diff --git a/src/player/actions/fondleButt.tw b/src/player/actions/fondleButt.tw
index 4ddfec6c94dd7ef7d6421dc4a7967d9764ad2208..6faf6663d2527abb335cca0d93997b4dbad8688d 100644
--- a/src/player/actions/fondleButt.tw
+++ b/src/player/actions/fondleButt.tw
@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ as well as $his
 	<</if>>
 	buttocks. $He looks longingly into your eyes as you continue to move around $his posterior, pinching with your fingers and slapping with your palms before reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter. $He moans and quivers slightly when you rub your fingers around $his virgin anus. $He starts to wiggle $his ass while you circle around $his anus, not breaking contact with $him with your fingers. You keep squeezing $his buttocks firmly — first one, then the other and then finally both. $He can't resist gyrating $his hips in arousal while in your grasp.
 	<<if canWalk($activeSlave)>>
-		You strongly pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and push $him down to bend $him over your desk.
+		You strongly pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around, and push $him down to bend $him over your desk.
 	<<else>>
 		You move closer towards $him, turn $him around and firmly hold $him down on desk, face-down so that $his butt is facing you up into the air.
 	<</if>>
@@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ as well as $his
 	<</if>>
 	buttocks with both hands before rubbing along them, feeling the shape of $his<<if $seeRace == 1>> $activeSlave.race<</if>> ass with your fingers and squeezing gently. $He looks passionately into your eyes as you continue to move around $his posterior gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He sighs as you rub your fingertips around $his virgin anus. $He starts to wiggle $his ass while you circle around $his anus, not breaking contact with $him with your fingers. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then both and $he can't resist gyrating $his hips enticingly while in your grasp.
 	<<if canWalk($activeSlave)>>
-		You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and bend $him over your desk.
+		You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around, and bend $him over your desk.
 	<<else>>
 		You move closer towards $him, turn $him around and push $him down on desk, face-down so that $his butt is facing you up into the air.
 	<</if>>
@@ -174,7 +174,7 @@ as well as $his
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.butt <= 20>>
 		couch-like
 	<</if>>
-	buttocks with both hands before rubbing along them, feeling the shape of $his<<if $seeRace == 1>> $activeSlave.race<</if>> ass with your fingers and squeezing gently. $He gasps as you rub fingers around $his virgin anus. You watch $his face as you continue to move around $his posterior and $he clearly enjoys the contact on $his bare skin. You gently reach to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He starts to wiggle $his ass while you circle around $his anus, not breaking contact with $him with your fingers. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then both and $he can't help but gyrate $his hips enticingly while in your grasp. You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and bend $him over your desk. You look at $his rear while you squeeze $his cheeks and rub them with your firm hands. You explore the contours of $his posterior with both your eyes and hands, then look at $his virgin butthole as you trace it with your fingers and thumb. Eventually you decide to stop and $he squeals in surprise after you give $his <<if $activeSlave.butt < 2>>
+	buttocks with both hands before rubbing along them, feeling the shape of $his<<if $seeRace == 1>> $activeSlave.race<</if>> ass with your fingers and squeezing gently. $He gasps as you rub fingers around $his virgin anus. You watch $his face as you continue to move around $his posterior and $he clearly enjoys the contact on $his bare skin. You gently reach to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He starts to wiggle $his ass while you circle around $his anus, not breaking contact with $him with your fingers. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then both and $he can't help but gyrate $his hips enticingly while in your grasp. You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around, and bend $him over your desk. You look at $his rear while you squeeze $his cheeks and rub them with your firm hands. You explore the contours of $his posterior with both your eyes and hands, then look at $his virgin butthole as you trace it with your fingers and thumb. Eventually you decide to stop and $he squeals in surprise after you give $his <<if $activeSlave.butt < 2>>
 		flat
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.butt <= 2>>
 		cute
@@ -215,7 +215,7 @@ as well as $his
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.butt <= 20>>
 		couch-like
 	<</if>>
-	buttocks before rubbing along them, feeling the shape of $his<<if $seeRace == 1>> $activeSlave.race<</if>> ass with your fingers and squeezing gently. $He gasps as you rub fingers around $his virgin anus. You study $his face as you continue to move around $his posterior gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He starts to wiggle $his ass while you circle around $his anus, not breaking contact with $him with your fingers. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then both and $he can't help but wiggle $his hips while in your grasp. You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and bend $him over your desk. You look at $his rear while you squeeze $his cheeks and rub them with your firm hands. You explore the contours of $his posterior with both your eyes and hands, then look at $his virgin butthole as you trace it with your fingers and thumb. Eventually you decide to stop and $he squeals in surprise after you give $his <<if $activeSlave.butt < 2>>
+	buttocks before rubbing along them, feeling the shape of $his<<if $seeRace == 1>> $activeSlave.race<</if>> ass with your fingers and squeezing gently. $He gasps as you rub fingers around $his virgin anus. You study $his face as you continue to move around $his posterior gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He starts to wiggle $his ass while you circle around $his anus, not breaking contact with $him with your fingers. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then both and $he can't help but wiggle $his hips while in your grasp. You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around, and bend $him over your desk. You look at $his rear while you squeeze $his cheeks and rub them with your firm hands. You explore the contours of $his posterior with both your eyes and hands, then look at $his virgin butthole as you trace it with your fingers and thumb. Eventually you decide to stop and $he squeals in surprise after you give $his <<if $activeSlave.butt < 2>>
 		flat
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.butt <= 2>>
 		cute
@@ -256,7 +256,7 @@ as well as $his
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.butt <= 20>>
 		couch-like
 	<</if>>
-	buttocks before rubbing along them, feeling the shape of $his<<if $seeRace == 1>> $activeSlave.race<</if>> ass with your fingers and squeezing gently. $He gasps and shivers as you rub fingers around $his virgin anus. $He remains frozen as you continue to move around $his posterior gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He shudders more while you circle around $his anus, not breaking contact with $him with your fingers. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then finally both. $He is so filled with terror that $he remains stiff while in your grasp, even as it becomes clear to $him you're not going to hurt $him. You pull $his quivering body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and bend $him over your desk. You look at $his quaking rear while you squeeze $his cheeks and rub them with your firm hands. You explore the contours of $his posterior with both your eyes and hands, then look at $his virgin butthole as you trace it with your fingers and thumb. Eventually, you decide to stop. $He gradually stands and looks in your eyes with utter incomprehension, but $he is frightened about what you will do next.
+	buttocks before rubbing along them, feeling the shape of $his<<if $seeRace == 1>> $activeSlave.race<</if>> ass with your fingers and squeezing gently. $He gasps and shivers as you rub fingers around $his virgin anus. $He remains frozen as you continue to move around $his posterior gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He shudders more while you circle around $his anus, not breaking contact with $him with your fingers. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then finally both. $He is so filled with terror that $he remains stiff while in your grasp, even as it becomes clear to $him you're not going to hurt $him. You pull $his quivering body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around, and bend $him over your desk. You look at $his quaking rear while you squeeze $his cheeks and rub them with your firm hands. You explore the contours of $his posterior with both your eyes and hands, then look at $his virgin butthole as you trace it with your fingers and thumb. Eventually, you decide to stop. $He gradually stands and looks in your eyes with utter incomprehension, but $he is frightened about what you will do next.
 <<elseif ($activeSlave.anus == 0)>>
 	While you grope $his butt, $he tries hard to resist. $He <<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>>grabs your wrists and tugs on your arms<<else>>writhes under your fingers<</if>> but stops, helpless, when you tell $him what the alternatives are. You reach around and grab $his <<if $activeSlave.butt < 2>>
 		flat
@@ -277,7 +277,7 @@ as well as $his
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.butt <= 20>>
 		couch-like
 	<</if>>
-	buttocks before rubbing along them, feeling the shape of $his<<if $seeRace == 1>> $activeSlave.race<</if>> ass with your fingers and squeezing gently. $He tries to break out of your grasp as you rub fingers around $his virgin anus. $He writhes as you continue to move around $his posterior gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He struggles to stay still while you circle around $his unbroken anus, not breaking contact with $him with your fingers. You look at $his face and $he has shut $his eyes, trying not to think about what's happening to $his butt. This only encourages you to continue. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then finally both and $he can't help but quiver while in your grasp. You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and push $him down, bending $him over your desk while $he tries to push away. You look at $his rear while you squeeze $his cheeks and rub them with your firm hands. You wander along the outline of $his posterior with both your eyes and hands, then look at $his virgin butthole as you trace it with your fingers and thumb. Eventually, you decide to stop. $He slowly stands and looks in your eyes, as though almost demanding answers. $He looks apprehensive about what you will do next.
+	buttocks before rubbing along them, feeling the shape of $his<<if $seeRace == 1>> $activeSlave.race<</if>> ass with your fingers and squeezing gently. $He tries to break out of your grasp as you rub fingers around $his virgin anus. $He writhes as you continue to move around $his posterior, gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He struggles to stay still while you circle around $his unbroken anus, not breaking contact with $him with your fingers. You look at $his face and $he has <<if !canSee($activeSlave)>>reflexively <</if>>shut $his eyes, trying not to think about what's happening to $his butt. This only encourages you to continue. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then finally both and $he can't help but quiver while in your grasp. You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around, and push $him down, bending $him over your desk while $he tries to push away. You look at $his rear while you squeeze $his cheeks and rub them with your firm hands. You wander along the outline of $his posterior with both your eyes and hands, then look at $his virgin butthole as you trace it with your fingers and thumb. Eventually, you decide to stop. $He slowly stands and looks in your eyes, as though almost demanding answers. $He looks apprehensive about what you will do next.
 <<elseif $activeSlave.fetish == "mindbroken">>
 	<<if canWalk($activeSlave)>>
 		You instruct $him to present $his buttocks and anus but $he remains still and unresponsive. Talking to a broken mind is pointless.
@@ -314,7 +314,7 @@ as well as $his
 	<<elseif ($activeSlave.anus == 0)>>
 		virgin butthole,
 	<</if>>
-	but you understand it is only physiological. You continue to move around $his posterior gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. You circle around $his anus but $he remains still. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then both but $he is like a doll in your grasp. You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and bend $him over your desk. You look at $his rear while you squeeze $his cheeks and rub them with your firm hands. You explore the contours of $his posterior with both your eyes and hands, then look at $his
+	but you understand it is only physiological. You continue to move around $his posterior gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. You circle around $his anus but $he remains still. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then both but $he is like a doll in your grasp. You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around, and bend $him over your desk. You look at $his rear while you squeeze $his cheeks and rub them with your firm hands. You explore the contours of $his posterior with both your eyes and hands, then look at $his
 	<<if ($activeSlave.anus > 3)>>
 		gaping
 	<<elseif ($activeSlave.anus == 3)>>
@@ -368,9 +368,9 @@ as well as $his
 		<<elseif ($activeSlave.anus == 0)>>
 			virgin butthole.
 		<</if>>
-		$He writhes as you continue to move around $his posterior gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He struggles to stay still while you circle around $his anus, not breaking contact with $him with your fingers. You look at $his face and $he has shut $his eyes, trying not to think about what's happening to $his butt. This only encourages you to continue. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then finally both and $he can't help but quiver while in your grasp.
+		$He writhes as you continue to move around $his posterior, gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He struggles to stay still while you circle around $his anus, not breaking contact with $him with your fingers. You look at $his face and $he has <<if !canSee($activeSlave)>>reflexively <</if>>shut $his eyes, trying not to think about what's happening to $his butt. This only encourages you to continue. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then finally both and $he can't help but quiver while in your grasp.
 		<<if ($activeSlave.amp != 1)>>
-			You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and push $him down, bending $him over your desk while $he tries to push away.
+			You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around, and push $him down, bending $him over your desk while $he tries to push away.
 		<<else>>
 			You move closer to $him, turn $him around and push $him down, face-down on your desk while $he tries to wriggle desperately.
 		<</if>>
@@ -425,9 +425,9 @@ as well as $his
 		<<elseif ($activeSlave.anus == 0)>>
 			virgin butthole.
 		<</if>>
-		$He writhes as you continue to move around $his posterior gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He struggles to stay still while you circle around $his anus with your fingers. You look at $his face and $he has shut $his eyes, trying not to get aroused by your touch on $his butt. This only encourages you to continue. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then finally both and $he can't help but quiver while in your grasp.
+		$He writhes as you continue to move around $his posterior, gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He struggles to stay still while you circle around $his anus with your fingers. You look at $his face and $he has <<if !canSee($activeSlave)>>reflexively <</if>>shut $his eyes, trying not to get aroused by your touch on $his butt. This only encourages you to continue. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then finally both and $he can't help but quiver while in your grasp.
 		<<if ($activeSlave.amp != 1)>>
-			You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and push $him down, bending $him over your desk.
+			You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around, and push $him down, bending $him over your desk.
 		<<else>>
 			You move closer to $him, turn $him around and push $him down, face-down on your desk while $he wriggles.
 		<</if>>
@@ -484,7 +484,7 @@ as well as $his
 	<</if>>
 	buttocks. You start rubbing along $his cheeks, feeling the shape of $his<<if $seeRace == 1>> $activeSlave.race<</if>> ass with your fingers and squeezing gently. As you rub your fingers around $his anus, $he starts to relax. $He quivers as you continue to move around $his posterior gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He purses $his lips while you circle around $his anus with your fingers. You look at $his face and $he is looking back at you doe-eyed, trying but failing not to get aroused by your soft touch on $his butt. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then finally both and $he can't help but let out a moan while in your grasp.
 	<<if ($activeSlave.amp != 1)>>
-		You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and push $him down, bending $him over your desk.
+		You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around, and push $him down, bending $him over your desk.
 	<<else>>
 		You move closer to $him, turn $him around and push $him down, face-down on your desk while $he tries to wriggle desperately.
 	<</if>>
@@ -529,7 +529,7 @@ as well as $his
 	<</if>>
 	buttocks. You start rubbing along $his cheeks, feeling the shape of $his<<if $seeRace == 1>> $activeSlave.race<</if>> ass with your fingers and squeezing gently. As you rub your fingers around $his anus, $he sighs audibly. $He moans as you continue to move around $his posterior gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He quivers while you circle around $his anus with your fingers. You look at $his face and $he is looking back at you longingly, getting aroused by your continued touch on $his butt. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then finally both and $he can't help but let out a moan while in your grasp.
 	<<if ($activeSlave.amp != 1)>>
-		You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and push $him down, bending $him over your desk.
+		You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around, and push $him down, bending $him over your desk.
 	<<else>>
 		You move closer to $him, turn $him around and push $him down, face-down on your desk so that $his butt is up facing towards you.
 	<</if>>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/fillUpButt.tw b/src/pregmod/fillUpButt.tw
index 9b27ead866e98ef7d875f8c2238c24789658ce8f..c8f326372276375004529c9bf040b2617faaff31 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/fillUpButt.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/fillUpButt.tw
@@ -105,7 +105,7 @@ before shoving the equipment into $his
 	<<elseif ($activeSlave.anus == 0)>>
 		virgin butthole,
 	<</if>>
-	but you understand it is only physiological. You continue to move around $his posterior gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. You circle around $his anus but $he remains still. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then both but $he is like a doll in your grasp. You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and bend $him over your lap, <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his soft and jiggly <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>>-filled belly spilling over your legs<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>> distended belly resting on your legs<<else>>$his belly resting on your legs<</if>>. You look at $his rear while you squeeze $his cheeks and rub them with your firm hands. You explore the contours of $his posterior with both your eyes and hands, before picking up the hose and inserting it into $his
+	but you understand it is only physiological. You continue to move around $his posterior gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. You circle around $his anus but $he remains still. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then both but $he is like a doll in your grasp. You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around, and bend $him over your lap, <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his soft and jiggly <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>>-filled belly spilling over your legs<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>> distended belly resting on your legs<<else>>$his belly resting on your legs<</if>>. You look at $his rear while you squeeze $his cheeks and rub them with your firm hands. You explore the contours of $his posterior with both your eyes and hands, before picking up the hose and inserting it into $his
 	<<if ($activeSlave.anus > 3)>>
 		gaping
 	<<elseif ($activeSlave.anus == 3)>>
@@ -161,11 +161,11 @@ before shoving the equipment into $his
 	<<elseif ($activeSlave.anus == 0)>>
 		virgin butthole.
 	<</if>>
-	$He writhes as you continue to move around $his posterior gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He struggles to stay still while you circle around $his anus, not breaking contact with $him with your fingers. You look at $his face and $he has shut $his eyes, trying not to think about what's about to happen.
+	$He writhes as you continue to move around $his posterior, gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He struggles to stay still while you circle around $his anus, not breaking contact with $him with your fingers. You look at $his face and $he has <<if !canSee($activeSlave)>>reflexively <</if>>shut $his eyes, trying not to think about what's about to happen.
 	<<if ($activeSlave.amp != 1)>>
-		You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and bend $him over your lap, <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his soft and jiggly <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>>-filled belly spilling over your legs<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>> distended belly resting on your legs<<else>>$his belly resting on your legs<</if>>, while $he tries to push away.
+		You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around, and bend $him over your lap, <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his soft and jiggly <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>>-filled belly spilling over your legs<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>> distended belly resting on your legs<<else>>$his belly resting on your legs<</if>>, while $he tries to push away.
 	<<else>>
-		You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and place $him on your lap, <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his soft and jiggly <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>>-filled belly spilling over your legs<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>> distended belly resting on your legs<<else>>$his belly resting on your legs<</if>>, while $he tries to squirm away.
+		You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around, and place $him on your lap, <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his soft and jiggly <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>>-filled belly spilling over your legs<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>> distended belly resting on your legs<<else>>$his belly resting on your legs<</if>>, while $he tries to squirm away.
 	<</if>>
 	You look at $his rear while you squeeze $his cheeks and rub them with your firm hands. You explore the contours of $his posterior with both your eyes and hands, before picking up the hose and inserting it into $his
 	<<if ($activeSlave.anus > 3)>>
@@ -220,11 +220,11 @@ before shoving the equipment into $his
 	<<elseif ($activeSlave.anus == 0)>>
 		virgin butthole.
 	<</if>>
-	$He writhes as you continue to move around $his posterior gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He struggles to stay still while you circle around $his anus with your fingers. You look at $his face and $he has shut $his eyes, trying not to get aroused by your touch on $his butt. This only encourages you to continue. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then finally both and $he can't help but quiver while in your grasp.
+	$He writhes as you continue to move around $his posterior, gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He struggles to stay still while you circle around $his anus with your fingers. You look at $his face and $he has <<if !canSee($activeSlave)>>reflexively <</if>>shut $his eyes, trying not to get aroused by your touch on $his butt. This only encourages you to continue. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then finally both and $he can't help but quiver while in your grasp.
 	<<if ($activeSlave.amp != 1)>>
-		You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and bend $him over your lap, <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his soft and jiggly <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>>-filled belly spilling over your legs<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>> distended belly resting on your legs<<else>>$his belly resting on your legs<</if>>.
+		You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around, and bend $him over your lap, <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his soft and jiggly <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>>-filled belly spilling over your legs<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>> distended belly resting on your legs<<else>>$his belly resting on your legs<</if>>.
 	<<else>>
-		You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and place $his wriggling body on your lap, <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his soft and jiggly <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>>-filled belly spilling over your legs<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>> distended belly resting on your legs<<else>>$his belly resting on your legs<</if>>.
+		You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around, and place $his wriggling body on your lap, <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his soft and jiggly <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>>-filled belly spilling over your legs<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>> distended belly resting on your legs<<else>>$his belly resting on your legs<</if>>.
 	<</if>>
 	You look at $his rear while you squeeze $his cheeks and rub them with your firm hands. You explore the contours of $his posterior with both your eyes and hands, before picking up the hose and inserting it into $his
 	<<if ($activeSlave.anus > 3)>>
@@ -269,9 +269,9 @@ before shoving the equipment into $his
 	<</if>>
 	buttocks. You start rubbing along $his cheeks, feeling the shape of $his <<if $seeRace == 1>>$activeSlave.race <</if>>ass with your fingers and squeezing gently. As you rub your fingers around $his anus, $he starts to relax. $He quivers as you continue to move around $his posterior gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He purses $his lips while you circle around $his anus with your fingers. You look at $his face and $he is <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>looking back at you doe-eyed<<else>>smiling pleasantly at you<</if>>, trying but failing not to get aroused by your soft touch on $his butt. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then finally both and $he can't help but let out a moan while in your grasp.
 	<<if ($activeSlave.amp != 1)>>
-		You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and bend $him over your lap, <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his soft and jiggly <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>>-filled belly spilling over your legs<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>> distended belly resting on your legs<<else>>$his belly resting on your legs<</if>>.
+		You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around, and bend $him over your lap, <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his soft and jiggly <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>>-filled belly spilling over your legs<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>> distended belly resting on your legs<<else>>$his belly resting on your legs<</if>>.
 	<<else>>
-		You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and place $him wriggling body on your lap, <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his soft and jiggly <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>>-filled belly spilling over your legs<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>> distended belly resting on your legs<<else>>$his belly resting on your legs<</if>>.
+		You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around, and place $him wriggling body on your lap, <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his soft and jiggly <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>>-filled belly spilling over your legs<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>> distended belly resting on your legs<<else>>$his belly resting on your legs<</if>>.
 	<</if>>
 	You look at $his rear while you squeeze $his cheeks and rub them with your firm hands. You wander along the outline of $his posterior with both your eyes and hands, before picking up the hose and inserting it into $his
 	<<if ($activeSlave.anus > 3)>>
@@ -315,9 +315,9 @@ before shoving the equipment into $his
 	<</if>>
 	buttocks. You start rubbing along $his cheeks, feeling the shape of $his <<if $seeRace == 1>>$activeSlave.race <</if>>ass with your fingers and squeezing gently. As you rub your fingers around $his anus, $he sighs audibly. $He moans as you continue to move around $his posterior gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He quivers while you circle around $his anus with your fingers. You look at $his face and $he is <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>looking<<else>>gazing<</if>> back at you longingly, getting aroused by your continued touch on $his butt. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then finally both and $he can't help but let out a moan while in your grasp.
 	<<if ($activeSlave.amp != 1)>>
-		You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and bend $him over your lap, <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his soft and jiggly <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>>-filled belly spilling over your legs<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>> distended belly resting on your legs<<else>>$his belly resting on your legs<</if>>.
+		You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around, and bend $him over your lap, <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his soft and jiggly <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>>-filled belly spilling over your legs<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>> distended belly resting on your legs<<else>>$his belly resting on your legs<</if>>.
 	<<else>>
-		You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and place $his wriggling body on your lap, <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his soft and jiggly <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>>-filled belly spilling over your legs<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>> distended belly resting on your legs<<else>>$his belly resting on your legs<</if>>.
+		You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around, and place $his wriggling body on your lap, <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his soft and jiggly <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>>-filled belly spilling over your legs<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>> distended belly resting on your legs<<else>>$his belly resting on your legs<</if>>.
 	<</if>>
 	You look at $his rear while you squeeze $his cheeks and rub them with your firm hands. You wander along the outline of $his posterior with both your eyes and hands, before picking up the hose and inserting it into $his
 	<<if ($activeSlave.anus > 3)>>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/fillUpFace.tw b/src/pregmod/fillUpFace.tw
index 31d6609932737a91facb5505d3b1414fae3e8cfb..474afdfdd9e86a595bddf9b533ea47fbd73fbf57 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/fillUpFace.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/fillUpFace.tw
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ You attach a hose to $dairyName tap with the pipes set to pump $activeSlave.infl
 	<<if canWalk($activeSlave)>>
 		You instruct $him to take a seat on your lap and open $his mouth wide for the hose, but $he remains still and unresponsive. Talking to a broken mind is pointless.
 	<</if>>
-	You reach out and wrap you arms around $his
+	You reach out and wrap your arms around $his
 	<<if $activeSlave.weight > 190>>
 		immensely soft
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.belly >= 150000>>
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ You attach a hose to $dairyName tap with the pipes set to pump $activeSlave.infl
 	<<if canWalk($activeSlave)>>
 		You instruct $him to take a seat on your lap and open $his mouth wide for the hose. Opposed to the thought of being filled <<if $activeSlave.inflation > 0>>more <</if>>with $activeSlave.inflationType, $he tries to step back, but you catch $him and pull $him into your lap, wrapping your arms around $his
 	<<elseif ($activeSlave.amp != 1)>>
-		You inform $him $he'll be taking a seat on your lap, opening $his mouth wide for the hose, and drinking until you tell $him $he is full enough. $He's opposed to the thought of being filled <<if $activeSlave.inflation > 0>>more <</if>>with $activeSlave.inflationType, but since $he is immobile, can't escape. You heft $him onto your lap, wrapping your arms around $his
+		You inform $him $he'll be taking a seat on your lap, opening $his mouth wide for the hose, and drinking until you tell $him $he is full enough. $He's opposed to the thought of being filled with<<if $activeSlave.inflation > 0>> more<</if>> $activeSlave.inflationType, but since $he is immobile, $he can't escape. You heft $him onto your lap, wrapping your arms around $his
 	<<else>>
 		$He's opposed to the thought of being filled with <<if $activeSlave.inflation > 0>>more <</if>>$activeSlave.inflationType, but as an amputee can do nothing about it. You heft $him onto your lap, wrapping your arms around $him
 	<</if>>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/forceFeeding.tw b/src/pregmod/forceFeeding.tw
index dc0c8edc85dca6a00df6c51b837349d14edca687..6388bc9e467216b2fe350c8d39dce006abb72407 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/forceFeeding.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/forceFeeding.tw
@@ -288,7 +288,7 @@ and a little jiggle from $his gut.
 		<<else>>
 			devotedly downs every gulp you give $him and catches $his breath, while being a tease, between helpings.
 		<</if>>
-		Once the last of the slave food is in $his stomach, you give the firm globe a <<if $activeSlave.devotion > 20>>gentle<</if>> slap, eliciting
+		Once the last of the slave food is in $his stomach, you give the firm globe a <<if $activeSlave.devotion > 20>>gentle <</if>>slap, eliciting
 		<<if $activeSlave.fetish == "mindbroken">>
 			a large belch from the broken slave.
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.devotion < -20>>
@@ -311,7 +311,6 @@ and a little jiggle from $his gut.
 			pat it several more times
 		<</if>>
 		as you appreciate its size.
-
 		<br><br>
 	<</if>>
 	Knocking the empty buckets aside, you help $his
@@ -523,7 +522,7 @@ and a little jiggle from $his gut.
 <</if>>
 
 <<if _pregDiscovery == 1>>
-	Once you've managed to stop $him heaving and clean up, you get to the root of this mess. While most of the tests come back normal, one in particular catches your eye; @@.lime;$He is pregnant <<if $activeSlave.preg > $activeSlave.pregData.normalBirth/4>> and surprisingly far along<</if>>.@@
+	Once you've managed to stop $his heaving and clean up, you decide to get to the root of this mess. While most of the tests come back normal, one in particular catches your eye; @@.lime;$he is pregnant <<if $activeSlave.preg > $activeSlave.pregData.normalBirth/4>> and surprisingly far along<</if>>.@@
 	<<set $activeSlave.inflation = 0, $activeSlave.inflationType = "none", $activeSlave.inflationMethod = 0, $activeSlave.pregKnown = 1>>
 <<else>>
 	<<if $activeSlave.inflation == 3>>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/widgets/bodySwapReaction.tw b/src/pregmod/widgets/bodySwapReaction.tw
index 28182fb3612515329d0e8b99d4432ba41d37d151..58c484d01540d39d9e65ffe964e00134312b8983 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/widgets/bodySwapReaction.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/widgets/bodySwapReaction.tw
@@ -1348,7 +1348,7 @@ Now you only have to wait for $him to wake up.
 			<</if>>
 		<</if>>
 
-		/* corest piercing */
+		/* corset piercing */
 		<<if $args[0].corsetPiercing != 0 && $args[1].corsetPiercing == 0>>
 			An odd feeling on $his back draws $his attention. $He discovers a series of rings running down $his spine and, flexing $his back muscles, shudders at the sensation.
 		<</if>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/changeLanguage.tw b/src/uncategorized/changeLanguage.tw
index 330aa85ba1e075d25dbc0ff4985a28de40b7654c..a93f3ba2fcaefb6b3cc8700ce0da3988eb429741 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/changeLanguage.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/changeLanguage.tw
@@ -5,27 +5,27 @@
 <<set $revivalistLanguage = 0>>
 <<if $arcologies[0].FSRomanRevivalist != "unset">>
 	<<if $language != "Latin">>
-	<<set $revivalistLanguage = "Latin">>
+		<<set $revivalistLanguage = "Latin">>
 	<</if>>
 <<elseif $arcologies[0].FSAztecRevivalist != "unset">>
 	<<if $language != "Nahuatl">>
-	<<set $revivalistLanguage = "Nahuatl">>
+		<<set $revivalistLanguage = "Nahuatl">>
 	<</if>>
 <<elseif $arcologies[0].FSEgyptianRevivalist != "unset">>
 	<<if $language != "Ancient Egyptian">>
-	<<set $revivalistLanguage = "Ancient Egyptian">>
+		<<set $revivalistLanguage = "Ancient Egyptian">>
 	<</if>>
 <<elseif $arcologies[0].FSEdoRevivalist != "unset">>
 	<<if $language != "Japanese">>
-	<<set $revivalistLanguage = "Japanese">>
+		<<set $revivalistLanguage = "Japanese">>
 	<</if>>
 <<elseif $arcologies[0].FSArabianRevivalist != "unset">>
 	<<if $language != "Arabic">>
-	<<set $revivalistLanguage = "Arabic">>
+		<<set $revivalistLanguage = "Arabic">>
 	<</if>>
 <<elseif $arcologies[0].FSChineseRevivalist != "unset">>
 	<<if $language != "Chinese">>
-	<<set $revivalistLanguage = "Chinese">>
+		<<set $revivalistLanguage = "Chinese">>
 	<</if>>
 <</if>>
 
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw b/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw
index 15439cfd5a92e46af9d9ea54024aa7406f5fcdfe..765f345e66ae010cba91e65c912048a52c0843f2 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/newSlaveIntro.tw
@@ -32,15 +32,15 @@
 <br>
 The legalities completed, ''__@@.pink;<<= SlaveFullName($activeSlave)>>@@__'' <<if $activeSlave.amp == 1>>lies helplessly on your desk,<<elseif !canWalk($activeSlave)>>kneels before your desk,<<else>>stands before your desk,<</if>>
 <<if $activeSlave.devotion < -50>>
-	looking you in the eyes with defiance.
+	<<if canSee($activeSlave)>>looking you in the eyes<<else>>directly facing you<</if>> with defiance.
 <<elseif $activeSlave.devotion < -20>>
-	looking at you sullenly.
+	<<if canSee($activeSlave)>>looking at<<else>>facing<</if>> you sullenly.
 <<elseif $activeSlave.trust <= 50>>
 	staring at the ground in fear.
 <<elseif $activeSlave.devotion <= 50>>
 	waiting meekly for orders.
 <<elseif canSmell($activeSlave) && $activeSlave.career == "a breeding bull" && isPlayerFertile($PC)>>
-	sniffing the air and staring intently at your crotch.
+	sniffing the air and <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>staring<<else>>pointing $his nose<</if>> intently at your crotch.
 <<elseif $activeSlave.origin == "$He submitted to enslavement to escape the hard life of an old world whore.">>
 	wondering what one of your working <<= $girl>>s can expect.
 <<elseif ($activeSlave.origin == "$He submitted to enslavement to get access to modern prenatal care.") || ($activeSlave.origin == "$He sold $himself into slavery out of fear that life on the streets was endangering $his pregnancy.")>>