From cabb6a2a6a49e5e60becf34a807ab5aef94d24a8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: klorpa <30924131+klorpa@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Sat, 8 Jun 2019 21:59:20 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] MiscFixes

---
 src/player/actions/fondleButt.tw          | 26 +++++++++++------------
 src/pregmod/fillUpButt.tw                 | 22 +++++++++----------
 src/pregmod/fillUpFace.tw                 |  4 ++--
 src/pregmod/forceFeeding.tw               |  5 ++---
 src/uncategorized/RETS.tw                 |  2 +-
 src/uncategorized/pCollaborationChoice.tw |  6 +++---
 src/uncategorized/pCoupCollaboration.tw   |  1 -
 src/uncategorized/pCoupLoss.tw            |  6 +++---
 src/uncategorized/pUndergroundRailroad.tw |  7 ++++--
 src/uncategorized/slaveSold.tw            |  2 +-
 10 files changed, 41 insertions(+), 40 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/player/actions/fondleButt.tw b/src/player/actions/fondleButt.tw
index 4ddfec6c94d..6faf6663d25 100644
--- a/src/player/actions/fondleButt.tw
+++ b/src/player/actions/fondleButt.tw
@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ as well as $his
 	<</if>>
 	buttocks. $He looks longingly into your eyes as you continue to move around $his posterior, pinching with your fingers and slapping with your palms before reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter. $He moans and quivers slightly when you rub your fingers around $his virgin anus. $He starts to wiggle $his ass while you circle around $his anus, not breaking contact with $him with your fingers. You keep squeezing $his buttocks firmly — first one, then the other and then finally both. $He can't resist gyrating $his hips in arousal while in your grasp.
 	<<if canWalk($activeSlave)>>
-		You strongly pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and push $him down to bend $him over your desk.
+		You strongly pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around, and push $him down to bend $him over your desk.
 	<<else>>
 		You move closer towards $him, turn $him around and firmly hold $him down on desk, face-down so that $his butt is facing you up into the air.
 	<</if>>
@@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ as well as $his
 	<</if>>
 	buttocks with both hands before rubbing along them, feeling the shape of $his<<if $seeRace == 1>> $activeSlave.race<</if>> ass with your fingers and squeezing gently. $He looks passionately into your eyes as you continue to move around $his posterior gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He sighs as you rub your fingertips around $his virgin anus. $He starts to wiggle $his ass while you circle around $his anus, not breaking contact with $him with your fingers. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then both and $he can't resist gyrating $his hips enticingly while in your grasp.
 	<<if canWalk($activeSlave)>>
-		You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and bend $him over your desk.
+		You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around, and bend $him over your desk.
 	<<else>>
 		You move closer towards $him, turn $him around and push $him down on desk, face-down so that $his butt is facing you up into the air.
 	<</if>>
@@ -174,7 +174,7 @@ as well as $his
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.butt <= 20>>
 		couch-like
 	<</if>>
-	buttocks with both hands before rubbing along them, feeling the shape of $his<<if $seeRace == 1>> $activeSlave.race<</if>> ass with your fingers and squeezing gently. $He gasps as you rub fingers around $his virgin anus. You watch $his face as you continue to move around $his posterior and $he clearly enjoys the contact on $his bare skin. You gently reach to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He starts to wiggle $his ass while you circle around $his anus, not breaking contact with $him with your fingers. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then both and $he can't help but gyrate $his hips enticingly while in your grasp. You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and bend $him over your desk. You look at $his rear while you squeeze $his cheeks and rub them with your firm hands. You explore the contours of $his posterior with both your eyes and hands, then look at $his virgin butthole as you trace it with your fingers and thumb. Eventually you decide to stop and $he squeals in surprise after you give $his <<if $activeSlave.butt < 2>>
+	buttocks with both hands before rubbing along them, feeling the shape of $his<<if $seeRace == 1>> $activeSlave.race<</if>> ass with your fingers and squeezing gently. $He gasps as you rub fingers around $his virgin anus. You watch $his face as you continue to move around $his posterior and $he clearly enjoys the contact on $his bare skin. You gently reach to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He starts to wiggle $his ass while you circle around $his anus, not breaking contact with $him with your fingers. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then both and $he can't help but gyrate $his hips enticingly while in your grasp. You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around, and bend $him over your desk. You look at $his rear while you squeeze $his cheeks and rub them with your firm hands. You explore the contours of $his posterior with both your eyes and hands, then look at $his virgin butthole as you trace it with your fingers and thumb. Eventually you decide to stop and $he squeals in surprise after you give $his <<if $activeSlave.butt < 2>>
 		flat
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.butt <= 2>>
 		cute
@@ -215,7 +215,7 @@ as well as $his
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.butt <= 20>>
 		couch-like
 	<</if>>
-	buttocks before rubbing along them, feeling the shape of $his<<if $seeRace == 1>> $activeSlave.race<</if>> ass with your fingers and squeezing gently. $He gasps as you rub fingers around $his virgin anus. You study $his face as you continue to move around $his posterior gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He starts to wiggle $his ass while you circle around $his anus, not breaking contact with $him with your fingers. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then both and $he can't help but wiggle $his hips while in your grasp. You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and bend $him over your desk. You look at $his rear while you squeeze $his cheeks and rub them with your firm hands. You explore the contours of $his posterior with both your eyes and hands, then look at $his virgin butthole as you trace it with your fingers and thumb. Eventually you decide to stop and $he squeals in surprise after you give $his <<if $activeSlave.butt < 2>>
+	buttocks before rubbing along them, feeling the shape of $his<<if $seeRace == 1>> $activeSlave.race<</if>> ass with your fingers and squeezing gently. $He gasps as you rub fingers around $his virgin anus. You study $his face as you continue to move around $his posterior gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He starts to wiggle $his ass while you circle around $his anus, not breaking contact with $him with your fingers. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then both and $he can't help but wiggle $his hips while in your grasp. You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around, and bend $him over your desk. You look at $his rear while you squeeze $his cheeks and rub them with your firm hands. You explore the contours of $his posterior with both your eyes and hands, then look at $his virgin butthole as you trace it with your fingers and thumb. Eventually you decide to stop and $he squeals in surprise after you give $his <<if $activeSlave.butt < 2>>
 		flat
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.butt <= 2>>
 		cute
@@ -256,7 +256,7 @@ as well as $his
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.butt <= 20>>
 		couch-like
 	<</if>>
-	buttocks before rubbing along them, feeling the shape of $his<<if $seeRace == 1>> $activeSlave.race<</if>> ass with your fingers and squeezing gently. $He gasps and shivers as you rub fingers around $his virgin anus. $He remains frozen as you continue to move around $his posterior gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He shudders more while you circle around $his anus, not breaking contact with $him with your fingers. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then finally both. $He is so filled with terror that $he remains stiff while in your grasp, even as it becomes clear to $him you're not going to hurt $him. You pull $his quivering body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and bend $him over your desk. You look at $his quaking rear while you squeeze $his cheeks and rub them with your firm hands. You explore the contours of $his posterior with both your eyes and hands, then look at $his virgin butthole as you trace it with your fingers and thumb. Eventually, you decide to stop. $He gradually stands and looks in your eyes with utter incomprehension, but $he is frightened about what you will do next.
+	buttocks before rubbing along them, feeling the shape of $his<<if $seeRace == 1>> $activeSlave.race<</if>> ass with your fingers and squeezing gently. $He gasps and shivers as you rub fingers around $his virgin anus. $He remains frozen as you continue to move around $his posterior gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He shudders more while you circle around $his anus, not breaking contact with $him with your fingers. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then finally both. $He is so filled with terror that $he remains stiff while in your grasp, even as it becomes clear to $him you're not going to hurt $him. You pull $his quivering body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around, and bend $him over your desk. You look at $his quaking rear while you squeeze $his cheeks and rub them with your firm hands. You explore the contours of $his posterior with both your eyes and hands, then look at $his virgin butthole as you trace it with your fingers and thumb. Eventually, you decide to stop. $He gradually stands and looks in your eyes with utter incomprehension, but $he is frightened about what you will do next.
 <<elseif ($activeSlave.anus == 0)>>
 	While you grope $his butt, $he tries hard to resist. $He <<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>>grabs your wrists and tugs on your arms<<else>>writhes under your fingers<</if>> but stops, helpless, when you tell $him what the alternatives are. You reach around and grab $his <<if $activeSlave.butt < 2>>
 		flat
@@ -277,7 +277,7 @@ as well as $his
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.butt <= 20>>
 		couch-like
 	<</if>>
-	buttocks before rubbing along them, feeling the shape of $his<<if $seeRace == 1>> $activeSlave.race<</if>> ass with your fingers and squeezing gently. $He tries to break out of your grasp as you rub fingers around $his virgin anus. $He writhes as you continue to move around $his posterior gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He struggles to stay still while you circle around $his unbroken anus, not breaking contact with $him with your fingers. You look at $his face and $he has shut $his eyes, trying not to think about what's happening to $his butt. This only encourages you to continue. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then finally both and $he can't help but quiver while in your grasp. You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and push $him down, bending $him over your desk while $he tries to push away. You look at $his rear while you squeeze $his cheeks and rub them with your firm hands. You wander along the outline of $his posterior with both your eyes and hands, then look at $his virgin butthole as you trace it with your fingers and thumb. Eventually, you decide to stop. $He slowly stands and looks in your eyes, as though almost demanding answers. $He looks apprehensive about what you will do next.
+	buttocks before rubbing along them, feeling the shape of $his<<if $seeRace == 1>> $activeSlave.race<</if>> ass with your fingers and squeezing gently. $He tries to break out of your grasp as you rub fingers around $his virgin anus. $He writhes as you continue to move around $his posterior, gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He struggles to stay still while you circle around $his unbroken anus, not breaking contact with $him with your fingers. You look at $his face and $he has <<if !canSee($activeSlave)>>reflexively <</if>>shut $his eyes, trying not to think about what's happening to $his butt. This only encourages you to continue. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then finally both and $he can't help but quiver while in your grasp. You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around, and push $him down, bending $him over your desk while $he tries to push away. You look at $his rear while you squeeze $his cheeks and rub them with your firm hands. You wander along the outline of $his posterior with both your eyes and hands, then look at $his virgin butthole as you trace it with your fingers and thumb. Eventually, you decide to stop. $He slowly stands and looks in your eyes, as though almost demanding answers. $He looks apprehensive about what you will do next.
 <<elseif $activeSlave.fetish == "mindbroken">>
 	<<if canWalk($activeSlave)>>
 		You instruct $him to present $his buttocks and anus but $he remains still and unresponsive. Talking to a broken mind is pointless.
@@ -314,7 +314,7 @@ as well as $his
 	<<elseif ($activeSlave.anus == 0)>>
 		virgin butthole,
 	<</if>>
-	but you understand it is only physiological. You continue to move around $his posterior gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. You circle around $his anus but $he remains still. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then both but $he is like a doll in your grasp. You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and bend $him over your desk. You look at $his rear while you squeeze $his cheeks and rub them with your firm hands. You explore the contours of $his posterior with both your eyes and hands, then look at $his
+	but you understand it is only physiological. You continue to move around $his posterior gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. You circle around $his anus but $he remains still. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then both but $he is like a doll in your grasp. You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around, and bend $him over your desk. You look at $his rear while you squeeze $his cheeks and rub them with your firm hands. You explore the contours of $his posterior with both your eyes and hands, then look at $his
 	<<if ($activeSlave.anus > 3)>>
 		gaping
 	<<elseif ($activeSlave.anus == 3)>>
@@ -368,9 +368,9 @@ as well as $his
 		<<elseif ($activeSlave.anus == 0)>>
 			virgin butthole.
 		<</if>>
-		$He writhes as you continue to move around $his posterior gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He struggles to stay still while you circle around $his anus, not breaking contact with $him with your fingers. You look at $his face and $he has shut $his eyes, trying not to think about what's happening to $his butt. This only encourages you to continue. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then finally both and $he can't help but quiver while in your grasp.
+		$He writhes as you continue to move around $his posterior, gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He struggles to stay still while you circle around $his anus, not breaking contact with $him with your fingers. You look at $his face and $he has <<if !canSee($activeSlave)>>reflexively <</if>>shut $his eyes, trying not to think about what's happening to $his butt. This only encourages you to continue. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then finally both and $he can't help but quiver while in your grasp.
 		<<if ($activeSlave.amp != 1)>>
-			You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and push $him down, bending $him over your desk while $he tries to push away.
+			You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around, and push $him down, bending $him over your desk while $he tries to push away.
 		<<else>>
 			You move closer to $him, turn $him around and push $him down, face-down on your desk while $he tries to wriggle desperately.
 		<</if>>
@@ -425,9 +425,9 @@ as well as $his
 		<<elseif ($activeSlave.anus == 0)>>
 			virgin butthole.
 		<</if>>
-		$He writhes as you continue to move around $his posterior gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He struggles to stay still while you circle around $his anus with your fingers. You look at $his face and $he has shut $his eyes, trying not to get aroused by your touch on $his butt. This only encourages you to continue. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then finally both and $he can't help but quiver while in your grasp.
+		$He writhes as you continue to move around $his posterior, gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He struggles to stay still while you circle around $his anus with your fingers. You look at $his face and $he has <<if !canSee($activeSlave)>>reflexively <</if>>shut $his eyes, trying not to get aroused by your touch on $his butt. This only encourages you to continue. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then finally both and $he can't help but quiver while in your grasp.
 		<<if ($activeSlave.amp != 1)>>
-			You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and push $him down, bending $him over your desk.
+			You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around, and push $him down, bending $him over your desk.
 		<<else>>
 			You move closer to $him, turn $him around and push $him down, face-down on your desk while $he wriggles.
 		<</if>>
@@ -484,7 +484,7 @@ as well as $his
 	<</if>>
 	buttocks. You start rubbing along $his cheeks, feeling the shape of $his<<if $seeRace == 1>> $activeSlave.race<</if>> ass with your fingers and squeezing gently. As you rub your fingers around $his anus, $he starts to relax. $He quivers as you continue to move around $his posterior gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He purses $his lips while you circle around $his anus with your fingers. You look at $his face and $he is looking back at you doe-eyed, trying but failing not to get aroused by your soft touch on $his butt. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then finally both and $he can't help but let out a moan while in your grasp.
 	<<if ($activeSlave.amp != 1)>>
-		You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and push $him down, bending $him over your desk.
+		You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around, and push $him down, bending $him over your desk.
 	<<else>>
 		You move closer to $him, turn $him around and push $him down, face-down on your desk while $he tries to wriggle desperately.
 	<</if>>
@@ -529,7 +529,7 @@ as well as $his
 	<</if>>
 	buttocks. You start rubbing along $his cheeks, feeling the shape of $his<<if $seeRace == 1>> $activeSlave.race<</if>> ass with your fingers and squeezing gently. As you rub your fingers around $his anus, $he sighs audibly. $He moans as you continue to move around $his posterior gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He quivers while you circle around $his anus with your fingers. You look at $his face and $he is looking back at you longingly, getting aroused by your continued touch on $his butt. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then finally both and $he can't help but let out a moan while in your grasp.
 	<<if ($activeSlave.amp != 1)>>
-		You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and push $him down, bending $him over your desk.
+		You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around, and push $him down, bending $him over your desk.
 	<<else>>
 		You move closer to $him, turn $him around and push $him down, face-down on your desk so that $his butt is up facing towards you.
 	<</if>>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/fillUpButt.tw b/src/pregmod/fillUpButt.tw
index 9b27ead866e..c8f32637227 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/fillUpButt.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/fillUpButt.tw
@@ -105,7 +105,7 @@ before shoving the equipment into $his
 	<<elseif ($activeSlave.anus == 0)>>
 		virgin butthole,
 	<</if>>
-	but you understand it is only physiological. You continue to move around $his posterior gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. You circle around $his anus but $he remains still. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then both but $he is like a doll in your grasp. You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and bend $him over your lap, <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his soft and jiggly <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>>-filled belly spilling over your legs<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>> distended belly resting on your legs<<else>>$his belly resting on your legs<</if>>. You look at $his rear while you squeeze $his cheeks and rub them with your firm hands. You explore the contours of $his posterior with both your eyes and hands, before picking up the hose and inserting it into $his
+	but you understand it is only physiological. You continue to move around $his posterior gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. You circle around $his anus but $he remains still. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then both but $he is like a doll in your grasp. You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around, and bend $him over your lap, <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his soft and jiggly <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>>-filled belly spilling over your legs<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>> distended belly resting on your legs<<else>>$his belly resting on your legs<</if>>. You look at $his rear while you squeeze $his cheeks and rub them with your firm hands. You explore the contours of $his posterior with both your eyes and hands, before picking up the hose and inserting it into $his
 	<<if ($activeSlave.anus > 3)>>
 		gaping
 	<<elseif ($activeSlave.anus == 3)>>
@@ -161,11 +161,11 @@ before shoving the equipment into $his
 	<<elseif ($activeSlave.anus == 0)>>
 		virgin butthole.
 	<</if>>
-	$He writhes as you continue to move around $his posterior gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He struggles to stay still while you circle around $his anus, not breaking contact with $him with your fingers. You look at $his face and $he has shut $his eyes, trying not to think about what's about to happen.
+	$He writhes as you continue to move around $his posterior, gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He struggles to stay still while you circle around $his anus, not breaking contact with $him with your fingers. You look at $his face and $he has <<if !canSee($activeSlave)>>reflexively <</if>>shut $his eyes, trying not to think about what's about to happen.
 	<<if ($activeSlave.amp != 1)>>
-		You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and bend $him over your lap, <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his soft and jiggly <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>>-filled belly spilling over your legs<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>> distended belly resting on your legs<<else>>$his belly resting on your legs<</if>>, while $he tries to push away.
+		You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around, and bend $him over your lap, <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his soft and jiggly <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>>-filled belly spilling over your legs<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>> distended belly resting on your legs<<else>>$his belly resting on your legs<</if>>, while $he tries to push away.
 	<<else>>
-		You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and place $him on your lap, <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his soft and jiggly <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>>-filled belly spilling over your legs<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>> distended belly resting on your legs<<else>>$his belly resting on your legs<</if>>, while $he tries to squirm away.
+		You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around, and place $him on your lap, <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his soft and jiggly <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>>-filled belly spilling over your legs<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>> distended belly resting on your legs<<else>>$his belly resting on your legs<</if>>, while $he tries to squirm away.
 	<</if>>
 	You look at $his rear while you squeeze $his cheeks and rub them with your firm hands. You explore the contours of $his posterior with both your eyes and hands, before picking up the hose and inserting it into $his
 	<<if ($activeSlave.anus > 3)>>
@@ -220,11 +220,11 @@ before shoving the equipment into $his
 	<<elseif ($activeSlave.anus == 0)>>
 		virgin butthole.
 	<</if>>
-	$He writhes as you continue to move around $his posterior gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He struggles to stay still while you circle around $his anus with your fingers. You look at $his face and $he has shut $his eyes, trying not to get aroused by your touch on $his butt. This only encourages you to continue. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then finally both and $he can't help but quiver while in your grasp.
+	$He writhes as you continue to move around $his posterior, gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He struggles to stay still while you circle around $his anus with your fingers. You look at $his face and $he has <<if !canSee($activeSlave)>>reflexively <</if>>shut $his eyes, trying not to get aroused by your touch on $his butt. This only encourages you to continue. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then finally both and $he can't help but quiver while in your grasp.
 	<<if ($activeSlave.amp != 1)>>
-		You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and bend $him over your lap, <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his soft and jiggly <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>>-filled belly spilling over your legs<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>> distended belly resting on your legs<<else>>$his belly resting on your legs<</if>>.
+		You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around, and bend $him over your lap, <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his soft and jiggly <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>>-filled belly spilling over your legs<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>> distended belly resting on your legs<<else>>$his belly resting on your legs<</if>>.
 	<<else>>
-		You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and place $his wriggling body on your lap, <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his soft and jiggly <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>>-filled belly spilling over your legs<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>> distended belly resting on your legs<<else>>$his belly resting on your legs<</if>>.
+		You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around, and place $his wriggling body on your lap, <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his soft and jiggly <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>>-filled belly spilling over your legs<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>> distended belly resting on your legs<<else>>$his belly resting on your legs<</if>>.
 	<</if>>
 	You look at $his rear while you squeeze $his cheeks and rub them with your firm hands. You explore the contours of $his posterior with both your eyes and hands, before picking up the hose and inserting it into $his
 	<<if ($activeSlave.anus > 3)>>
@@ -269,9 +269,9 @@ before shoving the equipment into $his
 	<</if>>
 	buttocks. You start rubbing along $his cheeks, feeling the shape of $his <<if $seeRace == 1>>$activeSlave.race <</if>>ass with your fingers and squeezing gently. As you rub your fingers around $his anus, $he starts to relax. $He quivers as you continue to move around $his posterior gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He purses $his lips while you circle around $his anus with your fingers. You look at $his face and $he is <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>looking back at you doe-eyed<<else>>smiling pleasantly at you<</if>>, trying but failing not to get aroused by your soft touch on $his butt. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then finally both and $he can't help but let out a moan while in your grasp.
 	<<if ($activeSlave.amp != 1)>>
-		You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and bend $him over your lap, <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his soft and jiggly <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>>-filled belly spilling over your legs<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>> distended belly resting on your legs<<else>>$his belly resting on your legs<</if>>.
+		You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around, and bend $him over your lap, <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his soft and jiggly <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>>-filled belly spilling over your legs<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>> distended belly resting on your legs<<else>>$his belly resting on your legs<</if>>.
 	<<else>>
-		You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and place $him wriggling body on your lap, <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his soft and jiggly <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>>-filled belly spilling over your legs<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>> distended belly resting on your legs<<else>>$his belly resting on your legs<</if>>.
+		You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around, and place $him wriggling body on your lap, <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his soft and jiggly <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>>-filled belly spilling over your legs<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>> distended belly resting on your legs<<else>>$his belly resting on your legs<</if>>.
 	<</if>>
 	You look at $his rear while you squeeze $his cheeks and rub them with your firm hands. You wander along the outline of $his posterior with both your eyes and hands, before picking up the hose and inserting it into $his
 	<<if ($activeSlave.anus > 3)>>
@@ -315,9 +315,9 @@ before shoving the equipment into $his
 	<</if>>
 	buttocks. You start rubbing along $his cheeks, feeling the shape of $his <<if $seeRace == 1>>$activeSlave.race <</if>>ass with your fingers and squeezing gently. As you rub your fingers around $his anus, $he sighs audibly. $He moans as you continue to move around $his posterior gently reaching to touch your fingertips against $his sphincter while rubbing $his ass at the same time. $He quivers while you circle around $his anus with your fingers. You look at $his face and $he is <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>looking<<else>>gazing<</if>> back at you longingly, getting aroused by your continued touch on $his butt. You keep squeezing $his buttocks tenderly — first one, then the other and then finally both and $he can't help but let out a moan while in your grasp.
 	<<if ($activeSlave.amp != 1)>>
-		You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and bend $him over your lap, <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his soft and jiggly <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>>-filled belly spilling over your legs<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>> distended belly resting on your legs<<else>>$his belly resting on your legs<</if>>.
+		You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around, and bend $him over your lap, <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his soft and jiggly <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>>-filled belly spilling over your legs<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>> distended belly resting on your legs<<else>>$his belly resting on your legs<</if>>.
 	<<else>>
-		You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around and place $his wriggling body on your lap, <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his soft and jiggly <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>>-filled belly spilling over your legs<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>> distended belly resting on your legs<<else>>$his belly resting on your legs<</if>>.
+		You pull $his body closer towards you by $his buttocks, turn $him around, and place $his wriggling body on your lap, <<if $activeSlave.inflation == 2>>$his soft and jiggly <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>>-filled belly spilling over your legs<<elseif $activeSlave.inflation == 1>>$his <<print $activeSlave.inflationType>> distended belly resting on your legs<<else>>$his belly resting on your legs<</if>>.
 	<</if>>
 	You look at $his rear while you squeeze $his cheeks and rub them with your firm hands. You wander along the outline of $his posterior with both your eyes and hands, before picking up the hose and inserting it into $his
 	<<if ($activeSlave.anus > 3)>>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/fillUpFace.tw b/src/pregmod/fillUpFace.tw
index 31d66099327..474afdfdd9e 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/fillUpFace.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/fillUpFace.tw
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ You attach a hose to $dairyName tap with the pipes set to pump $activeSlave.infl
 	<<if canWalk($activeSlave)>>
 		You instruct $him to take a seat on your lap and open $his mouth wide for the hose, but $he remains still and unresponsive. Talking to a broken mind is pointless.
 	<</if>>
-	You reach out and wrap you arms around $his
+	You reach out and wrap your arms around $his
 	<<if $activeSlave.weight > 190>>
 		immensely soft
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.belly >= 150000>>
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ You attach a hose to $dairyName tap with the pipes set to pump $activeSlave.infl
 	<<if canWalk($activeSlave)>>
 		You instruct $him to take a seat on your lap and open $his mouth wide for the hose. Opposed to the thought of being filled <<if $activeSlave.inflation > 0>>more <</if>>with $activeSlave.inflationType, $he tries to step back, but you catch $him and pull $him into your lap, wrapping your arms around $his
 	<<elseif ($activeSlave.amp != 1)>>
-		You inform $him $he'll be taking a seat on your lap, opening $his mouth wide for the hose, and drinking until you tell $him $he is full enough. $He's opposed to the thought of being filled <<if $activeSlave.inflation > 0>>more <</if>>with $activeSlave.inflationType, but since $he is immobile, can't escape. You heft $him onto your lap, wrapping your arms around $his
+		You inform $him $he'll be taking a seat on your lap, opening $his mouth wide for the hose, and drinking until you tell $him $he is full enough. $He's opposed to the thought of being filled with<<if $activeSlave.inflation > 0>> more<</if>> $activeSlave.inflationType, but since $he is immobile, $he can't escape. You heft $him onto your lap, wrapping your arms around $his
 	<<else>>
 		$He's opposed to the thought of being filled with <<if $activeSlave.inflation > 0>>more <</if>>$activeSlave.inflationType, but as an amputee can do nothing about it. You heft $him onto your lap, wrapping your arms around $him
 	<</if>>
diff --git a/src/pregmod/forceFeeding.tw b/src/pregmod/forceFeeding.tw
index dc0c8edc85d..6388bc9e467 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/forceFeeding.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/forceFeeding.tw
@@ -288,7 +288,7 @@ and a little jiggle from $his gut.
 		<<else>>
 			devotedly downs every gulp you give $him and catches $his breath, while being a tease, between helpings.
 		<</if>>
-		Once the last of the slave food is in $his stomach, you give the firm globe a <<if $activeSlave.devotion > 20>>gentle<</if>> slap, eliciting
+		Once the last of the slave food is in $his stomach, you give the firm globe a <<if $activeSlave.devotion > 20>>gentle <</if>>slap, eliciting
 		<<if $activeSlave.fetish == "mindbroken">>
 			a large belch from the broken slave.
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.devotion < -20>>
@@ -311,7 +311,6 @@ and a little jiggle from $his gut.
 			pat it several more times
 		<</if>>
 		as you appreciate its size.
-
 		<br><br>
 	<</if>>
 	Knocking the empty buckets aside, you help $his
@@ -523,7 +522,7 @@ and a little jiggle from $his gut.
 <</if>>
 
 <<if _pregDiscovery == 1>>
-	Once you've managed to stop $him heaving and clean up, you get to the root of this mess. While most of the tests come back normal, one in particular catches your eye; @@.lime;$He is pregnant <<if $activeSlave.preg > $activeSlave.pregData.normalBirth/4>> and surprisingly far along<</if>>.@@
+	Once you've managed to stop $his heaving and clean up, you decide to get to the root of this mess. While most of the tests come back normal, one in particular catches your eye; @@.lime;$he is pregnant <<if $activeSlave.preg > $activeSlave.pregData.normalBirth/4>> and surprisingly far along<</if>>.@@
 	<<set $activeSlave.inflation = 0, $activeSlave.inflationType = "none", $activeSlave.inflationMethod = 0, $activeSlave.pregKnown = 1>>
 <<else>>
 	<<if $activeSlave.inflation == 3>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/RETS.tw b/src/uncategorized/RETS.tw
index 7f270a7eed9..aa56f7a8250 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/RETS.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/RETS.tw
@@ -849,7 +849,7 @@ Passing the slave quarters late at night, you hear <<EventNameLink>>'s <<if $act
 "I'm tired," <<say>>s
 <<if $activeSlave.voice > $subSlave.voice>>another, lower,
 <<elseif $activeSlave.voice < $subSlave.voice>>another, higher,
-<<else>><<if $activeSlave.voice > 2>>high-pitched<<elseif $activeSlave.voice > 1>>soft<<else>>harsh<</if>>
+<<else>>a <<if $activeSlave.voice > 2>>high-pitched<<elseif $activeSlave.voice > 1>>soft<<else>>harsh<</if>>
 <</if>>
 voice. It's $subSlave.slaveName.
 <<if $subSlave.belly >= 120000 && $activeSlave.dick > 3>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/pCollaborationChoice.tw b/src/uncategorized/pCollaborationChoice.tw
index 482aac2bc9c..7e96c0cdf2d 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/pCollaborationChoice.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/pCollaborationChoice.tw
@@ -12,14 +12,14 @@ Your next communication from the Daughters of Liberty is a request for a live vi
 <<if $traitorType == "agent">>
 	<<if $traitor.intelligence+$traitor.intelligenceImplant >= 100>>
 		<<if canTalk($traitor)>>
-			"Hello, <<Master>>," $he <<say>>s simply. "It'<<s>> happening soon. The Daughter<<s>> have a<<s>>ked me to call you to a<<s>>k you for your cooperation. All they want are the a<<cc>>e<<ss>> code<<s>> to your <<s>>ecurity <<s>>y<<s>>tem<<s>> and they tru<<s>>t me to get them. You <<s>>till tru<<s>>t me, right? I promi<<s>>e giving me code<<s>> to give them is the right choice." $He stares at the camera, trying $his best to convey the deeper meaning to $his request. "It may be rough, but I promi<<s>>e we'll make it through it."
+			"Hello, <<Master>>," $he <<say>>s simply. "It'<<s>> happening soon. The Daughter<<s>> have a<<s>>ked me to call you to a<<s>>k you for your cooperation. All they want are the a<<cc>>e<<ss>> code<<s>> to your <<s>>ecurity <<s>>y<<s>>tem<<s>> and they tru<<s>>t me to get them. You <<s>>till tru<<s>>t me, right? I promi<<s>>e giving me code<<s>> to give them i<<s>> the right choi<<c>>e." $He stares at the camera, trying $his best to convey the deeper meaning to $his request. "It may be rough, but I promi<<s>>e we'll make it through it."
 		<<else>>
 			$He gestures that the Daughters are coming and that $he was entrusted with earning your cooperation. $He explains that they want $him to get your security codes for them, and fully expect that $he'll succeed. $He vows that you won't be making a mistake by giving $him codes and that you'll be reunited when it is all over.
 		<</if>>
 		<<set $traitorType = "trapper">>
 	<<elseif $traitor.intelligence+$traitor.intelligenceImplant < 0>>
 		<<if canTalk($traitor)>>
-			"<<Master>>," $he <<say>>s with panic in $his voice, "They are coming for you. They want your ac<<c>>e<<ss> code<<s>> <<s>>o then can get to you ea<<s>>ier, but now you know not to tru<<s>>t them!" $He manages to shout as $he is dragged offscreen, "Don't let them get you <<Master>>! <<Sh>>ow them who'<<s>> bo<<ss>>!"
+			"<<Master>>," $he <<say>>s with panic in $his voice, "They are coming for you. They want your ac<<c>>e<<ss> code<<s>> <<s>>o they can get to you ea<<s>>ier, but now you know not to tru<<s>>t them!" $He manages to shout as $he is dragged offscreen, "Don't let them get you <<Master>>! <<Sh>>ow them who'<<s>> bo<<ss>>!"
 		<<else>>
 			$He hastily gestures that they are coming for you and that nothing you can do will deter them. $He barely signs off a plea for you to prepare your defenses.
 		<</if>>
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ Your next communication from the Daughters of Liberty is a request for a live vi
 		<<if $traitorType == "agent">>
 			$traitor.slaveName silently frowns as tears start to well in $his eyes.
 		<<elseif $traitorType == "trapper">>
-			$traitor.slaveName smiles and thanks you. "I won't disappoint you."
+			$traitor.slaveName smiles and thanks you. "I won't di<<s>>appoint you."
 		<<elseif $traitorType == "hostage">>
 			If this will lessen what will happen to $traitor.slaveName, you don't know.
 		<<elseif $traitorType == "horror">>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/pCoupCollaboration.tw b/src/uncategorized/pCoupCollaboration.tw
index e4b93ab2764..46f57ed458e 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/pCoupCollaboration.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/pCoupCollaboration.tw
@@ -90,7 +90,6 @@ After half an hour of watching the executions,
 	the leader of the assault strides confidently into your office, deals you a vicious open-handed slap that knocks you out of your chair, and holds a pistol to your forehead. Your cause of death is that of many an oppressor — an aneurysm of the cerebellum, in 9mm Parabellum.
 <</if>>
 
-
 <br><br>
 
 ''GAME OVER''
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/pCoupLoss.tw b/src/uncategorized/pCoupLoss.tw
index 54404970c82..768077dcd58 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/pCoupLoss.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/pCoupLoss.tw
@@ -36,11 +36,11 @@ You are awakened in the middle of the night by a jolt that shakes the entire arc
 	<<if $traitorType == "agent" || $traitorType == "trapper">>
 		trying to sabotage a stockpile of explosives.
 	<<elseif $traitorType == "horror">>
-		encouraging $his fellow fighters with yells from the back lines.
+		encouraging $his fellow fighters<<if canTalk($traitor)>> with yells<</if>> from the back lines.
 	<<elseif $traitorType == "defiant">>
-		encouraging $his fellow fighters with yells and spearheading the charge<<if $traitor.bellyPreg >= 15000>> as best $he can<</if>>.
+		encouraging $his fellow fighters<<if canTalk($traitor)>> with yells<</if>> and spearheading the charge<<if $traitor.bellyPreg >= 15000>> as best $he can<</if>>.
 	<<else>>
-		encouraging $his fellow fighters with yells, and when that fails, leading them by example<<if $traitor.bellyPreg >= 15000>> as best $he can<</if>>.
+		encouraging $his fellow fighters<<if canTalk($traitor)>> with yells<</if>>, and when that fails, leading them by example<<if $traitor.bellyPreg >= 15000>> as best $he can<</if>>.
 	<</if>>
 <</if>>
 In areas already controlled by your enemies, slaveowners are being summarily shot in the streets. <<if $hackerSupport == 1>>"<<= properTitle()>>," $assistantName says, "the Daughters of Liberty are attempting a coup. They appear to have smuggled a significant quantity of arms and explosives into the arcology.<<else>>"<<= properTitle()>>," $assistantName says, "the Daughters of Liberty are attempting a coup. They appear to have smuggled a significant qua — zzzt —" There is nothing more from the computer systems.<</if>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/pUndergroundRailroad.tw b/src/uncategorized/pUndergroundRailroad.tw
index 01272d96894..cf3b57ec6cd 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/pUndergroundRailroad.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/pUndergroundRailroad.tw
@@ -12,7 +12,10 @@
 			<<if (ndef $activeSlave)>> /* anyone out there? */
 				<<set $activeSlave = $slaves.find(function(s) { return s.fuckdoll == 0 && s.fetish != "mindbroken" && s.amp != 1 && canSee($activeSlave); })>>
 				<<if (ndef $activeSlave)>> /* still no match */
-					<<set $activeSlave = $slaves.random()>>
+					<<set $activeSlave = $slaves.find(function(s) { return s.fuckdoll == 0 && s.fetish != "mindbroken"; })>>
+					<<if (ndef $activeSlave)>> /* STILL no match */
+						<<set $activeSlave = $slaves.random()>>
+					<</if>>
 				<</if>>
 			<</if>>
 		<</if>>
@@ -110,7 +113,7 @@ This is disturbing, to say the least. After close investigation, it appears some
 	<<if !canTalk($activeSlave)>>
 		gestures there may be an opportunity here; they'd likely take $him in if $he were freed and $he could serve you from within the group as a double agent.
 	<<else>>
-		<<say>>s, "I think I have an idea. They'll likely take me in if you were to 'free' me and from there, maybe I could feed you information, <<Master>>. I could help e<<x>>po<<s>>e them to you and they'd be none the wi<<s>>er of the mi<<s>>take they've made."
+		<<say>>s, "I think I have an idea, <<Master>>. They'll likely take me in if you were to 'free' me and, from there, maybe I could feed you information, <<Master>>. I could help e<<x>>po<<s>>e them to you and they'd be none the wi<<s>>er of the mi<<s>>take they've made."
 	<</if>>
 
 	<br><br>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/slaveSold.tw b/src/uncategorized/slaveSold.tw
index 221c82c5ec0..280beac2c16 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/slaveSold.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/slaveSold.tw
@@ -980,7 +980,7 @@
 	<</for>>
 
 <<case "D oral servants">>
-	$activeSlave.slaveName is an occasional sight around the arcology; $he's never seen outside the company of $his new slave superior. This is one of $his new master's more favored slaves. $He has a huge cock, and $activeSlave.slaveName usually crouches down, hugging one of $his superior's legs and keeping $his mouth obediently near that dick.
+	$activeSlave.slaveName is an occasional sight around the arcology; $he's never seen outside the company of $his new slave superior. This is one of $his new master's more favored slaves. $He has a huge cock, and $activeSlave.slaveName is usually crouching down, hugging one of $his superior's legs and keeping $his mouth obediently near that dick.
 	<<for _ss = 0; _ss < $slaves.length; _ss++>>
 		<<if ($slaves[_ss].fetishKnown == 1)>>
 			<<if ($slaves[_ss].fetish == "cumslut")>>
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