From e8b905e4d789b71d2dd4e225a4ee5bd0050ab8ce Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Pregmodder <pregmodder@gmail.com> Date: Mon, 15 Oct 2018 18:43:22 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] typos --- src/SecExp/authorityReport.tw | 8 ++++---- src/SecExp/securityReport.tw | 2 +- src/SecExp/tradeReport.tw | 10 +++++----- src/pregmod/saPorn.tw | 4 ++-- src/uncategorized/RESS.tw | 2 +- src/uncategorized/reputation.tw | 2 +- src/uncategorized/saLongTermEffects.tw | 2 +- src/uncategorized/saServeThePublic.tw | 4 ++-- src/uncategorized/saWhore.tw | 4 ++-- src/uncategorized/sellSlave.tw | 6 +++--- src/uncategorized/servantsQuarters.tw | 2 +- src/uncategorized/slaveInteract.tw | 4 ++-- 12 files changed, 25 insertions(+), 25 deletions(-) diff --git a/src/SecExp/authorityReport.tw b/src/SecExp/authorityReport.tw index d25dcdca15f..6c274f0a9b6 100644 --- a/src/SecExp/authorityReport.tw +++ b/src/SecExp/authorityReport.tw @@ -38,13 +38,13 @@ Your authority is <</if>> <<if $rep >= 19500>> - Your legend is so well known that your mere presence command respect and obedience, increasing your authority. + Your legend is so well known that your mere presence commands respect and obedience, increasing your authority. <<set _authGrowth += 10 * random(10,20)>> <<elseif $rep >= 15000>> - Your reputation is so high that your mere presence command respect, increasing your authority. + Your reputation is so high that your mere presence commands respect, increasing your authority. <<set _authGrowth += 10 * random(5,15)>> <<elseif $rep >= 10000>> - Your reputation is high enough that your presence command some respect, increasing your authority. + Your reputation is high enough that your presence commands some respect, increasing your authority. <<set _authGrowth += 10 * random(2,8)>> <</if>> @@ -154,7 +154,7 @@ Your authority is <</if>> <<if $edictsAuthUpkeep > 0>> - Some of your authority is spent maintaining your edicts + Some of your authority is spent maintaining your edicts. <<set _authGrowth -= $edictsAuthUpkeep>> <</if>> diff --git a/src/SecExp/securityReport.tw b/src/SecExp/securityReport.tw index 779597f8195..4a0c2204c71 100644 --- a/src/SecExp/securityReport.tw +++ b/src/SecExp/securityReport.tw @@ -207,7 +207,7 @@ <<elseif $ASlaves < 3000>> The number of slaves in the arcology is becoming an impediment for law enforcement, facilitating crime growth.<<set _crimeGrowth += 1>> <<else>> - The number of slaves in the arcology is becoming a a big issue for law enforcement, facilitating crime growth.<<set _crimeGrowth += 1.5>> + The number of slaves in the arcology is becoming a big issue for law enforcement, facilitating crime growth.<<set _crimeGrowth += 1.5>> <</if>> <<if $security <= 20>> The security measures in place are severely limited, allowing crime to grow uncontested. diff --git a/src/SecExp/tradeReport.tw b/src/SecExp/tradeReport.tw index 266b6fe5d29..a57f7ca8771 100644 --- a/src/SecExp/tradeReport.tw +++ b/src/SecExp/tradeReport.tw @@ -65,15 +65,15 @@ <</if>> <<if $transportHub == 1>> <<if $airport == 1>> - The arcology's airport, while small, helps facilitate the commercial development of the arcology.<<set _tradeChange += 1>> + The airport, while small, helps facilitate the commercial development of the arcology.<<set _tradeChange += 1>> <<elseif $airport == 2>> - The arcology's airport, while fairly small, helps facilitate the commercial development of the arcology.<<set _tradeChange += 1.5>> + The airport, while fairly small, helps facilitate the commercial development of the arcology.<<set _tradeChange += 1.5>> <<elseif $airport == 3>> - The arcology's airport helps facilitate the commercial development of the arcology.<<set _tradeChange += 2>> + The airport helps facilitate the commercial development of the arcology.<<set _tradeChange += 2>> <<elseif $airport == 4>> - The arcology's airport is a great boon to the commercial development of the arcology.<<set _tradeChange += 2.5>> + The airport is a great boon to the commercial development of the arcology.<<set _tradeChange += 2.5>> <<else>> - The arcology's airport is an incredible boon to the commercial development of the arcology.<<set _tradeChange += 3>> + The airport is an incredible boon to the commercial development of the arcology.<<set _tradeChange += 3>> <</if>> <<if $terrain != "oceanic" && $terrain != "marine">> diff --git a/src/pregmod/saPorn.tw b/src/pregmod/saPorn.tw index 8ab6a122cf8..5dea814d9d5 100644 --- a/src/pregmod/saPorn.tw +++ b/src/pregmod/saPorn.tw @@ -1866,7 +1866,7 @@ <<set $slaves[$i].pornFame = $slaves[$i].pornTypeNeglectful>> <<set $slaves[$i].pornPrestigeDesc = "She is world famous for her career in slave pornography. Millions are intimately familiar with the sight of her denying herself pleasure.">> @@.green;$He has become world famous for $his career in $slaves[$i].pornFameType pornography!@@ Millions are now intimately familiar with the sight of $him denying $himself pleasure, so it is now extremely prestigious to own $him. - <<set _desc = "a framed shot from porn starring " + $slaves[$i].slaveName + " showing her pleasing a line of partners without cuming once">> + <<set _desc = "a framed shot from porn starring " + $slaves[$i].slaveName + " showing her pleasing a line of partners without cumming once">> <<set $trinkets.push(_desc)>> <<elseif $slaves[$i].pornTypeNeglectful < 40000>> <<set _failedStar = 1>> @@ -1969,7 +1969,7 @@ <<set $slaves[$i].pornFame = $slaves[$i].pornTypeSub>> <<set $slaves[$i].pornPrestigeDesc = "She is world famous for her career in slave pornography. Millions are intimately familiar with her submissiveness.">> @@.green;$He has become world famous for $his career in $slaves[$i].pornFameType pornography!@@ Millions are now intimately familiar with $his submissiveness, so it is now extremely prestigious to own $him. - <<set _desc = "a framed shot from porn starring " + $slaves[$i].slaveName + " showing her sumbmission">> + <<set _desc = "a framed shot from porn starring " + $slaves[$i].slaveName + " showing her submission">> <<set $trinkets.push(_desc)>> <<elseif $slaves[$i].pornTypeSub < 40000>> <<set _failedStar = 1>> diff --git a/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw b/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw index 60d1ed4d581..b125f8a4741 100644 --- a/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw +++ b/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw @@ -3998,7 +3998,7 @@ $He does $his very best to get through the inspection without disgrace, hugging <<case "objectifying visit">> -At appropriate intervals during the day $assistantName directs an unoccupied slave to visit your office, and to ensure all your needs are currently being met. With such a vague task set before them, the slaves who enter your domain in such a way often find themselves used in a multitude of refreshingly novel ways. At this particular moment, <<EventNameLink $activeSlave>> comes through the door of your office and obediently +At appropriate intervals during the day $assistantName directs an unoccupied slave to visit your office to ensure all your needs are currently being met. With such a vague task set before them, the slaves who enter your domain in such a way often find themselves used in a multitude of refreshingly novel ways. At this particular moment, <<EventNameLink $activeSlave>> comes through the door of your office and obediently <<if $activeSlave.belly >= 300000>> settles $himself <<else>> diff --git a/src/uncategorized/reputation.tw b/src/uncategorized/reputation.tw index 29270d86d13..ec4c37294aa 100644 --- a/src/uncategorized/reputation.tw +++ b/src/uncategorized/reputation.tw @@ -405,7 +405,7 @@ On formal occasions, you are announced as $PCTitle. <</if>> <<if $PCSlutContacts == 2>> - You are actively staring in pornographic videos. While they are rather exclusive, @@.red;some still leak out to the public,@@ harming your image. + You are actively starring in pornographic videos. While they are rather exclusive, @@.red;some still leak out to the public,@@ harming your image. <<set $rep -= 50>> <<if isPlayerFertile($PC)>> That's not all that leaks out of you, considering all your shoots are rubber free. diff --git a/src/uncategorized/saLongTermEffects.tw b/src/uncategorized/saLongTermEffects.tw index e027ffc8d9d..94d01db42e1 100644 --- a/src/uncategorized/saLongTermEffects.tw +++ b/src/uncategorized/saLongTermEffects.tw @@ -8016,7 +8016,7 @@ /* saPorn */ <<if $slaves[$i].pornPrestige == 3>> - $He is the whore people envision of when they think of $slaves[$i].pornFameType porn. $His ever presence on the internet @@.green;boosts $his owner's reputation.@@ + $He is the whore people envision when they think of $slaves[$i].pornFameType porn. $His omnipresence on the internet @@.green;boosts $his owner's reputation.@@ <<set $repGain += (100*$slaves[$i].pornPrestige)>> <<set _donations = Math.floor($slaves[$i].pornFame/(random(13,20)))+(random(-5000,5000))>> <<if _donations > 0>> diff --git a/src/uncategorized/saServeThePublic.tw b/src/uncategorized/saServeThePublic.tw index 66934dc3b52..03ad25b2cb3 100644 --- a/src/uncategorized/saServeThePublic.tw +++ b/src/uncategorized/saServeThePublic.tw @@ -215,7 +215,7 @@ the public. <</if>> <<set $beauty = Math.trunc($beauty*$beautyMultiplier)>> -$His appearance attracted $beauty members of the public (<<print Math.trunc($beauty/7)>> a day)<<if $beauty > 160>>, so many that <<if canDoVaginal($slaves[$i]) && canDoAnal($slaves[$i])>>each of $his holes were<<elseif canDoVaginal($slaves[$i]) || canDoAnal($slaves[$i])>>each of $his available holes were<<else>>$his mouth and anywhere else a dick could fit were<</if>> often filled by more than one cock<<elseif $beauty > 140>>, so many that $he spent much of $his time getting gangbanged<<elseif $beauty > 120>>, so many that citizens often <<if canDoAnal($slaves[$i]) || canDoVaginal($slaves[$i])>>spitroasted<<else>>double-teamed<</if>> the slut<<elseif $beauty > 100>>, so many that $he frequently had sex with multiple citizens at once<<elseif $beauty > 70>>, so many that $he occasionally had sex with multiple citizens at once<</if>>. Most of them +$His appearance attracted $beauty members of the public (<<print Math.trunc($beauty/7)>> a day)<<if $beauty > 160>>, so many that <<if canDoVaginal($slaves[$i]) && canDoAnal($slaves[$i])>>each of $his holes was<<elseif canDoVaginal($slaves[$i]) || canDoAnal($slaves[$i])>>each of $his available holes was<<else>>$his mouth and anywhere else a dick could fit was<</if>> often filled by more than one cock<<elseif $beauty > 140>>, so many that $he spent much of $his time getting gangbanged<<elseif $beauty > 120>>, so many that citizens often <<if canDoAnal($slaves[$i]) || canDoVaginal($slaves[$i])>>spitroasted<<else>>double-teamed<</if>> the slut<<elseif $beauty > 100>>, so many that $he frequently had sex with multiple citizens at once<<elseif $beauty > 70>>, so many that $he occasionally had sex with multiple citizens at once<</if>>. Most of them <<if $FResult > 15>> were putty in $his hands. <<elseif $FResult > 10>> @@ -828,7 +828,7 @@ $His appearance attracted $beauty members of the public (<<print Math.trunc($bea <</if>> <<if $slaves[$i].pornPrestige > 2>> - Patrons line up for the chance to spend time with the face of $slaves[$i].pornType porn. + Patrons line up for the chance to spend time with the face of $slaves[$i].pornFameType porn. <<elseif $slaves[$i].pornPrestige > 1>> $He has a sizable fanbase, one that is eager to spend time with $him. <<elseif $slaves[$i].pornPrestige > 0>> diff --git a/src/uncategorized/saWhore.tw b/src/uncategorized/saWhore.tw index d9ae28d1653..7ac000d53db 100644 --- a/src/uncategorized/saWhore.tw +++ b/src/uncategorized/saWhore.tw @@ -212,7 +212,7 @@ $his body. <</if>> <<set $beauty = Math.trunc($beauty*$beautyMultiplier)>> -$His appearance attracted $beauty customers (<<print Math.trunc($beauty/7)>> a day)<<if $beauty > 160>>, so many that <<if canDoVaginal($slaves[$i]) && canDoAnal($slaves[$i])>>each of $his holes were<<elseif canDoVaginal($slaves[$i]) || canDoAnal($slaves[$i])>>each of $his available holes were<<else>>$his mouth and anywhere else a cock could fit were<</if>> often filled by more than one cock<<elseif $beauty > 140>>, so many that $he spent much of $his time getting gangbanged<<elseif $beauty > 120>>, so many that customers often <<if canDoAnal($slaves[$i]) || canDoVaginal($slaves[$i])>>spitroasted<<else>>double-teamed<</if>> the slut<<elseif $beauty > 100>>, so many that $he frequently had sex with multiple customers at once<<elseif $beauty > 70>>, so many that $he occasionally had sex with multiple customers at once<</if>>. They paid <<print cashFormat($FResult)>> on average. +$His appearance attracted $beauty customers (<<print Math.trunc($beauty/7)>> a day)<<if $beauty > 160>>, so many that <<if canDoVaginal($slaves[$i]) && canDoAnal($slaves[$i])>>each of $his holes was<<elseif canDoVaginal($slaves[$i]) || canDoAnal($slaves[$i])>>each of $his available holes was<<else>>$his mouth and anywhere else a cock could fit was<</if>> often filled by more than one cock<<elseif $beauty > 140>>, so many that $he spent much of $his time getting gangbanged<<elseif $beauty > 120>>, so many that customers often <<if canDoAnal($slaves[$i]) || canDoVaginal($slaves[$i])>>spitroasted<<else>>double-teamed<</if>> the slut<<elseif $beauty > 100>>, so many that $he frequently had sex with multiple customers at once<<elseif $beauty > 70>>, so many that $he occasionally had sex with multiple customers at once<</if>>. They paid <<print cashFormat($FResult)>> on average. <<set _incomeStats.customers = $beauty>> <<if $seeAge == 1>> @@ -837,7 +837,7 @@ $His appearance attracted $beauty customers (<<print Math.trunc($beauty/7)>> a d <</if>> <<if $slaves[$i].pornPrestige > 2>> - Customers line up for the chance to buy time with the face of $slaves[$i].pornType porn. + Customers line up for the chance to buy time with the face of $slaves[$i].pornFameType porn. <<elseif $slaves[$i].pornPrestige > 1>> $He has a sizable fanbase, one that is eager to buy time with $him. <<elseif $slaves[$i].pornPrestige > 0>> diff --git a/src/uncategorized/sellSlave.tw b/src/uncategorized/sellSlave.tw index fcdd3e3568f..0e2e0633dc9 100644 --- a/src/uncategorized/sellSlave.tw +++ b/src/uncategorized/sellSlave.tw @@ -472,11 +472,11 @@ A reputable slave appraiser arrives promptly to inspect $him and certify $his qu <</if>> <<if $activeSlave.pornPrestige == 3>> - $He's pretty popular in $activeSlave.pornType smut, isn't $he? Buyers will be lining up for $him. + $He's pretty popular in $activeSlave.pornFameType smut, isn't $he? Buyers will be lining up for $him. <<elseif $activeSlave.pornPrestige == 2>> - $He's gained quite the following in $activeSlave.pornType smut. In fact, I've even seen some of $his smut; buyers will flock to $him. + $He's gained quite the following in $activeSlave.pornFameType smut. In fact, I've even seen some of $his smut; buyers will flock to $him. <<elseif $activeSlave.pornPrestige == 1>> - $He's got a small fanbase in $activeSlave.pornType smut. Who knows? Maybe one of them will want $him all to herself? + $He's got a small fanbase in $activeSlave.pornFameType smut. Who knows? Maybe one of them will want $him all to herself? <</if>> <<if $activeSlave.devotion > 95>> diff --git a/src/uncategorized/servantsQuarters.tw b/src/uncategorized/servantsQuarters.tw index 0d647dc1b6f..4d158c7aeab 100644 --- a/src/uncategorized/servantsQuarters.tw +++ b/src/uncategorized/servantsQuarters.tw @@ -63,7 +63,7 @@ $servantsQuartersNameCaps <<if $servantsQuartersSlaves > 2>> $servantsQuartersNameCaps are busy with hurrying slaves. One shift of girls is eating, cleaning the quarters, and bathing. The second is sleeping, and the third is out in the penthouse cleaning and serving. <<elseif $servantsQuartersSlaves > 0>> - A few slaves are working out of servants' quarters. They must split their scant time between looking after their own needs and the superior needs of everyone else. + A few slaves are working out of the servants' quarters. They must split their scant time between looking after their own needs and the superior needs of everyone else. <<elseif $Stewardess != 0>> $Stewardess.slaveName is alone, and seems rather bereft without anyone to order around. <<else>> diff --git a/src/uncategorized/slaveInteract.tw b/src/uncategorized/slaveInteract.tw index 059cd3ca4fd..6bd3185ba82 100644 --- a/src/uncategorized/slaveInteract.tw +++ b/src/uncategorized/slaveInteract.tw @@ -1519,12 +1519,12 @@ Relationship rules: ''<span id="relationshipRules">$activeSlave.relationshipRule <<if _warn>><br>//Spending more than <<print cashFormat(5000)>> weekly will have no effect.//<</if>> <<if $PC.career == "escort">> <br> - You retain some contacts from your past life in the idustry that may be willing to cut you some discounts should you return to it. + You retain some contacts from your past life in the industry that may be willing to cut you some discounts should you return to it. <<if $PCSlutContacts != 2>> You are not baring your body for all to see. [[Star in porn for a discount|Slave Interact][$PCSlutContacts = 2]] <<else>> - You are staring in hardcore porn once more. + You are starring in hardcore porn once more. [[Stop doing porn for a discount|Slave Interact][$PCSlutContacts = 1]] <</if>> <</if>> -- GitLab