diff --git a/src/Mods/SpecialForce/NamingColonel.tw b/src/Mods/SpecialForce/NamingColonel.tw
index b8a735058e6c385ac542daabd4f82c70add2edcc..e4f6de0109dc0cb8306adb9eb2cb4f08a71017e3 100644
--- a/src/Mods/SpecialForce/NamingColonel.tw
+++ b/src/Mods/SpecialForce/NamingColonel.tw
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@
She frowns. "The client always seems to be happier that way."
<</switch>>
<br><br>
- She moves a step closer. "Your computer-helper-thing told me you wanted me to be a surprise, so I guess I'll tell you why you want me to run $SF.Lower for you. I'm a killer, pure and simple,<<if $SF.Colonel.Core === "cruel">>" she smiles, "<</if>>and you need that. I looked into those attacks you've suffered. Nasty business. I'll make sure that an attack like that never happens again. I was a soldier out there, in charge of about a thousand men when the Free Cities first started going up, and I knew they were the future. Eventually I deserted, found the first refugee convoy I could, killed the moron protecting it, sold the girls off to slavers, and bought enough gear to start killing for people like you. Ran my own merc crew, did well till we tried to take on a bigger one and everyone died."
+ She moves a step closer. "Your computer-helper-thing told me you wanted me to be a surprise, so I guess I'll tell you why you want me to run $SF.Lower for you. I'm a killer, pure and simple,<<if $SF.Colonel.Core === "cruel">>" she smiles, "<<else>> <</if>>and you need that. I looked into those attacks you've suffered. Nasty business. I'll make sure that an attack like that never happens again. I was a soldier out there, in charge of about a thousand men when the Free Cities first started going up, and I knew they were the future. Eventually I deserted, found the first refugee convoy I could, killed the moron protecting it, sold the girls off to slavers, and bought enough gear to start killing for people like you. Ran my own merc crew, did well till we tried to take on a bigger one and everyone died."
<<switch $SF.Colonel.Core>>
<<case "shell shocked">>
She looks away, caught in her own memories. It takes a solid minute before she starts again.
@@ -147,4 +147,4 @@
Oh, one last thing. I know you've got some kind of grand social experiment going on up there like all the other arc owners, and that's your own deal, but I'd appreciate it if you could keep that stuff out of the new barracks. I'll have a hard time approaching potential recruits and telling them they should come live in a Roman apartment, an Egyptian temple, a goddamn Japanese teahouse, or some of the other crazy shit I've seen in the past. They're hard, nasty people, and trust me, I can tell you from experience that changing that is just not going to happen. Like I said, though, I can hold them back a bit if you like.
<br><br>
Talk to you later, boss.//
-<</if>>
\ No newline at end of file
+<</if>>
diff --git a/src/events/RETS/reDatePlease.js b/src/events/RETS/reDatePlease.js
index 21ece54fc51f06dfa27d4865e54f7f698aafd47f..b9f454617b2a04281810c5a106913b40da9962ae 100644
--- a/src/events/RETS/reDatePlease.js
+++ b/src/events/RETS/reDatePlease.js
@@ -124,7 +124,7 @@ App.Events.RETSDatePlease = class RETSDatePlease extends App.Events.BaseEvent {
App.Events.drawEventArt(artDiv, [eventSlave, subSlave], "conservative clothing");
const frag = document.createDocumentFragment();
t = [];
- t.push(`Rather than answering ${him} directly, you tell ${V.assistant.name} to clear ${eventSlave.slaveName}'s and ${subSlave.slaveName}'s schedules for the evening. ${He} looks at you with happy anticipation, but this is nothing to ${his} gratitude when you tell ${him} that you'll arrange a date night for them. Trusted slaves are often seen unchaperoned in your arcology, and there are several establishments that cater to slaveowners who wish to bring their chattel out or even send them out alone. You tell ${him} you've made a reservation for ${him} and ${his} ${partner} at one of the less formal places, an ethnic restaurant that manages to add spice to liquid slave nutrition without ruining its good qualities. They're to spend the night out, and can wear what they like. ${He} hurries off to collect ${his} ${girl2} and get dressed, but also tries to keep thanking you on ${his} way out, and almost runs into the door frame as ${he} goes.`);
+ t.push(`Rather than answering ${him} directly, you tell ${V.assistant.name} to clear ${eventSlave.slaveName}'s and ${subSlave.slaveName}'s schedules for the evening. ${He} looks at you with happy anticipation, but this is nothing compared to ${his} gratitude when you tell ${him} that you'll arrange a date night for them. Trusted slaves are often seen unchaperoned in your arcology, and there are several establishments that cater to slaveowners who wish to bring their chattel out or even send them out alone. You tell ${him} you've made a reservation for ${him} and ${his} ${partner} at one of the less formal places, an ethnic restaurant that manages to add spice to liquid slave nutrition without ruining its good qualities. They're to spend the night out, and can wear what they like. ${He} hurries off to collect ${his} ${girl2} and get dressed, but also tries to keep thanking you on ${his} way out, and almost runs into the door frame as ${he} goes.`);
App.Events.addParagraph(frag, t);
t = [];
diff --git a/src/events/scheduled/sePCBirthday.desc.js b/src/events/scheduled/sePCBirthday.desc.js
index 279e687d60bcf54a0e30c0971727601df73a93ec..22f4aa6efb59e1e8e2fc63f45252bae3a97f2b70 100644
--- a/src/events/scheduled/sePCBirthday.desc.js
+++ b/src/events/scheduled/sePCBirthday.desc.js
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ App.Events.pcBirthday.Desc = (function(bday) {
renderMood_Solemn: function(data) {
let html = `
<p>
- Running a Free City takes a certain fortitude. It's constant work, oftentimes thankless, and—in the worst of times—terribly stressful.
+ Running a Free City takes a certain fortitude. It's constant work, oftentimes thankless, and – in the worst of times – terribly stressful.
This morning, as you stand at the balcony, looking across the ${App.Events.pcBirthday.scapeType(V.terrain)} around you, you find yourself reflecting on a year of hard
decisions and humbling outcomes. You are stalwart and resolute, however. This arcology, if not the world, is still yours to shape.
</p>
@@ -50,8 +50,8 @@ App.Events.pcBirthday.Desc = (function(bday) {
App.Events.addResponses(
frag,
[
- new App.Events.Result("Engage in your business matters with focus and resolve.", () => this.renderChoice_Business(data)),
- new App.Events.Result("Find a slave and spend the day relaxed and naked.", () => this.renderChoice_Relaxed_Assistant(data)),
+ new App.Events.Result("Engage in your business matters with focus and resolve", () => this.renderChoice_Business(data)),
+ new App.Events.Result("Find a slave and spend the day relaxed and naked", () => this.renderChoice_Relaxed_Assistant(data)),
new App.Events.Result(`Tell ${V.assistant.name} to get things ready: today there's going to be a party!`, () => this.renderChoice_Party_Assistant(data))
],
"bday-plans"
@@ -86,31 +86,31 @@ App.Events.pcBirthday.Desc = (function(bday) {
html += ` bids you hello, you find streamers and festive, sparkling decorations emerging from nooks
and crannies of your bedroom that you forgot were even there. The letters spelling <em>HAPPY BIRTHDAY</em>, strung along the wall across from you,
explain the subdued giggling you sometimes heard behind your back. Seeing you are now awake and aware, ${data.planner.slave.slaveName} prowls up your
- body`;
+ body, `;
if (data.planner.slave.boobs > 100) {
- html += `${data.planner.pn.his} exposed nipples gliding delicately over your chest.`;
+ html += `${data.planner.pn.his} exposed nipples gliding delicately over your chest. `;
} else if (data.planner.can.pen()) {
- html += `${data.planner.pn.his} engorged dick coming to rest on your crotch.`;
+ html += `${data.planner.pn.his} engorged dick coming to a rest on your crotch. `;
}
- html += `${data.planner.pn.She} brings ${data.planner.pn.his} mouth to your ear and whispers a soft and sensual <em>"Happy birthday, ${properTitle()}"</em>
+ html += `${data.planner.pn.She} brings ${data.planner.pn.his} mouth to your ear and whispers a soft and sensual <em>"Happy birthday, ${data.planner.slave.custom.title}"</em>
in your ear before nibbling your lobe.
</p>
<p>
- ${data.planner.pn.She} sits up. "So", ${data.planner.pn.She} begins with a brusque but excited chirp, "I didn't know how you would feel today.
+ ${data.planner.pn.She} sits up. "So", ${data.planner.pn.she} begins with a brusque but excited chirp, "I didn't know how you would feel today.
<em>So</em>... I've got two options for you to choose from."
</p>
<p>
You play coy and ask if she's serious.
</p>
<p>
- "Mm-hmm. If you are feeling particularly bold and"—${data.planner.pn.She} strokes your ${App.Events.pcBirthday.pcGenitals()}—"frisky, there's a bit of
+ "Mm-hmm. If you are feeling particularly bold and" – ${data.planner.pn.she} strokes your ${App.Events.pcBirthday.pcGenitals()} – "frisky, there's a bit of
entertainment that can be arranged. Sort of a social event, let's say. But. If maybe you wanted to take the day off and spend a little time in
- bed... I've got entertainment lined up for that also." This time ${data.planner.pn.She} strokes ${data.planner.pn.his}
+ bed... I've got entertainment lined up for that also." This time ${data.planner.pn.she} strokes ${data.planner.pn.his}
${data.planner.slave.vagina > -1 ? "pussy" : "cock"}.
- ${data.planner.pn.She} explains that if you decline the social event, ${data.planner.pn.She} has a business partner of yours set up to attend in your
+ ${data.planner.pn.She} explains that if you decline the social event, ${data.planner.pn.she} has a business partner of yours set up to attend in your
stead; a favor to be repaid one day. And if you prefer to see what it's all about, there will be plenty of stiff-dicked attendees there to sate
${data.planner.pn.her}, so there's no reason to feel obliged to stay put. "${properMaster()} will get ${getPronouns(V.PC).his} wish."
</p>`;
@@ -120,8 +120,8 @@ App.Events.pcBirthday.Desc = (function(bday) {
App.Events.addResponses(
frag,
[
- new App.Events.Result("See just exactly what, or who, will go down at this event.", () => this.renderChoice_Party_Planner(data)),
- new App.Events.Result("Enjoy the gift already sitting on your bed.", () => this.renderChoice_Relaxed_Planner(data))
+ new App.Events.Result("See just exactly what, or who, will go down at this event", () => this.renderChoice_Party_Planner(data)),
+ new App.Events.Result("Enjoy the gift already sitting on your bed", () => this.renderChoice_Relaxed_Planner(data))
],
"bday-plans"
);
@@ -130,7 +130,7 @@ App.Events.pcBirthday.Desc = (function(bday) {
} else {
html += `
<p>
- Running a Free City takes a certain fortitude. It's constant work, oftentimes thankless, and—in the best of times—remarkably rewarding.
+ Running a Free City takes a certain fortitude. It's constant work, oftentimes thankless, and – in the best of times – remarkably rewarding.
This morning, as you stand at the balcony, looking across the ${App.Events.pcBirthday.scapeType(V.terrain)} around you, you find
yourself reflecting on a year of tough decisions and surprising outcomes. You remain stalwart and resolute: this arcology, if not the world, is
yours to shape.
@@ -146,8 +146,8 @@ App.Events.pcBirthday.Desc = (function(bday) {
App.Events.addResponses(
frag,
[
- new App.Events.Result("Engage in your business matters with focus and resolve.", () => this.renderChoice_Business(data)),
- new App.Events.Result("Find a slave and spend the day relaxed and naked.", () => this.renderChoice_Relaxed_Assistant(data)),
+ new App.Events.Result("Engage in your business matters with focus and resolve", () => this.renderChoice_Business(data)),
+ new App.Events.Result("Find a slave and spend the day relaxed and naked", () => this.renderChoice_Relaxed_Assistant(data)),
new App.Events.Result(`Tell ${V.assistant.name} to get things ready: today there's going to be a party!`, () => this.renderChoice_Party_Assistant(data))
],
"bday-plans"
@@ -307,7 +307,7 @@ App.Events.pcBirthday.Desc = (function(bday) {
a calm, stress-free day here in the penthouse.
</p>
<p>
- "That"—${data.planner.pn.she} playfully pokes at your side—"can be arranged." ${data.planner.pn.She} turns ${data.planner.pn.his} sight to the candle.
+ "That" – ${data.planner.pn.she} playfully pokes at your side – "can be arranged." ${data.planner.pn.She} turns ${data.planner.pn.his} sight to the candle.
"Make your wish! I hope it comes true!"
</p>`;
@@ -316,7 +316,7 @@ App.Events.pcBirthday.Desc = (function(bday) {
App.Events.addResponses(
frag,
[
- new App.Events.Result("Close your eyes and make a wish.", () => {
+ new App.Events.Result("Close your eyes and make a wish", () => {
return `
<p>
With eyes closed and a deep breath, you extinguish the dancing flame. ${data.planner.slave.slaveName}
@@ -339,8 +339,8 @@ App.Events.pcBirthday.Desc = (function(bday) {
html += `
<p>
After thanking ${V.assistant.name} for ${data.assistPN.his} dedication, you head out of your office and into an elevator. A stroll through your bustling
- arcology will be a terrific way to wake up your senses, get in touch with the common folk—through an appropriate layer of security, of
- course—and maybe spy a juicy piece of action.
+ arcology will be a terrific way to wake up your senses, get in touch with the common folk – through an appropriate layer of security, of
+ course – and maybe spy a juicy piece of action.
</p>
<p>
As a general rule, birthdays aren't major milestones in a Free City. This is in part because of the state of the outside world, and in part because the
@@ -360,7 +360,7 @@ App.Events.pcBirthday.Desc = (function(bday) {
App.Events.addResponses(
frag,
[
- new App.Events.Result("Approach the girl on the bench.", () => this.renderStrangerScene(data))
+ new App.Events.Result("Approach the girl on the bench", () => this.renderStrangerScene(data))
],
"bday-prey"
);
@@ -378,14 +378,12 @@ App.Events.pcBirthday.Desc = (function(bday) {
${V.assistant.personality ? `"Aye aye, cap'n!"` : `"As you wish."`}
Your assistant knows plenty about what you consider a successful ${V.arcologies[0].name} party. You leave the details up to ${data.assistPN.her}.
</p>
- <hr>
<p>
It wasn't long before ${V.assistant.name} shot you a message with the details. All you have to do was be there, ${data.assistPN.she} said. You stand within your
closet deciding what to wear.
</p>`;
const after = `
- <hr>
<p>
That night, you tell yourself to do something special for ${V.assistant.name}, just before you drift off to sleep from exhaustion in a pile of assorted
slaves.
@@ -434,7 +432,6 @@ App.Events.pcBirthday.Desc = (function(bday) {
</p>`;
const after = `
- <hr>
<p>
That night, you tell yourself to do something special for ${data.planner.slave.slaveName}, and stroke ${data.planner.pn.his} hair just before the two of
you drift off to sleep from exhaustion in a pile of assorted slaves.
@@ -459,7 +456,7 @@ App.Events.pcBirthday.Desc = (function(bday) {
contact with ${pn.his} skin. You begin the third bow.
</p>
<p>
- The teddy is soon loose and ${pn.she} wastes no time slipping it over ${pn.his} arms and tossing it to the edge of the bed. Taking ${pn.his}`;
+ The teddy is soon loose and ${pn.she} wastes no time slipping it over ${pn.his} arms and tossing it to the edge of the bed. Taking ${pn.his} `;
if (data.planner.slave.boobs < 400) {
html += `petite but eager`;
@@ -469,7 +466,7 @@ App.Events.pcBirthday.Desc = (function(bday) {
html += `deliciously firm`;
}
- html += `tits in your hands, you can tell by a stroke of your thumbs across ${pn.his} attentive nipples that ${pn.she} would be ready to pounce if ${pn.she} weren't
+ html += ` tits in your hands, you can tell by a stroke of your thumbs across ${pn.his} attentive nipples that ${pn.she} would be ready to pounce if ${pn.she} weren't
letting you control the pace. ${pn.She} jiggles ${pn.his} tush to tease your ${App.Events.pcBirthday.pcGenitals()}. "Birthday ${getPronouns(V.PC).boy}," ${pn.she} coos, "you
know I have another gift for you." You admit to yourself that you're just as eager to open it.
</p>`;
@@ -546,12 +543,12 @@ App.Events.pcBirthday.Desc = (function(bday) {
The moans become audible, starting from a soft whimper and growing into a desperate cry for release. ${pn.She}'s working ${pn.his} hips with fierce
urgency. ${pn.She}'ll be damned if ${pn.she} gets off without milking your dick for every fucking drop of come that is ready to burst the dam. ${pn.She}
won't let go now; ${pn.his} limbs have such a vice grip on your pounding body that you'd have little chance to shake loose even if you wanted. The
- ${pn.girl} is wild. And hungry. And intense. And writhing. And —
+ ${pn.girl} is wild. And hungry. And intense. And writhing. And –
</p>
<p>
Brought to a crescendo, you release inside of ${pn.her}. An animalistic growl escapes ${pn.his} lips. ${pn.She} trembles underneath you, a series of
shockwaves and aftershocks ripples across ${pn.his} frame. Through this, ${data.planner.slave.slaveName} hasn't let go. ${pn.His} pussy swallows your
- semen; gulps it down like a parched nomad. As the bursts subside and your own body relaxes, ${pn.his} muscles yield. It matters little, however.
+ semen – gulps it down like a parched nomad. As the bursts subside and your own body relaxes, ${pn.his} muscles yield. It matters little, however.
You're scared to move for fear of overstimulating your exhausted cock. You collapse atop ${pn.her}, and ${pn.she} nuzzles ${pn.his} nose into your neck
before giving you a gentle kiss.
</p>
@@ -600,7 +597,7 @@ App.Events.pcBirthday.Desc = (function(bday) {
now, ${pn.his} pussy is planted firmly against yours, the direct mingling of your wetness sealing the kiss of your private lips.
${data.planner.slave.slaveName} bucks ${pn.his} hips and presses firmly down into you and the cadence quickly returns. ${pn.His} hands absently grope and
caress your body. ${pn.His} thrusts drive harder into you but the sticky friction of ${pn.his} groin against your clitoris never lets up. The ${pn.girl}
- is wild. And hungry. And intense. And writhing. And —
+ is wild. And hungry. And intense. And writhing. And –
</p>
<p>
Brought to a crescendo, you come spastically against each other. An animalistic growl escapes ${pn.his} lips. ${pn.She} trembles between your legs, a
@@ -650,10 +647,10 @@ App.Events.pcBirthday.Desc = (function(bday) {
</p>
<p>
The moans become audible, starting from a soft whimper and growing into a desperate cry for release. ${pn.She}'s working ${pn.his} hips with fierce
- urgency. ${pn.She}'ll be damned if ${pn.she} gets off without milking your dick for every fucking drop of come that is ready to burst the dam. ${pn.His}
+ urgency. ${pn.She}'ll be damned if ${pn.she} gets off without milking your dick for every fucking drop of cum that is ready to burst the dam. ${pn.His}
hips buck just as insatiably as yours. ${pn.She} releases your buttock only to reach down and pull your thigh over ${pn.his} hip. ${pn.She} rolls forward
enough to give you more leverage into ${pn.his} devouring asshole. ${pn.She} arches ${pn.his} back and begs you to pump ${pn.her} harder. The ${pn.girl} is
- wild. And hungry. And intense. And writhing. And —
+ wild. And hungry. And intense. And writhing. And –
</p>
<p>
Brought to a crescendo, you release inside of ${pn.her} and ${pn.she} onto the cotton sheets. An animalistic growl escapes ${pn.his} lips. ${pn.She}
@@ -700,7 +697,7 @@ App.Events.pcBirthday.Desc = (function(bday) {
The moans become audible, starting from a soft whimper and growing into a desperate cry for release. ${pn.She}'s working ${pn.his} hips with fierce urgency.
${pn.She}'ll be damned if ${pn.she} gets off without working ${pn.his} engorged tool against every sensitive spot inside you. You won't let go now; your limbs have
such a vice grip on ${pn.his} pounding body that ${pn.she}'d have little chance to shake loose even if ${pn.she} wanted. The ${pn.girl} is wild. And hungry. And
- intense. And writhing. And —
+ intense. And writhing. And –
</p>
<p>
Brought to a crescendo, ${pn.she} releases inside of you. An animalistic growl escapes ${pn.his} lips. ${pn.She} trembles above you, a series of shockwaves and
@@ -725,22 +722,22 @@ App.Events.pcBirthday.Desc = (function(bday) {
App.Events.addResponses(
frag,
[
- new App.Events.Result("Formal attire, to present a leader of style and authority.", () => {
+ new App.Events.Result("Formal attire, to present a leader of style and authority", () => {
data.attire = "formal";
return `
<p>You spend a few minutes fitting yourself into a stylish three-piece, finish the looking with a proper bow tie.</p>
` + this.renderPartyScene_Arrival(data) + afterParty;
}),
- new App.Events.Result("Something fun and spunky; when you said party, you meant it.", () => {
+ new App.Events.Result("Something fun and spunky; when you said party, you meant it", () => {
data.attire = "casual";
return `
<p>You find something that that broadcasts exactly what you want from this party: a raunchy, good time.</p>
` + this.renderPartyScene_Arrival(data) + afterParty;
}),
- new App.Events.Result(`The birthday ${getPronouns(V.PC).boy} will wear a birthday suit.`, () => {
+ new App.Events.Result(`The birthday ${getPronouns(V.PC).boy} will wear a birthday suit`, () => {
data.attire = "naked";
return `
- <p>There's no need to waste time—and cleaning costs—putting on clothes that are just going to come off again.</p>
+ <p>There's no need to waste time – and cleaning costs – putting on clothes that are just going to come off again.</p>
` + this.renderPartyScene_Arrival(data) + afterParty;
}),
],
@@ -788,7 +785,7 @@ App.Events.pcBirthday.Desc = (function(bday) {
there's hardly a moment when a stray hand isn't caressing your ${App.Events.pcBirthday.pcGenitals()}. You begin to wonder if anything was even planned for the
party beyond music and sluts, but before you can grouse about it, the lights dim and a spotlight beams down onto an empty area in the center of the
room. Two slaves roll a leather recliner into the light as two more take your arms and chaperone you over to it. On your way over you notice a mist
- billowing up from cleverly hidden fog machines, which you find a touch over-dramatic but you approve nonetheless.`;
+ billowing up from cleverly hidden fog machines, which you find a touch over-dramatic but approve of nonetheless.`;
if (data.attire !== "naked") {
html += `Before you are prompted to sit, your clothes are summarily dismissed from your body in a frenzy of precision that would
@@ -798,8 +795,7 @@ App.Events.pcBirthday.Desc = (function(bday) {
}
html += `
- </p>
- <hr>`;
+ </p>`;
if (V.PC.dick) {
html += this.renderPartyScene_PCBones(data);
@@ -861,7 +857,7 @@ App.Events.pcBirthday.Desc = (function(bday) {
like a pommel horse; her face stops before yours just long enough to plant a finalé kiss on your cheek, and she disappears somewhere behind you.
</p>
<p>
- As her body launched out of sight, however, another two bodies were waiting at your feet. Or — you begin to wonder if it is actually two, or
+ As her body launched out of sight, however, another two bodies were waiting at your feet. Or – you begin to wonder if it is actually two, or
if your vision is doubling from a random pill you pulled off a tray and the mystical atmosphere provided by the fog. But no, it's soon clear that
it's two redhead twins who had been warming each other up to prepare themselves for you. In stark and provocative contrast to the athlete before
them, these girls slide upon you with full, soft bodies. They kiss your nipples, your collarbone, your cheeks, and finally share your tongue
@@ -915,7 +911,7 @@ App.Events.pcBirthday.Desc = (function(bday) {
pussy lies moist and ready. She turns her body around, presenting an impossibly girthy dong standing at attention before her. She works the length of
her shaft against your pussy lips, a mild oil giving a pleasant stride for each pump of her waist. She takes your legs and brings them together in
front of her. She presses your thighs tight together around her dick as she continues to grind its mass against the lips of your lubricated vulva.
- An attendant slave—one of the two that brought you over to the chair—places an angled cushion before the belly-dancing slave fucking
+ An attendant slave – one of the two that brought you over to the chair – places an angled cushion before the belly-dancing slave fucking
your thighs. She kneels upon it, finding a good posture to return to her signature shake. The sway of her buttocks causes them to jiggle counter to
the motions. The precise control of her abs keeps her waist moving in time while her upper body is almost perfectly locked in place. Her hands
alternate between holding and caressing your thighs while she pumps her cock between them.
@@ -952,7 +948,7 @@ App.Events.pcBirthday.Desc = (function(bday) {
you like a pommel horse; her face stops before yours just long enough to plant a finalé kiss on your cheek, and she disappears somewhere behind you.
</p>
<p>
- As her body launched out of sight, however, another two bodies were waiting at your feet. Or — you begin to wonder if it is actually two, or
+ As her body launched out of sight, however, another two bodies were waiting at your feet. Or – you begin to wonder if it is actually two, or
if your vision is doubling from a random pill you pulled off a tray and the mystical atmosphere provided by the fog. But no, it's soon clear that
it's two redhead twins who had been warming each other up to prepare themselves for you. In stark and provocative contrast to the athlete before
them, these girls slide upon you with full, soft bodies. They kiss your nipples, your collarbone, your cheeks, and finally share your tongue between
@@ -1022,7 +1018,7 @@ App.Events.pcBirthday.Desc = (function(bday) {
You tersely tell her they are busy fucking or getting fucked.
</p>
<p>
- "Fair enough." She puts her phone—her failed (or successful?) prop—away. "There's a lot of rumors about you, you know. I don't know how much you pay
+ "Fair enough." She puts her phone – her failed (or successful?) prop – away. "There's a lot of rumors about you, you know. I don't know how much you pay
attention to that shit." You shrug and invite her to share a few. "You've got a giant dong. Or you've got no dong. Or sometimes two, but I think that one
started as a joke that some people took too seriously. They say you're a killer. Cold-blooded. Anyone gets in your way..." Her hand mimes a gun and shoots
an invisible bullet. "They say you designed the arco yourself. They say you overtook it from someone else. They say you stole it from your own father. They
@@ -1048,7 +1044,7 @@ App.Events.pcBirthday.Desc = (function(bday) {
App.Events.addResponses(
frag,
[
- new App.Events.Result("Offer her a chance to find out.", () => {
+ new App.Events.Result("Offer her a chance to find out", () => {
if (V.PC.dick) {
return this.renderStrangerScene_PCBones(data);
} else {
@@ -1067,7 +1063,6 @@ App.Events.pcBirthday.Desc = (function(bday) {
*/
renderStrangerScene_PCBones: function(data) {
let html = `
- <hr>
<p>
Her wrists bound in straps behind her back, her mouth now knows exactly how big your dong is. You sit at the edge of your bed, where she
kneels on the floor before you, her head bobbing in your lap. Your fingers splay through her soft, black hair as you hold her head. She
@@ -1108,7 +1103,7 @@ App.Events.pcBirthday.Desc = (function(bday) {
breasts. You knead and grope her tits as you suck at her protruding nipples. She finally lands her palms on the small of your back and seems
to bask in the warmth of your body. You move up to kiss the girl's lips, and delight as she can't help but moan into your mouth as you enter
her again. Your hands lock behind her shoulders and you resume fucking this girl silly. You employ the full length and girth of your cock to
- stimulate her poor clit, and she—as far as you can tell—might literally die from the pleasure. Her fingers squeeze your ass,
+ stimulate her poor clit, and she – as far as you can tell – might literally die from the pleasure. Her fingers squeeze your ass,
glide up to your shoulders, and one continues up to the crown of your head. Her pussy clenches, massages, constricts. You can only assume
she's come, presumably several times, by now because there can't possibly be another level above where she's been.
</p>
@@ -1143,7 +1138,6 @@ App.Events.pcBirthday.Desc = (function(bday) {
*/
renderStrangerScene_PCGetsBoned: function(data) {
let html = `
- <hr>
<p>
Her wrists bound in straps behind her back, she is helpless to do more than watch you engulf her cock in your mouth. Your hands explore her
torso and fondle her tits, which fit comfortably in the squeeze of your palms. It wasn't long into your flirting session that you noticed a
diff --git a/src/events/scheduled/seRaiding.js b/src/events/scheduled/seRaiding.js
index b737c50e576f60a3c2ea1ced3f5d10282dfc6a64..a886c959483bf52abd94e9ee23dea0841adf4460 100644
--- a/src/events/scheduled/seRaiding.js
+++ b/src/events/scheduled/seRaiding.js
@@ -588,7 +588,7 @@ App.Events.SERaiding = class SERaiding extends App.Events.BaseEvent {
slave = GenerateNewSlave("XX", {maxAge: 20, disableDisability: 1});
slave.career = "a classical dancer";
slave.prestige = 1;
- slave.prestigeDesc = "${He} was the pride of renowned dance troupe.";
+ slave.prestigeDesc = "$He was the pride of renowned dance troupe.";
slave.face = random(-20, 40);
slave.anus = 0;
slave.vagina = 1;
@@ -638,7 +638,7 @@ App.Events.SERaiding = class SERaiding extends App.Events.BaseEvent {
slave = GenerateNewSlave("XX", {maxAge: 43, disableDisability: 1, ageOverridesPedoMode: 1});
slave.career = "a classical musician";
slave.prestige = 1;
- slave.prestigeDesc = "${He} was the pride of a renowned orchestra.";
+ slave.prestigeDesc = "$He was the pride of a renowned orchestra.";
slave.face = random(-20, 0);
slave.anus = 0;
slave.skill.vaginal = 0;
@@ -672,7 +672,7 @@ App.Events.SERaiding = class SERaiding extends App.Events.BaseEvent {
});
slave.career = "a politician";
slave.prestige = 2;
- slave.prestigeDesc = "${He} was a widely known politician in ${his} former life. ${His} face has graced many campaign posters.";
+ slave.prestigeDesc = "$He was a widely known politician in $his former life. $His face has graced many campaign posters.";
slave.face = random(15, 100);
slave.vagina = 1;
slave.skill.oral = 35;
@@ -729,7 +729,7 @@ App.Events.SERaiding = class SERaiding extends App.Events.BaseEvent {
});
slave.career = "an investor";
slave.prestige = 1;
- slave.prestigeDesc = "${He} is a reputable investor from a bygone age.";
+ slave.prestigeDesc = "$He is a reputable investor from a bygone age.";
slave.face = random(15, 100);
slave.vagina = 1;
slave.skill.oral = 35;
@@ -888,7 +888,7 @@ App.Events.SERaiding = class SERaiding extends App.Events.BaseEvent {
} else if (raidEscape === 1) {
r.push(`Your ${V.mercenariesTitle} are met with fierce resistance by the staff of the newspaper firm, who take the raid as an opportunity to turn their abolitionist words into violent action. Eventually, your ${V.mercenariesTitle} retreat from the building before law enforcement can arrive.`);
} else {
- r.push(`Once the lone security guard is subdued, the journalists and editors of the firm quietly accept their restraints and file out of the building and into the waiting VTOL. The journalist spends the VTOL ride watching as ${his} colleagues are raped by your mercenaries. ${He} studies every brutal detail, records ever anguished scream in ${his} mind, hoping that one day ${he} might escape to produce an editorial to surpass all others.`);
+ r.push(`Once the lone security guard is subdued, the journalists and editors of the firm quietly accept their restraints and file out of the building and into the waiting VTOL. The journalist spends the VTOL ride watching as ${his} colleagues are raped by your mercenaries. ${He} studies every brutal detail and records every anguished scream in ${his} mind, hoping that one day ${he} might escape to produce an editorial to surpass all others.`);
newSlave(slave);
// skip New Slave Intro
}
diff --git a/src/facilities/toyShop/toyShop.js b/src/facilities/toyShop/toyShop.js
index dac5d3e1741de4e929b7e209be964891fa3e92e6..eaae76f4ac5cf234bcf54d10b46aff4799929264 100644
--- a/src/facilities/toyShop/toyShop.js
+++ b/src/facilities/toyShop/toyShop.js
@@ -107,7 +107,7 @@ App.UI.toyShop = function() {
}
function desc() {
- const value = App.UI.DOM.makeElement("div", `Enter shape here as it will appear in descriptions `);
+ const value = App.UI.DOM.makeElement("div", `Enter toy's shape here as it will appear in descriptions: `);
value.append(App.UI.DOM.makeTextBox(
vaginalAcc.name,
v => {
@@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ App.UI.toyShop = function() {
refresh();
}
));
- App.UI.DOM.appendNewElement("span", value, ` Your slave has a standard ${vaginalAcc.name ? vaginalAcc.name : `pink dildo`} wedged firmly in their pussy.`, "note");
+ App.UI.DOM.appendNewElement("span", value, ` Your slave has a standard ${vaginalAcc.name || `pink dildo`} wedged firmly in their pussy.`, "note");
return value;
}
@@ -206,7 +206,7 @@ App.UI.toyShop = function() {
}
function desc() {
- const value = App.UI.DOM.makeElement("div", `Enter shape here as it will appear in descriptions `);
+ const value = App.UI.DOM.makeElement("div", `Enter toy's shape here as it will appear in descriptions: `);
value.append(App.UI.DOM.makeTextBox(
buttPlug.name,
v => {
@@ -215,7 +215,7 @@ App.UI.toyShop = function() {
refresh();
}
));
- App.UI.DOM.appendNewElement("span", value, ` Your slave has a standard ${buttPlug.name ? buttPlug.name : `spade-shaped plug`} wedged firmly in their asshole.`, "note");
+ App.UI.DOM.appendNewElement("span", value, ` Your slave has a standard ${buttPlug.name || `spade-shaped plug`} wedged firmly in their asshole.`, "note");
return value;
}
@@ -269,11 +269,11 @@ App.UI.toyShop = function() {
*/
function width(toy) {
const widthOptions = new Map([
- ["standard", 1],
- ["large", 2],
- ["huge", 3],
+ ["Standard", 1],
+ ["Large", 2],
+ ["Huge", 3],
]);
- const width = App.UI.DOM.makeElement("div", `Select width `);
+ const width = App.UI.DOM.makeElement("div", `Width: `);
width.append(optionsStrip(toy.data, "width", widthOptions));
return width;
}
@@ -284,10 +284,10 @@ App.UI.toyShop = function() {
*/
function length(toy) {
const lengthOptions = new Map([
- ["standard", 1],
- ["long", 2],
+ ["Standard", 1],
+ ["Long", 2],
]);
- const length = App.UI.DOM.makeElement("div", `Select length `);
+ const length = App.UI.DOM.makeElement("div", `Length: `);
length.append(optionsStrip(toy.data, "length", lengthOptions));
return length;
}
diff --git a/src/interaction/siFinancial.js b/src/interaction/siFinancial.js
index eb574783a423a630ec0dfe8e82b080e55340dc2d..ca12ea57d9c97c3900a97298bbd990ae0553df8e 100644
--- a/src/interaction/siFinancial.js
+++ b/src/interaction/siFinancial.js
@@ -1,3 +1,4 @@
+
App.UI.SlaveInteract.financial = function(slave) {
const el = new DocumentFragment();
let r;
diff --git a/src/js/slaveExpenses.js b/src/js/slaveExpenses.js
index 8119ae130c15ec3d445c09ed436ba0d2523f0a12..66a8d67c06676662a6867f8e179c94172494d695 100644
--- a/src/js/slaveExpenses.js
+++ b/src/js/slaveExpenses.js
@@ -110,9 +110,9 @@ globalThis.slaveImpactLongTerm = function(slave) {
text += `time`;
}
text += ` with you, ${he} has cost `;
- div.append(text);
- div.append(App.UI.DOM.cashFormat(slave.lifetimeCashExpenses));
- div.append(`.`);
+ const cash = (App.UI.DOM.cashFormat(slave.lifetimeCashExpenses));
+ cash.textContent += `.`;
+ div.append(text, cash);
_Expense = slave.lifetimeCashExpenses;
} else {
div.append(`You have no record of ${him} costing you any ¤.`);
@@ -136,9 +136,9 @@ globalThis.slaveImpactLongTerm = function(slave) {
text += `time`;
}
text += ` with you, ${he} has earned `;
- div.append(text);
- div.append(App.UI.DOM.cashFormat(slave.lifetimeCashIncome));
- div.append(`.`);
+ const cash = App.UI.DOM.cashFormat(slave.lifetimeCashIncome);
+ cash.textContent += `.`;
+ div.append(text, cash);
_Income = slave.lifetimeCashIncome;
} else {
div.append(`You have no record of ${him} making you any ¤.`);
@@ -158,8 +158,9 @@ globalThis.slaveImpactLongTerm = function(slave) {
div.append(`${he} is even in cost and income.`);
} else {
div.append(`${he} has cost you `);
- div.append(App.UI.DOM.cashFormat(_Income + _Cost + _Expense));
- div.append(`.`);
+ const cash = App.UI.DOM.cashFormat(_Income + _Cost + _Expense);
+ cash.textContent += `.`;
+ div.append(cash);
}
frag.append(div);
diff --git a/src/npc/generate/newSlaveIntro.js b/src/npc/generate/newSlaveIntro.js
index 52ffd4cd0556247e6426dfc534f51f0f5d27c318..cd0153d6c9f521e8896e62e2d53809a8134cc612 100644
--- a/src/npc/generate/newSlaveIntro.js
+++ b/src/npc/generate/newSlaveIntro.js
@@ -983,6 +983,7 @@ App.UI.newSlaveIntro = function(slave, slave2, {tankBorn = false, momInterest =
linkName: `Introduce ${him} to anal service`,
result: function(slave) {
const r = [];
+ // FIXME: tone here does not match VCheck – one will need to be tweaked or rewritten
r.push(`You carefully and patiently explain to the fearful anal virgin how skilled Free Cities slaves take dick up the butt. ${He} is allowed to go at ${his} own pace, hesitantly progressing from enemata to a single well-lubricated finger to a little plug. After a long while ${he}'s beginning to get aroused, and you bring ${him} over to the couch to spoon. ${He} stiffens with fear but you take your time and just cuddle for a while before gently sodomizing ${him}. ${He} <span class="hotpink">thanks</span> you for being a <span class="mediumaquamarine">kind master,</span> and has <span class="green">learned</span> the basics of taking it up the ass.`);
r.push(VCheck.Anal(slave, 1));
slave.devotion += 4;
diff --git a/src/npc/interaction/fAnimal.js b/src/npc/interaction/fAnimal.js
index 8461297298e3f51575475161b7d559f5a2d578bc..0ac3524eef164b058c35abbd53c536c73206625c 100644
--- a/src/npc/interaction/fAnimal.js
+++ b/src/npc/interaction/fAnimal.js
@@ -257,9 +257,8 @@ App.Interact.fAnimal = function(slave, type) {
}
function consummationDevoted() {
- const
- mainSpan = document.createElement("span"),
- r = [];
+ const mainSpan = document.createElement("span");
+ const r = [];
if (act === Acts.ORAL) {
r.push(`You have ${him} kneel on the floor before calling in the ${animal.name}. The beast slowly saunters up to the slave where ${he} waits, showing little concern when the slave reaches out and begins masturbating it to begin the process of getting the animal hard. Once the ${animal.name} is hard enough, ${slave.slaveName} takes its cock and begins to give it a few tentative licks before finally putting it in ${his} mouth. `);
@@ -333,9 +332,8 @@ App.Interact.fAnimal = function(slave, type) {
}
function consummationNondevoted() {
- const
- mainSpan = document.createElement("span"),
- r = [];
+ const mainSpan = document.createElement("span");
+ const r = [];
if (act === Acts.ORAL) {
r.push(`You tell ${him} to kneel on the floor before calling in the ${animal.name}. The beast slowly saunters up to the slave where ${he} waits, showing little concern when the slave hesitantly reaches out and begins masturbating it to begin the process of getting the animal hard. Once the ${animal.name} is hard enough, ${slave.slaveName} takes its cock, and, after taking a moment to steel ${his} resolve, begins to give it a few reluctant licks before putting it in ${his} mouth. `);
@@ -409,9 +407,8 @@ App.Interact.fAnimal = function(slave, type) {
}
function consummationNonresistant() {
- const
- mainSpan = document.createElement("span"),
- r = [];
+ const mainSpan = document.createElement("span");
+ const r = [];
if (act === Acts.ORAL) {
r.push(`You force ${him} to kneel on the floor before calling in the ${animal.name}. The beast slowly saunters up to the slave where ${he} waits, showing little concern when the slave reluctantly reaches out and begins masturbating it to begin the process of getting the animal hard. Once the ${animal.name} is hard enough, ${slave.slaveName} takes its cock and begins to give it a few tentative licks before finally putting it in ${his} mouth. `);
@@ -485,9 +482,8 @@ App.Interact.fAnimal = function(slave, type) {
}
function consummationResistant() {
- const
- mainSpan = document.createElement("span"),
- r = [];
+ const mainSpan = document.createElement("span");
+ const r = [];
if (act === Acts.ORAL) {
r.push(`You have to physically force ${him} to kneel on the floor before calling in the ${animal.name}. The beast slowly saunters up to the slave where ${he} is restrained, showing little concern when another slave reaches out and begins masturbating it to begin the process of getting the animal hard. Once the ${animal.name} is hard enough, the slave takes its cock and lines it up with ${slave.slaveName}'s mouth. The animal needs no prompting, and thrusts itself into ${his} ring-gagged mouth. `);
@@ -587,9 +583,8 @@ App.Interact.fAnimal = function(slave, type) {
// MARK: Completion Function
function completion() {
- const
- mainSpan = document.createElement("span"),
- r = [];
+ const mainSpan = document.createElement("span");
+ const r = [];
switch (animal) {
case V.active.canine:
@@ -729,9 +724,8 @@ App.Interact.fAnimal = function(slave, type) {
}
function cleanUp() {
- const
- mainSpan = document.createElement("span"),
- r = [];
+ const mainSpan = document.createElement("span");
+ const r = [];
if (act !== Acts.ORAL) {
if (act === Acts.VAGINAL) {
@@ -824,9 +818,8 @@ App.Interact.fAnimal = function(slave, type) {
// MARK: Virginity Check Functions
function virginityCheck(type) {
- const
- mainSpan = document.createElement("span"),
- virginityLossSpan = App.UI.DOM.makeElement("span", '', ["virginity", "loss"]);
+ const mainSpan = document.createElement("span");
+ const virginityLossSpan = App.UI.DOM.makeElement("span", '', ["virginity", "loss"]);
switch (type) {
case Acts.VAGINAL:
@@ -853,11 +846,10 @@ App.Interact.fAnimal = function(slave, type) {
}
function virginityEffects(type) {
- const
- mainSpan = document.createElement("span"),
- devotionSpan = document.createElement("span"),
- trustSpan = document.createElement("span"),
- healthSpan = App.UI.DOM.makeElement("span", '', ["health", "dec"]);
+ const mainSpan = document.createElement("span");
+ const devotionSpan = document.createElement("span");
+ const trustSpan = document.createElement("span");
+ const healthSpan = App.UI.DOM.makeElement("span", '', ["health", "dec"]);
switch (type) {
case Acts.VAGINAL:
diff --git a/src/uncategorized/seCoursing.tw b/src/uncategorized/seCoursing.tw
index 6ec8e6d150862a13e9099f601b2b410ece081145..fd5d6ba6dce9905b43e01769f57877432d3fe84a 100644
--- a/src/uncategorized/seCoursing.tw
+++ b/src/uncategorized/seCoursing.tw
@@ -238,9 +238,9 @@ The rules have been explained to the hares: they're to be freed if they can reac
<<if $origin == "virgin">>
is an appealingly young _slave.race _girl2, and has V symbols drawn over _his2 cunt and on _his2 lower back, in the interests of fairness. _He2's a @@.pink;double virgin. @@<<if !canSee(_activeLurcher)>>To accommodate your blind lurcher, a bell is fastened around _his2 neck.<</if>>
<<elseif $origin == "heavily pregnant">>
- is <<= addA(_slave.race)>> _girl2, young and healthy but @@.pink;heavily pregnant.@@ _He2's probably been selected to be a hare as a joke, or because someone hates _him2. <<if !canSee(_activeLurcher)>>To accommodate your blind lurcher, a bell is attached to _his2 popped navel.<</if>>
+ is <<= addA(_slave.race)>> _girl2, young and healthy but @@.pink;heavily pregnant.@@ _He2's probably been selected to be a hare as a joke, or because someone hates _him2. <<if !canSee(_activeLurcher)>>To accommodate your blind lurcher, a bell is attached to _his2 popped navel.<</if>>
<<elseif $origin == "housewife">>
- is <<= addA(_slave.race)>> _woman2, no longer young, but attractive enough in a fake sort of way. _He2 has obviously been crying, and has probably been recently enslaved from a comfortable life, like that of a @@.pink;house<<= $wife>> or a trophy $wife.@@ <<if !canSee(_activeLurcher)>>To accommodate your blind lurcher, a bell is fastened around _his2 neck.<</if>>
+ is <<= addA(_slave.race)>> _woman2, no longer young, but attractive enough in a fake sort of way. _He2 has obviously been crying, and has probably been recently enslaved from a comfortable life, like that of a @@.pink;house<<= $wife>> or a trophy $wife. @@<<if !canSee(_activeLurcher)>>To accommodate your blind lurcher, a bell is fastened around _his2 neck.<</if>>
<<elseif $origin == "disobedient young">>
is a fit young _slave.race _girl2, and is far more watchful and alert than _his2 fellow hares. _He2 may be a @@.pink;disobedient slave@@ here because _he2 was difficult to train. <<if !canSee(_activeLurcher)>>To accommodate your blind lurcher, a bell is fastened around _his2 neck.<</if>>
<<elseif $origin == "disobedient young dickgirl">>
@@ -457,4 +457,4 @@ The rules have been explained to the hares: they're to be freed if they can reac
<</for>>
</table>
<br><br>
-</span>
\ No newline at end of file
+</span>