From b3f3f9e7733a8b95b6da03b46938d52f70f3c8be Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Anu <barrychahal@gmail.com> Date: Sat, 12 Jun 2021 09:24:11 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Sore shoulders: fix spacing & desc redundancy --- src/uncategorized/RESS.tw | 10 +++++----- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw b/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw index 77d30998a35..baaebc26d04 100644 --- a/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw +++ b/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw @@ -329,14 +329,14 @@ With $his back arched and $his thighs together $his <<if $activeSlave.butt > 5>> <<case "sore shoulders">> -<<= App.UI.slaveDescriptionDialog($activeSlave)>> comes before you for a routine inspection. The <<if $activeSlave.muscles > 95>>heavily muscled<<elseif $activeSlave.muscles > 30>>ripped<<else>>toned<</if>><<if $activeSlave.preg > $activeSlave.pregData.normalBirth/1.33>> and heavily pregnant<<elseif $activeSlave.preg > $activeSlave.pregData.normalBirth/2>>pregnant<</if>> $desc is looking good, but as $he raises $his arm<<if hasBothArms($activeSlave)>>s<</if>> over $his head to spin $his nude torso under your gaze, $he winces slightly. +<<= App.UI.slaveDescriptionDialog($activeSlave)>> comes before you for a routine inspection. The <<if $activeSlave.muscles > 95>>heavily muscled<<elseif $activeSlave.muscles > 30>>ripped<<else>>toned<</if>> $desc is looking good, but as $he raises $his arm<<if hasBothArms($activeSlave)>>s<</if>> over $his head to spin $his nude torso under your gaze, $he winces slightly. <<if canSee($activeSlave)>> - $His <<= App.Desc.eyesColor($activeSlave)>> flick up to see if you noticed, and $his face falls a little when $he sees that you did. You raise one eyebrow, and the obedient slave explains $himself + $His <<= App.Desc.eyesColor($activeSlave)>> flick up to see if you noticed, and $his face falls a little when $he sees that you did. You raise one eyebrow, and the obedient slave explains $himself. <<elseif canHear($activeSlave)>> - $His ears perk up to hear if you noticed. You clear your throat, startling $him and making $him explain $himself + $His ears perk up to hear if you noticed. You clear your throat, startling $him and making $him explain $himself. <<else>> - $He tries to affect a stoic expression, but when you tentatively touch one of $his shoulders, $he grimaces slightly and quickly opts to explain $himself -<</if>>. + $He tries to affect a stoic expression, but when you tentatively touch one of $his shoulders, $he grimaces slightly and quickly opts to explain $himself. +<</if>> <<if !canTalk($activeSlave)>> $He uses gestures to beg your pardon, and explains that yesterday was arm day for $him, and $he went out a little hard. $His shoulders are a little sore, but $he gestures that $he's all right. <<else>> -- GitLab