diff --git a/src/npc/startingGirls/editFamily.js b/src/npc/startingGirls/editFamily.js
index 8a8c0f1454363159fd6c7fb942844f84db783bb6..40522e45870e6d5484151c85c01a49a5f60e606b 100644
--- a/src/npc/startingGirls/editFamily.js
+++ b/src/npc/startingGirls/editFamily.js
@@ -261,10 +261,13 @@ App.Intro.editFamily = function(slave) {
 		const div = document.createElement("div");
 		const linkArray = [];
 
-		div.append(`${slave.slaveName} is the mother of these children: `);
-
+		const children = App.StartingGirls.listOfSlavesWithParent("mother", slave.ID);
 		const nameEl = makeElWithID("motheredNames", "span");
-		nameEl.append(App.StartingGirls.listOfSlavesWithParent("mother", slave.ID) || "None.", " ");
+		if (children) {
+			nameEl.append(`${slave.slaveName} is the mother of these children: ${children}. Add: `);
+		} else {
+			nameEl.append(`${slave.slaveName} is not a mother to any children yet. Add:  `);
+		}
 		div.append(nameEl);
 
 		linkArray.push(
@@ -328,10 +331,13 @@ App.Intro.editFamily = function(slave) {
 		const div = document.createElement("div");
 		const linkArray = [];
 
-		div.append(`${slave.slaveName} is the father of these children: `);
-
+		const children = App.StartingGirls.listOfSlavesWithParent("father", slave.ID);
 		const nameEl = makeElWithID("fatheredNames", "span");
-		nameEl.append(App.StartingGirls.listOfSlavesWithParent("father", slave.ID) || "None.", " ");
+		if (children) {
+			nameEl.append(`${slave.slaveName} is the father of these children: ${children}. Add: `);
+		} else {
+			nameEl.append(`${slave.slaveName} is not a father to any children yet. Add: `);
+		}
 		div.append(nameEl);
 
 		linkArray.push(