diff --git a/src/npc/descriptions/face.js b/src/npc/descriptions/face.js
index eb3c7d6aaf64c9dc81581b372461e14a5f536b5d..d363083d9ce69312a3d890cccaf82c993b681eaf 100644
--- a/src/npc/descriptions/face.js
+++ b/src/npc/descriptions/face.js
@@ -154,13 +154,13 @@ App.Desc.face = function(slave) {
 	if (slave.faceImplant > 5) {
 		r.push(`${He}'s`);
 		if (slave.faceImplant > 95) {
-			r.push(`had so much cosmetic surgery that ${his} face is located at the bottom of the uncanny valley`);
+			r.push(`had so much cosmetic surgery that ${his} face is located at the bottom of the uncanny`);
 			if (slave.face < -10) {
-				r.push(`in addition to its ugliness.`);
+				r.push(`valley in addition to its ugliness.`);
 			} else if (slave.face <= 10) {
-				r.push(`the only thing really distinctive about it.`);
+				r.push(`valley; the only thing really distinctive about it.`);
 			} else {
-				r.push(`its attractiveness notwithstanding.`);
+				r.push(`valley, its attractiveness notwithstanding.`);
 			}
 		} else if (slave.faceImplant > 60) {
 			r.push(`obviously gotten a lot of facial cosmetic surgery.`);