diff --git a/src/uncategorized/seIndependenceDay.tw b/src/uncategorized/seIndependenceDay.tw index 9b4030b9f951edddf2b0e0fcb80f2c9ae5e13437..38da5d2e957d174afbe9fbc29b265ccc59bf7c0a 100644 --- a/src/uncategorized/seIndependenceDay.tw +++ b/src/uncategorized/seIndependenceDay.tw @@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ In the Free Cities, Independence Day falls on the day when the Free City achieve the Grand Overseer of the Inferior Race can command complete attention from <<if $PC.title == 1>>his arcology the moment he<<else>>her arcology the moment she<</if>> wishes. <<elseif $arcologies[0].FSRepopulationFocus >= $FSLockinLevel*0.9>> <<if $PC.title == 1>> - the Progenitor of the Future can command complete attention from her arcology the moment he wishes. + the Progenitor of the Future can command complete attention from his arcology the moment he wishes. <<else>> the Midwife of the Future can command complete attention from her arcology the moment she wishes. <</if>> @@ -138,7 +138,7 @@ In the Free Cities, Independence Day falls on the day when the Free City achieve <<else>> as she of the godlike Body, you command enough respect that your citizens will listen to you so long as you do not abuse the privilege. <</if>> - <<elseif $arcologies[0].FSPhysicalIdealist >= $FSLockinLevel*0.6>> + <<elseif $arcologies[0].FSHedonisticDecadence >= $FSLockinLevel*0.6>> <<if $PC.title == 1>> as the Master of Softness, you command enough respect that your citizens will listen to you so long as you do not abuse the privilege. <<else>> @@ -278,7 +278,7 @@ In the Free Cities, Independence Day falls on the day when the Free City achieve <</if>> <<if $arcologies[0].FSRepopulationFocus != "unset">> <<if $arcologies[0].FSRepopulationFocus >= 90>> - You rhapsodize on the wonderful display of pregnancies you see daily, and affirm that the arcology will continue to be to bastion of the future. + You rhapsodize on the wonderful display of pregnancies you see daily, and affirm that the arcology will continue to be a bastion of the future. <<elseif $arcologies[0].FSRepopulationFocus >= 40>> You ask that your citizens will make an effort to put a child in at least one of their slaves tonight. <</if>>