From c34cd4f10b07c28ebba90b3ee2ddac78910bfc42 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: pregmodfan <pregmodfan@cock.li>
Date: Sun, 12 Apr 2020 13:09:15 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] Apply suggestion to src/pregmod/incubator.tw

---
 src/pregmod/incubator.tw | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/src/pregmod/incubator.tw b/src/pregmod/incubator.tw
index c6f290c689e..ad9c238ce3e 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/incubator.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/incubator.tw
@@ -455,7 +455,7 @@ Target age for release: <<textbox "$targetAge" $targetAge "Incubator">> [[Minimu
 				<<elseif _safecc > 15000>>
 					$His belly has reached the size of full term pregnancy.
 				<<elseif _safecc > 10000>>
-					$His belly inflated to the late term pregnancy size, skin become shiny.
+					$His belly has inflated to the size of late term pregnancy, and the skin has become shiny.
 				<<elseif _safecc > 5000>>
 					$His belly look like mid term pregnancy, it's possible to see some pulsing from the expanding and contracting of incubator probes. 
 				<<elseif _safecc > 1500>>
-- 
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