From d3e497384a4bf2543cf0b168595b73a17494e0ed Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Svornost <11434-svornost@users.noreply.gitgud.io>
Date: Tue, 9 Jun 2020 13:13:16 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] more fixes
---
src/npc/descriptions/describeTattoos.js | 6 +++---
src/npc/descriptions/style/hairClothing.js | 11 ++++++-----
2 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
diff --git a/src/npc/descriptions/describeTattoos.js b/src/npc/descriptions/describeTattoos.js
index 5d08d394fbc..9ad4b38fc69 100644
--- a/src/npc/descriptions/describeTattoos.js
+++ b/src/npc/descriptions/describeTattoos.js
@@ -474,11 +474,11 @@ App.Desc.tattoo = function(slave, surface) {
case "Asian art":
r.push(`A traditional Asian household scene is tattooed on ${his} lower back, showing a rendition of ${slave.slaveName}, dressed in rich silks, having sex with a`);
if (V.PC.title === 1) {
- r.push(`gentleman`);
+ r.push(`gentleman.`);
} else {
- r.push(`lady`);
+ r.push(`lady.`);
}
- r.push(`. The slave and the`);
+ r.push(`The slave and the`);
if (V.PC.title === 1) {
r.push(`gentleman`);
} else {
diff --git a/src/npc/descriptions/style/hairClothing.js b/src/npc/descriptions/style/hairClothing.js
index b0b4a402cc8..3d553e04c07 100644
--- a/src/npc/descriptions/style/hairClothing.js
+++ b/src/npc/descriptions/style/hairClothing.js
@@ -1778,16 +1778,17 @@ App.Desc.hairClothing = function(slave) {
r.push(App.Desc.image(slave));
break;
case "spats and a tank top":
- r.push(`is tied back with a scrunchy into a long ponytail that falls down `);
+ r.push(`is tied back with a scrunchy into a long ponytail that falls down`);
if (hasAnyLegs(slave)) {
- r.push(`${his} leg`);
+ r.push(his);
if (hasBothLegs(slave)) {
- r.push(`s`);
+ r.push(`legs.`);
+ } else {
+ r.push(`leg.`);
}
} else {
- r.push(`past ${his} torso`);
+ r.push(`past ${his} torso.`);
}
- r.push(`.`);
break;
case "a huipil":
r.push(`is tied into a huge ponytail, that leaves ${his} long hair to wave in the wind.`);
--
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