so it's no wonder that by the next day the story of your encounter has @@.green;spread across $arcologies[0].name like wildfire@@.
 	<<set $rep += 500, $cash -= 500>>
 	<</replace>>
 <</link>> // This will cost <<print cashFormat(500)>>. //
 <</if>>
-<br><<link "Manipulate her into having sex with you">>
+<br><<link "Manipulate $him into having sex with you">>
 	<<replace "#result">>
-	It only takes a moment for $assistantName to uncover the father's financial records and the copious debt therein, and only another moment for you to browbeat the terrified father into allowing his daughter to sleep with you under threat of purchasing all their debt and summarily enslaving her. 
+	It only takes a moment for $assistantName to uncover the father's financial records and the copious debt therein, and only another moment for you to browbeat the terrified father into allowing his daughter to sleep with you under threat of purchasing all their debt and summarily enslaving $him. 
 	<br><br>
-	Once you both retire to your private suite, you peel the girl's clothes off as easily as one might shed a gift of its wrapping. In the nude her body is tastefully youthful, with narrow hips, firm breasts, and a delicate blush across her shamefaced, rosy cheeks. Despite the circumstances of your sexual conquest of her, she seems to enjoy the fuck well enough by the sounds of her frenzied moans - citizens like her often do since sexual submission to a slave would be a crippling scandal to a prominent citizen, let alone one of her diminished social stature.
+	Once you both retire to your private suite, you peel the girl's clothes off as easily as one might shed a gift of its wrapping. In the nude $his body is tastefully youthful, with narrow hips, firm breasts, and a delicate blush across $his shamefaced, rosy cheeks. Despite the circumstances of your sexual conquest of $him, $he seems to enjoy the fuck well enough by the sounds of $his frenzied moans - citizens like $him often do since sexual submission to a slave would be a crippling scandal to a prominent citizen, let alone one of $his diminished social stature.
 	<<if $cash >= 10000>>
 		<br><br>
 		<span id="result2">
-		<<link "Enslave her afterwards">>
+		<<link "Enslave $him afterwards">>
 			<<replace "#result2">>
-			After she regains her bearings from your sexual encounter, the girl slips on her simple clothes and attempts to slink away from your private suite unobtrusively. She makes it out the door before being confronted by a glowing array of wallscreen monitors, each displaying a visual representation of your purchase of her father's considerable debt and subsequent enslavement of her on the basis of that debt. Tears begin to stream down her cheeks as she sinks to her knees, her hopes of a long life without enslavement now dashed.
+			After $he regains $his bearings from your sexual encounter, the girl slips on $his simple clothes and attempts to slink away from your private suite unobtrusively. $He makes it out the door before being confronted by a glowing array of wallscreen monitors, each displaying a visual representation of your purchase of $his father's considerable debt and subsequent enslavement of $him on the basis of that debt. Tears begin to stream down $his cheeks as $he sinks to $his knees, $his hopes of a long life without enslavement now dashed.
 			<br><br>
 			<<set $cash -= 10000>>
 			<<include "New Slave Intro">>
@@ -398,34 +398,34 @@ On this particular outing you happen to cross paths with a comely female citizen
 <span id="result">
 <<link "Let them pass">>
 	<<replace "#result">>
-	You step aside gracefully and bow your head, while signifying to the older woman that you intend to allow her to pass you. She seems taken aback by your geniality, especially given the gulf in social standing between the two of you, and seems disproportionately flustered by your small show of civility. Nonetheless, she is struck by her chance encounter with you and cannot stop recounting the story to all her friends, and soon @@.green;the anecdote has seized the imaginations of $arcologies[0].name's mature, female citizens@@.
+	You step aside gracefully and bow your head, while signifying to the older woman that you intend to allow $him to pass you. $He seems taken aback by your geniality, especially given the gulf in social standing between the two of you, and seems disproportionately flustered by your small show of civility. Nonetheless, $he is struck by $his chance encounter with you and cannot stop recounting the story to all $his friends, and soon @@.green;the anecdote has seized the imaginations of $arcologies[0].name's mature, female citizens@@.
 	<<set $rep += 100>>
 	<</replace>>
 <</link>>
 <<if $cash >= 500>>
-<br><<link "Fuck her over dinner">>
+<br><<link "Fuck $him over dinner">>
 	<<replace "#result">>
-	It takes a moment for you to convince the older woman and her sons that you aren't playing some cruel joke on them, but once you do she enthusiastically agrees to be your companion for the evening. With a mature lady on your arm for the rest of the night, and her sons trailing behind the two of you at a respectful distance, you take $arcologies[0].name by storm amidst a flurry of speculative whispers and contemplative rumors. Later that night, you conclude your date with a pleasant meal at one of $arcologies[0].name's choicest restaurants with fine dining and even finer conversation. To the credit of her sons, they politely continue eating their dinner without batting an eye when you <<if $PC.dick == 0>>don a strap-on and <</if>>take their mother over the dinner table. When you part ways, the older woman is clearly smitten with you - so it's no wonder that by the next day the story of your encounter has @@.green;spread across $arcologies[0].name like wildfire@@.
+	It takes a moment for you to convince the older woman and $his sons that you aren't playing some cruel joke on them, but once you do $he enthusiastically agrees to be your companion for the evening. With a mature lady on your arm for the rest of the night, and $his sons trailing behind the two of you at a respectful distance, you take $arcologies[0].name by storm amidst a flurry of speculative whispers and contemplative rumors. Later that night, you conclude your date with a pleasant meal at one of $arcologies[0].name's choicest restaurants with fine dining and even finer conversation. To the credit of $his sons, they politely continue eating their dinner without batting an eye when you <<if $PC.dick == 0>>don a strap-on and <</if>>take their mother over the dinner table. When you part ways, the older woman is clearly smitten with you - so it's no wonder that by the next day the story of your encounter has @@.green;spread across $arcologies[0].name like wildfire@@.
 	<<set $rep += 500, $cash -= 500>>
 	<</replace>>
 <</link>> // This will cost <<print cashFormat(500)>>. //
 <</if>>
-<br><<link "Manipulate her into having sex with you">>
+<br><<link "Manipulate $him into having sex with you">>
 	<<replace "#result">>
-	It only takes a moment for $assistantName to uncover the citizen's financial records and the copious debt therein, and only another moment for you to browbeat the terrified older women into sleeping with you under threat of purchasing all her debt and summarily enslaving her. Her sons, frightened into obedience by the possibility of losing their dear mother, take their cue to make themselves scarce during the encounter.
+	It only takes a moment for $assistantName to uncover the citizen's financial records and the copious debt therein, and only another moment for you to browbeat the terrified older women into sleeping with you under threat of purchasing all $his debt and summarily enslaving $him. $His sons, frightened into obedience by the possibility of losing their dear mother, take their cue to make themselves scarce during the encounter.
 	<br><br>
-	Once you both retire to your private suite, you peel the mature citizen's clothes off as easily as one might shed a gift of its wrapping. In the nude her body is tastefully plush, with wide hips, firm motherly breasts, and a delicate blush across her shamefaced, plump cheeks. Despite the circumstances of your sexual conquest of her, she seems to enjoy the fuck well enough by the sounds of her frenzied moans - citizens like her often do since sexual submission to a slave would be a crippling scandal to a prominent citizen, let alone one of her diminished social stature.
+	Once you both retire to your private suite, you peel the mature citizen's clothes off as easily as one might shed a gift of its wrapping. In the nude $his body is tastefully plush, with wide hips, firm motherly breasts, and a delicate blush across $his shamefaced, plump cheeks. Despite the circumstances of your sexual conquest of $him, $he seems to enjoy the fuck well enough by the sounds of $his frenzied moans - citizens like $him often do since sexual submission to a slave would be a crippling scandal to a prominent citizen, let alone one of $his diminished social stature.
 	<<if $cash >= 10000>>
 		<br><br>
 		<span id="result2">
-		<<link "Enslave her afterwards">>
+		<<link "Enslave $him afterwards">>
 			<<replace "#result2">>
-			After she regains $his bearings from your sexual encounter, the older woman slips on $his simple clothes and attempts to slink away from your private suite unobtrusively. $He makes it out the door before being confronted by a glowing array of wallscreen monitors, each displaying a visual representation of your purchase of her considerable debt and subsequent enslavement of her on the basis of that debt. Tears begin to stream down her weathered cheeks as she sinks to her knees, her hopes of making it through the breadth of her long life without enslavement now dashed.
+			After $he regains $his bearings from your sexual encounter, the older woman slips on $his simple clothes and attempts to slink away from your private suite unobtrusively. $He makes it out the door before being confronted by a glowing array of wallscreen monitors, each displaying a visual representation of your purchase of $his considerable debt and subsequent enslavement of $him on the basis of that debt. Tears begin to stream down $his weathered cheeks as $he sinks to $his knees, $his hopes of making it through the breadth of $his long life without enslavement now dashed.
 			<br><br>
 			<<set $cash -= 10000>>
 			<<include "New Slave Intro">>
 			<</replace>>
-		<</link>> // Purchasing her outstanding debts will cost <<print cashFormat(10000)>>. //
+		<</link>> // Purchasing $his outstanding debts will cost <<print cashFormat(10000)>>. //
 		</span>
 	<</if>>
 	<</replace>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/surgeryDegradation.tw b/src/uncategorized/surgeryDegradation.tw
index 1e120c5b63eab87779eda502371e68fbcd7b21e2..f01a5846f165c66feb93864f85a73bd6074def99 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/surgeryDegradation.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/surgeryDegradation.tw
@@ -841,17 +841,17 @@ As the remote surgery's long recovery cycle completes,
 
 <<case "butt">>
 	<<if ($activeSlave.devotion > 20) && ($activeSlave.fetish == "buttslut") && ($activeSlave.fetishStrength > 60) && ($activeSlave.fetishKnown == 1)>>
-		$He gently flexes her sore buttocks with a sigh of pleasure. $He's @@.hotpink;deliriously happy@@ to have a bigger butt, since $he confidently expects that this will mean more cocks being shoved up $his asshole. $He's so pleased that $he now @@.mediumaquamarine;trusts@@ your plans for $his body. As with all surgery @@.red;$his health has been slightly affected.@@
+		$He gently flexes $his sore buttocks with a sigh of pleasure. $He's @@.hotpink;deliriously happy@@ to have a bigger butt, since $he confidently expects that this will mean more cocks being shoved up $his asshole. $He's so pleased that $he now @@.mediumaquamarine;trusts@@ your plans for $his body. As with all surgery @@.red;$his health has been slightly affected.@@
 		<<set $activeSlave.trust += 4>>
 		<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 4>>
 	<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion > 50)>>
-		$He rubs her new butt experimentally and turns to you with a smile to show it off. $He's still sore, so $he doesn't bounce or squeeze, but $he turns from side to side to let you see it from all angles. @@.hotpink;$He's happy with your changes to $his ass.@@ As with all surgery @@.red;$his health has been slightly affected.@@
+		$He rubs $his new butt experimentally and turns to you with a smile to show it off. $He's still sore, so $he doesn't bounce or squeeze, but $he turns from side to side to let you see it from all angles. @@.hotpink;$He's happy with your changes to $his ass.@@ As with all surgery @@.red;$his health has been slightly affected.@@
 		<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 4>>
 	<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion >= -20)>>
 		<<if canSee($activeSlave)>>$He eyes her new butt<<else>>$He shifts her new butt<</if>> skeptically. $He's still sore, so $he doesn't touch it. $He's come to terms with the fact that $he's a slave, so $he expected something like this when $he was sent to the surgery. $He isn't much affected mentally. As with all surgery @@.red;$his health has been slightly affected.@@ $He is @@.gold;sensibly fearful@@ of your total power over $his body.
 		<<set $activeSlave.trust -= 5>>
 	<<else>>
-		<<if canSee($activeSlave)>>$He eyes her new butt<<else>>The new weight in her backside fills her<</if>> with resentment. $He's still sore, so $he doesn't touch them, but $he glares daggers. $He still thinks of $himself as a person, so $he isn't used to the idea of being surgically altered to suit your every whim. For now, @@.mediumorchid;$he seems to view this fake ass as a cruel imposition@@. As with all surgery @@.red;$his health has been slightly affected.@@ $He is @@.gold;terribly afraid@@ of your total power over $his body.
+		<<if canSee($activeSlave)>>$He eyes $his new butt<<else>>The new weight in her backside fills her<</if>> with resentment. $He's still sore, so $he doesn't touch them, but $he glares daggers. $He still thinks of $himself as a person, so $he isn't used to the idea of being surgically altered to suit your every whim. For now, @@.mediumorchid;$he seems to view this fake ass as a cruel imposition@@. As with all surgery @@.red;$his health has been slightly affected.@@ $He is @@.gold;terribly afraid@@ of your total power over $his body.
 		<<set $activeSlave.trust -= 10>>
 		<<set $activeSlave.devotion -= 5>>
 	<</if>>
@@ -1370,7 +1370,7 @@ As the remote surgery's long recovery cycle completes,
 	<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion > 20)>>
 		$He clearly feels quite normal except for a vague ache around her jaw. It takes a good while for $him to figure out what has happened, but eventually $he gets enough sensation in her mouth to realize that $he is wearing prosthetic teeth that $he can remove. $He gasps with shock, but eventually her shoulders slump and $he tries to carry on. $He isn't much affected mentally. Since the surgery was invasive, @@.red;$his health has been greatly affected.@@
 	<<else>>
-		$He clearly feels quite normal except for a vague ache around her jaw. It takes a good while for $him to figure out what has happened, but eventually $he gets enough sensation in her mouth to realize that $he is wearing prosthetic teeth that $he can remove. $He gasps with shock, gags, spits out the prosthetics, <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>looks at $himself in the mirror<<else>>runs her tongue across her empty gums<</if>>, and sobs. @@.mediumorchid;The surgical invasion has filled $him with horror and anger.@@ Since the surgery was invasive, @@.red;$his health has been greatly affected.@@ $He is @@.gold;terribly afraid@@ of your total power over $his body.
+		$He clearly feels quite normal except for a vague ache around her jaw. It takes a good while for $him to figure out what has happened, but eventually $he gets enough sensation in her mouth to realize that $he is wearing prosthetic teeth that $he can remove. $He gasps with shock, gags, spits out the prosthetics, <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>looks at $himself in the mirror<<else>>runs $his tongue across her empty gums<</if>>, and sobs. @@.mediumorchid;The surgical invasion has filled $him with horror and anger.@@ Since the surgery was invasive, @@.red;$his health has been greatly affected.@@ $He is @@.gold;terribly afraid@@ of your total power over $his body.
 		<<set $activeSlave.trust -= 10>>
 		<<set $activeSlave.devotion -= 10>>
 	<</if>>
@@ -1382,13 +1382,13 @@ As the remote surgery's long recovery cycle completes,
 	<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion > 20)>>
 		$He clearly feels quite normal except for a vague ache around her jaw. It takes a good while for $him to figure out what has happened, but eventually $he gets enough sensation in her mouth to realize that he now has teeth fit for a carnivore. $He gasps with shock, but eventually her shoulders slump and $he tries to carry on. $He isn't much affected mentally. Since the surgery was invasive, @@.red;$his health has been greatly affected.@@
 	<<else>>
-		$He clearly feels quite normal except for a vague ache around her jaw. It takes a good while for $him to figure out what has happened, but eventually $he gets enough sensation in her mouth to realize that he now has teeth fit for a carnivore. $He gasps with shock, accidentally gets her tongue in the way in her anguish, bites $himself, and starts gagging and spitting blood. @@.mediumorchid;The surgical invasion has filled $him with horror and anger.@@ Since the surgery was invasive, @@.red;$his health has been greatly affected.@@ $He is @@.gold;terribly afraid@@ of your total power over $his body.
+		$He clearly feels quite normal except for a vague ache around her jaw. It takes a good while for $him to figure out what has happened, but eventually $he gets enough sensation in $his mouth to realize that he now has teeth fit for a carnivore. $He gasps with shock, accidentally gets $his tongue in the way in her anguish, bites $himself, and starts gagging and spitting blood. @@.mediumorchid;The surgical invasion has filled $him with horror and anger.@@ Since the surgery was invasive, @@.red;$his health has been greatly affected.@@ $He is @@.gold;terribly afraid@@ of your total power over $his body.
 		<<set $activeSlave.trust -= 10>>
 		<<set $activeSlave.devotion -= 10>>
 	<</if>>
 
 <<case "oral">>
-	$He clearly feels quite normal except for a vague ache around her jaw. $He <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>checks $himself in the mirror<<else>>runs her tongue over her teeth<</if>> repeatedly before accepting that nothing too unusual has happened, and that $he now appears to have a fully functional set of normal teeth. Though $he's surprised that nothing outlandish has been done, $he carries on as usual. Since the surgery was moderately invasive, @@.red;$his health has been somewhat affected.@@
+	$He clearly feels quite normal except for a vague ache around her jaw. $He <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>checks $himself in the mirror<<else>>runs $his tongue over $his teeth<</if>> repeatedly before accepting that nothing too unusual has happened, and that $he now appears to have a fully functional set of normal teeth. Though $he's surprised that nothing outlandish has been done, $he carries on as usual. Since the surgery was moderately invasive, @@.red;$his health has been somewhat affected.@@
 
 <<case "mute">>
 	<<if ($activeSlave.devotion > 50)>>
@@ -1405,7 +1405,7 @@ As the remote surgery's long recovery cycle completes,
 	<</if>>
 
 <<case "electrolarynx">>
-	<<if $activeSlave.eyes <= -2>>
+	<<if $activeSlave.eyes == 0>>
 		<<if ($activeSlave.devotion > 50)>>
 			The autosurgery instructed $him in no uncertain terms not to speak during recovery, so $he knows that $his voice has been restored. When you come in to check on her late in the process, though, $he does $his best to communicate adoration with $his <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>eyes<<else>>face<</if>> alone. Finally, the accelerated healing process reaches the time when $he's to test $his new vocal organs. $He <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>looks at<<else>>turns to<</if>> you shyly, and <<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>>meekly beckons to you from where $he's still<<else>>meekly mouths a request that you come over to where $he's<</if>> restrained by the autosurgery. When you're near, $he clears her sore throat gingerly and then whispers, "@@.hotpink;I love you,@@ <<Master>>" @@.mediumaquamarine;$He is far more trusting of your plans for $him in the future.@@
 			<<set $activeSlave.trust += 5>>
@@ -1415,7 +1415,7 @@ As the remote surgery's long recovery cycle completes,
 			<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 10>>
 		<<else>>
 			The autosurgery instructed $him in no uncertain terms not to speak during recovery, so $he knows that her voice has been restored. When you come in to check on her late in the process, though, $he <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>stares at<<else>>faces<</if>> you for a long moment before turning away from you, towards the wall, and beginning to cry quietly. It seems $he's surprised that you would do this for $him, and does not understand how to deal with the situation. In any case, @@.hotpink;$he hates you far less@@ than $he once did.
-		<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 10>>
+			<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 10>>
 		<</if>>
 	<<else>>
 		<<if ($activeSlave.devotion > 50)>>
@@ -1425,27 +1425,27 @@ As the remote surgery's long recovery cycle completes,
 			Before surgery, $he was warned repeatedly not to try talking for a while, and $he obeys. When $he finally does, her voice is raspy and weak, but it gains strength gradually. While $he first believes nothing has changed, <<if canHear($activeSlave)>>$he soon notices a slight synthetic tone to $his voice and realizes $he has been given a mechanical larynx<<else>>the autosurgery informs $him in no uncertain terms that $he has implanted with a mechanical larynx<</if>>. $He has mixed feelings about this development, but $he's @@.mediumaquamarine;aware@@ how valuable such implants are, and $he already @@.hotpink;accepted@@ that you have complete control over $his body.
 			<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 5; $activeSlave.trust += 10>>
 		<<else>>
-			Before surgery, $he was warned repeatedly not to try talking for a while, and $he obeys. When $he finally does, her voice is raspy and weak, but it gains strength gradually. While $he first believes nothing has changed, <<if canHear($activeSlave)>>$he soon notices a slight synthetic tone to $his voice and realizes $he has been given a mechanical larynx<<else>>the autosurgery informs $him in no uncertain terms that $he has implanted with a mechanical larynx<</if>>. $He is @@.gold;disturbed@@ that you replaced $his larynx with an artificial one and afraid of increased control over $him that such device grants.
+			Before surgery, $he was warned repeatedly not to try talking for a while, and $he obeys. When $he finally does, $his voice is raspy and weak, but it gains strength gradually. While $he first believes nothing has changed, <<if canHear($activeSlave)>>$he soon notices a slight synthetic tone to $his voice and realizes $he has been given a mechanical larynx<<else>>the autosurgery informs $him in no uncertain terms that $he has implanted with a mechanical larynx<</if>>. $He is @@.gold;disturbed@@ that you replaced $his larynx with an artificial one and afraid of increased control over $him that such device grants.
 			<<set $activeSlave.devotion -= 5>>
 		<</if>>
 	<</if>>
 
 <<case "restoreVoice">>
 	<<if ($activeSlave.devotion > 50)>>
-		The autosurgery instructed $him in no uncertain terms not to speak during recovery, so $he knows that $his voice has been restored. When you come in to check on $him late in the process, though, $he does $his best to communicate adoration with $his <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>eyes<<else>>face<</if>> alone. Finally, the accelerated healing process reaches the time when $he's to test $his new vocal organs. $He <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>looks at<<else>>turns to<</if>> you shyly, and <<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>>meekly beckons to you from where $he's still<<else>>meekly mouths a request that you come over to where $he's<</if>> restrained by the autosurgery. When you're near, $he clears her sore throat gingerly and then whispers, "@@.hotpink;I love you,@@ <<Master>>" @@.mediumaquamarine;$He is far more trusting of your plans for $him in the future.@@ As with all surgery @@.red;$his health has been slightly affected.@@
+		The autosurgery instructed $him in no uncertain terms not to speak during recovery, so $he knows that $his voice has been restored. When you come in to check on $him late in the process, though, $he does $his best to communicate adoration with $his <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>eyes<<else>>face<</if>> alone. Finally, the accelerated healing process reaches the time when $he's to test $his new vocal organs. $He <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>looks at<<else>>turns to<</if>> you shyly, and <<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>>meekly beckons to you from where $he's still<<else>>meekly mouths a request that you come over to where $he's<</if>> restrained by the autosurgery. When you're near, $he clears $his sore throat gingerly and then whispers, "@@.hotpink;I love you,@@ <<Master>>" @@.mediumaquamarine;$He is far more trusting of your plans for $him in the future.@@ As with all surgery @@.red;$his health has been slightly affected.@@
 		<<set $activeSlave.trust += 5>>
 		<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 5>>
 	<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion >= -20)>>
-		The autosurgery instructed her in no uncertain terms not to speak during recovery, so $he knows that her voice has been restored. When you come in to check on $him late in the process, though, $he does her best to communicate gratitude with her <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>eyes<<else>>face<</if>> alone. Finally, the accelerated healing process reaches the time when $he's to test her new vocal organs. $He <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>looks at<<else>>turns to<</if>> you shyly, and hesitantly <<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>>beckons to you from where $he's still<<else>>mouths a request that you come over to where $he's<</if>> restrained by the autosurgery. When you're near, $he clears her sore throat gingerly and then whispers, "Thank you, <<Master>>." @@.hotpink;$He has a much higher regard for you@@ due to this display of care for $him. As with all surgery @@.red;$his health has been slightly affected.@@
+		The autosurgery instructed $him in no uncertain terms not to speak during recovery, so $he knows that $his voice has been restored. When you come in to check on $him late in the process, though, $he does $his best to communicate gratitude with $his <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>eyes<<else>>face<</if>> alone. Finally, the accelerated healing process reaches the time when $he's to test $his new vocal organs. $He <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>looks at<<else>>turns to<</if>> you shyly, and hesitantly <<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>>beckons to you from where $he's still<<else>>mouths a request that you come over to where $he's<</if>> restrained by the autosurgery. When you're near, $he clears $his sore throat gingerly and then whispers, "Thank you, <<Master>>." @@.hotpink;$He has a much higher regard for you@@ due to this display of care for $him. As with all surgery @@.red;$his health has been slightly affected.@@
 		<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 10>>
 	<<else>>
-		The autosurgery instructed her in no uncertain terms not to speak during recovery, so $he knows that her voice has been restored. When you come in to check on her late in the process, though, $he <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>stares at<<else>>faces<</if>> you for a long moment before turning away from you, towards the wall, and beginning to cry quietly. It seems $he's surprised that you would do this for $him, and does not understand how to deal with the situation. In any case, @@.hotpink;$he hates you far less@@ than $he once did. As with all surgery @@.red;$his health has been slightly affected.@@
+		The autosurgery instructed $him in no uncertain terms not to speak during recovery, so $he knows that $his voice has been restored. When you come in to check on $him late in the process, though, $he <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>stares at<<else>>faces<</if>> you for a long moment before turning away from you, towards the wall, and beginning to cry quietly. It seems $he's surprised that you would do this for $him, and does not understand how to deal with the situation. In any case, @@.hotpink;$he hates you far less@@ than $he once did. As with all surgery @@.red;$his health has been slightly affected.@@
 		<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 10>>
 	<</if>>
 
 <<case "voice">>
 	<<if ($activeSlave.devotion > 50)>>
-		Before surgery, $he was warned repeatedly not to try talking for a while, and $he obeys. When $he finally does, her voice is raspy and weak, but it gains strength gradually. It comes out <<if $activeSlave.voice == 3>>far <</if>>higher and more girly than it was before, and $he laughs at $himself as $he gets used to it. @@.hotpink;$He has become more submissive,@@ since this helps $him to think of $himself as a <<if $activeSlave.voice == 3>>bimbo slut<<elseif $activeSlave.voice == 2>>real woman<</if>>. As with all surgery @@.red;$his health has been slightly affected.@@
+		Before surgery, $he was warned repeatedly not to try talking for a while, and $he obeys. When $he finally does, $his voice is raspy and weak, but it gains strength gradually. It comes out <<if $activeSlave.voice == 3>>far <</if>>higher and more girly than it was before, and $he laughs at $himself as $he gets used to it. @@.hotpink;$He has become more submissive,@@ since this helps $him to think of $himself as a <<if $activeSlave.voice == 3>>bimbo slut<<elseif $activeSlave.voice == 2>>real woman<</if>>. As with all surgery @@.red;$his health has been slightly affected.@@
 		<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 4>>
 	<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion > 20)>>
 		Before surgery, $he was warned repeatedly not to try talking for a while, and $he obeys. When $he finally does, her voice is raspy and weak, but it gains strength gradually. It comes out <<if $activeSlave.voice == 3>>far <</if>> higher and more girly than it was before, and $he laughs grimly at $himself as $he gets used to it. $He carries on regardless, accepting it as one more thing to learn to accept. As with all surgery @@.red;$his health has been slightly affected.@@
@@ -1533,28 +1533,28 @@ As the remote surgery's long recovery cycle completes,
 	<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion > 20)>>
 		$He exits the surgery on all fours, unable to stand due to the changes to $his legs. $He finds a whorish pair of heels waiting for $him and obediently puts them on, gingerly standing to find that $he can indeed walk comfortably while wearing them. After a while $he realizes that $he'll never walk without looking like a stripper again, but $he accepts it. $He isn't much affected mentally. As with all surgery @@.red;$his health has been slightly affected.@@
 	<<else>>
-		$He exits the surgery on all fours, unable to stand due to the changes to $his legs. $He finds a whorish pair of heels waiting for $him, but obstinately ignores them. After some time, $he realizes that the situation isn't changing and puts them on, gingerly standing to find that $he can indeed walk comfortably while wearing them. $His <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>eyes are<<else>>face is<</if>> filled with hatred when $he <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>sees her new and permanent appearance in the mirror<<else>>discovers this is the only way $he'll be able to stand now<</if>>. @@.mediumorchid;The surgical invasion has filled $him with horror and anger.@@ As with all surgery @@.red;$his health has been slightly affected.@@ $He is @@.gold;terribly afraid@@ of your total power over $his body.
+		$He exits the surgery on all fours, unable to stand due to the changes to $his legs. $He finds a whorish pair of heels waiting for $him, but obstinately ignores them. After some time, $he realizes that the situation isn't changing and puts them on, gingerly standing to find that $he can indeed walk comfortably while wearing them. $His <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>eyes are<<else>>face is<</if>> filled with hatred when $he <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>sees $his new and permanent appearance in the mirror<<else>>discovers this is the only way $he'll be able to stand now<</if>>. @@.mediumorchid;The surgical invasion has filled $him with horror and anger.@@ As with all surgery @@.red;$his health has been slightly affected.@@ $He is @@.gold;terribly afraid@@ of your total power over $his body.
 		<<set $activeSlave.trust -= 10>>
 		<<set $activeSlave.devotion -= 10>>
 	<</if>>
 
 <<case "heelsRestoration">>
 	<<if ($activeSlave.devotion >= -20)>>
-		$He exits the surgery on her own two feet. $He's still sore, but the modern surgery is fast and effective, and $he can use her restored legs immediately. $He gingerly stands on one foot, then the other; and even takes a few little hops. $He's grinning like a fool the whole time. @@.hotpink;$He has become more obedient due to gratitude.@@ As with all surgery @@.red;$his health has been slightly affected.@@
+		$He exits the surgery on $his own two feet. $He's still sore, but the modern surgery is fast and effective, and $he can use $his restored legs immediately. $He gingerly stands on one foot, then the other; and even takes a few little hops. $He's grinning like a fool the whole time. @@.hotpink;$He has become more obedient due to gratitude.@@ As with all surgery @@.red;$his health has been slightly affected.@@
 		<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 4>>
 	<<else>>
-		$He exits the surgery on her own two feet. $He's still sore, but the modern surgery is fast and effective, and $he can use her restored legs immediately. $He gingerly stands on one foot, then the other; and even takes a few little hops. $He obviously confused, finding it surprising that you would go to the expense and trouble of repairing $him. As with all surgery @@.red;$his health has been slightly affected.@@
+		$He exits the surgery on $his own two feet. $He's still sore, but the modern surgery is fast and effective, and $he can use $his restored legs immediately. $He gingerly stands on one foot, then the other; and even takes a few little hops. $He obviously confused, finding it surprising that you would go to the expense and trouble of repairing $him. As with all surgery @@.red;$his health has been slightly affected.@@
 	<</if>>
 
 <<case "amp">>
 	<<if ($activeSlave.devotion > 50)>>
-		Of course, $he could not walk out of the surgery; you carried $him. $He knows what a slave's life is, but $he did not really expect that it would ever come to this for $him. After a long, silent <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>stare at<<else>>consideration of<</if>> her limbless torso, $he squares her shoulders and visibly resolves to carry on being a good slave as best $he can. Since the surgery was invasive, @@.red;$his health has been greatly affected.@@
+		Of course, $he could not walk out of the surgery; you carried $him. $He knows what a slave's life is, but $he did not really expect that it would ever come to this for $him. After a long, silent <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>stare at<<else>>consideration of<</if>> $his limbless torso, $he squares $his shoulders and visibly resolves to carry on being a good slave as best $he can. Since the surgery was invasive, @@.red;$his health has been greatly affected.@@
 	<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion > 20)>>
-		Of course, $he could not walk out of the surgery; you carried $him. Despite her obedience, $he cries softly the whole time, shoulder and hip stumps moving occasionally as $he reflexively tries to stand - to walk - to touch $himself - to gesture - all things that $he will never do again. @@.mediumorchid;$He will struggle greatly with her medically created disability.@@ Since the surgery was invasive, @@.red;$his health has been greatly affected.@@ $He is @@.gold;cripplingly afraid@@ of your total power over $his body.
+		Of course, $he could not walk out of the surgery; you carried $him. Despite $his obedience, $he cries softly the whole time, shoulder and hip stumps moving occasionally as $he reflexively tries to stand - to walk - to touch $himself - to gesture - all things that $he will never do again. @@.mediumorchid;$He will struggle greatly with $his medically created disability.@@ Since the surgery was invasive, @@.red;$his health has been greatly affected.@@ $He is @@.gold;cripplingly afraid@@ of your total power over $his body.
 		<<set $activeSlave.trust -= 20>>
 		<<set $activeSlave.devotion -= 20>>
 	<<else>>
-		Of course, $he could not walk out of the surgery; you carried $him. You had a good idea what her reaction would be, so <<if ($activeSlave.teeth == "removable")>>you removed her teeth<<else>>$he's muzzled<</if>> to prevent $him from trying to bite. $He sobs convulsively, and her <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>eyes dart desperately from side to side through her tears, hopelessly imploring the mirror to show her something other than this<<else>>stumps twitch pathetically with her desperate efforts to move $his limbs, to prove there is something other than this<</if>>. Anything other than this. @@.mediumorchid;The surgical invasion has filled $him with horror and anger.@@ Since the surgery was invasive, @@.red;$his health has been greatly affected.@@ $He is @@.gold;terrified to the point of insanity@@ of your total power over $his body.
+		Of course, $he could not walk out of the surgery; you carried $him. You had a good idea what $his reaction would be, so <<if ($activeSlave.teeth == "removable")>>you removed $his teeth<<else>>$he's muzzled<</if>> to prevent $him from trying to bite. $He sobs convulsively, and her <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>eyes dart desperately from side to side through her tears, hopelessly imploring the mirror to show her something other than this<<else>>stumps twitch pathetically with her desperate efforts to move $his limbs, to prove there is something other than this<</if>>. Anything other than this. @@.mediumorchid;The surgical invasion has filled $him with horror and anger.@@ Since the surgery was invasive, @@.red;$his health has been greatly affected.@@ $He is @@.gold;terrified to the point of insanity@@ of your total power over $his body.
 		<<set $activeSlave.trust -= 50>>
 		<<set $activeSlave.devotion -= 50>>
 	<</if>>
@@ -1567,7 +1567,7 @@ As the remote surgery's long recovery cycle completes,
 		<<set $activeSlave.trust -= 10>>
 		<<set $activeSlave.devotion -= 10>>
 	<<else>>
-		Of course, $he could not walk out of the surgery; you carried $him. You had a good idea what her reaction would be, so <<if ($activeSlave.teeth == "removable")>>you removed her teeth<<else>>$he's muzzled<</if>> to prevent $him from trying to bite. $He sobs convulsively, and <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>seeing<<else>>noticing<</if>> ports installed in her stumps does little to stop her tears. @@.mediumorchid;The surgical invasion has filled $him with horror and anger.@@ Since the surgery was invasive, @@.red;$his health has been greatly affected.@@ $He is @@.gold;terrified to the point of insanity@@ of your total power over $his body.
+		Of course, $he could not walk out of the surgery; you carried $him. You had a good idea what $his reaction would be, so <<if ($activeSlave.teeth == "removable")>>you removed $his teeth<<else>>$he's muzzled<</if>> to prevent $him from trying to bite. $He sobs convulsively, and <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>seeing<<else>>noticing<</if>> ports installed in her stumps does little to stop her tears. @@.mediumorchid;The surgical invasion has filled $him with horror and anger.@@ Since the surgery was invasive, @@.red;$his health has been greatly affected.@@ $He is @@.gold;terrified to the point of insanity@@ of your total power over $his body.
 		<<set $activeSlave.trust -= 40>>
 		<<set $activeSlave.devotion -= 40>>
 	<</if>>
@@ -1609,7 +1609,7 @@ As the remote surgery's long recovery cycle completes,
 	<<if ($activeSlave.devotion > 50)>>
 		Of course, $he could not walk out of the surgery; you carried $him. $He knows what a slave's life is, but $he did not really expect that it would ever come to this for $him. Anesthesia has yet to completely wear off so it takes $him a while to notice ports in her stumps. When $he does, $he visibly relaxes, realizing $he may yet walk again. $He squares her shoulders and visibly resolves to carry on being a good slave as best $he can. Since the surgery was invasive, @@.red;$his health has been greatly affected.@@
 	<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion > 20)>>
-		Of course, $he could not walk out of the surgery; you carried $him. Despite her obedience, $he cries softly the whole time, shoulder and hip stumps moving occasionally as $he reflexively tries to stand - to walk - to touch $himself - to gesture - all things that $he will never do again. $He slightly calms down when $he <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>sees<<else>>feels<</if>> ports installed in her stumps and realizes her immobility is not permanent. Even so, $he is still @@.gold;terrified@@ of your total power over $his body. @@.mediumorchid;$He will struggle greatly with her medically created disability.@@ Since the surgery was invasive, @@.red;$his health has been greatly affected.@@
+		Of course, $he could not walk out of the surgery; you carried $him. Despite her obedience, $he cries softly the whole time, shoulder and hip stumps moving occasionally as $he reflexively tries to stand - to walk - to touch $himself - to gesture - all things that $he will never do again. $He slightly calms down when $he <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>sees<<else>>feels<</if>> ports installed in her stumps and realizes her immobility is not permanent. Even so, $he is still @@.gold;terrified@@ of your total power over $his body. @@.mediumorchid;$He will struggle greatly with $his medically created disability.@@ Since the surgery was invasive, @@.red;$his health has been greatly affected.@@
 		<<set $activeSlave.trust -= 10>>
 		<<set $activeSlave.devotion -= 10>>
 	<<else>>
diff --git a/src/utility/descriptionWidgetsFlesh.tw b/src/utility/descriptionWidgetsFlesh.tw
index 3f6cd1dd9ec8b07f728aaa0ed22695f621760633..4679265cf58c08c7f67340a76cd5c705a2fa3b5a 100644
--- a/src/utility/descriptionWidgetsFlesh.tw
+++ b/src/utility/descriptionWidgetsFlesh.tw
@@ -2630,9 +2630,9 @@ $He's got a
 			<<elseif ($activeSlave.dick > 5) && canAchieveErection($activeSlave) && ($activeSlave.devotion > 20)>>
 				erection is so big that $he's trapped it upwards against $his stomach and under $his top.<<if $activeSlave.boobs > 800>> Its head peeks out from $his cleavage.<</if>>
 			<<elseif $activeSlave.dick > 5>>
-				cheerleader skirt is not designed for someone with a cock as big as hers; its lower half sticks out beneath its edge.
+				cheerleader skirt is not designed for someone with a cock as big as $hers; its lower half sticks out beneath its edge.
 			<<elseif $activeSlave.dick > 3>>
-				cheerleader skirt is not designed for someone with a cock as big as hers; its head is easily visible beneath its edge.
+				cheerleader skirt is not designed for someone with a cock as big as $hers; its head is easily visible beneath its edge.
 			<<elseif $activeSlave.dick > 0>>
 				cheerleader skirt hides $his dick reasonably well as long as $he stands still.
 			<<elseif $activeSlave.vagina == -1>>