From 0c72dd88dca5215d8210ee60fed702c27ff2711a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Svornost <11434-svornost@users.noreply.gitgud.io>
Date: Wed, 11 Nov 2020 17:10:33 -0800
Subject: [PATCH] Be more specific.
---
src/endWeek/saRelationships.js | 8 ++++----
1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
diff --git a/src/endWeek/saRelationships.js b/src/endWeek/saRelationships.js
index fe902074953..2fa47bd4136 100644
--- a/src/endWeek/saRelationships.js
+++ b/src/endWeek/saRelationships.js
@@ -1258,7 +1258,7 @@ App.SlaveAssignment.relationships = (function() {
r.push(`${slave.slaveName} is <span class="trust dec">agonizingly aware</span> that ${his} child ${worriedAboutChildren[0].slaveName} is also your slave and might suffer if either of them angers you, and <span class="devotion inc">does ${his} best</span> to protect ${him2}.`);
}
if (worriedAboutChildren.length > overwhelmed) {
- r.push(`${He} has so many children to worry about that ${he} is overwhelmed with emotion and <span class="trust inc">fears you less.</span>`);
+ r.push(`${He} has so many children to worry about that ${he} is overwhelmed with fear and <span class="trust inc">forced to trust you.</span>`);
}
let singleRelative = singleRelativeInMap(worriedAboutRelatives);
if (singleRelative) {
@@ -1268,7 +1268,7 @@ App.SlaveAssignment.relationships = (function() {
r.push(`${slave.slaveName} is <span class="trust dec">painfully conscious</span> that ${arrayToSentence(groups)} are also your slaves and might suffer if any of them displeases you, and <span class="devotion inc">tries to obey</span> as best ${he} can.`);
}
if (relativeMapTotalSize(worriedAboutRelatives) > overwhelmed) {
- r.push(`${He} has so many relatives to worry about that ${he} is overwhelmed with emotion and <span class="trust inc">fears you less.</span>`);
+ r.push(`${He} has so many relatives to worry about that ${he} is overwhelmed with fear and <span class="trust inc">forced to trust you.</span>`);
}
} else {
/** @type {Map<string, Array<App.Entity.SlaveState>>} */
@@ -1301,7 +1301,7 @@ App.SlaveAssignment.relationships = (function() {
r.push(`${slave.slaveName} knows that ${arrayToSentence(groups)} all love being your sex slaves, and is <span class="devotion inc">happy</span> for them.`);
}
if (relativeMapTotalSize(devotedRelatives) > overwhelmed) {
- r.push(`${He} has so many relatives that love being your slaves that ${he} is sometimes overwhelmed with emotion and <span class="devotion dec">neglects ${his} duties.</span>`);
+ r.push(`${He} has so many relatives that love being your slaves that ${he} is sometimes overwhelmed with joy and <span class="devotion dec">neglects ${his} duties.</span>`);
}
singleRelative = singleRelativeInMap(obedientRelatives);
if (singleRelative) {
@@ -1323,7 +1323,7 @@ App.SlaveAssignment.relationships = (function() {
r.push(`${slave.slaveName} knows that ${arrayToSentence(groups)} all hate being sex slaves, and is <span class="trust dec">afraid</span> for them.`);
}
if (relativeMapTotalSize(hatefulRelatives) > overwhelmed) {
- r.push(`${He} has so many relatives that hate being your sex slaves that ${he} is overwhelmed with emotion and <span class="trust inc">just has to trust you to take care of them.</span>`);
+ r.push(`${He} has so many relatives that hate being your sex slaves that ${he} is overwhelmed with fear and <span class="trust inc">just has to trust you to take care of them.</span>`);
}
}
}
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