From f679ca7aa0efa10f3b5662e792070c107d255fa2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: klorpa <30924131+klorpa@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Sat, 18 Aug 2018 10:30:20 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] Fixes Two

---
 src/pregmod/fMarry.tw                  |  2 +-
 src/pregmod/fSlaveFeed.tw              | 12 ++++++------
 src/uncategorized/walkPast.tw          |  2 +-
 src/utility/descriptionWidgetsFlesh.tw | 24 ++++++++++++------------
 4 files changed, 20 insertions(+), 20 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/pregmod/fMarry.tw b/src/pregmod/fMarry.tw
index ec1735a314c..ee120e60c44 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/fMarry.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/fMarry.tw
@@ -277,7 +277,7 @@ You tell $activeSlave.slaveName that you're going to marry $him. (A proposal, of
 	You leave $him to weep and consider $his fate. Despite $his "fortune", $he is still a slave, and undoubtedly knows that $his position could easily change should you tire of $him.
 	<<set _reactionType = 2>>
 <<else>>
-	$He doesn't really react to this. By no means does $he want to be your wife, but she's obedient enough to know that you are in charge. You leave $him to $his business, and go back to yours.
+	$He doesn't really react to this. By no means does $he want to be your wife, but $he's obedient enough to know that you are in charge. You leave $him to $his business, and go back to yours.
 	<<if $activeSlave.relationship != 0>>
 		<<if $activeSlave.relationship == -1>>
 			$He sighs at the realization that $he won't be allowed to be so promiscuous and will have to learn to focus $his attention on you.
diff --git a/src/pregmod/fSlaveFeed.tw b/src/pregmod/fSlaveFeed.tw
index e98e9ad18f0..f1f61bf2666 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/fSlaveFeed.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/fSlaveFeed.tw
@@ -42,27 +42,27 @@ The first necessary step is to prepare the milk cow and _his2 udders.
 <<elseif $activeSlave.mother == $milkTap.ID>>
 	This is easy enough, as $milkTap.slaveName fondly remembers nursing _his2 daughter. <<if $milkTap.lactation > 1>>$he is practically gushing milk with nostalgia<<else>>It takes minimal effort to get _his2 milk flowing<</if>>.
 <<elseif $activeSlave.father == $milkTap.ID>>
-	This is extremely tough, as $milkTap.slaveName is very uncomfortable breast feeding the $girl _he2 sired. <<if $milkTap.lactation > 1>>_Him2 excessive milk production quickly leaves _him2 eager for release, however<<else>>It takes some coaxing and kneading to get _his2 milk flowing and _him2 eager for relief<</if>>.
+	This is extremely tough, as $milkTap.slaveName is very uncomfortable breast feeding the $girl _he2 sired. <<if $milkTap.lactation > 1>>_His2 excessive milk production quickly leaves _him2 eager for release, however<<else>>It takes some coaxing and kneading to get _his2 milk flowing and _him2 eager for relief<</if>>.
 <<elseif $milkTap.mother == $activeSlave.ID>>
 	This is moderately tough, as $milkTap.slaveName finds it awkward to nurse _his2 own mother. <<if $milkTap.lactation > 1>>_His2 excessive milk production quickly leaves _him2 eager for release<<else>>It takes some coaxing and kneading to get _his2 milk flowing and _him2 eager for relief<</if>>.
 <<elseif $milkTap.father == $activeSlave.ID>>
-	This is very tough, as $milkTap.slaveName finds it weird to let _his2 father suckle from _him2. <<if $milkTap.lactation > 1>>$Him excessive milk production quickly leaves _him2 eager for release, however<<else>>It takes some coaxing and kneading to get _his2 milk flowing and _him2 eager for relief<</if>>.
+	This is very tough, as $milkTap.slaveName finds it weird to let _his2 father suckle from _him2. <<if $milkTap.lactation > 1>>_His2 excessive milk production quickly leaves _him2 eager for release, however<<else>>It takes some coaxing and kneading to get _his2 milk flowing and _him2 eager for relief<</if>>.
 <<elseif areSisters($activeSlave, $milkTap) == 1>>
 	This is easy enough, as $milkTap.slaveName wants _his2 twin to try _his2 milk, but only if $he can taste $hers too. <<if $milkTap.lactation > 1>>$he is practically gushing milk with excitement<<else>>It takes minimal effort to get _his2 milk flowing<</if>>.
 <<elseif areSisters($activeSlave, $milkTap) == 2>>
-	This is moderately tough, as $milkTap.slaveName is uncomfortable getting so intimate with _his2 sister. <<if $milkTap.lactation > 1>>_Him2 excessive milk production quickly leaves _him2 eager for release<<else>>It takes some coaxing and kneading to get _his2 milk flowing and _him2 eager for relief<</if>>.
+	This is moderately tough, as $milkTap.slaveName is uncomfortable getting so intimate with _his2 sister. <<if $milkTap.lactation > 1>>_His2 excessive milk production quickly leaves _him2 eager for release<<else>>It takes some coaxing and kneading to get _his2 milk flowing and _him2 eager for relief<</if>>.
 <<elseif areSisters($activeSlave, $milkTap) == 3>>
-	This is slightly difficult, as $milkTap.slaveName is uncomfortable getting so intimate with _his2 half-sister. <<if $milkTap.lactation > 1>>_Him2 excessive milk production quickly leaves _him2 eager for release<<else>>It takes some coaxing and kneading to get _his2 milk flowing and _him2 eager for relief<</if>>.
+	This is slightly difficult, as $milkTap.slaveName is uncomfortable getting so intimate with _his2 half-sister. <<if $milkTap.lactation > 1>>_His2 excessive milk production quickly leaves _him2 eager for release<<else>>It takes some coaxing and kneading to get _his2 milk flowing and _him2 eager for relief<</if>>.
 
 <<elseif $milkTap.relationTarget == $activeSlave.ID>>
 	<<if $milkTap.relation == "twin">>
 		This is easy enough, as $milkTap.slaveName wants _his2 twin to try _his2 milk, but only if $he can taste _his2's too. <<if $milkTap.lactation > 1>>_he2 is practically gushing milk with excitement<<else>>It takes minimal effort to get _his2 milk flowing<</if>>.
 	<<elseif $milkTap.relation == "sister">>
-		This is moderately tough, as $milkTap.slaveName is uncomfortable getting so intimate with _his2 sister. <<if $milkTap.lactation > 1>>_Him2 excessive milk production quickly leaves _his2 eager for release<<else>>It takes some coaxing and kneading to get _his2 milk flowing and _his2 eager for relief<</if>>.
+		This is moderately tough, as $milkTap.slaveName is uncomfortable getting so intimate with _his2 sister. <<if $milkTap.lactation > 1>>_His2 excessive milk production quickly leaves _his2 eager for release<<else>>It takes some coaxing and kneading to get _his2 milk flowing and _his2 eager for relief<</if>>.
 	<<elseif $milkTap.relation == "mother">>
 		This is easy enough, as $milkTap.slaveName fondly remembers nursing _his2 daughter. <<if $milkTap.lactation > 1>>$he is practically gushing milk with nostalgia<<else>>It takes minimal effort to get _his2 milk flowing<</if>>.
 	<<elseif $milkTap.relation == "daughter">>
-		This is moderately tough, as $milkTap.slaveName finds it awkward to nurse _his2 own mother. <<if $milkTap.lactation > 1>>$Him excessive milk production quickly leaves _him2 eager for release<<else>>It takes some coaxing and kneading to get _his2 milk flowing and _him2 eager for relief<</if>>.
+		This is moderately tough, as $milkTap.slaveName finds it awkward to nurse _his2 own mother. <<if $milkTap.lactation > 1>>_His2 excessive milk production quickly leaves _him2 eager for release<<else>>It takes some coaxing and kneading to get _his2 milk flowing and _him2 eager for relief<</if>>.
 	<</if>>
 
 <<elseif ($milkTap.lactation > 1) && ($milkTap.devotion >= -20)>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/walkPast.tw b/src/uncategorized/walkPast.tw
index f3dad6d1fd1..0990b850879 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/walkPast.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/walkPast.tw
@@ -3979,7 +3979,7 @@
 	<<case "a mounty outfit">>
 		$His uniform slacks can be slipped off $his hips to bare $his butthole.
 	<<case "a dirndl">>
-		$His dress can be easily lifted to access $his her bare ass.
+		$His dress can be easily lifted to access $his bare ass.
 	<<case "lederhosen">>
 		$His tight shorts can be slipped off $his hips to bare $his butthole.
 	<<case "a biyelgee costume">>
diff --git a/src/utility/descriptionWidgetsFlesh.tw b/src/utility/descriptionWidgetsFlesh.tw
index 4a9d9c56b9a..970a973edce 100644
--- a/src/utility/descriptionWidgetsFlesh.tw
+++ b/src/utility/descriptionWidgetsFlesh.tw
@@ -6330,7 +6330,7 @@ $He has
 	<<if $activeSlave.belly >= 1000000>>
 		<<if $activeSlave.bellyFluid >= $activeSlave.bellyPreg && $activeSlave.bellyFluid >= $activeSlave.bellyImplant>>
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.bellyImplant > 0>>
-			$activeSlave.slaveName's unfathomable, hyper-swollen, implant-filled belly makes a mockery of $his corset; it holds on only with custom lacing and, even then, is more plastered to her back than wrapped around her stomach.
+			$activeSlave.slaveName's unfathomable, hyper-swollen, implant-filled belly makes a mockery of $his corset; it holds on only with custom lacing and, even then, is more plastered to $his back than wrapped around $his stomach.
 		<<else>>
 			$activeSlave.slaveName's unfathomable, hyper-swollen pregnancy makes a mockery of $his corset; despite this, even the light pressure applied to it by the failing lacings of the garment has $his packed-tight womb on the brink of rupturing. $His brood squirms as much as they possibly can under the pressure.
 		<</if>>
@@ -7187,7 +7187,7 @@ $He has
 	<<if $activeSlave.belly >= 1000000>>
 		<<if $activeSlave.bellyFluid >= $activeSlave.bellyPreg && $activeSlave.bellyFluid >= $activeSlave.bellyImplant>>
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.bellyImplant > 0>>
-			$activeSlave.slaveName's unfathomable, hyper-swollen, implant-filled belly is wrapped with tight chains. Despite how tightly they're pulled together, they fail to sink into the firm globe of her belly at all, shifting over it and agitating $his flesh with each of $his movements.
+			$activeSlave.slaveName's unfathomable, hyper-swollen, implant-filled belly is wrapped with tight chains. Despite how tightly they're pulled together, they fail to sink into the firm globe of $his belly at all, shifting over it and agitating $his flesh with each of $his movements.
 		<<else>>
 			$activeSlave.slaveName's unfathomable, hyper-swollen pregnant belly is wrapped with tight chains. It bulges so extremely that the outlines of entire infants can be seen pressed up to either side of the chains, sometimes overlapping them so that flesh rubs up against flesh; every motion inside $him is excruciating.
 		<</if>>
@@ -12178,16 +12178,16 @@ $He has
 	<<if $activeSlave.belly >= 1000000>>
 		<<if $activeSlave.bellyFluid >= $activeSlave.bellyPreg && $activeSlave.bellyFluid >= $activeSlave.bellyImplant>>
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.bellyImplant > 0>>
-			$activeSlave.slaveName's cheerleader top rests atop $his unfathomable, hyper-swollen, implant-filled belly, giving the impression that $he is about to give birth to her entire school.
+			$activeSlave.slaveName's cheerleader top rests atop $his unfathomable, hyper-swollen, implant-filled belly, giving the impression that $he is about to give birth to $his entire school.
 		<<else>>
-			$activeSlave.slaveName's cheerleader top rests atop $his unfathomable, hyper-swollen pregnant belly, giving the impression that $he is about to give birth to her entire school.
+			$activeSlave.slaveName's cheerleader top rests atop $his unfathomable, hyper-swollen pregnant belly, giving the impression that $he is about to give birth to $his entire school.
 		<</if>>
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.belly >= 750000>>
 		<<if $activeSlave.bellyFluid >= $activeSlave.bellyPreg && $activeSlave.bellyFluid >= $activeSlave.bellyImplant>>
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.bellyImplant > 0>>
-			$activeSlave.slaveName's cheerleader top rests atop $his monolithic, implant-filled belly, giving the impression that $he is pregnant with the rest of her entire squad.
+			$activeSlave.slaveName's cheerleader top rests atop $his monolithic, implant-filled belly, giving the impression that $he is pregnant with the rest of $his entire squad.
 		<<else>>
-			$activeSlave.slaveName's cheerleader top rests atop $his monolithic pregnant belly, giving the impression that $he is pregnant with the rest of her entire squad.
+			$activeSlave.slaveName's cheerleader top rests atop $his monolithic pregnant belly, giving the impression that $he is pregnant with the rest of $his entire squad.
 		<</if>>
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 600000>>
 		$activeSlave.slaveName's cheerleader top rests atop $his titanic bulging pregnant belly clearly displaying that this cheerleader has fucked the entire school.
@@ -12523,16 +12523,16 @@ $He has
 	<<if $activeSlave.belly >= 1000000>>
 		<<if $activeSlave.bellyFluid >= $activeSlave.bellyPreg && $activeSlave.bellyFluid >= $activeSlave.bellyImplant>>
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.bellyImplant > 0>>
-			$activeSlave.slaveName's unfathomable, hyper-swollen, implant-filled belly is so enormous that the largest obi in the world could never wrap around it. As a result, $he leaves $his kimono open. It pools around $her when she rests atop her belly's incredible mass, causing her to resemble a geisha in repose due to her immobility.
+			$activeSlave.slaveName's unfathomable, hyper-swollen, implant-filled belly is so enormous that the largest obi in the world could never wrap around it. As a result, $he leaves $his kimono open. It pools around $him when $he rests atop $his belly's incredible mass, causing $him to resemble a geisha in repose due to $his immobility.
 		<<else>>
-			$activeSlave.slaveName's unfathomable, hyper-swollen pregnancy is so enormous that the largest obi in the world could never wrap around it. As a result, $he leaves $his kimono open. It pools around $her when she rests atop her belly's incredible, brood swollen mass, causing her to resemble nothing more than a geisha in repose, rocking on an ocean of undulating flesh.
+			$activeSlave.slaveName's unfathomable, hyper-swollen pregnancy is so enormous that the largest obi in the world could never wrap around it. As a result, $he leaves $his kimono open. It pools around $him when $he rests atop $his belly's incredible, brood swollen mass, causing $him to resemble nothing more than a geisha in repose, rocking on an ocean of undulating flesh.
 		<</if>>
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.belly >= 750000>>
 		<<if $activeSlave.bellyFluid >= $activeSlave.bellyPreg && $activeSlave.bellyFluid >= $activeSlave.bellyImplant>>
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.bellyImplant > 0>>
-			$activeSlave.slaveName's monolithic, implant-filled belly is so enormous that there is no way for $his obi to ever wrap around it to tie $his kimono. As a result, $he leaves $his kimono open. It pools around $her when she rests atop her belly's incredible mass.
+			$activeSlave.slaveName's monolithic, implant-filled belly is so enormous that there is no way for $his obi to ever wrap around it to tie $his kimono. As a result, $he leaves $his kimono open. It pools around $him when $he rests atop $his belly's incredible mass.
 		<<else>>
-			$activeSlave.slaveName's monolithic pregnant belly is so enormous that there is no way for $his obi to ever wrap around it to tie $his kimono. As a result, $he leaves $his kimono open. It pools around $her when she rests atop her belly's incredible mass.
+			$activeSlave.slaveName's monolithic pregnant belly is so enormous that there is no way for $his obi to ever wrap around it to tie $his kimono. As a result, $he leaves $his kimono open. It pools around $him when $he rests atop $his belly's incredible mass.
 		<</if>>
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.bellyPreg >= 600000>>
 		$activeSlave.slaveName's titanic bulging pregnant belly parts the front of $his kimono leaving it gracefully hanging to its sides.
@@ -13006,14 +13006,14 @@ $He has
 	<<if $activeSlave.belly >= 1000000>>
 		<<if $activeSlave.bellyFluid >= $activeSlave.bellyPreg && $activeSlave.bellyFluid >= $activeSlave.bellyImplant>>
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.bellyImplant > 0>>
-			Your breeding focused society finds $his unfathomable, hyper-swollen, implant-filled belly near the pinacle of fashion despite her inability to have children.
+			Your breeding focused society finds $his unfathomable, hyper-swollen, implant-filled belly near the pinacle of fashion despite $his inability to have children.
 		<<else>>
 			Your breeding focused society finds $his unfathomable, hyper-swollen pregnant belly the perfect realization of the fashionable ideal.
 		<</if>>
 	<<elseif $activeSlave.belly >= 750000>>
 		<<if $activeSlave.bellyFluid >= $activeSlave.bellyPreg && $activeSlave.bellyFluid >= $activeSlave.bellyImplant>>
 		<<elseif $activeSlave.bellyImplant > 0>>
-			Your breeding focused society finds $his monolithic implant-filled belly highly fashionable despite her inability to have children.
+			Your breeding focused society finds $his monolithic implant-filled belly highly fashionable despite $his inability to have children.
 		<<else>>
 			Your breeding focused society finds $his monolithic pregnant belly near to the perfect realization of the fashionable ideal.
 		<</if>>
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