From 1a6507730688b31bd04f0dfa5f7e3c75fcd20ff9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: klorpa <30924131+klorpa@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Sat, 1 Dec 2018 20:41:08 -0600
Subject: [PATCH] Others
---
devNotes/twine JS.txt | 4 ++--
src/Mods/DinnerParty/dinnerPartyExecution.tw | 22 ++++++++++----------
src/SecExp/encyclopediaSecExpBattles.tw | 2 +-
src/SecExp/encyclopediaSecExpMain.tw | 2 +-
src/SecExp/secInit.tw | 2 +-
src/gui/Encyclopedia/encyclopedia.tw | 8 +++----
src/js/slaveCostJS.tw | 4 ++--
src/npc/descriptions/fPoolSex.tw | 4 ++--
src/npc/rgASDump.tw | 22 ++++++++++----------
src/npc/startingGirls/startingGirls.tw | 2 +-
src/npc/takeoverTarget.tw | 2 +-
src/player/actions/fCaress.tw | 2 +-
src/pregmod/seFCTVshows.tw | 16 +++++++-------
src/uncategorized/RESS.tw | 4 ++--
src/uncategorized/cellblock.tw | 8 +++++--
src/uncategorized/pRivalryCapture.tw | 2 +-
src/uncategorized/reNickname.tw | 2 +-
src/uncategorized/remoteSurgery.tw | 2 +-
src/uncategorized/saLongTermEffects.tw | 2 +-
src/uncategorized/surgeryDegradation.tw | 4 ++--
src/uncategorized/walkPast.tw | 22 ++++++++++----------
src/utility/descriptionWidgetsFlesh.tw | 14 ++++++-------
22 files changed, 78 insertions(+), 74 deletions(-)
diff --git a/devNotes/twine JS.txt b/devNotes/twine JS.txt
index ab114b1846b..284fb9f485e 100644
--- a/devNotes/twine JS.txt
+++ b/devNotes/twine JS.txt
@@ -38415,8 +38415,8 @@ window.Beauty = (function() {
window.FResult = (function() {
"use strict";
- // we can't initialise our global variables on load, because SugarCube.State isn't initialised
- // instead, declare them and initialise on run time
+ // we can't initialize our global variables on load, because SugarCube.State isn't initialized
+ // instead, declare them and initialize on run time
let V, result, incest_bonus;
function FResult(slave) {
V = State.variables;
diff --git a/src/Mods/DinnerParty/dinnerPartyExecution.tw b/src/Mods/DinnerParty/dinnerPartyExecution.tw
index 062b35f3aca..860bc588bd4 100644
--- a/src/Mods/DinnerParty/dinnerPartyExecution.tw
+++ b/src/Mods/DinnerParty/dinnerPartyExecution.tw
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@
$He understands $he is about to be slaughtered liked an animal. Tears stream down $his face as $he struggles against $his bindings.
<</if>>
/* This needs to be rewritten. Take into account FS tastes and the fact that the player might not have a dick */
- $He is lying on $his back with an apple in $his mouth. You lift $his legs up in the air exposing $his nethers. You penetrate $him with your throbbing dick fucking her roughly and cuming quickly. Your guests form a line behind you, and do the same to her ass. Some of your guests take particular pleasure being rough with $activeSlave.slaveName. They enjoy making her squeal like a pig, knowing they are about to enjoy her flesh in a short while. After all of your guests had a turn with the little piggy, her ass is dripping with cum and a hint of blood. It seems your guests greatly @@.green;enjoy@@ themselves. You stand over her with a ceremonial dagger,
+ $He is lying on $his back with an apple in $his mouth. You lift $his legs up in the air exposing $his nethers. You penetrate $him with your throbbing dick fucking her roughly and cumming quickly. Your guests form a line behind you, and do the same to her ass. Some of your guests take particular pleasure being rough with $activeSlave.slaveName. They enjoy making her squeal like a pig, knowing they are about to enjoy her flesh in a short while. After all of your guests had a turn with the little piggy, her ass is dripping with cum and a hint of blood. It seems your guests greatly @@.green;enjoy@@ themselves. You stand over her with a ceremonial dagger,
<<set $rep += 1000>>
<<if $activeSlave.fetish == "mindbroken">>
looking into her dull eyes.
@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@
As you bite into the dick you feel as if this dish is missing something. Something Je ne sais quoi.
<<set _dishRating -= 2.5>>
<</if>>
- /% Dish rating, could be made into a seperate function/passage. The following will be called for every dish %/
+ /% Dish rating, could be made into a separate function/passage. The following will be called for every dish %/
<<set _dinnerRating += _dishRating>>
<<if _dishRating > 5>>
<<set _dishRating = 5>>
@@ -123,7 +123,7 @@
<<set _dishRating = $activeSlave.balls>> /* I give up. Each and every dish will need a rework and score redesign. Definitely some crazy potential with FSs to do some intersting things.*/
<br>
$activeSlave.slaveName's balls are coated in olive oil and sautéed.
- /% Dish rating, could be made into a seperate function/passage. The following will be called for every dish %/
+ /% Dish rating, could be made into a separate function/passage. The following will be called for every dish %/
<<set _dinnerRating += _dishRating>>
<<if _dishRating > 5>>
<<set _dishRating = 5>>
@@ -173,7 +173,7 @@
<<set _dishRating -= 2>>
<</if>>
- /% Dish rating, could be made into a seperate function/passage. The following will be called for every dish %/
+ /% Dish rating, could be made into a separate function/passage. The following will be called for every dish %/
<<set _dinnerRating += _dishRating>>
<<if _dishRating > 5>>
<<set _dishRating = 5>>
@@ -266,7 +266,7 @@
<</if>>
<</if>>
- /% Dish rating, could be made into a seperate function/passage. The following will be called for every dish %/
+ /% Dish rating, could be made into a separate function/passage. The following will be called for every dish %/
<<set _dinnerRating += _dishRating>>
<<if _dishRating > 5>>
<<set _dishRating = 5>>
@@ -345,17 +345,17 @@
<<set _dishRating -= 1>>
<</if>>
<<if $activeSlave.lipsImplant > 0>>
- All of sudden one of your guest's face turns red, then purple. It is clear he is choking on something. You leap out of your seat, rush over to him and start the Heimlich maneuver. On your third thrust into his abdominal, a piece of lip implants flies out of his mouth and hits another guest square in the face. You apologize profusely for your carelessness in selecting the meat. The rest of your guests had a great laugh at your @@.red;expense@@.
+ All of sudden one of your guests' face turns red, then purple. It is clear he is choking on something. You leap out of your seat, rush over to him and start the Heimlich maneuver. On your third thrust into his abdominal, a piece of lip implants flies out of his mouth and hits another guest square in the face. You apologize profusely for your carelessness in selecting the meat. The rest of your guests had a great laugh at your @@.red;expense@@.
<<set _dishRating -= 5>>
<<set $rep -= 500>>
<</if>>
<<if $activeSlave.buttImplant > 0>>
- All of sudden one of your guest clutches his chest. His face turns pale as a ghost, foaming at the mouth falls over onto the table. You rush over to him, it is clear he is not breathing. You don't know what's wrong with him. It could not have been poison, since any toxins in the food would have been detected by your virtual assistant. You order your slave to rush the man to the nearest emergency clinic. You were informed later that he had died from ingesting a silicone butt implant. Your reputation @@.red;suffers@@ greatly due to this incident.
+ All of sudden one of your guests clutches his chest. His face turns pale as a ghost, foaming at the mouth falls over onto the table. You rush over to him, it is clear he is not breathing. You don't know what's wrong with him. It could not have been poison, since any toxins in the food would have been detected by your virtual assistant. You order your slave to rush the man to the nearest emergency clinic. You were informed later that he had died from ingesting a silicone butt implant. Your reputation @@.red;suffers@@ greatly due to this incident.
<<set _dishRating -= 10>>
<<set $rep -= 5000>>
<</if>>
- /% Dish rating, could be made into a seperate function/passage. The following will be called for every dish %/
+ /% Dish rating, could be made into a separate function/passage. The following will be called for every dish %/
<<set _dinnerRating += _dishRating>>
<<if _dishRating > 5>>
<<set _dishRating = 5>>
@@ -440,7 +440,7 @@
<<set $HeadGirl.vagina += 1>>
<</if>>
One man moves to the head of $HeadGirl.slaveName and shoved his cock into _his2 mouth, fucking _his2 throat roughly. He buries his cock deep down _his2 throat all the way to his balls.
- He places both hands around _his2 neck and squeezes with every stroke. Your head girl's face turns red and gags uncontrollably. _His2 eyes rolls back as another man shoved his hard cock in _his2 asshole, sodomizing _him2 with no mercy. As your head girl made squeaking noises in pain, serval guests picked up forks and jabbed it at _his2 butt and _his2 back chanting "more meat... more meat..." and "squeal piggy squeal". You slump over your chair at the head of the table. Gulping down your drink, fighting back the urge to order your security drones to open fire on those men. You know those men would never dare to harm your head girl, not permanently, at least not anything your remote surgery couldn't fix. It's not as if you haven't done worse to your slaves, but the message is clear, the attack on your head girl was meant as disrespect and an insult towards you. Raping your head girl is like raping you. You stare at the group of men gang raping your head girl at the end of your own dining table, you burning their @@.yellow;names and their faces@@ into your memory as they take turns fucking _him2. They make use of _his2 every hole. When they are done, _he2 was left on the floor, battered and bruised, covered in cum and blood from superficial wounds.
+ He places both hands around _his2 neck and squeezes with every stroke. Your head girl's face turns red and gags uncontrollably. _His2 eyes rolls back as another man shoved his hard cock in _his2 asshole, sodomizing _him2 with no mercy. As your head girl made squeaking noises in pain, several guests picked up forks and jabbed it at _his2 butt and _his2 back chanting "more meat... more meat..." and "squeal piggy squeal". You slump over your chair at the head of the table. Gulping down your drink, fighting back the urge to order your security drones to open fire on those men. You know those men would never dare to harm your head girl, not permanently, at least not anything your remote surgery couldn't fix. It's not as if you haven't done worse to your slaves, but the message is clear, the attack on your head girl was meant as disrespect and an insult towards you. Raping your head girl is like raping you. You stare at the group of men gang raping your head girl at the end of your own dining table, you burning their @@.yellow;names and their faces@@ into your memory as they take turns fucking _him2. They make use of _his2 every hole. When they are done, _he2 was left on the floor, battered and bruised, covered in cum and blood from superficial wounds.
The leader of the pack pulls out his half erect cock pees on your head girl as a final insult towards you. The poor _girl2 is so spent that _he2 doesn't even flinch at the urine hitting _his2 face.
He finishes showering your head girl, then turns towards you and says smilingly:
<br><br>
@@ -450,9 +450,9 @@
<<else>>
//madam//,
<</if>>
- //you trained a fine obedient slave. _He2 certainly understands _his2 position well."// You grit your teeth faking a smile, repeating the old the old adage, @@.yellow;revenge is dish best served cold@@. You have made some enemies tonight; you begin to plan a military conquest of them all. You will enjoy storming their arcologies and making them pay for this insult.
+ //you trained a fine obedient slave. _He2 certainly understands _his2 position well."// You grit your teeth faking a smile, mentally repeating the old adage: @@.yellow;revenge is dish best served cold@@. You have made some enemies tonight; you begin to plan a military conquest of them all. You will enjoy storming their arcologies and making them pay for this insult.
<br><br>
- The abuse your head girl suffers had @@.red;decreased _his2 health@@ and _he2 is @@.mediumorchid;less devoted@@ to you as you allowed _him2 to be abused.
+ The abuse your head girl suffers had @@.red;decreased _his2 health@@ and _he2 is @@.mediumorchid;less devoted@@ to you, as you allowed _him2 to be abused.
<br>
<<set $HeadGirl.health -= 20>>
<<set $HeadGirl.devotion -= 20>>
diff --git a/src/SecExp/encyclopediaSecExpBattles.tw b/src/SecExp/encyclopediaSecExpBattles.tw
index 14c97c08544..2e0e50bd864 100644
--- a/src/SecExp/encyclopediaSecExpBattles.tw
+++ b/src/SecExp/encyclopediaSecExpBattles.tw
@@ -56,6 +56,6 @@
<br><strong>A Mercenary Officer</strong>: One of the mercenary commanders can take the lead. Their performance will be above average and mercenary units will be more confident, knowing they're being lead by someone with experience.
- <br><strong>The Colonel</strong>: The special force's colonel can take the lead. Her performance will be above average and mercenary (in addition to hers obviously) units will be more confident, knowing they're being lead by someone with experience. Her tactics have a higher chance of success along with better offence and defense.
+ <br><strong>The Colonel</strong>: The special force's colonel can take the lead. Her performance will be above average and mercenary (in addition to hers obviously) units will be more confident, knowing they're being lead by someone with experience. Her tactics have a higher chance of success along with better offense and defense.
<br>
<br>
diff --git a/src/SecExp/encyclopediaSecExpMain.tw b/src/SecExp/encyclopediaSecExpMain.tw
index b4dd21c9807..c293c49f446 100644
--- a/src/SecExp/encyclopediaSecExpMain.tw
+++ b/src/SecExp/encyclopediaSecExpMain.tw
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
<br><br>Statistics:
@@.darkviolet; <br><strong>Authority</strong>:@@
<br> Representing the power the player holds over the arcology. If @@.green;[[reputation|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "Arcologies and Reputation"]]@@ is how well the protagonist is known, @@.darkviolet;authority@@ is how much is feared or respected.
- Authority influences many things, but it is mainly used to enact edicts, who, similarly to policies, allow to shape the sociopolitical profile of your arcology. Like @@.green;reputation@@, @@.darkviolet;authority@@ has a maximum of <<print commaNum(20000)>>.
+ Authority influences many things, but it is mainly used to enact edicts, who, similarly to policies, allow to shape the socio-political profile of your arcology. Like @@.green;reputation@@, @@.darkviolet;authority@@ has a maximum of <<print commaNum(20000)>>.
@@.deepskyblue;<br> <br><strong>Security</strong>:@@
<br> Representing how safe the arcology is, how likely it is for a citizen to get stabbed, killed or simply mugged in the streets as well as wider concerns like
diff --git a/src/SecExp/secInit.tw b/src/SecExp/secInit.tw
index 39fea547054..c52f27234be 100644
--- a/src/SecExp/secInit.tw
+++ b/src/SecExp/secInit.tw
@@ -340,7 +340,7 @@
<<set $slaveUnits = []>>
<<set $mercUnits = []>>
-/* SFanon additons */
+/* SFanon additions */
<<set $SFSupportLevel = 0>>
<<set $SFSupportUpkeep = 0>>
<<set $SFGear = 0>>
diff --git a/src/gui/Encyclopedia/encyclopedia.tw b/src/gui/Encyclopedia/encyclopedia.tw
index b1ae2a9ee42..97f71470cf0 100644
--- a/src/gui/Encyclopedia/encyclopedia.tw
+++ b/src/gui/Encyclopedia/encyclopedia.tw
@@ -1617,7 +1617,7 @@ ARCOLOGY FACILITIES
<br><br>Upon entering an arcade, one is typically presented with a clean, utilitarian wall like in a well-kept public restroom. Some have stalls, but many do not. In either case, at intervals along this wall, slaves' naked hindquarters protrude through. They are completely restrained on the inside of the wall, and available for use. Usually, the wall has an opposite side on which the slaves' throats may be accessed. The slaves' holes are cleaned either by mechanisms that withdraw them into the wall for the purpose, shields which extend between uses, or rarely, by attendants.
- <br><br>Arcades have become so common that most arcade owners attempt to differentiate themselves with something special. Some arcades have only a low wall so that conversations may be had between persons using either end of a slave; business meetings are an advertised possibility. Many specialize in a specific genital arrangement; others shield the pubic area so as to completely disguise it, reducing the slaves' identities to an anus and a throat only. Some attempt to improve patrons' experiences by using slaves who retain enough competence to do more than simply accept penetration, while others pursue the same goal by applying muscular electrostimulus for a tightening effect.
+ <br><br>Arcades have become so common that most arcade owners attempt to differentiate themselves with something special. Some arcades have only a low wall so that conversations may be had between persons using either end of a slave; business meetings are an advertised possibility. Many specialize in a specific genital arrangement; others shield the pubic area so as to completely disguise it, reducing the slaves' identities to an anus and a throat only. Some attempt to improve patrons' experiences by using slaves who retain enough competence to do more than simply accept penetration, while others pursue the same goal by applying muscular electro-stimulus for a tightening effect.
<br><br>-- Lawrence, W. G., //Guide to Modern Slavery, 2037 Edition////
@@ -2006,7 +2006,7 @@ LORE: THE FREE CITIES TODAY
<br><br>Different Cities have taken different approaches to the obvious problem of dealing with criminal conduct, which in the old world breaks no traditional contract. The most common approach is to require everyone to sign contracts with the owners of their homes and workplaces to commit no crimes while there. In this way, what would be murder in the old world is a breach of the contract with one's landlord not to murder on his property.
- <br><br>Penalties for such conduct are usually left to the imagination of the property owner. With the traditional roles of judge, jury and jailor concentrated into the hands of a single wealthy person, rich potentates of the Cities hold more personal power over their tenants than anyone since the great feudal lords seven centuries ago.
+ <br><br>Penalties for such conduct are usually left to the imagination of the property owner. With the traditional roles of judge, jury, and jailer concentrated into the hands of a single wealthy person, rich potentates of the Cities hold more personal power over their tenants than anyone since the great feudal lords seven centuries ago.
<br><br>-- Torstein, Jens Learned, //The Modern Libertarian Paradise, March 25, 2032////
@@ -2100,7 +2100,7 @@ LORE: FREE CITIES CULTURE TOMORROW
<<case "Naked, Barefoot, and Pregnant">>
- //...and helpless, and illiterate, and dependant...
+ //...and helpless, and illiterate, and dependent...
<br> -- Anonymous slaveowner, on the ideal woman
<br><br>It must be admitted that some of the boldest statements of early 21st century social justice advocates are now receiving some justification in the Free Cities. A tourist visiting some of the more notorious arcologies is given a public, in-person lesson in precisely what some men are willing to do with women they own. For every misogynist credo there is a Free Cities slaveowner putting it into practice.
@@ -2184,7 +2184,7 @@ LORE: FREE CITIES CULTURE TOMORROW
<br><br>For the first time in modern memory, people - slaves - in the Free Cities are, in large numbers, doing exactly what their doctors recommend. Properly managed slaves eat right, exercise regularly, and do not smoke, drink, or do recreational drugs. These simple but revolutionary changes mean that the more valuable classes of slave are healthier, on average, than any group of human beings has ever been.
- <br><br>Naturally, fetishism, competitiveness, and leisure have intersected to create in the Free Cities a constant escalation of physical one-upsmanship when it comes to the training of slaves. Wonderfully muscled specimens have become very common, with feats of athletic prowess cited alongside sexual accomplishments without any distinction. The arcology owners most @@.hotpink;[[devoted|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@ to the human form are creating societies of uniform physical perfection unlike anything in human history.
+ <br><br>Naturally, fetishism, competitiveness, and leisure have intersected to create in the Free Cities a constant escalation of physical oneupmanship when it comes to the training of slaves. Wonderfully muscled specimens have become very common, with feats of athletic prowess cited alongside sexual accomplishments without any distinction. The arcology owners most @@.hotpink;[[devoted|Encyclopedia][$encyclopedia = "From Rebellious to Devoted"]]@@ to the human form are creating societies of uniform physical perfection unlike anything in human history.
<br><br> -- Lawrence, J. K., and Bolingbroke, D. S., __Trends in Free Cities Culture, 2031__ //Journal of Modern Social Sciences, International Edition, February 2032////
diff --git a/src/js/slaveCostJS.tw b/src/js/slaveCostJS.tw
index dee86baf67e..f4358029256 100644
--- a/src/js/slaveCostJS.tw
+++ b/src/js/slaveCostJS.tw
@@ -1234,8 +1234,8 @@ window.Beauty = (function() {
window.FResult = (function() {
"use strict";
- // we can't initialise our global variables on load, because SugarCube.State isn't initialised
- // instead, declare them and initialise on run time
+ // we can't initialize our global variables on load, because SugarCube.State isn't initialized
+ // instead, declare them and initialize on run time
let V, result, incest_bonus;
function FResult(slave) {
V = State.variables;
diff --git a/src/npc/descriptions/fPoolSex.tw b/src/npc/descriptions/fPoolSex.tw
index 4a1467eb133..da8c06a748a 100644
--- a/src/npc/descriptions/fPoolSex.tw
+++ b/src/npc/descriptions/fPoolSex.tw
@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ You order $him to meet you in the spa for some quality time in the penthouse's r
<</if>>
<<elseif ($activeSlave.trust < -20) && ($activeSlave.devotion > -10)>>
<<if $activeSlave.amp < 1>>
- $He's resting $his head on one arm, but $he nods at you in acknowledgement as
+ $He's resting $his head on one arm, but $he nods at you in acknowledgment as
<<else>>
$He's resting on a small pile of pillows, enjoying the sensations against the flanks of $his colossal belly. $He nods as you enter, not stopping $his rubbing, and <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>watches<<else>>waits patiently as<</if>>
<</if>>
@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ You order $him to meet you in the spa for some quality time in the penthouse's r
<<else>>
ooze stimulated quim is in need of $his tender care. Seeing the change in your demeanor, $he rolls back to recline at the pool's edge and, once you've joined $him,
<<if $activeSlave.amp < 1>>
- reaches down to masterbate your pussy, squeezing and rubbing your clit.
+ reaches down to masturbate your pussy, squeezing and rubbing your clit.
<<else>>
rolls sideways and rubs your vulva as best $he can.
<</if>>
diff --git a/src/npc/rgASDump.tw b/src/npc/rgASDump.tw
index db756d9a91d..6d06a2f25fc 100644
--- a/src/npc/rgASDump.tw
+++ b/src/npc/rgASDump.tw
@@ -23,17 +23,17 @@
<<else>>
<<if ($activeSlave.relation == 0)>>
-<<if random(1,100) <= 5>>
- <<set $activeSlave.recruiter = "twin">>
-<<elseif ($activeSlave.actualAge > 32) && (random(1,100) <= 41)>>
- <<set $activeSlave.recruiter = "mother">>
-<<elseif ($activeSlave.actualAge < 24) && (random(1,100) <= 40)>>
- <<set $activeSlave.recruiter = "daughter">>
-<<elseif ($activeSlave.actualAge < 43) && (random(1,100) <= 20)>>
- <<set $activeSlave.recruiter = "older sister">>
-<<elseif ($activeSlave.actualAge < 25) && ($activeSlave.actualAge > 18) && (random(1,100) <= 20)>>
- <<set $activeSlave.recruiter = "young sister">>
-<</if>>
+ <<if random(1,100) <= 5>>
+ <<set $activeSlave.recruiter = "twin">>
+ <<elseif ($activeSlave.actualAge > 32) && (random(1,100) <= 41)>>
+ <<set $activeSlave.recruiter = "mother">>
+ <<elseif ($activeSlave.actualAge < 24) && (random(1,100) <= 40)>>
+ <<set $activeSlave.recruiter = "daughter">>
+ <<elseif ($activeSlave.actualAge < 43) && (random(1,100) <= 20)>>
+ <<set $activeSlave.recruiter = "older sister">>
+ <<elseif ($activeSlave.actualAge < 25) && ($activeSlave.actualAge > 18) && (random(1,100) <= 20)>>
+ <<set $activeSlave.recruiter = "young sister">>
+ <</if>>
<</if>>
<</if>>
diff --git a/src/npc/startingGirls/startingGirls.tw b/src/npc/startingGirls/startingGirls.tw
index db359a96d01..7e725659ab2 100644
--- a/src/npc/startingGirls/startingGirls.tw
+++ b/src/npc/startingGirls/startingGirls.tw
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@
<<for _i = 0; _i < $slaves.length; _i++>><<if $slaves[_i].ID == _tempSlave.ID>><<set $slaves[_i].father = $activeSlave.father>><<break>><</if>><</for>>
<</if>>
<</if>>
- <<if $activeSlave.mother && $activeSlave.father>> /% Propogate missing family information across existing slaves. Assumes monogamous reproduction, e.g. all sets of siblings have a pair of exclusive parents. %/
+ <<if $activeSlave.mother && $activeSlave.father>> /% Propagate missing family information across existing slaves. Assumes monogamous reproduction, e.g. all sets of siblings have a pair of exclusive parents. %/
<<for _i = 0; _i < $slaves.length; _i++>>
<<if $slaves[_i].mother == $activeSlave.mother>>
<<if $slaves[_i].father == 0>>
diff --git a/src/npc/takeoverTarget.tw b/src/npc/takeoverTarget.tw
index 6ae6b81aeeb..4084dab5dc6 100644
--- a/src/npc/takeoverTarget.tw
+++ b/src/npc/takeoverTarget.tw
@@ -193,7 +193,7 @@ Alternatively, arcologies are being built every day, and their owners' control i
<<case "RomanRevivalist">>@@.orange;Roman Revivalism,@@ which seeks to recreate the glory that was ancient Rome.
<br>
It has an established lingua franca: Latin.
- <<case "AztecRevivalist">>@@.orange;Aztec Revivalism,@@ which aspires to reach the heights of the Aztec Empire at it's peak.
+ <<case "AztecRevivalist">>@@.orange;Aztec Revivalism,@@ which aspires to reach the heights of the Aztec Empire at its peak.
<br>
It has an established lingua franca: Nahuatl.
<<case "EgyptianRevivalist">>@@.orange;Egyptian Revivalism,@@ a movement to rebuild the monuments and greatness of ancient Egypt.
diff --git a/src/player/actions/fCaress.tw b/src/player/actions/fCaress.tw
index 67ced9184cc..cbf98698ed6 100644
--- a/src/player/actions/fCaress.tw
+++ b/src/player/actions/fCaress.tw
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ Then, you gently tilt $his <<if $activeSlave.face > 95>>overwhelmingly stunning<
<<elseif $activeSlave.lips > 20>>plush
<</if>>
lips
-<</if>> with your fingertips. You use your fingers and thumbs to slowly slide along $his mouth, $his chin, $his cheeks then around $his face. You use a deft touch to thoroughly explore the shape of $his <<if $activeSlave.face > 95>>gorgeous<<elseif $activeSlave.face > 10>>nice<<elseif $activeSlave.face >= -10>>cute<<elseif $activeSlave.face >= -40>>fair<<else>>prominent<</if>> cheekbones. Grazing $his temple and brushing $his forehead simultaneously, you smoothly motion along $his eyelids and nose and you tenderly stroke $his face with both hands as you take $his head lightly and trace around it, gently massaging as you go. You work your way down, slowly and gradually, along $his neck with one hand, then the other, briefly pausing before continuing your path down to $his shoulders and<<if ($activeSlave.fetish != "mindbroken")>> $he starts to gasp as<<else>> starts to shudder as<</if>> you slide your hands down $his side, across $his back and along $his belly taking every moment to savour the contours of $his body before going back up again to $his face.
+<</if>> with your fingertips. You use your fingers and thumbs to slowly slide along $his mouth, $his chin, $his cheeks then around $his face. You use a deft touch to thoroughly explore the shape of $his <<if $activeSlave.face > 95>>gorgeous<<elseif $activeSlave.face > 10>>nice<<elseif $activeSlave.face >= -10>>cute<<elseif $activeSlave.face >= -40>>fair<<else>>prominent<</if>> cheekbones. Grazing $his temple and brushing $his forehead simultaneously, you smoothly motion along $his eyelids and nose and you tenderly stroke $his face with both hands as you take $his head lightly and trace around it, gently massaging as you go. You work your way down, slowly and gradually, along $his neck with one hand, then the other, briefly pausing before continuing your path down to $his shoulders and<<if ($activeSlave.fetish != "mindbroken")>> $he starts to gasp as<<else>> starts to shudder as<</if>> you slide your hands down $his side, across $his back and along $his belly taking every moment to savor the contours of $his body before going back up again to $his face.
<<if ($activeSlave.fetish == "mindbroken")>>
$His posture doesn't change. $He initially only reacts slightly to your physical touch but then stops reacting completely. When you stop, $his $activeSlave.eyeColor eyes track the movements of your hands briefly but then stare blankly ahead of $him, awaiting further use of $his body.
diff --git a/src/pregmod/seFCTVshows.tw b/src/pregmod/seFCTVshows.tw
index 40a04a1c062..e8d7508822b 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/seFCTVshows.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/seFCTVshows.tw
@@ -521,7 +521,7 @@ The offered price is <<print cashFormat($slaveCost)>>.
<br><br>.....
<<elseif $arcologies[0].FSSlimnessEnthusiast == "unset" && $randShow == 3>>
- a documentary on the growing Asset Expansionist movement titled: "More of a Good Thing". After a brief set of opening credits the documentary dives immediately into short clips of numerous interviews with stacked women stating that they love having big tits and a big ass. Eventually, a man and woman are introduced as the hosts of the program. Both are finely dressed in the recent fashions, and despite the subject of the documentary, they don't have humongous assets. The woman does have huge breasts, wide hips, and a large derriere; the man has a noticeable bulge in his pants, but nothing extreme. The hosts explain that seeing Asset Expansionism as a call for ridiculous size is something of a misconception. They emphasize that it's about the freedom to enjoy more of a good thing.
+ a documentary on the growing Asset Expansionist movement titled: "More of a Good Thing". After a brief set of opening credits the documentary dives immediately into short clips of numerous interviews with stacked women stating that they love having big tits and a big ass. Eventually, a man and woman are introduced as the hosts of the program. Both are finely dressed in the recent fashions, and despite the subject of the documentary, they don't have humongous assets. The woman does have huge breasts, wide hips, and a large derrière; the man has a noticeable bulge in his pants, but nothing extreme. The hosts explain that seeing Asset Expansionism as a call for ridiculous size is something of a misconception. They emphasize that it's about the freedom to enjoy more of a good thing.
<br><br>The documentary makes several arguments in favor of the movement, and is clear about explaining the natural biological attraction humans have to large assets. By interviewing stacked members of the movement and psychological experts alike, they try to demonstrate how larger assets lead to happier and more pleasurable lives, both in and out of the bedroom. The documentary neatly tops off its argument by demonstrating how assets have been expanding naturally since the start of the twentieth century, and claiming that it's silly to idolize the way humans looked before modern nutrition and medicine. Western countries in the old world already had average bust sizes of D-cup or larger by the turn of the century, the hosts claim that trying to go back to smaller sizes is synonymous with reducing the prosperity of free citizens.
<br><br>.....
@@ -663,9 +663,9 @@ The offered price is <<print cashFormat($slaveCost)>>.
<br><br>As he stepped into the bedroom a breathy voice called out him. "Howdy there, stranger. Say, could you help me out with a little something?" She had the same blond hair and blue eyes of her daughter. Her face could be called angelic, but her expression changed her visage into that of a lustful succubus. Truly, she could inspire awe and lust in old-worlders and citizens of the Free Cities alike. However, her figure would prove more divisive.
<br><br>Annie had a body that could give ancient fertility idols an inferiority complex. Some would say she was more boob than woman, she would say their description, while true, was woefully inadequate. Without her exosuit, she wouldn't be able to kneel on the bed, let alone stand, and without the suit's smart material supporting her breasts Scott wouldn't be able to see Sadie's blond head poke out between Annie's thighs.
<br><br>Scott gestured to Sadie "It looks like you're already in good hands." A teasing grin spread across his face. "What could little old me do for you?" Annie gave him a knowing look and presented her well-lubricated cleavage. "Oh, I'm sure you could find something." Any response from Scott was interrupted by a young voice from the bathroom saying "I found more of the strawberry lube."
- <br><br>For a moment, the only sounds in the room were the soft whirr of a milker and the muffled hum of Sadie's vibrator. Annie's breath hitched from Sadie's ministrations and responded, "That's good sweetie, bring it here." The door to the bathroom swung open and Sarah walked into the room. She had lost her thong and was wearing a backpack printed with cartoon farm animals. Flexible tubing snaked out of the pack and attached two cups on her breasts. In her hands, was a bottle of edible lube and a bright pink rounded cylinder with the words Her First Vibrator printed in a saccharine font on the base.
- <br><br>Sarah looked at both her parents, then tilted her head and frowned. "You and daddy were playing that weird game again, weren't you?" Scott and Annie looked at each other; silently communicating in a way only parents can. Annie looked at her daughter and said, "When you're a bit older you're going to want to play those games too." Sarah looked unconvinced. "Anyway, you got the lube, are both your milker and vibrator charged?" Annie asked. Sarah bobbed her head. "Then why don't you lube up daddy?" Sarah bobbed her head again and kneeled at the side of the bed.
- <br><br>Scott quickly undressed and sat at the edge of the bed. Sarah kneeled between her father's legs. She began softly licking her father's cock, her tongue sliding along its length and gently swirling around its head, her mouth making lewd noises. She ran her tongue on the underside of her dad's cock, took him into her mouth and began to give him a slow blowjob.
+ <br><br>For a moment, the only sounds in the room were the soft 'whir' of a milker and the muffled hum of Sadie's vibrator. Annie's breath hitched from Sadie's ministrations and responded, "That's good sweetie, bring it here." The door to the bathroom swung open and Sarah walked into the room. She had lost her thong and was wearing a backpack printed with cartoon farm animals. Flexible tubing snaked out of the pack and attached two cups on her breasts. In her hands, was a bottle of edible lube and a bright pink rounded cylinder with the words Her First Vibrator printed in a saccharine font on the base.
+ <br><br>Sarah looked at both her parents, then tilted her head and frowned. "You and daddy were playing that weird game again, weren't you?" Scott and Annie looked at each other; silently communicating in a way only parents can. Annie looked at her daughter and said, "When you're a bit older you're going to want to play those games too." Sarah looked unconvinced. "Anyway, you got the lube, are both your milker and vibrator charged?" Annie asked. Sarah bobbed her head. "Then why don't you lube up daddy?" Sarah bobbed her head again and knelt at the side of the bed.
+ <br><br>Scott quickly undressed and sat at the edge of the bed. Sarah knelt between her father's legs. She began softly licking her father's cock, her tongue sliding along its length and gently swirling around its head, her mouth making lewd noises. She ran her tongue on the underside of her dad's cock, took him into her mouth and began to give him a slow blowjob.
<br><br>Scott felt himself slowly harden to full mast. He resisted the urge to pull her down till her nose touched his crotch and said, "That's good sweetheart, now use the lube." Sarah pulled herself off his cock with a lewd pop and picked up the bottle of lube. She squirted a generous amount of it into one hand, rubbed both hands together, and began to stroke his cock. "You're doing a good job sweetie, did you help mommy too?" he asked. Annie nodded "She did a very good job and was very through." Sarah preened at her parents praise and said, "It wasn't easy. I had to use a whole bottle to do mommy." Scott turned his head to his wife and raised an eyebrow. Annie gave him a lewd grin and her blush slowly spread down her chest, but said nothing.
<br><br>Scott patted his daughter's head. "Okay sweetie, take a seat." Sarah gave her dad's cock a kiss on the head, grabbed her vibrator and sat down on the couch across from the bed. She rubbed the lube on her hands over her crotch and her vibrator before licking off what remained. Scott began to stand, but paused; an impish smile spread across his face. "Before we begin, I have question for mommy." He reached into a night table and pulled out an odd remote and a Wartenberg pinwheel.
<br><br>"Oh, and what would that be?" Annie said in a knowing tone, her eyes twinkling. Scott just grinned and pressed a button on the remote. Annie squealed as her exosuit shifted her forward onto her breasts. Scott craned his head to look behind wife. "You alright down there, Sadie?" He cocked his head a bit more and barely made out a thumbs up beyond the horizon of his wife's ass. "Good. Now-" He rolled the pinwheel across her arm to collar bone and Annie gasped. "Why did you ask Sadie to stay behind when I sent her off for clothes?"
@@ -675,7 +675,7 @@ The offered price is <<print cashFormat($slaveCost)>>.
<br><br>Scott snorted in amusement and was about to continue when he felt a tongue licking him. He looked down to see Sarah. She looked at him with pleading eyes "Daddy, I need it." Scott sighed, but smiled softly at his daughter and said, "Okay, how do you want it." She thought for a second before saying, "I want puss-puss." He nodded, picked her up and laid his daughter atop his wife's vast breasts.
<br><br>He teased himself against her cunny and then began to ease himself into her. She gasped at the intrusion and began to tease her own nipples, milk slowly leaking out of them. As he eased into her tight cunny, he could feel his own orgasm building. He paused for a moment and then began to move. It didn't take long for his orgasm to build again. He increased the speed of his thrusts until he came inside his daughter. He continued until she tensed, her breasts spraying milk violently, and fell limp.
<br><br>Scott leaned into his wife's breasts to bask in the afterglow. While Annie had coaxed Sarah to turn around, pulled Sarah's cunny to her face and began to slowly eat her daughter out. Sarah just lay bonelessly atop her mother's breasts.
- <br><br>Scott just enjoyed the sight of mother-daughter bonding for a while before recalling his earlier plans. "I was thinking of taking the family out for ice cream after lunch." Annie made a pleased sound as she continued licking her daughters cunny, Sarah cheered lazily, Sadie's legs wiggled with what could be called excitement.
+ <br><br>Scott just enjoyed the sight of mother-daughter bonding for a while before recalling his earlier plans. "I was thinking of taking the family out for ice cream after lunch." Annie made a pleased sound as she continued licking her daughter's cunny, Sarah cheered lazily, Sadie's legs wiggled with what could be called excitement.
<br><br>"I was also thinking of taking Cathy with us." Annie stopped sucking on her daughter's clit to frown at him. He placating gesture and said, "She won't make a big scene with all of us there and besides you enjoy it when she has a mini freak out." She paused to think for a moment then said, "You have cameras and a drone on her right?" He nodded. "I want copies." She gave him a lusty grin before returning to her meal. He turned Sarah. "I wanna bloom berry sundae with bottom boost sprinkles." He nodded, hooked his head to look behind his wife and said, "How about you Sadie?" The hand that poked out from behind his wife waggled uncertainly, but ultimately became a thumbs up.
<<elseif $showTwelve == 3>>
The random function has brought up another episode of that drama series for you.
@@ -725,8 +725,8 @@ The offered price is <<print cashFormat($slaveCost)>>.
<br><br>There were posters, coasters, clothing and all manner of little knickknacks, but the true star of the show were the plushies. Rows upon rows of them covered the shelves and tables arranged in little displays, all of them made in the image of cows working at the creamery. One table had the plushies in a mini concert hall, the ones on stage wielding toy instruments that had 'Press me!' stickers on them. Another table had them arranged in what looked to be a garden party. Spread across two tables was a diorama of the creamery with plushies placed throughout it. One plushie that looked distinctly like Martha was plopped behind the dessert counter. Another was placed near the elevators and if one looked closely they could see a matching cowslave sat drowsing amongst the merchandise.
<br><br>The cow was young, busty, even for the arcology, and heavily pregnant. She wore what looked to be Holstein print pajamas with a hood made to look like a stylized cow. Her strawberry blond hair was mussed with sleep and she cradled a plushie in one arm. Truly, she looked like a daughter waiting for her daddy to come home. As the party approached, she began to stir.
<br><br>Scott reached out and began to gently pat her head. "How are you doing, Tabby?" Tabby just made a sound of contentment and pressed into his hand, luxuriating in his touch. After a few moments, she yawned and blinked, looking up at him. For a beat she just stared at him, her sleep addled brain struggling to process the sight in front of her. Finally, the penny dropped.
- <br><br>She squeaked and sat up so quick one would think she had been hit with a cattle prod. With a panicked expression, she began to babble a fervent apology. "Master, I'm sorry I fell asleep." She hiccupped and pleaded with him, on the verge of tears. "Please don't tell Gabe I fell asleep again. She'll yell at me for sure." Scott just continued patting her head, kneeled beside her chair, and spoke in a calm tone, "Hey, hey, no need for tears. Just take a deep breath and calm down Tabby cat. I won't tell Gabe."
- <br><br>Tabby sniffed, took a deep breath, and hiccupped. For a moment, she just relaxed into Scott's ministrations before she frowned and said, "I thought you weren't coming in today master." He moved her hair out her eyes. "I figured I'd get some shopping done and show the newbie around," he said with a nod to Cathy. Tabby gave her a bright smile. "Oh, nice to meet you. Would you like a free sample?" she asked gesturing to table next to her.
+ <br><br>She squeaked and sat up so quick one would think she had been hit with a cattle prod. With a panicked expression, she began to babble a fervent apology. "Master, I'm sorry I fell asleep." She hiccuped and pleaded with him, on the verge of tears. "Please don't tell Gabe I fell asleep again. She'll yell at me for sure." Scott just continued patting her head, knelt beside her chair, and spoke in a calm tone, "Hey, hey, no need for tears. Just take a deep breath and calm down Tabby cat. I won't tell Gabe."
+ <br><br>Tabby sniffed, took a deep breath, and hiccuped. For a moment, she just relaxed into Scott's ministrations before she frowned and said, "I thought you weren't coming in today master." He moved her hair out her eyes. "I figured I'd get some shopping done and show the newbie around," he said with a nod to Cathy. Tabby gave her a bright smile. "Oh, nice to meet you. Would you like a free sample?" she asked gesturing to table next to her.
<br><br>The table next to her held a platter of cheese curds. A sign with the words 'Free Samples' printed on it stood to the left of table. Someone apparently thought that was an insufficient description and had taken a pen to add the words 'I made them myself!' in bright pink letters. Next to the platter, was an empty package that said 'Lolimommy Cheese Curds' in a cheery font. On the package, was an adorably deformed picture of Tabby that said 'The fresh ones squeak'.
<br><br>Scott grabbed a few cheese curds and said, "Don't mind if I do," before popping one in his mouth. He handed some to Cathy and June. While June ate hers placidly, Cathy just stared at the cheese uncertainly. Scott gave her a look that promised a sore bottom if she didn't eat it, while Tabby clasped her hands and gave Cathy a look that could only be described as adorably determined.
<br><br>Cathy took a tentative bite before popping the rest into her mouth. "Its good." Tabby gave her a sunny smile and said, "Thank you! I worked really hard on them." Scott smiled at her fondly and patted her head, "Yes you did." She preened at his praise and let out a sigh of contentment.
@@ -780,7 +780,7 @@ The offered price is <<print cashFormat($slaveCost)>>.
<br><br>All throughout the show, Cathy was mesmerized by the show in the same way one might be by a train wreck. When the credits rolled, she broke out of the spell and noticed that another episode was about to play. "Uh, could we watch something else?" Cathy asked tentatively. Sarah looked like she going to object, but Scott gave her a quick look. She pouted at her father, but began to flip through the channels. As the channels went by, Cathy's eyes grew wider. "Why don't we go back to the cartoon channel?"
<br><br>After a few more episodes, Scott noticed the time. "I think it's bedtime for cuddly cows." Sarah grumbled, but didn't resist when he lifted her out of Annie's cleavage. She received a hug and a kiss from both her parents before June took her off to prepare for bed. Scott turned to Cathy and said, "Why don't head off too. You'll be coming into work with me in the morning so you should get some rest." Cathy nodded and headed off to her room, but returned a moment later to grab her plushie. Annie caught sight of the doll and gave Cathy a lascivious grin. Cathy did her best to avoid eye contact and all but ran out of the room.
<br><br>The moment Cathy was out the door, Annie began giggling which shortly transformed into breast quaking laughter. She wiped at her eyes, her smile bright as she looked at her husband. "Have I told you lately that I love you?" He wrapped an arm around her waist, his eyes bright with amusement, "I don't know, but it couldn't hurt to say it again." She pulled him closer, kissed him on the cheek and whispered, "I love you." He returned her kiss, rubbed her back gently, and whispered back, "I know."
- <br><br>For a while, the couple just relaxed and enjoyed each other's company. Annie let out a sigh of pleasure and asked, "You said there were a few bumps?" Scott let out a sound of acknowledgement. "Gabe has been riding the girls rather hard." Almost immediately, she said, "You should try getting her knocked up." Laughter burst of his chest, at her questioning look he said, "Beth said much the same thing." She nodded approvingly. "Beth is a smart girl. There can always be more babies." She pressed herself into her husband and said, "Gabe isn't the only one who needs knocking up." She nibbled on his earlobe and whispered, "Babies, babies, babies, babies, babies." He turned to look at her and she caught his lips in a searing kiss. When they parted she seemed short of breath, her eyes filled with need. "Babies."
+ <br><br>For a while, the couple just relaxed and enjoyed each other's company. Annie let out a sigh of pleasure and asked, "You said there were a few bumps?" Scott let out a sound of acknowledgment. "Gabe has been riding the girls rather hard." Almost immediately, she said, "You should try getting her knocked up." Laughter burst of his chest, at her questioning look he said, "Beth said much the same thing." She nodded approvingly. "Beth is a smart girl. There can always be more babies." She pressed herself into her husband and said, "Gabe isn't the only one who needs knocking up." She nibbled on his earlobe and whispered, "Babies, babies, babies, babies, babies." He turned to look at her and she caught his lips in a searing kiss. When they parted she seemed short of breath, her eyes filled with need. "Babies."
<br><br>Scott took a moment to steady his breath. "You know we have to wait for the treatment to take." Annie let out a sound of displeasure, but Scott didn't waver. "Do you want to go through all the trouble we had with Sarah again?" She deflated a bit. He leaned over and whispered in her ear, "That doesn't mean we can't get some practice in." Immediately, Annie captured his mouth again and began tearing at his cloths. It took them a few hours to make it back to bedroom.
<</if>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw b/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw
index fb892be5ea3..19f6261d522 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/RESS.tw
@@ -1897,7 +1897,7 @@ that $he enjoys being inspected, even if the inspection doesn't immediately tran
<<if canSee($activeSlave)>>Seeing<<else>>Feeling<</if>> your intent gaze, $he
<<if SlaveStatsChecker.checkForLisp($activeSlave)>>lisps<<else>>asks<</if>>, "<<Master>>, may I plea<<s>>e a<<s>>k you for <<s>>omething?"
-At your <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>nod<<else>>acknowledgement<</if>>, $he
+At your <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>nod<<else>>acknowledgment<</if>>, $he
<<if ($activeSlave.fetish == "submissive") && ($activeSlave.fetishKnown == 1)>>
gives a submissive shudder, and turns to show you $his bare back.
"<<Master>>, may I have a cor<<s>>et pier<<c>>ing? I would love to feel more, um, bound. Tied up. Plea<<s>>e?"
@@ -2486,7 +2486,7 @@ You decide to stop by to see $his method at work. By the time you arrive, $he's
<<case "imp">>
is hovering while viciously fingering $his cunt.
<<case "witch">>
- is pretending to read from her spellbook, but is obviously watching over the top of it.
+ is pretending to read from her spell book, but is obviously watching over the top of it.
<<case "ERROR_1606_APPEARANCE_FILE_CORRUPT">>
is mimicking her actions nearly perfectly.
<<case "schoolgirl">>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/cellblock.tw b/src/uncategorized/cellblock.tw
index 371f3c943d4..c3b04695e4c 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/cellblock.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/cellblock.tw
@@ -2,6 +2,10 @@
<<set $nextButton = "Back to Main", $nextLink = "Main", $returnTo = "Cellblock", $showEncyclopedia = 1, $encyclopedia = "Cellblock", $cellblockSlaves = $CellBiIDs.length>>
+<<if $Wardeness != 0>>
+ <<setLocalPronouns $Wardeness>>
+<</if>>
+
<<if $cellblockName != "the Cellblock">>
<<set $cellblockNameCaps = $cellblockName.replace("the ", "The ")>>
<</if>>
@@ -101,9 +105,9 @@ $cellblockNameCaps
<<if $Wardeness != 0 && canPenetrate($Warden)>>
<br><br>
<<if $cellblockWardenCumsInside == 1>>
- $Warden.slaveName is permitted to cum inside her inmates when she disciplines them. [[Forbid her from cumming inside|Cellblock][$cellblockWardenCumsInside = 0]]
+ $Warden.slaveName is permitted to cum inside $his inmates when $he disciplines them. [["Forbid " + $him + " from cumming inside"|Cellblock][$cellblockWardenCumsInside = 0]]
<<else>>
- $Warden.slaveName is not permitted to cum inside her inmates. [[Let her cum inside|Cellblock][$cellblockWardenCumsInside = 1]] //May result in pregnancies//
+ $Warden.slaveName is not permitted to cum inside $his inmates. [["Let " + $him + " cum inside"|Cellblock][$cellblockWardenCumsInside = 1]] //May result in pregnancies//
<</if>>
<</if>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/pRivalryCapture.tw b/src/uncategorized/pRivalryCapture.tw
index 5e60565612f..e08c948429d 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/pRivalryCapture.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/pRivalryCapture.tw
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
<<set _rivalType = _rivalType.random()>>
Your
<<if passage() == "P rivalry actions">>
- target is quickly delivered. Politely dismissing the head of your <<if $mercenariesTitle != "mercenaries">> $mercenariesTitle<<else>> mercenaries<</if>>, you savour
+ target is quickly delivered. Politely dismissing the head of your <<if $mercenariesTitle != "mercenaries">> $mercenariesTitle<<else>> mercenaries<</if>>, you savor
<<else>>
bounty is quickly claimed, and you are treated to
<</if>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/reNickname.tw b/src/uncategorized/reNickname.tw
index 03e6fecb16a..b28adcc9cf3 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/reNickname.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/reNickname.tw
@@ -1124,7 +1124,7 @@
<<case "reallyold">>
<<set $nickname = either("'Aged'", "'Elder'", "'Elderly'", "'Generation X'", "'Geriatric'", "'GILF'", "'GMILF'", "'Grandma'", "'Grandmother'", "'Granny'", "'Nanna'", "'ObÄ-chan'", "'Old'", "'Oldie'", "'Really Old'", "'Senior Citizen'", "'Senior'")>>
<<set $situationDesc = "is old. Really old. Old enough to be a grandmother. This, naturally, makes $him one of the most experienced sluts in the arcology, a desirable quality in and of itself. Many of the younger slaves mock $him relentlessly for $his age.">>
- <<set $applyDesc = "accepts $his new nickname with pride. This acknowledgement of $his age has $him ready to show these young sluts a thing or two.">>
+ <<set $applyDesc = "accepts $his new nickname with pride. This acknowledgment of $his age has $him ready to show these young sluts a thing or two.">>
<<set $notApplyDesc = "understands that $he must do $his best to fuck like the teenager $he once was. ">>
<<case "young">>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/remoteSurgery.tw b/src/uncategorized/remoteSurgery.tw
index 79d470862fd..d0c9dc66e35 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/remoteSurgery.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/remoteSurgery.tw
@@ -718,7 +718,7 @@ Work on her butt:
$He's got a
<<if $activeSlave.butt <= 1>>flat and <<print either("skinny", "slim", "taut")>> ass.
<<elseif $activeSlave.butt <= 2>><<print either("small, sleek", "small but rounded", "rounded, small")>> rear end.
-<<elseif $activeSlave.butt <= 3>><<print either("big and healthy", "curved and plump", "healthy and plump")>> derriere.
+<<elseif $activeSlave.butt <= 3>><<print either("big and healthy", "curved and plump", "healthy and plump")>> derrière.
<<elseif $activeSlave.butt <= 4>><<print either("juicy and large butt", "big bubble butt", "curvy and enticing butt")>>.
<<elseif $activeSlave.butt <= 5>><<print either("juicy and huge", "a huge", "massive and undeniable")>> rear end.
<<elseif ($activeSlave.amp == 1)>>ridiculous ass. It's so big it would jiggle as $he walked - if $he could walk.
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/saLongTermEffects.tw b/src/uncategorized/saLongTermEffects.tw
index b94871ddedd..998b7a92100 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/saLongTermEffects.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/saLongTermEffects.tw
@@ -5308,7 +5308,7 @@
<</if>>
<<else>>
<<if $slaves[$i].balls > 2>>
- $His balls have been relocated to $his abdomen, and while they still work there, it's not where they're designed to be. Routine scans show that @@.orange;they've atrophied,@@ <<if $slaves[$i].balls > 3>>and will probably continue to do so until they stabilise at a below-average size<<else>>but are not likely to get any smaller<</if>>.
+ $His balls have been relocated to $his abdomen, and while they still work there, it's not where they're designed to be. Routine scans show that @@.orange;they've atrophied,@@ <<if $slaves[$i].balls > 3>>and will probably continue to do so until they stabilize at a below-average size<<else>>but are not likely to get any smaller<</if>>.
<<set $slaves[$i].balls -= 1>>
<</if>>
<</if>>
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/surgeryDegradation.tw b/src/uncategorized/surgeryDegradation.tw
index 186710d9607..067b2604079 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/surgeryDegradation.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/surgeryDegradation.tw
@@ -912,10 +912,10 @@ As the remote surgery's long recovery cycle completes,
<<if $activeSlave.fetish == "mindbroken">>
$He doesn't notice that $his butt has gotten smaller. As with all surgery @@.red;$his health has been slightly affected.@@
<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion > 50)>>
- $He <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>twists to view<<else>>$He jiggles<</if>> $his new, sleeker derriere and turns to you with a smile and a flirty little roll of $his hips. $He's still sore, so $he doesn't bounce $his tighter buttocks for you, but $he seems happy all the same. @@.hotpink;$He's happy with your changes to $his buttocks.@@ As with all surgery @@.red;$his health has been slightly affected.@@
+ $He <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>twists to view<<else>>$He jiggles<</if>> $his new, sleeker derrière and turns to you with a smile and a flirty little roll of $his hips. $He's still sore, so $he doesn't bounce $his tighter buttocks for you, but $he seems happy all the same. @@.hotpink;$He's happy with your changes to $his buttocks.@@ As with all surgery @@.red;$his health has been slightly affected.@@
<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 4>>
<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion >= -20)>>
- $He <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>twists to view<<else>>jiggles<</if>> $his new, sleeker derriere skeptically. <<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>>$He's still sore, so $he doesn't touch it.<<else>>$He's still sore, so $he keeps $his torso still.<</if>> $He's come to terms with the fact that $he's a slave, but $he expected something other than this when $he was sent to the surgery. $He isn't much affected mentally. As with all surgery @@.red;$his health has been slightly affected.@@ $He is @@.gold;sensibly fearful@@ of your total power over $his body.
+ $He <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>twists to view<<else>>jiggles<</if>> $his new, sleeker derrière skeptically. <<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>>$He's still sore, so $he doesn't touch it.<<else>>$He's still sore, so $he keeps $his torso still.<</if>> $He's come to terms with the fact that $he's a slave, but $he expected something other than this when $he was sent to the surgery. $He isn't much affected mentally. As with all surgery @@.red;$his health has been slightly affected.@@ $He is @@.gold;sensibly fearful@@ of your total power over $his body.
<<set $activeSlave.trust -= 5>>
<<else>>
$He shifts $his diminished ass with resentment. <<if $activeSlave.amp != 1>>$He's still sore, so $he doesn't touch it, but <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>$he glares daggers<<else>>$his face contorts with distaste<</if>>.<<else>>$He's still sore, so $he keeps $his torso still, but <<if canSee($activeSlave)>>$he glares daggers<<else>>$his face contorts with distaste<</if>>.<</if>> $He still thinks of $himself as a person, so $he isn't used to the idea of being surgically altered to suit your every whim. For now, @@.mediumorchid;$he seems to view this surgical ass theft as a cruel imposition@@. As with all surgery @@.red;$his health has been slightly affected.@@ $He is @@.gold;terribly afraid@@ of your total power over $his body.
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/walkPast.tw b/src/uncategorized/walkPast.tw
index 4f20a554b58..c7ce07b9b9c 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/walkPast.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/walkPast.tw
@@ -821,7 +821,7 @@
<<if $activeSlave.butt > 10>>
$His stretch pants tightly cling to $his rear as $he moves. While the writing adorning it may catch your eye, the huge expanse of wobbling ass cleavage is far more distracting.
<<else>>
- $His stretch pants tightly cling to $his rear as $he moves; the writing on $his bottom gives you plenty of excuses to oggle it.
+ $His stretch pants tightly cling to $his rear as $he moves; the writing on $his bottom gives you plenty of excuses to ogle it.
<</if>>
<<case "restrictive latex">>
As some of the only islands in the sea of black latex, $his holes are eye-catching.
@@ -856,7 +856,7 @@
<<case "clubslut netting">>
As $he moves, $his clubslut netting moves with $him, leaving nothing to the imagination.
<<case "a cheerleader outfit">>
- As $he moves, $his pleated cheerleader bounces up and down flirtily.
+ As $he moves, $his pleated cheerleader bounces up and down flirtatiously.
<<case "cutoffs and a t-shirt">>
As $he moves, $his cutoffs hug $his butt.
<<case "spats and a tank top">>
@@ -947,7 +947,7 @@
<<case "battledress">>
$His fatigue trousers are not particularly flattering to $his butt.
<<case "nice business attire">>
- $His attractive skirt is nevertheless tight enough to show off $his derriere.
+ $His attractive skirt is nevertheless tight enough to show off $his derrière.
<<case "slutty business attire">>
$His skirt is so short it'll barely be necessary to lift it.
<<case "a comfortable bodysuit">>
@@ -955,25 +955,25 @@
<<case "a latex catsuit">>
$His latex catsuit displays the curves of $his butt.
<<case "a military uniform">>
- $His uniform skirt is nevertheless tight enough to show off $his derriere.
+ $His uniform skirt is nevertheless tight enough to show off $his derrière.
<<case "a schutzstaffel uniform">>
- $His uniform trousers are nevertheless tight enough to show off $his derriere.
+ $His uniform trousers are nevertheless tight enough to show off $his derrière.
<<case "a slutty schutzstaffel uniform">>
$His uniform miniskirt is nevertheless tight enough to show off the enticing curves of $his butt.
<<case "a red army uniform">>
- $His uniform skirt is nevertheless tight enough to show off $his derriere.
+ $His uniform skirt is nevertheless tight enough to show off $his derrière.
<<case "a long qipao">>
$His elegant dress shows off all $his curves.
<<case "battlearmor">>
- $His snug battlearmor is nevertheless tight enough to show off $his derriere.
+ $His snug battlearmor is nevertheless tight enough to show off $his derrière.
<<case "a mounty outfit">>
- $His uniform slacks are tight enough to show off $his derriere.
+ $His uniform slacks are tight enough to show off $his derrière.
<<case "a dirndl">>
- $His skirt shows off the soft curves $his derriere.
+ $His skirt shows off the soft curves $his derrière.
<<case "lederhosen">>
- $His shorts tightly hug the crack of $his derriere.
+ $His shorts tightly hug the crack of $his derrière.
<<case "a biyelgee costume">>
- $His costume skirt has thin enough material to show off $his derriere.
+ $His costume skirt has thin enough material to show off $his derrière.
<<case "a nice nurse outfit">>
$His nurse's trousers demurely cover $his behind.
<<case "a mini dress">>
diff --git a/src/utility/descriptionWidgetsFlesh.tw b/src/utility/descriptionWidgetsFlesh.tw
index 8d1d461d800..59d1df802e4 100644
--- a/src/utility/descriptionWidgetsFlesh.tw
+++ b/src/utility/descriptionWidgetsFlesh.tw
@@ -1913,7 +1913,7 @@ $His
<<elseif $activeSlave.butt > 3>>
is tailored to flatter $his big buttocks.
<<else>>
- tastefully hugs $his derriere.
+ tastefully hugs $his derrière.
<</if>>
<<case "slutty business attire">>
$His skirt is so short that
@@ -1952,7 +1952,7 @@ $His
<<elseif $activeSlave.butt > 3>>
is tailored to flatter $his big buttocks.
<<else>>
- tastefully hugs $his derriere.
+ tastefully hugs $his derrière.
<</if>>
<<case "a mounty outfit">>
$His uniform slacks
@@ -1963,7 +1963,7 @@ $His
<<elseif $activeSlave.butt > 3>>
are tailored to flatter $his big buttocks.
<<else>>
- tastefully hug $his derriere.
+ tastefully hug $his derrière.
<</if>>
<<case "a schutzstaffel uniform">>
$His uniform trousers
@@ -1974,7 +1974,7 @@ $His
<<elseif $activeSlave.butt > 3>>
are tailored to flatter $his big buttocks.
<<else>>
- tastefully hug $his derriere.
+ tastefully hug $his derrière.
<</if>>
<<case "a slutty schutzstaffel uniform">>
$His uniform miniskirt
@@ -1985,7 +1985,7 @@ $His
<<elseif $activeSlave.butt > 3>>
is tailored to flatter $his big buttocks.
<<else>>
- tastefully hug $his derriere.
+ tastefully hug $his derrière.
<</if>>
<<case "a red army uniform">>
$His uniform skirt
@@ -1996,7 +1996,7 @@ $His
<<elseif $activeSlave.butt > 3>>
is tailored to flatter $his big buttocks.
<<else>>
- tastefully hugs $his derriere.
+ tastefully hugs $his derrière.
<</if>>
<<case "a mini dress">>
$His scandalously short dress
@@ -2325,7 +2325,7 @@ $He's got a
<<print either("small, sleek", "small but rounded", "rounded, small")>>
<</if>>
rear end.
-<<elseif $activeSlave.butt <= 3>><<print either("big and healthy", "curved and plump", "healthy and plump")>> derriere.
+<<elseif $activeSlave.butt <= 3>><<print either("big and healthy", "curved and plump", "healthy and plump")>> derrière.
<<elseif $activeSlave.butt <= 4>><<print either("juicy and large", "big bubble", "curvy and enticing")>> butt.
<<elseif $activeSlave.butt <= 5>><<print either("juicy and huge", "huge", "massive and undeniable")>> rear end.
<<elseif $activeSlave.butt <= 6>><<print either("truly massive", "enormous")>> posterior.
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