diff --git a/src/uncategorized/pRivalryActions.tw b/src/uncategorized/pRivalryActions.tw
index 21e643264adc7511b111593cc7b96f176790ac71..c9a7e02266ea882f87cf0387370e9249c6558c88 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/pRivalryActions.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/pRivalryActions.tw
@@ -432,7 +432,7 @@ Your inter-arcology war with the arcology owner behind the Daughters of Liberty
 		<<set $hostage.vagina = 3>>
 		<<set $hostage.behavioralFlaw = "anorexic">>
 		<<set $hostage.sexualFlaw = "hates penetration">>
-		groaning as her taut belly is measured and her weight is taken; 140 tallies adorn her lower belly. "88 Kilos, a good start, but no where near the end. Now about that fetish of yours..." She responds with a meek
+		groaning as her taut belly is measured and her weight is taken; 140 tallies adorn her lower belly. "88 kilos, a good start, but nowhere near the end. Now about that fetish of yours..." She responds with a meek
 		<<set $hostageFetish = either("submissive", "cumslut", "humiliation", "buttslut", "boobs", "sadist", "masochist", "dom", "pregnancy")>>
 		<<switch $hostageFetish>>
 		<<case "submissive">>
@@ -789,7 +789,7 @@ Your inter-arcology war with the arcology owner behind the Daughters of Liberty
 		<<set $hostage.sexualFlaw = "crude">>
 		<<set $hostage.vaginalCount += 35>>
 		<<set $hostage.vagina = 3>>
-		giggling and flirting while her body is measured and her weight is taken; 280 tallies adorn her soft belly. "108 Kilos, getting there. Oh don't make that face, there's plenty of food left."
+		giggling and flirting while her body is measured and her weight is taken; 280 tallies adorn her soft belly. "108 kilos, getting there. Oh don't make that face, there's plenty of food left."
 		<<switch $hostageFetish>>
 		<<case "cumslut">>
 			<<set $hostage.oralCount += 70>>
@@ -993,7 +993,7 @@ Your inter-arcology war with the arcology owner behind the Daughters of Liberty
 		<<set $hostage.devotion -= 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.vaginalCount += 1>>
 		<<set $hostage.fetishStrength = 100>>
-		publicly showing off her pure and flawless body. A look of complete joy on her face.
+		publicly showing off her pure and flawless body, a look of complete joy on her face.
 	<<case "Youth Preferentialism">>
 		<<set $hostage.trust -= 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.devotion -= 5>>
@@ -1023,7 +1023,7 @@ Your inter-arcology war with the arcology owner behind the Daughters of Liberty
 		<<set $hostage.trust -= 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.devotion -= 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.vaginalCount += 1>>
-		publicly showing off her thin, sleek body. A look of complete joy on her face.
+		publicly showing off her thin, sleek body, a look of complete joy on her face.
 	<<case "Pastoralism">>
 		<<set $hostage.trust -= 5>>
 		<<set $hostage.devotion -= 5>>
@@ -1051,7 +1051,7 @@ Your inter-arcology war with the arcology owner behind the Daughters of Liberty
 		<<set $hostage.fetishStrength = 100>>
 		<<set $hostage.vaginalCount += 40>>
 		<<set $hostage.vagina = 4>>
-		giggling and flirting as her flabby body is groped and fondled while her weight is taken; her stomach is so large you can't make out how many tallies adorn it any longer. "128 Kilos, pretty big now aren't we?"
+		giggling and flirting as her flabby body is groped and fondled while her weight is taken; her stomach is so large you can't make out how many tallies adorn it any longer. "128 kilos, pretty big now, aren't we?"
 		<<switch $hostageFetish>>
 		<<case "cumslut">>
 			<<set $hostage.oralCount += 70>>
@@ -1241,7 +1241,7 @@ Your inter-arcology war with the arcology owner behind the Daughters of Liberty
 	<<case "Pastoralism">>
 		<<set $hostage.muscles = 100>>
 		<<set $hostage.vaginalCount += 1>>
-		giving an interview. She gushes over how great it feels being a chiselled goddess and how terrible it is that some people want to keep girls obese, pregnant, milky cows.
+		giving an interview. She gushes over how great it feels being a chiseled goddess and how terrible it is that some people want to keep girls obese, pregnant, milky cows.
 	<<case "Cummunism">>
 		<<set $hostage.boobs = 24300>>
 		<<set $hostage.weight = 100>>
@@ -1253,7 +1253,7 @@ Your inter-arcology war with the arcology owner behind the Daughters of Liberty
 		<<set $hostage.fetishStrength = 100>>
 		<<set $hostage.vaginalCount += 60>>
 		<<set $hostage.vagina = 5>>
-		moaning as she shoves food into her mouth with one hand and fondles her lover's body with the other. "My apologies. I don't have her weight for you this week. You see, she broke the scale when she stepped on it, well I suppose that tells you plenty. Though I have another surprise for you! <<SlaveFullName $hostage>>, would you like to tell'em yourself?" She shouts, spewing crumbs everywhere,
+		moaning as she shoves food into her mouth with one hand and fondles her lover's body with the other. "My apologies. I don't have her weight for you this week. You see, she broke the scale when she stepped on it, well I suppose that tells you plenty. Though I have another surprise for you! <<SlaveFullName $hostage>>, would you like to tell 'em yourself?" She shouts, spewing crumbs everywhere,
 		<<switch $hostageFetish>>
 		<<case "submissive">>
 			"I haven't orgasmed all week, but I've made sure to bring every one of my lovers to climax! That's what I love most, seeing the look of satisfaction on their faces as they blow their loads deep into me!"
@@ -1295,7 +1295,7 @@ Your inter-arcology war with the arcology owner behind the Daughters of Liberty
 	<<case "Hedonistic Decadence">>
 		<<set $hostage.muscles = 100>>
 		<<set $hostage.vaginalCount += 1>>
-		giving an interview. She gushes over how great it feels being a chiselled goddess and how terrible it is that some people want to keep girls obese, slovenly wastes of flesh.
+		giving an interview. She gushes over how great it feels being a chiseled goddess and how terrible it is that some people want to keep girls obese, slovenly wastes of flesh.
 	<<case "Chattel Religionism">>
 		<<set $hostage.vaginalCount += 1>>
 		giving an interview. She gushes over how great it is to experience all manners of class and culture, both physically and spiritually.
@@ -3620,7 +3620,7 @@ Your inter-arcology war with the arcology owner behind the Daughters of Liberty
 			desperately begging for the owner of the dick being waved in her face to shower her with cum.
 			<<set $hostage.oralCount += 70>>
 		<<case "humiliation">>
-			standing on a balcony fully nude shouting at passersby to oggle her, desperate for stronger forms of humiliation.
+			standing on a balcony fully nude shouting at passersby to ogle her, desperate for stronger forms of humiliation.
 		<<case "buttslut">>
 			begging for more cocks in her ass as the two men already penetrating it struggle to not get too intimate with each other.
 			<<set $hostage.analCount += 35>>
diff --git a/src/utility/birthWidgets.tw b/src/utility/birthWidgets.tw
index 956b8a7045f0a0a9f4ef872b0ad600d7dfcf7476..fe252cc2d3a9f3da62a1bdaa23ba8bcd82f6e5af 100644
--- a/src/utility/birthWidgets.tw
+++ b/src/utility/birthWidgets.tw
@@ -1315,9 +1315,9 @@ Feeling childbirth approaching, $slaves[$i].slaveName is helped to her prepared
 	<<if $slaves[$i].fetish == "mindbroken">>
 		Instinctively, she begins to push out <<if $slaves[$i].broodmother > 0>><<if $slaves[$i].birthsTotal == 0>>her first<<else>>this week's<</if>> baby<<else>>her bab<<if $slaves[$i].pregType > 1>>ies<<else>>y<</if>><</if>>, indifferent to the obvious wetness forming <<if $slaves[$i].mpreg == 1>>under her rear<<else>>over her crotch<</if>>.
 		<<if $slaves[$i].pregType > 10 && $slaves[$i].broodmother == 0>>
-			Child after child is born into her stretch pants as the <<if $slaves[$i].mpreg == 1>>seat<<else>>front<</if>> distends more and more. With no where left to go, her newborns begin to slip down her pantlegs, but that isn't enough to relieve the straining material. With a loud rip, the overburdened garmit splits and frees her brood into the world.
+			Child after child is born into her stretch pants as the <<if $slaves[$i].mpreg == 1>>seat<<else>>front<</if>> distends more and more. With nowhere left to go, her newborns begin to slip down her pantlegs, but that isn't enough to relieve the straining material. With a loud rip, the overburdened garmit splits and frees her brood into the world.
 		<<elseif $slaves[$i].pregType > 4 && $slaves[$i].broodmother == 0>>
-			Child after child is born into her stretch pants as the <<if $slaves[$i].mpreg == 1>>seat<<else>>front<</if>> distends more and more. With no where left to go, her newborns begin to slip down her pantlegs. She struggles to carry on with her task until someone helps free them from their cloth prison.
+			Child after child is born into her stretch pants as the <<if $slaves[$i].mpreg == 1>>seat<<else>>front<</if>> distends more and more. With nowhere left to go, her newborns begin to slip down her pantlegs. She struggles to carry on with her task until someone helps free them from their cloth prison.
 		<<else>>
 			She finishes giving birth and begins anew on her assigned task, ignoring the squirming bab<<if $slaves[$i].pregType > 1 && $slaves[$i].broodmother == 0>>ies<<else>>y<</if>> distending the <<if $slaves[$i].mpreg == 1>>seat<<else>>front<</if>> of her stretch pants until someone helps them from their cloth prison.
 		<</if>>