diff --git a/src/npc/fDance.tw b/src/npc/fDance.tw index 3d6fb5ae673444712437a748d5bf54f39367df9f..68fd05676d33448d3f82df68722bd0c5466ee6cd 100644 --- a/src/npc/fDance.tw +++ b/src/npc/fDance.tw @@ -270,7 +270,7 @@ $His face is <<if ($activeSlave.sexualFlaw == "judgemental")>> $He thinks to $himself that a real _womanP wouldn't need to compensate this way, and judges you harshly. <<elseif ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "idealistic")>> - $He can't believe $he now lives in a world where $women are expected to preform for their <<= WrittenMaster()>> whether they consent or not. + $He can't believe $he now lives in a world where $women are expected to perform for their <<= WrittenMaster()>> whether they consent or not. <<elseif ($activeSlave.behavioralFlaw == "bitchy")>> $He dances, but makes sure that the disgust on $his face shows clearly that $he is not into it. <</if>> @@ -280,7 +280,7 @@ You allow the situation to continue for about an hour, before deciding it's time You look up once more at your slave and take some time to review $his dancing performance. <<if ($activeSlave.devotion >= -20)>> <<if ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 100)>> - Your slave has a level of skill previously unseen in the old world. Even $his blinks have the seductive pull of a goddess. As you watch $him preform, you think how no _womanP of the old world would ever get to see pure sexuality like this. And not only do get to watch $him, you OWN $him. $His body moves like water, and hips that ebbed and flowed as if the tides themselves panged for a rock hard cock to come and take them. You tried to get some work done, but couldn't take your eyes off $him for even a second. You promise to reward your slave for bringing so much sensuality and beauty into your office; transforming your place of work into a shrine of Masculine dominance. + Your slave has a level of skill previously unseen in the old world. Even $his blinks have the seductive pull of a goddess. As you watch $him perform, you think how no _womanP of the old world would ever get to see pure sexuality like this. And not only do you get to watch $him, you OWN $him. $His body moves like water, with hips that ebb and flow as if the tides themselves panged for a rock hard cock to come and take them. You try to get some work done, but can't take your eyes off $him for even a second. You promise to reward your slave for bringing so much sensuality and beauty into your office; transforming your place of work into a shrine of Masculine dominance. <<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 60)>> $His skill would have only been matched by the best of the best old world erotic dancers, but in your Free City expectations are high. $He dances with seduction in every move, alternating $his style between everything from belly dancing to club twerking, and each with the skill level of a trained professional. You got some work done while $he danced, but often found yourself pulled back in by the tide of $his rolling hips. You praise your slave for $his enriching performance. <<elseif ($activeSlave.skill.entertainment >= 40)>> diff --git a/src/utility/descriptionWidgets.tw b/src/utility/descriptionWidgets.tw index 9a8482136e91a1c79f0b291ee22a63b40d435331..db78ca36720034602325ca837c67c58229f0becd 100644 --- a/src/utility/descriptionWidgets.tw +++ b/src/utility/descriptionWidgets.tw @@ -176,7 +176,7 @@ <<elseif $activeSlave.geneticQuirks.wGain == 2>> $He has hyperleptinemia and will easily gain weight. <<elseif $activeSlave.geneticQuirks.wLoss == 2>> - $He has hypoleptinemia and will easily loose weight. + $He has hypoleptinemia and will easily lose weight. <</if>> <<if $activeSlave.geneticQuirks.wGain == 1 && $geneticMappingUpgrade >= 2>> $He is a hyperleptinemia carrier. @@ -189,7 +189,7 @@ <<elseif $activeSlave.geneticQuirks.mGain == 2>> $He has myotonic hypertrophy and will easily gain muscle mass. <<elseif $activeSlave.geneticQuirks.mLoss == 2>> - $He has myotonic dystrophy and will rapidly loose muscle mass. + $He has myotonic dystrophy and will rapidly lose muscle mass. <</if>> <<if $activeSlave.geneticQuirks.mGain == 1 && $geneticMappingUpgrade >= 2>> $He is a myotonic hypertrophy carrier.