From 2a93b7de89d8c2a47935c404acc2ce822490265d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Pregmodder <pregmodder@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 29 Mar 2018 18:49:24 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] text cleanup
---
devNotes/VersionChangeLog-Premod+LoliMod.txt | 10 +++++++
devNotes/twine JS | 31 ++++++++++----------
src/pregmod/csec.tw | 10 +++----
3 files changed, 30 insertions(+), 21 deletions(-)
diff --git a/devNotes/VersionChangeLog-Premod+LoliMod.txt b/devNotes/VersionChangeLog-Premod+LoliMod.txt
index ee693405b00..d0fd9987355 100644
--- a/devNotes/VersionChangeLog-Premod+LoliMod.txt
+++ b/devNotes/VersionChangeLog-Premod+LoliMod.txt
@@ -2,6 +2,16 @@
0.10.7.1-0.1.x
+3/29/2018
+
+ 14
+
+ -you can now implant a belly implant post csec (non-seBirth only)
+ -added more hacking skill effects
+ -fixed bad syntax in seBirth
+ -various typos fixed
+ -some code cleanup
+
3/28/2018
13
diff --git a/devNotes/twine JS b/devNotes/twine JS
index b63629805c2..b2545e3d95c 100644
--- a/devNotes/twine JS
+++ b/devNotes/twine JS
@@ -3923,22 +3923,21 @@ if(eventSlave.fetish != "mindbroken") {
}
}
- if(State.variables.RERelationshipSlave != 0) {
- if(eventSlave.relationship > 3) {
- if(State.variables.RERelationshipSlave.devotion > 20) {
- if(canWalk(State.variables.RERelationshipSlave)) {
- if(canTalk(State.variables.RERelationshipSlave)) {
- if(eventSlave.devotion > 50) {
- if(eventSlave.trust > 50) {
- if(eventSlave.speechRules != "restrictive") {
- State.variables.RETSevent.push("date please");
- }
- if(State.variables.RERelationshipSlave.anus != 0) {
- if(State.variables.RERelationshipSlave.dick != 1) {
- if(State.variables.RERelationshipSlave.dick == 0 || canAchieveErection(State.variables.RERelationshipSlave)) {
- if(State.variables.RERelationshipSlave.fetish == "dom" || State.variables.RERelationshipSlave.fetish == "sadist") {
- State.variables.RETSevent.push("top exhaustion");
- }
+ if(eventSlave.relationship > 3) {
+ var relationshipSlave = State.variables.slaves.find(function(s) { return s.ID == eventSlave.relationshipTarget; });
+ if(relationshipSlave.devotion > 20) {
+ if(canWalk(relationshipSlave)) {
+ if(canTalk(relationshipSlave)) {
+ if(eventSlave.devotion > 50) {
+ if(eventSlave.trust > 50) {
+ if(eventSlave.speechRules != "restrictive") {
+ State.variables.RETSevent.push("date please");
+ }
+ if(relationshipSlave.anus != 0) {
+ if(relationshipSlave.dick != 1) {
+ if(relationshipSlave.dick == 0 || canAchieveErection(relationshipSlave)) {
+ if(relationshipSlave.fetish == "dom" || relationshipSlave.fetish == "sadist") {
+ State.variables.RETSevent.push("top exhaustion");
}
}
}
diff --git a/src/pregmod/csec.tw b/src/pregmod/csec.tw
index 612b20f1fc7..c6cafc7c16b 100644
--- a/src/pregmod/csec.tw
+++ b/src/pregmod/csec.tw
@@ -311,21 +311,21 @@ Since her <<if $activeSlave.mpreg == 1>>ass<<else>>vagina<</if>> was spared from
<<set $activeSlave.pregWeek = -4>>
<<if $activeSlave.broodmother == 0 && $bellyImplants == 1>>
<br><br>
- <span id="bir">She is already in surgery, so it's possible to take advantage of her body state and by using belly implant preserve her pregnant appearance.
+ <span id="bir">Since she is already in surgery and her body already stretched, it would be possible to preserve her pregnant appearance via fillable implant.
<<link "Do it.">>
</span>
<<replace "#bir">>
<<if $PC.medicine >= 100>><<set $activeSlave.health -= 5>><<else>><<set $activeSlave.health -= 10>><</if>>
- Installation of belly implant is relative simple procedure. Using the fact that her body and internal organs already stretched and adapted to the pregnancy, it's possible to greatly expand initial size of implant. She will still look pregnant after her recovery and going out of surgery.
+ Installation of belly implant is relative simple procedure. Using the fact that her body and internal organs have already adapted to pregnancy, it's possible to greatly expand initial size of implant. She will still look pregnant post surgery and recovery.
<br>
<<if ($activeSlave.devotion > 50)>>
- As she leaves the surgery with her belly still looking pregnant, and as such, knows you put something into her womb replacing natural pregnancy. She is @@.hotpink;curious@@ about the details of the implant, and eagerly awaits to see the end result.
+ She leaves the surgery with her belly still very gravid, and as such, knows you put something into her womb replacing her prior natural pregnancy. She is @@.hotpink;curious@@ about the details of the implant, and eagerly awaits to see the end result.
<<set $activeSlave.devotion += 4>>
<<elseif ($activeSlave.devotion >= -20)>>
- As she leaves the surgery with her belly still looking pregnant, and as such, knows you put something into her womb replacing natural pregnancy. She understands the realities of her life as a slave, but she is still surprised at what now resides in her womb. She is @@.gold;sensibly fearful@@ of your total power over her body.
+ She leaves the surgery with her belly still very gravid, and as such, knows you put something into her womb replacing her prior natural pregnancy. She understands the realities of her life as a slave, but she is still surprised at what now resides in her womb. She is @@.gold;sensibly fearful@@ of your total power over her body.
<<set $activeSlave.trust -= 5>>
<<else>>
- As she leaves the surgery with her belly still looking pregnant, and as such, knows you put something into her womb replacing natural pregnancy. She does not understand the realities of her life as a slave at a core level, so she's @@.mediumorchid;terrified and angry@@ at the potential that she's been turend in some sort of freak. Even after what has been implanted into her womb is explained to her, she is no less defiant; though she is relieved that procedure is reversible and there is no trully permanent damage. She is @@.gold;sensibly fearful@@ of your total power over her body.
+ She leaves the surgery with her belly still very gravid, and as such, knows you put something into her womb replacing her prior natural pregnancy. She does not understand the realities of her life as a slave at a core level, so she's @@.mediumorchid;terrified and angry@@ at the potential that she's been turned in some sort of freak. Even after what has been implanted into her womb is explained to her, she is no less defiant; though she is relieved that procedure is reversible and there is no trully permanent damage. She is @@.gold;sensibly fearful@@ of your total power over her body.
<<set $activeSlave.trust -= 5>>
<<set $activeSlave.devotion -= 5>>
<</if>>
--
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