diff --git a/src/npc/descriptions/style/clothing.js b/src/npc/descriptions/style/clothing.js index 7c8b2bdbe611251e4a6065c5748b4a519a09dd67..8783390414d6d6f5514dd07226297c9a19c01046 100644 --- a/src/npc/descriptions/style/clothing.js +++ b/src/npc/descriptions/style/clothing.js @@ -957,7 +957,7 @@ App.Desc.clothing = function(slave, {market, eventDescription} = {}) { } r.push(`built-in corset and an elegant, layered skirt that evokes the feeling of a flower ready to blossom.`); if (hasAnyLegs(slave)) { - r.push(`${He} is wearing`); + r.push(`${He} is`); r.push(App.Desc.footwear(slave)); } break; diff --git a/src/npc/descriptions/style/footwear.js b/src/npc/descriptions/style/footwear.js index 619b1405f2b7ded7e529669b47e545eab5158a74..d767d0964e3928554535aff1e7c33cda4f26abc3 100644 --- a/src/npc/descriptions/style/footwear.js +++ b/src/npc/descriptions/style/footwear.js @@ -4371,66 +4371,62 @@ App.Desc.footwear = function(slave) { switch (slave.shoes) { case "flats": if (bothFeet) { - r.push(`an elegant pair of dancing slippers.`); + r.push(`wearing an elegant pair of dancing slippers.`); } else { - r.push(`an elegant dancing slipper.`); + r.push(`wearing an elegant dancing slipper.`); } break; case "boots": if (bothFeet) { - r.push(`an elegant pair of heeled booties.`); + r.push(`wearing an elegant pair of heeled booties.`); } else { - r.push(`an elegant heeled boot.`); + r.push(`wearing an elegant heeled boot.`); } break; case "heels": if (bothFeet) { - r.push(`an elegant pair of heels.`); + r.push(`wearing an elegant pair of heels.`); } else { - r.push(`an elegant heel.`); + r.push(`wearing an elegant heel.`); } break; case "pumps": if (bothFeet) { - r.push(`an elegant pair of pumps.`); + r.push(`wearing an elegant pair of pumps.`); } else { - r.push(`an elegant heel.`); + r.push(`wearing an elegant heel.`); } break; case "extreme heels": if (bothFeet) { - r.push(`an elegant pair of excruciatingly high heels that test ${his} grace.`); + r.push(`wearing an elegant pair of excruciatingly high heels that test ${his} grace.`); } else { - r.push(`an elegant, excruciatingly high heel that makes it impossible for ${him} to stand.`); + r.push(`wearing an elegant, excruciatingly high heel that makes it impossible for ${him} to stand.`); } break; case "platform shoes": if (bothFeet) { - r.push(`a fragile pair of platform shoes.`); + r.push(`wearing a fragile pair of platform shoes.`); } else { - r.push(`a fragile platform shoe.`); + r.push(`wearing a fragile platform shoe.`); } break; case "platform heels": if (bothFeet) { - r.push(`a fragile pair of platform heels.`); + r.push(`wearing a fragile pair of platform heels.`); } else { - r.push(`a fragile platform heel.`); + r.push(`wearing a fragile platform heel.`); } break; case "extreme platform heels": if (bothFeet) { - r.push(`a fragile pair of excruciatingly high platform heels that test ${his} focus with each step.`); + r.push(`wearing a fragile pair of excruciatingly high platform heels that test ${his} focus with each step.`); } else { - r.push(`a fragile, excruciatingly high platform heel that makes it impossible for ${him} to stand.`); + r.push(`wearing a fragile, excruciatingly high platform heel that makes it impossible for ${him} to stand.`); } break; default: - if (bothFeet) { - r.push(`elegantly bare feet.`); - } else { - r.push(`an elegant bare feet.`); - } + r.push(`elegantly bare footed.`); } break; case "a bimbo outfit":